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Title: Stay - Chapter III (06/16/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: dirtydeeds on November 16, 2012, 12:45:33 PM
Hi there people of jphip! i posted this oneshot on tumblr but then i remembered that i had this account so why not post it here. feel like i need to give you a heads up that what you're about to read is a really really fluffy OS and its also really long too about 5k+ words. those of you who can't stand fluffy fics can read my other oneshot on my Tumblr (http://"http://www.supermaji.tumblr.com")
:3  (i can't post the other one here because of the new rule). there are also TONS of grammatical error on this thing. This is my first ever oneshot so go easy on me  :oops:
A comment from you will be really well appreciated  :wub:
oh theres a link at one point of the story and i extremely recommend you to click it.

i suck so much at introductions *crawlsunderarock

btw Jurina and Mayu are both 15 in this story lol



Choudai, Darling!



“What about this one?”

A girl  in a black knee length dress spun around in front of her laptop screen. She strikes a pose,  A nervous smile plastered on her face as she waits for a response from an irritated looking girl on her laptop screen.
“Unless you’re planning to go to church with her, i suggest you try something else” The girl on the laptop screen exclaimed.
Feeling slightly hurt from her best friend’s comment, Mayu made a mental note to herself:

Next time Rabutan asks for advice, instead of being helpful give her a sarcastic comment instead.

“But this is the last outfit i have in my closet”
Mayu pouts as She looks down on her black dress. The long sleeved dress has a flappy white collar around the neck area and it makes Mayu’s sensitive skin itches like crazy.

‘Who am i kidding, Rabutan is right. I look like a freaking nun’

Feeling defeated, The girl with twin pigtails sits on the edge of her messy bed. She sighs as she stares at the already empty closet in front of her. It’s contents are scattered all over her pink room that you can barely see the surface of the floor. Her stuffed alpaca is staring at her from the corner of her room, judging her.

“I give up. Lets just Face it, im hopeless” She mumbles as she lays down on her back.

Hearing Mayu’s declaration, Rabutan immediately reacts
“Now now dont be so pessimist. You do realize how lucky you are dont you? Girls would kill to be in your position!”

Mayu stood up and put her laptop on her lap, ready to give her stubborn friend a piece of her mind
“Cant you see? thats the problem! im not one of those girls! I dont have stylish clothes, im not popular, i dont wear heels wherever i go, heck I dont even know how to use make up! what should i do? Shes gonna regret ever asking me out. Oh my God shes going to hate me… Rabutan, shes going to hate me!”
Mayu’s eyes starts to well up with tears. Her lips are quivering. Seeing the pathetic state of her best friend, Rabutan facepalms herself and let out a sigh   

“Mayu you idiot, don’t cry. Everything is going to be okay. You’ve had a crush on Jurina ever since middle school. You should know her better than anyone else. Besides, Jurina wouldnt even asked you out if she didnt like you in the first place.”

Hearing Rabutan’s comforting words, something snapped inside of her. Realizing crying isnt gonna solve anything, Mayu stood up as an idea striked her like a lightning bolt. She wiped the remaining tears on her face and turned around, facing her best friend.

“Youre right, i can’t give up now. I’ll be back in a bit” said Mayu before she rushed to the door, leaving her best friend dumbfounded, staring at the now empty pink bedroom.. 



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Mayu quietly opened the door to her parents bedroom and peeked inside to find her mom lounging on the bed, watching TV. She swallowed hard before completely entering her parents bedroom.

“Mom? Can i talk to you?”

Hearing her daughter’s voice, the woman turned and stood up from her position.

“You wanna talk to me? As in…. asking me for an advice?” the figure on the bed points to herself as she raised her eyebrows

Mayu answered with a slight nod as her mom questioned further

“Really?” her mom whispered

Mayu nods shyly and lowered her head trying to avoid her mother’s eyes.

Meanwhile, Mayu’s mom looking at her own daughter in disbelief, her hands covering her mouth as if something magical just happened in front of her eyes. Well, to the woman named Maeda Atsuko it is pretty magical.

“I have been waiting for this moment ever since you were born!! Come here! Sit here on the bed!”

Atsuko exclaimed enthustiacally as she pats the empty space on her bed, signalling her daughter to come over. Mayu closed the door behind her and flopped down next to her mom. She crossed her legs on the bed and fumbles with the hem of her nun looking dress.

“Okay here it goes…. Dont laugh okay?”

Atsuko shook her head  and lower the TV volume down before she let Mayu continue

“A girl i really like asked me out to dinner and im… I just have no clue what im doing right now”

Mayu mumbles into her hands. The older woman gasps in disbelief.  All this time, she never thought that her only daughter was capable of having human feelings. Atsuko is not prepared for this, but she’s gonna try her best.

“Aaaww! Isnt that nice? tell me, Whos the lucky maiden? “

 Atsuko asked in a sing song voice. She cant help to think that time flies by so fast. It only seems like yesterday she was teaching Mayuyu how to walk, picking her up from the kindergarten, reading her bed time stories and now, shes fifteen years old and asking her mom for dating advices.

“Her name is Jurina”

Murmured Mayu, she paused for a few seconds, trying to find the right words to describe the perfection that is Matsui Jurina .

“She goes to my school and shes a member of the track team. She has a gorgeous short black hair that she recently cut to add bangs which i think looks extremely cute on her. Shes also really nice to everyone at school, really smart too and she has this prince-like aura around her. Its kinda hard to explain, but youll know when you see her in person, but If i had to choose one word to describe Matsui Jurina, i think it would be… Perfection.”

   Mayu smile unconsiously from ear to ear  as the thought of Jurina’s face suddenly races through her brain. She failed to realize that her cheeks are turning bright pink and this doesnt go unnoticed by Atsuko whos having the time of her life, hearing her daughter babbling about her first crush.

“Seems to me that you really fancy this Matsui girl” teased Atsuko

“I do. Mom, i really really like her. Ever since i could remember” Mayu sigh as she grabbed one of the pillows on the bed and snuggle it

“All this time i never thought i could ever had a chance with her. Lots of girls in my school are crazy for her mom, and theyre not just ordinary girls mind you. Some of them are even models and here i am just…. Plain old me”  Mayu mumbled into the pillow.

“Plain? My kid is not plain! aww Come here honey” Atsuko wrapped her arms around her daughter, pulling her to her warmth. She kissed her forehead before she broke the hug.

“Listen, you are the prettiest, most adorable girl i have ever seen in my whole life”

Atsuko smiled as she stroked her daughter’s hair lovingly.

“And if that Matsui girl cant see that, well thats her lost. Honey, i know you really really like this girl, but you dont have to change who you are just to get her to like you. Make sure she likes you back because youre you. My previous otaku daughter”

“Thanks mom” mumbled Mayu

“The last part was really unnecessary though” Mayu joked receiving a soft giggle from her mom

“What time is your prince going to arrive?”

Before Mayu was able to reply, a loud voice coming from her papa downstairs cut her in.

“Atsuko! Theres a handsome looking girl at the door looking for our daughter!”

“That must be her. Shes early! Mom what do i do?” Mayu stood up as panic starts to take over her.

“Okay… First of all, youre not going out wearing that arent you?” Atsuko cringed. Making gestures with her hands.

“I dont know what else to wear! Thats why i came here in the first place! i was gonna ask you to pick out the outfit and maybe… do my make up for me” Mayu mumbled. Both the tips of her index fingers touching each others in a cute manner.

Atsuko stood up. She put both of her hands on Mayu’s shoulder and gaze into her daughter’s eyes.

“Dont worry honey, you have come to the right person”



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    Two figures are sitting opposite of each other in the living room. The girl with the short hair was fidgeting on her seat. her eyes are wandering around the room trying to distract herself from the obvious glare coming from the person sitting in front of her. The room is eerily quiet, only the ticking sound of the clock on the wall can be heard. The person sitting opposite of her is wearing a v neck tee and a pair of sweat pants, while the handsome looking girl was cladded in a cream colored knitted sweater, layering a buttoned up shirt inside of it.

“How long have you been dating Mayuyu?” The shorter of the two suddenly asked, making the short haired girl in front of her jolt.

“Oh were not dating. This is actually our first date” the short haired girl answered, flashing a cat like smile to appear confident. Shes not gonna lie though, she’s nervous as hell. She never thought a women this small could be so… Intimidating.

“What was your name again?”

“Its Jurina, Matsui Jurina.”

“Hmmm” the shorter one nods. Stroking an invisible beard below her chin.

“How do you do at school?”

“Pretty good. I dont mean to brag, but Im the top of my class” Jurina said, flashing a wink as she leaned closer to the women in front of her.

“I see”

The older woman crossed her hands in front of chest. Her face still bearing the same cold expression, While the younger girl keeps grinning from ear to ear.

Suddenly, the sound of light footsteps can be heard coming from the stairs, causing the two figures to turned their heads to the source of the noises. Jurina stood up from the couch and watch enthustiacally as Mayu make her way to the bottom of the stairs. She’s cladded in a simple floral dress with a brown knitted cardigan over. The usual flats Mayu usually wear are replaced with a pair of stylish ankle boots.

“Wow…”

‘So… So cute!’

Jurina thought that all her effort, mustering every bit of confidence she had to ask Mayu out was worth it at that point. The girl standing in front of her is simply… Breath taking.

“Sorry for the wait” Mayu said, fixing the cardigan her mom had lent her.

“You let your hair down….” Jurina pointed out.

“Y-yeah. Im still not sure about it though. What do you think?” Mayu asked shyly, while stroking the long strands of her hair.

“I think you look beautiful… N-not that you look less beautiful with your pigtails, i mean theyre great! I… I think any kind of hairstyle w-would fit you. You could even shave your head and still look pretty.” Jurina mentally facepalmed herself as she finished her sentence while Mayu is blushing furiously at Jurina’s compliment.

“Wow. She really does look like a prince” Atsuko suddenly appeared behind Her husband, smiling from ear to ear.

“She looks like a shemale to me” Takamina spat.

“Yhey look cute together” Atsuko elbowed her partner, as she watch the lack of interaction between the two girls in front of her. Jurina is fumbling with the hem of her sweater, while Mayu is struggling to make an eye contact with her

“We uuhm.. We should probably get going now” Jurina exclaimed

“Un” Mayu nods in agreement. She turned her head to her mom and mouthed ‘wish me luck’ before making her way to the front door. Jurina follow her behind.

Suddenly, Takamina grabbed Jurina’s arm and yank her before the poor girl reach the front door of the house.

“Listen, if she’s not back a virgin, i will hunt you down like a wolf.” growled Takamina.

Jurina shudders when her eyes met the older woman’s threatening ones.

“Y— yes ma’am.”

Satisfied, Takamina loosened her grab on Jurina’s arm. She then watches the young girl jog to catch up with Mayu whos already waiting on the front gate.

“You okay?” Atsuko asked Takamina while her hand is rubbing her back, calming her down.

Takamina sighs ”I just dont want her first date end up like our first date”

“Hey! whats wrong with our first date!” Atsuko pouts as she playfully slapped her lover’s arm

“Atsuko, please. Don’t act like you don’t remember. We had sex on our first date”



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A black SUV is parked neatly near the front of Mayu’s house. On the driver seat, A suspicious figure of a women holding a binoculars can barely be seen through the black tainted window

“Nyanyan, shes coming out!”

“Let me see!”

A long haired brunette exclaimed as she snatched a pair of binoculars off of a certain dimpled women next to her.

“What do you think?”

“Wow… Not bad.”

“Not bad? I think shes extremely cute! “ Yuko snatched the binoculars back to take a second look on the girl who has successfully stolen their daughter’s heart.

“As expected from the daughter of Oshima Yuko”  Yuko proudly stated,

“But wheres our Jurina?”

“I dont know. What is that girl doing alo- oh! There she is! our Juri just walked out! Why does she look so pale? what happened inside?”

“Can someone please tell me what the heck are we doing here ?” A girl who has been sitting in the back seat suddenly proclaimed. She has been silent the whole time but she has had it up to here. She has an important math test the next morning and instead of encouraging her to study, her parents had dragged her out to tag along on their little ‘adventure’.

“Sakura! Honey! Language please!” Haruna yelled

“Mom! Look at your husband! Shes nuts! What kind of parents spying on their kid’s date like its the most normal thing in the world? just what kind of parenting is this?!”

“Dont worry Sakura, we’ll spy on yours too when the time comes” Teased Yuko as she turned her attention to her youngest daughter.

“You guys are sick you hear me. SICK” Sakura furrowed her eyebrows and crossed her arms in front of her chest.

“Yuuchan they’re getting into that bus! Lets go follow them!” Haruna pats Yuko’s shoulder, ignoring Sakura’s statement.

“Aye aye cap’n!”

With that, Yuko turned on the engine of the car, following the bus which Jurina and Mayu got on. Sakura kept babbling about the lack of privacy she and her sister have during the trip, making a promise to herself that she will never ever let her parents know if she’s ever gonna plan to go on a date. Ever.

After minutes of driving, Yuko and Haruna was surprised that Jurina and Mayu got off at a stop not too far away from Mayu’s place. Relieve soon fills the parents when the pair are seen entering a normal looking cafe. That feeling was soon replaced with a feeling of nostalgia when they observe the vintage looking cafe in front of them.

“Okay i see no drug dealers or yankees here. I think onee chan can manage going home by herself. Can we go home now please?” Sakura pouted as she emerge from the gap between the front seats.

“Nyan-nyan, this place is…” Yuko widened her eyes.

“Do you think its a coincidence?” Haruna murmured.

Silence fills the air as the couple both have their eyes glued to the wooden sign that says ‘Rusty’s Jazz Café’

“Hello? Parents? You there?” Sakura asked, waving her hand in front of her parents face trying to gain their attention.

“Yuuchan.. Lets go home” Haruna muttered softly as grabbed Yuko’s hand and gave it a squeeze. They stare at each other lovingly and share a warm smile.

“Yeah. Lets go home” Yuko replied as she softly carresses her wife’s cheek

“YES! Lets go!” Sakura yelled, startling the married couple out of their little momentum.

Haruna giggled and pinched the 13 year old girl’s nose playfully, As Yuko drives the SUV away from the building and into the dark of the night with warm smile on her face.

Ganbatte, Juritan’



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“This is it. This is the place i told you about”

“Rusty’s jazz café?”

“I know it doesnt look much from the outside, But i can assure you - you’ll love it here.” Jurina flashed Mayu a smile, making Mayu’s heart thumping wildly like a Taiko drum. How can she say no to that smile?

“lets go inside”



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   As soon as Mayu stepped into the café, the smell of wood and lavender greeted her. The café is larger that what she had thought. Theres a wooden bar counter on the left side of the café and the bartender is dressed neatly in a white buttoned up and bowtie. Although theres not much customers in sight, a band is performing on a little stage in the far corner of the café while a couple is dancing in front of them, swaying their bodies to the slow rhythm of jazz. Mayu thinks that she has never listened to something so soothing in her whole life. Jurina then led The shorter girl to the reserved table located in front of the stage. She took the chair out for for Mayu, and the other girl blushed furiously at the sweet gesture.

“So, What do you think?” Asked Jurina as she seated herself on the chair

“I love it.”  Mayu replied. Her eyes are wandering around the café, gawking at the beautiful interior.

“Really? Cause if you dont we can always go someplace else like that danso cafe. Girls like to go there right? O-or maybe we could go to that french restaurant down the street. Theres always Mcdonalds if yo—.”

“No! Its okay really! I like it here.” Mayu exclaimed. She cant believe that Jurina, THE Matsui Jurina is nervous because of her.

“Okay… Good then”

There she goes with that smile again. I bet she could get away with murder using that gorgeous smile.
Mayu thinks to herself

“So uuhmmm” Jurina mumbled. Her hand is rubbing the back of her head.

“Im glad you like the place” she continued

“I- its peaceful” Mayu proclaimed, mentally cursing herself for the short answer which creates minutes of awkward silence for the two. Beads of sweat starting to form on Mayu’s forehead. She’s brainstorming for things she could say to Jurina, but the only thing she could conjured up is; ‘nice weather huh?’

Jurina furrowed her eyebrows when she noticed the uncomfortable look on the shorter girl’s face. She cleared her throat and starts talking;

“Im sorry if this date came out too weird for you. Its just that, I have never asked a girl out on a date before and..”

“Wait a minute, you have never been on a date before?”  Mayu cut Jurina in, not letting her finish her sentence.

Hearing Mayu’s question, Jurina shook her head and smile like an innocent little kid, oblivious to the effect of her words.

Mayu was completely taken aback at her new found revelation. How can a girl like Matsui Jurina has never been on a date? Does this also mean that Jurina never had a girlfriend?

The thought of being Jurina’s first ever girlfriend sent butterflies to Mayu’s stomach and she cant help but hope for tonights date to end up wonderfully even though she knows she shouldn’t be building her hopes that high.

“Can i ask you something?” Mayu mumbled

“Yeah sure”

“Why me?”

“Why you?”

“Yes. I mean, youre quite popular in our school and  you have tons of pretty good looking girls falling on your feet and kissing the ground youve walked on so… why me?” Mayu asked nervously, she just has to get it out of her head one way or another.

“I think you were a little exaggerating.” Jurina giggled, recieving a pout from the girl in front of her.

“Truth is… I dont know how to answer that without sounding like a total creep but anyway.” muttered Jurina

“I flunked my exam”

Eh?”

“I did, and its all because of you.”

“M-me?”

Jurina let out a sigh and propped her elbows on the wooden table before she explained further

“theres this girl in my class who’s always been my rival. her name is Nakanishi Yuka. She’s also a member of the track team like me. are you familiar with her?”

“Of course. everybody in school knows her. “

“I hate losing. with her, it has always been a tight competition. I would study and train really hard everyday to be number one while she always came in second. Thats why i never had time for girls. My mind was too occupied with wanting to be the top. My papa’s been nagging about it too you know. She said that i was too serious.. That i should loosen up. I know its stupid, but i just hated seeing that smug grin on Nishishi’s face whenever her grade is better than mine”

Mayu tilted her head in confusion.

what does anything she just told me has anything to do with me?

Although, seeing the girl of her dream talk so openly in front of her, in a dimly lit cafe, with a romantic song playing in the background, Mayu wonders if she should care.

“Then one day, i saw you, sitting alone in the library reading manga with your cute little pigtails. I didn’t know why, but when laid my eyes on you… I felt like my heart was gonna jump out of my chest. You were like the cutest thing i have ever seen! I’ve never felt like that towards anyone before. Everything was so new to me. It all kinda went downhill from there, everyday when you walk pass by me in the hallway, my chest would flutter. It got so bad to the point that i wasn’t able to study because you kept popping up in my brain. ” Jurina chuckled, her cheeks are turning shades of red and Mayu thought she could die from the cuteness

“When i failed my exam, Nishishi was so ecstatic of course, she wasn’t even trying to hide it. The odd thing is… i didn’t mind at all…”  Jurina shook her head and lean back on her seat. Her eyes travelled from the table to Mayu’s pair of black orbs.

“Thats when i realized i was a goner” exclaimed Jurina as her lips curved into a somewhat  sad smile.

Mayu can’t believe everything she just heard. did Jurina just say the she was the cutest thing she has ever seen? it can’t be… the girl she’s been having a crush on since forever, is feeling the same way towards her. things like that only exist in movies right? Mayu feels butterflies, no, fireworks in her stomach. she would roll around on the floor with happiness if its not Jurina sitting in front of her. She wants to climb to the top of Fuji mountain and screams out

 ’MATSUI JURINA LIKES ME! SHE LIKES ME! SHE THINKS IM CUTE! HA!’

“Do you…. hate me now?”

“I would never!” Mayu answered automatically and immediately. She quickly put her hand over her mouth to prevent anymore word vomit to come out.

“You would never….. hate me?” Jurina questioned.

Mayu dipped her head. she fumbles with the napkin on her lap. she was hesitated at first, but she has decided. if she wants for things to go the way she wants, she’s gonna have to do it. yes, she’s gonna tell Jurina that her feelling is not one sided after all.

“Be-because… I l-li—like you too.” 

A pregnant silence fills the air. Mayu lifts her head up, curious for the lack of reaction coming from the other girl. She found Jurina frozen in her seat, grinning from ear to ear.

“You have no idea how happy you just made me” Jurina softly murmured.

She extends her hand and resting it over Mayu’s on the table. Her thumb is moving slowly in circular motion, caressing the back of Mayu’s hand.

 Jurina doesn’t know where she got the courage to do that, but when she sees a smile forming on Mayu’s lips, she knows she’s done the right move.



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   The two lovebirds continued their chatting as they wait for their foods to arrive. Getting to know each other was an important part of the date that Jurina had in mind. Mayu turned out to be a really easy person to talk to and Jurina feels like she could tell her everything. She also found out several interesting facts about Mayu like how she hates vegetables, how she spends most of her time reading manga, how she has an annoying best friend with a funny name and the most interesting one is the fact that Mayu has had a crush on her since middle school. that one sent Jurina to cloud 9.

   The pair kept stealing glances at each other even when they’re eating. Jurina had cut Mayu’s steak into bite size pieces and Mayu wished that Jurina would stop being such a gentlewoman because she doesn’t know how much her heart can take anymore. It feels like it would burst out of her chest anytime now. the two had finished their dinner when Jurina asked

“Do you wanna dance?”

Mayu glanced to the empty dance floor. the band is still playing but the couple that occupied the dance floor earlier had gone.

“I don’t know how..”

“Don’t worry. i’ll lead” Jurina stood up from her seat and offered Mayu her hand.

Mayu smiled and take Jurina’s hand. the contact sent electricity through her body and she can’t seem to wipe the smile off her face as the other girl lead her to the dance floor. The taller girl let go of their hands and Mayu watched silently as Jurina made her way to the stage and whispered something to the lead singer of the band which was replied with a thumbs up. She then turned to Mayu as the band began to play another song. The close proximity between the two girls makes them 10x nervous than they already are. Jurina pursed her lips, her right hand slowly making its way to Mayu’s waist and her left hand is holding Mayu’s right hand up.  Mayu is resting her right hand on Jurina’s  shoulder as they begin to sway to the slow, hypnotizing music. (CLICK) (http://"http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qfr6jmJOGA8")

“Do you know this song?’” murmured Jurina.

Mayu shook her head.

“It’s called ‘Me and Mrs Jones’ its one one my favorite song.”  explained Jurina

“So… am i Mrs Jones in this song?” Mayu smiled teasingly.

Jurina dipped her head as she let out a chuckle.

“This is actually a song about adultery. lets not relate anything to this song shall we?”

Mayu nods and lower her head in attempt to hide her flustered face as Jurina keeps swaying their bodies, left and right.

The taller girl stares at the girl in her arms. Her lips curve into a cat like smile as they bring their bodies closer to each other. Both girl are drowned in each other eyes and Jurina wished that time would stop so that she can stare at Mayu’s beautiful eyes forever. Mayu then leans closer, resting her head on Jurina’s shoulder. Mayu’s hair is smelled of chocolate and it makes Jurina’s mind go haywire. She closed her eyes, savoring what could be the happiest moment of her life.

She wonders if Mayu thinks so too. 



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On the side of the quiet road, two figures can be seen walking together hand in hand.  The lights from the street lamps reflected on their faces, creating a romantic atmosphere around them. Mayu and Jurina had decided to walk home instead of taking the bus. The idea of having to part soon irked them and they rather not to think about it.

“And then my mom was like ‘MY SCARF!’ And she was sobbing and screaming in the kitchen. it was so crazy And then she was like ‘Mayuyu! You are grounded forever!’” Jurina bursts into fit of laughters. She hold her stomach while her other hand is still holding firmly on to Mayu’s.

“I cant believe you used your mom’s Hermés scarf to wipe a spilled bolognese!”

Jurina said in between her laughter.

“Well, my papa said it was okay! We had no idea it was that expensive. That thing looked like a rug anyway.” Mayu deadpanned.

The taller girl wiped tears on her eyes as they both continued walking in a snail pace.

“Well, were here” Mayu exclaimed as the pair stopped in front of her house.

“I had a really good time” Said Jurina as she tighten her grab on Mayu’s hand, not wanting to let go yet.

“I dont want tonight to end yet”

Mayu pouted and dipped her head, silently cursing whoever it is who came up with the idea of curfew.

Jurina chuckled at how adorable the girl in front of her is. She lifts up her hand and stroke the older’s girls cheek softly like its the most fragile thing in the world. Mayu feels goosebumps all over her body and she knows for sure why.

“Lets do this again” Jurina muttered under her breath.

“I would love that”

Mayu exclaimed as her lips curved into a cute smile that successfully turns Jurina’s legs into jelly. She lowered her caressing hand and let it rest awkwardly on her side.

“Uhm.. i need to tell you something”

“What is it?”

“Theres a reason why i took you to that jazz café” Jurina exclaimed, her hand rubbing the back of her neck

“Because you like jazz?” Mayu guessed

Jurina giggled and shook her head

“Actually, that place is where my parents met for the first time.” proclaimed Jurina, her fingers are fumbling with the hem of her sweater out of nervousness

“The song we danced to - that was the song my parents also danced to on the night they met” Jurina continued as she lowered her head. Her face is red in embarrassment.

did i take it too far?

“Wow… That’s.. I don’t know what to say” Mayu murmured under her breath

“No! you don’t have to say anything! I’m freaking you out aren’t i? god you’re so stupid Jurina! i knew i should’ve taken you to that danso cafe instead!” Jurina said, smacking herself on the head.

“Thats not what i meant! i think what you did was really sweet! i really liked it there and knowing that its where your parents met, it meant a lot more to me” said Mayu, Her fingers are tracing the outline of Jurina’s bangs.

“Thank you for not freaking out”

“You’re welcome. Take it down a notch next time will you.” exclaimed Mayu while pinching Jurina’s cheek lightly. She nods as a response and gave the other girl puppy eyes.

Its hard to believe that the younger girl took it that far with her. Mayu finds it kinda funny that the cool prince-like Matsui Jurina shes constantly fawning over at school is actually a hopeless romantic. She can’t wait to tell Rabutan all about it.

“I think you should go inside. Your papa is watching us and i don’t think she’s pleased” Jurina said, glancing to the window on the second floor of Mayu’s house. Mayu followed Jurina’s gaze and found her papa standing behind the window of her parents bedroom, watching them like an eagle eyeing its prey. Mayu let out a sigh and turned her head to the girl in front of her.

“So i guess i’ll see you tomorrow at school?” muttered Mayu, her palm is getting sweaty from holding hands with Jurina for so long but she doesn’t mind a bit.

“I’ll see you then” Jurina said as she slowly took a step backwards, her hand is still connected with Mayu’s and her eyes not leaving hers. she took another step backwards till it was impossible for them to keep their hands in contact. With one last smile, Jurina turned around and started walking away from the other girl.

Mayu glanced at the second floor of her house again, her papa is still standing there in the same position, her eyebrows are even furrowed as if telling her ‘don’t do it Mayu’.

ah, screw it

“Jurina!” Mayu yelled, catching the attention of the other girl as she turned around

“Yes?”

Mayu wasted no time. She ran towards where the other girl is standing and kissed her tightly on the lips. Mayu snaked her arms around Jurina’s neck and the other girl who was caught by surprise has her eyes closed, kissing Mayu back with the same force. They pulled back when oxygen becomes an issue.

“My make up for making you flunk your exam” Mayu said, panting

“Well in that case, maybe i should just fail all my exams”  Jurina giggled receiving a playful smack on her arm.

“You should go now before my papa chase you down”

“Wh- what? she’s not gonna do that for real right?”

“Well, do you wanna stay and find out?” teased Mayu

“Fine~ ill go.” Jurina pouted  as she walks backwards, waving goodbye to the older girl.

Mayu blew a kiss and Jurina pretended to caught it with her hand and brought it to her chest.

Mayu felt like she could die from all the happiness right now. As soon as the other girl was out of her sight, she clutched her chest and lean on the gate of her house. A wide smile plastered on her face. She sighed and turned around, skipping her way to the front door while humming the song she and Jurina danced to.



—————————————————————————————————-




“OH MY GOD! Acchan they’re kissing in front of our house!”

“Minami, relax… Mayu is all grown up now. you can’t treat her the same way you treated her 10 years ago. i learned that today.” Atsuko exclaimed as she got off the bed and walked towards her fuming husband

“this is unacceptable. I’m gonna kill that shemale! let me grab my gun” exclaimed Takamina as she rushed to the door of her bedroom

“no no no no! you are not going to embarrass your daughter!” Atsuko grabbed Takamina by the arm and yank her to sit on the bed.

“But they..”

“Breathe, honey”

“But what if she…”

“I said BREATHE”

“Okay okay I’m breathing! Jesus Christ Atsuko.”

“Inhale.. exhale…”

The shorter women took a deep breath and release it on Atsuko’s command. Her body starts to relax, under Atsuko experienced hands massaging her shoulder. She then slowly pushed Takamina to lay down flat on the bed and straddle her waist. 

“Now… where were we?”


The Endo
Title: Re: Choudai, Darling! (JuriMayu, AtsuMina, KojiYuu+Miyawaki Sakura)
Post by: chichay12 on November 16, 2012, 01:03:55 PM
i read this on tumblr...haha
and i really love it
mayu and jurina is so so so so
:farofflook: :farofflook: :farofflook:
i cant explain in one word.. :sweat:
and atsumina and kojiyuu + sakura..
 :imdead:

thank god you put it in here so manny can read ur awesome fic.. :thumbsup
 :kneelbow:

Title: Re: Choudai, Darling! (JuriMayu, AtsuMina, KojiYuu+Miyawaki Sakura)
Post by: dirtydeeds on November 16, 2012, 01:30:35 PM
i read this on tumblr...haha
and i really love it
mayu and jurina is so so so so
:farofflook: :farofflook: :farofflook:
i cant explain in one word.. :sweat:
and atsumina and kojiyuu + sakura..
 :imdead:

thank god you put it in here so manny can read ur awesome fic.. :thumbsup
 :kneelbow:


Thank you thank you thank you so much for reading my OS. *sheds tears of happiness
and thank you for giving it a comment  :cry:

i want to give you a virtual hug :') your my first commenter and oh my god I'm just so nervous
Title: Re: Choudai, Darling! (JuriMayu, AtsuMina, KojiYuu+Miyawaki Sakura)
Post by: chichay12 on November 16, 2012, 01:55:44 PM
i read this on tumblr...haha
and i really love it
mayu and jurina is so so so so
:farofflook: :farofflook: :farofflook:
i cant explain in one word.. :sweat:
and atsumina and kojiyuu + sakura..
 :imdead:

thank god you put it in here so manny can read ur awesome fic.. :thumbsup
 :kneelbow:


Thank you thank you thank you so much for reading my OS. *sheds tears of happiness
and thank you for giving it a comment  :cry:

i want to give you a virtual hug :') your my first commenter and oh my god I'm just so nervous

dont be nervous..ur fic is so cool..just wait..
they gonna love it just like i do..  :wub:
Title: Re: Choudai, Darling! (JuriMayu, AtsuMina, KojiYuu+Miyawaki Sakura)
Post by: fausto on November 16, 2012, 02:10:47 PM
Yeah good fic!! :D Good idea those pairings, Jurina is a prince, i like when people call her like that  :panic: :banghead: Of course I can't hide that i was hoping for atsumina sex  :nervous :nervous But it's okay, good job!!  :thumbup
Title: Re: Choudai, Darling! (JuriMayu, AtsuMina, KojiYuu+Miyawaki Sakura)
Post by: marisado on November 16, 2012, 02:22:33 PM
I just love fluff   :heart: I too first read this on tumblr and I gotta say this is extremely adorable  :thumbsup
Title: Re: Choudai, Darling! (JuriMayu, AtsuMina, KojiYuu+Miyawaki Sakura)
Post by: kuronekosan on November 16, 2012, 02:28:16 PM
Wow...just so FLUFFY!! It's was well written and definitely brought out squeeling from all that cuteness. Just sweet innnocent love. Sigh. :heart: Except for that last part of course. Heh heh. :shocked
Title: Re: Choudai, Darling! (JuriMayu, AtsuMina, KojiYuu+Miyawaki Sakura)
Post by: ChuuuPuffss on November 16, 2012, 02:33:41 PM
Waahh! Mama Mustache! You posted it hereee~ Since you did, I read it again and still awesome as ever! Please write mooaaar!  :deco:
Title: Re: Choudai, Darling! (JuriMayu, AtsuMina, KojiYuu+Miyawaki Sakura)
Post by: miayaka on November 16, 2012, 02:43:54 PM
you widened up my smile  :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
thank you for this!
Title: Re: Choudai, Darling! (JuriMayu, AtsuMina, KojiYuu+Miyawaki Sakura)
Post by: Haruko on November 16, 2012, 04:03:00 PM
yeah! i saw it in tumblr... but here is better love it :B
Title: Re: Choudai, Darling! (JuriMayu, AtsuMina, KojiYuu+Miyawaki Sakura)
Post by: jell_o_jello on November 16, 2012, 04:07:09 PM
This fic is sooooooo sweet. I love it  :wub:

Please write more of these fluffy stuffs. I'm a sucker for this type of stories. As long as there's Mayuyu in it, I'll love it, really  :lol:


Thanks so much for posting it in here.
Title: Re: Choudai, Darling! (JuriMayu, AtsuMina, KojiYuu+Miyawaki Sakura)
Post by: dirtydeeds on November 16, 2012, 04:22:09 PM
these comments are just :cry: :cry: :cry:

@Chichay12: ah stop it you. :wub: thank you for the words of encouragement *bows
@fausto: just so you know i wasn't planning to make Jurina that prince-like but her darned handsome face was like asking for it. aaww man Sex scenes are so hard to write  :cry: no matter how hard i try i will always end up cringing at my own writing. its just too awkward for me  :bleed eyes: i seriously need someone to teach me how to write smut. thank you for the comment! :two thumbs
@marisado: I SAW YOU ON TUMBLR!!! *does victory dance* I'm glad you like fluff cause its the only thing I'm able to write :P thank you for the wonderful comment!  :bow:
@kuronekosan: thank you!  :bow: I'm glad i made you squeeled! (lol is it just me or does that sound so wrong? naah probably just me) yeah that last part just came out of nowhere actually >.<
@ChuuuPuffss: MELOOON MY CHILD *glomps. i posted a renairin on tumblr actually but I'm not sure if you're interested  :cry:
@anzai48: aawww really? you were grinning? xD Yuki as Mayu's mom.... WHY DIDNT I THINK OF THAT??!!!!!!!  :banghead: :banghead: :bang head: you know come to think of it it would've made much more sense. Yuki has always been Mayu's 'mom' after all xD
@miayaka: and you sir just brightened up my day :)
@Haruko: thank you for reading it on tumblr and here and not getting sick of it!! :wub: matte, are you Haruko48 on tumblr?
@ jell_o_jello: then i hope you enjoy my upcoming oneshots!!  cause honestly all i can write is this vomit inducing type of fluff. fluff is kinda my forte :3
Title: Re: Choudai, Darling! (JuriMayu, AtsuMina, KojiYuu+Miyawaki Sakura)
Post by: ChuuuPuffss on November 16, 2012, 04:45:27 PM
I actually just finished reading it, Mama~ I want part 2 of it!
Title: Re: Choudai, Darling! (JuriMayu, AtsuMina, KojiYuu+Miyawaki Sakura)
Post by: Pdpond on November 16, 2012, 05:44:01 PM
That so sweet!! :heart: :heart:
Why Only OS?, want more Motto motto!!
Title: Re: Choudai, Darling! (JuriMayu, AtsuMina, KojiYuu+Miyawaki Sakura)
Post by: JuRikki on November 16, 2012, 05:57:01 PM
wuaaaa i havent read this!! and this fic is beautiful ><

they're so cute oh Jurina and Mayu  :farofflook:

dont know how to describe this :imdead:

you should make part 2 of this  :kneelbow:
Title: Re: Choudai, Darling! (JuriMayu, AtsuMina, KojiYuu+Miyawaki Sakura)
Post by: Calyrica on November 16, 2012, 07:01:46 PM
I read and liked this on Tumblr when you posted it. It's so cute and funny~  XD :heart:
Title: Re: Choudai, Darling! (JuriMayu, AtsuMina, KojiYuu+Miyawaki Sakura)
Post by: KojiYuu44 on November 16, 2012, 08:34:23 PM
This is TOOO cute!!!
I love this fic!!
Jurina and Mayuyu :)))))
I know it's an OS but you really should continue!!
Pretty please...
Title: Re: Choudai, Darling! (JuriMayu, AtsuMina, KojiYuu+Miyawaki Sakura)
Post by: Tam_atsu on November 16, 2012, 08:45:15 PM
Aww kojiyuu is so cute!! Thanks for the kojiyuu!!!
Title: Re: Choudai, Darling! (JuriMayu, AtsuMina, KojiYuu+Miyawaki Sakura)
Post by: nori on November 17, 2012, 01:01:22 AM
That was such a wonderful fic really heart warming  :heart:

Then I decided to read the wMatsui fic on your tumblr, totally different just as awesome  :cry: :thumbup

I hope you post another fic here or on your tumblr either I will definitely read it  :)
Title: Re: Choudai, Darling! (JuriMayu, AtsuMina, KojiYuu+Miyawaki Sakura)
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on November 17, 2012, 01:15:02 AM
i love this fanfics the first time i read it was on tumblr but now its here i cant stop reading it over again and again  :cathappy:
Title: Re: Choudai, Darling! (JuriMayu, AtsuMina, KojiYuu+Miyawaki Sakura)
Post by: dirtydeeds on November 17, 2012, 04:21:10 AM
@ChuuuPuffss: but but but i wasn't planning for this to have a continuation :(
@Pdpond: I'm sorry but there won't be part two >.< i can't think of a plot yet :( thank you for reading! :bow:
@JuRikki: thank you for reading! (and for following me on tumblr) yeah i saw you thar xD
@Calyrica: there are so many from tumblr i can't  :cry: you guys made me so happy with all the likes and reblogs  :cry:  :cry: thank you so much :bow:
@KojiYuu44: oh no! you said the magic words  :panic: if did end up writing a continuation, it would be because you and your pretty please :angry:
@Tam_atsu: thank you  :heart: i enjoy writing kojiyuu!
@nori: thank you so much for visiting my tumblr and reading my angst!! that WMatsui oneshot is what i considered a failure actually :( that was my first and last attempt on writing angst. NO MORE ANGST FROM NOW ON. actually I'm working on another fluffy oneshot but i hope you're not sick yet of all the fluffiness :(
@mayuki_daisuki: you're being too kind now xD thank you for reading it both here and on tumblr!!  XD
Title: Re: Choudai, Darling! (JuriMayu, AtsuMina, KojiYuu+Miyawaki Sakura)
Post by: ChuuuPuffss on November 17, 2012, 10:42:13 AM
But Mama, I want part 2 xD Pleeaaaaaseeee *Puppy Eyes
Title: Re: Choudai, Darling! (JuriMayu, AtsuMina, KojiYuu+Miyawaki Sakura)
Post by: Wmatsui22 on November 25, 2012, 11:44:31 AM
Thanks for making this VERY NICE One-shot story...

I already read it and saved it to my phone...

A very good story about MayuJuri but I hope there's also a side story of AtsuMina! hahaha!

I am serious about what I said..

Please do continue writing..

Update if you have time!

Good Luck!

thank You

+WMatsui_22+
Title: Re: Choudai, Darling! (JuriMayu, AtsuMina, KojiYuu+Miyawaki Sakura)
Post by: Haruko on November 25, 2012, 08:52:09 PM
Yeah! Im Haruko48 on tumblr :D...

I just read just fic again.. if you dont want a make a continuation please make a part 2 or presequel  :bow: you can make another fic.. i love how you write :B its amazing!!
Title: See You Latte (RenAirin)
Post by: dirtydeeds on November 29, 2012, 11:55:10 AM
A really short RenAirin i had on tumblr. I wasn't planning to put this here cause I wasnt sure if there were any renairin shippers here TT^TT But then an anon made my day by requesting me to put it here so... ENJOY!

Show yourself, anon!


See You Latte



  For some kids, summer break is that time of the year when you spend your whole month dedicated to procrastination, spending everyday on the internet or finishing off that video game you never had time to play with, most probably while skipping showers. Some girls would prefer to go to the beach with their friends, showing off their new bikinis and get some tan.

   For a certain girl named Furukawa Airi, summer holiday is no time to do any of those things. She had to find a job to help her parents pay for her expensive college fee. So when her bestfriend Kumi, told her that her cousin was going to open up a coffee shop in town, Airi immediately agreed to be a temporary Barista along with Kumi. The money is pretty good and plus she gets to work together with her bestfriend which Airi thought was 10x better than working with a stranger despite how annoying Kumi can get.

   Its been 2 weeks since she started working in Cup-a-cabana.  the number of customers coming in is so much less than what she expected it to be and she started to feel awfully bored because of it.

“Another quiet day in cup-a-cabana” Airi sighed behind the counter, resting her chin in her hands propped on her elbows. She blew her hair out of her eyes  and stare at the empty tables in front of her.

“I don’t understand why you are complaining. All we have to do is to stay until 6, go home and get paid by the end of the month. Easiest money ever!” Kumi said, her fingers are busy punching the buttons of her cellphone while sitting comfortably on a stool behind the cashier.

Airi clicked her tongue.
“I need to socialize too y’know. I cant do that if your face is the only thing i see everyday.”

“What you need is to get laid” Kumi deadpanned, her eyes not leaving her cellphone’s screen.

“Wha- what are you saying? Do-dont just say stuff like that you pervert”
Airi stood up. being a closeted pervert that she is, her face automatically feels hot and she tries to rid the heat by fanning her face.

“It’s true. I mean look at me! Ever since i got together with Yuria, ive been a happier and healthier individual” Kumi puffed her chest proudly.

“Do-does that mean that you D-did it with Yuria-chan?” Airi stuttered.

“Is that what you guys did when you told me you were having a sleep over at her place?!” Airi gasped and points at her best friend while her other hand is covering her mouth in surprise.

Kumi furrowed her eyebrows and turned.
“Of course thats what we did! What do you think we do on sleepovers? Braid each others hair?”

“Uhmm… Excuse me”

Still being lost in her own perverted thoughts, Airi failed to notice a presence of another person in the room, calling her.

“Pstt! Airin! Customer!” Kumi whispered, loud enough for Airi and the customer to hear.

“Wha-what…” Airi turned her head.

  In front of her stood a doe eyed, skinny girl, smiling brightly at the barista. Her skin is as white as snow and Airi can almost see the sun’s reflection on her smooth raven hair. She’s wearing a green tank top whose strap had slid off her shoulder revealing a bright yellow bra strap. Airin tried desperately to keep her mouth from dropping.

“We-welcome to cup-a-cabana!” Airi smiled awkwardly.

“Hi. Can i get a tall latte to go please?”
The girl exclaimed, shoving her tank top strap back onto her shoulder.

“Do you want it hot, blended or iced?” Airi asked.

“Hmmm” the stranger put her index finger under her chin, slightly lifting her head as her eyes travel to the menu written above Airi’s head. Airi unconsiously stare at the customer’s exposed neck, wondering if its possible for a person to have a neck that beautiful.

“Iced please”
Airi shook her thoughts away, and quicly darted her eyes back to the girl’s.

“O-one iced latte coming up!” Airi yelled almost to enthusiastically. She quickly turned away to hide her flustered face and busy herself with the coffee maker.
The customer then made her way to the cashier, not paying attention to Kumi who has been struggling to hold in her laughter.

“Miss, your latte is ready” Airi proclaimed.

   She extends her arm, with the cold beverage in her hand for the other girl to take. Airi’s heart skipped a beat when the pretty customer’s fingers brushed against her’s as she took the latte off of her hand.

“Thanks” muttered the girl. The corner of her lips tugged into a mysterious smile before she turned around. Airi’s eyes followed her as she sashayed towards the door.

“HaHahahaha!!” a loud, maniacal laughter erupts the moment the mysterious customer has gone out of sight.

“What kumi!?” Airi asked,

“Oh my god! You were totally drooling over that girl! It was so obvious! Hahahaha!”

“No i did not!”

“Oh please you dont have to lie to me. Your expression says it all! Look at your ears! Theyre all red and shit! Hahaha! Oh god why cant i stop laughing…”

“Its not funny!” Airi protested. She put her hands over her reddening ears, trying to hide them from her best friend.

After regaining composure, Kumi turned her attention back to her cellphone and let out a sigh

“But i admire your taste buddy. That girl sure was hot”

————————————-

   Ever since that day, the mysterious customer would come by everyday around the afternoon, ordering the same thing, Making her the only regular customer the coffee shop has. Everytime the girl made an appearance, Airi’s stomach would flip for unknown reasons and shes dying to find out why.

“You should talk to her you know” Kumi exclaimed after yet another day of Airin looking like a total idiot in front of her dear customer.

“I cant. You know how awkward i am”

“Well how are you gonna make a move on her if you dont even know her name?”

“Its not just that!”

“Then what?”

“Dont you think shes a little bit…. out of my league?”

Kumi rolled her eyes at Airi’s remark
“So? Everyones had a crush on someone they thought was out of their league. But this isn’t baseball. There are no leagues! Just go for it!”


—————————-

“Hi… Can i have a the usual please?” The mysterious customer is here again, this time cladded in a beautiful white summer dress. Maybe its her brain playing tricks on her but Airi could have sworn that the girl looks more and more beautiful everyday.

“Coming right up” Airi smoothly said, but when she turned around to start making the beverage, Kumi’s face suddenly appeared in front of her.

“Let me do it”

“What?”

Kumi peeked over Airi’s shoulder and gave the customer a reasuring smile.
She then turned her attention back to the confused looking Airi and mouthed ‘talk to her!’.

“Ri-right” mumbled Airi.

“Hi…” Airi muttered nervously as she turned around on her heel.

“Hi” the customer said, a tiny smile spread across her face, making Airi’s heart beats harder against her rib.

“So uhm…”

Airi tapped her fingers on the counter

“How about them coffees?”

Kumi who was in the middle of making latte, facepalms herself.

“They’re great i guess?” the customer raised one of her eyebrows

“Im sorry but can you give us a second? The coffee machine seems to be broken” Kumi gave the customer a toothy grin as she squeezed her best friend’s shoulders hard. She pulled Airi down with her, crouching behind the counter

“What the hell was that?!” Kumi muttered furiously

“I told you im awkward! I can’t do this!” Airi breathed

“Yes you can! You’re just going to ask for her name, not for her to marry you!”

Airi shook her head and pouted even more. Kumi rolled her eyes.

“coward” spat Kumi

The short haired girl extended her arm and grabbed the iced latte she finished making minutes ago.
“Here. The least you can do is to give her this and hope that your fingers  will brush against hers again in a sensual manner. Cause i swear thats the closest thing to sex you will ever get” Kumi said under her breath.

“Fine” Airi sighed in defeat. She stood back up with the cold cup of latte in her hand to find The pretty customer still standing there in the same position.

“Sorry for the inconvenience. He-here’s your latte” Airi proclaimed. The customer smiled and took the latte from Airi’s hand. This time, their fingers didn’t brush with each other and Airi couldn’t help but feeling a little disappointed. She mentally cursed her awkward-self as she watched the woman turned her back on her and walk towards the door. Suddenly, the woman stopped in the middle of her track and turned around on her heel.

“By the way, its Rena”

“Wha-wh-what?” Airi widened her eyes in surprise. Her brain wasn’t able to process the words coming out form the customer’s lips.

“My name. its Rena, Matsui Rena.”

   Rena’s almond shaped eyes travelled from Airi’s eyes to the name tag Airi has on her chest. The corner of her lips tugged into a smirk. She started walking back to Airi and with each step she took, Airi’s heart would pound wilder. Rena stopped right in front of her, separated by the counter which thankfully was not that wide. She then propped her elbows on the counter and leaned closer to Airi whose face is already as red as a tomato.

“ive been coming to this place everyday waiting for you to make a move on me” Rena murmured.

“I hate to be the one making the initiatives but..” Rena muttered as she rummaged through her purse and fished out a piece of paper.
Airi who has been frozen still , can only watch as Rena took a sharpie from Airi’s breast pocket and scribbled down a series of numbers on the white paper. She slipped the paper under Airi’s hand and leaned closer.

“See you tommorow, Airi” Rena breathed softly on Airi’s reddening ear. She flashed Airi a seductive wink before making her way out of the coffee shop.

Kumi slowly stood up. The two bestfriends have their eyes glued to the glass-paneled front door with mouth agape. Kumi broke the minutes of silence between them by asking

“Wha-what just happened?” mumbled Kumi. She turned her head to Airi whose eyes are still fixed to the door.

“I dont know….”

Airi paused, turning her head to Kumi to meet her gaze.

“But i think im in love.”

The Endo
Title: Re: See You Latte (RenAirin)
Post by: miayaka on November 29, 2012, 12:07:23 PM
i think im inlove too  :heart:
thank you for this!
Title: Re: See You Latte (RenAirin)
Post by: chichay12 on November 29, 2012, 12:34:47 PM
i think im inlove too  :heart:
thank you for this!

Sh*t!i agreed to you mia!
I think im in love to!!
Dirty-chan!this is so so so
Cute!haha,its ok if i call u dirty-chan??hahaha
Title: Re: See You Latte (RenAirin)
Post by: chibi_airin on November 30, 2012, 03:16:17 AM
lol I love this fic!  :heart:

I had to ask to put it here since there is so few renairin fics *__*

Thank you!  :thumbup
Title: Re: See You Latte (RenAirin)
Post by: KojiYuu44 on November 30, 2012, 05:05:32 AM
hahaha cute fic!!
Rena with the initiatives :)
Thank you!
Title: Re: See You Latte (RenAirin)
Post by: Pandah on December 04, 2012, 09:21:37 AM
that renairin fic is just so cute!!! :D
i read it on your tumblr but since you posted it here i decided to read it again!
thanks for writing it :)
hope you'll write some more renairin xD
Title: Re: See You Latte (RenAirin)
Post by: marisado on December 16, 2012, 06:45:16 AM
I think I like Kumi a lot more now!
To be honest I want more! RenAirin is nice  :inlove:
Title: Re: See You Latte (RenAirin)
Post by: dirtydeeds on December 16, 2012, 03:33:14 PM
Miayaka: thanks so much for reading >.<
Chichay12: well thank you :wub: you can call me deeds instead of dirty-chan. that name just sounded kinda... dirty ><
chibi_airin: AHA!!! it was you! i love your blog! I'm already a follower since long long time ago. thank you for liking my fanfic :bow:
Pandah: hi there! thank you for reading  :cow: i actually have another RenAirin in my tumblr :3 pls read it  XD
marisado: i know renairin is the best >.< why do you like Kumi more?
Title: What My Heart Wants to Say
Post by: dirtydeeds on December 17, 2012, 03:57:31 AM
this was written a long long time ago by my sister. this fanfic is probably older that Jurina thats how old it is. This was meant for another fandom but my sister decided to edit it into an Atsumina OS. yay for my sister! :D

PLEASE PREPARE TISSUES CAUSE YOU WILL CRY... OR WILL NOT CRY BUT PREPARE THEM ANYWAY


What My Heart Wants To Say


“Bakamina, are you sure about this? You do know that Acchan’s going to kill me if something ever happen to you right?” asked Yuko, worried.

Takamina chuckled, “That’s exactly why she must not know, I want it to be a surprise.”.

    Yuko was looking deeply into Takamina’s eyes, trying to find some hints to prove that her bestfriend might be just joking when she told her about her plan. As much as she wanted to further dig in the information from Takamina’s eyes, she couldn’t stare at the brunette girl any longer, because she might just burst into tears. The sight of Takamina was just heartbreaking. Yuko still remembered clearly in her mind how her bestfriend used to be. Takamina, as most people knew of, used to be a lively girl, dorky some might say, she always made everyone smile with her failed acts. Now, that Takahashi Minami had long gone. This Takahashi Minami who was in front of her had lost all the hints suggesting that she’s just a normal girl. Takamina was sick, very sick, to the point that the doctor had dropped the ultimatum on how long she’d got left on earth. She’s very pale, and skinny to the point that there were only skin and bones left of her. Needles were pinned through her skin and tubes were all over her body. It amazed Yuko that Takamina was still able to laugh in that condition.

“But your conditi….” Before Yuko finished, Takamina cut her off.

“I’m fine Yuko. Can’t you see?” Takamina wiggled her hands and made some dorky expressions with her face.

Yuko wanted to laugh but she couldn’t. For a moment there she thought the Takamina she used to know was back, but the reality hit her and she knew Takamina did that just to convince her. She didn’t know how much pain Takamina had been through, but if she could, she would gladly share it with her so that she could have her bestfriend back.

“But the doctor said….”

“please Yuko.” Again Takamina cut her off. “I don’t want to spend the remaining time I’ve got left just lying on this bed. I want to do something worthwhile, and it’s with Atsuko.”  Takamina gave a weak smile. “I don’t know how much time I’ve got left. Which I’m sure it’s pretty soon…”

“Don’t you ever, EVER, say that again Minami!!!” snapped Yuko.

Takamina was startled by the way Yuko called her real name. Yuko had never called her real name for ages. Even though her other friends called her ‘Takamina’ Yuko had always stuck with ‘Bakamina’ the nickname she’d proudly given to her. From the way Yuko called her real name, the shorter girl knew that she was being serious. 

“I just… when I’m gone I don’t want her to grieve over me. I want her to never change because of me. She has a lovable personality, and that’s why people adore her, “ just by talking about Atsuko brought smile to Takamina’s face. It was sincere and full of love. “It was the reason why I fell in love with her, and I don’t want to be the reason she change.”

“You know that’s impossible right? Atsuko loves you very much, I don’t think she will ever be the same.”

“I know! You have no idea how much I love her, that’s why I want to do this.” Takamina’s head hung low.

Seeing Takamina’s determination, Yuko sighed in defeat, “Fine, fine, how can I help?”

Takamina’s head lifted up and smile spread across her face. “Really?”

Yuko could actually see sparkles on Takamina’s eyes. “Yeah, yeah, what should I do?” asked Yuko, pretending to roll her eyes.

“Okay, here’s the plan…” just as Takamina was about to share her plan with Yuko, the door opened and walked in a tall, cat-liked girl.

“Oh, hey NyanNyan! I was just about to tell my plan to Yuko. Now that you’re here I can also get some reference from a girl’s point of view” said Takamina at the sight of Haruna coming to the room.

“Hey! I’m a girl too! And watch the language Bakamina! It’s only me who can call my NyanNyan, NyanNyan!” retorted Yuko, pushing Takamina lightly on her shoulder.

“What? Why?” asked Takamina with a hurt expression.

“Because you used to have a huge crush on my NyanNyan back in high school.” replied Yuko, squinting her eyes with a suspicious look to Takamina.
“it was like ages ago! And beside, I have my Atsuko! She’s way, waaayyyyyy more beautiful than your NyanNyan!” exclaimed Takamina, poking her index finger on Yuko’s forehead.  Takamina then quickly turned to the tall beauty who was still standing near the entrance door, “Please don’t take that seriously NyanNyan, of course you’re beautiful. You’re just as beautiful as Atsuko.”

“I said stop calling her NyanNyan!” yelled Yuko. She quickly stood up from the bed and went in front of her girlfriend, raising both of her hands, pretending to be the great wall of china if possible to hide her precious girlfriend from Takamina's sight.  “I now forbid you to call her NyanNyan ever again!” Yuko suddenly turned around and wrapped her arms around Haruna's waist, placing her head between the soft mounds Haruna possessed which is Yuko's favorite ‘hangout’ place.

it wasn't too long for Yuko's comfort until she heard a loud smack ringing over her ears and pain soon followed from the top of her head.

"i..itai" murmured Yuko.

"How many times have I told you not to do that in public?" asked Haruna, annoyed. She pushed the smaller girl away, and crossed her hands accross her chest.

"But there's only Bakamina here." answered Yuko, slightly pouting as she rubbed the spot on her head that her girlfriend just mercilessly hit.

"And she is sick, shouldn't you be taking care of her instead?" demanded Haruna. "I bet you were planting some perverted ideas on Takamina's head like you always do before I came in right?"

Before Yuko was able to retort back, Takamina has cut in, "No, believe me, this time she's not." chuckled Takamina, amused by the sight of the mini-quarrel the couple just had.  "I'm actually the one who have some ideas here, but it's not perverted, so don't worry."

“What plan?” asked Haruna as she settled herself on Takamina's bed.

“Takamina want to give Acchan some kind of a-night-to-remember.” Answered Yuko.

“But the doctor said you cant leave the hospital. Acchan will kill us if she finds out. You know how scary she got toward something that is related to you. Do you even know how she looks at me when she sees us do just much as talking alone? it's like she wants to mutilate me!" explained Haruna in horror.

"Yup, yup, been there, saw that" agreed Yuko, raising her hand. "Even I don't have the guts to be around her when she turns into hulk-mode. Kinda wondered how you survive after all these years."

"So anyway, no, I think it's a bad idea." stated Haruna.

“That’s exactly what I said to her! But this shorty here wouldn’t listen.” Yuko pointed her finger to Takamina’s forehead and poked it continuously.

“Hey cut it out!” scolded Takamina. She slapped yuko’s finger from her forehead. Takamina then turned to Haruna.

“I know you care so much about me and Atsuko, but when I’m gone I want to…” before Takamina even finished, Yuko cut her off.

“Don’t even start on the dying thing again Bakamina.” Warned Yuko. Haruna knew that this was about the sensitive topic. She couldn’t imagine what’s going to happen to Acchan after Takamina’s gone. Even when Takamina was treated in the hospital, Haruna  could hear Acchan cried herself to sleep in the apartment that they shared. Acchan often awoken from a nightmare of Takamina dying and cried her eyes out and Haruna would always be there to console her. It broke her heart to see the sight of her friend like that. So, if Takamina was trying to make Acchan a bit happier, or return the old Acchan if it’s possible, Haruna would definitely say yes to it.

“Okay, what’s the plan?” asked Haruna after much consideration.     

“But first, you got to make a promise to me.”

Yuko and Haruna looked at each other confused.

“Take care of Atsuko will you? maybe I wouldn’t be there to protect her anymore but she still has you guys. She’s fragile, despite all of her efforts to show how strong she is. I hope you can be her source of support.” Takamina flashed a weak smile.

Yuko and Haruna both smiled sincerely. “We will.” Said Haruna.

“Now lets move on to the plan, shall we?” said Takamina averting the topic.





   “Takamina has got to pay us back!! She basically drained out our wallet.” Complained Haruna while carrying a huge roll of wire. Yuko on the other hand was pushing a cart with gigantic speaker on it with one hand and her other hand was carrying a huge tube of fireworks. Being a gentlewomen that she was, she carried heavier things, not to mention double amount, than her girlfriend. They made their way to the city park, where Takamina would carry out her plan.

“Correction, MY wallet." said Yuko, "Thanks to God up there in heaven that shorty didn't ask us to prepare anything balloon-related."

Yuko then smiled,  "I guess she’s just trying to cheer Acchan up.” Said Yuko. “But…”

“But what?” asked Haruna.

Yuko hang her head low. “I don’t know, it’s just, I have a bad feeling.”

“What do you mean?”

Trying to think positive, Yuko shrugged the thoughts out of her head. “Never mind. Whatever Takamina has got in her mind for Acchan I hope it’ll turn out well. Let’s go, we’re late already” 

Sensing that something is wrong with Yuko, Haruna stopped on her track. Realizing that her girlfriend wasn’t beside her anymore, Yuko stopped and looked back.

“Yuu-chan, you don’t have any disease that you hide from me right?” asked Haruna.

“Eh?! No!!” replied Yuko. she was taken back by Haruna's question.

“Promise me something will you?” asked Haruna. Tears were on the corner of her eyes.

Yuko made her way to Haruna and dropped everything that she carried in her hands. She tiptoed on her feet and cupped Haruna's face with her hands, as she looked deeply into the brunette's eyes.

“Anything.” Said Yuko.

“Never ever leave me. don’t ever leave me alone Yuu-chan” Haruna's face now drenched with tears. She hugged Yuko tightly and buried her face on the crook of yuko's neck. “ I’m scared, I’m scared that I’m going to lose you just like what happened to Takamina and Acchan. I’m not strong yuu-chan. I cant, I just cant..”

“Shush shush,,, it’s going to be okay. I won’t go anywhere. I’ll always be here with you.” Said Yuko while stroking Haruna's back, calming her. But Haruna's sob was even louder. Yuko pulled away from the hug and cupped Haruna's cheeks with her hands.

“Hey, hey look at me.” said Yuko. Their eyes were now on the same level.“You still have a long, long, long way to go to get rid of me. I wont leave you, I promise. I’ll always be with you NyanNyan, because I love you. I love you so much.”  Yuko tiptoed and pressed her lips on Haruna's cheek, kissed away the tears. Then she move downward and brought her lips to Haruna's. 




“What took them so long? Atsuko could be here any minutes now.”  said Takamina to herself. She was waiting for Yuko's signal to sign her that everything was prepared. Suddenly her phone on the desk next to her hospital bed vibrated. It’s Yuko calling.

“Hello, what took you so long?!!” answered Takamina right away without giving the caller a chance to speak.

“Sorry midget, something came up. Everything’s ready here.”

“The music?”

“yup.”

“The speaker”

“yup”

“The firework?”

“All set, all you have to do Is bring her here.”

Takamina paused for a moment. “Hello?? Bakamina, you there??” called Yuko.

“Thanks Yuko. for everything. Thanks for being the best bestfriend anyone could ask for. I’m glad I sat next to you on our first day of elementary school.” Takamina smiled as she recalled the memory. “I know I don’t say this often because it’s kinda gross but, I love you Yuko.”

There’s a long silence between the two. On the other line, Yuko's face was already drenched with tears.

“Yuko?” called Takamina.

“Dude that’s totally gay.” Said Yuko to lighten up the mood.

“Hey!!! I am gay!!” laughed Takamina. “But seriously, thanks.”

“Anytime kid. Now you better get your and Acchan's asses down here A.S.A.P, because my NyanNyan is freezing to death!!!” with that, Yuko hung her phone.

“Damn squirrel” chuckled Takamina. As she was about to put her phone on the desk, there was this throbbing pain on her chest. She clutched her eyes shut and bit her lips to hold the pain. The pain was blinding, her eyes became blurry.

“Oh no, not now, please not now.. at least give me a chance to say what I want to say to her…” she held on the railing of her bed. She held it very tightly that she could feel her hands became numb.

“oh god,, oh god,,, think of her… think of her… her smiles… her voice… her pouts… her lips… her kiss… her hugs.. Atsuko… Atsuko…”

As if on cue, the certain girl peeked her head from the door. “Mi.na.mi ??” she called.

“At..Atsuko..” didn’t want to worry the girl, she tried to hold back all of her pains. Takamina found it really strange that just by looking at the brown haired girl smiling at her, all of her pains were all gone. If she could, she’d want to see that smile forever, but she knew she couldn’t. she knew all along that her time was short and that’s why she planned all of this. She didn’t want to be the cause of Atsuko's tears, she wanted to be make the girl happy in any ways that she could.

Atsuko could literally hear her heart breaking at the sight of Takamina in front of her. Why did everytime she visit her, Takamina always looked skinnier and paler? She wanted to cry right there right now, but she couldn’t. She didn’t want Takamina to see her cry for it would pain Takamina even more than she already did. Maeda Atsuko made her way to Takamina and kissed the girl’s forehead. “I miss you Minami.” She looked lovingly into Takamina's eyes.

“I miss you too.” Takamina smiled, showing her pearly white teeth. Not long after, she pouted. “Not on the lips?”

“Awww, you’re cute, why you have to be so cute??” said Atsuko while pinching Takamina's cheek.

“Ouch… it hurts.” Said Takamina rubbing her cheek with her hand.

“Awww I’m sorry.” Atsuko leaned forward and kissed Takamina on the place where she pinched earlier.

“These kinda hurt too.” Grinned Takamina, pointing at her lips.

Atsuko leaned forward and brushed her lips against Takamina. Atsuko's lips tasted so soft and  warm, Takamina wanted to taste them forever if she could. Takamina deepened the kiss, being afraid of the fact that that could be the last time she kissed her Atsuko. Their lips parted when air became necessary. They gazed through each other eyes. no words were needed, their eyes said it all.

“I want to show you something.” Takamina broke the silence. Without warning Takamina pulled out the needles on the back of her hand.

Atsuko gasped in surprise, “MINAMI?!!! What are you doing?”

Takamina got off from the bed and changed her patient robe to her casual outfits. She didn’t even bother to answer Atsuko's question as she changing her clothes. When she’s done, she offered her hand to Atsuko.

“Just come with me will you? I want to show you something. Please.”

Atsuko hesitated for a moment but seeing Takamina's eyes, she knew she couldn’t do or say anything to change her girlfriend’s mind. So, she took her hand and walked outside the hospital room.





In some part of the park, Haruna and Yuko were hiding behind the bushes, waiting for Takamina and Atsuko to arrive. Yuko had her hands around Haruna's shoulder to warm her up from the cold weather, rubbing her hand with the side of Haruna's hand.

“Takamina is very romantic, you know?” whispered Haruna so that no one could hear and find where they were.

Yuko pouted at the statement, "what are you implying NyanNyan? Am I not romantic enough to you?"

Haruna smiled, and poked Yuko's dimple, her favorite feature of her girlfriend, "no silly, I'm just saying."

Yuko chuckled weakly, “Yes she is. But don’t you think it’s going to break Acchan's heart even more is she’s doing this?”

Haruna lowered her head. Yuko was right, what’s the point of making Acchan all happy and smiley when she knew eventually Takamina's  gonna leave her and left the girl crushed. Haruna didn’t even want to imagine what’s gonna  happen to Acchan next, for Takamina is the girl’s whole life. Takamina had change Acchan into who she was today, If she’s all bubbly and smiley that’s all because of Takamina.

“yuu-chan, whatever happens next, we have to be strong for Acchan.” Haruna broke the silence. “it’s going to break her.”

“yeah I know.” Replied Yuko looking at Haruna's eyes. She could tell that her girlfriend was about to cry. So she held her into her arms. “that stupid midget. She’s really good at making everyone’s crying.”

They stayed at that position for some time, until they heard the familiar voice approaching.

“Minami we should just go back to the hospital...”.

That was Acchan's. They peeked through the bushes and saw the couple coming toward the intended area.

“it’s on baby.” smirked Yuko to Haruna. “turn everything on.” Instructed Yuko

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“Minami, what are we doing here?” asked Atsuko as they got off the cab.

“just wait and see.” Teased Takamina.

The park was quiet, only few people spotted walking or just sitting in the park because it was almost midnight now. They walked further to the center of the park. Takamina could feel the pain in her chest striking in every steps that she took, but she chose to ignore it. She put on her brightest smile for the girl next to her so that she wont be worried over her.

“we should just get back to the hospital, I’m afraid something might be..”

Takamina stopped her track and cut Atsuko off with her finger on her girlfriend’s lips.

“Just please,”  Takamina brought her forehead to Atsuko's “pretend that I’m the old-healthy-Minami. Okay?”

Atsuko slowly nodded and Takamina pulled away. She stared into Atsuko's eyes to assure the girl that she’s fine. They continued walking hand in hand with Takamina's leading. As they got closer to the centre of the park, from the distance they could see a microphone standing there at the middle of the grass field.  A huge smile spread across Takamina's face, knowing that her bestfriend had settled everything in place. Takamina headed to the microphone and reached it.  She placed the mic in front of her mouth.

“Ehm, check, check.” Takamina's voice blasted from the gigantic speaker that was placed just a few feet away from the microphone. Atsuko was taken aback. Before she could even say anything, Takamina brought her to sit on the bench just in front of where the mic’s standing and gestured Atsuko to be quiet by putting her finger in front of her lips.

“Let me do the talking.” Whispered Takamina to Atsuko ear. She walked back to the microphone.

“Hey there the most amazing lady I’ve ever met.” Waved Takamina to Atsuko. Atsuko waved back and flashed her smile. The smile that could make Takamina’s heart beat two times faster, and make her forget all of her pains.

“You have no idea how lucky I am to have you in my life. you’ve made these past five years worthwhile Atsuko. If I haven’t met you I’m sure I must’ve died years ago.  Even when sometimes I troubled you with my illness, never at once you left me alone. You’re always by my side through everything. I thank you for that, thank you for having faith in me.” Atsuko was about to stand up to go to Takamina but she stopped her by motioning her to sit still.

  “But I’m defeated Atsuko, I don’t think I can hold on for too long. I wish I could grow old with you. I wish I could have you by my side everytime I opened my eyes in the morning and everynight when I’m going to sleep, but I know I couldn’t. I love you Atsuko, any words cannot describe how I feel about you. But tonight I’m gonna try my best to describe it to you and I want the whole world to hear it” Smiled Takamina to Atsuko. She could see that her girlfriend’s face was already glistening with tears.Then she clapped her hands giving signal to Yuko and Haruna to turn on the music. The music blasted through the speaker.

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You're amazing
So amazing
Have I told you
Enough
You're my angel
Guardian angel
God knows I've been blessed with love


Atsuko covered her mouth with her hand to hold back the overflowing tears. She couldn’t believe Takamina has prepared all of this for her. Takamina's got the most amazing voice, even in her unhealthy condition she could bring out powerful voice. Atsuko remembered how Takamina's  voice always lulled to sleep.

But if I been gone tomorrow
Would you know how deep my loves goes
Have I ever told you
You're the one

If the words don't come my way
Hope its still love
Hope it still shows
If the words don't come my way
Hope you still know what my heart wants to say

A love so tender
I surrender
To this feeling
So true
My affirmation
My inspiration
Darling I have been blessed with you

If the words don't come my way
Hope you still know
Hope it still shows
If the words don't come my way
I hope you still know what my heart wants to say

But if I be gone tomorrow
Would you know how deep my loves goes
If I was gone forever
Would you know how much I care

You make me feel like flying
I'm sailing on your ocean
That everytime you look at me
You see it in my eyes

If the words don't come my way
I hope you still know

If the words don't come my way
I hope you still know
I hope it still shows

If the words don't come my way
I hope you still know
What my heart wants to say

Takamina clapped her hands one more time. As if on cue, colorful fireworks shot to the sky, decorating the dark sky which was already covered with sparkling stars. 
If the words don't come my way
I hope you still know
Hope it still shows

If the worst don't come my way
I hope you still know
I hope it still shows
I hope still you know
What my heart wants to say


When the music had stopped, she made her way to Atsuko who sat on the bench. Takamina kneeled before her and cupped Atsuko's cheek with her hand. Takamina thumbs wiped away the tears from Atsuko's face. “Hey, don’t cry.” pleaded Takamina. “Please. I want you to promise me that tonight you wont be crying. Can you do that?”

Atsuko shook her head. She couldn’t do it, how could she possibly do that. Fear of losing Takamina had scared the living out of her.

“Please?” Takamina pleaded once again. “It’s not like I’m dying Atsuko.” joked Takamina. Takamina cursed herself in her mind. How could she say that? Because the fact was she knew she really was dying. She’s already dying when she saw tears on Acchan's face and knowing that it was her who caused it, pained her even more. “I’m not worth your tears.” That did it. Atsuko stood up from the bench, she’s mad. Takamina was taken aback,

“You’re worth it Minami.” Sobbed Atsuko. “You’re worth everything, you’re worth my life! how could you say that? Don’t you know how I feel?”

Takamina hugged Atsuko tightly. Atsuko's scent hit her nostril. She’s gonna miss this, the smell of Atsuko's scent, the feel of Atsuko in her arms, she’s gonna miss her. “I’m sorry.” Was all Takamina could say. Atsuko was trying so hard not to cry, but she failed.

“Hey, you promised not to cry.” Said Takamina. She pulled away from the hug and wiped Atsuko's tears with her thumb. “I have one last thing to ask.”
Atsuko could only stay silent. She hated the way Takamina talked because it felt like she’s saying her goodbyes.

“When I’m gone..” Takamina was stopped by Atsuko's finger pressed on her lips.  Takamina grabbed a hold on Atsuko's hand and brought it down. “When I’m gone, please be the way you used to be. Don’t change for me. Keep smiling and move on. I know you’ll find someone who’s better than me” Takamina flashed a weak smile, stroking Atsuko's long, brown hair with her fingers.

“How can I be smiling when you’re gone?“

Takamina stayed silent. She didn’t know how to answer it, so she thought of the best way she could do to calm the love of her life. She leaned forward to capture Atsuko's lips. They kissed like never kissed before, as if it’s the last kiss they shared. Takamina ignored the pain in her chest that was erupting when she kissed Atsuko. She wanted to savor the moment, wanted to feel Atsuko's lips on hers for the last time. Takamina let out a cough while they’re kissing. She pulled back and lowered her hand.

Atsuko felt something wet on her lips, it didn’t taste the same like they kissed before. It tasted like copper,,,, blood. Atsuko lifted up Takamina's head with her finger on her girlfriend's chin. Takamina quickly wiped away the blood on her lips with the back of her hand and swallowed the rest of the blood in her mouth.

“Minami? Are you okay? Lets get back to the hospital now.” said Atsuko. Before she could pulled Takamina's hand to start walking, but Takamina held her.

“Look at you, all smudged with my blood.” Takamina let out a chuckle. With her thumb she wiped away her blood which all over Atsuko's lips.

“It’s not funny! Come on lets go back to the hospital!"

“Could we just stay here Atsuko? Please.” Takamina gave out that look, the look that Atsuko couldn’t resist.

“But…”

“Please. Come, let's lay on that ground.”  Takamina intertwined her fingers with Atsuko and brought her to the field of soft grass. They laid on the soft grass with Takamina's hand wrapped around Atsuko and Atsuko's head rested on Takamina's chest. Atsuko could hear Takamina's heart beat weakly in her chest. They looked up at the starry sky. They stayed still for couple of minutes till Takamina broke the silence.

“I’m going to be one of the stars above and watching over you.” Said Takamina pointing at the sky. Atsuko reached Takamina's hand in the air and intertwined their fingers.

"Minami?"

"hm?"

"Thank you."

"what for"

"Thank you for loving me"

Hearing her girlfriend's statement brought a weak smile on Takamina's face.

"Have you ever regretted loving me?" asked Takamina.

"No. Never. Not for  a day, not for an hour, not for a minute, even not for a second." answered Atsuko. She looked up to takamina's face and locked her gaze with her tiny girlfriend. "Why would you think so?"

"Because I'm a bad girlfriend." Answered Takamina. "I was never around, I rarely take you out to movies, romantic dinner, pick you up from the office, or all other activities that can be sum up into what they call a perfect date. Most of my times I spent was in the hospital or curled up in my bed because I was so weak. What's even worse is that i can' t protect you, I cant take care of you the way i should be, the way i wanted it to be. It's always you who's patiently taking care of me. i'm qualified as the worst girlfriend ever don't you think? Sometimes I even wondered whether you stay with me out of pity."

Atsuko placed her free hand on Takamina's cheek and caressed it lovingly, "I love you. I love everything about you. You're still the same person i fell in love with back in high school, you've never changed. Though there's time when you tried to push me away, I would never let you do that because... " Atsuko inhaled a large amount of air as she found a difficulty in breathing for holding back her sobs. "Because I realized being with you completes me. You make me a better person, and I love who I am when I'm with you."

Takamina displayed her widest smile that night, " you don't know how happy I am to hear that." Takamina tightened her hold around Atsuko, trying to engulf herself in the warmth that the latter provided.

"Atsuko, I'm cold." Said Takamina.

"Please don't leave me Minami," sobbed the taller girl.

"I'll try, I've tried hard"

"Promise me you have to continue living, fulfill your dreams even it's not with me. Promise me to not be afraid to fall in love again, find one that's healthy and won't leave you like I do. You're gonna die an old lady and surrounded by the people who love you. And until that day comes, I will be waiting for you patiently."

Atsuko bit her lips hard to hold back the tears. Somehow Atsuko felt that this was the last time she’d ever hear Takamina's voice. She’s gonna miss Takamina's voice which lulled her to sleep, her voice when she whispered sweet nothing to her ear, her voice when she said “I love you” , her voice when she scolded Atsuko if she’s not taking care of herself, she’s going to miss Takamina for the rest of her life.

“I love you Minami.” Said Atsuko looking up to Takamina's face.

Takamina flashed a weak smile. “I love you too, very much.” Takamina snuggled closer to Atsuko. “I’m a bit tired Atsuko, is it okay if I sleep here? It’s so comfortable being in your arms.”

Atsuko nodded. She stroked the brunette hair with her fingers to lull her to sleep.

"I'm scared that i will never feel the rest of my whole life the way i feel when i'm with you" stated Atsuko.At that moment, she couldn’t hear takamina's heartbeat anymore. Takamina's gone, the love of her life’s gone in her arms. She knew she had promised Takamina not to cry, but she couldn’t. “I’m sorry Minami. It hurts, it hurts so much” Said Atsuko before she bursted out to tears. She hugged Takamina's body tightly in her arms. Her sob could be heard all over the park.

Not to far from where Takamina and Atsuko laid, stood two figures witnessing the whole heartbreaking scene. Both were crying hard. Yuko dropped herself to her knees. Her bestfriend was gone, the bestfriend who she pulled prank on someone with, the bestfriend who she skipped class with back at school, the bestfriend who she often mocked for being 5cm shorter than her, the bestfriend who loved to fail so much, the very bestfriend that Yuko could ask for was now gone. Haruna was not any better, she covered her mouth with her hand to avoid letting out her sobbing. Four of them had been very good friends for more than 5 years. And she gotta admit that Takamina had a good heart, she didn’t deserve to have such a short age. That’s why Haruna often thought that the world was unfair. She kneeled beside Yuko and hugged her girlfriend. Yuko was now crying hard on Haruna's embrace.

Trying to hold back her tears, Haruna said “Remember what Takamina said to us, we promised to take care of Acchan, we have to be strong for her yuu-chan.”

Yuko tried to stop her tears from coming and wipe away the tears on her face with her hands. “You’re right. It’s the least that we can do for her.” They both could hear Atsuko's sobs getting louder and louder, so they decided to approach the girl. The sight in front of them pained their heart. Atsuko was clutching to Takamina's shirt crying her eyes out while Takamina laid there motionless. Haruna laid beside Atsuko and hugged her from behind, trying to console the girl like she always did whenever she had a nightmare about Takamina and now Atsuko's worst nightmare had come true. Haruna stroked Atsuko's hair trying to calm the girl.

“She’s gone now, Minami's gone. I dont think I could carry on without her, I’m not that strong.” Sobbed atsuko. 

“We shouldn’t be grieving for her, acchan, she’s in a better place now and at least she’s no longer in pain. Isn’t that what you want for her? ” Haruna couldn’t even imagine if she’s in Atsuko state now. the pain must be unbearable.

Yuko followed suit and laid beside Takamina's body. She looked up to the sky and said “wait for us up there midget, don’t you dare have all the fun without us.” Atsuko tried to stop her crying and looked above. She remembered Takamina said that she’s going to watch over her from above.

So the three bestfriends laid there looking up to sky, hoping that somehow there was a sign from Takamina saying yes to them. As if a miracle, one star twinkled brighter than the others.


The Endo


Title: Re: What My Heart Wants to Say (AtsuMina, KojiYuu)
Post by: chichay12 on December 17, 2012, 05:26:56 AM
oh my god!
I really cry while my reading this!
Dirty chan,can u say thank you to ur sister?
I really love this story!

Atsumina!!! :cry:
Title: Re: What My Heart Wants to Say (AtsuMina, KojiYuu)
Post by: haruhi16 on December 17, 2012, 05:27:55 AM
I already read this on tumblr, it's really a heart-breaking story ya know~ you made me cry. *wipes tears*
Title: Re: What My Heart Wants to Say (AtsuMina, KojiYuu)
Post by: KojiYuu44 on December 17, 2012, 05:58:12 AM
ahhhh I cried really hard reading this story  :cry:
this is a really good story
please thank your sister for the wonderful OS
Title: Re: What My Heart Wants to Say (AtsuMina, KojiYuu)
Post by: Haruko on December 17, 2012, 06:24:00 AM
I already read this on tumblr, it's really a heart-breaking story ya know~ you made me cry. *wipes tears*

me too.. aww my heart T_T
Title: Re: What My Heart Wants to Say (AtsuMina, KojiYuu)
Post by: chiqinna on December 17, 2012, 07:56:59 AM
I read it on tumblr last night.. and i'm still sad now~  :cry:
the song just make me  :gyaaah:
Title: Re: What My Heart Wants to Say (AtsuMina, KojiYuu)
Post by: ikun1216 on December 17, 2012, 08:15:35 AM
There are absolutely no words to describe how in awe I am of "Choudai, Darling!"
Everything about this story is perfect.  :heart:
Title: Re: What My Heart Wants to Say (AtsuMina, KojiYuu)
Post by: dark48 on December 17, 2012, 11:48:29 AM
This story >>>>> "What My Heart Wants to Say"

So Sad yet So beautiful

That really is true LOVE  :heart:
Title: Re: What My Heart Wants to Say (AtsuMina, KojiYuu)
Post by: miayaka on December 17, 2012, 01:03:59 PM
 :on speedy: Splendid you caught my emotions here..
 :farofflook: Best sad OS I've red!
Title: Re: What My Heart Wants to Say (AtsuMina, KojiYuu)
Post by: stepk on December 17, 2012, 06:54:50 PM
the all history are really cute
but the last one is really sad

Takamina  :cry:
Title: Re: What My Heart Wants to Say (AtsuMina, KojiYuu)
Post by: kahem on December 17, 2012, 07:06:21 PM
It's sad but beautiful. I wanna cry T_T
The first one was awesome
Title: Re: What My Heart Wants to Say (AtsuMina, KojiYuu)
Post by: Jessye on December 17, 2012, 11:41:15 PM
 :cry: :cry: :cry:

 :cry: :cry: :cry:

I cried a lot....

 :cry: :cry: :cry:
Title: Re: What My Heart Wants to Say (AtsuMina, KojiYuu)
Post by: freakymonday on December 18, 2012, 07:47:18 AM
 :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:
i was drenched in tears~~~  :mon surr:
Title: Re: What My Heart Wants to Say (AtsuMina, KojiYuu)
Post by: FNK23 on December 18, 2012, 10:56:17 AM
i was knew what will happen in your fic since the first time, but i cant help myself to not crying while read your fic :cry: :cry:
why you leave acchan like that takaminaa, whyyyyyyy :pleeease:
Title: Re: What My Heart Wants to Say (AtsuMina, KojiYuu)
Post by: cisda83 on December 22, 2012, 12:23:12 PM
Your story "What My Heart Wants to Say" makes me cry.... lots  :cry:

But it's very very good story.... very sad ending....

Thank you for the story...

Can't wait to see your other updates

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: What My Heart Wants to Say (AtsuMina, KojiYuu)
Post by: marisado on December 22, 2012, 09:27:46 PM
I cried  :k-sad:  so sad, I didn't want to finish reading it but I did.
I like kumi more because how you written her in ur story  :lol:
Title: Re: What My Heart Wants to Say (AtsuMina, KojiYuu)
Post by: yourockme on December 23, 2012, 05:44:53 AM
 :err: :err: 
I am so happy a while ago
But now  :cry:

Whenever im reading this kind of stories
I cant breath properly
Like hell i need to put much effort just to breath XD
LOL
Anyway thank you and thanks to your sisiter
Itss awesome
Title: Re: What My Heart Wants to Say (AtsuMina, KojiYuu)
Post by: Sydney W on December 23, 2012, 10:06:36 AM
i put the song ("What My Heart Wants to Say)" as my ringer tone. It just sad that Minami leaving Acchan behind.
Title: Stay - Prologue (05/12/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: dirtydeeds on May 12, 2013, 04:46:31 PM
Well hello people!!! :cow: I'm back with another fic at last! Well actually it's not "me" who's back, it's actually my sister.. She's been writing this fic and I'm just helping her to post it, so basically I'm just a messenger. get it? 8)

This time it will be Atsumina because who doesn't love Atsumina really? and partly because they've been missed  :cry: enough with my rambling, so this fic tells pretty much a chronology of what had happened during Acchan's post-graduation period up until now (at least that's what my sister's imagined to have happened), because of that probably some past events at that time will be brought up as the story goes.. Yup yup, so she had her imagination going haywire and she ended conjuring up this fic  :nervous

Without further ado, enjoy the prologue!!!
A comment from you will be really well appreciated  :wub:








(http://i43.tinypic.com/i2u9g5.jpg)












Prologue






“The moment you walk out of the door, we’re over!” Her chest heaved up and down, out of breath, from all the yelling she’d been doing.

The other girl, the shorter one by figure, stopped on her track just as she turned the doorknob open. Takahashi Minami chuckled bitterly before turning around to face the brunette haired girl. She could see dried tears had made trails down the latter’s cheeks, and she couldn’t help but to spend a few seconds to study her girlfriend’s facial features. Her eyes finally made a stop on the taller girl’s eyes and locked her gaze with hers. Takamina could read everything from her girlfriend’s eyes, just like an open book. Her eyes were emitting anger, determination, and seriousness. Takamina let out a sigh before responding to what she had said.

“Look at what we have become. We’re not us anymore. It’s just you, and then there’s me” reasoned Takamina calmly. “face it, this is not working out.”

“And in case you haven’t realized it, I think we’re already over.” Added Takamina before stepping out of the door and slamming the door closed with a loud bang.

Maeda Atsuko was taken aback by the loud sound of her apartment door being closed. Anger rose within her.  Before she realized it, she had reached for the vase placed by the table near her and threw it against the entrance door.

“Minami I hate you! Just go! I don’t ever want to see your face again!” shouted Atsuko as the glass from the vase was shattered into pieces and scattered all over the floor.

Her lips parted, gasping for air to enter her lung.  She was startled by a sudden drop of water hit her hand.  She looked up to ceiling, trying to find the source only to apprehend that it was coming from her eyes. Realization struck her that she had been crying. She quickly wiped them away with her hands, wanting to rid of that sign of weakness, sign of regret.  After all the fights they’d been having the past few months, Atsuko thought that she’d had enough. Her girlfriend had changed, or so she thought. She’d become overly possessive, overly sensitive, and when they started yelling at each other eventually Minami would always bring up her selfishness to graduate from the group, putting the blame on her. If ending things with Minami was what she really wanted, she should be relieved that they finally broke up, right? Then why did her heart feel like it’d been pricked by hundreds of needles?

Atsuko covered her face with the palms of her hands and sobbed against them. She broke down and let herself drop onto the floor. She bawled her eyes out as she called for Minami’s name repeatedly.

“Minami please come back.”





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Dang, I didn't realize how short it was  :huhuh

Well, that's all I got for now... Get ready for Chapter 1 people!!!
Adios!!!
Title: Re: Stay - Prologue (05/12/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: chichay12 on May 12, 2013, 04:55:14 PM
deeds~~
your back with ATSUMINA fic!!
YATTA~~  :cow:
but but why a heart break..  :cry:
looking forward for more!! :on gay:
Title: Re: Stay - Prologue (05/12/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: miayaka on May 12, 2013, 04:58:31 PM
I knew it drama  :cry:
but I like it :3
Superb author-san
Looking forward on your first chapter.

btw the poster is great  :thumbsup
Title: Re: Stay - Prologue (05/12/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: 7sam14 on May 12, 2013, 05:18:10 PM
A heart breaking prologue...  :cry: :cry:

and I Like It!!!

Can't wait for zee First Chap.!

Saknyuu for the Prologue!!
Title: Re: Stay - Prologue (05/12/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: bimbo on May 12, 2013, 05:28:15 PM
Post-graduation fanfic is nice  :) And don't forget to tell your sister she make a good job  :twothumbs Now I'm excited for the next chapter  XD
Title: Re: Stay - Prologue (05/12/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: Hii_chan on May 12, 2013, 05:40:34 PM
great job  :twothumbs
interesting prologue
please send your sister my thanks
Title: Re: Stay - Prologue (05/12/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: cisda83 on May 12, 2013, 08:09:23 PM
Wah... another fic from you... Yeah...

I enjoyed the previous one...

Ah... Minami and Atsuko broke up after lots of fighting huh?

Minami seems to not care about their relationship anymore... She seems to be fed up over all the fighting...

Would Minami really not want to work on the relationship anymore?

Ah... Poor Atsuko... she seems to still want to be with Minami...

What's going to happen with Atsuko?

Who was at fault...? Minami or Atsuko or both?

What's going to happen with Atsumina?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the prologue

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Stay - Prologue (05/12/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: Minami-chan on May 12, 2013, 09:51:29 PM
wow it´s a very good prologue.
It´s a atsumina fic? or you will play with other couples ?
Title: Re: Stay - Prologue (05/12/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: kurumi on May 12, 2013, 10:17:26 PM
I am looking forward to a new story! Can't wait for Chapter 1 :)
Title: Re: Stay - Prologue (05/12/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: Tanchan on May 13, 2013, 07:26:49 AM
Interesting prologue. What's gonna happen to Atsumina?
Title: Re: Stay - Prologue (05/12/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: kuro808 on May 14, 2013, 12:09:35 PM
Nice prologue, I didn't see this before and I'm glad I read it :thumbsup
Title: Stay - Chapter I (05/15/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: dirtydeeds on May 15, 2013, 10:40:28 AM
Thanks for all the feedbacks!!! :love: I need to warn you guys, for those who are expecting some sappy, mushy, cheesy love stories of our dear AtsuMina, you're not gonna find it here.. I intend to make it dark, angst, with some plot twists, well you know what I mean :twisted: because I'm an evil author.. :bleed eyes: so you guys might as well enjoy the ride, because this fic is gonna be one hell of a roller coaster ride  :yep:

without further ado, I present.......
























Chapter I





















“nonononono...” Atsuko muttered in disbelief. Her hands were clutching hard on the newspaper she’d been reading.

“It’s bad, isn’t it?” asked Yuko hesitantly.

“This is awful! What if Minami sees this?!” ranted Atsuko in panic.

The newspaper that had been thrown carelessly on the floor showed a large black and white picture of a guy who’s carrying a certain girl in his arms. The girl’s dress was lifted, showing her thighs and buttock for the entire Japan to see. Atsuko didn’t need to see the face of the girl to know who she was, it was her. The blurry memories from that drunken night she had were all flooding into her mind now. A few more photos of her in her drunken state decorated the front page of the newspaper gracefully.

“Could he at least cover my butt?! Could he even carry me properly?!” Continued the younger girl.

She paced back and forth in front of the couch where Yuko was sitting in the apartment that they shared. Since the break-up, Atsuko decided to move out of Minami’s apartment and just stayed over at Yuko’s apartment. She didn’t want to be alone and drown in her own misery. Minami hadn’t come home ever since she left her after the fight, and Atsuko figured it would’ve been easier to leave when she’s not around. And ever since the break up too, she hadn’t heard from Minami. It was only from her friends and the news that she heard anything related to Minami.

“Acchan I’m sorry, I’ve only made it worse between you and Takamina.” Pouted Yuko.  She was genuinely sorry for leaving both of her friends in a more complicated situation.

Atsuko sighed, and seated herself next to Yuko on the couch, “it’s not your fault, it’s mine. I shouldn’t have drink that much. The whole thing with Minami troubled me so much that I just needed a moment not to think about her, even just for a night. I guess I didn’t know when I should’ve stopped.”

In fact, she didn’t care about the scandal at all. She’s already on the legal age to drink alcohol, and it didn’t really bother her if her assets were flaunted to the whole nation, it wasn’t her first time anyway, she had done that a lot on AKB’s music videos and her photo-books. What she’s worrying about was Minami, she might get the wrong ideas when she saw the pictures.  She leaned down and reached for the newspaper she threw on the ground.

“look, even when I was drunk I still cried out her name.” She pointed at the picture that showed her crying as she held the guy’s hand.

Yuko suddenly burst out in laughter, “I’m sorry, but look at your face Acchan. I’ve held it back ever since I showed you that newspaper, but geez your face, your hair, even the way your purse’s hanging on your neck, everything about you is so wrong.” Explained Yuko while clutching her stomach to hold back her laughter.

The latter scoffed in disbelief and slapped Yuko’s hand really hard, “it’s not funny! Minami might get the wrong idea about this! The pictures are implying that I’m crying to beg him to stay! If you hadn’t left me with those guys to meet up with NyanNyan, you’d be the one I’m crying to and the one who should’ve taken me home, not him!”

Once she got a hold of herself, Yuko retorted, “Well in my defense, firstly, I didn’t know that you’d be that drunk, you usually are a light drinker.  Secondly, Takeru is a good guy and I believe he wouldn’t do anything inappropriate to you. Plus I think he’s gay, hence the way he carried you was very un-gentleman-like. And lastly, NyanNyan texted me that she wanted some “late dessert” if you know what I mean” smirked yuko, making a quote in the air, “who’s on their right mind would refuse to that?! It’s very unlikely of her to do that you know?”

“Oh god, so you bailed on me for sex? What a friend.” Sneered Atsuko.

“You ought to relax. I will explain everything to her myself, that it was just a big misunderstanding.”

“As if she’d care” muttered Atsuko under her breath.

“Of course she cares! Bakamina loves you and will always love you, even the rest of the members could tell that. The way I see it, she was just overwhelmed by everything, your graduation, the team shuffle, her being the general manager, the new album, so yes, everything. She’s got too much on her plate and she just can’t handle it. You know how she is, she always refuses to share her problems and choose to carry the burden all by herself. It might be hard for her now that you’re gone. Your presence in the group is really important for her.”

“but..”

Before Atsuko could reply, the shorter girl cut her off. “Before you say anything, no I don’t blame you. I know being actress is what you really want, and leaving the group was the best decision to do so. In order to make a dream come true, you have to give up the other. I totally understand and respect your decision.”

“thank you,” smiled Atsuko, “but if realizing my dream also means that I have to lose Minami, I would give up my dream any seconds now.”

“Just wait ‘till she come around and realize how stupid she’s been. I think it’s just a matter of time for the both of you to get back together” said Yuko. Her hand was draped around Atsuko’s shoulder to provide assurance to the latter.

“but it’s been a month, she didn’t even care when I left our apartment.” sulked Atsuko.

“Then I’ll knock some sense into her head.”
 



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Yuko’d been hiding the truth from Atsuko. She didn’t want her bestfriend to feel any guiltier by leaving the group. Truth was, Takamina had changed. She wasn’t the same person she used to be. She wasn’t as dorky as she used to be, wasn’t as fun as she used to be, if she was still the same Takamina on-screen, making fun of herself and the whole failed acts she did, it was all just for show. Off-screen she didn’t talk much anymore. It’s like everything that came out of her mouth was only work related, not for any chit-chat they usually shared among the members anymore. She kept turning down member’s offer to join in the gatherings they held, reasoning that she wanted to practice instead. But Yuko’s guts told her that it had something to do with a chance of meeting Atsuko in those gatherings. Even though Atsuko had graduated, she was always invited to join. If she hadn’t had any schedules that time, she’d most definitely come.

Takamina had turned really scary too, most of the junior members were scared of her because Takamina didn’t tolerate any mistakes. When they practiced together and a member made mistake on the dance moves, Takamina would scold them to stop playing around and be more serious in practicing. Once, Takamina had successfully made a junior cried. Yuko felt bad toward the junior, but there’s not much she could do except for calming her and encouraging her to do better.

Today the Senbatsu members had another practice of their newest single and it had the most complicated choreography in the history of AKB. Even Yuko who was one of the best dancers in AKB, admitted her defeat. As expected from the leader, Takamina had mastered the choreography beforehand and she was leading the group to sync their dance moves. She watched at herself through the mirror that was attached to wall across the room. Her eyes were focused on her dance steps, trying to catch up with the beats of the music. She was in sync with the music, she knew that, but she felt like something’s missing. She turned her head to her left out of habit, but only to be left disappointed that it wasn’t Atsuko that she saw. Dancing next to Atsuko always gave her an assurance and confidence. At times when she felt she’s about to give up, she only had to glance to her left side and found Atsuko smiled back at her. With that one smile, Takamina found herself with the strength she never knew she had before. It irritated Takamina that it wasn’t Atsuko whom she’s dancing next to. She didn’t know how a sudden anger lifted up inside her, out of nowhere, just by the mere thought that Atsuko wasn’t there.  She’s scrutinizing the rest of the member’s movements to divert her thoughts from Atsuko.

“Haruna you missed a step!” yelled Takamina.

“Rena your movements are stiff, try to relax!”

“Sasshi you’re lacking of facial expression!”

“Yuki, wrong steps!”

“Sakuratan, you’re moving late!” Takamina groaned, and walked toward the music player and pressed the stop button.

“Dammit how many times do we have to do it until we get this right?” Yelled Takamina. Annoyance was evident on her face. “We have a live show tomorrow, and if you still do it half heartedly like that, we might as well not perform at all! I don’t want to waste my time dancing around with some spoiled girls who think that practicing is a waste of times!”

All of the members in the practicing room were startled by the sudden outburst. Feelings were hurt, confidences were torn, but none of them dared to response back to Takamina’s speech. If Takamina said they didn’t work hard enough, then they did not, and they’re willing to push themselves to the limit. Takamina’s opinions were all that matter.

“No breaks until we get this right! Don’t even think of going home before we perfect this!” announced Takamina before she pressed the replay button.

Yuko took a quick scan around the room, paying a close attention to all the members in the room. Exhaustion was apparent from their faces since they hadn’t taken a break for almost three hours now. Her eyes then landed on Haruna, and her girlfriend’s face looked really pale. She knew Haruna had a hard time when it came to dancing, it took some private practices with her for Haruna to get a choreography mastered. She felt concern toward her girlfriend, she must be dead tired right now. 

“focus Yuko!”

Yuko was brought back to reality by the loud sound of Takamina’s voice.  She turned her face to the front and stared at Takamina’s reflection on the mirror. Yuko wasn’t dancing to the music like the rest of the girls, instead she just stood there clenching her fists tightly.  She had decided that she’d had enough of Takamina’s sudden change of bitchiness. Whatever respect she had for the smaller girl, had just gone out of the windows.

“We need a time-out.” stated Yuko, gritting her teeth.

“I said no break until I say so!” demanded Takamina.

Yuko walked briskly toward the music player and turned it off. As soon as the music stopped playing, all of the members stopped their movements, their eyes travelled back and forth between their ace and the leader, somewhat scared of what about to happen.

“Break now or you won’t have any members left to perform with you tomorrow.” insisted Yuko, gritting her teeth. “Look around, they’re all exhausted. At this rate you’re pushing them, they might break down and even fainted!” Yuko turned to the rest of the members in the room and commanded, “30 minutes guys, drink a lot of water. We continue practicing after the break.”

“Don’t you dare move from your spots!” yelled Takamina, “I said no recess until we nail the choreography! I’m the General Manager, and I want each and everyone of you to listen and do as I say!”

“what’s your problem really? After the break we can continue practicing until the break of dawn if you want to. So tell me, what the hell is your problem?” dared Yuko.

“My problem is that you’re spoiling them too much so that they favor you!” said Takamina.

Yuko scoffed, “who are you kidding? Everyone in this room knows very well the cause of your sudden acts of bitchiness. Ever since her graduation you’ve changed into this person we don’t recognize anymore!”

Takamina’s mouth were tight shut, her lips were quavering. She wanted to come up with a response, but something’s holding her. It wasn’t until Yuko mentioned it that she realized what a great effect Atsuko’s departure had on her. How could she retort back when everything’s Yuko said had hit the right spot?

“Or maybe, because of that scandal she made with that actor?” asked Yuko further. She wanted to help her dealing with their break-up, but how could she when Takamina put on a high barrier by acting like a freakin’ witch.

“Don’t you dare say another word about her!” threatened Takamina, grabbing the collar of Yuko’s shirt.

“Why? She’s free to do whatever with whoever she wants. You broke up with her, remember?” said Yuko, purposely igniting Takamina’s anger. “You have to find a way to help you deal with her leaving, but don’t use us. We’re not your punching bag! You have to stop mopping like a sad kitten and move on!” Yuko didn’t see it coming when she felt Takamina’s fist made a contact with her cheek. She fell down on the floor and unconsciously rubbed her cheek out of reflect. Haruna quickly made a dash toward where Yuko fell and checked up on her girlfriend in a worry.

“Yuu-chan are you okay?” asked Haruna worriedly, she then looked up to Takamina with a glare, “Takamina! What’d you do that?!”

“I’m fine NyanNyan. What the hell is your problem Bakamina?” added Yuko, wincing in pain.

For a moment, Takamina was surprised by her own action. She didn’t realize that she’d become overly sensitive whenever a topic about Atsuko was brought up and now apparently it caused her to punch people. But still, she never thought that she was capable of punching people. She just wanted Yuko to shut up, and that’s it. She never knew her anger could take over. Takamina felt sorry, but she kept putting on her façade and pretending that she didn’t regret what she had done.

“I asked you to stop mentioning her! Yes we broke up, and so I don’t care what happened between the two of them, or any other person there is she sleeps with! And as the leader of the group, the moment she took her picture off the wall of this theatre, she’s no longer a part of us and she’s not my responsibility anymore. I’m just glad that when she made such a shameful act she’s not a part of AKB anymore.” stated Takamina.

Takamina then walked toward her messenger bag that was lying on one corner of the room, she picked it up and slung it over her shoulder.

“I’m out of here. Do whatever you want to do.” Muttered Takamina, as she made her way to the door.

“Look I’m sorry. The truth is Acchan still cares about you.” said Yuko, stopping Takamina on her track. “You may not care, but she cares about what you think, like a lot. She spent days trying to figure out a way so that you won’t misunderstand. It was partially my fault to invite her on that party and not be responsible for it.”

Takamina glanced at Yuko over her shoulder, “like I said, I don’t care anymore. From this moment on, I don’t know anyone by the name of Maeda Atsuko.”

With that said, she left the room leaving Yuko and the rest of the girls speechless.  If only she could be just a bit observant, she would notice a girl with long brunette hair was standing not so far from the entrance of the practicing room. Maybe it was the pillar that hid her from Takamina’s view, or maybe Takamina was too eager to leave the place that she didn’t care pay much attention on her surroundings.  From her hiding spot she could hear every conversations in the room clearly, every words that came out from the smaller girl was like stabs to her heart. Maybe she should’ve stopped her futile attempt to wait for Takamina to return back to her. Takamina had moved on, she stated it very clearly, even in front of the members.

“Acchan?” called a voice that was familiar to her ears.

Atsuko looked up and found Mariko walked toward her with face was full of concern.

“Please don’t tell me you hear any of those conversations.” pleaded Mariko, feeling bad toward the younger girl.

“Mariko.” greeted Atsuko weakly, forcing a smile. She shook her head to answer Mariko’s question, but it seemed like her heart could not put up with her acting as she felt her tears had streamed down on her cheeks. 

Mariko quickly embraced the girl in her arms and rubbed Atsuko’s back to console her. Though there’s not much she could do, she wanted Atsuko to know that she was there for her. She couldn’t imagine what it did to Atsuko when she heard that. The pain must be unbearable to listen to the person you loved saying such mean things about you, and even considered you as a stranger. Mariko was there the whole time when Atsuko and Takamina’s friendship had turned into something more. She witnessed how their love blossomed and their bond grew deeper for the past five years. She thought that their relationship was something that would last forever.   

“Mariko what did I do wrong? Why she hates me so much?” sobbed Atsuko into Mariko’s chest.

“Takamina hasn’t been herself lately, there are so many things that she’s got on her shoulder. It’s hard for her to cope with almost everything since you left, she didn’t take it very well. ” Reasoned Mariko.

“I love her so much.” cried Atsuko.

“I know and she loves you too, she’s just too proud to admit it”

Suddenly, pairs of arms were draped around Mariko and Atsuko, covering them with more warmth. Mariko looked at the people around her and found Yuko, Haruna, Miichan, and Tomochin engulfed them in a hug. Being in the arms of her friends made Atsuko sobbed even louder ‘cause she was finally able to pour out all of the feelings that she’d pent up for so long ever since her break-up. Her friends didn’t mind Atsuko’s loud cries, nor her tears that soaked their clothes wet, because they all wanted Atsuko to know that they’d be there for her in her toughest time, as her pillar of support whenever she needed them.











TBC









I didnt know it's gonna be this short  :?

Anyway, look forward for the next chapter guys!
Title: Re: Stay - Chapter I (05/15/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: kuro808 on May 15, 2013, 10:53:54 AM
Takamina disapproves of Acchan's actions.  Although Yuko seemingly is playing mediator to no avail :nervous

I think the background set up is great and not too much on dialogue :thumbsup
Title: Re: Stay - Chapter I (05/15/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: chichay12 on May 15, 2013, 11:21:39 AM
ohmygod my atsumina heart :cry:
i cant take it  :on speedy:
 :on voodoo: :fainted: :pleeease: :on cloudeye:

btw deeds nice update  :on gay:
Title: Re: Stay - Chapter I (05/15/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: cisda83 on May 15, 2013, 11:24:37 AM
Ah... Talking about that scandal with Takeru...

Poor Atsuko... now she need to worry if Takamina will misinterpret the picture of Atsuko being with Takeru more than friendly...

OMG Takamina is such a scary monster... so strict and so bitter... and full of anger...

She even punched Yuko... but to proud to say "Sorry" even though she knew she was wrong... she was not supposed to punch...

But I think she was also sad and jealous by Atsuko's absence in her life... and also by Atsuko's scandal...

Poor Atsuko for having to hear all the hurtful words from Takamina...

Ah... Mariko, Yuko, Haruna, Miichan, and Tomochin feel really 'Sorry' for Atsuko... but they could not do anything...

What's going to happen next... to Takamina and Atsuko...?

Can't wait to find out more

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Stay - Chapter I (05/15/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: bimbo on May 15, 2013, 05:33:11 PM
We already have too many sappy, mushy, cheesy love stories of Atsumina so I'm totally fine with dark and angst fic  XD I just love this fic so much and ready for hellish roller coaster ride LOL Waiting for the next awesome chap!
Title: Re: Stay - Chapter I (05/15/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: Minami-chan on May 15, 2013, 09:47:34 PM
Oh! MY! GOD!!!
please do not take too long in the next chapter!
What a story! impressive. I'm wanting to know is going to happen.
The truth is that ... Takamina change is bad, but I think I also have stuck to Yuko for those comments.
Title: Re: Stay - Chapter I (05/15/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: Haruko on May 16, 2013, 05:16:42 AM
if in the end is atsumina... for me its ok
Title: Re: Stay - Chapter I (05/15/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: Tanchan on May 16, 2013, 06:00:02 AM
As long as it's Atsumina in the end, then I'm fine with any genre even if it includes some hand/head-chopping off XD

Edited: oops, look like the girls better not give the General Manager a reason to scold them or else all hell would break lose. The fight between Leader and Ace, although ended up with Yuko getting a punch on her face, is an effective change in expressing this midget duo's friendship.

I just wonder, Takamina didn't come back to their home after the fight, so where was she staying during that time? I think she must have moved back to the apartment she shared with Atsuko already after Atsuko had moved out, but where did she stay before that? Miichan's? Tomochin's?

And of course Mariko-sama is there to save Acchan from breaking down! At this point I believe every one knows she's an Atsumina shipper, having been there from the beginning, she must have witnessed how these two's relationship panned out and how their friendship slowly transformed into something more that would make them each other's most important person.

Side note: Oh no Yuko you ditched your friend for sex XD. May be that punch is the price :lol:

And UPDATE SOON PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE
Title: Re: Stay - Chapter I (05/15/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: K-popJ-popAWESOMENESS on May 16, 2013, 07:29:56 AM
My AKB kamioshibjust made my dear Acctres cry..... O..O

And she punched my little Yuu-chan.. . Nooooo!!

Please update soon! I REALLY can't wait ^ ^
Title: Re: Stay - Chapter I (05/15/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: ptrd3009 on May 16, 2013, 10:29:39 AM
oh no takamina punch my yuuchan :(
please update
i can't wait for next chap
Title: Re: Stay - Chapter I (05/15/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: stepk on May 16, 2013, 11:52:10 PM
Drama 
i love it  :inlove:
this fic is really interesting  :twothumbs
minami change a lot, she is not like that.  :shocked
But great, great job please update  :w00t:
Title: Re: Stay - Chapter I (05/15/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: kurumi on May 20, 2013, 06:31:54 PM
I felt really tense the entire time! Really hope this misunderstanding doesn't drag on too long :(
Looking forward to the next chapter very much!
Title: Re: Stay - Chapter I (05/15/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: KojiYuu44 on May 21, 2013, 03:53:25 AM
Really good start to the story
Takamina's behavior is so not like her
I feel so bad for Acchan... Having to hear Takamina talk about her like that
I'm looking forward to the next chapter
Title: Re: Stay - Chapter I (05/15/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: nunku on May 21, 2013, 04:39:04 PM
It will more drama?
I can't take it my acchan hurt so much. :bleed eyes:  :angry:
Hope takamina realize How much she love her.
I will wait atsumina ending together   O0
Thank u very much author san.  :twothumbs
Title: Stay - Chapter II (05/24/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: dirtydeeds on May 24, 2013, 07:42:31 AM
Hi Guys  :cow: sorry it took me so long to update :cry: I'd like to welcome all new readers, thank you for commenting, you guys seriously made my days  :love: I promise I wont take long to make another update..

@kojiyuu44, @K-popJ-popAWESOMENESS, @Minami-chan, @cisda83, @nunku: I'm trying to introduce a new side of Takamina, the one that hasn't been brought up by any other stories, that's the reason why the punch is necessary, just to emphasize how different Takamina is in this story.. I hope I could deliver it well in this story  :bow: this chapter will or will not make you look like this  :angry: or this  :shocked or even this  :bleed eyes:

@Tanchan:  :? You got me.. Well maybe Takamina's staying at her own house, you know, the one she shares with her family.. let's just assume to that :P


Enjoy guys....  :yossi:




























Chapter II





















Three months had passed, and Atsuko had been busier than ever. Not that she’s complaining, she liked it the way it was. More time she spent working meant less time thinking about Takamina. She accepted every advertising contract and role offers that had been shoved to her face hoping that it would distract her mind off of Takamina. She had to admit it’s working well so far, despite the limited time she had to see her friends. Her friends had been nothing but supportive to her. She might not have time to actually meet them but with the constant text messages and phone calls, she felt closer to them than ever. During all those conversation they shared, Atsuko felt thankful that they didn’t mention Takamina’s name. Atsuko understood that they wanted her to move on and she really appreciated it, but the truth was she’s not ready to forget Takamina yet. It had only been five months since they broke up, and they had been together for five years. It’s not that easy. During all those conversations she shared with her friends, she’s dying to ask about Takamina, to hear any news about her, but somehow she’s afraid to find out the answers.

Atsuko had finished her schedule earlier than she expected, the crew had to postpone the filming because of the dreadful weather. So she headed home, wanting nothing but to give herself a decent rest before waking up in the break of dawn getting ready for yet another filming. She was about to insert her key to the apartment’s door when suddenly the door was opened from the opposite side revealing Yuko all dressed up ready to leave.

“Going somewhere?” asked Atsuko.

“You’re early?” responded Yuko. It’s very rare for her to see Atsuko at this hour, so to see the brunette that early was surprising for her.

“It’s the weather. We couldn’t continue filming.” answered Atsuko as she made her way into the apartment. “Where are you going?”

“The girls have set up a gathering to celebrate Tomochin’s and My birthday. They also mentioned a farewell party for Sae if I’m not mistaken.”  Answered Yuko, “Now that you’re here, you should come too. It’s been a while since we hang out together because of your busy schedule Miss Maeda Atsuko The Great Actress.”

The taller girl felt guilty for she hadn’t made much time for her friends. She always turned down their offers because her works had prevented her to have time for herself.

 “come on, it’s been a long time since they saw you, and they miss you.” begged Yuko with a pout.

And Atsuko missed them too, but it didn’t stop her from hesitating. She’s wavering at the fact that there’s a possibility that she could meet Minami tonight, and she wasn’t sure if she’s ready for that yet. No matter how much she missed her, she wasn’t sure if seeing her would be easy.

Yuko could see the hesitation on Atsuko’s face, and she was sure that the latter must’ve thought about her leader.

“Takamina’s not coming, NyanNyan told me earlier.” Stated Yuko.

Atsuko was startled that Yuko could read exactly what she’s thinking. She couldn’t really explain herself right now, a part of her was relieved that Minami would not be there, but a part of her was really disappointed that she wouldn’t be able to meet the person that she missed the most tonight.

“So?” trailed Yuko.

The brown haired girl knew that she’s not gonna win an argument against the latter, so she decided to just comply with her request.

“fine,” sighed Atsuko, “just wait for a sec, I need to freshen up”











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Two figures were lying in the bed of a cheap hotel room. The thin blanket with some holes on the cloth was the only thing that covered their naked bodies. The cold breeze wasn’t that much of a trouble when they could still feel the warmth from the intense activity they just did earlier. The smaller figure brought up her hands under her head, positioning them as her pillow, while the other one went on a slumber at once. She was breathing heavily, trying to catch up for some air into her lungs. She stared blankly to the ceiling, she could see that some parts of the woods were already rotten and leaving holes here and there. Looking at the poor state of the ceiling was far more interesting than looking at the sleeping girl next to her, because she knew once she gazed at the sleeping girl guilt would soon follow.

Takamina wasn’t sure how she managed to get the girl into the bed. All she remembered was this chick came up to her at the bar and said that she was a huge fan. They flirted, one thing led to another, they ended up in this place. This weird girl even shouted “General Manager” repeatedly during the intercourse, which was such a turn-off.  She wasn’t the first girl Takamina had brought to bed, there were several others even weirder than her. She found out that sex was the perfect getaway from the thoughts of Atsuko that kept haunting her.  Even so, from all those wild nights there’s one similarity, she never let any of those girls kiss her lips. For Takamina there’s something sacred about lips, her lips were just reserved for Atsuko. She was her first kiss and if it should be her last one, she wanted it to be with Atsuko.

Today the girls had invited her to join a small get-together for Yuko, Tomochin, and Sae. She kindly rejected the offer and spent the night in the bar instead. Despite being in a large number of people during her work, she had never felt lonelier than ever. She didn’t like being in the group that reminded her so much of Atsuko, but when she tried to find her among the crowd, Atsuko was never there. It was frustrating, at some point Takamina was sure she’s going to go crazy. She knew her group mates were worried for her, but she kept pushing them away, she even punched Yuko for god’s sake. For her it was safer to build up a wall between them rather than for her members to finally learn her weakest state. She didn’t mind if her friends hated her, being a leader didn’t make you a favorite person anyway. The burden of being the so-called-General Manager was too much for her to handle, and since Atsuko’s not around anymore, she felt like it was only intensified. It seemed to her that nothing was ever gone right the minute Atsuko left. She was overwhelmed with the excessive amount of responsibilities that she had to carry, and the fact that she didn’t have the right to refuse the role that naturally fell upon her was slowly taking a toll on her. She had no choice but to let everything bottled up and just sucked it up. She was on the edge, and it was only a matter of time for everything to explode.

She didn’t feel like sleeping, but she was too lazy to leave the place. In fact, she’d been avoiding the street. She felt like Atsuko’s haunting her everywhere she went, literally. Well the perks of having an ex-girlfriend who was an award winning actress, a CM model with the highest earnings, the most-seeked gravure model, and an ex-member of a popular idol group was she got to see her face everywhere, anywhere. Everywhere her head turned she found on the magazine stands, posters on the wall, freakin’ billboard screens, even a damn bus had Atsuko’s face on it. Ever since she left AKB, she’d been getting more popular day by day. On the other hand, ever since Atsuko left AKB, Takamina was left alone to fall into pieces. She chuckled bitterly, realizing that she’s the one who walked out on her, she’s the one who caused everything to crumble down. 

She felt the figure next to her shifted her position and unconsciously wrapped her arm around her waist. That’s the cue for her to immediately leave the place before the latter wake up. She carefully lifted up the stranger’s arm from her body and scooted herself away from the bed. She stood up and quickly dressed up without making a single sound. She was heading toward the door when she felt her phone vibrated on her jeans pocket. She reached into her pocket and fished out her iphone, showing that she received a text message from Mii-chan, her ever so persistent friend.

“The party won’t start unless you come here! I know you have no schedules for the rest of the day, so I expect you to come in the next 20 minutes! P.S:  We have tons of Katsudon for you.”

Being the youngest out of the first generation, she was always the spoiled one. No one could get away from Mii-chan’s unrelenting whining, she always got what she wanted. She did refuse Haruna when she invited her earlier, but spending seven years growing up together with Mii-chan, Takamina had never been able to learn to say the word “No” to Mii-chan. She blamed Atsuko for pampering Mii-chan too much. Atsuko often said that Mii-chan was their baby, that’s why she needed to be spoiled. Unknowingly, a smile made its way to her face, a genuine one, the one that didn’t require her to act just like she did in front of the cameras. She had to admit, it felt good. Maybe she’d been putting on a mask far too long. Before she knew it she already pressed the send button on her phone.

“Be there.”









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Mii-chan was grinning in victory as she read the reply from her leader. She stood up from her seat and raised her phone highly for anyone to see before announcing proudly,

“I’m The Great Mii-chan! I could melt the ice that is our General Manager! Bow down to me peasants!”

“Mii-chan what the hell?! Sit down!” ordered Mariko. She pulled Mii-chan by her shirt to sit back down on her seat. The others in the room were laughing at the troll-duo’s action, some were staring at Mii-chan curiously.

“It’s VIP room, only us here. Duh.” retorted Mii-chan.

“what’s wrong?” asked Haruna.

“Takamina has agreed to come.”

“wha.. really?” asked Haruna surprised. Not just her, the other in the room were also surprised to hear the news. For the past few months, Takamina had always denied their invitation to have meals together. The sudden turn of event came as a shock to them. Takamina didn’t hang out with them as much as before anymore. By “before” it meant the time when Maeda Atsuko was still a part of AKB.

 “Yes! She could never say no to me.” Answered Mii-chan proudly.

“Finally,” sighed Mariko. “How long is she planning to act that way anyway, distancing herself from us?”

“I think being with us reminding her of Acchan,” muttered Haruna. “This is frustrating, they’re both are such a mess. Yuko told me that Acchan kept piling herself up with work to distract her mind off of Takamina. She barely got some sleep at night.”

“I think they need to sort this out by themselves.” Suggested Mariko.

“I wish Acchan could come and finally talk it through with Takamina” said Mii-chan.

Not long after, the door of the VIP room was burst opened, revealing Yuko with another figure that she hid behind her.

“Guess who I brought guys?” announced Yuko. She stepped aside and revealed the person hiding behind her,  “The one and only Maeda Atsuko!”

The whole room cheered when they saw Atsuko entered the room. It had been a long time since they saw her, so everyone was pretty much too ecstatic to finally get to see her.

Unknown to the rest of the room, three persons were frozen in their seats. Their mouths were slightly open because of the shock that ran through their bodies. Mariko made her first move from her seat by elbowing Mii-chan on her ribs, making the latter let out a yelp, “be careful of what you wish for.”














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“Takamina’s coming?!” Yuko repeated her girlfriend’s statement in disbelief.

“Tone it down.” Said Haruna as she flicked Yuko’s forehead.

“ouch!” Cried yuko, rubbing her forehead, “that hurts NyanNyan.”

Looking at her girlfriend’s glare, she continued on with whisper, “You said Takamina’s not going and that’s the reason why she agreed to come with me in the first place.”

“Well, she rejected my offer earlier. But Mii-chan texted her just before you came and she said yes right away.” Reasoned Haruna.

Both of them were whispering in one corner of the room, along with Mariko and Mii-chan.

“you shouldn’t have texted her Mii-chan, you know how she always complies with whatever you want.” Stated Yuko, poking her finger on Mii-chan’s chest.

“Well I didn’t know that Acchan’s coming, you didn’t say anything!” retorted Mii-chan.

“Stop blaming each other,” stated Mariko, “they have to see each other eventually. Isn’t that what we want? For them to talk?”

“but, I’m afraid of the outcomes.” Said Yuko, “I’m afraid Acchan will get hurt again”

The four of them averted their gaze at Atsuko who was busy taking pictures with the rest of the members. Aware of the stares that were fixed toward her, she turned her gaze to meet with theirs.

She smiled before mouthing, “what?”

Before she got her answer, the sound of the door being opened distracted her and naturally she changed her direction to the person who just came in. Her breath hitched in her lungs, when she saw the person she’d been longed to see entering the room. 

“I’m sorry I’m la…” Takamina’s voice got stuck in her throat when her view came across Atsuko.

Takamina felt like the room had quieted down in an instant, all of the other voices that came in to her ears were all like a blur sound wave that she could not manage to catch. Time had stopped for the two persons, as they were staring at each other with such longings that were so overwhelmed. Their gaze was locked to each other, neither knew what to do, neither knew what to say, they were just there, drown in each other eyes.

The occupants of the room couldn’t help but to hold their breath as they watched their general manager and their ex-ace shared an intense stare across the room. Their heads kept moving from left to right, watching the two of them, waiting for one of them to give up and break the stare to save them from this awkward moment. Of course they knew about the current situation between Takahashi Minami and Maeda Atsuko, even their sister groups from out of town were updated, words travel fast indeed. Well, the fact that Takamina punched Yuko during their practice some months ago because of the discussion about Atsuko were not really something that could be hidden for long. The members nudged each other, silently asking for someone to just break deafening silence, but none seemed to dare to do anything.

While on the other side of the room, a certain squirrel-look-alike girl was being elbowed on her ribs from left to right.

“What?!” whispered Yuko from the corner of the lips, too nervous to even open her mouth.

“do something!” ordered Mariko, with the same volume.

“what exactly?” asked Yuko back.

“Anything!” murmured Mii-chan. “things are getting awkward here.”

Yuko grumbled to herself for always being the victim to be a mediator between the two ex-lovers. The last time she tried, a fist landed on her face, and this time she could expect the worse to happen.

She heaved a deep sigh before she spoke loudly, “oi Takamini, glad you make it!”

She made her way toward the shortest one of the group and casually draped her arm around Takamina’s shoulder. “have you eaten yet? What do you want to eat?” asked Yuko enthusiastically, even too enthusiast that it’s kinda weird, but also it’s a good thing that no one noticed. Almost immediately, the whole room started to make a sound again.

She led Takamina to one of the vacant seats before making sure that it was the furthest from Atsuko. Yuko agreed that both of them need to settle things, but not now, not in front of the members. She’d feel bad at Sae and Tomochin because the gathering was meant for them also. If it’s up to Yuko and the event was hers, she would lock Takamina and Acchan inside the room to talk. Maybe one thing might lead to another and they would kiss and make up, and maybe doing even more than just a kiss. Yeah, that’s the way Yuko liked it, she wished things would just be as simple as that.

Atsuko shifted from her seat to put back her glass of cold water to the table. The tip of the straw for her drink was disfigured, a habit that she’d developed when she’s nervous. The room was filled with the sound of laughter from her ex-fellow members, but she didn’t feel like laughing, she didn’t even feel like talking. She was there, the person she’d been missing so much these past months, she was so close to her but yet felt so far. She wished she could just hug Takamina and tell her how her days felt like a total wreck without her. Atsuko’s thoughts drifted off to the words that Takamina said about her in front of the members a few months ago.

“Did she really mean those words she said? Does she miss me like I miss her? Does she think of me all the time like I do?” asked Atsuko to herself. So much questions came up to her mind that desperately needed to be answered. Atsuko felt her eyes brimmed with tears, and she quickly wiped them away before she let any to fall down on her cheeks. It was hurt to remember those things Takamina said. She didn’t realize that she had fixed her gaze onto Takamina for quite some time until their eyes met again for the second time that evening. Caught red handed, she hastily turned the other way, accidentally kicking the table in the process. It was unfortunate that a wineglass was placed near the side of the table, causing the content to also spill on Atsuko’s skirt. She bit her lower lip, cursing herself for her clumsiness that was caused by the stares from her ex. People around her were immediately helping her before the stain could do much damage to Atsuko’s skirt. She stood up from her seat after thanking her friends for their help and excused herself to the restroom.

Takamina watched as Atsuko leaving the room. A smirk crept on her lips from learning that Atsuko hadn’t changed much, she’s still as clumsy as ever.

“this is unfair. Why she’d gotten prettier after we broke up?” thought Takamina. “long hair really does suit her.”

Unknowingly a smile made its way to her face, a genuine smile that had been long gone for a while. “I still cannot escape you, can I Maeda-san?” sighed Takamina to herself. The smile didn’t stay for long when she remembered those scandalous pictures of Atsuko that graciously landed as the cover of every newspaper and magazines in Japan.

“Has she found someone new?” wondered Takamina, “Why in the hell would Atsuko choose him as my replacement? He’s not even man enough to properly carry her home when she’s drunk. He’s a kamen rider for crying out loud!”
 
The thoughts had successfully gotten her irritated beyond belief. She wanted to get mad and interrogate Atsuko right there on the spot, but on the other hand she felt like she didn’t have any rights to interfere with her personal life anymore. She grabbed a bottle of tequila and reached for a shot glass on the table, filling it full with the alcohol. She drank it in one take, and soon had another refill. She did it repeatedly ‘till her action earned an astonished look from her friends.

“whoa general manager, slow down.” said Mariko as she took the tequila from Takamina’s hand. “you drank half of the bottle already, spare us some will you?”
Takamina chose to ignore Mariko, with seven shots of tequila already consumed in her body, Takamina was tipsy. She laid back at her seat closing her eyes letting the sensation of the alcohol warmed in, when suddenly she felt her phone vibrated against her thigh. She fished out her phone and read the new text message. She didn’t know who it was from, all that she knew  was the sender had sent her some dirty, erotic message and asked her to meet up later that night. She smirked knowing that it must be from one of those girls, the girls that Takamina spent her lonely nights with and didn’t even bother to remember the names. It always made Takamina curious why those girls couldn’t get enough of her, as they kept asking to do the same thing repeatedly. Whatever reasons they had, Takamina made sure that she would ask them later. All of her thoughts about Atsuko were long gone as soon as the alcohol occupied her system, thinking that if Atsuko had moved on with that good-for-nothing guy, why couldn’t she? She couldn’t bear herself to imagine what things Atsuko had done with that guy. She took one last shot and stood up.

“sorry guys, gotta go.” Announced Takamina.

“What? But it’s still early, we haven’t even cut the cake.” complained Mii-chan.

“Boo Takamina! Don’t be such a party pooper, the fun hasn’t even started yet.” Said Yuko. “we haven’t played spin the bottle, and you must see how I skillfully drink shots from NyanNyan’s body.”

A fist soon came in contact with Yuko’s crown, “too explicit Yuu-chan!” scolded Haruna.

“I’m sorry, but I have an early schedule tomorrow, and I don’t feel really good right now.” Lied Takamina.

When it came to schedule matter none of them could come up with an argument, because they themselves knew just how precious sleep was for those who had morning schedule.

“okay then. Rest well Takamina.” Smiled Haruna full of understanding, though Takamina could stills see a hint of disappointment in her eyes. Not just Haruna, but those friends who were close to her also.

They waved Takamina goodbye as she made her way out of the room. The last thing she heard when she closed door was whisper from some of the members.

“you think Takamina leaving early has something to do with Acchan’s presence?”

“is it because of the scandal about Acchan and Sato Takeru?”

Takamina scoffed dejectedly, but chose not to care about what other people thought of her.

She headed toward the exit door when she felt another vibration form her cellphone. She took her phone from her pocket and read the new message. It was from the same girl, texting her to make sure that she would come. Takamina headed out as she typed a reply to let the sender know that she would come, not paying attention to where she’s going. She had her eyes fixed to the screen of her cellphone and didn't realize when someone just came out of the restroom at the same time when she walked pass the door. Her cellphone dropped to the floor when their bodies made contact in a not-so-subtle way. Despite having a small figure, the blow didn’t give much impact to Takamina, but on the contrary the other person was too startled to even balance herself. Out of reflex, Takamina reached for the arm of the latter before she fell down, and her other hand was securely placed around her waist. Not until the stranger was safe in her arms that she realized who was the other person. The scent that was still familiar to Takamina's nostril, and how the other's body perfectly fitted into hers, could only mean one person.

"You alright?" Asked Takamina, still holding Atsuko safe in her arms.

Was it because of the alcohol that was playing tricks  with her eyes or maybe just because of the lighting, Takamina could swear she saw a hint of pink on Atsuko's cheeks.

"I'm okay." Answered Atsuko. They both stood still, frozen in their position, no one wanted to let go. Their eyes met for the third time that day and in a much, much closer distance. It felt like their gaze were pulling each others closer.
 
"You... You can let me go now." Said Atsuko after regaining her composure.
Takamina hurriedly removed her hands from Atsuko and looked away, avoiding the latter's eyes. She spotted her cellphone and bent down to grab it. She straightened herself back up as her eyes travelled to check out her ex girlfriend from toes to head. Atsuko was wearing a white sleeveless blouse with a skirt that went  just right above her knees. It was just a simple outfit, the kind which the taller girl wore everyday, but it was just enough to get Takamina mind blown.

"You look good" complemented Takamina, blurting out her mind. "long hair really does suit you"

"Thank you," smiled Atsuko genuinely.

Noticing the messenger bag that was slung over Takamina's shoulder, she decided to ask, "You're leaving?" Asked Atsuko, surprising the shorter woman.

"Yeah, I have something to do." Answered Takamina.

Though it was just a spare of seconds, Takamina could see a hint of disappointment on Atsuko's face. She pouted, well maybe not too much, the pout was there, barely, something that Atsuko did whenever she felt upset toward something.

A pregnant silence once again filled the atmosphere, and Atsuko secretly hoped that the ground would just swallow her right there. She wished there's something she could say to Takamina to make her stay, but her brain didn't see to cooperate, but still, she had to try. She missed her so much, 30 minutes wasn't enough to satisfy all of her emotions. Even her eyes hadn't been appeased by seeing Takamina in such a short time.

"So.."

"So.."

They both chuckled when they realized that they're about to say something at the same time.

"I should go now" said Takamina, excusing herself.

"Oh, okay" replied Atsuko, feeling dejected. "take care"

Atsuko walked past Takamina, walking toward the members’ private lounge. Without her realizing it, a lone tear began slid down her cheek, and as much as she wished it was the last tears she’d cry, she knew better that this wasn’t going to happen.  It crushed her deep down that the both of them were acting like a total stranger to each other. Not much words were exchanged between them, while they used to share every single things that happened in their daily life all the time and not getting tired to listen to each other's voices.  Back there both of them were keen to avoid staring into one another's eyes , while they used to spend a day doing nothing but just stared lovingly at each other's eyes, finding themselves fell deeper to the person in front of them. Atsuko missed those moments, she missed them all, she missed Takamina, she missed how they used to be. After merely five steps, Takamina's voice was stopping her from her track.

"Atsuko" called Takamina from her spot. "do you want me to stay? I’d stay if you want me to."

Atsuko stood there motionlessly. She looked down on the floor and her back continued to face the love of her life. She did not have the strength or will to turn around because she knew that if she did, she would have easily collapsed and broke apart again.

Hearing no response from the latter, Takamina decided to leave, maybe it was just her wishful thinking. Maybe Atsuko had indeed moved on.








“do you?” asked Atsuko bitterly.












TBC




That's all I have for now guys... :nervous
Title: Re: Stay - Chapter I (05/15/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: kuro808 on May 24, 2013, 07:51:49 AM
I find it hard for Acchan to accept Takamina back but the tension builds pretty high in the room :lol:
Title: Re: Stay - Chapter I (05/15/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: Haruko on May 24, 2013, 08:49:44 AM
I find it hard for Acchan to accept Takamina back but the tension builds pretty high in the room :lol:

OMG my atsumina feelings... Takaboy is now a womenizer!... T_T
Title: Re: Stay - Chapter II (05/24/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: Hii_chan on May 24, 2013, 09:37:04 AM
actually, I just couldn't imagine Takamina's appearance :nervous it seems not like her
but i like your fic  :)
so thanks for update and wait for your next update :welcome
Title: Re: Stay - Chapter II (05/24/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: cisda83 on May 24, 2013, 09:45:22 AM
Poor Atsuko and Minami... they were still broken up  :cry:

Eh.. Minami was sleeping around... OMG....  :shocked

AH... the situation between Atsuko and Minami was so awkward...

Minami would stay if only Atsuko said something... but Atsuko was a bit slow...

And Minami would not stay around to wait for a while more...

Minami still thought Atsuko had moved on with Sato... while that was not the case...

If ever they went back together.... Minami would be in lots of troubles... She was the one that sleeping around...

But I do hope it's only in this story not in real life....

Because she is the GM... and she should not be the one that caused any kind of scandal....

Well anyhow... can't wait to see the next chapter

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Stay - Chapter II (05/24/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: abcari on May 24, 2013, 10:42:59 AM
oooooooooh!!!!! Stay!!! Stay!!!! xD omg omg omg! *screams like a crazy fangirl*
Title: Re: Stay - Chapter II (05/24/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: den_takacchan on May 24, 2013, 03:49:41 PM
ahh. acchan why are you too slow to reply??? hehe great fic i'm thrilled what wuld happen next but broken bec of my atsumina heart  :( please update as soon as you can  :twothumbs
Title: Re: Stay - Chapter II (05/24/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: chichay12 on May 24, 2013, 04:31:15 PM
ohmygod :hehehe:
Chaper 3 where are you???
update soon deeds~~ :on gay:
Title: Re: Stay - Chapter II (05/24/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: Tanchan on May 25, 2013, 06:05:03 AM
Looks like Takaboy got some explanations to do once they got back together :nervous

Even though this is far away from the Minami in real life that I know, I don't mind at all. Though I can't imagine her choking down glasses after glasses of tequila or sleeping around like she does in the story, that's an outstanding change from the usual serious Takamina. Plus, it's not like she sleeps around with guys, she has nothing to lose, can't blame her if those girls are willingly jumping into her XD.

I wonder what Acchan's reaction would be if she found out after they got back together, she's the faithful one here.

OKAY NOW RAGING TIME. WHERE IS MY CHAPTER 3!!
Title: Re: Stay - Chapter II (05/24/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: KojiYuu44 on May 25, 2013, 06:29:28 AM
ohhh my Atsumina  :(

To be honest, even tho the Takamina in this fic isn't like her real self i dont mind at all. I actually quite like this side of her that you've created. Gives off a different type of feeling. I'd say its a job well done! :twothumbs

I imagine that there will be a lot of explaining to do for Takamina once she gets back with Atsuko tho
all those night...  :lol:

Thanks for the update!
Title: Re: Stay - Chapter II (05/24/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: Tanchan on May 25, 2013, 09:45:51 AM
I forgot to mention this.

"Their heads kept moving from left to right, watching the two of them"

I find this part funny :lol:, imagine them moving their heads left and right between the two who are in a staring contest, I couldn't help but find it humorous :lol:

And Atsuko, you being late in answering Minami's question just gave her another opportunity to get on with another girl that night right there, and another explanation she would have to bear once you two are back together. You should have turned back and ran to her as soon as you heard that.
Title: Re: Stay - Chapter II (05/24/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: chemicalstar on May 25, 2013, 01:26:10 PM
I can't believe Takamina could sleep with random girls easily.

Only messed up left of the two after the break up.
They really should make it up again, before they're really lost their way..

Thanks for update :)
Title: Re: Stay - Chapter II (05/24/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: kurumi on May 28, 2013, 07:07:02 PM
Why do both of them have so much pride? ARGH! I wish they could be more frank, although I'm glad Takamina stopped to try.
Title: Stay - Chapter III (06/16/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: dirtydeeds on June 16, 2013, 07:11:54 PM
Hi guys!!!  :on ksweat: oh gosh, I'm such a fail author for not being able to keep my promise to update faster :on blackhole: GOMEN *notice how i write it in bold capital letter*  :mon cry:

okay this is my attempt to make it up to you guys  :mon hanky: hope you enjoy...

 :mon innocent: welcome to the new readers























Chapter III





























"Atsuko" called Takamina from her spot. "do you want me to stay? I’d stay if you want me to."

Atsuko stood there motionlessly. She looked down on the floor and her back continued to face the love of her life. She did not have the strength or will to turn around because she knew that if she did, she would have easily collapsed and broke apart again.

Hearing no response from the latter, Takamina decided to leave, maybe it was just her wishful thinking. Maybe Atsuko had indeed moved on.

“do you?” asked Atsuko bitterly.













Atsuko’s question has successfully stopped Takamina from walking away. She turned around to face the other girl, bewildered by her question. Before she could mutter a single word to ask, Atsuko had cut her off.

“Do you want me to stay Minami? Since you’re the one who said that you don’t know anyone by the name of Maeda Atsuko” spat Atsuko. She briskly wiped any trails of tears from her face, she didn’t want Takamina to see her as this pathetic girl who’s still hung up on her ex and hadn’t moved on. Atsuko didn’t know why she’s even trying to stop her emotion from showing in front of the latter, she just thought that she had a pride to safe. While in truth, she wished that she could blurt out the word “Yes” right away, but somehow she prevented herself to do so. 

Takamina was taken aback, Atsuko wasn’t supposed to hear that. Whatever she said or did that day was out of lines and she realized that, it was only on the spur of the moment. 

“Atsuko, I was..” before Takamina began her explanation, Atsuko had once again cut her off.

“From now on let’s just act civilized toward each other. If we run into each other, we’ll greet. If our friends invite us to hang out together, we’ll go and pretend that we are good friends.” and there came a series of sentences that Atsuko didn’t mean to say. Even describing their relationship with only the term of “good friends” being in one sentence had created a deep cut in her heart. Atsuko swallowed hard before continuing, “That will stop them from worrying about us. I really don’t need anyone to feel sor…”

Atsuko’s words were caught in her throat as she felt a sudden weight on her back and arms encircled around her waist.  Her heart was pounding against her chest. Takamina had made her way to Atsuko, and hugged her from behind. Atsuko was frozen under her embrace, as if her entire body was paralyzed through shock. Her feet went numb, stuck onto the hard ground, and even if just how much she wanted to hug Takamina back, she simply couldn’t move.   

“I’m sorry,” Takamina whispered softly. “I didn’t mean any of those words I said. Ever since you left, I wasn’t being myself”
Seconds had passed and Atsuko still hasn’t turned around nor said anything, so Takamina took the initiative to place her hands on the latter’s waist and gently turned her around. Once she brought Atsuko’s front to her view, the latter was refusing to look her in the eye and kept her gaze to the floor.

“Atsuko loot at me,” said Takamina as she lifted the other girl’s chin with her finger.

“I’m sor..”

Atsuko abruptly pounced on the shorter girl with a hug, stopping the latter’s speech midway.

“Just… Just don’t say anything, and hug me for a minute.” pleaded Atsuko. “No, hug me for five minutes, hug me like you used to.”

Takamina was startled by the taller girl’s sudden request. It felt like it was just a minute ago that Atsuko was attacking her with a guilt trip, and now she’s the one who’s initiating and asking for a skinship. Takamina instantly complied no matter how confusing the other girl’s behavior was, because she knew she’d been missing the other girl just as much. 

Atsuko hugged Takamina tighter, afraid that if she let go, Takamina would disappear again. She snuggled closer into the brunette’s neck, breathing in the scent and enjoying the warmth that she’d missed for months.  She felt Takamina rubbing her back, an action that Takamina always did to soothe her.  It dawned on Atsuko how much she needed the older girl to be in her life. Being in Takamina’s embrace had always managed to calm her down. Whatever troubles or problems she’s facing seemed to leave her behind when she’s being hold close by the latter. Takamina’s embraces had always provided an assurance that no matter what happened, or how hard could it get, Takamina would always be with her through it all. Now, Atsuko was left to relish those few minutes left being held close by Takamina, knowing that once they parted she had to face the reality of  not having the other girl by her side anymore.

Being in such close proximity to Atsuko simultaneously overwhelmed Takamina’s senses and put her at ease. She wasn’t sure she’d ever get used to it. They stood there in each other’s embrace for a few minutes before finally she felt Atsuko had loosened her embrace. Takamina pulled back slightly, ever so slowly, unwilling to leave the warmth that only the long haired girl could provide. Takamina brushed her lips on Atsuko’s cheek by chance when she’s halfheartedly trying to part. Unconsciously, her lips lingered to the corner of Atsuko’s mouth. She leaned away from Atsuko slightly, just far enough that she could look Atsuko in the eyes but not far enough that she would break the embrace. Atsuko still had her arms linked around her neck, keeping her still in her embrace. Their faces were only centimeters away from each other, so close that they could feel each other’s breath tickling their faces.

Takamina cupped Atsuko’s cheek, and rubbed her thumb softly against the smooth skin, her gaze never left Atsuko’s eyes. Atsuko’s eyes were the reason why she fell senselessly in love with the other girl. Atsuko was never an expressive person, she looked emotionless most of the time, her fans and the members would most definitely agree with this. But when Takamina stared at her eyes, she could see it all, her emotions, her feelings, her sadness, her troubles, everything. Atsuko spoke through her eyes, and only Takamina could decipher it. And right at that moment, Takamina knew exactly what Atsuko was trying to say through her pleading eyes, and it gave her the confidence to lean forward. When their lips finally brushed together, Takamina found the barriers that Atsuko had put up were finally broken down. Takamina pressed her lips on top of Atsuko’s. it wasn’t just a peck like the one Takamina gave when they’re in public, for Takamina tilted Atsuko’s chin using her hand to deepen the kiss, and nipped Atsuko’s lower lips faintly.

Atsuko felt surprised that Takamina could do this to her, attacking her lips and be the one who initiated the kiss, much more in public. Atsuko of course gladly obedient and let Takamina kissed her, since she’s pretty damn sure that she was the one who gave her the signal, and of course Takamina could read her like an open book. She pulled Takamina closer by her neck, craving to explore that mouth she’d been missing so much. She could taste a slight bitterness of alcohol from their kiss, maybe Takamina had been drinking, but she chose to ignore it. Atsuko felt Takamina’s lips were leaving hers, and she used the opportunity to breath for a second before diving in back to kiss Takamina. Atsuko wanted to make up for the time she had spent not kissing Takamina’s lips the past months. She nibbled the shorter girl lips, and sneaked her tongue into Takamina’s waiting mouth, finding a passionate battle waiting for her, which she heatedly fought.
Takamina pushed Atsuko backward slowly, doing so while not breaking the kiss.  She used her body to pin the taller girl against the wall. Her hand was placed on the wall, right beside Atsuko’s head, trapping her in between. When she tried to pull back after a moment, Atsuko chased her lips each time, attempting to bring her back into the kiss she had started.

They finally pulled apart when oxygen became necessary, with their foreheads pressed against each other’s as they breathed heavily. Takamina stared silently at Atsuko’s bruised lips, couldn’t help but to think how inviting those luscious lips were.  She brought up her right hand to Atsuko’s cheek and brushed those plump lips with her thumb softly. She glanced up and found Atsuko’s mesmerizing eyes staring back at her. Unconsciously, both had a smile plastered on their faces, and the next second, before they even knew it, they chuckled together. Takamina took a step back from Atsuko, and found herself being stopped halfway when the latter held her arm, wouldn’t allow her to stand at a distance from her. Takamina smirked, a needy Atsuko always made her weak at the knees. Her instinct had taken over her mind when she came to a realization that she had this urge that desperately needed to be satisfied, and she knew that once she gave in, she wouldn’t be able to stop. Her body acted on its own when she took the taller girl by her hand and dragged her to the restroom just nearby.

Atsuko willingly let herself being taken to the restroom. Somehow she knew what was going to happen inside that room, and she was ashamed to admit that she’s been anticipating it. She was right. Once the door of the restroom was closed and locked by the smaller girl, she felt herself being pushed backward roughly. She yelped in pain once her back came in contact with the concrete wall, but it was soon muffled when Takamina’s soft lips were pressed against her own. Atsuko loved the feel of Takamina’s lips on hers, the way the other girl would rasp against her chin and jaw, catching on her sensitive skin and sending tingles of pleasure straight to her core. It’s a wonderful, wonderful sensation that she couldn’t get enough of. She shivered at the feeling and moaned Takamina’s name. She could feel butterflies floating in her stomach. One of the feelings that she’d missed, one of many feelings that she could only experience when she’s around the older girl. The pleasure was too much for her, and Atsuko had lost control at the first kiss.

She gasped when she felt Takamina’s cold hand slipped up her blouse and roamed on her abdomen. Atsuko closed her eyelids tighter and bit back a moan. Takamina had successfully left a trail of butterfly kisses from the side of her face, down to her neck.  Atsuko twitched her head to the side, giving the latter more room to suck on her vein tenderly. She held Takamina tighter by her neck, pulling her closer. Atsuko was panting harder when Takamina’s hand inside her blouse had travelled upward and cupped one of her mounds, squeezing it. Atsuko gasped, and couldn’t help but moan.

Why love had to be so complicated? It felt right, but it felt wrong at the same time. The way the older girl touched her, kissed her - everything that she did confused her, but Atsuko couldn’t stop wanting more. Takamina worked on her lips again, licking her bottom lip once, twice, until she gave in and open her mouth, letting their teeth and tongue clashed together. The bitter taste of her mouth, the smell of alcohol within her breath, and how aggressive Takamina had became somehow knocked her out of daze, and her conscience was telling her that this person who was pinning her against the wall inside a public restroom was not the same Takamina that she used to know. Atsuko forced her eyes to open and found herself staring back at the mirror, her mouth slightly opened and her eyes had turned into a darker shade of brown orbs. She bit her lower lip to hold back her moan as Takamina, ever so slowly, trailing her fingers upward underneath her skirt.

“Mi..Minami stop.” Whispered Atsuko in between their kisses, trying hard to take control over herself.

“hm?” mumbled Takamina while her lips were busy kissing Atsuko’s lips, didn’t intend to stop what she’s doing.

“Minami stop” asked Atsuko, louder this time. “Please”

Feeling that the older girl was not planning to stop, she pulled away from the kiss and pushed her by the shoulder. Being the weaker one of the two, Atsuko’s push had only made Takamina stumbling back for merely a few inches. She could see the confusion on Takamina’s face, and there was hurt in her hazel eyes. She was about to say something when suddenly the shorter girl grabbed her upper arms, gripping them tightly, and pinned her back against the solid surface. Without giving any warning, Takamina had claimed her lips once again, kissing them roughly. Atsuko struggled against her tight grasp, and turned her head sideway to avoid the sloppy kiss.

“Minami… please…not like this,” pleaded Atsuko when Takamina started to attack her neck, nibbling and sucking on it.

Atsuko kept fidgeting around, trying to pry away from Takamina’s menacing grip. Her line of view was  Once she felt the other girl’s grip was loosened, she held her shoulders and pushed her back. This time, Takamina stumbled back a couple of feet away from Atsuko.

“I said stop!” yelled Atsuko, tears were forming in her eyes.

Takamina was knocked out of her senses with the volume of the taller girl’s voice. She felt like something kicked her in the gut. Her heart was ridiculously aching with the rejection.

“Why? I thought you wanted this.” Asked Takamina, hurt was evident in her voice.

Atsuko was confused, she felt lost under the dark hazel orbs that were staring intensively at her. She knew how bad she wanted it, she wished for it, she even dreamed of it, but yet something inside her screamed a loud “Wrong!”

“I..I did but..,” Atsuko stuttered with her answer, “but it’s… it’s too soon for that.”

“Are you kidding me? Am I not good enough? Is he better than me?” questioned Takamina. Takamina didn’t realize how harsh she sounded until she saw the change on Atsuko’s expression.  Atsuko’s response had caused a great insecurity to emerge within her. She was scared of the possibility that she was replaceable, she despised the thought that Atsuko might have chosen him over her. She wouldn’t let herself getting hurt, so she allowed her defense mechanism to take over.

“He? Minami.. what are you talking about?” asked Atsuko incredulously.

“You know very damn well who I’m talking about” retorted Takamina.

“I really don’t know what or who you’re talking about” answered Atsuko truthfully. She watched as Takamina’s chest heaved up and down caused by her short breath, her knuckles were balled up in a fist. She had never seen Takamina in that state, ever. Was she mad? No, it looked like she’s furious. Then it all made sense for Atsuko, how could she even forget.

“Let me explain, you got it all wrong” said Atsuko as she made her way closer to the shorter girl. She was trying to get a hold on Takamina’s hand when the latter shrugged it off. Atsuko chose to ignore the stinging pain in her chest and continued, “I was drunk, and he took me home because Yuko had left to meet Haruna. Me and Takeru, we’re just friends, nothing more, you’ve misunderstood the news.”

Takamina scoffed cynically, “Takeru? So you’re on a first name basis with him now”

“We’re just friends!” growled Atsuko, slowly losing her patience. Takamina’s response was starting to sound really immature, and it began to annoy her.

“That’s not what the pictures look like to me.” chuckled Takamina, “Two persons, much more a guy and a girl, do not just hang out late at night together and come home together in one cab with the girl being carried in the guy’s arms, something must’ve happened that night!”

“You’re starting to talk nonsense you know that? I don’t have time for this” sighed Atsuko. She was about to spin on her heel and walked out of the room before she decided to give Takamina a piece of her mind, “for the record, I’m not obliged to tell you who I’m going out with or what relationship me and anyone have! as far as I remember we broke up, or so as I thought, because you left me! No words for weeks, you just vanished!”

Minami clenched her fists tighter when words had failed her. She found herself to be tight lipped, feeling the guilt that she’d been trying to bury deep inside had slowly crawled out.

Atsuko tried to calm herself with a soft exhale of air. Hearing no response from Takamina, she decided to leave the matter on her hand.  “Minami, for the last time, listen to me. Me and him, we’re just friends, nothing more” explained Atsuko desperately.   

“Stop lying!” snapped Minami, “I’m so done with people hiding things and talking about me behind my back. Just admit it, If you’re not dating him, so what are you two? Fuck buddies?”

It happened as fast as it ended, and Takamina didn’t get a hold of the situation just yet. Though her ears were still ringing from the impact caused by the younger girl’s hand that landed harshly on her cheek, she could still hear the faint sound of her sobbing. Takamina brought her hand up to her cheek and felt the burning sensation as soon as it came in contact with the skin. It all felt surreal to her, her mind was still registering to accept the fact that Atsuko had just slapped her. Then how come her heart was the one that’s hurting really badly right now?

“Is that how you think of me? To think of me to do something that low, do you hate me that much Minami? You know you’re the only person I’ve ever done it with! How could you even say something like that?!” screamed Atsuko with tears streamed down her face. She was hurt. Every words that came out of Takamina’s mouth was like a dagger piercing through her heart. Atsuko forced out a bitter chuckle in between her cries, “Oh god, I’ve been so stupid. Here I am, foolishly waiting for you to come back like my feet stuck to the ground, but I guess you don’t even care. “

Takamina couldn’t bring herself to look up to meet Atsuko’s gaze on her. She didn’t want to see the tears on Atsuko’s face, knowing that she was the reason for it. She was ashamed of every single thing that came out of her mouth, accusing and hurting Atsuko, all because of her insecurities.

“I don’t even know you anymore. Tell me Minami, did the kiss even mean anything to you or was it you trying to prove that you’re better than him?”

Takamina wanted to answer the former, she wanted to explain how the kiss had sent hundreds butterflies inside her stomach, how it had made her knees turned into jelly, how she felt fireworks just exploded inside her chest, but her damn tongue was not able to utter anything, and instead she stood still and fixed her gaze to the ground. Seconds had passed and without hearing any replies from Takamina, Atsuko stomped out of restroom, hand covering her mouth to muffle her sobs.

Not until she heard the door slammed shut Takamina raised her head. A lone tear escaped from her eye. Her lips tugged in a bitter smile. She was never good enough for her, Atsuko deserved more than someone like her who’s only capable of hurting the person who loved her unconditionally. Her eyesight caught a glimpse of her reflection in the mirror. She walked closer toward the mirror, her gaze never left the dark eyes that were staring back at her. Takamina didn’t recognize the girl in front of her, she looked like a mess, with disheveled hair, eye bags under her eyes, and the apparent reddish mark on her cheek. Once again, she brought her hand to her cheek, rubbing the spot hoping that the red would fade away. She didn’t want any reminder for what she’d done to Atsuko in that cramped restroom. To her dismay the mark was still there, if anything it had become redder any slightly swollen now. It’s weird though, with every strokes she made on the red mark she couldn’t help but wincing from the indescribable pain, but it’s inside her chest. She stopped her futile attempt before making it looked even worse, and wiped the tears stain on her face.   

“what am I turning into?” murmured Takamina before slamming her fist to her reflection, sending cracks all over the surface of the mirror.








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“Dammit! Pick up the damn phone Acchan” muttered Yuko under her breath. She gritted her teeth as she punched the redial button on her phone with her thumb, and once again she was diverted straight to the mailbox. She growled in frustration and threw her phone on the couch before tossing herself lazily after.
The clock on the desk beside the couch had showed that it’s 8 in the morning, but there’s still no sign of Atsuko. Yuko still hadn’t had the slightest idea of what happened last night. Atsuko showed up in tears after a trip to the restroom, and when Yuko asked her what’s wrong, the girl had already stormed out of the room and left the rest of occupants bewildered. She had tried her luck to run after her bestfriend, but by the time she was out of the building, Atsuko was nowhere to be seen. At first Yuko thought that she’d meet her when she got back to their apartment, however there’s no sign of Atsuko coming home since last night. She laid on her back and brought her hand on her forehead, trying to come up with any ideas of what could cause Atsuko to cried and stormed off like that. Then, like someone just turned on the light bulb in her dimmed head, a thought, more precisely a name popped out in her mind. It could make sense though, only Takamina who’s capable to make Atsuko cried a river. She snapped her fingers, before reaching for her phone and dialed Takamina’s number. Well, this time even worst, her phone was out of reach.

“don’t people use phone anymore?” growled Yuko in frustration. Not giving up, she dialed another number on her phone. After a few seconds of dial tone, the recipient finally picked up the phone.

“hello? Yuu-chan?”

“Nyannyan, is Takamina there? Can I talk to her?” asked Yuko in urgency. She called her girlfriend right away, whose house was where Takamina had been staying over ever since the breakup.   

“Takamina hasn’t come home since last night” answered Haruna.

“eh? But last night she said she came home early to rest” said Yuko.

“I know. I think she lied. Well, not the first time it happened anyway, so I’m not surprised.” sighed Haruna, “it’s better than the times where she brings some random girls home though. Why are you looking for her?”

“Acchan hasn’t come home either. I’m really worried about her, I just wanted to know why she’s running off crying last night” explained Yuko.

“You think it has something to do with Takamina?”

“I don’t know. Probably?”

“Well, maybe, but they barely even talked last night” reasoned Haruna.

“This whole thing between the two of them is going to be the dead of me” sighed Yuko.

Haruna chuckled from the other line.

“When will that midget of a General Manager get back to her own place? I really don’t get it, why can’t she stay at her own apartment? It’s pretty much empty now, she can bring all those girls she sleeps around with there.“ asked Yuko grumpily. “Ever since she stays at your place, we don’t have much time alone anymore. I swear Takamina’s gotten more action than I did these days.”

“Perv! I could ask you the same question, when will Acchan get her own place? I always like it sleeping in Yuu-chan’s bed, watching the view of the city at night while being in Yuu-chan’s arms, naked.” teased Haruna.

“oi! Stop right there, I don’t want this phone call to end up talking about something lewd.” Blurted Yuko hurriedly.

“wow, that was the first time you turned down an invitation of a phone call that could possibly lead to phonesex. I’m impressed Oshima-san.” Giggled Haruna, “so anyway, I can’t just kick her out because she’s my bestfriend. She’s in, somewhat, dark time right now, and she needs someone by her side.”

“same thing with Acchan,” agreed Yuko, giggling, “well played Kojima-san.”

“Yuu-chan I need to get ready now or I’ll be late for the practice. So, see you at the practice?”

“Yup, see you. Tell me if you get a hold of Takamina though, okay? Love you.”

“will do. Love you too.”

Talking with her girlfriend for a few minutes had successfully taken her minds off of things. She was calmer now, and she didn’t even realize how her lips had formed a wide grin. Yuko once again found her mind drifting off to the thought of her two friends. Takamina was probably off somewhere, waking up in someone’s bed.  Haruna and Yuko knew about Takamina’s habit of having a one night stand once in a while. If Yuko hadn’t seen Takamina in bed together with a girl, naked and all, with her own eyes Yuko wouldn’t actually believe in million years. Unfortunately, she picked a wrong day to do one of her prank scheme on her General Manager. Her jaw dropped when she found Takamina sleeping with a girl she had never met before next to her. Seemed like her plan was backfired, and she was the one who left the scene in shock. Yuko still remembered the scene like it was just yesterday, and her body cringed in disgust almost immediately. Takamina was acting indifferently when Yuko caught her, and she acted like it wasn’t that much of a big deal, so Yuko just shrugged it off. Who Takamina’s sleeping with was none of her business anyway, and of course Yuko didn’t let Atsuko know about this. Haruna and Yuko had agreed that none of the members should know about this side of their leader, so they kept it to themselves for as long as they should. Yuko still didn’t understand though, how Takamina could manage to bring a girl to bed. Physically, and emotionally, or so as Yuko thought, Takamina wasn’t really a chick-magnet type, but yet she’s able to score a number of hot girls. Did she drug them or what?   

Yuko jerked up from the couch when she heard the clanking sound of keys from outside the door. She waited until the other occupant of the apartment showed up her face from behind the door. Once she was assured that it was really Atsuko coming in, she breathed out in relief.

“Where the hell have you been?” fumed Yuko.

The girl in question ignored her roommate and walked past her dismissively. She put on a blank stare as she dragged her feet toward her room. Hearing no response from the younger girl, Yuko grabbed her by the wrist and spun her around, determined to get all of her answers no matter what. Yuko made an inaudible gasp when she came face to face with Atsuko. She looked awful. Her make-up was smudged all over, trails of dried tears were visible on her face, dark shades were apparent underneath her swollen eyes socket, and to top it all up Yuko could smell alcohol coming out her pores.

“Acchan, what on earth happened to you?” said Yuko, giving her a concern look.

“I’m fine, don’t worry” answered Atsuko with a weak smile.

“You don’t look fine to me. What’s wrong Acchan? You know you can tell me everything right?” Yuko continued as she placed both of her hands on the taller girl’s shoulders, and squeezed them gently to give her reassurance. To her disappointment, the latter just shrugged off her hands.

“Yuko please, not now.” begged Atsuko. She then spun on her heel and strolled away to her room, leaving Yuko with her jaw dropped. Yuko was stunned, but she didn’t want to push the matter even further, thinking that Atsuko would eventually tell her when she’s ready. Since Atsuko wanted to be alone at the moment, Yuko decided to leave for practice early, hoping that when she got back the younger girl’s state would get better. She walked into her room to grab her bagpack and her coat. While hesitating to tell Atsuko that she’s leaving, her feet had already brought her in front of her roommate’s room. She could hear the shower running from behind the door, signaling that Atsuko was in her bathroom. So Yuko let herself in, and proceeded to make her way to the front door of the bathroom. She knocked once,

“Acchan, I’m leaving for practice. If you need anything don’t hesitate to call me, okay?” called Yuko.

As expected, no replies, just the sound of the water hitting the bedroom tiles. Yuko sighed in disappointment, she was about to leave when she heard a faint sound of whimpers. She was pretty sure the sound was coming from behind the bathroom door. She brought her left ear to the surface of the door to get a better hearing, and the sobs were getting clearer.

is she crying?” thought Yuko.

“Acchan? Are you okay?” yelled Yuko. She was getting annoyed from being ignored. Without thinking twice Yuko barged in the bathroom, silently praying that Atsuko still had her habit of leaving the door unlocked. She covered her eyes as she walked in and as expected, she was welcomed with the displeased shriek from the occupant of the room. She got in the bathroom easily, and the first thing that came into her view made her heart dropped.

“Yuko what the hell?!!” yelled Atsuko.

Still with her eyes covered, Yuko retorted, “before you get mad, firstly no, I didn’t barge in just so I could see a wet, naked body of a girl no matter how much I miss seeing it. Secondly, yes I know you want to be alone, but there’s no way I could leave in peace without you telling me what the hell is going on. So forgive me, but I’m going to stay at this very spot until you spit out what happened to you last night!”

To the petite girl's dismay, she heard snort of laughter instead. She got curious and tried to take a peek from the space between her fingers. Through her limited sight she found Atsuko crouching down, hugging her knees in the corner of the room, she was still fully clothed, and drenched from the running water above her.

“what in god’s name happening here?” mumbled Yuko to herself.

Yuko dropped her bag and her coat carelessly, and snatched the nearest towel.  She turned off the faucet and squatted down beside Atsuko. Yuko draped the towel over the brunette’s shoulders before making herself comfortable sitting down on the wet floor beside the younger girl.

“What are you thinking?” asked Yuko calmly. “is this how you usually take a bath? Do you know when you’re taking a bath you’re supposed to take off your clothes?”

“I just feel like it.” answered Atsuko simply, as she wiped the remaining tears on her face. She then rested her head on Yuko’s shoulder.

“Yuko..” began Atsuko, “please tell me how to forget her, how to make this feeling go away.”

“Acchan..” Yuko was taken aback with Atsuko’s statement. She didn’t expect the younger girl to finally come to terms with her break-up. Ever since Yuko knew about Takamina’s new routine she’d been silently praying for Atsuko to move on and forget about her feeling toward her General Manager before she got to learn the truth. She knew it would definitely break Atsuko to know how Takamina had easily moved on with her life. Though the reason behind the latter’s new found habit was still unknown, Yuko could sense and would bet that it had something to do with the girl next to her.

“feeling is not something you could force to go away,” continued Yuko. “it’s beyond our control. You don’t know how, when, or why you could fall in or out of love. Feeling might appear or disappear by itself, it takes time and you cannot control it no matter how badly you want it.”

“I slept with someone last night.” confessed Atsuko all of a sudden. She wiped a lone tear that had dropped from her eye, and gazed into Yuko’s brown eyes. She could see the shock written on Yuko’s face, and waited for the latter to be ready to response while on the other hand, Atsuko felt relieved beyond belief to be able to tell someone about her act of desperation.   

Yuko was stunned, she needed time to let Atsuko’s statement to sink in her brain.

“who, I mean what, I mean when, I mean how?” mumbled Yuko in confusion.

“with this guy I met in a bar. You could say that it’s an act under alcohol’s influence, but a part of me wanted it to happen I guess. I wanted to take a step forward and tested myself whether I was ready or not. The sex was quite good I suppose, but the entire time I felt like I was cheating on Takamina,” explained Atsuko. “and I just can’t seem to make this guilt to go away.”

Yuko let out a sigh and stroked the girl’s wet hair before she began, “it’s understandable. You‘ve been with her for years, it’s only natural.”

Yuko chuckled weakly, “But honestly, I think it’s very blunt of you to do something spontaneous like that, and I find it rather hard to believe you would do that. Our Acchan is not so innocent anymore, isn’t she?”

Atsuko smiled at Yuko’s remark, and punched the older girl's arm in playful manner.

"Sorry I was being a bitch to you" said Atsuko.

Yuko chuckled, "aren't you always?"

"hey!" exclaimed Atsuko.

“I’m relieved though.” Stated Yuko.

“Hm? How so?” asked Atsuko with a frown.

“You’re moving on, or at least trying to” smiled Yuko. 

“I’m still not sure of it.” sighed Atsuko. “I spent every day wondering if she’d ever come back to me. I tried not to, I tried to distract my minds off of her, but nothing worked ‘cause by the end of the day I found myself thinking of her. Maybe that’s the reason, me imagining of ‘what ifs’ or ‘what could be’, that’s the thing that have been holding me back. Last night I finally found my answer, I’ve accepted the fact that me and Takamina are not together anymore, and what is left for me is to learn to let go.”

“last night?” asked Yuko, frowning. “which reminds me, why were you crying last night?”











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Yuko stomped her way through the corridor of Akihabara theatre, heading toward the practice room. She could hear the sound of their music blasting throughout the hallway, signaling that the practice had already started.  She was trying hard to calm herself, clenching her fists to hold back the anger rose up within her. Atsuko made her promise that she wouldn’t do anything to Takamina, but, what she didn’t know wouldn’t hurt her. Yuko wanted Takamina to feel even the slightest pain that Atsuko had gone through, if she could not make her feel them emotionally then she would bring them physically, maybe even considering it as a payback.

Her feet had brought her to the front door of the practice room, she slid the door opened and let herself in. The music had stopped playing, and everyone dispersed from their formation.

“10 minutes break and then we practice for the medley” ordered Takamina to the members in the room, before she spotted Yuko who’s standing by the door.

“glad you decide to join us” stated Takamina as she made her way to the ace of the group.

“I want to talk to you outside, now” blurted Yuko.

By the look of it, Takamina knew it had something to do with what happened last night between her and Atsuko. Here’s the fact that Takamina hated so much about the slightly taller girl, she meddled too much.

“She told you what happened huh? It’s between me and her Yuko, just stay out of this” hissed Takamina.

“Oh geez, are you for real Takamina?!” exclaimed Yuko exasperatedly. The volume of her voice had successfully catch everyone’s attention as every pairs of eyes in the room were all now fixed on the both of them.

“Why wasting time? Why can’t you just tell me right now?” opposed Takamina as she crossed her arms against her chest.

“Because I don’t like being staring at,” shrugged Yuko, “and I don’t want people to watch it”

Takamina raised her eyebrow in confusion, “watch it? what are you talking about? What ‘it’?”

“this” said Yuko simply, before gathering her strength into her fist and brought it to meet to Takamina’s cheek.   



























TBC







Well, that's all I have for now..

Yuko's revenge  :on asmo:
Title: Re: Stay - Chapter III (06/16/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: chichay12 on June 16, 2013, 07:45:26 PM
Omg omg omg
when I read the smexy time of minami and acchan..
I was like..thank god their together...
But but WTH happen....
minami stop being an idiot and makeup your f*ucking mind!!
my atsumina heart....
I can't take it!!!!!
deeds thank you for the update! :on gay:

Ps.pls stop torturing my atsumina heart I really can't take it. :angry:
Title: Re: Stay - Chapter III (06/16/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: Haruko on June 16, 2013, 08:06:11 PM
OMG!! hell yeah yuko... minami needs that!!

Not atsuko.. dont become in that... you are better..

Please makes Takamina be a better person and fight for atsuko forgiveness.... aww kojiyuu moments was gorgeous love it...
Title: Re: Stay - Chapter III (06/16/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: Elo on June 16, 2013, 08:37:17 PM
damn what is happening and there I thought that they would make up

but no it got worser

 :cry: :cry: :cry: acchan slept with someone else

danm I want th next chapter ASAP author-san ^^
Title: Re: Stay - Chapter III (06/16/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: Tanchan on June 16, 2013, 11:49:45 PM
At first I was yeah they're making out and will get back together in no time and then Takamina had to blurt out those stupid words, and worse, now Atsuko also "moved on" but I guess that's just outside pretense because if Takamina still hasn't moved on with all those sleeping around with who- knows-how-many-girls then a one night stand with a guy won't be enough. But gruhhh who's that guy? I will hunt him down, take advantage of Acchan like that :angry: I guess that makes them even in terms of cheating-but-not-really-cheating-since -they-broke-up but IMO Acchan's less guilty and can be forgiven easier since she was under alcohol's influence whereas Takamina wasn't.  I know this is not a rainbow fic so I don't rule out these things happening. Although I'm sad about Atsuko's one night stand, not really her fault, but I can't wait for your next update. If you make me wait for another month I will :angry:. But somehow something at the back of my mind tells me that Atsuko wasn't telling the truth, hey I can hope, right? I want Atsuko to give Takamina a punishment when they eventually get back for all those irresponsible sleeping around that she did and that won't be logical if Atsuko herself had committed the same crime.


Yeah at Yuko's revenge. Yuko in this fic is more faithful than Takamina, albeit their situation is different. But poor Takamina for getting slapped the last night by Atsuko and a punch the next morning from Yuko :nervous. How can she score the hot girls again with those swollen cheeks XD

And Taka get back to your own apartments to give Kojiyuu their own space, you can't bring any girls to Haruna's house like it's your own house.
Title: Re: Stay - Chapter III (06/16/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: kuro808 on June 17, 2013, 12:28:38 AM
Yuko is putting sense in Takamina to stop getting down on Acchsn
Title: Re: Stay - Chapter III (06/16/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: KojiYuu44 on June 17, 2013, 03:19:24 AM
when I read the make out scene I thought things were going to get better
but... NO!!
Takamina is such an idiot... always making Acchan upset
things are only getting worse since Acchan slept with someone out of frustration :(
good thing Yuko is there to help... nice knocking sense back into Takamina
KojiYuu moment is so cute :)
Thanks for the update!!
Title: Re: Stay - Chapter III (06/16/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: cisda83 on June 17, 2013, 11:11:20 AM
OMG... Minami nearly forcing herself on to Atsuko like that...

Yeah... I agreed with Atsuko... Minami had changed... into somebody that she did not know...

But I guess the relationship with Atsuko and Minami would have ended sooner later...

Because Minami had always felt insecure about her relationship with Atsuko... always felt that she was not good enough for Atsuko...

Oh... Minami really crossed the line just now... that was why she was being slapped by Atsuko... she called Atsuko a slut or a cheater in crude words...

Ah... Minami still had feeling for Atsuko but she had a big pride... and she did not want to look weak in front of Atsuko

That was why she always kept all her problems and insecure inside...

Eh.. Atsuko also slept with a guy...

With a lot of water under the bridge... would they get back together...?

Ouch... Poor Minami being punched by Yuko...

Who said... Minami did not have her feeling.

Her heart already broke... and she always felt pain since her break up... that she became numb to emotional pain...

What's going to happen to Minami next?

Would the rest of the members be stopping Yuko from doing anymore damage to Minami?

Would there be anymore scandals or problems about Atsuko sleeping with the guy from the bar?

Can't wait to see how they get back together

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Stay - Chapter III (06/16/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: asahi on July 03, 2013, 04:04:28 PM
Never would have imagined Takamina someone as like that.
I'm hooked with your story! Not much time for me to spare to read fanfics but i'll definitely make time for this/future updates!

Thank you and Update soon if you can!  :)
Title: Re: Stay - Chapter III (06/16/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: ᶘ ᵒᴥᵒᶅ on July 04, 2013, 12:00:04 PM
Amazing. Looking forward to the next update.  :thumbup
Title: Re: Stay - Chapter III (06/16/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: karenchan on July 04, 2013, 08:53:07 PM
For the first time in my life, I FEEL SO HAPPY whensomeonegotpunched
Hah ! A punch suits your face takamina.  :hiakhiakhiak: :hiakhiakhiak:

I'm not anti, I worship both takamina & atsuko. :wriggly: :wriggly: Its just the character.  :shifty: :shifty:

HighFive YUKO ! Yuko SAIKO !
  :on GJ: :on GJ: :on GJ:
Title: Re: Stay - Chapter III (06/16/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: lambie96 on August 31, 2013, 02:31:08 AM
SOOOO SADDD!!! woah, takamina, the chick magnet. totally unexpected.
Title: Re: Stay - Chapter III (06/16/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: Tanchan on August 31, 2013, 06:51:44 AM
Pull up the thread pls update author-san
Title: Re: Stay - Chapter III (06/16/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: blakwhite on September 13, 2013, 07:05:23 PM
aww, update this pls
 :cry: :cry: :cry:
Title: Re: Stay - Chapter III (06/16/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: asahi on October 20, 2013, 12:58:27 PM
more?  :(
Title: Re: Stay - Chapter III (06/16/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: Mina on October 21, 2013, 12:31:43 AM
That history is very good  :twothumbs, I want to know takamina and acchan will be committees again. 
Please it finishes posting!!!  :bow:
Title: Re: Stay - Chapter III (06/16/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: Senelcar on December 13, 2013, 10:38:16 AM
We need an update, im really looking forward to reading the end of this fic !

Onegaishimasu  :bow: :bow:
Title: Re: Stay - Chapter III (06/16/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: amachan48 on December 13, 2013, 03:13:38 PM
Author-san please update this story >.< I have been waiting for months >.<
Title: Re: Stay - Chapter III (06/16/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: crazywota on December 13, 2013, 03:59:16 PM
^
I second that.

more? :(
Title: Re: Stay - Chapter III (06/16/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: takeshi77 on February 12, 2014, 06:18:40 PM
update???
Title: Re: Stay - Chapter III (06/16/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: ubulubulbilu on July 18, 2015, 01:51:39 PM
No update?
W H Y?????? :pleeease:
Title: Re: Stay - Chapter III (06/16/13) (AtsuMina)
Post by: Saint0angel on July 19, 2015, 03:52:24 AM
Updates please! :)