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Title: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: REPLIES (MaYuki)
Post by: ChuuuPuffss on August 12, 2012, 04:58:27 PM
GYAAAAAAH ! I really couldn't stand it  :angry1: :badluck: :fainted: :err: :frustrated:
I just had to make a fic with Mayuyu as the center ! And this one happened to be an idea :on polter:
I'm working on another fic so I think I won't be able to update as fast ?  :depressed:
But I'll work hard  :onioncheer:
I think this Fic will be focused on Mysteries and Nezumi's Mind Games~ But there's still romance tehehe  :bigdeal:

Prologue


Have you ever thought why the stars exist?

Have you ever thought why God made people imperfect?

Have you ever thought that WHAT IFs could be real and not a lie?

Have you ever thought why the world is filled with crimes and bad deeds?

Have you ever thought of all things, Love is the only thing that hurts you for real?

The world we live in is indeed, full of mystery.

If a question is asked, then an answer shall be told.

If a mystery is unsolved, then a discovery shall be unravelled.

If change shall be changed, then nothingness shall be nothing at all. Ironic, isn’t it?

This is why, questions should be asked and mysteries should be solved.

Have you ever tried connecting the dots?

It’s easy. You just have to analyze what you read and your outcome would turn out like this :

The stars exist because God made people imperfect. And that’s how the world was stained with hypocrisy, questions, mysteries, changes and nothingness. Especially, LOVE. Imperfect people unravel what shall be told and come back hurt but with what if’s as their shell to be protected by the world’s stains. But the world is just too ironic that it’s imperfect...

It turns out like that.

You may think it doesn’t make sense; but it does.

You just have to connect the dots.

And you will become the perfect master mind to what shall happen...



Was that hard to understand ? Please tell me what you think of this err... complicated prologue  :depressed:
I don't know where I'm going on this one  :fainted:
Title: Re: The Stars, The Stains, and The Mind Game : Prologue ( Nezumi X ??? )
Post by: yuukimoko on August 12, 2012, 05:04:11 PM
I love the prologue!!! :inlove:

its really interesting! it wasnt hard to understand ~ and there is Nezumi! XD

but Nezu must be with someone right...?  Black! Black wants too surely~ :wub:

please update soon~ :)
Title: Re: The Stars, The Stains, and The Mind Games : Prologue ( Nezumi X ??? )
Post by: mo-chan on August 12, 2012, 05:35:31 PM

I love the prologue!!! :inlove:

its really interesting! it wasnt hard to understand ~ and there is Nezumi! XD

but Nezu must be with someone right...?  Black! Black wants too surely~ :wub:

please update soon~ :)
black! black!black! black!  :onioncheer:
Title: Re: The Stars, The Stains, and The Mind Games : Prologue ( Nezumi X ??? )
Post by: Pwety on August 12, 2012, 10:39:12 PM

I love the prologue!!! :inlove:

its really interesting! it wasnt hard to understand ~ and there is Nezumi! XD

but Nezu must be with someone right...?  Black! Black wants too surely~ :wub:

please update soon~ :)
black! black!black! black!  :onioncheer:

YES! :deco: YES! :deco: YES! :deco: BLACK! BLACK! BLACK! BLACK! :onioncheer:
Title: Re: The Stars, The Stains, and The Mind Games : Prologue ( Nezumi X ??? )
Post by: ChuuuPuffss on August 13, 2012, 03:13:28 PM
YAAAY I've managed to update even though I have a looooot of homework  :fainted:
Soooo I don't know if there are any mistakes in my 'very good' English coz' I'm effing tired.  :badluck:
And, Hell, No. I'm not gonna edit it if there are any mistakes !!  :bigdeal:
BTW, credits to Kiruchi-san for the name ' Watanabe Yuuma'  :) I haven't rlly asked for ur permission but please, let me use it ?  :whistle:
I got inspired by some kind of movie my sister let me watch o.o It's about Forensic's and shit xD And the slavery thing is from ' 40 Shades of Grey '  :wahaha:


You Are Now My Property
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Forensics or Autopsy is a type of job that you might need the BRAINS. Why ? Because it deals with LAW and MEDICAL at the same time. So you might be thinking that a forensics doctor should work in a Hall of Justice or a police station coz' it deals with LAW. Yes and No. Yes because it can be. And No, because a real doctor belongs to a hospital. And a DEAD BODY should not be in a hall nor a police station. But there are types of Forensics Pathologists. But those are not Important. To discover more, let us go forth the life of Watanabe Yuuma. A Medical Examiner in the Forensics Field.

A serious case had happened last 2 days. It was a sudden death. No traces, and no faces had been suspected. A Medical examiner's job is to solve cases like mysterious deaths. This is what exactly Dr. Watanabe had been doing. He was never the Justice type of a person but investigation was his type. He should've took Law school ? No. He didn't want to risk his life... As he was observing the deceased body, he already knew what had happened. The bite marks on her hand, the red stuff on her neck and a burn on the head. It seemed like this was rape. But look here, they were no signs of suspects on who did this and what caused this, ... yet. This wasn't his job anymore though. He covered the body up and washed his hands and put on his glasses.

Knock Knock

" Come in. " He sat on his chair sprayed air freshener around his surroundings. We wouldn't want guests to smell the dead body, wouldn't we ?

" Dr. Watanabe ! Nice to see you done with your job ! " A man around his mid 30s went in. To Dr. Watanabe, this man was indeed important to get the rank he wants. He stood up and bowed

" Hello, Doctor Keiichi. It's nice to see you too. " He bowed down again

" No expression as always ! ..I see you're done with your job, hmm ? "

" Hai. It seems this was rape, Doctor. Concluding to the bite marks on almost every part and also red stuff that I think are hickeys ? There's also a burn on her head which I do not know of, so I thought we should send this to Doctor Miyazawa. But we haven't found any clues on the evidence and the suspect. It seems we have to send this body for examining. "

" Very well said. Bravo, Dr. Watanabe. So young yet so smart! "

" Thank you, Doctor. "

" Since you've been doing such a wonderful job, I've decided to give you an assistant, well err... not exactly an assistant but an apprentice! "

" Ahhh, I see.. "

" She's a doctor too and I think she might learn a thing or two from you~ " The doctor said and called for a person. A beautiful girl went in as she smiled and bowed to Dr. Watanabe. To Dr. Watanabe, she looked gorgeous and stunning. Tall, beautiful, nice figure! He was a lucky doctor alright!

" She will be in your care now, Dr. Watanabe! As long as you're working here, she will be your apprentice. Got it ? "

" Hai, Doctor. "

" Okay. Introduce yourself then, Doctor ! "

" Hai.. Hello. I'm Watanabe Yuuma. I specialize in the Forensics Pathology.  Let's work together from now on. " Watanabe bowed

" It's a pleasure to meet you, Doctor Watanabe. I'm Kashiwagi Yuki. Forensic's Pathology too. I've heard a lot from you and they say you're very good ! So I hope I'll help you in any way I can. " Kashiwagi bowed down

"  There you go ! Well, look at the time. I have an appointment with a patient today. Work together ! See ya ! " The doctor went out leaving the two of them together

" Doctor Watanabe — "

" Please. You can call me Yuuma. "

" Ahh, I see. Yuuma-chan, want to have lunch with me ? "

" Yeah, sure. But I smell like medicine. "

" It's okay since we ARE in a hospital. "

" You're right. Before that, let me just go clean up, alright ? "

" Okay... " As Yuuma was cleaning up the laboratory, Yuki on the other hand was observing the dead body. When she got bored, she looked at Yuuma. She noticed that Yuuma had a really slender figure that she couldn't help but touch waist. Then suddenly, the Doctor squealed

" E-EHHHH ?! " Yuki was surprised. She had never heard a guy squeal before! Yuuma had looked at her with a very scary face. Slender waist... That has been repeating through Yuki's mind now until she realized it. " D-Don't t-t-tell me... Y-You're a .. " she gulped and said the last word softly " G-girl ??? "

Yuuma smirked " Ahh.. So I see you have noticed. You are very clever, indeed. " Yuuma went closer and closer to Yuki. With every step the Doctor took, Yuki backed away. Until she reached the wall. The doctor pinned her to the wall with a smirk on his face.

" Y-Yuuma-kun ?? " Yuki said as she gulped

" Dont. Ever. Tell. Anyone. Or. Else. " Yuuma said as he sent a warning glare to Yuki

" H-Hai ! "

" Hmph.. Since you know now... It's Watanabe Mayu.. "

" Mayu ? Yuuma ? ... So it's Mayuyu ! " Yuki exclaimed

" Lower your voice.. ! " Yuuma— Mayu warned her again

" S-Sorry.. I won't tell anyone about this. "

" Good. " Mayu smiled at her

" BUT ! On one condition. Let me see you as a girl ! " Yuki smiled

" Hey, I just met you ! And you're crazy ! "

" I guess I'll be telling the whole staff ? " Yuki touched Mayu's wrist to scare her

" Alright ! Alright ! Geez.. "

" YESS ~ "

" But maybe later.. I'll take you home with me. "

" Hmm okay. I guess I'm free later— "

" I'll take you home with me. And you, Kashiwagi Yuki, will be MY PROPERTY forever. " Mayu proclaimed and when Yuki was about to react, she directly kissed her lips. Yuki struggled and broke this kiss immediately

" What was that for ?! " Yuki blushed

" You're blushing so you like it. " Mayu teased

" Just because I'm blushing doesn't mean I like it !! " Yuki yelled

" Ha ! Everybody has their own opinion. " Mayu smirked

" You know, I feel like I'm in a game. What're you planning huh ? "

" Very clever. You got into my Mind Game with noticing. And Yuki, I'm not planning anything. " She innocently smiled

" Mind game ? What is that ? "

" What you think it is. "

" You're so weird... Well, anyway, there is no way you're taking me home and being your property ! "

" Too late~ " As Mayu laughed a Tattoo appeared on Yuki's neck.

" OUCH ! "

" It hurts ? Don't worry. It's only for awhile. "

" Wh-What is this ?? "

" It's a tattoo to make you obey my orders. "

" Why and when did this happen ?! " Yuki touched the tattoo on the side of her neck

" It happened when I kissed you. It seems my veil had spread through out your body and managed to contaminate your blood with my blood "

" What ??? Are you serious ?! "

" Uh-huh. It clearly shows that YOU ARE MY PROPERTY. So if you disobey me, that Tattoo will start hurting you until you stop disobeying me. It will also prevent you from doing acts regarding the 7 Stains. "

" What am I a dog ?? " She said without realizing ' 7 Stains '

" A cute dog. "

" How am I supposed to wear clothes that reveal my neck ?! "

" Don't worry. It just shows up when you've done something wrong. "

" Oh my God.. what have I gone into  ? "

" You've gone into my Mind Game. Come with me to my house later on and I will explain to you what are the basic things you need to know. " Mayu went out of the laboratory casually and closed the door.

" Stupid Mayu ! AAARGH ! " As Yuki said that, the Tattoo glowed into Purple. " Ittai ! " She touched her neck again " Alright, I'm obeying ! " The tattoo disappeared and pain went away. Yuki needed to discover more about this 'Mind Game'. She needed to know more about this Mystery about Mayu. But Mystery is one of the 7 Stains. How can she do it since MYSTERY is one of the 7 Stains ? Stay tuned and be updated on the Stars and the 7 Stains tomorrow~



A/N :

Woohoo ~ I don't know what I was writing. You'll know more on the 7 stains and the stars nxt update  :glasses:

@ All Of You XD : Not BLACK, but Yuki. Meh. Still the same, who cares ? xD
Title: Re: The Stars, The Stains, and The Mind Games : You Are Now My Property ( MaYuki )
Post by: epiclulz on August 13, 2012, 03:32:03 PM
W-what?!!

Mayu is dansoing? Yessssss ikemen and still Yuri at the same time!

Kissing someone you just met?

Not sure if love

Or just a mind game.

I sense hints of BDSM here~  Mayu is so LOL

I'm at a loss for words... Mayu's personality is so cool and badass!!!

Will there be gap moe also?????

I'm so interested in the 7 stains. 

Awesome badass sado Mayu!!!
Title: Re: The Stars, The Stains, and The Mind Games : You Are Now My Property ( MaYuki )
Post by: kiruchi on August 13, 2012, 03:43:12 PM
I wonder what kind of 'mind games' we're going to have in here?  :kekeke:
Mayu's doctor danso's the BEST!!!  :nya:
Purple tattoo?  :dunno: curse seal?
anyway i'm still looking forward to those mind games!!!  :ding: update soon
Title: Re: The Stars, The Stains, and The Mind Games : You Are Now My Property ( MaYuki )
Post by: yuukimoko on August 13, 2012, 04:01:31 PM
I.........LOVE THIS FIC~!   YES!!! YUKIRIN IS MAYUS PROPERTY~!!!!!!


I really really love it~ Im just obsessed over posessive Mayuyu~

for a second I thought it was boyxgirl but then Mayu was crossdressing~

and now Yuki has a owner~!

please update soon~!!!!! really cant wait to read more~~~~

how am I going to survive until tomorrow when you post the next chapter....?
Title: Re: The Stars, The Stains, and The Mind Games : You Are Now My Property ( MaYuki )
Post by: mo-chan on August 13, 2012, 07:47:15 PM
wow it's really interesting  :ding:
I want to see more of Mayu  :kekeke:
Title: Re: The Stars, The Stains, and The Mind Games : You Are Now My Property ( MaYuki )
Post by: kahem on August 13, 2012, 09:15:14 PM
Yuki is Mayu's property? Hum interesting~
Title: Re: The Stars, The Stains, and The Mind Games : You Are Now My Property ( MaYuki )
Post by: Crossing Crossroads on August 13, 2012, 09:38:12 PM
AHHHHHHHHH!!!~  :mon lovelaff: :mon lovelaff: :mon lovelaff: :mon lovelaff: :mon lovelaff: :mon lovelaff: :mon lovelaff:

Yesyesyesyesyes~ SUBMIT TO HER REIGN, YUKIRIN! :heart: :mon roll:

God, I love this. I mean. Seriously. Danso Mayuyu? Really? Pft. Guess what.

IAMINLOVEEEEEEE. :mon love: Iloveit. X3 <3

Last words...

Yes. LOL.
Title: Re: The Stars, The Stains, and The Mind Games : You Are Now My Property ( MaYuki )
Post by: cmze on August 13, 2012, 10:34:05 PM
COOL!  :twothumbs

Mayu is  :twisted:

i love it!  :inlove:

please update soon!  :cow:
Title: Re: The Stars, The Stains, and The Mind Games : You Are Now My Property ( MaYuki )
Post by: Cessy10 on August 14, 2012, 11:23:35 AM
Mayuyu as a Doctor of  Forensics Pathology!!! This is soo effin' interesting! :inlove: :peace:
More PLEASE! :">
Title: Re: The Stars, The Stains, and The Mind Games : You Are Now My Property ( MaYuki )
Post by: Playgirlz on August 14, 2012, 11:53:16 AM
At first I thought Mayu is male, lol, but still prefer is she a girl  :luvluv1:
And the tattoo on Yuki's neck, is Mayu a devil? look like she has a super power   :on gay:
I smile everytime i read the fic that Mayu being the attacker :kekeke:
Thank you update soon pls, love it so much  :kneelbow:
Title: Re: The Stars, The Stains, and The Mind Games : You Are Now My Property ( MaYuki )
Post by: yuukimoko on August 14, 2012, 02:18:05 PM
I cant wait for the update....!!!! :O

I alredy reade this chapter 10 times andnoe I can say it without reading...... XD

anyway~ take you time(today) and please update soon~ :P
Title: Re: The Stars, The Stains, and The Mind Games : You Are Now My Property ( MaYuki )
Post by: ChuuuPuffss on August 14, 2012, 02:51:30 PM
Hey ! Say ! Jump ! Lol. You're like, " YAY AN UPDATE " while I'm like, " YAY I DON'T HAVE HOMEWORK "   :farofflook:
Okay, I have another fic to update so I'll make this quick, and interesting  :P By quick I mean, fast in making. Not short chapter  :glasses:

@Epiclulz : Hmmm... Gap Moe.. I'll think of that ?  :on lol:
@Kiruchi : Lol somewhat like a curse seal. Purple tattoo ? Lol No xD I won't spoil  :hiakhiakhiak:

@Yuukimoko : YAAY seems like you survived... xD


@Mo-chan : Oh, you will see more of Mayu tehehe... In Nezu form wootwoot !


@Kahem : Let's see if Yuki will be able to resist Mayu's smexyness xD


@Crossing Crossroads : Waaa ~ I'm glad u like it  :luvluv2:

@Cmze : Coz' Badass Mayu is Epic  :glasses:

Cessy10 : Thank you :))


Playgirlz : You might be correct on the super power thing! Just don't wanna spoil, just read  :on lol:


Anzai48 : LOL Mayu will become less possessive when she develops things from Yuki~ I dun have HW ! It just takes me time to go home from school~


The Stars and The 7 Stains

" Oi ! Come out ! " Yuki yelled at Mayu " What the heck are you planning, huh ?! And why am I tied to a chair ?! " Yuki asked as she gritted her teeth

A creak sound coming from the door went past Yuki's ear. A giggle " You are a feisty one. " Mayu had just came out from the bathroom. Yuki's jaw dropped. This was not the super intelligent hot Dr. Watanabe Yuuma she was seeing but Watanabe Mayu, an 18 yr old girl. To her expectancy, she wasn't expecting a neat and cute girl but umm.. ragged ? She despised Mayu until now. Seems like Mayu earned some points

" Hmm, okay. You got your demand. See ? You got to see me as a girl. " Mayu said as she crossed her arms and a smirk appeared on her face

" Y-Yeahh.. " Yuki blushed. Mayu went closer and closer to Yuki's face " Heh. And you will see more of it. " Her smirk grew wider

" Wh-what're you talking about ?! " Yuki's eyes widened

" Pfftch. Dirty-minded. " Mayu paced back and forth before she did a thinking pose and looked at Yuki

" What ? "

" Hmm... Do you have any objections, requests, demands, before we start ? "

" YES ! I don't wanna live here ! I don't wanna be your slave ! and I demand you to tie me off this chair ! " Yuki felt a buzz spread throughout her body. " ITTAI ! " she shouted and touched her neck as the tattoo glowed Green

" Hahaha ! " Mayu laughed " Stupid girl ! Didn't I warn you to obey me ? " Mayu smiled

" Aish ! I don't know anymore ! " tears started to fall down from Yuki's eyes. As for Mayu, always having a passionate side, she walked up to Yuki and knelt down so that she can face her eye-lvl contact. To Yuki's surprise, Mayu wiped Yuki's tears away " I'm sorry.. I've warned you so that you won't get hurt. Please, just obey me for once.Smile. " Mayu smiled a reassuring one

" This is your fault ! How can I smile ?! I'm deeply hurt ! I didn't sign up for this ! " Yuki squirmed as Mayu backed away coz' she was startled. Yuki looked at Mayu and she just stared at her blankly as Yuki continued to cry. Mayu had pity. She released Yuki from the chair and sat on her couch. " Okay. I've managed to grant all your requests. You can leave now, since you're not interested in this at all. " Mayu said as her face was full of regret and sadness

" R-Really ? You're letting me go ? " Yuki said

" Go away before I change my mind. " Mayu stood up and as she was about to go upstairs, a hand grabbed her wrist

" What do you want now ?? " Mayu glared at Yuki

" I've realized that you're not really just a Cyborg Doctor without a heart. You're more than that. So... I'll try to bear with you in this. " Yuki looked away blushing

" Pfftt... ha.. " Yuki looked at Mayu " What's so funny ? " Mayu burst out laughing " Then again, my Mind Games always work on you. " Mayu smirked " EH ?! " and at a flash of lightning,all the doors and windows are now locked " Woah ! H-How did you do that ?! "

" Well, sit. " Yuki sat down on the couch " Actually, I'm not normal. "

" I saw that when a Tattoo appeared on my neck. "

" Good. My father had tested me on one of his experiments, and now, I've become a person who can do almost everything "

" What ? "

" My brains are normal though... "

" You call your brains normal ?! You're super smart ! "

" I know. Anyway, about this slavery thing... Are you really up for it ? "

" Eh ? ... I guess.. "

" Then there's no turning back. Once you've agreed to my covenant, you are no longer meant to be freed. Your destiny has been changed to being a successor if ever something happens to me. You are now unable to do things on the will of the 7 Stains and the Stars. "

" Wait, what ? Explain slowly, please ! "

" Hmph.. That was slow. "

" That was slow to you ?! "

" Zip it or I'll make that tattoo extra painful when you do something against my will ! "

" Hai, hai~ "

" Ehemm.. That tattoo has many types. I have one too. " She showed Yuki one on her wrist that appeared magically " It's name is 'Nezumi'. Yours is 'Black'. It's a symbol that YOU are MY PROPERTY. That is the main reason why you can't go against me. My blood is combined with yours now. "

" Umm.. How exactly did this tattoo form ? "

" You see, my veil or venom has circulated throughout your body. Which means, you're now affected and you've become like me. Invincible. " Mayu smirked as she said the last word

" Ahh.. So umm 'Black' gave me a power ? "

" Yes. You have to discover that on your own though. Also, you can control to make it appear but you need training. "

" WHAAT ? So it appears anytime ?! "

" Well, no. It appears when you go against my will. "

" Oh, yeah, I knew that. " Yuki smiled sheepishly " What's the 7 Stains and Stars you we're talking about earlier ? "

" The 7 Stains are the things that made the Earth imperfect and bad. Very deadly to us. The deadly stains are; hypocrisy, questions, mysteries, changes and nothingness. "

" Those are only 5 ! "

" I'm not done, stupid. "

" Oh. "

" Those 5 stains are the most deadly ones. Hypocrisy; you shall not be false to yourself and I. Only be hypocrytic when you need to. Questions; To me questions are very very rude. Do not ask too much questions that are to obvious on what you're plotting. Mysteries; As I am now, I'm trying to solve mysteries. But you are not permitted to get involved in such mysteries. Changes; DO. NOT. EVER. CHANGE. Nothingness; .. unexplained on how it's so ironic but do not get into voids. Got it ? "

" What's a void ? " Yuki curiously asked

" A void is a black hole which people like us get sucked into. Basically, TRUST. Don't trust anyone except me. "

" Ehhh! " Once again, a buzz hit Yuki. " OUCH ! Wtf is with this Black thing ?! " she touched it again and it glowed Red. As she looked at Mayu, her eyes we're purple and some kind of sign was formed there and it disappeared. Back to it's original form

" What was that ??? "

" You don't trust me ? I read your mind and controlled Black to do that. You have to trust me. "

" Hai. Okay. I'll try. "

" Don't try. Do it. Anyway, there are 2 more Stains, correct ? First one is IMPERFECTION. Imperfection is perfection. "

" What ? Imperfection can't be perfect ! There's an IM there ! "

" Once, all the people we're perfect. Equal with greed, lust, pride and all of those. Until the Stains stained the world. People started to feel too confident of themselves and became too Perfect that they became Imperfect. Therefore, Imperfection is Perfection. "

" You're really smart. I don't think I'll get along with these stuff "

" Don't worry. You'll get to it, soon. Last one is Love. " Mayu said as she blushed to the word love

" Ehh ?! Love is a Stain ?! "

" Yes. Well, Love is... love. Nothing more, nothing less. I only know that love is the only thing that really hurts the most. That is why, you shall not fall in the hands of LOVE. "

" Mayu, have you ever been in love ? "

" No. I don't believe in love. It's... stupid. "

Yuki sighed " You'll get to it soon, Mayu. "

" Oh, a tip. Black cannot overcome Love. The only stain it doesn't react to. I don't know why though. I didn't do too much research on love "

" Why not ? "

" I might fall in love. To know love you have to experience it, right ? "

" Yeah "

" And I don't want to fall in love. Enough about that love and shit, let's move on to the Stars. "

" Hmm are those the stars in the night sky ? "

" No. These stars are different. There are 7 for the basics. Have you noticed Black glows into different colors when you go against the Stains or my will ? "

" YEAH ! "

" Those are the Stars. They are colors. 7 colors, 7 stars. There are a lot of Stars, really but.. It's complicated to tell you. You wouldn't understand. "

" Hey ! You saying I'm stupid ? "

" What do you think ? "

" .... "

" There. You should learn to answer your own questions. Questions is a Stain. "

" AHH ! I forgot about that ! "

" Hmph. Anyway, the colors you may encounter are Red, Purple, Blue, White, Green, Yellow, Orange and Black. Each one symbolizes a Star. "

" Ahhh.. "

" I think you had a lesson from school about the meaning of the colors, right ? "

" Uh-huh. "

" Good. You may know and there's no need for me to explain. Last information, the colors we're invented at 1666 by Isaac Newton. 666 is the devil's number which means Stars are bad things. Avoid them. "


" Okay. "


" I've explained to you all the things you needed to know. Now, I'll tell you my objective. "
 
" I'm all ears. "


" My objective is to make Imperfection REAL PERFECTION. "


" What ? How are you gonna do that ?? "


" I've collected a lot of data. From Businessmen to Yakuzas who want to do the same thing. Only a few are left now, since I've assasinated them all. "


" You kill people ?! And you're a Forensic Pathologist ?! "


" Yes. I'm not the Justice type of person. I just want to fool the law. "


" You are really a smart kid. "


" Oh, yes, I am. And I want you to help me carry out my objective, Yuki. "


" Since I've agreed to this, ... Okay. I'll follow what you'll say. "


Mayu sat on Yuki's lap facing her " What a clever and cute dog, indeed. Obeying and following what's right is good, Yukirin~ " Mayu smirked and kissed Yuki again. Yuki's eyes widened but unlike their last kiss shared, this one was full of feelings. A passionate kiss. It felt good. So she kissed back unknowingly. After some time, Mayu pulled back.


" Yuki, if you finish the tasks I give you, you might just get rewards from me. " Mayu winked at her seductively and stood up leaving Yuki wondering about what she said.


" Yuki, I guess that would be all. Ah ! By the way, remember when I said I'd take you home with me ? "


" Y-yeah ? "


" Your luggage is in your room. Next to mine. " Mayu smiled and went to the kitchen


Yuki sighed " I guess... being a slave isn't as bad as it seems, eh ? " Yuki smiled.



A/N : 7 Stains - Made up by me lolol Are somewhat like 7 Capital Sins
7 Stars - Also made by me like the sins effect after the 7 Capital Sins

Too long ?  :on lol:  Hope you guys understood Mayuyu's explanation  :hiakhiakhiak:


Too much mystery is killing me  :fainted:






Title: Re: The Stars, The Stains, and The Mind Games :The Stars & The 7 Stains ( MaYuki )
Post by: yuukimoko on August 14, 2012, 03:18:06 PM
ahhh~ that was lovely~~~~~!!!!!!! XD XD XD XD XD


so Mayu doesnt want to fall in love? ohh~ you cant do that! Yuki is too lovable~ :wub:

it was soooooo interesting!!!!!!!! XD XD XD XD

please update tomorrow~!!!!! I cant wait to read more~ this chapter wa delicous!!!! :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:

I want more~~ :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub:
Title: Re: The Stars, The Stains, and The Mind Games :The Stars & The 7 Stains ( MaYuki )
Post by: epiclulz on August 14, 2012, 03:25:30 PM
Yuki, make Mayu fall in love with you!!!!

Actually I agree with Mayu lol except for one bit.

Love is stupid unless it's between the pairings we ship.

Mayu is really mysterious herself...

Kissing people so passionately and saying that love is stupid???!!!

Either she's really tsundere or just a player. (Tsundere and allegedly smart genius image? Gap Moe hint hint.)

What will Mayu make Yuki do??

Rewards?!!!

And yes, I might hijack your fics and drop really subtle hints from time to time.XD

I'm really interested how this fic will end up!!
Title: Re: The Stars, The Stains, and The Mind Games :The Stars & The 7 Stains ( MaYuki )
Post by: aruka on August 14, 2012, 03:36:19 PM
Despite hoping to understand Mayu's explanation, I gotta admit it's heavy. :lol: I even reread the prologue to connect what she explained and the premise.
But I haven't fully grasped it.. the mystery is thick, which is thrilling! :D (and mystery is a Stain? -got buzzed-  :lol:)

, yet it's definitely needed to be open.. those mysteries, and so I'm waiting for next updates. :D
Title: Re: The Stars, The Stains, and The Mind Games :The Stars & The 7 Stains ( MaYuki )
Post by: mo-chan on August 14, 2012, 04:21:58 PM
 :wigglypanda:
Yuki is Mayu's slave  :wahaha:
Mayu don't believe in love and she think it's stupid  :stoned:
Mayu can do anything to her  :kekeke:
your fic is really interesting  :glasses:
even Mayu doesn't believe in love she still kiss Yuki  :shy2:
Quote
" Yuki, if you finish the tasks I give you, you might just get rewards from me. " Mayu winked at her seductively
I can't wait for that moment  :ding:
update soon please  :on gay:
Title: Re: The Stars, The Stains, and The Mind Games :The Stars & The 7 Stains ( MaYuki )
Post by: ChuuuPuffss on August 14, 2012, 05:35:05 PM
 -Currently Taking a break from Studying-

@Yuukimoko : Chill and wait lol~

@Epiclulz : I don't get it but I always laugh at you replies xD Actually, Mayu is a player. A player in her own Mind Game kekeke~ I dun wanna spoil but, Mayu had plotted that Yuki will be her Apprentice. Somehow, she saw this coming ;)) And YES, in time, she'll fall in love against her own will hohoho~

@Aruka : Lol okay I rlly lol-ed at ur reply xD The buzz thing pffft ! I relate to ya, dude ! I wasn't even thinking when I wrote the prologue xD I thought of it at school and it hit me~ Then the plot was born TROLOLOL You'll understand soon.. I didn't even understand what I wrote in that chapter xD I was confused with the Stars and Stains -.-

@Mo-chan :
We are all waiting for the REWARDS to come fufufu >:))
Title: Re: The Stars, The Stains, and The Mind Games :The Stars & The 7 Stains ( MaYuki )
Post by: Playgirlz on August 14, 2012, 08:06:48 PM
Mayu is being so so soooo mysterious lolol

There're a lot of information in this chapter, can't remember all O.O

Poor Yuki, she got hurt everytimes she's not obey Mayu >:]

Update pls, waiting for Mayu's reward lol

Title: Re: The Stars, The Stains, and The Mind Games :The Stars & The 7 Stains ( MaYuki )
Post by: ChuuuPuffss on August 15, 2012, 05:03:37 PM
Hello ~ I've updated !  :hee:
Since you guys want more MaYuki lovey dovey scenes, I've tried to focus this one on love.  :glasses:
BUT ! Since Mayu doesn't believe love and doesn't know it too well, she would be clueless she likes Yuki lol  :on lol:


Jealousy Cannot Be Tamed and I Don't Like Sharing


This day was a busy day. Yuki and Mayu couldn't meet each other today. Mayu left earlier than Yuki leaving a note that she needs to solve another case. For Yuki, she was still in training so you might think she's not that busy ? No. She's totally busy. Training is more hard than work. Yuki was at the same time, training and working. She pays and gets paid. As Yuki was busy looking through some papers in her office she was interrupted by an annoying voice call.

" Doctor Kashiwagi Yuki, Please report to Room no. 556 right now. Repeat, Doctor Kashiwagi Yuki, report to Room no. 556 now. Thank you. "

Yuki sighed as she got up from her seat. She straightened out the papers first, tucked them in her drawer and rushed to the room. When she arrived there, she saw a dead body. The nurses we're all silent and the Doctor looked at Yuki with worried eyes. So she decided to break the ice.

" What's wrong ? "

" Dr. Kashiwagi-san. " A nurse spoke up " This patient died immediately the moment we started the operation. "

" What ? Is that it ? What happened to the man before he got here ? "

" Apparently, his neighbor saw him in his house lying dead with blood all over with a knife on the side of his body. " the doctor explained

" Ahh.. So it's a murder ? "

" Yes. The strange thing is when we took the knife for analyzing, the fingerprints could not be identified. "

" Eh ? Is that so ? We're there any other evidence in the case ? "

" No, Doctor. " The nurse looked down

" Does this man have a family or guardian ?? "

" We looked up his name but he doesn't have any relations. "

" Hmm.. That's strange. Well, I guess put him in the morgue. "

" Right away, doctor. "

" Why don't you call other Forensic Doctors ? "

" We tried to call Doctor Watanabe but he was busy with 3 other cases. And he told us to call you, instead. "

" Ahhh, I see... Well, since this was murder, Doctor, the identification of death has been solved. All we need to do is do further research on who did this. "

" Yes. "

" We're the police informed already ? "

" Yes, Doctor. "

" Well, what're you waiting for ?! Send them to the patient's house ! I want the whole house investigated ! " Yuki said with a serious face which scared the doctor

" Y-yes, Doctor ! " The doctor rushed outside and seemed like he was scared

" Hmm... Being well-known for being Mayu's apprentice, eh ? That's nice.. " Yuki mumbled to herself " But.. I know this is all her doings. To get the law distracted. Ahh, Mayu and her Mind Games. " Yuki walked out of the room and passed by the Staff's room which where the nurses stay. As she passed by, a bunch of nurses called for her

" Ah ! Kashiwagi-san ! "

" Eh ? " She looked at the nurses who we're calling her and smiled " Hello. " Looked like the nurses we're about to faint

" Kashiwagi-san, so what's it like to be working with Dr. Yuuma ? "

" Is he too serious ? Too silent ? Or maybe cool ?! " The nurses gone wild

" Ehh... Umm I've been working with him for just a week so I really don't know what he's really like. Why won't you ask him though ? "

" Eh ! We cant ! He looks so serious all the time ! And he's busy too.. "

" Ah. It's okay. He's really kind just ask him. He won't mind at all— "

" Hello, nurses ! " The nurses squealed " Dr. Miyazawa ! "

" Any problem here ? "

" Not at all, Doctor~ " One of the nurses tried to seduce him

" I see.. " Dr. Miyazawa looked at Yuki " Dr. Kashiwagi Yuki, right ? " He smiled

" Hai. Nice to meet you, Dr. Miyazawa. " Yuki bowed

" Just call me Sae. " Dr. Miyazawa winked at Yuki and tried to seduce her but no avail.

" Okay, Sae-san... Well, I better get going then. "

" Wait, not yet. Can I ask you something ? "

" Uhh sure, I guess.. "

" Wanna go grab lunch ? I've heard you're solving a mysterious murder case so it must be hard. " Dr. Miyazawa smiled

" Yes. It's actually hard but nothing I can't do. Oh, and I'm sorry, Sae-san. I can't go grab lunch with you. " Yuki smiled sheepishly

" Why not ? It's my treat ! " He smiled

" Umm... I'm not sure. "

" Come on ! A little food won't hurt, right ? "

" I'd like to come with you but I can't, okay ? Yuki tried to stop Dr. Miyazawa Why is this guy so flirtatious ! I must avoid the Nothingness stain ! Yuki thought to herself

" Hmm.. I'd like a valid reason why you can't. " He smiled again

" Ehh aren't you busy ? You are a Forensics Pathologist too... "

" I'm at a break ! And so are you, right ? Come on ! "

" Please, I don't want to. "

" It's just for a little while— " Dr. Miyazawa was cut off by a familiar voice. Not low, not high. But average. A young boy had walk in front of them. To their expectation it was him.

" I'm sorry, Dr. Miyazawa but didn't your mother told you to not steal other people's girlfriends ? "

" Ma— Yuuma ! " Yuki blushed as she heard the word 'girlfriend' but she knew this was just an act by the super smart Mayu

" Girlfriend ? " Dr. Miyazawa looked at Yuki " Yuuma-kun is your boyfriend ?? "

" Don't call me Yuuma-kun. " Mayu hissed at Dr.Miyazawa

" Umm.. H-Hai, he's my boyfriend... " Yuki looked at Mayu but Mayu had this sarcastic face on again

" Ahh. Then, I'm sorry, Dr. Yuuma..-kun ? " Dr.Miyazawa joked

" Stop it with the 'kun' or I'll rip you teeth off and you won't be able to fix your teeth by your own now, wouldn't you, Forensics Dentist, Dr. Miyazawa ? "

" .. For a kid, you're scary sometimes. " Dr Miyazawa then looked at Yuki then smiled " See you, Yuki-chan~ I guess I'll ask you out later ! " Dr. Miyazawa winked at her and went away

Yuki sighed " You saved me there, Mayu. " Yuki looked at Mayu but Mayu was angry " Wh-What's with that f-face, Mayuyu ? " Mayu dragged Yuki along with her to a closet and locked the door.

" H-Hey ! What're we gonna do in here—" As soon as she spoke Mayu attacked her lips. Yuki kissed back just going with the flow, but a few seconds later, Mayu bit Yuki's lip making Yuki pull back

" HEY ! What was that for ? You go kissing people you just met and bite their lips ?! " Yuki licked her bleeding lips and she felt a buzz. Black appeared on her neck again with the color Blue. Yuki flinched and touched her neck. Blue for Questions.

" You know... Yuki, I'm jealous. "

" What ? What're you jealous of ? You don't even love me ! "

" So you mean if I'm jealous means that I love you ? Pathetic. " Mayu looked at her with a Cyborg face

" ... "

" JEALOUSY CANNOT BE TAMED so you better stay away from that suave Genking Miyazabutt or I'll rip his teeth off ! " Mayu scolded Yuki

Yuki thought for a second " Okay, I'll do it. But tell me why I should ? "

" Because you're MY PROPERTY and I DON'T LIKE SHARING MY PROPERTY . " Mayu explained calmly

" O-Okay.. " Yuki blushed

" Since you've been a bad girl, I'm going to punish you. "

" Whaaaat ??? "

" No time to waste. You deserve this. " Mayu smirked and attacked Yuki's lips once again and they did their Smexy time in the closet which I suck at making

Really. Really, really, reaaaally. Sometimes, I don't get the difference of rewards and punishments Yuki thought and smiled in their kiss.



A/N :

YAAAY ! Finally done. Lol back to studying  :frustrated: :fainted: :err: :badluck: :dozing: :depressed:
Just give me a criticism at least...  :on cloudeye:
Title: Re: The Stars, The Stains, and The Mind Games UPDATE !!! ( MaYuki )
Post by: mo-chan on August 15, 2012, 05:58:12 PM
Sae again go away Sae  :angry1:
Mayu is cute when she is jealous  :shy2: :luvluv1:
Quote
Really. Really, really, reaaaally. Sometimes, I don't get the difference of rewards and punishments Yuki thought and smiled in their kiss.
I like it  :whistle: :wriggly:
update faster please I can't wait to know what is going to happen after  :on gay: :onioncheer:
Title: Re: The Stars, The Stains, and The Mind Games UPDATE !!! ( MaYuki )
Post by: yuukimoko on August 15, 2012, 06:30:34 PM
sweet!

Mayu jealous is the best! and Yuki got a punishment(reward)  ......but what is a real reward if this is punishment?

I liked this chapter, short but sweet! thanks for your hard work and good luck with homeworks~

please update soon~
Title: Re: The Stars, The Stains, and The Mind Games UPDATE !!! ( MaYuki )
Post by: Crossing Crossroads on August 15, 2012, 08:09:19 PM
AHHH~ First of all... whatisthis, Mayuyu? Tying Yukirin to a chair? :ding: Sounds like Mayuyu could be into some interesting stuff...  :hehehe:

Second?~ JEALOUS MAYUYUU~ OH THIS IS JUST... :mon inluv: :on gay: :mon roll: :on GJ:

Ahaha... :on drink:
Title: Re: The Stars, The Stains, and The Mind Games UPDATE !!! ( MaYuki )
Post by: Pwety on August 15, 2012, 11:30:27 PM
WOUAAAAHHH :luvluv1:

Mayuyu jealous is a best XD

Can't wait for the next chapter :peace:
Title: Re: The Stars, The Stains, and The Mind Games UPDATE !!! ( MaYuki )
Post by: kahem on August 16, 2012, 12:42:25 AM
Hehe Mayu~ Mayu~ it's love~ ^^
Title: Re: The Stars, The Stains, and The Mind Games UPDATE !!! ( MaYuki )
Post by: epiclulz on August 16, 2012, 01:59:53 AM
Closets?

Tying to a chair?

Punishments and rewards?

Maso Yuki LOL

Suave Genking Miyazabutt made me LOL

Yes Mayu is gonna fall in love!!!!

I wonder how it will turn out!!!!!

But look at all the S&M LOL it's smexy enough
Title: Re: The Stars, The Stains, and The Mind Games UPDATE !!! ( MaYuki )
Post by: lollita90 on August 17, 2012, 06:44:49 AM
DAMN!! THIS IS HOTTT!!!  :on bleed: :on bleed: :luvluv1:  Mayuki should always be this way, and no, no Sae will be allowed to intersect.. :on thumbb: anyway, aren't u still underage, Chuuu? tch tch tch u're such a badass urself.. ahahaha  :wahaha:  anyway, will be waiting for your updates!!
Title: Re: The Stars, The Stains, and The Mind Games UPDATE !!! ( MaYuki )
Post by: ChuuuPuffss on August 17, 2012, 04:19:02 PM
Hey Hey~ YAY I update ! BTW, wasn't able to update yesterday  :fainted:
It was my mom's birthday, I had to go to dancing class and I had a load of HW !  :badluck:
Help me xD

Mo-chan : Jealous Mayuyu is kyuutoo~ Sae in the picture makes it more interesting! But y'know, we still end up with MaYuki~ TEEHEE  :on lol:
@Yuukimoko : Sweet like Strawberry Cake~ I'm sorry it was short  :kneelbow: And thank you for the push up !  :shy1: If a PUNISHMENT is something like that then I'm sure you'll be expecting more to the REWARD. Much more fiercer but sweet at the same time~  :luvluv2:
Crossing Crossroads : Sado Mayu lolol Mayu is interesting when u first look at her  :wahaha:
Pwety : Coz' we like Possessive Mayuyu and Otona Jelly Belly Mayuyu lolol  :kekeke:
Kahem : Yep. it's love ! She just won't admit it ~  :smoke:
Epiclulz : You knew it was S&M !  :stoned: I'm amazed with what u have there, dude.  :on GJ:
Lolita90 : Oh, Hey ~ You got here lolol ! Sae is always the key to emphasis ! But She can be annoying at times  :on drench: And I guess I'm underage ? I mean, is 18 underage ? xD And YES, I am a badass !  :wahaha:


Teppen : Real Execution I

" Yuki. "

" Nggh.. "

" NOW ! Or else.. ! "

" No way .. ! "

" I have no choice then. "

BUZZ

" Ittaii !! " Yuki half stood up her bed but as soon as she wanted to yell at Mayu, her lips met her. Before she knew it, Mayu was on top of her. No wonder her body was heavy when she was sleeping.

Mayu broke the kiss " Heh. You should've told me you wanted a good morning kiss. " Mayu winked at Yuki

" Ehh ! Who would want a kiss from you ! " Yuki tried to push Mayu off of her but to no avail.

" Oh ? How sad.. " Mayu acted sad and looked away. In Yuki's point of view, she saw a puppy instead of a girl

" EEH ! I'm sorry ! " Yuki hugged Mayu

" Ha ! Naisu ! " Mayu jumped out of Yuki's arms

" Eh ?? You we're acting ?! "

" Yes. Never saw a person act, dummy ? "

" Of course I have ! "

" Un. Then you we're an idiot for not knowing I was acting. " Mayu sticked her tongue to Yuki

Yuki sighed to the childishness of Mayu " Anyway, why so lively in the morning ? " Yuki looked at the clock " It's still 8 AM and it's an effing Sunday ! "

" Hmmm... Really want to know ? " Mayu skipped around doing weird steps

" Umm.. Well, I guess.. " Yuki looked at Mayu with a weird face

" Then, " Mayu stopped and looked at Yuki " Let's play a Mind Game! " Mayu smirked

" Okay. But what kind of Mind Game ? "

" If I tell you that, then that wouldn't be a Mind Game now, wouldn't it ? " Mayu crossed her arms and pouted " And that wouldn't be fun ! "

" Ah, you're right. Then, explain what I should do ? "

" ..Ahh I pity you ! Let's just make this easy. A little guessing game would do ? " Mayu tested Yuki without Yuki knowing. Oh, how Mayu operates with people.

" That wouldn't be a Mind Game now. " Yuki sweat-dropped

" Exactly. You see, Asking 'What Kind' and 'Explain' are mostly the same if you mean it in the same way. At first, you'd be the one asking and I neglect it. 2nd, I'd be the one asking and YOU neglect it. You need to realize what to say. Not realizing what I said earlier and unconsciously repeating what I said. Get it ? "

" Ahhh ! I get it ! "

" You see ! You got yourself into a Mind Game. And do you know what kind of Mind Game ? "

" Umm No ?? " Yuki said

" COMMON SENSE, YOU DUMMY ! " Mayu grabbed a pillow and threw it to Yuki

" Oh, gosh, I suck at this. " Yuki facepalmed

" You'll get to it. Anyway, since you really suck at it, I'll tell you directly. "

" Go ahead. "

" You'll have your first mission tonight. 'The Teppen Execution' "

" What ? I haven't even have training yet ! Nor preparation ! Why today ?! "

" Yuki, it takes the BRAINS and not the SKILLS. "

" Mayu, I'm not some kind of super-genius like you ! "

" I said you'll get to it ! And if I say TONIGHT, it's TONIGHT !! GOT IT ?! "

" H-Hai.. "

" Oh, and Yuki.. It's my father's death anniversary today. That's why. "

" Oh. So you're doing this behalf of your father ? "

" Yup. He left me the Watanabe name. And I shall continue what he had started. "

" Aren't you gonna go to his grave ? "

" Grave ? No. I don't want to see that bitch of a mother I have. "

" What ? Why not ? "

" I don't wanna talk about it. She make's me sick. "

Yuki got off her bed and patted Mayu's back " Don't worry, Mayuyu. I'll be here to be your 'Mother' instead ! " Yuki smiled

" What ? That's impossible. "

" Naahh. It is ! "

" Ah whatever. "

" Oh, before you tell me the instructions what is your father's name ? "

" Watanabe Yuuma. "

" SAY WHAT ?! "

" Yes. I took my father's name after he died. Nobody knew about my relations. Only You. "

" I'm flattered. " Yuki nudged Mayu

" I-It's not like I-Im telling you coz' I like you.. " Mayu blushed

" Who said anything about like ?? "

" Eh ? Nothing Nothing. Anyway, for your mission, you have to go to the enemy's hide out. Leave the location to me. The Yakuza group or 'Infinity' is my greatest enemy. I know I'm only 18 and all alone but I have been facing them for almost 4 years now. Never lost to them. They are also looking for Perfection. And losing is not my thing, Yuki. So I want you to get a crystal like figure named ' Nirvana '. A hint to lead us to the mystery if the Stains. "

" Stains ? What does the Stains have to to do with finding perfection ? "

Mayu sighed " You see, in order to find Perfection we have to find the Legacy Of The Stains. The legacy is the key to finding the mystery. And the mystery will lead us to how it all started. So, basically, we're looking for a FRAGMENT. A Fragment of the past. This fragment had been the cause to why the Stains appeared. A missing piece had been lost. I'll repeat. A fragment of the past disappeared and that's when the Stains stained the world, and people became too perfect that they are known to be imperfect. Got it ? "

" I got it. But why do you seek perfection ? "

" I seek perfection to be perfect myself. I am sick and tired of mistakes. Sick and tired of the Stains. It's like I have a curse, Yuki. Have you ever experienced freedom ? I haven't. I would want to feel what it's like to be free. I was never up to no good since birth. My birth had been planned. So the moment I was born, my father took me away and made me an experiment test and my mother never did anything to stop him. This void. Something called trust can ever be harmful." Mayu looked down and tears started falling down " I never obliged to do this !! "

" M-Mayu... " Yuki was worried about Mayu " Never experiencing freedom ? It's kinda cruel, Mayu. But since you knew that you we're destined for this, why not give up ? "

" Giving up makes you weak. Being weak makes you pitiful. And, I, Watanabe Mayu, will NEVER BE LOOKED DOWN. " Mayu proclaimed

" Shh.. Alright, Alright. I got it... Mayu, since you broke my freedom, I was never obliged to do it too. Accompanying you was pointless to me, but seeing that you have a purpose makes me feel that you are determined. Yet, no purpose, never giving up. but now, I've found my purpose to keep on being by your side. And that is to SET MAYU FREE. So, Mayu, don't forget that I'm here, okay ? " Yuki pulled Mayu in for a hug

Mayu blushed. Dammit, how could I show her this side of me ?! Now I'm screwed. Mayu just gave in. She hugged and leaned in to Yuki inhaling her scent.

" Mayu, you may not love me, but I love you. " Yuki whispered

What ? That can't be. Yuki, loving someone is against the Stains. This is bad, Yuki. I don't want to accept it but... I think I need you instead of love you. Which is greater ? Which is more valuable ? Which is more rightful ? I wish I could just be free and love you forever and ever. And we can spend Perfection together. 



A/N :

Okay. I admit it. This is so gay. Which makes it interesting. And I have no idea what I just wrote. Eff Nirvana and stuff lolol ~ Hope u guys got the picture xD

CRITICISM AT LEAST !  :whistle:

 



Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Teppen: Real Execution I ( MaYuki )
Post by: yuukimoko on August 17, 2012, 04:53:02 PM
M-morning kissu!? Yuki you're so bold~ :wub:


Mayu's past is sad! :cry:

Yuki have her first mission!!! yey~ XD

Mayu doesnt love Yuki.......she NEEDS her?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! :P XD XD   

sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo loooooooooooooooooooooooveeeeely! XD XD XD XD XD   

I cant wait for the next chapter........ :(

but ill still wait...so please update soon~!!!! XD
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Teppen: Real Execution I ( MaYuki )
Post by: lollita90 on August 17, 2012, 10:10:28 PM
ahaha yes!! i'm here! thanks for the link! anyway, how do u manage to write such story? this is kind of heavy for me. it's like i'm currently watching the animation from the assassin's creed game or so.  :dizzy:  hehe thanks for the update! ahh~ getting morning kiss from yukirin is just sooo  :wriggly: will wait for your next update!  :onioncheer:
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Teppen: Real Execution I ( MaYuki )
Post by: epiclulz on August 18, 2012, 12:39:24 PM
Hahaha, didn't expect a 12 yo girl like me to know BDSM?

I might even be more knowledgeable than you LOL

So Mayu starts to realise love...

Morning kiss!!! Kyaaa!!

The theme is very dark and serious lol

For some reason I can't stop loling

I'm very very curious about your fic.
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Teppen: Real Execution I ( MaYuki )
Post by: ChuuuPuffss on August 18, 2012, 03:50:59 PM
Hello :) Update for today :)

I'll focus the chapter today on Mayuyu's thoughts :)

@Yuukimoko : Since I'm in a rather good and bad mood, I'd just say thank you haha  :)

@Lolita90 : Oh, wow I'm flattered o.o My fic resembled the Assassin's Creed ? Wtf. I'm sorry but I'm not sure with my answer. I actually think about what to write in school but none of that pays off so I just write whatever comes to my mind so it might be a little heavy for you guys to understand. Sorry again  :nervous

Epiclulz : Eh ? You're still 12 ? Cool. You might be but I don't really know haha. The LOLing tension in my fic is quite heavy that it makes the mystery heavier too loool Joking xD

Confessions of a Cyborg

If you we're in a situation to find peace of mind, and you're forced to kill people..Dozens of people.. would you kill them ? Of course not.

But what if you are forced to kill people.. Millions of people, for a certain important person.. would you kill them ? Of course.

Why is it that you protect them to the extent that you would kill anybody blocking your way ? Is this the effects of TRUST and LOVE ?

Would you rather be a lonesome wolf than being lured in to a certain kind of touch ?

Would you rather kill yourself than to experience Betrayal ?

Would you rather experience Love ?

Or would you escape the consequences of being Stupid ?

Which one do you find rightful ? ...

As for my opinion, none of them are the right things to do. Simply escaping or getting lured in these voids are stupid. Instead, you would find a way to destroy these.

But what if ... a person. At first, a person. A mere stranger. Comes into your life. Unplanned. Undecided. Just... Suddenly. And they expect that you knew it was coming.

But what if ... this person becomes so bright and interesting to your eyes ?

Would you talk to her ?

Would you find a way to get her in your life ?

Of course you would... Just.. Like.. Me.

... But what if you successfully got her into your trap and you fall into her captivating void ?

Would you destroy the cause ?

Would you rather get away from her ?

Or would you just.. get lured in.. ??

As for me, ... I would get lured in.

Whether, Betrayal meets my way, I wouldn't destroy that certain void anymore. Why ? Simple. Because.. You.. Fell.. In.. LOVE.

Believe it or not.. I'm not sure yet..

Whether, I need her or I love her.

Which one is best ?

Both, you say ?

But what will happen to your mission ?

Your goal ?

The important person your protecting ?

The Peace and Perfection you are trying to find ?

Which would you pick ??

The one you love .. ?

The important person ?

Or.. Your goal of Peace and Perfection ?

Undecided.

... But what if they we're all combined in one simple being.

Would you go for it ?

Yes. It's easier that way and you get what you want.

Then, I found my REAL GOAL.

To get YOU.

To protect YOU.

To avenge YOU.

To MAKE YOU MINE.

These.. are the Confessions of Watanabe Mayu. Confessions of a Cyborg who is simply ... In Love.



A/N :

Heh.  :dozing:

Kinda boring. And Lame. But those are Mayu's thoughts. I'll update another chapter sometime soon. Bye bye  :cool2:








Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Confessions of A Cyborg ( MaYuki )
Post by: yuukimoko on August 18, 2012, 04:05:18 PM
Mayu thought's are ...intense! she really fell in love~ I aprove ,Mayu, You cand make Yuki yours! XD


please update soon~ :wub:
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Confessions of A Cyborg ( MaYuki )
Post by: lollita90 on August 18, 2012, 07:00:15 PM
Mayu thought's are ...intense! she really fell in love~ I aprove ,Mayu, You cand make Yuki yours! XD



Yeah, Yukirin is Mayu's! One and only! heehehh  :luvluv1:

Hahaha, didn't expect a 12 yo girl like me to know BDSM?

I might even be more knowledgeable than you LOL



we got another badass over here!!~ :stoned: ahahaha

Btw Chuuu, it's ok, i hope i don't whine too much. anyway, yes, in a way, your fic does resemble the game a bit. killing for a cause. :err: to find the so-called 'peace'. lol. look forward to your next update!  :on GJ:
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Confessions of A Cyborg ( MaYuki )
Post by: 21stMay on August 19, 2012, 10:15:02 AM
Thank you for the update, really hope that Mayu can be with Yuki :wub: Continue please :panic:
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Confessions of A Cyborg ( MaYuki )
Post by: Oshiforlife on August 19, 2012, 04:52:50 PM
this is kinda hurts my brain too LOL pls continue ~
ufufufufu it's good to fall in love Mayu ... especially with Yuki "dark smirk"
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Confessions of A Cyborg ( MaYuki )
Post by: mo-chan on August 20, 2012, 02:02:45 AM
Mayu loves Yuki now  :luvluv1:
it's more interesting now  :ding:
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Confessions of A Cyborg ( MaYuki )
Post by: ChuuuPuffss on August 20, 2012, 08:13:20 AM
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE

To all of you who sent a reply, all I could say is, " Hey there. I'm updating. I'm sorry if it hurts your minds and there's a very big possibility Mayu WILL fall in love. "



Teppen : Real Execution II

" Ahh.. I see you've arrived, Ne-zu-mi~ "

" Hmm Are you happy to see me ? "

" Kind of. But I'd be more happy to see you DEAD. "

" Oh ? And how are you going to kill me, then ? "

" With one final blow. "

" And what would that so called 'Final Blow' be ? "

" This.. Gekikara, beat her. " The person called out for a girl who looked like she'd break everyone's bones then she walked away

" hahahahaha ne.. okotteru ? "

" What if I'm not, you psychopath ? " Nezumi smirked as if she's plotting something

the girl somehow paused for awhile wide eyed but started laughing again " hahahaha "

" Hmph.. " Nezumi smirked much more wider. I'm not sure what her face can take too much smirking " Inside, I know you felt insulted by what I said. "

The girl bit her fingernails and stopped laughing " .. I'm not mad. "

" Of course, you aren't. " The hooded girl crossed her arms and put on an insulting smile " I mean, who said you we're ? Or is your conscience speaking what you feel for you ? "

The girl's eyes looked like it could come out from it's sockets. She snapped. She stopped biting her nails and lunged at Nezumi with a punch. But to her surprise, she didn't hear a crack nor smell blood.

" Hmm ? Is this what happens when you get offended ? " The reason why she didn't hear nor smell, was because her punch was stopped by one hand.

The girl tried to get her hand off but to no avail " Ha. This is why your asshole of a boss should face me PERSONALLY. She knows her henchmen wouldn't stand a chance. "

" No ! Master is caring to us ! She wouldn't hurt us nor betray us !! " The girl shouted

" I hate to be the Joker in the game but she's using you as a decoy. She doesn't care for you. You should've realize that by now. " Her sly smirk appeared again

" Aaargh ! " The girl got angry again and punched. Then, again caught by Nezumi's hand. " You know you don't stand a chance against me. "

" I do ! I fight for a reason ! And my reason is because Master saved me and I need to save her too !! " She tried so hard to set her hands free

" I have my reasons to kill your Master too. So we're even, right ? "

" No ! Your reason is terrible ! "

" Pathetic ! My reason is the same as yours ! So if my reason is terrible, yours is too. Am I right ? " Nezumi chuckled

" SHUT UP ! " She finally got her hands free and tried to punch but it was dodged

" I pity you. Trapped in a mesmerizing curse by your Master.  If I were her, I'd set you free if I were in danger. "

" I SAID SHUT UP, YOU RAT !! " She tried to punch again but her hand was pulled in and now she's pinned to the ground

" Well, let's see. " Some purple seal appeared in Nezumi's left eye " If I were to kill you right here, right now, for a certain important person, would I kill you ? No, right ? But what if I've had enough of you ? I WOULD kill you, wouldn't I ? So there's a great possibility I would kill you. So, stay out of my business! "

" NEVER ! I WILL STAY FAITHFUL TO MY MASTER FOREVER !! "

" Hmm that made sense in a way. I've really had enough of you, and I would so so kill you right now if my mind wasn't working. Even though I'm a Cyborg, I have a heart too. So, I'll just set you in a seal to prevent you from waking up, alright ? An eternal seal possibly if you struggle too much in your dreams. "

" What ? No— " As soon as the girl could react, glowing spears came out and attacked her body. It hurts but not physically but spiritually. Within 5 seconds, her eyes were closed and she stopped struggling.

" That'll teach you to mess with me. " Nezumi stood up and straightened her hoodie so that her face wouldn't be seen and spotted a camera in the corner of her eye.

" Oh ? " she walked up to the camera but didn't look up to it " So, you were watching ? Hmm.. Interesting. " She smirked and in a flash of lightning, the camera was set down to the floor in front of Gekikara.

" Have a nice view. " She walked away after.

Meanwhile ...

" Shit. Why is this place so wide ?! " Black half shouted as she was running

" Oi ! "

" Eh ? " Black turned around and saw two Midgets " Aargh ! What do you want, WMidget ?! "

" Hey, who're you calling Midget ?! " Midget 1 yelled

" Yeah, you Marimokkori ! " Midget 2 stuck a tongue to Black

" Aish. I don't have time for games. What do you want ? " Her dark aura started to emerge

" We come in peace ! " Midget 1 said

" We'll help you ! " Midget 2 flashed a peace sign

" How should I know the 2 of you aren't that girl's henchmen ? "

" We are. But we got tired of her ! " Midget 2 shrugged

" I don't trust you. " Black turned around but a hand patted her shoulder

" Hold on, Black. Why don't we give the Midgets a chance ? " Nezumi smirked

" Nezumi . " Black looked at Nezumi surprisedly

" Hmm.. First of all, do you really want to help us ? " Nezumi asked as she skipped forward to the Midgets.


The midgets hugged eachother for dear Mercy

" Yes ! Our Master is just using us ! " Midget 1 said

" I see.. "

" How about we ask them to show us where Nirvana is " Black whispered to Nezumi

Nezumi turned to Black and whispered" Hmm.. Nice idea, Yu~ki~rin~ " then she kissed Black's cheek. Black blushed and the 2 Midgets blushed to the sight

" Let's see.. " In a flash, Nezumi was behind WMidget squeezing their Oshiris " Can you tell us where Nirvana is ? " Black face palmed

" Hey ! W-Where do you think y-you're touching ?! " Midget 1 panicked

" I'm supposed to be the one touching Oshiris ! " Midget 2 panicked as well

" I won't let go until you answer my question. " Nezumi's face turned emotionless


" Y-yes ! W-We'll tell you wh-where it is ! "


" Yeah ! Just let us go and f-follow us ! "


" Ah ! I'll put a seal on the two of you, then ! Okay ? "


" Hai ! " Wmidget said because they want their Oshiris freed


" Good. " As Nezumi leaned in to Midget 1 but then


" Matteyo ! " Black yelled


" What is it, Black ? " Nezumi stopped half-way


" Y-You aren't going to kiss them, r-right ? " Black blushed


" Oh ? Jealous, are we ? " Nezumi smirked


" N-Not really.. " Black looked away


" Hello ! There so much time to do that in bed ! Our oshiris are getting numb ! " Midget 2 retorted


" You're right. Don't worry, I won't kiss you. " Nezumi leaned to Midget 1's cheek and licked it then she let go of Midget 1's oshiri. Then she did the same with Midget 2. Seals then appeared on their palms


" There. So, if you go beyond my will and power, I swear I will kill the both of you. Got it ? " Nezumi's face turned emotionless again


" Yokai ! "


" You know the rules, right ? "


" Yes. Our Ex-Master told us about you now we know what you always do. "


" Ahh I'm that famous~ " Nezumi went back to her spot next to Black


" Umm Nezumi-san, right ? " Midget 1 asked


" Yep. "


" Aren't you a little too young to be Ex-Master's nemesis ? " Midget 2 asked


"  Well, I'm 18 and legal. So, Yes and No. " Nezumi flashed a peace sign


" Wat "


" Eh ? " Nezumi's face turned to questioning " Did I say something wrong ? " Black face palmed her face too hard this time


" Nothing. Well, I'm Takahashi Minami and this is Oshima Yuko ! " Midget 1 ( Takamina ) bowed


" Yoroshiku, Shiriri-chan ! " Yuko flashed a peace sign


" Interesting, Squirrel. . Well, I'm Nezumi as you know, and this is Black. " Black glared at them


" Yikes ! Easy there, dude ! " Yuko clung to Takamina


" Now that's done. Tell us where Nirvana is. " Nezumi smirked


" Hai ! Follow us ! " Yuko led them to Nirvana but the 2 Midget's Ex-Master's henchmen caught them walking around


" Cease them !  "


" Black, carry them and run to Nirvana now ! " Black nodded and did what Nezumi said. Wow ! I never knew I could run this fast !! Black thought

Nezumi finished beating them up and caught up to Black and the Midgets and they ran to Nirvana


TBC


A/N : Midget 1 = Takamina Midget 2 = Yuko


Eeh~ I enjoyed writing this chapter even though I had to do it twice loooooool


Review ? Criticism ? YAY Hope you liked it :3

BTW, I'm Advertising my OS / Idk if it's rlly an OS xD Maybe it isn't now coz' I got tired and decided to make Parts lol

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Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: UNDER CONSTRUCTION XD ( MaYuki )
Post by: masokun on August 20, 2012, 08:48:11 AM
Oke, you've got me..

Where's the next part?

Gimme..gimme moreeee  :banghead:
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: UNDER CONSTRUCTION XD ( MaYuki )
Post by: ChuuuPuffss on August 20, 2012, 09:00:43 AM
@Masokun : xD Sorry Sorry xD It's up now xD
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Teppen : Real Execution II ( MaYuki )
Post by: Crossing Crossroads on August 20, 2012, 10:52:43 AM
UWAAAHHSDFEKR...  :mon XD: I :heart: this chapter... :mon thumb:

Takamidget, and Yuko-midget make an entrance! :on cigar: Uhuhu.

Oh, Mayuyu... so she likes butt-grabbing... I'm pretty sure everyone here dug that... hehehe. :mon fyeah:

Yukirin is jealous? JEAROUZ? Ehehe... :mon lol:

I wonder who their "Master" is...  :mon huh: :mon one:

...god it's hot over here... :mon tantrum:
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Teppen : Real Execution II ( MaYuki )
Post by: masokun on August 20, 2012, 11:14:41 AM
Yay!  :cow:

Black being tsun..cute!!! Careful, nezumi..you don't know what will happen if black really are jealous  :twisted:


Curious about the WMidget's Ex-Master and Nirvana

Update soon will you  :oops:
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Teppen : Real Execution II ( MaYuki )
Post by: lollita90 on August 20, 2012, 08:30:05 PM
*edited from my previous comment just now*

ehh? who is the master? geki is down now.. poor geki  :fainted:

yeah, continue more!~~  :cow:
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Teppen : Real Execution II ( MaYuki )
Post by: ChuuuPuffss on August 21, 2012, 01:49:17 PM
Ohhh an Update :33
Hey, guys, I'm kinda free on the moment. Finished making HW and shit. Any requests for an OS ? Any pairing *^*
Awwe, pleaase ! Walking my dog at this hour isn't an option so :puppyeyes: any requests ? Gladly accept.
Lol whatever, here~



Teppen : Real Execution III


" QUICK ! RUN FASTER, BLACK !! " Nezumi yelled as she got ahead of Black

" HEY ! I'm not a Cyborg, you ! So, basically I have lungs ! " Black panted while running

" Come on, Dude ! I gave you the power of Speed so basically RUN FASTER ! THEY'RE CATCHING UP ! "

" Don't call me dude ! I'm a girl ! " Black retorted

" Hey, you two ! This isn't the time for a lover's quarrel !! " Takamina smacked Black's head causing her to slow down

" You've made it worst, Midget ! " Yuko smacked Takamina

" What the hell ?! Look who's talking, Midget ! " Takamina stuck a tongue at Yuko

PAAK ! Nezumi smacked Yuko " SHUT THE F*** UP ! BLACK, RUN NOW !! " Black looked at Nezumi with a 'Are-U-Serious- face

" My head hurts ! "

" Is that a no ? " Nezumi turned expressionless knowing what will happen

" .. Yes ? " BUZZ. The seal had appeared on Black's neck but with it's original glow

" RUN NOW, OR ELSE ! " Black's super speed reacted and she ran. Nezumi smirked and caught up

As they lost the henchmen, they slowed down a little. Nezumi glanced at WMidget and they we're swiftly doing their job while Black was following the directions and mumbling stuff with 'baka' and 'rat' and 'midget'. As soon as they arrived at their destination, there was nobody there.

" Ha. Your Master is stupid ! She left nobody to guard this place ! " Nezumi skipped to a crystal like figure with a glass covering it. But to their surprise, she stopped.

" What's wrong, Nezumi ? " Black asked curiously.

Nezumi turned around and looked at the Midgets. " Hey, you two. " She said with a bitter tone

" HAI ! " The Midgets stood straight

" I'm not stupid. I don't believe there isn't anyone guarding this place. Speak up ! " Nezumi ran to Takamina and raised her collar

" Eer.. aano.. Th-There are invisible lasers there, " She pointed over to the glass " and there's a camera .. ! " she pointed to the camera above

" Why didn't you tell me earlier, then ? You think I'm stupid ? I could kill you any second ! " Nezumi raised her fist and was ready to punch but Black caught her arm

" Nezumi, calm down. At least listen to their reason. " Nezumi let go of Takamina's collar and shook Black's hand off

Takamina straightened her collar " Alright. What's your reason ? " Nezumi looked at her bitterly

" We thought that you already knew since you're so smart and stuff. We're sorry. " Takamina and Yuko bowed

" Hmm That reason is valid. You two don't let your guard down. " Nezumi turned around and faced Black " and Black, get Nirvana fast and carefully. I wouldn't want a scratch on your body.. If you know what I mean. " Nezumi winked at Black and Black blushed and nodded at the same time

Nezumi walked up to the camera and smirked. " Hello~ Ne~zu~mi desu~! " Nezumi playfully smiled and pointed at the camera " You Sadist ! You're watching, right ? " The Midgets sweat dropped " What the heck is she doing.. "

" Anyway, I'll be taking Nirvana now, okay ? Since your henchmen are too weak, you don't stand a chance. You coward, face me properly and your little chess pieces aren't gonna get hurt. " Her smirk got wider as she took her phone out of her pocket and point it at the camera. " BANG. " She smirked and as she pressed a button, all the cameras blew up attracting a certain someone's attention.

" Nezumi, I got it ! " Black held Nirvana in her arms

" Good. Let's go. " Black ran to the Midgets but as soon as they we're about to go out, a voice called out. " Oi. "

Nezumi turned around with an irritated face " You know, as much as I like games, I'm not in the mood to play one. " They all looked at the person

" Nezumi, right ? I'm Centre. The keeper of this place. " The girl smirked and she almost looked like a Cat

" How polite of you to tell your name to the enemy. But the enemy doesn't want to know your name, but it's too late. " Nezumi got a piece of gum and unwrapped it and place it in her mouth. Then she started chewing

" Well, I'm not the type who just lunges at you for no reason. You might be kind in a way ? " She walked slowly to Nezumi

" I might be and you're not. I have no interest in a fight. I suppose you want Nirvana back ? "

" That might be, Hooded friend. But... I want a challenging fight, first. I'll give up if I lose. "

" Oh ? I don't want any fights. "

" Then, I have no choice but to lunge at you, right ? " Centre turned into fighting position

" Beats me. " Nezumi's party turned away but then Centre jumped on Nezumi. They landed on the ground and Centre had a punching spree

Black and the others laughed at Centre " Interesting. How could you be assigned to this place and you're not smart ? Your Master is always depending on the skills. " Centre turned around and saw Nezumi sitting down on the glass with lasers below her feet

" How can this be ?! " Centre looked at what she was punching and to her surprise it was a decoy with the same everything as Nezumi. Nezumi snapped her fingers and the decoy disappeared. Centre stood up and smirked " Not bad. "

" Yeah and you're bad. " Nezumi jumped off the glass and in a flash, she was raising Centre's collar up

" Listen, kid. I don't want you meddling in my business.. " Nezumi leaned in to Centre's ears and blew " You saw that friend of yours who got massacred, right ? Do you want to turn out like that ? " Centre gulped

" Geez.. I don't have a choice, do I ? "

" Well, stay faithful to your master or just give up ? "

" Since this hurts too much... " Centre smirked " I'm gonna punch your face, pimp ! " Without warning, Centre punched Nezumi's face. But that didn't stop Nezumi from playing her Mind Games

" You aren't aware that you got into my Mind Game. And guess what ? You played along. Thank you. " Nezumi pinned Centre to a wall and punched her face a couple of times.

Nezumi let go of Centre and went back to her party. " Let's go. " As they started walking, Centre suddenly spoke up " I'm not done with you, Rat.. ! " Centre tried to catch up

Nezumi smirked " We'll meet again. You'll get your chance. " And with that, they left the Infinity's hideout safely.

When they arrived at Nezumi's house, Black showed the two Midgets where they could rest. She changed her clothes and went to Nezumi's room. I mean, Mayu's room.

" Mayuyu ? " When she entered Mayu was changing into a shirt which showed her

" E-Ehh ??! Sumimasen ! " When Yuki was about to go out, she was stopped by Mayu

" Where do you think you're going ? " Continued to put her shirt on

" Well, umm...anoo.. y-you we're changing your clothes so.. "

" Ahh. You we're embarrassed. " Mayu chuckled

" Umm.. " Yuki blushed

Mayu sat on her bed and patted the space next to her " Come. "

Yuki nodded and sat with her. To her surprise, Mayu held her hand

" Since you did a good job, " Mayu leaned in to Yuki and ended up pinning her to the bed " I'll give you a reward. " Mayu smirked

Yuki blushed and was looking for an excuse to get free. then, she saw Mayu's swollen cheek " Wait, Mayuyu ! "

" Ehhh What ? " Mayu stood up pulling Yuki with her " We were going to the good part... " She mumbled

Yuki blushed AGAIN. " Y-Your cheek is swollen.. "

" Eh ? " Mayu touched her cheek and hissed " Baka Mayu, why'd you touch it .. "

" Let me help you clean it. " Yuki offered but Mayu rejected

" No way. I'm fine, Yukirin. "

" We don't want your face like that, do we ? "

" I know one thing that would heal it quickly ! " Mayu wiggled

" Hmm what is it ? "

" A kiss on the cheek would do the trick ! " Mayu smiled whil Yuki blushed

" I have no choice. " Yuki kissed Mayu's cheek gently. When she was about to pull back, Mayu pinned her to the bed again

" Continuing~ Ja, itadakimasu ! " Mayu kissed Yuki's neck and left a mark

" M-Mayu ! " Yuki blushed " Just stay still, will you ! " Then she continued

Meanwhile in Infinity Hideout

" Hmmm... Centre, I am not proud of you. "

" I'm sorry, Master... "

" As a punishment, I will suspend you for this week. "

" Hai.. "

" Now go get Gekikara. "

" Yes, Master. " Centre left

" Hmm... I've underestimate you, Nezumi.. I'll make a more hard plan, then. " She smirked



YAY !
Reviews ?
Requests anyone ? OTL
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Teppen : Real Execution III ( MaYuki )
Post by: yuukimoko on August 21, 2012, 01:53:47 PM
first request!

Simple : Mayuki please~!

Hard :JurinaxRenaxYukixMayu!


You chosse!

later the comment!
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Teppen : Real Execution III ( MaYuki )
Post by: yuukimoko on August 21, 2012, 02:01:05 PM
second review!

" A kiss on the cheek would do the trick ! " I like this line~!!!!! :oops:


Yuki got her first reward~!!!!!! so happy! :inlove:

Centre lost, well I was expecting it~ :lol:

Balck is sooooooo cute~~~ :wub:

And now Mayu has 3 servants~ :?
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Teppen : Real Execution III ( MaYuki )
Post by: mo-chan on August 21, 2012, 02:18:52 PM
request for pairing : of course I want Wmatsui  :ding:
Yuki is always kawaii  :shy2:
Yuki got her first reward but it wasn't long  :fainted:
I wonder who is their master  :dunno:
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Teppen : Real Execution III ( MaYuki )
Post by: Crossing Crossroads on August 21, 2012, 04:54:53 PM
The moment I read "sadist" I thought Sado, and when I thought Sado, I thought of Mariko... Sadist will always mean Sado... LOL.

Ohoho... Now Center makes an appearance...  :ding:
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Teppen : Real Execution III ( MaYuki )
Post by: masokun on August 21, 2012, 05:13:10 PM
The master..the master...the master..
wait.. why I have to repeat those word  :lol:
 I really curious about the master, for sure..


for pairing..all I can request just
Rena X Airin (SKE)  :pimp:
Jurina X Churi (SKE)

why SKE?... I dunno  *wuuzzzzztt....dissapeared*

Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Teppen : Real Execution III ( MaYuki )
Post by: lollita90 on August 21, 2012, 06:55:10 PM
yeayy!! thanks for the update! i'm still wondering who the master is. sado?  :dunno:

anyway, can i request for a marimii pair?  :mon pray2: :mon pray2: thanks! but it's ok if u can't  :)
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Teppen : Real Execution III ( MaYuk
Post by: ChuuuPuffss on August 23, 2012, 04:24:40 PM
Lolita90 : Oh, sure ! I'll work on the MariMii pair after I feel well !
Crossing Crossroads : Lol I won't tell you guys yet who exactly the Master is. Gomen ne ^^"
Masokun : Ooh~ I'll work on one of those pairings then :D
Since I have so much homework and I'm not really feeling good, I'll just give you guys an Omake or Extra, instead  :mon santa4:
Well, it's better than nothing, right ? For the record, I have no idea what I'm gonna use as a plot to this Extra. Forgive me. My brain won't function well if I'm tired ^^"
Anyway, Cheers for the Omake~! :cheers



Omake : The Hospital Mischief

It was a normal day at Akihabara Hospital. The doctors, the nurses, the surgeons, the staff and everybody was doing their job well. There were also days when everybody in the hospital was a war freak. When they were losing patients and some would even get fired for yelling at the patient's visitors. But if you do your job well, there will always be this day called day-off. Unfortunately, none of them got a chance to get a day-off this month. Trollface Enough about that, let's go to the lives of the Hospital workers.

Meanwhile at the Nurses' Counter...

" Ah~ This day is pretty normal~ " Yuko stretched her arms

" How would you know ? You just got into this hospital. " The girl beside Yuko, Minegeshi Minami or Miichan stucked a tongue out to Yuko

" I know but a hospital is always busy, you know. Today, it's kind of relaxing for all of us~ "

" Ha! It feels like were having a day-off in the hospital. " Takamina leaned to the wall

" Yeah. And woohoo ! Looks like the doctors are coming this way! " The Squirrel rejoiced to the thrill of meeting Dr. Kojima Haruna

" Goodmorning, girls " Yuki opened the door without warning. That led the three nurses to squeal

" What the heck, Yuki ! " Yuki looked at Takamina and saw her on the floor

Yuko laughed so hard " HA ! Midget's oshiri got owned by the floor ! " Yuko moved her hand and hit Miichan's icecream causing it to fall down

" Geez, Yuko ! My Oh so Precious Food !! " Miichan knelt to the ground and mourned

" Is it always this lively here ? " Mayu patted Yuki's shoulder

Yuki looked back " Oh, Ma-- Yuuma ! I thought you had another case to solve . " Yuki blushed coz' Mayu was too close

" Oh, I'm done with that. " Mayu went in and sat down

" Look's like were forgotten ? " Haruna went inside dragging the well-known surgeon, Maeda Atsuko

" Sorry for intruding.. " Acchan silently said and took a seat

" Nyannyan, you came for me~ " Yuko went to hug Haruna and now her face was buried on her OPPAI boobs

" Ahh, Yuu-chan, get off me! " As Haruna was struggling, she stepped on Miichan's ice cream

" My ICECREAM ! NOT AGAIN ! " Miichan mourned harder

" Miichan is so pitiful. " Acchan glanced at Takamina and she was still on the ground. Acchan stood up and offered a hand to Takamina

" Eh ? "

" I'll help you get up. " Acchan smiled and Takamina blushed " O-Ok.. " Takamina took her hand and she was pulled up gently but Haruna's struggling AGAIN bumped Takamina and she ended up hugging Acchan. But when she accidentally hugged Acchan, Acchan fell down the floor with Takamina on top of her. Poor Acchan was pressured by the weight of Takamina and because she landed on Miichan's ice cream.

" NOOOO !! MY EFFING ICE CREAM ! WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH YOU, PEOPLE ?!?!? " Miichan stood up and stuck a tongue to Acchan " I'm gonna get another ice cream and eat it outside ! " Miichan stomped her feet all the way to the cafeteria

" Ah ! Gomen, Acchan, Miichan ! " Haruna smacked Yuko's head gesturing her to apologize too " Sorry " Yuko smiled showing her dimples

Acchan smiled at them showing that it was alright.

" Geez, how could this Midget be so heavy ?!?! " Acchan was yelling in her head

" Hey, aren't you getting up ? My hair has so much ice cream now. " To her surprise, Takamina's face was in her boobs which made her blush

" Ohoho ! Getting good in there, eh, Takaboy ? " Yuko laughed " Yuu-chan ! " Yuko grinned " Sarehh "

Takamina realized where her face was and immediately got up and bowed " I'm sorry ! Please don't think I'm a pervert ! "

Acchan sat up and smiled sheepishly " Oh, no, it's okay. You're not a pervert haha. " Acchan laughed but there was a tint of blush on her cheeks

" It sure is getting hot in here. " Yuki sweat dropped while Mayu was just expressionless but she slowly took Yuki's hand and intertwined their fingers together making Yuki blush

" Ahh.. " Acchan stood up and touched the back of her head " Looks like Ice cream owned my hair. "

" I'm sorry again. " Takamina looked down

" It's okay. It was just an accident. " Yuko was laughing so hard while Haruna was still struggling

" Hey, Takabutt. Help Dr. Maeda clean herself up. " Mayu advised Takamina coz' she looked like she needed help

Yuki quietly whispered to Mayu " Wouldn't that make the situation work ? "

" You may be clever, but I'm smart. " Mayu flashed a reassuring smile Yuki. Yuki on the other hand gave up knowing Mayu knows what to do.

" O-Okey.. " Acchan took Takamina's hand again

" Let's go, then ? " Acchan smiled

" Yeah.. " Then Acchan dragged Takamina to the Rest room

Mayu sighed " What's wrong ? " Yuki asked

" I wonder what the other doctors are doing... "

" Ah. I forgot. I need to finish that report too. "

" What report ? "

" The report you told me to make ! "

" Oh, that. "

" Yeah, I gotta go. " Yuki released Mayu's hand and was about to go out but Mayu got her wrist

" What ? " Yuki asked

" Finish the report later. " Mayu pointed to KojiYuu's actions

" Yuu-chan ! Let go ! " Yuko was still hugging Haruna " Nooo waaay ! "

" I want something like that. " Mayu smirked and dragged Yuki to a closet again

" Hey !! What about me ?! Don't leave me with a pervert ! " Haruna was crying inside

THE END



A/N : Was that even an Omake ? Lol

Reviews are greatly accepted ~~  :mon santa2:

Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Omake ~! ( MaYuki, AtsuMina, Kojiyuu )
Post by: Crossing Crossroads on August 23, 2012, 04:36:54 PM
Uuuhu... god knows why I'm still up... past the night and into the morning... :err: (Not good, I had plans today... I hope I don't fall asleep. :mon tweaker: ...I'm such a vampire... :mon bat: ) *COUGHCOUGHAKBFANFICSCOUGHCOUGH*  :mon sweat:

But yay~ AtsuMina!~ (And of course other favorited OTPs...)
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Omake ~! ( MaYuki, AtsuMina, Kojiyuu )
Post by: lollita90 on August 23, 2012, 04:53:57 PM
nice nice nice NICE!!!!  :farofflook: :on GJ: :ding:

ahh~ minna kawaii ne~  :on BDay: :stuffed:

mayuki  :on bleed: :on bleed:
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Omake ~! ( MaYuki, AtsuMina, Kojiyuu )
Post by: mo-chan on August 23, 2012, 06:49:13 PM
Atsumina are really funny  :hiakhiakhiak:
Mayuki the best  :on GJ:
poor Haruna  :wahaha:
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Omake ~! ( MaYuki, AtsuMina, Kojiyuu )
Post by: Pwety on August 24, 2012, 12:01:06 AM
II NE~~!!! :on GJ:

Takamina too funny! :hiakhiakhiak:

Mayuki hoho... :luvluv1:

Poor Haruna
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Omake ~! ( MaYuki, AtsuMina, Kojiyuu )
Post by: masokun on August 24, 2012, 05:52:01 AM
Whaaaaa??
Are trying to torture me..
with all those pairing in ONE omake.. but you just left with an -END- word?  :banghead:

I'm kidding..

Great omake.. really cheering up the day!
nice one  :thumbsup

and will be wait for another pairing  :oops:
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Omake ~! ( MaYuki, AtsuMina, Kojiyuu )
Post by: ChuuuPuffss on August 25, 2012, 02:43:47 AM
HIATUS.. MAYBE ?

OKAY.. The thing is I lost inspiration ...

I can't accept the fact that a lot of pairings are being separated !

All the cruisers are sinking. fuck u, Aki-P.

Akicha is getting transferred to JKT ! What'll happen to French Kiss ?! Yuki got her solo ! Is AKB breaking down ??

Mayuyu also is a Seiyuu and the next Centre ! AND SHE DID A AN EFFING 2ND SINGLE ! Do they need to be in AKB ?! -Sigh-

Some members are graduating too..

I somehow want Acchan to feel GUILTY.

Even tho she's my 3rd Oshi, I just want her to feel the pain of what's happening to her members.

MaYuki is breaking down !! I don't want that ! Getting separated ?!?! WTF, Aki-P ! I will murder u slowly and surely !!

WHAT'LL HAPPEN TO THE WOTAS ? xD

(http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m9a5ribdli1r31n4zo1_400.gif) <-- Immediately broke my heart T_T

(http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m9a7vd7r271qg6n1ho1_250.jpg)

(http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m99ycyxjFt1r9bi8bo2_250.jpg)

THINK ABOUT THE WOTAS, AKI-SHIT ! Without the wotas, u r nothing T_T

And it's not like this is the end to my 48 Fandom.. I just lost hope and inspiration. My beloved Team B </3

Please, guys ! Tell me what I should do T_T
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Announcemet (MaYuki, AtsuMina, Kojiyuu)
Post by: kahem on August 25, 2012, 03:36:31 AM
Oh~ there is Atsumina too~
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Announcemet (MaYuki, AtsuMina, Kojiyuu)
Post by: Crossing Crossroads on August 25, 2012, 03:54:03 AM
Take as much time as you need to absorb all the information. Take a hiatus if you want, but OTP does not stop there. The members are still part of AKB as they are of us. As long as AKB doesn't fall into the shadows with this change, I'm perfectly fine with this. I guess I'm the type to easily adapt to things when the time is right. And I, for a fact, am used to reading fictions that are put on hiatus and never continued again. Ever.

Eventually, I think you will come back to the 48 fandom though. I don't think this should stop you. If AKB is continuing to step forward as a renewed group, I think you should too, but as an AKB fan/wota(?). :bingo:
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Announcemet (MaYuki, AtsuMina, Kojiyuu)
Post by: lovefate on August 25, 2012, 04:46:05 AM
hmm...i know u are shock... it's hard to accept it anyway. I also lost at the moment i saw Mayu's name in Team A... and then Yuki is not the captain anymore.

I didnt know what to do, or what will happen to Mayuki... my precious couple...There were a lot of things happen in the concert this time... No one think that they will reshuffle the group again.

I was depressed for the whole day, no energy to do any effing thing, just thinking about them broke me. But thinking about it, there's still a chance for them, Mayuki i mean ( other couple is hopeless). Mayu and Yuki are the 2nd and 3th senbatsu members, so they will probably together to perform their single, photoshoot or at least some TV shows together. We still have hope in them, right?

I know being in the same team will be much better, but at least im glad that Aki-P didnt transfer Mayu or Yuki to those freaking JKT or SHN.. or whatever idk.

As their shipper, i believe in them...i believe that all those sweet moments between them are not all for fan-service. I believe that all those 5-6 years relationship they have spent together wont vanish when they are not in the same team anymore.

If they still manage to show us their sweet moment later on the show, or blog or something like that, isn't that also mean that they are real? Being separated is nothing but to make each other realize how important the other is, right ?

Looking at those heartbroken picture tear our heart apart, but we can see the pain in it. Mayu cried when she heard her name being called. Yuki could do nothing but looking and crying hopelessly. Isnt that show us how hurt, how disappointed, and how broken they were? Isn't that enough for us to know that they are real, that we can believe in them?

So please, just stay calm ( i know it's hard T-T) and believe in them, believe in what we have been believed for all those times. Also support the new team, it will be hard for them, too. It's not only us who are in the pain, they are also hurt. Being moved away from their close friends whom they have been together is not easy at all.

Takamina had said that this is a new beginning for them, so we should listen to our beloved captain and follow her. I believe she will lead us to a new future.

Enough with me rambling. Over all, this is just my poor opinion... i love ur fic tho :) U can take a break and try to adapt to the new things for now... Thank u for writing the fic and for ur time reading my silly post ( if u ever read it)

Have a nice day........ i hope :)
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Announcemet (MaYuki, AtsuMina, Kojiyuu)
Post by: kuronekosan on August 25, 2012, 07:23:08 AM
Take as much time as you need. I was seriously shocked too. Everyone is. But if you need proof, look at the 3rd picture you posted. They've come to an understanding backstage. Although their smiles are sad, I think it shows that they're always gonna keep in touch. They know that even though they're in separate teams now, they're still close friends and they won't let that stop them. So cheer up! The fans will weather this together and see just how strong their friendship is.
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Announcemet (MaYuki, AtsuMina, Kojiyuu)
Post by: mo-chan on August 25, 2012, 11:53:26 AM
I'm dead I' dead  :on cloudeye: :on blackhole:
 wait!I want to kill Akip's before I die  :shifty:
who want to come with me  :ding:
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Announcemet (MaYuki, AtsuMina, Kojiyuu)
Post by: ChuuuPuffss on August 25, 2012, 05:33:34 PM
To all of you who gave me support. To every reason you told me. That was equal to ONE SLAP. ONE VIRTUAL SLAP. And guess what ? That virtual slap brought me back to my senses. Much more hope and inspiration before the Shuffle happened. I'm actually grateful the Shuffle happened. It brought me to what I am now. And Aki-P ? Yes, I still want to kill him BUT I realized he really did know what he was doing. Appointing some other members to overseas 48 groups was a great chance for them to go beyond famous. I mean, think about it. We need 48 groups aside from AKB|SKE|NMB to be famous ! As for the MaYuki and other OTPs, Im actually not really worried anymore. I recalled why I fell in love with MaYuki. It was because of their loyalty for eachother. Therefore, being in different teams wouldn't stop them. Just like KojiYuu. They were never in the same team in the first place. So, people out there who are going crazy and can't accept the fact, don't go out and tell the world, " OH GOSH, HEY, I'M THROWING A TANTRUM AT MY HOUSE ! VIDEO ME AND SEND IT TO AKI-P " Why ? Because You would look stupid and dumb just like a dork who didn't analyze the situation  :rofl:  :rofl:
Cheer up, guys ! AKB needs a new and fresh start ! And the OTPs shall live forever <3 Including AtsuMina ! We shall not be like ' </3 ' anymore !  :heart:

BTW, I'm advertising again~ I've gained so much inspiration that I made a fic !
http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33587.0 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33587.0) <- Check out my Boredom Thread. It's located in the lowest part~  :grin:

Last, I would like to thank a certain member who made me realized I almost told the world I'd go to USA and purposely get eaten by a shark. Mention name ? I think you know who you are ~ And THANK YOU ! Yes, You ! The one who is reading this line ! I LOVE YOU and PLEASE CONTINUE TO SUPPORT AKB ! There's so much more to this 48 Fandom !
We should KEEP CALM AND SUPPORT AKB ! Thank you for taking your time in reading this. To all I had said so far, I think you have realized that I will not HIATUS this fic. Let's continue our Akihabara Adventures together with our strength, hope and support for AKB ! Ja ne~  :deco:
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Thank You ! (MaYuki, AtsuMina, Kojiyuu)
Post by: ChuuuPuffss on August 30, 2012, 12:48:20 PM
Update yay lol  :grin:




Before the Dawn


" Centre. "

" Yes, Master ? "

" Where is L ? "

" Outside. Shall I call him for you ? "

" Very well. " Centre nodded and called for L

L bowed " You called for me ? "

" L, I am not satisfied with Centre taking the lead. I want you to lead from now on. "

" Okay. "

" Wait, what ?! What do you mean ?! " Centre called out

The master looked at Centre " You are too soft. L will be taking your place from now on. "

" .. Fine. " L smirked at Centre " You got lucky this time, you. "

" This time.. My plan shall be a success. "

" What shall I do, Master ? "

" I want you to seduce her. She'll be very good for bait. "

" Hmm Okay. I'm on it. "

" Now, go. " L nodded and in a swift of wind, he was gone


∞∞∞∞∞∞∞∞∞∞∞∞∞∞∞∞∞∞∞∞∞


" Hey, where exactly are we going, huh ? " Yuko kept on following Nezumi

" To search for more clues, duh. " Nezumi replied with bland tone

" Why didn't you bring Yuki, then ? " Nezumi suddenly stopped and fell silent " ..... "

" Oi. " Yuko waved her hand in front of Nezumi's face " Oi ! Did you guys fight or something ? "

" What ?! No. " Nezumi blushed

Yuko smirked " Awwe come on ! You guys obviously fought ! "

" We didn't fight, okay ?! It was just... " Nezumi fell silent again

" It was just what ? "

" Wait, we didn't fight ! I.. I just got tired of her, okay ? I don't need people who go against me. "

" Dude, " Yuko patted Nezumii's back " Yeah, you don't need people like that, but I assure you that you need Yuki. "

" I don't need her ! " Nezumi shook off Yuko's hand " I lived without her once. I'm sure I can do it twice. "

" Then, tell me what you're gonna do to let her go, hmm ? "

" Why do you care ? " Nezumi glared at Yuko

" I care because I can. Let's just get to the point. You like Yuki, don't you ? "

" N-No ! I d-don't l-like her ! "

" Come on, LIKING isn't a part of the Stains. " Yuko sweat dropped

" Oh, yeah. I knew that. " Nezumi sighed " But hey, LIKE might turn into LOVE. "

" Hmm so you do like her " Yuko smirked again

" I said, I don't, you Squirrel ! " Nezumi smacked Yuko

" Ittai ! " Yuko rubbed her head " Geez, chill, okay. I'm just trying to get you to realize your feelings. "

" I don't like her ! " Nezumi blushed

" Ahh blooming young love~ " Yuko leaned to a wall " If you don't like her, then why are you stuttering ? "

" Because I want to ! "

" Now, you're just making excuses, you mouse. " Yuko shook Nezumi's shoulders making her hoodie fall

" Face it, Mayu ! You LIKE her ! You L-I-K-E, LIKE her ! "

" Okay, Okay ! Stop shaking me ! " Yuko kept in shaking her until she felt a BUZZ " Ahh, ittai ! Stupid mark ! "

" Ha ! Don't forget that I'm still your master ! " Mayu stuck a tongue at Yuko

" Geezz.. "

" Okay. I have to admit. I. ABSOLUTELY. DO. NOT. LIKE. KASHIWAGI. YUKI. "

" Then, what is it that you feel for her, then ? " Yuko looked at Mayu in the eyes

" I.. I'm not sure. All I know is that I need her. "

" YES ! See ? I was correct ! High five me now ! " Yuko lifted her hand up the air but Mayu pulled it down

" You are not helping at all. "

" Sorry. " Yuko grinned showing her dimples

" Why do I need her ??? "

" I don't know, okay. You have to figure out the answer all by yourself. "

" You're right... "

" Anyway, does Yuki know you're out at this hour ? "

" Ummm no ? Why does she care though. " Mayu snobbed

" You effing mouse, she'll get worried ! "

" That's her punishment for getting goodie-goodie with that Miyazabutt. "

" Ohoho ! " Yuko smirked " So, you're jealous of Sae boy, eh ? "

" I wanna rip his teeth off of his face ! " Mayu clenched her grip

" Hold on. What did he exactly do ? " Yuko scratched her head

" Well, it was like this.. "


----------------------------------------------------------

" Good evening, Dr. Watanabe. "

" Good evening. "

Dr. Watanabe was finally done with his last operation. Since the surgery was a success, he wanted to reward himself by going to eat out. But he wanted to bring Yuki with him. Luckily, as he was strolling around the halls, he saw Yuki. As he was about to approach her " Yu-- " He saw a very annoying man beside Yuki " --ki. " He was left with a bitter tone at the last syllable

" Yuki-chan ! Yuki-chan ! "

" Eh ? " Yuki turned to her side " Oh, Dr. Miyazawa. Good evening. " Yuki smiled

" May I ask you a question ? "

" Um sure. "

" Why is your smile so beautiful ? Just so perfect ? "

Yuki blushed " I.. I'm not sure how to reply to that. Gomen. "

" I'm not satisfied. "

" I really don't know what the answer is. " Yuki smiled sheepishly

" In that case, I'll forgive you on one condition "

" What is it ? " Yuki tilted her head

" Go out with me for dinner ? "

Yuki blushed " Ummm.. Flirting is really not my type, Dr. Miyazawa. And I must decline your proposal. "

" I see.. Flirting ? I'm just being kind. "

" One does not simply make up an excuse to ask out a girl. " Yuki's black aura was starting to emerge

" Very clever. "

" I know. " Yuki glared at him. He was starting to get annoying

" Don't you like me, Yuki-chan ? "

" No. I like you in a acquaintance way. "

" I see.. So, Am I not your friend ? "

" Not a chance. "

" But.. I can be a lover, right ? "

" Yeah. You can be a lover to someone else. "

" Geez, Why are you so cold ? "


" Do you expect me to answer that and you know the answer already ? " Yuki sweat dropped

Dr. Miyazawa laughed " You're so hard to get.. but that won't stop me from going after you. "

Yuki blushed. " Since you won't accept anything I want.. " Dr. Miyazawa leaned in and kissed Yuki's cheeks making Yuki blush harder

Mayu, on the other hand, seeing this was hurtful for him. Life risky for his heart. He watched Dr. Miyazawa go away and leaving Yuki flustered. His anger rose up from beyond his expectations. He walked to Yuki with an angry face

" So, you like kisses from other people, huh ? "

" What're you talking about, Yuu--- Mayuyu ? "

" Don't tell me that. I know you know. "

" Hmm.. Oh ! That ! You saw that ??? "

" Of course, I did ! What did you expect ?! "

" I'm sorry. Are you mad ? "

" I'm not mad, Yuki. I'm frustrated. " Mayu looked down

" I'm still sorry. I guess I'm the reason why you're frustrated. I'm sorry, Mayuyu. " Yuki pulled Mayu in for a hug which he did not hug back

" Yes, you are. "

" I'm sorry. "

" Stop apologizing. "

" Are you jealous ?? "

" .... I don't know. I'm frustrated.. I'm frustrated to the fact if you are even happy or satisfied being with me. " Mayu pulled back and left Yuki with desperate, teary eyes.

" Oh my gosh. Mayu, you need anger management training ! "

" I wasn't angry nor mad, okay ! I was just frustrated. If she was happy or not.. "

" Of course she is ! Yuki is like a loyal puppy, Mayu ! " Yuko pushed her fist up the air

" Maybe, she is.. but what about me, Yuko ? " Mayu looked at Yuko with desperate eyes

" Eh ? "

" Help me. I'm not sure with what I feel. I might hurt her if I don't know what's real. "

Yuko smiled " So, you finally have a heart. "

" Shut up. " Mayu massaged her temple

" Well, first thought is that you felt jealous so it's obviously love, Mayuyu. "

" ... How can that be ? "

" Beats me. However, isn't love in the 7 Stains ? "

" Yeah. "

" Then, you cannot love her is what your father might say but what I say is, " GO FOR IT, MAYUYU " ! "

" You know, I wonder why.. Why is it that our seals do not react to the Stain called Love .. "

" Hmm I've been wondering that too. Well, maybe it's because Love is a wonderful thing. "

Mayu's expression turned blank " Everything wonderful is bad for you. "

" Sou ka... "

" Well, whatever. I'll go apologize to Yuki. I feel guilty for leaving her alone. "

" Uhn. Where are we, anyway ? "

" Eh ? " Mayu looked around " I don't know. I have never been here before. "

" Yes. That's because you fell into my Dimensional world. " Suddenly, a voice called out

" Eh ?! Who was that ?! " Yuko looked around while Mayu kept calm

" Come out, you coward. Face us personally and stop relying on your silly powers. "

A beam of light came from the sky and a man appeared before them. The man didn't fully reveal his face. He wore something to cover his lower face revealing only his eyes, hair and half of his nose.

" Yo. " The man sat down like a yankee

" .... Ha ? " Mayu and Yuko were confused

" I am L... Only L. "

"Ehhmm, " Yuko coughed " Okay, Only L-- "

" I said, it's L ! Only, L ! You stupid squirrel ! "

" Hey, don't call me stupid, you coward ! "

" Alright, Enough out of you two. " Mayu pulled her hoodie up and she turned to Nezumi " Yuko, what time is it ? "

" Umm.. " Yuko looked at her wrist watch " It's 4:30 AM. "

" Oh ? It's that late.. Yuki must be worried. "

Yuki ? L wondered

" Yep. She is. "

Nezumi smirked at L " I'll make this quick. I have to go back before the dawn. "

" Oh, please. I am not here to make conflict, Nezumi.. and uh.. err Squirrel. "

" Hey ! It's YUKO ! "

" Whatever. "

" Make this quick. "

" Hmm well, I just want to inform you that, that Yuki girl of yours is going to be mine soon. "

" Oh ? Announcing your wedding to us ? How adorable. So, you're inviting us ? "

" Stupid girl. Aren't you jealous ? "

" Jealous ? Jealous of who ? "

" Of me taking your Yuki away. "

" I have no Yuki. I have my Black. If you want Yuki, go talk to Mayu. " Nezumi looked at her nails, mocking L

" Tsch. Aren't you the same person ? "

Nezumi laughed at L " You. Are. Stu-pid. ' Her expression changed " We have the same body but we are two different sides if one person. "

" That doesn't exist. "

" Oh, it does. Your pathetic powers exist. Why couldn't my awesome side couldn't ? " Nezumi put on an insulting smirk

" Tch. You're annoying. "

" You're the one who is annoying. You randomly popped up. "

" Because I was told to. "

" Oh ? You're from Infinity ? "

" What do you think ? "

" Hmph. Tell your bitch of a Master to face me personally. That's what I told the last one but she didn't obey me. "

" Yeah, right. " L snobbed

" Well, I wouldn't want to waste my strength on you. So, we'd better be going now. "

" Oh, how are you going to get out of this dimension ? "

" Stop your fun and games or I'll break your bones. " Nezumi glared at L

" Hmph. Fine, then. I guess I would be smart enough to let you go. After all, I'm finished with my business-- "

" Oh, just let us go ! " Yuko scratched her head and stomped her foot

" Geez, okay, okay. Until we meet again. "

" I hope we won't though. " Yuko made an insulting face. L snapped his fingers and poof, they were back to an intersection with the wall.

" Were back. "

" Yeah.. Hmm, what time ? "

" Err.. 4:49 "

" Crap. Okay, where are you staying today ? "

" Oh, I'm staying at Nyannyan's~ "

" Hm. Okay. I'll go on first. "

" Oka--" Nezumi immediately dashed with her full speed, not waiting for Yuko's response " Geez, Mayu. "

Nezumi ran as fast as she could. Worrying what could've happened to Yuki without her. Like committing suicide or something. As she was running, she stumbled across a small rock. She tripped. She cursed the rock.

" Craaaaap ! It's bleeding !

However, the rock didn't stop her from running home. She ran and ran even though her knee hurts. When she arrived at her home, she opened the door and kept on panting. She rushed to Yuki's room and saw her looking at the window.

Nezumi took off her hood " Y-Yuki.. "

Yuki looked back " M-Mayu ! " Yuki ran and hugged Mayu causing the both of them to fall down and land on the floor.

" Easy there, Yuki. " Mayu heard sobs. Yuki started to cry on Mayu's chest

" Mayu, where have you been ?? "

" Did I make you worry ? " Mayu moved her hand back and forth against Yuki's hair

" Yes ! I thought you were going to leave me ! "

" I'll never leave you, Yuki. " Mayu smiled

" Really ? " Yuki looked at Mayu

" Uhn. Promise. "

" Then, I'm sorry about what happened earlier. "

" It's okay. As long as I know you are mine, you ARE mine. "

" That's cute... So does that mean you are mine, too ? "

Mayu blushed " Beats me.. "

" Stupid. " Yuki attacked Mayu's neck

" Kyaaa~ "



A/N : Not to get confused of the names but When Nezumi takes of her hood she's Mayu. If she puts it on, she's Nezumi. And Yuuma in the Hospital. And yes, it has to be HE.

I'm sorry for the lame ending..  :catglare:
Reviews ?
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Before the Dawn (MaYuki)
Post by: Crossing Crossroads on August 30, 2012, 01:16:12 PM
PREDICTIONS, PREDICTIONS... AND I PREDICT... :glasses:

...IT'S SAE. SAESAESAE. But if L is Sae, I wonder why Sae got the name L? :dunno: LOL. L.L.L.L.*COUGHDeathnoteCOUGH* L.L.L.L. Hm? What? Did I say something? :hee: But to be honest, the moment I read L though, Deathnote was a second thought. Persona was the first thing that came up, if you understand me. :ding:

OhMayu.Youshallsoonlearn. Youshall. :glasses:
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Before the Dawn (MaYuki)
Post by: mo-chan on August 30, 2012, 02:10:38 PM
L? who is L? Sae?  :dunno:
I think it's Sae 'cause he in hospital he is colled to Yuki even Yuki is Yuuma's girlfriend  :angry1:
go away L  :temper:
Mayu blushed " Beats me.. "

" Stupid. " Yuki attacked Mayu's neck

" Kyaaa~ "
don't say stupid say pervert  :hiakhiakhiak: :wahaha:
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Before the Dawn (MaYuki)
Post by: lovefate on August 30, 2012, 07:56:21 PM
Yay update :D... i have been waiting for ur update XD ... and this chapter is as good as always :)

Sae again, why Sae always has to be in between Mayuki, i wonder XD... cant she just leave them alone for god sake ( but then the story will be so smoothly lame lolz)

I smell drama is coming, I think that "Only L" is Sae... lolz... He is trying to get, or seduce Yuki OAO.... i hope Yuki wont fall for him...or else Mayu will be so mad XD

Awwie Mayuki is so cutee.... at the end... aww...tsk tsk, this couple is just.. everytime they meet, there will be "something" happen.. eheehehe >:D and i like it...

Thank u for update Chuuu-chan >:D ! Im waiting for ur next update! Please update soon <3
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Before the Dawn (MaYuki)
Post by: masokun on August 30, 2012, 08:40:25 PM
It's just me..or this story is getting hot?  :w00t:

Tsundere Nezumi as always :lol:, but Nlack going to melt you out, nezumi.. just like what Yuki does :twisted:

Update soon will ya, chuuu-san  :bow:
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Before the Dawn (MaYuki)
Post by: Pwety on August 30, 2012, 08:51:24 PM
SO i just want to know :P... Nezumi really have 2 personality/side? So Yuki also have 2 side because she is Black?

Unless it is a bluff from Nezumi??? :dizzy:

The end of this chapter  :ding: :luvluv1:

Update soon please :peace:
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Before the Dawn (MaYuki)
Post by: Megumi on August 30, 2012, 10:36:51 PM
Yes I was wondering too if Yuki and Mayu have 2 personality...
And LOL that L was funny annoying...but so L...hrrm I wonder who...
Yuko the squirrel  :rofl:

Quote
" It's okay. As long as I know you are mine, you ARE mine. "

" That's cute... So does that mean you are mine, too ? "

Mayu blushed " Beats me.. "

" Stupid. " Yuki attacked Mayu's neck

" Kyaaa~ "

 :wahaha: Yukirin is the first one attacking Mayu!

Thank you for your update!
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Before the Dawn (MaYuki)
Post by: kahem on August 30, 2012, 11:13:23 PM
It's love Mayu! Listen to Yuko! lol
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Before the Dawn (MaYuki)
Post by: Cessy10 on September 01, 2012, 04:20:28 PM
LOVE is Mayu & Yuki!!  :heart: :inlove:

I WANT MORE OF THIS!PLEASE? :roll:
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Before the Dawn (MaYuki)
Post by: Megumi on September 01, 2012, 05:41:11 PM
AH LoL never mind me asking of their personalities 
now I'm getting it when I reread it from the beginning  :lol:

Stupid me :smhid

:kneelbow:
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Before the Dawn (MaYuki)
Post by: ChuuuPuffss on September 06, 2012, 04:19:34 PM
Hey ya~ I'm back ya~ YAY ya~ Wtf is with the ya ya ? Ok I'll stop now ..

@Crossing Crossroads : LOLOLOL L xD L xD I definitely know what you mean xD

@Mo-chan : Hmm I won't say anything about L ~ I don't like spoiling xD Read and observe the development ho ho ho

@Lovefate : Lol coz' we always expect something from MaYuki~

@Masokun : Then, I'm sorry for a late update.. I felt lazy for the past days xD

@Pwety & Megumi : So, seems like u guys r confused xD Sarehh~ So, Mayu does have another side. Well, to Yuki, she does too~ Basically, 2 diff personalities in 1 body  :deco:

@Kahem : Listen to ur oshiri sister lolol

@Cessy10 : Oh, suuree~ I'll update faster if ever I can LOL



Heart Shaped Virus

" Pick up your ass, Takabutt ! "

" Oi, what'd you call me ?! "

" stop talking big, midget ! "

" Who the hell are you calling midget huh, Midget !? "

" Shut up ! When Acchan is here, you suddenly hide your bitch mode ! "

" Oii Oii ! What the f*** did you say ?!-- "

SMACKKK

" Would the two of you shut up ! "

" Oww ! " The two midgets rubbed their head in agony " What was that for ? " The smaller one asked

" For being so noisy ! " The hooded girl face palmed herself while sighing

" Are we there yet, Takabutt ? "

SNAPPP

" I said shut up you, squirrel !! " The smaller one looked behind, forgetting she was driving, a truck was approaching wow that rhymed.. not really

HONKKK

" KYAAAAAAAAAA !! " The three of them screamed but the smart one, stirred the wheel to the other side, avoiding in getting into an accident

Nezumi sighed a big one and " WILL YOU PLEASE STOP FIGHTING ?! I'M GOING TO KICK YOUR ASSES IF YOU WON'T SHUT THE F*** UP !!! "

Takamina and Yuko got startled " Geez, alright, alright. Such a bad ass... " Nezumi sighed again and leaned to the side window

" Oi, I can see it now~ " Takamina pointed out her finger to a big tower which looked like it came out from a fairy tale book

" Waaaaaaw ! " Yuko jumped up and down on the back seat " Looks like there's a princess in there ! "

" Well, you're definitely not her knight.. " Mayu mumbled as she blew up her fringe partly covering her eyes " Oi, Takamina, pick up your pace. "

" Aye, Captain. " Takamina hit some red button on the wheel of her car " Buckle up~ "

" Wait what-- WAAAAAAAAHH !! " The car flew up in the air with a speed as quick as lightning. The squirrel behind was making Nezumi suffer from her screams. Within a minute, they landed gently.. okay maybe not gently, but they landed safely anyway.

BOINKKK

" Kya~ My oshiri bounced ! " Yuko blushed as she smiled sheepishly

" Geez, you don't have to say that, you know. " Takamina blushed too. She scratched the back part of her neck. The two midgets looked around and noticed Nezumi was already at the gates " Waaahh ! Wait for us, Nezumi ! " The two caught up to Nezumi as they entered the gates of the tower opened

" Who goes there ??? " Suddenly, a deep voice called out

" Don't have time for games, Tomo~mi ! " Nezumi kept up her black expression as always

" Ehhhh ? You're no fun, Mayuyu~ " The voice turned into a cute one " Maji de ?! " The two midgets looked at each other with shocked faces due to the sudden change of voice

" It's Nezumi, Tomo~mi. "

" .... " A silence developed " Neeeeeeehhh. Who cares~ Come in, anyway~ " The entrance door opened with a creaking sound

" Yikes, that's creepy ! " Yuko hugged Takamina unconsciously. Takamina pushed the other midget to the floor " Hanase ! "

BANGGG

" Aiyaa ! That hurts !! "

" Oi, you two. It's either you get killed or shut up ! "

" Gomen.. " The two of them bowed down, receiving a sigh as a response

" Mayuyu~~ " A tall and beautiful person came in to the picture and hugged Nezumi " It's Nezumi! Ne-zu-mi ! " The girl broke the hug and scanned Nezumi

" Mayuyu, you've grown too much ! Last time Chiyuu saw you was when you were 15 ! Now, you're a cute woman~ "

As the two of them were talking, Yuko whispered to Takamina " Ne, here oppais are squishabble ! "

SMACKKK

" Sh-shut up, Yuko ! "

" Oi, you two, "

" Hai ! "

Nezumi pointed out the girl beside her " This is Kasai Tomomi. She's a witch. Tomo~mi, this is Yuko and Takamina.  "

" Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat ?! "

" I supposed you haven't believe that witches don't exist, right ? Call me Chiyuu~ " Tomo~mi smiled like she was an angel. Yuko's jaw dropped, making Takamina raise it up ward. " Geez, and you think your breath doesn't stink ? " Tomo~mi chuckled

" Ehmm.. Then, lets get to business, shall we ? " Nezumi spoke out

" Oh, right ! Come with me~ " They climbed up the stairs for an hour. After an hour of tired work, they finally arrived. The two midgets were panting hard

" Don't you have an elevator, for God's sakes ! " Takamina panted

" Oh, I do ! Over there ! " She pointed to the side

" Wat "

" Hehe, you never asked that's why~ " The three face palmed themselves " Anyway, follow me chiyuu~ "

Yuko nudged Nezumi " She's even a worse of a air head that Nyannyan ! " Nezumi ignored Yuko's statement " Geez. Kid needs to talk more. "

" Were here~ " Tomo~mi pushed the doors and revealed her experiment room. It had full of potions and tubes but it wasn't a laboratory at all. Big pots and a big bird could be seen too.

" Woah. Wicked ! " The two midgets eyes widened " Thank you ne~ " Tomo~mi went inside the room and gestured for them to follow. She stopped at a table full of tubes of different shapes and colors " Here it is~ "

" All of these ? " Nezumi chewed her gum while observing all of the tubes

" Of course not ! " She went to another table to do something while Nezumi spotted a bottle that had a heart shape " Oi, Tomo~mi, what's this bottle ? " Nezumi turned around and raised the bottle

" Ah ! That's it ! " Tomo~mi rushed to Nezumi and took the bottle " This is it. A step to getting perfection~ "

" Perfection ? " Takamina asked

Tomo~mi smiled " Yes. This potion is one of the things you need for perfection! "

" So, what does it do ? " Yuko scratched her hair

" Well, one sip of this, and ... you'll have to find out for yourselves~ " Tomo~mi winked " But remember, it takes an hour to take effect. So, you might feel a little drowsy before it starts. "

" Ahhh... " Nezumi snatched the bottle " Yes ! Finally ! I lay my hands on this bottle ! "

" Be careful, Mayuyu. It's like limited edition ! "

" I know. Well, can I drink it now ? " Nezumi opened the bottle and took a whiff of it

" Um sure. But don't drink too mu-- " Nezumi sipped a big amount leaving only half of the liquid " ch.. " Tomo~mi was left with a redundant tone

" Hey, this tastes good~ " Nezumi smiled cheekily

" Ne, is that a part of the effect ? " Yuko nudged Tomo~mi " Of course. But she drank a little too much so you might want to keep an eye on her. "

" She's drunk. " Takamina sighed " We know ! " Tomo~mi and Yuko said in unison

" Hey, take note that the more you drink, the more it will take less to effect ! It's gonna work soon ! "

" When will this end exactly ? "

" Well,... that's actually a love virus made into a potion. So, if she loves the person she sees first, her love won't end. EVER. " Tomo~mi smiled " WHAT ?!?! " The to midgets fell to the floor

" It's one of the keys to perfection. "

" But but but Love is a Stain !! "

" Not really. Love is one of the greatest perfection of all~ Mayuyu must gain that perfection~ " Luckily, Nezumi was running around not hearing anything

" Ehh... "

" Well, we have to take her home. Shall I use my magic to transport you back ? Looks like less than 5 minutes, she's going to fall in love~ "

" YES, PLEASE ! " Yuko begged

" But what about my car ?! "

" Don't worry, I'll transport it to your house tomorrow~ "

" Okay. Thank you, Tomo~mi ! "

" Chiyuu~ " Yuko chased after Nezumi and finally got her. " Hai ! I got her ! "

" Okay~ Ready ? Set ! " Tomo~mi snapped her fingers and poof, they arrived inside the house. Yuko and Takamina looked at eachother ...

" HOLY CRAP ! WHAT SHOULD WE DO ?!?!? "

" Hey, what's going on here ? " Suddenly, Yuki appeared before them.

" Yukirin ! " Yuki glanced down at Nezumi and saw her hiccuping and burping " Oh my, is she drunk ?! "

" Err... annooo... " Yuko smiled sheepishly. Takamina whispered " I know now ! Lets leave Nezumi with Yuki ! "

" Good idea ! Ne, Yuki ! "

" What ? "

" Umm.. take Nezumi to her room and get her to rest. Oh, and change her clothes ! "

" Uh okay. " Yuki took Nezumi to her room and laid her on her bed. " Yuuukiiii~~ " Nezumi called out " Shh.. " Yuki took Nezumi's hood, and now, she was Mayu.

" Okay. Next is, your cloth-- Woaah ! " Mayu grabbed Yuki and now she was on top of Yuki " M-Mayuyu ?! " Yuki blushed

" Yukirin, I love you~ " Mayu captured Yuki's lips into a rough void of temptation.

" Ngghh Mayu...mhhh..stop, you're drunk! " Yuki pushed Mayu but now, Mayu dove into Yuki's exposed neck and began to kiss and lick it

" Mayuyu ! Stop ! " Takamina and Yuko peeked at them " Ohoho, Yukirin's moans sure are something ! "

" Shh let's go, Yuko. " The two midgets left

" Yukirin, I love you~ " Mayu started groping Yuki everywhere

" Mayuyu ! Stop it ! You're drunk ! "

" I'm not drunk, okay ?! I love you ! " Mayu kissed Yuki again, but more softer " Can't you feel it ? I love you ! "

" Mayu, I don't know whats wrong with you right now but I know you're more responsible than this ! " Yuki pushed Mayu off of her

" Ittai ! " Mayu rubbed her head. Yuki rushed over to Mayu " Oh my gosh, Mayu, are you okay ??? "

" I'm not okay, Yuki ! I'm not ! I don't know what's suddenly gotten into me ! One moment, I'm calm, the second, I'm groping and kissing you everywhere ! I don't know what I'm feeling right now but all I care about is that I love you, Yuki ! I love you ! " Mayu pinned Yuki to the floor

" Mayu.. Something is definitely wrong. I love you too, Mayu but I would prefer you doing this if you really know what you're doing. Please.. " Tears started to fall from Yuki's eyes

" No, don't cry, Yukirin. Even though I don't know whats real or not, I really do love you. I just.. I just don't know how to express it ? "

" No. You're under some kind of spell. You do not love me, Mayu. " The tears started flowing faster. Mayu kissed Yuki's tears " I'm sorry. I can't control myself now. "

" I understand.. "

" So, that means I can do this ! " Mayu suddenly gained strength and carried Yuki to the bed " Mayu, no! Mayu.. err.. anoo... Mayu, sit ! "

" Ha ! I'm not a dog ! " Mayu started marking Yuki everywhere " Please, Mayu.. "

" Don't worry. I won't be asking for more... for now. " A dark smirk appeared on Mayu's face

" I hope you realize what's gotten into you because I don't like it. I want the real you to love me, Mayu. I don't care if you don't love me in reality, all I care about is being with you. It's better to not be loved than be loved falsely. Because I love you. Yuki gave up.

TBC



A/N :

Lol lame end ;u;

There will be part 2~

Reviews ?  :cathappy: :deco:
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Heart-Shaped Virus (MaYuki)
Post by: yuukimoko on September 06, 2012, 04:37:06 PM
Ahhh~ I missed this!!!!

I dont want Mayu to be under a spell! Yuki do something! you dont want it too.......

Somohow I started liking Mayuki with bad ends....Im going to write a OS ~

Thanks for the update! and please update soon?
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Heart-Shaped Virus (MaYuki)
Post by: Chanaline on September 06, 2012, 05:30:11 PM
Aaaaaah Really good fanfic. So they have 2 personality... Interesting XD

Mayu says she loves Yuki but it because of potion!! Poor Yuki XD

Loves this fanfic! thank you!
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Heart-Shaped Virus (MaYuki)
Post by: masokun on September 06, 2012, 09:34:11 PM
But there's only 2 types of honest human in this world..

Children and drunks  :on crazygran:

So I'll take it as Mayuyu honest feeling  :twisted:
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Heart-Shaped Virus (MaYuki)
Post by: mo-chan on September 06, 2012, 09:48:51 PM
I don't like Mayu with love spell  :fainted: :on speedy:
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Heart-Shaped Virus (MaYuki)
Post by: Pwety on September 09, 2012, 10:45:27 AM
Mayu why you drink a love spell?!!!

I want a real Mayu confess her love for Yuki!!
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Heart-Shaped Virus (MaYuki)
Post by: Cessy10 on September 11, 2012, 12:40:42 PM
Mayuuu! You really love Yukirin.  :inlove: :)

Moore!  XD
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Heart-Shaped Virus (MaYuki)
Post by: Cessy10 on September 18, 2012, 03:49:14 PM
Why no update? :(

I'm curious about the next chapter.  :?

Please.  :cry:
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Heart-Shaped Virus (MaYuki)
Post by: Megumi on September 18, 2012, 10:35:12 PM
(http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mak360trr41r31n4zo1_250.gif)


Do you see this? I'm fangirling just like Yukirin over Mayu here so I'm waiting patiently for your update!
:kneelbow:
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Heart-Shaped Virus (MaYuki)
Post by: kahem on September 18, 2012, 11:02:32 PM
WOW Mayuyu! Go! lol
Chiyuu appeared~
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Heart-Shaped Virus (MaYuki)
Post by: Cessy10 on September 27, 2012, 04:48:59 PM
Are you busy ChuuuPuffss-san?  :(


Why aren't you updating.  :cry:


I miss them already.   :mon cry:
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: Heart-Shaped Virus (MaYuki)
Post by: ChuuuPuffss on September 27, 2012, 05:29:27 PM
Replies:

@Yuukimoko: Lol don't worry about the spell. It'll wore off sometime soon.. xD

@Javs: I agree! Mayu is so strong hearted but when it comes to love, pfftch! Don't mention it LOL OTL And thank you for liking the fic~

@Chanaline: Yeah, Yuki is so pitiful. But not in a bad way xD Mayu should stop being a coward. Thank you too for liking this fic :3

@Masokun: LOLOL Indeed, children and drunks xDD Lol seems like everyone doesn't want Mayu on a spell fufu

@Mo-chan: Gomen~ Almost reaching the climax so please be patient, ne? :>

@Pwety: Same for you, Pwety-san! Be patient too hahaha

@Cessy10: Sorry for not really updating. I'll try to update on the weekend, then~

@Megumi: Fangirling over a person under a love spell, eh? Lol~ Good choice! At least someone supports Mayu xD

@Kahem: Chiyuu made an entrance TEEHEE

Sorry to everyone who were waiting OTL I've been busy lately. A looooot of projects, more homework, sprained ankle, soccer practice, dance practice and exams are on -.- My creativity juice just keeps on getting drained. I'm really so sorry, you guys OTL After I study, I read some fics to cool down stress lol. I'll try to update on the weekend! Please be patient and wait for the update~ Thank you for supporting this also ;u; I deeply appreciate your warm help ;u; Keep a look out for the update!  :deco:
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: REPLIES (MaYuki)
Post by: Cessy10 on September 27, 2012, 08:32:33 PM
Yeey! we'll look forward to that!  :kneelbow:


Specially Me. Mehehehe  :nya:
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: REPLIES (MaYuki)
Post by: Crossing Crossroads on September 28, 2012, 12:47:22 AM
For one, study hard! Break a leg?~ Just chill, everyone should and could wait. Don't feel too pressured about updating. :hee: But we are on the other hand, excited for the next part~

Secondly... I really love your... icon? :D :ding: :heart:
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: REPLIES (MaYuki)
Post by: yuukimoko on December 26, 2012, 06:04:09 PM
yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa~~~ >_< no update~~??!?!!



..nee~ is this on Hiatus? *tilts head*  just asking~ cuz i miss the story sooooooooooooo much!!!
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: REPLIES (MaYuki)
Post by: ChuuuPuffss on December 26, 2012, 07:02:34 PM
Yeah, pretty much on hiatus XD I guess the hiatus-chain will be broken on Summer :3 Or if I feel like writing some more of this, I'll do it as soon as possible :3
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: REPLIES (MaYuki)
Post by: ryeangryu on January 21, 2013, 11:27:06 PM
i just read, your fanfic & i figure out who L is  :hiakhiakhiak:

he's from this korean kpop boy band called Infinite?  :hehehe: am i right? HAHA

GAH! i am very sorry if i spoiled the readers, who wondering who L is  :mon emo:

Honto ni Gomen nasai!  :kneelbow:
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: REPLIES (MaYuki)
Post by: ChuuuPuffss on January 22, 2013, 12:03:45 PM
LOL I knew someone would get the wrong idea xD But sorry to tell you, nope~ It's not L from Infinite at all. Actually, I wanted people to think that way but it really is someone else from the 48 group. I just like to troll
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: REPLIES (MaYuki)
Post by: ryeangryu on January 23, 2013, 02:20:28 AM
ehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...  :depressed: i see..
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: REPLIES (MaYuki)
Post by: achina-chan on April 06, 2014, 11:48:15 AM
Ne , Chuuupuffss-san.....

You have interesting fic here :twothumbs  :twothumbs

Please update.... :bow: :bow:

Thankyou
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: REPLIES (MaYuki)
Post by: MayuxMatsuixMusic on April 06, 2014, 03:02:37 PM
sweet mayuki~~~

please update :bow: :bow:
Title: Re: The Stars,The Stains,and The Mind Games: REPLIES (MaYuki)
Post by: Kirozoro on April 06, 2014, 08:28:27 PM
Omg Mayuki!?!!?

Mayu is so cold but sweet

Update soon