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Title: "By the time I realised..."Ch6 UPDATE!! (after months!! 04.21
Post by: chibi-midgetlove on November 23, 2012, 11:45:17 AM
Hiii~~ :)
Firstly I just wanted to say sorry to the people that always read my fic <3 I was really busy with exams and now I have the weekend so I think I'll be able to update more :love:

Anyway here's the story.
I think a lot of people will get confused but you'll find out what its about after my next update hopefully XD


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Takamina POV
Flashback
"OK Bye Takamina~~ I'll see you tomorrow~" two of my best friends wave goodbye to me. Miichan, a popular green mascot-looking person and Haruna, a kitty like beautiful person. Out of the three of us our ages are well balanced and Haruna which I call Nyan Nyan is the oldest of us three.

We had just finished going to a political party, which was no different to any other of those parties.
Oh I forgot...
My name is Takahashi Minami! As many of you know, I'm the daughter of the renowned Takahashi family that has been a member of the parliament for generations. My daddy doesn't expect me to take over even though I'm his only child. He says that our name isn't whats important, but the inside of someone is the thing that makes a person beautiful. He also said that I should follow my dreams and not worry about succeeding our name. I know that daddy actually does hope for me to take over in the inside... But he won't mention because he doesn't want me to worry about it. But saying that I also don't have any feelings about taking over...
 Sorry, dad but I think I'll live honestly doing the things that I love, and being myself.

When I was around 3 I wanted to be a green, leafy cabbage! But that was only when I was little...
Now my dream is to be a solo singer! I'm not sure how long it will take, but I promise that I will sing, sing so that my voice can reach everyone!
I think that a singer is such a great occupation, I mean who doesn't think that being able to give hope, courage and dreams to people isn't wonderful!!!!

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"Uwahh.." I always walk along the edge of the pathway and try to balance and walk along the bricks, I fall off so I always keep going.

But then suddenly... I hear footsteps.. I feel that I am in danger so I walk quicker.. And the faint sound follows.. When I stop walking the sound of footsteps stop as well. I don't know what to do so I start to run in full speed, I can hear someone following me getting closer to me as they seem to have more speed then me.
I know that if I look back its all over.. I remember being in this type of trouble when I was 7... Due to how my daddy is famous, these men in black tried to attack me for money before but luckily I found a police station just in time and they ran away...

But this time I don't have time to call daddy, find a police station, or catch a taxi so I have to handle this myself.. Just the thought of that really scared me. I am pretty brave at dealing with insects and animals for a 21 year old girl but I get scared the most easiest when I'm dealing with these type of scary things.

Stomp. Stomp. Stomp, stomp, stomp, stomp, stomp, stomp.
There are 3 men wearing black in front of me, so I have no choice to turn around to see who had been following me. It seems that he is also part of the men in black.

They grab me and push me onto the floor and grab my arms and hangs them against the wall. A guy puts his hand over my mouth and now I can't do anything. I fight back but my strength is nothing compared to men and every time I react a certain man would do slap me. "Give us money, or else...." They start ripping and tearing my clothes of..... The guys do a creepy smirky face and take out a camera................ Stop.. Stop. Stop. Stop.. Stop!!!!  I can feel my vision turn blurry and I can't help the tears from falling.. "Looks like we can not only earn money but also have some fun time" they say..

Now I can't really take it so my I wait until I hear some footsteps....
Now!!!!!...
 I bite the finger of the guy's that has their hand covering my mouth. It comes of and I scream for tomorrow..
"SOMEONE HELP ME!!!! HELP!!!!! HELPPPPPPPP!!!!"
"You bit**!!" a man in black hits the temple of my head and everything goes blurry..

..............Am I still alive? I see a faint figure fight the men in black. What? The guy punches them and they all run away, leaving the camera. I see my saviour's lips turn to a smirk while looking through the camera.. Oh so he's a pervert......... But I see the back of the figure's head shake and he takes the memory card of the camera and smashes it.

*thump* What is this feeling? I've never experienced it but I know that I owe my life to him.
I try to see his face before he leaves but then I can't stand it and I totally black out for good..

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"Where am I?" I look around at the unfamiliar environment. Oh yeah.. I was about to get raped but someone saved me.
I look around and I find a passport.

Hnn? It wasn't there before? Then I realise that it must have my hero's passport.
So I get up and run to it and I see a guy's face and 2 words staring at me.
".... Maeda Atsu..."

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I wonder if anyone understands this.. Sorry if it was hard but at the end of this story you'll understand for sure XD
Title: Re: "By the time I realised, I was too late..."
Post by: dark48 on November 23, 2012, 12:03:37 PM
Really Love It  :heart:

Please continue  :bow:
Title: Re: "By the time I realised, I was too late..."
Post by: TakaminaBG on November 23, 2012, 12:52:10 PM
Please continue!! It's really interesting!!!!!!
Title: Re: "By the time I realised, I was too late..."
Post by: chichay12 on November 23, 2012, 02:03:15 PM
ATSUMINA!!!!
KYAAAAA!!!!!!
 :ptam-glow: :luvluv1: :mon crazyinlove:

CONTINUE!!!!
Title: Re: "By the time I realised, I was too late..."
Post by: Pdpond on November 23, 2012, 05:11:01 PM
So interesting~
Waiting for update :deco:
Title: Re: "By the time I realised, I was too late..."
Post by: KojiYuu44 on November 23, 2012, 08:18:40 PM
ATSUMINA!!!!YES!!!
Please keep writing!!
I will be waiting for the update :)
Title: Re: "By the time I realised, I was too late..."
Post by: hidden_player on November 24, 2012, 04:32:34 AM
Why I have a feeling that it's not Atsumina, LOL


But it's interesting, so it doesn't matter XD

Waiting for the next chapter and thanks for your hard work :wub:
Title: Re: ♥~Takamini fanfics~♥ "By the time I realised, I was too late..."
Post by: chibi-midgetlove on November 24, 2012, 10:15:04 AM
@dark48 Thank you~~ <3 And don't worry I will :)
@TakaminaBG Thanks~ Oh I used to read your fanfics a lot, I still love them  :wub:
@Pdpond Here's your update~ XD
@Chichay12 @Kojiyuu44 Yup... 8) Atsumina so far XD And I will continue~  :)
@hidden_player Wow... Your feelings are so amazing~!!!... And your welcome :)

Everyone~ Thank you for allll your feed back, it really means a lot to meeee~ O0
For some reason for each fanfic I change my writing style...

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Chapter 1
Takamina POV
- A week later at Nyan Nyan's house with Miichan
*ring ring*
"Takamina! Your spacing out. Your phone is ringing!" Miichan says.
I take my phone out. Its an email from dad.

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To my beloved daughter, Minami

I have something wonderful to tell you today.
I'm sure this thing will change your life forever, please come to our hotel restaurant at 6pm.
I will be waiting~

Loves of love from your no.1 daddy,
Takahashi Keiji xoxo
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I show Miichan and Haruna my email and now we're all excited!
"What do you think its about!?!?" Miichan asks.
"I don't really know but dad says its a good thing so it has to be!" I respond.
"Takamina, why were you spacing out before? I mean you've been spacing out a lot since last time we had the political party.. Did something happen?" Haruna asks.
"Really!? You're probably just imagining!! Hahaha!" I don't know what to say so I just laugh it off. I know that Miichan and Haruna are great best friends but I'm sure they'll tell my dad and they'll worry heaps and so will other people so I won't tell them what happened a week ago...

"Anyway... Nyan Nyan can you help me with my make up!?"

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-At meeting place (6:00pm)
"Daddy~!" "Minami~!" Dad and I hug, daddy greets me with a smile.
"So dad.. What did you want to discuss with me about?"
"Oh Minami, I'm glad you mentioned." I see my dad, he has one of the biggest smiles I've ever seen on his face.

"Minami, I want you to meet, this gentlemen" my dad shoves me softly so that I would walk up to this "gentlemen" he was talking about.

I see an average sized figure walk up the aisle.
This guy seems like the gentlemen my dad was talking about. I wonder what he wants with me.


He reaches out his hands and gently grabs mine and kisses like a prince would.
"Nice to meet you. My name is Maeda Atsu."

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I don't write much each chapter but I'll update regularly :)
I hope you like this chapter~ :byebye:
Title: Re: ♥~Takamini fanfics~♥ "By the time I realised, I was too late..." [Updated]
Post by: chiqinna on November 24, 2012, 11:11:45 AM
veeeeerrryyyy nice~~~  :heart:
keep going on!!  :))
Title: Re: ♥~Takamini fanfics~♥ "By the time I realised, I was too late..." [Updated]
Post by: douya08 on November 24, 2012, 05:21:49 PM
it's really rare to see Acchan as a boy.. :on lol:

looking forward for the next chapter! :cow:
Title: Re: ♥~Takamini fanfics~♥ "By the time I realised, I was too late..." [Updated]
Post by: Pdpond on November 24, 2012, 07:31:28 PM
Oh!! Atsuboy~ :deco:
Title: Re: ♥~Takamini fanfics~♥ "By the time I realised, I was too late..." [Updated]
Post by: takamae on November 25, 2012, 06:48:00 AM
Atsu...is a guy  :wub:  :wub:
Minami this is your time to be the girly part, I like it  :inlove:
Thank you for the fic ^^
Title: Re: ♥~Takamini fanfics~♥ "By the time I realised, I was too late..." [Updated]
Post by: KojiYuu44 on November 25, 2012, 07:13:05 AM
So Atsu is the princely type... mmm i like!!
Minami is in for some good stuff :)
Thank you for the update!
Title: Re: ♥~Takamini fanfics~♥ "By the time I realised, I was too late..." [Updated]
Post by: cisda83 on November 25, 2012, 10:18:04 AM
Atsuko as male....  :twothumbs

Interesting topic... gambate  :fap  :cow:

looking forward to your update  :theking :heart:

Thank you for the fanfic  :wub: :inlove:

Title: Re: ♥~Takamini fanfics~♥ "By the time I realised, I was too late..." [Updated]
Post by: Haruko on November 25, 2012, 08:47:41 PM
uh?!.. could be..
Title: Re: ♥~Takamini fanfics~♥ "By the time I realised, I was too late..." [Updated]
Post by: chibi-midgetlove on November 26, 2012, 11:43:25 AM
@chiqinna Yup~ I will keep going~ Don't worry  :grin:
@d_ruffi Thank you~ Atsuko as a guy is Atsu  :thumbsup
@Pdpond Atsuko= Atsu  Takagirl? XD  :wub:
@takamae Yup~ Taka's turn to be the girl for once :love:
@KojiYuu44 But Prince Atsu sounds likes a good name right!? O0
@cisda83 Thank you for thanking me for the fanfic XD
@Haruko ? ...... :grin:

Everyone~ thank you for your comments~ It always means a lot like I always say XD
I hope you guys like this chapter~ :)
A/N: Oh and just remember my pairings are my pairings  XD and its original so Taka could end up with a frog or something XD

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Chapter 2
Takamina POV
He reaches out his hands and gently grabs mine and kisses like a prince would.
"Nice to meet you. My name is Maeda Atsu."

Maeda Atsu? ......... Could he be the guy that saved my life last time?.....

He gently turns his face to peek at mine because he is wondering if there's anything wrong.
No~! I have to be polite! I can ask him about "that" a little later after I introduce myself!! Snap out of it Minami~~!!
"My name is Takahashi Minami, nice to meet you too." I respond with a smile.
He smiles back. His smile. It looks like an angel's smile. An angel that has fell from heaven and dropped down to earth.
"Maeda-san, perhaps- have we met before?" I ask politely.
Well I can't help it, I'm so curious. I hope he is my hero but I also hope that he isn't my hero...
If he is.... Then I owe my whole life to him.

"Sorry..? I think you have the wrong person."
What..? Am I wrong?
"Um.. May this be yours in any way?" I take out his passport that I secretly kept that I found at that place a week ago.

"Where did you find that?" he asks gently trying to suppress his surprised face.
"I found it on the floor near a place I was at... A week ago...." Now his face is really close to mine. Wahh~!! I'm not used to good looking guys look at me so closely. Maeda-san stopp~~!
"Thank you, I was in search for that." His face turns back into a smile.

Phew! I'm glad that he's smiling again.
But... My main concern is...
Is he not the person that saved me?
Maybe he was trying to be polite in front of my dad so he's not saying anything. Or maybe he's just shocked that he know's that I found out that he was pervert with a smirk on his face..

"Minami, is he not a fine man? I hope you grow up to marry someone like this gentlemen" my dad says to me with a smile.
I'll admit that he is a gentlemen... but dad... You're grinning and smirking too much!

"Takahashi-san, I came to talk to you about something that may be about to change your life. I would like to help you achieve your dream that your father has mentioned to me."
"About your solo-debut. I was wondering if you would like to be produced under my name? But for this you will need to sign a contract."
Uhh......
"Daddy!!!!!!!!! Thank you~ Maeda-san thank you so much!!!" I say as I hug both of them.
My dream may be able to come true soon, I can't hold my joy!!

I quickly sign the sheet that he placed in front of me.
"It's no big deal.." Maeda-san says. What? Is that a faint blush on his cheek?
"The project is starting the day after tomorrow. Please get ready to go to Hokkaido." Maeda-san says. Now the colour of his cheeks are back to normal.


Never was I to know until later that this happiness would... If I knew then maybe I would have never signed this contract... If I knew about "it"...

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Someone~ help~! I can't continue the same writing style!!
The style of this and the style of chapter 1 and prologue are so different XD

Title: Re: ♥~Takamini fanfics~♥ "By the time I realised, I was too late..." Chapter 2
Post by: miayaka on November 26, 2012, 12:34:33 PM
my acchan is a guy!
kyaaaa  :heart: :heart: :heart:
i can imagine her so kakkoii!
Title: "By the time I realised, I was too late..." Ch3 (Mayuki,Wmatsui,Kojiyuu,Atsumina
Post by: chibi-midgetlove on December 01, 2012, 09:58:45 AM
@miayaka Yeah~ I guess your Acchan's is the guy  :P

Because I wont be here for some time because I'm busy doing something else I just wanted to update something~ <3
Well I hope you guys like it! :)


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Chapter 3
Takamina POV
-The next day at Haruna's house
"And yesterday was amazing like amazing, now I can achieve my dre-" I say but get cut off.
"It's HIM!!!!!" Haruna screams out as she shows me and Miichan the guy that she loves on television.
"Haruna... Oh my god.. I think he's so cute as well!!!!" Miichan says.
"Who's he? " I say. I think I saw him before but I can't remember.
"TAKAMINA!!! Don't you know him!!?? As expected you're so thick-headed... He's the extremely popular soccer player that's everyone rumoring about for losing his memory." Miichan looks at me with her eyes wide open.
"His name is Oshima Yuu... Does that ring a bell?" Miichan asks.
Oh... Come to think of it, I think I saw him on TV the a few days ago...

"That reminds me... But anyway he looks like a player and he's so short, is he the same height as me? What's so good about him?" I ask.
"TAKAMINAAAA~~~!!!!!! What's wrong with you!!?? How can you say that!? Do you not think he is CUTE!!? Don't you think his smiles make him look as if he way born to become loved and popular!? He looks like an angel that has fallen from heaven and accidently landed down to this world!!" Haruna is now about to fall off her chair.
"I don't remember how I was like before I lost my memory but I'm glad I still have the ability to play soccer" A sound from the television comes.
"THE SMILE.......!!!!" Haruna and Miichan are now both directly in front of the television....
*sigh* I guess lots of girls like guys that make them feel as if they're in danger and a guy that might cheat on them....

"Well I guess he does look like the type that everyone is attracted to but he's not really my type..."
"*sigh* Takamina... We don't care but we both know that we are definitely taking you to the soccer stadium, TODAY." They both say in unison.

*sigh* So much sighing going on but seriously, I thought we were talking about my solo debut...
Oh well, I  guess I can't help them if it comes to cute guys for them..


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"Over here!!" Miichan and Haruna call out as they find our seats.
Hmmm...? Who's that tall- model looking guy standing beside Miichan..
"Takamina! I want you to meet this person." Miichan says.
"Hello. I just met Miichan a few minutes ago and they have so kindly invited me to sit with them. My name is Shinoda Mari, please just call me Mari." Wow... Mari-san has a smile that makes them shine brighter than anyone..
I can see Miichan having one of the biggest grins on her face.
"Mari, and this is Takamina." Miichan smiles to him.
Miichan.. What happened to you liking Oshima Yu. I look at Haruna and she seems to be smiling widely as well. Well I guess that's one rival down for Haruna.
"Miichan I'm sorry I can't sit with you because I have to go somewhere, I'll be back after the match" Mari-san says.
Miichan looks upset but smiles to make sure that Mari-san doesn't worry.

*Drumroll*
"Guys! Its starting!" Haruna says looking so excited.

"Player no.11 Matsumoto Takuma.  Player no.10 Kurokawa Kame... Player no.4 Takahashi Jin. ....  Player no.1 Itano Toma .May we have a round applause to greet Team Chickens!" The announcer says.
A polite clapping sound is heard throughout the massive stadium.

"Ladies and Gentlemen, boys and girls!! What you've all been waiting for.... Player no.11 Kashiwagi Yuma."
A straight black haired guy walks out. A loud roar goes across the stadium, as if the polite clapping was not even there before...
"Yuma-sama!!!! Look this way!!! Look at Watanabe Mayu!!" One very cute pig tailed girl screams out, holding her fan that has Kashiwagi Yuma on it.
Yuma looks directly at her and smiles looking at her and no-one else. It seems that they are acquaintances.

"Player no.10 Matsui Juri"
The guy known as Juri also receives a very loud Juri call.
"Juri. I like you." One strangely quiet girl whispers.
Juri looks at the girl and puts a peace sign up. The crowd goes even louder.
"Juri..." The same creepy ghost girl smiles as she says his name.

Several names get mentioned but all of them receive a cheering louder than any member of "Team Chicken"
"Player no.3 Shinoda Mari"
"What.... Mari~!!!!!! Look this way!!!!!" Miichan screams at the top of her lungs. I guess she didn't know.
Mari-san looks over at our direction but I can see his eyes only reserved for my best friend Miichan.

"Player no.2 Oshima Yuu"
A short guy, just a few centimetres taller than me walks out and shows his trade-mark dimple.
The crowd turns into the loudest it has ever been. Even the announcer is blocking his ears.
"Yuu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Out of all his fans Haruna seems to be the one that's screaming the loudest, desperate to get his attention.
I see Oshima Yuu wave his arms at our direction.
Haruna is now crying while waving back desperately.

"Last but not at least... Player no.1.... Maeda Atsu
......... What...?
Maeda Atsu?
I see a medium sized figure, that seems to be like a prince walk out.
What...!!!! What is Maeda-san doing here!?
"ATSUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU~~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" The crowd is now screaming at the top of their lungs. Even Miichan and Haruna participate even though have a player that they like more.
Maeda-san's beautiful eyes and my eyes meet coincidentally. He looks shocked and surprised but his face returns back into a smile straight away, looking away from me.
"Maeda-san..." I whisper quietly.
"Takamina? Do you know Maeda-san?"  Miichan asks.
Oh no.. I hadn't told them about yesterday and what happened the other time when he rescued me.. And I don't think I can tell them about the time he saved me so I quickly think of something else to say.
"No... It just seems like a familiar name" I say trying to cover up.

"Please welcome these members. The I.Angel"

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"50-0... And with that I.Angel wins their 70th consecutive win!"
The crowd goes wild.
To be honest I feel sorry for "Team Chicken" because they seem so sad that they have no supporters....
"Team Chicken, you guys played wonderfully!!!!" I scream out, as loud as I can. I hope that my voice can reach them...
Everyone including the audience, Team Chicken, I.Angel, the announcer, Haruna and Miichan looks at me.
Everyone joins in and starts screaming out the same thing.
"Yeah!!! It was a great match!!! I hope to see you guys again one day!" the audience join.

I'm glad that my voice was reached everyone.
I choice...
Mum, dad, my friends and everyone that has looked after me so long- I promise that I will become a successful solo singer, so that my voice will reach and give hope, courage and happiness to everyone!

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Hope you guys liked this chapter (its on-going still XD) <3

AN: I forgot to mention but if there's anyone that wants me to add any pairing/member, you can request it <3
Title: Re: "By the time I realised, I was too late..." Chapter 3 (new pairings introduced!)
Post by: bimbo on December 01, 2012, 10:47:45 AM
May we have a round applause to greet Team Chickens!

LOL  XD XD XD

I still love boy!Takamina but boy!Acchan is fine too  :deco:

Please update soon!  :)
Title: Re: "By the time I realised, I was too late..." Chapter 3 (new pairings introduced!)
Post by: dark48 on December 01, 2012, 10:53:26 AM
Nc you put all of them in one team !!!

I'm really looking forward to knowing more
about Atsu !!

Really love it :heart: :heart:

Tnx for the update
Title: Re: "By the time I realised, I was too late..." Ch3 (Mayuki,Wmatsui,Kojiyuu,Atsumina
Post by: KojiYuu44 on December 01, 2012, 09:04:02 PM
i missed the update of chapter two... how??
but two chapters at once is great too :)
OMG all the boys are soccer players... that's so hot :)
thank you for the update!!!
Title: Re: "By the time I realised, I was too late..." Ch3 (Mayuki,Wmatsui,Kojiyuu,Atsumina
Post by: Akblaire48 on December 02, 2012, 04:53:53 AM
Hi DANE!  :D

Love this fanfic  :gmon peakaboo:
Title: Re: "By the time I realised, I was too late..." Ch3 (Mayuki,Wmatsui,Kojiyuu,Atsumina
Post by: cisda83 on December 16, 2012, 10:38:43 PM
nice update

Well Atsuko, Mariko, Yukirin, Jurina, Yuuko as male...

Great one...

Can't wait for the next one...Thank you

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: "By the time I realised, I was too late..."Ch4 (Mayuki,Wmatsui,Kojiyuu,Atsumina
Post by: chibi-midgetlove on December 27, 2012, 03:55:41 AM
@bimbo Yeah, I thought about writing a really weird/funny name for the other team XD
@dark48 Hmmm.. Atsu is mysterious but he's going to be a desperate character (I don't think you know what I mean though XD)
@Kojiyuu44 I think you missed it because I added something in front of the title. Personally I like soccer players more than football players cause I don't really watch either so I don't know any rules~
@Akblaire48 Glad you like this~ <3
@cisda83 Well here's you next one that you've waited for~ :grin:

Finally back from holidays~ :cathappy:
I wanted to stay longer but we couldn't XD
And thank you for all your support guys, it means a lot to me :grin:
I hope you guys like this chapter  O0

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Chapter 4
-After the match
Takamina POV
"Mari! Why did you not tell me that you were one of the soccer players!?" Miichan asks.
"Haha, I just wanted to surprise you guys and furthermore if I told you than you guys wouldn't have acted the way you had, right?" Mari replies.
"Anyway how about you guys come to lunch with all us soccer players?" Mari asks.
"WE'LL LOVE TO!!" Haruna and Miichan replies.
"Oh and how about you 2 standing behind the wall spying on us?" Mari asks the two girls that had been listening to our conversation.
Oh.. It's the two girls from before. One of them is the cute girl with the pigtails that was screaming out "Yuma-sama!!!! Look this way!!! Look at Watanabe Mayu!!"
The other girl is the one that I thought was creepy because she was like a ghost and she was secretly whispering "Juri. I like you."
"OH yes! Mayu would love to join, if Yuma-sama is joining!" the girl named Mayu replies.
"If Juri is coming I would also like to join, if you do not mind." The ghost like person replies softly.
"I guess that's that then. Lets go!" Miichan says.

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-At the Café
As we enter the café we see the soccer player known as Juri is sitting at a table.
“So you girls are the ones that Mari was talking about, huh.” The one known as Juri says.
Then suddenly Juri and the ghost-like girl starts having this eye contact, which seems impossible to cut or to break.
“Rena? Why are you here?” Juri asks. Now that I think about it seemed that Rena and Juri had met each other before and so had the girl in pigtails and Yuma.
“Juri, I wanted to see you… And I also needed to check if you weren’t cheating on me.” Rena replies.
“Eh, have you guys met before?” Miichan asks.
“Oh yeah, I forgot to mention. She, Matsui Rena is my childhood friend and she and I are going out at the moment.” Juri responds.
“Juri, what do you mean at the moment?” Rena frowns at Juri.
“We’re going to be together forever, not just at the moment.” Juri corrects himself.
We hear the cafeteria door open and look around to see the rest of the players.
“Sorry for the waiting guys.” The one known as Yuu says.
My eyes meet Atsu’s eyes. He smiles but quickly turns his face to another direction.
I wonder why he doesn’t ever look at me…
“GYAHHH!!! Yuu~!!” Haruna starts fangirling.
“YUMA-SAMA!!!!!!”
“Hello, I saw you at the soccer stadium. Thank you for cheering for me.” Yuma smiles at Mayu.
“No Yuma-sama, please don’t thank me.” Mayu smiles.
“I have something to tell you… I love you! Could I please become your wife when I get older?” Mayu says shyly at the last few words.
Everyone seems so surprised at the sudden confession. Yuma just smiles and causally says “Um guys, Mayu and I will be out, so enjoy yourselves.” But he seems to have a tint of red on his cheeks.
Atsu and my eyes meet again and his mouth starts moving he seems like he has something to tell me.
“I…. will….tell…. you…sorrow” his mouth seems to be telling me.
Hm? Sorrow? Oh tomorrow…
So I guess he’s going to tell me everything and why he’s here tomorrow.
I nod deeply towards him trying to show him that I understand.
“It feels like a matchmaking party” Yuu smiles showing his big dimple.
“Hm.. Let me see… Hello beautiful, care to tell me your name?” Yuu starts to flirt with Haruna.
I see Yuu starting to look at Haruna’s big breasts.
“What cup are you? E? F?” Yuu asks.
“My name is Haruna and I’m you’re biggest fan. And… my bra size is E.” Haruna responds fixing her shirt trying to show more of it to the guys.
I see everyone at the table is blushing now even Atsu.
“Haruna what are you doing!?” Miichan shouts looking over at Mari.
“Well… There’s nothing wrong right? It’s my body.” Haruna shrugs.
“So Yuu, how is your memory at the moment?” Mari asks trying to change the mood.
“I already remember everything except for this one really important thing that I can’t seem to remember.” Yuu responds.
Oh now that people talk about it, Yuu had a memory lost…
I wonder if he was this perverted before he lost his memory.
Ah… My head really hurts for some reason… It feels like someone’s squishing it…
“I need to go to the bathroom, I’ll be back.” I say.
“What’s wrong Takamina!?” Haruna and Miichan ask.
“I just have a headache, I’m fine, and you guys can keep talking.” I try to smile to reassure them but they don’t seem to believe me.
I walk down the corridor and wow~~… Is that two lady toilet signs? I feel so dizzy I think I’m seeing double vision.
“Minami!” I hear a guy shouting my name, and I black out…

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I'm sorry for the long wait~ XD
Takamina always seems to be blacking out in my stories XD
Title: Re: "By the time I realised, I was too late..."Ch4 (Mayuki,Wmatsui,Kojiyuu,Atsumina
Post by: FNK23 on December 27, 2012, 05:38:26 AM
“I have something to tell you… I love you! Could I please become your wife when I get older?” Mayu says shyly at the last few words.
Everyone seems so surprised at the sudden confession. Yuma just smiles and causally says “Um guys, Mayu and I will be out, so enjoy yourselves.” But he seems to have a tint of red on his cheeks.
LOL, mayu, what a good movement !!  :on GJ: :on GJ:
i mean, it's really fast, why don't both of you being a lover first ?
mayu wants yuma so badd  :shy2:
Title: Re: "By the time I realised..."Ch4 (Mayuki,Wmatsui,Kojiyuu,Atsumina? UPDATE!
Post by: yourockme on December 27, 2012, 12:50:00 PM
Uwaaaaa
My acchan is a boy/man   :on lol:
Kinda not use too it HEHEHE
but anyway this is soo cool
I LURB ITT
atsuminaaaa YIEEEE! ♥♥♥♥

LOL YUU soo funny
Thank yuu ヽ(^。^)ノ
Title: Re: "By the time I realised..."Ch4 (Mayuki,Wmatsui,Kojiyuu,Atsumina? UPDATE!
Post by: chichay12 on December 27, 2012, 01:22:33 PM
I WANT MORE!!!!!
:ding: :gyaaah: :frustrated:
Title: Re: "By the time I realised..."Ch4 (Mayuki,Wmatsui,Kojiyuu,Atsumina? UPDATE!
Post by: KojiYuu44 on December 28, 2012, 12:52:44 AM
Multiple pairings :)
More please!!
Title: Re: "By the time I realised..."Ch4 (Mayuki,Wmatsui,Kojiyuu,Atsumina? UPDATE!
Post by: XxRoByNxX78 on December 28, 2012, 01:42:28 AM
Yuko and takamina had something in the past hmm i dout it mabye im just overthinkin things
Title: Re: "By the time I realised..."Ch4 (Mayuki,Wmatsui,Kojiyuu,Atsumina? UPDATE!
Post by: Haruko on December 28, 2012, 03:26:52 AM
Yuko and takamina had something in the past hmm i dout it mabye im just overthinkin things

yeah could be... kojiyuu omg... so smexy time
Title: "By the time I realised..."Ch5 (Multiple pairings, Atsumina Chapter UPDATE!
Post by: chibi-midgetlove on January 06, 2013, 01:34:54 PM
@FNK23 Yeah, they LOVE~ each other a lot already XD
@yourockme I'm glad you like it~~ And yup~ your Acchan is a guy  :grin:
@Chichay12 I'll write more~~~!! :bingo:
@KojiYuu44 Don't worry I'll try to write things about other pairings as well~
@XxRoByNxX78 Maybe you're overthinking and maybe you're not  O0
@Haruko They both try to flirt with each other XD

None of my stories are planned out so I just update whenever I feel like it.
I'm sorry for being a my-paced writer  XD
Well here's chapter 5~

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Chapter 5
-Atsu POV
-At the Cafe
"Minami~!!!" I scream out as I see Takahashi-san about fall.
"Takamina!!!!!!" Takahashi-san's best friends scream out to her.
I run up and quickly hold her so that she won't hurt herself.
"*puff* *Puff* I thought you and Takamina had some sort of relationship!!" Mari's friend says while blushing.
Hm..? What!? My hand is touching her butt!!
"Wahh!! I never... Wah!!! I'm so sorry!!" I blush as I take my hand away from that area.
"I don't know about your relationship but I'm just glad Takamina is OK..." The big chested girl says.


"Miichan, I think someone should take Takahashi-san home..." Mari calls out.
"I will," I say unconsciously...
I mean what~~!? What am I saying!? I don't even know where she lives!!!
"But you don't even know where she lives..." Miichan says.
"*sigh* I don't know if I can trust you but I'll give you her address..." The big chested girl says.
"Haruna!! How can you trust him so easily!? What if he does something weird to Takamina!? WE should take her home, because WE are her friends. Not Atsu..."
"Something weird!!? What, NOO~!!!! I wont do that to her!!! Its OK, I'm her fathers friend, you can trust me!" What did I just speak unconsciously again...? And why am I being so desperate to earn the trust of Takahashi-san's friends?
*sigh* I don't know whats wrong with me.
"How do you know Takamina's dad? He's a politician..." Miichan asks as all my soccer players in our team seem to have their suspicious eyes on me.
"Atsu, don't worry... You can tell us next time about everything but right now its more important to take Takamina back home. So can we trust you?" Haruna says.
"I'll tell you guys everything tomorrow. And yes, you can trust me." I say confidently. *Sigh* There really are some problems with my mouth today, saying things on its own...

I hop into the car with the address that Haruna wrote to me in my hands.
"Atsu, you better make sure Takamina goes home safely... Or else..." Miichan and Haruna say as they give me the cold glare.
"OK, OK. I promise, it'll be fine!"

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-At Takamina's mansion
Wow... The size of this house is bigger than my house, I think as I carry Takahashi-san around the house attempting to find her room.
This house is too big... I'm lost already...

Uh! I think I found it.. Her room! It says "Minami's room" with decorations on the door, like the one's that kids only normally have.
*pff* I laugh to myself. I'm glad that she isn't awake because she'll probably be offended.

I open the door and I see this room full of cute pink and white objects. Her bed is like those spacious princess beds that you don't find around normally. The smell of her room smells like fragrant roses. Even her wall is painted as a pink cloud design.

She must be really girly inside...

I gently put her on the bed and cover blankets over her.

I peep at her face which seems so angelic. I've always thought that her face was very beautiful but she looks even more beautiful up close.
I never realised but Takahashi-san has really long eye-lashes I think to myself...



!!?? What are my hands doing!? I seem to have unconsciously been caressing her face gently...
*sigh* Seriously I wonder whats wrong with me today...

Suddenly her face starts to turn pale and she seems that she is having a nightmare.
Her body seems to be turning cold...
"Someone help!! Please!" Takahashi-san says out loud...
I wonder whats happening in her nightmare.
"Please... Someone..." She keeps repeating.
I don't know what to do so I act on impulse and squeeze her hand.
"Its OK... I'm here for you Takahashi-san..." I say...
It seems that see finally settled down and now her squeezing my hand has lightened.

I turn my head around over to the window where a strong light had been directed at us.
It seems like tonight is a full moon...

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I hope people liked this chapter <3
Title: Re: "By the time I realised..."Ch5 (Multiple pairings, Atsumina Chapter UPDATE!
Post by: chichay12 on January 06, 2013, 04:51:36 PM
i really like it... :wub:
But its tooooo short! XD

Thank you for the update...  :nervous
Title: Re: "By the time I realised..."Ch5 (Multiple pairings, Atsumina Chapter UPDATE!
Post by: Haruko on January 06, 2013, 10:03:06 PM
cute and short
Title: Re: "By the time I realised..."Ch5 (Multiple pairings, Atsumina Chapter UPDATE!
Post by: cisda83 on January 10, 2013, 05:18:14 PM
Oh so sweet... holding hand to rid of the bad dream...

Thank's for the update...

Can't wait to see the next

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: "By the time I realised..."Ch5 (Multiple pairings, Atsumina Chapter UPDATE!
Post by: Archie28 on January 11, 2013, 02:49:42 PM
This time Acchan is the guy and Takamina is the girl!  :inlove:

Only few write stories that involves Acchan as a guy and Takamina is a girl...  it's usually the other way around so I was excited reading this fanfic of yours  :thumbsup

Does Takamina and Yuu had a romantic relationship?

and Atsu is falling for Takamina  :inlove:




Title: "By the time I realised..." Chapter 6
Post by: chibi-midgetlove on April 21, 2013, 01:58:27 PM
@Chichay12 I hope its long enough now~ :lol:
@Haruko Thank you :grin:
@cisda83 Yeah. Atsu is so sweet  :wub:
@Archie28 Yup Atsu is falling for Minami~

 Sorry for such a late update again...
This time I felt so annoyed at my computer and myself because I deleted nearly half of this thing accidently... So I really wanted to give up and stop writing  XD
But then I remembered my last update saying I would update more often but I didn't so I thought I had to finish this :nervous

I don't know if this is OK, but I hope you like it~!
Comments and thanks would be very much appreciated :grin:
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Chapter 6
I've had this dream so many times I still remember how it goes.
The time before my mother had passed away... I still remember it clearly, I have had the this dream almost nearly everyday after the incident, and it all seemed to be coming back to me at once.
I'm on a luxury cruise ship with my both my parents and my childhood friend and his family.

My childhood friend comes over and offers a dance, while his parents and my parents are dancing to the classical orchestra set organised for us on the 5 star cruise. The vivid vision comes clearly, even after 10 years- even when I am 16. But the only thing is, I can never clearly see his face, the 6 year old boy smiles, beaming radiantly at me. Now that I think about it, I've always had special feelings for him, like his smiles always tugged my heart strings somehow.

Ah.. The place changes, just like it always does...
This is the part where my mother dies....

My childhood friend drags me down to play with him at the bottom of the boat, I always never forget the next part to this dream but I always end up following him. So our parents, laughing happily saying that they can't wait to see  my childhood friend in suit and me in a wedding dress walking down the red carpet and even saying that they would be sister and brother in law, follow us down to make sure we are safe. And when I looked at my childhood friend he would always be blushing as red as a tomato probably just like how I looked like as well. 'Don't come!' I don't know how many times I wanted to say that in my dream... A catastrophic gust of wind throws my mother's hat into the air, 'don't worry' about it I say to myself but I always end up trying to catch the hat for my mommy... Just like always I fly into the sea of water. "Someone help!! Please!" I scream "Please... Someone..." I keep screaming... Why can't I stop? But this consequently results my childhood friend diving in to the water to save me and my mother following him, thinking that it was her fault her hat blew. And my big father following to save all of us. Like always he saved my childhood friend and I in his arms, but like always the detestable wave splits his hand and my mothers hand. I wonder how many times I blamed the wave for its horrendous action...

The settings change again and my mother is in bed, with the doctor on board explaining that this will be our last moments with her... I can't help cry in the arms of my childhood friend no matter how many times I've been in this scene watching my pale mother and my heart-wrecked father...





My childhood friend's parents lament while apologizing for their son dragging me down and how all this wouldn't of had happened if it weren't for their son. But no, we all knew that it wasn't his fault and nobody blamed him, but we still parted as they moved away too shameful of seeing us, not that we blamed them. The last thing  that always happened in this dream was my first love and I exchanging fare-well presents. I never forget the tiger tooth bracelet I gave him and his 24-carrot diamond ring that he put on my right wedding finger. I sometimes wonder if he ever meant to put it on the left hand but he would always laugh and say that it costed him a fortune so I should take care of it well. He would also say "I need to tell you something really important, when we meet again, even if its in the future 5, 10, 15, 20 years from now" which then I would say "Why can't you tell me now?"jokingly but to be honest I still want it to be a surprise for when we meet again. "Just saying but I'll protect you." he would say, showing his attractive smile with his white teeth showing. I don't think I need to mention, that even though it sounds horrible, the ending is happy, do I? ^^



"Nnnn..." I slowly open my eyes wondering what the funny feeling is.  I can feel something on my hand.


..


...





....!!!?

"Maeda-san!!?" I shout out causing Maeda-san to open his eyes slowly.
"A little longer..." Maeda-san replies with his eyes closing again.


'.........!!!!!???? Takahashi-san!?' Maeda screams even louder than me as he opens his eyes as widely as ever.

OK, I try to recall what happened. I remember I was at the cafe and I don't know how I ended up here..

'Good morning, sorry I was just so surprised and forgot what happened.Yesterday, you fainted and so I took you home.'
'I'm just really glad you're awake now.' Maeda-san says.

I glance slightly at my hand which is still held by Maeda-san.


'Takahashi-san, I didn't do anything weird, by the way!! Uwahh..!!!! This is not what you think!!! You seemed to be having a night mare so I just tried to calm you down...' Maeda-san quickly releases my hand and gives me shy glances.


"Ano, Maeda-san, do you know what time it may be?" I ask politely.


'....!! We have to got to Hokkaido, immediately!' Maeda-san says after looking at his watch.

Hokkaido? Why do we have to go Hokkaido?

"My solo debut project starts today!!" I shout out unconsciously.

"Come on, Maeda-san" I say as I drag him along.



'Please wait, Takahashi-san' he says.
At first sight, you would think that Maeda-san is a good-looking, hard-working businessman or athlete but I find the more I talk to him, the more he seems like a sweet and shy, clumsy person.


"You can call me Takamina" I wink at him.

Feeling of love~
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Title: Re: "By the time I realised..."Ch6 UPDATE!! (after months!! 04.21
Post by: Archie28 on April 21, 2013, 03:02:15 PM
wahhh... finally an update  :shocked :shocked :shocked :bow: :bow:

but it's too short  :(

so Atsu and Minami were  childhood friends...  :twothumbs

Title: Re: "By the time I realised..."Ch6 UPDATE!! (after months!! 04.21
Post by: cisda83 on April 22, 2013, 02:10:44 PM
So AtsuMina are childhood friends...

Ah.. such a tragedic accident... for losing a parent in such a young age.

Ah... Atsu saying such a romantic words... about wanting to protect her

What's going to happen in Hokkaido?

Can't wait to see more

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: ANNOUNCEMENT
Post by: chibi-midgetlove on November 08, 2013, 11:49:34 PM
Hi every one! <3
I'm so sorry for how I haven't updated in a long time and I don't think I'll continue on this account anymore (i changed my username btw), I started a new account and I've decided that I want to post all my past, present and future stories on 1 thread. I'm sorry for all the trouble I may cause and please bare with me until I finish uploading all my stories.
And if you are interested my new username is
chibilove373
and the thread I post my stories on is:
http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=36298.0 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=36298.0)

And I'll try my best to keep everything neat and tidy from now on so I don't have to do this again!
So if you are interested please visit my thread and I might continue some stories or all my stories <3

Love, Rin (yes I had an internet name swap) <3