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Title: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 7: 6/13 The fic is still alive]
Post by: unicorn48 on October 30, 2012, 10:25:53 AM
On Going Stories:

Secret Train of Love Prologue (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34210.msg1112761#msg1112761) | Chapter 1 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34210.msg1114109#msg1114109) | Chapter 2 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34210.msg1114521#msg1114521) | Chapter 3 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34210.msg1114910#msg1114910) | Chapter 4 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34210.msg1117356#msg1117356) | Chapter 5  Part 1 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34210.msg1117928#msg1117928) Part 2 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34210.msg1137073#msg1137073) | Chapter 6 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34210.msg1145246#msg1145246)
It's not coincidence, It's Fate ! Chapter 1 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34229.0) | Chapter 2 Part 1 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34229.msg1114848#msg1114848) Part 2 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34229.msg1115761#msg1115761) | Chapter 3 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34229.msg1117337#msg1117337) | Chapter 4 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34229.msg1119670#msg1119670) | Chapter 5 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34229.msg1126622#msg1126622)

One Shots:

Do You Believe in Unicorns ? (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34210.msg1113232#msg1113232)
Centimeter Too Late (AtsuMina/TakaTomo) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34229.msg1124572#msg1124572)
I Love You (KojiYuu) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34229.msg1126081#msg1126081)

Hello guys ~ :) Two persons will run this thread/stories (Unicorn 4 and Unicorn 8 :shakeit:)/just saying.
We mostly write Unicorn pairings.

We're just a newbie in writing but we're trying our best more likely luck to make an edible writing :nervous. Sorry for the future grammatical errors or not good stories :peace:
So umm.. please help us by doing comments (good or bad) and suggestions !
Sadly we only do requests for our co-unicorns ( ̄ー ̄)
Not to be annoying but... we will need at least 7 comments to post an update. And an update per week eh ? tho it may change.
<- not anymore LOL.
Dozo ~    :peace: :peace: :peace:



Secret Train of Love [Prologue]

Maeda Atsuko sighed as she drove through the Metropolitan express way. It's only a 2 kilometer drive to reach her destination yet it felt so long. She finally made her decision and now, she's planning to straighten things up with the person who ruined her precious life in the most beautiful way she definitely never imagined. She thought of it with a loving and genuine smile.

Suddenly, she heard a familiar tune, it was her cell phone. And with the music that is playing, she could tell that it was her girlfriend, Takahashi Minami.

She reached for her phone and looked at the message.

                                 
Atsuko  ♪

I’m waiting for you at the usual place, be quick! (〃・・〃)

                                          -TKMN-

Guilt ruled over Atsuko's face, her girlfriend is really sweet whenever she's not busy handling the members. Acchan knows that she is the number 1 priority of her girlfriend and she wished that she’ll always be. But she had made her decision, and her bestfriend is right, she must choose.

"Acchan."

Atsuko feigned a smile as she saw the look on Tomochin's face. She tried to ease up the atmosphere that is yet to arise.

"Konnichiwa tomochin, what bro---" Before Acchan could finish her greeting, Tomochin sighed and look at her seriously which made her stop.
"Atsuko, we need to talk"

"That's what we're doing right now don't we?" Atsuko raised an eyebrow, she knows where this 'talk' is heading and she doesn’t want to be on the lower side again.

Without taking any hint from Atsuko, Tomochin made her way into the other girl's couch and seated. Atsuko followed seating behind her.

"Tomochin, an argument with you is not on my list today." Acchan confronted her bestfriend.

“Then you must know what to do!”

“You know how hard it is.” Acchan laughed dryly.

“Just stop it.” Tomochin pleaded.

“But-“

“But you promised.”

Acchan bit her lips with tears forming on her eyes. Tomochin sighed as looked at her best friend, she knows that It’s really hard for her but she can’t just do anything. On the other side, Acchan knows how Tomochin is concerned with the issue that’s why she’s deadly serious about it.

“Honestly, I thought of it more than a hundred times.” Acchan mumbled.

“Choose. Though I know who you would pick” Tomochin looked at her with determined eyes making the word ‘would’ sound as ‘should’.

Breaking their moment, Atsuko’s phone started to ring. She reached for it and answered it.

‘Moshi moshi, atsuko desu’

'Acchan, are you busy? let's meet at the park, i want to talk to you’

Atsuko felt an unecessary happiness upon hearing the caller's voice which made her smile. She could feel Tomochin's knowing glance at her.

'ano.. gomene, i'm quite busy at the moment.'

'at 7 pm ? but you told me you're free today mou ~'

Acchan looked at the clock, it was 6:30 pm then she looked at Tomochin. Acchan knows that she can't refuse the person talking on the other line.

'hai hai, at the usual place okay~'

'aishiteru' Upon saying that, the caller ended the line. She managed a smile and look again at her visitor.

“Atsuko, I think it’s the right time. You know-“

"I know. Tell her I'm sorry"

With Acchan's statement, goose bump ran through Tomochin's body. She knew what Atsuko meant by 'her'. And saying sorry to 'her' is not what Tomochin thought of. 

Tomochin wondered if she should've letted Acchan to live in a deceiving life.

Was it really Acchan ?

or Takamina ?

or herself ?

Atsuko looked at Tomochin with determined eyes.

"Arigatou."


Indeed, it’s the right time to straighten things up. Atsuko was about to reach her phone, when she realized that the stop light was already green and she have no choice but to go. Badly wanting to message the person waiting for her, she multi-tasked.

A white light flashed on her face that blinded her along the impact of the car in front of her. Everything happened so fast.

“Gomene..Minami..." Was all Atsuko said before she laid unconscious.


Meanwhile, A certain Oshima Yuko was standing on her favorite spot on her - no it's 'their' favorite park waiting for someone to come. She too had made her decision, She wants to fix everything to save her relationship with the person she loved the most - which she have only realized now even if it means hurting the person she thought she love. She regretted every decision she made, in the past. 

♪    One two three fooo ~ I want you ~    ♪

Yuko felt something bad about this call; she answered it with her wide eyes open as she dropped into her knees.

END of PROLOGUE



Thanks for reading  :love: :heart:

So guys... how was it ?  Chapter 1 to be posted.. soon   :bleed eyes::
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Prologue]
Post by: sakura_drop_ on October 30, 2012, 10:36:45 AM
OMG...

So it's a love quadruple... Or more like this...

Bakamina -> <- Acchan -> <- Yuko-sama -> <- NyanNyan

OMG...

And Acchan was hit by a car  :panic: :panic: :panic:

Please let her be safe!!

I'll be waiting for your update!!
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Prologue]
Post by: Mai-chan on October 30, 2012, 10:45:18 AM
Welcome to fan fic world Unicorn48! :welcome:

 to the both of you goodluck in making stories  :)

I'll be waiting for the next update and also to your future works!

to the both of you goodluck and have fun writing stories :)
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Prologue]
Post by: unicorn48 on October 30, 2012, 10:51:20 AM
@Sakura_drop

First comment omggggggg ~  :heart: i thought no one would comment.  :cry:
hmmm.. let's see if your findings are right in the next chapters  :lol:

@Mai-chan
Thank you for the welcome and comment  :heart:


I don't really know what to say but i want to reply on all the comments i sound like a hopeful noob writer orz
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Prologue]
Post by: haruhi16 on October 30, 2012, 11:12:23 AM
I want more!Please update asap!  :thumbsup
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Prologue]
Post by: Tam_atsu on October 30, 2012, 11:19:04 AM
I saw haruhi16-san and rukaeru san commented on this fic, so i read it too :)
Coz both of them are my favorite writers :))
and as i read it, i think this will be a great fic so please continue it  :thumbsup
I'll wait for the next update :) goodluck!  :thumbsup :twothumbs
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Prologue]
Post by: arrow27 on October 30, 2012, 12:00:45 PM
Woah its really interesting so far :D So acchan was supposed to make a decision between Minami and Yuko and was heading to yuko :O Poor minami :( But atsuko got hit by a car O_O hope she's allright! Looking forward to your next update :)
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Prologue]
Post by: dirtydeeds on October 30, 2012, 12:08:35 PM
so many atsuyuu these days, not that I'm complaining tho  :cathappy:

interesting plot, nicely written too. please continue  :bow:
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Prologue]
Post by: unicorn48 on October 30, 2012, 12:47:42 PM
thanks for the comments guys  :cry: we'll definitely do our best to finish this fanfic  :peace: please wait for our update  :deco:
you guys are the best  :cry:
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Do you believe in Unicorns? [One Shot] UPDATE !!
Post by: unicorn48 on November 02, 2012, 10:42:15 AM
And we're back for chapter 1  :hee:
There will be no 'week rule' because we plan to hopefully end this on March this will be a loooooooooooong fic  :glasses:

And before i forget, we will be running the POV of this story into three: Third person and two First Person: Takamina and ??)

Dozo ~  :peace:



Secret Train of Love [Chapter 1]

Takamina's POV

I have never imagined that things would go this way. she told me that everything will be fine. I believed in her, so why did it turned out like this?

It was 7 in the evening when Yuko called me - crying. She said that Acchan had an accident, Acchan was driving in the Metropolitan Expressway to meet me. Every since Acchan told me she'll get a license, i know it was a bad idea. I know her well and her clumsiness.

Just where is that damn hospital? I've been running for ages !

I reached out for my phone to get new updates about Acchan, but great ! I left it in our apartment. Well, not 'our' anymore since she stopped living with me due to 'some factors' and instead lived with her bffs, Harugon and Yuko. But Hey ! Aren't I her bff too? - That's what the case before, but now we're something more. Acchan and I have been dating - 4 years already.

Damn ! Just what am i thinking? It's not the time to think about stuffs like this or maybe i just need some distraction? Oh wait, why am i even running, i could've gotten a cab !!!

'Baka Baka Baka!!!' I hitted my head lightly for my idiocy. I was panting very hard when i realized i was already here.

My Heart beated fast. I tried to distract myself again with random thoughts but i failed. I went to the attendant to confirm Atsuko's number. Like any other Hospitals, well, hospitals that i know of, it's eerily quiet here which added to my nervousness.

I'm already at the front of Atsuko's room. There's only a person or two in the hallway.

Where  are the others?

Tears formed in my eyes. I wiped it with my sleeve but it's no use. It continued to fall. 'scenarios' started to form in my head.

What if Acchan is in a critical condition?

What if i won't be able to see her smile again ?

rather...

Can i face her ?

I felt a hand caressed my back. It has the same warmth as Atsuko's. For that second, my worries faded. I looked back to see who it was.

"Tomochin..."

In my voice i know disappointment escaped. But disappoinment in what? Is it with the accident or with the matters in my heart?

"Minami..."

She looked at me for a second. I cleared my throat. There are many things that i want to ask but for some reason i can't put it to words.

As if Tomochin know what's on my mind, she gave me the answer i was looking for.

"She's okay."

I cried. The feelings and worries i have been hiding all this time went out bursting. I think i really love Atsuko.

If there is someone who knows me the most - next to Acchan, it was her. Tomochin was always there for me. She is my bestfriend and Acchan's too. Some may think of her as bitchy, but the truth is she's a good person and a friend. The three of us have been together for six years, since the start of AKB . It's not really about being the 1st gen members, rather, there is something that linked us together. Tomochin is always ther for me and Acchan. It's thanks to her that Acchan and I are dating.
Tomochin is a friend i'll never want to loose.

"Ikou?" Tomochin asked. It has been 20 mins since i sitted at the chairless hallway. I think I can face Acchan now.

I opened the door. Atsuko's room is like a house, everything's there. A mini TV, couch, ref and table. Miichan and Mariko were there, the room is filled with silence. The two of them looked up at us and gave a mini smile.

"you're late general manager" Mariko said trying to start a conversation. Like any normal day, we have already been teasing each other. Or mostly, Mariko teasing me.

"i forgot to take a cab, looks like i panicked when Yuko suddenly called me." i scratched my head admitting my idiocy.

Tomochin and I seated at the couch facing the other two. I looked at Acchan who was sleeping peacefully, she looks okay except for the bondage in her head and the fact that she's sleeping. I want to go beside her but i think it's not that time for it yet.

“Looks like Yuko is ahead of us in all the things, especially when Acchan graduated.” Mariko joked.

“Actually, I called Yuko... after Aki-P called me.” Tomochin said.

“Yeah, Thanks to Yuko or else i would still be in the restaurant waiting for Acchan to come.” I said sadly, faking a smile.

“Why didn’t you contact me Tomochin ?” I asked.

“I forgot.” She plainly answered which made me confused. I don’t mean that Yuko is not the best choice to call surely, panicking and worrying will lead to confusion.   

“What’s Acchan’s condition by the way?” I tried to change the subject.

"the doctor said she'll wake up in 24 hours." Miichan said as she saw me looking at Acchan. I turned my head at her, sadness and fear is all over her face, but still , she's thinking positively, something i can't do.

"the accident didn't damaged her greatly, only some bruises and all but it got her unconscious.” Mariko added.

“Guys, Thanks for being here for Acchan. You should go to rest, I’ll take in charge here.” I smiled at them. “It’s better if i’m the only one absent tomorrow, right?”

“Are you sure takamina ?” Tomochin asked. “I could stay with you, it’s my day-off tomorrow anyway.”

I looked at Tomochin, she’s sincere and i’m glad she wants to stay with me here, but i don’t want to ruin her day-off. It’s not something an AKB member often gets.

“me too.” Miichan said, “I want to stay”

“You’re not the only one concerned for Acchan General Manager!” Mariko added.

It's really good of them but ...

"Miichan, Mariko, Tomochin... I'm sorry but.."

"How 'bout Takamina and i will just update you about Acchan ?" Tomochin said.

"sou," I nodded. wait, eh ?!

 I can see Mariko raise an eyebrow.

"It's my day-off tomorrow and i wouldn't watching my bestfriend." I think Tomochin stressed out the word bestfriend for some purposes but maybe it was just my imagination.

 "You two needs to attend a press conference tomorrow right? And you can also tell others about Acchan's condition" Tomochin added.

"Ah, right ! good thing you reminded me,." Mariko said.

"You'll model for Mariko's latest fashion design right miichan ?" Tomochin asked, making a double kill.

"just be sure you don't want Takamina all to yourself." Miichan said. Tomochin laughed dryly.

What does she mean? Well, since it's miichan she must be joking.

After that, Mariko and Miichan waved their good byes. I went with them to the elevator as a sign of courteousness, then i went back to Acchan's room.

Tomochin was sitting on the couch, watching Acchan earnestly, I was too engrossed by the moment that i watched the two together. The thing is, Tomochin saw me. It felt odd on my case because i look like a creeper.

"Tomochin, thank you for convincing them." I said blushing. One of her talents is convincing people, i wish i had one too.

"No problem ~" Tomochin smiled.

"Now you can go ho-"

"So, what do you want for dinner Minami ?" She grinned.

With that being said, i know i can't convince her to go home, really, It's going to be a long night.

END



We hope you won't mind the drama for awhile because it will go on for like 5 chapters more before we go to the actual story  8)2
Also ~ before we post the 2nd Chapter, we will be posting more of our short stories and one shots, wait for it  :cow:





Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 1] UPDATE !! 11/02/12
Post by: sakura_drop_ on November 02, 2012, 11:13:50 AM
So Acchan was going to Yuko-sama, and Yuko-sama thought she was going to Bakamina... And Tomochin really has feelings for Bakamina, and that Bakamina is so dense, she's not noticing it...

I wonder if Acchan wakes up with her memories, or without. And who is she going to choose?...

I hope it's Yuko-sama, then Tomochin could open up to Bakamina  :wub:

I'll be waiting for your one sots, and then the next chapter of this story!!  :bow:


EDIT. I'm first again!!! XD
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 1] UPDATE !! 11/02/12
Post by: unicorn48 on November 02, 2012, 11:32:44 AM
@sakura_drop_ yey ~ thanks for commenting again  :heart: :heart: :heart: it would be good if it really turned out that way but... who knows ? hehe  :cathappy:  we will be posting another story tomorrow, net is crappy  :doh: thank you again ~   :heart:
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 1] UPDATE !! 11/02/12
Post by: arrow27 on November 02, 2012, 10:09:15 PM
Thanks for the update :D really loving it so far :) Glad acchan is ok! Wow looks like things are going to get complicated, can't wait to see what happens! Minami don't give up!! Tomochin is sweet tho :)
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 1] UPDATE !! 11/02/12
Post by: unicorn48 on November 03, 2012, 03:22:29 AM
@arrow27 thank you for reading and loving it so far  :love:  :heart: comments and readers are what makes the writers update !  :luvluv2:
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 1] UPDATE !! 11/02/12
Post by: saeyukilover on November 03, 2012, 04:07:58 AM
5 chapters of drama..... i'm not sure if i can handle that but ur the writer so ill just wait for the update:)

 :twothumbs
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 1] UPDATE !! 11/02/12
Post by: unicorn48 on November 03, 2012, 11:36:30 AM
@saeyukilover hehe , don't worry it will be fuuuuull of OTP moments after that :P thanks for reading  :deco:
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 1] UPDATE !! 11/02/12
Post by: unicorn48 on November 03, 2012, 11:45:51 AM
Horray for Chapter 2  :onioncheer: This will be a somewhat Kojiyuu chapter ~ or just an overview on what is happening on them ?? Heehee don't kill us please. Btw, we made a separate thread to put our other stories + one shots because this thread will be solely for our Main fic : Secret Train of Love.

Dozo ~  :peace:



Secret Train of Love [Chapter 2]
Yuko Oshima's POV

This won't take long, I promised myself to just take a peek then go home.

I looked at Acchan whose sleeping peacefuly from the glass window of the door. From here  I can see Acchan clearly, with the bruises and damage the accident gave to her. I can't deny the fact that despite the accident, Acchan still looked beautiful. Atleast, in my eyes.

I'm not cheating on my girlfriend just because I thought Acchan was beautiful okay.

Nyan Nyan is beautiful too, more beautiful than Acchan. I laughed at the mere thought.

Why is there no one in the room except for Acchan? I realized that Takamina was not in the room. She should be here right? I know I called her.

"Wah ~" I almost jumped out of surprise when i felt a tap on my shoulder. I putted my hand on my chest, my heart is beating fast.

"It's just me Yuko."

I looked at her,

"Yeah, so please don't scare me like that." I smiled at her, still in shock of what happened.

"One does not simply think while staring at a beautiful girl," Tomochin joked so I gave her another smile. It was really my fault while I was surprised. I shouldn't have been thinking deeply.

"She will be okay, don't worry." Tomochin said as she tapped my shoulder again, but this time I was not surprised anymore.

"Thanks." I suddenly hugged her. Tomochin's words are so reassuring that her, telling me that Acchan will be okay, lifted half of the burdens I have as of now, in a short while I broke it.

"No work tomorrow?" I asked , it will be really good of Tomochin if she stayed up all night here just to stay and look at Acchan especially if she have a work the other day.

"Day-off... you know, that once in a lifetime experience."

We both laughed. Surely, day-offs in AKB is rare especially if you're in the senbatsu, if it's not matters with AKB, then the actress/modeling life is also there.

I sat at the chairless hallway, Tomochin followed. It's hard to chat while standing you know.

"By the way, where's the midget?" I asked again. It has been a mystery to me since I didn't see Takamina at the room.

"She's at the cafeteria eating." Tomochin answered.

"How is she?"

"Are you sure you're asking me that?" She answered. I could sense that she has been stopping herself from being angry at me the moment I asked about Takamina.

"Minami... she's still smiling but I know she's crying inside." Tomochin said.

"I'm sorry." It was all I can say. Then I stood up and brushed the dust in my pants. I helped Tomochin stand up, good thing she didn't swoosh me off.

"I guess it's time to go. Thank you, really." I looked at Tomochin and smiled then peeked at the door's window glass, taking my last look on Acchan for the day.

"You won't stay?" She asked but I know her question is just for formality.

"No, not really. It's quite late and I promised my girlfriend to go home early." I answered. I can see her in face that she was surprised.

"I'll go back tomorrow with Nyan Nyan along the others. Please take care and Acchan too." I bowed slightly then walked away. I can hear the door creaked so Tomochin must have entered the room.

As I walked in the hospital's hallway, I reminded myself to buy a cake on my way home later for her girlfriend as a compensation for going home late and to Acchan for tomorrow.

I looked at my phone, No new message from Haruna. Before, if I’m late, I’ll receive a million of message from her asking where I am that I need to silent my phone. Now, a single message of concern from her would be a miracle.

I reached the hospital's exit. Good thing there's still a cab or else I’ll have to walk. I entered it and told the driver that I will have a mini-stop at the nearest Unicornatious cake shop.

After some minutes, the taxi stopped, we have already reached the cake shop. I signaled the cab to wait for me.

"Good evening, ma'am" the clerk said, I just smiled at her.

The cake shop displayed many cakes in different sizes and flavors. I quickly spotted a strawberry cake, Haruna will surely love that, strawberry cake is our favorite.

"I'll take that one" I pointed at the strawberry cake, now my only problem is the cake for Acchan.

"and..." This is hard. I can't pick a cake for Acchan, maybe the clerk can help me.

"Umm.. can you pick a cake for me ?"

"okay ma'am but i don't promise you to like this."

"It's your reputation we're talking about." I joked.

As the clerk putted the cake of his choice in the box, i looked at the cab outside making sure it didn't left me. Apparently, i wasn't able to see what he cake he putted inside. I'll just take a peak later.

"That would be Y 2000 ma'am."

I get the box then gave the money and headed back to the cab.

"gomenasai," I told the driver. I think he didn't mind waiting at all because he'll charge me large for sure.

Today is a tiring day. I closed my eyes for a second and when I opened it I’m almost at my destination. I paid the driver with tip and went out the cab.
The lights are still open?

I'm at the point of pushing the doorbell when I stopped thinking that Nyan Nyan must be sleeping and I might disturb her sleep. I get my keys instead and opened the door.

Upon entering the room, the first thing I saw was Haruna sleeping. Did she wait for me? As I looked at her closely, she's hugging the big squirrel shaped pillow I gave her on our first anniversary. Seeing her do this makes my heart smile.

I get a blanket and putted it to her comfortably.

I went to the kitchen to put the cakes on the refrigerator I opened the first box, It's the strawberry cake, Nyan Nyan and I could eat for breakfast. Then i opened the other cake's box, the clerk gave me another strawberry cake.

END



so... how was it  :nervous
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 2] (Kojiyuu) UPDATE !! 11/03/12
Post by: sakura_drop_ on November 03, 2012, 11:51:38 AM
First yet again!!

I have a smell for Yuko-sama stories hehe XD

Ah, I'ma bit confused about her feelings, so I'll be waiting for more updates from you!!

Though I'll be home just on Sunday evening...

Thank you for this update  :bow:
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 2] (Kojiyuu) UPDATE !! 11/03/12
Post by: unicorn48 on November 03, 2012, 12:47:25 PM
@sakura_drop_ LOL thank you for reading again  :shy2: hmm.. i think it will be cleared on chapter 4 ?? not sure tho ~ stay tuned. And take care  :peace:
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 2] (Kojiyuu) UPDATE !! 11/03/12
Post by: saeyukilover on November 03, 2012, 02:38:21 PM
Gosh yuko stop calling someone your girlfriend when ur cheating on her :grr:

But how sweet waiting for someone and giving you a cake :)

What will tomochin do ? Knowing that she knows something, hardest is all of them are her friends

 :twothumbs
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 2] (Kojiyuu) UPDATE !! 11/03/12
Post by: Tam_atsu on November 03, 2012, 05:37:53 PM
Kojiyuu kojiyuu kojiyuu, thanks for the 2nd chapter!!! :)  :thumbsup :thumbsup
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 2] (Kojiyuu) UPDATE !! 11/03/12
Post by: Haruko on November 03, 2012, 06:28:16 PM
Aww kojiyuu so sweet :D
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 2] (Kojiyuu) UPDATE !! 11/03/12
Post by: Tanchan on November 03, 2012, 08:34:14 PM
I'm all for the original couples so Atsumina and Kojiyuu ftw  (feeling a bit guilty since I love TakaTomo too, but Tomochin can always have Chiyuu :wub:)but seeing how the story goes I doubt it's going to happen.
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 2] (Kojiyuu) UPDATE !! 11/03/12
Post by: yourockme on November 04, 2012, 02:43:57 AM
another strawberry cake  :jerk:
Anyway WOW I love this Fic  :ptam-wub:
but Acchan got accident  :shocked
but its okay  :cow:
there is AtsuYuu?  :wigglypanda:
OMG if there is Im really goin to be HAPPYYYY  :on GJ:
even its just a short scene  :on hobo:
HEHEHE...
well i know that its gonna be
KojiYuu and
Atsumina?

Err please Update Soon
Arigatou  :on cny2:
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 2] (Kojiyuu) UPDATE !! 11/03/12
Post by: unicorn48 on November 04, 2012, 02:51:39 AM
@saeyukilover Yes ~ that's the question lol what tomochin did is one of the reasons why the story happen  :lol: more about it to find out in the future  chapters  :peace: Thank you for reading  :heart: :heart: :heart:
@Tam_atsu Thank you for reading  :heart: Please wait for chapter 3 ~ it will be a somewhat kojiyuu's somewhat love somewhat story again i think  XD
@Haruko Hee  :deco: Thanks for reading ~ Let's just hope they will be able to maintain this 'sweet' in the future chapters  :P or.. sweeter ?
@Tanchan Thank you for reading  :deco: Noo ~ Don't loose hope haha. We'll never know what will happen next but stay tuned for the next updates  :peace: Try our other fic It's not coincidence, It's fate! (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34229.0) a TomoTomo fanfic  :thumbup
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 2] (Kojiyuu) UPDATE !! 11/03/12
Post by: unicorn48 on November 04, 2012, 02:55:49 AM
@yourockme I smell an AtsuYuu shipper here  :on gay: Thank you for reading ~  Anyway, like i said on my other reply, Don't Loose hope ! heheee  :peace: Actually, I myself is a hardcore AtsuYuu shipper LOL. So.. there will be 'some' moments. but just how many is 'some'  :whistle:
Thank you so much  :peace: :peace: :peace:
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 2] (Kojiyuu) UPDATE !! 11/03/12
Post by: Tam_atsu on November 04, 2012, 06:13:34 AM
@saeyukilover Yes ~ that's the question lol what tomochin did is one of the reasons why the story happen  :lol: more about it to find out in the future  chapters  :peace: Thank you for reading  :heart: :heart: :heart:
@Tam_atsu Thank you for reading  :heart: Please wait for chapter 3 ~ it will be a somewhat kojiyuu's somewhat love somewhat story again i think  XD
@Haruko Hee  :deco: Thanks for reading ~ Let's just hope they will be able to maintain this 'sweet' in the future chapters  :P or.. sweeter ?
@Tanchan Thank you for reading  :deco: Noo ~ Don't loose hope haha. We'll never know what will happen next but stay tuned for the next updates  :peace: Try our other fic It's not coincidence, It's fate! (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34229.0) a TomoTomo fanfic  :thumbup




Yehey!!! I'll really wait for that!! Thank you so much for the kojiyuu!!
Well i also love atsuyuu so im fine if it will be atsuyuu or kojiyuu!!  :love:
Goodluck on writing!!!  :) :thumbsup
Title: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 3] (Kojiyuu) UPDATE !! 11/03/12
Post by: unicorn48 on November 04, 2012, 02:10:02 PM
Chapter 3 !!  :deco: fast update huh? Our sem break is over .. so we'll be derping at school :cry: but we'll try to update every two days LOL, 
This chapter will clarify the confusions with more confusions. This chapter is not really on our story outline but things change.

Anyway....Here's a a long KOJIYUUlicious update  :cow: heheee ~ shippers would surely love this. except for the end of the chapter

 :peace:


Secret Train of Love  (Chapter 3)

Kojima Haruna opened her eyes, it was already morning. She realized that she fell asleep on the couch while waiting for Yuko to come home.

She brushed her eyes and sitted. She saw Yuko sitting on the other couch opposite to her, sleeping.

'That idiot broke her promise again.' She muttered, knowing that Yuko didn't fullfil her promise on going home early and have a quality time together. Kojima even cooked many dishes and rented a Love Actually DVD Yuko would surely love. She'll just reheat the food for lunch or dinner, and swear that Yuko won't know anything about her preparation.

'Yuko looked like an angel when asleep, no... more like a cute squirrel' she giggled to herself. Even though Yuko often break her promises, Haruna in the end will always forgive her. Just who could possibly resist Yuko Oshima ?

But certainly, things could not continue like this. There are also things that Haruna couldn't pass. Yuko's mistakes are forgivable, but the number of it is not.

'We're so happy back then.' Kojima thought as she reminisced the past.

Those moments when Yuko would kiss her when she's not looking or just because Yuko wants to. Then she will push Yuko away, with no effort at all. She miss this so much. But it's not like it's completely gone at all. It's not even gone. The thing is,   Yuko changed. But the problem is, Kojima didn't know what change Yuko had.

It was not only Haruna who sensed things about Yuko, Yuko herself knew about it and she tried to make things back the way it used to be.

It surprised Kojima when Yuko asked her to live together. Despite the fact that Yuko only thought of this last month, Kojima was still happy. Despite Yuko's effort in maintaining their relationship strong, Kojima felt that there is something wrong.

"I'm sorry..." Yuko's sleep talking pulled Kojima back to reality. She felt her heart ache.

'It's not your fault Yuko...' She answered in her head.

"Ohayou Nyan Nyan ~ i'll melt." Yuko who just woke up said as she saw Kojima staring at her.

"Who-Who said I’m looking at you. Ohayou"  Kojima blushed,

"Don't worry Nyan Nyan I have been always looking at you since the day we met, so we're quits." Yuko joked making Kojima blush harder. Then she went to the other side, and sat at Kojima's lap facing her as she hugged the other girl.

"Nyan Nyan ~"

"Hm..?" Kojima answered hugging Yuko back.

"I think your boobs are getting bigger."

Kojima's face became red, even though she can't see Yuko, she knows that her girlfriend is having a perverted smiled on her face.

"Ecchi !!" She tried to push the pervert away with little effort at all.

"mou, gomen ne" Yuko said as she tried to steal a kiss.

"I'm still mad at you, you know !" Kojima said. She should be mad at her. "You went home late, and didn't woke me up."

"Because i fell asleep," Yuko answered in a matter of fact tone.

"that's not an excuse."

"I fell asleep looking at you." Yuko said making haruna blush for the nth time.

Kojima pushed her away making Yuko fall on the floor leaving the perverted squirrel brushing her aching butt. Then she headed in the kitchen to prepare breakfast.

"But it's really cute ~ my girlfriend waiting for me to come home. Aaah kawaii ~" Yuko teased her more. But Kojima didn't mind her, still reminding herself to not fall on Yuko's charm harder than she had already fell.

Kojima, looking for some bread in the refrigerator came across two strawberry cake inside it. She smiled at herself, Happy about the cake and her girlfriend.

"Huh? why are there two?" She mumbled as she get the first strawberry cake.

Apparently, Yuko followed her in the kitchen and answered her.

"Ah, the other one is for Acchan."

"Acchan ?" Kojima raised an eyebrow to Yuko. She didn't want to make assumptions, but cake for what?

"You didn't know ?" Yuko said confused. "Acchan was..."

"Acchan was ?" Kojima repeated, hoping that Acchan just had a break in acting so they will celebrate it and not some bad news.

"Acchan had an accident."

"WHAT ?!" With that being said, Kojima dropped the strawberry cake they're supposed to eat for breakfast.

"Yeah but she's okay,hopefully. Wait you didn't get a call or a message?”

"My phone is dead." Kojima answered still can't believe what happened to Acchan. Of all the people in the world why Acchan? "L-Let's visit her."

"Of course, but how bout breakfast first?" Yuko asked as she touched her tummy and butt, which are aching. She didn't have dinner last evening and she can't afford not to eat breakfast too.

"Let's just eat on the way!" Kojima said as she went to her room to prepare, after some moments of hesitation on what to do, Yuko cleaned the mess the cake made on the floor first before changing her clothes.

After preparing they quickly went to the car which Aki-P lent them for emergency purposes, Good thing Yuko knew how to drive since she's having her driving lesson lately and they headed to the hospital.

As they reached the parking lot, Yuko felt that she can’t handle anymore her hungriness. She managed to open the box of strawberry cake they're supposed to give to Acchan, and sliced it using the free plastic knife inside the box and ate the cake like a hungry caveman.

"Want some ?" Yuko offered Haruna who was looking at her in awe.

"No thanks," Haruna answered.

"Here ~ ahhhh ~" Yuko made a sweet gesture making Haruna eat the cake.

Yuko noticed an icing on Kojima's cheek, she went closer to her girlfriend who is still eating the strawberry cake and licked the icing making sure there was none left. Kojima's face heated on her girlfriend's action.

"There’s an icing you know." Yuko whispered at her girlfriend's ears.

"HENTAIIIIIIIIIII" Kojima yelled jokingly.

They both laughed at what happened as they went out of the car. Then, they headed straight to Acchan's room walking hand in hand.

Yuko took a glimpse on Acchan before she knocked on the door, the girl was still sleeping peacefully giving no sign of waking up at all. Yuko opened the door and saw Takamina smiling at them.

"Ohayou," Takamina smiled, the eye bugs on her eyes told Yuko and Kojima that the captain didn't slept at all, patiently waking for her girlfriend to wake up.

"Ohayou" They replied, Yuko took a sit on the couch while Haruna went straight to Acchan.

"I'm sorry Takamina, I only knew about the accident from Yuuchan this morning, I.." Kojima said, lost in words as tears formed in her eyes.

"It's okay Nyan Nyan, The doctor said Atsuko will wake up today." Takamina said as she went to Nyan Nyan and pat her back leading them back to the couch.

 Yuko just stared at them. Is this what it feels to be jealous?

"Where's Tomochin ?" Yuko asked. Tomochin was there last night wasn't she ?

"Ah, Tomochin went home to take a bath." Takamina answered.

"Why don't you go rest Takamina ? Nyan Nyan and I could stay here for a while." Yuko offered.

"Eto.. I don't want to leave her side." Takamina said sadly.

"Just take a bath at least? Then go back here." Yuko teased Takamina. It's a way to make the captain rest even for a bit. For now, Staying in place of Takamina is the only thing Yuko could offer for the captain.

"arigatou Yuko." Takamina gently smiled,

"Actually, I can't stay. I'm sorry" Kojima said.

"I have work later, but I’ll definitely go back." She continued.

"Yuko ?" Takamina asked.

"It's okay with me, I can stay for a bit. Maybe wait for you or Tomochin to come ?" Yuko answered.

"Then, let's go together Nyan Nyan." Takamina said, gaining a nod from Haruna.

"Okay. I approve of this but be sure not to touch my girlfriend." Yuko demanded, as Kojima and Takamina stood up and headed to the door.

"chotto, chotto ~"  Yuko called out. Kojima and Takamina looked back.

"kissu ~ my kissu Nyan Nyan." Yuko pouted.

"b-baka." Kojima said as she gave Yuko a peck on the lips.

"bye bye ~"

Moments later, Yuko and the sleeping Acchan were completely alone together. The energetic Yuko's face changed to a worried and sad one, even worse than Takamina.
 
She went sat on a chair near Acchan's bed. Then, she slowly caressed the face of the sleeping girl.

"I'm sorry Acchan." She said as tears formed in her eyes.

"I'm sorry for loving you."



So how was it ?  :sweat:

I really enjoyed writing this chapter took me a whole day  with the Kojiyuu moments and that somewhat atsuyuu somewhat moment. I love both pairings okay, though i love atsuyuu more but that doesn't mean i will be biased on the couples in the story LOL. just what am i even babbling about.  :doh:

Will Acchan wake up ? What do Tomochin really have in her head ? What will be Nyan Nyan's reaction when she finds out ? What is Takamina's shampoo ? Is Mariko really a troll ? What about Miichan ? Is Yuko a pimp?

/shot
 
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 3] (Kojiyuu) UPDATE !! 11/04/12
Post by: arrow27 on November 04, 2012, 02:36:58 PM
Thanks for the update! I really love your fics :D Aww, so sad, but at least we know Yuko does feel bad and gulity about the whole thing. Sad for Haruna and takamina as well :( can't wait to see what happens when acchan wakes up! Looking forward to your next update as always :D
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 3] (Kojiyuu) UPDATE !! 11/04/12
Post by: haruhi16 on November 04, 2012, 03:07:50 PM
OMG~ This is new! Interesting, yet, heart-breaking. Why would you want Yuko to end up with Acchan when you know Acchan is for Takamina and Yuko is for Kojiharu! Why are you messing with these couples  :angry: , i feel sorry for Takamina and Kojiharu, although it's fine for me for Yuko to end up with Acchan 'cause Yuko is perfect either with Kojiharu or Acchan.....but how about Takamina? Are you just going to write it there and let our general manager suffer in heartbreaks?  :(
I'm a KOJIYUU shipper but i don't want these couples to end up terribly and i also want a happy ending ya~know! SIGH*  :(

UPDATE SOON!  :thumbsup
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 3] (Kojiyuu) UPDATE !! 11/04/12
Post by: unicorn48 on November 04, 2012, 11:02:31 PM
@arrow27 Thank you for reading our story  :deco: yesshou, yuko does feel bad about it.. damn her fault ! pimping just kidding  :peace: Yuko will sort out her feelings sooner or later
@haruhi16 wow ~ thank you for the long comment and for reading our story  :love: LOL, i'm sorry but but -- don't worry everything will drop into it's rightful places in the right time ~  :peace:
@rukaeru Thank you for reading our story  :love: Yes, Atsumina ~ but we'll just have to wait for it. Who knows ??  :peace:
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 3] (Kojiyuu) UPDATE !! 11/04/12
Post by: Haruko on November 04, 2012, 11:08:12 PM
Did you hear that?!?! It was the sound of my heart when it´s broken -___-

no why!!! not atsuyu.. i love them but not in a romantic couple is like more like buddies for her tsundere girlfriends... T_T no way...
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 3] (Kojiyuu) UPDATE !! 11/04/12
Post by: yourockme on November 05, 2012, 09:19:43 AM
Quote
"I'm sorry for loving you."
:ptam-cry: :ptam-wub:
YEY ATSUYUU  :wigglypanda: :wigglypanda:
ARGHH REALLY GUYZ
please just now let me be happy by reading
Atsuyuu fics PLEASE
u already know that its goin to be KOJIYUU
right?
its already in the title  :farofflook:
soo please let me,the writer and the others have some
AtsuYuu  :prayers:
XDXDXD LOL
well anyway you guyz are right 
well I also love atsumina and kojiyuu   :luvluv1:
YIEEEE  :on cny2:

tnx for the update
muahhh  :on slopkiss: :on ksweat:
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 3] (Kojiyuu) UPDATE !! 11/04/12
Post by: Tam_atsu on November 05, 2012, 10:55:08 AM
Wahhh!!! Thank you for the super sweet kojiyuu moments!!!!!

Ehhhhh?? Yuko?? Hahahaah!! She's inlove with acchan xD
Well, i love kojiyuu but i also love atsuyuu so i really love this storyy!!! :drool:  :thumbsup :inlove:
Update soon :)))
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 3] (Kojiyuu) UPDATE !! 11/04/12
Post by: unicorn48 on November 05, 2012, 12:16:07 PM
@Haruko *gives band aid* but.. but... Atsuyuu  :cry:. Kidding aside, Don't  worry haha this is just a fanfic  :peace: aaand, who knows what may happen next  :lol: Nyways, thanks for reading  :love:

@Yourockme Thanks for reading  :deco: I'm glad that you liked that somewhat Atsuyuu somewhat part , i suddenly thought of making that scene when i was  writing the kojiyuu moment LOL.

@Tam_atsu No Problem, we always take into consideration what the readers/shippers want to read in the fanfics we make  :peace: Thank you for reading our story on for loving it as well  :heart:

*I just have some clarifications to make,

What we put in the AuthorTopic part (thread name) is temporary (pairing). We only put the pairing there to indicate what pairing will be seen in that particular chapter and NOT the pairing that will be together in the end  :peace: So stay tuned for our updatessss. Thanks guys !

And by the way, the pairings that will/might appear/might end up together in our chapter will be revealed in the End  :nervous


Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 3] (Kojiyuu) UPDATE !! 11/04/12
Post by: saeyukilover on November 05, 2012, 12:30:37 PM
the hell is up in your brain yuko ...playing around with nyan nyan's heart.....

 :twothumbs
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 3] (Kojiyuu) UPDATE !! 11/04/12
Post by: yourockme on November 05, 2012, 12:32:16 PM
Quote
What we put in the AuthorTopic part (thread name) is temporary (pairing). We only put the pairing there to indicate what pairing will be seen in that particular chapter and NOT the pairing that will be together in the end
:shock: :shock:
HEH?!
OWWWW  nevaamind
LOLOLOLOL

 :wigglypanda: :wigglypanda:
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 3] (Kojiyuu) UPDATE !! 11/04/12
Post by: unicorn48 on November 05, 2012, 01:41:15 PM
@yourockme

what i meant is, not because it's on the AuthorTopic, it doesn't mean that they will necessarily 100% end up together or the like but it also doesn't mean that they won't be together in the end. Everything depends on the flow of the story, and the reader because we take you guys in consideration  :nervous  :peace:

Sorry for my babblings  XD i just don't want to get everyone's hope up.  :err:
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 3] (Kojiyuu) UPDATE !! 11/04/12
Post by: sakura_drop_ on November 05, 2012, 04:52:51 PM
I agree with NyanNyan. Nobody can resist Oshima Yuko-sama  :wub: :wub: :wub:


Sorry for this late comment!!  :bow: :bow:

Ah, I love AtsuYuu a lot, so I wonder if they will be a couple in the end.

Arigatou  :bow:
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 3] (Kojiyuu) UPDATE !! 11/04/12
Post by: unicorn48 on November 10, 2012, 02:07:06 PM
Yey ~ we’re back ヾ(´・ω・)人(・ω・`)ノ゛ with a Takamina centered chapter, poor captain.

Sorry for the delay  :nervous you know.. school and lack of motivation. Just how many rising action will this fanfic have lol  :angry: let's break the hearts of the characters and the readers. just kidding  :cow:

Dozo ~  :peace:




Secret Train of Love (Chapter 4)

Takamina’s POV

“Gomenasai.” I lowered my head and proceed walking again. It has been the fourth time i bumped someone on my way to the theater today, not counting the other’s last week. I guess I’m terrible right now, I feel like dying. But no one can’t blame me for acting like this, right ?

I stopped in front of a familiar building where our practices always held.I can still remember going here everyday with Acchan, walking hand in hand together and talking about the future - Ours and AKB’s. I guess it’s impossible now. She graduated, and…

“Takamina! “Someone called me from nowhere. I don’t know why but I feel like ignoring her. I continued walking slowly till i meet our practice hall’s door.

“General Manager, you’re late.” The one who shouted a while ago told me.

“Sorry.” I sighed.

“It’s okay, I’m late too.”

I looked back to see her, and as what I’m expecting, she’s Mariko. She smiled and opened the door for me. Then, I saw my fellow Team A. The aura is quite unusual, new faces ? where’re the others ? oh yeah.. Team Shuffle. It’s quite amazing that up until now i’m still not used in it, i miss the old faces, especially that of Acchan’s. Then again, She’s not here even before the Shuffle. It’s only her that i miss, i think. 

“Sorry for being late. again” I apologized. They all looked at me differently, It’s so unusual for me to be late, for two consecutive weeks. The only thing i’m thankful about is that I’m not the Team’s Captain anymore. Atleast, in the rehearsals i don’t have to act strong and knowing which i’m not really am.

“Okay. We’ll start our practice now!” Mariko told us.

I sighed as I put my bag down. I don’t feel like practicing today or tomorrow or the next days. My energy is completely drained.

How can I focus if there is so many things that needs to be managed right now? If there are problems that I want to know the reason? If there’s someone whom I want to meet and to be with right now?



I fixed my clothes as I walked heading to Acchan’s room. I wiped my sweat that I got from running. I rushed from our CM just to be in this place,  Acchan is supposed to wake up yesterday but she didn’t maybe she’ll wake up today?

Then I saw Aki-P in front of acchan’s door.

“Goodevening.” I lowered my head.

He just nodded not smiling or anything.

I slowly opened the door, Aki-P beside me. I saw Mariko and Tomochin inside.

“How is she?” I asked them but I got no answer. Mariko can’t look at me and I faced Aki-P who remained outside. I looked at them confusedly and walked beside acchan’s bed where Tomochin also is. I looked at Acchan, she’s still sleeping peacefully and seems like nothing changed.

“Tomochin how is she?” I asked tomochin.

She looked at me with tears forming in her eyes.




“Takamina~ Are you alright?” Chiyuu asked.

“Is there something wrong?” Yuihan followed.

I looked at them, I smiled a little bit. It seems that my new Team A is really concerned with me.

“I-I’m alright” I answered. “So what must we practice right now?” I continued.

“Eh? Of course, for our stage performance. We always practice for it with the same date.”  Mayuyu said in a matter of fact tone with a confused look.

“Oh,I’m sorry, I forgot. He-he” I remembered. I scratched my head. It’s really troubling me.

We stand on our positions and started dancing as the song started to play. At first, I managed to follow the movs but with little energy. They  ignored  my lousy dancing and I felt a little bit relieved. Then my thoughts drifted again.



“Y-You’re kidding right?” I laughed dryly as I pushed tomochin away.

“Taka-“ Tomochin tried to speak.

“That’s not a good joke !!! Acchan seems fine, nothing changed. Look at her, she’s still sleeping peacefully.” I loudened my voice.

“It’s true, Takamina.” Aki-P now entered the room and looked at me.

“But how? The Doctors said that she’s fine and she will recover! And now the three of you is saying that !” I shouted. Tears fell in my eyes.

“It’s not expected though. But her mind is damaged.” Mariko said softly.

“You must be lying. She will be fine.” I  I laughed dryly while sobbing.

“I trust her, I trust the doctor’s words.” I said forcing myself to speak.

“Minami – ” Tomochin tried to put her hands on my shoulder but I blocked it.

“How can this happen?” I asked them. They looked at me sadly.

I started to cry loudly.



“Takamina you’re doing the wrong moves.” Mariko shouted.

Everyone stopped, even the music.

“I shouted because I kept on saying it for three times already but you just kept on not minding me and still dance with the wrong moves.” She explained.

“I’m sorry.” I really don’t know what’s happening to me. What I know is that I must be beside her.

“You can just take a rest Takamina.” Mariko said.

“No, I’m fine. Let’s continue practicing.” I replied though I also want to take a rest right now but I can’t just leave them. I want to set a good example to them.

“Okay then, let’s continue.” Mariko forced a smiled. I see my fellow team A members nod and stretch a bit. I really feel sorry for acting like this, I must be the one who’s leading this practice. Glad that Mariko is here, she understands me.

We continued practicing again, I tried to focus more but the thing with Acchan kept on bugging me, making me forget the steps. They just looked at me worriedly, some convincing me to rest but i just smiled at them.  Moments later, a few stopped dancing and looked at the corner, Aki-P is watching us. So I tried my best again to focus but apparently i can’t.

“Stop.” Aki-P commanded.

They all stopped except for me who haven’t heard it until Mayuyu poked me. We all looked at Aki-P waiting for him to say anything but he just looked at Mariko. I caught Mariko wink at him. But I don’t care right now.

“Goodwork for today, It’s a tiring day for almost all of you. I think it’s enough. You can now go home.” He ordered.

Go home ? We haven’t even reached half of what we usually practice. I guess it’s all my fault. I shouldn’t be acting this way but I’m happy that we’re dismissed early.

“Hai. Arigatou.” We all said.

I immediately grabbed my bag , I have to go to the hospital as quickly as possible. I fixed my hair, and hang my bag on my shoulder.

“Takamina.” Mariko called me.

“Yes Mariko? Ahh! T-thanks a while ago and I’m really sorry.” I said as I faced her.

“It’s fine.” Mariko smiled. When serious things like this happen, she’s always there to help us and not in a trolling way, sometimes.

“You look terrible General Manager. If you could just see yourself right now.” She continued.

“Come on.” She grabbed my hands as we headed to Aki-P who is still standing at the corner. He’s eyes is full of concern, worry and disappointment. I felt sorry for him and more for myself. I just really can’t accept the fact that Acchan is on a comatose and she might not open her eyes again.

END



So how was it ? It took us a lot of effort to stop procrastinate and write chapter 4  :on gay: and Acchan on coma  :fainted: what will happen to her and to this story ?!
Hopefully we'll be able to make chapter 5 tomorrow  :deco:
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 4] UPDATE !! 11/10/12
Post by: Haruko on November 10, 2012, 02:38:37 PM
really?!... minami we feel your pain.. T_T
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 4] UPDATE !! 11/10/12
Post by: yourockme on November 10, 2012, 02:52:52 PM
YEY AN UPDATE!  :cow: :cow:
but am i happy?
OF COURSE I AM NOT!!!
cause you you .... you  :angry:
nevermind XD
update tom? yeheyyy cant wait for it
thank you thank you
btw ur making takamina sufferrrr thats bad  :cry:
and of course US!  :cry: :cry: :cry:
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 4] UPDATE !! 11/10/12
Post by: arrow27 on November 10, 2012, 03:55:22 PM
Thanks for the update! Amazing chapter! Really felt Takamina's sadness and pain being conveyed, sad news bout Acchan but hope she'll pull through! :D Cant wait to find out what happens, looking forward to your next chapter :)
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 4] UPDATE !! 11/10/12
Post by: sakura_drop_ on November 10, 2012, 07:04:45 PM
Acchan, you must wake up!!!  :panic: :panic: :panic:

I'll be waiting for your next update!

Thank you!!  :bow:
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 4] UPDATE !! 11/10/12
Post by: unicorn48 on November 11, 2012, 06:11:30 AM
@haruko poor captain  :cry: let's just hope that things will be okay or else it will also be poor AKB  :smhid thanks for reading  :deco:
@yourockme thank you for reading our latest update  :love: i'm sorryyyyyyyy ~ but having some difficulties will make a character grow hehe  :lol: and yes. let's hope that we'll hopefully manage to write update chapter 5 today  :peace:
@arrow27 thanks for reading and complement  :deco: stay tuned for our updates  :cow:
@sakura_drop_ let's all hope that Acchan will wake up  :nervous but who knows, we love tragic endings.. just kidding  :peace: thanks for reading  :heart:
@origami thanks for reading !!  :heart: ihh ~ don't loose hope  :) it will be needed for our next chapters  :twisted:

thanks for the comments guys  :peace: :peace: :peace:
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 4] UPDATE !! 11/10/12
Post by: TakaminaBG on November 11, 2012, 08:27:22 AM
Your fic is really great. The story line is amazing!
Does Acchan have feelings for Yuko? In the begining Tomochin told her to choose...
So Yuko loves both Acchan and Haruna.
I have the feeling that Tomochin likes Takamina and Acchan is in coma so this is her chance!
Please update SOON!!!
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 4] UPDATE !! 11/10/12
Post by: dark48 on November 11, 2012, 10:46:15 AM
no way!!!
Acchan in a coma state :cry:
Tnx for the update
This is a really good fic
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 4] UPDATE !! 11/10/12
Post by: unicorn48 on November 11, 2012, 12:14:47 PM
@TakaminaBG thanks for reading our fanfic and appreciating our story line   :love: :heart: don't worry ~ we'll update soon.. like now  :peace: hmm.. i wonder ~ so many pairings gahhh  :bleed eyes:
@dark48 thanks for reading our fanfic  :deco: ihh ~ we really appreciate comments  :inlove: let's hope that acchan will wake up.. or not ?
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 4] UPDATE !! 11/10/12
Post by: unicorn48 on November 11, 2012, 03:06:27 PM
And so we are back with a loooooooooong chapter ~  :twothumbs took us 3 hours to edit this  :bleed eyes:
Anyways, since chapter 5 is a long chapter, we decided to cut it into two Part 1 (this duh) and part 2 yet to be written (to be posted tomorrow or the next next day?)

Just.. what is Mariko and Aki-P hiding ? You'll know here  :cow:

Dozo ~  :peace:


Secret Train of Love (Chapter 5)
Part1

The sun is still hiding yet Team A's Captain and AKB48's producer is already having a serious talk. Takahashi Minami's actions is not a secret to them, they chose to act and find solutions regarding the matter but it always resulted as a failure, making them cornered into revealing something they never wanted to tell anyone, hoping that it will solve the problem.

The previous day, Mariko decided to talk to Takamina with Aki-P, telling the ex-captain the last possible option to help herself and her girlfriend who is on comatose. Neither Aki-P nor Mariko wanted things to be like this but they don't have a choice. Both have their own agendas but it have the same point - to save Takamina and AKB48.

Then again, Mariko's questioning of their plan is the reason why they're still having a serious talk instead of sleeping on their own respective beds.

"Yasusu, I'm not sure with this. I haven't used this for ages !" Mariko said as she bumped her palm on the table loudly.

"I know Shinoda-san, but aren't you the one who proposed it first?" the producer said cooly, fixing his glasses.

"but it's dangerous and... Takamina.. she..."

"She can do it. You're not the only one who's bothered by it Mariko. Telling her the secret we had been hiding for ages is already bad, we should go forward and not backward." Aki-P said, trying to reassure Mariko's resolve.

"Maybe i should go with her," Mariko said.

"Yes, i should go with her, with that i can make sure she'll be safe." She continued, still unsure with the plan she came up with. If something bad happens to Takamina, she wouldn't be able to forgive herself.

"No, you'll stay here." Aki-P said with a serious tone.

"Have you forgot about it ? The 48th rule ? " He added, making Mariko pause for awhile.

'Yes, the 48th rule. There's still hope !' Mariko thought. She didn't know that the rules she hold on to for a long time would be of use now.


She smiled at the old man infront of him, she's now reassured. Things would definitely be okay with the genius old man on her side.

The two of them waited patiently for the sun to signal Takamina to give her answer, because everything depends on Takahashi Minami now.

Atsuko will be saved as well as AKB48.

'There is a chance huh..' Takamina thought while sitting beside a sleeping Maeda Atsuko.

'Is this all a dream ?'

Perhaps it is. Her mind couldn't accept the things that are happening. It's impossible. She's hoping that a time will come where Acchan would kiss her in the cheek making her wake up on this bad dream.

But she perfectly knew the sad truth and dwelling in fantasies is not a good thing.

'This thing... It's like what happened in the past. In the start of AKB. There's still hope right ? If i ... If i'll trust him again this time' Takamina's thought drifted back in time.

In the start of AKB, Aki-P told her the same thing he told her yesterday. "trust me and we'll definitely get to your dreams."

If ever what Aki-P is telling her real, things will be better. There's no harm in trying right ? Just a little trust can fix this. It's her only hope.

Then, Takamina remembered what's at stake if the plan Mariko told her earlier will happen - her life. She may not be the same like before. She can be better or worse. Most of all, she won't be able to turn back once she agrees.

Her thoughts are contradicting. She wanted to believe in Aki-P again but she can't. She looked at Acchan. She knows to herself that she'll do everything for the girl.

Takamina kissed the sleeping girl lightly on the lips. She have made her mind. Even if Aki-P and Mariko are just tricking her or giving her false hope, she'll take the risk, just to make sure that Atsuko will open her eyes again and see her smile.

She's ready to go back to the past.

Moments later, The midget is now standing infront of the theater's door. Mixed emotions filled her, but it's not the time to doubt. She putted her hands on her chest, Atsuko's laughter echoed in her head. She missed it a lot and she'll do everything to hear it again together with her lover's breathtaking smile.

She slowly opened the door and smiled as she saw the stage. She saw the old Team A performing happily, Acchan was there waving at her. She rushed towards the stage but everything was replaced by the scenery of Acchan announcing her graduation.She was at the point where she wanted to cry but she came back to her senses, Acchan's graduation is the reason why she's here now, It's the reason why she would accept Mariko and Aki-p's offer.
 
"So you're here." Takamina looked around to see who's speaking. It's Mariko together with Aki-P.

Takamina just looked at them with determined eyes. Aki-P still didn't reveal any expression while Mariko began to smiled creepily trying to ease the tension.
 
"Eh?" Takamina reacted as she saw Mariko's face.
 
"General Manager, nothing's wrong. I'm just excited of what will happen."
 
Aki-p looked at Mariko, Takamina looked at Aki-p then to Mariko with confused eyes. Takamina trusted these two but knowing that both of them are trolls made her unsure of what she must do.

"So what will happen now?" Takamina asked.
 
"We must be the one to ask that Takahashi-san." Aki-P answered, directing the question back to the midget in front of her.
 
"Eh?"
 
"General Manager, we're here to find out what you want to do." Mariko said as she rolled her eyes at the ever-so-dense girl.
 
'Oh.. Baka. I haven't said my decision yet.' Takamina mumbled.
 
"I-I believe on what you told me yesterday even though it's really hard to believe." Takamina tried to say confidently, but Mariko and Aki-P could see the doubt that's forming in her eyes.
 
'Mariko trolls everyone while Yasusu trolls the whole akb even the fans. It's really hard to believe and I don't know why I trust the both of you especially with this plan.' She thought.
 
"I want to go the past and change things." The midget continued reassuring the two.
 
"You won't be the General Manager at that time, General Manager." Mariko joked.
 
"Of course I know. E-Eh wait, this isn't a troll right? I'm tired of being trolled." Takamina looked at them seriously.

"Honestly General Manager - " Mariko tried to troll Takamina again but Aki-P interjected,

"This is a serious thing Takamina."
 
"Then, I'll be going." Takamina replied with determined eyes.
 
"Ready to face the consequence? We explained it clearly right?" Mariko said seriously.
 
"Yes. I'm ready for everything."



Yuko's POV



I walked  headed towards the theater where we always perform.

The staff told me that Yasusu is inside the theatre now. How weird, there's no AKB member here. But its also good at the same time, I can talk about my decision with Aki-P sincerely about my upcoming graduation from AKB.
 
While walking I realized that its really hard to graduate from the group, especially now that I'm the captain of Team K. I think i know now what Acchan's feeling is when she decided to graduate. How I wish she's also here beside me, well she's the reason why i decided to graduate from the group anyway.
 
"Ready to face the consequence?" I heard a voice say as i stood infront of the theater's door.
 
I opened the door quietly and slightly so no one could notice.
 
"We explained it clearly right?" The familiar voice continued, i looked at the person talking.. Mariko ?!
 
I thought only Aki-P is here but I can see Takamina and Mariko as well. They seemed serious so I decided not to disturb them and just watch them from here.
 
"Yes. I'm ready for everything." Takamina replied.
 
Then rainbows started to fill the whole room, it's very colorful which gave me a hard time to see them before it became clear again but, there's still rainbow everywhere and I can't see Yasusu anymore. I can only see Mariko wearing something colorful and on her side is something which looks like...unicorn. It is a Unicorn! And there is also Takamina who's frozen on her place. I feel her, I can feel myself also frozen. I shiverred at what I'm seeing. I don't know if that's real or if it's just a special effect of the stage that they're trying.

Will we have a concert or what ? or a new single ?  just what the hell is going on ?
 
"Takamina wake up, It's real." Mariko said with a serious tone.
 
Takamina is still not moving with her mouth open. I want to go and save her there but my feet can't move and voice can't escape my lips.  And the unicorn is just there standing looking at Takamina, and I can't really see Aki-P anymore. Maybe the unicorn ate him ? wait.. aren't unicorns supposed to be good ?
 
"Takahashi, I thought you're ready for everything and we have told you to expect unexpectable things like this." The unicorn said with Aki-P's voice.

Wait, don't tell me that unicorn is also Aki-P.
 
"Yasusu-san, I think Takamina is really shocked." Mariko said as she looked at the unicorn.
 
That unicorn is Aki-P? What the heck happened?
 
"I-I'm fine. Yeah I'm ju-just shocked." Takamina start to talked, i can tell that she's nervous with her hands shivering.
 
"We know right." Mariko rolled her eyes.
 
"Takamina, ride on my back. I will lead you to the past." The unicorn, I mean Aki-P commanded calmly.
 
"It's okay General Manager." Mariko reassured.
 
Takamina with hesistation slowly rode on the unicorn I mean Yasusu's back.
 
"Like we have said before, we'll be watching you and you must do things carefully. No one must know what we have done." The unicorn said. Oh again, It's Yasusu. Oh my Gosh just what is happening ? Don't tell me i'm also a unicorn.
 
"How about the present me?" Takamina asked still confused, trying to set her mind on her real dilemma.

 "We'll take care of everything." Mariko replied.
 
"You can update or talk to us even at the past, we will know everything. That's the 48th rule of our magic." Mariko continued as she winked.
 
"Ready? The past and the new future is waiting for you Minami." The unicorn spreaded it's wings. Woah ~ It reached the two pillars of the theater !
 
"I am ready" Takamina said with determined eyes.
 
Then suddenly Mariko snapped her fingers and another rainbow with clouds-like inside appeared. The unicorn Aki-P  floated.
 
"Bye Minami, everything will be fine. Please take of the past and do everything you can." Mariko waved at them.
 
Takamina just nodded and the unicorn together with her entered the rainbow. Then everything came back to normal. Mariko is just wearing her casual dress not the colorful ones before.

While me, I'm just here still shocked of what I saw. What happened? What did they do? Takamina is going to the past? Is that even possible? Is this an AKBingo set or some variety show ? And it's really weird, rainbows everywhere and Yasusu becoming a unicorn? What the heck is that? And w-why would takamina go back to the past? Does this have something to do with Acchan ? If it' so, i want to go back to the past too, even if it means becoming a unicorn myself so I can also change things.
 
I leaned on the door to relax for a bit. But the door opened making me fall on the floor. Mariko stared at me with eyes wide open.
 
"I saw everything." I told her.
 
END


So.. how was it ?  :lol: actually, I (Unicorn 4) is the one who writes the drama while (Unicorn 8) writes the light part haha  :peace: so this chapter is made with our combined powers ~ i hope you liked it.

Are there unicorns here too... ?  :lol:
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 5] UPDATE !! 11/11/12
Post by: sakura_drop_ on November 11, 2012, 03:19:44 PM
Yuko-sama!!!   :panic: :panic: :panic: do not graduate yet, please!!!  :bow: :bow: :bow:

Ah... I need an update!!!  :wub: :bow:
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 5] UPDATE !! 11/11/12
Post by: arrow27 on November 11, 2012, 03:25:53 PM
Thanks for the update :D The fantasy aspect is a nice twist :D Pretty cool how Takamina's going into the past!!! That must be tough though cause she'd have to be very careful, time travle is complicated :P Once again great chapter, def looking forward to minami's adventuers in the past and seeing how she'll save acchan, as well as what's going to happen to the present :)
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 5] UPDATE !! 11/11/12
Post by: TakaminaBG on November 11, 2012, 03:44:01 PM
I laughed so much reading this chapter!!! Aki - P a unicorn?!?!?!   :gyaaah:
Hmmm, so Minami is going back to the past, but why do I get the feeling it's not to save Acchan?? Or to save her but on what cost??
Yuko, if you graduate!!!! Don't dare do that to me!!!
Yuko knows what will Mariko do??
Aki - P an unicorn?????  :gyaaah: :gyaaah: :gyaaah: :gyaaah: :gyaaah:
But WAIT!!!  actually envy HIM!! Unicorns are so damn CUTE!!!
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 5] UPDATE !! 11/11/12
Post by: Haruko on November 11, 2012, 04:33:07 PM
a twist story!! yeah!!.. I always think about to travel in the past is to dangerous..because we know that even if takamina change the past.. her real destiny not change that all..  because know we have two differents ways.. one when acchan is fine and the other when acchan is in comatose...
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 5] UPDATE !! 11/11/12
Post by: unicorn48 on November 11, 2012, 11:19:19 PM
@sakura_drop_ thanks for reading our fanfic  :heart: I wonder what'll happen to Yuko's decision hmm..
@arrow27 thanks for reading our fanfic  :deco: plot twist haha.. i thought the readers won't like it since our fic is trying to be realistic LOLOL .. good thing  :peace: please stay tuned ~
@TakaminaBG Yeah yeah ~ Takamina will surely have a great adventure in the past.. but who knows ? Yes ~ and we can be able to unveil the 'secrets' of the secret train of love  :peace: Thanks for reading !  :love:
@Haruko Nice thinking !!   8) Actually.. takamina will... it's either she will be able to change that 'one thing' in the past or not. thanks for reading  :love: :heart:

Thanks for reading and commenting guys  :cow: we really appreciate it ~~ and also for the silent readers if there's any  :peace: :peace: :peace: 
Let's all be a unicorn  :deco:
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 5] UPDATE !! 11/11/12
Post by: yourockme on November 12, 2012, 10:15:19 AM
LOL with those UNICORNS  :mon taichi:
I MEAN EPIC  :gmon butt:
XD HUHU..
YES I LOVE UNICORNS TOO!!!!!
THEY ARE SO CUTE TO BE TRUE  :mon cute:
thank you for the update
thank you thank you  :mon fyeah:
please update soon  :mon rockstar: :gmon fry:
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 5] UPDATE !! 11/11/12
Post by: saeyukilover on November 14, 2012, 02:25:31 AM
What the heck ! That shocked me yasusu becoming a unicorn!!!  :shocked

But I like the point that minami will be going to the past , I'm curious if she will find out about Atsuyuu !!!  :cry: thinking of Atsuyuu makes me cry T_T

 :twothumbs
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 5] UPDATE !! 11/11/12
Post by: unicorn48 on November 16, 2012, 11:07:29 AM
@saeyukilover Sorry for shocking you and making you cry about atsuyuu  :mon cute: errr, thanks for reading our fic  :heart: ~ please stay tuned for our update  :peace:
@yourockme thank you for reading our story  :heart: horray for unicorns  :cow: stay tuned  :peace:

Thanks for the comments once again ~  :deco: let's all hope that we'll get inspired later or tomorrow to write an update since it's weekend yeyeyeyey  :onioncheer:
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 5] UPDATE !! 11/11/12
Post by: takamae on November 16, 2012, 01:51:34 PM
Wow...minami going to change the past
Whatever happen please make minami happy  :bow:  :bow:
Thanx for the update ^^
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 5] UPDATE !! 11/11/12
Post by: cisda83 on November 19, 2012, 10:52:16 AM
Just Joining

Keep up the good work and looking forward to the next chapter

Thank you for all the fanfics

Interesting... is it going to be AtsuYuu or AtsuMina..

Also Minami able to find out about the affair or not while in the past?

can't wait to find out  :inlove: :wub: :twothumbs :twothumbs :heart: :yep:


 
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 5] UPDATE !! 11/11/12
Post by: unicorn48 on November 27, 2012, 03:07:16 PM
@takamae Thanks for reading our fanfic  :love: we all  wish for Takamina and everybody's happiness  XD i'm glad you liked our going to the past concept.  :peace:
@cisda83 Hmm.. that thing about the affair has also been running in  my mind  XD let's hope that everything will be okay in the near future  :peace: Thanks for reading our fanfic  :heart:

Don't worry guys, we will update our fanfic this week hehe ~ please stay tuned  :peace:  :deco:
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 5] UPDATE !! 11/11/12
Post by: unicorn48 on December 29, 2012, 01:22:05 PM
Secret Train of Love (Chapter 5)
Part 2

"I saw everything." Yuko repeated, her body is shaking but she tried to control it.

Mariko is still shocked about the sudden appearance Yuko made. She stepped closer to Yuko and grabbed the other girl inside the theater. She then locked the door, making sure that no one would make a reapperance again. Prevent is better than cure anyway.

"Yuko, It's not what you think." Mariko said, trying her best effort to persuade Yuko even though she already know that she can't. "Everything you saw was -"

"True. Everything I saw is true and real." Yuko cutted. She's still unsure of what she saw, but the best thing to do right now is to corner Mariko and make the older girl confirm it.

"Yuko, Why don't you just go home. You're tired."

"No I’m not. In fact, it's still early."

"What you saw is just your hallucination."

"What did I saw?”

"I don't know you’re the one who saw it."

"Yeah, I'm the one who saw it. And I’m sure you did too Mari-chan. It's either we're both hallucinating or it's real." Yuko said sarcastically. She don't have time for this, nor Mariko. All she wants is to confirm everything and then... what ?

"Mari-chan you know me well..."

"Let's take a sit first, then we'll talk." Mariko said as she lead the way to the theater's seat. The two of them sat at the front row having two seats in between them.
 
"First, promise me that you'll never say anything about this to anyone." Mariko started,

"Hai," Yuko nodded. Things are going better than what she expected. She's good at keeping secrets anyway.

"I want to make things clear Yuko. I can make your memories about this vanish, but I won't do that   since your my friend." Mariko said seriously, ever since she saw Yuko peeping, she already thought about the possible things she would do to the girl. But she used her instincts, Yuko would be of use in the near future. "Takamina went somewhere to change the present."

"The past..." Yuko muttered, she heard awhile ago their discussion about going to the past, before the unicorn came, or was it Yasusu? It doesn't really matter... or did it? If it was really the past then Yuko too wanted to go there. If Takamina did, why couldn't she ? She too wanted to change the present. Things have changed, She'll do everything for her relationship with Kojima to become the way it must be. She'll prevent the crack that destroyed the glass to appear.

"Yeah, it's the past." Mariko said, confirming Yuko's words. To what extent would she tell her the details? "It's a one way trip. Once you go there, there will be no turning back."

"Will Takamina be fine ?" Yuko said with a hint of concern for the small captain. She has heard about Time travels - mostly in mangas and dramas, all of them ending up tragic.

"Of course she will." Mariko answered, also in doubt of what she just said. She's still regretting about not coming with Takamina in the past. Even though there's also a Mariko in the past, the past Mariko's knowledge about the future is quite limited.

"Where's Aki-P ? Yeah.. the unicorn ? Is that him? How?" Yuko asked again. Aki-P is the reason why Yuko is here in the first place. She might reconsider the thought of graduating into the group since it may not be safe for the other girls to be in AKB48 anymore. Especially with the existence of a Unicorn and some witch-craft-like things.

"It's a long story Yuko. But yes, it's him." Mariko answered again, not wanting to prolong their conversation. It has been 20 minutes since Aki-P and Takamina went back to the past. On the thirtieth minute, Aki-P will come back. And it won't be nice if he'll see Yuko here. Takamina knowing their secret is already dangerous, what more if Yuko did too.

"So, Takamina is going back to the past to what? Where exactly in the past? Why her? Then, things here too will change if she made changes there right?"

"Yes yes yes ! Takamina is going back to the past for Acchan okay. She was not doing her job well since Acchan was in coma. And it's still unsure whether or not Acchan will wake up." Mariko said irritatedly, It’s not because of Yuko but because of the questions. Yuko just asked the things she had been trying to ask to herself.

"I don't know where exactly in the past, its automatic."

"What kind of witch craft is that ? It's not something like Harry Potter."

"I don't know Yuko. I don't know. But one thing is for sure, Takamina will only change one thing there. She know the risks."

"The risks?"

"Yes the risks." Mariko stopped, she have said many things. She thought that maybe it's better to vanish Yuko's memories about this, than to let her leave having these kinds of information.

"Yuko..." Mariko stood up, and went to the seat next to Yuko. She moved her head, closer and closer to Yuko's face and putted her lips near the other girl's ears.

"mongayonlimot, limotngayonmo," She whispered in a language the other girl couldn't comprehend, but Mariko stopped right in the middle. She can't do it after all. In the middle of her chanting, she remembered that after all, Yuko is her friend and will always be. And again, she can't afford to erase the other girl's memories. She may accidentally erase Yuko's memories that contain her memories with Haruna, something she can't afford to do. Her bestfriend, Haruna, may cry on the phone again asking if she can have a sleep over at Mariko's house because Yuko once again hurted her feelings. The last time an incident like this happen, she erased Haruna's two weeks memories, which contained her memories of stalking Yuko, and seeing her girlfriend being lovey dovey with Acchan. But Mariko's effort bore a bad fruit, Haruna forgot as well all her appoinments she scheduled and was scolded by her manager and Aki-P’ S, Mariko decided to just read Yuko's memories.

Yuko was confused with Mariko's actions. Could the older girl be erasing her memories ? She shook her head, she trusts Mariko.

"Sorry," was all Mariko could say as she regained her posture. She was shocked with Yuko's thoughts but she didn't showed it. Yuko's thoughts was mostly about regrets, Haruna and graduation.

"Wh-what did you do ? You didn't erase my memories right?" Yuko asked, trying to not offend Mariko.

"I peaked." Mariko answered. She regretted looking at Yuko's memories. She never knew how much burden the other girl has from her career to personal life. Maybe this is the reason why Yuko became close with Acchan, the two are the only one who understood each other completely. The aces' burdens.

Yuko's tears fell, Mariko knew. She didn't know whether she should be happy or what. Her thoughts are her burdens. She had kept her thoughts all to herself before, now, Mariko too have it.

"Mariko I want to go to the past too. It's the only thing that can save me." Yuko pleaded, She's sure that Mariko understands her. Yuko bore the same eyes Takamina had a while ago. She knows that she can't persuade Yuko unto anything anymore, and the only thing she could do is to support the girl.

"Yuko, you know that I can help you, but I can't assure your safety like Takamina's 100%,"

"I know. But the thing is, You can." Yuko said as she wiped her tears with her sleeves. With that said, Mariko flicked her hands and a wand appeared.

“Yuko are you really sure about this?” Mariko asked looking away, she never imagined letting anyone anymore to do the time travel but imagining her close friend carrying her burdens every day is worse to think of.

“I do!” Yuko assured her with determined eyes.

“Then…” Mariko raise her wand and close her eyes then everything just to turn into magic. Everything that happened to Takamina also happen to Yuko except its Mariko who become the unicorn.

“Mariko?” Yuko asked with wide eyes open.

“What’s with the reaction? I thought you know that this would happen.” Mariko rolled her eyes.

“I’m now taller than you!”

“Just get off Yuu-chan, I don’t want anyone to see this scenario anymore.”

“Are you sure?” Yuko asked.

“Wow Yuko can’t jump to a unicorn now though she always jump to the backs of akb members and to the top of her nyanyan” Mariko joked.

“And I’ll be doing this because of her.” Yuko Jumped off to the back of the unicorn.

“Thanks Mariko, please take care of Nyanyan.”

“Roger.” The unicorn wiggle its tail.

“Are you ready, you know that it’s kind of dangerous but I’ll be there – “

“I know. I know.” Yuko tap the head of the unicorn with a smile. Even it’s all of the sudden, she’s now prepared for everything.

Then a huge rainbow appeared and the unicorn run through it, the akibahara stage return to its normal face.

“Everything will be changed. I hope Minami could do it.” Aki-P thought. He’s now standing on the stage of Akibahara theatre.

“Gomene Yasusu.” Someone said behind him.

He turned to the direction of the voice and saw a unicorn coming from a rainbow and slowly transforming back to herself.

“I thought you left already.” Yasusu said.

Mariko didn’t reply and just lower her head to Aki-p and remained in that position for a while. She felt sorry, it’s not right to let anyone to know their magic except for Takamina whom they both agree. But Yuko is different, she’s the only one who decide but she can do nothing but to help her friend.

“You tried to follow us?” Aki-p asked plainly.

“No. Something happened.” Mariko now stood still, trying to look at Aki-p who’s raising his eyebrow.

“Yuko appeared after you went with Takamina. She told me that she saw everything and I stopped her on knowing the truth at first, but she’s my friend and we know each other well and that means we can’t lie to each other."

"She asked if she could also go back to the past and I refused but I peaked to her memories. A-And as I saw it, I felt sad for he, she had a lot of burdens – “

“I understand.” Aki-P cutted her.

Mariko looked at Yasusu who’s nodding. She felt relieved by Aki-P’s statement, she knows that Aki-P do really understand what happened and what’s happening to the girls especially to Yuko, the new ace.

“Let’s hope that they will be able to accomplish their purpose.”

Mariko gave a nod and both them started walking towards the door.



An Update yey ~ sorry for our mega slow update  :cry: been busy with other fics LOL  :peace:



Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 5.2] UPDATE !! 12/29/12
Post by: Wmatsui22 on January 01, 2013, 07:20:44 AM
Secret Train of Love

-Yes! Finally Updated!

-This chapter is so nice!

-Yuko and Takamina really loves Haruna and Acchan!

-while Mariko-sama is loyal friend

-I can't wait for your next update

-Thank You
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 5.2] UPDATE !! 12/29/12
Post by: cisda83 on January 08, 2013, 10:38:50 AM
It's getting more and more interesting although a bit confusing...

So Atsuko and Yuko don't have an affair with each other? Not cheating thier individual partner? Confusing...

Somehow until chapter 5.1, it seem like Yuko and Atsuko are lover too...

Well anyhow... thank you for the fic.

Can't wait to see the next one

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 5.2] UPDATE !! 12/29/12
Post by: unicorn48 on January 20, 2013, 12:54:38 PM
Seret Train of Love (Chapter 6)

Yuko’s POV

“Yuuchan..”

“Yuuchan..”

I felt gentle hands caressing my hair making my consciousness come back. I slowly opened my eyes and saw a worried face of Harunainfront of me, apparently I’m laying down on her thighs. Something is weird.

“You suddenly fainted, If you want I can askNinagawa-sensei to postpone the filming" Haruna said giving me a bottle of water. I tried to stand up but my head suddenly ached causing me to fall down to her thighs again. “itaii ~”

“Yu-Yuuchan ?!”

“daijoubu, I really like NyanNyan’s thighs hehe,” I joked, to ease the worry in Haruna’s face. I don’t want her to be worrying about me and all – AGAIN. This is just a headache and wait, did she just say that we’re in the middle of filming? The UZA single is out a couple of weeks ago. And the janken single, I know I’m not in it so, what the hell is happening ?

“P-pervert!!!” She’s about to slap me but she stopped, She can’t hurt an already hurt person. “If you just didn’t fainted I-“

“Don’t worry so much NyanNyan, I’m Oshima Yuko after all.” I tried to stand up again; the head ache is not that bad anymore. I faced Haruna and became shocked at what I’m seeing. She’s wearing our Heavy Rotation lingerie !Okay so it’s not because of the sexy Haruna with lingerie in front of me that I became shocked, I liked it and all but what shocked me is the fact that Haruna is wearing it. The exactly the same Lingerie she wore at our Heavy Rotation PV. Of course I know that since I always look at her. I looked down at myself and realized that I’m wearing my HebiRote lingerie too.

I looked around us, It’s the backstage area of the set filled with dress and lightings. There’s a wall that separates us from the filming part. Haruna looked at me with confusion but I’m more confused of what’s happening.

“w-what are we filming?”

“Eh? Don’t tell me you forgot. It’s your single, baka !”

“Sou da..” So it is heavy rotation after all. But just to make sure.. “What’s the date today NyanNyan?”

“June 27, 2010. Stop asking weird questions Yuuchan !”

“Gomenasai, it must be the head ache.” I lied. “Let’s go back to the set?”

“It’s not that I’m really worried but stop acting like that..it makes me worried.”

“awwww ~” Due to her tsundereness and over cuteness a  jumped into her and buried my face to her breast.

“Yamette !” She tried to push me away with no effort at all,

“Maybe we shouldn’t go back after all.” I winked at her, giving off my perverted grin.

“Pervert!”

I ignored her statement since I know it’s true and continued clinging to her till we reached the set which is not that far from the backstage since duh, it’s the backstage..at the back of the stage. And woah, I’m really at the HebiRote shooting. It’s like.. I’m back at the past. Wait.. Yeah, I’m back at the past !It did work ! But why here? Why in my moment of glory?

“There you are, are you okay now ?”Ninagawa-san asked. Yup, Mika Ninagawa-san, the director of HebiRote PV.

“Hai, sorry for the trouble.” I lowered my head and turned to NyanNyan who is now busy chatting with Mariko-sama. I went to them and gave a knowing smile to Mariko, but it seems like she didn’t notice. Gah, never mind.

“Where did we left of?” I asked, “Fainted. Sorry.”

“You’re in the part of kissing Acchan when you fainted, maybe there?” Mariko-sama said plainly.

“Oh,”Chill ran to my body, I looked at NyanNyan who seems like it’s okay – the kissing with Acchan and all. Now that I think about it, we have talked about this in the past- the past before this past where I’m in which is currently the present. “right, thanks.”

“Oshima-san?” I heard Ninagawa-san’s call so I immediately went to her.

“Gomenasai,” I bowed again,

“So we will be filming the part where you’ll take of your shirt and …” She said giving off the instructions which I already know since I already finished this thing off before. It’s a good thing that we will be shooting the PV’s opening first before the kiss because.. It’s the kiss! And I don’t know why I’m having butterflies on my stomach just because of reminiscing that scene from before.

“3,2,1 Lights, Camera, Action !”

After just 8-10 minutes of shooting that part, it’s already over. Since as I have said a while ago, I already mastered that damn part before.

“Very Good! Now, since we have time left, we’ll take the part of you and Maeda-san.”

“H-Hai.” I answered nervously; I shifted my gaze to Acchan who’s currently teasing Takamina with the lingerie our Captain is wearing. They look cute. Yeah, seriously. But Acchan.. She looks somewhat down. Ninagawa-sensei called her attention and she immediately followed. She explained the things that she explained to me about how the kissing part will be and what not. Acchan gave me a smile, so I gave her a smile too in return.

We went to the center position where all the cameras are pointed, I looked at Acchan who’s infront of me – very veryinfront, if there’s such a word, since there’s only like 15cm that puts us apart. Acchan’s make-up is cute, like very cute. And her lingerie too. And speaking of Acchan, this is our first kiss ever.  Yeah, I always kiss other members, mainly Team K since I find them cute, and NyanNyan too, but NyanNyan of course is different since you know, I love her. But I love Team K and AKB48 too but it’s platonic. So I guess it’s okay to kiss Acchan. Before. If I didn’t came from the present.

“3,2,1 Lights, Camera, Action !”

This is just a kiss.

A kiss with Acchan.

I pouted cutely not minding my heart’s fast beat. Will Acchan hear this ? I hope not. Acchan pouted too and went closer to me, since I’m not moving. She made a quick peck with my lips and it’s done. But the abnormal beating of my heart is not.
And this is how our first kiss happened.

“And Cut !Very Good,Oshima-san and Maeda-san.”Ninagawa-san said, I unconsciously turned to Acchan who also looked at me with a smile.

“It’s nice to work with you.” We both said as we bowed to the director infront of us. We went back to the backstage since it’s others turn to be filmed. I searched for NyanNyan but it looks like it’s her turn so I’m stucked here with a bunch of people and Acchan.
And that’s where Mariko-sama finally appeared. She went to me with a pocari sweat drink. She grabbed the nearest chair and sat beside me. I remembered the present Mariko-sama’sreminder, that I should talk to the past’s Mariko once I arrived and all. And wow, my memory of the present – now I’m calling it ‘Future’ since I’m currently in the past, is now coming back.

“Mariko-sama ~ busy later?” I asked after I realized that I can’t really talk to her here.

“Your treat?” She asked , as if she knows what I mean.

“sure ~”

“You okay now ?” She asked, If she’s talking about the headache or Atsuko I don’t know.

“I hope,” I answered plainly, A P.A went to us and told Mariko-sama that it’s her turn along with other senbatsu to film. I bid her good bye and started to gaze at the not so empty wall of the backstage.

Then, I saw Acchan walking towards me. I pretended to continue gazing at the not so empty wall, ignoring the other girl. She sat at where Mariko sat and started a conversation.

“You seemed a little bit not you in the filming Yuko,” she remarked, “something bothering you?”

Ohh, hell you ask me that Acchan, is what I want to say but I don’t say rude things to beautiful girls.

“Not really, I guess it’s because of my head ache.”

“Sou..Takamina said you fainted a while ago.” She said with a LITTLE concern in her voice. Yeah, we’re not really that close even though we’ve been in this industry, but I think we are close but not really, there’s always that sense of rivalry like a wall..now, but before – I mean in the future it’s different. And this conversation may lead us from breaking that wall down, but do I still want to?

“Stress from work?” She asked,

“I guess?”

“Let’s go out sometime,” She said giving me that damn smile again.

“And when is that ‘sometime’?” I asked jokingly.

“How about Today? Dinner?”

“It sounded like you’re hooking me up.” I remarked. Hiding the I-don’t-know-what feeling in my voice.

“So? We can tell NyanNyan, don’t worry” She joked. “It’s nothing illegal.”

Yeah right. But I can’t rather, I don’t want to.

“Atsukooo ~”

Takamidget, great. Wait… Takamina came from the future too right ?

“Hey Yuko ~ Are you okay now?” Takamina asked,

“Un, How about you?” I asked back, so if I fainted, Takamina should also have fainted right? Just to make sure.

“Yeah,” She smiled,

“Geez, Midgets are getting attacked by headaches eh?” Atsuko joked, pinching the cheeks of Takamina. Awkward? No. How about for me ? I don’t know. They’re happy as I can see.

“What’re you doing here Minami? Done preaching stuffs with the members?” Acchan said sarcastically,
 
“Yeah, and Aki-P said that we can have a break later. Let’s go out,”

I can see Acchan raising an eyebrow. I guess this is something new for her. Takamina, as I can see is trying to make Acchan happy and like giving everything Atsuko really wants – time with her, since Takamina is always busy, her attention is cutted into AKB and Acchan – at the future. Acchan should feel happy. I think.

I feigned a cough, making Takamina realize that I’m still with them and it’s not the place to get lovey dovey with a certain girlfriend. But anyway, it seems like they don’t care. Whatever,

“Minami, you’re late idiot. I already invited Yuko off to dinner later, You can go with us if you want.” Acchan suggested, So she’s still insisting about this dinner thing.

“But I didn’t even said –“

“Sure,” Takamina said happily. Baka-midget, just to spend time with Acchanhuh ? “Bring NyanNyan too Yuko ~ and it’s a double date.”
 
“I know this newly opened restaurant; let’s meet at the station at 6:30 pm.”

“E-Eh ?” No escape.

“Oshima-san, Maeda-san, Shinoda-san, Itano-san, Kashiwagi-san….” A P.A said calling our names, it’s time for some filming again. We went to the dressing room to change to HebiRote uniforms. NyanNyan is already there having a hair dresser fix her hair, I went to her to ask about the somewhat double date later.

“Acchan asked me if I want to have dinner with her and I said yes, and Takamina will come too, do you want to come with me?” If Haruna don’t want to go, then It can be my excuse. Reverse Psychology eh ?

“Why don’t you rest? You fainted a while ago.”
“Come on, I can rest after that ~ And we should spend quality time together. With Takamina and Acchan that is. Or if you want, we can just go to my apartment and --”

“Okay, Okay.”

“Okay about what? The one in my apartment?

“Ecchiii ! Geez Yuko when will you change ?”

“But you like it anyway.” I grinned sheepishly, “So?”

“The one with Acchan and Takamina,”

“awww, okay then.” I scratched my hair, not really knowing whether or not this is a good idea or if I really don’t want to spend the evening with Takamina and Acchan, and Acchan again. Another P.A arrived, telling us that it’s time to shoot the dance version. We quickly went outside, and did our job.

After the shooting and non-stop rehearsing, it’s finally done! The PV, but it will still be polished, but I did great, since I already memorized and performed the dance steps a lot – in the future that is. And It’s really fun, actually reliving this moment. Okay, except for the ItsumoKiittetapart, since my hand sweated a lot without knowing why. Or I guess I know why but I hope I didn’t.
I went to NyanNyan to bid good bye since I’m going out with Mariko-sama for lunch, She told me to rest but I told her that If I’m going to rest, I want it in a bed with her.

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“Nice café here,” Mariko-sama remarked as she sipped her frappe. We really wanted to have lunch somewhere decent but we ended up in this Unicorlandia café, I don’t even know if this is really a café since everything is in here. Like really. Appliances, Food (Japanese to Mexican to whatever) and Spa.

“Yeah.” I answered, actually, this café is not the one I recommended but Mariko-sama insisted going here. If it’s because of the Unicorn stuff, I don’t know. Really.

“Something you want to talk about?” She asked, “You seemed a bit un-you awhile ago.”

“Really?”

“I’m the great Mariko-sama.”

“I know that, and I know that you’re a unicorn too.” With that said, Mariko-sama almost blurted out the frappe in her mouth, good thing she managed to control it.

“W-what?”

“A unicorn what else. Don’t tell me you don’t have a clue about what’s going on with me and all?”

“Are you insane? Me? A unicorn? Geez Yuko.”

“Yup, and also Aki-P, don’t worry you told me all about it in the future, and oh, yeah I’m from the future, more like the present in the future but it’s so complicated.”

“I did?”

“Don’t hide it from me, I know everything. Don’t tell me you don’t know?”

“Actually I don’t. Since I trust that you’re telling the truth, and that you’re from the future… I guess okay, so I’m the one who made you go back to the past?”

“I pleaded you to do so and all… And I fainted a while ago right? That’s the reason! I just came here…”

“Are you sure about what you’re talking about?”

“You even whispered.. what is that..uhmm..” I tried to recall that sentence or was it a phrase that she whispered in my ear when she tried to look at my memories. Gottcha !

“ ‘mongayonlimot, limotngayonmo’ ”

With that, Mariko-sama’s eyes widened and it looked like she’s suffering from a head ache too. I don’t have powers right? What’s happening? Did I said the spell wrong that it made her irritated or annoyed?

“Ahhhhhhhh!” She shouted, I quickly went to her side and patted her back.

“Mariko?”

“Mariko?”

After a minute or two, it stopped. I think the headache is not there anymore and Mariko-sama is now smiling. Smiling creepily to me.
“W-what happened?”

“Sorry for the bother Yuko, I needed any spell to awaken up my memory of the future. And it’s a good thing you managed to
remember that damn spell or else, I wouldn’t remember.”

“Oh,” Was the only thing that escaped my mouth. So if I didn’t remember that damn spell then I’ll be stucked here forever trying to figure out what went wrong in the unicorn-past thingy.

“Just, talk to me about how the things are going, and I’ll update you about the future. I still have a link there,”

“Okay, and Mariko you know the things that’s inside my head right? Everything?”

“Quite. And I’m sorry about it.”

“No, It’s okay. Rather, I want to tell you something. About a certain dinner later.” I sipped at my coffee trying to wet down my dry throat. “You know, Acchan asked me out – but not that ask-ask but just a friendly dinner. I’m not really going to agree but she insisted, and now we’re going with Takamina and Haruna.”

“And then?”

“I’m quite bothered by it. I’m trying to avoid these stuffs with her, but...”

“You can’t?” Mariko-sama guessed correctly, “Yuko, anything is fine. Avoiding her or not, it’s okay. Everything depends on how you’ll handle the situation. If you’ll escape from it, it might just get worse.”

She has a point there, but the thing is, I don’t think I can’t not escape it. When you love somebody too much…

“Yuko, always remember the reason why you pleaded to go here – in the past.”

“Yeah, I promise.”

I hope I’ll be able to, Haruna.

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“Try this Acchan,” Takamina said as she putted a dish in Acchan’s plate, I’ve been secretly looking at them for quite some time now and I can say that with Takamina’s over sweetness, ants may just arrive and devour her in.

I continued eating the food in front me, trying to avoid my gaze into the two. Just what’s taking NyanNyan so long in the rest room?

“Mou, Minami what’s with this suddenly?” Acchan asked, making me stop for a while.

“Huh? You should get used to this.” Takamina answered. Suuure, General Manager is using her chance very well. Maybe I should too? At last, Haruna came back. She went to her seat in front of me pouting cutely.

“Any problem?” I asked,

“Nothing, just photoshoots tomorrow my manager called.”

“Isn’t that good NyanNyan?” Takamina remarked, Acchan nodded.

“It’s supposed to be next Saturday, and it’s my free day tomorrow…”

“aww, that’s okay we can always be together on your next free time,” I joked, though not really since It’s half true.

“S-stop it.”Haruna said blushing,My girlfriend is forever a tsundere, even in the future eh.

“The two of you are so cute,” Acchan remarked, but something is not right, just a hunch.

“Of course, NyanNyan is ~” I answered back,

“By the way, are you now okay? I made Takamina drink some medicine for headaches, it’s herbal though. I have some spare just in case,” Acchan said, as she looked throughout her bag for the herbal thing.

“N-Not really, I’m quite okay now.”

“Better safe than sorry, Yuuchan” Haruna said, Great. No Escape again.

“Okay?”

Apparently, even though I hope she didn’t, Acchan finally found the herbal she’s talking about. I opened my hand nicely in front of her.

“Maybe Yuko is being stressed being the center and all.” Takamina jokingly said, “Acchan used to have such before right?”

“Un,” Acchan replied, I just smiled. Acchan’s facial expression is pokered so I don’t really know what’s going on through her head.
 
“But it fades away suddenly if you have a cute girlfriend beside you… and in bed.” I winked at Takamina, knowing for sure she gets what I’m talking about. Ha-Ha ! Haruna blushed, pinching me on my side suddenly. I turned to her and made a hug gesture, “Ne, NyanNyan”

“Speaking of which, I’m sorry for the kiss with Yuko in the PV, I don’t want NyanNyan to be angry.” Acchan said, smiling sheepishly.

“Oh, and I’m sorry too, Takamina, but Acchan’s lips is soft.” I blurted out unconsciously, anyway Takamina chuckled so I think she took that as a joke, but I can smell a jealous cat beside me. “But NyanNyan’s is sweeter.”

“D-Don’t worry Acchan, Yuko and I talked about it a day before.” Haruna reassured.

“And I’m sure that it’s completely Platonic.”

“Yup,” I smiled, trying to reassure my head that the abnormal beating of my heart when Acchan opened up about the kiss is completely normal and that, as Takamina said, it’s completely Platonic. Rather, It’s gonna be platonic.

After that talk about random stuff, we talked about AKB and about things about fashion and all since NyanNyan said that she’ll be having a photoshoot- a modeling one tomorrow. Then, NyanNyan and I decided to bid goodbye to the two.

Inside the cab with Haruna – since I’ll be spending the night with her, without perverted stuff of course, I don’t want her to be dead tired for tomorrow, or… not, just kidding, Haruna putted her head in my shoulders.

“Tired?” I asked, tilting my head a little to see her face. Haruna is really beautiful, But it’s not the reason why I fell in love with her. It’s because she’s – I don’t know. She’s just special in every way.

“I’m the one who should be asking that, You fainted a while ago.”

“Stop with that, I’m already okay and there’s Acchan’s herbal and all.”

“If you say so...” Then she closed her eyes as she dwelled in a deep sleep.

After like 25 minutes, we finally reached Haruna’s house. I woke her up, and arranged the bed for her since she’s very sleepy. I sat at the bed, where she’s currently laying and caressed her face gently. I miss this. I miss our times like this, when no doubts are in the middle of our relationship, unlike the future. This is the reason why I went back here. Haruna. I don’t want her to suffer. I’ll make things right.

I was about to sleep too when I saw a light coming from my phone, I opened it and saw a message- a familiar message since I already received it before – in the future’s past I mean.

It’s from Acchan.

‘Drink the herbal Yuko( ´∀`)
It’s effective you know wwwwww
Thanks for coming at the dinner, Did you enjoy?
Let’s go out again.
(´ ▽`).。

-Atsuko’



An Update Yey  :cow: Comments and remarks are forever accepted  :peace:

How's it ?

@Wmatsui22 Thanks for reading and commenting  :) :deco: Yup, they do love each other very much... or so it seems  XD
@O r i g a m i Thanks thanks thanks ~ And about the ICTF.. we'll see about that  :lol: Just kidding, we'll update that soon.
@cisda83 Thanks ! And yeah, it really is quite confusing, But i hope our next chapters will enlighten you or what orz orz We'll know later (on the next chapterssss) who is cheating with who.



Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 6] UPDATE !! 01/20/13
Post by: takamae on January 20, 2013, 05:00:08 PM
Why I got the feeling acchan the one who start the first move, is it?
Poor takamina, she so madly inlove with acchan

Yuko said she love haruna but feel butterflies for acchan too
And for acchan, I don't get what she feel for takamina and yuko
Why acchan and yuko act like this, it make me angry  :angry:

Thanx for the update :)
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 6] UPDATE !! 01/20/13
Post by: Haruko on January 21, 2013, 12:17:24 AM
Why I got the feeling acchan the one who start the first move, is it?
Poor takamina, she so madly inlove with acchan

Yuko said she love haruna but feel butterflies for acchan too
And for acchan, I don't get what she feel for takamina and yuko
Why acchan and yuko act like this, it make me angry  :angry:

Thanx for the update :)

yeah!!! aww i dont know if i need to continue reading...
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 6][Atsumina|Kojiyuu] UPDATE !!20/13
Post by: yourockme on January 21, 2013, 02:39:17 AM
OMG OMG!
Aishhhhh fangirling this fic  :bleed eyes:
i wish there will be an update tomorrow LOL   XD
Ok maybe I'll just wait for it  :jerk:
Aishhh ok i need to calm myself  :rock:
YOSH! Thankkkk youu for the update
I really love reading fics by unicorns HEHEHE
Mua mua Atsuyuu Atsumina Kojiyuu ●▽●
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 6][Atsumina|Kojiyuu] UPDATE !!20/13
Post by: Tam_atsu on January 21, 2013, 12:34:51 PM
Atsuyuu/kojiyuu!!! Like this so much!! :)))
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 6][Atsumina|Kojiyuu] UPDATE !!20/13
Post by: cisda83 on January 22, 2013, 04:01:44 PM
Eh... the cheating is going to happen again...

It seem that Atsuko initiate everything... or Yuko first just the time b4 she actually came back to the past...

Going to be interesting again....

Can't wait.... Thank you
 
 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 6][Atsumina|Kojiyuu] UPDATE !!20/13
Post by: FlameHazeKatsu on January 22, 2013, 06:42:19 PM
Wow~ Tomochin is the superior one here...if ya know what u mean...

Prologue - nani kore...Acchan...tsk..
Chapter 1 - I feel sorry for Takamina
Chapter 2 - wth Yuko, u cheating on Kojiharu, how could you?!
Chapter 3 - I knew it!!
Chapter 4 - ehh?? Amnesia.....huh.... And man Takamina here is really.....
Chapter 5 - My reaction  :mon duh:
And I'm glad she Yuko wants to fix her relationship with Kojiharu cuz if she didn't I would've hate her guts...
Chapter 6 - Yuko better gather all of her crap cuz I'm having second thoughts now...yup...and *sigh* she just had to get that message....don't let this bother u!

wow I'm focusing all my comments to Yuko (im just bothered on her actions) even though I'm like a Takamina fan.... thx for the story~~  :mon thumb: looking forward for updates~~  :mon yeah:
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 6][Atsumina|Kojiyuu] UPDATE !!20/13
Post by: miayaka on January 22, 2013, 07:59:29 PM
i love the plot that taka is so inlove with acchan nyahahaha
I know there's a reason behind all these and thats what im looking forward to!
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 6][Atsumina|Kojiyuu] UPDATE !!20/13
Post by: kahem on January 25, 2013, 06:15:27 PM
Imagining aki-p as an unicorn makes me laugh lol
I hope Takamina and Yuko will success
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 6][Atsumina|Kojiyuu] UPDATE !!20/13
Post by: Wmatsui22 on January 27, 2013, 08:27:14 AM
Hello.

Nice chapter!

But I am a little confused by Acchan,

Is she have a feelings for Yuko?

I hope not (Sad)

I love KojiYuu and AtsuMina

Please Update Soon! :D

Thank You

Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 6][Atsumina|Kojiyuu] UPDATE !!20/13
Post by: unicorn48 on June 13, 2013, 10:43:34 AM
Secret Train of Love (Chapter 7)

It has been a week since the double date between Atsuko-Minami and Haruna-Yuko happened. Takamina made sure that she has a time for Atsuko every day. It has been hard for her part since she must take care of the members too. In the past (the past before she went to this past) she always sacrifices her time with Atsuko for the sake of AKB but now, she’ll do her best to not repeat the mistake she did before even if it means sacrificing her time for herself for the sake of the two things she loves the most – AKB and Atsuko.

 Since it’s currently their break, Takamina decided to visit Aki-P’s office and talk to him about the things in the current present, and the future. Upon reaching the hallway leading to Aki-P’s office, Takamina saw Tomochin coming out from it smiling to herself. Takamina felt a bit nervous seeing her close friend and happy at the same time. Takamina doesn’t know if Tomochin will be able to sense that she came from the future since Tomochin is one of the persons who know Takamina the most. Or maybe, Takamina is just having weird thoughts.

“Tomochin, Ohayou.” Takamina greeted, earning a smile from the other girl.

“Ohayou Minami.”

As much as Takamina wants to make a conversation with the other girl, she has to talk to Aki-P first. And unfortunately, Aki-P’s time is gold so Takamina should hurry before the old man decides to go somewhere else.

Takamina gave a smile to Tomochin and headed to Aki-P’s office.

After knocking, Takamina opened the door and saw Aki-P who looked younger the last time she saw him, smiling at her. “Good Morning, I have been expecting you. Take a sit.”

“Hai.” Takamina answered as she followed Aki-P’s order and took a sit in front of Aki-P’s table.

“How’s your day?” Aki-P asked.

“It’s fine. Well, tiring as usual but it’s fun.” Takamina answered.

“That’s great to hear. I heard you have been spending a lot of time with Atsuko this past week.” Aki-P said.

Takamina gave a nod. “Un, But don’t worry I’m not forgetting my job over my team. What I’m doing is always for AKB…”

“And Atsuko.” Aki-P said then he continued after a dramatic pause. “I know Takahashi, The future has been bad for her and for AKB itself.”

“H-huh? What do you mean?”

“It’s a long story. I have a meeting somewhere. Let’s talk about that next time,” Aki-P said,

“I just came here to report that I came to the past successfully. But of all the happenings, why in the shooting of heavy rotation ? Why not in the place where Acchan is supposed to enter the car ?”

“It’s your job to find out. I don’t know too.”

“And what about the head ache?”

“Don’t worry. It’s normal. Takahashi, report once in a while to me about Maeda’s situation. And never forget the reason why you’re here.”

“H-Hai,” Takamina stood up and bowed as a sign of respect. “Thanks for the time.”

“I’m doing this to prevent Acchan from getting hurt.” Takamina thought while heading towards the door. She’ll do everything for Acchan. If she won’t be successful in doing things right in the past, things may get worse.

“Tomochin…” Takamina suddenly mumbled upon seeing a figure sitting in one of the bench outside Aki-P’s office. Even if all she can see is the back part, Takamina knows for sure that the girl sitting in there is her friend.

“Hey,” Takamina patted the other girl’s shoulders. Tomochin closed her phone and looked at Takamina with a smile she wasn’t able to hide.

“H-Hey.”

“Do you still have an appointment with Aki-P? He told me he will have a meeting somewhere today so…” Takamina informed. Tomochin just gave a chuckle and signaled the midget captain in sitting beside her.

“I talked to him earlier and I was just waiting for you,”

“W-well that’s nice? And what can be the reason for it, Miss?”

“I thought I should tell you this first…” Tomochin paused dramatically, “Aki-P said I’ll be having a solo artist debut!”

Takamina’s instincts told her that she should hug the happy girl beside her so she did. “W-wow. I mean, I’m so happy for you. I’m sure you’ll do great. This has always been your dream, right?”

“Yeah… But it’s still tentative. I mean there’s no date yet.”

Takamina tried to break the hug but Tomochin didn’t seem to want to so she prolonged the hug too.

Takamina wondered whether it was the same reaction she did before when Tomochin told her she’ll have a solo debut. But was the hug this long? Well nothing’s wrong about it. It actually felt good and kind of warm. Okay, in a non-perverted way like what Yuko will do if she’s in Takamina’s place now. When Tomochin told her before (in the future’s past) that she will be having a solo debut, Takamina felt a small bit of jealousy because it’s her dream too but of course happiness for her friend dominated the feeling.

But at this moment, It’s only pure happiness.

“O-oh,” Tomochin said, noticing that the two of them are still hugging. She quickly broke the hug with a small laugh. “Just full of emotions.”

“It’s okay.” Takamina smiled sincerely. “Should I ask for an autograph now?” She joked.

“What?” Tomochin said in surprise earning a chuckle from Takamina. Apparently, the autograph thing is a joke.

“Break is almost over. Maybe we should head back?” Takamina said, standing up. Tomochin did the same too.

“Let’s go eat Katsudon later, if you’re not busy that is. My treat.” This has been something Takamina have always regretted. When Tomochin said about the single debut to her before, she just congratulated the other girl and did not treat her to anything. Well, Takamina has always treated her close friends whenever something good happened to them. So maybe, it’s the time to straighten things up.

“Is this a date?” Tomochin asked, hiding the excitement in her voice.

Takamina blushed over Tomochin’s statement. “T-that… No I mean, friendly date?”

“You’re blushing!”

“I’m not.”

“Yes you are.”

“I’m not.”

“You’re small.”

“I- okay I am.”

The two continued walking towards their respective rehearsal room. A bit late, but I guess it’s worth it.

Treating Tomochin to katsudon won’t change the past she’s currently in, right?

As soon as their rehearsal was over Tomochin changed clothes not wanting to smell bad if ever, not that she do smell bad but this is a once in a lifetime opportunity to be treated by the midget captain with only the two of them together so she should be on her best self. She practiced on the mirror the face she should be using – not too happy, not too excited and no heart shaped eyes. Just the usual Tomochin… hanging out with a friend.

Friend, huh?

She slapped her face lightly to stop herself from thinking about things like that. Having Takamina as her friend is a very great thing already and she wishes nothing more. But then, why is she being ecstatic over this mini-hangout?

She knows the answer but decided to ignore it.

This is for the best.

“Tomochin ~ you ready?” Takamina asked as she walked towards Tomochin.

Tomochin flinched at Takamina’s presence. “Oh, yeah. Let’s go?” Then she suddenly remembered Acchan. “How about Acchan?” Great. Why does it feel like she’s cheating on her best friend?

“Oh. I asked her a while ago but she said she’ll be having a photo shoot with Yuko or do you want to resched our date so Acchan can come?” Takamina said smiling, but there was a hint of disappointment on the last part of what she just said and Tomochin wasn’t sure if it was just her imagination working or what.

“No, no, NO!” Tomochin said with a sudden burst of energy. “I- I’m okay if i-it’s just the two of us.”

“Really?” Takamina said for reassurance.

“Y-yeah. I- I mean I-It h-has been a long time. W-we’re close f-friends right? So I-It’s o-okay….” Tomochin said blushing. And why the hell is she stuttering?

“That’s my Tomochin!” Takamina said happily. “I’m getting hungry~ We shouldn’t let the food wait.”

Tomochin stiffened at Takamina’s words. My Tomochin. She wasn’t able to move that the confused Takamina had to drag her out of the room.

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“You’re not really planning about graduating after your first solo single are you?”

Tomochin stopped at the midget’s words. “Huh?”

“Well… I’m sure your first single will be a big hit.” Takamina tried to say plainly as she started digging out the katsudon in front of her after mumbling an ‘Itadakimasu’. She has been paranoid about the graduation thingy and maybe this is a good chance to make Tomochin confide to her IF EVER the girl suddenly decides about graduating. It didn’t happen before but just to be sure.

“Not really. I still have a long way to go and… I still like being with AKB. And hey! The single isn’t released yet.” Tomochin pointed out. “And if ever, I want to be with AKB till I get old.”

“Yeah, me too.” Takamina said in agreement.

“I think Takamina’s break will come soon too.”

“I think that soon is still far.” Takamina laughed at the other girl’s statement. Sadly, that ‘soon’ is still after Acchan’s graduation on their Tokyo Dome concert. Knowing this, she’ll devote herself to AKB more and Atsuko. “I want to focus on AKB as a whole, we still have a long way to.”

“That’s a very Takamina answer.” Tomochin replied.

“Hey, what’s that supposed to mean?!”

“That’s a good thing you know.” Tomochin pouted her already pouty lips.

“It’d be really good if we’ll reach million sales.”

“Yeah.” Was all Tomochin answered. It felt like they’re on a friendly work meeting rather than a friendly date. All they talked about was work work and work. Not that she doesn’t like it, but can they talk about something else? Like…

“Atsuko?” Tomochin mumbled unconsciously.

“Oh Acchan is doing fine. You should know that lol.” Takamina said, confused about Tomochin suddenly mumbling Atsuko’s name.

“Oh yeah.”  Tomochin was also taken aback by her word. Why Atsuko?!

“I thought she was acting weird these past few days.” She said. Well this one is true. She’s concerned with the way Acchan is behaving since the girl is really acting weird. Not that she needs to be confined in some rehabilitation center… but she’s just not that Atsuko-ish.

“Hmm?” Takamina listened. This is new, In the past Tomochin didn’t tell her anything about Atsuko being weird so maybe treating her to Katsudon is a good thing.

“I don’t understand too. Something is just off.”

“I guess she’s just stressed from work.” Takamina sighed.

“Maybe the two of you should go out for a date. Go to Disneyland or something? That could help. Besides, Atsuko really loves Disneyland.” There it is again, Tomochin helping AtsuMina. Sometimes she pities herself for always being the third wheel. But then a three legged chair is more stable than a ladder or something.

“Now that you say it…” Takamina paused thinking. “That’s actually a great idea! You’re really the best Tomochin!” She said as she held Tomochin’s hand making the tsundere girl blush.

“Tha-That’s nothing. I’m Atsuko’s bestfriend after all.”

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While Takamina is currently plotting something for Atsuko and enjoying Tomochin’s company, Atsuko is currently pushing herself in giving her smile in her photo shoot with Yuko. As an idol and face of AKB she had mastered the art of smiling even if it’s forced but right now, It seems like she have lost everything she learned.

She’s finding it hard to smile in the presence of Oshima Yuko.

She was okay with the other girl before but they weren’t really close because of their generation in AKB and team. They were casual with one another but nothing more nothing less but everything shattered when the second sousenkyo happened. It’s not that she hates Yuko for getting her spot. It’s just that she doesn’t want to lose. And the thing is, she can’t understand why she lost to this girl beside her.

 So why did she invited Yuko to the dinner thing?

She wants to know Yuko more. She wants to understand why. She wants to know Yuko’s strengths and weaknesses. Yeah, especially the weaknesses.

The photographer in charge of the two’s photo shoot was shaking his head, not really liking the outcome of the pictures. Despite the smiling faces of the two AKB48 aces, he can’t understand why he can’t make a good shot.

“Maeda-san, Oshima-san, look at the camera as if you’re not happy.”

Acchan and Yuko who were confused with what’s happening just followed what the expert said. It was supposed to be a happy photoshoot but…

“Okay there, Smug faces here we go. Nice.” The photographer clicked his camera. The outcome was way better. The emotions are more real. “Now, maeda-san try tilting your head on Oshima’s shoulder.”

“Okay, Oshima-san you do that too.” Yuko followed hesitantly. She must act professional but she can’t stop the abnormal beating of her heart. She just hopes that Atsuko won’t be able to hear it.

After more clicks the photo shoot was finally done.

The two were very happy because they can’t bear to be with each other.



When did we last updated this?! OMG. It felt like years and we are really sorry.  :mon cute: We have been busy with life jk we don't have life. We're just lazy. But we're guilty so.. sorry really. We even intended to finish this fic last March  XD

For those who are reading our fic (IF there's any) Thank you very much! We won't abandon our fanfics no matter how many eternity passes  :nervous

Comments and remarks are forever appreciated  :cow:
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 7: 6/13 The fic is still alive]
Post by: 48GGMU on June 13, 2013, 11:52:15 AM
Moar Atsuyuu scene pleaseeee.... XD

1st comment here (though i've been read this story @ your tumblr lol)
Hmm, i smell some development of TakaTomo here...  :hehehe: :hehehe:
Its okay for me. Coz Acchan can be happy with Yuko (saw a raging cat glaring at me lol)  :imdead: :imdead: :imdead:

But in this fic, i love both Atsuyuu and Kojiyuu, so it doesn't matter for me if you make kojiyuuatsu in the end  :wahaha: :wahaha: :wahaha: :wahaha:

Thanks for the update Unicorn-san *give scandalous ni ikou's seifuku*  :bow: :bow:
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 7: 6/13 The fic is still alive]
Post by: AshuraX on June 13, 2013, 01:39:59 PM
YEZZA!!!

AtsuYuu~!!!

I hope the outcome would be AtsuYuu~!

Since there's SOOOO many AtsuMina and KojiYuu fics out there.

All hail AtsuYuu!!!!!!

I wanted some TomoAcchan but AtsuYuu takes priority >w>

Oh, and I wonder what Tomochin's feeling for Acchan and Takamina are... Can't wait! OwO/
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 7: 6/13 The fic is still alive]
Post by: cisda83 on June 13, 2013, 04:29:21 PM
Ah... so Takamina came back at the time after Yuko won the election

"Heavy Rotation'... Atsuko was not happy for being lost to Yuko

So she wanted to find out what's Yuko weakness especually...

Poor Tomochin.... she liked Takamina but did not dare to hope... because she knew that Takamina liked Atsuko...

I guess at this time... Atsuko still had not develop any romantic feeling toward Yuko...

So Minami needed to work fast if she wanted to change the future...

What's going to happen next... to Minami and Yuko being in this time...?

Would Takamina able to prevent Atsuko from being hospitalized

Can't wait to see the next

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Unicorlandia: Secret Train of Love [Chapter 7: 6/13 The fic is still alive]
Post by: Kazan on June 13, 2013, 08:24:47 PM
 AtsuYuu :thumbsup