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Title: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 8
Post by: fausto on September 25, 2012, 08:19:25 PM
Hello, it's me again, with an Atsumina fanfic, again^^ :nervous Sorry if you think it's too much, I guess I try to avoid the fact that Aachan is gone but writing more fics... Anyway, if it's boring, just tell me, I can understand. This is gonna be (normally) a story about Atsumina, they're not dating actually, and Atsuko is in a new drama. Have a good time!! :thumbup

Chapter 1

At the Takeru Agency

"So, we choose you to play Yukiko, a 24 woman, who's officially a music manager, but when the night comes, she becomes a helper for the people in danger. She's old school jsuticier so she fights with her katana. The story is about her double life, how she handles it, with her job and friends, lovers..."
"Oh okay", said the young woman. "It's seems very interesting!"
Actually she was very excited, it was the first time she was going to play in an action drama.
"Maeda-san, are you ready to sign the contract?"Asked the man.
"Yes, absolutely!"

She left the agency with a big smile on her face, it was still mornin and she had to go to the theater to the team A repetition. She was so excited to announce it to everyone, it was official, and the man of the agency even said that Atsuko had to take martial art lessons!! The tall girl wasn't athletic at all, but the curiosity was winning here, it could be really fun!

At the AKB theater


Minami POV

Atsuko was late again, it made her a little bit angry. Wait, no, it wasn't anger, it was concern. The Ace didn't call her yesterday night and it wasn't usual... She didn't want to show everyone, but her face betrayed her.
"What is it Takamina?"
"Nothing, it's okay Mariko, we're taking 5 minutes break everyone!"
Everybody approved, leaving the dancing floor to sit next to their stuff to take a rest.
"Hi everybody!" Smiled Atsuko entering the room.
They hi her back, and the tall girl joined the captain, hugging her from behind.
"Hey..."
Shit, I'm thrilling right now...
"Aachan!" She escaped her embrace quickly. "You're late."
"I know, but i had an appointment at Takeru agency."
"Really? About what?"
Gosh, you're really beautiful Atsuko...what?Baka, don't think about that!!
"A new drama! I'm going to play a woman who fights with a katana!!" she smiled so brightly.
Aachan, with a katana? Wow that's hot...
"Wow, this is such a new experience!" she smiled, honestly happy for her friend.
"I know! I'm so excited! Do you think I can make it?"
Hell yeah...I think guys are gonna be so turned on...
"Yes, absolutely, you can do anything."
"Oh, Minami, you're so sweet...I'm gonna practice martial arts, and than I will be sexy Atsuko with a weapon", she said seductively before bursted into laugh.
Atsuko was such a teaser all the time, Minami knew that but she couldn't be used to it. She began to imagine her friend in a black leather suit, with a really big katana...nosebleed...
"Minami? Are you okay?"
"Eeh? Erm yes.. Can you change? We have to repeat."
"Hm, yes", she said pouting." You're so serious sometimes..."

Atsuko's POV

She was really happy to have this new opportunity to chase her dream. Somewhere she was a little sad because it meant that she had to be away from AKB for few time. She needed to see everyone each day, talk with them, dance with them, it was her life. But most of all, Minami was her best friend, and not talking to her everyday was very hard.
The little captain was a real deal in her life, she wasn't doing anything without talking to her. She loved teasing her, see her face become reder and reder when she touched her and tried to hug her. Maybe it was just for fun, because she liked her so much...But  she could become very jealous sometimes, too much people liked the midget. But she was her first, she was her bestfriend.
She owned her, it was her Minami...


At Atsuko's house

Atsuko POV

Atsuko lived with her parents again, because she liked to be in her childhood house, and she wasn't ready to move in alone. Tonight she couldn't sleep, her training was beginning in one week.
She needed to call Minami. Now.
"Moshi...Moshi..."said a sleepy voice.
"Minami, were you sleeping?"
"Yeah...I think so..."
"Oh sorry, I didn't think it was so late!"she said looking at her clock.
"No, it's okay. Are you alright?"
"Hm, yes...I couldn't talk too much with you today, i needed to call you..."
"Okay."
It felt so good to hear her voice.
"I wanted to call you yesterday but I fell asleep..."
"It's okay Aachan, I understand. You should sleep right now, you're gonna need energy."
"I know...Mou Minami, I would sleep with you tonight..."
"What??"
"You're making me feel safe, and you're a good pillow!Comfortable!
And I like your smell...
"Aah...We could see tomorrow, if you're not late again^^"
"No, I will be the first with you, promise!"
"Okay, sleep well."
"You too, bye!"
She hang up and sighed. She missed her, but she had to sleep. Sometimes she thouht that Minami had a really big place in her heart, more than an usual friend should have...


End of the chapter one, I'm gonna update soon because the story is always running in my head so I have to write it!! :) Thank you!
Title: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 1
Post by: m00nchild on September 25, 2012, 08:35:12 PM
nice fiction~
but it not enough~
need more...
Please Update soon,

Looking forward for the update.
Title: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 1
Post by: TakaminaBG on September 25, 2012, 09:38:59 PM
God!! This is really interesting!! I NEED MORE!!!
Please update soon!!!!!!
Title: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 1
Post by: kahem on September 25, 2012, 09:56:36 PM
I like the title of this fic ^^
Title: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 1
Post by: Haruko on September 26, 2012, 04:07:10 AM
Yeah! for me its ok.. doesnt matter if acchan is not there anymore.. you are the writer so.. make whatever you want.. :D

yeah acchan gonna be a badass.. love it :D... aww minami you are so clueless :D
Title: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 2
Post by: fausto on September 27, 2012, 12:42:36 PM
Chapter 2
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At the praticing room/AKB theater

Minami POV

She was dancing again, not giving up. She needed to be perfect... It was 5pm, the rest of the team must arrived in two hours, and Minami wanted to be the first in the room, as always, be able to have few hours to work alone on the choregraphies.
I can make it...It's not okay. I have to repeat it again...
The sweat was running down her neck, but she didn't care. She was really concentrated, she couldn't think about something else than dancing.

Atsuko POV

She walked in with a little smile on her face, she was satisfied that she succeed to get up early to be the first meeting Minami in the pratice room.
The theater was really quiet, except from this distant sound...River song.
The tall reached the origine of the sound, quietly to be able to see the person in the room without being seen.
...Minami...
She saw the little captain up here, dancing so fastly, concentrated on her own movements. She was wearing a black trasksuit.
She's so concentrated, I never see her practicing alone like this, this was really good to see. Minami was not a superficial girl, she acted in public always like she was, but because she had responsabilities and important status, she couldn't always express what she tought or who she was. And now, Atsuko was seeing her like she really was.
To busy watching her, she didn't notice that she was leaning on the door. She stumbled and the captain froze.
"Atsuko?! What are you doing here?"
"Ehm...I told you yesterday that I would be the first", she said walking into the room.
"But pratice in two hours, you could have sleep more."
Atsuko reached the midget, blushing.
"I just wanted to be alone with you a little, but you can repeat, I'll just watch you."
She's really kakkoi like this, with all this sweat running on her neck, it was sexy. And her hair was seconded...best haircut ever...
Atsuko had always knew that she was attracted to the captain, since she met her, it was so obvious. She was totally okay with it, there was no worries because she was a girl too, for her Minami was like her ideal boyfriend. Of course she didn't tell anyone, even her friends, it was her secret, as long as she was in AKB, she could be next to her and love her in silent. Sometimes it was hard not to talk about it, or share it with her best friend, but she was so afraid of losing her for that. On in other hand, she couldn't help but tease the midget all the time, see her blushing and try to hug her as much as possible. To save the appearences, sometimes she pretented to like a boy or find one attractive, but it was all lie, she was good friends with them, and if Minami didn't exist, maybe she would be with one, but hopefully she was here!!
"Hm...I don't know, it's weird..."said the midget, pouting.
"Minami, we've been reapeating together since we started, what's weird in this?"
"Dunno...I guess you're right..."
"'kay! I'll be quiet, over there!"
She ran to a corner, and sit on the floor, next to Minami sweat shirt and stuff.

Minami POV


 Why am I finding this akward to know that Atsuko is watching me...?

 She began to dance again, concentrated as much as possible. Sometimes she could see Atsuko's face, she seemed fascinated, but the leader must got it wrong, there was nothing fascinating in this.
It was 30 minutes before the team arrived, and Minami stopped dancing, breathless and a little tired. Sha had to keep energy for the rest of the practicing.
The room was very silent, and she remembered that Atsuko was supposed to be there. When she looked at her, she saw the girl lying on the floor, her head resting on the leader sweat-shirt.
She's on my sweat-shirt... She's sleeping, her nose in my sweat...
The midget approched the tall girl without making any sound.
OMG she's so cute! She seems very tired...
Slowly she took off her tracksuit jacket  and recovered her with it.
Sleep well Aachan...
She was standing up to leave when the cute one took her hand, still sleeping.
"Minami...stay with me..."
The leader blushed instantly, Atsuko was sleeping but she had react to the leader presence, and now she was holding her hand very strongly. Minami smiled, and decided to sit next to her friend, watching her sleep before the next dancing session.
"Minami...you have to...rest...this is too much..."
Dam this girl is really cute...How do I do to resist...

For Minami there was AKB. This was is all life right now, she wanted to be at her best, do what she's been hired for, make everyone happy, see that Akimoto-sensei didn't regret her choice, be her for the team, the group, the young ones who were lost. She didn't have much time for her, she was always thinking about being a good leader or a good person, it was her personality and her choice. Because of that she hadn't many time for her personal life, hopefully her friends was in AKB or else she couldn't see them.
And love life. Zero.
She must not have any boyfriend during AKB and honestly she was fine with it, she was young and not really concerned by this. She liked boys, they were funny and a little dorky, like her, sometimes they were good looking and nice. But don't know why, Minami was not really attracted to them, sometimes she envied them.
Maybe she was just too young to see a boy as a boyfriend, maybe she wasn't mature enough...
"M-Minami..."whispered a really weak voice
"Eeh?"
The leader stopped daydreaming and looked at the girl next to her.
Aah kawaiiii!! She's all sleepy and lost...!!
"Aachan are you okay?"
"Yes...I'm sorry, I was...watching you and then, I fell asleep..."
"Ya ya, it's okay, you must be tired", smiled the midget, tender.
Atsuko tried to wake up and suddenly, smiled maliciously.
"Minami, you're holding my hand."
"Eeh?!" She blushed and stopped holding it," You held my hand! You grabbed me!!"
"Hm, I don't think so, it's okay you know, you don't have to be ashamed^^"
"Aachan! You're the one who..."
"Yeah, right", she said kissing quickly the leader on her cheek, "I'm gonna go to the bathroom before the team arrive."
She walked away smiling brightly.

Atsuko POV

I can't take it anymore. Minami, I'm so gonna harass you and force you to see that you can love me. Atsuko teaser mode. ON!!!!

Minami POV

What's up with this girl? I'm feeling like a boy chasing a girl...What?! No, forget this, this is silly, Atsuko is my friend and it will stay a really good friend. That's all.



Aah, I like this moment in my head when Atsuko is gonna tease!!^^ I'll update soon!
Title: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 1/2
Post by: kahem on September 27, 2012, 01:31:28 PM
An Acchan on teasing mode is so funny ^^
Takamina is so dense lol
Title: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 1/2
Post by: m00nchild on September 27, 2012, 02:15:17 PM
nice update~!
Next update Acchan start engine start chasing Takamina~
GO GO ACCHAN!!
My spirit support u~!!

looking forward for the next update~!
Title: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 1/2
Post by: TakaminaBG on September 27, 2012, 02:43:18 PM
GO ACCHAN!! Go after your MAN!!
Please update soon it's really interesting!!
Title: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 1/2
Post by: Haruko on September 28, 2012, 03:52:44 AM
teaser atsuko mode: on jajajaja its gonna be funny :D for us of course
Title: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 1/2
Post by: yuuzu05 on September 28, 2012, 07:57:24 AM
ah i've been missing atsumina moments too, please continue with this fic  :bow:
Title: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 1/2/3
Post by: fausto on October 02, 2012, 02:26:45 PM
Update!!  :D

Chapter 3

Minami POV

 The captain was talking few minutes to rest when she heard the voice of Atsuko.
"Minami? Come help me please!"
The midget ran to the bathroom.
Why do I run like this? I heard her voice and I feel like it's the priority...weird...
Atsuko was in font of the mirror, in underwear. Minami instantly drop her jaw.
….......... Wow......
"Ah Minami, can you please unhook my bra? I need to change it."
She's in underewear...! I've seen her before but it was in bikini, and I don't know why but it was different...
"Eeh??! You...want me to what??"
"Take it off, baka!^^"
"R-right..."
With the tips of her fingers, she unhooked it slowly, her heart was beating so fast that she felt dizzy.
"Thanks."
Atsuko took it off so naturally, and Minami caught sight of Aachan's clear skin, before she looked away, blushing like crazy. Her eyes fell on her back.
This is so beautiful...Soft skin, little moles...
"Minami? Are you okay? You look weird."
"Eh? Wh-what? Ah, yes, I'm okay... I'm gonna...go to the other...room."
"Ah...if you want, I don't mind if you stay", the Ace smirked.
"...I do."
She ran away quickly.
What was that? Atsuko can do it herself, why does she ask me to do it...?


Atsuko POV

I think it worked! She seemed to be embarrassed and interested. But it's not it, I have to practice more on her, she has a great sense of responsability and she can focus on work easily, so I have to work harder...

End of the POV


The team praticed until noon, it was going well but everybody was really tired.
Kojima, Mariko, Miichan, Yuko Aachan and Minami decided to go eat at the restaurant across the street. On the way in, Atsuko took Minami arm in a smile.
They sat on their favorite table.
"Miichan, come sit next to me!! "said Atsuko, excited.
The funny one obeyed, happy for this request.
"Ah, I love you Miichan!"
"I know, me too wifey^^"
Minami frowned, she was expecting to eat next to Aachan, today she was acting weird in the leader's opinion.  Miichan whispered something at Atsuko's ear, which made the Ace had a embarrassed expression.
"Neh, Nyaro, we could go to this store I told you about. What do you think?"
"Sure Mari-chan, maybe thursday right?"
"Nyan-Nyan!! You've promised me that you will eat with me on thursday!!" screamed Yuko, angry.
"Stop screaming pervert, I can do both you know."
Mariko laughed, she was loving this kind of lunch.
"Minami?"
"Hm, what is it Atsuko?"
"You could invite me to dinner sometimes..."
"Yeah sure", she smiled, "I will invite you whenever you want."
"Wow, our beloved leader is so generous to Aachan", joked Yuko with a smirk.
"Yes, that why I chose her", said Atsuko with a int of pride.
The girls stood silent few seconds, it was a confession! But the leader was busy looking at her phone, she didn't notice anything. Atsuko sighed and everyone smiled in compassion.

The server brought the dishes and the girls started eat and talk at the same time. This was one of this magic lunch, where they could joke and laugh about everything, they knew each other for so long that it was easy and likeable.  Sometimes, Atsuko tried to catch the midget eye, everytime she successed, she would smile brightly at her.

Flashback

"Tell me if I'm wrong wifey, you're trying to wake Minami's love for you right? And you're using me to do it right?^^"whispered Miichan at the Ace ear.
Atsuko blushed and nodded, embarrassed.

Voila! I will update soon since I have some free time, maybe this part was annoying, but i need to begin the story, so sorry for this, it would better after, and longer^^ :nervous

Title: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 1/2
Post by: TakaminaBG on October 02, 2012, 02:45:59 PM
Go Acchan.... Her way of seducing Takamina is just... like I WOULD!!  :shy1:
Update SOON!! I want MORE!!
Title: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 1/2
Post by: m00nchild on October 02, 2012, 04:37:40 PM
nice update~!
Like it so much~!
want for more of it~!!
please update soon~~!

looking forward for the next update~!~!
Title: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 1/2
Post by: Haruko on October 03, 2012, 05:14:55 AM
jaja its ok.. please miichan help acchan with her husbands is a clueless person!!
Title: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 1/2/3/4 (HOT update^^)
Post by: fausto on October 03, 2012, 10:30:01 PM
Hey^^ So tonight is the next part, longer and eventful!!^^ Enjoy!  :thumbsup

Chapter 4

Somewhere between theater and Minami's house. In a cab.


She saw the ocean.
Red as it was.
The waves licking her feet.
Tumultuous thoughts.
Is there a shadow behind your back?
I could leave you tonight or just touch you all day...
We're not meant to be.
But the red got me.
I'll explode you until the end...


"We're there, Takahashi-san", said the driver.
"Ah, yes, sorry."
She closed her notebook, put it into her bag and left the taxi after paying the driver.


Yuko's house. 21:30 pm.

Minami POV

Yuko had called her to say that it was dinner at her house tonight with the usual six of them, plus Jurina.
It was totally her style, organize a party two hours before, just because she was bored.
The captain rang at the door, and straightened her clothes, a black sweater and blue jeans. And of course, her favourite Adidas pink shoes.
"Ah, come Takamina!"
"Haruna? Where's Yuko?" Asked the leader, coming in.
"Ordering a lot of sushi^^"
Minami followed Kojima to the evening, where everyone was.
"Ah, Takamina!"
She greeted Mariko and instinctively looked to the right.
Fuck me...
Her eyes went on Atsuko, she did her best not to drop her jaw. She was gorgeous. A short red dress and black makeup around her eyes.
How can you be so beautiful...?
The Ace smiled at her, making the midget blush, smiling back.
"Oooookay, hi to you too Takamina", laughed Miichan.
"Hi!"

Atsuko POV


She's so kakkoi, I've missed her a lot! I hope we'll get some time alone tonight. No doubt she's the one I want forever...


"Hey you! Don't you think it's a genious idea to brought us together here, so you could « work » on our leader?"
"Aah Yuko, I should have guess it was one of your pervert plan!" Smirked Atsuko, glad that she did it anyway.
"Oh come on, you'll thank me one day!And I have to do my best with Nyan Nyan, she's so cold lately..."
Atsuko laughed and watched Yuko ran in the evening with bottles.
"Everyone!! Sushi in ten minutes! Let's drink beers first!"

Jurina POV


I'm sooo right to be here!! I smell love in the air, and some sexy moves.
I'm gonna sit there and watch all of it!!! Sugoi!!


22:00pm

The dinner table was full of sushi, everyone picking some, drinking and talking a lot. Jurina was sat next to Mariko, and seemed really excited.
"Ah Mariko-sensei, I love this dinner!!^^"
"You know Jury-boy, this is the best place to be to watch pervert scene...You are lucky to be there!"
"I know right? It's like AKB is full of gorgeous girls who are always touching and kissing each other. I think it's paradise... But it would be better with beer!" She pouted.
"Aah, you're too young, I'll drink for you kiddo. And don't try to seduce any of this lady tonight, okay? Keep your hands away!"
"Haha, yeah, I'm waiting for Rena-chan anyway!"

Atsuko was sitting next to Minami, watching her eat.
"Minami!"
"Yes?" She said looking at her.
"Feed me!"
"Oh, okay!"she took a little sushi, put some wasabi, aaaaaah.
"Aaaah, oishi!!!"
The Ace ate the sushi looking at Minami with a big smile.
"Another one!"
"Haha you're so cute!Okay!"

Yuko was sitting accross them, she watched the girls and pouted.
"Let me feed you Nyan Nyan!"
"Why do you always want to do the same as Takacchan?!"
"Because they're an example, see? Aachan is always asking for some attention and Takamina gives it to her!! It's the way it should be for us too!!"
Minami blushed hearing Yuko, it was true, she always gave what Atsuko wanted from her. It had been always like that.

23:00pm


Atsuko POV


The Ace felt a little numb, she had drank two beers and since it was just occasionaly, it had rapid effects on her.
She needed something refreshing and so she decided to go to the bathroom, put some water on her face.

Looking at herself in the mirror, she thought about Minami. With the alcohol troubling her mind, she wanted her affection so badly...
Minami...I wish you could love me too...
The door opened, making her jump. Her lovely captain came in, and saw her.
"Oh Aachan, I'm sorry, i didn't know... I will come back later."
"No!"
Minami was surprised by the fervor of her tone.
"Please, stay", she said with a husky voice.
The midget closed the door and reached Aachan.
"Are you okay? Are you sick? You drank a lot..."
"Yeah...I'm okay. Sorry if I look ugly..."
"No", said the leader smiling and touching her arm, "how could you be ugly...you're beautiful..."
Shit...Minami...
"You're worring me, you're so pale and you seem sad. Talk to me, I can help you."
Minami don't touch me...don't be so close...
"Aachan?" She frowned and put her hand on her forehead, to check her temperature.
Enough...
"Minami..."
The tall girl embraced the captain and pushed her upo the door, trapping her against it.
"Atsuko? What are you doing?! You a..."
The Ace captured Minami's soft lips and attacked them. Her heart was beating so fast, like it was gonna explode in her chest.
This is...amazing...you're lips taste so good... and your smell...
She couldn't stop licking her lower lip, trying to get access to her tongue. Atsuko was afraid that Minami would reject her, but she seemed to follow the movement.
Atsuko started shivering, the waves of pleasure and desire were so powerful...
She needed to touch her. Her hands ran on Minami's waist, pulling her closer to her own body. The tongues were still battling.
Toc.Toc.Toc.
"Guys? I need to go to the bathroom!"
Atsuko gasped and they stopped kissing.
"Hello?"
Minami seemed to regain her mind, she wiped her lips, probably wondering what the fuck was going on. She looked at Atsuko, lost, and finally opened the door, leaving without noticing Kojima at the doorstep.
Atsuko stood silent for few seconds, breathless and dizzy. And then she left the room without a word.
"But...what's going on here?" Asked Kojima to anyone in particular.

 0:00pm


Minami POV

There is a frozen time somewhere
Your eyes are the only thing I want to see
Hold my hand, I'm falling for you
I will create a field full of roses
A home full of love
Give me your lips
This had been my dream all this years.


She dropped her pen and reread what she had written.
Honestly she was still shaking.

Flashback


Minami POV


Atsuko...you're kissing me...
What does it means...your lips are so sweet, I want more...
I don't know why you're doing this, but you drive me crazy...
I feel your hot body against mine, my brain is fucked, your hands on me...
...Don't stop, I'm begging you.
Wow...I have to leave , I feel...dizzy.


End of flashback.


She finally fell asleep, her head  on her precious notebook. So many questions...


i don't know why but I'm happy with this part, I took real pleasure writting it, and I hope you enjoyed it, I can't wait to continue!! :nervous






Title: Re: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 1/2/3/4 (HOT update^^)
Post by: kahem on October 04, 2012, 01:58:42 AM
Wouhou!!!! Kiss scene FTW!!!!
I wanna be at Jurina place^^
Title: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 1/2/3/4 (HOT update^^)
Post by: Haruko on October 04, 2012, 06:27:16 AM
yeah the atsumina`s kiss was hot and cute for me:Dwell done acchan well done..step 2..kiss her again:D

jajajayuko you are a genius!!:D

jaja i totally imaginer that jurina with a notebook taking note about how to harass you tsundere girlfriend by Acchan and yuko:D
Title: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 1/2/3/4 (HOT update^^)
Post by: Pdpond on October 04, 2012, 06:53:46 AM
Atsumina's kisss scene~>\\\<
Acchan keep going~ get love from takaboy;)
Title: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 1/2/3/4 (HOT update^^)
Post by: thebotole on October 04, 2012, 07:02:35 AM
Atsumina kiss  :wub:
Update soon  :bow:
Title: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 1/2/3/4 (HOT update^^)
Post by: TakaminaBG on October 04, 2012, 09:50:39 AM
Ah... Acchan made her move!! MORE MORE MORE!!!
Title: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 1/2/3/4 (HOT update^^)
Post by: m00nchild on October 04, 2012, 04:29:20 PM
nice updated~!!
So AtsuMina having a kiss~!!
how about Rena did she come?
Jurina is waiting for Rena...
Takamina dont worry because Acchan drunk only kiss you~!!

Looking forward for the next update.
Title: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 1/2/3/4 (HOT update^^)
Post by: fausto on October 04, 2012, 09:24:10 PM
@Moonchild: actually Jurina meant that she was waiting for Rena to be okay to do nasty things, but it's my bad, it wasn't so clear, sorry :nervous
Thank you everybody, I will update as sson as possible! :thumbup
Title: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 1/2/3/4 (HOT update^^)
Post by: Calyrica on October 05, 2012, 07:40:39 AM
Oooh, I liked this update a lot! That was a hot kiss! I can't wait to see how Acchan is going to act once she's sober and realizes what she's done.  :rofl:

And Takamina! Don't you run away from Acchan because you're confused! Time for more  :heart: !
Title: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 1/2/3/4 /5 update
Post by: fausto on October 05, 2012, 03:38:21 PM
Next part, things are getting complicated!!!  :( I wanted to say that maybe it's a silly idea, but I liked the idea that Minami is a little poet, that's why she's writting in her notebook. Anyway, let's go!

Chapter 5
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The day after, in a cab

Atsuko POV


A bright smile was on her lips.
This morning, she had woke up in a really good mood.

This is such a great day...Everything seems to be brighter!

She had made a decision on her way. She was going to tell Minami the truth. What she truely felt.
It was risky and unconscious, but she couldn't hold it anymore.

Your lips meeting mine...It was more than I've expected. My body was burning...

She was scared, as death.but the leader hadn't reject her during their kiss, she was even asking for more, didn't it mean that she was loving it? Maybe the captain had realized that she was in love with her...

At the theater

The Ace sighed at the entrance of the theater. It was really a big deal. The biggest of her life.

Gambatte. You can do it!

Everyone was already in the dancing room, Atsuko thought that it would be better to wait for the end of the practice to declare herself.

Be patient. You will have your all life to be next to her.

Minami POV

She's here. What should I do? I dunno...God, I feel like an idiot. She has probably forget about this.


The leader decided to ignored those facts and act as usual.
"Hey Aachan!" She said with a really sweet voice.
"Ah Minami, ohayo!"
The midget wanted to continue the discussion, talk with her more,  but they were already late so she began the training.

End of POV


The « Beginner » choregraphy was hard to do, and they spend three hours trying again. Minami was not giving up, doing the same movement again and again so everyone could understand and try to do it perfectly.
Seeing that the team was tired, and feeling that even herself was breathless, she decided to give them a break, to eat.
"All right, thank you everyone! Lunch time!"
Everyone approved and soon, little groups were formed on the floor, sharing the food and talking.
Minami wiped the sweat from her brow, took her lunch out of her bag and looked in the room. She noticed the Ace, sat alone in a corner, bending over a sheaf of papers.
"Aachan, what are you doing?" She asked as she sat next to her.
"Ah, I'm trying to learn my lines, the first drama scene is in one week!"
"...Are you saying that you're leaving in one week?" She said, frowing sadly.
"Hm...the set is in Tokyo, but I will not be here so often... I thought you knew."
"No...you didn't tell me that...How could I know..."
Atsuko looked at the leader, she seemed really sad.
"Anyway, do you want me to help you with this?" Asked the midget, showing the papers.
"Really?Great! It's annoying when I do it alone. See, you have to read the lines in red."
"Okay, what's the story?"
"Hm, this scene is between my character and her boyfriend. He's wondering why she acts so weird, and obviously, she can't tell him it's because she spend the night rescuing people with a weapon!^^"
"You enjoy that, right^^"
""Yes!!The story is funny^^"
""Okay, let's go! « Yukiko, did you sleep well? I think I saw you up last night... »"
"« Oh, I'm okay, I was just starving, so I got up to eat something! »"
Minami was looking at Aachan, this one had a cute serious air, really focus on her role.
"« Hm, I could swear I've seen something metal, and you in a black suit...strange. Anyway, you seem distant for few days. Is everything okay? »"
"« Really? I don't think so, I'm just tired. »"
"« Okay, then kiss me right now! »"
Minami suddenly realized what she had just said and blushed like crazy. Atsuko looked at her with a strange look, where the repetition had to end...? Because she seemed to want to kiss the captain.
"I'm sorry, I was just reading and..."
"It's okay Minami, I knew it would come", she smiled.
"Yaa, embarrassing!"
"Thank you anyway", said Aachan, putting the papers back in her bad, you helped me a lot!
"Etoo...now you have to eat!" She said opening her bento and already feeding Atsuko.
"Aaaah, okay good. You have to eat at least half of the box. You need to be strong for this!"
"Hay! Minami..." the tall girl pouted
"Yes?"
"I...need to tell you something after practice, you could walk me home."
"Sure! Are you okay?"
"Yeah, no worries",she smiled, a little nervous.
She ate half of the box while Minami was looking at her.
"Are you gonna kiss that boy? I mean, for the scene...?"
Atsuko stopped her movement, this was a really unexpected question.
"...Yes, I think so. Why are you asking?"
"For no-nothing."
She stood up, red as a tomatoe.
"Everyone! Let's back to work!"


End of the practice, in front of the theater.


Atsuko POV

Minami would be here in a minute...I'm so scared!
I have to be brave, and just tell her, like « Minami, you know what?I love you! », no, not like that, like « Minami, I've realized that you were more than a friend for me », no no no! Like...


"Hey, are we going? I don't want you to be cold!"
"Yeah, let's go!she said, blushing."
"Wait, tell me now, I'm so curious to know!!"
Atsuko wanted to walk but actually her legs were too shaking for that. She faced the big door of the theater and sighed.
"Yeah, hum Minami...do you remember last night?" she was looking at shoes, too shy to look at the short one.
"Yes"
That's it! Go!
"Hm...I was drunk but I didn't..."
Don't be confused, say it clearly!
"I just want to..."
She looked at the short girl and saw her frozen, looking behind the Ace, like really shocked.
"Minami?"
No answer. She wasn't moving. Atsuko turned around and saw a girl, standing there, looking at Minami.

What's going on? Who's she...?

Atsuko turned back and touched Minami arm.
"Minami? What is it?!"
The midget seemed to wake up and stepped back. The girl approached them, smiling.
"Long time no see, Taka-chan."

Taka-chan??! But who the fuck is she?? Why Minami is reacting like that??

"Who are you?" Asked Atsuko roughly.
"I'm Kanako Kirijo, an old friend of  Minami."
"Don't call her Minami!"
Atsuko's cheeks were red, she was angry without knowing why. Actually, yes, she knew! It was going to be her confession, and this girl is standing here, disturbing them and being extremely intimate with HER Minami!
"Why?^^" Asked Kanako with an insolent air.
Atsuko was about to reply but she felt Minami's hand on her arm.
"Atsuko, I think you should go home and rest, I will talk to you later", she said to the tall girl, still staring at the girl.
"Are you sure, I mean..."
"Yes, I'm sure, please go."

Minami...What's going on...?I don't like this...


"...Okay, call me. Bye."

She looked one more time at Minami, and then the girl who was still smiling, and she walked away, heart broken.

That's it for today, I need to write the next part!! I hope it's good for you! Anyway, I was wondering the other day, is there guys here or are we just girls?^^ :nervous
Title: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 1/2/3/4 /5 update NEW
Post by: Calyrica on October 05, 2012, 05:11:45 PM
Ah~! Nothing's resolved yet!  :banghead:

I don't know about the others, but I'm a girl. XD I think girls tend to be more into fanfiction than guys.
Title: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 1/2/3/4 /5 update NEW
Post by: fausto on October 05, 2012, 07:44:20 PM
Yes, I agree with you, I was just wondering, for me I love Atsumina and many others pairing, it doesn't mean anything about people sexuality or else, I was just curious, because I thought we were girls but I didn't want to offend anybody  :nervous Thank you for your answers! :thumbup
Title: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 1/2/3/4 /5 update NEW
Post by: m00nchild on October 05, 2012, 08:46:17 PM
O.o,
So that a Acchan having a rival huh~!
Nice... Takamina go for it~
Just make Acchan disappointed...
Taka Ganbate~!

Looking forward for the next update.
Title: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 1/2/3/4 /5 update NEW
Post by: Minami-chan on October 05, 2012, 11:43:18 PM
UAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!
 :panic: :panic:
Who is that girl!!?
Title: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 1/2/3/4 /5 update NEW
Post by: Haruko on October 06, 2012, 05:45:19 AM
yeah! a rival!! come acchan figh for your husband!!
Title: Re: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 1/2/3/4 /5 update NEW
Post by: kahem on October 07, 2012, 12:57:47 AM
Eh?! Who is that girl? Don't tell me is Takamina's ex...
Poor Acchan she was finally brave enough to confess
Title: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 6 update NEW
Post by: fausto on October 10, 2012, 12:51:04 PM
Hello, I'm a little late but I've been busy with school and work, anyway, this is the chapter 6!!Thank you everyone who is commenting this.

Chapter 6


At Mikoto cafe


"What are you doing here?"
"Buisness, I have an opportunity to work here for couple of weeks. And I wanted to see you", she said, pouring sugar into her cup of tea.
"Why?" Frowned the short captain.
"Don't be so suspicious, it's been a long time, I've missed you."
Minami was sitting in front of her, waiting for something, probably the end of this meeting. She couldn't take her eyes of the girl.
"So, how are you?"continued the blonde girl
"Why, do you care?"
"Of course I care Taka-chan", she smiled brightly, outrageously beautiful.
"Don't call me that way", she said coldly. "I don't know why you're here or what you want, but it's..."
"I want you back", she interrupted her.


At a cafe, in Akihabara.

"But who is this girl?"
"I don't know Miichan, I'm telling you", Minami asked me to leave.
"This is so weird...We known Minami for years and she never talked about this girl!"
"Hey girls!" Said Mariko and Jurina has they sat on their table.
"Where were you, you two?" Asked Miichan suspicious.
"Shopping!" Smiled Jurina, showing the five bags full of clothes.
"What's up Atsuko, you seemed sad", asked Mariko.
"She's upset because a girl showed up when she was with Takamina, and Aachan had to leave", answered Miichan, knowing that it would hurt Atsuko more to repeat it.
"Really?! Was it Captain's girlfriend?!" Asked Jurina excited.
"Juri-boy, you need to learn how to be subtle", rebuked Mariko, patting her." Atsuko, I'm sure Takamina has a good reason for this, you should call her tonight."
"Yes..."nodded the Ace sadly.
"How is the girl Aachan?" Asked Jurina with a boyish look.
"Gorgeous..."
"Gorgeous?" Jurina seemed shocked, "but Aachan, I mean, compared to you, how is she?!"
"I don't know Jurina, I think most of people find her really beautiful."
"Wow, I need to see her! If even you say that she's gorgeous..."
"Haha Juri-boy, you're such a player^^" smiled Mariko, proud of her student.

At Mikoto cafe

"You what??!"
"I want you back", repeated the blonde girl.
"You can't have me back, we've never been together..."
"Okay so let's say I want you", said  Kanako with an insolent look. "Come on, you know that we belong together, we were so close!"
"Yeah, maybe before you ran away. I don't want to talk about this, I think it's a bad idea for you to be here. It was long time ago."
"Yet, you didn't seem insensitive earlier..."
"Kanako, I'm tired, I wake up early tomorrow so I'm gonna go", said Minami as she stood up.
"Okay, I'll see you soon, sleep well, Taka-chan."

Minami left the cafe, upset and disturbed. What the fuck was that...? Kanako was back, now. It was a shitty situation. She had to call Atsuko, to apologize.

At a cafe, Akihabara

Atsuko's phone rang, and the girl motioned to everyone to shut up while she put on the loudspeaker.
"Moshi Moshi?"
"Atsuko, it's me. I'm sorry for earlier, are you okay?"
The girls were all listening to the captain.
"Yes, I'm all right, and you?"
"I'm okay, I go home."
"Who was she?" asked Atsuko,unable to avoid the only important question.
"Hm...an old friend...I didn't see her in seven years."
"Oh... "
"Do you know your lines? Have you eat? You should be sleeping right now!"
Atsuko was a little embarrassed to show the members how Minami was concerned all the time.
"It's okay, I'm gonna go Minami"
"Okay, so tomorrow I have meetings for No sleeves, so I'll see you on Thursday, okay?"
"'kay, good night."
"You too, Aachan."
The Ace hang up the phone and looked at her friends.
"Wow, Leader is such a perfect girl! I wish I could be her boyfriend!!" exclaimed Jurina.
She met the icy look of Atsuko and pouted.
"Juri-boy, Takamina is Atsuko's property okay, don't go there!" Said Mariko before smacking her head.
"Well, it's not that..."Atsuko bushed.
"Wifey, we all know that you want to have Takamina..."sighed Miichan.
"How do you know?! said aachan opening wide eyes.
"Hard not to know considering that everyone who touches her is instantly frozen by your killer look, and that you're always all over her..." smiled Mariko.
"If you will be together, I could die because of sexyness overdose!! The Ace with the perfect leader...it's unreal...!!"screamed Jurina, over excited.
"That's why we need to help her, kiddo" said Mariko with a wise tone.


Wednesday, in a dressing room

Minami was sat on a corner of the room, taking a break for the rehersal. She released her notebook and her pen.

The wind is bringing you back to me.
My tears are frozen, lost in the dust.
I've got you, inside me.
I will take you to the other side.
Your fast against mine.
The trees are singing my love song.
I will touch you, easy.



Thursday, at AKB theater

Minami was the first in the theater, as usual. She looked at the stage and smiled, she loved that place, she felt really secure in it. Today she was just passing by to see the beginning of the training, and then she had a meeting with Akimoto-sensei.
"Minami?"
The short one turned around and smiled sweetly.
"Aachan, you're early again^^ How are you?"
"Good. I've missed you", she said as she hugged her.
Minami blushed but hugged her back.
"I don't practice today, I need to see Akimoto-sensei, you know."
"Oh..."pouted Atsuko as she approached her mouth to kiss her on the cheeks, "but we didn't..."
"Captain!!" this was the so lovely screaming voice of Yuko. "There is someone for you here!"
"Eeh?!" Asked the leader, turning back to see Yuko with Kanako.
Minami felt Atsuko tensed, it wasn't good! The girls reached them, and while she killed the pervert one with her eye, she stepped back from Atsuko's embrace.
"Kanako, what are you doing here? This is a private theater..."
"Be cool Captain, she seems nice!" Laugheed Yuko, clueless.
"I needed to speak with you," answered Kanako.
"I'm working" said Minami, frowning.
"It's okay Takamina, you have 30 minutes before your meeting, go, I will replace you", smiled Yuko, proud to do a good action.
"Great! Come Taka-chan, I will order you your favourite tea, like before!" Said Kanako as she grabbed her hand and pulled her out of the theater.
"YUKO!!" Kojima screamed as she smacked her head.
"Itai Nyan-Nyan!!! What is it?"
"You're so stupid!! This is Atsuko's rival, and you're making the thing even easier!"
"What? Wait!! Aachan, who is she?"
"I don't know, but you're not helping me baka!!"
She ran away in the bathroom, hiding her tears. Maybe it was overeacting, but it was honestly breaking her heart. She needed to speak to Minami and she couldn't because of this girl.


In front of the theater

"Can you take a coffee with me?"
"I don't want to Kanako. Can you please let me work?"
Kanako sighed and for the first time she seemed really sad.
"Why do you reject me like that?"
"I don't mean to be cold, it's just that you showed up like that, expecting me to be happy...It was a long time ago, maybe I'm too sensitive but I didn't forgive you."
"...Okay, maybe I can change that. People make mistake you know, maybe you don't because you're perfect but I'm not. You used to like me, it can be true again."
Minami looked at her, she seemed sad and somewhere she felt sorry. She was still beautiful.
"We can be friends if you want, but you need to stop coming whenever you want to, I have a job..."
"Okay!" Smiled Kanako. "I give you my number and you call me when you have time okay?"
"Okay" she said, not convinced that it was a good idea.
Kanako wrote her number on a piece of paper and gave it to the leader.
"So, see you soon I hope, Taka-chan!"

In the theater

Atsuko left the toilet after five minutes to reached the girls again, trying to hide her recent tears. Yuko seemed really embarrassed.
"Aachan I'm sorry, I have an idea!"
"Why am I worrying right now?"smiled Atsuko.
"No, no no it's genius again! Let me organize another party like before, but I invite Kanako. And you, you just have to seduce our leader, and show the other girl that she has nothing compares to you!"
Yuko was waiting for the Ace answer, so excited about her idea.
"Hm, I don't know, I don't want to force Minami, if she likes her..."
"Minami doesn't like her, she's just clueless..."sighed Yuko.
"Miichan, what do you think?" Asked Atsuko.
"Could be interesting. Let's do it!"
"YES!!! Aaah, okay, but it will be in one week okay, on friday night!!"


Atsuko's room


It was the third day of the set today, and Atsuko was exhausted. She had a martial training everyday for three hours, and her body was crying. It was really difficult, but interesting and exciting. Most of the time, it was helping her not to think about Minami, or she could let off steam on training hours.
Tonight she needed to call the leader, to have news and hear her voice.
"Yep?"
"Minami? It's me."
"Aachan! How are you?!"
Atsuko smiled, it was always the first question.
"I'm tired, and you?"
"How is the set?! Is it hard?! Are you cool with a katana?" Asked Minami excited.
"Haha, it's great! And no, I'm not cool, I suck at it, but I'm trying^^"
"You must be really cool Atsuko, I'm glad that you call."
Atsuko blushed, she was really happy to hear her.
"I'm exhausted, but I wanted to hear your voice."
"Aah, I will massage you next time, it's hard for you!"
Atsuko was smiling but then she heard a voice in the phone, far away.
...Taka-chan, where are the forks?!
"...Is Kanako with you?!"
"Hm, yeah, she wanted to cook something..."
"…"
"Aachan..."
"It's okay, I will see you on Friday. Bye."
She didn't mean to be so cold but it was hurting so bad. Kanako was at her house. With her. Alone. It was so hard to think about it.
She cried for a long time this night.

Atsuko POV

Minami...Am I losing you right now...? I feel like the reason of being happy everyday is gone. You're the one for me, it's never gonna change...
Who's this girl anyway? You seem so different when she's there...
This is so painful...



Almost no POV this time so we don't know what Minami is thinking and feeling...suspense^^  :nervous
 



Title: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 6 update NEW
Post by: TakaminaBG on October 10, 2012, 01:15:05 PM
I kind of want to slap Kanako and kick her out of the picture!!!! :hiakhiakhiak:
Poor Acchan......
Update soon!!!!
Title: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 6 update NEW
Post by: thebotole on October 10, 2012, 03:19:32 PM
acchan should make her move i guess.  ;)

look forward for next update... :bow:
Title: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 6 update NEW
Post by: m00nchild on October 10, 2012, 05:44:38 PM
Nice Update...
So Jurina learn all the bad staff from Mariko huh~
interesting which mean Mariko not a good senpai...
Really Sad for AtsuMina moment,
Kanako was so annoying...
Acchan must make a move,
waiting for the party part,

This update was nice,
it's bring sadness and funny,
looking forward for the next update.
Title: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 6 update NEW
Post by: Haruko on October 11, 2012, 04:43:52 AM
jajja no no juriboy.. minami is the boyfriend..not the girlfriend..

come on acchan you need to be strong and fight for your husband ok?.. seduce him!!

yuuchan ..yuuchan you are soooo baka... dont hep her..

jejej i love this jealousy story jeje
Title: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 6 update NEW
Post by: yuuzu05 on October 12, 2012, 01:52:14 AM
love the new atsumina fic  :cow:
aachan needs to hurry up and mark her territory bc takamina is too dense to notice that hanako is going to try to get back with her :panic:
thanks for the update   :)
Title: Re: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 6 update NEW
Post by: kahem on October 13, 2012, 01:26:41 AM
Kanako, I feel something bad from this girl...
Title: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 7!!!
Post by: fausto on October 13, 2012, 12:24:57 PM
Update, aaaah Atsumina really got me, I hope you won't be disappointed!


Chapter 7


Thursday

"Where is it Mariko-sensei? I have sore feet!"
"Stop complaining Juri-boy, this is right here" said Mariko pointing the nearest building.
"Are you sure we can come?!" Asked Miichan, very excited.
"Yes, Aachan said that we could come today."
They reached the entrance of the building, the three of us were very happy to be able to come on the set of the drama. They followed the indications that Atsuko had left to Mariko by mail, there was a lot of people talking and working, the girls felt a little stressed to be kicked out.
"Okay! Everybody quiet, Maeda-san, are you ready?"
"Yes."
"Okay, and...action!"
The three girls followed the voices and discovered the set. Atsuko was there, all dressed with her black leather suit and her katana, doing a martial art choregraphy.
Jurina dropped her jaw.

Jurina POV


WTF...?! Aachan? This is so...hot!
She's fighting in a suit with a katana!! Aaah this is like an old fantasm, a really gorgeous girl holding a dangerous weapon...katana is classic and maybe old-fashionned but so powerful!!!


End of POV

"Juri-boy, you're drooling..."laughed Mariko.

Miichan POV


Wow, she's really beautiful and talented!! I'm very proud of her!! Minami should definitely see that...

End of POV


Mariko POV

Minami should definitively see that...I have to take a picture of this.
She did it, a really nice and sexy picture showing Atsuko focus and holding her katana in front of her as she was attacking an enemy.
I send it to Minami right away, adding my commentary: « isn't she gorgeous? You should see that for real! Come! »
Aaah, I'm satisfied!^^


End of POV

At the same time, resting room, Shin domoto kyoudai

Minami was eating teriyaki when her phone rang. As she took a bite of food, she opened the mail. What she saw made her stifle.

Minami POV

What he hell...??! Is this..? Atsuko... You're so hot!! Mariko, why are you sending me this?! And this comment? But, she's really beautiful! I knew that she would be that cool!

"Takahashi-san, are you ready to continue?"
"Eeh? Ah, yes, of course!" She said as she closed her phone, still thinking about this picture.

The rehearsal is done in 35minutes, I can go and sse Aachan after this, I'm so curious to see her work on the set!!! I can't wait for it!!



In front of the building


To: Mariko
From: Takamina

Meet me at the entrance please, I don't know where is it.


"Guys! Takamina is here!! I have to go meet her to guide her here!"
"Really? But Aachan is gonna have a break, so make it fast so we can talk to her!" Said Miichan as she couldn't take her eyes of Atsuko.

Mariko hurried up and meet Minami at the entrance.
"You've made it!!" she screamed excited.
"Yes, I have feelings that you enjoyed that^^"
"Of course!!"
The leader followed the older girl trhought the staff members and several rooms.
"Here it is..."

Minami POV

The short girl noticed Miichan and Jurina and then she followed their look.

…............................
Geez...!! Atsuko you're so hot!! What is this suit? It suits you very well, it's so sexy... I knoew this girl was beautiful and sexy but that...What?? I'm talking like a guy!! But, I mean, this chick is...gorgeous!!!!


"Haha, look sensei, Takamina is drooling even more than me!!" screamed Jurina.
"That's right, isn't because our leader is noticing the amazing sexiness, right Takamina?" Said Mariko with an evil smile, she was enjoying this so much!
"The leader understood few seconds after that Mariko was talking to her" too troubled by what she was seeing.
"What?"
"Yes, I think this is the reason, Juri-boy^^" said Mariko as Jurina nodded.

She's coming now!! God, I feel embarassed I don't even know why...maybe it's because I'm not supposed to disturb her when she works. I shouldn't have listen to Mariko...

End of POV

Atsuko POV

Minami is here!!!! This is such a nice surprise! But wait, she saw me on the set, she should have think I'm awful, I'm not credible with a katana...I'm so ashamed...


Atsuko reached the girls, already blushing.
"Hi girls, you've made it!! It's nice to see you!"
"Hey wifey! Are you okay?"
"Yes Miichan" she said as she hugged her. "Aren't you too annoyed? I'm sorry it's..."
"Aachan!!! You're so sexy!! It's really hot you know, you, this suit, the katana...!!"
"Haha...Etoo thank you Jurina..."blushing because of the player look that the young woman was giving her.
Sometimes Jurina was reminding her of Minami, when it came to her boyish side.
"You should rest, Aachan, it's nice of you to invite us on the set, it seems really nice!" Said Mariko as she gave her a bottle of water.
"Thank you, yes, it's really cool in here, everyone is really nice to me."
The three girls who had already spoken was now silent, knowing that it was now between Takamina and Atsuko. They pretended to be interested in something and let the two girls alone a moment. Atsuko blushed again, ashamed to be in this kind of suit in front of Minami.
She came to see me! Does it mean something? She's so kakkoi!
"Hello, Minami."
"Hey^^ Here, take a sit, you have to rest you know."
"Wait, Minami..."
"Yes?" Asked the leader as she looked at her.
"Hm" she blushed, "what do you think about that...?"
"About what?"
"What you saw, baka^^"
"Oh...I think...you were really...sexy."
Sexy?? Minami thinks that I am sexy...?!
"Thank you hehe."
"Stop giggling and sit!"
"Hay!" As she obeyed and sat on the nearest chair.
Minami stood behind the chair and began to massage the neck of Aachan.
"Oh Minami, this is so good..."

I've missed her contact so much...I feel so relief when she touches me...

"I miss you."
"I miss you too, Aachan. I'm sorry I you feel lonely, I'm not here for you enough lately. But I don't want to disturb you with the set..."
"You never disturb me!! I need you to be next to me all the time, in my life everyday..."
"Haha, it seems like a couple talk^^"
"Yeah, maybe it's what I want..."said Atsuko sighing.
"What??!" asked Minami, shocked by those last words.
"Guys! I think we need to go, the director is getting impatient, I think we don't have the right to be here anyway" said Miichan to the two girls.
"Yes, of course" said Minami as she stepped back from Atsuko shoulders, trying not to blush. "We're going, everybody!"
Atsuko pouted, it was always too short...
You're leaving again...When do I'll have the time to see you properly...?
"So" added the leader, talking to the Ace, "I'll see you tomorrow, at Yuko's!"
"Yeah...you're bringing Kanako right?" Pouted Aachan, already knowing the answer.
"Yes...Yuko asked me too, I don't know why..."
Suddenly out of nowhere, a really good-looking guy interrupted them.
"Aachan, we're doing the first scene again in five minutes, okay?" He smiled.
"Yes, sure. Ah, Kaoru, this is my friends, Miichan, Jurina, Mariko and Minami."
"Very nice to meet you, I'm a fan of AKB48^^"
Miichan smiled in a really girly way, already in love with him, Jurina had no reaction and Minami frowned.
"You're supposed to be Atsuko's boyfriend in the drama?"
"Hm, yeah" he said still smiling.
"Did you kiss her already?"
"Eeh?" Asked Kaoru, red as a tomatoe.
"Hm, give us a sec please Kaoru, I will be right there in 3 minutes" she smiled, embarrassed, as she pulled Minami in a corner.
"Minami, what's wrong?"
"Did you kiss him?" Asked the short one once again, pouting.
Is she jealous?
"No. Why? You don't want me to?"
"Of course not, you don't know him!"
"This is a drama Minami, of course I don't know him!... But it's okay 'coz I know you, and you can't runaway everytime" she smirked as she approached Minami's lips.
"A-Atsuko, what are you doing?!" As she stepped back.
"Right, you prefer Kanako's lips!" She screamed, pouting;
"Eeh?!" Asked Takamina, shocked and surprised by the changing mood of the tall girl.
"I have to go meet my boyfriend, see you tomorrow with your girl" she said as she turned around and go.
Minami joined the three girls, clueless.
"What's with her...?!"
"Takamina, you're a great leader, but sometimes, you're such a dumb person..."sighed Miichan.


Friday, Yuko's house 9pm

"Aachan, relax, it's gonna be okay" said Yuko as she gave her a beer.
"How do you want me to relax?! She's coming with this girl, and I don't know if I'm able to behave right..."
"Don't worry, we're all here for you" she added as she designed all the girls in the room who were talking with each other.
Miichan, Mariko, Kojima, Jurina, Rena, Tomochin.
"Thank you, Yuko" the Ace smiled as she swallowed some liquid. She suddenly felt tight in a denim short and her little black shirt. Kojima had advised her this outfit, and she was trusting her. She was just scared that Minami didn't noticed it, or like it. Kojima had say that it put her legs in value and few detached boutons let people see the beginning of her breast. It was sexy.

Near Yuko's house


"Please be nice with everybody"
"Of course Taka-chan, I can be nice you know."
"Can you stop call me this way? It's weird..."
Minami wasn't feeling very well with this situation.
"Okay, Minami then."
"No...This is just Aachan who call me this way. Use Takamina, like everybody."
"Hm" smirked Kanako, "I have a challenger, I'm gonna fight for my price tonight^^"
The leader didn't answer, she was stressing and had a bad feeling with this party...


Yuko's house 9:30pm

"Aaah welcome leader, and... "she said as she welcomed the girls at the door.
"Kanako" she smiled.
"Kanako, welcome, you're gorgeous!"
"Thank you."
"Come! Come!"
They followed her inside.
"You're not so bad yourself leader" Yuko smirked as she was looking at her clothes, black slim jeans, white tee-shirt and a black jacket. Her hair was seconded, once again.
"Thank you Yuko^^"
They arrived in the evening and everyone looked at them in silent.
"Okay everyone, this is Kanako, a friend of our leader, so be nice^^ Can I get you anything, beer, juice, beer...^^"
"Beer, thank you^^"
Kanako seemed to enjoy this party. The girls had been checked, this was the enemy, but it could be a nice girl so there was no attention in being mean or anything.
Minami greeted everyone and ended up in front of Atsuko, gorgeous as always.
"Hey...Listen, I'm sorry for yesterday, this boy seems nice..."
"No, it's okay" smiled Aachan, "it was funny actually. I had the impression that you didn't want me to..."
"Hello Maeda-san."
"Kanako...welcome."
The blonde girl had joined them and was standing next to Minami, way too close, in Atsuko's opinion.
"It's nice of you to invite me" she smirked, full of irony.
"I didn't actually, but you should thank Yuko, she's always the one with the greatest idea" Atsuko smirked back.
Minami was feeling embarrassed, the two girls were battling, and it was a bad start. She could feel the tension in the air.
"You should go and eat something, ask Mariko, we didn't eat since hours" she said at Kanako's intention.
"Sure...but don't go to far, I'm watching you...^^"
She left and Minami looked at Atsuko again.
"Sorry..."
"She's flirting with you" said the tall girl with a weird face. "I'm gonna go talk with Miichan for a while..."
The leader sighed, something was going on and she had no clue what it was...

10:30pm, corner of the evening.

Rena POV

"Come on Rena, show me!"
"No, why do you want to see it?"
"Could be bad, I'm worried" Jurina smirked.
"It's just a scratch, you just want to be pervert...!"
"Pervert?! Who do you think I am" she said as she came closer to Rena.
"You've been drinking!!" said Rena as she smelled her breath.
"Just two..."whispered Jurina in Rena's neck.

She's too close, I can't let this happen, but she's really kakkoi in this suit...!! She's such a player, but...

"Where is Mariko-sama, she should be watching you and..."
Rena couldn't continue, Jurina had jumped on her lips, kissing her.
"...Jurina!!"
"This is much better this way...let me enjoy my beers and this kiss...You can't runaway everytime Matsui Rena..."she smirked before kissing her again.


In the sofa

"Mari-chan, take your camera, Jurina is working!" Laughed Kojima.
Mariko smiled looking at her student.
"She's really good at this, don't you think?^^"
"You do realize that you are bad senpai right? Teaching her you sadistic tric and encouraging her to be a player..."smiled Miichan.
"We are pisces, we understand each other, and she was like this before!"
Atsuko joined them, another beer in the hand. She sat next to Miichan, really calm.
"How is it going wifey? Are you okay?"
"Yes"
"Okay, so it's not going well, but it's only the beginning, you have the night to take what is yours."
She stopped talking about this as Minami and Kanako were joining them on the couch, followed by Yuko. The blonde girl made Miichan move to sat next to Atsuko, right across them was Minami, next to Yuko.

Minami POV

She's so beautiful...


The leader was drinking beer tonight, because she was too stressed to stay sober. The alchohol was already making her dizzy, it was strange an unusual but pleasant. Things were differeent this way.
"So, how do you know each other?" Asked Yuko to Kanako.
"Oh, we grew up together. I know her better than anyone..."
"Do you have a boyfriend?!"Said Jurina, pressing and excited by the drink she had.
"Haha, no, I'm into girls. More into...boyish girls..."she added as she gave a teaser look at Minami, which everyone saw.
"…"
"And you, Maeda-san" said Kanako as she turned at Atsuko, "how do you know Takamina?"
Atsuko seemed lost and hesitant, because of the insolent self-assurance of the blonde.
"She's my best friend Kanako, we always hang out together, she know me very well" said Minami with a bass voice.
Everyone opened wide eyes, including Atsuko who was really surprised. The leader wasn't really the kind of person who exposed her personal life, but she had been really clear on this and Kanako was pouting.
"I go outside, I have a call and a cigarette waiting for me."
"I come with you!" Screamed Jurina, making Rena pouting.
They went outside while Yuko decided to get other beers from the fridge with Kojima.
"So, how was the set today wifey?"
"Oh good, kaoru-chan was really funny, and I had to do another fight scene, it was exciting!!"
"Kaoru-chan...? so, you're friends now or what?" Frowned Minami.
"Well" said Atsuko blushing, "he is funny and nice to me so..."
"Great..."
Aachan felt some jealousy all of the sudden, her cheeks were red from anger.
"And you with Kanako, is it alright, does she sleep at your house? Did she kiss you yet?"
She stood up and went in the kitchen, really upset.

She's really sexy when she's angry! … Where is Kanako...
I don't understand anything, but it's okay tonight...


Mariko laughed, it wa the first time she saw her leader a little drunk.

11:00pm


"Nyan-Nyan, stop being distant, I need our skinship!!"
"Aah Yuko, you've drank too much again, stop touching my brest!!"
The entrance door opened and Jurina came in, followed by Kanako.
"Guys, Kanako had a great idea, let's play bottle game!"
"BOTTLE GAME!!!I love that game!!"screamed Yuko. "Let's dot it!!"
Nobody really grumble, because of the alcohol, even Minami didn't really understand what was going on. They sat on the carpet and Yuko took a bottle of beer.
"Since I had the idea, I start" imposed Kanako, insolent.
She turned the bottle on the ground...she turned and...it stopped in front of Jurina.
The young girl had a big smile, when she was drunk and even when not, she was always loving kissing girls.
"Oh, the young player...Let see if you know how to handle a woman..."
Rena frowned, she didn't like the irrespectious tone of the older girl. Jurina approached the lips of Kanako and kissed her slowly, like a professional. Mariko took a quick picture and smiled. Kanako stepped back.
"Hm, not so bad kid..."
"Jurina is a good kisser, don't treat her like that" pouted Rena. And since you're so young and drunk, you can't kiss anyone else, it's an adult game! She said as she gave the bottle to Kojima. Nyan-Nyan turned the bottle and it went to... Atsuko.
The Ace smiled, relief that it was Haruna, it was okay with her, she didn't want to kiss Yuko!^^ They giggled and in front of everyone had a nice and gentle kiss, like real friends.
It's not the way you kissed me that night...I feel something bad in my heart, I don't like that.
"Aaah Yuko, you missed something!"laughed Atsuko.
"Mou, Nyan-Nyan, give me on!" Pouted Yuko.
"No, follow the rules^^"
The tall girl turned the bottle fastly and wait for the answer. Unfortunately, it was...Kanako.
What??! Atsuko, don't do this!! This is a nightmare, I don't want you to kiss Kanako!!
Atsuko frowned but she saw the insolent smile of Kanako, like a challenge.
"So, I'm gonna kiss the Ace, see what's so unique...^^"
It was being mean, but Atsuko chose to ignore it. She fastly topped Kanako and kissed her roughly, surprising her. She stepped back and looked at her, with an hint of challenge.
"Wow...maybe girls like me after all...^^" said the blonde looking at Minami with a smile.
Those lips...this is definetely heaven, how I could have ignored this before...I was wrong, I want her, I need her, she was right...She's so gorgeous.
"Taka-chan come ouside, I need to talk to you."
It was an order, but before Minami could realize it, she was following the blonde outside.
Atsuko sighed, it was a really bad evening, she couldn't talk to Minami... She walked next to the windows, when she heard the sound of Minami's phone ringing.. Afraid that it was gonna be her mom, she looked for it in the girl's bag. The phone wasn't there, and searching for it, she dropped a notebook who felt, opened on the floor. Atsuko frowned and picked it up.

The wind is bringing you back to me.
My tears are frozen, lost in the dust.
I've got you, inside me.
I will take you to the other side.
Your fast against mine.
The trees are singing my love song.
I will touch you, easy.


She red the other pages and dropped the notebook again, frozen.
She needed air, to breath, she felt awful in a second. She ran outside and fell nose to nose with Kanako and Minami.
The Ace looked at her leader with tears in your eyes.
"So this is true?! You have written all this things, this...love things about her...Because she just showed up one week ago, and suddenly you're in love with her...??! Who is xhe? You never talked about it!!!"
"What? Aachan? What is it?!"
"Your notebook Minami! You're writting things that I've been waiting you to tell me all this years, and it's for her...?!" she was crying now.
Shit my book...!! Wait, did she said that...?!
"Listen Aachan, I don't know what you saw, but Taka-chan and I are meant to be. You're pretty but maybe you're not the one for everybody, so be nice and get back with the others, we have things to do without you being in our feet..."
Minami and Atsuko frozed, nobody had noticed that all the girls were at the door, watching at the scene with wide opened eyes.
"Atsuko, wait!!" the leader turned at Kanako and speak with her leader voice." You!... You come in my life like this, after what you've done, I don't care that it was nothing for you, you've hurt me I don't trust you and I don't like you anymore!! And you treat my friends like shit, you think you are the world here but you're wrong! And don't you dare speak to Atsuko like that or call her Aachan!! Respect her, she has the nicest personality that I know, you're nothing compared to her, so now go home, not mine and live your life, I'm done with you!!"
Minami was breathless, fire on her cheeks, she was really angry to the blonde girl.
"Go now."
Kanako didn't answer anything, and left, defeated and not so sure of herself anymore.
Minami looked at Atsuko, still breathing hardly.
"Atsuko...I don't..."
"It's okay, I'm your friend I know it's just that..."
I want to do it...I'm afraid but i want it so much...!
"We could still be friends if you want to, anyway thank you for what you've said and..."
Enought...
Minami moved closer to Atsuko in a leap and grabbed her by the neck to kiss her roughly. Her heart was in fire, she had tingling in her fingers...
This is so good...Fucking good...
"Stop saying stupid things...you're so beautiful tonight..."whispered Minami between two kisses.
"Aah Mi-nami...!"
Minami couldn't stop, searching for Atsuko's tongue, licking it.
I knew it was you...You're the one...You're mine...
"You're mine..."she whispered.
"What?"
"You're mine Atsuko...It was you, in the book, it was you" as she kissed her one last time before taking her breath again.
Atsuko had wide opened eyes, trying to take her breath again, asking if it was real or not.
"Minami...are you...is it real??!"
"Yeah, it's my bottle game and I choose you...^^"
The girls were all amiling at the door.
Holy shit! I'm gonna collapse, this is so hot!!"screamed Yuko
"This is so sexy...I knew I would be in heaven..."sighed Jurina.
"Wifey, you've made it!"
"This is so romantic!!"applauded Kojima.

End of the POV

The two girls blushed when they discovered that they weren't alone, but the happiness was so high...
"Okay, ladies, can we get back inside now? It's freezing here!"
Everyone laughed and they came in once again. They sat on the couch, Atsuko near Minami, just to dot Takapillow, the tall girl was tired and happy. Everything was okay now, Minami had chose her, it was so perfect that she wanted to sleep on her shoulder for the rest of her life. She heard them talk for a bit but she was really numb, and she was holding Minami's hand, because she was afraid that maybe she would go away.

00:30

"Aachan... Aachan, wake up..."
Somewhere in her sleep, Atsuko heard the sweet voice of the leader, she slowly opened her eyes.
"Hm...what is it?"
"I'm taking you home, Aachan, you need to sleep" smiled Minami, she had this responsible look that suited her so well.
"No...I want to go in your home, and sleep with you..."
Minami looked at the really cute girl and giggled.
"So, my home it is!" She said as she lifted her and carried her on her back, Atsuko's arms around her neck.
"Ooh, this is so sweet, Nyan-Nyan, please stay is tonight, and sleep with me too!!"
"Okay pervert, you've won here."
"Yay!!!!"
They all accompanied her to the door.
"Don't do anything wrong to my wife okay midget?"
"Don't call me midget!! And you should stop call her your wife okay..."
"You're jealous!! Anyway, be sure to do some dirty things tonight, it's the night!!" smirked Yuko.
"Shut up hentai! Goodnight you two" smiled Kojima.

Minami was walking slowly, enjoying the moment, she was feeling really good, and she had a really cute Aachan on her back, who was half-sleeping half-speaking.
"Minami, you've made me wait...so long..."
"Gomen."
"I love you so much...you're my boyfriend now...don't you dare leave me alone...ever..."
Aachan, I won't, I promise."
"Minami is such a perfect person..."
She fell asleep on Minami's neck., smelling her scent.

01:00pm

Minami put Atsuko on the bed, and topped her to take off her jacket. She was busy trying to take off
her clothes when Atsuko grabbed her by the neck and kissed her.
"Minami, I want you so bad...you're mine, take me now...!"
They kissed like crazy, Minami was getting excited by her girlfriend lying there and asking here to touch her, it was so good...
"Aachan? Aachan...?"
The leader looked at the Ace face and realized that this one was deeply sleeping now. She smiled and stepped back to cover her with a blanket. Dam it was frustrating but it was okay, tomorrow was Saturday.

You're not gonna run away everytime Atsuko, tomorrow you will be mine!!



:inlove: Atsumina  :heart: Hehe, sorry, anyway, this is bad I know but I'm trying to improve!! :nervous




Title: Re: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 7!!!
Post by: Haruko on October 13, 2012, 02:40:06 PM
After this pervy section!!  :on bleed:

yeah!!! we need it :D...
Title: Re: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 7!!!
Post by: TakaminaBG on October 13, 2012, 03:11:15 PM
After this pervy section!!  :on bleed:

yeah!!! we need it :D...
YESS!!! Ahh!! I need more!!! :on bleed:
Please update SOON!!
Title: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 7!!!
Post by: chichay12 on October 13, 2012, 05:51:11 PM
ne fausto-san...
if u will continue this to pervs forum,pls pm me!!
i dont have access there!! :banghead:
hohoho!!

looking forward!!!
and thank you for the update!! :thumbsup
Title: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 7!!!
Post by: m00nchild on October 13, 2012, 07:46:07 PM
nice updated,
Mariko was so bad,
keep taking photo of all the stunning screen,
I think she can try to blackmail others member already,
with all those photo,
Atsumina moment huh~
keep it up,

Looking forward for the next update.
Title: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 7!!!
Post by: Pdpond on October 14, 2012, 02:13:44 AM
This part so sweet>.<
Look for your new update.
Title: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 7!!!
Post by: thebotole on October 14, 2012, 04:24:26 PM
atsumina.... :inlove: :heart:
update please... :bow:
Title: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 7!!!
Post by: yuuzu05 on October 15, 2012, 08:04:10 AM
kyahh!! i really loved this chapter  :wub:
thankyou for the update  :bow: :bow:
Title: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) teaser chapter 8
Post by: fausto on October 24, 2012, 05:52:13 PM
Teaser for the next update!  :banghead:

Minami was sleeping well when the noise of her phone wake her up. She slowly opened her eyes, the light was too bright for her. She fumbled to find her clock.
09am...To soon...It's day off today...
She opened her phone and saw that it was a mail from Kanako. She sighed, she had almost forgot about her...

Taka-chan, don't reject me like that.
I could be really persuasive.
If I can't have you than she can't neither.
Put an end to this.
Love.


Minami felt her heart stopped. Memories came back like a punch on her face.
Kanako was threatening her again. It was really bad.

Please don't kill me but it's issue time... :nervous
Title: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) teaser chapter 8
Post by: thebotole on October 26, 2012, 06:19:34 PM
a nice teaser... :twothumbs
the next update will be interesting  :wub:
look forward for the update.. :bow:
Title: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) teaser chapter 8
Post by: m00nchild on October 26, 2012, 07:42:03 PM
nice teaser,
Looking forward for it,
please update soon.
Title: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 8
Post by: fausto on November 09, 2012, 09:49:59 PM
Hello, I'm really sorry for those who are waiting for the updates of my fics, I don't really know what's happening, I have a sort of hard time on fics, hard to continue... :( But don't worry I'm gonna update soon. For this, it's a short one, and I'm on it so you won't wait long before the next part. Please, excuse me for this.

Chapter 8



"Minami, why are you like that today...?" pouted Aachan.
"Hm? For nothing, it's just that...I need to focus on work..."
Atsuko was trying to touch the leader but this one was all weird, trying to avoid her contact.
Later this morning after the first mail, Minami had sent her a respond

What do you want from me?


The blond girl was vicious.

Your love.
Don't date her or else I would tell the press.


Minami didn't know what to do... It was a messy situation, she couldn't ignore Kanako's threat, it was serious and she couldn't hold a scandal, especially involving Atsuko and AKB48. But not telling Aachan and avoiding her was not possible neither...
"Mi-na-mi!" Whispered Atsuko has she bited gently her ear.
"Aah, Aachan...it's not helping at all..."
"Helping? What are you trying to do...?"
"No-Nothing..."
Minami couldn't ignore the sexyness of her girlfriend, her soft skin and her mouth far too close to her own body...
"Aachan, could you step back please, I need to work..."
"Work...?" she said as she sat on her girlfriend's lap, "why do you need to work now...? Just when I need your touch and your kisses..."
"Because...Hmm" she moaned as her girlfriend kissed her neck. "It's important..."
"Minami! It's 10am, you have the all day to work on that, can't you just focus on me for a bit and enjoy it...?"
The short girl looked at the gorgeous girl pouting, it was too hard to see her sad and half naked without doing anything. But she couldn't ignore Kanako, and the earliest she would try to stop dating Aachan the easiest it would be.
"This is not you it's just..."
She couldn't keep on talking, her lips were taken by Atsuko's mouth. It was a very hot kiss, long and rough. Minami could feel the Ace warm body so close to her.
"Stop talking, and take me... I fell asleep last night but today I'm way too awake so that you can't escape me..."whispered Atsuko, breathless.
Minami thought once again about the mail, and then she gave up and kissed Atsuko back. Just once, she wanted her just once, and then she will take responsability and stop this realtionship for the sake of Atsuko.
"Are you sure you want that?" Asked Minami, already touching Atsuko's butt.
"Never been so sure...^^"
They kissed for a long time, getting excited and wanting more. Minami's brain was being fucked, she couldn't think about something else than Atsuko's body, her hands on it. Suddenly she stood up as she she carried her beautiful girlfriend, her hands underneath her ass.
"Wow Minami you're strong...This is so sexy..."
The leader smiled and took her to the bed.
"Are you sure you're not gonna snore in two minutes...? Because I will be forced to take you in your sleep..."
"Be sure that I'm wide awake..."
Minami took off Aachan's shirt roughly, she wanted her so much that she was shaking. Seeing her naked brest was too much.
"…"
"Minami?" Asked Atsuko worried. "Is it something wrong?!"
"No... This is just...beautiful...I mean you're beautiful..."
Atsuko smiled and grabbed her girlfriend by the neck, forcing her to kiss her.
"I think you'll have to do me twice at least because I'm too excited to wait..."
"No problem..."
She sucked her breast, voraciously.
"Aah...Hmfff...Minami!"
"Is it good?"
"Hmm...yes..."
She continue doing it and started to rub her clit, still covered by her pants. Atsuko shaked because of the waves of desire. She needed Minami'sbody closer to hers.
"Minami, I'm sorry, I think I can't wait because I want you so much...I'm gonna..."
"It's okay, Atsuko. Since you drove me crazy with you're body...I won't be able to work until I fuck you three of four times...so go on..."

Sorry if you're disappointed... :nervous
Title: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 8
Post by: Haruko on November 09, 2012, 10:11:40 PM
OMG!! yeah!! but i feel sorry because then..takabaka gonna broke acchan`s heart -_____-

smexy time!! :D.. and what happen with kojiyuu?!... :D
Title: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 8
Post by: TakaminaBG on November 10, 2012, 10:38:56 AM
Takamina the pervert!!!!
Title: Re: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 8
Post by: kahem on November 10, 2012, 10:47:41 AM
wow!!!! Go Takamina save the problems for later hehe
Title: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 8
Post by: dark48 on November 10, 2012, 03:00:44 PM
Wild Takaboy!!!

tnx for the update ^^
Title: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 8
Post by: saeyukilover on November 11, 2012, 10:16:25 AM
 :onioncheer: :onioncheer: :onioncheer: oh yeah! oh yeah! go go minami!! go wild minami! :)

 :mon blood: :mon blood: nose bleeedddd!!! GP i need blood.. i'm loosing too much:)

 :twothumbs
Title: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 8
Post by: cisda83 on November 19, 2012, 10:22:34 AM
Just Joining

Keep up the good work and looking forward to the next chapter

Thank you for the interesting fanfic  :drool: :inlove:
Title: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 8
Post by: takamae on November 19, 2012, 03:42:40 PM
Kanako is a creepy woman
Be strong minami, there always a way for you complete your love with acchan, gambatte
Thanx for the update, will be waiting for the next update ^^
Title: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 8
Post by: stepk on December 07, 2012, 12:34:39 AM
I Hope
you can upload the next chapter

time is passing xDD
Title: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 8
Post by: FlameHazeKatsu on January 08, 2013, 06:14:11 PM
This is H-O-T I tell ya hot! LOL  :mon bleed2: (I hope this get finished, this is a really good story) author-san ganbare!  :onioncheer:































PS: Onegai~~`, finish this  :kneelbow: hahahahaha :mon thumb:
Title: Re: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 8
Post by: kairi on January 09, 2013, 12:50:39 AM
Oh this is really hot *o* please continu I love your story ♥
Title: Re: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 8
Post by: Archer1992 on July 11, 2013, 11:46:31 PM
waaaaa

continue!!!!!!!!

update!

or something.....TT.TT!!!!

that bitch...como on minami do something
Title: Re: You can't run away everytime (Atsumina) chapter 8
Post by: noah minami on September 10, 2013, 06:54:11 AM
what the hell,happen between kanako and minami? :angry:
why can't this girl leave minami alone!! :banghead:
minami please be with acchan.. :thumbsup
i want an update .... onegai... :fap  :panic: