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Title: Pandora's Box | Important Announcement!| Oct. 28
Post by: ChuuuPuffss on September 08, 2012, 05:22:16 PM
Hello~ Chuu is here with another fic. But in collab with Creamcracker-san  :cathappy: Since, the both of us like crimes and shit, we decided to do this~

Creamcracker-san is really good with words o.o But now, she has a cold. So, I'll be posting the prologue ~~

The prologue has been made by Creamcracker-san  :grin:

The 1st chapter will be posted a while or so. Since, it's really hard to contact each other. Please wait for us though.

And now, dun du du dun ! ... Here's the prologue :cheers





Love? That’s a funny word and a ridiculous emotion. I forgot that feeling since it already faded a long time ago and was replaced with hate and revenge.

Care? I’ve been living alone since that day. Abandoned by someone, stared by judgemental eyes of people like I’m a monster. I suffered alone, no shoulders that I can lean on, hands that can wipe my tears and a warm hug that will vanish these cold emotions that made me who I am today.

Freedom? My past keeps haunting me and my wounds are still open. Until I can find the answer, until I can finally have my revenge and until this hatred will fade, I can’t free myself from this cage.

That day, and that one mistake made my life a living hell, that day that I will never ever forget, because it made me open my eyes into reality, that the world is full of lies. Strong are the kings and queens and the weak are just mere pawns.

In this tiny dark room of mine, a game will be born. I’ll be the mastermind and these two people who suffered the same fate as me will be my company. A game that will give turmoil to this city, a game that will give value to our existence and a game that you will never want to join.

Plans have been made, the first player has been chosen, and the date has been set. Will it be successful? Can police solve the mystery behind this game or will they end up the same mistake as before?

In this underground website that I made called “The Perfect Crime”, will be the starting point of the game and people who have evil desires are gathered. Accepting the terms and conditions without even thinking the consequences.

Now, In behalf of Wolf and Spider, I, Anopheles will start the game of crime.





Oks~ Deep. Waaay to deep. I'm proud of you, Creamcracker-san ;u;

Liked the prologue ? Reviews are greatly accepted  :deco:
Title: Re: Pandora's Box | Prologue | Welcome to Pandora's Box
Post by: kahem on September 08, 2012, 05:38:37 PM
Sounds really interesting
Can't wait to see what kind of crime you will create hehe
Title: Re: Pandora's Box | Prologue | Welcome to Pandora's Box
Post by: yuukimoko on September 08, 2012, 05:44:54 PM
its really interesting! I cant wait to see what is really happening~

what are the pairs?(Mayuki please)

Please update soon~.......the perfect crime?! I did a one shot with that title~
Title: Re: Pandora's Box | Prologue | Welcome to Pandora's Box
Post by: TakaminaBG on September 08, 2012, 06:01:21 PM
This sounds really interesting!! I hope this fic AtsuMina, or at least AtsuMina moments.  :hiakhiakhiak:
Please update SOON!!!
Title: Re: Pandora's Box | Prologue | Welcome to Pandora's Box
Post by: rhin12 on September 08, 2012, 06:51:21 PM
A collab between chuupuffs and creamcracker  :inlove:  :inlove:

i'm super excited  :cow:

...and i have a strong feeling that it's a MAYUKI fic..  :lol:

maybe mayu is the game master and black yukirin will do the killings..  :P2 hahaha  :peace:
Title: Re: Pandora's Box | Prologue | Welcome to Pandora's Box
Post by: Chanaline on September 08, 2012, 07:01:41 PM
I just want to say it is sound really interesting!! :P

And a collaboration... interesting huhuhu!! what are the pairs? :?
 
Eheh! Continue please!!!!  :thumbup
Title: Re: Pandora's Box | Prologue | Welcome to Pandora's Box
Post by: Megumi on September 08, 2012, 08:59:18 PM
Kyaaaaa! I can't wait for next update!

:kneelbow:
Title: Re: Pandora's Box | Prologue | Welcome to Pandora's Box
Post by: 21stMay on October 27, 2012, 02:57:14 PM
I like how name the title "Pandora's Box" cuz it reminds of my biased KARA heehehe :wub: well please continue :panic:
Title: Re: Pandora's Box | Prologue | Welcome to Pandora's Box
Post by: nori on October 27, 2012, 04:07:38 PM
With a title like "Pandora's Box" and "The perfect Crime" this story looks like its gonna be a really dark and intense  :w00t:
Ideally I'd want some sort of wMatsui or Mayuki but honestly the story looks so good I'm not bothered about what the pairings are XD
Can't wait for the first chapter and please continue it even further  :bow:
Title: Re: Pandora's Box | Prologue | Welcome to Pandora's Box
Post by: White Hawk on October 27, 2012, 05:10:19 PM
The prologue is really interesting!

Quote
I’ll be the mastermind and these two people who suffered the same fate as me will be my company.
So... There are 3 people, right...? Please let it be Mayu, Rena, Yuki..  XD

Please update soon  :)
Title: Re: Pandora's Box | Prologue | Welcome to Pandora's Box
Post by: ChuuuPuffss on October 27, 2012, 05:52:42 PM
Hey, there, guys! its been a long time since the prologue was posted. I think the first chapter will be posted maybe a little bit further from now since Creamcracker-san is a bit busy, I think. We divided the parts of the chapter to equal parts and we get to write a part each. But seems like Creamcracker-san isn't done with her part, yet. So, it would be of great help if you guys would have the patience and wait some more. However, there is a big chance that this fanfic will not continue. All we can do is wait. If this fic will not continue, I would be happy to give this to the hands of an author who can continue this and have big plans... After I get permission from Creamcracker-san lol. Thank you for taking your time in reading.
Title: Re: Pandora's Box | Important Announcement!| Oct. 28
Post by: creamcracker on October 27, 2012, 07:13:46 PM
I just read your comments in here today and CHU-san sorry for not messaging you for a long time. Was kinda busy and some family problems but it's all settled now haha. BTW dont worry I'll contine this fic just need to finalize the first crime lol.

Anzai-san: never thought you're still waiting for an update of that fic hahaha I thought the fic was already forgotten haha. Hmmm let's see if i'll update that need to do this first before that fic if you dont mind?
Title: Re: Pandora's Box | Important Announcement!| Oct. 28
Post by: rhin12 on December 27, 2012, 07:17:36 PM
Is this fic still alive??  XD I really want to know what will happen next.  :lol:

Please update creamcracker-san and chuuuuupuffs-san   :bow:  :bow: :cry:
Title: Re: Pandora's Box | Important Announcement!| Oct. 28
Post by: korin48 on December 28, 2012, 03:16:28 AM
Oh so this is that fanfic what were you talking about last night huh...  :mon huh:
Nice fanfic....  :mon determined:
Cream-o and Popcorn, please update soon!!  :mon fyeah:
Title: Re: Pandora's Box | Important Announcement!| Oct. 28
Post by: itamana on January 10, 2013, 12:40:07 AM
Hey, Hey,Hey!!!!

great prologue  :bow:  :fap
 please update!!!!!  :panic:

can't wait!!!!  :banghead:
Title: Re: Pandora's Box | Important Announcement!| Oct. 28
Post by: rhin12 on September 08, 2013, 12:39:55 PM
Happy Anniversary to this thread  XD

Creamcracker-san & Chuuuupufffs-san, would u mind posting the first chapter now?  XD  :rofl:

Title: Re: Pandora's Box | Important Announcement!| Oct. 28
Post by: chichay12 on September 08, 2013, 12:42:09 PM
Happy Anniversary to this thread  XD

Creamcracker-san & Chuuuupufffs-san, would u mind posting the first chapter now?  XD  :rofl:


i want chapter 1 XD
happy anniversary cream!!pops!  :twisted: