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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: Kuumin1234 on August 13, 2012, 06:47:49 PM
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Hey there guys , I'm New in here & this is the first time I wrote fanfic , so if there is a mistake , pardon me please :bow: , so this is the first chapter , & I'm truly sorry if it's boring / others , and sorry for my bad grammar :sweatdrop:
My name is Kimoto Kanon , I'm 16 years old (in this fic ) , Today I'm gonna transfer from xxx school to xxx school .
"Ahhhhh , I'm so nervous right now , what should I do , what should I do " I keep mumbling that word time by time
" Relax sis , it's gonna be okay , trust me " my little sister said that
" Yeah .. I hope so .. "
BTW , this is my little sister , her name is matsui jurina , she is kind , honest & friendly , I feel from the tone she speak & her face is , she is very relax , I don't know why , but , sometimes people say that I'm a shyful type .
*at the front school gate*
"wow , sure is a big school , eh sis ? "
" Yeah .. Sure is .. "
There is a big clock in the school wall , when I was about to see it , I realize that it is almost the time for the student to study .
So before I go to class , I have to go to principal room , except for my little sister , because she is alread told by the homeroom teacher to study directly , before we go to opposite direction , we said a farewell to each other . When I was about to walk
Again , someone's hit me .... And with a full speed , automatically I fall .
" Ahhhhh !!! Ittai~ !!! " I said as I rub m head
" Uwahh , sorry for that " that person said as she give me a hand to stand up
"Nah , it's okay " I said as I took that person hand , it feels so warm & comfortable .when I see that person face , I saw a female figure with a black long hair , wearing a jacket with pink colour and headphoen on his neck , I have to say that she is cute.
" You okay ? I'm very sorry about this , and if you excuse me , I have to go to m classroom , 'cause I'm late , so ... Later mmiss " she said as she smile , and ran to her classroom in hurry . When I was about to stand up , I realize there is something on the floor , so I pick it up ... It's a student card . 'Yagami Kumi' so it's her name .
TBC(?) :?
Uwaa , I'm so nervous , Sorry for the boring chapter :( , I think it's short , I mean very very short , I'm truly sorry for this :bow: , I will try the best more in the next chapter , and if it's not bothering you , please write a comment or critic for this , & I will try the best for the next chapter :cry: :panic: :nervous
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:thumbsup Great opening and it is kind a short but I'm looking forward to read more of your update!
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:welcome to the forums! I hope you enjoy your time here! Even though it's short, at first I was also not able to write long updates. Practice takes time. So ganbatte, nee? ;)
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welcome to jphip!
yay! another kuminon fic..
pliz continue~ i want to know what will happen next..
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Welcome :welcome :hee:
I love it ! Kuminon FTW ! :kekeke:
It's kinda short ? :dunno: .... Nahh. It's just a prologue, isn't it ? So I guess it's normal~ :bigdeal:
Updatoo soon :onioncheer:
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@Megumi : Thank you for the comment , i will do my best for the this chapter and the rest :)
@Sakura_drop_ : Thank you , i will do my best :D
@yukofan : thank you , i will do my best for this chapter :)
@chuuupuffss : yeah , it's definitely short , gomenasai :cry: , in this chapter 2 (or not) i will try my best , and thank you for your comment :)
so , this is the chapter 2 ..... i guess . anyway , this is it and sorry again for my bad grammar :bleed eyes:
Chapter 2
after that accident , i directly go to principal room , when i was there , i got a warm greet by my homeroom teacher , his name is Takahashi Kai , i can say from his look that he is a kind person , and i got a warm greet by Akimoto yasushi-san too, the principal of this school . then , after some introduction , Takahashi-san told me to follow him to my new classroom , he told me to stay at front of the classroom for a while , i can hear what he say and the other student say .
"alright , class , please be quiet , we have a new student here ." as he said that , the whole classroom suddenly became quiet .
"sensei"
"yes?"
"is it a girl or a boy?"
"it's a girl.." i hear most of them say 'yayyy' and the other are just keep silent
"okay , then , you may come in .. " then , i go inside the classroom , as i walk to Takahashi-san , some of the student are looking to me with an amazed look on his face , some of the student starting to whispering to each other , i hope it's not a bad thing ..
"Please introduce yourself to them "
"okay , my name is Kimoto Kanon , and i'm a transfer student from xxx school to this school , please take care of me for this year , yoroshiku onegaishimasu" i finished it with a smile , then i bow to them
"okay , Kimoto-san , you may take a seat in...yagami-san front seat" as i heard that name i starting to thinking ' Yagami ... yagami kumi .. it's her ..' after some of my daydreaming , i go to the direction of my seat . when i approach my seat and her , she offered me a smile , then i reply her with a smile too ."
a minute later , i receive a small paper from her , i took it then i read it
'hey there kimoto-san , my name is Yagami kumi nice to meet you :3 you can call me kumi if you want ' as i read it , a smile form in my face . i reply her too , the words that i write is :
'hello Kumi , nice to meet you too , then you can call me kanon too :D i'm still new in this school , so when it recess , can you tell me each of the place in this school ? if it's not bothering , and oh yeah , i have your student card , i think it's fall to the floor when we hit each other this morning :) ' so i give to Kumi , her student card . not long after that , i receive her small paper again ' sure ! i have a lot of free time , so don't mind it , and thank you for already giving me back my student card ^^ ' i reply to her : ' thank you very much Kumi and your welcome ' . after that , the lesson started
--skip--
*recess bell is ringing*
after Takahashi-san go out some of boys are just staring at me , somehow it makes me a bit uncomfortable . but that uncomfortable vanished when it covers by the girls that come to me .
"hey there , my name's matsui rena , you can call me rena if you want" a girl name matsui rena introduce herself to me , it's amazed me when her last name have a same last name as my little sister . oh yeah , actually my little sister and i have a different father , so her name and my name is different , it cause different father because when my real father died because of an accident , my mom get married to another man , it's jurina father ... but now they are all missing , they left some money and credit card in the house , luckily , i know the password of their credit card so we can survive , i don't know if they abandoned us or died , i feel bad for them if they died before say something to us , that night actually , jurina cry , but i don't , because i have to know if they died or not , so from that day until now , i'm stiil searching for them , but i stiil don't have enough information about them
"a-ahh , uhn ,hello , rena-san "
" you can drop the formality if you want "
"okay then ..... Rena , nice to meet you" i said it with a smile
"uwahh , you're so cute , nice to meet tou too , Kanon" i blush as i hear that
"tha-thank you"
"haha , okay then , kanon , this is my friend , her name is furukawa airi "
"you can call me airin" she said with a smile
" okay then , nice to meet you airin " after that i feel that my back is poke by a finger . when i turn back , it's kumi
"hey hey , you wanna know each of the place in this school right ? "
"ah yeah , sorry for keep you waiting "
"nah , it's okay"
so then , she told me each of the place of this school , this school is definitely big , my feet hurt a lot , but kumi is still have a relax face , maybe she is a athlete or something ? or maybe just i'm the one that very weak ? not sure of it.
--skip--
an hour later , the bell is ringing , it is the time for student to go home .
"hey kanon , i realize that you are very tired of exploring the school am i right ?"
"how do you know ?"
"the way you stand up , your legs is a little bit trembling"
"ah you're right..."
"wanna go to ice cream stall ? i will treat you "
"err .. sure !" then she go to the direction of the ice crean stall , and i just follow her , cause i'm still don't know where the place is
"kanon , which kind of ice cream do you want ?"
"ngg , i will choose cookies and cream then.."
"okay then , mister , 2 cookies and cream please "
"here miss , this will be xx yen" after kumi pay the bill he turn to me , then i say "thank you" to her with a smile , she smile back to me , i feel that there is something ing my cheek , it feel hot , and when i see my reflection on the mirror , my cheek turns red , i have no idea what is that , i keep on rub my cheek , but it's not working , finally , my cheek even become more red than before , maybe beacuse i rub it to hard , oh well , i let it be like that . after having some of the conversation with kumi , the sky turning become more darker , i decide to go home.
"kumi , it's getting darker here" i said that as it getting more cold .
"uhn , we should go home ,i will accompany you till you go home then ."
"is it okay ? you should have go home too , cause it getting more cold in here .."
"it's okay , moreover , when a girl go home at night , it dangerous right ? and plus you're cute , so it will be more dangerous " she said and then turn to me with a smile . the heat on my cheek become more hotter than before , i guess my cheek is like tomato now . luckily , because it's dark she can't see my face is red as tomato , because it's a shameful thing .
"...but you're a girl too right ? isn't it dangerous too ??"
"i'm okay with it , 'cause i study to fight / protect myself from my uncle "
"owh , okay then , thank you kumi" i smile to her
"no prob" she reply to me with a smile too
*a few minute's later*
"this is my house "
"owh , it's a big house "
"yeah , it's quite a big house , ja , once again , thank you for already accompanying me kumi , and be careful on the way to your house " i said as i smile
"you're welcome , thank you , i will be carefull " she smiled back and then leave
*in the house*
"hello si- .............wow ...... you got at attack by an bee ?" jurina said that to me
"nu'uh , no i'm not,do my face really that red?"
"pfttt ... yeah .. your face is even the same as a circus clown.."
"HEY!!!"
when i ran after her , i see a mirror and my reflection ... yeah , i have to agree , my face is similiar to a circus clown face .... TT_TT
TBC
okay then , first i have to apologize for this boring chapter :cry: , and the second , i'm sorry with my bad grammar :banghead: , if it's not bothering you (again).. please write a comment or a critic :panic: ... and i will try harder next time .. :) ( and btw is this short or not ? :? )
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hey , i'm new in here too :D , actually i never made a fanfic before , i only read people's fanfic :hee: , i'm kuminon shipper too , i think this is quite good ... please update soon :glasses: oh !! and please take care of me :kneelbow:
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Kuminon is an effing cruiser ! :on GJ:
Good job on this chapter ! It's actually kinda longer ! :on GJ:
Yeee~ Can't wait for lovey dovey scenes :on bleed:
Updato soon ~ :kneelbow: :hee:
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So far it's good. Keep this up! :mon misch:
*is also waiting for some perv scenes...* :mon star:
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@Kuro--black : owh , you're new in here too ? well , please take care of me too :kneelbow: and btw , thank you for already reading this and comment it :D :hee:
@chuuupuffss : thank you so much for reading and commenting again :bingo: i will try more for the next chapter :whistle:
@sakura_drop_ : thank you so much for reading this ( and commenting ) :mon ignore: i will try more for the next chapter :mon lurk:
@all : i will try as fast as i can for updating the next chapter 'cause i have to study for exam :mon study: :on cloudeye: :on study: and thank you for reading this fic guys :oops: :on drink:
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I always have a place for Kuumin..
Kuumin with anyone..for sure I'll read..
You have a good start here..
please update soon, okay :D
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@maso-kun : thank you for reading & commenting this fic :) , maybe when weekend / friday I can update the next chapter ( actually , I reply this secretly , 'cause my mom will get mad when tomorrow exam & I open my laptop :kekeke: )
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is it short or long? i think it's long enough XD
don't worry about grammar. almost all author here (or maybe all of them, i don't know exactly,hehe) don't use english as their first language. it's very normal to make grammar mistakes. but, i think the most important isn't perfect grammar but making your readers understand what you write. And i can understand what you write very well..
i love your story and i'm waiting for your update..hehe..
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@yukofan : thank you very much :D :onioncheer:
Hey guys , I guess it's a delay update :cool2: , so sorry for that , 'cause I'm still don't have an idea about next chapter & my homework still waiting for me :badluck: sorry about this & thank you for all the readers :)
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Oh , I see .... Well goodluck with the homework , & I'm looking forward for the next chapter :twothumbs
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Take your time..
We'll be waiting :D
Ganbatte Kuumin1234-san!
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@Kuro--Black : Thank you , i hope you like this chapter , cause i made this one not fully concentrate on the story :nervous :banghead:
@masokun: thank you , hope you like this one :bleed eyes:
in this chapter , i made kumi and kanon still not close yet , cause i think it's still to early , so guys i hope you like it ^^"
Chapter 3
so today is the second day of my school , before school i do my daily activity first , like taking a quick bath , make a breakfast for my sister and me , after that we go to school .
"let's go sis or we will be late"
"okay , wait a sec" i said that as i see my reflection on the mirror , i'm glad that there is no red tint on my cheek like yesterday , i'm starting to thinking , is that a blush ? maybe yes , maybe not ..
after that we walk to the direction of the school , unwittingly i don't pay my attention on the road as i cross the traffic
"SIS !! WATCH OUT!!" i i hear jurina shouting at me from behind and a horn of a car , when the car almost hit me , i feel there is a hand from behind pull me , i feel relieve when i know that the car will not hit me
"phew , that's a close one !! you okay ?? " after that , i look up and saw kumi face , her face is so close to me , then i fell my cheek is hot ....again.
"i-i'm okay , thank you kumi " i smile to her
"no prob!! " she said with a wide smile on her face
"thank goodness !! i though you were gonna hit by that car !! " jurina said that with a concern look and a sigh after she approach me
"huff .. that nearly give me a heart attack" suddenly i see rena beside jurina , that give me shock , also to jurina , i don't feel there is a presence other than jurina and kumi , maybe i just too focus on my incident .
" w-whoa ..." i see jurina touch her chest , and with a freak out face seeing rena
"hm? what's wrong ?"Rena said that with smile , then i took glance at jurina again .. as a sister , i know that jurina talking to herself say ' wow , what beauty '
"n-nothing .. " jurina said as there is a red tint on her cheek , maybe she is blushing ... wait it's similiar to me ... i'm blushing ?
"kanon ? hellooo~?"
"N-nani?" i snap when i hear kumi voice
"are you daydreaming ?" she said with a giggle
"errr...ehe , maybe ... ?" i said with an embarrassment laugh
"haha , you're funny " she said with a smile on his face.and then, for the second time , i fell my cheek becoming hot again .. yeah , i think i'm blushing and my heart is beating faster than usual
"t-thank you k-kumi...." i said
"ah !! and by the way , guys this is jurina , my sister .. jurina , this is rena-chan and kumi " in a moment i thought in kumi eyes , deep in it , i see a flash of pain and sadness but think it's only my feeling
"nice to meet you guys " jurina said with a smile
"nice to meet you" they said in unison and with a smile too
"okay then , we shall go now " i said to them , and as a reply they nod to me
*at the school*
before we go inside the school i see kumi looking left and right , i ask her what's the matter , but she said nothing's matter ... so i just nod and go inside the school
"jurina , i'll go to this direction , take care of yourself "
"hai , hai" she said and go to the direction of her classroom
"alright then , let's go to the classroom " kumi said , then smile to me , as a reply i smile back to her
after some hours of study , the recess bell is ringing , so after the teacher go out , we walk to the cafeteria
"soo , kumi what do you want to eat ? " rena ask
"hm , i will just eat kimchi " kumi said
"how about you kanon ?" ask kumi as her face turn to me
"errr .. chicken katsu .."
" 'kay ..... let's start kumi "
"Let's go !!!!" i look at them with a confused look
"JAN KEN PON!!!" kumi with a scissor form , and Rena with a rock form , ohhh , so they do a jan ken pon ... but i still don't know what for they play that at this time ...
"arghhh , how can i lost !?" kumi said as she staring her hand with a glare
"yes"rena said with a happy face
"erggg .. nevermind that .. kanon let's start !"
"he ? start what ?"
"Jan ken pon , of course " she said as a wide smile form on her face
"o-ok then ..." and then we start it
"JAN KEN PON!!" i , with a paper form , and kumi with a scissor form again
"Yatta!! i love you scissor!!"
"a-ahh .. haha , i lost ... but what is this for ?"
"for buy the lunch , look at there" she said as she point the stall direction with her index finger
"in i and rena tradition , those who lost have to buy it , and then give the food that we order then give it to us , but of course for the money we paid it by ourself" kumi explained
" ehhhhh ?? but there is so much student on that stall , how can i buy it , i'm so small , not like you guys "
"well ... that's make a point though .... ah !! how about this ?"then kumi start whispering to rena
"okay then"rena said
"okay , kanon .. because you're body is small,i will help in this .."
"oh , okay then"
"let's go"
then we go inside the crowd , it's so full of student in here , it's so hard to breath in here , i already see all of the direction , but still don't see kumi , when i was about to stuck , i feel a hand on my left hand
"gotcha!!"
"kumi.." i blush , when i realize that her hand holds my hand , then she smile to me
"excuse me , excuse me" kumi leads the way , while i just follow her with kumi hands hold my hand
"hufff...finally ... miss !! chicken katsu , kimchi and beef teriyaki please !!!" after some minute we got the food that kumi order
"okay , i'm finish paying , can you hold this one kanon ?" she offer me to hold rena beef teriyaki
"s-sure"
"ok , let's go back , c'mon " she give me a hand so that we will not be separated again in this crowded
"..uhn" i take her hand with a blush on my face
finally we got out from that crowded , and we see rena waiting in the back of the crowd
"huff .. huff .. rena .. here's your's ..huff.." kumi said and give rena's food between her panting
"wow , you sure are sweating a lot ... " rena say as she take her food from kumi
"yea ...huff.. this day become even..huff.. more and more student "
"errr... kumi "
"huff..yes..?"
"thank you" i smile to her , then i saw she's blushing .. or maybe she's just to tired so her face become red
"......"
"kumi?"
"ah , yes , your welcome" she smile to me
"hoho ... interesting..."
then i look to another direction , there i saw jurina
"hi rena - sempai " jurina say with a smile
"hi" rena reply back with a smile
"what do you mean interesting ?"i and kumi said in unison
"i'll tell you later , when we eat together , 'kay ?" she said as there is a smirk on his face
".......?"
then after some minute jurina comeback
"let's eat !!" she said with a wide smile , some minute pass , no one said anything .. it's a silence , but it's a comfortable silence
"sooo ... what so interesting about ? " kumi ask
"o yea , i forgot .. it's you , kumi - sempai .."
"what so interesting about me? " after kumi ask that , jurina start to smirk
"you're blushing back there when onee-chan say 'thank you' " after jurina said that , kumi make a hand form of 'x'
"no , i'm not !!"
"yes you are , don't underestimate me , even i'm more younger than you guys " she still on his smirk mode face
"noooo , i'm just feel hot and tired so my face become red " kumi still denies that
"so why do your face start to become red when onee-chan said that , before onee-chan said that , the colour of you face still normal"
"u-ughh..." finally she surrender
"see!! i told 'ya !" she said with a proud pose
"congrat sis !!" when kumi , jurina and rena look at me , i start to blush again knowing that she's blushing when i said that back there
"whoooo , sis start to blushing too " jurina said
"jurina , stop that !!" i yell at her but my 'blush' still not dissapear yet from my face
"bye sis , i have to go to my classroom !!! good luck !!" she said then she leave
"what do she mean by goodluck?" i thought
"let's go kanon , it's our time to go back to the classroom too " rena said
"ah , okay "
--skip--
another hours have pass , and the final bell's ring
"let's go home kanon , i will accompany you again , because i'm afraid something will happen to you" she said with a concern tone and a small smile
" is it okay ? sorry for bothering you , thank you kumi " i smile to her
"it's okay , nah , it's not bothering me , i'm the one who want to accompany you , and your welcome " she smile at me , but this time , it's a warm smile , actually , i really love her smile
"hehe , ah (look at the phone).......... jurina said she want to study at her friend's house , so she will be at home at night"
"what a coincidence"
"uhn"
on the way to my house , kumi seem acting a bit strange , she always look back several times
"what's wrong kumi?"
"shhh.....i think someone is stalking us ..." she whispering to me
"heeeee??really ??" i said with a whisper-shout voice
"yeah... wait a second okay ?" after she said that , she take out her mobile phone , and then make a contact with someone
"oji-san? can you please pick me and my friend ? and please be fast and bring some of the bodyguard .......... the road is xxxxxx ... okay ..... i will wait you here , thank you " and then she hang up his phone
"okay then , kanon , we have to go to save place first okay ? and make sure you're ready , cause we have to be very very careful ... my instinct tell me that there is more then 1 guy ... i think ... 3 guys is stalking on us ..." as i hear that , i become scared , cause maybe we'll be attack by those guys , i feel my leg start to trembling.
"kanon, stay calm okay ? you don't need to be worry , cause i'm here for you ... and i'm good at fighting"she said that to me , hearing that make me blush and relieved at the same time . why am i blushing many times since i meet kumi? that question keep ringing on my thought , but i try to stay focus on this dangerous condition
"o-okay .. i will try " i whisper back to her
" 'kay , we have to move fast okay ? " she whisper to me , after that i nod and then she grab my hand , her hand is so soft and warm i have to say. but not in a few second , another hand at my back pulling me hard , automatically my hand that kumi grab is off from her hand .
"yagami kumi ..... it's been a long time .. "another guy with a one patch eye said
"you....let go of her ..." kumi said as she give him a glare
"oh no , i'm scared " he said with a teasing tone , it's make kumi become angry , and somehow it's irritating me
" i said let go of her ... or else ... " this time it's a deathglare
"or else what ?"
"........."
"hahhh , you've not change since that day .... you're lucky that i let you live longer ... don't you feel gratitude of me?" i see kumi eyes twitched
"no...unless you don't kill her ..."
"who ? ohhhhh ..... that girl ?? your sister am i right ? well , it's your father fault , 'it's the payment for already giving me this" he point to his another eye that closed by the patch
"....and for make my life even worse then before..."
" if you hate my father that much , why do you kill my sister ?! she is not into you and my father business !!!"
"why? ... it's fun ... yea , it's fun !!!! " he said as he laugh
"!!!!!!!?????? W-WHAT TH-- "
"but ... you don't need to be sad anymore ... i want to help you again .... in a moment ... you will meet her .... "
i saw that guy take out a knife from his pocket , as i saw that my legs start to trembling again .
"but be patience okay ? i want to kill you slowly that you will fell what i'm suffering for this long " he said as he approach kumi , with a smirk on his face
"NO!!!!DON'T!!!!!!!!!"
TBC :nervous
is this short ? :bleed eyes: i'm very sorry for this , if it's a boring and i'm sorry for my bad grammar :depressed: and thank you for all the readers :kneelbow: and please give me an advice if there some mistake or other :bingo: thank you :)
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yeyeyeyeyyyy , an update :onioncheer: haha, jurina was funny :D and go kuuminon go go !!! :on woohoo: ah , and i see why you can concentrate , because you have a exam right :hehehe: ... or not :grr: .. well , nevermind , thanks for the update , hope you can update soon , and goodluck on your homework and exam ( if there are ) :hee:
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@kuro--black wow , so fast :lol: thank you for the comment and the 'goodluck' i will try my best for the next chapter :bingo:
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Kumixnon. . .This fic is cüte. . .co'z kanon is in there^^. .the way kumi acts towards kanon is s0oo. . .cool!. .waiting for the next!
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Is Kumin in the mafia or something?
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mmm..kumi has such a dark past..
kumi will beat that bad guy, right? :panic:
please update soon :panic:
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@Dreamstalker : haha , thank you , i will try my best to update ASAP :bingo: and thank you for already read it dreamstalker-san :) :hee:
@Kahem : no , it's only her father that a mafia , but he keep it as a secret from his family , and btw thank you for already reading this fic , kahem-san :D :kneelbow:
@Yukofan : errr.. about that i'm still thinking :? , i'm sorry ,and yes , i will try to update soon :hee: and thank you for already read this fic yukofan-san :farofflook:
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Wohohooo
the progress between them is cool..
I like kuumin character more and more..
next will be the fight right? let's kick the bad guy :twisted:
j/k... :w00t:
good job, kuumin1234-san :thumbsup
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@Masokun : haha , yes , indeed it is ... and thank you for comment , i will try my best (sorry for keeping you waiting , i'm still not got an idea :sweatdrop: )
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hey , sorry for the very very late post guys :depressed: because the exam in this week already finish and today i'm free from studying , i decide to make next chapter ^^ ( though next week i still got exam :fainted: )
so here's the chapter 4 , i hope you guys like it :)
"NO!!!!DON'T!!!" kanon shout to 'one eye patch man' , but that man just look at kanon with a not caring eyes , after that he look back at kumi again
"who's that? your friend?" that man say , but kumi just stay silent and glaring at that man with a death glare
"i will take that as a yes then.." soon , a smirk form on his face ,that make kumi have a bad feeling as he look at kanon
"as a punishment , i will let you see your friend suffer like that day your sister suffer" that sentence make kanon goosebump and kumi's hand made a fist and her eye fill with anger and shock . when he walk to kanon , from behind , kumi hit him hard , make the guys feel pain on his back
"a-aghh.......why you ..." he look at kumi with an irritated eye , then he tried to punch kumi but kumi manage to dodge it
"oi ! don't forget we have a hostage here " he point to kanon
" if you dodge me or try to hit/punch me , i will make your friend more suffer !!! and i change my mind again... because you hit me back then , not your friend that will suffer but you are the one who will suffer !!" then he make a signal to one of the guy that hold kanon , and after that , that man squeeze kanon hand
"ah , ittai !!!" kanon yell in pain
"S-stop tha--" before kumi finish that sentence that man punch her on her stomach , and he keep punching kumi again and again and again , and because kumi don't want kanon hurting , she just stand there , and just accept the punch .. for the time being , kanon watching that scene with a fear look , and her legs shaking a bit
"stop it , stop it ..."kanon though as her eyes start to getting red . but he just keep punching again and again , until kumi have a hard time to stand , and her face full of bruises and blood
"look's like you already having a hard time .."
"...shut up , baka ..."she said and laughing with a teasing look , although her vision already blur . that guy become mad as he put a anger look to kumi
"what did you say !?"
"are you a deaf ?? it's a BAKA " and then the guys punch again , and this time more hard , that make kumi fell down
"oi , baka 'one eye patch' man ~" there's another voice came from kanon . when that man see to that voice direction , he already got a punch right on his face , and that's seems very hard , until there's a sound of the punch . then that person help kumi to stand up
"wow ... this is the first time i see you in this kind of condition ... " when kumi see to the person that help her and kanon , she still cannot see that person face because of her vision , and a second after she saw kanon is alright and running to her , her vision become black .
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"HAHAHAHA" there is a voice of evil laughter in front of her , kumi saw the scene in front of her with fear , she saw her father got a stab right on his heart , and there's blood all over the floor . she cover her sister eye with her hand , she hear what her father say before he pass out
"run kumi , take care of your sister , i will see you in another life..." that was her father last sentence to her and with a last smile on his face . and after she heard that , she grab her sister and run with a teary eyes , and another villain start to case them , but they manage to run from him , and from that on , she promise herself that she will protect her sister , even if it cost her life . moreover , her little sister is the last person in her family that survive besides herself .
"onee-chan , what happen to father?"
"he want to take a rest for a while"
"but why is there a blood on his body ?"
"that's not a blood , that a paint color " kumi lie , so that will not make her sister know the truth , because she's still too small
"oh... how about mom ? "
"she still away because of business .. don't go away from onee-chan ok? grab my hand , and stay with me always "
"okay"
then when she sure that there is no one in the hallway , she start to run , but then she realize that her sister hand start to loosen up
"eh?"when she look back , there's a guy with his hand covering one of his eye , and seems hurting on his eyes , and then take out a knife
"hahahaha , take my revenge , little brat !!" and then he stab her sister with a grin , and her sister blood start to spill to her face .
"NOOOOOOO"
"kumi!!" kumi open her eyes , and saw kanon beside her . her body is shivering , her hand grip the bed very hard and she's sweating
" kumi are you okay? you having a nightmare aren't you ? you seems very pale.." kanon said with a concern look and wipe kumi sweat with a handkerchief
" ..kanon ? wh-where am i ? and ..ouch !! why my body hurt when i move ??" kumi said
" we are at the hospital , you get beaten by the 'one eye patch man' and the 2 other .... i'm sorry for becoming your burden kumi..." kanon said as she look at the floor with a guilty look
"no, not at all , i'm the one that have to sorry you , that guy i related to me , and i'm causing you trouble ..." kumi said as she go closer to kanon , and then she realize that kanon hand is bandaged
"oh no .. kanon , what happen to your hand ?"
".. err , doctor said that i have 2 broken bones , so i cannot move my hand to much for a while .." kanon said and smile to kumi , but kumi reply it with a guilty smile
"i'm sorry kanon .."
"no , it's okay , and that's not your fault anyway" kanon smile to kumi
"but-"
"now , just take a rest first okay ? " kanon said , then kumi follow what kanon said as kanon help her to lie down
"that guy .. i will make sure he will repay this .. " kumi though
"excuse me .." jurina go inside the room
"...jurina..."
"yo sis , hello kumi nee-chan " jurina smile to kanon and me , and then kanon smile back to her
"eh ? jurina ? didn't you still have an extra curricular ??"
"well actually yeah , but when i want to go home to take something , i saw you guys got attack and so i help you guys ... "
"oh , so you are the one that help me and kanon ... thank you jurina " kumi smile to her
"yup , no need to thanks , and why don't you fight againts them ?"
"well , kanon become hostage .. he said that if i try to punch him or dodge him , they will hurt kanon .. "
"heee... so that's why ...."
"yes.."
"....nggg.. o yeah !! your condition getting improved ?"
"yes .. thank you for already visiting me.. and thank you kanon for already accomany me .." kumi smile to them .
"your welcome" they said in unison and with a smile
" ah yeah , when i help you to stand back then .. without my realization , they already gone ... i'm sorry that i cannot give them to you to interview why they attack you .."
"no , it's okay ... you already help us anyway.."
"it's no need jurina ... i already know why he attack me , and make kanon for his hostage.." kumi though with a panful face
"well then i will come back again tomorrow " jurina said and prepare herself to leave
"ok" kumi smile to her
" ah .. and jurina ?" kanon said
"yes?"
"i will'not go back to our house for a while , so please take care of yourself"
"ok" and with that , jurina leave the room
" now , you should rest kumi " kanon said with a smile
"yea , thank you for taking care of me"
"your welcome" kanon said , and then kumi asleep , but this time with she decide to forget about today incident and so she's sleeping peacefully
*few week later*
few weeks have past , and kumi already can go to school and do the other things
*at the school*
"finally~" she said with a happy face . kanon just smile as she saw kumi already back to herself like before
"o yea , how about your hands , it's already healed right ?" kumi ask to kanon
"yes , i can do my daily acticivities like before so no need to worry .." kanon smile
"that's good then" kumi smile back to kanon . after some minutes , they finally arrived at their classroom
"yoohoo~" as kumi said that all the student look at kumi with a happy look . most of them congrating kumi that she already can go to school , and the other ask kanon about her hands condition .
"guys le- ah !! kumi and kanon .. you guys already back , i have heard the news ... congrat for the condition aready got healed " kai said and smile to them
"thank you kai sensei" kumi and kanon said and smile back
"ok then , i have a announcement for you guys .." as kai already starting to talk with them all , the whole classroom become quiet . soon after that , a wide smile form on his face
" we will have a trip "
TBC
is this chapter short ? :grr: .. well guys , sorry if in this chapter it's boring and there is no romace 'bout kuminon , but no need to get disappointed any longer , in the next chapter , there will be definitely real kuminon ( a bit romace i think :nervous ) so i hope you guys look forward on that :) :hee: and thank you for all the readers :kneelbow: ( and sorry if there's a mistake :banghead: )
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Ahhhhhhhhh nooooooooo Kumis sister :cry:
A school trip! Exited!
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Ah , you post chapter 4 , I'm happy :ding: :lol: what's with that guy I fell that I want to punch him on the face !! :angry: :angry1: uwaa , poor kumi , what happen to her family.. it's a tragedy :cry: :OMG: but kanon accompany & take care of kumi :w00t: and , yeyy , it's a trip !! I hope kanon & kumi will be in the same room :twisted: *pervert mode on* just kidding :lol: well thank you for the update & I'm looking forward for the next chapter :bingo:
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That eye-patch deserves more than death!!!!
Jurina is cool!!!!
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kumi T_T
but, glad that she finally saved
and i'm excited for the trip :cow:
update soon! :bow:
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awesome fic, i love kuminon, its so cute :luvluv2:
im looking foward for this trip, i hope we will get some wmatsui too?? and takamina is the teacher right?? is that possible that his wife (~acchan~) will make any appearance? that would be nice hehehe
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@Megumi : yes , poor kumi sister :cry:
@Kuro--Black : glad that you're happy :)
@yukofan : yea , hope you like this chapter :D
@okotteru : thanks you so much :oops: yea , kuminon sure is cute :D if you say so , i will try to make wmatsui too then ^^ ... and about Takamina , well i will try to make them appear in this chapter then :lol: ( and btw , i will make their appearance but not yet married is it okay ? :? )
so here's the next chapter hope you guys like it :) :bingo: ( and btw , i will try to make the other pairing too .. :)2 )
"we will have a trip" kai announce . after hearing that all the students cheers , except one student , her name was watanabe mayu known as cyborg .. she's always wear a poker face to everyone except when she's with her bestfriend name kashiwagi yuki , yukirin is her first friend since elementary school . when mayu still in kindergarden , her friends always tried to become a friend with her , and so her too , but they think that mayu is boring and unsocialized , so they always ignore her . but oneday , she meet yuki , and day by day , she manage to make a friend until now .. but if she's think that it's no need to be amaze , her face make a blank expression again.
"we will have a trip in the mountain on friday this week , there will be your junior to participate , take care of those guys and you will have to bring this thing " kai say , then he write the things that they all must bring on the whiteboard
"o yea , about the clothes , you may wear whatever you like and you may bring whatever you want , but if it's lost , then it will be your responsibility.." kai said
----2 days have past ( friday )-----
kumi wake up , she really excited about the trip .. she start to stretching her body , then she look at the clock , it's show's 06:00 am
" i still have 1 hour ... maybe i will pick kanon later " she though as a smile form on her face . and then she start to take a quick bathand then put her favorite clothes and preparing the things to bring for the trip . after a few minute , she already got prepared and go downstair while humming . before she's get going , she go to her sister , her mother and her father picture on the side of the house .. she sit in front of their table and then look at them with a sad smile.
"____(kumi sister , i don't know what's her name ^^") , mom , dad .. today i'll have a trip and i will be going for a while , may God take care of our house that full of our memory ..." she said with a little tears on her eyes . after a while , she stand up . and before she leave the house , she look back at their picture with a smile and walk to the door to leave.
"well then , i'm going mom , dad , ___ (kumi sister)" she whisper with a smile and then leave her house
*kanon side*
kanon wake up early because she's excited too , she prepare jurina and her things . after that she go to jurina's room to say that she already prepare . she enter the room , she saw jurina still preparing things.
" how odd .. it's the first time you got a bit late " kanon said as she help jurina to put her things on her bag.
" yesterday.. i cannot sleep because i'm too excited of this trip " jurina said with a smile . "i hope i can walk and talk with Rena-san in this trip" Jurina though. kanon knows what jurina is thinking right now , so she just sigh .
----10 minutes later-----
"okay then ... it's finish.." kanon said with a relieve sigh and smile a little
"thank 'ya sis" jurina said
"you're welcome" kanon said . then they hear knock on the door.
"i'll open the door .." kanon said
"okay.. i'll bring your bag to downstair " as a thank you kanon nod and smile to jurina.then kanon go downstair and open the door.
"yo" kumi said with a smile
"ah , kumi .. sorry for keep you waiting .. wait a moment please ..?" kanon said
"sure!" kumi said . after a minute jurina and kanon go to kumi with a bag on their back . after that , kanon locked the door and then make sure if it's already lock or not . after kanon already sure that all of the windows already close , and all the door already locked , she look at jurina and kumi with a smile . and then they walk to the school.
"err.. kumi-san , sis , i will go first to school .. later !!" jurina said with a smirk to kanon as kanon just sweat-drop and with a ' no way' face .
"..you're so cute today..." kumi said , kanon look at kumi with a blush on her face , for the time being , kumi smile sweetly to her .
"t-thank you .. you're cute too" kanon stutter but managed to smile back to her still with a blush on her face
"haha , don't mind it .. and thank you too kanon" kumi said with a light blush , and then they stay with a comfortable silent .
*jurina side*
jurina run to the school with a smirk on her face. thinking about kanon face when she leaves make her giggle. when she go to the school she saw rena .
"ren--" jurina stop when she saw someone hug rena . rena just giggle at her friend reaction and pat her head . "look like i've got a tough rival .. then ... Challege accepted !! " jurina though with a wide smile. then she walk to rena
"mornin' , rena-san" jurina greet her with her famous 'cat-like' smile
"ah , good morning" rena smile back to her.
"hey there , senpai . i will introduce myself shall i ? if it's not bothering you " jurina said
"sure" that girl smile to jurina
"my name's matsui jurina , 15 years old you can call me jurina if you want . i'm kimoto kanon younger sister .. i'm sure you know her .. please take care of me" jurina smile
"ahh..i know i know , your sister sure is a shy person *smile* .. then , please take care of me too .. o yea i will introduce myself then .. my name furukawa airi , as you now i'm 16 years old like your sister" airi say with a smile .
"okay then , thank you introducing yourself , airi senpai" jurina say
"you too" airi say and smile . rena just watch them with a smile.
*mayu and yuki side*
yuki walk side by side with mayu , yuki is humming while mayu eyes just keep focus on her manga that she read.
"ne mayu , don't you feel excited about this trip ?" yuki smile to mayu
"no" mayu say , her eyes still on the book
"ehhhhhh..." yuki made a fail expression
"well at least there is one reason that i feel excited .. " mayu say
"eh?" yuki look back at mayu
" the reason is ... i'm excited to be with a beauty like you , care about me anytime i'm not with you" mayu said , and finally she take her eye off from her manga and smile to yuki , while yuki just blushing madly .
"h-how do you k-know about that ??" yuki said , still blushing .
" i know everything about you " mayu smile sweetly to her .
"ahhh , you're so cute , mayuyu" yuki said and then hug mayu tightly , mayu just blush and hug her back. from the tree just a few meter from them , there's a ikemen girl with a jealous face. "oh c'mon !!!!! i should be the one that that on mayu places !!"
she keep on wear a jealous face .
*kai and acchan side*
"hmmm ... only a few student that not yet arrive at school .. good !!" kai though as she check the student's list
"Hello kai !!" acchan said as she hug kai from behind .
"u-uwaaa, acchan you make me-- ....." kai look back , and when he saw acchan he stare acchan for at least 10 second .
"what's wrong ?" acchan ask innocently
"n-nah..you're just so beautiful" kai smile to her
"ah , you're just a sweet talker" acchan giggle and playfully punch him on his shoulder.
"no no , i'm serious" kai laugh , while acchan blush
"thank you" acchan smile and kiss kai cheek making kai blush.
*haruna and yuko side*
haruna walk peacefully to the school , but suddenly she hear a fast footstep. when she almost look at the back , she got stop by the sudden attack.
"MORNING SKINSHIP!!!" before she look back she already know who it was
"Yuuchan !! not in the public place" she say as she start to struggle by her girlfriend groping her boobs .
"aw c'mon , i need a energy nyannyan" yuki pout , haruna thinks it's cute . she decide to give a light kiss on yuko lip's. yuko keep standing there , her eye widen , shock that it's so rare for haruna to make a move first.
"is that enough to satisfied you ?" haruna said with a warm smile.
"very enough!!" yuko said and then cling her arm to haruna arm
"but later i need a skinship too nyanyan" yuko though with a smirk on her face without haruna know it.
*back to the school*
"alright , i think everyone has arrived" kai though
"okay guys !! please gather in the auditorium" after 15 minutes , all the student already in the auditorium and sits nicely. after that , kai tell all the instructions to them .
----skip----
after some hours , they finally arrive at their destinations.
"everybody please go to your room that i told you guys back there when we're in auditorium" kai said , and then all the student do what kai said.
---i just make a list like this , pairing like usually we know , sorry i made it lazily and only a few :banghead: ---
"=" : with
Kumi=kanon
jurina=churi
Rena=airin
mayuyu=yukirin
yuko=haruna
sae=sayaka
and the other pairing.. well you guys know it ^^
beside jurina and churi room is rena and airin room. they all said that they have to gather to the court because they will be exploring the woods .
jurina and churi already got prepare but jurina remember that she forgot to bring something.
"shoot!! churi , i will go back to the room first , you can go to them , i will catch you up later" jurina said as she walk but her eyes still on churi
"okay , be careful " churi said with a smile
"definitely , thanks , you be careful too" jurina smile back and then run.
---in jurina and rena room---
"where is it , where is it ?" jurina though as she keep searching. and then she saw a picture on the wall . with a picture of a animal like a goat got kill by many people with a knife and and blood spill out everywhere on the ground , and in the back of them , near the tree , there is a man , with a masker and a big knife . his face is covered by the masker so his face cannot be seen.
"what the heck?" jurina though
TBC
i'm truly sorry , there is only a little bit kuminon .. :( but i hope you guys like it , and sorry for some mistake :hee: :kneelbow:
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@kahem : ah , sorry , i forgot to reply you .. yea , jurina is cool :lol:
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ah , poor kumi .... her family all are dead :OMG: :fainted: ... BECAUSE OF THAT JERK !!!!!!!!! :angry1: :temper: :scolding: :on voodoo: all the pairings are cute though :D
(kumi and kanon)
kumi is so sweet XD and kanon is so cute :lol: jurina , what a nice decision that you make , leaving kumi and kanon alone is a very nice idea :on GJ: #plak
(rena , airin , jurina )
Jurina got a rival , eh ? ganbatte jurina :on woohoo:
(mayu , yuki , sae i guess(?))
wahah , mayu only not become a cyborg when she's with yuki :lol: :on gay: and lol with sae become like a stalker :on lol:
(yuko , haruna)
yuko skinshipping haruna in the morning , so energetic :onioncheer: ( because in the morning ... i always sleepy anywhere i walk , sit , or whatever :bigdeal: ) and wow , haruna kiss yuko first :on grad: ... and yuko ... a plan that haruna didn't know it at all :lol:
( kai , acchan )
kai was a sweet talker , and acchan blushing , cute pairing !!! :on asmo:
and what's with that picture on jurina's room ? :? i hope it will become a horror a bit .. because i like horror movies :P
nice chapter by the way :mon dance: thanks for the update and hope you can update soon :mon fyeah: ( i write a long comment , didn't i ? :mon nyah: lol )
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:panic: Me too just like Jurina....What the he**?
Scary!!!!!!
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What a weird picture lol
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jurina=churi
Rena=airin
whyyy??? my beloved wmatsui :fainted:
well, i guess there's nothing i can do about it, it's your fic...
but whatever, the fic is still nice and i'm really looking foward to next chapter :mon thumb:
also... thank you for putting atsumina on this fic and i hope next chapter we get more kuminon ^^
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ahhh~
My sweet Mayuki! Thank you~!!!
Thanks for the update!
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@kuro--black : uhum , uhum ... and about that picture you will know later :lol: thank you for the comment kuro--black -san :hee:
@megumi : haha , yes , it's a unknown picture , you will know it later megumi-san :) thank you for the comment :kneelbow:
@kahem : lol , yea , it's a weird picture :lol: thank you for the comment kahem-san :on grad:
@okotteru : no no , there's no need to be worry okotteru-san :bingo: they're in one room not like they're making out or something .. i don't make jurina and rena in one room because jurina is more younger than her , and the rules in the trip is the rommate have to be the in same age .. so i make jurina with churi , and rena with airin but they're just friend , and i'll let you know , i'm a wmatsui shipper too you know :on GJ: so no need to be worry :on drink: and thank you for the comment :)
@yuukimoko : ahaha , yes , mayuki is a cute couple , i like them too :bingo: and thank you for the comment yuukimoko-san :)
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ops, seems like i misunderstood somethings... :err:
i'm ashamed, sorry about this :kneelbow:
but now i feel relief :on gay:
this made me even more excited to next chapter... please update soon (~^A^)~
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@okotteru : ahaha , no it's okay :) and beside i didn't teel you the rule before too right ? i'm sorry too :kneelbow: and glad that you feel relieve :bingo: hope you like this one okotteru-san :hee:
all right , this is chapter 6 , i hope you guys like it :kneelbow:
"where is it , where is it ?" jurina though as she keep searching. and then she saw a picture on the wall . with a picture of a animal like a goat got kill by many people with a knife and and blood spill out everywhere on the ground , and in the back of them , near the tree , there is a man , with a masker and a big knife . his face is covered by the masker so his face cannot be seen.
"what the heck?" jurina though . she's keep staring at the picture , and after a while , she though that she have to remove that picture , so she take the picture and put it on the ground . when she remove the picture , behind the picture on the wall , there is mirror , and it's reflect rena
"r-rena-san ??" jurina said as she keep staring at the mirror and she start to confused . on the rena side/room , the mirror looks normal , rena just see her own reflection and she start to fix her hair .
"r-rena-san ..? rena-san ??" jurina said many times but rena just keep fixing her hair . jurina waved her hand in front of rena face , but it's useless because in rena room , she doesn't see anyone reflection except herself , as jurina doesn't see rena realize her , she became even more confuse .
"this is sooo weird .... she can't see me , but i can see her !! " jurina though and take a step back , jurina sit on her bed , and watching rena fixing her bangs
"she's sure are beautiful.." jurina though and daydreaming , but it took only a while . rena go to her bed , and looks like searching for something in her bag , and then after a minute of searching , she take out a shirt and she smile as she look at the shirt
"...don't tell me..." jurina though , rena go to the mirror and start to unbutton her clothes
"sh**" jurina said as she is blushing , she walk to the door to go out but then she stop , her one side want to go out but her other side want to see rena body , she only stand in front of the door . and then she decide to take a peek at her back , she saw rena naked body only with her bra and her underwear , after seeing that scene she decide to look rena body for a while . she look at rena with a blush in her face , and she start to nosebleed as she just keep see rena body , but then when rena walk to the mirror , jurina face became more red like her face is burning , and she decide to close her eyes
" you gotta be kidding me " she though and she throw a light punch to the wall beside the mirror . on rena side , rena shocked that there was a sound beside the mirror , and she start to become afraid
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after that , jurina tell the story to rena , kai and acchan
" very weird ..." kai said and he start to examine the mirror
"very very weird...."acchan said as she just keep staring at the mirror and put her hand on her chin
" well , as long as it's not bothering you guys , you guys no need to worry , and it's not a big deal !" kai said as he turn around and smile to them
"....it's a big deal...."jurina and rena though with a sweatdrop
"alright then , i will leave then , o yea and jurina , prepare for the punishment in the court later" acchan said and then leave
"...crap ! i forgot ! rena-san i'll be leaving then , see you!" jurina said fast and leave in blink , rena just stay still , not moving for an inch . rena just realize something
" ........ SHE SEE ME ONLY IN BRA AND UNDERWEAR !!??" rena though as she is blushing very hard
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"so- *pant* sorry .. *pant* i'm late *pant*" jurina said as her hands touch her knees , holding her to stand
"alright everyone except jurina , please follow miss sayaka" acchan said as she take a glance at jurina
"oh ,come on !!" jurina said still panting , and then sigh with a frustrated look , but acchan just put a smirk on her face without jurina knowing it
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"so ... we will go to the woods on that way" sayaka said as she walk and take a look back at all of the students , and then look back to the front.and then , after half and hour of walk , they reached the lake . the lake is so beautiful that can make your body , mind and eyes relaxed .
"for today , we will take a rest for day first on this zone " sayaka announced to all of the student , as all of the student mood become bright , maybe all of the students think that it is a very good decision that they will stay beside the beautiful lake even if it's only for 1 day . yuki and mayu go to somewhere else where no one know , while sae cursed herself for letting her guard down . yuko , like always skinshipping haruna in a public place , while haruna struggling to get away from yuko . kai and acchan was having a romantic scene beside the lake where there is no student at all . all of the student is enjoying the view and they're start to walking around the lake except kumi . she's though that now is not a good idea to explore and see the lake view because it was too crowded , so she plan to go around the lake when there is only a few student left . while waiting , she decide to make a tent first , so later she can relax . when she trying to make a tent , the wood just keep bend here and there . when she tried it again the wood bend again .
"what's wrong with you ?? " kumi though with a annoying look . on the other side kanon just giggled , she stand up and walk to kumi . seems like kumi didn't know that kanon is walking to her because she's too focused with her own problem .
"need some help ?" kanon ask
"ah , kanon . sure if you don't mind " kumi said and smile to her
"okay then" kanon smile back . after a while , they finally finish make a tent .
"thank you kanon " kumi said with a smile
"you're welcome" kanon smile . kumi looked around , she realized that there is only a few of student that walk around the lake , so she decide to explore the lake . she put a jacket , cap and her necklace on .
" where are you going ?" kanon ask .
" well.. i want to go around the lake and see the view .. you want to come with me ?" kumi said
"okay , i will come with you" kanon said with a cute smile , make kumi blush a little without kanon know .
"let's go then" kumi said as she tried to hide her blush . kanon just nod . they walk and walk and walk around the lake and they are having a conversation happily . not knowing the time , it's already night .
" it's already dark .. i think we should go back , they're start to preparing the food " kumi said as she look to the camp from far away.
"yes , the lights was so bright , i even can see our friends shadow " kanon said . after that , they walk back to the camp , but there's a sound of roar .
"what......was that ?" kumi said with a confused look
" i-i think it's a wild animal .." kanon said with a creep out look
" we better run , but don't make any sound " kumi said as kanon nod . they start to run quietly but stop when kanon feel something touch her shoulder .
"KYAAAAAA!!!" kanon shout , freak out and then run to kumi and hug her . kumi blush by the sudden movement
"woa , woa .. easy there sis .." kanon know who's that voice are , it's her sister , jurina , kanon sigh in relieve knowing that it's her own sister .
"e-err...kanon..?" kumi said stuterring . kanon look at kumi , and realize that she hug her tightly , kanon blush and immediately step back fast
"so-sorry , kumi" kanon said while kumi scratch her cheek with her finger with a blush .
"i-it's okay" kumi said shyly with a smile . but suddenly there's a crack from behind them . jurina , peek back , and saw something very dangerous . a dangerous animal called bear , and the worst is , it's a wild bear .
"...oh my God.." jurina , kumi and kanon though . and in one time , they all start to run for they life . they all run and run and run , kanon and jurina manage to run from that bear but kumi isn't. kanon and jurina look around but they don't found kumi anywhere .
"this is bad... very very bad ... i think we have to inform this to the teachers , let go back first and inform them !!" jurina said as she panting , kanon agree and they start to run to where the camp was placed.
" kumi , wait for a while , i will definitely find you !!" kanon though with a worry face on her face .
*kumi pov*
" oh my God .. it's a bear , more worst it's a wild bear !! " i though as i keep running for my life , i see that bear is chasing after kanon and jurina . don't want they to get hurt , i whistle that bear and start to dispers from kanon and jurina was , that bear seems distracted by my whistle and start to chasing me , i go inside the woods , not knowing that going alone inside the woods is very dangerous . i ran as fast as i can not knowing where to go . beacuse it's a little foggy , i fall down because of a tree root . and when i want to stand up , i saw a shadow in front of me . the bear is staring at me with a hungry look . at that time my vision become black . seems that i fainted because of fear . when i open my eyes , my vision was still blurry . i only know that it's already morning because there is a sunlight , and after a while trying to focused my vision . i open my eyes , my vision already not blurry and i can see clearly know , there is a girl with a long hair kneeling in front of me and she's staring at me with a warm eyes . i must say that she's pretty and moreover , because on sunlight effect , she become more pretty .
"e-eh?" i said
TBC
so , i hope you guys like this one , and is this short :? i'm so sorry if this is short and i'm sorry for the mistake if there was and sorry if it's boring .. :cry: if you guys don't mind please comment or critic it :on ksweat: and thank you for all the readers :kneelbow: i will try more for the next chapter :bingo:
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The wmatsui part was lovely~ Jurina saw Rena almost naked~?!
thanks for the update~....but what happened to Mayuki? they leaved to a place no one knows? that sounds misteryous~
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:shocked Weird really weird LOL Jurina couldn't resist... :rofl:
This is just hilarious!
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ahaha , kanon is so cute and kumi was so sweet :lol: i just read it yesterday actually :bingo: poor kumi family , i feel pity for her :cry: i'ts because of that guy :mon uggh: :mon headbang: and a trip , yes !! :mon beam: lol jurina see rena almost naked :rofl: :on spit: and kanon kumi jurina got attack by a bear :shocked wonder who's that girl is :dunno: i'm looking forward for the next chapter :nya:
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@yuukimoko : yup, Jurina almost see rena naked :lol: and yea mayuki go to their secret place :on lol: :bigdeal: thank you , i hope you like this chapter :hee:
@megumi : yes , what a weird picture and mirror isn't it :smhid thank you , and i hope you like this chapter :oops: :hee:
@seighcretz : yea , poor kumi family :'( about that girl , you will know it in this chapter :) thank you and hope you like this chapter :hee:
so this is chapter 7 , i hope you guys like it
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*Kumi pov*
" oh my God .. it's a bear , more worst it's a wild bear !! " i though as i keep running for my life , i see that bear is chasing after Kanon and Jurina . don't want they to get hurt , i whistle that bear and start to disperse from Kanon and Jurina was , that bear seems distracted by my whistle and start to chasing me , i go inside the woods , not knowing that going alone inside the woods is very dangerous . i ran as fast as i can not knowing where to go . because it's a little foggy , i fall down because of a tree root . and when i want to stand up , i saw a shadow in front of me . the bear is staring at me with a hungry look . at that time my vision become black . seems that i fainted because of fear . when i open my eyes , my vision was still blurry . i only know that it's already morning because there is a sunlight , and after a while trying to focused my vision . i open my eyes , my vision already not blurry and i can see clearly know , there is a girl with a long hair kneeling in front of me and she's staring at me with a warm eyes . i must say that she's pretty and moreover , because on sunlight effect , she become more pretty .
"e-eh?" i said
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few minutes have past but none of them speak . they just keep looking at each other eyes . Kumi feels that there is something familiar on that girl eyes . but then , that girl decide to break the silent .
"you .... okay ?" that girl ask . kumi just nod as a yes , she keep look at that girl eyes . kumi though there's something familiar in her eyes .
"... i saw you got attack by a bear . i though you can get away from that bear because you are running so fast . but you got tripped by a tree root , and seems that you fainted . my friend see that scene so she decide to help you . she distracted that bear and because she's clever with a animal trap , she make a trap in a short time , and that bear fell into her trap . then , she said that i better take you to our camp and she will search for water . but until this time , she still not getting back yet " she said with a worry look when she mention her friend still not getting back yet .
" ah....thank you then .. and don't worry , i'm sure she'll be back later " Kumi said with a smile. that girl smile back too
"o yeah , by the way my name's Yagami Kumi , you can call me Kumi if you want to" Kumi said.
"uhn , alright .. Kumi... my name is Kizaki Yuria , you can call me yuria" the girl name 'yuria' said . not long after that a girl came .
"ah sayaka " yuria said with a glad smile plastered on her face .
"sorry for being so late ... aa , you already wake up ... " that girl said , kumi just smile to her
"oh yeah , this girl name is Yamamoto Sayaka . she's the one that help you from that wild bear " Yuria said
" thank you for already helping me " Kumi said
"your welcome" Sayaka smile to Kumi
"BTW , why are you so late ???" Yuria ask her .
" well , the story i like this.."
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Sayaka ask Yuria to take Kumi to their camp , while she want to search for water . she know where is the wellspring located is , so she directly go to where the wellspring direction. and after a few minute , she already arrived . and then , she pour the water on a bottle . all of the bottle that she brought already filled , so she decide to go back to their camp . when she turn her back , she saw a girl .. beautiful girl that seems very familiar to her . that girl keep staring at sayaka face with a shock face , and after a few second , tears start to fall down from her eyes .
" S-Sayaka....?" that girl said , her voice is trembling but she keep looking to Sayaka eyes while Sayaka eyes form a tears too but she don't say anything , she just keep silent . but then , that girl walk slowly to Sayaka.
"Sayanee..?" she said , that sentences make sayaka ear twitched .
"..milky..." Sayaka said . this time her tears fall down from her eyes too. without sayaka know she got a hug by that girl named 'milky' .
"I-i though ..... you died .... on that day .. we don't find you every....where..." milky said between her sob , while sayaka hug back milky and rub milky head .
"shh , don't cry , don't cry ....." Sayaka said as she keep rubing milky head . but tears keep falling from milky eyes , so sayaka decide to keep silent for a while until milky stop crying . 10 minutes have past , milky already stop crying but she still hiccuping . Sayaka just smile when she look at milky .
".....i'm glad that i meet you again ... i miss you .." Sayaka said with a warm smile , make milky blush slightly .
"....i miss you too..." Milky mumble looking other way.
"hehe .. i hear that .." Sayaka smirk . make milky blush more redder . and then without milky know , she feel sayaka lip touch her lip . at first , milky just stay still , but then , she kiss sayaka back . and then , sayaka pull back because the lack of air , she smile sweetly to milky , milky smile sweetly to sayaka too .
" I love you ..." sayaka said as she smile
" I love you too... " milky said but this time with a clear voice . and so they enjoying the few while holding each other hand.
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"...so it's like that .. and guess what she said that i better go to her school , so i decide to go to her school later " sayaka said with a wide smile .
"ohh..." Yuria said with a not so interested look while Kumi just smile after hearing Sayaka story .
"......why do you looking at me with that face ? " Sayaka ask.
"well ................ i don't need your romantic story to tell us actually.." Yuria said with a sweatdrop.
"well i just want to tell you guys .." Sayaka pout , but Yuria just ignore it .
"nevermind , Kumi... we better take you to your camp too now .." Yuria said.
"oh yeah .... i forgot , they say that I and my friend will go to the woods today .."
"well then , we better go n-- E-EH !!??"
" w-what's the matter ?" Kumi ask in a confused face .
"maybe i mishear it ... today you will go to where ?" Yuria ask
"Today , we will go to the woods .." Kumi said , while Yuria and Sayaka face show a disbelief look.
" you gotta be kidding me..." Yuria said
"Why was that ?" Kumi ask .
"the woods in here is very very dangerous , we better stop them" Yuria said with a serious tone .
" okay then " and then they go to where the camp is ( kumi leading the way , because she now where the camp is by GPS )
" kanon , hang in there " Kumi though while Sayaka i thinking about Milky .
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*other side*
"where do Kumi go actually ???" Kai said with a worry look . the other keep searching for Kumi but still don't find her yet . kanon keep silent , her mind is full of negative things that maybe will happen to Kumi , without kanon know it , tears start to fall down from her eyes .
"sis ...." jurina said as she's approaching Kanon .
"Jurina...." kanon said .
"don't worry , we will definitely found her !!" Jurina said with a confidence look .
"yes ..." kanon smile back to Jurina .
TBC :bleed eyes:
aih , i hope that you guys like it :panic: sorry if this is boring , and if there is any mistake , i write this in hurry because in my country , it's already late at night ... so i'm hoping that you guys don't get bored .. :cry: and thank you for all the readers :)
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Nope not boring at all it's very interesting :twothumbs
And I had a hunch that the "girl" was Yuriiiiiaaaa *fufufu my guessing was right
But it seems that Kumin recognised Yuria but I wonder from where :)
CAn't wait for next update!
Thank you
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I want the same mirror than Jurina! lol
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Uwaha Sayamilky make an appearance :shakeit: love it :deco: and that 'girl' is Yuria , eh ? Muahahaha , As I though :onionwhip: and yeah like Megumi-san said it's not boring at all :yep: it's good 'ya know :thumbsup thank you for the update :onioncheer:
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my oshi make an appearance :drool: :farofflook: if Kumi with kanon i wonder who is Yuria pairing :dunno: .. is it Yuria with Paru like in jehovachiabi-san fanfic ? :hehehe: anyway , gracias for the update and please update soon :on comhere:
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@Megumi : thank you so much megumi-san :) ahaha yea you're guessing was right :lol: about that you'll see in the next chapter :bingo: ( but i'm sorry it's still not yet finish , still in the process :cool2: ) thank you for already spare your time reading this :kneelbow:
@kahem : ahaha , me too me too :lol: kidding , thank you for already reading this kahem-san :kneelbow:
@Kuro--Black : yea Hha , thank you for already reading this Kuro--Black san :kneelbow:
@burakuaria : Hha , yea your oshi make an appearance :D ( though i don't know who is your oshimen :lol: ) .. well about that .. i still don't know yet .. i'm sorry :err: thank for already reading this burakuaria-san :kneelbow:
....i think i use too many kneelbow huh ? :lol: thank you for all the readers whether it's silent reader or not i'm very appreciate that , and i will try to update ASAP :kneelbow:
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hey guys , i want to say thank you for all the readers and commenting .. i finally finish this chapter .. sorry , i'm taking a long time to finish this , because i got many homework to do , but now i got a free time so i decide to update ... i hope you guys like this chapter :)
Chapter 8
hour have pass but kumi still not founded yet . Kanon become more worried , she keep on searching for Kumi until she's become very exhausted . after a while , she sit on a big rock and wiped her sweat , she think maybe that Kumi was in the woods , she don't want the others to get in danger like kumi does , so she go there alone . but in the way to the woods , her sister , Jurina met Kanon .
"still don't find her yet ?" Jurina ask
"no , so you too , huh ?" Kanon say
"yea ... it's already been half of a day but we still don't find her yet .. i think Kumi-san was in a danger right now .." Jurina say as she think
"i don't think so ... kai sensei said this forest already guarantee that this forest is totally safe" Kanon complaint
"hmm ... then .. maybe Kumi-san is in the woods ..." Jurina say
"i though so too...."
".. how about we check it now ?" Jurina said
"well , now i want to check her in the woods .. i will just go there by miself , you just check her in the forest .."
"eh? but it's dangerous , i don't want you to be in danger like Kumi-san .. i want to come with you!" Jurina said
"but--"
"no buts !! even if you complaint i'll still coming with you!!" Jurina force Kanon , while Kanon just sigh
"what a troublesome little sister" Kanon whisper to herself
"Hey , i hear that !!" Jurina shout
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*Kumi , Yuria and Sayaka side*
"is it still far ?" Yuria ask
"i think we almost arrive .. we just have to follow where the point location is " Kumi said as she keep see her GPS
"o yeah , why we cannot go to the woods ?" Kumi ask
"... i will just tell you in short , see this symbol on my arms ?" Yuria said , showing a symbol , and the paint was like a tatoo
"woa , cool , what was that ? " Kumi said
".... see this little digital chip in the middle of the symbol ?" Yuria ask
"uhum" Kumi nod
"it's a bomb" Yuria said with a serious face
"....i will take my words back then..." Kumi said
"you better ... Sayaka have it too in her arms .." Yuria said , while Kumi look at Sayaka , then Sayaka show her digital chip bomb
"..why do you guys have that ?? you guys better just take it of " Kumi said with a frightened look
" I and Sayaka try to take of this since long time but it cannot be taken off , even if you rip your skin ... you know why we don't get away from this forest from the first we got this chip?" Yuria ask while Kumi just shrugged her shoulder
" because if we still got this digital bomb chip on our arms and we get away from this forest we will get explode , from the inner of our body ... our friends once try to get away from this forest , but when she cross the line , in a second her body explode " Yuria said , try to hold back her tears , and manage to hold it
"...what the heck was wrong with that chip .. " Kumi though
" .. so .. if you guys go to the woods , you guys will become like us too ... " Sayaka said
" what's that suppose to mean ?" Kumi ask
"you guys will got this digital bomb chip too" Sayaka reply
" the ones who always play with human live , his name was Docter Forex ... beside us , there was many people that got this digital bomb chip ... most of them was girl "
" .. why don't you guys go to that ' docter forex ' places and find a way to cure ?" Kumi ask
" we once try to fight againts him , but we fail .... our condition even more worse than before .. our teamate .. all of them was dead , in our group only the two of us that survive .." Yuria explained
" i'm so sorry " Kumi said as she feel sorry for Yuria and Sayaka
"no no it's okay " Sayaka reply with a sad smile , while Yuria just nod .
PIP PIP PIP
suddenly there's a voice coming from Kumi GPS .
" Finally ! this is our camp .. thank God they're still in this place " Kumi said as they finally arrived at Kumi and the others camp
" KUMI !? " a girly voice called her name , she already know who is that voice belongs to .
" .. IT'S YOU !! " her best friend , Rena shout and then hug her . while Kumi just smile and hug back
"yes , it's me " Kumi said
" where have you been !? you've been missing in a long time " Rena said
" Well the story is long , i'll explained it later " Kumi said . soon after that , the other student finally realized that Kumi was back to their camp . Kumi got many question form her friends , so she decide to explained them later "
" this is my new friend , this one is Yamamoto Sayaka , while the other one was Yuria Kizaki " Sayaka and Yuria smile and then bow to them .
" nice to meet you guys " Sayaka and Yuria said in unison
" nice to meet you guys too " they reply and then bow
" okay , now eve--- wait , where's Kanon ? and Jurina ? " Kumi ask . there was a silent for a few second , but then
" i think i saw them back then " Yuki said
" w-where did you see them ? " Kumi ask
" back then , i saw her with Jurina go to the woods " Yuki said , then Mayu nod
" WHAT !? " Kumi shout in dibelief , Sayaka and Yuria face full of shockness , while the other was just confused . without waiting , Kumi run to the woods , make Yuria snap , and then run to hold Kumi . Sayaka said to everyone that they better stay in this place , so they juts stay stiil , except Kai , Rena and Yuki .
" Kai , it's dangerous , we better stay in this place " Acchan said with a worried look
" but i can let my students get hurt " Kai said
" i know you are a stubborn boy , so i will not hold you ... if you want to go , just go . just keep yourself safe and sound when you reach back here ... and no need to be worry with the other students just leave that to me " Sayaka akimoto said
" thank you .. " Kai said as he smile to sayaka , and then run to them , while Acchan follow him , making Kai stop .
" Acchan , you better stay there .. no need to worry about me " Kai said
" no , i don't want to ... if you leave , then i'll follow you . if you stay , then i will stay " Acchan said as Kai sigh
" fine .. just stay with me and don't get involve in a dangerous thing okay ? " Kai said
" okay~ " Acchan said as she make her finger interwhined with Kai , making Kai blush without Acchan know it .
" Yukirin , you want to go with them ? " Mayuyu ask
" yes , you want to come with me ? if you don't want just stay with them " Yukirin said
" fine then , i will go with you " Mayuyu said with a poker face
" such a cyborg " Yukirin though as she smile , and then they run to the woods
" Airin , i will go with them .. stay here and please take care of them " Rena said and then she run
"but..." Airin see that Rena was out of sight so she stop what she want to say
" just please be careful ... " Airin though
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" it's getting creepy here sis " Jurina said as she shivered
" and cold ... he-- "
"KYAA !!"
Jurina words was got cut by a girl , with a pink jaket , and she wear a ribbon .
" ita ta taii ! " She said but with a loud voice
" e-eh ? Kumi ???" Kanon said with a shock face , while the girl just plastered a confuse look on her face .
" ... Kumi ? who is that ? and who are you ?? " the girl ask . when Jurina want to say , she got cut again .
" baka , how clumsy are you .. " a beautiful girl with a brown hair said to the pink jacket girl .
" ehehe , sorry .. i got tripped by a rock " soon after that pink jacket girl finish her words , she got a punch right on her face and a blood show on her nose . Kanon and Jurina just jaw drop when they see that scene
" K-kumi , are you okay ? " Kanon ask as she move near the pink jacket girl
" hey wait ... who is Kumi exactly ??? "
TBC
i hope you guys like it , sorry if it was short and if you don't mind please write a critic , so that later i'll improve :) thank you :kneelbow:
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Eeeehhh!! what happened? *curious*
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PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE
WMATSUI
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Eeeeh? Who's that? Kumi?! No Jurina, Kanon don't go to the woods!
I'm curious....
Well, update soon ~
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Wonder who's that 2 girl :? And hurry Kumi before something happen to Kanon and Jurina :bleed eyes: thank you for the update by the way XD
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@Saeseki : Hha , glad that you're Curious .. I'm afraid that you will get bored of this fic :sweatdrop: thank you saeseki-san , I hope you like this chapter :)
@yvet_951 : uhn , I will make Wmatsui , but I hope you you'll be patience , because now it's still in the part of 'introduction' :D thank you yvet_951-san , I hope you like this chapter :)
@juRikki : I'm glad you're curious .. :D thank you juRikki-san , I hope you like this chapter :)
@Kuro--Black : thank you Kuro--Black-san , I hope you like this chapter :)
So this is chapter 9 , sorry for the very long update .. I hope you guys like it :)
" K-kumi , are you okay ? " Kanon ask as she move near the pink jacket girl
" hey wait ... who is Kumi exactly ??? "
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" E-ehh ?? It's you ! " Jurina shout , still with a confused face
" W-what ? What are you talking about ?? My name is not Kumi , My name is Dance ! Who are Kumi ?? You guys keep saying Kumi , Kumi and Kumi until now it's making me irritated " the girl name 'Dance' say while a confused look was plastered on Kanon and Jurina face .
" ... Eh ? " Kanon said .
" Ah !! " A voice interrupted them from behind
" Kanon !! " Kanon look back to the source of the voice
" ... Kumi ?? " Kanon ask with a shock face while Kumi run to Kanon and hug her .
" Thank God you're fine " Kumi said between her hug , while Kanon try to hide her blushing face . Jurina just look at Kumi and then look back at Dance .
" ... What on earth was happening here .. ? " Jurina , Dance and the brown hair girl though .
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" Yuki .... Yukirin ! " Mayuyu shout . Unfortunately , she and yukirin got separated and lost because of the fog during their walk in the woods .
" Hey ! What are you doing here !? " Someone shout , that voice seems so familiar to mayu . She look at were the source of voice are , when she look back , she saw a certain girl that she love the most , but a little bit different . The girl wearing a black jacket and seems very similar to someone that dear to her .
" Yukirin !! " Mayu shout as she run and hug the girl .
" Hey what are you doing !? Get of me ! " The girl said as she tried to get of from mayu , soon she hear giggle beside her , she saw another girl with a scar .. she's tilting her head and biting her own nails . The girl push Mayu away from the black jacket girl , making Mayu fall down hardly .
" Ne .... Okotteru ? " The girl with scar said , while the jacket girl help Mayu to get up , making the girl with scar frown .
" You okay ? " The girl with black jacket ask , Mayu just nod as a yes .
" Geki , don't do that " the girl with black jacket said as she scolded the scar girl , while the scar girl look down but still biting her nails . That scene make Mayu sweat drop .
" She seems confused ... I'm really sure that this girl was not her ... " The girl with black jacket though as she take a peek at Mayu .
" Say....what's your name ? " The girl with black jacket ask , but the question make Mayu become even more confused .
" ... What ? You don't know me ? It's me , Mayu ! " Mayu said frowning
" .. I think you thought me as a different person ... I'm not the person that you know .. " The girl with black jacket said as she try to make Mayu calm down .
" E-ehh ?? But .... Okay , wait a minute ... May I ask you what is your name ? " Mayu said .
" ... My name is black " The girl named black said .
" I see .... So you're not Yuki ... " Mayu said while Black just silent .
" Ne ... What your name ? " the scar girl interrupted their conversation.
" Ah .. My name is Mayu Watanabe " Mayu reply , trying to avoid the scar girl gaze . Somehow , for Mayu , the scar girl gaze making her trembling .
".. You're not her .. " Black said , making the scar girl and Mayu look back at her .
" 'Her' ? Who ? " Mayu ask confusedly .
" .. I'll explain it later .. Do you have a time ? " Black ask
" Em .. I have .. " Mayu said
" Then follow me please .. " Black said as she start to walk , while mayu and the scar girl named 'Geki' followed her .
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*meanwhile*
"Oh no ... Bad .... Sure is bad ... " Yukirin though as she keep searching for her cyborg . She just keep searching , don't know where she's heading .
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"Wh-what ... Double Kumi ?!" Jurina said . Hearing her name being mentioned , Kumi look to Jurina .
" Double Kumi ? What do you mEANN ?????? " Kumi face show a shock face after she look at Dance .
" W-what happen ?? Am I dreaming ?? Who are you ?? " Kumi ask half shouted as she approach Dance .
" Hey , that's my line !! Who are you ?? " Dance ask her back and still with a shock face too .
" Stop it , you guys make my ear's hurt ! " The brown hair girl said , then punch Dance on her face , making Kumi jaw drop .
" Ouch .. " Kumi though as she touch her face , feeling the taste of being punch .
" You guys , follow me .. We will explain it all to you guys later " the brown hair girl said .
" Ah .. O-okay .. " Kumi reply , still putting her hand on her face . Kanon and Jurina just keep silent and follow her like an obedient kid , while Dance try hard to ignoring the pain that she just got .
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" We better keep stalking them until we arrived at the place where they're gonna show it .. " Kai said .
" But ... Is it really safe if we keep doing like this ? " Acchan ask him with a worried face .
" I hope so .. " Kai reply . Hearing that reply making Acchan face become more worried .
" Ah ! I found you guys finally " a girl said not to loud , seems so happy that she find them .
" Eh , Rena ?? What are you doing in here ?? " Kai said loudly , making Acchan panic
"Shh shh !! " Acchan warn him . Kai realize it , and then turn his voice to a whisper .
" Of course to find you guys and the others " Rena said .
" It's dangerous ! You better go back now ! " Kai said .
" No way " Rena said .
" But .. you can make me become even more in trouble " Kai said making Acchan and Rena frown .
" More ? Am I burden for you ?? " Acchan ask with an angry face , Kai just realize what he said and think 'oops' .
" Hey , I can watch myself " Rena said and then continue to stalking them , leaving Acchan and Kai alone . ( I mean not some pervy scene because Acchan now is scolding Kai :D )
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" Here it is " Black said , showing her a big wooden house .
" Wow ... big , but a little bit creepy .. " Mayu though . Then , she follow Black to go inside the house . As soon as the door open , Mayu peek inside the house and amaze because there are many girls in there .
" Yo Black ! And who's this cute girl ? Eh , wait .... She look's like someone ... " A girl said .
" Nezumi ?? " A girl with a short hair stand up from her seat and walk approach Mayu . But then stop by Black's hand .
" Wait centre .. She's not that mouse .. " Black said .
" Yea yea , hehe .. " The scar girl said then giggle , making Mayu sweat drop again .
Soon , a pop sound hear from behind Centre , making all of them look back .
" As I though you will come here soon or later .. " A girl with a pink hoodie jacket said as she chewing her gum . Centre look at them with a shock face , but Black and the scar girl don't seems surprised at all .
" Who are you ... ? " Mayu ask , her face seems so confused .
" Let me explain it later ... All of the guest are not here yet .. So if you don't mind please wait for a second .. " As soon as the pink hoodie jacket girl said , Kumi , Kanon , Jurina already got inside the house .
" Mayu ??? " The 3 of them said in unison .
" You guys ??? " Mayu said back .
" Wait ! Don't start a conversation I will explain it all now .. " The pink hoodie jacket girl said stopping them before they start a conversation .
" Before we started , let me introduce myself and the others .. My name is Nezumi , sometimes others call me little mouse .. This girl with a black jacket is Black , sometimes she have a black heart so if you have a sensitive heart you better be careful .. This one is Gekikara , as you know she always giggling everytime and everywhere so don't mind it .. That girl who just greet black is Gachapin .. Oops , I mean Shaku .. This girl is Dance , she's popular with her clumsiness , and the girl who always punch Dance is Shibuya ... There are many more , but I think they're busy right now so I will introduce them later .. " The pink hoodie jacket girl named Nezumi explained .
" Ah ... Then , I'm Watanabe mayu , known as cyborg , this girl is Yagami Kumi .. Beside her is Kimoto Kanon , she have a little sister .. Her name is Matsui Jurina .. " Mayu explained .
" Right .. So I will explain about why our face look the same now .. " Nezumi said , all of them just nod .
" So .. You guys seems confuse why our face look the same .. It simple .. I , Centre , Black , Gekikara , Gacha-- I mean Shaku , Dance , Shibuya , and the others that live in this wooden house is a replica of you guys .. Long ago , there is a doctor named as forex .. He make a replica from the face of you guys by a mirror .. I don't know that is a magic mirror or whatever .. But it can copy face from anyone face that he choose .. " Nezumi explained .
" Then ... Why do he make it the same as all of us ? I mean .. Why don't he make one of you or all of you guys different from all of us ? " Kumi ask .
" About that I don't know too ... " Nezumi replied . Soon , the room become quiet .
" What's this ? " A guy came out from a room , followed by a girl with a doll on her hand and a girl that seems the same as Kumi and Dance .
" Woa , is this another replica of me ?? Kakkoi !! " Jurina half-shout as she see the guy , making Centre pout .
" Am I not cool ?? " Centre though as she mirrored herself .
" Replica ? Is this my original form ?" The guy ask to Nezumi , then Nezumi nod
" I see ... Okay then , my name is Nobunaga , pleased to meet you .. " Nobunaga said .
" My name is Matsui Jurina , pleased to meet you too ! " Jurina smile .
" This girl is another replica of Kumi too .. Her name is Komimi .. " Nezumi said .
" Yo ! My name's Komimi , nice to meet you " Komimi said with a smile and offering a hand to shake .
" My name's Yagami Kumi , nice to meet 'ya !" Kumi said with a smile too and shake Komimi's hand .
" this girl over here is Kanon's replica .. Her name is Nantene " Nezumi said.
" N-nice to meet you .. My name is Kimoto Kanon .. " Kanon said as she smile shyly .
" Nante ne ! " The girl just said like that , making Kanon sweat drop .
" O yea , I believe Kumi already know that girl .. " Nezumi said , pointing her index finger to a certain girl .
" Wha , Yuria ?? " Kumi said .
" Yo " Yuria said .
" What are you doing here ? Are you following me all the time ? " Kumi ask .
" Nope , Actually this place is my camp .. The place that I help you is just a safehouse .. " Yuria said , while Kumi mouth form a 'o' .
" Hey yo , my name is Peace , I'm Yuria's replica , nice to meet you guys " Peace said. Soon as Peace introduce herself , a tall girl showed suddenly in front of them .
" Hello , my name's Torigoya , please take care of me from now on " Torigoya said .
" .. Cute " Kanon though . Then Torigoya look at her .
" Why , Thank you .. " Torigoya said with a smile , making Kanon shock .
" Ah , I forgot .. Be careful , she's a mind reader .. " Nezumi said .
" With her by our side .. I think she will know all of my secret ne~ " Jurina though .
" Yup " Torigoya suddenly answered it .
" ..... "
TBC ? :?
Sorry if there's a mistake or it's boring ... But I hope you guys like it and please if it's not bothering you leave a comment or a critic ..... Thank you very much :kneelbow:
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wahhhh~!!! so cool!!! I love this even much!
I wonder what will happen now....Mayu lost her Yukirin....w-wait! where is Yukirin?!?!?!?
Thanks for the update! it was really interesting!!!
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Genius!! And I wonder why the doctor made a replica of them! And.........
Hahaha XD yes Jurina! Nobunaga so KAKKOI!!
Eum, will you bring Nanashi Annin and others?
Well, I have to wait for the answer..
Thanks for the update :bow:
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Woah , Majisuka Gakuen 2 and 3 combined ?! :w00t: so cool !! XD and yeah agree with Jurina , Nobunaga is indeed very cool. :twothumbs pffttt , what's with Centre , she's mirroring herself because of jealous with Nobunaga :lol: lol at the 'nante ne' phrase :rofl: thank you for the update , looking forward for the next chapter :D
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A replica , eh ? interesting :glasses: and you know ... now I'm sad because the announcement that Kumi will graduate :err: but when I read this , it's make me lighten a bit ... thank you kuumin1234-san .. I hope you can update soon :kneelbow: :oops:
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Oh now I see, interesting!
Thank you for your update!
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:
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@yuukimoko : glad that you like it :D , and your welcome ... Thank you for already read this Fic and comment it yuukimoko-san :)
@JuRikki : hmm , you will now it later .. And yea , I will bring annin here to this Fic , but it's on the chapter 11 / 12 I think .. I already have a plan so .. Yea I think annin will make an appearance in chapter 11 / 12 :D please be patient ^^ and thank you very much JuRikki-san :)
@Kuro--Black : yeah , it seems that mjsk 2 & 3 are combined :D thank you for already read this and comment it Kuro--Black-san :)
@Seighcretz : uhn , yea , I'm very sad too when I know that kuumin will graduate ... But we can still support her , so cheer up Seighcretz-san :D hehe , and thank you very much Seighcretz-san :)
@Megumi : glad that you understand it and your welcome :D Thank you very much Megumi-san :)
So so so so sorry that I update it for sooo long ... I'm very very sorry :'( and so here is the chapter 10 ( Sorry for the grammatical error )
Chapter 10 ---------------------------------------------------------As the others is chatting in the wooden house , in the woods , a certain girl is searching for someone in a panic state . She keep on searching until finally she found a girl , with a black hoodie jacket standing in front of a big tree . Yuki can't see his eyes because the shadow of her hoodie , Only her mouth that revealed . The mysterious girl with black hoodie jacket look at Yuki , while Yuki stop and stared at that girl with a suspicious look .
" Hello young girl .. " The girl said with a smile as she take a step forward .
" who are you ? " Yuki said , trying to be calm as she's not take a step backward .
" Ah .. You're quite a brave girl " the girl said as she start to smirk , making Yuki shivered a bit .
" Answer my question " Yuki reply . Her reply make her look up at Yuki . Somehow , Yuki can see her right eyes shining in red color , in her red color eye there's a weird and complicated symbols , and below her right eye's there's written a number , it shows '002'
".. You will know it soon ... Kashiwagi Yuki .." that girl said , as she smirk and turn into a dust and disappeared . Hearing her own name being said making her startled . Yuki then noticed that there's small box in the ground , Exactly where the place where the girl just disappeared .
Yuki open the box and realize that there was a piece of paper in it .. She took it and read it 'treasure your time like you treasure your life' that is the only word in that piece of paper and in the edge of the paper , there's a familiar symbol , Yuki realize that the symbol was the same symbol in the mysterious man's eye , and on the box there's a timer , The more Yuki think about it , the more she's become confused , so she just put the paper inside the box and then put it in her pocket , ignore it , and keep searching for her beloved cyborg .
When she was walking , suddenly her foot was pulled up by a rope , making her body floating in the air in an upside down position . The first thing she saw was a girl that go to their camp with Kumi and Yuria .
" Ah , I think I've see you somewhere " the girl said as she put her index finger on her chin .
" O yea ! you're one of Kumi's friend .. sorry for this .. I made a trap for an animal but unfortunetaly , you're the one that got caught " The girl said as she giggle , while Yuki pout . Sayaka cut out the rope that caught Yuki's foot . before Yuki land hardly to the ground , sayaka catch her and put her down slowly .
".. Thank you .. " Yuki said
"Your welcome ... It's dangerous so it's better if you stay there , what are you doing here ?? Judging by your appearance , you seems not the sporty type so it's dangerous for a girl like you to go to this place" Sayaka said
" .. Well , I want to help Kumi and the others so I chase them with Mayu , but we got separated and so on here , I keep on searching for her but I still don't found her yet .. " Yuki explained .
" Eh ... I try to find them too , but still don't find them yet .. I think we could cooperate to find them , ne ? " Sayaka said with a smile .
" Uhn " Yuki reply with a smile too .
" By the way , my name is Yamamoto Sayaka , you can call me Sayaka .. " Sayaka said with a smile
" My name is Kashiwagi Yuki .. You can call me Yuki " Yuki reply with a smile too .
" Err .. By the way , I still don't have an idea how to find those guys , so .... Do you have an idea ? " Sayaka said .
" Hmm , I don't know too ... " Yuki said as she take out the box that she just got and stare at it . Sayaka notice it and decide to ask her what is that .
" What is that ? " Sayaka ask .
" Ah , I got it just before I got trap by your trap .. I got this From a girl with black hoodie jacket .. " Yuki said , Sayaka eyes widen by what was just Yuki said . This don't go unnoticed by Yuki .
" What's wrong ? " Yuki ask with a confused look .
"..M-may I see that ? " Sayaka ask to Yuki with a serious face , ignoring what was Yuki asking to her . Yuki have no idea what was happening all of the sudden in Sayaka's reaction but she just gave it to Sayaka anyways .
Sayaka open the box and see the paper . Her face seems so pale and shock , her body start to trembling . She fall down hardly to the ground . Yuki seems very very confused and shock by Sayaka's reaction . She go to the girl side and tried to help her to stand up .
" You okay ?? What's the matter ?? " Yuki ask with a concert tone .
" Oh no .... Follow me ! We gotta go , Now ! " Sayaka start to run , once again ignoring Yuki's question . she got no choice so she's just follow Sayaka to run .
" I've got to tell Nezumi " Sayaka though as she keep running .
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*Meanwhile , back to the base house*
" Why you guys don't go to other place instead of staying in this woods and jungle ? " Kanon ask . There's a silent for a while , but Nezumi broke it .
" You see this ? If we get out from this place , we will explode from our inner body ... We got this from a doctor in this place " Nezumi said as she show's a red big bracelet on her wrist .
" The same bracelet on Yuria and Sayaka's wrist .. " Kumi though
" Who is the one that can do such a thing ?? To play a human's life is a horrible things ! " Jurina said
" Glad that I can met a kind human like you ... But too bad , we're not a human .. " Nobunaga though as she smile sadly.
" Why don't you guys go to their place to search for the truth and to free yourself ? You guys know where their location right ?" Mayu ask .
" Yes , we know it , but we don't dare to go there ... " Black said.
" Why is that ? "Jurina ask .
" Because .... It will be useless ... We once go there with our comrades ... In the past , there are so many of our friend in this place .. But when we tried to fight againts them and steal the document , many of them are died in their hand ... We got no choice but to retreat because only a few of our friends that save from their attack .. Two of them is Gekikara and Nobunaga ... The proof is there's a scar on their face .. It's a traumatic past for all of us " Black explained , everyone face change into a sad one and they all look at the floor .
"I-i'm so sorry to hear that .. " Jurina said as she feels guilty because she ask a question that made the replicas remembered the sad past .
" It's okay " Centre smile a bit , soon the others replica recovered and smile a bit too . Second have past , and suddenly , the door open hardly , making a loud voice of bang . All of them look at the source of the voice and found out that it was Sayaka standing there panting . Sayaka walk in a fast pace to Nezumi and give her the box . Soon , Yuki show up , and when Mayu realize Yuki standing there , she run to Yuki and hug her .
" Ma-mayuyu ?? " Yuki says with a shock face , still panting as she tried to hug her back .
" I'm glad that you okay " Mayuyu said as she broke the hug and smile to Yuki , Yuki blush , so as Mayu as they realized that there face was just a few inches a way , they just keep staring each other for so long , and then Nezumi broke the moment .
" Get a room you two !! Don't do that kind of things now , We still in a conversation you know " Nezumi says irritated . Soon , the two of them back to the real world and look the other ways , tried to hide their blushing face while Nezumi face palmed .
"Oh c'mon Nezumi , we will do it too right ? " Centre said as she tried to kiss Nezumi cheek , but Nezumi stop it by her hand and give her a glare . Centre stop and look down like a puppy that get scolded by her master .
" Back to the conversation , what is this Sayaka ? " Nezumi ask Sayaka that still trying to catch a breath .
" J-just open it .. " Sayaka said as she's panting
When Nezumi open it , her eyes widen and she's frozen , not moving at all . The others seems very shock because it's the first time that they see Nezumi in a state like that .
" W-what's wrong Nezumi ? " Centre ask , while the other replicas already sense that something bad will coming to them .
"T-this is bad ... Okay I will explained it fast .. For the replicas , we still have 45 hours before we explode from our inner body and we better go now to their place rather than stay here and wait for the end .. And for the others , I don't want to tell you guys this .. But if your replica got vanished , you'll be vanished too from this world .. " Nezumi explained , and everyone's eyes was widen .
" WHAT !!?? " They all exclaimed .
" How did you know that ?? " Kumi ask still with a very shock face.
" I will read it then ... A message from Forex : 'to all of my dear replicas , I give this box to you guys by the help of my special assist , Yuko Oshima .. I sent you guys this to invite you to a game that you will have to accept it , or else you guys will die , explode like all of your friend died . So , you guys have 48 hours before you explode and if you want to be save , just make sure that you guys can past the game .. Oh yeah , for the non-replicas , I invite you too to this game .. The rules is if your replica died in this game and vanished , the original of you will vanished too from this world , so you have to make sure to cooperate with them and don't make them died .. So that's it .. I give you guys the map where the location of the game was held ... And so hurry before your time is up ... And remember .. Don't let you replicas died and for the replicas .. Don't waste time , time is a treasure of your life .. So then , that's it ! Jaa~ ' " Nezumi finished it , and then , she entering a number to the box , and a paper that was rolled up by a tie pop out suddenly from the small box.
Nezumi open it and and see the location . She look up at them and give them a serious look .
" Prepare everything that you thing that it will help you guys later .. Everythings okay ! and hurry up !! We don't have much time left " Nezumi says , while everyone recovered from their shock state and in a no time they already got prepared .
"We have to go to their location now .. It will take about 3 hours to go there by walking .. Don't waste your energy too much , because we don't know what will happen in there .." After Nezumi said that , they all nod and so the game of the death begins .
TBC
Sorry if it was sucks or others .. And sorry if there is a mistake ^^" if it wasn't bothering please leave a critic or a comment :) thank you for all the readers that like it or don't like it , I really appreciate it :)
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Mayukiiiiiii! finally together!!!
I wonder what the game will be like? really interesting!!!! love the Mayuki moment.....
Thanks for the update~!!
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Whoaaa!! They'll be vanished!! Noo!!
I wonder how the game like, and you bring Annin too? Yeaa! XD
Love your fic!! <3
Can't wait for next update..
Thank you very much :twothumbs
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Yea , I'm curious about the game too .. Wonder what will happen to them :hehehe: wow , the girl that give Yuki the box is Yuko ? Or should I say .. Yuko replica ? ( Or not ? ) :otomerika: ahh , I'm really curious now :ding: thank you for the update , looking forward for your next update :hee:
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Wait .. what ? that girl is Yuko and below her eye's there is a number that written in '002' right ? Exactly like in the flying get PV !! Interesting :w00t: don't tell me that there is '001' ? ( aka acchan ) :hehehe: well i'm just guessing haha :hee: Hope you can update soon :stuffed: and i'm curious about the game too though XD
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:panic: Oh my gaaaa!
This is ahh I can't wait for next update!
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:
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@yuukimoko : your welcome .. Ah , I'm glad that you feel that way :D thank you very much yuukimoko-san :D :kneelbow:
@JuRikki : yea , I will bring Annin :D ah , I'm really glad that you like my fic JuRikki-san :kneelbow: ( because , sometimes .. I think that maybe everyone think that this fic sucks so yea .. I'm really glad that you like it :) ) your welcome and thank you very much JuRikki-san :kneelbow:
@burakuaria : glad that you're curious :D and yea , the '002' girl is Yuko ... Hmm , yea I think it was Yuko's replica :D your welcome and thank you very much burakuaria-san :kneelbow:
@Kuro--Black : uhum , yes it's Yuko and below her eye's there is a number that written '002' .. Yea , I just realize it after I post this chapter 10 , haha :D hmm , about that , you'll see :hee: thank you very much Kuro--Black-san :kneelbow:
@Megumi : ahaha , Thank you very much Megumi-san XD :kneelbow:
So ... Errr ... I want to say sorry because I update it so long ... But I hope you guys like this one :) ... And o yea , maybe this chapter is a bit complicated and have many grammar mistake so please pardon me , I'm suck at english ^^" .. So this is chapter 11 , hope you guys like it :)
"Prepare everything that you think that it will help you guys later .. Everythings okay ! and hurry up !! We don't have much time left " Nezumi says , while everyone recovered from their shock state and in a no time they already got prepared .
"We have to go to their location now .. It will take about 3 hours to go there by walking .. Don't waste your energy too much , because we don't know what will happen in there .." After Nezumi said that , they all nod and so the game of the death begins .
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" Umm ... May I ask you something ?" when all of them were walking silently because of the seriousness , Suddenly Kanon break it with a question .
"What is it ?" Nezumi replied not bothering to look back at Kanon .
"..a-are you sure about ... This ?" Kanon ask.
"About what ?"
"About this .... This plan ... You sure we can win this game ?" Kanon ask again.
"I don't know .... But better if we try than waiting for the end ... I even feel guilty if we , the replicas are vanished ... You and your friends life will end , and it was all our fault if things like that will happen .. So we will try as best as we can" Nezumi said. Not knowing how to reply it back , Kanon just keep her mouth shut and continue to walk behind Nezumi.
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*3 hours later*
"I think this is the place" Nezumi said as she stared at the building.
'3 hours sharply ?? You've got to be kidding me' Yuki though as she see at her watch and sweatdropped .
"Wha ?? This kind of places ??" Kumi says half shouted. The place look like an old wooden building and it's look like in a second it would collapsed.
"Not sure of it .. But the map show it here .." Nezumi reply as she open the front door slowly. before she open it fully , she already sense that there is someone stood in the middle of the room . She know that it was a bad timing but she just open it anyway . When she open it , they was welcomed by a girl that was familiar to Yuki .
"Hello my dear brother , sisters .. And humans" the girl said as she smile . Her action make the groups uncomfortable .
"This is the first part of the game .. I will tell you something about this place .. Maybe this building look very old and can break down anytime , but you guys don't need to be worry . This building is well built up and almost impossible if it will collapse ... That's all the info about this building .. Now , I will tell you about the game " the girl say as Kumi gulp.
"First part ... In this building , there are so many of rooms , maybe a hundred .. But one of the hundreds rooms , there is a single golden key ... you guys have to search the golden key ..." She says . All of them sigh in relieve but it's stop when the girl says another.
"But , every single room has a trap , so don't choose it playfully" the girl says.
"Now , you guys can search for it , the game was already started" she says as she disappeared.
"Before we start the game , who the heck is that girl ??" Jurina ask.
"That girl appeared when I was searching for Mayu and she gave me that box !" Yuki says
"She is Dr Forex assistance .. Well , I think you guys already know the name , it's Oshima Yuko .. Second testament that Dr Forex made ... See the symbol below her eyes ? It's show that she was the 2nd" Nezumi says.
"Hey guys look ! I think the golden key is in that room !" Shaku said as she run to the room. Few of them come with Shaku , while the others walk slowly to the room.
A box suddenly showed up . Shaku and the others walk to the box , but then , Nezumi remembered something.
'Every single room has a trap' that words echo in Nezumi's head as she see that there was a little crack on the floor.
"Hey wai-- " before she finished , the floor start to crack all the way and it makes them to separate into 2 groups. They look down to the place where they got separated , Expecting that there was a ground , but when they see it , their thought was wrong .. It was an endlessly and there was some kind of hole that will suck you , like a black hole .
"Yabai.." All of them though.
"What's that ?? a black hole !? " Kumi ask with a shock face.
"No idea .. But I think It's a good idea not to come near the crack floor .. Because once we got suck in it , we will never get back here .." Mayu says with no expression.
"This is sure a horrible game" Jurina says as she start to shiver a little bit.
Nezumi see the other side of them that come earlier to the room . There , she see that there was Shaku , Jurina , Kumi , Kanon , Yuria , Nobunaga , Mayu , Yuki and Sayaka.
"We get separated into 2 formation , I think they would be okay as there was Sayaka , Nobu and Mayu .. I can make sure that all of them would be okay but That Gachapin will surely become burden to them .." Nezumi though as she stares at Shaku as Torigoya giggled .
"I don't know what are you saying in your mind but I'm sure 200% it was not a positive things" Shaku though as she sweatdrop.
"Okay , as you can see we can't become one formation again as this ground separated us .. So you guys have to continued the game to that door , while we continued the game too but with different direction .." Nezumi says , as Nobunaga nod .
"Nobu , you will take the lead .. And Mayu you will be helping Nobunaga .. And I would like to give you guys something.." Mayu says as she search something from her bag pack and take out 1 thing.
"Catch it" Nezumi says as she throw the things to Yuki and Yuki successfully catch it.
"Kashiwagi Yuki , you will get the part to tell me the condition of your formation , and tell me if something happen , that little chip will be useful .. It's almost the same thing as walkie talkie but the voice was more smoother .. And I know that you have a hand clock on your wrist so use it to know how many hours that was left for us .. " Nezumi says as Yuki heard it seriously .
"The others will help to find where's the golden keys located , but don't make the same mistake as Gachapin do " she continued following by a pout Shaku. After that , Nezumi give them a move that signaled them to open the box . Kanon open it and take the silver key out of the box and shows it to Nezumi.
"Is that door locked ? If yes , open it with that silver key.." Nezumi says . Jurina open the door in the corner of the room but it can't be open . It's shows that it was lock , so Kanon come near the door and unlock it with the key and it was open , showing a long corridor.
"Okay then I hope we can meet each other again" Nezumi says as they nod and left.
"Let's go" Nezumi said as she look back and walk , following by the others.
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*other side*
Rena keep walking , leaving Acchan and Kai behind until finally she found something on the ground. It's a cellphone. She take it to her hand and stare it for a while. Don't know who it's belong to , she flip it open like she will know whose its belong to of she open it.
she open it and press a 'power' button on . The cell phone screen start to light up and in a second it shows girl picture . She already know who it was as she see a girl with a cat like smile in the cell phone wallpaper.
'Jurina..' Rena whisper softly as she keep the cell phone in her pocket and continued to walk.
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"Emmm ... Which one that we should open it first ?" Kumi ask as she look back to others.
"Just open whenever you feel it was not a dangerous one , but choose it carefully like what Nezumi said." Nobunaga reply.
When they all heard it , one of them open the room without hesitation . All of them look at the one who just open the door . They all was quiet concern when they see who is the one that open it while Nobunaga give a glare to the culprit.
"You sure didn't choose the dangerous one , Gachapin.." Nobunaga said as he enter the room while Shaku pout .. again.
The room is big , but not extremely big . Its just like it fits perfectly to their thought. They all entered the room and were shock by the view that they see .
"What is this ? It's Empty , It's a white colour room that's empty" Kumi said with a confused look .When they are looking around , suddenly the door close hardly . They all get shock because the door was close and when Sayaka tried to open it , the door can't be open.
"What the.." Sayaka said as keep trying to open the door .
"Wait Sayaka .. " Mayu said while Sayaka stop and look back to her.
"Don't waste your energy , it will not be open by one of us in this room ..." Mayu continued while Sayaka stop her action.
"We just have to finish this game quick.." Mayu said as she look every side of the room .
"In every room , there must be an exit and I'm sure that this place have a trap , so be careful when you guys search for something " Nobunaga said.
"The wall ... The shape was all square.." Kanon say as she touch the wall to make sure of it.
"..So is the floor" Kumi said.
"The roof was ... So high.." Yuki said as she look up.
"And so dark ... The top can't be seen" Yuria continued.
"Hey , wait. There's a one big hole in the wall over there ... Maybe 10 meter from the ground" Jurina said as her face slowly start to become panic. "Don't tell me ... We have to climb this wall to reach there.."
"No. way." Kumi said , disbelief by what was Jurina said .
"Ugh , if it was like this .. We are wasting our time .. We cannot met with the others and cannot go to that stupid Forex place" Nobunaga said while the others become silent.
"You got to be kidding me .." Kanon said cracking the silent ."Don't tell me that this is dead end .. Don't tell that from the start , he already p-" not yet finished her word , Kumi grab Kanon's shoulder and make Kanon to look at her face.
"Kanon .. It's okay , there must be a way to reach there , so don't give up yet" Kumi said as she smile to make Kanon calm.
"...okay" Kanon calm and smile a bit.
"Then , for this time .. We have to wait and see what's next .." Mayu said as she sit down .
They all wait silently . The room was very quiet , no one speak until ..
'Bamm!' Suddenly a block fall down near them from the very high roof , making all of them very shock.
"A-ahh...." due to the shock , Yuki unable to speak properly.
"Look out !" Mayu shout making them to look up and run to the place where the next block don't fall down on there.
"T-this.." Kanon stutter and she start to sweat because of the fear.
"Block ! Blocks start to fall down from the top" Kumi said .
"This is definitely a game ! the game was already start ! Everybody , be careful , there's another block fall down !" Mayu shout as everybody nod and avoid the place where the next block fall down.
Meanwhile , somewhere , a guy was watching them secretly.
'Hmmm ... How many people that can manage to get out from that room ?' Dr.Forex though
Blocks keep fall , fall and fall . But until now , they still can avoid that.
"We don't know where will the blocks fall next , we just have to avoid that . Be caution guys " Nobunaga shout.
'Haha , just keep on avoiding the blocks .. If you guys still think of protecting your teammates , you guys will be crushed .. You guys cannot finished this game if one of you don't die in this game' he though as he smirk.
"Sooo.. I guess you really concern about your sis eh ? It's shows on your face " Dr.Forex said as he look back to a certain girl that got chain . The girl give him a glare and move hardly , hoping that she would be free , but the chain was too hard for a girl like her to broke it , so it can't be broke.
"Easy there .. It will be useless" Dr.Forex said as he smirk. "You better not wasting your energy , You just have to watch your sister die" he said as he look back to the screen.
*back to the game*
"Ugh , this is a deathly game" Mayu said between her pant.
"What should we do ?? we don't have a place to avoid the blocks again" Yuki ask.
"I know ! Climb up the blocks ! This is the only way to reach that big hole or should I say exit !" Sayaka half shout as she start to climb on one the blocks.
'nice idea' Mayu though as she grin a bit and climb one of the blocks too.
"We have to avoid being on the side of the room , we can get stuck by the blocks if we are in that place" Mayu said as the others nod in agreement. While they keep avoiding the blocks , Jurina realize something.
"! Wait ! It feels like the blocks that fall down have a tempo .... There must be a rules of the game for the location of the blocks that fall down!" Jurina said with a wide smile , she close her eyes for a moment and open it . Her face seems like she already know where is the location of the next block will fall down.
"Over there!" Jurina point with her index finger to a place and a block fall down at the place where jurina point it.
"Woa , cool ! The block fall down exactly at the place where you just point it" Shaku said as her face bright up a bit.
"Just imagine that the time where the block fall down as a tempo , while the place where the block fall down as a foot step or a hand movement .. Then it was the same as we see a dancing block right ?" Jurina said , still with a wide smile on her face.
"Ah , I see ! If that's a basic rules of the game , then this game only can be operate by a simple computer system right ?" Kanon said.
"You mean the program can't make the blocks To dance with a complicated tempo , eh ?" Kumi said .
"So then , if we just guess where the blocks will fall down next , then that's mean the game will easily be over !" Yuki said. Everyone now understand it and smile to each other and continued it.
"Kanon , hurry" Kumi said as she lend her hand to help Kanon to go up.
"Come on guys , don't give up !just a bit more , and we will finish this game" Nobunaga said.
They have done well , all of them already manage to go out except Kumi and Kanon and suddenly a block fall down to Kumi with a high speed , making Kumi and the others froze .
'What ? The tempo's changing??' Jurina though. "Kumi , look out!" Jurina shout while Kumi snap and act fast .They all got relieve when they know that Kumi was in a full shape and nothing happen to her .
"Kumi , You okay ?!" Yuria ask from above.
"I think so" Kumi said while Yuria smile in relive to Kumi.
"Be careful , the tempos becomes quick !" Jurina said as Kumi and Kanon nod.
"Alright then , we should continue the--!!" Kumi said , but suddenly she froze at her place.
"Kumi , what are you doing ?? It's dangerous in this room !" Nobunaga said while Kumi look at Nobunaga and look back to Kanon.
"Kanon ! Give me your hand !" Kumi said , her action make Kanon confused.
"Eh ? you first , Kumi" Kanon said , but Kumi just keep telling Kanon to lend her hand , so , no choice for Kanon , she lend her hand to Kumi , and then Kumi pull Kanon up to Nobunaga .
"Come on Kumi , give me your hand " Nobunaga said . Instead of come to Nobunaga , Kumi laugh a bit.
"Wha? What's so funny ?? Hur-- ??" Nobunaga stop his sentences when he see Kumi's shirt.
"Yo-your ... Shirt .." Nobunaga said with a shock look .
"Haha ... Yea ... I got stuck .. I think this is it .. Goodbye guys .." Kumi said as the exit hole got closed because another fall down block. Everyone froze at their place.
"..eh?"
TBC
Emm ... Sorry if it was boring .. And yea .. The game in the empty room was a bit complicated .. I'm sorry , I don't know how to use it as a word , because I'm imagining the scene by my mind and I found that it was hard to make it as a word .. So I'm sorry :kneelbow: Btw , I want to say thank you for all the readers , even if you don't like it , I'm really appreciate it :kneelbow: if it's not bothering , please leave a critic or a comment :) thank you very much :kneelbow:
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Owh , cool . Now it's getting more interesting XD and who is that girl that got chained ? :? Sister ? :? And waa ??? Kumi got trapped!? Man , I wonder how she will escaped from that room when her shirt got stuck .. Don't tell me that she will rip it off *Q* nah , just keed :lol: you made me really curious now :o thank you for the update :hee: and worries not , I love this fic :D
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AAAAHHHH!!!!!! What's gonna happen to Kumi?
:OMG:
Now you got me all excited
can't wait for the next update please update soon!! :on woohoo:
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Whaaaa what happened to Kumi? And..... Chained? Who? Sister? Who??
Whoaaa thank for update :lol:
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I´m a little confused
but really like it the history
please continuous
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WHAT HAPPENED TO MY KUMI?!?!?!
Please don't leave the fic like this :cry:
Update :bow:
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@Kuro--Black : about Kumi's sister and how will Kumi escape from it , you'll know it later :D and thank you very much for the comment Kuro--Black-san :hee:
@alexsher99 : thank you very much alexsher99-san :kneelbow:
@JuRikki : about that you'll know it later ^^ and thank you very much JuRikki-san :kneelbow:
@stepk : I'm sorry to make you confused :nervous and glad that you like the history :D thank you so much stepk-san :hee:
@K-popJ-popAWESOMNESS : nah , I don't leave it .. You know , I just slow when it comes to to make next chapter , gomenasai , I still make it halfway because now I still focus on my OS , but I'll update ASAP :hee: thank you J-popK-popAWESOMNESS-san :kneelbow:
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Please,.. Continue this fic Dx pleaase :bow: for kuumin fans sake Dx
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Please,.. Continue this fic Dx pleaase :bow: for kuumin fans sake Dx
Yeah.. please update this i want to know what will happen to kumi T^T
want to know who is that Dr. Forex *angryface*