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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Library => Topic started by: yuukimoko on August 18, 2012, 06:36:06 PM
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This hit me when I was looking at a movie, well not really looking as I was thinking about my next chapter for Love puppy! but......Anyway! it hit me and I wanted to try it!
This will have probably not very much chapter but I wanna give it a try.Do you all remember how Mayu is obsessed with her lovely face?and she loves herself? well In this story, Mayu is a rich -man's doughter , so a rich girl that loves only herself and a little her parents, and so does her sister,Jurina! Now, Rena and Yuki have to make them love them! what do you think?
Prologue-
On a beautiful morning of October, the sun was shining in the clear sky.A really beautiful day ,in witch everyone was happy and paceful.
And so was in the Watanabe mansion, where everyone was getting ready for the day.Today was also a day with surprises, where The pround head of the familly had prepared a surprise for his lovely 2 doughters. He was truly pround of them, they both where the best in their school,they where popular and loved.They have a head on their shoulders and will surely make him more pround. But both his girls had a single problem, they loved themselves more than they love anyone else in this world.
They where nothing like their friends how had a lover or a potential lover, and he wanted to remedy that.He had called them early in the morning for the surprise.And now he waited for them to come .
There was a knock at the door and he lifted his head from his computer
'Entre!'
The door opened, revealing two lovely girls,they both wore a smile on their faces for their father.They both had the same years, just a few months difference.The younger one ,Watanabe Mayu, was wearing very cute skirt ,that barely reached her knees and a shirt with bunnyes over it.On her hands there where accesories ,and her hair was up in two side ponytails.She was surely the cute and playful type.
Beside her was her somewhat older sister, in pants and a shirt with a vest over it.Her handsome face and accesories where prof that she was the cool and filtry type.
Both where happy to see their father how had been away for months.He had been around all Japan, working .He also had some surprises for his girls like he always did even if they said that there was no need.
'Father!' both girls rushed and hugged their father happy.
'ohh! my girls! I am so happy to see you two!' he also happy embraced them
After a few minutes of hugging and talking about what happened when he was gone, he decided to tell them the surprise.
'Then girls, like every time, I brought you a present!'
'father! there was no need!
'mou, papa......'
'You know I like to surprise you! now the big surprise.... from now on, ........you both have girlfriends!'
He had a big grin on his face as he said that but the girls reactions where exactly the opposite
'WHAT?!'
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I said that, but when I started writing everything changed! I was thinking something at the start but then it changed and changed and changed again....so lets me a review please? I dont know how long it will be and all but I still wanted to try~
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first! yeayy!! yattaa!! :farofflook:
ohohoho this prologue seems interesting.. :hehehe: presents in terms of girlfriends?! what a lovely father they have! i'm looking forward!
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Wah this looks super super good! :farofflook:
I love it! :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv2:
So wait the father is encouraging them to have girl friends? :grr:
Why can't I have a father like that! :gyaaah:
Ah the story looks really good. Please update soon! :pleeease:
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Waw..
Update soon, please ! :cow:
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omg im going crazy i so can't wait for the chapter i love fics like this my 2 fav couples too yayyyy :luvluv1: :luvluv2: please update soon :kneelbow: im so excited i can't express it lol :gmon twirl: :mon love: :cool1: :byebye:
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Eeeeehhh ! What kind of father will let his children have girlfriends ?!?!
Lol jks EPIC Father is EPIC
At 1st, they were so happy but then when they heard they have gf, they snapped Lol
Update soon~
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ehhhhh EPIC FATHER.
This prologue look very interesting and my 2 favorite OTP Mayuki and Wmatsui ( right now I like crazy cuz Wmatsui kiss tatata)
I'm sure mayuyu and jurina will love their girl friend very soon haha. Update soon~~~ ^.^
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So Yuki and Rena is jurina and mayu girlfrend?LOL
What will yuki and rena do..to make mayu and juri fall for them..
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What a interesting story yuukimoko-san, please continue hehehe :twothumbs
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so cool ! but they r girls father :))) he has a weird but funny thoughts here!
i'll wait for u but pls dont forget risky game :D
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Chapter 1: Obssesed?!
'What?!!?' both girls shouted at the same time.The shock was writen all over their faces.
Their fathers sweetdroped.
'w-well, girls, I wanted to bring you the perfect gift this time, and you both dont have any boyfriends or girlfriends so I thought .....'
The father was stoped be a loud BANG that appeared from behind the door, they all looked at the door.
The said door was demolished to the ground . And from behind the door two girls appeared.
The older one was wearing black clothes that looked cool on her ,in hand a katana(sword) was being held,sheathed of course .On her face a small smile was, but her eyes looked unfocused,empty ,sad.
Beside her was her little sister, the black hair making them look like sisters.She was wearing something similar to her sister,but wore a skirt instead on pants and she didnt have anything in her hands, well anything beside her sister's hand.They sat there hand in hand ,one smiling with empty eyes and the other looking a little shy but with a smile.
The three frozen ,snaped after a while.The girls begining to shout at their father
'you cant be serious father! I dont need anyone!!'the older shouted
' why? why father? I didnt do anything wrong to get this!' the little one was saying mad
And so they continued,on and on.Their father could do nothing to stop them,he just watched afraid as they brawl at him. Telling them to stop could never happen, shouting at them would end with him being ignored for a year, so he just waited for them to finish and then talk.
The girls at the door entered, seeing that they where ignored they just stond but the shouts where too lound .The older one walked at Mayu and Jurina ,from behind them putting her hands on their mouths and holding them to stay.
The girls tryed to break free but couldnt do anything, the one holding being the most powerful.
The father looked calming down at them, they where getting tired and started stoping moving after 3 minute.
He looked at the captor 'thank you Yuki, you can lets them go now'
the said Yuki lets go of Jurina but hugged Mayu ,not taking her hand off her mounth.Mayu was too tired to do anything anymore.
Jurina looked ar her father 'and these who are?!' she pointed at Yuki how was hugging Mayu with a smile and her sister .
't-these are ypur girfriends...'
'What?!'
'Jurina....calm down and listen to what I have to say,then you can yell as much as you want' he said shaking
'fine!" Jurina crossed her arms and sat on a chair
he turned to Yuki and Mayu 'Yuki, please put Mayu on the chair'
Yuki shaked her head 'no' ,
he sighed 'please put her down, you will stay with her after all you want'
Yuki pouted but put her down
'now explain' Mayu said as she took out a mirror and startred looking at herself after she sat down.
'well.......I meet my childrom friend when I was in this work excursion.He lets me stay at him for a while to talk more.So we talked and talked until we started talking about our kids and I heard that his children where 'obssesed' with you two.He said that they saw you on tv on time and fell in love, love at first sigh.
So I got interested when I remembered that both of ou didnt have anyone, so I waited to meet them and see what they can do.They where incredible! they both where something, so I decided to ask if they want to be your girlfriends.And they said yes so......'
'so you mean that just like that we now must be with them?' Jurina asked
'y-yes......they are your owners now..'
'owners? what damn that means?! I own myself!' Mayu sat up
'......not anymore...' a sweet voice whispered and before they could react, both Jurina and Mayu had collars around their neck.
'whats the meaning of this?? I dont understand anymore!!' Jurina was trying to rip the collar to no vain, while Mayu was inspeccting it with her hands
'.....you cant rip it Jurina.....its made from something very rough'
'father!'
'yeah......so I forgot to tell you something.....meet Kashiwagi Yuki and Rena!'
the girls smiled at them 'nice to meet you!'
'Rena will be Jurina's girlfriend and Yuki ,Mayu's' he explained and fell back in his chair
'.....that story was not the hole truth was it?' Mayu asked serious
'.....'
'I will find it myself'
Jurina started walking to the exit with Mayu
'Ah! also, they are both obssesed with you, at the possesive mode!'
'w-what?!' tha girls found themselves attachated to the other two girls.
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sorry,,,,,, I had many pauses so I lost it.....ill try to make the next chapter more interesting!
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Ohoho~ This is too interesting !
Looks like I now understand the title lool xD
Yuki likes hugs lol
Awesome update !
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Somehow...i love this fic...love at first sigh..LOL
The story really interesting...
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Waaaaaaaah :shocked
Very interesting!! I can't stop smile! :P
Yuki and Rena are sisters waaaaaah good idea!! :twothumbs
Yuki is so cute she likes hug Mayu :heart:
update soon please hehe :peace:
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Uh. . .nice and interesting story you have in there. . .waiting for the next!
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'ne Jurina?
'yes,Mayu?'
'.....I think now I know how sardines feels....'
'haaaa~ I know what you mean'
Both girl stayed silent as the ones hugging them hugged tightly again.
Chapter2: Rules!
'..I ....had....enough....of.....this!!' Mayu shouted as she finally broke free from Yuki's embrace after 2 hours of being hold close to another body.
'mou~ you are no fun.I like hugging you Mayuyu....' Yuki said with half closed eyes as she tryed reach Mayu and hug her again.
'no! stay right there! its an order!' Mayu said and Yuki's smile disappeared as she did as she was told.
Mayu sighed and turned to her sister '.....cant you just get her off you? she is surely less powerful than Baka-Yuki'
A few feets away Jurina was sitting on a chair, in her lap sat Rena how was hugging her around the neck close.
'I would........but she is too delicate.I feel like I would break her if I tryed...' Jurina murmured as she looked tired at her sister
'just do it! you wont get hurt so why doest it matter?!' Mayu crossed her arms
'well.......I will probably get hurt....I am sure Yuki is going to murder my pretty face..' Jurina whispered
'why do you think that?' Mayu raised a eyebrow
'...because she is looking at me with a murder look?' Jurina asked sarcasticaly
Mayu turned to see Yuki ,Yuki just smiled inoccently at her.
She turned back at Rena 'Rena, lets go of Jurina, its an order!'
Rena pounted and lets go ,sitting beside her sister.Once she sat down she took hold of Yuki's hand and started playing with her fingers.
Jurina and Mayu looked at them hopeless, they now had two girlfriends that where obssesed with them,both taking commands, and both having also a 'sister complex'........just how bad could this get?
'wait.dont ask that question or things will get more bad' Mayu remained the author
Ah, thanks Mayu.Anyway!
'We need rules!'
'rules...? why?' Yuki asked curious
'cuz you two are too attachable.....you hug and kiss and do things without permission.' Jurina explained
'So the rules for you are:
1-No kisses!
2-No attachament! you cant just hug us for hours!
3-......no perv things!
4-.............not too much love in public,we are only doing this because papa(father) said so ,so dont get the wrong idea!
........these are all for now,Ill think abut more soon' Mayu turned and exited the room.Yuki sat up too, walking after her,she paused at the door
'you do something my sister doesnt like.......and Ill reorganize your pritty face...' where her last words as she exited the room
Jurina remained scared looking at the door, she turned to Rena who was smiling sweetly at her.
-later ,alredy night-
After running around the mansion trying to make Yuki go away ,Mayu was very very tired, wanting nothing more now than to sleep.So she prepared for sleep and entered her room, only too see Yuki alredy in bed.
'what are you doing her???!?!?!?!?!?!'
'well this is my room too so ~ dont see why I souldnt be...' Yuki smiled and walked to her ,taking her hand and kissing the back of it 'you only said that kisses lips to lips wherent allowed...' her eyes half closed she caryed Mayu bridal style to the bed and under the covers.
'Good night Mayuyu' Yuki kissed her forehead ,hugged her and fell asleep
Beside her Mayu had tears at the edge of her eyes, a hopeless expression
'father.........if she ruins any part of my body hugging me.......Im coming to kill you..'
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I said it would be interesting but after how much I wrote today.........review?
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Eeeh Mayu is cruel ._.
lol keep updating fast coz' looks lyk Im checking every hour xD
Jurina is scared of Yuki Lol~
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Beautiful! Absolutely beautiful! :farofflook:
Haha I love how Yukirin and Rena are possesive over their lovers. :nya:
This is such a good story! :luvluv1:
Please update soon! :pleeease:
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yuuki-chan you're the best :on GJ:
I LOVE this fic :luvluv1: :luvluv2: :shy2:
Mayu and Jurina are sisters :luvluv2:
Yuki and Rena has sister complex :farofflook:
Yuki is so lovely with Mayu and so scary with Jurina :on lol:
Rena is so cute :nya:
Mayu is cold as always I love cold Mayu :luvluv1:
I think Jurina is the first one who will fall for Rena :ding:
Yuki and Rena are so possesive :shy1:
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I like it! It's so cute!
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Stalking here again. .^^ i'm enjoying your fic now. .
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OMG! :farofflook:
THIS HAS GOTTA BE ONE OF MY FAVOURITE FICS!!!! :luvluv1:
I mean, just look at it!
Yuki and Rena are obsessed with Mayu and Jurina!
And normally, it's those two who are the dominant/slightly-obsessed with the older girls!
Not only that!
They're sisters AND...
Yukirin has a sister complex for Rena!
:nya: I LOVE THIS!!!
But wait! Who shall fall for the obsessed girls first?
Will it be Mayu, who is so tsundere that Yukirin can't help but go Dere-Dere over her?
Or Jurina, who is scared of hurting Rena because of Yukirin's sister complex?
Ahaha, who knows? I'll definitely love it whoever falls first!
The two pairs are so lovable! Ah~ Hours of hugging. FTW! :on lol:
Thank you for this fic, Yuukimoko-san!
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'.....why.......just why?!' Mayu shouted as she hit the table in front of her
'......life is cruel ,isnt it?' Jurina mumured as she looked in the mirror
'...Cant you two do something else than filter with each other for hours?!'
Chapter 3: I only love 'I'!
'...why do we must be their girlfriends?just what is father hiding...?' Mayu asked as she looked in a mirror.
'maybe he wants to make us love them?' Jurina asked back as she looked back at her sister
'thats imposible! I only love 'me'. I wont fall for some muscles clown that resembles a puppy.' Mayu smiled at herself
'yeah, I only love myself too, but what if father will put us at more...' Jurina looked out the window.Outside, Yuki and Rena where playing with a ball.
'like hell! dont think like that Idiot!' Mayu looked with her out the window 'they are just like puppyes'
Yuki felt Mayu's presence and looked at her window, smiled and waved at them.Rena did the same happy, after they both decided to go back inside to their lovers.
'Damn, they are coming!' Jurina jumped from the window and started looking for a hiding place in the room,they know they didnt have a lot of time since Yuki was fast, and strong .
Mayu lets go of the window too and entered a secret place inside the wall.Jurina entered under the bed.
The door opened, and inside enteres Yuki and Rena hand in hand.
'where did they go..?' Rena asked sad as she looked around the room.
'hmm~ I wonder' Yuki smiled and sat on the bed, Jurina stoped breathing so she wont be found.
'we dont we find them?' Rena asked Yuki as she sat in front of her
'maybe they want some time alone...' Yuki reached out and put Rena on her lap 'and I ,too ,want some time alone with my Rena-chan...' Yuki smiled and stroked Rena's cheeks
'mou.....Yuki-chan' Rena closed the little space between them and kissed Yuki on the cheek. 'lets play a game'
'what are the rules?'
'how finds first her girlfriend, wins .The winner chosses the next game.' Rena smiled and sat up
'I accept.' Yuki sat up to.
'then.......Start!'
And so they started searching around the room, in drawers and everywhere.Rena tripped over something, and ended on the floor, a very good position to see Jurina.
'are you okay,Rena- chan?' Yuki helped Rena sat up and looked for any posible wounds
'Im okay.......and I won.' Rena smiled and moved to the bed 'Yuki-chan? can you help me lift this bed up?'
'yes!' Yuki lifted the bed alone, as she didnt want Rena to get hurt, and also because she was strong enough. Under the said bed Jurina was trying to cover her face mumuring 'If I cant see it they cant hurt me,if they cant see me they wont hurt me.....'
Rena smiled and hugged the scared Jurina 'Juri, this is not a good place for you to play~'
Jurina yelped in surprise and jumped away from the bed and Rena.
'w-what do you want?!' Jurina saw Yuki put the bed down again and was once again scared be her power
'nothing~ just some time with Juri-chan~' Rena hugged Jurina again and both exited the room, Jurina sighing and Rena smiling.
Yuki sighed with a smile and sat on the bed.
'hah~ I lost again......' and she fell asleep.
Mayu got mad, how could they forget about her!? she exited her hiding place and saw Yuki asleep on her bed.
'hmpf! Baka-Yuki!' Mayu moved closer and sat on the bed looking at Yuki's sleeping face
'you are quite cute ....' Mayu blushed a little and stroked Yuki's cheek, when she saw what she was doing she pinched Yuki's cheek hard
'But I still love only 'I' ......'
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.....Review?! Please! I need them, Im going crazy!
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Mayu. It. Is. Love.
LOL Mayu loves only herself~
Very narcissistic indeed ~
You tend to update fast now, eh ?
And it's not like I don't want you to stop xD
Update soon, I guess xD
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I need to do a review then to don't stop you from updating... :lol:
Yukirin is scary strong here and the sister complex is just so :rofl:
So Mayu thinks that Yuki is cute...but still love herself :bigdeal:...maybe not for so long :kekeke:
:on spit: Gosh Jurina kawaii!
If I don't see them :mon lmao:
Thank you for your update!
:kneelbow:
Oh by the way I like "risky game too" :sweatdrop:
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Ahhh really cute chapter! :luvluv1:
Haha Jurina can't hide anywhere when Rena is after her. :luvluv2:
Mayuyu you could be at least a little nicer to Yukirin. :sweat:
Great chapter as always. Please update soon! :nya:
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yuukimoko-san~!! i love your stories!! moe~ you made me feels so jealous! i want yuki n rena as my girlfriends too!! :mon ignore:
mayuyu, jurina, come on, fall in love with them.. i'm sure they will be your greatest partners ever! :mon inluv:
please update soon~~ onegaishimasu :kneelbow:
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Yuki and Rena are so possisive
I want to take Rena's place that I can be Jurina's girlfriend :shy2:
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'.....Mayu?'
'yes Baka-Yuki?'
'I want to use these today!'
'these?! are you crazy? '
'no? :dunno:'
'.....'
'......Mayu? :dunno:'
'......'
Chapter4: Annoying/Cute!
'Nee, Mayu? :hee:'
'....what?' Mayu looked up at her from her book
'lets go to the inside pool! :on woohoo:' Yuki said cutely.
'If we do, will you stop holding my hand ?' Mayu asked annoyed
'Yes!' Yuki aproved.
The inside pool was at the last floor under the ground.The pool was very big and the room was very amusing and recreating.
The girls changed clothes, Mayu and Rena wearing bikini while Jurina and Yuki short pants and the bra from some bikini.
When Rena and Mayu exited the dressing room, Yuki and Jurina where alredy at the pool.
The two made their way there two.
'you could have waited for us ,you know?' Mayu said annoyed as they entered the room
Jurina and Yuki turned their heads to them and both froze
'M-Mayu......Rena...... :on bleed:' Yuki looked at them dreamy, and Jurina did the same without knowing.
'hmmmm~ I get you like it Yuki-chan, how about you Juri?' Rena smiled blushing and looked at Jurina how was about to have a nosebleed.
'y-you look cute...' Jurina whispered
'just cute?' Rena asked sad
'No! :bigdeal: you look stunning Rena-chan!! :luvluv2:' Yuki looked lovingly at Rena
Rena blushed and turned her back covering her face.
Jurina looked a little annoyed at Yuki,how ignored her.Even Mayu looked annoyed at Yuki but in no vain.
'then, come in Rena-chan! lets play! :whistle:' Yuki looked at Rena from the edge of her eyes still blushing
'....but I want to play with Juri first' she said a little scared that her sister will get mad
Yuki smiled gently 'its okay Rena-chan, we can play later! :bingo:'
'thank you Yuki-chan!' Rena smiled back
'then, she's all yours Jurina!make her cry and Ill come after you... :shifty:'
'y-yes!' Jurina said scared
'catch me Juri!' and Rena jumped of the edge of the pool on Jurina, getting both of them in the water.
'ahh~ so cute~ :stuffed:' Yuki watched with a smile
Mayu who had watched all the exchange, had a big frown on her face looking at Yuki's back.
Yuki turned to her and asked 'want to enter too Mayu? or just sit there all day? :bigdeal:'
Mayu turned her back 'I prefer to----' and she was all wet and more annoyed
She turned back and saw Yuki smiling. So she run and jumped in the water .
'..... :on drench:......well I'm happy that you decided to enter too :ding: now is my chance!' Yuki started tikling Mayu
And so the play started!
3 hours later Mayu and Jurina where in their beds very tired, while Yuki and Rena still smiled at them.
'thanks for playing with me,Jurina...' Rena smiled and kissed Jurinas forehead softly.Before entering the covers too ,hugging Jurina and drifing to sleep.
'hihi.....Yuki-chan was so cute today too!'
Mayu on the other hand was fighting Yuki's hug, and Yuki just smiled and continued to hug her until she fell asleep first.
'Annoying Baka-Yuki! ,.........damn annoying and cute!' Mayu said as she turned her back to Yuki still in the hug.
:dozing:
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How I love all your reviews everyone......I love them! and want more.........Im so greedy!.......please? Yuki bow!
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WOO ! Updatoo again~
Is there Chapter 5 too ? xDD
Awwe~ This sister complex might be used to make Juri or Mayu jelly belly fufufu
Rena is just so so kyuuttoooo !!!
Okay umm .. If I say, " Update Soon " will you update another one ? xD
Meh. Whatever. UPDATE SOON, I guess xDDDD
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Seriously...i dont believe rena and yuki just fall for mayu and juri...
There must be something hidden...
And i want to know what happen if in the end mayu and juri really fall for yuki and rena?its interesting
Thank for the update~
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Haiyai! Wow this is a fast update even for you! :shock:
I love it! :luvluv1: :luvluv1:
Aww everyone is just so cute I could just die! :nya:
Please update soon! :wriggly:
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why do they have sister complex and love Mayu and Jurina :dunno:
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'Ju-ri-na!'
'y-yes Rena?'
'I want a kiss....'
'e....EHHHH?!?!?!'
'kiss me.....'
'noooooo---'
Chapter5: Kiss me,please?
The beautiful soon was shining on the clear blue sky.People where free and relaxing in parks,home or with familly.And so was at the Watanabe mansion, the maids where relaxing, the batlers and so on.It was inded a beautiful day, and so our favorite heroines where outside for a picnic on the green grass.
Mayu was reading a book while Yuki was holding her hand and looking at the sky.Jurina and Rena where playing with a ball, and talking.Lets hear what could they be talking about on such a beautiful and paceful day....
'Kiss mmeeee~!' Rena started running after Jurina
'nooooo~ I dont want to die yet! Im too young! and my lovely face isnt ready yet!!' Jurina run with all her energy.
......it sems they where the only ones too agitated....
Yuki looked at them and smiled thinking they where playing.Then turned to Mayu and hind her face in Mayu's hair, inhaling her sweet scent.Mayu blushed a little but lifted her hand and pushed Yuki away.
'stay away Baka-Yuki.Go play something' Mayu said annoyed as she took a out a mirror and looked at her hair
'......' Yuki smiled sweetly and kissed the back of the hand she was holding making Mayu blush again
Suddenly a cry was heard and they turned to see Rena crying on the ground.It seems she had triped over her own feets running after Jurina.
Yukis jumped and ran to her worryed, leaving Mayu's hand.Mayu looked a little sad at her hand but stand and walked after Yuki.
'Rena! are you okay?' Yuki asked worryed as she lifted Rena in bridal style and examined her body, she had a bruised knee that was bleeding.
'....' Yuki turned to Jurina with a dangerous expression making Jurina shiver. 'you did this.....Im going to kill you....'
But instead of going after Jurina she just went inside the mansion and to the single nurse office in the mansion.
Mayu remained with Jurina looking at them
'nee, Mayu?'
'yes?'
'why do you think Yuki is so possesive with Rena?'
'.....I dont know, the faster way to find out is to ask Baka-Yuki...'
'haa.....'
'lets go'
'e-ehh? where going to ask?'
'of course,common'
Inside the infiramary, Rena had fallen asleep on the bed while Yuki was beside her holding her hand.
The door opened and Mayu and Jurina entered.
'ah! Mayu, coming to see me~?' Yuki asked with a smile
'no. I come to ask you why you are so posessive over Rena.' Mayu asked with a blank face
'you want to know.....?'
'no.Jurina wants.'
Jurina surprised fell to the ground 'please dont beat me!'
'....' Yuki looked blankly at Jurina then turned to Mayu 'well,when we where little Rena always was trying to protect me from getting bullyed even if I was the older one.She was always protecting me, until one time when Rena got beaten really bad and I got mad.I beated and almost killed the ones that did that to Rena .I promised that I would protect her from now on, and be strong so she wont have to save me again.I dont like to see Rena sad so I always make her every wish come true.....even the most imposible one...'Yuki said with a serious face
Mayu was taken aback a little be her serious face, thinking that is was a 'little' cool.
Yuki then smiled looking at Rena 'beside, isnt Rena juat the cutest and most sexy girl alive~' her smile turned perverse
Mayu got jealous and mad without knowing and hit Yuki really hard in the head
'Itaii!!!!!!!!'
Then Mayu left the nursery.
'whats with her...?' Yuki asked looking at the still opened door.
Jurina looked at Rena sad, she felt guilt .
The next day Rena was up again, but Yuki looked at her every move so she wont get hurt.
Mayu was still mad,Yuki hadnt come to sleep beside her,she had sleept on the chair beside Rena.
And Jurina was trying to make up to Rena.
Ahhh~ life is complicated!
'nee Rena?'
'yes Juri?'
'w-what can I do to make you forgive my mistake..?' Jurina asked shily
'well...' Rena smiled 'I want a kiss!'
'w-what?! anything else?'
'noo~ I want a kiss!'
Yuki walked to them to see what was wrong
'Yuki-chan! Juri wont give me a kiss!'
'eh? why not?' Yuki turned to Jurina ,her eyes ready to kill.
'cuz its inappropriate...' Jurina explained looking other way of Yuki's glare
'......then Yuki give me a kiss!' Rena said stubborn
'yes yes ,my princess~' Yuki reached out and kissed Rena on the cheek
'like that ! see, Juri now you!' Rena said to Jurina
'a kiss......on the cheek?' Jurina looked frozen
'of course, what where you thinking?' Yuki looked at Jurina again '....where you thinking something indecent about my sister....?' her eyes could really kill now!
'n-nooo!' Jurina said scared
'kissu!kissu!' Rena shouted
'yes...' Jurina closed the space and kissed Rena on the other cheek
'yey! I got a kiss from Yuki-chan and Juri too~' Rena was finally happy, Jurina smiled relaxed
Yuki smiled too.
A single person wasnt smiling......
Mayu had watched everyithing in silence, they had forgot about her again.
'...my princess hah.....Baka-Yuki...'
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I want more reviews....Im starving after them.......want more!.......geograpy is killing my brain........review....
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you're fast!! :shock: but i like it! :on GJ:
slowly now, mayuyu has started to like yukirin.. yes! i can see the future! :ding: ahahaha
jurina has perverting thoughts :kekeke: just kiss rena on the lips, jurina! you will never not like it, i'm sure! :on slopkiss:
update more yuuki-chan!!
MORE! :onioncheer: MORE!! :onioncheer: SOON!! :onionwhip:
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Rena got a kisses from Yuki and Jurina I want it too :farofflook:
Mayu is jealous of Rena :on lol:
they forget about Mayu :stoned:
Mayu is lonely :on speedy:
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Wah Yuki is so brave when it comes to Rena. :cool1:
I want to know more about their relationship. :ding:
Aww Rena got kisses from Yuki and Jurina. :nya:
But poor Mayuyu. :fainted:
Yuukimoko-san don't leave Mayuyu alone! :pleeease:
Otherwise I will go in there and comfort her myself. :on speedy:
Please update soon! :gyaaah:
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Ohw. . .yuukimoko-san. .
Rena is a very spoiled girl in there. .w/yuki and jurina by her side. . .poor mayu, but i'm reading and waiting here. . .
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Mayu is jealous...LOL
Yuki...dont make mayu soo lonely
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Kissu datteeee LOL
Awwe~ I'm so so getting into this Sister Complex xD Too bad my sis is a riot lol
Mayuyu is jelly beeeeelly again !!
Yuki u gotta start spoiling Mayu now and not Rena o.o
Updattooo soon, again xD
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This fanfic is EPIC!!! :luvluv1:
Rena and Yuki being so obsessed with Jurina and Mayu is so cute and funny.
And you are really fast to update :shocked
Poor Mayuyu everyone forget her :farofflook:
Please update soon :pleeease:
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You are so fast updating :shock: but I like the story so it's ok :luvluv2: and please continue update fast :cool1:
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Give me 30 minutes to wake up.then ill post the next chapter.
Good morning everyone! Wonder what mayu is doing?!
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Take your time!
Make sure you are fully rested so you write a good story.
I'll be waiting.
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'......'
'......?'
'....ne,Mayu?'
'yes....'
'why am I here again?'
'cuz I need to make you look beautiful of course.I dont want a girlfriend how doesnt look good...I need to keep my image clean!'
'.....'
Chapter6: Punishment.......
A beautiful morning, a clear sky, a ready sun, a happy Mayu.These where the ingredients to make a happy morning, that only if you wherent Kashiwagi Yuki, how was handcuffed to the bed.
'hmmm~' the said Yuki just wake up ,and couldnt move too much
'w-whats this..?' she tried moving her hands but they where chained above her head ,to the bed or was it directly to the wall?!
'good morning Yuki.....' Mayu sat up from beside her on the bed, her face a dreamy expression as she looked at Yuki.
'g-good morning Mayu......whats this?did someone handcuffed me?' Yuki looked at Mayu a little surprised but soon it transformed in a loving expression.She felt like jumping on Mayu right then and there .....only to remember that she was chained...
'well....I wanted to have some fun with Yukirin.....so I handcuffed you so you wont say no....' Mayu made a shy expession and looked other way.
'a-ah.....I wont say no, so you can lest me out so we could have some fun together Mayuyu'' Yuki felt lovesick, Mayu was just so cute~
'ah! of cour--That s nothing to do with this idiot!' Mayus expression changed in a frown,all the love disappeared
'ehh~!? why!? what did I do?' Yuki asked seeing the change
'you ignored me and spo-----You didnt do anything! I just decided to give you a lesson for the future.so stay still so I can torture you!' Mayu grined and moved out the bed to take a feather and moved to Yuki's legs.
'w-wait dont! I dont need a lesson please!' Yuki tried but......Mayu started moving the feather up and down her legs making Yuki lost breath.
'hahahn-no hahaha!' and so torture started.
One hour later, Mayu got bored of the feathers,mouse, hiting and talking.
She sat beside Yuki how was almost asleep from so much agitation.
A loung groan was heard 'I'm hungry....' Mayu sat up and walked out to go eat leaving Yuki alone.
Down, Jurina and Rena where alredy eating.Rena was sitting beside Jurina ,feeding her.
'good morning Mayu!' Jurina geeted first
'good morning Mayu' Rena smiled at Mayu and looked aroud 'where is Yuki-chan?'
'...Baka-Yuki decided to sleep more today....' Mayu sat down and didnt say anything more.
For the rest of the day Mayu didnt enter in her room, leaving Yuki to starve there ,alone and chained.Mayu just made Rena do something all day so she wont ask about Yuki,and when she asked Mayu would tell her a lie.At a moment really, Mayu forgot about Yuki and why she was sitting with Rena.
So she made her way back to her room and saw it locked, she unlocked it and entered in the darkness.
When she saw Yuki on the bed chained, she remembered why. She paniked and ran to the bed and unlocked the chains .Yuki seemed to be asleep or dead?
Her hands had red marks where had been the handcuffs and they where dead cold from the absence of blood in them.
'ah...' A soft sound left Yuki's mouth .
Mayu was feeling guilt for wha she did...who could she forget Yuki there? it was like when they forgot about her.....so this was revenge.But she still feel bad, she entered the bed and lifted the covers over both of them, hugging Yuki to warm up.
She took her hands in hers and close to her chest.Tears started forming in Mayu's eyes without reason.Yukis hands where cold.....so cold, like her empty eyes.Yes, her eyes almost never had emotions in them even if she was smiling.Mayu kissed both hands and then her cheeks.
'it seems.......I started liking you a little Yukirin.....but only a little,dont jump to conclusions on your own.' Mayu said looking at Yuki like she was scolding her but her cheeks where red from blushing.
'do not lets it go to your head,Yukirin' she kissed her forehead and hugged her close.
'punishments........are the worst after all...'
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this is kinda lame, but Yuki got some love without knowing.I am hungry~ Ill update later again! Review?
Next time: I dont love you!.......no, maybe this is not the title,Im still thinking!
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YEAAAAAH ! FINALLY ~~~
UPDATTTOOO !
MAYU, HOW COULD YOU FORGET ABOUT YUKI ?!?!?!
Okay, maybe that was the cause why Yuki got a little love <3
Eeeh~ Mayu failed at making Yuki suffer TOO MUCH. She got a little REWARD Love in the end. And without knowing !!! :banghead:
Naisu updato ~
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I hope yuki know what mayuyu doing...kissing.. huging...her,so her eyes not so empty..because she receive a love from mayu LOL
But still a little eh?
Hope yuki gained more love from mayu...
And for rena...i though jurina is more easy with her...than mayu to yuki hehe LOL
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waaaah you update so fast :twothumbs
Really Reeaallllyy goog chapter! :heart:
update soon please :peace:
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'Sae and the others are coming tomorrow.'
'hmmmhhh~'
'.....Sae...and the others...'
'hmmm---w-ait what!? Sae"?!'
'yes.....'
'Jurina?'
'yes?'
'can we handcuff and hide Baka-Yuki and Rena?'
'good idea!'
Chapter7: Rivals,frinds......new love?!
Today was a dangerous day.Mayu and Jurina's friends where coming visit.And that meant that Sae and Yuko would come too.Yuko was a good friend of Mayu,a second sister, but Sae.......not so good.
'..ne Yuririn?' Mayu smiled sweetly at Yuki who was once again holding her hand.
'yes Mayuyu?' Yuki asked a little scared that she will be tied to the bed again so she lets go of Mayu's hand.Mayu saw this and she took Yukis hand back in hers
'I want to eat something sweet, but there is nothing since Jurina alredy eated everything.....' Mayu made a sad face
'then Ill go Buy some from the city! Leave it to me Mayuyu! Ill come back with a lot~' Yuki was happy because of Mayus actions
'really thank you Yukirin~!' Mayu smiled ,inside it was a smirk, Yuki had done exactly what she wanted
'then take Rena with you,Yukirin. She will help you chosse!' Jurina said as she come in with Rena.
'yes!'
And so they left the mansion to buy sweets.
Mayu and Jurina made sure to send them at someone they know and that could hide them until night.
One hour later everyone come. Entering the mansion where Takamina and Acchan hand in hand,Haruna running from a perverted sqirrel, aka Yuuko, Sae, Mariko-sensei, and michan.
'Shiriri-chan!' Yuko touched Mayu's oshiri, Mayu smiled
'Im happy to see you too, Yuko!' but despite that she felt a shiver on her spine.Hopefuly if she takes a shower before Yuki comes she wont know that somone come and touched her.
'......' Jurina was looking blankly at Mariko-sensei
'what?' Mariko asked back annoyed
'....I dont remember inviting you too Sensei...'
'......you didnt......but Im here to make sure you are having fun on your holiday, and doing your homeworks' Mariko explained
'....' Jurina contined to lookk
'.....and maybe I wanted to spend some time with Miichan too....' Mariko blushed a little
' whatever' Jurina said indifferent
'so Mayu ,Jurina, any boyfriends-girlfriend ?' Acchan asked after everyone settled down at a table .
'no.' Mayu said simple eating a candy, there where sweets, but Yuki and Rena didnt know.
'how so? Didnt anyone else than yourself captured you?' Sae asked trying to gain information
'no, I am the must beautiful after all, so why would I need someone else?' Mayu said back
'haaa' Sae sighed
'ah! I heard your father come back, what did he give you this time?' Yuko
'Baka Yuuko! you always ask what you mustnt...' Mayu thought as she said 'well, this time he finally understand and didnt bring us anything.'
'ehhh? ' Yuko said disapointed.
'anyway !lets go play games!" Jurina jumped and headed to the play room with the others.
'....ne,Mayu?'
'what now Sae?'
'why is there a chain and hadcuffs on this chair?' Sae asked pointing at the said chair
'well, I was playing with a annoying dog and left these there in case he comes back' Mayu said with a small smile
'....poor dog...' Sae whispered moving away
'Jurina?why are there so many photos of you on this wall?' Yuko looked at the said wall full of Jurina
'hahah~ well I love myself so I decided to do this' Jurina sweeatdroped 'lame excuse Jurina..'
'haa~ maybe I should do one like this for Haruna too!' Yuko said happy
'na! dont even think!'
'we forgot to hide evidences...'
Their father decided exactly then to see what they are doing, wondering about Yuki and Rena.
'hey kids! what are you doing?'
'where fine ,thank you!' Takamina responded for them all
'its good to hear hahah!' He looked around 'ne, where are Yuki and Rena? I wanted to talk a little with them'
Mayu and Jurina where frozed from the moment he entered the room.
'who? who is Rena and Yuki?' Acchan asked for them
'hmm? Mayu and Jurina's girlfriends of course!' He said smiling
'.......SAY WHAT?!' was everyones reactions
they all wanted to turn to Mayu and Jurina to ask about it, but the door opened again and Yuki and Rena entered.
'we're back~!' Yuki said as she walked past everyone ignoring them and going directly at Mayu with a bag. 'I got the sweets you wanted Mayuyu~ a lot of them!'
she put the bag dawn and took the one from Rena too putting it beside.
'Good afternoon everyone..' Rena said shily as she turned to the visitors, then turned to Jurina and kissed her cheek hugging her close and hiding her face in Jurinas neck.
Yuki continued to ignore them,all her attention being on Mayu until she saw their father
'ah, father, I didnt see you there' she bowed 'is there anything I can help you with ?'
'ah, not right now, but I would like you to come tomorrow to my office.We have something important to speak of.' and he exited the room.
Yuki turned to the visitors then for the first time
' and you are...?' she asked with empty eyes and a small smile
'a-ah! we are Mayu and Jurina's friends and classmates! Iam Takamina, this is Atsuko,Haruna,Miichan,Yuuko, Mariko-sensei and Sae' Takamina presented everyoneand smiled
'BEAUTIFUL.....' two voices eched in the same time in the room.
Wonder who fell for how?
TO BE CONTINUED........(THERE WILL BE A PART 2 OF THIS CHAPTER)
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YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY xD
I bet Sae fell for Yuki fufufu
But NOOO Yuki mustn't fall for Sae >:OO
Yuki is Mayu's hmph !
Okay... Update soon, again xD
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HOHOHOHO :shocked:
I hope nothing bad will happen.
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'I love you!'
'...'
'I want you!'
'...'
'I need yo--'
'Stop that song alredy! its making me shiver.....put Cross game please~'
'...'
Chapter7 (part2) : In love with two?!
The room froze. One of the voices being recognized very well,it was Sae's voice when she found someone with who she suddenly fell for.The other....was Yuki's voice looking at someone she souldnt.
'oh, beautiful princess,what is your fairy name?' Sae jumped to her knees in front of Yuki
'...' Yuki ignored her and started walking at someone that wasnt with 'her feets on the ground', the airhead queen.
'You are truly a godness my lady, please tell me your name if you may.' Yuki took Haruna's hand and kissed the back, and bowed.
The room was frozen.Rena lets go of Jurina and looked at her sister, for a second their eyes met and something started.
Haruna wake up from her sleeping and looked at Yuki who hold her hand, she blushed and took back her hand holding it close to her chest.
'w-what do you want....?' she asked carefuly
'ah, godness I only want to know your name' Yuki looked lovingly at Haruna, making her blush more
Sae then snaped and wanted to walk to them but sliped and ended hugging Yuki, who eneded on Haruna, who ended on the ground.
Yuki had her face in Haruna's breats , Sae had her hands around Yuki on her bo*** while Haruna had her hands on Yuki's head ,like holding her close.
The room was still frozed.But just why was it frozed? Acchan,Takamina, Mariko-sensei and Miichan where shocked looking at the show.
Yuko was ready to make BOOM!, while Jurina was trying to hug Rena how wanted to go to her sister.Mayu was mad, more mad than Yuuko.She was so mad that tears started forming in her eyes,ready to pour down her cheeks.
So what did the three on the ground did?
Yuki tried to talk, but only made Haruna moan and hold her tightly leaving her without breath.Yuki tried to move her legs, only to hit Sae how tightied her grip on her chest.So Yuki couldnt do anything.
After a few seconds Sae lets go of Yuki and sat up, helping Yuki and Haruna as well.Sae had a smiling expression looking at her hands, Yuki had the same face but just smiled at Haruna how was looking back at her blushing madly.
'thats it!' Yuko finally snaped and jumped in front of Haruna protectively. 'Haruna is mine, so stop that! go find someone else' the squirrel was mad.
Rena finally lets go of Jurina pushing her gently and with wide eyes she shouted 'cute~!!!' and jumped on Yuuko.
'ahh~ I know Im cute but I must protect Nyannyan now, please lets go of me!' Yuko said trying to take Rena off her without having to use force.
Mayu was trembling and crying, finally everyone heard her sniffs and turned to her with a pityful face.Poor Mayu didnt even know why she was crying.
Yuki see that and a sad smile appeared, the smiles origins unknow.Maybe she felt pity,happyness, fear?
Yuki walked to Mayu and hugged her and stoked her back softly to calm her down.
Rena lets go of Yuuko and turned to Jurina who was about to cry too, she did the same as her sister.
'I think we should go....' Takamina said
'yes, we'll come talk things out later this week ok?' Yuko smiled a little and took Haruna's hand.
They all exited the room.
Just what was going on there?!
'Baka Yuki!Baka!!' Mayu shouted as she hit Yuki , who didnt do anything, she just lets Mayu hit her.
Jurina hugged Rena close,not wanting to lets go.
The four fell asleep that night in the same bed, Jurina hugging Rena,Mayu hugging Yuki and under the covers Yuki holding hands with Rena.
Just what is this love?!
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Jurina rabbu Rena rabbu Yuki rabbu Mayu.
Jurina rabu Rena rabu Yuuko rabu Haruna rabu Yuki -Sae rabu Yuki rabu Mayu
.... Review~!?
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Woooo dont tell me!! Hahaha
OMG..i love this...
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WHAT ? i am so confused @@
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LOL INTERESTING xD
I was like reading a book with dominoes when they all fell xDD
Still waiting for another chapter lol~
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:panic: :panic: :panic:
become crazy for awhile..
In the end poor mayu..
i want more wmatsui moment..
i know mayu said he dont like yuki but herself
but what about jurina
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yuuki-chan you always confuse me with your fics :dizzy:
I'm sure Rena and Yuki had something hidden and the father is involved with this :on thumbb:
but I can't get what is it :frustrated:
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. . .what that just happened?. .[topsy turvy] i'm all laughing while reading this. . .and wh0w. . .yuki and rena. .what's you secret. .i'm curious n0w. .please have pity on mayu and jurina. . .this fics gives me excitements!
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ola I'm little confused!
why Rena and Yuki did that? Too weird :lol:
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Jeez I was only gone for a couple hours and you already have so many updates? haiyai! :shock:
All the chpaters were adorable and now we're starting to see Mayuyu is warming up to Yukirin a little. :nya:
Sae what do you think you're doing? Get away from Yukirin! :angry1:
Yuki why do you love Haruna? She's Yuko's so stay away or she'll attack you! :scolding:
Great chapters. Really great ones. :luvluv1: :farofflook:
Please update soon! :hee:
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:dizzy: Somehow this turned into a freaking love orgies! :badluck:
:wahaha: But that was just way too funny!
:wriggly: So waiting for your next update!
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This is so confuse, WTH!? :shock:
Who love who ??!! :shock:
you really need answer my question in the next updates, please!! :pleeease:
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'its time go Rena...'
'yes, lets go home Yuki'
Chapter 8:Just a joke.Life is not what it seems....
The next morning, when Mayu and Jurina wake up ,their lovers wherent in bed anymore.They both panicked.Running around the mansion to find them was very hard,the mansion was .....well a mansion.
At a moment they stoped and decided to ask their father,after remembering that he had to meet Yuki and Rena today.They arrived at his office and heard someone talking, it was from inside
'its Yukirin's voice!' Mayu whispered, they got closer to the door to listen.
Inside
'We will be going,in a hour the car is coming.Thank you for taking care of us Shiro-san, Master is grateful.' Yuki's voice said
Wait! what they where going away? whats going on- could be read on Mayu and Jurina's faces.
'yes, Thank you for everything' Rena's voice continued
'its okay, I must thank you too.I feel like my girls had a lot of fun, and maybe learne to stop loving themselves.' their father said
Mayu and Jurina decided to enter then
The door opened
'father! whats going on here?' Mayu said first
'where are Rena and Yuki going?'
'ahh.....I was expectiong for you to come...' he said looking at them
'explain then!'
'fine......' he sighed 'the truth is that Yuki and Rena are NOT in love with you two.'
'SAY WHAT?!' they both shuted .
Shocking ,isn't it?
'I meet my childhood friend like I said, but I know that he didnt have any girls.So I was surprised to see Yuki and Rena.He told me that they where forgoten girls, they had an accident where everyone thought they died and moved on,but they survived.With a price, Rena here,lost her legs,they didnt move anymore and she thought when she wake up that she was a doll needing a master puppet to move her.So he made her legs move with science.'
Mayu and Jurina stared at Rena shcoked.Rena smiled at them and waved,making after a princess bow.
'I didnt want to stop dancing, so when I saw that I couldnt move I become crazy.....' Rena explained then looked at her and Yuki's hands that where held together 'I thought Yuki was my master, because she was the first person I saw when I wake up.I stayed beside her and cryed ,singed and smiled.I know God would give me power to move my legs again, and I fell in love with Yuki, without knowing she is my sister.' Rena brought Yuki's hand to her chest and huged it tightly.
Jurina felt jealousy and sadness, how could this happen to the person she fell in love without knowing.....(she thinks she only likes her,but she fell easy for Rena's kindness)
Shocking.......
'...w-with Yuki.....did something happen to Yuki too?' Mayu said with tears in her eyes, she was in the same situation as Jurina.She fell for Yuki, in a way or another, even if she wont tell it yet.
Their father sighed ,then smiled 'they seems to have captured you somehow.After all ,I requested them here to make you two feel more emotions...' he sat up and walked a little ,stoping almost beside Rena and Yuki.He then moved a hand in front of Yuki's face and looked at Mayu and Jurina 'see?'
'what to see? Yuki cant see with your hand in front of her...' Mayu said annoyed
'yes and no.' He moved the hand away,Yuki's eyes where still open and her smile was still there. 'she right now is not seeing anything.'
'what do you mean?'
'in that accident, Yuki lost her ability to see.' Mayu's tears falled freely
'she lost her eyes, she couldnt see anymore.Even when Rena wake up, she was still sleeping ,not wanting to face reality .She did awake up with Rena's help .But when she opened her eyes and saw that she cant see,she didnt believe it, she didnt want to.......she cryed saying that she is a wood doll.He give her a limited singh, she can see ,but for a limited time.They somehow become hald cyborg because they wanted to continue to live.And he become their father.' He smiled sadly as he watche Mayu and Jurina cry
'I wanted to make you two feel more than just love yourselves, so I asked them if they could play lovesick for someone they never see, and they accepted.The plan was for them to stay more than this, but something intervened and they must go home....'
'no....'
'eh?' he looked confuser at them
'no, I dont want them to go! I wont lets them!' Mayu jumped and hugged Yuki tightly ,never wanting to lets go,then run to a hiden place in a wall and jumped out of vision.Jurina did the same in the next moment,closing the wall on her back.
'....these girls....they dont even know what is going to happen if they dont go back...I must find them soon..''
Mayu and Jurina took their two loved ones to a room plased on the lower floor of the mansion,exactly in the ground.When they got there they handcuffed Rena and Yuki to the bed,careful and just a single hand chained.
Mayu stoped crying and looked at Yuki sad, she stroked her cheek '...you cant see me ,can you?' at witch Yuki continued to smile not saying or doing anything.
'then tell me just a thing.....do you love me?' the tears forming again
'.......no..'
Mayu started crying again, her tears falling on Yuki's face as she put both her hand on Yuki's cheeks,forehead on forehead and cryed silently.
Two steps away,in the same bed, Jurina was hugging Rena carefuly to not hurt her.
'Rena......do you really like Yuuko?'
'no....I was only playing,and so was Yuki.' Rena said straight
'.....do you love me?'
'...you are cute.....I like you,but....I love Yuki'
Jurina looked in Rena's eyes '.....then,if you like me even a little.....will you lets me kiss you please?'
'yes' Rena smiled.Jurina closed the distance and kissed Rena on the lips, her taste the sweetest thing Jurina ever tasted.
A bell was heard after Jurina and Rena broke the kiss, exactly when Mayu wanted to ask for one too.....(damn that bell!)
'girls! girls listen to me!' their father sayd , it was a sistem that was in all rooms,so if something bad ever happened to be used to speak with a person in the mansion 'girls, you need to lets Yuki and Rena go. If they dont ,something bad will happen!' he said desperate
'what will happen ,tell me?!' Mayu shoted as she moved her eyes off Yuki
'......Yuki had been smiling for some time hadnt she?' Mayu looked at Yuki with curiosity about what was he talking
'yes, she has...'
' ...her eyes become blank.She had a blood problem some of these days, she doesnt want to tell why but that problem made her eyes lose it! if she doesnt go home soon her eyes will start bleeding and she will go crazy!' he shouted
Mayu froze, she know what made her blood problems.She did, when she handcuffed Yuki to the bed and forget about her.She looked at Yuki and saw her eyes starting to bleed, the blood running down her cheeks.Yuki lifted her free hand and wiped Mayu's tears away, then she smiled a true smile for Mayu
'My fear of blindness is no more....' her sweet voice whispere as she kissed Mayu, a soft a sorrowful kiss.A kiss Mayu wont forget.
5 minutes later they where outside, where the butlers took Rena and Yuki from them and into the limo.Driving away.Their first loves.
Mayu smiled, followed by Jurina while their father looked puzzled at them
'I dont love myself anyme......I am not a narcissist. Iam an obsessed.'
THE END?!
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Gimme 5,6 or 7 reviews and Ill continue! Ill haunt you~................was it interesting or not?!
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what the end!??? :shock:
nooooooooooooooooooooo :stoned:
Rena like Jurina but she loves Yuki :badluck:
Yuki is blind :on speedy:
Yuki doesn't like or love Mayu poor Mayu :gyaaah:
yuuki-chan don't tell me it's the end nooooooo :OMG:
please cantinue :pleeease:
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Heii..noooooo dont end this...!
Pleeeeeeeaseeeee..
I want happy and for mayu and jurina...
Seriously? Rena and yuki dont fall for mayu and juri-chan??
I want moreee
Thank yuukimoko-san...please continue this i beg you!
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! :on blackhole:
you can't end it like this, yuuki-chan!! :frustrated: :OMG: :fainted: :gyaaah:
please continueeeee :pleeease: :mon whine:
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yuukimoko-san I swear in the name of jesus if you stop this fic I will personally start bawling my eyes out! :fainted:
Please continue this fic! :pleeease: :pleeease: :pleeease:
I really love and don't want you to stop. :gyaaah: :gyaaah: :gyaaah:
Please continue please! :gyaaah: :gyaaah: :gyaaah: :fainted:
I'll die if you don't continue. :imdead: :mon cry:
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:pleeease: :pleeease: :pleeease: no dont end it
I need to know more.............. :pleeease: :pleeease: :depressed: :depressed: :depressed:
The tittle said... just a joke... what joke??
The father joke?? so cruel
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Okay~ I got 5 reviews and 3 thanks~!!! XD
that made me happy~ so I will continue some more.......but! I repeat BUT when Yuki and Rena confess, everything its over~!!!!! :P
I got another 3 ideas while rereading my own fic.......and I got excited be my ideas......but I still have another ones to finish.....so Im going to write them down and do them when I finish the others ok?
I also dont know If I ll post anything tomorrow.....cuz Im really putting to learn!You dont want to see me without my laptop right?!
But ill try for all of you to post one chapter......
Bye~
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Aahw. . .*my heart breaks*, but it gives them a less0n of n0t to love only themselves. . .tragic past of yuki and rena. . .*sad*
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO,
please continue, I don't mind if I'll have to wait for the updates, just continue :pleeease: :pleeease: :pleeease: :pleeease:
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I was force to reply!
That's not important, what's important is -->this is a joke right? RIGHT?! :mon scare: :mon scare:
I mean how did it even end up like this in the first place???
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OMG!!!! OMG!!! You have to continue I want to know what will happen!!!!
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'we officialy broke up?'
'yes......they are gone'
'.....I want Baka-Yuki back...'
'...I miss Rena too'
Chapter9: Reverse! I'm obsessed, you are the narcissist (loves her sister..)!
Mayu and Jurina decided to go to Yuki and Rena.They had pleaded and tortured their father for hours for a week, until he give up and decided to visit Yuki and Rena.They wake up at the first hour in the moring and headed for the secret laboratory in the forest ,in another city.
'wahh~ this forest is big! someone could easy be lost here' Jurina said as she and Mayu looked out the windows .
They arrived at the doors and waited for them to open, it was like a mansion, but the other way around, there where a few floors outside and the others in the ground. It was like the mansion was made the other way around.
'ah! Shiro-chan! what brings you here??' a man in his 34 exited the mansion with a few butlers.
'Kai-kun! is good to see you again' Shiro said greeting his old friend
'yes, good to see you' Kai smiled 'so what brings you here? and with your little girls too?'
Shiro sighed 'they want Yuki and Rena back...I explained to them what happened, but they are damn stuborn!'
'hhmmm~ Interesting! So now You want to make Yuki and Rena fall for you two?' Kai smiled at Mayu and Jurina
'yes!'
'then, I think you can stay.'
'yeey~!' Mayu and Juirna hugged each other happy
'but! only for 3 months. If you make them fall in these 3months, then they are yours.If not then you wont try anymore,ok' Kai explained
'yes!'
'then lets enter!'
'.....and that was the spa from the 3 floor in the ground.Well, thats all.' Kai said with a smile after he finished showing them around.
'yes' Jurina said as she continued 'but where are Yuki and Rena's rooms? '
Kai smiled 'hmm~ thats on the next floor under us.'
'even deep?! '
'yes, that is their place, they have there like a house.' Kai turned to them 'want to see them?'
'yes!' Mayu and Jurina said determined.It had been 3 weeks since they last saw them.
'you really did fall for them huh? and to want them back...'
'Yes! When I want something, I get it!' Mayu said annoyed 'and I will have Yukirin.'
'lets see them'
The last floor that was Yuki and Rena'house, was really like a house, or a maze.There where 2 bathrooms, at each end, 3 rooms with beds and everything that looked not used, a kitchen, a big one.And a last room at the end, after some rooms with games and a library.
There was a single door pn a long wall, that was the last room.Kai said that it was Yuki and Rena's room, they slept together.
Kai knoked at the door, waiting for a reply but Mayu become impatiend and moved Kai away to open the door.
'w-wait!' he trye dto shout for her to not open it, that Mayu seems to not know what private means....
She opened the door, the room was seen to be very big from the first time, but inside was completly dark.Mayu opened the light beside the door and the room was iluminated.It was a paceful room, everything seemed in his place and with many colors.At a far end on the oposite wall, was a big bed, and in the bed where the two girls they where sarching for.
They got closer to the said bed and looked at the girls. Rena was hugging Yuki around the wrist, with her head on Yuki's right shoulder,while Yuki was sleeping calmly under Rena, her eyes where binded and bandaged with white.
Rena moaned a little and moved under the covers, sitting up a bit and rubbing her eyes with a hand.
'cute....' Jurina whispered as she blushed a little.
Rena looked up and scrmed surprised, jumping on Yuki and hugging her tightly.Yuki wake up as well and in a mere second she was up with a sword at Jurina's neck.
Jurina screamed and jumoped away
'calm down Yuki. ' Kai smiled and turned to Rena 'Rena, Mayu and Jurina wanted to see you two again so they some and we made a deal.They will be staying with us for three months.Please tell Yuki to calm down.'
Rena calmed down and after another look at the two, she looked at Yuki and started whispering words in her ear.Yuki calmed and put the sword back in her place ,after turning to them again.
'good morning' and she exited the room.
'excuse Yukirin, she is not always a morning person, and she is surprised probably' Rena smiled at them getting off the bed 'I didnt really thought that you will come after us even knowing that we dont love you'
'yes, neither did we know that we will fall for you two at the begining' Mayu said sad because Yuki had ignored her once again, but she needs to remember tat Yuki cant see her.
Rena smiled kindly 'then, shall we have breakfast?'
One hour later they where all eating, the silence was for some uncomfortable and for others good.Mayu was looking at Yuki as she ate ,somethime Rena would turn to her and feed her.Jurina was also looking at Rena but discretly, and when their eyes would meet she would blush and look somewhere else.
'you know......I am a little happy to see you two again.It was a little too silent without you.' Rena said with a smiled as she wiped Yuki's mouth .
'hhaaa......We missed you two' Jurina whispered smiling sadly, Rena smiled and turned to Mayu 'what do you say Mayuyu?'
Mayu turned to her for a second before moving back to look at Yuki 'lets play a game'
Yuki lifted her head up at the word game '....what's the game?'
Mayu almost melted inside after hearing Yuki's sweet voice, then smirked 'the same as always'
Yuki didnt say anything 'the change? the game is named Chance. how will you name it?' she said after a while
Mayu smirked more
'Reverse'
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I have one hour before they take my laptop. Hope I learn something without it....Ill try to write another chapter but I wont probably finish it.
REVIEW~!
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Poor Mayu! :cry:
Just want to say that!
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gambare Mayu! gambare Jurina! fight oh! fight oh! fight oh! :onioncheer:
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Yei!
This is interesting! Reverse game...
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WOW. :cool2:
Look at these updates. I just came back to check and see if you have updated...only to see that several chapters have been updated!
:onioncheer: YAY~! Thank you so much, Yuukimoko-san! I really REALLY love this fic of yours! It's just so lovely!
And wow... the revelation about the ravens' past. It's so cruel, but I still like it! :on GJ: I mean, because of it, they managed to stop Mayuyu and Jurina from only loving themselves! It is so cool!
I do feel bad for Mayuyu, but I since there's YukiRena here...Maybe let her suffer more? :glasses: Nantene~ :hiakhiakhiak:
Maybe...maybe not? Saa~
I can't wait for your next update, Yuukimoko-san! This REVERSE game sounds interesting, and I know that it'll be amusing like the previous chapters before it!
Please update soon! :on GJ:
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Thanx! for continuing this fic. . .and now its reverse. . .goodluck mayu and jurina! Make them fall for you. . .
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Ahhh reverse mode on! :ding:
Gambate Mayuyu, Jurina! :onioncheer:
I hope you guys win! :nya:
Ah what a great chapter. :luvluv2:
Please update soon! :luvluv1:
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I just didn't onl for a few days and you updated a new fic????? Even up to chapter 9 lolol
Btw good story xDDDD I was so shocked when finish chapter 8 lol, who'd know Yuki and Rena are lovers xD
Im glad to see you continued, but if you ended in chapter8 is still ok, I'm really satisfied xp
And yes, I support Yuki and Rena in this fic, even I'm Mayuki shipper :p
Thank you, i love it XD
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I was so shock! What a twist!! You really make it good! Interesting storyline in so many way XD
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I'm with you Mayuyu and Jurina don't give up!!!!
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'Love has no limits huh....'
'yes, Rena and Yuki love each other even if they are sisters....'
'...I want to kidnap Yukirin...'
'....'
'...then rape her..'
'....'
'then chain her to me, put a collar on her neck with shocks when she doesnt listen to me, then to make her take my virginity ,then eat chocolate from my body, then suck like a kid from her amasing chest, then embrass her in front of her sister, then mak-------'
'.....Mayu.....I didnt need to know...'
Chapter 10: Not away for a second?!
The first day was supposed to be calm, Yuki and Rena hoping that the two wont start from the first day as they wanted to enjoy each others company a little more before something happens.But these where just their hopes, because at 8 o'clock in the morning Mayu and Jurina started knoking at their door.
Rena groaned as she sat up from her position on Yuki and opened the door ready to shout at them or tell them to leave.But in the instant she opened a little the door she was almost hit in the face with the door, Jurina caught her while Mayu, the one that pushed the door walked to the bed silently.
Mayu walked to where Yuki was sleeping , she reached out and stroked her cheek softly then smiled and kissed forehead.
'hey---' Rena was about to shout something to Mayu ,how did the thing Rena does usually but stoped when she felt Jurina kiss her on the cheeek.
'good moring Rena~' Jurina said with a smile as she took Rena's hand in hers, Rena blushed a little
Mayu tried her luck and leaned to capture Yuki's lips but was stoped by a sudden movement .Mayu blinked a few times and found herself with the back on the bed and Yuki over her.
'Rena....' Yuki whispered lovingly and stroked Mayu's cheek
Mayu smiled sadly knowing that Yuki thinks she is Rena but sayed still seeing Yuki bend down for a kiss.She wanted to feel Yukis sweet and intoxicating lips again....
'w-wait!' Rena's shout made Yuki stop.Yuki stroked Mayu's cheek again and moved her hands down to her chest, she squeezed her left one a little yearning a moan from Mayu.
Mayu blinked again.Yuki wasnt there anymore, she was holding Kissing monster Jurina away from Rena. Mayu almost cursed, if Jurina waited a little more before try to kiss Rena on the lips then Yuki would have kissed her!
But still, she felt Yukis hand on her chest......it was wonderful! Mayu's smiled droped again when she remembered that Yuki only did that to compare Rena's chest with hers........
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Mayu know that she should wait until Yuki could see again , so she could seduce her.But having her not seeing was fun too, she could replace Rena and feed Yuki ,when Jurina took Rena to eat in another room at breakfast ,and that made her happy.But she couldnt talk or lets Yuki touch her too much or she will find out.
After breakfast, Mayu and Jurina retreated to think next moves and plans when Rena come in the room enraged.Rena took Yuki to another room too, to talk about these rats and their plans.
'Yuuu~ki! Mayu and Jurina are trying to take us away from each other!' Rena said hugging Yuki
Yuki hugged back 'how so? wherent we together at breakfast?I didnt heard them at all'
True, Yuki could only use her touch and hearing to locate everything.
Rena sighed 'I wasnt at breakfast with you! Mayu-rat was! she switched places when Jurina took me away.....'
'oh! so thats why I heard giggling beside me......' Yuki pulled back and kissed Rena on the lips and rubbed their noses together.It was a act Yuki loved to do,feeling the closeness and warmth.
'Yuki......' Rena give Yuki a short kiss before saying 'how about we hold hands all day? like that if Jurina tryes to take me away again you will feel it and when Mayu tries to switch with me I can tell you'
'good idea, my dear~' Yuki smield softly and Rena blushed.
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And so was it, Yuki and Rena hold hands all day, destroying Mayu and Jurina's plans.They entered in a room holding hands, they ate holding hands,they even entered the bathroom together ,Yuki insisted and Rena was blushing madly even if she know Yuki couldnt see her but still! holding her hands while she was in the bathroom hardest....and at the end of the day they took a bath together.
Jurina was sad, because everytime she tryed coming closer to Rena,she would make a sign to Yuki and Yuki would stop her.
Mayu was mad, very mad. She couldnt touch ,talk and even stare at Yuki! Rena was watching her every move.
Mayu decided.They needed rules.
The next day at breakfast she talked.
'we need rules.' she said simply
Rena frowned, while Yuki smiled 'I know youll say that sooner or later..'
Mayu blushed but continued 'r--' but stoped when Yuki talked again
'but can you decide them after I take off the bandages? '
Mayu frowned 'when?'
'the day after tomorrow'
Mayu thinked a little 'fine, but tomorrow you two have to spend the day with us, and not ignore us like today.'
'sounds fine' Yuki smiled
'and no holding hands this much!you wherent away from each other even a second!?'
'yes yess~'
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It's kinda really hard how could they fall in love :badluck:
I think it's impossible :fainted:
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A~ even I ship WMatsui but seeing Jurina and Mayu tried to break up a happy couple to have them for themselves is just not right :sigh: in the end! Hope that everyone will happy though
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Aww poor Mayuyu! :fainted:
Smart plan Rena very smart plan. :hehehe:
Ah it's going to be hard to get Rena and Yukirin to fall in love with Jurina and Mayuyu. :depressed:
Keep it up you two! Gambate! :onioncheer:
Please update soon! :farofflook:
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Yuki and Rena are too cute~
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Yuki and Rena are so cute xD
Things will be more fun when Yuki takes the bandages off >:]
Pls more, and thank you for updating
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haha rena is just so smart! :hehehe:
poor yukirin she couldn't see :mon waterworks:
good luck, mayuyu n jurina! :mon blowhorn: :mon yeah:
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am i the only one want yuki and rena be together? XD
but i also want mayu and ju be happy... :(
arghhhhh :banghead: :banghead: .....so hard to make everyone happy, :cry: but yuki and rena so sweet together :wub: and..and... :panic:
i dont know anymore :O
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Ah. . .mayu and jurina. .are getting obsessed now. .i'm patiently waiting of what will be the results of their obsessions^^. . .
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I'm feeling sorry for Mayuyu and Jurina.
I don't want to see them suffer :pleeease:
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it's just a matter of time right ? but YukiRena is cute too =]]
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I will support you mayu and jurina..
good luck rape yukirin.. haha
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'...my chances to make Rena fall for me are 45 from 100.When I will have 50 from 100, Rena will start loving me.Iam happy for that, but Iam sad. Rena is happy with Yuki......she can be happy with me, but ,......Mayu's chance with Yuki is 30 from 100......'
Special Chapter: charActer
I hope I didnt burn her skin when I thouched her for the first time.....or was she touching me? The burning sensation was making my head dizzy and could think for a few moments.In that moment I wanted to hid my face.......I smile as I remember, I smile stupidly.
With a curious glace, insatiable throat. The happyness you felt then , troubles me even now. Your shining eyes where capturing me without knowing.That gaze burnt my insincere heart.
I hope one day you'll know how to engage and stop this infernal machine that beats in my chest. The burning and uncontrolable emotions come from it , and I will soon want to destroy you.
You said you like me.........and I know noe that its true.But I love you and want you to love me back.Because......my eyes won't be restricted to your clothes.....
Unique barriers to our feelings, how much I want to transform yours in love.
The face I always show, a happy smile, that would become crazy if you look closer, are what restricts me from seeing your burnt body withoout clothes.
I shout inside and out 'Look at me, love me, embrace me' ! I will tear apart that blind master of yours and become your new one.
I take your hand and refuse to lets go!
My sister.....is not so good as me......inside , she is inside more teared apart than me.Inside her chest.....that machine will stop someday, sooner that it should.Her weak heart that suddenly seeks for your master will stop surely........
If I could tear apart this mask I wear, the saddness would finally show.But I continue to wear it in hope someone will stop this machine inside me before the one inside my sister stops.I want to by sacrified for her, but before that, I want to have you for a moment at least.
Your smile is breaking me......
Once you fall , you wont be able to leave this trap anymore.....I will be the master how controls you,your heart and body!
I put my mask back after a screaming night, I become soaked with this honey.......but nobody taught me these sweet words, that I now want to say to you and you to me.They come from my heart.
My body moves nervously , as if to hide my feelings.I want to convince myself to forget all of this, but then I saw your smile and the machine starts again.I dry my tears to not burn you again......
The sweet piano plays......your master is playing it.I wonder.....if I know how to play it, would my chances become 50 from 100?
There is a tin line between Like and Love.
Both ,you and I, are lost into a maze, and, so are my sister and your master.Can they ever find the other end without you entering between them?
As we walk ,past each other ,we separe but we dont stay.
Prisoners of a picture! thats what all of us ,in this maze, are. That I burn. tear away, and tear up....Running away from our daily lives, we enter this maze as you made us fall first.....
I left the bird off its nest........that was the sign that..... 'I dont love myself anymore'........whose precious name was
charActer
...just what is this burning machine...?
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This is sorry for not updating today but my parents took my laptop and phone so I could learn......
No mysteres :
The one talking is: Jurina
Her sister : Mayu
The one she was captured be :Rena
Rena's master : Yuki.
I wont update tomorrow too probably......but Ill still try at least something...
REVIEW!!!!!
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Wah what a great chapter! :farofflook:
Poor Jurina, she's in so much pain right now! :fainted:
If I could I would just run over and hug her and never let go. :on gay:
Please update soon! :gyaaah:
Also, i made that OS you wanted of mayurena. :hee:
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So sad.. :fainted:
Jurina let think aggressively like your sister
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I sympathize jurina. . .i have faith in you. .fight!. .nice update. . .
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Your parents are so cruel T_T
Jurina don't give up!!!
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'I want.....your heart.....'
'..'
'give it.....to 'me' '
'...'I' will never love you....'
'...you are so cruel.....there is no need to love me.....just to be mine...'
Last chapter: Sudden end of everything
'Mayu's POV*
No matter how much I try.....I will not have you will I ?
Its been a month and a half since you can see...and things wherent easy.I couldnt do anything anymore, the more I tryed the more you would dislike me.
So I decided to do the last thing I can to have you....as the end is coming near.
Jurina did it, she made Rena fall for her totaly. With sweet words , flowers, kisses......she was such a romantic.And Rena fell for everything....but she still hadnt told you......but I believe you alredy know......because you had become more protective and now Rena cant leave your side anymore.....
But what about me......? why am I the one is truly hurting the most in this? why am I punished for things I didnt do? ...what did I do to get this....this failure in love?
First to fall in love with myself......then with someone that triked me.........and the end is coming near, for both our leaves and my weak heart.....
My heart is very weak......I believe that at the end of this month when you will say no to my question ,I will die. But thats fine, I dont want to love another.....only you
and for that I will die.....and leave you alone......
TO BY CONTINUED! (MAYBE....)
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WAIT!!! YOU CAN'T END LIKE THIS!!! I WANT MORE!! :OMG:
YOU NEED TO EXPLAIN THE THINGS, HOW RENA SUDDEN FALL IN LOVE AND WHAT HAPPENED!! :OMG:
CONTINUE PLEASE!!!!!! :pleeease:
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EH?!!!! No!!! Mayu don't die!!!
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I see many author is affected by this team shuffle... :sweatdrop:
No please don't end it like this "onegai"
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Oh. .mayu is hopeless. . .h0w sad. . .rena and jurina are ok now. . .
uh. .i have team shuffle effect too. .why?! That's all i'm thinking since last night. .why?!
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please...if mayu died...she will died in a long chapter yuukimoko-san....not this short....LOL
maybe you got the shuffle effect like me....im not in the mood on my work....my friends even call me...im like someone who lost a big bet...LOL
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'love is not simple, sometimes is very hurtful, or just happy.....but hawever it is, it always end bad.....so I want to try everything.Because at the end someone must be there for me too.I love Rena, but in the end she is my sister, I wont force her in nothing.I will lets her have hawever she wants......and I too have someone I like ,someone that snaked into my heart and took it.I will give it a try.....'
Sudden end!!
A few days later after Mayu's confessin to us, (last strange and short chapter~) Mayu had become distant, knowing that she wont be loved.....the end was coming too fast, so she could at least think show no interest .Her blank face was scarying Jurina who know that something will happen, and she will give her heart to Mayu without regrets. She will dave her sister, even if it means she will die.
On the other end, Rena was fightined.....she didnt know how to tell her sister and actual lover that she loves someone else and wants them to break up! Rena was sure that Yuki would lose her sight, Yuki will go mad and will do something bad....it was hurting Rena, she still loved her sister even if she wasnt in love with her.
As for Yuki.....well, that I dont know what to tell you, so lets wait and see?
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'nee, Yukirin...' Rena said timidly and scared.She decided that it was time, or she would become too scared to do it anymore.
They all where sitting at a table eating dinner, Kai, Mayu,Jurina,Rena and Yuki.
Rena though it was a right time, so she went for it.But when she said the first words to atract her sisters attention she started trembling and put her hands to her chest.She felt like crying! after so many years of being together, just like that a simple game could make her fall for Jurina's sweet words! She cant leave Yuki alone even if they break up, she cant! Yuki is still her most important person beside Jurina.
'...yes?' Yuki said but didnt turn to look at Rena, making her feel a little more confortable that she couldnt see these sad and hurt eyes that could break her....
'...I wanted to tell you something....b-but, it doesnt matter,forget it!' Rena said shaking as she give up suddeny.She just couldnt do that to her sweet ,gentle, lovely sister!!!
'no....its not nothing. Say what you wanted to say Rena...' Yuki turned to Rena, Rena didnt turn to look at her.
Mayu ,Jurina and Kai where looking at them silenty.Jurina know what Rena wanted to say, Mayu stared blankly thinking about something else not wanting to get hurt , while Kai was watching with interes at them.
Yuki seeing that Rena wont do anything, took her chin with a hand and kissed her .It felt good, but Yuki felt a taste, Jurina's taste on Rena's lips.......Rena liked the kiss but she was scared....truly scared.
Yuki broke the kiss, sucking the saliva that united their lips together and looked in Rena's eyes serious.Rena was on the verge of crying.
'Kai-papa....can we have a little party tonight? I would like to swing this princess one last time. I will be your master tonight, my lovely puppet......Ill set you free tomorrow.'
Not waiting for a response from neither Kai or Rena ,Yuki sat up and walked out the room.
Jurina was happy but worryed, Kai was still interested while Mayu had wake up from her daydream when she saw Yuki kiss Rena and then listened......Yuki will set Rena free, then Yuki would be free too.It was a chance?
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Later ,at dawn when the sun was leaving ,and the beautiful moon was taking the stage all for herself.When the stars took the clouds places and populated the beautiful dark blue of the univers.Inside a upside-down mansion the party light invaded the darkness.Maids where not maids anymore, butlers where not butlers anymore, they where ladyes and mistress. All of them dancing and drinking,it was a party night, a crazy night.There where people invited from the city, old friends or just persons they know.
The centre of this all, the mistress of the mansion where .....where were they?
Jurina is a suit and a tie,hair in a ponytail, was trying to calm down a worryied Rena ,in a beautiful dress that made her look stunning. They looked like a couple, they where good for each other, bith waiting for Yuki to come and take Rena for a last night of being lovers.....
Kai was just sitting and waiting. it was really entertaiming him.
Mayu was waiting with interes too, would she finally have Yuki after this last night with Rena or it was just Jurina and Rena being happy together leaving her alone?
Mayu's stunning presence captured a lot of the man at the party but Mayu just ignored them, she loved Yuki too much, it was just a game of waiting now so she decided to stay still and wait for the answer the next day.No man could seduce her, only Yuki could.
The door opened, and Yuki entered the big room.She wore a suit and tie like Jurina, and hair in a ponytail.She looked amasing, every lady looking at her like she was a prey, Mayu doing the same.But they all know the reason this party was held tonight so they tryed to stop themselfes from doing something stupid and enrage the blind prince like girl.
Jurina and Rena saw Yuki, Jurina leaved Rena giving her a smile and moving beside the sad Mayu,holding her sisters hand reasuring...
Yuki aproached Rena and smiled 'you look stunning tonight,Rena-chan. You always look stunning...'
Rena blushed 't-thank you......you look good to Yuki-chan'
Yuki smiled and extended her hand 'then, would you give me this dance, princess?'
Rena took the hand and danced.They had a perfect harmony, a prince and a princess.They looked perfect together....if only they wherent sisters....
A few dances had gone in the wind, as they continued to dance.The people around them changed, leaved and looked at them.
Yuki whispered in Rena's ear softly 'Rena.....will you sing me your song please? I want to heard it one last time as your master.....'
Rena smiled 'I will do as you please my master....'
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Rena took some mic that was placed around her ear so it could stay without needing to hold it, after all her night with Yuki wasnt over, they would still dance.
She aproache Yuki how was smiling back at her
'Shall we dance?'
Yuki took Rena in her hands for a second before parting and just holding her hand.
They gazed at wach other as Rena singed her song, a crazy song that she first sang when she wake up and saw Yuki.
'I'm just a gadget, a marionette
Just pull the string to make me laugh'
Rena smiled at Yuki and took a step back. Around them everyone stoped to watch with curiosity.
'My legs are artificial,but
I can dance with them so well'
Rena made a dance poses and moved around Yuki.
'How about waltz?
I've been practicing'
Rena started dancing waltz around Yuki, she was feeling happy.Happy to sing this crazy song again.Yuki smiled gently at Rena.
'Now pull the string to operate
Lets me see that you can handle me well'
Yuki took Rena's hand and they started dancing around the now empty dance floor.
'Yes, it depends on you'
Rena stroked Yuki's cheek with a hand
'Turn,turn, my legs're waving
Swing, swing, spherical joints
Operate me well
And lets me dance, won't you?'
The two danced as there was no one in the world, just them together,in this one last night.
'Some day ,Ill dance with these legs
With you pulling the string
I;m a moving gadget,a gimmick-mimic-puppet
Which cant do anything alone'right?'
Rena smiled sadly, she couldnt do anything alone.....not confess,not say 'i LOVE YOU' not anything....
A step back,one forward.A slow dance, a crazy one.
Rena loved dancing.......
'Ill follow you will
When my legs start to move ,
I will be a princess'
In the crowd Jurina whispered 'My princess' while Yuki did the same in front of Rena
The song continued and with every step, Rena become crazyer.This song was after all made when she was crazy,on a bed unable to move and pleading a sleeping Yuki to wake up and manipulate her.
'Some day, my legs will start moving
God told me so'
Rena cryed, tears of happyness and sadness.As she smiled with love at Yuki.
'You can pull the sinister string
And humanize me, right?'
Rena kissed Yuki , a short but sweet kiss
'I am a genuine puppet
I want your unconditional love'
Another kiss.....and another, the taste was addicting.They where addicted to each other, but everything needed to end tonight.
'I;m not human at all
Just a gadget-puppet'
The song ended, before Rena would lose her mind and go crazy about it.But she become crazy about Yuki, she needed her right then.
'...take me Yuki.....
I want to give you my virginity as a break up present....'
Yuki smiled sadly.
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Jurina and Mayu watched from a distance as Yuki and Rena left the room.
'tomorrow....ill have an answer tomorrow..; Mayu whispered as tears fell down her cheeks.She felt her heart hurt and started breathing a lot harder.
Jurina embreced Mayu and walked to their room. For them it had been a strange night with many emotions.
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Inside Yuki and Rena 's room things where .....hot? it was hard to breath, as they both striped to nothing.
Rena sitted with her back on the bed, Yuki sat on top of her.
'are,.....you sure you should give it to me?' Yuki asked one last time before enchaining her lust for her sister....
'Iam sure.....I am your tonight Yuki..' Rena smiled and took Yuki's cheeks in hers
They started kissing and groping each other like the end of the wourld.
'The God shall sleep for tonight...' Yuki's voice echoed it the night as the two sisters showed their love for each other one last time, in this sinful night....
(then Yuki s*** on Rena's **** and go----------........huh? Why I cant sontinue my first smut?! ahh~ I forgot that I cant put it here......
Forgive me and lets move one....)
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The next moring Yuki and Rena where sleeping hugging each other naked.It was somehow.......refreshing?
They entered the room where everyone was waiting to eat breakfast(Mayu,Juri,Kai)
All waiting to see what will happen now.
Rena aproached Jurina boldly and kissed her.Jurina was shocked at first but kissed back.
'....I am your now....' Rena blushed as she whispered these words in Jurina's ear.
Jurina smiled sadnly 'for now until I will die...'
'what?' Rena parted shocked
'....if Your sister will refuse Mayu's love then Mayu will die from her weak hear......I will give her mine'
Rena cryed as she heard these words, she know she couldnt do anything but hope Yuki will accept Yuki's love.
They eat breakfast silently, Mayu thinking about her rejection that will come .Jurina worrying with Rena and Yuki....Yuki planning something.
Yuki walked out of the room earlier saying that she has something to do and no one could ask what...
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At dawn Mayu walked around the mansion, Yuki hadnt been seen all day.It was like she disappeared, like she just ran away.
Mayu felt like braking, she entered a terase and walked around the inside garden filled with roses and a sweet scent.
She walked until the other end, she shocked saw Yuki there sitting on a chair no emotions on her face...
Mayu aproached her
'Yuki?'
Yuki smiled suddenly ,her eyes still closed.
'I lost it again.....'
Mayu looked sad at her, she was talking about her eyes
'But I realized something ......' Yuki sat up and aproached Mayu, taking her hand and kissing the back of it....
A song started, and Yuki sang with the melody, this was her crazy song....
'All traces of color from distant days have faded,
and day by day all shapes rot away.
Still as beautiful as the bright sun, hands outstretched, but unable to feel'
Yuki hugged Mayu and started dancing slowly.
'Even should I chase the colors fading away,
wont they someday be erased?'
Yuki moved away and looked at Mayu without seeing
'but ....I'm not afraid of blindness anymore...' Yuki kissed Mayu with love.
Mayu was shoked, was her dream really becoming reallity?
They parted
'would you be the sun of my darkness Mayuyu?' Yuki asked as one of her eyes started brighting up and seeing.
Mayu cryed silently with a smile, it was truly happening! she really did make Yuki fall for her.....or did dhe really love her from the start? This was a mistery
'yes, My blind master....'
T-H-E E-N-D!!!!!!!!!!!
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I know its kinda lame but I must go to sleep and I couldnt make corrections or changes, and it didnt end up like I wanted it to but Its still good.Hope you enjoyed it and leave me REVIEW~~
The songs are from Vocaloid......dont remember right now the names.......
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YEZZZZZZZZ
I'm still not satisfied though. But u can leave it at that ~
Did Yuki really love Mayu ?
What happened to Juri and Rena ?
Lol~ I was expecting MayuxJuri here xD
But anyway, nice ! End already oh yeeeaaah
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....You are right ChuuuPuffss...
I think Ill do one more chapter, but later!
Okay? Okay! hope that chapter will answer some questions.....
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Wah great ending! :farofflook:
But wait you're doing one more chapter? Yay! :luvluv2:
I'm so happy! :shy2: :shy2:
Ne now that this one is done, does that mean we'll get to start ours soon? :dunno:
Haha please update soon! :nya:
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agh! arleady the end so fast :shock:
I loved it's a lovely chapter :shy1:
aah you're going to make extra chapter good idea I want to know whta will happen after :shy2: :luvluv2:
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Wouhou!!!! Great!!!
Yuki/Rena Oh~
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Every story has it's end right?. . .i can't describe my feeling while reading this. . .i'm happy,i'm sad? I don't know. . .still it's an amazing fic yuukimoko-san! It's n0t an ordinary lüv st0ry. .whew!
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Neh...i have to say something...I DONT LIKE THE ENDING!!!!!!!!!!! why don't you just let it ends at chapter 8 TT.TT
Mayu and Jurina would be very lamentable but Yuki and Rena were....they have been experienced a lot of things, always be together... and now you teared them apart??
I don't know how to explain my feeling right now
It's a very good story, thank you...
Btw, i didn't know you listening to Vocaloid :]
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'This was a game too! did she really think I would love her? she is cute,inteligent and lovable but love doesnt juat appear! It comes with time.....and they took Rena away from me......I should just kill them...'
Epilogue
A year after everything, they setled down. They moved back at Mayu and Jurina's home, leaving Kai alone.Jurina and Rena where happy together being all lovely dovely every day, they truly loved each other. But Rena would still remain private with Yuki.....the reason is wnknow. The other didnt really question it very much, as they where sisters.
Mayu was happy with Yuki, even thought she would be the one to become lovely over Yuki, Yuki smiled and did as she wanted.Mayu felt spoiled ,but at a moment she felt like Yuki was just a puppet.......in the true meaning. Sitting on a chair all day with a smile, it was like her time to day had come.A moment of love....
Mayu had waned a moment of love and in a night she discovered that this was it.This year full of joy with them all.She had Yuki, Jurina had Rena.,they where happy with their father and Kai was ...Kai? something had been strange about it .....and this year of love , what was it?
was it a ...illusion?! just what was it?
The things here where too perfect......happy familly, cool friends, easy school, and the love of her life with her.....
Things where good.....too good.
She had never seen it like this before....just what was this all?
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On a clear night sky ,Mayu was sitting on Yuki's lap outside on a chair.It was a beautiful clear sky, even the stars where few.
Mayu smiled as she hugged Yuki close and hided her face in her neck.It was too beautiful too be true......
'ne, you know that I care about you right Mayu..?' Yuki asked with a smile
'yes.....I love you too...'
'then dont you want to get out? to the real world? Ill see you off...' Mayu broke the hug and looked at Yuki surprised
'w-what do you mean? this is the real world, Yukirin!'
'......is it?' Yuki smiled sadly at Mayu 'think about it and tell me again tomorrow....'
Yuki took Mayu in her arms and carryed her to bed where Mayu started thinking about what was Yuki talking about.
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What is Yukirin talking about....? didn she go crazy?
...no. Yukirin has a high IQ .....and only her eyes have problems....
these beautiful eyes in witch I only once saw the truth.....only once?
then when she told me she loved me of course! she said she loved me......wait, she said she loved me?
Yuki never said 'I love you'! she never said that.....she only asqed if I would be her sun....
the sun....?
I get out the bed and look out the window.
Its night so there is the moon......the moon usualy mades everything dark and hiddes the truth......
The sun is the one which should everything, the truth. So I am Yukirin's truth?
That means that I should be able to see everything for her, to see the truth....
She never said that she loves me.........did she only want me to find something out?
But what was it?
I look up at the sky.....Its so clear,.....I look at the moon and dont remove my eyes off.
As I look at the moon, I can see a light that shouldnt be there.......I look more and my eyes widen as I see a ceiling....a ceiling?
I start to scream. That ceiling is not the moon, the moon had disappeared and was replace with a place unknow to me.
I feel a hand on my shoulder and Yuki hugs me......I am crying.Just what was that?
What was that thing I saw? was that,......what Yuki wanted to show me?
I fall asleep in Yukis hands as I whisper 'tomorrow........is the last one?'
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The next day everything was like the usual. I wake up in Yuki's arms, warm and reasuring but suddenly transparet....
We had breakfast with Jurina and Rena.They looked happy, and I smiled.
'ne Mayu? how about we go visit mother today? its been some time and I want to see mama...' Jurina says looking at me.
I smiled 'sure sure~ I want to see mama to---mama?.....but mama is not death....' I whisper the last part, what is going on?
'what do you mean Mayu? Mama died 4 years ago.....ohh, how I miss her' father says, but why? mama didnt die!
Mama was home when we had that char acci------accident? car !
I remember something, we where in a car when it jumped out the street and in the ocean!.....but w-what is going on?
....wasnt I supposed to be death?
......now that I think about it......I dont remember anything about what happened last year....nothing....
this...this is not real? why!?!?!
Yuki turns to me , my shocked face with tears on my cheeks made her smile....
why is she smiling?!
She takes my hand and I look in her eyes......I can see truth in them!
'can you see the truth now, my sun?' she smiles warmly at me......what does she mean?
She sitts up and takes me with her
'we will eat a litter later if you dont mind' She says and the other smile
we walk to our room where she makes me sit in her lap again and looks outside
There was the sun.....a clear sky with the sun
'that sun......is a fake' she whispers and I look at the sun too. It is just the sun and nothing more....
'that is a sun I cant see......but when I look at you, I can see.I can see the real sun, you are my sun....'Yuki kisses me softly
Its warm but transparent....
'that was a fake kiss.....the warmth is not there as you see, because we didnt really kiss.' Yuki smiles at me, I bring my hand and feel my lips
'but I can feel my lips.....' I reach out and touch hers.....the are not warm like I thousht when we kissed
'you are real, while I am not.....'
I cry , she is real! she is! I dont want to believe this!!
Whatever is this, I dont want to awake up!!
'lets me awake you up ,wont you?' you ask and kiss me again without waiting for a answer..
You made love to me.Took my virginity. And at the end ,said for the first time the words I never heard from you...
'I love you...'
Your whispering voice echoes in my mind as I slowly wake up from a dream like state....
You are not beside me, your warmth is not here...
I sit up and look aroud.
What is this place? its all white......
A white room. Beside the place I am is another bed.....the is Jurina how sleeps pacefuly with a smile and conected to machines...
I take off the machines connected to me and sit up.My body , I cant move it very well, its like it have been sleeping until the time Yuki made love to me....
Where is Yuki....and Rena?
The room is completly white.....
Where is my mother? she was never in the room that ended in the ocean.....she was home with my two little sisters.
My little sisters.......Yuki and Rena.....
Yuki and Rena?!
Yuki and Rena where my sisters.....in the real world?
In my dream world they where mine and Jurina's lovers....
They have been from the start our sisters......
I touch a wall and it disappears in a window glass..
I look shocked on the other side......
Scientists........mother......father.......Rena.......and Yuki......
They where there.
Mother was hugging Yuki and Rena close. Father was connected to machines like Jurina and I ....
I look and see Rena...in a moving chair.......a sad broken smile
She never got real feets......she had them but sacrificed them so Jurina would live.....
Yuki.....my Yuki......My little sister Yuki.....had bandages on her eyes
She sacrificed her eyes for me
The truth is hurting so much...
we have been living in a dream......a illusion
The scientins, the guvernment and others did tests on us.....
This was the truth.The true light didnt exist because there was no sun in this room.Only the lights always turned on.
They sacrificed so we would live.But we just drifed in a different time of death, dream.
Jurina fell in love with Rena ,one of our little sisters from reality.
Mother was death in our dream, she was the one that had an ccident with the car.....
Father was awake and with us, here he is sleeping an eternity.
And I fell for Yuki, the little sister I always loved more than I should.....
I, Watanabe Mayu, was in reality 20.Jurina 19. Rena 17.Yuki 17.
......I cry....
They finally saw me.....
......but the one I loved ...the one that wake me up .....didnt see me.....
....because her eyes where seeing her.
I had Yuki's eyes.
THE END.
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I just comed back from my first two exams! I have a headache and I must learn to other two now, so leave me a reaview so I can learn faster and come back to write more fics~~~~
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I put a sad end because I know Playzgirl would come and say that she didnt like the end.....so I wanted to sattisfy her !.....and some of you!
expect me soon with other new colaboration and fics!!!
Yuuki was here!!!!!
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To be honest, I really didn't like the ending.
Thats all I can say
Im sorry if it offended you in a way but its just coz Acchan is killing me ;A;
Poor Mayu....
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Wow this is so so so good yuukimoko, u made another twist at the end and I was surprised again.
I really have nothing to say this time >< sr that I made u wrote another chapter...I have to let you know that this one amazing, thank you a lot for writing such a excellent fic
I'm waiting for ur new works,...btw is this the real ending? U always ended and continued, ended and continued, ended and continued, i don't know which one is real anymore .___.
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eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeh :shock: :stoned: :OMG:
what is this end I was watching acchan graduation I was really sad all was crying Yuki mo Mayu mo :fainted:
and what is this yuuki-chan what is this it's not an end :frustrated:
Jurina still in coma :badluck:
Yuki and Rena are their sisters :on cloudeye:
Yuki and Rena sacrefited for their older sisters Mayu and Jurina :gyaaah: :gyaaah: :gyaaah: :gyaaah:
It's really a sad day today I cried so much today :on speedy:
but the end it's not clear yuuki-chan :fever:
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T_T Sad so sad T_T
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So Sad
Poor Rena and Yuki
So all of them were a dream
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:shocked OH MY GAD! This is so twisted!
:panic: What is going on? You made my brain messed up!
Waaaa! The end :shocked Wow it's really....super!
The ending was so unexpected that I really liked it! :thumbsup
Thank you for such a twisted/awesome fic!
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:
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Wahhh! What a great ending! :farofflook:
The twist really threw me off. :OMG:
I read this right after watching Acchan's graduation. :fainted:
I started crying like crazy. :gyaaah:
Thank you for the lovely story! :luvluv1:
Look forward to seeing more from you! :byebye:
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Already finish
yeyeye Im so late here..
Just so busy..
Im reading this today on my free time..
Gotta edit my comment later *winks*
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this is too sad. T__T mayukiiiii :pleeease:
thanks, yuuki-chan!
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starts crying....
mayuyu.........sob... yukirin...
such an awesome story..........
....I always feel so sad at the end, but
this was just so touching and wonderful and somehow a void in my heart opens up
that always happens with AKB and stuff,
but......... really god story overall.......
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i just see this fic right now
and read it in one go
i tought it'll be happy but the truth was so sad
guess in real life the truth would never be as like we expected
nice fic anyways :twothumbs
love to see your other story to
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THIS IS SO SAD :'(
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Omg~~ this is so sad :cry:
This is a good fanfic :thumbsup