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hi...i'm new in this thing.
i just wanted to post this because........i like this paring very much. :) well....i'm a fan of no3b, i started watching mendol ikemen idol and thats what got me in her. i'm not the best writer but i will do my best in every story that i will do. :) i alos posted this in tumblr.....i'm an idiot.
i hope you guys like it because its a rare paring, and i like rare parings :)
this fanfic is dedicate to FoF, my favorite author.
prologue
It was a sunny day in March, the flowers bloom, the birds sing with joy, the blue sky is not crying. Two people are enjoying themselves by talking to each other after they declare their love for one another. This love was unique; not because they were the same sex, but it was different from others. Like a butterfly and spider. One was the set up the web and the other one got caught, yet both of them got caught.
“So how long have you been in love with me?” Minami ask
“Well….i realize a have feelings for you 3 months ago”
“That’s a really long time”
“How about you?”
“The same as you”
As the two hold hands, they look into the sky. How clear was the sky but soon it will become a thunderstorm?
“Would you like to eat something” ask Haruna
“Do you have katsudon”
“No, but I can make it”
“I love you”
“I love you too”
Days have pass, they decided to keep their relationship a secret. Is this a sin of two people or is this a sin of the lovers? Their love was clear like water, loving like a rose, and joy able like a toy. One night, they were at butterfly’s house. That night was their first time.
Cloths are thrown everywhere, kisses all over their bodies, the paradise waits for them. One gets drunk with pleasure and the other one loves the sensation and the pleasure.
“You are everything to me”
“I will always protect you”
“I love you”
“I love you”
As the days pass their love grew and flourishes. There was no rain only sunny days. The wind blew freely without worry.
“do you want me to tell you a tale that has been passed on by my ancestors”
“Yes” Haruna cuddle closer to Minami
“It’s called, “spider and butterfly”, one day a new bloom butterfly flew away and ended up in a place where butterflies and spiders live. She made friends with the butterflies and the spiders.” Minami said
“What happen to the butterfly?”
“Well…the butterfly met a spider that was charming. Soon after they were friends but that was not what the spider desire. The spider wanted more. Since the first time the spider look at the butterfly, the spider fell for the butterfly. The butterfly didn’t notice when the spider put up the web. Slowly but surely the butterfly got caught in the trap. But the spider didn’t notice that it was also caught. Soon after they realize they were in love, but there was a problem. In the place where they live there was a rule; not to fall in love with a butterfly or a spider….each other.” Minami said while hugging Haruna
“So, what happen to them?”
“One day a black widow found them together but didn’t say anything at that time. The black widow came to see the spider and threaten the spider. The black widow wanted the spider for herself, so she told the spider to come with her and if not the black widow would tell about the relationship. The spider decided to go with the black widow. Without telling why the spider left the butterfly because if they discover they had a relationship, the butterfly would be killed.”
“That’s sad”
“I know, poor them”
“So what happen?”
‘The butterfly was destroyed, so was the spider. They couldn’t do anything just suffer. Then after a long time the spider realize that it didn’t matter if the “community” found out about them the spider and the black widow parted. The threaten came true. The “community” was angry with the spider and the butterfly. But that didn’t stop the spider the spider and the butterfly. That day it rain; the web wasn’t destroyed and that show that their love was stronger than anything in the world”
“That’s amazing”
“I know, my grandma told me the story”
Days of happiness only to be destroy. Days of joy only to avoid…….
The couple lives happily in harmony until……….
i have a queastion....how do you update a fanfic here, without making another topic......i just don't know. :?
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Hello :D Welcome to the family ! :welcome
Nice fic ! :on GJ:
Very sweet ~ :shy1:
As for your question, You'll click REPLY if you want to update it :hee:
And if you want to change the Topic Subject, look for your first post and you'll see MODIFY then change the Subject :hee:
Hope that helped ~
Updato soon :D
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Wow. You dedicated a TakaHaru fic for me? And it's not even my birthday yet. *bawling my eyes out* :farofflook:
But seriously, thanks for that! :) :) :bow: :bow: :bow:
TakaHaru is one of my fave pairings in AKB. Sadly, there aren't much fics about them for me to spazz about. :nervous
And well...truthfully, I've actually forgotten about them since I'm more focused on my other favorite. :nervous I know right? Eff me right? :nervous
But when I read this, it made me remember. So thanks for that. :) It also made me remember that I have an unfinished TakaHaru fic as well. :nervous :nervous
Though I am curious as to who is the spider and who is the butterfly in their relationship. I mean, I could easily imagine both TakaHaru as a spider and as a butterfly so...yeah it got me thinking. :lol:
Days of happiness only to be destroy. Days of joy only to avoid…….
I love that. It's sad but sometimes true. :)
Is this your first fic? If it is or not, I'm sure we'd see more updates from you. XD
About your question, well I think ChuuuPuffss-san answered it but if ever you are in a pinch about anything, please feel free to pm anyone of us around here. I'm sure they'd be happy to help out. :)
Well, thanks for the read umichan. :bow:
Oh yeah, and :welcome to the world of akb fanfics. :)
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Welcome! XD
Nice story! Though there's not a lot of TakaHaru fanfics out there, but I find them cute together and also really rare couple. Good job, I like this couple too.
Please continue writing for the fun!! XD
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hello......thank you for reading this fanfic. well right now i'm going to post the first chapter of this fic. :)
i thought that some people would read it and that it would hace taken time to see a coment from some one, but i fangirling when i saw the first coment. later that i
found out that FoF comented in my fanfic........i was in shock.....i was fangirling, even my mom told me to stay calm(she doesn't know i write fanfic.....i just tell her i write scary stories then she doesn't bother me). Well....thank you to those people who comented, and thank you FoF you made my day :) :) :)
(Butterfly POV)
chapter 1
In the scent of your perfume I get lost. I never thought I would fall in love with you. I got caught in your trap. Seducing me with your charm. I’m only a butterfly caught in the trap of love. Even if you are not my girlfriend, I get jealous of the girls you flirt with especially your best friend. But at the end of the day, I know I’ll be yours again. Every night; since 3 months ago, we make love. Only with few words like, “I love you”, “you are everything to me”, “I will always protect you”, we consume our love. I like the sensation of your hands roaming thru my naked body. The way you kiss me, the way you go inside of me. It’s the ultimate pleasure. The only secret we keep from the public is our sin.
“I told you I don’t like you flirting with other girls” Haruna said angry
“It’s only a persona, I’m sorry” Minami brought her hand to cup Haruna’s cheeks.
“I love you” Minami and haruna shared a passionate kiss.
I thought you would always be with me, but I was wrong. The thunderstorm came to fast. I was destroy when I saw you and Atsuko kiss. You told me……
“I’m sorry; I was only playing with you”
My heart fell slowly to the ground. I ran as fast I could only to find myself in my room. Remembering all those nights, I only cried more. Sorrow and pain, only those two feelings. Later I realize why didn’t I stayed and ask you why. The days pass as if what we had never occur. I miss the sensation and the pleasure. I even pray to be with you one more night, one more kiss, and one more “I love you”.
Two months have passed, I acted like it didn’t hurt me I heard you have a happy life with her, and you even stop flirting with other girls. But why is it that every time we see each other, your eyes tell me. ”please take me away from her”. Sometimes that look worries me but I tried to ignored or it probably my imagination. My friend yuko tells me not to worry and hugs me, but I never return her hugs because from the corner of my eyes I can see you staring at me. A jealous look from the unforgotten. I wonder, do you get jealous of yuko? Days have passed I heard you have problems. I only imagine the worst, but I ignored.
“Yukirin, have you heard what happen to takamina” ask sae in their classroom
“No, what happen to her” answer yukirin
“Well….she got slap by Atsuko , can you believe that” said sae
“Really that’s bad” yukirin said while walking near sae
“I know I hope you never slap me” sae said seriously
“I will if you don’t stop flirting with other girls” yukirin look at sae
“It’s part of who I am…..and you know I will always love you” sae kissed yukirin on the lips.
It’s been 3 months since we broke up, I still feel lonely. You still give me that look and I want to know why. One day I had to stay afterschool. That day I understood why you were with her. As I pass the hallway, i hear two people moaning. Inside I saw you and Atsuko making out.
“I…love..you…mi..na..mi.” said Atsuko between kisses. Haruna at hearing this started to cry. She wanted to run but something stop her.
“Haruna” Minami moan aloud. Atsuko push her and slap her.
“Are you thinking about her again” Atsuko look mad
“I’m sorry…I didn’t meant to”
“I’m going to kill myself” Atsuko said while grabbing a pencil
“Please don’t, I love you….please don’t commit suicide” Minami tries to get the pencil
“I should...so you and that slut would sleep together” Atsuko push Minami and try to stab herself, but Minami took the pencil.
“Please don’t kill yourself….i already left her for you so don’t”
That day I went to my house with a lot more questions.
all day listening to Bad Boy from Big Bang and number six from Alice Nine...........
the next chapter will be updated next saturday because i have a something to do :D it will also explain why the spider did what it did.
thank you
......until the day comes.....
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WOW! This is interesting!!!!
So, Takamina loves Haruna but broke up with her to be with Atsuko, because she threatened that she will kill herself or kill Haruna?!
Can't wait for the update!!!!! :thumbup :thumbup :thumbup
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Wow this is def interesting :D Thanks for the update :) Aw poor Takamina in a difficult situation. She loves Haruna but broke up with her so Atsuko wouldn't kill herself. Meaning Minami does care for Atsuko alot but not in the same way she loves Haruna apparently. Please continue the fic :)
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My friend actually was the one who informed me about your fic. She read it and told me about it. Plus it's TakaHaru, how can I not read that. :lol:
And uh...I'm glad I made your day a bit better. :nervous Though you really shouldn't fangirl over me. :nervous :nervous
Wow. So Haruna is the butterfly eh? And Takamina is the spider.
And Atsuko threatening Takamina for her affection? :shocked Dark! Me likey! :twothumbs
Poor Takamina. Being in that situation is just...rough. :smhid But again, me likey! :lol:
Do continue! XD
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Hello....
i'm just here to aks something to you guys...... who do you think is the black widow?
and also here is teaser for chapter 2
''look if you don't want Atsuko to kill herself, just tell her that you love her'' Mariko said seriously
'' but wouldn't that decision affect your relationship with Haruna'' Miichan question Minami
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My hands roaming thru your naked body its the ultimate pleasure. Sniffing your perfume. Stepping into fascination, making you my girl, my woman, my lover. Not wanting this paradise to end, we end up having 2 hours of sleep.
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Later that night i cry for a really long time, that night i cry my heart out.
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and that was my teaser .
please tell me who do you think is the black widow?
...... until the day comes......
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Isn't the black widow Atsuko then? My Atsumina fangirl is screaming no XD but well, Takamina and Haruna were together first so Atsuko shouldn't intervene, lest threatening to kill herself. I would get mad too if Takamina and Atsuko were together first and then Haruna came in the scene to break them like that.
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hello...its me again. :)
i'm here to drop off the fic. i'm here doing a heechul gif hunt, so my personal mesaage will be brief.
Thank you to those people who read my fic, it makes me feel so happy.
well here it is chapter 2
chapter 2
(spider POV)
Without realizing I fell for you each minute. A taste of Eden, a taste of you. You fell in love with me. My charm; the glorious soul. I only set up my trap…my web…for you. Seducing you slowly, but surely. My trap caught both of us, yet I was its owner. We are a secret because my parents would send me away from you and the school is also a problem. Paradise waits for me, every night. It has been 3 months since we got together. Stepping into fascination; I get drunk with pleasure. Every night is fireworks. Sometimes I wonder if you think I’m experience…well I’m not.
The way I kiss you, the way I go inside of you is only natural. The way your hands roam thru my naked body is the original sin. I forget how to breathe when your lips are on mine. My only sin is loving you more that my own life.
“Haruna, I will always love you” Minami kiss Haruna’s forehead
“Remember that every time I’m not with you” Minami kiss Haruna.
Without knowing, my life was about to change. That day change my life. Thunders shock me. I felt something on my lips at first I thought it was my Haruna, but when I open my eyes it was my best friend. I push her.
“Hey why did you kiss me?” Minami said while removing the sensation of her lips with her hand.
“Because I love you” Atsuko approach Minami and kiss her again. Minami still conscious of what was happening; push Atsuko to hard that she end up in the floor.
“I’m sorry Atsuko….I didn’t meat to push you that hard” Minami tried to pick up Atsuko but was stop by a tear.
Atsuko got up and star to run. Minami chase her all the way to the school’s rooftop. She saw Atsuko climbing the fence that surrounds the roof.
“Atsuko, what are you doing” Minami sounded worried.
“If you don’t accept my love, I will commit suicide” Atsuko turn to Minami.
“Are you crazy” Minami almost shouted.
“Crazy for you” said while taking another step. ‘What should I do’ Minami thought.
“Please come back down here so we can talk” Minami got closer.
“No” Atsuko took another step. Minami ran to Atsuko and grab her.
“I will think about it if you come down
My life had a lot of questions and answers but with that question; will I leave the person I love the most to save my best friend, I didn’t have an answer
Seeking for advice, my search was useless. The pedal of the bloom flower. The sad melody of my answer.
“So what do you think I should do”
“Well…if I was you and Haruna was Miichan and Atsuko was…..Sayaka, I would choose Miichan” Mariko said while looking at the person sitting beside her.
“Aww….you are so sweet” Miichan wrap her hands around Mariko’s shoulder.
“But in your situation” Mariko pointed at Minami; who was sitting in front of her.
“I would choose Sayaka” Miichan unwrap her hands and push Mariko.
“Look, if you don’t want Atsuko to kill herself, just tell her that you love her” Mariko said seriously
“But wouldn’t that decision affect your relationship with Haru-chan” Miichan question Minami.
“How did you knew about me and Haruna…..if I haven’t told anyone except for Mariko and Umi” Minami was kind of shock.
“well the glares you give two each other, the way you and her hug, and I have seen you walk in and out of her house” Miichan said
“Stalker” Minami whispered
“What”
“Nothing”
“Well…leave your butterfly and go with the black widow you spider” Mariko said while looking at Minami.
Later that day I realize what she meant by that.
My last night with the person I love the most. Very slowly I get drunk with pleasure. My web caught you, now I have to let you go without knowing why. When your lips are on mine I forget how to breathe. My hands roaming thru your naked body; it’s the original sin. Going thru every inch or your body. Stepping into fascination, making you my girl, my women, and my lover. Not wanting this paradise to end; we end up having two hours of sleep.
‘So this is our last time’ Minami thought while kissing Haruna’s neck.
(on sunday i'm going to put a scene that has that in it....if you know what i mean, but it going to be in tumblr)
The next morning, my hands were wrapped around Haruna’s slim body. Her head was resting in my small chest. The sensation of her arms around me. If only time stop. I slowly try to get out of your bed without waking you up. I got dress and I saw you waking up.
“Minami-chan, why didn’t you wake me up” said Haruna while rubbing her eyes.
“Because you are so beautiful when you sleep” Minami smile
“You are so sweet” Haruna smile
The most wonderful view is your smile. If only…..
As I put on my jacket, I walk to you. You tell me to sit down so I did. I put the best smile I had and…….
“I have to go to my house and change my cloths” Minami said
“Ok, I will see in school”
“Yeah” Minami smile faded away.
I stood up and walked to the door. I wonder if a last glimpse of a goddess would be a sin. The door-shot came too fast. I took a step and something got my attention. “Our last kiss” Minami whispered. Without thinking, I turn around and open her door. I saw you and my body couldn’t control itself. I ran to you, and pull you towards me. The sensation of your lips is my desire. A soft and tender kiss for our first. A passionate and loving for our last. A step forward a step backward until we fall on your silk sheets. The pleasure and desire grows, but I have to stop it.
“I have to go, goodbye” Minami said while trying not to cry.
I got out of that. As I walked; I try not to cry, but the sadness is too powerful. I ran to my house as I cry.
Later that afternoon, I summon enough courage to tell Atsuko the biggest lie of my life and summon enough courage to tell something horrible to Haruna.
Later night, I cry for the longest time. I cry my heart out.
i tiered....... :) sorry if there is any gramar errors.....
tell what you think
i will update next saturday.......i don't want to go to school
.....until the day coms...
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PLEASE UPDATE YOUR NEXT CHAPTER.
WHO'S THE PAIRING?
I AM FAN OF ATSUMINA. (SHARE)
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i realize something horrible...i'm going to school tomorrow and i would not be able to update next saturay day.
so here is chapter 3...enjoy it .
all day listening to blue flame from alice nine and monster from big bang.
enjoy and also thank you for all the people who read this fanfic....even though its not a atsumina.....
i don't know why i don't like atsumina..well sometimes i do, but most of the time i like takaharu....and i think it because i read a takaharu from FoF....it was my second fanfic that i read in this forum.
Chapter 3
(Black widow POV)
The sensation of your hands roaming thru my naked body, I only wish. I fell in love with you. You didn’t set up your web. Slowly, slowly, and slowly you became everything to me. It hurts knowing you are forbidden, than you are someone else’s desires, but what hurts me the most is you are some one else’s.
Atsuko run to the roof where Minami was, she wanted to tell her that she did well on of her test, but was stop because she heard some noises coming from the other side of the door of the rooftop.
“I told you I don’t like you flirting with other girls” Haruna said angry
Atsuko open the door a little to peek who was in the roof.
“It’s only a persona, I’m sorry” Minami brought her hand to cup Haruna’s cheeks.
At this point Atsuko was shock. Her eyes went wider when she heard…..
“I love you” Minami and haruna shared a passionate kiss.
She stood still and for some reason her heartache
Since that day I realize I was in love with my best friend, but also realize that no one is worth her love expect me. I didn’t spoke a word of what I saw. Silence is killing me. After 3 months I told her “I love you”. With without knowing, I was acting differently. A magical day and I finally heard the most beautiful words; “I love you”. She was mine and only mine. My own love turned into….. I wanted to be yours but something happen.
Atsuko was in Minami’s house, since Minami’s parents are on a business trip. They started talking about schoolwork then Atsuko kiss Minami and one thing led to another. Lucky, they were in Minami’s bedroom. Slowly Atsuko made its way to Minami’s neck, but-
“Haruna” Minami moan aloud instantly Atsuko stop whatever she was doing.
“Why are you thinking about her?” Atsuko said angry. There was silence,
“I’m sorry, I didn-“Minami was interrupted when Atsuko slap her.
“You know what….I’m going to my house, see you later” Atsuko ran to her house. Later night she receive a lot of messages from Minami.
Jealousy and fear grew over me. Without controlling it, my love for you grew but also my insecurity.
“Can you believe Minami is still flirting even though she has a girlfriend” Jurina said.
“Really…that’s horrible, but who is her girlfriend?” Rena said
The two girls where talking in their classroom. Then Tomomi, Miichan, and Atsuko came in.
“It’s Atsuko”
“Really?” Rena look surprised
“Yeah that’s Minami’s girlfriend”
“We should tell her”
Jurina and Rena walked where the three were sitting.
“Hey..Atsuko, we have something to tell you”
“What is it?”
“The other day we saw Minami flirting with Sayaka”
“What”
“…and also Maria-san”
“……”
“…I’m going to kill those b-“
“No…you know she is like that” Tomomi said
“On what side are you in”
“On neither”
“Calm down Atsuko” Miichan was trying to calm down Atsuko
“I won’t …..Let me find her” Atsuko got out of the classroom. The rest of the people follow.
When she got to Minami’s classroom, she saw Minami and Umi talking…
“Look, I’m going to talk to her next month, but I don’t guaranty you anything” Umi-chan said
“Ok, but please tell her is not my fault that she is in love with me”
“I will….I hope you find happiness with your butterfly”
“That’s impossible…I’m with the black wid-“
Minami was interrupted when Atsuko slap her.
“What was that for” Minami almost shouted
“Because you are cheating on me”
“No I am not”
“Yes you are”
“How”
“You are flirting with other girls”
“….that’s not cheating”
“Yes it is”
“No it-“another slap Atsuko interrupted Minami. Everyone didn’t dare talk. Until…
“Stop hitting her” Umi said angrily
“Who the hell are you”
“I’m Umi Takahashi and I’m her cousin” Umi look Atsuko. Like those dramatic stares
“So”
‘So, do you know who I am?”
“No’
“I’m the president of the school council and I’m your sempai”
“Are you going to do something?”
“Yeah” Atsuko look mad and was about to slap Umi, but Umi stopped Atsuko by grabbing her hand
“That doesn’t work on me “Umi unhold her hand and bowed to Minami
“I’m sorry….I will leave now, and don’t worry about what we talk early…I’ll talk to her” with that Umi left
After that accident, everyone heard that I slap Minami. Welcome to my nightmare. The dreams of life turn into a tornado. I just want to be with her forever, but slowly I lose myself into my in worries. I will never eat.
i hope you enjoy it.....i'll see you next two saturday.
....until the day comes.......
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I really feel for Minami. This is the first time I've disliked Minami and Atsuko together.....
Update soon!! :thumbup :thumbup :thumbup
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Wow, I really like this. It def has a dark twist to it which is something new :) It's really sad though, poor minami, she def doesn't want atsuko to hurt herself but she's unhappy :( & I also do feel bad for Atsuko though, she is def in the wrong but she does love Minami, she's just handeling everything so wrong though! Great fic :) Can't wait for your next update :D
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i'm alive
when i rereading my fic i realize that it wasn't dark enough so i will make it like that.
at first i though i would be a 7 chapter fic, but now i think is going to be longer......how much i hate it...i'm a person of few words.
enjoy
p.s will not be updated until next 2 weeks.
Chapter 4
A cold sunny day, the tree without leaves, only the scenery of fall. In a tree you can see two people sitting under it. The cold breeze of fall.
“Your black widow let you come?”
“She had to go with her parents for the weekend”
“Where?”
“osaka”
“Oh….so what is it that you wanted to ask?”
“Well…have you talked to her?”
“Yuko?”
“Yeah, her”
“She said it was okay, it’s not your fault she is in love with you”
“That’s good”
“So, how is life?”
“Not so well”
Ring…ring…ring…
“Can you wait a little I have to answer this?”
“Okay”
“Moshi….sorry I was talking to my cousin….Umi…she is not a….I didn’t yell....I’m sorry…..you’re coming back tomorrow….ok…see you tomorrow…..bye”
“Whip” Umi said in a whispered
“What”
“Nothing”
“So, you heard any news from your butterfly”
“My Haruna….i haven’t seen her”
“Why”
“Atsuko doesn’t let me go anywhere”
“That’s cruel”
Umi turn to see a couple nearby and…
“You could be happy” Minami turn to the way her cousin was staring at and then look back at Umi.
“How”
“When it rains” Umi said in a whispered
“What”
“Nothing”
“Do you want to come with me to South Korea and USA?” Umi ask
“You know I can’t “
“Yes you can…let me ask my aunt”
“My will let me but Atsuko won’t”
“She doesn’t control your life”
“I know she doesn’t but remember what I told you, she will kill herself”
“Yes I remember, but that doesn’t mean she can control you”
“You don’t understand that I care for her as a friend”
“If you care for her as a friend why don’t you just stay friends”
“She will kill herself…..she is not thinking right”
“Well, talk to her”
“Ok”
Umi stood up and look at same couple that she saw early. “Hey is that Mariko and Haruna?”
“What” Minami turn where Umi was looking.
“Don’t worry Mariko is Miichan’s girlfriend” Umi wrap her arm around her cousin’s shoulder.
“Let’s go to your house, and let me ask my aunt if she will allow you to come with me”
-somewhere in the park-
“I want to ask you something” Mariko looks at the tree where two people were sitting under it. Then Mariko realizes that Haruna wasn’t answering.
“Haruna” Mariko waves her hand in front of Haruna. Still no answer.
“Haruna” Mariko almost yells at her.
“What”
“Airhead….I want to ask you something” Mariko said.
“What is it?”
“Do you want to be with Minami?”
“No”
Mariko look a little shock.
“I thought you love her” Mariko look at Haruna
“I do, but…..it’s just that….you wouldn’t understand it” Haruna said in frustration.
“Tell me”
“Okay, the day we broke up she was with Atsuko. She told me “I was only playing with you”, and some days later I had to stay after school; I heard something that
make me think she is with her because Atsuko will commit suicide”
Mariko just looks at Haruna like if she already knew what she meant because in reality she did knew.
“I know” both if the stop walking. Haruna look shock.
“I know why she broke up with you and what u said is true” Haruna’s eye wide.
“What”
“A day before she broke up with you, she came to me for advise and I reminded her the tale of her ancestors” Haruna felt betray
“The tale…she told me that tale but that was a really long time, so I don’t remember well” Haruna try to think.
“You will remember one day now let’s go it’s almost twilight” Mariko told Haruna while she look at the two people who were sitting under a tree leave.
“See this is why I live alone…..never worrying about time”
Haruna lives alone ever since her parents die when she was 15 now she is 17. Her grandmother is the only one that cares enough to give her money for school and food.
-Somewhere in osaka-
“Mrs.kojima, have you visited your granddaughter lately?”
“Who is this?”
“I’m Madea Atsuko and Haruna’s friend”
“Yeah and…why are you calling me, is she alright”
“Oh she is more that fine”
“What do you mean by that?”
“You should look at the entrance of your door”
“Why”
“You will find something about Haruna”
“Okay”
Mrs.kojima walk to the entrance of the house; telephone in hand, she saw an envelope.
“I see it.”
“I want you to open it; there you will see photos of her doing something”
Mrs. Kojima did so, see saw a photo of Haruna kissing Minami. Mrs. Kojima couldn’t believe what she saw; she never thought that her granddaughter will do such
things. Mrs. Kojima picked up the phone again…
“What is this?”
“That is what your daughter is really doing; she is going out with a girl that is no good to her.”
“How do you know all this?”
“Because the girl who Haruna is kissing is my friend”
“WHAT... I can’t believe my granddaughter would do something like this, why are you telling me this?”
“Because I don’t want her near my friend.”
“I just can’t believe it… I just can’t”
“You better believe it”
- Minami’s House-
“HI aunt, how are you?”
“Fine, thank you, Umi”
In a big Mansion the Takahashi Family live. Well only Minami’s parents and her, Now Umi lived in another mansion with her parents. They were both the richest families in Japan. Minami’s dad was the president of the Takahashi Company while Umi’s dad was the vice president. One day Minami and Umi will be in charge of the company.
“So how is your father?” Minami’s mom asked.
“Well… he went to a business trip to South Korea.” Umi sat in the couch.
“That’s great”
“And talking about trips… Aunt Ray will you let Minami come with me to South Korea and the US” Umi asked as she look at her aunt.
“And what about school… you almost have your finals.”
“School… Aunt, I and Minami are way smarter than those kids besides I will ask for the work.”
“That’s right mom, me and Umi are smarter than those kids… don’t you remember we only wanted to be in a public school to experience what it feels to be in one”
Minami said.
“So can we?” Umi asked.
“Okay you can go, but be careful.
Now both cousins were jumping like little kids, “So immature” Minami’s mom thought.
“Well.. When are going?” Minami asked.
“In December, and don’t worry we’ll be back before Christmas.” Umi told Minami.
“I have to go now. Bye cousin, Bye Aunt” and with that Umi left Minami’s house. She looked at the clock and saw it was 11:00 pm. Minami knew Atsuko was coming
back tomorrow and it was going to be a pretty long day.
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Thanks for the update :) Glad Haruna knows for sure now why Minami is with Atsuko :D She'll be having trouble now though with her fam :( & Atsuko's love for Minami is pretty toxic, hope Acchan changes and can see what shes doing is wrong.
Thanks again for the update, I look forward to your next chapter :D
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hello...i'm just dropping off my fic...
its been a really long time sience i update this....and well.....i was lazy and i started school......
well for my shot.....don't worry i will update them....
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The tale of a spider and a butterfly
-Akihabara school-
“Class as you can see we don’t have any books, so we have to share them with the next class” the teacher said
“Haruna is in the next classroom right?” Umi lean forward and whispered to Minami. Minami nodded.
“Grab your things and let’s go to the next class”
As the class walked to the next class, Minami and Umi were talking.
“Are you okay” Umi ask
“Yes why”
“Haruna is in the next class”
“So…it’s not like I am nervous….am I nervous?...god I’m nervous” Minami almost had a panic attack in the middle of the hall way.
“Calm down everybody is staring at you”
“Sorry”
The other classroom teacher was telling people wear to sit. Finally it became Minami’s turn.
“You will sit with Haruna over there” the teacher was pointing where Haruna was sitting at. As in slow motion Haruna look at the direction where Minami was. She was
shock.
“Just go and sit down” her teacher point out.
Haruna just stood there froze. Minami made its way to Haruna. She didn’t even dare to make eye contact. Thankfully, her cousin was told to sit with a girl behind her.
This was really awkward, the atmosphere wasn’t a good one. Minami turn around to her cousin who was talking to the student she was sitting beside. Nothing to do now. In this world of wonders, two spirits walk the same path, yet they don’t know.
“Ok people turn to page 48 in your text books”
Without both realizing that they were reaching for the book, both their hands made contact. Both froze and slowly turn their heads to look at each other.
“Haruna” Minami whispered. Minami look at their hands and slowly retracted her hand.
“Could you open the text book”
Haruna didn’t say anything but did open the text book. The class went on without them talking until all the students finish.
“You have 20 minutes until school day is over, so talk” the teacher announced.
Minami not wanting to talk to Haruna, she turned around but to her surprise Umi was talking to her partner.
“So, you think we will have a good grade on this”
“Yeah”
“By the way my name is Umi”
“My name is Jyou”
‘Thanks so much for having a cousin in class’ Minami thought irritated. She turned around only to feel awkward. Both Haruna and Minami look into different directions without making eye contact. Then minami felt someone tap her shoulder. “Talk to her already” Umi whispered. “About what” Minami whispered. “Anything”. “Okay”.
Minami turn around to talk to or try to talk to Haruna.
“So….how is your classes” Minami studded a little. No answer came from Haruna. She just kept looking at the window. ‘Why is she talking to me’ Haruna thought.
“How is…life” silence, awkwardness and worried at the same place. Haruna still didn’t answer, but—
“Why did you break up with me” Haruna said flatly while looking at the window. Minami was shock at hearing this. Minami remember she told her she was playing with
her, but never gave a reason why. Minami didn’t answer and started to look at the clock. It was 3:45, five minutes until it’s time to go home. Those 5 min were the longest of her life.
Ring…
Minami rapidly stood up, went where Umi was; grab her hand and drag her from the classroom.
“Call me Jyou” Umi was dragged to the hall way then stopped.
“Why did you drag me for?” Umi sounded a little upset.
“I couldn’t handle been with the person I hurt” Minami started to walk to the exist of the school. “Wait” Umi yell.
Umi ran towards Minami but was stop when she saw Atsuko walking towards her cousin. “Minami I was looking for you” Atsuko approach Minami
“What’s wrong?” Atsuko asked worried
“Nothing lets go” before they could walk out Umi appeared.
“Wait” Umi said
“What” Minami sounded upset
“My dad is going to come today…..talk” Umi vowed to Atsuko. “Bye, Minami….Atsuko” with that Umi went to her car.
“Can we go to the park?” Minami asked Atsuko
-some other place but in school-
“Grandma?” Haruna look at person who was standing in the hallway.
“Haruna, my child” Mrs. Kojima walked where Haruna was. She gave Haruna a hug and look at her.
“We need to talk, honey” Mrs.kojima took Haruna’s hand and drag her from school.
In the process she saw Minami and Atsuko holding hands. That made Haruna sad and angry.
-At the park-
Minami remember what her cousin said to her yesterday.
“Atsuko how was your day?”
“It was wonderful, and yours?” Minami at this point froze a little. She didn’t wanted Atsuko to know she was with Haruna
“It was okay”
“So, what are we doing today?”
“I don’t know, we have to tal-“Minami was interrupted when her cell phone rang.
“Hello…at the park….why…my uncle….oh about that….okay….see you later”
“Who was that” Atsuko said with a jealous tone.
“My cousin, she told me my uncle wants to see me” Minami took at her watch.
“Well…I’ll drop you at your house”
-At Umi’s house-
“Yes dad, I already told Aunt Ray and uncle Kai” Umi was sitting near Minami while her dad was in front
“Are you both sure you want to go?”
“Yes, we just want to go somewhere before we spent our full time to collage” Umi look serious.
“Yes uncle we want to explore” Minami said.
“Okay girls you can go” both cousins were jumping like little kids.
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Umichan..
I am happy because you update!!! :D
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hi......i know it took me so long to update this fic....i have school and other things
i update tis because tomorrow is my brirthday and i was planning to update it tomorrow but my family is taking me some where....so yeah.....
i think this the climax of the story i really don't know because i was planning on doing 7 chapsters but someone told me to make it longer....thank you friend....
well this chapter is dedicated to yuksun.....we have talk and as i said i will update today..
The tale of a spider and a butterfly chapter 6
Two days pass. Minami’s class still had to go to the next class. Everyone sat beside the person they were sitting on Monday. The awkwardness of the atmosphere flows. The same two people didn’t spoke neither they made eye contact. If leaving a loved one meant loneliness and despair; She would have chosen…..
“I’m leaving in 2 days for a month” Minami whispered as she look at Haruna. Silence. Haruna was only glaring at the window. ‘What’ Haruna wanted to yell but she resisted.
“Don’t worry about me” Minami said.
“I don’t” Haruna said coldly
Ring…ring…ring
Minami stood still while Haruna got up. Minami saw as Haruna walk out the door.
“You okay” Umi lean forward and ask
“Yes”
“You told her?”
“Yes”
“Okay now you have to talk to Atsuko and if she threatens you, just ignore her.
-At the entrance of the school-
Haruna saw her grandma.
“Hello grandma” haruna said.
“Hello dear….did you saw her today”
“What are talking about” Haruna look confused
“You know what I’m talking about” Mrs. Kojimma look at Haruna
“Oh about that, you know it impossible I have her in a class” Haruan remember what her and her grandmother talk yesterday. It wasn’t very pleasant talk but it made
sense.
-Flashback-
-At Haruna’s house-
“Grandma it is a surprise having you here” Haruna smile
“Yes darling it must be a surprise” Mrs.Kojima said in a sarcastic tone
Msr.Kojima took a folder and threw at Haruna. Haruna was shock that her grandmother threw something at her.
“Will you explain to me what is that” Mrs.kojima said in an angry tone as she sat down in the couch that was in the living room.
Haruna open the folder and couldn’t believe what she was seeing. It was 3 pictures of her and Minami. The first photo was of Minami entering Haruna’s house, the second one was of Minami and Haruna kissing and the view was like if it was taken from outside the widow, and last one was of Haruna guiding Minami to her the stairs that her room.
“I…..I…” that’s all Haruna could say at this moment of shock, worrying, and surprise.
“Who is that girl” Mrs.Kojima yell at Haruna
“She is my……friend” haruna was scared that her granma discovere her secret
“I’m not stupid Haruna” Mrs. Kojima look at Haruna
“She is my…..ex-girlfriend” at this point of hearing “girlfriend”, Mrs.Kojima slapped Haruna. The slap was really hard that it left a mark on Haruna’s s cheeks.
(At this point I will not put what they do because I don’t know how to make reactions.)
“So she was your girlfriend?”
“Yes”
Another slap sound was heard.
“Haruna who do you think you are?....what would your parents say about this…..”
“I a human like every else….i deserve to be in love”
“Love…that’s not love….that’s disgusting”
“That’s not disgusting…..I was in love with that girl”
Another slap was heard.
“You are not going to see her anymore”
“I only see her at school, we go the same school……and I told you she is my ex-girlfriend”
“Okay but if I heard that you an her are back together, I will make you live with me”
With that Mrs.Kojima left Haruna’s house; leaving a crying Haruna in there. Haruna was crying while looking at the floor. Then she remembered the photos that her
grandma threw at her. With seeing those photos made her cry even more.
-End of flashback-
“Lets go honey” her grandma grab her hand
“Haruna” someone yell
Haruna turn to see who it was; it was Umi.
“You forgot your notebook” Umi smile at Haruna
Haruna look confuse. “Thank you”
“No thank you for letting me barrow your note book and you have something in your note wrong you might want to correct it, if not the teacher might yell at you” and
with that Umi bowed a little.
“See you tomorrow”
“Yeah see you tomorrow”
Haruna look at the notebook and look at her grandma.
“Should we go” Mr. Kojima ask
“Yeah”
-At the school garden-
“I did it” Umi whispered to herself
As Umi was walking she saw Jyou sitting on a bench. She walked around her.
“Hi Jyou-san” Umi smile
“Umi-senpai….what are you doing here?” Jyou responded a little surprise
“Nothing, I was just walking here then I saw you and I asked myself if I should talk to you” Umi look at Jyou.
“Oh okay”
“And you….how are you doing” Umi ask
“I’m doing okay…..”
“Yeah and the band, how is it going”
“Its goin-…..wait how do you know?” Jyou look at Umi with surprise. Jyou was in a band she told no one in her school. How can Umi know this?
“I have my ways….you forgot I’m the president council and I your senpai” Umi said as she look somewhere.
“Oh…..please don’t tell anyone if my parents know this they will kill me” Jyou said in a pleading way
“It okay, your secret it safe with me…..and did you finally found a supporter?” Umi ask
“No we need someone to be our supporter with money….” Jyou look sad
“Really….well you got your supporter”
“Really?”
“Yeah it’s me” Umi smile
“You don’t have to….”
“I want to help you overcome your dreams”
“Really?”
“Yeah I will give you 20,000 yens then you will return it” Umi smile
“Thank you very much” Jyou tackle Umi with a hug.
“You are hurting me” Umi try to push Jyou.
“I’m sorry and I don’t think I will give you your money as soon as possible”
“Don’t worry there are other ways to pay me” Umi said in a seductive way as she lean forward. Jyou was kind of surprise at her behavior.
“You don’t mean” Jyou look…..worried.
“What are you thinking” Umi ask
“Nothing” Umi was getting closer to Jyou, but then when Umi saw that jyou was closing her eyes she looked to her right. There she saw her cousin with Atsuko leaving
the school.
“I know how you will pay me but will have to go somewhere more private.
-At the park-
“Atsuko I want to talk to you about something” Minami and Atsuko where in a park. Minami decide to go there after school.
“What is it?”
“In two days I’m leaving the country for the month until Christmas”
“And”
“I want to talk about us”
“Us?”
“Atsuko…..lets break up”
“WHAT”
“I know you have notice all the time, and I know you know that I don’t love you”
“Yes you are, is just that you haven’t realize it yet”
“Stop lying to yourself….I don’t love you” Minami was slapped.
“I don’t want to hear you” Atsuko said in tears.
“I’m sorry, but you have to learn the truth”
“Shut up or I’ll kill myself”
“I don’t love you…I’m in love with Haruna, I’m only with you because you threaten to kill you self if I don’t love you back”
“That’s not true, it because you lov-“
“I don’t love”
“Yes you do”
“Listen, I care if you kill yourself, but I will not stay with you because of that”
“You love me, you love me don’t lie to yourself”
“I’m not happy with you”
“You don’t know who you are dealing with”
“I do know, I’m dealing with a girl that doesn’t know the difference between love and obssion”
“You love….shut up”
“I try to fall in love with you but everything reminded me of Haruna”
A slap was heard.
“You don’t know shi-“
“I do and that’s why I leaving you and this place to think of what I have done”
“Wait” Atsuko try to grab Minami’s wrist but fail.
“I’m sorry, bye”
-At Haruna’s room-
Haruna look at the notebook that Umi had given her and still she was confused by that, she decided to open the notebook. There she found a piece of paper saying” come to the school’s garden at 6:00, I’ll be waiting”. Thankfully her grandmother wasn’t around to see her go out the house. She decided out of curiosity that she would go. The cloud that once was born by the vapor of the earth will now drop as tears.
-Back at the park-
Atsuko ran as she cried, the only thought was of killing herself. There is no point in turning a white rose into a red one. Her heart was in pain but her mind was clear. Without looking she run into something or may I say someone.
“Ouch” Atsuko and the other person were in the floor.
“I’m sorry” Atsuko stop got up and started to walk.
“Atsuko” Atsuko stop at the familiar voice.
“Atsuko its me, Yuko…are you alright” Yuko sounded a little worried.
“Leave me alone” Atsuko started to run. She didn’t realize that Yuko was following her until yuko ask…
“Where are you going?”
“Just…go…away”
“Are you crying?”
“Leave me alone” Atsuko fasten her speed. Only one thing was coming to her mind…there is no point of living if the person you love doesn’t love you back.
-Somewhere else-
Minami was walking in the side walk; remembering what she has just done. Did she do the right thing? Is Atsuko going to kill herself? Why was her life like this; she had money, a company that one day she will run, a family that t understood her. So why? She will never understand it. In a forest of the warmth only the cold ones survive. As she remembers what her grandma used to say to her, she didn’t notice where she was going. A spider fell in love the butterfly. And the butterfly was caught in the trap of love….. Then out of nowhere it stated to rain.
Minami stop walking and look up to the sky. The spider didn’t care if they knew about their love, that day it rain. “Haruna” Minami whispered.
“Minami” Minami stood there not wanting to look at the familiar voice. Like if time stop, Minami slowly looked at Haruna.
“Haruna, what are you doing here” Minami sounded worry.
“I’m just walking to the school’s garden” Haruna look to the side.
“Oh….how are you” Minami look to the side.
“I’m fine” Haruna said. Silence surrounded the atmosphere. Few people pass by but then people magically disappeared.
“I miss you” Minami said.
“What”
“Nothing” Minami blushed and thank god it was raining.
“Ok…bye” Haruna said; she started to walk. Minami saw this and grab her wrist.
“We have to talk” Minami made that excuse to see her more. “We have nothing to talk about” Haruna said angrily, while trying to get away. “Let go” Haruna yell at Minami, obediently she did so.
“I didn’t meant to hurt you” Minami was looking at Haruna with teary eyes.
“That’s you problem you never meant anything” Haruna was trying to hold her tears back.
“You never meant any of those you told me” A tear fell slowly to the ground; it span.
“You never loved me, you never meant any of those words that you told me” Haruna was crying. Her mind was only transmitting the information that made her heart hurt. Forgetting about the day she had to stay after school and the day she talked to Mariko.
“I’m sorry for hurting you…I really did meant each and every word I said” Minami was crying. If people say that god is crying when it rains; the god must be really sad. Minami always thought that Haruna would be the person she will love forever, but she never thought there would be problems.
“Then why did were you playing with me” there was silence only you can hear the rain falling.
“That’s what I thought, you are just a coward, and you are the worst person. Is this your game; you made them fall in love with you then you play with them and throw them like trash. I hate you Minami…I hate you Min-“
Haruna was cut off by Minami’s lips. Minami cup Haruna’s cheeks. Haruan in response began to punch her in the chest but slowly her hits were been weak. The warmth that both hearts felt could even be explained. Haruna slowly gave in to the kiss. The scenery of two people kissing while raining, is a piece of art.
Then Haruna came to her senses. She pushed Minami and slapped her.
“Don’t kiss me ever again; I don’t want to see you anymore. I don’t love you” Haruna run away. Minami was weak, holding her cheek; she began to cry harder.
-Somewhere else-
“Don’t do it”
“Nobody is going to stop me from doing this, so go away”
The rain reaches faster in a rooftop; in a rooftop where two people are. One girl was near the edges of the roof and another was in the edge of the rooftop.
“Atsuko listen to me” Yuko said
“No leave me alone” Shout back
“Listen, I know you love mina-“
“Shut up, she just broke up with me” Atsuko began to cry
“Is this why, I thought you were smarter, stronger, and self-sufficient. Are you going to jump because of her, huh?” Yuko sounded angry. She doesn’t want to be right here looking at the person she….
“Atsuko don’t jump….I promise everything will be alright” Yuko took a step closer to Atsuko.
“Nothing is alright” Atsuko shouted. She turned around to see a raindrop fall until it hit the ground. There was silence, then….
“I can’t believe you are going to give up on live, you have more than this, more that Minami. I might not know how you feel, but I’m pretty sure of one thing” Yuko took two steps closer to her. Only 5 steps remain.
“What” Atsuko was still looking at the scenery.
“That there is a person that loves you more than their own live” Yuko started to cry. ”a person that will fight for you, that will protect you and that will take care of you
forever”
Atsuko stood there crying harder. She could not believe the words that Yuko was telling her. But somewhere in her mind, doesn’t want to hear her; she only wants the pain to go away.
“I don’t care if there is someone else who loves me. If Minami doesn’t love, I don’t want live” Yuko saw Atsuko taking a step of her death, so Yuko ran the short distance. Like if it was slow motion, she saw Atsuko falling but….
“Let me go”
“No…never”
“Let me go”
“No”
Yuko summon enough strength to pull Atsuko to the surface of the rooftop. “Why did you same, idiot”. Yuko’s strength was enough to pull Atsuko back, that both ended up in the concrete floor. Now Atsuko was on top of Yuko. It didn’t matter if it rain, Yuko just wanted to stay like this position because…
“Because I love you” Yuko look straight into Atsuko’s eyes. The rain stop.
“Don’t lie to me, you don’t love m-“Atsuko was interrupted when she felt someone’s lips. She slowly closed her eyes. The rays of sunshine hit both of their bodies that were lying in their paradise.
“Do you believe me now….i love you”
THIS IS THE LONGEST CHAPTER I HAVE EVER WRITE..........it feels wonderful
well i hope you guys like it and yay my birthday is tomorrow........awful
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AtsuYuu??
You know what?
Somehow I feel REALLY REALLY happy it's not KojiYuu.. ~.~
KojiYuu everywhere and it's really driving me crazy :| :|
Nice one! It's KojiTaka.. Though I'd prefer KojiMari way more :D :D
But.. As long as it's not KojiYuu, kinda glad and happy! :D :D
Happy update.. waiting~ <3
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:w00t: YEAHHH!!!! FINALY :cow:
FIRSTABLE THANK A LOT I AM FLATTERED THAT THIS ONE IS DEDICATED TO ME THANK U FRIEND LOVE U :inlove: :luvluv2: KEKEK
AND WOW HOW MANY SLAPS ARE IN THIS CHAPTER , POOR HARUNA 3 SLAPS :dizzy: IN A ROUND KEKE :P
BUT THEN WHY HARUNA :sweatdrop: WHY YOU REJECT THE POOR TAKAMINA, :pleeease: OMG LOVE IS SO HARD :on speedy:, AND WAIT I THOUGH TAKA WAS THE ONE WHO WROTE THE NOTE BUT,, WHO IS WAITING FOR HER THEN :mon dunno: OH I THINK I KNOW :roll:
AND WOW UMI IS SO HOT JAJAA SHE LIKES JYIU HA :P 8)
HAHA YOU REALLY SURPRISE ME WITH THE ATSUYUU THING WOWWW IS GETTING MORE AND MORE EXCITING :mon star:
I LOVE THIS CHAP AND AGAIN ICAN'T WAIT TO THE NECT ,,, NO PRESSION OKI I''LL WAIT YOU KNOW :mon thumb:
EY TE MANDO UN MEGAABRAZO , Y PUES IS CLARO QUE HABLO ESPAÑOL :D MUY BUEN CAPITULO , ESCRIBES SUPER BIEN ME ENCANTO NOS VEMOS :byebye:
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hi....i'm in class
i just want to let you know guys that the next chapter week
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hi everyone....i know i said i'll update in a week, but the was some complications with my life and school.....i'm verry sorry
i know this chapter is going to be short ,but i didn't had this chapter written or plan out....hope you guys like it and thank you
Chapter 7
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Chapter 7
The regret that is upon us has fallen into one. If you don’t make it see it you are the one who will regret it. The cold air that the person you love gave you will sting, so fight it back and get the person’s heart back.
“Are you ready?”
“Are you?”
“Of course”
“Ok”
“We will be going at 3 p.m.”
“Ok”
“Hey Minami, I’m going to visit somebody first”
“Who”
“It’s none of your business”
“I bet it’s the Jyou girl”
“No….I’m just going to go now”
The cousins were in Minami’s house getting ready for the trip they were going to take. After the “broke up” with Atsuko, Minami felt a little more free but also worried because she didn’t knew what had happen to her after she left her there.
And after talking to Haruna she felt terrible that she even though to cancel the trip. But Umi told her that this trip will make her forget something and live happy only for a couple of days. So, Minami just decided to take the trip.
-Somewhere in japan-
“What are you doing here” Haruna said irritated.
“I was just passing by, and I thought I could said hi” Umi respond to Haruna
“Oh…so you are not going to give me a note that says, “Meet me at the school’s garden at 6” Haruna sounded upset
“Actually….that was some sort of plan that I had……” Haruna look at Umi with furious eyes
“I didn’t inted for you and Minami to meet….actually I was going to talk to you about what does your classmate like”
“Classmate?”
“The girl that sits behind you”
“Jyou?”
“Yeah, but I waited a really long time” Haruna thought that the meeting that she had with Minami was planned by her, but apparently it wasn’t…..or was it.
“Well…yeah tell about her some other time and don’t make me wait”
“Ok”
“But that not the reason I came here”
“Then why did you came to see” Haruna again said irritated
“I just wanted to tell you that we are leaving in two hours” Umi smile but rapidly it fell
“Yeah and….”
“Aren’t you going to say bye to my cousin”
“Why should I; its not like you guys are leaving forever”
“You are right, but you love her” Umi said seriously
“I don’t love her anymore” Haruna was almost going to close the door but Umi put her foot to stop her.
“Listen, this trip is going to change her and if she knows that she has more options, she will leave you.” With that Umi left.
After that, Haruna decided to take a walk, so she called Yuko to accompany her.
-Minmami’s house-
“Everything set?” Minami ask her cousin
“Yeah” Umi nod
“Mom, we are leaving”
“Alright kids, have a safe trip, remember to do your work, and please take her of her Umi” Mom said
“Hey…..I’m older that her” Minami pointed to her cousin.
“But she is more taller that you” Mom pointed to Umi
“Okay, aunt….I’ll take her of her”
They grab her luggage and put in in the limousine that was waiting for them.
“please let that know that I’ll miss him”
“Okay sweetie, I’ll tell him” Minami’s mom wave of as she saw the limousine leaving.
-Inside the limousine-
“Hey lets have a good time while we aren’t her…..i don’t want to see my favorite cousin gloomy” Umi pinch Minami’s cheeks
“Like you have any other cousin…...stop pinching me” Minami try to move away but every time she moved away, Umi came closer.
“Okay”
After a few moments, they were passing the park and Minami was staring at it. Umi on the other hand was sleeping.
Minami saw to girls sitting a bench and then one of the girls turn to see the road. It was Haruana. “Haruna, I miss you so much”
-In the park-
“So, how is Atsuko?”
“She is doing better…I guess” yuko smile
“Have you ask her”
“What?” yuko look confious
“Have you ask her to be your girlfriend” Haruna knew what happen between Yuko and Atsuko because Yuko told her after Yuko got to her house.
She was happy for her friend, but….what about Minami, wasn’t Atsuko obsessed with her.
Anyways, she was happy that yuko finally got to say to Atsuko that she loves her because ever since they enter high school, Yuko fell in love with Atsuko.
“No….i don’t think she is over her” Yuko look to the side.
“Fight for her, don’t let love slip from your hands” Haruna said
“What about you?” Yuko look at Haruna
“I don’t know….maybe if she had told me sooner, she broke my heart by saying hurtful thing”
“I think its time to leave” Yuko suggest
Haruna look into the distance. It was almost twilight and yuko had to go to her house. Haruna didn’t care if she went home alone later because she lives alone.
Her parents died when she was 16 and was left with her grandma, but her grandmother told her she should live in her parent’s house.
“Haruna, stop looking stupid” Yuko look at Haruna. No answer.
“Haruna” Yuko yell
“What”
“I have to go, bye” Yuko walked away from the bench.
Haruna wave off her friend and stay looking at the sun set.
The love that both of these creatures had broken….or so they think, but there is light at the end of the tunnel.
Yet they are people who will put their love to the test. The future looks dark but there in the world that once they love, they will find love all over again.
....until the day come.......
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Thanks so much for the update :) Hope all is well with school and stuff, its understandable to take your time updating :D
I enjoyed reading this chapter & look forward to the next one :)
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Please continue this story as fast as you can :mon XD:
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aah, what will going on next ?? :tantrum:
are minami going to leave nyannyan forever ?
please noo, pleasee :frustrated: :pleeease:
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hello everyone..... i wrote this chapter fast.
well i hope you guys enjoy it. i was thinking of putting this tomorro but i finish early, and besides i want to finish this so i can do my next story.....
enjoy....
Chapter 8
-Flashback-
“Jyou….can you help me with something?” Umi asked. They were in the school’s garden. Umi had called Jyou, so she could help her with something that she had plan.
“What is it?” Jyou look at Umi with questioning eyes.
“While we are not here, can you check on Haruna”
“Why”
“Because I’m afraid Atsuko will do something to her” Umi looked worried
“Is that Minami’s ex-girlfriend?”
“Yeah……she is “obsess” with my cousin”
“Okay….is that all?”
“Yeah” Umi looked to the side a came back looking at Jyou. “Are you ready?”
“For what?”
“To leave this place, you did realize this is not the reason why I called”
“What’s the reason?”
“We are going on a date”
“But you leave tomorrow” Jyou whined.
-End of flashback-
-Somewhere in Korea-
“Well…I’m in Seoul right now, but I will tell you later how you do it….ok…bye Jyou”
“Who were you taking to?”
“With my friend…why”
“No reason”
“So, what was that package you sent?”
“What package”
“I saw you sending something”
-Flashback-
Minami was in a jewelry store in Seoul looking for a necklace. She looking and looking until….
‘I like that necklace’ Minami thought happily. Minami look at the beautiful necklace in the shape of a butterfly.
(“Korean”)”would you like to buy that necklace” ask an employee. Minami didn’t understand a word.
(“English”)”I don’t speak Korean”
“Would you like to see that necklace?”
“You speak English?”
“Yes, ma’am”
“Ok…yeah can I see that necklace?”
“How much does it cost?”
“14,000 won”
“Okay I’ll take it”
-Minami’s room-
Minami had a piece of white paper and a pen. She looked into the big window which brought in sunshine, then she look back at the paper.
Dear Haruna
I know that you will try to throw this letter away, but please just read it.
I still remember that day when I first saw you, and even though I had some girlfriend back then, you caught my heart. You were, well you are still are an airheaded that didn’t notice how many times I went to your class with the excuse to talk to my friend. From afar I saw you.
After a while I broke up with my girlfriends, at that time I only wanted to talk to you. You can say I fell in love with you at first sight.
Then one day, our friend that we have in common, Yuko, introduced us in the cafeteria. I was happy when I finally knew your name. Slowly we started to become friends, but I didn’t want to be just friends.
Sometimes I asked your friend to leave me alone with you, so I could talk to you more. And the more I talked to you, the more I fell for you, yet I knew I wasn’t supposed to because I was a player like Sae. I remember a night when I couldn’t think about you, that snowy night I realize I was in love with you; I fell in my own tramp. We got closer and closer, but I doubted that you would turn my feelings for you. This was the first time I felt doubt.
On March 21st (I’m stupid for remembering this), was the happiest day of my life, that day you told me you were in love with me.
I told you, ”I love you”, it made me happy to say it without worrying. We started to go out to places. It made me to be with you by your side.
Sometime later, I made you mine. It happened so slowly, yet so fast. The sensation of your body on mine was what kept me awake at night. To this day I remember every night we spend, but I remember our last the most. Sometimes I thought you thought that I was experience, but actually you were my first.
I know I told you that we should we our relationship because of my parents and school…..well actually school is not a problem but my parents are.
I’m the daughter of the president of the Takahashi Company and my cousin Umi is the daughter of the vice-president. We are the richest people in Japan, and because of it I didn’t wanted people to know you were my girlfriend. My father has enemies who will try to put our name to shame.
I’m sorry for not telling you this. Those three months we were together are the best days of my life. I still remember my birthday when I came to celebrate
it at your house. You made a cake and katsudon. Thank you for doing that.
Thank you for everything, Haruna. Now that we broke up, me and Atsuko, I can tell you why I was with her. Believe it or not, I cried a lot that day. I summon enough courage to tell you” I was only playing with you”. Actually I was lying to you. Have you heard this, friendship or love, I chose friendship. Two days before we broke up, Atsuko threaten me in the top of the roof. Saying that if I didn’t love her back she will commit suicide. It was hard to choose what because I didn’t wanted
to apart from you or knowing that someone committed suicide because of me. But then Mariko reminded me of the tale that once I told you about.
I thought this would have been my only option because it the end the spider ended up with the butterfly. I guess I was wrong on choosing that because
you don’t love me anymore. Every day I was with Atsuko, I thought about you and only you. Now that I and she broke up, I feel free, but at the same time I feel sad. I’m sorry for not telling; it was responsibility.
Haruna, I love you so much. I love you more that my own life. I will always love you. I’ll turn around from the sunshine, and be in the darkness which my forlorn soul belongs in. I hope one day you will forgive me. I hope you find happiness with someone who would not hurt you that will care for you, and love you.
I love you…..until the day comes…..
Minami cried while writing the last part of the letter. She folded the letter in half and kissed. “I will always love you no matter what. My Haruna”,
-End of flashback-
“I’m not going to tell you!” Minami look serious in the eyes of Umi
“But I’m your cousin” Umi made puppy eyes
“It’s nothing…hurry up I’m hungry” Minami look at the kitchen.
“Let’s go to a restaurant, my dad told me they serve really good food”
“Ok”
-2 days after…….somewhere in Japan-
Haruna was in her living room after her grandma came to check on her. She thought she was old enough to take care of herself, and besides her grandmother didn’t care about her that much. Then she remembered what Umi had told her.
“Will she really find someone?”
Then she heard someone knocking. She thought it might be Yuko, but she didn’t invite her today, so might it be. She walked to the front door and saw it was a mailman.
“Can I help you?”
“Yes, are you Kojima Haruna?” said the mailman
“Yes, that’s me”
“Ok, can you sign here” the mailman pointed out to the paper work and Haruna did so. The mailman gave Haruna a box.
“I wonder what this is”
She vowed to the mailman and walked away from the door.
Then she got the living room and sat down in the couch. For a second she thought that it was a bomb or something that kills you because lately she had been receiving threatens from someone. Then she carefully opened the box. It was a butterfly necklace. Haruna just look at it and smile. She removed the necklace and to her surprise there was also a letter. The sunshine that came from the window a beautiful shadow. She looked curiously at the letter and saw, “to Haruna”.
She started reading the letter. As she read the letter, tears began to flow. Haruna couldn’t believe what she was reading. A sudden realization came to mind.
All those times when she talked to Minami came. She remembered when for no apparent reason her friends wouldn’t show to lunch for almost 2 weeks. She remembered that feeling that made her feel so happy, yet so sad. She continued to read the letter and more and more tears were falling.
The butterfly that gave herself to the love of the spider was destroyed by what the spider had said. It made the rain appear, yet it was sunny. Let them say good-bye to their mistakes. The butterfly that flies away from what was her home, but in reality she doesn’t want to leave. Let their love be long-lasting, even after the story has end.
i cried while i was writting this, i'm softand very emotional.
i hope you guys like it.......3 chapters and thats it!
......until the day comes...
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For a second she thought that it was a bomb or something that kills you because lately she had been receiving threatens from someone.
nyannyaan, you ruin my teary momentt :mon annoy:
takamina is a sweet girlfriend. i hope they can be a couple again. :mon cute:
thanks for your update :twothumbs
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If Nyan-Nyan does't want Takamina.. I do!! Let's fight for her!! :hiakhiakhiak:
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very interesting fic there... Thank you
A tale of spider and butterfly... is there really such a tale...?
Well hope Minami and Haruna can be together...
What a bad grandmother Haruna has. Don't listen to her, Haruna... take Minami back.
Can't wait to see the next update
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Excellent the storyline, i'm looking forward to what will be done haruna against minami.
Please update
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umi-chan when will you post next chapter? :(
I'm waiting waiting waiting FOR YOU :bow:
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hello people i'm very tier and wel i'm rudhing to put thid chapter up snd yeah si'm not going to be able to ups until a month or so and also my shot sae's keys i'm very sorry. i have a new semester and well i haven't seen the girl that i really like, so yeah. and also my exam i din't get my fial exam's result because they said it wiuld tke a long time for all of us. enjoy leave a comment if you can........and well i should go back to my depress state and learn to smile a little more.
enjoy
Chapter 9
It was a regular morning for everyone, the couples enjoying their day. The Saeyuki, MariMii, and Tomotomo, and the WMatsui were enjoying their dates at different places, but for two people it would star something called, “Hell”.
Haruna got up to make her breakfast and receive her grandmother, who insisted on coming over since Haruna had told her that she had been receiving threaten.
When she got to her door she saw an enveloped on the floor.
“What is this” Haruna said to herself. She picked up and opened it.
[I will kill you if you don’t stay away from you know who]
‘Another threat mail’ Haruna said as she walked to the garbage can.
“Oh well, I have to make some breakfast and get the house ready for my grandma” Haruna said to herself.
She wasn’t really excited that her grandmother was coming because of what happen last time. She hope this time she would yell at her or slapped her. As the day went by she remembered Minami and how much fun they used to have in Haruna’s living room, the kitchen, and her room. If you know what I mean. She stopped what she was doing and she stares at the door. The memory of that day, still hunts her. That day she and Minami broke up. ”stupid Minami, I would have helped you understood”
The time pass and she was done. After that she decided to go for a walk.
As she was walking, she was holding the necklace that Minami sent to Haruna, which Minami thought that Haruna had probably thrown away. She heard people making a lot of noise. Out of curiosity she got closer.
“Hello, we are xxxxx and we hope you like our song called “kiss in the dark” with that the song started. Haruna walked closer to the people, the vocalist seem familiar
to Haruna, but at this moment she could figure out who she was. The singer notice that Haruna was there. Every now and then the singer looked at Haruna who stood
there.
“Thank you for listening to us” the singer and the other band members vowed. After that Haruna look at the singer go off stage. The singer that staring at Haruna put on her jacket as soon as possible, and walked to the audience.
“Jyou remember that we a reversal tomorrow” a person shouted to Jyou.
“Yeah okay”
The breeze that bring the lies will crease another person’s cheeks.
Haruna seen that the band wasn’t going to perform again, decided to walk away. Jyou saw her and decided to catch up to her.
“Haruna” Jyou shouted. Haruna heard her name and look to both sides, then to her back. She saw a person walking to her; it was the singer.
“How do you know my name?” Haruna stop walking and asked the singer.
“I’m your classmate…Jyou” Jyou answer.
“Jyou…that girl who sits behind me”
“Yeah that one”
“I didn’t knew you were in a band” Haruna look at the stage and then at Jyou.
“I’m, but can you please don’t tell anyone”
“Yeah I won’t say it to anybody”
“Thank you”
The two were walking in silence, but then Jyou look at the necklace that Haruna was wearing.
“I like your necklace” Jyou commented.
“Thank you” Haruna smile.
“Where did you get it” Jyou asked.
Haruna look at her and stop, Jyou also stopped. She smiled.
“I got it from the person that I love the most” Haruna smile. A warm feeling began to form in her heart, she love Minami and that she knew that Minami loves her.
Haruna started to walk again.
“Hey do you want to go eat somewhere else” Jyou ask while they were walking. Haruna was thinking about the question that Jyou had asked her.
“Yes”
Haruna and Jyou walk in to some ramen shop around the corner.
“Can I have the same-old-same-old for two” Jyou told the waiter.
“Yes, Jyou” the waiter said.
“You come here often” Haruna ask because the waiter answered her by her name.
“Yes I do” Jyou chuckled
Ring….ring…ring…
“I’ll be right back Haruna” Jyou got up and walk outside the restaurant.
“Hello honey”
“Hi sweetheart” somebody laugh at the other end.
“What do you want?”
“Have you done what I told you to do”
“Well, she went to one of my concerts and well I brought her to eat with”
“Wow, you are that far”
“Hey it only happen”
“Ok well….take care of her and keep an eye on her, I can feel something is going to happen. Bye sweetheart” the person at the other line laughed.
“Bye” Jyou close her phone and came back to the restaurant only to find Haruna already eating.
“I’m sorry, I was hungry” Haruna apologize.
“its okay”
Haruna stopped eating and look at Jyou sitting down.
“It’s just that my grandmother is coming to my house, by the way I live alone, she is coming an I had to clean”
“Why is she coming” Jyou said as she was getting ready to eat.
“She is coming because someone is keeping me sending threaten mail” Haruna said seriously.
“Please don’t tell anyone”
“I promise”
‘Now I have something to tell Umi, so she can tell her cousin’ Jyou thought. If you remember in the flashback, Umi told Jyou to take care of Haruna because she thought that something will happen, especially when Minami told her that Atsuko will do anything to take her back.
-Atsuko’s room-
“Yes Yuko I’m okay”
“Really?”
“Yes”
“Really?”
“Yuko, I will kick you out of my life if you don’t leave my room”
“Okay”
Atsuko pushed Yuko to the door.
“I love you”
“Okay”
Even though Yuko had told Atsuko a thousand times that she loves her, Atsuko didn’t take it seriously.
Atsuko walked to her bed and sat on it.
“Minami, I miss you so much” Atsuko started to cry. Those moments that she spend with Minami began to flow. She couldn’t forget Minami. The black widow could not be satisfied without eating.
-Somewhere in Seoul-
“Do you miss Haruna?”
“Of course”
“What did you sent?”
“I’m not going to tell you”
“Why, please tell me” Umi plead.
“Okay…I sent her a butterfly necklace”
“Really…how original” Umi sounded disappointed
“What’s with that attitude” Minami said upset
“Nothing. I thought you bought her a ring or something more expansive”
“Just because our parents are the richest in Japan, that doesn’t mean that we have to spend money like water”
“Hey, I’m just saying because 1 million yens is a week’s worth”
The cousins where in the streets of Seoul talking about the gift, and what are they going to do next.
“no” Minami look at her cousin like’ what is wrong with you’
“It would have been a good gift” Umi look at Minami
“It would, but Haruna said that she doesn’t love me”
“and you believe her….you are so naïve”
“Yes”
“You surely have fallen in love once” Umi sounded a little surprise, but move her head side-to-side.
“Yeah, so”
“Well most of the time when a girl says that, it means they haven’t forget you”
“Since when you know so much about love”
“since I had my first boyfriend, but you know I prefer girls” Umi look at a girl that was passing my and wink at her. The girl smile.
“Haruna is just another butterfly like the other that you don’t bring to your house”
“Haruna isn’t just another butterfly, she is the butterfly”
“Ok spider”
“I don’t like it when you call me like that” Minami mumble.
“Okay I won’t call you like that”
“Hey I’m tired, can we go now besides we have to catch the plane tomorrow”
“Ok”
ok can you guess who is going to die in the next chapter.....i mean badly inhured???
.......until the day comes.........
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Thanks for the update!
Aw, so Haruna still loves Minami :D Hopefully everything will work out b/w them!
& Poor Yuko isn't being taken seriously by Atsuko, & Atsuko still likes Minami :S Seems complicated on that end.
Badly injured? I wonder who :O My guesses are either Haruna, Atsuko, or Minami :S
& As for your private life, I wish you the best with that & with school! Hopefully your exams went well!!!
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Ah... Lucky Haruna is being protected...
EH.... someone going to be badly injured in the next chapter....
I think it's going to be Minami... from plane crash?
Atsuko is so sad... loving someone that doesn't love her....
Hope she can get over herself... before becoming black widow.... and accept Yuko
Thank you for the update... can't wait to see the next
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someone will be badly injured in the next? :O please don't :(
but maybe this person will be Minami :roll: then after that Haruna will comes to Minami take care for Minami and we will have a happy ending? :twisted:
thanks for your update and waiting for you :welcome
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XD thank for update :shocked there be badly injured? I think minami
Can't wait for the next
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I'm the new reader. interesting story. and i cannot wait for your new update.
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hello.....its been a long time since i have update my story. right now i want to finish this story so i could go with the next one.
school is guilty for me not updating and also the girl that i like is guilty and a guy who i think he likes me too.
i'm very stress, i'm tiered, ihaven't sleep well, but i'm still here. :) :wub:
i past all my exams and i'm very happy and my new classes some i like some i don't even want to go there.
Anyways here is where all the dark stuff will come into plase after this chapter there is other two and an alternative ending to the story that my sister and i wrote. well she wrote a part and i wrote another.
Enjoy!!!!!
Chapte 10
Minami’s POV
Where am I? Why do I feel dizzy?
I saw my surroundings and I see that I’m in the street’s hallway. It’s very dark out here and there is only one lamp that shines over me.
“Minami…”
I hear someone scream but I see no one, then i heard the same voice calling me; it was my cousin.
“Minami…”
This time it sounded very differently. I knew this voice, my heart yearn for that voice. I hear her calling me again; it was Haruna.
“Minami…”
I hear someone yell my name again. This time I automatically recognize the person, it was my friend, Atsuko. I turn around to see Atsuko facing me. She looks desperate, stress, and I tell her what’s wrong. No respond.
“Minami….” Now my cousin sounded hurt like if she was in agony.
“Minami…..” Haruna sounded hurt like if she was sick or badly injured.
“Minami, come with me so we can be happy once more” I saw at Atsuko reaching out for me but I couldn’t move.
“What about them?” I ask Atsuko, she frowns, then she turns around to some other direction of the street and there I saw Umi on the floor and she was cover with
blood. I was shock by the scenery of her in all that blood.
“We’ll just forget about them!” Atsuko shrugs. I could not understand I thought my friend was one of the kindest people in the world, but this…leaving my beloved cousin to die in the streets; that was just scary.
“What I can’t, she is my cousin” I look back at Umi and she was reaching for me. But her cousin was speeding more blood.
“Save me….don’t….do…what…she…tells…you……go back……with your….butterfly…”Umi said as she was grasping her last breath. Then she collapsed. I was in the verge of crying, but then I felt someone stab me, I turned around and it Yuko. Yuko, the person that I considered my other best friend; now she betrayed me.
“Yuko…” I was stabbed again and again, but Atsuko stop her.
“Don’t hurt her, do you want me to love you? Well don’t hurt her” Atsuko kiss Yuko on the lips. I was surprise by what she did, didn’t she want me.
“Minami…” I hear Haruna called my name and from the distance I can see her grabbing from a poll and she was standing sloppy. She had her right hand in the stomach and for a moment I thought I saw she was pregnant, but no she was bleeding
“Haruna” I yell as she starts to walk again. She stumbles down to the floor hitting her face first.
“Haruna” I scream like I never did. She is hurt and I can’t do anything. I want to move but I can’t, and she is just there bleeding without any stop. Tears fall from my
eyes and see how Haruna wants to get up but fails every time. I cry even more, it this a nightmare? If it is let me wake up from it.
I fell how someone kicks me to the grown and it was Jyou, the girl that my cousin likes and that I work with once.
“You did this, if you weren’t such a player in your days. This is God’s payback and now you will suffer even if also suffer.” I saw her crying and her red hair all mess up. She kicks me again and again. Maybe I do deserve it, maybe if I wasn’t a player back then, maybe if I trusted my cousin more, maybe if I choose love over friendship, but how could I; I cannot carry a death’s weight.
The will that I had for reaching MY HARUNA, made me regain control of my power and started to move slowly but surely. I hear how Atusko would say something Yuko and then look at me. Yuko came besides me and help me help me get up, this is really strange from one moment to the other she is helping me get up.
“I love you” Atusko said to Yuko and she only smile, but her smile fainted when she felt something dripping from her shirt. I saw how shock she was when she looked where her heart was. Atsuko stabbed her. I couldn’t react in time because I didn’t have the strength. She slowly collapses on the puddle of water that was near her.
“Yu..ko” I say as I turn to see her laying in there.
“I….lo…ve….you…” that was her last word, her last word as she looked Atsuko with hurt eyes.
“Atsuko, why” I look up to her and she was just smiling.
“Because of you” she takes my hand and pulls me towards her. I try to move away but again I could not move. I look at her arm and then I slowly made way to her hand, but something caught my eye; my hand. My hand was cover in blood, and then felt something wet in my left hand. I look in horror that both of my hands are cover with blood, then I sudden flashback came to my mind, “You did this, if you weren’t such a player in your days. This is God’s payback and now you will suffer even if also suffer”. Oh my god did I did this.
“Yes you did, who do you think kill your cousin Umi…I didn’t do it you did, but it would have been a pleasure” I hear her whispered to my ear. I was horrified, shock by what she had just said.
“No, I didn’t do this, not to my cousin” this time I turn around to see my cousin who was still on the floor with a large pond of blood.
“Your hands are stain with blood even form the person you swear to love for eternity” by hearing this I imagine the worst. My expression was unknown to me only Atsuko could see me.
“Yes you kill you Haruna, with your own hands” she whispered to me.
“no….no..no..no, I could have don’t it, I love her more than anything in my life I could not kill her she is the love f my life” I cry like I never did. The tears, the
confusion was more that I could handle. I turn around and throw a punch to Atusko, but she dodge it and again and again.
“Even if you denied it, you kill her” I punch her but she react to quickly and she punch me hard.
“If you could have love, none of this would be happening” Atusko took my hand and walk me towards Haruna.
“Say that you love her and I’ll leave you alone” she yell at me and then she look at Haruna’s body. she put her feet I Haruna’s side and turn her around without any help. I look at her and I want to say it.
“I…..lov….” I couldn’t say it, why voice where you are when I need you. I cry at the moment I sense I could not move.
“You can’t say it can you, it’s because you love me” Atsuko chuckles. I could not understand the behavior of my body. I love Haruna with all my heart but why can’t I
say it. I’m hating myself. Tears start to fall down my cheeks I could not control it.
And with all my will I try to say it.
“I…love…. You….Haruna”
Then I felt a sting in my right cheek, Atsuko had just slapped me.
“Minami….I….love….you…..” Haruna whispered. I look at her and kneel down, so I could face her. I gently grab her right cheek and I tell her that everything is going to be okay, but she just smile. I began to cry harder and harder.
I move closer to her so our lips were only few centimeters away. Haruna look at me and smile. With the only strength left I close the gap that was separating us. I could feel the breeze that I had when we first kiss. All those memories were flowing over me. The time I made her mine, the time I told her I will always love her, the time when we celebrate my birthday, the time we broke up, and the time when I kiss her again in the hospital. Then something pop up, how did I know she was in the hospital.
I broke of the kiss and I saw her close her eyes and then I felt Atsuko dragging me away from her. I could not fight against that, I was weak.
“Now you will love me for the rest of your life” Atsuko push me against the wall.
“No…I will never do that” She slaps me. I’m really hurt, I want her to stop but what will do I have? None. Then out of nowhere the place started shaking. Parts of both buildings where falling off, and I saw Atsuko panic. She turns around and starts to walk. I was there helpless. The brick of stone where falling, and the light that keep on shining disappeared.
“Wake up, we are in our hotel” Umi slapped me gently. I look at her and I started to cry, I remember my dream and I was happy that my cousin was alive. I hug her
tightly, and I know that she is looking at me like “what is wrong with you”.
“What’s wrong with you, why are crying?” she questions me and I just couldn’t find the words.
“Please don’t cry. They might think I did something to you” she looks out the window. I stop hugging her; I think she didn’t like it when I did that.
“So why were you crying”
“I had a nightmare” I respond as I was wiping off my tears.
“What happen in that nightmare” she patted my head and smile
“You and Haruna died in it” I look down.
“Well I see how much you love us “she chuckle.
“anyways we have to get out other people are forming a line behind this taxi” she smiled and open the door, so after all I’m happy that she is a live, but my heart
aches when I think about Haruna. Will she be okay?
End of Minami’s POV
-Somewhere in Japan-
It’s been three weeks since Minami had left and that Haruna and Jyou had been good friends. They hang out with their other friends. She still got those threatening messages and Atsuko, well she still goes to school, but when finish, she goes back home and Yuko still by her side. she says that Atsuko has to have time because no one gets over a relationship so fast.
Today is the day where there would be storm in from of the devil. Just as your nightmare was told. The wounded would be hit hard and no one will know who did it. Yet a mysterious shadow will know who did it and by that, she will be hurt.
Jyou was talking to Umi in the phone, she told her that she will protect Haruna because of the dream she had and that they were in America.
After that Jyou walked Haruna to her house, where Haruna’s grandmother was waiting for her.
“So what should we do for our project” Haruna asked as she looked ahead. Without them knowing someone was following them.
“Well we can make…” Jyou stop walking and look behind them, then she look at Haruna and continue saying what she was saying. “a power point about the holocaust”
“Yeah I guess that would be a good project to show in our history class” Haruna smiled. They were walking calmly in the streets, but Jyou started to have the sense
that someone was following them. She took Haruna’s hand and whispered something to her.
“I think we are being followed and please don’t turn around”
“Why do you say that or is it that you want to hold hands with me.” Haruna smile.
“No seriously we are being followed, I take you to your house and I’ll talk to someone.” Jyou fasten her step and so did Haruna. By the time they got near Haruna’s
house, Jyou was certain that someone was following them; although, it was getting darker she can still a shadow moving behind them.
“Okay, someone IS following us, don’t worry I’m going to protect you, I promise someone that I will” Jyou hold Haruna’s hand tighter. Haruna just nodded. When they got to Haruna’s house, they both said there good-bye, but something stop them.
“Haruna, how dare you steal my Minami” by that both knew that it was Atsuko. Haruna turn around to see Atsuko walking towards them.
“So you are the one that was following us” Jyou ask.
“Shut up, my conversation is not with you” Atsuko snapped at Jyou.
“I didn’t steal anybody, you were the one that threaten Minami” Haruna walked towards Atusko.
“I did it because I love her, I didn’t want her to love you” Atsuko sounded angry.
“If you love her some much why didn’t you understand that she IS in love with me” Haruna yell.
“She is not, and if you love her so much why didn’t you stay with her when we broke up” Atsuko snapped.
“Because…..” Haruna could not find the words to say, she was about to answer, but Jyou said something first.
“Will leave is dark out here; we can talk about it tomorrow. Her Grandma is waiting for her” Jyou said as she walked towards Haruna.
“Hahahaha…….hey Haruna, did you ever asked yourself how you grandmother knew about your relationship with Minami"
She was shocked by what Atsuko had asked her, how she knew about that. She thought for a second….
“You….you …..Told her” Haruna stutter.
“I did, so you could back away but I guess that didn’t work.” Atsuko grin. She was evil when it came to love, Atsuko was this looking calm child but inside she had problems. Haruna slapped Atsuko, and Jyou just watch the scene.
“How dare bring my grandmother in all of this. She is the family that I have and you poison her with your words against me” Haruna was about to slap, but Atsuko stopped her.
“Don’t dare to touch me again” Atsuko yell. She was furious, so she took a knife that was in her pocket.
“Atsuko calm down there is no need to have a knife” Jyou walk to her, but Atsuko pointed the knife towards her. Jyou froze in the spot.
“Drop the knife down” Haruna said scared.
“Never, not until you’ll leave us alone” Atusko pointed the knife towards Haruna which made her even more scared.
With the chance at hand Jyou try to tackle Atusko, but Atsuko was stronger and sent her flying to a wall nearby. By this point you might ask where are the people?, well magically there were no people on the streets.
“Please don’t hurt me” Haruna cried. Then a sting in her stomach hit her. She realizes that she got stabbed. She put one of her hands in her stomach and felt the
blood flow over.
“That’s what you get” Atsuko laugh.
After a couple of seconds Jyou came back to her senses and saw that Haruna was vomiting blood and that she was hold her stomach. She saw how Atsuko was going to stab her again, but somehow another person came in and took hold of Atsuko’s wrist, and kiss her. Now she was counfused, but her mind stop as she saw Haruna falling to the ground.
“Help somebody help” Jyou scream.
“Shut up” Atsuko yell
“Atsuko just let go, we have to leave, the police is going to search for you” the girl got hold of Atsuko’s hand and dragged her away.
Jyou got her cell phone out and called the ambulance. Then she saw the door to Haruna’s house open.
“What is this fuzz all abo-“Mrs. Kojima could not believe what was in front of her; the body her granddaughter.
“Oh my god, somebody help me” Mrs. Kojima yell.
“Don’t worry the ambulance it’s on its way. More blood came out of Haruna’s body. Her breathing were slow and the last thing she remember was people putting her in to the ambulance.
“Minami…..”
-Somewhere in U.S.A-
Minami had just felt something in her heart and it hurt a lot. She didn’t knew what its was but she became more worried when she saw her cousin answer a phone call.
“hell- wait a minute I can’t hear you…..slow down…….what!......no this can’t be happening……I told you to protect her………are you okay……is she badly injured?.....oh my god….stay with……will be there tomorrow……I got to tell her…..bye take good care of her…..” Umi ran to Minami which she was in the living room when Umi got a phone call.
She looked at her Minami and saw her that she was holding her chest.
“What’s wrong?” Minami asked worried.
“We need to head back something terrible has happen” Umi look at Minami.
“It’s your butterfly, she got stab by….”
“What!.....no….please don’t tell me that” Minami started to cry.
“Minami everything is going to fine….”Umi hugged her.
well i hope you guys don't hate me for making Atsuko so evil, the story demanded it.
okay i must go back to my sucky life and think about stuff and listen to Fudanjuku.
........until the day comes......
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First, thanks for the update!
2nd.Wow O_o Atsuko is def too far gone here. Doesn't seem like anything can snap her out at the moment.
Poor Haruna, I hope she's okay. & That was quite the frightnenig dream Minami had and now that part of it came true she's prob scared/hurt.
Can't wait to find out what happens next!
& glad your exams went well! Best of luck with the rest of your schooling :) Thanks again for the update!
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Atsuko is not evil, Atsuko is freaking crazy!
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:shocked wow
Hard to guess but i hope that
This will have a happy ending
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Minami had a bad dream about the death of Umi and Haruna... coz' they are closed to her
Ah... haruna got stabbed...Jyou couldn't protect Haruna...
Atsuko... what have you done?
What's going to happen with Haruna...?
Can't Minami get back with her love...?
What about Atsuko...?
And also Yuko?
Can't wait to see more
Thank you for the update
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hello there.
its been a really long time since I update anything on this web site. I'm sorry if I haven't update my other fics, but school and my personal life has been a pain.....
well anyways, I bring you this alternative ending to this fic that my sister wrote. she is also a fanfic writer but not in this web site.
I hope you don't kill me or her for writing what she wrote.
Alternative Ending
“I’m so dumb” Atsuko said to herself in a whisper, she went to her house directly to the kitchen and grabbed a knife and killed herself. She had a slowly and painful death. Eventually Haruna found the body and a big pond of blood. She touched the body, Atsuko was now icy cold.
Haruna went running to Yuko and told her what she just found. Yuko was shocked at hearing this awful news.
At the funeral Yuko cried a lot and never was the same after that. She went a “little” crazy not to say completely insane. Some weeks later Yuko started to have weird dreams and some days after Atsuko’s ghost started to hunt her. She was then put on a mad house.
Yuko was really unhappy on the clinic. One lucky day she was left alone in her room with the door unlocked, she looked from the door to both sides of the hallway and luckily nobody was near. She made a run for it and got to the stair that gave way to the rooftop, on a rage she went running to the edge, and without thinking anything more than Atsuko she jumped into the sky; falling on the pavement cracking her skull and the gray material was spill on the floor.
that was short but that's what my sister wrote. she wrote this when I was writing the second chapter of this fic.
I promise her that I would post it because this is my first fic.
........until the day comes.......
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:( Oh but anyway finally you had update. Hopefully the next not so far hehe :P
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Very gloomy ending but not badly written at all actually...
Interesting I would say...
Just very depressed
Thank you for the alternative ending
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Whoa just whoa. That was pretty dark but still awesome~