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Title: (OS) Promise - Wmatsui
Post by: Juribait on August 31, 2012, 01:24:13 AM
I decide to make this OS after see the new PV of SKE: Kiss Datte Hidarikiki, is a other end to the Wmatsui story.
Sorry for the grammar mistakes is short but I hope to you enjoy :3

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Promise

When Everybody leave me, you was there for me.
Even they said bad things about me, you ignored and started to talk to me.
The days that we passed together was the best ones, and before I realized, I have fall for you.
I don’t know why, maybe you kindness or your spirit full of energy make me fall, but this don’t care anymore.
You have fallen for someone else already, and this someone is not me, is our art teacher.
I saw you talking to him and that beautiful smile, I envy him for this, because I know that you will never smile to me in that way.
You ask me to help you to confess to him, and I helped. Even that I don’t wanted, I helped. And you smile, that beautiful smile that I love, but is not the same one when you talk or see him.
I make what you wanted, I took him to you and leave you two alone.
And then I waited, I was with fear but I already know what was gonna happen, your love to him like my love to you is impossible, and then you come to me crying, he reject you, when I saw you crying I remember the day you start to talk to me, I was being bullied and you come to talk to me and encouraged me. But now who was sad was you, I started to cry too and hugged you, my loved one.
I just wanted to make you happy, I just wanted to see your beautiful smile again, later we and some friends decide to go see the lights of city from a little mountain not to far way and then you was smiling again, even with a broken heart, you smiled to me and said thank you. In that moment I make a promise to myself, I’ll do everything to see you happy and I’ll make you fall for me, so then I’ll be able to see you smile to me a much more beautiful and shining way than you smiled to him.
And lucky was able fulfill the promise just some weeks after he reject you, and now you gave to me that smile that I always wanted, that smile that I promise to protect.


~~END~~


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Title: Re: (OS) Promise - Wmatsui
Post by: anonymousdowner on August 31, 2012, 01:37:04 AM
Aww, these were my thoughts exactly too when I watched the pv.

Thanks for putting it into words, I appreciate it ':)

I don't know why they torture us Wmatsui fans like this! 'X(

In real life - Jurina: "I love you Rena-chan~"

                  Rena: "..." Ignores*

In the PVs - Rena: "I love you Jurina!"

                  Jurina: Falls in love with some random girl/guy**

Us Fans    -  (╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻) Flips table*

You see? lol, well I liked the os. Would like to read more of your inspired work  :thumbup
Title: Re: (OS) Promise - Wmatsui
Post by: BbSis on August 31, 2012, 03:56:38 AM
How cute *.*

It was saaad until the last line. I was almost crying when I read the last line and then I smiled =p

I´m a total newbie is this world but I totally go for WMatsui couple o/

thanks for this cute os o/

EDIT: Just watched the Kissu datte hidarikiki and its a shame that the dancing part is not exactaly part of the storyline of the pv hauhau
I wanted to punch Jurina >< how come she fell for that ugly teacher >< At least Rena was on her side *.*

Now I liked your os even more o/
Title: Re: (OS) Promise - Wmatsui
Post by: Wmatsui22 on August 31, 2012, 11:49:16 AM
THANK YOU FOR MAKING WMATSUI :D

PLEASE MAKE ANOTHER ONE..

THANK YOU..
Title: Re: (OS) Promise - Wmatsui
Post by: Dreamstalker on August 31, 2012, 11:42:50 PM
Nice os! It's like i fully understand the story behind that mv. . .i guess the teacher rejected jurina b'c0z he's just afraid to go to jail. .hahah..a jailbait.
I like it juribait san.
Title: Re: (OS) Promise - Wmatsui
Post by: kahem on September 01, 2012, 01:03:24 AM
The prologue is cute~
Title: Re: (OS) Promise - Wmatsui
Post by: Crimson on May 12, 2013, 09:33:10 PM
The-used-to-be-silent-reader coming out to comment /o/

Commenting on old fic won't hurt anybody right :D i hope so..

Juribait-san~ I love how u describe the scene :deco: ur way of writing seem to be sweet for me :cathappy: