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Title: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: Wmatsui22 on October 05, 2012, 12:22:48 PM
Best Friend

Part I

   I, Takahashi Minami also known as Takamina to my friends and I have a beautiful best friend Maeda Atsuko and I called her Acchan. We’re been friends since birth, I guess because our parents are closed so their daughters become also close not that close but very close to each other. We’re also been friend for almost five and a half years and today is our 6th anniversary for being together as BEST FRIEND as capital BEST FRIEND. You think that I am sarcastic here?! Yeah! That’s right  because I’ve been waiting for her almost two hours! What the hell?! This is the first time Atsuko did to me! But I am also worried to her what if she could be in danger? What will I am going to do? I am in panicked state right now and suddenly my phone ring and I get it from my pocket of my jacket. ”Moshi! Moshi! Takamina” The other line said. What the Hell Yuko!. ”Ui ! Don’t shout at my Nyan-nyan !”. S-sorry Haruna, I thought your Yuko. ”It’s okay Minami” Haruna said and I know if my friends call me Minami, there’s something wrong or bad will happened to me. What is it Haruna? I asked. “A-ano, Minami, I-. . .” What Haruna? I raised my tone and suddenly Yuko interrupted our conversation. “We see your beloved Acchan date a guy” the squirrel shout to me. What? Are you making fun of me again?! I shouted back to them. “See it for yourself Minami, We are here in AKB48 Romance Fine Dining Restaurant. Our table is located at the back where Acchan and the guy seat not a far from our table”.  Haruna said calmly and the call ended.  I Froze at where  I stand. I am confused on what Yuko and Haruna said to me about Acchan date a guy. Is my friend telling the truth? Or not? Or should I go to see it for myself? In the end, I decided to go to that damn restaurant.

After the long run from the park at this damn AKB48 Restaurant. I feel exhausted due to marathon and I am not an athlete so my legs are trembling and my body is full of sweat and the good thing I smell nice although my body is full of sweat. Before I enter the main door I fixed my jacket and I walk and there’s a lady who greet me. “Good Evening Sir! May I help you?” the waiter said. I guess I have a table because my friend invited me here. “okay Sir” the waiter bowed to me. I walk and I surprised on what I see. Atsuko holding hand to a guy and it seem very happy and sweet. I- I feel my heart is going to exploded due to heart break. My legs also trembling and I feel my tears are flowing in my cheeks but I managed to say.
A-acchan??? “M-Minami?”

TBC…
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Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: Wmatsui22 on October 05, 2012, 12:28:18 PM
I wrote this Fan fiction..

because I Love AtsuMina pairing

although Acchan is not in AKB48 anymore..

I will support them :D

Sorry for my wrong grammar..

I hope you enjoy reading it and please leave a comment..

Thank You

_+WMatsui_22+_
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: Wmatsui22 on October 05, 2012, 12:42:34 PM
hehe..

Thank You Sese-san for reading and commenting to my work..

guy? It will reveal in Part II..

Thank You  :thumbsup
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: Wmatsui22 on October 05, 2012, 12:45:08 PM
* Rukaeru-san..

Thanks for reading it.. :D

Yes.. I will continue it but my next update will be next next week

because this coming week I have a very hectic schedule..

I hope you understand..

Thank You  :thumbsup
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: miayaka on October 05, 2012, 12:54:09 PM
Hoooo  :ding:
Your own fic at-last..
looking forward on this!
Continue your work  :kneelbow:
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: Wmatsui22 on October 05, 2012, 01:05:39 PM
* Miayaka-san

Thank You Miayaka-san for reading my work..  :bow:

Hmm..

You too update your fan fiction..

I can't wait for your next chapter..

Thank You..  :thumbsup
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: TakaminaBG on October 05, 2012, 01:18:53 PM
Finally I can read your own fanfic.
The story is pretty interesting!! Achan?!?! Who the heck is that guy???
Poor Takamina...... (hug)
Can't wait for the update!!!
GOOD JOB!!
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: Wmatsui22 on October 05, 2012, 01:23:03 PM
*TakaminaBG

Thank You for reading it..

hehe..

Thank You..

 :thumbsup
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: Wmatsui22 on October 05, 2012, 01:24:29 PM
THANKS FOR READING AND COMMENTING !!!  :jphip:

I FEEL GOOD AND I WILL CONTINUE TO WRITE THIS FAN FICTION..

TO MY SILENT READERS..

THANK YOU..

I HOPE YOU  COMMENT :D
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: fausto on October 05, 2012, 02:56:36 PM
Aaah good to read you wmatsui22!! And an astumina fanfic!! You made my day^^but watch out aachan! don't hurt my oshimen hehe! :heart:
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: Pdpond on October 05, 2012, 05:29:00 PM
Oh! Acchan you break my takaboy's heart.
But who the guy?  :banghead:
Look forward next update ~
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: Haruko on October 06, 2012, 05:51:50 AM
come on! really for a guy.. acchan T_T what are you doing?
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: Wmatsui22 on October 06, 2012, 09:03:18 AM
Best Friend

Part II

   Atsuko seemed surprised to see me in this restaurant and her face is filled with guilt that I caught  dating with this stupid guy?! (what the hell?!) I screamed in my mind. “M-Minami, what are you do—I interrupted her by slapping his cheek. What I am doing here?! What the hell?! Atsuko!! I’ve been waiting for you to the park because it’s our 6th anniversary of being a BEST FRIEND and yet I see you dating this stupid guy and I punched him right at his face and he fell down. As I try to attack one more time, Atsuko shield her body to protect this stupid guy. (What is this? Why is she protecting that guy? I am very confused) “Why did you do that Minami?!” Atsuko shout and her eyes form a tears and I feel guilty but my heart and my mind screamed. Why you dating this stupid guy? I is not enough to make you happy? Atsuko? Why you betrayed me? I thought you love me more than a BEST FRIEND? I said it while my eyes is form also a tears but Atsuko seems mad and she said that my whole body, heart and soul totally breaks with her sudden confession. “I love you Minami as a friend but not that kind of love that you think. I am not a gay and I don’t want a friend “L” and this day our friendship ends and I just want to tell you that I and Sato Takeru are officially in a relationship”. “What are you doing this Atsuko?” Haruna asked and Yuko support my body not to collapsed and the patrons of that restaurant gaze on our spot. “You hear it Haruna what I said I hate “L’s”
Just like you and Yuko” Atsuko smirked to us. ‘it’s really disgusting that my friends are like that”. Yuko will attack Atsuko but I hold her hand in a firm grip and I said, Let’s Go guys, we don’t have to waste our time to that bitch. I smiled to them to assure that I am fine but in reality it really hurts that I want to die right now. After a few minutes, we leave this hell, I mean this damn restaurant.
This is the last time that I will see my beloved Atsuko whom I really love and I will miss her very much. Our closeness seems to end our wonderful memories will be forgotten. I said it while I crying so hard in the corner of our secret place.

TBC..
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: Wmatsui22 on October 06, 2012, 09:26:21 AM
*Fausto-san :   Thank You for reading my work..
                      Don't worry.. It's an obstacle to TakaMina and how she managed the heart breaks..

*Haruko-san :  Yeah! Acchan in this story is a bit bitchy.. :(
                       Thank You for reading my work..


*Pdpond :        The Guy is Sato Takeru
                       Thank You for reading my work..

_Thank you !!!  :jphip:

_by : WMatsui_
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: ichikawa on October 06, 2012, 09:29:07 AM
No no no no ... my Atsumina!!!  :mon ref:
Acchan! come back to Takamina!!!  :mon hanky:
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: TakaminaBG on October 06, 2012, 02:05:27 PM
What the hell?!?! I really REALLY wanna SLAP Acchan!!!
What the heck is she saying??? What's wrong with her. She is not a bitch.... She is a... I can't even find a word to describe her!!!! I hate her (in this fic)!!!
Please update SOON!!
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: thebotole on October 06, 2012, 04:37:11 PM
that sato again??  :smhid
it will be interesting..
update pls  :bow:
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: saeyukilover on October 06, 2012, 07:16:35 PM
Bakaero!!!  :angry: acchan!!!!!

And huh!! I've been reading too much of sago takeru in atsumina fic  :smhid

I guess atsumina hate him too much

 :twothumbs
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: Haruko on October 07, 2012, 04:40:53 AM
no way.. atsuko you.b**ch.. make her suffer >_>
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: Wmatsui22 on October 07, 2012, 05:24:49 AM
_Morning !!!_

+Rukaeru-san          - Sorry.. but it's just an obstacle in the AtsuMina pairing :D
                              I LOVE AtsuMina
                              Thank You for reading

+TakaminaBG-san    - Yeah! that's right Acchan is a bitch here but in the end she will be an angel (LOL)
                               I think I will update next Sunday..
                               Thank You for reading

+thebotole-san        -Sato-san? I hate him  :angry:
                              Thank You for reading

+saeyukilover          -I think so.. :)
                               Thank You for reading

+haruko-san             -Thank You for reading


_for all my readers (silent or not) thank You !!! :)

_I will update as soon as possible.

_+WMatsui_22+_
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: Pdpond on October 07, 2012, 05:20:33 PM
Awhh!! it hurt when acchan said like that  :mon ref:
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: Wmatsui22 on October 13, 2012, 01:09:59 PM
Best Friend - Part III


Everyday Atsuko seems so happy torturing me because her and Sato is very sweet to each other and their also kissing in public. The bad thing is, it’s just not a simple kiss but a FRENCH KISS!!!! (What the Hell!!!!) I am very disappointed to her, She is not like that in the past.

FLASHBACK

   In our secret place, we are sitting in the rock along the falls and our feet is in the water playing on it.  “Neh, Minami, if someday, I will have a boyfriend, I promise that I and my boyfriend will not be affectionate in public because I don’t want other people to gossip about our sweetness. “When she said that, my heart hurts because I love her but I can’t confess to her”.
END OF FLASHBACK
   But seeing her right now, She’s totally flirt bitch but I love her so much that I can’t be mad at her. What a poor human I am.

“Takamina” I heard someone call me and I look back at her and I saw Itano Tomomi
“The Fashionista” but I called her “Tomochin” . She is standing near the window signaling me to come to her. The couple beside me seems distracted and walk away. I come to Tomochin and asked her Why you called me? Tomochin?. “You don’t need to see them in awkward situation, you will only hurt yourself” After hearing that to Tomochin, I’m starting to cry as I hug her she hug me back too. After a few minutes, we stared to each other and suddenly she kiss me on the lips. I am very surprised and I feel my heart beat increase at the wild action of my friend.  “I am sorry Takamina, but I can’t hold it anymore. I LOVE YOU!!! More than a friend” but she said it in a whisper tone and tears flowing in her cheek. I wipe her tears using my small hands and I just smiled and I hold her hand and walk away. We didn’t know that someone took a picture of the scene that will ruin their reputation.
   
TBC,...
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: Haruko on October 13, 2012, 02:41:58 PM
takatomo.. eh?! really.. BUT acchan deserves that..
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: TakaminaBG on October 13, 2012, 02:53:41 PM
YAY!! TakaTomo!!!! For some weird WEIRD reason I LOVE seeing them together and I pray to see more TAKATOMO moments!!!
But.... Acchan.... why are you with him???
UPDATE SOON!!
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: thebotole on October 13, 2012, 06:40:13 PM
Nooo..acchan..   :banghead:
Takatomo moment..  :inlove:
 Look forward for the next update.. :twothumbs
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: Wmatsui22 on October 18, 2012, 12:22:01 PM
Best friend – Part IV

“Tik-Tok-Tik-Tok” Arghh! It’s noisy! I immediately turned off the damn alarm clock! As I sit in my bed, there’s a little kitten and I smiled patting his small head. His name is “Sky” because of his blue eyes that is like the color of sky and that eyes remained of me of someone although her eyes is not blue but color black is very attractive. I let out a small sighed. Sky is a Siamese Cat that Atsuko gave to me when were in junior high although I have an allergy, I REALLY LOVES CAT.

FLASHBACK

Acchan! I called her “What is it Minami?” The day after tomorrow is my birthday! I said it with a smile that my dimples shown at both side of my cheek. She giggled at that sighted  and slapped me at my arm and she said “Don’t worry, Minami! I have a present to you and she winked at me and I blushed at that time making her laughed at me.


Atsuko is late! Damn! Where is she? Suddenly the door of my house opened revealing the short black haired girl with a small cage in her hand. “Minami! I am very sorry for being late again”. I ignored what she said but what’s that? As I point my index finger at the small cage. “My present to you!” Atsuko said and held me the small cage. Wow! A kitten! Kawaii! “Yeah, this small kitten is a very cute one and her breed is a Siamese, Happy Birthday! Minami! And she hugs me. (It feels good) Thank You! Acchan! I appreciate your gift but I am really happy that  your here with me in my birthday although I know your very busy. I cried at that (I’m such and crybaby). “It’s okay, Minami! Were Best Friend so, it should have a time with you. She smiled sweetly at me and I hug her back.

FLASHBACK END

I sighed heavily in reminisce of the past and well this bedroom have also a good memories of Acchan. In my bedroom, I have a medium sized bed with white and red bed sheet. Next to my bed, there is a bed side table and top of it is a red lamp. In the right to bed, there is a wooden desk and at the top of it is a computer. I also have a musical instrument like guitar and piano. Well, I like to compose a song. Sometimes, to kill boredom, I draw a abstract or I will sketch a picture of Acchan. And that is my story about my room.


After preparing my things, I dashed out my door and locked it and not far away, I can see Tomochin standing at the front gate of our University but it seemed the pretty face of Tomochin is somewhat bothered.”Ohayoo” She said to me. What’s wrong Tomochin? Do you have a problem? I asked her. “Principal Yamomoto Sato wants you to meet him at his office discussing important matters. I see her tears in the corner of her eyes. It’s okay Tomochin, I smiled to her while holding her hand. “D-Do you know already?” Nope, but I have an idea on what’s going on. Don’t worry, I will be fine.

TBC…
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: Haruko on October 19, 2012, 05:23:21 AM
eh?! im confusing...
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: Wmatsui22 on October 19, 2012, 02:00:05 PM
My Replies to my readers:


@Haruko-san : Sorry if my chapter is very confusing  :bow:
                       I will make it up in the next chapter.

@Origami-san :  Sorry if my chapter is very confusing  :bow:
                       I will make it up in the next chapter.
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: Wmatsui22 on October 20, 2012, 04:41:59 AM
Best Friend - Part V


After talking to Principal Yamomoto Sato, I walked in the hallway that you will see me like a zombie. It hurts my heart and soul on what Principal told me about the scandal of Tomochin and I.


FLASHBACK AT PRINCIPAL’S OFFICE


I slowly walked to the pathway to the Principal’s room. I have already an idea, why Principal calls me. I will knock the door when it suddenly open revealing this evil guy in front of me, Sato Takeru. Damn! He’s smiling at me or I can say that he is mocking at me. “Takahashi-san, this time I won the game between us” (What is he mean? Yeah! I know, he win’s Acchan’s heart and for sure! I will be kick-out in this university because of the scandal. I hope Tomochin will be alright). And then he leave and bam my shoulder. “There you are Takahashi-san” Principal Yamomoto said smirking at me. “First, I want you to know that even you are the most intelligent in this campus, you are not exempted in a punishment for breaking our dear rules. As far as I am concern, we didn’t allowed the students to be delinquent and you are the first! Takahashi-san! Your disgrace in your family, for being a LESBIAN! God! Help me! And the disgusting things that you do is kissing Itano-san! You don’t have a dignity!” She said with full of angriness. I only do is nod at her, I don’t know what to say or depend myself because I think that all she said was true! But the worst thing that I heard that is breaking my heart and shattered into pieces. “Maeda-san, took a pictures of you and Itano-san kissing at the hallway and she said that she distant herself to you because she sensed that you are LESBIAN and you might be desired your best friend to be your girlfriend”. I was shocked! Acchan! Acchan will not do such thing to me like that. “From now on, I Yamomoto Sato will kicked you out in this University and I for sure that all the University in Tokyo will not accept you! You can leave now!”. She shout at me and then I take a leave.


FLASHBACK ENDS


While I am walking, I see a familiar figure that will go to my direction and that is my best friend. “M-Minami” I slap her face! How dare you to that to me?! “Do what?” Don’t play innocent here Maeda! I shout at her. You’re a traitor! I hate you so much! From now on, were not BEST FRIEND anymore nor schoolmates but a stranger to each other.


OTHER POV


“Damn!, Damn!” A woman with whip in her hand continue to say bad words while the other woman try to calm down the first woman. “I don’t know what to do for creating this damn band! I need a guy or gay or whatever that is very talented in playing musical instrument and have a nice voice!”. Suddenly, he heard a something that is very interesting to hear.
Other side of the bar, a midget is playing a guitar and sing her composed song titled “A Little Not Over You” to release her stress, loneliness and angriness that she feel that she didn’t notice the two figure listened and watching her silently.

Minami Sings playing with her guitar :

E-e-e Ouuh
E-e-e whoooa
E-e-e Ouuh
E-e-e

It never crossed my mind at all
It’s what I tell myself
What we had has come and gone
You’re better off with someone else
It’s for the best, I know it is
But I see you
Sometimes I try to hide
What I feel inside
And I turn around
You’re with him now
I just can’t figure it out

Chorus
Tell me why it’s so hard to forget
Don’t remind me, I’m not over it
Tell me why
I can’t seem to face the truth
I’m just a little too not over you

E-e-e Ouuh
E-e-e Not over you
E-e-e Ouuh
E-e-e

Memories, supposed to fade.
What’s wrong with my heart?
Shake it off, let it go.
Didn’t think it’d be this hard.
Should be strong, movin’ on
But I see you sometimes I try to hide
What I feel inside and I turn around,
You’re with him now
I just can’t figure it out

Chorus
Tell me why it’s so hard to forget
Don’t remind me, I’m not over it
Tell me why I can’t seem to face the truth
I’m just a little too not over you

Bridge
Maybe I regret everything I said
No way to take it all back, yeah
Now I’m on my own
How I let you go, I’ll never understand
I’ll never understand, yeeeeaah, ooh
Ooooh, oohh ooh
Ooh ooooohh, ooh

Chorus
Tell me why it’s so hard to forget.
Don’t remind me, I’m not over it.
Tell me why I can’t seem to face the truth.
I’m just a little too not over you.

Tell me why it’s so hard to forget
Don’t remind me, I’m not over it
Tell me why I can’t seem to face the truth
And I really don’t know what to do
I’m just a little too not over you

E-e-e Ouuh
E-e-e Not over you
E-e-e Ouuh
E-e-e



After hearing the midget's voice..


SAEKO’S POV


“This! Finally! The band will be complete!. She smiled evilly and walked towards Minami and slightly tap her shoulder making Minami screamed “kya!!!!!, Monster!!!” after hearing Monster from Minami, Saeko smacked Minami in the head. “ITAI” Saeko also shocked that this talented person is a SHE not HE. “Don’t be rude Midget in front of your sensei!” Midget?! Oi! I am not a midget! “WHATEVER” “I have a deal with you!” A Deal? After that she feels her body weak and she felt dizzy and it went black.


TBC..

Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: Haruko on October 20, 2012, 06:47:23 AM
eh?! minami.. spell.. really?.. atsuko?.. a band...
Im confused -_-
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: Wmatsui22 on October 23, 2012, 04:54:06 AM
Best Friend - Part VI



”Yuko!” Yuko look back at me with annoyed face. “do you know where is Minami right now? I haven’t

see her for almost two weeks?” before Yuko answer my question, Haruna interrupted our conversation
 
by asking me a question. ”Why do you care? Atsuko? Correct me if I was wrong on what I heard from

others that you ruined her life by capturing Minami and Tomochin kissing. Is that what you want,

Atsuko? To ruined your best friend life because she is an “L” It is wrong that she loves you as a

woman?! Answer me, Atsuko!!! I was surprised at the sudden change of attitude of Haruna. Kojima

Haruna is a quiet, sweet and sometimes air headed but have a kind heart and long patience towards

her friends but seeing her right now, she was pissed off.

“I-I do care for her!, I do love her b-but there are things that is forbidden!.” Really?!  There’s

nothing wrong if you love someone that same as your gender as long as you love each other, you can

live happily ever after (LOL). You don’t know how much pain Minami takes when you are with Sato,

she’s crying every night, she takes all the pain by herself so that her friends will not be worried
 
to her situation! Atsuko, do you understand?! Or are you pretending to be dense!! Answer me!! She

suddenly pull my collar, her eyes met mines, I see her tears and I also surprised that my tears

already flowing in my cheeks. I-I am sorry Haruna, Yuko and Minami b-but I don’t know what to do,

I felt an arm hug me and that is Haruna, her anger subsided. I cry so much. I told them that I love

Minami so much I love Minami more than a friend. I love her as a woman but I am 3 months pregnant

and the father of my baby is Sato. And that is the reason why I always push Minami, saying harsh

things to her so that she will hate me and forget her love to me. I betrayed her when I and Sato

have an intense relationship I cried when I said it to them. Haruna and Yuko also cried and

hug me. They understand my situation and they forgiven me but there’s someone I need to ask a

forgiveness. A really important person in my life.

TBC...


Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: Haruko on October 23, 2012, 05:15:19 AM
omg.. a baby? no way!!
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: yuuzu05 on October 23, 2012, 06:20:08 AM
omo :shocked :shocked
dont get me wrong, i like atsumina, but in this case idt atsuko should get minami back..i mean, she's gna have to work her butt off to have any chance with her (if any chance at all) :smhid
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: yourockme on October 23, 2012, 07:35:26 AM
WHOOOOOOOOOOOW
Acchan is is is  :shocked:
HAHA..
TakaTomo XD Yieee
I Lurb that
Ur Fic is really interesting
OMG I hate Acchan in this FIC  :angry:
XD
Update soon
ARigatou
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: Pdpond on October 23, 2012, 09:07:30 AM
sounds interesting in your fic
atsuko why you do that to minami.
she love you so much ahhhh :banghead:
pls update soon :bow:
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: Wmatsui22 on October 25, 2012, 11:02:57 AM
Best Friend – Part VII

D-Deal? “Yes, a deal between you and me” she smiled evilly making me shiver. No! I don’t want to deal with you Psycho woman! I shout and struggle in my seat that earned me smack in the head. (Itai) “what aggressive you are, but you can’t escaped here”. She said creepily. Damn this crazy woman. “knock!, knock!” when the door opened revealing two figures, the one is familiar with me because she also one of  the culprit that kidnapped me at the bar and beside her is a d-doctor? Doctor? I think because her coat is like what the real doctor is wearing and her posture seemed professional. “Saeko-san, this is Dr. Yokoyama Yui our doctor in this experiment”. “Good Job!!! Marilyn, you have a surprised gift from me” said the crazy woman to Marilyn with a wink (gross). Wait, E-experiment? What the hell is that?!!! I don’t realized that I said it loud that the three gazed at me saying “IDIOT MIDGET”. “okay, we kidnapped you to become an idol” I-idol? are you serious?! why me? I don’t have any talent that you can you used. “Why you?, great question midget” Don’t call me midget! “Whatever, midget. Anyway, I choose you because of your voice but I am disappointed that you’re a girl”. What’s wrong if I am a girl? “Simple answer to your question, midget. I need only a one BOY to complete my band that composed of 3 boys, unfortunately you’re a GIRL! Not a real girl because you look manly”. Manly? What the fuck is she implying?! “seeing her midget that somewhat trouble on what she said, but our problem will be solved if you agree to take this medicine to become a real man as she handle a black tablet. H-Huh?! The only word I said.[/pre]

Atsuko POV

How pity I am right now as I gripped my skirt and tears flowing in my cheek. I see my tears down to my hand. I regret with my decision that I made.

FLASHBACK

I read some books when someone knocked our door. “knock! Knock!” “Coming!” My mom said while walking towards the door. “Acchan, come here”. I hear my mom call me and I immediately went to the living room and I was surprised that Takeru-kun is there together with his parents. (Does he know that I am pregnant?) I feel my sweat become cold  as I sit in the couch. (I feel there will be bad happened today).  Takeru-kun said to my mom that he is responsible to my pregnancy and he’s willing to marry me. I am speechless (I don’t know what I am feeling right now but one thing is for sure that I feel empty and I don’t know why) and my mom surprised and agree to the proposal of Takeru-kun.

END OF FLASHBACK

I can’t do anything nor undo it because I know this will happened anytime sooner or later. In the first place, It’s wrong to sleep with Takeru-kun, I am only fond of him because he’s gentleman towards me and my friends, he’s also smart and definitely handsome that some girl go gaga to him. I am fooled that I fall easily to his charm and have a one-night stand and this is the effect of it. “You cry too much, Acchan” H-Haruna? She smiled to me and hug me. “don’t cry, she will understand if she knows the reason why you are marrying Sato Takeru”. I hope so, Haruna.

Ceremony at Church

While I am walking to aisle, I feel uncomfortable and my smile is a fake one. When Takeru hold my hand firmly, I gazed at his eyes. You will see that his eyes is  full of happiness and I felt more guilty. The ceremony starts. “Sato Takeru, Do you take Maeda Atsuko to be your legal wife in sickness and in health, by richer or poorer , till death do us part” the priest said. “I do” Takeru said easily with no hesitation in his voice. “Maeda Atsuko, Do you take Sato Takeru to be your legal husband in sickness and in health, by richer or poorer, till death do us part” “…………”  (I suddenly remember all the happy and sad memories of Minami. Her smile, lame jokes and her eyes full of honesty and love) all the audience seemed distract when I didn’t answer the question quickly. I see Takeru somewhat afraid on what will I answer but I think it’s too late if I don’t marry this guy, Minami will also be mad at me. Nothing will change if I choose one. “I-I do” and you may kissed the bride. Takeru at first hesitate to kiss me but he do it smoothly but in the corner of eye, I see someone standing at the door and somewhat familiar because of his height but he is a guy not a girl that I know. Then he left but I see in his eyes the sadness and pain.
“I think this is goodbye and give up my love to her. She’s happy with that guy and I must begin my new life with my new friends and find someone to fixed my broken heart.

TBC…


Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: dark48 on October 25, 2012, 12:42:27 PM
That was really heart breaking :cry:
Don't give up on Acchan, Takamina!!!
Tnx for the update....
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: chichay12 on October 25, 2012, 01:13:10 PM
F*ck Nooooooooo!!!!

What just hppend?
My god!

Update soon! :banghead:
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: chiqinna on October 25, 2012, 01:56:00 PM
yeah~ really broken heart  :on shady:
someone please fix her Taka's heart!!!  :mon pray2:
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: Sydney W on October 25, 2012, 04:28:39 PM
totally heart broken to see Acchan say "I do" to Takeru... Quick heal Taka heart !
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: Haruko on October 26, 2012, 04:21:39 AM
omg!! takaboy is a boy.. but just temporarily right?.... what´s going happen...
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: Wmatsui22 on October 26, 2012, 09:38:24 AM
Best Friend – Part VIII

After 7 years…

Kai POV


Seven years had passed, this feeling of coming back home from where I was born feels me comfortable but at the same time sweet and sour memories flashback to my mind. How is she? Is she okay? Happy? Arghh! Why I am thinking her?! For God sake! She is married and probably have kids and become one happy family but why this feeling? I feel there’s something wrong that I need to fixed and help her. I think this is Best Friend instinct.  Anyway, I went to Japan to take a break from my career, sometimes being an idol is  tiresome because of the busy schedule and you don’t have time to rest and have a privacy on your own because of the stupid paparazzi that always there when  your strolling, eating in a fined dining restaurant and shopping. What a life I have?! But if I don’t agree in that crazy woman, what I would become? poor? Happy? I think so, So, My name right now is Takahashi Kai, 22 years old, member of an ikemen band called PERSONA. Actually, My real name is Takahashi Minami but when I agree to deal to that woman, she insist that I change my name that suits me because I am now a man not a girl in the past. I am strong now, I can do whatever I want because I can support my needs and desire but one thing that I don’t have. Her love. Love of my Best Friend. All these years, although I have a lot of girlfriends including the Diva that is now my friend and Tomochin that is a friend of mine in the past, and having now a boyfriend named Minegashi Kuu,  I still love her and I think, the missing piece of my heart to complete is her.
I almost fall in the bench when I feel the ball hit  my head hard making me ache in pain. There’s a boy running in my direction to take his ball from my hand but seeing the boy, he looks familiar. He must be between seven to nine years old. Tall at his age.  Shaggy hair. Spiky at  top, which remind me of a typical hair cut for a Japanese teenager. When he’s in front of me, he bowed ”Sorry mister if I hit you in the head” Ah! No, that’s okay. He smiled that somehow looks very familiar with me. ”can I?” eh? Oh! Sure, you can have it. After an awkward moment, I decided to break the ice from asking him, you won’t mind play basketball with me? I smiled slightly, if he refused, that’s okay I understand but I am surprised when he agree to what I said. ”okay but if I won on our game, you treat me a Katsudon!” he said happily. I smiled at this boy, what a coincident, I also love katsudon! And Yes! Deal! I will treat you if you won but if you lose…hmmm.. he’s a bit tensed.. hehe.. if you lose I will trained you so that you improve on this game. He only nod on what I said. Ahh! My name is Takahashi Kai as I forward my right hand to him, he’s surprised but recovered easily, My name is Sato, Kaizer then he shake his hand. S—Sato?! Is he the son of Takeru guy and Atsuko? I feel my heart will going to break again.


TBC…

Wmatsui: Thanks for reading. Please comment. Thank You
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: Wmatsui22 on October 26, 2012, 10:08:23 AM
WMATSUI MESSAGE:

First, thank you for reading the chapter VII and commenting it..

I hope the silent readers will comment. Thank You.

Thank YOU.


@Rukaeru-san: Thanks for reading..:) Yeah.! It's totally heart broken.

@Dark48: Thanks for reading and comment. :)

@Chichay12: Thanks for reading and comment. :) Yeah.I will update soon.

@Chiqinna: Thanks for reading and comment. :) Only Acchan can fixed Minami's heart.

@Origami: Thanks for reading and comment. :) Don't cry Origami-san :)


@Sydney W:
Thanks for reading and comment. :)


@Haruko:
Thanks for reading and comment. :) going to happen? Let's see what will happen to AtsuMina or rather KaiAcchan.


Arigatou.




Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: Sydney W on October 26, 2012, 12:00:19 PM
Kai meet Kaizer, perhaps Atsuko later on. I guess Atsuko divorce Takeru and live with her son. So, guess there is a reunion for Kai & Atsuko ?! Update soon ^^
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: chichay12 on October 26, 2012, 01:45:11 PM
poor kai!!! :mon headbang: :mon headbang: :mon headbang:

please update soon!!!
waiting for this is killing me!! :on blackhole:
 :mon whine:

looking forward for more!!
 :on GJ:
 :on gay:
thank you for the update!!!
 :kneelbow:
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: thebotole on October 26, 2012, 06:08:27 PM
hmm,,interesting.. :twothumbs
wonder what will happen next...
look forward for update  :bow:
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: yourockme on October 27, 2012, 01:47:56 AM
This is is is.......
 :on cloudeye:  :err: :fainted: :badluck: :gyaaah: :stoned:
HURTING MEEE  :on blackhole:  :on speedy:
Oh my Kai
Poor her/him LOL
Quote
Kai meet Kaizer, perhaps Atsuko later on. I guess Atsuko divorce Takeru and live with her son. So, guess there is a reunion for Kai & Atsuko ?
Exactly whats in my mind  :yep:
Please update soon wmatsui san hehe.    :on hypto:
arigatou  :on slopkiss:
Btw THAT TAKERUUU  :on voodoo: :on kimbo: :angry1:
xd  :mon wtfmm:
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: Wmatsui22 on October 28, 2012, 03:51:54 AM
Best  Friend – Part IX

”Y-Yuko Hentai !” Haruna  shout  while  pushing her little squirrel who wants to  grope her big asset. ”Nyan-nyan, skin ship!” Yuko smiled showing her deep dimple in her  face. ”uh-uh, so cute” Haruna giggle and she did not notice that the squirrel is already in her breast. Haruna only sighed and blushed on what position they are. That’s the couple do in the park (LOVEY DOVEY). After a couple of minutes, ”kyaa!!!!” Why Nyan-nyan? Yuko slowly lift her head to face the bothered Haruna. ”Yes! Where’s kaizer?! Haruna look to her surrounding to find her friend’s son, kaizer. Yuko is still thinking about their  friend Acchan. Everyone knows that Acchan is a kind, caring and sweet  friend but they didn’t know that Acchan’s has an evil side.

Experience No. 01

When I, Nyan-nyan and Acchan go shopping for the baby’s thing, we accidentally watch in the television of the mall the kissing scene of the Diva and Kai of Persona. At that time, you cannot see anymore  the emotionless face of Atsuko but a jealous emotion written all over her face and I don’t know why, for sure, Atsuko have a slight crush on the small member of Persona. I think it’s because this guy resemble Minami that  much in the height department.  A midget.  Anyway, back to story, some weird guy appeared in front  of  Atsuko to impress our friend but to his dismay, he receive instead a hard punch right to his face that he collapsed in the floor and my Nyan-nyan  think fast  that  we should run and it’s unbelievable that  Acchan runs fast among me and my Nyan-nyan although she’s pregnant  and her tummy is a little bit big. What the fuck?! After running, were exhausted to the hell! We sit at the bench of the park and eat our lunch. “Acchan, why do you punch that weird guy?” My Nyan-nyan asked. Oh! Acchan’s aura is scary “I don’t know Nyan-nyan. I feel that I want to release my madness and then.. you know what happen. He’s a jerk. A real jerk”. “Jerk?!, who’s the jerk?!” Haruna asked again. “that midget guy! Shit! I want to punched him and that Diva?! I want to cut his damn hair!” the two of us somewhat  scary because Atsuko seems did not know what she’s doing to me?! God!! Nyan-nyan! Help me! Atsuko will choke me to death because the melon pan that she’s holding forcefully pushed to my mouth plus she’s holding my beautiful neck  while my Nyan-nyan try to hold Acchan. After the struggling, Nyan-nyan thinks the solution to let go of me. She find in the bag of Acchan’s favorite chocolate  and she gave it to Acchan and slowly the angriness of Acchan subsided and she let go of my neck. Somehow my neck is sore from the strong hold. “s-sorry Y-Yuko” she bowed to me”. “ahaha! That’s okay, Acchan” “okay”. Therefore I conclude that  DON’T MESSED UP WITH ACCHAN OR ELSE YOU WILL EXPERIENCE HELL FROM THE HANDS OF EVIL ACCHAN. Yuko thought and said “Oh! God! Atsuko will kill me for sure if there’s something bad happened to kaizer! We got to find him Nyan-nyan! The two of us starts to run and then we bumped to the two guys. “Haruna?” “Is that you?” eh? Riku-kun? Aniki? Haruna said to the tall guy with red streak at his black hair and sun glasses. “hai!” two hug each other. I am very jealous!

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So, what are you doing here, Riku? I know that the Persona is in the Paris, right? “Sort of, but one of the Persona is here in Japan so two of us decide to come here to pick-him up back to Paris”. Ahh! I understand. “Haruna, who is she?” Eh? Haruna look to my direction and then she smiled. (I feel nervous on what Nyan-nyan will tell to her brother, is she going to tell that we have a relationship? Nah, that’s impossible because I know that my love is only one-sided like my best friend, Minami) Yuko thought sadly. I look to Yuko’s sad face and suddenly I have an idea, Yuko is my girlfriend. “girlfriend? What do you mean, Haruna?” hmm, Baka! Riku, were dating, okay? Riku and Kuu surprised to my statement and for the first time, Kuu asked me. “So, you mean, you’re a Lesbian?” I only nod and smiled to them and even Yuko seems surprised. “Nyan-nyan”. I only hold her hand under the table. My eyes say that it will be fine. Riku first recover from the shock and said “okay, I understand, if that’s my sister affair, I don’t want to interfere as long as my sister is happy and contented to Oshima-san” he smiled and his smile is not a fake one. He handed me his right hand in front of me. I was shocked and I look to my Nyan-nyan who smiled and gesture to shake my hand to his brother. “Arigatou, Kojima-san for trusting me to take care of your sister and I will make sure that she will be happy everytime we go together ” I bowed to him. “Riku, You can call me Riku” “Okay, K—Riku” I smiled and I feel comfortable to the two guys, Riku and Kuu. We chit chat for an hour when I saw Kaizer with a Midget? “Kaizer!” I and Yuko said in unison. The boy look to our and direction and you will so that he feel guilty. He run towards us leaving the midget. “k-kai?” Riku and Kuu said in unison. “Aunt” he hug Haruna and I only patted his head. “S—Sorry” We smiled and said “That’s only okay Kaizer, don’t do it next time. “hai”. The boy sway his hand to the midget.

Kai POV

Eh? That’s Riku and Kuu and in the opposite table is Haruna and Yuko. What the hell will I do ?!!!! I screamed in my mind. Kaizer sway his hand to tell me to go to them. I have no choice. I slowly walked towards them praying that two of my friends in the past will not recognize me as Minami.
“kai!” “You Baka!!!” Kuu smack me in the head “Itai” I will smack Kuu but Riku hold my hand and Kuu’s hand. “Stop it!!!! We have a guest here, we should act good not rude”. We only nod.
“Sorry for the scene, This is Kai, our member that is missing”. “hello” I said. I feel uncomfortable because of the intense gazed of Yuko and Haruna. “hello, I’m Kojima Haruna, call me Haruna and beside me is Oshima Yuko, call me Yuko and last our handsome boy, Sato Kaizer. Kaizer interrupt us and said “Call me kazier, Takahashi-san” he bowed. Yuko and Haruna surprised to the attitude of the boy who is aloof to the stranger but not in this midget. (Miracle). “I like Persona, especially you, Takahashi-san, I and my mom like you  a lot although you’re a midget but you have a kind and brave heart as an idol”. I am touched on what he said. I patted his head “really? I am grateful to have a fans like you and your mom that not judging an idol on his or her appearance. Suddenly Kuu interrupt our moments. “Okay! Everyone! Stop the drama here! We Should eat our food. We chat for about an hour and we did not see that it almost night. “Thank You” said the both parties.


On the way to their Apartments

“kai, are you sure that he’s not your son?” Riku asked. Baka! Where did the hell you conclude that thing? “it’s because of your closeness”  We are close because of our bonding in the park, we play basket ball and he’s kind that’s why he’s close to US. “really?!” Kuu smiled is somehow creepy. “okay” we must stop teasing our midget. Riku and Kuu giggled and I only rolled my eyes. I immune in this two when teasing me. But this day is different, I feel contented and happy because of my friends and Kaizer, the son of my best friend, Atsuko. For the first time of my new life, l sleep tight while I’m smiling.

TBC...
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: Haruko on October 28, 2012, 04:17:36 AM
OMG! Atsuko is pregnant.. again?!.. aww kaizer and kai are cute :D
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: Pdpond on October 28, 2012, 08:19:26 AM
Kai meet Kaizer, perhaps Atsuko later on. I guess Atsuko divorce Takeru and live with her son. So, guess there is a reunion for Kai & Atsuko ?! Update soon ^^

I agree with that!!
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: chichay12 on October 31, 2012, 12:03:40 AM
Update!! :banghead:
Update!! :banghead:
Update!! :banghead:
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: yourockme on October 31, 2012, 12:32:16 AM
Yiee so cute
BTW Wmatsui san
Kai is now a boy
not a girl right?
I mean the the the ... sex organ
xDDDD  :on spit:
LOL
Please update soon wmatsui san
Arigatou  :on gay:
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: yuuzu05 on October 31, 2012, 06:05:53 AM
i...just cant say no to some atsumina :cry: :cry:
thankyou for the update :bow:
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: Wmatsui22 on December 21, 2012, 06:46:19 AM
Best  Friend – X

Kai  POV

I slowly opened my eyes when the sun’s illuminated in our room. I saw my band mates is still sleeping and I couldn’t help to smile on how cute the face of Riku and how innocent Kuu’s face when he’s sleeping but one’s he wakes up, you will see the INNOCENT gachapin turn into EVIL gachapin. As for revenge to the pranks he made to me, I get a marker in my cabinet and I start to draw anything to his cute face. I trace a two big circles in his eyes, a polka dot in his nose and I shade his jaw line so  it  looks  like  a beard. Kuu’s face is totally like a gachapin. What a funny face. (haha) Anyway, I fixed my bed and I walk towards the kitchen.
At the Kitchen
“Hmmm… Wow! It’s smell so good!” Kuu said drooling and walking towards the kitchen while his eyes are closed. “Oh! Midget! Is that you?! Kya!!!!, Haha! You’re so gay!” Kuu said laughingly and I smacked his head “Itai” but I hold my laughter in his disgusting face. “You’re so cruel, kai!” “What is the commotion here? Saeko asked together with Marilyn and Riku. “Midget Smacked me” Kuu pout to them and when he saw Kuu’s face they are laughing out loud including Saeko who wold her stomach. “huh? W-What’s funny????!!!!” Marilyn took pity to the clueless Kuu and take a small mirror from his bag and gave it to Kuu although she still laughing. “K-KAI !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” Kuu shouted while I am start to run away from our house. Yes! My revenge is successful and I believe in saying “Revenge is so sweet” HaHaHaHa!!!!!




At Sato’s House


It seems that the Head of Sato’s family arrived at their home which Atsuko greeted him. *SLAP
Atsuko received a slap from his husband. “Mom!” Kaizer stands up from his chair. Stay at your place if you don’t want me to slap again your whore mother! Takeru shouted. “What did I do?” Atsuko asked but Takero hold his hair pulling towards his face. Atsuko can smell the alcohol from him which brought a fear to her spine. Usually, if he is drank he will forcefully me to have a **x with him which every time he made it I will only cry after that.


Atsuko’s Flashback

It’s past 12 am but Sato seems not arrived at their home which Atsuko a bit worried towards his husband. *Knock! *Knock! Atsuko immediately stands from the couch to open their door and she saw his messed up husband. “S-Sato? Why -” she cut her off by Sato’s lips and he kicks the door to closed it and then Atsuko struggling from his torture kiss. “S-Stop it! S-Sato” Why? Atsuko? Who’s the real father of Kaizer?!!! “W-What are you saying Sato? He’s your son!” Your lying! Bitch! He’s grip my both arms tightly. “S-Sato, It hurts!” I cried but he ignored me and kissed again my lips. When pulled out from the kiss What do you want? Atsuko? Do you want me to fuck you so that we will have a new baby and that’s I will know that you are carrying is my baby! When he said that he pushed me that I lay in the floor and he was so aggressive that he rip my clothes and that time he is rough with me and he also said that Kaizer is not his son but from the other man! What he’s thinking?! Damn! I only cry that time that I realized that I don’t know fully know Sato that he’s a type of guy who have a mask and if you will alone with him you will realized that he’s evil. I hope there will be Minami at my side at this point of giving up. I cried all night.

END of Flashback

Present


You! You filthy bitch! Who’s that blonde guy you are talking the other day?! Tell me?! He grip tighly my hair. “It hurts” Yeah! It will hurt more if you don’t confessed your fault. I will punch your face with my fist so that you will not look to the other guy rather than me! “Enough!” Kaizer said while kick Sato’s knee who’s suddenly let go off Atsuko’s hair. “Let’s go mom!” Kaizer hold her hand and running fast from their house and Sato not giving up but really pissed off also run towards them but immediately stop when he saw……………….

a person standing from her wife and son. His expression is shocked but her body is now trembling due to fear from this person.



TBC…


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Thanks
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: saeyukilover on December 21, 2012, 08:34:06 AM
 :angry: satooooo!!!  :angry:

poor atsuko  :cry:

Pls.. Update more of this...
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: Sydney W on December 21, 2012, 09:46:47 AM
Poor Atsuko been hit by her husband. Kai, go save your lover !
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: Haruko on December 21, 2012, 07:01:44 PM
omg so much violence -_______- acchan...
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: miayaka on December 21, 2012, 08:40:26 PM
acchan being a battered wife
OMG!
That husband has a guts hurting my ace!!!
Kai go save her!!!  :banghead:
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: giakb48ff on December 22, 2012, 07:32:41 AM
OMGIRLSS!! so sad .. kai go to save your wife!!  :heart: :thumbup :cathappy: :deco:
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: Wmatsui22 on December 23, 2012, 09:05:57 AM
Best Friend 11

“So, A-c-Maeda-san, are you okay?” Don’t you see? Takahashi-san, my mom is not okay. Kaizer said a bit louder and Atsuko scold her son. Kaizer! It’s rude!. But Mom. “KAIZER”. Okay, I am sorry for being rude, Takahashi-san. “Eh? That’s fine, Don’t worry” Thank You Takahashi-san but I think you shouldn’t involve in to our problem. Atsuko said emotionless. “What?!” I slightly tap our table making the two surprise at my sudden action. “Eh sorry, but Maeda-san This is abused not only to you but to your son! He hurt you! Not only in physical but also in emotional and you didn’t do anything? Are you insane?!” after that he earned a slap from Atsuko who will stand up but she felt a hand that grab her to sit again to her chair. “Why don’t you sit again, Maeda-san so you can hear me explain” Yeah! Mom, he said definitely true and he’s the one who I am talking to you who played at me in the park. Okay, I will lend you my ear for a minute. “Thank You” “Anyway, I don’t apologized on what I said to your husband which is the true, right? But… there’s a reason why I mind your problem because someone, a cute girl which is my cousin request to me that I shall protect her best friend and her son to her evil husband. Her name is Takahashi M-I-N-A-M-I. Mom, It’s your best friend! Kaizer said with a smile but Atsuko did not smile but tears are flowing in her cheeks. “Maeda-san” Minami….


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“Kuu, I want this bag. This shoes. And this dress” Tomochin aka “A Fashionista” together with her boyfriend and currently stalling in the Expensive Store at Shibuya District. Eh? Tomochin, you already have that right? You don’t need to buy more.  “But Kuu it’s so cute! Like you”  Tomochin said with her ducking  lips which Kuu can’t resisted so he bought them all. But in the end. His wallet is empty now and he can’t but his favorite cake! Kuu thought to himself.



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Are you sure? Mari-chan? You don’t want to stroll or shopping? You know, It’s free “Yes I am very sure of my decision” Mari-chan said seductively while playing Riku’s hair that is now messy due to their lovemaking. Eh? Mari-chan, do you want another round? Riku is a bit shocked because  he is very tired now due to the intense love making but nonetheless he also enjoyed it. I Love You Mari-chan “Mariko  a bit stunned but recover immediately by saying I Love You Too Riku”



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Nyan-Nyan! SKINSHIP!!!!!
Okay.
Eh? Really?
You don’t want?
I want it
What do you want, Yuko? Haruna teased her squirrel
I want to eat Nyan-nyan’s OPPAI (Bad Moved For Our squirrel)
She earned a strong slap from Haruna and she leaves her girlfriend in the couch.

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TBC…
A/N: Please Read and Leave a comment. Thank You
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: Sydney W on December 23, 2012, 10:18:38 AM
Finally, Kai, you are a step further to win Acchan heart once again. Make Acchan fall in love with you again !

Pity Kuu, his wallet is drain...

Haha, nice move by Yuko as the result, she earn a slap. Ouchhh !
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: Haruko on December 23, 2012, 09:26:14 PM
Finally, Kai, you are a step further to win Acchan heart once again. Make Acchan fall in love with you again !

Pity Kuu, his wallet is drain...

Haha, nice move by Yuko as the result, she earn a slap. Ouchhh !

jajaj yeah
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: cisda83 on January 01, 2013, 08:28:50 PM
Oh... is Minami going to make Atsuko fall in love with her male or female part? Going to be interesting...

Sato is DV... It's making me very angry  :angry:

Minami do something.... make Atsuko leave him....

Well so Kuu is with Tomochin while Riku is with Mariko... very interesting pairing

Thank you for the update...

Can't wait to see the next one.

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: kahem on January 03, 2013, 04:30:30 AM
I'm gonna to kill that bastard of Sato!!!!
Wait, kaizer is Minami's son? How is it possible?
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: korin48 on January 03, 2013, 06:50:17 AM
I want to kill that Sato guy!! Even in real life!! I hate him because of that scandal!!  :mon mad:
So Kaizer is not Sato's real son, huh?  :mon fyeah:
I wanna know what happen!!!  :mon fire:
Please update soon!  :mon pray2:
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: FlameHazeKatsu on January 06, 2013, 03:50:28 AM
umm....looking forward to it....still...  :smoke: hehehehe
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: steven_0809 on January 13, 2013, 11:51:10 PM
umm....looking forward to it....still...  :smoke: hehehehe

same here  :thumbup
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: Tiptip on February 18, 2013, 07:52:04 AM
I hope you countinue this fic   :OMG: :ding:
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: 7sam14 on May 31, 2013, 07:50:08 AM
I hope you countinue this fic   :OMG: :ding:

I Agree!!!....

I just Read this today... and I really Like It!!!  :yep: :yep: :yep: :yep: 

Author-San!!!!
Pwease Update!!!!  :pleeease: :pleeease:
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: cisda83 on May 31, 2013, 11:31:42 AM
Wmatsui22-san

This story is one of my fav.

Please update

Can't wait to see the next

Thank you

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: IntanLakz on May 31, 2013, 03:46:07 PM
Interesting ♥

Pleasee updattee  :catglare:
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: karenchan on June 03, 2013, 06:07:56 PM
Please, update :gyaaah:
You know what torturing the most. Reading an unfinished story.
Onegai  :kneelbow: :kneelbow:
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: Elo on June 03, 2013, 07:11:11 PM
Wmatsui-san please update I love this fic and want to know how it will go on ^^ :bow:

Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: no-chan on November 06, 2013, 09:08:49 PM
this was such a great story.... :twothumbs

what a shame.....it's not updating..... :cry:

hope you'll update soon..... :D

just like karenchan said, "You know what torturing the most. Reading an unfinished story."

totally agree.. :P
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: Mina on November 08, 2013, 12:08:27 AM
Finally I found that fanfictions, it was seeking her. 
But please it continues, this being interesting.  :bow:  :bow:  :bow:
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: noah minami on November 08, 2013, 11:59:34 AM
Please, update :gyaaah:
You know what torturing the most. Reading an unfinished
 story.
Onegai  :kneelbow: :kneelbow:

I couldn't not agree more
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: Kirozoro on November 09, 2013, 12:50:03 AM
This is mix story

Omg why that Sato guy, he hurt Acchan  :angry: :angry: :angry:

Takamina help Acchan

Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: Mina on December 02, 2013, 02:49:03 AM
Where the updating is. PLEASE CONTINUES.  :cry:  :bow: :bow:
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: Akira ryusen sora on January 04, 2014, 04:35:14 AM
KAIxACCHAN!! My fav!!  :twothumbs
Please!!! Please!!! Update this is one of my fav fanfic  :bow: :bow: :bow:


FOLLOW MY TWITTER: @Trikeenn  :deco:
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: crosteks on September 27, 2014, 06:22:38 PM
 :pleeease: :pleeease: UPDATE THIS PLEASE EVERYONE  :mon whine: :mon whine: :mon whine:
 :kneelbow: :kneelbow: :kneelbow: :pleeease: :pleeease: :pleeease:
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: Akiro on January 28, 2016, 10:29:31 AM
UPDATE IT AUTHOR~SAN ! *kneel down hundreds of times* , kaixacchan KYAAA
Title: Re: _My One-Shot AtsuMina Fan Fiction_
Post by: koyatsum07 on December 20, 2016, 02:59:06 AM
Please upgrade, it's Super Tu Fanfic :on cny1: :mon thumb: