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Title: Why Do I Get This Unnatural Feeling...? [MARIRIN X AKICHA][Ch.4.3]
Post by: GinkoX on October 16, 2012, 04:09:23 PM
ITS MY FIRST TIME.  :yawn:

Please Ignore my Errors..  :cry: ahahaha

Here Goes..

In My Class, I Was known For Making Crash Pairings.


"Heh. Heh. Heh."The Voice of The Witch is all over her Secret Room, She was Mixing the Spices.

But, A Girl Knocked, A Very Tall and Beautiful Girl.

"May I Ask you Something? Young Witch?" The Girl Asked.

"What is It?" In a Flash, The Witch Answered.

"Can You Curse this Very Tall, Slacker, and Noisy Woman?"

"Your Wish is My Command." The Witch Poured down the Ingredients in her Cauldron, Including The 'Very Tall, Slacker and Noisy Woman.''s Picture

"I Have Put the Curse."

Little did The Witch Know, That She Has Bestowed the Curse on the Wrong WOMAN...

At That Time, Yukirin--- The Tall and Beautiful Girl, Thought that she hid Mariko's Face while her finger Pointed The Other Girl's ... But Instead, She actually pointed Mariko's Face.

Meanwhile, In a Quiet apartment, A Single Room Destroys the Endless Silence of The Apartment.
"I'll Apply for a Work today." A Tall-short-haired girl said as she was fixing herself for her 'Job Interview'

"Nee-chan... yep. Go On... No One's Stopping you." replied her Lil' Sis while reading a Newspaper.

"Oh, C'mon.. Aren't you Happy for Your Sister?" The Short-haired Girl said again before leaving Their Room.

". . . ." The Lil' Sis Didn't Reply.

"Snobbish Earthworm." The Short-haired girl, Closed the Door.

Maririn's Introduction...
Shinoda Mariko desu~ an UNEMPLOYED noisy SLACKER. I Have a Sister. THE LEFT AND THE RIGHT. oh Sorry. My Sister's Name is Haruna. She loves Cats but I Feel Sorry for her, Because I LOVE DOGS. Today.. Uhm... I'm Going to Apply for Work!! yay!!

Did You Know?

Its My 48th time to Apply for Work! Yay!!

I Don't know why.. but.. I'm Always being fired at work.... IDON'TKNOWWHY!!! ( TT 3 TT)

Well. That's It.. M.Y.I.N.T.R.O.D.U.C.T.I.O.N.

[END OF LE PROLOGUE.]


Too Ugly Right? Like meee..  ;)
Title: Re: Why Do I Get This Unnatural Feeling...? [MARIRIN X AKICHA] [12|16|10]
Post by: yukofan on October 16, 2012, 07:36:27 PM
New author...new story..yay!  :cow:

No..it's not ugly at all..I found that the prologue is very interesting..really..

I hope you'll update the first chap soon because the prologue really mekes me interested to your story..

 :thumbup
Title: Why Do I Get This Unnatural Feeling...?[MARIRINXAKICHA][CHAPTER 1-Girl to Boy]
Post by: GinkoX on October 17, 2012, 05:14:14 AM
@yukofan: Well yeah. Thanks Man... Is it Really that Interesting???

LOL.


CHAPTER 1: Girl to Boy.

It was Blazing Hot in the Morning, Mariko was Riding her Bike, Today was her Job Interview, Of Course.
"Atsui ne~" Mariko was Talking again to her Self.

Continuing, She Stopped for a While and Opened her Bag to Get her 'Umbrella Hat'.

"Hahahahaha." Certainly, She was Trolling the People on Her Way. But, Her trolling stopped when she Accidentally Bumped into a Volkswagen Beetle. When She Noticed that she Bumped into a Car, Mariko's Face was Like.. 'OOPSSS.' She Thought that the Volkswagen Beetle Owner didn't Notice that She Bumped the Car. And So, She Quickly Dashed to The Building Not Far from where she was Hanging. "Thank Goodness, They didn't Notice!!" She Entered the Building and Rushed into The Counter.
"Uhm.. May I Apply for Janitress?" She asked.
"President Takajo is Up Stairs. You.Go.To.Him!" The Chinese Counter Lady Answered.
"Xièxiè nín"Mariko Thanked the Counter Lady.
". . . . . ." Counter Lady was Silent.
"Earthworm."
Mariko directly Walked to the Elevator, She Didn't Know that Unauthorized Person's are not Allowed to Ride The Elevator. Little did She Know that The president is Also Riding the Elevator.
"Are You an Employee?" The President Asked.
"Yep."Mariko Answered.
"State your Name."
"Shinoda Mariko Desu~"
"I Don't Know You. Come With me."
The Elevator was Going Down Again. Mariko didn't know what's Hapenning. When The Doors Opened, The President Shouted at Her...
"YOU'RE NOT AN EMPLOYEE!! GET OUT! GUARDS!"
[Author's notes: In The Next Part that I Will Write, Is The Part Outside The building. The Time When Mariko Was Already inside.]
Meanwhile, Outside the Bulding...
"Kitahara, Did You See the Guys Face?" The Lady Inside the Volkswagen Beetle said
"Yes Master Aki, I Believe, He Entered the Building of Your Dad's Company." Her Maid, The One who is Called 'Kitahara' Answered.
"I'll Let Him Pass."
A Minute Passed and... Something happened to Akicha...
"Master AKI! MASTER AKI!"she was repeating This All Over.

[Back to Mariko.]

"Hah! Ano Yarou!" She was Hanging on her Favorite Place again, With Her Precious 'Buddies'..
"Thanks for the human who invented The Alcohol!" As you can see, She's Already Drunk.

Then, An Hour later, She Felt That her Clothes is Somewhat Getting Tight...
"Am I Getting Fat?" She was Talking to Herself.
She Looked at her Self Once again.. She Noticed that something was missing from her body.
"Heh?! HEH?!!!" She was touching her chest.. and it was Missing..
"Wha--?? I-I-I B-B-BECAME A MALE?"Mariko was Surprised. But she did Ignore what happened to her.
"Oh well, Haruna won't notice it, so it'll be FINE~"

She rode her bike again to make her way home. When she Arrived, she saw a Letter.
'Nee-chan, I'll Be Home on 11 pm.'
"Du Heck?!"Mariko stared at the Paper, in a Few Seconds, She Crumpled the Paper and Threw it in the Trash Can.
"I'll Take a Bath first. Its Only 10:30 pm."She Entered the Bathroom to take a Shower.
While 'she' was taking the shower, Mariko didn't Notice The Time. Then Her Sister, Haruna, Opened the Apartment's Door.
"Tadaima~"
"That was fast, Haru." Mariko stepped outside the Shower, Topless.
"O-Onee-chan?! n-n-n-n-no! a ROBBER!! POLICE!! HELP!!"
"Haruna!? Shut your Trap! Lemme Explain!"
"ONEE-CHAN!!!" Haruna Rushed in the Bathroom, She Saw nothing but her 'Sister's' Clothes.
"Oi! HA-RU-NA! I'm Your Sister!"
"Eh? What happened to you Nee-chan?!"
"I Dunno."
"Well. Its Fine. I'd Rather Have a Brother than a Sister like You."
"Earthworm."
"Just Wait here. I'll Borrow some of Miyazawa's Clothes  for you."
"Thanks Haru!"

And So, They Ended the Day.

Chapter 1 Finished.
Many Errors Again I Assume.  :nervous
Title: Re: Why Do I Get This Unnatural Feeling...? [MARIRIN X AKICHA] [12|16|10]
Post by: fuu_kun on October 17, 2012, 05:32:13 AM
wow! you update so fast ^_^
heh? maririn transform to a mele?? wohohoo how could it be? how?? i'm so curios..
sae will appear in the next chapter?! (/^o^)/ yoosh! hoping there will be some saeyuki :| it's rare to found them again.. please continue <3 i love this new pair
Title: Re: Why Do I Get This Unnatural Feeling...? [MARIRIN X AKICHA] [12|16|10]
Post by: m00nchild on October 17, 2012, 05:40:29 AM
nice story~
so the curse is to change to male,
so Mariko sudden changed to male already,
the one who curse her is Yuki?
Nice update also,

looking forward for the next update.
Title: Re: Why Do I Get This Unnatural Feeling...? [MARIRIN X AKICHA] [12|16|10]
Post by: GinkoX on October 17, 2012, 02:14:07 PM
@fuu-kun: There will be a VERY DRAMATIC SAEYUKI. xDD why Mariko transformed to a Male?. Its in the Prologue  XD. It is also the Mistake of Yukirin to Point Mariko's Face Instead of Pointing The Other Girl's (Kojiharu) Face.

@m00nchild: ahaha. Thankies. Yep, You're Right. Yukirin is The One who Cursed her.  But It was not Meant by Her. She was Mistaken..

LOL.

for other readers and Anons...

I Might update late because of my EXAMS  :bleed eyes:, Anyways, I'll try to update as fast as I can   :cathappy:.

I'LL TRY TO UPDATE TOMORROW! :bow:

This is the Only One I Can Give today.    :lol:

Mariko/Maki Shinoda
-Free Loader
-The Troll
-Called as 'Slender Man' by the Kids close to their Apartment.
-Heavy Drinker
-Super Human
-Loves DOGS.
-Tall

Aki Takajo
-Arrogant and Snobbish Woman
-Princess
-Has a Sensitive Heart
-Quiet in School, Noisy At home.
-Ladylike Vintage Car lover
-Foodie
-Likes her name Being Added by ((e.g Master, Mistress, nee-chan etc.)) [Like This, e.g.:Master Aki.]

Haruna Shinoda
-Loves Cats
-Cafe's favorite
-'Snobbish Earthworm' - Shinoda Mariko
-That Beautiful lady from the Cafe.
-Late Reactionist

Yuki Kashiwagi
-Cafe's Hatest Worker
-Tall and Beautiful
-Black Marimokkori
-Envious
-Inlove with Sae
-Big Reactions

Sae Miyazawa
-Boyish Girl
-Inlove with Yukirin
-A Certified Good Friend
-A Yankee Biker
-The Baker Yankee

The 'Young Witch':  Minami Minegishi
-Loves Money
-Adventurer
-Friendly Witch
-Secretist

Others Next Time.  :P

Title: Re: Why Do I Get This Unnatural Feeling...? [MARIRIN X AKICHA] [12|16|10]
Post by: yukofan on October 17, 2012, 02:33:29 PM
In the name of my kami-Oahu who celebrate her birthday today, I swear that your fix is interesting. Moreover, I never read abut mariko-akicha pairing so it also felt fresh..

LOL..mariko was turn into male..I wonder what will she do with her "newgender identity"..LOL..
Title: Re: Why Do I Get This Unnatural Feeling...? [MARIRIN X AKICHA] [12|16|10]
Post by: GinkoX on October 17, 2012, 04:02:37 PM
Quote from: yukofan on October 17, 2012, 02:33:29 PM
In the name of my kami-Oahu who celebrate her birthday today, I swear that your fix is interesting. Moreover, I never read abut mariko-akicha pairing so it also felt fresh..

LOL..mariko was turn into male..I wonder what will she do with her "newgender identity"..LOL..

wahahaha. My sister Loved that part too and Now.. I'm Still thinking of What will Happen next. LOL.
Title: Re: Why Do I Get This Unnatural Feeling...? [MARIRIN X AKICHA] [12|16|10]
Post by: fuu_kun on October 17, 2012, 04:03:24 PM
eh? but haruna saw mariko half naked as a guy right? :?
yeaaay!! thanks GOD XD finally ! finaly~~ saeyuki will appear!! yeaah! \ (^o^) / ~jump like crazy when you mentioned "there will be dramatic saeyuki"~ yeah! i can't wait! i'll always follow this fic.. *bookmark it* hehe ^_^)
Title: Re: Why Do I Get This Unnatural Feeling...? [MARIRIN X AKICHA] [12|16|10]
Post by: GinkoX on October 17, 2012, 04:17:58 PM
Quote from: fuu_kun on October 17, 2012, 04:03:24 PM
eh? but haruna saw mariko half naked as a guy right? :?
yeaaay!! thanks GOD XD finally ! finaly~~ saeyuki will appear!! yeaah! \ (^o^) / ~jump like crazy when you mentioned "there will be dramatic saeyuki"~ yeah! i can't wait! i'll always follow this fic.. *bookmark it* hehe ^_^)

Yep. Kojipa saw MariMari as a Topless Male... LOL.

Iam a SaeYuki Oshi. LOL.. THATS THE REASON WHY I AM PUTTING THEM IN THE STORY!! LOL!!

SAEYUKI!! lol.  :thumbsup
Title: Re: Why Do I Get This Unnatural Feeling...? [MARIRIN X AKICHA] [12|16|10]
Post by: fuu_kun on October 17, 2012, 04:31:12 PM
yeaah XD i'm saeyuki fans tooooo (/^_^)/\(^_^\) now it's so rare to find this pair :( soo.. ganbatte for our otp!! yuhuuuuu x)
Title: Re: Why Do I Get This Unnatural Feeling...? [MARIRIN X AKICHA] [12|16|10]
Post by: Amakuchi on October 17, 2012, 06:00:57 PM
TROLOLOLOL~! UPDATE SOON!!! xDD
SNOBBISH EARTHWORM. xDD
Title: Re: Why Do I Get This Unnatural Feeling...? [MARIRIN X AKICHA][Chapter 2]
Post by: GinkoX on October 18, 2012, 04:06:54 AM
Wahahaha. Can't Stop My Hands. :lol:

I'm doing an Assignment. THEN I OPENED GOOGLE TO LOG ON.! xDD :inlove:
Chapter 2: That Damn Volkswagen Beetle.!
In a Certain mansion, A Princess was crying in her room because of an Incident, She was with her Maid, Named Kitahara Rie. Rie was with Aki Since she was 5, She's Always been by Her side and Never left her... even in the bathroom.

"What should I Do?! Kitahara!" The princess----Aki, was overflowing in tears because of what happened to her car.
"Master Aki, Please calm down. I'll get the Car repaired as Soon as Possible."Rie said to her Princess who was in tears.
"MAAASSSTTTEERRRR AKIII!!!!!"Ooppsss, she became addicted to it again.
"Anyways, Thanks Kitahara. I'll Be Going to School now."
"Master!? You'll go to School by Walking?!"
"No, I'll Borrow dad's Limo. Lets Go, I Might Became Late." The Arrogant Princess walked down the stairs. she made her way to the garage and forced her Dad's driver to bring her to school.

When Aki Arrived to her School----Watanabe All Girls school, everyone was greeting her, including the Teachers. She walked the stairs to go to her classroom, as usual, no student wants to hang on the classroom, they all want to hang in the Tea Shop or sweets shop inside the school. She just sat quietly on her chair, she was scrolling her phone checking messages. After Minutes of Waiting, One of her Friends, Arrived---- Sashihara Rino.

"Yo~! Aki~ Forever Alone aye?!" Rino said, Hugging AKi to the Fullest.
"Shhh. I'm studying."
"Studying? Where's your book? I Can Only See one thing in your hands... THE CELLPHONE."
". . . . ."
"Snobbish."

Seconds After That, The Bell Rang.

Meanwhile, in a Cafe, 3 females are cleaning the whole shop.
"Yukirin, How Much is your Paycheck Every month?"Haruna asked Yukirin, She was Smiling.
"500 yen. Blame the Manager that hates me."Yukirin answered while she was wiping the table.
"500 YEN?! SERIOUSLY?!"a Girl wearing a Gakuran----Sae, was Moping the floor.
"Yep, You Got it Right."
"Anyways, Forget about your Paycheck, I'll give you some of mine." Sae smiled at Yukirin.
"Thanks Sae."Yukirin Smiled.
"I Feel Like I've been left out of the Conversation."Haruna Sighed.
 THEN, a woman Barged in the Shop."Sorry for being LATE!!"-- and it was The Late Midget----Oshima Yuko.
"NYANNYAN~!"Yuko hugged Haruna very Tight.

After The Cleaning session in the Cafe, The 4 Girls Made their way to the Arcade and started Playing the Arcade games, while they were Enjoying their selves, Someone called Yukirin.
"Did you Like The Curse?" The Young Witch----Minegishi Minami, Said on the Phone.
"I Like it. HOW YOU FOOLED ME TO BELIEVE ON YOUR WITCHCRAFT!"Yukirin shouted at the Phone.
"Eh?! I'm Sure! I Did something to the Tall and Short-haired girl!"
"Tall and Short-haired Girl?! Its not her I wanted to curse! Its The Other girl with Long Hair! I Know that they're both tall, noisy and Slacker but.. HARUNA IS MORE ANNOYING!"
". . . .bye. . .  CURSE HER YOURSELF! She's my BESTIE you know?!"
Conversation Ended.

After the Call, Because Yukirin got annoyed by Mii-chan, She Almost Lost balance of her Self, When She is About to slip, Sae Guided her Back with her hands, And their faces was close to each other.

"A-e-a-ah-ah-ah." Yukirin was Blushing, Her Heart thumping very fast.
"Yuki, Are You Alright?"Sae asked her, Hiding the feelings that she truly feels.
"Y-Y-YES! I'M FINE!!"

In Maki's(Mariko) State...
She's Biking Again, 'Starting Today, You'll Be Called as Maki!' While thinking of what Haruna said before leaving, He didn't notice that he Crashed on a Limousine, This Time, The Owner came out, Its Aki.
"Gokigenyou, To The Man who Broke my Volkswagen Beetle."Aki said, While Crossing her Arms.
"Ah! The owner! Good Day to You too!"Maki was certain that he is Trolling the Owner.
"Do You Know how much That Car Costs?"Aki raised a brow
"Yep."Maki was smiling like an Idiot.
"How Much?"
"500yen."He Trolled Aki Again.
"You're Wrong, Its worth is 500,000 dollars"
"Ahhh... Bye-Bye."
"Oi! You're Paying For That!"
"In Your Dreams. HEHEHEHEHE."Maki escaped, he ran to the nearest Shop.
"Grr! Kitahara---No, I Mean Rie, You Know what to do."
"Yes Master Aki."
"MASTER AKKKIIII!!!!"Addictness over 5000.
"Master, This is His Location, Everywhere he goes."
"Thank You."

When Maki got Home, He Felt relieved because he knows that the girl who owns the Volkswagen Beetle doesn't know his Location.
"Hah, Hah, Hah, Hah... Whoo."He was really exhausted hiding from Aki.
Then Someone knocked the door, He Thought it was Haruna. But when He Opened the Door...
"Gokigenyou."Aki said, She Surprised Maki.
"WAHAAHHH!! What the heck are you doing here!?"
"I'm Here to Make you pay."
"I DON'T HAVE MONEY!"
"What a Dirty Room. You Don't Have Money? Give me Your Number. I'll Call you if I Have thought a Good type of Payment."
"Here."
"Well, I Should Take My Leave."

Few Minutes after the Arrogant and Snobbish Woman left, Haruna with Friends Arrived.
"Aniki, Who's That girl? She looks so Fashionable."Haruna asked.
"Hmm... Hah.. She is the owner of the Volks-something Bitter that I have crashed Yesterday."he Took a breath before speaking.
"Yuki, What do You Think of Her?"Sae Asked.
"Hmm..... She Looks Beautiful and Eccentric."She answered.
"Don't worry, You're Way more Beautiful to her Yuki." Sae smiled.
". . . . Thanks . ."Yuki was Blushing, Seeing Sae's Smile.


I'll make sure that in the Next Chapter, I'll Put More. and. More Errors. xDD
Title: Re: Why Do I Get This Unnatural Feeling...? [MARIRIN X AKICHA] [12|16|10]
Post by: fuu_kun on October 18, 2012, 04:38:28 AM
wohohoo~ you update so fast!
good job!! nice chapter ^o^)/ saeyuki momment <3 love it~ akicha is superr arrogant huh :|
can't wait for the next chapter~ thankyou!
ps: i think there's nothing error :? keep the god job bro
Title: Re: Why Do I Get This Unnatural Feeling...? [MARIRIN X AKICHA] [12|16|10]
Post by: GinkoX on October 18, 2012, 05:07:11 AM
Quote from: fuu_kun on October 18, 2012, 04:38:28 AM
wohohoo~ you update so fast!
good job!! nice chapter ^o^)/ saeyuki momment <3 love it~ akicha is superr arrogant huh :|
can't wait for the next chapter~ thankyou!
ps: i think there's nothing error :? keep the god job bro

wahaha. I Might update the next chapter next thursday. xDD I Have my Exams and Fieldtrip. xDD
Title: Re: Why Do I Get This Unnatural Feeling...? [MARIRIN X AKICHA] [12|16|10]
Post by: GinkoX on October 19, 2012, 05:15:31 PM
I HAVE THE LAST UPDATE AS OF THIS WEEK. NEXT WEEK I'LL BE STUDYING.

HOPE YOU'LL ENJOY, I Made it Longer. and more.and.more. errors, as I promised.  XD
Chapter 3 - Sleep Over Part 1
In The Takajo Mansion, Aki was thinking for the solution of 'Maki's' Payment. She Had thought of One Thing, Making 'Maki' as her Problem Solver and Tutor."Atlast, I Have thought of a Payment!"
"What is it, Young Miss?" Rie asked her, she was curious about what her master is planning.
"GIVE ME THE PHONE! I'LL CALL HIM RIGHT AWAY!"
"Here you go Ma'am."

Aki, then dialed 'Maki's' Number."Gokigenyou, Aki Takajo here. I Have thought of a Wonderful Payment!"
"Ah? Who's This?" Haruna was the one who answered the phone.
'Wait?! What?! It must be his Girlfriend!' Aki thought on her Mind, But, she was Mistaken.
"Hello? You Still there?"Haruna asked on the phone.
"May I Talk to your Boyfriend?"
"Sorry, I'M STILL SINGLE YOU FREAK! LESBO!"
"Oh, Sorry, Are You his Mom?"Aki asked her.
"Nope.AS I SAID, I AM STILL SINGLE! and ready to mingle. and too young to be his MOM. "Haruna answered.
"Then, Who're You?"
"I AM HIS FREAKING SISTER!"
"Anyways, May I Talk to him?"
"Wait."

On Shinoda's Apartment.
"OI! WAKE UP! YOU GOT A CALL!!!"Haruna shouted on her 'brother's' ear.
"Hai! wait! wait! wait!"'Maki' stood up from 'his' bed to reach the phone.
"Hai, Who's This?"He asked.
"Takajo Aki."
"Who're you?"
"The Owner of The Volkswagen Beetle you crashed the Other day."
"The Volk-something Bitter?"
"Its VOLKSWAGEN BEETLE."
"VOLK-SWOLEN BEACH PARTY?"
"ARGHH! Stop this Nonsense.!"
"mm'kay. so what now?"
"Do you know how to go to Watanabe All Girls School?"
"Nope~"
"Answer me Seriously!"
"Okay, Okay, I KNOW HOW TO GET IN THERE, That's where my Mom Graduated after all."
"Good. You Need to be there in 10:00 am sharp."
"But its already 9:30."
". . . . ."
"Earthworm."
Aki Ended the Conversation. She Rushed into the School Gate to wait for Maki.
Back to Mariko's Apartment..
"Haruna, I'll go outside for a bit. and I almost forgot, Sae and Yuki will be sleeping Over."Maki said before leaving.
"Take Care Nee-chan. I Mean Aniki."
"Thank You!~"

10:01 am... [Watanabe All Girls School]
"I'm Already Here!"Maki said to Aki.
"You're Late!"she replied, her arms crossed and eyebrows raised.
"eh? but its only 10:01 am."
"Anyways, I'm going to tell you the Payment method."
"What is it?"
"You'll Going to be my Problem Solver and Private Tutor."
"WHAT?! I CAN NEVER AGREE WITH THAT!"
"So you'll have my car FIXED?"
"Nope.. I Mean.. Yes.."
"Okay, Lets Start, Lets Go to My House."
"Okay, Lets Start Walking."Maki said, she was Trying to troll Aki Again."
"Why would we walk if I have my Limousin there?"
"Uh. Sorry."Maki apologized to her, It was the first time he became serious.
Maki, However, Doesn't know whats Happening to him, Since he became a Male, His Trolling got weaker.
He asked himself over and over, It was repeating continuously in his mind.
'Huh? He didn't Troll me?'Aki said in her mind.
"Is there a Problem?"Maki asked Aki, Worries was shown in his eyes.
"Uh.. No! Nothing!!"Aki answered.
"Lets get Going, My Sister is alone in our House."
"Okay."

They Rode the Limousine until they reached Aki's Mansion. As They Arrived, Aki's Dad Welcomed her Back. But He was shocked when he saw Maki Walked outside the Limo.
"Aki, Who's That.?"Her Dad Asked.
"That's... Who are You Again?"Aki asked Maki.
"Shinoda Mari--- I Mean, Shinoda Maki."
"Oh Yeah. He's name is Shinoda Maki, The One who crashed my Volkswagen Beetle."
"So, You're The Man That My Aki is Talking about. You'll become her Tutor, Right?"
"Uh.. Yeah.., M-my Debt of... NEVERMIND, Lets Go, Master Aki."
"MASHHTTERR AKII!!!"Aki, Got Addicted to it Again.
Suddenly, Rie, Appeared and Covered Aki's Mouth.
"I'm Sorry, Mr. Shinoda, Come with me. I'll show you to Her Room."
"Mmm'kay."

A Few minutes of Walking, They Arrived on Aki's Room."I'll Leave Young Miss to You, Mr. Shinoda." Rie Smiled at Maki.
"Alright."Maki Closed the Door.
To Maki, It was his First Time Entering a Princess' room, It was Very Neat, Too Much Furniture's  Built-in Bathroom, Water Bed, and a huge Study table.
"Nice Room." Maki said to Aki.
Aki sat on her bed, she took a Deep breath Before telling her Problem.
"Now, Help me how to Confess to a Student from Matsui music school."
"What's his Name?"Maki asked.
"Miyazawa Sae."
"WHATT??!! SHE IS A SHE!!"
"Yep. I know that."
"I Know who that Guy is, I'll Help you."Maki smiled at Aki.
"You Know who He-- I mean Who she is?!"
"Yup. She or He will be Sleeping Over to our Apartment Tonight, Wanna Come Over?"
"SURE! IF HE/SHE IS THERE I'LL GO!"
"we'll just walk to get there. We'll walk for about 20 minutes."
"I'll do Everything just to Talk to him!"
"Then Lets Go."

The Two quickly rushed to the gate, They Escaped from Aki's Dad because he'll not Allow Aki to Go Out This Late. They Talked All About Each Other when They were walking, As They Reached the Apartment, An Eerie feeling entered Aki's Atmosphere.
"W-why is That--"her words were blocked by Maki.
"Its Really Quiet in Here."Maki said, He is CERTAINLY trying to troll Aki again.
"You Mean.. There are ghosts in here?"
"Yep. Look at that Old Janitress, SHE IS A GHOST."
"E-eh?!"Aki was Shocked, She almost covered her mouth.
"SHINODA! HOW MANY TIMES DO I HAVE TO TELL YOU THAT, I AM STILL YOUNG!"The Janitress----Megumi Ohori, got irritated so Much, She Left right away.
"Maki-kun, Is she really a Ghost?" Aki asked, But she Knows that she.GOT.TROLLED.
"Nope~"Maki asked.
"Hmmph!"
"Anyways, Lets go up Stairs."

As They were climbing the stairs that seemed forever to Aki, She didn't notice that she lost her balance, all she can do is to look at Maki to grab her hand."Watch Out!"The words came from Maki's Mouth were not a Mere trolling, Those words was serious, as Maki Grabbed Aki's Hand, They both fell on the stairs, Maki's back was severely hurt.

"Oi! Maki! Are You still Alive?!"
"I'm still Alive, This is Nothing, C'mon, Lets Climb again."Maki smiled Aki, Enduring the Pain he was feeling.
". . . . . ."Aki slapped Maki, Her head down.
"Eh? What did I Do?"Maki stared at Aki.
"I Know that your back hurts, I Feel the same way when I'm at home."
"What do you mean by that? M-Ms. Takajo?"
"Nothing, I Just want to see Miyazawa right now. And, You're too Formal, Call me Aki."She looked away from him
"Yes, Aki.. Arh!!" Maki's back suddenly Ached, He almost fell down but kept his balance.
"Let me Help you."Aki Assisted him as they arrived in the Room, Haruna Opened the door."Good Evening.. wait! What did you do to My Brother?!"Her voice became louder, heat is blazing up inside her.
"Haruna, Nothing happened. we just fell from the stairs there, and I Saved her. Now, Let me rest."Maki walked directly to his room. and Closed the door.
"You're Aki Takajo from Watanabe all girls school right?"Sae said, pointing his finger to Aki.
"Yes, and You're Sae Miyazawa from Matsui Music School, am I Correct?"Aki replied, the joy is in Her Eyes.
"What Brings you here?"Sae asked.
"I'm here for a Sleep Over, Maki Invited me."
"Lets Call it a Day. Haruna said, while she was yawning."
"Yep."Yuki prepared her futon.
"Hm.. Where should I Sleep?"Aki said, Her eyes wondering.
"Here, Futon." Sae handed it to Aki.
The word 'Thank You' was marked Aki's Face.
When Haruna Closed the Lights, Sae Moved Quickly to Yuki, She Whispered to her.
"I .LOVE.YOU."
Yuki pretended that she was Asleep, Sae kissed her.
'Mmmphh!!' Yuki said on her mind.
Aki saw it, Her Heart Broke, It was Shattered into pieces.

She Cried on her Sleep.

Chapter Ends.

How was it?? xDD




Title: Re: Why Do I Get This Unnatural Feeling...? [MARIRIN X AKICHA] [12|16|10]
Post by: m00nchild on October 19, 2012, 07:29:51 PM
Nice Update,
So Aki like Sae,
Sae like Yuki, love triangle,
And Mariko have become Maki,
And Miichan known NyanNyan,
how they know each other??
why Yuki wanted to curse NyanNyan??
Rie didnt follow Aki together??

looking forward for the next update,
Title: Re: Why Do I Get This Unnatural Feeling...? [MARIRIN X AKICHA] [12|16|10]
Post by: fuu_kun on October 26, 2012, 02:36:59 AM
huwaaaa xd i don't know you had update chapter 3 for a long time xd xd sorry..
*can you change the title whenever you update the new chapter?*
you suprise me XD aki love sae! but sae love yuki <3 poor maki, lost the troll ability xp you made my day XDb
thankyou for the update :bow: and please update soon :kneelbow:
Title: Re: Why Do I Get This Unnatural Feeling...? [MARIRIN X AKICHA] [12|16|10]
Post by: Amakuchi on October 27, 2012, 03:22:11 AM
LOL. According to GinkoX, she's having a writer block now. She'll be thinking of what to do next chapter. :D
Title: Re: Why Do I Get This Unnatural Feeling...? [MARIRIN X AKICHA] [12|16|10]
Post by: fuu_kun on October 28, 2012, 04:47:37 AM
oooh that bad :| hoping your sister can fix it amakuchi san.. but it's allright, i'll always waiting ^-^ but not too long i hope XDb
Title: Re: Why Do I Get This Unnatural Feeling...? [MARIRIN X AKICHA] [12|16|10]
Post by: GinkoX on October 28, 2012, 06:24:22 AM
CHAPTER 3 PART 2: ON-PROGRESS
Title: Re: Why Do I Get This Unnatural Feeling...? [MARIRIN X AKICHA] [12|16|10]
Post by: fuu_kun on October 28, 2012, 11:29:18 AM
yaaayyyy  :ptam-glow: can't wait... ganbatte ne  :gmon peakaboo:
Title: Re: Why Do I Get This Unnatural Feeling...? [MARIRIN X AKICHA] [CH.4]
Post by: GinkoX on October 30, 2012, 04:16:34 PM

DO JI WON!!

HAD FUN USING AMAKUCHI'S IPAD~

LSS MODE: OMOIDE IJOU - AMAKUCHI'S FAULT.

Chapter 4: Sleep Overpt.2, Amusement Park and WHO THE HECK IS DO JI WON?!
Maki's POV

It was blazing hot today, my back isn't fully healed yet. Because of what hapenned to me the other day. I saved Aki's face from being destroyed. I don't really know what will happen today, but I wish that Aki's confession to Sae will be successful. I WISH FOR AKI'S VICTORY!

Anyway, back to the point, today is Sunday and I have nothing to do. I was really bored. And it looks like Aki, Yuki and Sae are just hanging out in my house--- erm.. Scratch that, my apartment-- no I mean Me and my Sister's apartment.

"Haruna.. Do you know somewhere we could hang out to? I'm getting bored here." Sae said, she was reading a magazine about 'yankee style' or so. But she seemed to become more weird since she received her 'motorcycle'.

That is Sae. One of my SUPER FRIENDS. Always helping me. So I love her as much as I love my lil' sissy~ AND THE MOUTH OF GLORY SPEAKS. HURRAY. Well, wanna know who is the 'Mouth of Glory' that I was talking about? Well, it's MY SISTER! HARUNA!

"Hmm... I know there's an amusement park nearby. That's all I know." Haruna crossed her arms... LIKE A BOSS.
"Do you want to enter that AMUSEMENT PARK for free?" Aki stood from the sofa she was sitting earlier. Oh nana. I know that this is one of her plans to get Sae from Yuki. But I have to help her... Damn that VOLK-SOMETHING BATH HOUSE.

"Aniki~ do you want to go there?" Haruna asked me. I don't know how should I reply but... Aki is staring at me TO DEATH. Looks like 'YES' is the lucky answer of the day. And yeah. I answered Haruna a nod.

Hmmm... Aki is missing. Oh... She's in the kitchen talking to the 'so-called' Kitahara-girl. So I went closer to hear their conversation.

"Kitahara, let me and this people enter Daddy's Amusement Park."
"As You wish. May I ask who are these 'people' you were talking about?"
"Take note. Shinoda Maki."
"Noted."
"Shinoda Haruna."
"Noted."
"Miyazawa Sae."
"Noted."
"Kashiwagi Yuki."
"Noted."
"Oshima Yuko. She suddenly appeared a while ago."
"And lastly, Me."

Ooohhh... It's real. I was hiding on the opened refridgerator for so long. Listening to Aki's conversation with 'Kitahara-Girl' but oh my gosh. I feel like someone is staring at me from above. It's Aki... Melting me since October 3, 1991. Guys. I'll tell something serious about Yuki. I heard it last night, she said she wa-----
"Now what are you doing there hiding behind an open fridge's door? Would you like to explain it to me? Shinoda Maki?" Aki's voice suddenly barged in the door of my ear, in my surprise, I accidentally entered the cold fridge because of the embarrassment.

"Oi! Maki! Get out of the fridge!" she was forcing me to get out of the fridge, but I heard Haruna's voice, I can't be mistaken, SHE OPENED THE FRIDGE!
"Ohohohohohohohoho." this is the only word I can say, though it's not really a word.
"And what are you doing inside the fridge, Aniki?" Haruna is now satring at me TO DEATH. I didn't answer, I just stared at her too. A few moments have passed someone knocked on our door.
"Haruna-chan, this is Ohori Megumi, the night janitress. I received a package from your grandmother." well, that's what she said. And... Haruna replied, "JUST LEAVE IT ON MY MAILBOX."

Then our Adventure of Walking to go to Amusement Park has began. Walking too long sure is boring, remembering my Job, I moved closer to Aki, and I asked her, "When will you confess to Sae?" it's really a quiet job.
"Later, when I have the time." Aki answered, she really HAS THE MIND!
"So time is what you Need? I'll but you time later." I just smiled at her, now, I am puzzled on how could I buy her that much of time. I don't even have that much MONEY. ON ACTION DRAMAS, HOW THE HECK CAN THEY BUY TIME? IT'S NOT EVEN ON SALE.

And so, we arrived on the Place where we must go. THE AMUSEMENT PARK!

[9:50 am, TAKAJO Amusement Park.]

"Ohohohohoho."I Laughed, REALLY HARD.  Then, I Received a Message, Its from Aki.

-Maki Phone-

____________________________
Subject: [NONE]
From: [Aki Takajo-chan]
Time Received: [9:55am]
****************************

You Know what to Do! ( >  o <)/

-Message Ends-
____________________________

I Sighed and smiled at her after Reading her Message. I'm feeling strange today, I wonder why. I Can't stop Glancing at Aki. But I Should Concentrate on my Job. And There,  THE MOUTH OF GLORY SPEAKS AGAIN!, Its Haruna, Told you.

"Why Don't we Go Around the Amusement Park in Pairs? "HAAA.. SHE REALLY IS THE MOUTH OF GLORY. But wait, Lets Go back to the Reason why Me and my 'FRIENDS' are here. First, It's Aki's Fault why I Am here. Second, Aki's confession to Sae, and Third, TO ENJOY. But HOW COULD WE GO IN PAIRS? WHAT WILL WE DO? JANKEN TAIKAI!---no, really and SERIOUSLY no. LET THE MOUTH OF GLORY SPEAK!----- This is a YES.

"Hmm.. I Think We'll Arrange it as This. Draw Lots!"Haruna declared. But, She doesn't know how will we DO HER DRAW LOTS. But Yeah, She did have a Plan, a Very strange Plan. "Just wait here Guys, I'll Buy Something We Need."The  Mouth of Glory added. Well, Wanna know where she went? She went to the Nearest Mug shop. and the Mug Shop's Name is... NM-MUGS. I Have Many friends working There, Like Sayaka Yamamoto, Miyuki Watanabe, Nana Yamada, Mayu Ogasawara and Lastly their Shop Owner, Rina Kondo. Also, The Employees, Sayaka. Miyuki, Nana and Mayu are sometimes Singing on The Amusement Park's Stage. Singing 'Zetsumetsu Kurokami Shoujo'. They're Good at Singing but Why are they Getting Poor Sales? I Think its because THEY'RE ALL POOR. Well, I Don't Know why is that but.... I DON'T REALLY CARE! HOHOHOHOHO!  HARUNA IS BACK! She was holding a Box of Mug. from NM-MUGS of Course. Yeah. And also, About the 'NM-MUGS', I Don't Know who is the One who gave that Name in their Mug Shop but... The One who gave that name is a TOTAL IDIOT. NOT AS IDIOT AS ME OF COURSE. The Moment Came, Haruna Opened the Box and Placed the Box on a Random Table, With The Mug on Her Hands. Wait. Pause. I'll describe the Mug.

The Structure of the Mug is This:
A Normal Mug with 'I Love Milky' Printed on the front.
Instead of putting this picture beside the 'I Love Milky'...
(http://i43.tinypic.com/jsghh3.jpg)
they accidentally placed THIS PICTURE INSTEAD!
(http://koreangossipgirl.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/01/AnnaLaker1.gif)

ITS DO JI WON! FROM SMILE DONGHAE, AS ANNA LAKER. Oh My Gosh, I Freakin' Love That Show! But Yeah. Play Button. And it All happened... Haruna held the Mug like a Baseball player, a Pitcher, to be Specific... and... LOL.... She threw The Mug like a Professional Pitcher. With the Matching background Music from her Phone. We Used to play Baseball when we were still Young, she always plays as the Pitcher and me as The Batter. Well Back to Reality, She really threw the Mug, LIKE A BOSS. Let me tell you the Adventures of the Mug with 'Milky' and 'Do Ji Won'.

When Haruna threw the Mug, The 'NM-MUGS' Shop Owner, was crying inside the Shop, Because she gave the wrong Mug, specifically, the 'Errored' Mug. Haruna felt the wind blowing on her face, even if its Just her Imagination, Remember what I Said Earlier? IT WAS BLAZING HOT. As the Mug is 'flying' in the Sky, when it fell, It accidentally hit a Performer's Head, The Performer is MILKY or Miyuki. Fortunately, The Mug didn't Break. Miyuki picked up the Mug and saw the DESIGN. The 'I Love Milky' and 'Do Ji Won' Design, She stared deeply on the Mug... Her face was... 'Who in the effin' World is this?!' a Korean passerby saw Milky and he thought that 'Milky' is 'Do Ji Won' "WAIT! I KNOW HER! IT'S DO JI WON!"The Passerby moved closer to Milky and offered to shake hands. Milky Refused, Because of her Anger, She Threw the mug on the Korean Passerby's Face and Said, "THERE! EAT YOUR DO JI WON! I EFFIN' DON'T NEED IT!" Because of the Massive throwing of The Mug, It broke.

"Ooopss..."Haruna face palmed, She was Disappointed, While Mayu, Sayaka and Nana are Laughing at her on her back. They can't stop their laughter.
"Its Your Fault"I Lol'd at my Horrible Sister's Face. She was feeling sorry. but, We Just Ran to Escape the 'NM-MUGS'. When we Arrived on the place where no one can recognize us from the past place, We Started the Draw Lots.

"NOW! Me, Yuki, and Aki, Let US NOW DRAW."Haruna started the draw.

This is What Happened, Yuki drew Sae's Name, The Mouth of Glory drew Yuko's Name and lastly, Aki drew MY NAME. SO UNFORTUNATE. Then, a Couple of Minutes after the Draw, I Received a Message, AGAIN. FROM THE SAME PERSON.

-Maki Phone-

____________________________
Subject: [WHY YOU?!]
From: [Aki Takajo-chan]
Time Received: [10:15am]
****************************

WHY! IT ISN'T SAE!! WHY!!!

I HATE IT!!!

ITS ALL YOUR FAULT!!!

:angry:

-Message Ends-
____________________________

Then I Replied.

-Aki Phone-

____________________________
Subject: [Hohohoho]
From: [Shinoda Maki ]
Time Received: [10:15am]
****************************

hohohohoho.

-Message Ends-
____________________________

Then Our Conversation Continued, So we have decided that we'll just Deal with it. But... My Money was Lowered. Haruna started doing another draw lots, this time for the Places that the pairs would go, the time has come, it was FINSHED. I was the first on to draw, and I Picked 'Horror House' The Next One who will draw is Sae, now she picked 'Roller Coaster' that means she and Yuki will ride it. While Haruna and Yuko will go to the 'Fun House'.

[Inside the Horror House|10:20am]

"HARRGGH!! I HATE IT. IT SHOULD BE SAE NOT YOU!"And... The Princess was Being stubborn, She wants Sae. but Instead, Another Unwanted Happening, Like what Happened to The 'I Love Milky' Mug. LOL. Its Not My Fault its HER FAULT FOR DRAWING MY NAME. While she is being stubborn, I Just Kept Quiet. Then another Unwanted Happening Arrived, a Haunted House worker scared Aki, she suddenly Hugged me Tightly, She didn't stop until we got out of The Horror House, she was Crying. I Just Wiped her Tears using my FLORAL Handkerchief. I, Again, Received a Message.

-Maki Phone-

____________________________
Subject: [We Will Meet at..]
From: [Yuko Le Oshiri.]
Time Received: [10:28am]
****************************

We will Meet infront of the
NM-MUGS. Be There at 10:30!

-Sincerely,
     Yuko~

-Message Ends-
____________________________

"We will Meet at the NM-MUGS, Aki, Lets Go." I pulled her hand LIKE A BOSS and hurried to NM-MUGS, When we Arrived there, Yuko and friends are Being lectured by Kondo, not to throw the Mug anywhere again.

"GOT THAT?!"Kondo-minium said, she tapped the table really loud.
"Yes Ma'am."Yuko with friends, Including Milky responded, while I Whispered to Aki.

"Aki, I'll Lure Yuki first, After we walk to a place far from where you are, Pull Sae on the Forbidden Place and Confess."That's what I Whispered to her, I Have to do this because of Work. And yeah, It Really happened, I Lured Yuki to a Far Place, the 'Ferris Wheel'. And I Went to the place where Aki will confess to Sae, Of Course When I Arrived, I Hid at the back of a Rectangular Trash bin, No One can see Me, And there, I Watched the intense Confession.

"Sae, I Really Liked you Since I First saw You. Last Night, I Cried Silently because I Saw you Kissing Kashiwagi-san. It Really Made my Heart Broke. It was Still Bleeding."Tears were flowing on Aki's Eyes, She can't stop it. I Really don't Know Why... But.. Why is My Heart Breaking? Why?...

"Sorry Takajo-san... But I Already like Someone."Replied Sae. The part where Sae said 'I Already like Someone' Pierced through Aki's Heart, Aki cried really hard, Tears burst in her Eyes While Sae, Doesn't Care.

'What is This Feeling Anyways?'

'Why is My Heart feeling Pierced too, while seeing Aki Cry?'

Those Questions was like, walking in my Head, After that, I Walked to Aki and Confronted her, She was still crying, When she stopped Crying, We came back to The Group and Began Eating the Pizza that Kondo-san Ordered.

They Later Realized That Yuki is Missing. And after The Adventures of Finding Yuki. NOT THE MUG ANYMORE!

[Ferris Wheel]

"Uhm! GUYS!! HELP ME! ITS SO HIGH!" Yuki pleaded for help and she was staring terribly at me.

"DON'T WORRY YUKI! I'LL SAVE YOU!"Sae rushed to the Control Room of the Amusement Park.

Because Milky Thought that Yuki is the One who threw the Mug on Her, She also Threw another 'Errored' Mug. Featuring Her Face and 'I Love Do Ji Won' design.

"I HATE YOU!"Milky said as She threw the Mug on the Ferris Wheel.

'Could it Be? I'm..'

-CHAPTER ENDED-



HAHH!! AFTER THE LONG WAIT!!

   
Title: Re: Why Do I Get This Unnatural Feeling...? [MARIRIN X AKICHA] [CH.4]
Post by: m00nchild on October 30, 2012, 10:21:42 PM
Poor Yuki~!!
Aki was hearts breaking,
I wonder is that anything happen on Haruna & Yuko?
Maki was so caring,
after I saw this fiction.
I still wondering which pair better, due there are different author with different pair,
like MariMii, MariHaru and MariAki.
which will better.

Looking forward for the next update.
Title: Re: Why Do I Get This Unnatural Feeling...? [MARIRIN X AKICHA] [CH.4]
Post by: fuu_kun on October 31, 2012, 02:05:14 PM
yaayy finaly you update \ (^o^) /
sorry aki :( but sae is yuki's x)
yaddaa mario fall in love to aki XD haruna is really2 like a boss ! i think it's suit to her real personality :D i like it <3
i wonders who is do ji won? :? i think i must google it :grin: thankyouu for the update :bow:
looking forward to the next chapter ^-^
Title: Re: Why Do I Get This Unnatural Feeling...? [MARIRIN X AKICHA] [CH.4.2]
Post by: GinkoX on November 01, 2012, 04:47:03 AM
Chapter 4.2 [Another's View]: The Annoying, Crazy Little Squirrel.

Haruna POV.

It was Another Sunday Morning, I Was really happy because Yuko or Mayu didn't Join the Sleep Over. It was really a Relief!, This Morning, I Was the first One to wake up, AGAIN. Well, This isn't Really something to Brag about. I'M ALWAYS WAKING UP EARLY, NO DOUBT. As I Glanced to The floor, My Sister---scratch that, I Mean My Brother's Friend, Takajo-san, Sae-chan, Yukirin, were sleeping soundly on the floor, of course, on the FUTON. I Decided to take a Morning Walk to Relax myself, It became my Habit already. As I Walked beside the River Nearby, I Looked at my Phone, It's Just 5:00 am. Not Much people are walking outside. and, I wasn't looking on My way, so I Accidentally stumbled on One or actually Two People, Its Minegishi Minami, With a Small Kid... OH WAIT... ITS TAKAHASHI MINAMI! A Friend from high school.

"Haruna! Long Time no See! Since Graduation!"Takamina Started the Conversation, Of Course, I was being shy to start it.
"Yeah.. Uhm.. Why are the Two of You here in Sakurami City?"I Asked them, I was being curious.
"I-I uh.. Didn't Really leave this Town. Haruna."Miichan, said, I was really shocked and I remembered when the last time I saw Her, She was on the Airport, with her Parents.
"Eh?! Seriously?!"Takamina and My Eyes Widened. Because it was the two of us who brought her to the airport at that time.
"Its Been 6 years Since our High School days. Right?" I Tried to Divert our Conversation, and Hopefully, It worked.
"Oh! Shoot! Minami! We're Going to be late for Our Work!"Miichan said, She really changed. She's not the Miichan I Met in Middle School.
"Ha?! Majisuka?!"The Two ran to the Nearest train Station.
"Bye."I Just gave them a silent farewell.

After that, I Hurried to the Nearest Breakfast shop that is Open, The NM-BUTTER, Kondo Rina is the One who owns this Shop, She also owns a Mug Store on Takajo Amusement Park, The NM-MUGS. They Make Really good Breakfast here, In Fact, The Store Has its Own Enemy, The SK-EATERY. The Both Owners don't have Good Naming Sense. So, I Entered The 'NM-BUTTER' Because they Have delicious Foods here, and the SK-EATERY is Only open in the Midday to Evening while the NMBUTTER is Opened the Whole Day, 24 hours. As I Entered the Air-conditioned Breakfast Shop. I Sat on one of the Empty Tables. I Was the first Person to Enter the Shop. Then, A Waitress Walked to me and Asked for My Order, I Don't Know who it was, But when I Looked at her name plate, It was One of My Former Sister's Friends from the International School where she Graduated. The Waitress is Yamada Nana-san. My Brother always tells Me about her when I Was still in Middle School. Aniki will always Tell me that 'She Excels in Studies and she was Accelerated. So they became classmates on his Last year of High School.' Yeah. Lets Go Back to Reality.

[NMBUTTER-5:30]
"Ano... Miss, What is Your Order?"She Asked Me. handing the Menu to Me.
"Uhm.. Chicken Soup and Darjeeling."I Answered, I Didn't accept The Menu Either. Because I Already Knew what I want.
"Noted. Just Wait here, and your Order Will be Delivered in a Few minutes."She Left My table walked to the counter to place my order.

A few minutes  passed, and One of The Old Workers There, Yamamoto Sayaka, made her way from the 'Authorized personnel' Room. And she sat beside Me.

"Oh! Haruna, You don't have to pay for what you ordered. You've been a Customer since this Shop has been Built. So Order to your Hearts Content."Sayaka Smiled.
"YAY!"I forgot check the time. Yeah. Whatever. I Opened My Phone, SLOWLY.... AND CHECKED THE TIME. IT WAS 5:59am.. So, My Order Arrived and  I Sipped the tea and carefully tasted the hot soup. It was delicious as always. And curiosity again, Attacked me. I Asked Sayaka.

"Sayaka, Could you show me the kitchen? and the workers?"The words came out from my mouth. It was Curiosity's fault.
"Eh? Sure."Sayaka stood from her chair and escorted me to their Kitchen. I Saw how clean they were working, The Cook, wearing plastic gloves and changing it every time she holds another spice or food. while the one who arranges the food is wearing gloves too. Its really clean. Not even showing an inch of DIRTINESS. "We'll be closing this shop Later after the current customers after they eat."Kondo Rina suddenly appeared. Crossing her arms.
"Why?"I Asked Kondo, I Was REALLY Shocked.
"The Workers of NM-MUGS became sick because of the Expired food from The SK-EATERY. Mita Mao called Me Last Night. An Idiot ordered a Food from that Damn Eatery."And We Go back to where I was sitting earlier, and there, We Chatted and Chatted, As The Time Passed, It was already 7:30 am.

So I have taken my leave and walked back to Our Apartment. When I Arrived, they're already awake, Only Aniki is the One who is not awake even if its already 7:30. Not an Inch of his Existence is Being shown on the whole leaving room. Its Only Sae-chan, Takajo-san and Yukirin playing spin the bottle. So, I Entered the Apartment to wake the Slacker and a few minutes have passed and Yuko Arrived Surprisingly, with the word 'Yaho!'written on her face. There, We Have Embarked on an Adventure to the Takajo Amusement Park. We Needed a Box when we arrived, so I Entered the shop called 'NM-MUGS' the shop I was talking about this Morning. And bought a Mug, a Random Error-ed mug. Kondo gave me the Mug with a Smile. She didn't realized that it has an error. After I Bought the Mug, I Walked outside. I was supposed to keep the Mug, but the picture placed in the mug that I Bought Isn't Right. Because of the disgusted feeling of Seeing My Hatest Korean Actress' picture on an 'I LOVE MILKY' Mug, I Threw the mug Like a Professional Pitcher of Japan's baseball team. I Didn't know that the Mug is bound to fall on a performers head on the stage. So, The Mug Didn't break when accidentally thrown on the Performer's head, The Performer is Milky, Who was Performing 'Zetsumetsu Kurokami Shoujo' on-stage with Sayaka and Other Employees of the 'NM---' Like that. She Got Disgusted, And when a Korean Passerby said that SHE IS DO JI WON. She threw the Mug on The Korean's Face and Voila. It Broke. So we ran to a Safe place to escape the 'NM'S'.

I Started the Draw Lots. With the Use of the Mug box. I Unfortunately drew Yuko's Name. GOSH. Really Unfortunate. When Yuko drew the The place where we would go. ITS THE FUN HOUSE. So, Yeah. I and Yuko went to the Fun House, Its Full of Kids.

[FUN HOUSE - 10:20am]

"O-oi... Yuko why are the clowns here so scary?"Still, I Got Curious. This Amusement park holds Many secrets, the fun house suddenly became a Horror house. It was very scary. BUT YEAH. YUKO CONFESSED. That it IS HER PLAN AFTER ALL TO DIVERT ME TO THE SECOND HORROR HOUSE. My Body was shaking as the two of us were walking to the Dark path of the 'Horror house'. I Was really scared. When we Got out, Yuko Pulled her phone and sent a Message to the Group. I Don't Know whats inside of the Message but, We continued to walk through the Amusement park and Yuko pulled me to a Crepe shop and Treated me. "I'm Sorry?"Yuko handed me the crepe. I Just Nodded to her simply and Smiled at her. She smiled back. Before the clock's hands move to '10:30' She insisted to ride the 'SPACE SHUTTLE' there, I Froze before meeting with other Group Members. When Yuko brought me to the NM-MUGS, I'm still frozen. and even when Kondo-san hit our heads with a newspaper, I'M STILL FROZEN, BECAUSE OF YUKO. It's that Crazy Little Squirrels fault why my Fear of heights came back at me. LIKE A GHOST. Until the Day Ended, With Yuki on the FERRIS WHEEL. And seeing Milky throwing another Mug of Error to Yuki. Because Milky thought that it was Yuki who threw the 'DO JI WON' Mug to her. Yeah, Well We don't know what Yuki is doing there but, She said that it was ANIKI'S FAULT WHY SHE IS THERE. And so, We Go back to the Shop to eat the Pizza that Kondo-san Ordered.

-END-


THEN THE NEXT 4.3 is for YUKI or SAE? PICK ONE.
Title: Re: Why Do I Get This Unnatural Feeling...? [MARIRIN X AKICHA] [CH.4.2]
Post by: Amakuchi on November 01, 2012, 05:43:11 AM
I dunno. xDD
Title: Re: Why Do I Get This Unnatural Feeling...? [MARIRIN X AKICHA][CH.4.2(HarunaxYuko)]
Post by: fuu_kun on November 01, 2012, 02:10:11 PM
whoaa yuko confess already xd good job yuko!! XD
i want yuki next~ i wanna know what yuki did while aki confess to sae x)
thankyou for the update :bow: looking 4ward for d'next update ^-^
Title: Re: Why Do I Get This Unnatural Feeling...? [MARIRIN X AKICHA][CH.4.2(HarunaxYuko)]
Post by: m00nchild on November 01, 2012, 03:14:25 PM
so this have happen on that day,
with Haruna POV,
Next I would like to know Yuki,
I wanted to know how she feel when she stuck,

Looking for the next update.
Title: Re: Why Do I Get This Unnatural Feeling...? [MARIRIN X AKICHA][CH.4.2(HarunaxYuko)]
Post by: GinkoX on November 10, 2012, 06:16:18 PM
ANNOUNCEMENT:

I KNOW THAT NO ONE CARES BUT...

HIATUS.

I WILL BE CONTINUING THIS FIC WHEN I FINISHED THE NEXT CHAPTERS, IT WILL BE LONGER.

SORRY.
Title: Re: Why Do I Get This Unnatural Feeling...? [MARIRIN X AKICHA][HIATUS]
Post by: fuu_kun on November 11, 2012, 01:32:31 PM
whaay?? whaaay?? T^T i don't like hiatus T^T :cry: pleasee continue this interesting fic.. plisss *puppy look* :bow:
Title: Re: Why Do I Get This Unnatural Feeling...? [MARIRIN X AKICHA][CH.4.3]
Post by: GinkoX on December 21, 2012, 12:57:52 AM
O-HA!~

I'm Back from the Depts of ZENONIA!~

SOrry if its a Bit Boring. ( = , = )


Chapter 4.3 [Another's View]: A Diet

Yuki POV

It was still dark when I Woke up, I stood up from the Futon where I was Lying a while ago and checked on Haruna's Room, She wasn't there. I Started to Jog By Myself because that is my Morning Habit. I Was Really fascinated by the Beautiful Scene in the Streets, When I was the only one there, Jogging. I can feel the Strong Air Breeze as I was jogging, Until I Stumbled on a Friend. It was Mayu.

"Aww... My Butt..." Mayu accidentally sat on the ground

"Ah! Oh... Sorry Mayu!" I Apologized to her. I Didn't Mean it.

"No, No. Mom. It's Fine."She Stood up from the ground. I'm Sorry Baby Mayu!! ( TT 0 TT )

"By The Way. Mom, Why are you Up This Early?" Mayu stared at me coldly.

"Eh-Ermmhh..... I'm Jogging! Y-Yes!! I'm Jogging"I Replied to her, I Need to hide the reason why I'm Jogging. I Need to burn Fats.

"Liar. It's True that you're jogging, But to jog with those.... Weights, and Very Thick Clothing, The Secret of you, Burning Fats... Is UNVEILED!"She Pointed at me accusingly. Yes!! I Mean it!! I'm Burning my fats for Sae!!

"Yeah Right. Yes. Yes. I'm Burning Fats. Is Anything Wrong With that?----"In a Blinding flash of light, Some Wild Yuihan Appeared.

"HONMAYAN! YUKI-SAN FROM AK-BURN IS BURNING HER FASTS IN THE MORNING!"Arrghh.. Damn... It's Honmayan. This Makes alot of trouble. Yes, Yes. The Three Eating Shops has These Bad Names. Only One is Named Beautifully. The 'Hakata Ramen Store' Such favoritism. But... WHY NAME IT 'HAKATA' THOUGH WE'RE NOT EVEN LOCATED THERE?!

"Honmayan. Stop. GO HOME AND STUDY." I Look at her Angrily. Then, She's Out with this reply again. Honmayan... When will you be a Normal Child?. Haahh...

"Go Home and Study? If I Do that You'll definitely Laugh at me Right?"Oh My Gah. What's Happening to the Children These days...

"DO THAT NOW! NO MORE EXCUSES!!" I Shouted at Honmayan's Cute Face.

".... Honmayan Be-----"It was stopped by me.

"I'm Going to tell your Parents." ( = u = )

"'kay. I'm Going Home." She walked to the direction from where she is from.

"Ooohhh~! So Fast!!" Mayu was Amazed. Was that really Amazing?? I Just Ignored Mayu and Continued on the Path where I Would run to burn my Fats. Until I Got hungry and Stopped over to Hakata Ramen Store.

"Irrashai! Oh! Yuki-san!---Desu ne~"It was when Sashihara Rino, Opened the Door to the Ramen Shop. By The Way, What is she doing here. Isn't she a Rich Girl Studying at Watanabe All Girls School?

"Oi! Don't 'Desu ne~' Me!. Moreover, What are you Doing Here?!"I Sat on an Empty Chair and Gazed at the Menu.

"I am Working here for my Tuition. Shall I Tell you my story" The Mood became sad, and Here enters the ramen that I ordered. It was Sakura-san who delivered the food to me. I've been talking to this girl ever since this Ramen Shop was built.

"Ohayo Gozaimasu. Kashiwagi-san. Still Burning Fats eh?"Sakura smirked. Where did she get the information that I was burning my Fats?!

"E-Eh... Yeah..." ( _ _) And Sashihara's Story Continues.

"My Mom was Sick! And My Dad is outside the cou----"I Didn't want her story to continue so I Just talked to Sakura. Until the ramen on my Bowl Ran Out and I had to go back to Shinoda Residence. I Made my Way Again, I Ran back to the Apartment and I Bumped into someone again. Never-ending Bump. The Person I Bumped was 'Mita' (I'm Not Even Sure if thats really her name), One of my Neighbors, Honmayan's Twin, I Think..

"Mita-san! Gomen!!" I Apologized to the Person Named 'Mita' or So, I Think.

"Iie, Sanda desu."I Was defeated by her Stare.

"D-Do demo ii!!" Ignoring her Name, I ran faster than I Could, Until I Stopped to the Apartment where Haruna and his Bro lives.

Back to the 'Crazy' House

"I'm Back."I Was really tired when I got back. I Saw Sae and Takajo Playing Spin the Bottle, As if they Already Know Each Other for a long time. Yeah. That's True, They Really Know each other. Even Though When I Entered, I Showed an 'Ohayo~'Face, I Was still ignored. Why!!?? Until a Minute came and I was Noticed by Sae.

"Oh! Yuki! Ohayo!~ Wanna Join us?" An Invitation? Lol. Yuki, That's not in a Paper. It is Called 'They're Inviting you to Play with them.' When did I Transformed to being an Idiot? Harhhhahaha!!

"I'll Change My Clothes First." I Dashed to the Bathroom as fast as the Lightning. When I am Taking a Shower, A Thing came into my Mind.... Does Aki Like Sae?? Does She Like My Sae?? If She Does.... Then.... I Should Stop them now... Stopping them without clothes?! Yuki! Get a Hold of your Self! You're a Decent Girl! Super CLEEAAANN~~ Girl! Fudge Yuki, Take a Bath faster. to stop them in the Right Time. But... What the Effin' Day.... The Door broke.... and I Can't get out.... FUUUUUU!!!

As I Try to open the door, The More the Door Locks.... How Can I Get out??? The Condition Left is... That I Transform to Black and Destroy the Door. Okay... Black... Here we Go... BAKLABAKLAFLYFLYINTHESKY!!

After 5 Minutes.....

"Atsuki Chishio no yawa hada yo... Ashita wa... Mou Nai...." I Destroyed the Door, After a Few Minutes, I'm back to my Normal Self. The sound of the breaking door became a disturbance to the whole apartment. It suddenly became noisy. And When Sae Opened the Door She Shouted...

"Guys! Nothing Happened!! shoo! shoo!"She Angrily Closed the Door. Until After an Hour, Haruna Came back and Saw us Playing Spin The Bottle. I Still Can't believe that Aki is that Rich. And Her Family Owns the Newly Built and Popular Amusement Park near here. Just sooo.... Unbelievable. We Later Started The Adventure to The Takajo Amusement Park. They Have decided to Have a Drawlots but we don't have a Box to put the Paper on. So Haruna Entered the Mug Shop And she later Got out with a Box of errored mug. She Later Threw it like a Professional Pitcher and It Landed on Miyuki's Head, Which is Performing on the Stage with Nana and the Others. Miyuki was really angered by the Sudden Throw of the Mug, also saw whats written on the mug... 'I Love Milky' and Do Ji Won's Picture. If I Were Miyuki, I'd Also be Disgusted. Then, A Random Person came ant Told Miyuki that she is 'Do Ji Won' Miyuki Threw the Mug to the Random Person and Walked Out of the Stage because of Guiltiness, While Our Group Ran Until We Escaped the NM-Mugs.

On The Cafe Near the Store, We Begin the Drawlots. Guess What?! I Picked Sae. I'm So HAPPYY!~ But on the Place that we would go, I Was ShitBricked by the Roller Coaster. And Unwanted Events Happened.

[10:20|Roller Coaster|SAEYUKI PAIR]

"Sae!! I Don't Want to Ride it!!"I Hugged Sae Very Tight.

"Don't Worry Yuki, It'll be Fine."She gave me a Smile.

"Oh-Okay..."I Said as we sat on the roller coaster's chair. after 2 minutes, I Froze.

"Oooi! Yuki! You Alright??!!"It was when I Came back to Reality. I Was in the Cafe With Sae.

"Uh.. Yes... I'm Alright.." YATTA! I WAS SAFE!! ( O u O )

"Let's Eat. Here. Hot Dog." Sae handed me the Hot Dog.

"T-Thanks..."I Was Blushing... I Can't even Admit to her that I Already Love her...

"Yuki? Are you Melting me to death?"Her Eyes was in the Power of Curiosity. We Later Received a Group Message from Yuuko that we'll meet in the NM-Mugs.

-Yuki Phone-
____________________________
Subject: [We Will Meet at..]
From: [Oshiruko]
Time Received: [10:28am]
****************************

We will Meet infront of the
NM-MUGS. Be There at 10:30!

-Sincerely,
     Yuuko~

-Message Ends-
____________________________

"Lets Go Back."I Said to Sae. She Replied a Quick Nod.

When We Arrived, Haruna and Yuuko was Getting Lectured by.... the Girl Called Kondo.

"Ahahaha! Yuki-chan! Let's go to the Ferris wheel~"Maki suddenlt Pulled me with him to the Ferriswheel. While We Were walking, I Decided to ask him why are we going to the Ferris Wheel.

"Nee... Maki-san.... Why are we Going to the Ferris Wheel?" I Stared at Him.

"I Have Something to tell you~" He showed his Troll Face.

"Oh---Kay..." ( O 3 O )

And When We Arrived at the Ferris Wheel, Maki quickly Pushed Me inside the Ferris Wheel... as the Doors Closed, He Quickly Left Me with a Smile. Saying...

"Ja~! Bye-Bye~" He Just Look Like and Like Mariko-san. But... Haruna Said that She's Working Overseas.

"Oi! Maki! Get Me Down Here!!" I Shouted to Him. He's Just Smiling.

"Hahahaha!" Those Disgusting Smile....

"When I GOT DOWN HERE! I'LL GET YOUR HEAD RIPPED!"

"Bye~" He Really Left Me.

I lasted there for 30 Minutes. Later, When I Got to the Top, I Heard that the Machine Got Errored. So The Ferris Wheel is Stopped. The group suddenly appeared with the NM's, And..... Sae said that she'll save me!! *blush* Kyaa!~ Eherm.... Someone from the NM's Threw me a Mug written 'I Love Do Ji Won' with Milky's Picture. Whaddaheck is this.? When I Already Got down, I Ignored Maki for the Whole Day.

[End]







Title: Re: Why Do I Get This Unnatural Feeling...? [MARIRIN X AKICHA][Ch.4.3]
Post by: fuu_kun on December 21, 2012, 02:56:52 PM
nyahaha XD it's not boring at all XDb keep it up! i like the moment when yuki jogged XD 'for burning fat' she says~~ nyahaha XD
thanks :bow: