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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: yuukimoko on October 13, 2012, 11:40:11 AM
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Once again here.....why I never really finish a fic? Well, I did finish some of them .....but I still have some not finished....Im working on it! Just tell me if you like this!!!!
Preview
'Come and meet us! Come and visit us!' the cryes are heard between giggles and screms.
What could you ever wish for if you are a monster in a cage? What is it that you wish for in this hell?
A monster without mind, what could she want? in this place where she is hugging the girl she needs to survive, she is slowly roting away......the creation of hell which got bored of humanity, They send this monster with a angel.What is her true face? will it ever be how it was before?
'I....what do I wish for? do I wish freedom?love?pity?healing? I dont know....and I dont care!! hahahaahahhahaha! I only want to destroy! Ill destroy everything that gets in my hands!!!!everything! I only need her, the one thats always with me , to survive! as long as she is there, there is no need for my freedom!!!!!!hahhahahahahahahahha!!!!!!'
Lzying around , eating and sleeping, such is the life of another.A half cat that doesnt care about anything, her mind was destroyed and she is just thinking about something else.Shall she really think the circus is fun?!
'....should I care?....I dont really...as long as I have where to live and what to eat...why should I care if they destroy my body?Ah the sky is still far away today too.....maybe tomorrow ill rain?'
A deformed diva.The voice of a star with the body of a monster.Thats what a princess is being closed like.A human who's skin was burned and painted on it....raped by man and treated like a dog.....I wonder why is she still so regal ?Cant she accept the truth?
'I am a princess....I am a princess....I am a princess......someday my prince will come and get me......I am a princess.....'
In the darkness of the night, when only the sky is beutiful, her beauty exceeds that of this night.She, how is truly an angel, and a princess at the same time, was closed in a cage. Her sparking eyes can be seen only in the dark.Her beautiful voice can be hear only then too.She is the one that had fallen from heaven and never ended in hell, but on earth.
'She will come someday.....she ,who is mine, will come and together we will have our final moment of love.Then I can touch the true hell.'
In a modern society with all kind of people.How can this circus survive? The people just laugh at them, they dont even care that they are still human! Such place.....I hate it! I ,myself, the mind how's life was coruppted at the age of 15.I have given my life only to disappear from thiw world.I hate it so much.....but this circus....this is all I have....these kids who are distroyed....They were forgotten by God!!!
In the night you can hear a giggle , if they are in your town, the giggle that makes your mind see only illusions.
'Come by and see him! this is our circus!!'
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I dont really like how it sounds but....oh well whatever!!!! I want to put here the ideas I get, maybe some of them Ill continue....Ill think about it.....
Anyway! The cast for this one!
Cast:
Crypton Circus:
-Matsui Rena
-Kojima Haruna
-Atsuko Maeda
-Kashiwagi Yuki
'Humans':
Matsui Jurina
Oshima Yuko
Takahashi Minami
Watanabe Mayu
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I didn't understand the preview XD still if there are Mayuki and Wmatsui please cantinue :lol:
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I didn't understand the preview XD still if there are Mayuki and Wmatsui please cantinue :lol:
I don't know if I got it right, but I think our four heroines are humans made into monsters, so to work in that circus...
Red is Gekikara, I understood that instantly, after the first 'hahaha' part. And I understood she'll appear as soon as I read word 'giggles' in the first sentence of the preview XD and we know another Matsui will save her :yep: :yep:
Yellow is oc Harunyan... Cat, duh XD And she's waiting for her dearest squirrel to save her!!! :wub: :wub:
Then pink is our princess Acchan, waiting for her man prince to save her!! So romantic!!! :heart: :heart:
And the last but not the least is Yukirin, or Black, being in the same cage with Geki, waiting for her cyborg to come and save her :w00t: :w00t:
OMG, I don't know if I am right, but that's what I concluded from this preview. I like the concept, it's unique!! Good luck!!!
I'll be waiting for your update!!!
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Wahh great preview! :luvluv1:
I want to know more! :luvluv2:
Please update soon! :farofflook:
I wanna know what happens! :gyaaah:
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Uhuhuhuhu!
Quite interesting o/ forgotten girls... It's going to be a very interesting freak show ;p
Keep it up \o/
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:ding: So coooool! :dizzy:
Can't handle this... :err:
:farofflook: Very interesting indeed...
:kneelbow:
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What the heck did I just read :shocked
Not too sure what to make of this at the moment but I will definitely read the first chapters so please continue :bow:
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Ehhh pls continue its a really good story
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seems interesting wonder what will happen pls continue :kneelbow:
:mon santa4:
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niiice preview :DD ... would love to read Chap 1 soon :))
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Kinda reminds me of a play we're doing at my school called "Freak."
Please update soon!
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Interesting...freak show huh?
Yeah... There are going to be Mayuki, Wmatsui, Atsumina and Kojiyuu
Can't wait to see the next
Thank you for the preview
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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I hope u will write Rena - Yuki :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs