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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: pen-pen-chii on August 18, 2012, 05:47:52 PM
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Hello minna-san~ :mon hi: Pen-pen-chii desu~ :vv:
This is actually my first time writing a fanfic~ oh! This is actually the second~ but it’s my first time posting it here~ :mon sweat: Enjoy~ :mon beam:
[Just Passing By....] (Wmatsui OS)
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"Jurina, what are you doing out here?"
"Ah! R-rena, d-don't surprise me like that."
"Well, I should be the one who is surprised. By the way, why are you here in front of my house?"
"Uhmm.. I- I was just passing by. hehe" Jurina scratches the back of her head.
'Just passing by??! Lame excuse Jurina, lame excuse.' Jurina thought to herself
"Oh. So you were biking. Where are you heading to?" Rena looked at Jurina's bike and smiled at her.
Seeing Rena's smile just makes her heartbeat fast, making her stutter.
"I- uhh I'm g-going to the uhmm b-bakeshop.."
"Really? Can I come with you?"
"Sure! Wait-- ehhh??"
"What? You don't want me to?" Rena pouted
"That's not what I mean! I mean, uhmm... of course you can--"
"Then let's go."
Rena suddenly grabbed Jurina's hand pulling her to their destination. Jurina just blushed by Rena's sudden action.
While walking at the riverside Rena noticed that Jurina was so quiet. So she decided to know why. She looked at Jurina, and saw that the younger girl was blushing and seems to be a little bit of uneasy or nervous. Because of the curiosity she decided to ask her.
"Jurina, is there something bothering you?"
Jurina turned to Rena and shook her head
'Jurina is so cute like this~' Rena thought
"I- It's j-just.. uhhh.." Jurina looked at her hand which is still being grabbed by Rena
"Hmm?" Rena also looked at Jurina's hand and noticed that she was still holding it.
"Ah! I- i'm sorry!" Rena let go of Jurina's hand and turned her head to the side to hide her face from blushing.
When Rena finally relaxed, she was about to say something but Jurina's phone suddenly rang up.
Grabbing the phone from her pocket, Jurina looked at the name of the sender and saw that it was her older sister, Pen.
Title: Favor
From: Pen-neechan
[ Juririn, you're going to the bakeshop with Rena, right? Can you buy me some slices of Chocolate cake? Of course you're the one who is paying for it. Nantene~ :P I'll just pay you later when you get back~ ]
'How did she--' She was stopped in her thoughts when another message was received.
Title: Answer
From: Pen-neechan
[ Oha-chan told me that you were in front of their house and you and Rena went somewhere~ Oh! and before Rena went out she told Oha-chan that she's going to the bakeshop to buy some melonpan~ Now, is your question answered?~ ]
'Can she read my mind??' Jurina thought
"Who is it?" Rena asked
"Just nee-chan"
"Oh. What did she said?"
"Buy her some slices of Chocolate cake."
"Hehe. She still hasn’t changed, huh." Rena smiled
"Well, she will always be like that." Jurina smiled back
"Ne, Jurina" Rena suddenly stopped walking
"Hmm?" Jurina also stopped and looked at Rena
"Can you tell me why?"
"What is?"
"Why are you really in front of my house?"
"U-uhh.. I was just passing by..." Jurina said avoiding Rena's gaze
"Liar."
"Eh?"
Rena walked in front of Jurina and placed her hands on Jurina's head
"I know that you're lying. You've been in front of my house for 30mins. So it's impossible for you to be just passing by. And I’ve been looking at you since you arrived there. You were looking very bothered by something. I've also noticed this a few days ago."
"Rena.."
"Please Jurina, tell me what has been bothering you. I want to help you."
"Rena.. It's hard to explain these things that had been bothering me. But I want to tell these things, especially to you."
"Then tell it to me. How matter hard it is to explain, I’ll listen to you and understand those things."
Jurina grabbed Rena's hands and removed them from her head. She just stared at Rena's eyes and started to speak.
"There is this girl that I had known since years ago; we had been close friends, no, almost like sisters. And I had been admiring her since we met. She was a shy, smart, beautiful, kind, and weak girl. But sometimes she's weird and when she get mad because her friends are being hurt, she would beat those guys who hurted them. But these past few days whenever I’m with her my heart just beats so fast, making me nervous and all. Even if we’re not together, I still can’t help but to think about her. Then I noticed that these feelings of mine are not the same feelings that I have felt when I met her, these feelings of mine were more than that. That girl…. Is you. Rena, I love y—“
Jurina was interrupted by a soft kiss on her lips.
“I love you too, Jurina”
They kissed again but it was different from before, it was a deep and passionate kiss.
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I’m sorry if my OS is too lame and boring~ :err:
I’ll just re-read this later and edit some errors~
And Oha-chan (Ohayou) I'm sorry for using your name without permission~ :kneelbow:
I'll sleep now 'cause its already 11:40PM here in my country~ :byebye:
Oyasumi~ :sleep:
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:w00t: :w00t: :w00t:
I need more wmatsui hahahahahaha
thank you for great os ^^
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Eeeeeeeeeeh~~~
I'm dying out of cuteness xD
WMatsui is so sweet~
Lol Rena Melon Pan xD
Naisu OS !
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I loved it!
Normally I'm too lazy to reply to anything, but that was just too cute! :wub:
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A wmatsui fanfic!! I like that, update soon!! :thumbup :thumbup :)
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Sweet fic~ :wub: :wub:
I like their interaction~ thanks for the update^^
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. . .i'm just a passing by when i notice this fic. . .heheh. . .cüte story. .wmatsui kiss ftw. .!
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Minna-san~ Thank you for reading and for the comments~ I'm really glad that you liked it~ :nya:
I have another OS but this one will have parts~
PART I
*RING RING RING*
Jurina picked up her phone and answered it.
"Ah! Churi~ Doushitano?~"
Jurina paused for awhile listening to the other girl over the phone
"Eh?? Was it today?"
Jurina worriedly looked at the girl beside her.
"But- ... Okay, I'll be right there in 30mins, just wait for me, okay?"
Jurina closed her phone and sighed. She looked at the girl beside her and apologized.
"Gomen, Rena-chan! I forgot that we have something important to do and I really need to go."
"It's fine, Jurina. I understand." Rena smiled
"But-"
"Just go or else Churi will get mad at you if you'll be late."
"Ah! Yabai! Then I’ll be going now and I’m really sorry" Jurina apologized again and went to her destination. She looked back at Rena and waved her hand while smiling. Rena smiled and waved back.
When Jurina was out of sight, Rena decided to go to the bookstore.
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Rena entered the bookstore and was greeted by the girl at the register.
"Welcome! Oh! Hello, Rena-chan. It's been awhile since you visited."
"Hello Rikako-chan. Is Yuka-chan here?"
"Unfortunately, she had a day-off today. Why do you ask?"
"Nothing. I just wanted to ask her about something."
"Oh! Do you want me to ask her about it?"
Rena shook her head.
"It's fine. It's not really important. I'll just go upstairs, okay?"
"If you say so. Go ahead. Oh! And there's no one up there, do you want me to accompany you?"
"Thanks, but I’m fine by myself." Rena smiled
Rikako also smiled and Rena went upstairs.
Rikako grabbed her phone and messaged Jurina.
sorry if this one is too short~ :mon sweat:
I still haven't thought about the title 'cause I still haven't finished writing part II (and III?)~ :dunno: but i'll try to finish it later when I got home~ bye~ :byebye:
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Just passing by = :luvluv2:
The OS story in parts looks interesting. The store worker seems to been/have planed something. :? hmm
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Some surprise for Rena maybe?
Hrrm :?
Interesting
:kneelbow:
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Hehe.. the mention of Rikki and Yuka in the dialogue below lights my curiosity up. :D
"Hello Rikako-chan. Is Yuka-chan here?"
"Unfortunately, she had a day-off today. Why do you ask?"
"Nothing. I just wanted to ask her about something."
"Oh! Do you want me to ask her about it?"
Why does it seem to me that Rikki is trying to find ways of getting close to Yuka? :rolleyes: (My ship radar is being a bit more sensitive. :grin:)
And patiently waiting for the plan to unfold :yep:.. what do you have up your sleeve, Juri-chan?
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I really really like "Just passing by" I can read it again and again and again :shy1: and the next story it's also ok so please update soon :farofflook:
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wow it good cantinue I want to know what is going to happen :ding:
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Hello.
Please do continue!!!
It's nice :D
I am also a fan of WMatsui
Thank You
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I like "just passing by" because of the natural flow and a lil bit of fluffy stuff instill in the story... the messaging parts really add more fun to the story! Cant wait to read part II of the OS! :D
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Pleasee continuee pen-san :twothumbs
This is good XD
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Your Os is so cute i love it
ch 1
What relationship Jurina and Rena have now?
Rikako what she going to text?
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kyaaaaaaaaaaa~ :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
i love it!
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More wmatsui please.. XD
I love both your OS and the part thing too.. :inlove:
Hope you find a nice title.. :twothumbs