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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: saeyukilover on August 12, 2012, 11:20:50 AM

Title: PLANNING STILL... (love story in akihabara university)
Post by: saeyukilover on August 12, 2012, 11:20:50 AM
i'm planning to write a story, i need everyone's help to decide which one.........
this is not my first time to write a fanfic but it is my first time to post fanfic here in jphip.....
if everyone's could be please be patient because i don't update everyday, i only update during my free time and spare my grammar, spelling and English because its not my first language...

CHOICES:

A) ANNOUNCEMENT!!!!! 1st generation to be graduating!!!!! (first choice i'm going to let akb48 1st gen. graduate or not?.....)
B) Another akb48 and mendol fanfic....note: i'm going to use persona here but they consist more than 3 members.....
C) Tokyo dome concert...TWIST....akb48 will change leader cause takahashi minami will be graduating!!!!!!WHATT!!!

there are more to choose but i'm gonna stop....
mostly a and c could be one shot and more in drama and akb48's friendship
b could be series and with pairings...........and loadsss of cheesiness....

 :jphip:






Title: Re: PLANNING STILL...
Post by: Sydney W on August 12, 2012, 12:36:24 PM
i choose B !!!! ^^
Title: Re: PLANNING STILL...
Post by: sakura_drop_ on August 12, 2012, 12:47:09 PM
B!! Cause graduations are just  :cry: :cry: :cry:
Title: Re: PLANNING STILL...
Post by: 7sam14 on August 12, 2012, 02:24:35 PM
I Choose B cause C is making my  Oshi Graduate and A is making all first Gen. to graduate so ...it just makes me sad...  :cry:  :cry:  :cry:
Title: Re: PLANNING STILL...
Post by: ScarletWings on August 12, 2012, 02:27:49 PM
B with tons of saeyuki kudasai~ (ʃƪO̷̴̷̐ﻬO̷̴̷̐) *shot*
But yeah, I shall vote B since I missed those ikemen-tachi... (╥╯Д╰╥)
Title: Re: PLANNING STILL... (love story in akihabara university)
Post by: saeyukilover on August 14, 2012, 12:35:21 PM
okay B it is then.... note: i got the title from the kdrama loves story in Harvard...


prologue 1
   Kai...what will i do? help me!
after hours of looking for her, he find her under the tree were they always hangout. seeing her like this, sitting in the grasses hugging her legs and tears flowing in her eyes non stop, kai cant bare it anymore, he drop in his knees pull the girl infront of her for a hug, holding her very tight,
   everything will be alright i'll protect you i'm here! kai whispered in her ears.
kai let go from the hug, placed there frohead to each other hand in her shoulder and there eyes met, kai can see that she has been crying for a while her eyes are very red swollen from crying..in kai's mind, he needs to be strong, all she's got for now is just him, kai will do everything for her even if it cost her happiness. after a while letting her cry till her hearts content he just stay there beside holding her tight. then kai is the first to broke there silence...
    Ne! Yuuchan.....
   hmm?
   do you want to come with me?
   Yuko being surprise from kai's question she just stare at him...
   what i mean is .. hmm... is .... lets get  away from here.. few second passed and kai didnt here any answer from the girl beside her, kai is about to say something but he got stop from the response from yuko..
   un!
   eh?
   yes! i'll go with you but, i'm scared not only for us but for you as well, you will get hurt like me.. saying this words tears started to fell from her eyes again...
   i'll be okay .. but you need to promise me something
   hmm? what is it?
   stop crying like a baby, you don't look cute when you cry you look ugly!! :)kai look in yuko's eyes and started luaghing!!
   i know! i'm not going to cry like a baby anymore because i know i will have my own...and who's ugly i'm very cute when i cry you midget.......yuko shouting at kai giving him slap in his shoulder.
both of them know that they will be facing a lot of things in future, their both scared but they also know they need to grow up.

...

please give me your feedback, comments and views so i know if i need to change the story or not...

another reminder: i'm an amateur writer not a professional so please don't expect too much... :)
Title: Re: PLANNING STILL... (love story in akihabara university)
Post by: RJay on August 15, 2012, 04:00:32 AM
This sounds really interesting.
Hm... I wonder what's the relationship between Yuko and Kai. Brother and sister relationship?  :?

Please update soon! XD
Title: Re: PLANNING STILL... (love story in akihabara university)
Post by: yukofan on August 23, 2012, 11:51:47 AM
i hope you'll continue the story. i wonder what will happen to kai and yuko..