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This Guy's In Love With You...
Prologue (Scroll down)
Chapter 1 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34080.msg1109343#msg1109343)
Chapter 2 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34080.msg1135020#msg1135020)
Chapter 3 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34080.msg1169811#msg1169811)
Chapter 4 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34080.msg1185559#msg1185559)
Chapter 5 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34080.msg1193430#msg1193430)
One-Shot
Maple Love (KojiYuu) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34080.msg1190420#msg1190420)
I think that this story will be UNIQUE that maybe you guys won’t take it in, but just so you know, I tried my best in making this one, so, I hope, even if it’s just a little, enjoy the story. Thanks :)
I based this story on a Filipino film that I recently watched, it was a good film, but somehow I was kinda disappointed at the ending, so I tried to create an AKB48 version of it and that I would end the story with how I wanted it, but its still depends on you guys.
So here goes nothing :nervous…
Characters:
Main:
Kojima Riku – He is rich, handsome and intelligent, what more can you ask for a boyfriend right? Well actually, the thing is why he doesn’t have a girlfriend? It’s because he is gay. And he is madly in love with Matsui Ren and they are currently dating, almost 3 years now.
Oshima Yuko – She is a bank teller at a prestigious bank, happy with her life and love life, she is currently dating Matsui Ren for almost a year now, what she doesn’t know is that she will meet a drastic change in her life specially in her love life in the near future.
Matsui Ren – He is a handsome, kind and caring guy that is completely and madly in love with Oshima Yuko, but there is still one obstacle he needs of surpass, before he could be free and be happy with the one he truly loves.
Prologue.
In a private restaurant…
“I rented this place for our 3rd anniversary, I hope it goes well.” Riku said as he arranged the table.
“Yeah, I mean, look at this place, it’s amazing, to think you would go this far for him.” Kai said bringing the wine to Riku.
“I really love him, he’s the person I’m going to marry, and I think today, he’s going to propose to me.” Riku replied imagining things that would happened later.
“Wait. Are you sure? He’s going to propose?” Kuu said as he was eating some of the foods that is served.
“Are you deaf? Didn’t you hear me?” Riku said to Kuu sarcastically. “And don’t eat those they’re for later.” Riku reprimanded Kuu which he just ignores it.
“But, you’re the one who organize this, should he be the one…” Kai said but immediately cut off by Kuu. “Or maybe you are the one who’s going to propose.” Kuu said laughingly.
“No! He’s going to propose to me today, here, we’re going to America to be married. Just wait and see.” Riku said a little pissed at the two.
After a few minutes…
Ren came. He and Riku proceeded at the table to have their dinner date, while Kai and Kuu are watching from afar.
“I can’t believe I always forget this day, I’m so sorry.” Ren said to Riku apologetically.
“It’s ok you can always make it up there’s still 4th, 5th, 6th, 7th, 8th, 9th, 10th and many more years to come.” Riku said forgiving Ren.
“I’m really sorry, and I want to thank you for these gifts.” Ren said showing two large paper bags. “The watch, the clothes and the shoes, I’m really grateful.”
“It’s nothing, not compared to your gift for me.” Riku said.
“Gift?!? What gift? I don’t have a gift.” Ren asked wandering what Riku is saying.
“Yes you do, you’re going to propose right?” Riku said while handling a ring box at the side of the table so that the two spectators won’t be able to see it.
“What’s this?” Ren said as he opened the box.
“Just give it to me.” Riku whispered.
“Here” Ren said handling out the box to Riku.
“So he did propose.” Kuu said.
“And you thought he was bluffing.” Kai said.
“Oh my! You’re going to propose, yes!” Riku said acted like he was surprised. But Ren is much more surprised by him.
“Huh?!? No, I can’t. I can’t marry you. I’m sorry.” Ren said declining Riku.
“What?” Riku said a little shocked.
“I came here to break up with you. I can’t continue this. Let’s end it here.” Ren said as he stood up and left Riku dumb folded, tears keep flowing in his eyes.
End Of Prologue.
Thanks of Reading. Hope you liked it.
I don't own this. My friend wrote it. (Dianne) Hohoho :onionwhip:
She's the one who should give the credit for. XD
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I will edit when i read it!! :cathappy:
i'm sick so i'm planning to read it in a few days.. :catglare:
but still it looks pretty interesting "Keep it up!" :thumbsup
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Oh god! :rofl:
Poor Riku!! :grin:
But i still don't get what are going to be the pairing but i love it anyways! :inlove:
i can't for your update! :w00t:
please update soon! :bow:
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Oh. Okay. Arigato cmze-san. :)
Please update too on your fiction. I'm one of your readers. :deco: XD :onioncheer:
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Nice story, lost most of my stress when I read your fiction. (stressed from thinking :panic:)
I didn't expect Riku to be gay in stories so your fic gave me a good laugh! :rofl:
Can't wait for the next update~ :cow:
P.S The title reminds me of a filipino movie though! :lol:
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Yes it is. The title was This Guys Inlove With You Mare. :lol:
I'm glad you had fun. My friend will make it more interesting than the film itself.. :thumbsup :cathappy:
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I hope it will end up being kojiyuu!!! :heart: please update soon!! :)
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Man, this is so interesting..
RikuRen :heart: (I like yaoi)
Poor riku..his boyfriend dump him..
Can't wait for the first chapter...can't wait for yuko's appearance..
More RikuRen plizzz...hehehe..
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WOOT! I TOTALLY WUV THIS STORY! PERSONA-TACHI!!!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! APUDEETO PURI~ZU!!!! xDD
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Woah .. I watched that film and I was laughing so hard while watching it :lol:
I think this will be interesting ..
Waiting for the next update :twothumbs :thumbsup
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:cool2: wow... this is new... Riku is a gay... hahaha interesting.. :on GJ:
:dunno: urmp..is there any chance that riku and yuko together??? :hehehe:
:smoke: or... they will having a big fight??? :onionwhip:
please update.... :on woohoo:
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:yep: interesting!
the odd pairing makes the story even more interesting
I can't wait for next update!
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:
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Omg this sounds so interesting! I was lolling so badly when I read that Riku was gaaaaaaay! Update soon :)
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I haven't watched the movie yet, but reading this fic of yours made me want to ASAP. Though at the same time... I'm wishing that I never saw the trailer.
:err: It's because... I kept imagining Riku as Vice the whole time I was reading this!
Please update soon!
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NOTE TO ALL WHO HAVEN’T WATCHED AND IS PLANNING TO WATCH THE MOVIE:
THIS FICTION IS A HUGE SPOILER TO YOU GUYS.
BUT YOU, READING THIS FIC AND KNOWING THAT, I AM REALLY, REALLY GRATEFUL AND I WOULD LIKE TO GIVE YOU GUYS A HUGE THANK YOU.
ARIGATOU GOZAIMASU. :bow:
To cmze, CheesyBits, Spicy Sapphire, rhin rhin, javs, yukofan, Amakuchi, Nab, RenaChii, Megumi, sakura_drop, yourockme, karomuwi, ElleOranji
I want to thank you guys for liking and clicking the Thank You button, but maybe the right thing to say is…
:mon loveflower:You’re Welcome. Love you guys, Thank You. :mon love:
Cmze, the pairings are a secret ;) but to give a hint, The pairings are not just one or two, it’s going to ba more than that.
CheesyBits, Actually, me too, I never would have thought that I would write a fic about Riku being gay. XD But somehow I did, and I, too, am laughing while writing the fic. :lol:
Tam_atsu, Kojiyuu? Hmmm. I’ll think about it. But just so you know, I am a huge fan of the Kojiyuu pairing. But we, even I, still don’t know what might happen in the climax or ending of this story. We just have to find out, so stay tuned :)
Yukofan, RikuRen, Haruna and Rena I first thought that these two never really liked each other, and have so little interaction, but when I saw the video of Rena’s crush, I was like :eek: Rena’s crush is Haruna :shocked, so I made this fic using the two of them, male version. I would try my best to have more RikuRen moments so stay tuned. :)
Amakuchi, Thank you, I really appreciate it, and I have update :)
Karupin12, you have seen it? Me too, I was also laughing so hard. I just wish I could meet your expectations :)
Flunicsnaz, the answer to your questions are YesMaybe and YesMaybe. Because there might be a great percentage that Yuko and Riku would be together, and there is also a great chance that they will have a big fight. So just stay tuned :)
Megumi, Well, this really is an odd pairing and I hope that readers here will accept them, somehow :cry:.
Strawberri, Yeah, Riku as gay was definitely a shocker and a laugher. :lol:
Karomuwi, Well, it’s still in the theaters so you still have time to watch it. Seeing Riku as Vice, actually, when I watch the movie, I was with my friends, and after I finished the prologue and half of chapter 1, I let them read it. They say that they also imagined Riku as Vice. And I said “Mas gwapo naman si Riku. (Riku is much more handsome.)” And sorry for being a spoiler to the movie.
This chapter is a bit sad, you know, for Riku. It’s really hard to get over a break-up, especially if you really love the person. That’s proven and tested. Well anyway, even if the chapter is a bit sad, please enjoy it, thanks :) And this is also Yuko’s first appearance, together with other characters :)
CHAPTER 1
“Why did he do this to me? How could he?” Riku asked with his toes in a bucket of hot water and a towel over his head. “Yuki, All I have done was to love him with all of my heart. Why? Why?” He continued turning to his sister, Yuki.
“Maybe he’s not really for you.” Yuki said comforting her older brother. “It’s his loss, not yours.”
“But I really love him, I would do everything for him.” Riku said pleadingly. “I don’t want to lose him.”
*Sigh* “Here, take this.” Yuki said as she gave Riku sleeping pills and a glass of water. “You need to rest, we’ll talk tomorrow morning.”
Riku took the pills in her hands and drank it. Yuki then helped him to lie in his bed.
“Goodnight.” Yuki said as her head to the door, towel and bucket at hand.
“Goodnight.” Riku replied, knowing that he might not be able to sleep due to the pain of a broken heart and the pain of breaking up with the one you love, and if were to get some sleep, it’s thanks to the sleeping pills.
At the living room.
“What happened?” Yuki asked in her usual dark aura to the two sitting in the sofa.
“…” Kai and Kuu are both speechless, from nervousness and fear. And of course because of the shock that their best friend was crying, that it, somehow, just breaks their hearts.
“Talk!” Yuki said in a scary but moderate tone so that his sleeping brother won’t be bothered. That made the two standup.
“Yes!” Kai and Kuu both said, cowering in fear.
“Well, it was supposed to be a celebration for their third anniversary.” Kuu said.
“But it turned out to be a break-up.” Kai continued in a sad tone.
“Then why was he soaked in the rain?” Yuki continued to ask.
“Well, you see, after the break-up Riku was crying, so we both don’t know how to approach him.” Kai said.
“Then it rained hard, really hard.” Kuu said. “And it took us a little more time to approach him. That’s why.”
*sigh* Yuki then threw herself on the couch. And the two also sat on the couch.
“My brother doesn’t deserve this.” Yuki said. “But I can’t blame him. He’s a guy that also wants a girl.”
“But we are girl’s, at heart that is.” Kuu said as a matter of fact, that earned a nod from Kai.
“Not just girls at heart, but also physically girl, you know without the thing between your legs.” Yuki said.
“Sorry for being born with a p***s.” Kuu said sarcastically.
“Not what I meant.” Yuki replied.
Kuu was about to reply when Kai covered his mouth and said “Kuu, that’s enough, she has a point, boys have needs and urge, even me, I sometimes feel those needs.”
“What?” Kuu said as he removes Kai’s hand from his mouth. “You’re becoming an L.”
“What? No! What I meant was sometimes us gays also need that’s almost like those.” Kai replied to Kuu.
“Argh!” Yuki said standing up. “Please, don’t talk those dirty gay talks while I’m here. I’m going to sleep just lock the door and the gate when you leave. Goodnight.”
“Sorry, we will. Goodnight.” Kai replied politely.
As Yuki entered her room the living room suddenly became quiet.
“Hey! Come on, we need to go home now.” Kai said to Kuu.
“But I don’t want to go home yet.” Kuu said.
“Come on, I’m tired, I want to go home now.” Kai said. “I’ll bring you home.”
“Ok fine. Let’s go.” Kuu said.
At the car.
“But you know, I’m really worried about Riku.” Kuu said worryingly, sitting in Kai’s car.
“There’s nothing else we could do, but be good friends with him and comfort him.” Kai said while driving Kuu to his house.
“Yeah, we’re always here for him.” Kuu said with a little smile on his lips.
The next day.
Riku get up of the bed, has swollen eyes, walk out of his room to have breakfast.
“Good Morning!” Yuki greeted him.
“Morning.” Riku replied languorously.
‘Well at least he replied.’ Yuki thought as she led her brother at the dining table, and he sat on the chair.
“Where’s the vampire?” Asked Sae, their cousin.
“Vampire?” Asked Yuki.
“Because life was sucked out of him, so maybe there’s a vampire here.” Sae replied.
Sae earned a sarcastic laugh from Yuki and she said “Not funny.”
“Come on, I’m just trying to make him laugh.” Sae said apologetically.
Riku smiled for a bit, but immediately turned upside down and said “I’m not hungry.” He then stood up and walks into their veranda.
As he stares at the sky, another tear just flowed down his cheeks. And said “I still love you.” To no one in particular, but we all know to whom these words are for.
*Ding* *Dong**Ding* *Dong**Ding* *Dong*
Oshima Yuko was awakened by the sudden and continuous ringing on her door bell. Since she started working as a bank teller, she insisted on living alone although her parents didn’t approve of it, one reason is because of her boyfriend, Matsui Ren. They never really liked him. There was one time when Ren visited her their house, Yuko was still living with her parents, they were eating at that time, both her parents and sibling treated him like a ghost, although they greeted him, they didn’t even gave him a chair to join them in dining. It’s maybe because they don’t think that Ren is really good for their daughter. But none the less, she loves him, and that’s all that matters.
“Yeah, yeah, be right there.” She half shouted to the ringer of the doorbell, as she looked at her alarm clock. ‘7:28? Who could that be at this early in the morning?’ She thought.
After she readied herself, she walked out of her room to go to the front door, but she didn’t look at the calendar near her door. It has a heart mark on the day today. And when she opened the door, instead of a person greeting her, a huge bouquet of roses greets her. And her expectation didn’t fail her as a person holding the bouquet entered her field of vision. It was her boyfriend for almost a year, Matsui Ren.
“Happy Anniversary!” Ren said.
Scratch that. It was her boyfriend for a year now, Matsui Ren.
‘Anniversary?!? Wait. What date is today? Need to check the calendar.’ Yuko thought as she half closed the door and check her calendar and said to herself ‘oh my! I forgot!’
While Yuko was in deep thought Ren opened the half closed door and asked "You forgot. Did you?"
"O-Of course not." Yuko replied. 'I totally did. What kind of a girl friend am I?' she asked herself.
"hmm. Ok, if you say so. I'll pick you up at eight?" Ren asked Yuko about their anniversary date.
"Sure." Yuko said as she nodded.
"okay. See you later, I have a surprise for you." Ren said.
"Surprise? Uhm. Me too, I have a surprise for you." Yuko smiled and tried to act confident.
"Really? Ok then I'll see you later." Ren said as he kissed Yuko's cheek.
"Ok. Bye-bye." Yuko said then she closed her door.
"Surprise? What the hell is my surprise?" Yuko asked herself. "Nice going Yuko!"
End of Chapter 1.
To those you viewed, commented, thank you-ed the story, I'm really really grateful to you gus, you are the ones who motivate me in writing the next parts of the story.
You guys are and will be my inspiration. haha XD
thanx for reading :) And sorry for the short update. It's just that we had a busy weekend and my birthday is coming up. I'm so sorry. :bow:
Next will be Yuko's and Ren's date And Riku's desicion. Stay tuned. I'll try to update within next week as a birthday present to myself joke hehe. :)
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woah... i'm shock!! i never thought that yuki is his sister... this is new :ding:
:on ksweat: is Sae and Yuki dating???? :kekeke:
i'm waiting for the next update!!! keep it up !!! :on woohoo:
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KYA~~~!!! It's YukoRen :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub:
DO.WANT.
NEED.AN.UPDATE.NOW.!!!!
:panic: :panic: :panic: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:
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Poor Riku! Feel so sorry for him :cry: thanks for the update! :grin:
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Whaha
waiting for maeda san
are u? are u gonna Add some spice in it??
LOLOLOL :shocked:
Poor Riku :banghead:
OMG he's a GAY XD
Please update soon :cow:
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LOL. So Persona here are girls or is Riku the only gay here? xDD UPDATE PLEASE! xDD
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Poor riku..he's so broken-hearted..
yukoren moment :heart:
Wait, kaikuu is a gay pairing? XD
Can't wait for the next update..
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HI!
I know that it has been so long since i have updated, 2 months, I'm sorry about that, it's just that school work was really hectic, and we just started our thesis, although our prelims exam should be done before our Christmas break, our 3 professors are argh ("EPAL"), they decided to give our exams next year. :(
I'm really sorry. :( :bow:
Here are extra character list:
Takahashi Kai– one of Riku’s best friends, he can be really helpful at times, although there are times that he is a fail and sometimes a little dense, he is a true friend that you could count on. Despite being a gay, he is also an asexual. In short he doesn’t really need and want love in his life. But is that what his heart really says or will he really stay as a gay and asexual when he realize who his destined one is?
Minegishi Kuu - one of Riku’s best friends, he is their fun loving friend, which would sometimes put them in a pinch but, more or less, he just wants the best for them and of course he just wants to have fun. He is a pansexual and would go after anyone who’s fun to hang out with. But when he found his true love will he still just want to have fun or is he the one who is subject of fun?
Kashiwagi Yuki – The over protective little sister of Kojima Riku. Ever since they were little, Yuki would always protect her brother, and could mistake her as the older one. This is because they were orphaned at an early age, and they grew up with just the two of them side by side, and sometimes with the help of some distant relative. She really loves her family, and has no intention of falling in love. She works as a school nurse in the nearby university, which she and Riku graduated, their Alma matter. Will she always be the over protective sister or will she be able welcome love in her heart?
CHAPTER 2
A couple of loud inhales and exhales and loud sighs can be heard from the Kojima House hold.
“What a depressing aura. I hate it when he’s like that. Normally he’s so cheerful and charming, but now it’s a total opposite.” Sae remarked as he and his cousin, Yuki, watch Riku at their veranda.
“He’s broken hearted, the least we could do is understand him. We need to support and be his shoulder to face this predicament.” Yuki replied to Sae, who is also sad seeing his brother this way.
“I know. But damn, this atmosphere is so contagious. We better find a way to lighten up his mood. But what should we do?” Sae said trying to find a way to help Riku.
“hmm. I think I know two people who can do that.” Yuki said referring to the two people who brought her brother back home last night.
“And who could that be? I know that it’s not Ren because you just said two, and as far as I can count Ren is just a person, not two.” Sae said trying to guess who Yuki is referring to.
“I know that Ren is the first one that could make Riku happy, but right now if I see him I could kill him.” Yuki said with black aura emitting from her.
“Whoa there. He’s not here so save your aura when the time comes.” Sae said trying to calm Yuki down.
“Your right, I should save my rage.” Yuki said calming down. “Any way, I’m talking about Riku’s friends, I know that they could cheer him up.” Yuki continued.
“And how did you know that? How can you be so sure?” Sae asked.
“Well, let’s just put it this way. Who is better to cheer a gay up, than fellow gays.” Yuki explained. “Right?”
“Well, I guess it’s worth a shot.” Sae replied.
Yuki texted Kai and Kuu, to ask them if they could help cheer up her brother. After a few minutes, Kai replied to Yuki.
“We’re already working on it. I’m with Kuu and we are currently heading there right now.”
“Thank you guys. I owe you a lot.” Yuki replied.
“No need to thank us. Riku is also our friend, and friends help each other. So don’t sweat it.” Kai replied.
“Did I ever mention how much I love you guys? Because right now I really love you! But of course not in a romantic way.” Yuki exclaimed in her reply.
“We know. We are almost there. Oh and could you please prepare clothes for Riku, were taking him out for fun.” Kai requested.
“Okay, I’ll prepare his best clothes.” Yuki replied.
And with that Yuki immediately go to Riku’s room to prepare his clothes.
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After Ren left, Yuko took a bath readied herself had breakfast. She hurriedly does these things so that she could have enough time to pick an anniversary present for Ren. She went to a jewellery store near her office. She had been eyeing this necklace to give to Ren, she was just waiting for a right time to buy and give it to him. It is a silver necklace with an 'R' pendant.
She was wondering if Ren would like it considering he already has a necklace that changes to pop and rock depending on his mood, I wonder if you could call it a mood necklace.
Do you want to know why I picked the necklace of all the things that I could give to Ren? Well that's because it caught my attention, I don't know why, I don't know how, but it just did. When one of my colleagues drags me to this jewellery store then there it is, within my peripheral view. It's like the necklace is asking me to buy it, I know it sounds weird but that's what I feel. So now, without further ado, I will finally buy it for Ren.
"I have been noticing that you have been staring at it for a while back since the first time you entered here." the owner of store talked to Yuko.
"Yeah, I've had hard time thinking about it, but now I've decided to buy it." Yuko replied with confidence.
"That's good to hear. Tell you what. Want to engrave something in it, for you it's free of charge." the owner suggested as he is pleased of Yuko.
"Really? Sure thank you very much." Yuko replied with enthusiasm.
"No problem, I like customers like you. So what do you want to engrave it with?" the owner asked.
"My name, Yuko, would be fine." Yuko replied.
The owner engraved the pendant with a small but readable 'Yuko' on the back and placed it in a rectangular box then gave it to Yuko, who gave the owner the exact amount of the said necklace. Then her phone rang and the name 'Acchan' was on the screen of the ringing phone. Yuko answered it.
"Where the hell are you? Our boss is here asking for you." Maeda Atsuko, the colleague that I was talking about, half shouted at the phone.
"Geez, I could hear you perfectly so you don't have to shout." Yuko said with a finger on her ear.
"No! I need to shout at you so that you can remember what I'm saying, you are always late, didn't our supervisor reprimanded you that one more late and you're fired, and he's here so that he could catch you. So hurry up." Atsuko said reminding Yuko of her situation.
"Sh*t! I almost forgot." Yuko said remembering what Atsuko said. "I'm on my way and almost there." Yuko continued as she hung up her phone and put the necklace and the phone in her bag.
Lucky for Yuko she made it in time. She was not late. And her supervisor gave her a disappointing look.
"He really wants you out of here, doesn’t he?" Atsuko said to Yuko. "Too bad for him you made it in time."
"I just got lucky today, next time he might succeed in trying." Yuko replied.
"Next time? There won't be a next time. I would call you the first thing in the morning to wake you up." Atsuko suggested.
"That won't work. I would just go back to bed." Yuko said declining Atsuko's help, and went to her station to do her job.
"Well then I will just have to find a way to wake you up then." Atsuko said to herself, obviously plotting something, while watching Yuko's retreating back.
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Kai and Kuu just arrived at Riku's house just to see a very sad and depressed Riku, still in his pyjama, still at the veranda, and still staring at absolutely nothing.
"How long has he been like this?" asked Kai.
"All morning, since he woke up." Yuki replied. "I'm really worried about him. It's not good to be depressed." she continued.
"We should get him ready, we have prepared something that would definitely change his mood." Kuu said.
They helped Riku to prepare and get ready when they were about to enter Riku's room.
"No! I don't want to enter my room." Riku said protesting.
“Why not? It’s your own room, you need to get dressed.” Kai replied still dragging Riku to his room.
“Because when I enter there, I would only remember Ren. And it hurts so much.” Riku is still protesting.
Riku protested and protested with all his might but to no avail. They have reached and entered his room. This would be the first time that Kai and Kuu entered Riku’s room.
“Whoa!! This is like a museum of Ren. Full of pictures, different angles, wow.” Kuu said as he described Riku’s room.
“I’m speechless.” Was all that Kai could say.
“It’s like the walls are wallpapered with Ren’s image. Everywhere you turn your head you can see Ren.” Kuu continued to be amaze at how Riku’s room is designed.
“Riku was right, if he would enter this room he would only remember Ren.” Kai said.
“Maybe we should just get rid of all these pictures.” Yuki suggested while on the motion of ripping the wall of pictures.
“Ahhh! Wait! Stop!” Riku immediately stop his sister’s hand from ripping his precious collection.
“Why? This would only bring back bad memories and pain.” Yuki asked.
“I agree.” Kai said.
“I second the motion.” Kuu said.
“Maybe we could be okay again and be together. And also these are really expensive. So please, don’t.” Riku reasoned out.
They don’t have a choice so they decided to leave the pictures alone. After the whole argument about the room and the pictures, Riku is not that depressed anymore, he’s not staring off in space anymore and we could now talk to him maybe it’s because that his two best friends are here.
“So where are we going exactly?” Riku asked. Currently seated at the backseat of Kai’s car, asking the two in front of him, Kai on the wheels and Kuu beside him.
“Hmm. It’s a surprise.” Kuu answered giggling.
“But it’s too early for our surprise and I think it’s not ready yet. So were going to take a detour first.” Kai said not taking away his eyes on the road.
First, they went to the nearest amusement park and rode some of the rides there. Then, they took Riku to an arcade, knowing Riku is an otaku for games. Then, they took a break at the café where they usually hangout and ate lunch. After that they went to a karaoke and sang AKB48 songs, with all their might.
These are some of the things that Kai and Kuu thought that might cheer Riku up, because when they were in their college days, together with their other friends, these things are their past time if they have free time.
They could see Riku smiling and having fun but they know that he is just forcing himself, there is still sadness deep within his heart that can be seen in his eyes. Their efforts weren’t enough so they decided that it’s almost time for their main surprise.
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Yuko started her job and treated it as one of those ordinary days, except for later, where her boyfriend would pick her up for their date, and Yuko can’t help but smile thinking about it. Yuko’s job should be easy, where she would transact with the bank’s investors and customers, but due to her supervisor where he would always pick on her, ask her to do some errands that isn’t part of her job description and she doesn’t have any choice but to follow. Lucky for her, if she has some errands that are really hard, Acchan, Maeda Atsuko, would be there to help her. Acchan is also a teller on the bank that Yuko is working at. Here they became good friends that would help each other to make their jobs easier.
Finally, it was the time that Yuko is really waiting for, the bank’s closing time. So that she could have her most awaited Anniversary date with her most beloved boyfriend, Ren, and that she could give the necklace to him.
“Hey, Acchan, aren’t you leaving yet?” Yuko, who is ready to leave, asked Acchan, who is busy checking some files.
“Not yet, our supervisor asked me to find some files for him, but after I’m finished with this I’m definitely going out.” Acchan answered not even taking her eyes off the files.
“Going out?” Yuko asked. “No way! You have a boyfriend? How come you didn’t tell me?” Yuko continued to ask as curiosity took over her.
“No, it’s not that. I am meeting some of my college friends at some restaurant after work. It’s seems one of them was recently heart broken.” Acchan denied and explained.
“Oh, must be hard, good thing Ren would never break my heart.” Yuko said.
“One of the perks in being loveless, you won’t be heart broken.” Acchan said as a matter of fact.
“But being in love is the most fun, exciting and the happiest feeling of all, that’s why people love, even if it sometimes results to a broken heart.” Yuko said with a huge smile on her face.
“Touché.” Acchan replied.
“So, do you need any help? I could help you.” Yuko suggested offering a helping hand.
“No need, I could handle this, and I know that you are so eager to leave and have your date right now, so don’t mind me, have fun with your boyfriend.” Acchan declined Yuko’s help.
As the two talk, a handsome guy walked inside the Bank holding a bouquet of rose.
“I appreciate the thought though, and speaking of the devil, here comes you most awaited prince.” Acchan teased.
Yuko looked at the entrance and there she saw her boyfriend, she waved at him, he waved back, then she looked back at Acchan.
“You sure?” Yuko asked again.
“Yeah, I’m fine, I can handle it. So, go! Now!” Acchan declined again and gestured Yuko to go.
“Okay, good luck on finding the files.” Yuko said wishing Acchan good luck, as she went to Ren’s side.
Acchan took a glance at a retreating Yuko, going to her boyfriend and smiled. “You too, good luck on your relationship.” She said to Yuko not really caring if she heard her or not. “They really are a happy couple. They’re perfect.” Acchan said to herself. ‘When will I find someone I could be happy with like them?’ is the question lingering on Atsuko’s head while looking for the files.
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“Hey!” Yuko said to Ren as she was walking towards him.
“Hey!” Ren replied, Yuko was now right in front of him. “Here.” Giving her the bouquet of flowers.
“Aw. So sweet.” Yuko said as she gave Ren a peck on the cheeks.
“Let’s go?” Ren asked Yuko if she is ready to leave.
“Let’s go!” Yuko replied enthusiastically.
Ren called a taxi to take them on the venue of their date.
“So, where are we going?” Yuko asked seated beside Ren, their hands intertwined.
“It’s a surprise. You’ll definitely love it.” Ren replied.
Yuko just shrug it off and enjoyed the ride with her love one.
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Between the three of them Riku was the most sophisticated one, and due to that they took him in one of the newly build restaurant that Kai and Kuu was sure that Riku hasn’t gone to, yet.
They entered the said restaurant. Kai and Kuu noticed that finally Riku smiled genuinely with sparkling eyes. And with that they could say that it’s a mission complete.
“Wow! I didn’t know you guys knew such restaurant.” Riku said sarcastically as the receptionist guide them to their table.
“Well, it’s just a newly opened restaurant and we happened to know the owner.” Kai replied.
“Yeah, yeah, we know her---wait 'WE' know her?” Kuu asked emphasizing the word WE.
“Yeah, the three of us knows her.” Kai answered. “She’s our childhood friend, back when we were little, but unfortunately she moved away, and now she came back here and started this business.” Kai explained.
“Eh? You mean… her?” Riku said remembering their friend.
“So she came back, huh?” Kuu said not really happy that their friend came back, because when they were little they are always bickering even on the smallest of things.
“Oi. Don’t be like that. Even if you would always argue back then, were still friends right, maybe this time you would became good friends.” Kai said to Kuu.
“Yeah, Kuu, it’s been a long time, may be things have changed and don’t you miss her.” Riku added.
“I suppose your right.” Kuu agreed. “So where is she?” Kuu asked.
“You’ll meet her soon, she’s a little busy, just enjoy the night in her amazing restaurant.” Kai said.
They are now sitting on their table. Their table has the best view of the restaurant. The perks of knowing the owner.
Kai texted someone on his phone and after a few minutes, that someone replied, “Ok, I’ll be there in a few minutes.”
Meanwhile, Kuu was also busy texting someone and received a reply, “Sorry, work got me a little late, but I’m on my way now.”
After a few more minutes, a tall slender woman made her way towards the table of the three.
Riku saw her, he stood up and showed a happy and big smile, she stopped for a second and blushed a slight color of pink at Riku’s action. Riku noticed that she stopped half way so he walked towards her instead, still wearing his smile.
“Mari-chan?” Riku was now in front of her as she stares at him. Riku then hugged her, “I’ve missed you!” And with that her face was now completely red. Luckily Kai came in and released their hug before she ran out of blood.
“It really is her. Shinoda Mariko-sama.” Kuu is just watching from his seat.
Riku and Kai, together with Mariko came back to their seats.
“Why aren’t you ordering yet?” Mariko asked. “We assure you we are not just appearances.”
“We were waiting for you.” Kai answered.
“So, what are we waiting for? Waiter---“ Mariko called the attention of the waiter but was cut off by Kuu.
“Wait!” Kuu exclaimed lowering Mariko’s hand. “We’re still waiting for one more person.”
“Who?” Riku and Kai both asked.
“It’s a secret.” Kuu answered. “She’ll be here any minute now.”
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Ren paid for the driver and got out of the taxi, then held it open so that Yuko could come out. He offered out his hand which Yuko immediately held coming out of the taxi.
“Thank you.” Yuko said.
“You’re Welcome princess.” Ren replied kissing Yuko’s hand.
They entered the restaurant, Yuko was amazed, it was the best restaurant that she had ever seen. They went to the receptionist to get the table that Ren had reserved. The receptionist showed them their table. Their table is just a few tables away from where Riku, Kai, Kuu and Mariko are.
Ren called the waiter for them to order their dinner.
“Ren, could you order for me, I need to go to the ladies room.” Yuko said as she stood up her seat.
“Okay, do you have anything you want?” Ren asked as he nodded.
“No, anything’s fine, I trust your taste.” Yuko replied with a dimpled smile.
“Okay. Take your time.” Ren said while nodding again.
Yuko then headed to the comfort room to do her business and retouch re make-up.
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Riku, Kai, Kuu and Mariko are still waiting for the last person to arrive when suddenly, Riku stood up.
“Where are you going?” Kai asked Riku.
“Men’s room.” Riku answered. As he went to the direction of the Comfort room.
“Kuu, how long does she want to keep us from waiting?” Kai asked Kuu, obviously impatient from all their waiting, and kind of hungry.
“I know right, I’m also impatient here, but could we just wait a little longer.” Kuu said checking his phone again to see if there are any messages. And there is.
“I’m really sorry, I’m almost there, just a few minutes more. I promise, I’ll make it up to you guys.” Was the message that he received.
“You better be sorry, people here are being impatient, and I’m really hungry, especially when we’re surrounded by people eating. You don’t need to make it up to us. Once we see you, you’re already forgiven. But please, do hurry up, I’m really HUNGRY!” was Kuu’s reply.
“Okay, okay, but we all know that you’re always hungry, so no need to say it anymore.” Was the reply and Kuu could see the sender of the message chuckling. “P.S. I’m also hungry.” There was a postscript at the end.
“In that case we are just the same, knowing you; I know that you’re always hungry also.” Kuu replied returning the tease, the Kuu chuckled.
“What’s funny?” Kai whispered to Mariko.
“I think, he just lost his mind.” Mariko replied.
“I think, it’s due to his hunger, knowing him, his always hungry, maybe he just reached his limit.” Kai said.
“Maybe we should order now, for Kuu’s sake.” Mariko said.
“I think he could still handle a few more minutes, it’s a bit impolite to start while still incomplete.” Kai replied.
“Yeah, I know, but Kuu is really creepy right now.” Mariko said.
“I know right.” Kai replied. “I wish she’s already near.”
“Yeah.” Mariko replied.
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Yuko retouched her make-up, a little nervous and excited at the same time. She checked her gift, the necklace, for one more time then walked out the comfort room while putting the gift back inside her bag when suddenly…
*crash*
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Riku is walking towards the comfort room, he glanced at the side, and he saw Ren. ‘Maybe I’m just imagining things. If we were still together and have a date here, he would definitely like this place.’ He thought, not really looking at his way when suddenly…
*crash*
END OF CHAPTER 2
A/N
This was supposed to be longer but i made a deadline of this chapter which is just before Christmas, i shall update/post this. So i ended it here, because if i didn't, i would not be able to meet my deadline. Actually, i have really no intentions on making chapter 2 yet, it's due to the people in our facebook group (PA), they're the reason i've updated :D
Sorry for wrong grammars, spellings. I didn't have time to send this to my proofreader, if i did i won't make the deadline.
Thank you for your Consideration and for Reading.
And I'm really sorry, i think it would be a long time again before i update, due to school work, our thesis and our exams are still not finished, still have exams next year after our break. And i have to help my cousin in her take home exams and reports.
I'm really sorry.
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Can't wait for the next update..
Finally riku and yuko will meet.
everyone seem to be at the same place
i wonder what ren will do
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No, I want my YukoRen to be together!!! Riku, just stfu!!! go to Mariko or whatever!!! Leave my Yuko-sama to my Ren-sama~!!!
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omg is yuko and riku going to have a cat fight over ren? (lol)
gahhh ~~ can't wait to see what happens next!
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Aww cessy~ That's soo sweet :D
WOSHOOO~~ CAN'T WAIT FOR THE FIGHT OF RIKU AND YUKO XD :rofl:
THX FOR THE UPDATE. CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE :rofl: :cow:
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UPDATE NA YAN! XD
ERMEHGERD! TEH, YOUR STORY IS SO AWESOME TALAGA!
YOU MAKE UPDATE NA AH!
I REALLY WANT TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER SO BADLY NA TEH! XD
<----Amakuchi (Conyo Mode)
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at first I was
yuko and riku :heart: flail much
then
yuko and riku fighting over ren? :panic:
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Cool fanfic! I wanna know what happen to Riku and Yuko!! :luvluv1:
I already watched "The Guy's in love with you Mare" so.... :hiakhiakhiak:
Update soon! :kneelbow:
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This is Mendol story... I am happy with that... but making them as gay... very interesting idea...
I'll try to like them.... although I hope they are not really gay.... but bi-sexual better...
then maybe Kai can be with Atsuko, Riku can be with Mariko or Yuko, and Kuu can be with Mariko or others.
Ren is being very unfaithful from the start even if he is a bisexual... he should have one relationship one at a time not the two of them at the time.
If only Yuko knew what's going... she won't want to be with Ren then. Riku do something...
Somehow, it seem like Ren is a gold digger... which part of him is kind and caring guy?
Anyway, thank you for this interesting fic... can's wait to see the next one.
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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I was thinking very hard of what I will write, because the following scenes are not in the movie, it was really hard to connect events, so please bear with what I have written… I know I'm not that good, actually every time I finished a chapter and reread the chap, I say to myself, I suck, I really do, and the only reason that I write is that my friends encourage me to continue on writing, and also you people who continue to read these chapters, knowing that I suck, I'm really grateful of you guys. And maybe one more reason is that, writing makes me free, I mean it makes my very wild imagination free.
Actually there are many things/reasons why I wasn't able to update. First and foremost is that our school work really got to me, with 2 thesis and 1 system to operate, it really was a hassle, I didn't even get enough sleep for almost a month and 3 nights without sleep. It really got to me and I'm really sorry. Next is my lack in English communicating skills, it is also the reason why this fiction is experiencing redundancy in terms. And it's really hard to translate, well the movie is 'taglish' (Filipino and English) so I need to translate some words, which I'm doing really bad at, so sorry about that. Next is that I really suck at describing, whether its, people, places or things, the way people dresses, the characteristics of the person etc. I suck at those things so once again I'm sorry.
I admit that I suck really bad, but truly want to thank you guys for actually reading my work, I really love you guys :heart:
Again, I'm so sorry, For a really long update, And for the wrong grammar.
@chuppachup : The world is a small place, haha Yeah Riku and Yuko will meet, but Ren wouldn't do anything………Yet…. XD
@sakura_drop : I’m still debating myself about the pairings, hmm Maybe I MIGHT add some YukoRen moments next chapter, but take note of the word “might” haha XD
@vPANDAv : well, unfortunately, there wasn’t any catfight that happened, but they did meet. Though, Someday, the catfight might happen. XD
@CheesyBits : I know right, (nilalanggam na nga ako eh) haha joke :) No fight happened, I kinda prefer it that way, I don’t want any fight, let me rephrase that, I can’t write any fight. I don’t know how to, haha XD
@Amakuchi : Awesome? Really thank you, but why do I have a feeling that I suck. Haha XD eto na po nag-update na, haha XD
@miayaka : I am trying my best to write sweet moments, but I really fail :sweatdrop: haha Riku and Yuko might fight, but not today, maybe in the future chapters :)
@correnereyes : Nothing really happened between Riku and Yuko, maybe next or Future chapters, I’ll try my best to level the fanfic, which I’m really doing a good job in. haha XD
@cisda83 : Not really a mendol story, although I did use the characters, so maybe it is haha :doh: About their sexuality, I think I might base it with their pairings which I am having a hard time with haha :) I’m sorry about Ren, actually said sorry to Riku in the chapter, and trust me, in the future chapters, he will get what he deserves and pay for it, so stay tuned ;) And he actually don’t want to hurt Riku anymore, that’s why he broke up with him, I think he really loves Yuko :) haha
@Others: I really thank you for reading the Fictions, means a lot to me, I really am grateful
Additional Character's Info:
Maeda Atsuko - Riku, Kai and Kuu’s classmate and good friend in college. She is also Yuko’s office mate now. She was once jealous of Yuko and Ren’s relationship, having a loveless life, but after finding out something about Ren, all she wants now is to break them up, for Yuko’s sake. Can she break those two up or will she fail and will her loveless life be fruitful as she carries out her mission?
Shinoda Mariko – Riku, Kai and Kuu’s childhood friend. One look and you can easily mistake her as a model. Such a beauty but still hasn't got a boyfriend. Want to know why? She still can’t get forget her first love, or rather crush. When she was little she had, and still has, a crush on Riku. But can she get over her little infatuation or be forever be bound by her unrequited affection?
Chapter 3
I stepped out of the car, as I texted my friend. “I’m about to enter the restaurant.” As I enter I immediately recognize the people I was going to meet, especially the two guys, which are my best friends, the first one is the one I was texting, second is the guy beside him. The first one waved at me, obviously very eager to see me arrive, I’m thinking that he really is hungry that made me smile as I walk toward them.
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“Ah! She’s here!” Kuu exclaimed standing to get a good look at the entrance.
“Where?” Kai said. Both he and Mariko looking at the entrance.
A cute, entered the premises. Kuu waved at her and Kai just smiled. “Acchan?” Kai asked himself, not believing his eyes that their best friend, Maeda Atsuko, came.
As she walks towards them, he stood up. Then she reached their table.
“Long time no see.” Kai said to Acchan.
“Yeah, It’s been awhile.” Acchan replied. As the three of them seated.
“Acchan, I would like you to meet-“ Kuu was about to introduce Mariko to Atsuko when Atsuko cut him off.
“Ah! Mariko?” Acchan asked a little surprise to see Mariko there. “As in Shinoda Mariko-san?”
“Yes, Maeda-san, It’s such a small world.” Mariko replied with a full smile.
“Wait. You two know each other?” Kuu asked. Both he and Kai’s a little confused.
“Yeah, Shinoda-san is a big client in the bank that I was working on.” Acchan replied. “And I personally handle her account.”
“You flatter me so much, I’m just a normal entrepreneur, and not a big one.” Mariko said. “And I keep on telling you, just ‘Mariko’ is fine.”
“Yeah, since we’re all friends now. You can call her Mariko, and you can call her Atsuko.” Kuu said happily. “All that’s left is Riku, and then we could finally order.” He is happy that could now order.
“Speaking of Riku, where is he?” Acchan asked.
“Went to the Comfort room.” Kai answered.
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“Ouch” Riku said holding the little bruise in his arm, while standing up.
“Aw” Yuko said holding the little bruise in her head.
Riku saw the girl that he bumped with, he was a little more worried for the girl rather than himself. He reached out and offers his help for the girl to stand and asked “Are you alright?”
Yuko saw the gesture and felt a little embarrassed, but nonetheless still accepted the help of the young man, and said “I’m fine. I’m sorry, I wasn't looking were I was going and thank you for the help.”
“Me too, I’m sorry, my was a little preoccupied with something, that I didn't see you, and I think it’s my fault so you don’t need to thank me.” Riku said.
“What’s going on here? Do you two need any help?” The receptionist said as she approached the two.
“No, we just kind of bumped at each other. No harm done, I hope.” Riku said to the receptionist.
“Yeah, all is well. I need to go now.” Yuko said as she head to their table, but not before turning around. “I’m sorry and thank you again.” She said.
Riku was left speechless and just smiled to the girl.
“So, I also need to go now.” He said as he left the receptionist to go to the Comfort room.
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Inside the comfort room.
Riku was finished with his business when his phone suddenly rang and vibrated. He checked the pocket of his jacket and was a little surprise when he found 2 things in it. He’s surprise to find the name of the caller, which is Kuu, the second one, which super surprised him was a rectangular box. He first answered the call, and shoved the gift inside his pocket again.
“Why are you so slow? Can you hurry it up a little bit? We are all hungry here.” Kuu said half-shouted.
“Okay-okay, I’m done. I’m getting out now.” Riku said as he hung up the phone and got out of the comfort room.
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“Hey.” Yuko said as she reached their table.
“Hey.” Ren replied offering Yuko her seat.
“Did you wait long?” Yuko asked as she took her seat.
“Not really, but I did miss you though.” Ren said with a wink.
Yuko blushed in deep pink with what Ren had said.
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“Acchan?” Riku asked as he was almost at their table.
Acchan turned around and stood up to give Riku a hug. “ I've missed you.” She said.
“ I've missed you too. It’s been like what? Years.” Riku said as both of them let go of the hug.
“Why didn't I get any hug?” Kai whispered to himself.
“What did you say?” Mariko said, as she kind of heard Kai, with knowing eyes. All eyes are now on Kai.
“Nothing, I just said that I’m glad that Riku’s now here, so we could order.” Kai sweat dropped.
“I second that!” Kuu said enthusiastically.
Mariko just looked and smiled at Kai.
“What?!?” Kai asked at Mariko.
“Nothing” Mariko said her smile turned into a smirk.
Kai just rolled his eyes.
All five of them are now seating and ready to order, when suddenly…
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Yuko and Ren are in the middle of dinner.
‘This is it, I’m finally going to propose to her.’ Ren thought when suddenly…
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A group of friend are having dinner also at Mariko’s restaurant. They just finished their main course when someone suggested that they play truth or dare. In the middle of the game, someone chose dare, which she shouldn't have. The girl is now on her way to do what the dare is. She is now about to pull the lever of the fire alarm that would definitely make people inside the building really, really wet, and really, really angry. But she has to do what the dare says. So she finally pulled the lever. Allowing the sprinklers to activate. Making people wet and a little angry.
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Due to the sprinklers, people inside the restaurant is now wet and shocked at what happened. Also due to the sprinklers, Kuu is still hungry and didn't even had the chance to call the waiter. And also because of the sprinklers, Ren wasn't able to propose to Yuko.
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The next day.
Riku was sitting in a chair near their balcony, holding a piece of paper, a cup of coffee and holding his tears to fall. Apparently, the paper wasn't just any other kind of paper, it was a letter, a letter from Ren.
‘Riku, I don’t know how to tell you this, but the day of our anniversary, I was actually there to break-up with you.
I just converted, I’m finally a Christian. And the Lord doesn't want this kind of relationships, it’s in the Bible.
Sorry Riku, I don’t want to hurt you, but this is where we end. But I do want to say thank you for loving me, even my family.
You know, if ever that you’re a girl, there won’t be any problem. But this is just not going to work. I’m sorry.
I’m so sorry.’
As he read the last words, he could not hold his tears anymore as he cried, really hard. Good thing that his sister, Yuki was there, she hugged and comforted him.
“I’m finally going to let him go. He deserves to be free.” Riku said sobbing.
“If you love someone, you've got to let him go.” Yuki said consolingly.
“I know, and it really hurts.” Riku replied.
That morning did last long as Riku cried and cried. But on that day, Riku decided to let go of Ren. He decided to call his friends, to have fun, to relieve stress and most of all, to forget. And one way to forget is to find someone else.
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“You know,” Kuu started. “The first time you introduced Ren to us, I know that he won’t be serious of you.”
“He loves me.” Riku answered. “He did loved me.” Correcting his first statement. Indicating that Ren did love him in the past, when they were still together.
“But look at what happened, Didn't he dumped you?” Kai said interfering. “Look, you know, Ren is still a guy, that would look for a real girl.
“That’s not true!” Riku said defending Ren. “It’s not a girl, he didn't ditch me for a girl.”
“What?!?” Both Kai and Kuu exclaimed.
“Yeah, it’s the Lord.” Riku answered.
“Wow.” Kuu said “That’s a really big rival.”
Kai nodded. “So, I’m guessing that’s your resolve? To forget him because he’s going to be a priest?”
“No, he is not going to be a priest, he just converted, he became a Christian, and according to the bible, being in a gay relationship is bad news.” Riku said.
“Oh.” Was the only thing that Kai said.
“So, what are we supposed to do now?” Kuu asked.
“I don’t know, I just…” Riku said “just want to have some fun, and maybe on the process find someone that could get me out of this heartbreak.”
"Having fun is good, I have to agree to that, but finding someone to get over a breakup, isn't really fair, especially to the person you found." Kai said, that made Riku shock and speechless.
"Yeah, it's like having your heart fix by breaking other's, especially if you still love your ex." Kuu agreed. "It's really unfair."
"...ok...fine...I won't do it, I'm not that heartless you know, I only have a broken one." Riku retorted. "But off the record, whose side are you on?"
"Of course your side, it's just that we don't want you to hurt anybody, that might turn out as another heartbreak." Kai said.
"I'll be fine and I'll be cautious." Riku said reassuring Kuu and Kai.
After the talk that they had, they finally reached the club. They entered and saw Mariko there. But before they could reach her table a guy walked to her, looks like he's hitting on her.
"Excuse me, but have we met before?" The guy asked Mariko.
"No, I don't think so." Mariko rolled her eyes. 'What the heck?!? Is he hitting on me? And why aren't they approaching me.' Mariko thought as she texted "HELLLLLPPPP!!!!!!!!" to the three boys that she was waiting for.
"But I think I do know you, or maybe you just look like her." The guy said insisting that he really knows her.
"Really? From where? And who might it be?" Mariko said with an obvious irritation.
"My next girlfriend." The guys said.
'Ok! That's the last straw!' As she was about to stand and make a scene at the club, a familiar hand stopped her.
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As I read Mariko's text I looked at the 2 beside me, I assume they also got the text, and then I looked at Mariko, ‘She looks like she's really having a hard time with the guy. I feel sorry for the guy though, out of all the girls here in the club, does it really have to be Mariko, I mean, Mariko's pretty and all but, I think she's not the type you could or would pick up in a club like this, that is so not her. What am I doing here, blabbering on and on, when she need help.’ As I was about to approach her, someone already beat me it. I couldn't move, I couldn't do anything, I was like stuck there, just looking at the back of the one who beat me in approaching Mariko.
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"I'm sorry honey, did you wait long?" Riku asked Mariko, with all the masculinity left in his body, as he placed his hand on her shoulder and gave her a peck on the cheek, which made Mariko blush a deep red.
"W-What took you so long?" Mariko asked as she played along.
"I'm sorry, it's just that the meeting went on and on." Riku answered. "So, what were you doing? And who is this?" Riku asked as he looked at the guy who was picking Mariko up.
"Oh nothing, this is uh..." Mariko said. "What was your name again?" Mariko asked.
"Mike, it’s Mike." The guy answered.
"So? What does Mike want?" Riku asked.
"He keeps on insisting that we knew each other." Mariko answered. "But I really don't."
"Do you really know my girlfriend?" Riku asked glaring at Mike and made Mariko blush even redder.
"I'm sorry, I think, I may have mistaken you for someone else." Mike said nervously. "Please excuse me." Mike then left them.
"Phew." They both sighed in relief.
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"Hey?" Kai asked as he put his hand on Kuu's shoulder. "Are you okay?"
"Oh?" Kuu jumped a little to the touch, not really expecting it. "Yeah, I’m fine, it's nothing." Turning his head around facing Kai, then turning his head again looking at the interaction of Riku and Mariko.
"Don't worry, Mariko would be fine, Riku's already there." Kai assured Kuu.
"I'm not worried..." Kuu started. "It's different than that." The last few word where so soft, that Kai didn't hear it.
'What the heck is this? Why is there a big lump in my chest when I see Riku and Mariko, am I jealous? No, no, NO! This can't be, I'm not in love with Riku, and most definitely not Mariko. But what the hell is this lump?... Wait maybe I'm just jealous that they are getting very much comfortable with each other, I'm just jealous of their friendship. But I'm also their friend so what the hell? I don't know anymore.’ Kuu thought.
He just shrug whatever he was feeling and turned to Kai, with a big smile on his face, "Come on, let’s go" opting them to approach the two.
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"Thank you." Mariko thanked Riku for saving her.
"Don't mention it." Riku said with a wink. "So what's the deal? Do you always gets picked up at clubs like this?" Riku asked.
"Not really, just a few times, this is the reason why I'm not fond of clubs." Mariko answered.
"We'll I have to say, I'm not really surprised, knowing you really are pretty and sexy, just like a model." Riku said with a laugh.
Mariko was left speechless 'OMG, what is he doing, is he making fun of me or complimenting me? If it’s the latter, OMG!' Mariko thought as she blushed again.
"Oh, I almost forgot, um… I'm sorry for what I said earlier." Riku said scratching his hair on the back of his head.
Mariko curled her eyebrows confused at what is Riku apologizing for. "About what?" She questioned.
"You know, when I called you 'honey' and 'my girlfriend'" Riku answered. That made Mariko blush again reminding her, what Riku called her.
"I-it's o-okay, I-I understand." Mariko replied stuttering and unable to hide her embarrassment.
“Hey! What happened here?” Kuu asked as he and Kai approach them.
“Let me rephrase what Kuu asked, what happened to her?” Kai asked as he notice Mariko. “Why is she blushing so much?”
“I don’t really know, maybe the guy that was hitting on her is her type, I shouldn't have shooed him away.” Riku said teasing Mariko.
“No, He’s not my type…” Mariko said. “You are…” she whispered to herself.
“What was that?” Riku asked, hinting that he did not hear what Mariko said.
“Nothing.” Mariko replied.
End Of Chapter 3
I know that this wasn't the expected meeting of Yuko and Riku, since there were people rooting for the two of them to fight, but I’m sorry, that won’t happen, Maybe, maybe not haha I still don’t know, I’m still thinking about it.
Reflection: The cat fight didn't happen, the proposal was postponed, Mariko has a trashed restaurant, Ren finally apologized to Riku (through a letter though), Mariko is still in love with Riku, Acchan and Mariko knows each other, Acchan and Riku are close, Kai and Kuu are both kinda jealous of Riku etc.
Coming up (Still tentative (I’m allowed to change my mind, aren't I?)): Riku might know the truth about Ren, he might do something about it. :P2 Yuko and Riku might meet again for the 2nd time, And the revealing of the mysterious box in Riku's jacket. That’s all for now ;)
IMPORTANT NOTE:
I’m actually battling my mind about this. Who would be the pairing? I have a few options about it, actually I had my mind set on the pairing, but I might change my mind, so please, I really need your help. Thank you. :)
Here are the other characters i might add: Mayu, Jurina, Sayaka, Tomochin, Tomo~mi and still thinking who might add.
And I MIGHT update after a few weeks, HOPEFULLY.
;)
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This will be fun, I think you should let Jurina be a BOY here, take Ren out of YukoRiku's relationship
This Yaoi couple will be the best :twothumbs
Mayuyu? Mayuki? Saemayu?
WTomo or KaixTomochin, nah already had MariKuu so... How 's about Saeyaka? I prefer Sayaka to be a woman here :lol:
Thanks for update, keep writing and plz make WMatsui.
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Interesting!!
I just read your story and I really liked it, it is very pleasant to read.
On couples .... who would be boys and which girls?
If tomochin is a man could be paired with Kai.
The saeyakas always work very well since Yuki and Sae are cousins.
But I get the impression that kai and Acchan are in love and Kuu is in love with Mariko .... so honestly any couple provisional would be interesting to read.
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YAY! UPDATE! ANOTHER LIIIIIIIIIIIIIIGHT! \o/ *just ate chocolates*
Nice update! Me want more! LOL. I sense MariHaru in le chappy. :3
He-he-he! And A lil' of MariMii in Ku's side. >:3
Neways, update ka na teh! XD
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Ah... what secret of Ren that Atsuko knew... that she was willing to break Yuko's relationship with Ren?
Yeah right... Ren broke up with Riku because of his new religion...?
He was cheating on Riku for years before the break up... it has got nothing to do with his new convert to new religion.
Isn't it Christianity also said not to cheat, lie and polygamy?
He broke everything that Christianity said not to do?!
He is a sin man... whether he is Christian or any other...
As a human he is very bad person... two timing someone... using Riku for his money... etc.
God should punish someone like that....
Ah.. Mariko is still crazy about Riku...
Eh... Kai seems to like Atsuko more than just a friend.... and he is supposed to be gay....
I think he just never liked anyone before... so he thought he was gay
And Kuu seems to be jealous... of Mariko being closed to someone... especially with Riku... But he doesn't notice it
Can't wait to find out the next one
Thank you for the lovely update
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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hey
You got an interesting story here :twothumbs Can't wait for what kind of pairings you will have.
And by the way, I'm rooting for RikuxMariko hehehe :lol:
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Please continue this fic.... I like it a lot :)
I also watched the movie and it's hilarious
I'm looking forward for your next chapter! :D
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Cessy10-san
Please update
This story is one of my Fav.
I nearly forgot the existence of this story
So Please continue it...
Can't wait to see how the story going to develop
Thank you...
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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shiruba_rein-san
Eh... there is a movie of this story...
I just goggle it... is it the movie title "This Guy's In Love With U Mare!"
Filipino movie...?
Thank you for the info
Can't wait to watch....
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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@cisda83, yes that's right... it is a Filipino movie :)
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where are you Cessy-san?
I want Kojiyuu together hic :cry: but they're fighting over Ren... NO
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First of all, I would like to you (the readers) to know that the pairings are already decided, but I won't say it yet. But here is the "possible" love triangles you might encounter.
F X M X F
- Mariko X Riku X Yuko
- Yuko X Ren X Jurina
- Jurina X Mayu X Yuki
- Tomo-mi X Sae X Sayaka
M X F X M
- Riku X Mariko X Kuu
- Kuu X Atsuko X Kai
- Sae X Tomo-mi X Tomo-chin
F = Female
M= Male
The final pairing would be for me to know and you to find out. :P
Next, sorry for a late update. I was busy this summer (it's summer here in the Philippines), we have gone to many beaches/pools.
Last, is that I miss my 'inspiration', haha joke. Though I am looking forward to our enrollment, because there I could meet this so called 'inspiration' haha.
@ashiya: I could assure you that there will be a WMatsui moment, but that's all that I can say, I mean i haven't even introduced Jurina yet, but I think that she would be in the next chapters to come.
And Mayu also would be in the the next chapters to come.
And Sayaka would also be here.
As far as i know that's really all i could say and please look forward to the other characters who would appear and the pairings also.
Sorry for the super late update.
Don't worry, in the next few chapters, there would be much much encounters between the kojiyuu pairing.
Thanks for reading :)
@Minami-chan: No, I should be the one thanking you. And you liking the story means a lot to me and very much appreciated. Well I, together with my proof reader/s, do our best to make it pleasant/presentable to read.
Uhm, at the top of the post I wrote the possible pairings that might be encountered together with their gender.
As of know I can't really comment on the pairings, because I want it as a surprise for the readers, All that i can say is that, the pairing would have many twists and turns. So please look forward to it.
Thanks for reading :)
@Amakuchi: Yeah, i know, I browsed the chat box in PA that day and I read that you did ate chocolates that day.
I definitely put a mariharu moment there and probably there's still more to come.
And MariMii also there would be improvements. So please look forward to it.
Opo, mag-uupdate na po, haha XD
Thanks for reading :)
@cisda83: The secret would be in the next chapter, after the big revelation on Chapter 4. Actually, it wasn't my idea, it was from the movie, i just didn't want to sway really far from the movie so, I adopted it. Sorry if it somehow offended you, I didn't mean it. Anyway it was just a reason for Ren so that Riku would break-up with him completely, that he wouldn't follow him anymore, and that he would give-up knowing that it's not a girl but the Lord.
Mariko really has a huge crush on Riku since they were little. Kai is more like an asexual, rather than gay, or rather he chose to be gay, so that he won't have any sexual interactions. So him liking Atsuko would be new, you're right and awkward for him. And Kuu is Pansexual, he never really liked someone before as to the point of love. Which he might experience/feel in the future chapters. So please look forward to it.
Wow, knowing that this is one of your favorite story is very humbling, I'm really grateful that you liked the story, although you did forgotten the story, which is really my fault for not updating for so long, so I'm sorry.
Do you want to watch the movie? I think it was posted in Dailymotion although it's in Filipino. Hope you could understand it.
Thanks for reading :)
@AoiShiori: I can't promise you a RikuXMariko pairing at the end because the story would really have many twist and turns at the end, but i could promise you improvements in their relationship in the future chapters. So please look forward to it.
Anyway, you're from the Philippines right? Have you watched the movie yet? because if you did, you would have a little background of the story.
Thanks for reading :)
@shiruba-rein: If i have time, of course i would continue writing the fiction, and i thank you for liking it.
I can't say that I will be able to meet the expectation, knowing you have watch the movie, the fiction wouldn't be that hilarious, because for me it's a little hard to write funny scenes, but nonetheless, i'll be doing my best to write the best story that i could come up with, so please look forward to it.
Thanks for reading :)
AGAIN SORRY FOR THE LATE UPDATE, YOU'RE COMMENTS AND THANKS ARE VERY MUCH APPRECIATED AND EVEN THE VIEWS, THANK YOU SO MUCH.
Sorry for wrong grammars and/or spellings.
Chapter 4
A few minutes have passed, the group is still in the club. They are more likely the center of attraction of the place. They could always feel or catch several eyes on them, some just taking glances, but others are shameless enough to stare. But you know, who wouldn't, for the guys, a beautiful young lady, and for the girls, three attractive young men who are apparently already very embarrassed.
"W-Where the h-heck is she?" Kai asked stuttering from the embarrassment.
"I-Is she always t-this l-late?" He continued. The other 3 looked at him and covered their mouth, even with the embarrassment they can't help but to laugh at him.
"Dude, stop stuttering, it's funny and embarrassing at the same time." Kuu said to Kai.
"I-I can't help it, e-especially with almost all eyes on us." Kai replied still stuttering. "I-I feel like I'm in s-school, and that I'm reciting in front." Remembering his school days. The laughter died down as Kai was a little serious.
"Yeah, I feel the same way, but not to the point of stuttering." Riku said which made them laugh again, except for Kai who just pouted.
"Aw, he's pouting, c'mon Kai, we're just messing with you, and you know, stuttering makes it even more embarrassing." Mariko stated.
"Stuttering aside, Where the heck is Acchan?" Riku asked repeating Kai's earlier question without stuttering, which earned a glare from Kai. Riku just smiled sheepishly at him.
"She can't help it, due to her work and very strict boss." Kuu explained.
"But it's so embarrassing here, can't we wait for her somewhere else, where people aren't staring.
"I have an Idea!" Mariko exclaimed, the other looked at her. "Why don't we go to her work place, it would save us the time of finding another place to wait for her and save her time of her going to us.
"C'mon, let's go." Kai said, very eager to get out of the place.
"Wait, who's going to drive? Kai and Mariko both have a car." Riku asked.
"And Mariko's the only one who knows the workplace." Kai added
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"Well, it's obvious that Kai and I will both drive, but who's going with who?" Mariko asked.
"How about, Riku, you go with Mariko, and I'm with Kuu. C'mon, Let's Go!" Kai said without waiting for the others to protest or even reply. He quickly held Kuu and Riku's wrist as he stormed out of the building, leaving Mariko shock but most of all embarrassed, thinking that she and Riku would be in the same car, her car, without anyone else, just the two of them.
"Oi, Mari-chan? Are you okay?" Riku asked as he returned to see why didn't Mariko followed them.
"I-I'm f-fine." Mariko replied trying hard not to face Riku, because if Riku were to see her, it'll be much more embarrassing because she was blushing so hard.
"Are you sure? But why is your face red? Do you have a fever?" Riku asked.
As he was about to touch Mariko's face, Mariko stood up facing down and said "I said I'm fine. Let's go." She stormed out of the club still facing down and still blushing.
Riku just shrug his shoulder and followed her out.
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'It was the perfect time and the perfect place, but how come it all fell apart? Just a few more seconds, and i should have been engaged, that's if she ever says yes.' Ren thought still contemplating on his failed proposal. 'Why does the sprinklers have so much timing?' He is on his way to pick-up his supposed to be fiancee 'If not because of that stupid sprinklers. Argh!' His thoughts clearly shows that he is frustrated. 'Well, it's just my first attempt, I'll just have to make sure that the next would be much more perfect than yesterday.'
He pulled up his car in a park space at a nearby bank, where his girlfriend is working at. He opened the door of the backseat and took out a beautiful bouquet of roses. Once the guard had saw him, he was immediately allowed inside, almost all of the staff there knows him, and they also know how much he loves their co-worker, Yuko. He would almost make time to pick up and drop off Yuko to work, just to make sure that she was safe.
"Hey babe!" Ren said as he saw Yuko on the teller booth. There are no more customers, just the staffs and employees. He then proceed to the booth. As Ren reached Yuko, there was an automatic kiss on the cheeks, and he hands the bouquet to her.
"Aw so sweet." Yuko said.
"Ready to go?" Ren asked.
"Yeah, were almost finish." Yuko replied.
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Just as Kai has said, He is seated behind the wheels of his car next to him was Kuu who is apparently eating, before they left he ordered take-out in the club. 'Just glancing at him make me hungry, why does he have to eat while I drive?' Kai asked himself.
"Oi, Kuu, share some, looking at you makes me hungry." Kai asked Kuu.
Kuu, still busy eating his snack, looked at Kai. "YADA!" He said as he stick-out his tongue and he faced his back to Kai. (YADA = NO)
"Kechi" Kai said as he pouted. (Kechi = Stingy)
Just as he focused of the way, he saw a cat cross the road, which made him step on the break immediately. Thus making Kuu's snack splattered on his nose.
"Sorry, a cat crossed-" As Kai was about to explain the sudden stop, he burst out laughing. "That's what you get for being a glutton." He said in between laugh.
Kuu just glared and rolled his eyes on Kai. "Dude, Tissue?" Kuu asked almost snarling.
"Club (laugh) box" Kai said still laughing.
Kuu then immediately opened the club box, got the tissue and wipe his face. "Not funny." He said still glaring at Kai.
"For you it doesn't, but for me, it's hysterical." Kai said wiping a tear from his eye.
"Haha, very funny." Kuu said sarcastically.
"Fine, I'm sorry." Kai said. "But you've got to admit that was funny." that earned Kai a sneer from Kuu.
Meanwhile on the car that Kai and Kuu is following.
'This is pretty awkward.' Mariko thought as both she and Riku aren't speaking. 'Should I talk to him? but I'm nervous, I might stutter again. I don't want to be embarrassed again. And he looks a little preoccupied. What should I do? Maybe I should-'
"Mari-chan?" Mariko was interrupted with her thought when Riku suddenly spoke.
"Yes?" Mariko thanked that she didn't stutter.
"Isn't that your restaurant?" Riku asked as he pointed at the under-construction building. They currently stopped near the restaurant because of the traffic.
"Yes it is." Because Mariko was preoccupied with her thoughts, she didn't noticed her own restaurant.
"Why is it under construction?" Riku curiously asked.
"Due to the sprinklers, it made some parts of the building weak, like the wood flooring, so it's under renovation. And probably won't be a restaurant anymore." Mariko explained.
"Won't be a restaurant anymore? Why is that?" Riku asked.
"Well after the incident, I don't think that people would trust us again, it would be hard to continue it as a restaurant, with the bad publicity and all." Mariko sadly explained.
"Oh, sorry to hear that. But what would t be then, if not a restaurant anymore?" Riku again asked.
"I'm thinking of something related to fashion, since I did studied at a fashion school." Mariko said as a matter of fact.
"You studied at a fashion school? I didn't know." Riku said a little shocked. "But why did you opened a restaurant?"
"It was a family business, they said I should open a restaurant here." Mariko explained.
"But a fashion student running a restaurant? That's harsh." Riku said.
"I'm just the owner, I never said i'm running or managing it." Mariko said.
"Really? I thought- wait. Now that I remember, you never did said you manage it. Sorry." Riku said.
"You need not to say sorry, it's fine." Mariko replied.
"Fashion. I suits you, you're very fashionable, and looks like a model so, i think you would succeed in this one."Riku complimented her which made her again blush. "Tell you what, I could help you in your business."
"How?" Mariko asked.
"You see, me and my partner, owns different kinds of business, like a photo studio and a computer shop, i think we could help in the commercial and promotion of your business, and we also have a parlor that could help in the make-up of your models." Riku explained.
"Thank you, I would very much appreciate all the help." Mariko thanked Riku.
"It's nothing, what are friends for?" Riku said with a sweet smile.
'friends?' Mariko thought and replied with forced a smile.
After a few minutes, the 4 people reached their destination and got out of the car. They were about to proceed to the entrance when suddenly Riku stopped.
"What's wrong Riku?" Kai asked.
Riku pointed to a car and asked "Whose car is that?" then the other three looked at the pointed car.
"I don't know, how are we supposed to know a strangers car." Kuu said sarcastically.
"Now that I take a closer look, it looks a little like Ren's, don't you think?" Kai asked.
"It doesn't look like Ren's car, IT IS Ren's car." Riku said.
"Look Riku, you have need to get him out of your mind, it just looks like his car, it doesn't mean it's his." Kuu said.
"No, it really is his. Take a look at the plate number, it's the same." Riku said.
"Your right it is his." Kai said.
"But what the heck is he doing here?" Kuu asked.
"Well, there's one way to find out." Kai said.
As the group turned in to the direction of the door they saw Ren, holding a bouquet of flowers entering the bank.
"It really is him." Kai said.
'So this is Ren.' Mariko thought.
"But why would he bring flowers here?" Kuu asked.
"Maybe there's a prayer meeting inside." Riku defended Ren. The three of them looked at Riku with one eyebrow elevated. "What? it could happen." The three the rolled their eyes at him.
"Since when did the Christians have a Saint of Money?" Kuu asked sarcastically.
"Or maybe he has a client there that he needs to sway" Riku said again defending Ren.
Then suddenly the door once again opened that made the four of them speechless. Kuu then sighed and said "Yeah, that's a Client alright." Ren left the bank together with a bank teller hand in hand, the bouquet with the teller.
"Love hurts." Kai stated.
"A cheat hurts." Kuu added.
"And a lie hurts." Mariko added.
End of Chapter 4
I can't believe that still haven't reached the 1/4th part of the movie. It made me realize that I'm so slow. And I apologize for that. Sorry for the late update and for a very short one i might add. it's just that i'm a little sad this week, cause i can't be classmates with my crush, but somehow i became happy more like elated, because my crush texted me, although i was not able to reply back i'm happy that somehow i have received a PM from my crush. hehe
Moving on. When our class starts, i might be a little occupied with school work, so i might not be able to update again so, i'm sorry in advance, but i would do my best to update before school even starts so wish me luck ;)
Also I made a video pertaining to this fiction, hope you would view it, if not it's ok, I admit i'm not good in making vids :) here's the video. This Guy's In Love With You...(trailer) (http://youtu.be/WqpiUDP-ktE)
To those whose OTP is Mariharu, Atsumina, Marimii, Kojiyuu, I assure you that there would be development in their relationships in the upcoming future chapters.
If I were able to update Chapter 5, I would introduce other characters like Tomochin and Jurina. So stay tuned :)
Thanks for reading :)
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hahahha finally you've updated :)
And you're right, you still have a lot to go, so better update soon hahahah :)
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No Cessy10-san... You did not offense me at all...
Yeah... I try to watch the movie... but can not understand it at all.. :(
So I guess I will need to wait for your update to know what's going on
Can't wait to see the possible love triangles you are going to make in this story :thumbsup
Kai is so funny... embarrass being the center of attention... :sweatdrop:
Yeah Mendol and Mariko all are attractive of course... they get all the attention...
Ah.. Mariko so shy... with having to be in the same car as Riku... only the two of them... :wub:
What happened to Kuu in the car is so funny... :rofl:
Riku is going to help with Mariko's advertising... But Poor Mariko... to be said only friends again by Riku
Ah.. Poor Riku... need to scene between Yuko and Ren...
Yeah.. Ren is a cheater, a lair, and a gold digger
What's going to happen in Riku, Ren and Yuko?
Would Yuko remember Riku from the restaurant?
Ah... Yuko and Atsuko work in the same office...?
What's going to happen to the rest?
Can't wait to find out
Thank you for the update
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
PS: the trailer is nice...
:thumbsup :thumbsup :thumbsup
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Jurina's a girl ...but I love Juriboy...
Why I have this feeling about Ren that's not what he looks like...
lol I love MariKuu :wub:
Jurina and Tomochin would appear soon :w00t:
Mayuki?
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Thank you for the update :)
It's ok if you can't write a funny scene
I'm just looking forward to your story
I'm excited for the YukoxRiku moments :D
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Yey for the improvements of the pairings! :cow:
And yes I'm from the Philippines and I saw the movie too.
Update soon :)
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Salamat sa Update!!!!
I'm waiting for the next one~~
Please make it MariKuu.... *begs* :bow:
uwaa..and i want RikuYuu~~~
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I know I should update This Guy's In Love With You, but instead I posted a One Shot. Sorry.
But Don'y Worry, Chapter 5 is on its way. And the reply on the comments will be when I updated chapter 5.
And sorry for using the thread of TGILWY, it's just, I don't want to create another thread, with only one Story/Post, so I'm using this.
A KOJIYUU ONESHOT
I'm Kojima Haruna. I'm a sophomore History major. And right now I'm...
"I've always thought you were great, Oshima san." A man said whilst sweating a little of nervousness.
"Um...I'm sorry..." replied the girl called Oshima san.
Smack dab in the middle of the spring time of youth..
I awoke from my nap to find a guy getting shot down?!
...maybe they'll go away...
"Are you in love with someone else?" the guy questioned.
"No, but..." the girl named Oshima is thinking of a way to reject the guy.
I can't even move...
"Th-Then-" the guy keep insisting until...
RINGALINGALING!
Sigh...If only I was a ninja...
Haruna's phone rang. She stood up to where she was lying then bowed to the two of them.
"I'm sorry." she said as she bowed.
"Oh! No...it's...a...I have to go. See ya!" stutter the guy who immediately walked away.
I turned to the girl named Oshima, a little surprised that instead of looking at the guy who just confessed to her, she was looking right at me. Then she smiled, dimples showing.
'whoa! She's...cute' is just what I thought after seeing her smile.
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"You caught me at a weird moment before. I'm Oshima Yuko! Ummm?" the girl said after we sat on the bench.
"Kojima Haruna..." I replied.
"Neko..." She murmured. "Nyan Nyan, huh? :heart: thanks, you saved me. That guy just wouldn't let it go." She said whilst giving me a nickname.
'Neko? Nyan Nyan...? Do I really look like a cat?.' I thought to the nickname she had given me.
"He seemed pretty cool, though, such a waste..." I suggested to her.
"Oh?... I guess...?" She said not really thinking about it.
"But... I like girls..haha" smiling her cutesy smile again, and dimples, but this time her teeth are showing although they weren't perfect, that made her extra cute.
"Does that gross you out?" She asked.
"...No...It...doesn't." I gave a clearly and honest reply.
"..." Then there was silence.
"Want to give it a try then?" She asked as she held my chin and slowly close the gap between us, but even if she did it slowly, I couln't react immidiately. The next thing i know, we were kissing, scratch that, she was kissing me. Her eyes were close but mine were wide open. Do you know the saying silence after the storm? In this case, it's silence before the storm.
SMACK!
"..." She was speechless, as I slapped her face. I could clearly see the slap mark in her perfectly white cheeks.
"...You hit me..." She said to me as she touch her red cheeks.
"Uh-huh." I answered.
"That's...the first time someone's ever hit me...I think..." She said her hand is still in her swollen cheeks.
"That's good." I said as I got up off the bench. She's still dumbfounded about the slap.
"You know, you might think you're just trying things out, but you shouldn't do stuff like that anymore." I said to her as I walked away from her. while she was just sitting there staring at my back.
Yuko took her camera, aimed at Haruna's walking away figure and snapped a picture of her back as she smiled.
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"Oh! there you are! Nyaro!" My classmate, Shinoda Mariko, I call her Mari-chan, said, as she walked towards me.
"Where were you? Class is starting. And you didn't answer your phone..." She asked.
"Oh...Kissing a pretty girl..." I said as i remember the earlier incident.
"Huh? What did you say? You alright?" She asked as she can't believe what I just said. Well, I can't really blame her, if I were on her position I won't really believe too, and knowing that it's me, clearly an airhead, sometimes.
"Yeah...well..." I replied as we got to our class.
'hmmm...It takes all kinds...' I thought as I remembered Oshima Yuko. '...And she was so cute too...' (It takes all kinds meaning there are different kinds of people)
"Does that gross you out?" I suddenly remembered Oshima-san's question. 'I never really thought about it, but I don't think it does.'
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She must've been through alot...
But...
Next day
"Aha! I had a feeling you'd be back here again!" She said to me. Me who is currently in the bushes again where I was sleeping yesterday.
"You'll get a sunburn if you nap out here." She continued as a lowered the book in my face.
"Oshima...san." I said as I saw her face.
"You don't need to use '-san' with me, and please, you could call me with my first name." She said as we both sat at the grass.
"...Did you want something?" I asked.
But still...
"Um...You see..." She started as I tilted my head.
"I think I've fallen for you, Nyan Nyan. Please go out with me :heart:." She said with her brightest smile.
This is ridiculous...
"...oh...But I don't like you, so I can't go out with you..." I replied honestly.
"Haha! You sure are interesting, Nyan Nyan!" She replied laughing.
"Friends, then! Can we be friends?" She asked.
'...Interesting?...' I asked myself 'what's so interesting about me?'
"...Oh. Okay then..." I answered.
"Yay!" She cheered. "Okay, this is to commemorate our new friendship!" She pulled out her camera and snapped a photo of us together. In which again, I couldn't react.
"Ahaha! You aren't very photogenic, Nyan Nyan. :heart:" She said whilst looking at the picture.
"How rude." I said as I glared at her.
"Why? That's a good thing, you know?" She looked at me, "It means you're more impressive in person. :heart:" as she complemented me.
"I see..." I said as I reached for the camera in her hands. So we are now holding the small camera together.
"You're right. You're not very photogenic either Yuko..." I said as I moves towards her to take a good look at the picture.
Yuko blushed at the close proximity 'H-Her hand...! And she complemented me like it was nothing.... And used my name without -san so casually...Don't tell me, shes's unwitting flirt?' She could feel her heart beating so fast. She just hopes Haruna won't notice it.
"Hey, Do you always carry this around you?" I asked obviously pertaining to the camera and made Yuko leave her thoughts.
"Oh, the camera?" Yuko asked as she was so happy with her thoughts.
"Yeah, I like pictures. I get shots of things that made me happy that day, or cute things I ran across." Yuko answered with full smiles. "It's like my diary.:heart: "
"hunhh" I replied nodding my head.
"Hey, Nyan Nyan, don't you eat lunch? Lunch time just started, right?" Yuko asked.
"Oh...I live alone, and I don't have any money...So I just nap here during lunch..." I answered.
"What?! But you gotta eat! Let's go get lunch, my treat!" Yuko said.
"...Okay..." I unwillingly replied as I get dragged to the lunch room. '...she's treating me...'
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Next day, I am with Mariko studying at the Library.
"Oh! Nyan Nyan! Hi :heart:" Yuko said as she passed by the Library.
I just waved at her, knowing that I shouldn't shout at the library.
"Hey, that was Oshima Yuko, right? Do you know her? Nyaro?" Marichan asked me.
"Yeah, I made friends with her the other day." I replied tilting my head. "Something wrong?"
"Seriously?" Marichan said. "But everyone knows she steals her friends' boyfriends!"
"Well, I guess it doesn't concern you, since you don't have one right now." Marichan teased, as I raised an eyebrow.
"...Are you sure that's not some sort of mistake?" I asked as I remembered Yuko, 'She said she has fallen for me? Or does she?'
"Huh? I heard she made Takamina cry the other day." Marichan said.
"...But she was such a nice girl..." I said as I questioned myself, 'Is it really true? so why me? I don't have a boyfriend?'
"What makes you so sure?" Marichan asked.
"She treated me to lunch the other day. She's a good person!" I said as a matter of fact.
"uh-huh" Marichan said as she nodded disbelievingly. '...So shes's feeding an animal.'
"Well, maybe you shouldn't get too involved with her, hm?" Marichan suggested.
"..." I didn't answer.
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"That's what she said." I said to Yuko what Marichan said to me. "...Is it true?"
"Oh, that's because my friends' guys just fall for me. You know, because I'm so cute. :heart:" She said as she showed her cutest smile with dimples.
"Oh I see! Must be hard being cute..." I replied.
"...Nyan Nyan, you were supposed to jump in with a witty retort there. And I was only teasing Takamina with Acchan, that's why she cried." She said.
"Well, there was one time, I have taken a friend's guy just so he'd break up with her, that didn't go well." She continued.
"Oh! But you're the only one for me now, Nyan Nyan. Don't worry." She added.
"Umm...I thought we just agreed to be friends?" I asked.
"Yeah. We are friends." Yuko replied. "I just happen to be in love with you too. :heart: "
"..." I was speechless, well, actually I just can't find the right words to say.
So that's how it is...
But...
"Nyan Nyan, I got some movie tickets! let's go together! :heart:" Yuko said as she holds two tickets.
"Okay" I relluctantly replied.
So we're friends...?
"Nyan Nyaaaan, I made lunch today! Let's eat it together! :heart:" Yuko said handling a box lunch.
"...Okay." again I reluctantly replied.
...We're friends...
RINGALINGALING!
I woke up as I checked my noisy phone.
Incoming message!
From: Oshima Yuko
sub: Morning! :heart:
You have class first period today, right?
Better not be late! ^_^ See ya.
Love you! :heart:
-Yuko :heart: :heart:
"..." I didn't reply and head back to sleep.
...We're...Friends...?
"I want to ask you about the difference between a friend and a lover..." I asked Marichan as we head to our class.
"...What the..." She replied shockingly.
"Come on!" I said.
"Friends and lovers, huh...?" Marichan thinks. "Well, Bottom line, Are you two doing it or not?"
"...But what about f*ck Buddies...?" I asked again.
"I never raised you to have such a filthy mouth..." Marichan said teasingly.
"Shut up! You never raised me at all." I replied.
"...I don't know, do I look like the person to know?" Marichan answered, "...We can just look it up in the dictionary..." as she opened her phone.
"Ahh. Lovers are two people who are in love with each other." Marichan read. "So basically, you could be lovers if you both like each other?"
Oh, I see...
'I don't like you, so I can't go out with you.' Remembering my reply to her confession.
...I barely knew her back then...
But...how...about now...?
...I'm...not really sure...
"Oh, yeah, there's a mixer the day after tomorrow. You're going too right?" Marichan asked. "There'll be free food."
'...Food...' I thought.
"...Okay." I replied.
"And I have a favor to ask, could you invite Oshima too?" Marichan asked. "One of the participants there likes her."
"...I guess..." I replied.
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"Huh? A mixer?" Yuko asked as we are both in a cafe next to the school.
"Oh! But you don't have to go if you don't want to..." I replied.
"Sure, I'll go! Oh, But I can't drink at all, not even a drop. Is that okay?" She asked.
"I don't see why not?" I replied
"Okay, I'll go then. You're coming too, right?" She said.
"...Yeah." I replied. "...There'll be food there..."
...What?
I kind of thought she'd say no...
"I have to make sure I look my best" she said.
...I mean...
Isn't she in love with me?
Wait...why am I being so...
"Oh, it started raining." She said as rain really started to fall.
"huh?!" I said as I was out in my deep thought. "Argh...I didn't bring an umbrella..."
"It's okay! I have one." She said as she took her umbrella out. "Let's walk to the station together. :heart:"
We are now on our way out of the cafe when she stopped me. "Oh, hold on a minute." she said as she grab her camera out, and snapped another picture. I'm pretty mush used to it by now.
"That's to commemorate our ai ai gasa. :heart:" she said. (ai ai gasa = love love umbrella, a drawing of an umbrella with two names under it, equivalent to a heart with two names on it.)
'...Don't call it that...' I just thought, because I can't really say that, I should just be thankful for the umbrella.
"Want me to hold the umbrella?" I said as we go to the station.
"No, It's okay, I've got it. :heart:" She replied.
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"I'm never inviting her again...!" Marichan retorted as we are now on the mixer and all of the boys are fixated on Yuko and Yuko alone.
"...What the hell..? Even Kuu-kun is going for her. I wanted him..." Marichan continued to sulk.
"Well, the food's good, so what does it matter?" I said as I awallowed my food.
"...And you! At least put on some makeup before you come to one of these!" Marichan said as she take a look at me. "You have good features to work with, so.."
"I did put on foundation though..." I said as I munch on my food.
'Oh' I glanced at Yuko.
She didn't bring her camera today.
Because this isn't fun?
She shouldn't have come at all then...
Well, I did invite her...
When she's flushed and grinning surrounded by guys...
She looks like a different person, somehow.
Wait....Flushed..?
Then Yuko drank the drink near her.
That's...Oolong tea...
Then I suddenly stood up and reached for her forehead. And judging by their faces, her's and our groups', they were really surprised from what I did.
"Nyan...Nyan?" She said as I continue to touch her forehead. the flush in her face turned into a blush.
Then I got close to her, and I touch my forehead to her's.
"...Let's go home." I said as I part our foreheads.
"..." she did not say anything so i grabbed her wrist and drag her out. That made the group surprised, again.
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"Can you walk?" I asked as we are now walking in the street to get her home.
"...Yeah." She said her head facing down and our hands still intertwined.
"...Um...Nyan Nyan...Are you mad?" She asked.
"...Yes, I am..." I replied.
'Why?' I want to ask her, but I can't, not here.
"...Why." I said, as we are now in her room, she's resting in her bead and I'm seated beside her. "Why did you force yourself to come...even though you have a fever?"
"..." She didn't say anything and hid her face under her blankets.
"...I wish you'd just say no..." I continued.
"...But..." She said, still hiding.
"You..still would've gone without me, right?" she continued.
"...You're a great girl...so someone might have stolen you away..." she said.
"I didn't want that to happen..." She added. "I'm sorry."
This isn't friendship, is it...?
"Sorry, I've been..." She still continued. "Such a nuisance..."
What an idiot...
...It's not like I'm all that popular...
She's so cute.
I'm sure she has much better girls to choose from...
So why did she fall for me?
What an idiot...
She's just too stupid...Really...
It makes me want to do everything for her...
"Yuko...Come on out there..." I said as she's still hiding in her blankets.
"I'm not angry anymore, c'mon." I said as she lowered her blankets and I finally saw her face.
"Is there anything you want me to do? If there's anything you want just tell me." I said.
'She's like a bunny.' I thought as she just has her eyes seen.
"........Well, then..." She said as she sit up her bed.
"....You, Nyan Nyan." She answered.
"J-Just Kidding! I just wanted to say it!" She immediately said. "Maybe my head's all messed up because of the fever."
"hmmm...Something that I want?" Yuko's still thinking.
"Okay." I retorted.
"huh?" She said as she didn't heard what I said.
"You can have me." I said as I face her, close our gap and kiss her.
"...You'll get..." She said with teardrops on her eyes, after we part the kiss. "My cold..."
"That's fine...As long as you'll be there to nurse me back to health." I said and wink at her.
"Want to take a picture?" I asked.
"To commemorate when we found out the feeling was mutual."
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If anything's changed since that night, it is...
"Nyan Nyan!" Yuko said as she saw me in the school. "Let's walk home together!"
"Okay." I answered.
...Has anything changed at all....?
I looked at her, still thinking. And she tilted her head.
"Something wrong?" She asked.
"Want to hold hands?" I answered with a question.
"Oh! sure!" She said as we intertwined our hands.
"B-But don't you think people will think we're weird?" She asked. "You sure it's okay?"
'...You kissed me the day we met and you're asking this now...?' I thought as I looked at her and raised an eyebrow.
"Wh-What?" She asked.
"Oh, I was just thinking about how cute you are..." I simply said, that made Yuko blush a deep shade of red.
And...That, I guess.
"Hey, Yuuchan, there's something I want to ask you." I said.
"Wh-What is it?" She asked.
"How do two girls have sex?" I asked innocently, that again made Yuko blush and at the same time flushed.
They'll be smack dab in the middle of the spring time of youth soon.
END.?
-from MAPLE LOVE (Your Cuteness) by Otsu Hiyori
Thanks for reading :)
I think I'll update chapter 5 after the elections. See you then :)
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Very interesting drama OS there...
I like how Yuko and Haruna interact with each other...
They were so cute together...
Yeah... I could say that everyone would hate having to be with Yuko...
Because she was so cute and attractive so many people would like to be with her....
"How do two girls have sex?" Haruna was so innocent... :rofl:
Thank you for the OS
Can't wait to see you make another OS... and also to make the next chapter for This Guy's In Love With You
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Very interesting drama OS there...
I like how Yuko and Haruna interact with each other...
They were so cute together...
Yeah... I could say that everyone would hate having to be with Yuko...
Because she was so cute and attractive so many people would like to be with her....
"How do two girls have sex?" Haruna was so innocent... :rofl:
Thank you for the OS
Can't wait to see you make another OS... and also to make the next chapter for This Guy's In Love With You
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I 2nd this~ hope you update soon~ loved the OS~
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Kojiyuu . . . So cute! :wub: :wub:
I love it! XD
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oMG! kojiyuu so cute!
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I liked this OS! It was very sweet and cute. Please write more KojiYuu OS! :heart:
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Owww nonono... definitely not end!! pleeeaseee continueee *-* :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:
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the title made me laugh xD
I ready read that fic but with a different pairing, I think it was Mayuki
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I love this :) part 2 please!! XD more kojiyuu from you please :bow: :bow: :thumbsup :wub:
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Hohoho YukoRen~!! :heart: :heart: :love:
Loving this~! Update soon!! :bow: :wub:
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So....Mariko's announcement was a bummer. Totally unexpected to almost all, except for a few. It actually made me depress for a while, but there's nothing we could do anymore, so i decided to let it go, and just support her, in her every decision. so sad :(
I almost cried though, but i didn't, just teary eyed :cry:
I was supposed to update right after the election, but due to the announcement, I was held back in writing sorry about that.
Not really a JuriMayuki Chapter, but Introduction to them.
THIS GUY"S IN LOVE WITH YOU REPLIES:
@maku: Yup, trying my hardest to update, you know that, hehe.
And please, Update your Breakout.
@cisda83: Sadly the movie and my story has may differences, i just based the story on the movie, but can't guarantee that it would end like the movie but i'll try my bets :P
The love Triangles are due to the many possible pairing a character has, and the shipper that that pairing has. so I tried to make love triangles, even if they don't end up with each other, they would have moments together.
In this update, I tried to get them on the same car again.
and possibly, the same room together <-- next chapter.
I'm sure Riku's treatment to Mariko would definitely improve especially after the next chapter.
But please don't hate Ren, he has his reasons and I didn't plan to make him an antagonist, he's also a protagonist.
Next chapter would mainly be Riku and Yuko's meeting and interaction.
Yes, Yuko and Acchan are office mates and are close friends.
Thanks for Reading :)
And Wait for the next chapter. ;)
@ashiya: I think that Jurina being a girl here would be more convenient in the story, because I already wrote the character of her partner to be a boy, so I decided to make her a girl. sorry if ever that it's not to your liking.
Please don't think of Ren as an antagonist, he's also a protagonist, he just haven't had a background yet so i think that made you think that, almost all of the readers, think that he is, And because of that, I made a scene in this update that would somehow open his background.
MariKuu here is a little underdeveloped yet but I do plan to improve their relationship, but right now, Kuu would definitely show some signs of jealousy.
Jurina did appear, but Sadly, Tomochin didn't yet, but Mayu appeared. Maybe next chapter would be Tomochin's appearance.
Thanks for reading :)
And Wait for the next chapter. ;)
@shiruba_rein : Sadly YukoXRiku moments would be on the next chapter, I'm still thinking of how i'm going to write their meeting, the action scene in the movie, but please look forward to it. I'm also looking forward to writing it. hehe
Thanks for reading :)
And Wait for the next chapter ;)
@AoiShiori: Hope I could meet your expectations, because i can't guarantee it that it would be like the movie.
And please also update you Fool Like Me, I have a friend, she likes it and waiting for the next update.
Thanks for reading :)
And Wait for the next chapter ;)
@xsilentreader: Walang anuman po :) Salamat din sa pagbabasa. you're not really a silent reader, are you? hehe joke :lol:
As I have said to ashiya-san Marikuu here is still underdeveloped but Kuu's showing signs of jealousy but I promise there would be improvements.
Thanks for reading :)
And Wait for the next chapter ;)
@AgentBlueBear: Please look forward to the next chapter, Because I'm thinking of writing a YukoRen scene there.
And this update also has a YukoRen scene.
Thanks for reading :)
And Wait for the next chapter ;)
MAPLE LOVE (OS) REPLIES:
@cisda83: I always picture Yuko as the insisting type, while Haruna as the 'meh' type, and would complement each other. Sometimes while reading manga I could picture the two of them, as to what i did here.
Good to know you liked it.
I do plan on making other OS stories, please look forward to it :)
Thanks for reading :)
And Wait for other OS ;)
@sakura_drop_: Good to know you liked the OS.
I do plan on making other OS stories, please look forward to it :)
And please also look forward to the next chapter of This Guy's in love with you, I think I would write Ren's Proposal to Yuko.
Thanks for reading :)
And Wait for other OS ;)
@shiruba_rein: Thanks for liking the story :)
I do plan on making other OS stories, please look forward to it :)
@Haruko: Thanks for liking the story :)
I do plan on making other OS stories, please look forward to it :)
@sharlatan: Thanks for liking the story :)
I do plan on making other OS stories, please look forward to it :)
But not just KojiYuu, other pairings as well.
@Nab: Thanks for liking the story :)
I'm thinking/planning to write a part 2 also, but might take long. Sorry. but please do look forward to it :)
@kahem: Really? I didn't know, I haven't read that yet, honest mistake.
But i do plan to write a part 2 if ever please do look forward to it :)
@Tam_atsu: Thanks for liking the story :)
Part 2 would take time though, i'm still Planning for it.
And I do plan on making other OS stories, although other pairings as well, please look forward to it :)
Extra Characters Lists:
Watanabe Mayu - He works as a Physician/School Doctor at a nearby University. He is a very workaholic man that he always wears glasses. But even though he still has many fans, mostly students. He doesn't really show his emotion much. Others may say that it's all an act, others say that he is a robot, but those others really doesn't know who he really is, and there are some who think they know him. But what does really lie under those glasses?
Matsui Jurina - A very mature and responsible student in the outside, but a very energetic and cheerful person on the inside. She is a young high school student, but her fate has already been decided for her, by her parents. At a very young age her parents already has a fiancée for her. She came from a rich family, that's why she needs to act mature and responsible, which is a little opposite to her true personality. Will she be able to escape her fate and set her own path to life or will she be forever bounded by the path others chose for her?
Chapter 5
***This part was just right after Riku received or read the letter from Ren (Chapter 3)***
Yuki, seeing her brother in a broken hearted state which makes it so hard for her, promised herself that she would never fall in love and focus on her career and her family.
"Hey, Yuki, you don't need to worry about me, I'm going to be fine." Riku assured his sister.
"But you-" Yuki insisted but she was cut off.
"No buts, I just need to preoccupy myself. And you still have work to do, right?" Riku said, still reassured Yuki.
"Okay, but are you sure? I could take a day off and stay here with you." Yuki asked.
"No, I'm fine. You don't need to do that." Riku said as he shook his head.
"Okay then, take care." Yuki said as she proceeded to her room to get ready, leaving Riku to himself in the balcony.
'Fine, huh?' Riku asked himself.
Yuki readied herself to go to her work, Sae, their cousin, asked if he should drive her to work, but Yuki declined, saying "I think Riku could use the company more than me." still worried about Riku.
"I think Riku's going to be fine, have a little faith and he's your brother, my cousin, so I trust him to make right decisions." Sae said to Yuki, which made Yuki calm down a little bit and smile.
"But I still want you to keep an eye on him though, just to make sure." Yuki said.
"Such a worrywart." Sae teased Yuki.
"Yeah, yeah." Yuki replied as she took off to her work.
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PE class
"Alright class today, like I promised, we would be having a game of volleyball." Said the teacher, that made the class cheer in excitement.
"Since the class consists of 35 students, the class will be divided into five with 7 members." She continued. "Each team should come up with its own name and must have a leader."
She then divided the class and asked them the name and their leader.
The first team chose "Team A" with their leader Kawaei Rina , the second team chose "Team K" with their leader Matsui Jurina, the third team chose "Team B" with Shimazaki Haruka, the fourth team chose "Team 4" with their leader Shimada Haruka and the fifth team chose "Team 8" with Oba Mina.
The teacher then realized that the teams, if combined, would spell "AKB48", one of the most popular girl groups in Japan. She then asked why? Then they all replied "We're fans of them." The teacher just smiled and shrugged the question.
(Please think of the leaders as ordinary people and not a part of AKB48, thank you)
In the middle of the game, it was a heated battle between Team K and Team B, with the score of 24-23, Team K is leading. Jurina's teammate served the ball, Paruru's teammate received it, then Jurina received the ball, but Paruru was ready for it, so she spiked the ball hard to earn a point and deuce the game, but Jurina didn't expect it to be returned quickly so the ball hit her face. Jurina fell to the ground, and then the teacher approached them, together with other students.
"I'm sorry, I didn't mean to hit the ball to your face, I just...I...I'm really sorry." Paruru said as she is really sorry and doesn't know what to do.
"It's okay, I'm fine, it's not your fault, it's mine, we’re having a game, I should have been more attentive." Jurina said as she stood up to a sitting position.
"Are you hurt anywhere?" The teacher asked.
"I'm fine, really." Jurina said as she is now in a standing position.
"Are you sure? Do you want to go to the clinic? I could accompany you." Paruru asked.
"No, I'm fine, I swear-" she was cut off. When she suddenly left, something wet came out of her nose. She wiped it with her hand to make sure, but it definitely is blood.
"Ah, no you’re not." Paruru said as she saw Jurina get a nosebleed.
"Shimazaki-san, could you please accompany Matsui-san to the clinic, and explain what happened to the doctor/nurse?" The teacher asked.
"Yes ma'am." Paruru said as she helped Jurina walk to the clinic.
"Okay class, back to the game, and please if you're to spike, please check if you won't hit anybody, and if you're to receive please be more attentive." The teacher announced as the class get back to the game.
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"Ohayogozaimasu" Students, especially the male, greeted Yuki as she entered the school grounds and made her way to the clinic. (Ohayogozaimasu = Good morning)
"Ohayogozaimasu" She replies them with a smile.
"Hey, don't you think Yuki-sensei looks lovely as always?" Murmurs a student with another.
"Yeah, that's why I envy Mayu-sensei, he's always with her, how I wish I could be him." replied the other.
"Yeah, I know what you mean, me too." The other one said. Both of them seem to be day dreaming.
"Ohayogozaimasu." Yuki said as she reached the clinic and opened the door. "Mayu-sensei."
"Ah, Yukirin, ohayo." Said Mayu, who is most probably the doctor. (The school is very prestigious, that they even have a doctor, some school doesn't, only nurses.)
Their work is both easy and difficult, easy because, it's not every day that there is a big accident or illness the students here have. This is a prestigious school so almost everyone here is very responsible and healthy so it's very easy. But it could also be difficult, only in some cases like a sudden illness or an unexpected accident, which is not very common.
After a few minutes.
'Sigh...' Yuki's worries about her brother are showing through her sighs.
"In the last minutes, you've sighed for the nth time." Mayu said as he noticed Yuki's worries. "Is there something that's troubling you?" He asked.
"Is it that obvious?" Yuki replied with a question.
"Well, you did sigh for...uhmm...1,2,3...I don't know, I lost count already." Mayu replied.
"I'm sorry, It's just...I'm worrying too much." Yuki said.
"What is it about? Maybe I could help?" Mayu asked. "You know I'm also a qualified counselor."
"Thank you, Mayu-sensei." She said as she smiles at him. "It's just...It's about my brother..."
"Oh it's not about love, did you know that 80% of a time girl's troubles are about love." Mayu said.
"Well, actually, it is, you see my brother he just broke-up with his boyfriend." Yuki said.
"Oh, and I stand corrected, it's not just girl's, apparently girl's at heart also." Mayu said
*Knock* *Knock*
Their talk was interrupted by the knock.
*Door opens*
"Is the doctor in?" One of the two students asked.
"Yes! I'm here." Mayu said as he approached the students.
"Uhm, I accidentally hit her while playing volleyball." She said as Mayu helped her move the injured to the bed.
"Name please?" Yuki asked while holding a paper for the records, after they laid the injured person on the bed.
"I'm Shimazaki Haruka and she's Matsui Jurina." The student said.
"Well, Shimazaki-san, why don't you go back to your class, I can assure you that Matsui-san is fine and she just fainted from exhaustion and a little concussion. She’ll be ok after a good rest." Mayu said after he checked on Jurina's state.
"Yes, Thank you, I'll take my leave then." Paruru replied as she walked out of the clinic.
"What a nice friend." Yuki commented on Paruru.
"Yeah, she is." Mayu agreed. "Well then, shall we monitor her while she sleeps? There might be other injuries."
"Yes, Mayu-sensei." Yuki replied.
After a few hours...
Jurina woke up. Waking up in a totally different environment made her uneasy. This would be the very first time she had gone to the clinic. The very first time she was knocked out. The very first time she fainted.
"Oh, I'm glad you're awake." A lady said to her, she was wearing a nurse's outfit, so she is most probably the nurse.
"Oh, how are you feeling?” A guy beside the nurse said, he was wearing a lab coat and he has glasses, most probably the doctor.
"I'm fine." Jurina replied.
"Matsui-san, it's your first time here right?" The doctor said. "I'm Watanabe Mayu, the doctor and this is Kashiwagi Yuki, the nurse."
"I'm Matsui Jurina." She replied.
"Umm...Yes, we know, it's on your record." Mayu said.
"Ah! Yes, you already said my name." Jurina replied. "Sorry."
"You don't really need to say sorry though." Mayu said. "Anyway, Yukirin, could you check her temperature, and see if her fever is gone."
"I have a fever?" Jurina asked.
"Well, apparently you do, I think it's due to fatigue, you forced yourself too much. That's the only reason you end up getting hit and fainted." Mayu explained. "From your records, you are a very athletic girl, but if you push yourself too hard, you might fall and collapse, so please be careful next time."
Jurina nodded and let Yuki check her temperature, through a thermometer.
"Well, Matsui-san, you're fever's all gone now." Yuki said after she took the thermometer and check it.
"Umm...could I go back to class now?" Jurina asked.
"Since you're fine and your fevers gone, it looks like your free to go now, but remember to not force yourself, especially today because your fever might relapse and we don't want that, do we?" Mayu said as Jurina got ready to go.
"Yes, thank you very much." Jurina said as she bowed to thank the two.
"Take care." Both Mayu and Yuki said as Jurina got out of the clinic.
"So...about your brother..."Mayu started.
Yuki shook her head. "Let's not talk about that anymore. Having a patient lifts my spirit, so let's not bring it back down." She said as she stretches her arms.
Mayu just shrug his shoulders.
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After a few hours the class has already ended and so is the teachers' working hours. Yuki has now returned home after work and decided to do some chores. She first decided to do the laundry, she headed to Riku's room to get his laundry, then Sae's and lastly hers. She was arranging the dirty clothes in order and checking the pockets if there's something in it, when she saw a rectangular box in one of Riku's jacket pockets. 'Looks like a gift, I'll give this to him later, when he gets home.' Yuki thought as she shoved the gift into her pocket and continued on the laundry. After finishing the laundry, she then went to cooking as it's about time for dinner and about time for her brother and cousin to get home.
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"Yesterday didn't go well as we have expected, I never thought that we would end up being wet. I'm sorry." Ren apologized for the much unexpected shower they had at their previous date at the restaurant.
"You don't really need to say sorry, and except for the sudden shower, it was a pretty good night, thank you." Yuko replied. 'Actually it's a good thing that that happened, I don't know where I've put it, but the necklace that I bought was missing, I remember it's still with me when I went to the comfort room, but after the catastrophe of the sprinklers, when we were about to go home, I opened my bag, it's already gone. And Ren must have forgotten about it.' Yuko recalled what happened at their dinner. 'I was so sure I've put it in my bag.'
Ren pulled up his car in front of Yuko's apartment. He quickly got out of the car so that he could be a gentleman and open Yuko's door.
"Thank you." Yuko said as she got out of the car.
"No need to thank me, I wanted to do it." Ren said as he gave Yuko a sweet smile and a wink.
"Do you want to come inside and have coffee, before you drive home?" Yuko asked, concerned about Ren falling asleep while driving.
But Ren, knowing that they still need to work early tomorrow, refused the offer, saying "As much as I love spending time with you, I don't need the coffee." Ren replied. Yuko, confused, just tilted her head. "Just by seeing you, my energy is fully restored. But if you add a power hug, and a power kiss, I would feel like nothing can make me feel tired."
Yuko blushed at how sweet her boyfriend is, but although embarrassed, she gave Ren a power hug, and a matching power kiss, that made Ren extremely energized. And with that, Ren was completely energized ready to drive home.
"Drive safe." Yuko said as Ren opened the driver's door.
"I will." Ren replied and waved his hand.
He then got inside the car, started the engine and then he looked again at Yuko and smiled at her before he drove. Yuko just keeps on waving her hand as the car drove away until it was not be able to see again.
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I sigh as I arrived at my home, how I wish that Yuko would be the one to greet me after a day of work, be the one to welcome me home together with our kids, and be the one
who would always be by my side. If only I had proposed to her, if things just go like the way I wanted it. 'Sigh' No use of thinking about it now, I should just forget about it and plan another proposal.
As I step in our porch I could hear the television running, I opened the front door but there is something blocking me from fully opening it, so I made my way inside through a half opened door. As I enter the house, I found some empty bottles of alcohol scattered in the hallway, it's also the one blocking the door. I followed the bottles into the living room to see my father, holding an almost empty bottle, sitting in the sofa, watching the television. As I saw the show in the TV, I immediately deducted that my father's sleeping, because he doesn't like that show.
"Tadaima!" I softly said to avoid waking my father up.(I'm home)
"Ah, Onīchan, Okaeri!" My sister replied as she walked down the stairs. (Onīchan = Brother; Okaeri = Welcome home)
"Okāsan, doko?" I asked. (Asking where is their mother)
"She's upstairs, in her room." She replied.
"They did it again, didn't they?" I asked fully aware of what had happened earlier.
"Yes, they did." She replied.
"What is it about this time?" I asked.
“Otōsan asked for money, but Okāsan didn't give him any, knowing that he'll just spend it in alcohol, so they fought, again."(Otōsan = Father; Okāsan = Mother)
"Okay, I'll take care of the mess here, you go ahead and rest, you still have school tomorrow." Ren said as he pat his sister’s head.
"Hai, Oyasumi, Onīchan." She said as she got up the stairs again. (Oyasumi = Good night)
"Oyasumi." I replied before she closed her door.
After my conversation with my sister, I switched off the TV and I arranged the empty bottles and put them in a sack.
“So, you’re already here.” I was surprised when my previously asleep father talked, obviously awakened.
“Ah, Otōsan, Konbanwa.” I replied turning around to face him. (Konbanwa = Good evening)
“Give me money.” He said after he drank the remaining fluids in the bottle in his left hand and opens the palms of his right to reach what he desired.
“Gomen.” I said as I already know why he wants the money for, obviously for alcohol, and bowed down to him. ‘He already consumed so much, and still wanting more.’ I should make up some kind of excuse. “I don’t have money with me now.” (Gomen = Sorry)
“Ehhh?!?! Don’t you have a job? And that so called ‘boyfriend’ of yours?” He asked, emphasizing on the word boyfriend.
“Please don’t treat him like that.” I said, a little pissed.
“Why? Don’t you also treat him like that?” He said. “Isn't it the only reason why you are with him for that reason? For Money?”
‘You’re wrong!’ I really wanted to shout at him, to punch him, but I can’t. ‘You’re the main reason why.’
“What’s with the pissed expression?” He asked as he saw. “Want to punch me? Huh? You want to?” he asked as he leaned a little and grant an entry to my fist and his jaw.
I controlled myself, although I really wanted to punch him. But he noticed that I was controlling myself and really wanted to punch him, so he punched my instead right in the stomach, that made me crouch and hold my stomach ‘It really hurts’ as the pain gradually loosens I was able to get back to my feet but another punch went straight to my face, and made me fall to the ground.
“*Sigh* Why is my son so weak?” He said as he turned his back on me, “Well, you’re not really my son though.” And walk out the house. I just shrug his statement as I know that he’s just drunk and doesn't know what he’s talking about.
I used all my strength left to stand up and get an ice in the fridge for a cold compress on my face, which would definitely turn in to a black eye. ‘I can’t face Yuko tomorrow.’
After I regained a little of my strength back, my face and stomach still hurting, I went up to my mother’s room and sit beside her bed. As I sit there, I noticed that she wasn't sleeping and she was crying.
“Gomen, Okāsan, I wasn't here earlier to protect you.” I said as a tear left my eye.
She sat up and hugged me tight, and I hugged her back.
“How’s Yuko doing?” She asked as we are still hugging each other, not letting go.
“She’s fine.” I said. My mother is the only one that knows that I broke up with Riku and that I’m with Yuko. If ever my father knows about this, he would beat me up, until I get back together with him. He was the only reason why I dated Riku, but as I gradually became close to him, I know deep inside me that cares about him, I do like him, but I love Yuko more.
“How was your proposal?” She asked.
“It was a failure, but I won’t give up.” I replied.
“Hey, Okāsan, if ever Yuko did agree to marry me and we were married, I want you, and Imōto, to live with me.” I said as I face my mother, for her to know that I’m serious. (Imōto = Younger Sister)
“We are just going to be a bother to you and Yuko as a married couple, and we won’t want that.” She said.
“No, you won’t.” I said, “Never!”
“But, as you and Yuko will be, I am married with your Father, my husband.” She said.
“But, he doesn't treat you like family.” I said.
“But I know, deep inside his heart he is still the person I loved, the person I'm married to and the person who became your father. I believe in him that one day, he will change.” She said.
“Do you really think so?” I asked.
“I know.” She said.
“I hope you’re right then.” I said as I smiled at her. “You should rest now.” I helped her back to bed.
“Oyasumi.” She said as she readied to sleep.
“Oyasumi.” I said as I turned the lights off and closed her door. And then I proceed to rest.
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"Can I go back to the car now?" Riku asked as he was in shock and dumbfounded at the scene they just saw, still in the parking lot, a few meters away the bank where Atsuko is working at.
The other three just nodded as they don't know what to say or do in this kind of situation. As Riku got inside the car, the group just stared at him worriedly.
"Seeing Riku like this, I can't help but be sad for him." Kai said. "I don't want to see him like this."
"We all do, Kai." Mariko replied.
"Well, at times like this, Kai, there's only one thing to do." Kuu said as a matter of fact.
"What is it?" Kai asked, Mariko turned to Kuu, as she also wants to know.
"Leave it to the great Mariko sama!" Kuu said as he grabs Kai's hand ready to drag him.
"Ehhh! Why me?!?!" Mariko asked, obviously shock at Kuu's answer.
"Kai, c'mon, let's go get Acchan." Kuu said as he dragged Kai and runs towards the entrance, ignoring Mariko.
"Waittt!" Mariko shout at the two as they were now out of reach. 'What should I do?' she asked herself as she looked back to Riku and smiled sheepishly. And Riku tilted his head innocently as he watched them.
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"Are you sure about letting Mariko handle Riku?" Kai asked as they were near the building.
"Nope." Kuu said still dragging Kai.
"Ehh!" Kai said as he swatted Kuu's hand that's dragging him. "Then why?"
"I just thought that between the three of us, Mariko's the one who had the better chance to comfort and make him laugh." Kuu explained. "Remember when we were still kids."
***Flashback***
Kai, Kuu, Riku and Mariko are in their childhood days and were playing at the near playground, siting in the box of sand.
"Hey guys, look at that." Kuu said as he point to a group of children playing with their bikes.
"Looks like fun." Kai said. "Let's go get ours."
"Yeah, Let's!" Kuu replied.
As they were about to stand and go. They saw Riku was sad and stayed siting.
"What's wrong, Riku?" Mariko asked.
"Uhmmm...Sorry, but I can't go, I don't have a bike..." He said but was cut-off.
"That's not a problem. I have two bikes, the other one is my brother's. I'm sure he wouldn't mind if you use it." Kai said cutting Riku off.
"Thanks...but I also can't ride one." Riku continued and frowned.
"Don't be sad, Riku." Mariko said and seated beside him.
"I'm sorry." Riku apologized and bowed, as if the sand below him are the most interesting things right now.
"You don't need to say sorry." Mariko said as she held his chin and turned it up to face her.
"But, I'm ruining your fun." He replied, breaking away from Mariko's hand to avoid the gaze.
"No, you’re not." She said reassuring Riku. "Tell you what, how about I teach you, so you could ride one?"
"But it won't be fun, teaching me." Riku said still avoiding their gaze.
"Who said that it won't?" Mariko asked, Riku then turned and face her.
"But..." he said but was cut-off.
"But nothing." Mariko said.
"Bu--" Riku was about to say something but was cut-off by Mariko's hand, covering his mouth.
Riku then realize that Mariko won't accept a no as an answer, so he gave up and put his hand on Mariko's hand, covering his mouth, to uncover his mouth.
"Thanks Marichan." He said smiling.
"No problem, but in return, if you have learned ridding the bike, I want you to give me a ride through town.” She said.
"Okay, but don't you already know to ride one?" He asked.
"Yes!" Mariko answered.
"So, Why...?" He asked.
"It's much more fun if you're not the one pedaling it." Mariko said.
"Okay, Thanks again Marichan." He said as he stood up the sand box but not before placing a kiss in Mariko's cheeks. That made Mariko dumbfounded and her face was blushing so hard.
"Mariko?" Kai asked as he waved his hand in front of Mariko's face, but she ignored it, more like she didn't heard it, touched her cheek.
"Mariko?" it was Kuu's turn to call Mariko, he put both his hands in her shoulders and shook her back and forth, but she's still in her dreamland as she smiled.
"Eh, Marichan?" It was now Riku, who is just beside Mariko, turn to call her, as he sat back again and put his right hand on Mariko's left shoulder. This time, Mariko heard him and faced him, their faces were just inches apart.
"Daijobu ka?" Riku asked. (Are you okay?)
"D-Daijo-bu d-desu." Mariko stuttered. (I'm okay.)
"Let's go?" Riku said as he stood up again and offered his hand for Mariko.
"Hai!" Mariko said as she reached for Riku's hand and stood up. (Yes!)
Then the other two who were watching the scene had a conversation to themselves.
"So...we're being ignored then?" Kuu asked Kai and turned to him.
"Yes...We are definitely, being ignored." Kai replied.
This is one of the many proofs that Mariko is one of the few people that could comfort and cheer Riku up. But this is also a start and proof that Mariko has feeling for him.
***End of Flashback***
"You're right, as much as I don't want to admit it, she's much more effective than the both of us." Kai agreed.
"Yeah, she is, isn't she?" Kuu said as he again reached for Kai's hand and got ready to drag him.
"But...Are you sure?" Kai asked. "About leaving the two of them together?"
The question of Kai made Kuu avoid eye contact. 'Does Kai know?' he thought as he glanced at Kai, who looks like he knows something and waiting patiently for an answer.
"What are you talking about?" Kuu asked still avoiding Kai's eyes.
"You tell me?" Kai answered with another question.
'No, he doesn't.' Kuu thought as he assured himself.
"It's for the best." Kuu said as he finally faced Kai.
"You sure?" Kai again asked that made Kuu, again, avoid eye contact.
'Does he?' Kuu thought.
"And besides, and if we were there, we would just be ignored like most of the time." Kuu said. "So come on, let's go get Acchan." as he drag him again.
'No, he doesn't know.' Kuu thought. 'I hope.'
Kai just let Kuu drag him as he starred at Kuu's back worriedly. 'I am right, Love really hurts.' he thought as he restated what he said when they saw Ren together with a girl. (Last part of Chapter 4)
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Mariko sighed and think of a way to cheer Riku up as she headed back to the car. 'What should I do?' she asked herself again as she was nearing the car's door. 'I hate those two.' She made a mental note for later, as she grabbed the handle of the door and opened it. She sat the driver's seat beside her was Riku who looks like ready to cry again. A few minutes have passed and no one's breaking the very awkward silence until...
"Uhmm...R-Riku-" Mariko said to break the silence but was cut off.
"Marichan!" Riku said.
"Hai?" Mariko answered.
"Want to go somewhere else?" Riku asked.
"Sure! Where to?" Mariko asked.
"I don't know, where do you want to go?" Riku asked.
"Uhhmm..." Mariko's thinking of any place that would suit to cheer Riku up.
"I just want to leave this place." Riku said.
As Mariko heard what Riku said she immediately started the engine and drove out as quickly as possible. After a few minutes, the Bank was now nowhere to be seen and Mariko's still thinking of a place they might go, that would take the scene they saw earlier out of Riku’s mind. Just as they turned right at a corner, they saw a mini playground, of course it's already night time so children were nowhere to be found there. 'Oh!' A thought ran into Mariko's mind. 'I know a place that would make Riku definitely forget about Ren.' And after a few more minutes, they are now nearing Mariko's choice of place.
"Uhmm...Marichan?" Riku asked.
"Yes?" Mariko responded.
"Where are we supposed to go?" Riku asked as he was a little familiar of the surrounding.
"Hi-mit-su." Mariko said as she gave Riku a wink. Riku just pouted in return. "You'll know when we get there." She continued. (Himtsu = secret)
Riku just shrug his shoulders and turned his attention at the surroundings. He saw a very familiar statue. 'Eh?!?! Isn't that the Moai Statue?' He asked himself. He then turned to Mariko who's smiling. 'It's no use asking her, she wouldn't budge an answer. But...' His trail of thoughts was cut off when he saw their old house, before he and Yuki were orphaned, he then again turned to Mariko who now has a wide smile. 'Masaka?' He thought as he has a huge clue to where Mariko would take him. (Moai Statue, in reference to AKBingo's segment Ikemen Gakuen. Masaka? = Could it be?)
As expected of the great Mariko sama, she was right, as the depressed look on Riku's face turned to an excitement one, when they get near to the place. 'It looks like he already knows.' she thought.
She then took her cell phone in her pocket and handed it to Riku. "Hey, since, I think, you already know where we're going, could you text them, they might get worried to where we are now?" She said as she knows that driving and texting are a bad combination.
"Okay..." Riku replied as he opened the phone and typed the message. "But just to be sure, where are we really going?"
"I won't tell." Mariko said as she focused on the road.
Riku then gave another pout to Mariko. 'So, you still won't tell me, huh?' He said to himself as another thought came to his mind, 'If you won't tell me, I'll make sure you'll regret this.' Now his pout was then turned to a smug look as he type and send the mail. As he returned the phone to Mariko, his expression changed into a nervous one, thinking he might get caught, but as she put it to where it was before, he sighed in relief and smiled as Riku just can't hide his excitement.
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Kai and Kuu entered the premises, but were immediately stopped by the guard.
"Sorry but the bank is now closed." The guard said.
"Uhmmm, No, we aren't customers/clients." Kuu said.
"We're looking for Atsu--" Kai was cut off when he heard someone calling their names.
"Kai? Kuu?" A person inside the bank called, probably the one that they are looking for.
The three, Kai, Kuu and the guard, then turned and looked from where the voice came, as the person drew closer and closer.
"Acchan!" Kuu called.
"Uhmm...Maeda-san? Do you know them?" The guard asked.
"Yes, I know them, they’re with me." Atsuko said. "Could you let them through?"
"Yes, anything for you, Maeda-san." The guard said, obviously has a crush on Atsuko.
"What are you guys doing here? I thought we're going the club?" Atsuko asked.
"Well, you my friend sure took your time, and the club became so crowded that we can't even enjoy our private space." Kuu said as he wrapped an arm on Atsuko's shoulder.
"And what are you talking about? We send you a mail to inform you that we're going to get you." Kai added.
"Ehh, Sorry, I was so busy getting thing done as fast as I can and didn't have time to check my phone. Sorry." Atsuko said as she bowed at the two.
"It's okay, we understand." Kuu said.
"Is there anything we could do to help?" Kai asked. "I mean we're already here and all."
"Thanks, but I'm already finished and about to go when I saw the two of you at the entrance." Atsuko replied.
"So, what are we waiting for then, let's go!" Kuu said.
As they got out of the building and headed to where they parked their car, Kai and Kuu noticed that Riku and Mariko is nowhere there and Mariko's car is also missing.
"Where are they?" Kuu asked as they reached where Mariko's car is supposed to be.
"How are we supposed to kno--" Kai answered but was cut off by his cell phone ringing.
"Oh, it's from Mariko." Kai said as he opened his phone and saw the sender of the mail.
"What does it say?" Atsuko asked leaning over to Kai as he read the content.
"EEHHHH!?!?!?!" Kai was obviously shocked after he read the content of the mail.
It made Atsuko and Kuu look at each other, then, at Kai's shocked expression. Kuu took the phone from Kai's hand, which was quite easy as he's still in a state of shock. Atsuko again leaned over to read the content. As they read the content, both of them were surprised.
"Son-‘na..." Kuu murmured. (No way or Impossible)
"Masaka..." Atsuko uttered. (Could it be or No way)
As the two of them, scratch that, three of them, including a still shocked Kai, read the message.
"...We're...............................
..............................Eloping..."
END of Chapter 5.
Masaka can be used in doubt or suspicion.
Riku used Masaka meaning he has suspicion, while Atsuko used Masaka meaning she has doubt.
And I used Moai Statue there, because I need a somewhat prominent place, and I thought of it, although please don’t think of it as the real one, Riku’s childhood home isn’t near there. hehe
Truth to be told, this is not part of the movie, so I haven’t progressed at all. I’m so slow.
And School start in a few days (2 days to go) so I’m going to be much more slower, and during midterms and finals, I’m going to be extra slow, super slow. Sorry in advance for that.
Although I said Tomochin and Jurina would appear, Jurina only appeared with Mayu and no Tomochin, sorry about that, I promise, next chapter Tomochin would appear, and would have a huge role in Yuko’s life.
Upnext: RikuXYuko (Kojiyuu) arc with a little bit of RikuXMariko (Mariharu) part, I still don’t have any concrete plans for the next chapter just the other 2.
BTW, I’m planning a Part 2 of the OS. I repeat plan, meaning not yet sure, still thinking about it.
If you have any questions, any scenes you didn't understand, feel free to ask a question :)
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I prefer it if you did not make the ending the same as the movie... it would mean that Yuko was going to be with Ren, right?!
I want different ending... just for the surprise.... Make used as much characters as possible..
Yuki was so worried about her brother... And after looking at Riku sad state... she did not want to fall in love at all..
Poor Jurina being smashed on her face by a volley ball... It must be very painful...
Ah... she also had a fever because of fatigue...
Mayu and Yuki worked in the same school... Here Mayu wanted to ease Yuki's worries about Riku but he missed his timing...
Ah... as I thought Ren was just using Riku for money... now that he had more than enough from Riku... he dumped him...
Poor Riku.... for being used all these time and still thought he was spending the money out of his good heart... not because Ren demanded...
If only from the start Ren said that he needed money from Riku and did not want Riku, Riku would just give him a job or something...
Now the one that suffered from this break up was just Riku... Ren would just used his father as his reason to hurt and used Riku...
And also he justified his reason and put an end to everything with Riku by thinking he liked Yuko more so it was fine to break up with Riku.
If only Ren would say the truth... that all this time he was just using Riku for his money and never loved him.. and also he was cheating on him behind his back...
Riku would not be so broken heart like this... he would be angry and demand that Ren gave back all the things he gave... and Riku could move on... be more careful next time.
But Ren said because of religion, he must broke up with Riku... He still wanted to go out of this mess unharmed... without tarnishing his image in other minds...
Cessy10-san... it was hard not to hate Ren... Ren was very selfish...
Sure I sympathized with his family situation.. but it did not give a right to play around with people emotion and also stealing from them.
Poor Riku... needed to meet Ren again... so short after the break up...
Ah... Mariko was able to comfort and made Riku smiled when they were younger so Kuu left everything up to Mariko to comfort Riku now.
Yeah... and it was also the proof of the start of Mariko's crush on Riku... Until now... Poor Mariko... for having one-side love after all the time.
Ah... so Kai had a feeling that Kuu might have feeling for Mariko... but he did not or could not do anything about it... because of Mariko's feeling for Riku
And Kai was scared to fall in love because 'Love is Painful'...
Oh... Atsuko was very popular with guys in her work place... even a bank guard also had a crush on her...
He would not let Kai and Kuu go in... if not for Atsuko's permission.
Mariko was so playful here... so cute... and Riku was also the same... sending a message saying 'We're Eloping' to Kai.
Poor Kuu... he needed to see that... he would have a broken heart after this...
Well for Kai and Atsuko... they would just be shocked... then they would know that they were tricked... when they get over the shock.
What's going to happen with Riku and Mariko...?
What about Yuko and Ren?
How about the rest of the other characters?
Can't wait to see the next
Thank you for the update
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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okay it wont be Jurimayu right? I just want to see Mayuki together :roll:
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Thank you for the update! :D
I like the relationship of Mariko and Riku but I'm into KojiYuu. . . Hehehehe :D
I also want to see the development of Acchan and Kai. . .
I hope to read your next chapter soon! :)
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Yey! an update :)
I like the Mariharu in this chap. Keep it up :D
And I hope there's more to come.
PS: kakaupdate ko lang, mag uupdate ulit ako? hahaha :) uunahin ko muna ung isa ko pang fic.