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Title: Say you love me Chapter 5 -Mayuki- Replay~
Post by: mo-chan on December 02, 2012, 01:32:42 AM
Ok first I want to say maybe I made it as the manga which has the same name or "Sukitte Iinayo"! But my fic is not the same story :D
I know I have two other fics and I didn't finish them but I wanted to start a new one  :nervous
I hope it wont be boring so here is the chapter



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Say you love me
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Chapter 1




<><>Years ago in elementry school<><>

The teacher: “Yesterday the rabbit that we had in our class has died, it seems like it ate something bad”

A boy:“You must be the responsible one, yesterday, I saw you three girls standing at the rabbit’s cage”

One of the three girls: “that.. Mayu-chan was..”

Little Mayu: “eh” *shocked*

The girl completed: “she said the it will eat anything, so she try feeding it”

The other girl:” I told her to not do it , but she did it anyway”

Little Mayu: it was’t me… I haven’t done… anything…everyone…why…”




<><><>at the present<><><>

A teenager girl wake up . she opens her eyes slowly. She puts her arm on her eyes and says:

“ again this dream…”

It was an other boring day of summer . The teen girl gets up from her bed and gets downstairs. She enters the living  room she sees the TV “boring as always”

she thinks  she passes by the kitchen sees her mother preparing breakfast .

“ good morning” she says

“ ah Mayu  good morning go take a shower till I finish” her mother says

Mayu goes to the bathroom . She undressed. She put her clothes on the pannier. She opens the tap and the water is poured on her head. She closed her eyes she

felts the warm water on her pale skin.

She was back to her sence when her mother called her and said:

“Mayu, don’t let the water just run”

“okey” Mayu replayed in lazy tone

After wearing her clothes Mayu went to eat with her mother.

“ I got the wind chimie out, feels like summer, doesn’t it?” the mother said in exited tone

“eeum, but isn’t it a bite late this year?” Mayu  replyed

“better late then never everything starts at some point”

“what’s that?”

“ a phrase from a song~” the mother said

“ yes yes” Mayu said

“mou you’re like a cyborg my cute daughter~”

After finishing eating Mayu go back to her room and she put her uniform. She took her bag and prepare herself to go to school.

“I’m going!” Mayu shouted

“ take care of yourself” her mother replayed who was getting ready to go to her work

In the way of school Mayu took her ipod she put her headphone and started listening to the Music ignoring the world she is inside. At the station too she waited the

metro alone. While a bunch of girls on Mayu’s back were talking looking at Mayu and laughing.

“ look look it’s her that weird girl”

“yes yes you’re right”

“I never saw her talking to anyone”

“you’re right she is really weird” and all the girls laughed . Mayu ignored them and continued to listen to her ipod.



<><><><>at school<><><><>

Mayu was walking in hallway of the school to attend her classroom. But three girl stopped her and got on her way.

“ Watanabe So I heard that you never had a boyfriend or a girlfriend before”  one of the girl said

Mayu looked at them then she continued walking.

“ are you ignoring me?”

“ I think that question was too intrusive” the other girl said

“ come now , we all know it’s been 16 year already” the third one said



<><><>Mayu’s PVO<><><>

“ the truth is, I haven’t had any friend in 16 years even until now in this girls high school . It’s been the same every year. There were only a few times when I was

in a group , that I could conveniently call ‘friends’ . but I relized .You’ll only get hurt if you have friends and that is something I don’t need”

<><><><><><><><><><><>



Two girls was walking on the hallway and the girls was looking at them. The two girls looks so cool. The older one She has a  milky white skin, long black silky hair

and a beautiful angelic face which make everyone fall for her smile. The younger one her high is near to the first one she has short black hair and pink lips which

formed a cat smile on it.

“yesterday was just unbelievable! I was trying my best to look good, because those girls tend to be cute

 but everyone was only interested in you” the younger one said

“ oh really!” the older replayed

“ Don’t act like you don’t notice. Certainly the cutest one had her eyes on you”

“euum”

“don’t look down on my skills”

“I think you should stop trying to kiss all the girls around you it will be more easy”

“ but it’s not my fault that they look damn cute” the younger said and hugged herself

“ yeah yeah” the older sigh

“ so did you give her your number?”

“no”

“wait!seriously!why!?”

“ what do you mean?It’s not like I have to give her my number”

“ such a cute girl, and she really looked like she wanted your number. What a waste!”

“ is it? She looked like any other girl to me”

“hmm as expected of our school’s most popular girl treating everyone equally  Kashiwagi Yuki”

“ are you being sarcastic Jurina?”

“ do you honestly believe that all the girls are alike?”

“no it’s just it’s more like I can’t understand what makes them so special-”

“ Yuki! good morning” a girl said

Jurina turned to the girl and smiled wildly she opened her arms and shouted:

“ Rena-chaaaan” and she wanted to hug the girl named Rena but Rena avoided Jurina and walked to Yuki and said to her

“ where did you go last night I thought you said you wanted to revise maths with me I called you but you didn’t answer” Rena said in a mad tone to Rena 

“ sorry I was out having dinner with some students from an other school” Yuki smiled apologetically

“ eeeeh why didn’t invite me too I was bored alone”

“ sorry I will invite you next time”

“ promise! In that case let’s go to karaoke with everybody” Rena said smiling

“em !good idea” Yuki smiled back

“ later” Rena said and walk away

Yuki turned to Jurina and realized that Jurina still in the same position her arms still open.

“ ano Jurina what are you doing?”

“ are you trying to take Rena away from me?”

“what?”

“ Rena-chan  is my angel!”

“ don’t act like that you know that Rena and me are best friends and that’s all”

“no it’s not like that Rena-chan is-“ Jurina pumped someone on her back and the girl from her back fell on the floor

“ sorry sorry” Jurina said really fast but the girl looked at Jurina and glared to her

“ well I didn’t do it on propose” Jurina said scared the girl got up and walked away

“ really what a weirdo”

“ who is it?” asked Yuki

“ you don’t know her . Watanabe Mayu . she is in the same class as me . but she’s always aloof and never talks. 

I wonder if anyone has ever heard her voice. I don’t understand her at all . She is the type I can’t handle.

“ euuh I see” Yuki said and smiled “ she is interesting” Yuki thought



<><><>at lunch time<><><>

“ I’m hungry let’s buy snucks!!” Jurina said exited

“ Jurina can act like a kid like always” Yuki said and her and Rena gigged .

“don’t say it I’m not a kid I’m only 1 year younger of you!!” Jurina shouted

“ aaah Jurina can’t be calm I feel so tired I wonder why we are having a morning assembly” a girl appeared from behind and sigh after talking

“ah! Yuko-san you scared me”

On their way to stairs Yuko sow two girls walking upstairs and covering with their hands their skirts. Yuko had a pervert green on her face and said:

“ you girls” and she run to them and said “ that’s outrageous”

“stop it! “ one of the girl said

“ pervert oshima” the other girl said

“ if you don’t like it then don’t shorten your skirts” Yuko said laughing

The other came to them

“ hey Yuko don’t be rude to them” Yuki said

“ I’m just letting them know it’s even more of a tease if you cover up it makes it look like you are asking for attention” Yuko said 

“ your bain must be rotten you know!” one of the two girl said

“ you sound like an old man!” the other one said

“ forget Oshima ! Yuki-san I heard you went out for dinner with some girls from the other high school was it a blund date?” the first girl said

“ no it was just a dinner ‘ Yuki said

“ not fair”

“ we want to go to a dinner with you too “

“ em next time”

“yeah!” all the girls said

“ you make so much promis Yukirin” Jurina sigh and looked to Yuko who still has her pervert look on her face . Yuko was watch the other side of the stairs.

“ What a rare sight a long skirt! It’s appealing in it’s own way “ Yuko said and waled up to the girl and said :” the person wearing the skirt is..” Yuko touched the

girl’s skirt

“eh!” the girl said

“ eh I don’t know you” Yuko said

“ eeeh Yuko-san it’s not good it’s Watanabe-san!! “ Jurina said panicking

Yuki walked next to Yuko and said : “ hey Yuko what do you think you are doing?”

Mayu’s face get white of anger and she kicked Yuki harshly on her face with her leg causing Yuki to fall from stairs .

The girls screamed at the acted watching the most popular of school got kicked.

Jurina run to help Yuki

“ Yukirin are you ok?”

“ you keep on saying it wasn’t on proposealways and always then WHAT’S YOUR PROBLEM? You’re persistent you idiot! Just die!!” Mayu said yelling and walked away


“ that’s mean!”

“ you didn’t even do anthing Yuki-san”

“ Yukirin I’m sorry it’s my fault” Yuko said sadly

Yuki was looking shocked by the act

“ Yukirin?” Rena said with a concern face

But suddenly Yuki started laughing “ it’s really hurt” Yuki said and continued laughing

“ did she hit your head?” Yuko asked worried

“ Watanabe Mayu..” Yuki though




so the chapter finished I hope you liked it ja ne bye~ :cathappy:
Title: Re: Say " I love you " {Mayuki} chapter 1
Post by: cmze on December 02, 2012, 01:47:46 AM
SO COOL!!  :yossi:

Yuki is so cuteeee!  :wub: she's so nice and i think she's already atractted to Mayu!  :inlove:

This is really good mo-chan hope you update soon!  :thumbsup

I hope to see more "cold Rena!" so funny  :rofl:
Title: Re: Say " I love you " {Mayuki} chapter 1
Post by: ILOVESAEYUKI-WMATSUI on December 02, 2012, 04:15:19 AM
omg I love this already :wub: thank you :heart: I'm really looking forward to the next chapter :twothumbs yay!! :cow:
Title: Re: Say " I love you " {Mayuki} chapter 1
Post by: kurogumi on December 02, 2012, 04:28:55 AM
Mo-chan-san! Aaah its been a while i dont read your fic (T^T) and this new one its awesome,

Im already fall in love when mayu kick yuki scene~ awww who not fall if someone like mayu kick you? LOL

Yuki must be have the same though too...at least she think mayu is an interesting person...

I love you!


I love you!

I love this fic! LOL LOL LOL LOL

Thank for the update...
Title: Re: Say " I love you " {Mayuki} chapter 1
Post by: Chanaline on December 02, 2012, 01:08:04 PM
OOOOOH!! :w00t:

Really interesting... I love Yukirin... And Mayu... She got a trauma and haven't friends...
Title: Re: Say " I love you " {Mayuki,WMatsui,KojiYuu and maybe others} chapter 1
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on December 02, 2012, 02:25:16 PM
awwwww mayu dont hurt yuki   :wth
hope yuki's alright  :heart:
Title: Re: Say " I love you " {Mayuki,WMatsui,KojiYuu and maybe others}chapter1<replay>
Post by: mo-chan on December 02, 2012, 03:04:15 PM
@cmze: I'm happy that you liked this fic but I love cmze-san's fics more  XD . Yes Yuki is kinda interrested in Mayu I still don't what Yuki will do  :cathappy:


@ ILOVESAEYUKI-WMATSUI: don't thatk me it's me who thank you I'm happy you liked it  :)


@kurogumi: aah sorry kuro-chan I was really busy these days and I had bad results on my exams  :( I kinda lost inspiration on the other fics  :banghead:  but I'll update in the others soon or maybe I'll cantinue this one see the others later I don't know what do you think  :? kuro-chan wanna a kick from Mayu  :rofl: don't fall in love with Mayu . Mayu is Yukirin's girl  :P


@Chanaline: you find it interesting like Yuki find Mayu interesting  8) yes Mayu got a trauma let's help Mayu then  ;)  thank you for review  :D


@mayuki_daisuki: don't worry Yuki will be okey she laughed this is a good sign  ;)  thank you for review  :D
Title: Re: Say " I love you " {Mayuki,WMatsui,KojiYuu and maybe others} chapter 1
Post by: kahem on December 03, 2012, 11:03:24 AM
hehe I like that kind of story ^^
Title: Re: Say " I love you " {Mayuki,WMatsui,KojiYuu and maybe others} chapter 1
Post by: mo-chan on December 03, 2012, 12:11:14 PM
@kahem: I'm happy you like it kahem-san  :D
Title: Re: Say you love me {Mayuki,WMatsui,KojiYuu and maybe others} chapter 2
Post by: mo-chan on December 03, 2012, 12:14:51 PM
Chapter 2 




<><>the same day after school<><>


Mayu   walked from her classroom she headed to her small brown locker. Rena twisted the lock of her locker. Finally, it opened, and a degusting smell hit her.

There was rotten fruit on top of her shoes and clamps inside it. She picks up everything and put it in the trash , she empty her shoes clamps.  at the end of her

locker , she sees a piece of paper. She took it . It was wrote on ””””Apologize you nitwit. Kicking someone is the worst thing you could do!””””

“ again bulling they can’t get tired of it” Mayu thought still looking at the piece of paper

“Watanabe-san!... Watanabe Mayu-san!” someone shouted

“euuh” Mayu looked at the owner of the voice . It was kashiwagi Yuki

“Hi” Yuki said and waved her hand . Yuki’s hand was blue , Mayu remembered how she kicked Yuki and Yuki dodged the hit with her hand which caused a blue

mark on Yuki’s hand.

 “ what do you  want of me?” Mayu said looking other way

“ I wanted to apologise” Yuki said smiling

“ apologise?” Mayu said and looked at Yuki surprised “ why you?” Mayu continued

“ I would, because It’s something my friend did. The one touched your skirt, is a good friend of mine . I heard that you are in the same class as Jurina “

“ well, I don’t talk much in class. “ Mayu said coldly and continue wearing her  shoses

“Sorry for Yuko, she always does what she wants but she doesn’t mean anything bad. You didn’t like it anyway, did you? Watanabe-san I’m sorry ” Yuki said softly

“ no… same here” Mayu sneezed the piece of paper in her hand and said looking down“ I apologize for kicking you instead”

Yuki started laughing when she remembered it .

“aah” looked at Yuki surprised by the sadden act of her

“It’s bit surprising after all.” Yuki said still laughing and she put her arms on her stomach

Mayu started blushing and looked down her look where look where milted between angry and sad.

“ ah sorry I didn’t want“

“ it’s alright” Mayu said and turned her back to Yuki

“ I think you are interesting “ Yuki said serious

“interesting…? So you’re saying it might be fun to tease me aren’t you?”

“ that’s not truth. I feel like you are the type of person I like”

“ I really don’t understand”

“ how should I put this…”

“ I don’t want to hear it” Mayu said coldly and started walking away

“ Wait Watanabe-san!! Wait” Yuki run to Mayu

“ you’re not done yet?”

“ let’s be friends” Yuki said softly with a big smile

“haa”

“ Let’s exchange numbers”

“ I don’t want it”

“ I just want your number”

“ I still don’t want to”

“ I see in that case , here take it call me anytime you want” Yuki a paper were wrot her phone number

Mayu took the piece of paper and give to Yuki a wound dressing” you hurt your hand when I kicked you right? Take this”

“un thanks” Yuki said blushing

“ but you know my hand won’t get better with just one small bandage” Yuki said (Yuki was waiting for something else like a kiss XD )

Mayu took from her bag a tone of bandages and said “ is this enough?” Mayu said showing them . Yuki was deceived  “ tell me if you need more” continued Mayu

“ no I didn’t mean that” Yuki said

“ then I really have to go now “ Mayu said and started walking

“ Mayu! “ Yuki shouted and showed the bandges to Mayu “ thank you see you tomorrow” Yuki said and smiled Mayu blushed and run away

“ I wonder if she hates me now” Yuki said sadly

<><>at the way of Mayu’s part time job<><>

Mayu was walking to home alone like always then she thought” that surprised me it’s been a while since I have talked in school. She gave me her number” She

looked at the piece of paper Yuki gave her and she remembered how Yuki smiled to her “ so there are people who can smile like that” Mayu blushed” what I’m

thinking about!! Anyway I don’t have a reason to call her .



<><>at the cosplay café <><>

“ Choco Danish please”

“ hai I’m coming!” Mayu said and went to take the order

“ Mayu-chan” the manager walked to Mayu

“ yes!”

“ do you have a fever? Your face is red”

“ it is not and I don’t have fever either” Mayu said nervous



<><>after her job Mayu back to home<><>

Mayu was on her bed looking at the paper “ I don’t want to worry about unnecessary things, since I will just be btryed again



<><>the next day at school<><>

Yuki saw Mayu on the hallway “ Mayu!!” Yuki shouted and waved her hand but Mayu ignored her



<><> the next day <><>

at the entry of school Yuki saw Mayu “ Mayu good morning” said smiling but Mayu ignored her again


<><>in break time<><>

“ Mayu!” Yuki shouted  but again Mayu ignored but this time kept following her

 “ why didn’t you call me? I was waiting you know?”

“ stop following me and I never said that I would call you in the first place “ Mayu said angry kept walking

“ just for a while”

“ I don’t want!”

“ eh? Don’t you talk to your friends?”

Mayu looked at Yuki and said “ I don’t have any friends here look to my phone I have only my home and my workplace numbers .People always brayed me and

the school is a place where I have to rely on others. It’s like a doll house you hang out together and pretend to be friends but when it suits them they just abandon

you I never had any desire to get along with people like that“ then started walking

Yuki shouted “ not everyone is like that! “

“ they are. I don’t need any friends “ Mayu said and walked away



here is the second chapter it's a bite short  :nervous  leave comment please  :cathappy:
Title: Re: Say " I love you " {Mayuki,WMatsui,KojiYuu and maybe others} chapter 2
Post by: kahem on December 03, 2012, 12:27:51 PM
Go Yuki make her be your friend and even more hehe
Title: Re: Say " I love you " {Mayuki,WMatsui,KojiYuu and maybe others} chapter 2
Post by: Lightning on December 03, 2012, 12:33:35 PM
Umh Yuki is quite iterested by Mayu! Very well ;)
Title: Re: Say " I love you " {Mayuki,WMatsui,KojiYuu and maybe others} chapter 2
Post by: ChuuuPuffss on December 03, 2012, 02:13:49 PM
Ah~ It's been a long time since I posted a review lol.

Mo-chaaaan! It's been so looooong! I hope you won't go disappear again lol~

You better update this as fast as you can! I like this one bwahaha

Update soooooon  :deco:
Title: Re: Say " I love you " {Mayuki,WMatsui,KojiYuu and maybe others} chapter 2
Post by: yuukimoko on December 03, 2012, 02:45:40 PM
hehe~ *smile* really interesting! i love how Yuki wont give up on Mayu~~~ so much love....
Title: Re: Say " I love you " {Mayuki,WMatsui,KojiYuu and maybe others} chapter 2
Post by: BbSis on December 03, 2012, 06:01:34 PM
Yo, Mo-chan! O/

Nice beginning :) I'm really curious now to see if Yuki will get what she wants huahua

Mayu is so strongminded xD

Thank you for the update o/

Ah! By any chance you got inspired by a manga that was recently turned into an anime? ^^^
Title: Re: Say " I love you " {Mayuki,WMatsui,KojiYuu and maybe others} chapter 2
Post by: Chanaline on December 03, 2012, 08:02:45 PM
alalala! Mayu... :smhid

I like it, it is really interesting... Yuki don't give up :twothumbs
Title: Re: Say " I love you " {Mayuki,WMatsui,KojiYuu and maybe others} chapter 2
Post by: cmze on December 03, 2012, 11:44:34 PM
Yuki don't give up!!  :thumbsup

that cold cyborg needs love!!  :inlove:

thanks for the update!!  :grin:

Please update soon!!  :bow:
Title: Re: Say " I love you " {Mayuki,WMatsui,KojiYuu and maybe others} chapter 2
Post by: JuRikki on December 04, 2012, 10:25:06 AM
Whoaa mo-chan!
What a great fic here.

Come on Yuki, you can! Mayu is really a cyborg.

Title: Re: Say " I love you " {Mayuki,WMatsui,KojiYuu and maybe others} chapter 2
Post by: Playgirlz on December 04, 2012, 01:11:45 PM
NEW MAYUKI'S FIC!!!!!!!!!! THANK YOU, I LOVE YOU XDDDDD

The plot seems interesting, so many Mayu being bullying recently lol

I really want to know what Yuki can do to change Mayu >:] please update soon

Title: Re: Say you love me {Mayuki,WMatsui,KojiYuu and maybe others} Characters+pics
Post by: mo-chan on December 08, 2012, 03:10:10 PM
@kahem: yes Yuki go!!  XD

@Lightning: yes Yuki is very interested in Mayu  :roll:

@ChuuuPuffss: exams made me disappeared all these days  :banghead: I'm happy you liked this fic  :cathappy:

@yuukimoko: Yuki annoyed Mayu  :lol:

@BbSis: yes I'm here  :jphip:  yes I got the idea from the anime of sukitteite  :twothumbs I will change it a bite XD but it will be the same story  :P

@Chanaline : yes I hope Yuki won't give up too  :deco:

@cmze: all with Yuki make Mayu yours!  :fap

@JuRikki: thank you I'm happy you like it

@Playgirlz: don't worry I'll stop bulling Mayu  :P


since I don't have no idea of what I'll write in the next chapter here some information of characters of this fics




characters


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Watanabe Mayu
Mayu was a social person before, but because of an accident that made her classmates put the blame on her, she decided never to befriend anyone again.She has an attitude of cyborg but the truth she is honest, supportive, and funny. Her father works out of country so she live with her mother.


(https://fbcdn-sphotos-c-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/297227_496364437050528_330374856_n.jpg)
Kashiwagi Yuki
Yuki also called Yukirin by her best friend is the one of the most popular girls in her school. When she first meets Mayu, she gets kicked by her. Then, she eventually grows a liking to her.
Yuki is someone who thinks of others more than anyone else, protects what should be protected, and cares for others despite having his own problems to deal with.


(https://fbcdn-sphotos-g-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-prn1/18232_496367073716931_1378141229_n.jpg)
Matsui Jurina
Jurina is one of Mayu's classmates, and a good friend of Yuki's. she has a big crush on Rena . She is popular too like Yuki .She likes flirt aroud and kissing cute girls .


(https://encrypted-tbn3.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcS8Nu1NgZNBbc870hRML13fH-YLeJZBMpn77dXdzpP7Di74fOXA)
Matsui Rena
Rena is not related even they have the same last name. She is one of Yuki's good friends and classmate. We always don't know what she is thinking about. She is been always rejecting Jurina's calls.

(https://encrypted-tbn2.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcRGG5sOFD5bkgKMBmQkorDfnzx8kJVVbqtI9Is_maUFUQnrzdNs)
Oshima Yuko
Yuko is Yuki's friend and classmate.She is a real pervert she only thinks and get exited about butts and boobs. She has a crush on her classmate Kojima Haruna

(https://encrypted-tbn2.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcRFQfVJuQzuhMGESCR4XuY00BW7AHKvKVaHS57KkQS4iGybkeNc)
Kojima Haruna
Haruna is Yuki's friend and classmate too . She has a complex about her large chest.

(https://fbcdn-sphotos-h-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-prn1/12194_496380323715606_537376281_n.jpg)
Takajo Aki
Aki is Yuki's classmate. She's brash and bad-mouthed, but a nice girl.

(http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mar9lb943C1r8s56vo1_500.jpg)
Kuramochi Asuka
Aki's lover and childhood friend. She loved Aki from time ago.

(https://fbcdn-sphotos-c-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash3/68845_496382630382042_684198193_n.jpg)
Kashiwagi Haruka
Haruka is Yuki's little sister . she is also called Paru only by Yuki

(http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_luefxsxutq1qbrgi8o1_500.jpg)
Ota Aika
Aika is an amateur model she is called Lovetan as an idol.

(https://fbcdn-sphotos-e-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash3/c0.0.375.375/p403x403/61344_496387313714907_1534224883_n.jpg)
Miyazawa Sae
You will find out later  :P
Title: Re: Say you love me {Mayuki,WMatsui,KojiYuu and maybe others} characters+pics
Post by: yuukimoko on December 08, 2012, 03:20:47 PM
no ideas? mou~ Mo-chan~ ideas come when you are not looking for them~

So watch a movie, read a book, have fun, and when you will think in a moment of relaxation in these times, you will somehow end in a 'what if' and these are what help the ideas.I hate 'what if's but they help ideas.

I love the photos~~~ Mayu and Yuki~~~~
Title: Re: Say you love me {Mayuki,WMatsui,KojiYuu and maybe others} characters+pics
Post by: kahem on December 08, 2012, 03:25:34 PM
I loled at Sae xD
Title: Re: Say you love me {Mayuki,WMatsui,KojiYuu and maybe others} characters+pics
Post by: mo-chan on December 08, 2012, 06:49:35 PM
@yuukimoko: don't worry yuuki-chan I got many ideas after  :grin: I'll post it this night the chapter a present for yuuki-chan I'll make mayuki kiss  :cathappy:
@kahem:
I loled at Sae xD
why?  XD
Title: Re: Say you love me {Mayuki,WMatsui,KojiYuu and maybe others} characters+pics
Post by: ChuuuPuffss on December 08, 2012, 07:00:07 PM
Mo-chaaaan~ Updatoooo! :3

Wheeen? I'm rolliinnnggg now lolol.

Hope you better keep what you said to Yuuki-chan. Lol I wonder when tonight is in your country xD
Title: Re: you love me{Mayuki,WMatsui,KojiYuu and maybe others} chapter 3 : first kiss
Post by: mo-chan on December 08, 2012, 07:26:34 PM
@ChuuuPuffss: don't worry Chuu-chan I keep my promise  ;) and about the time now it's night and It's 19h20 now

sorry to keep you wait minna-san! here is the chapter  :thumbsup





Chapter 3
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<><>same day same time same place when Mayu walked away and let Yuki alone<><>


“ ah we found out Yuki!” a girl shouted and hugged Yuki

“ah Haruna” Yuki said smiling patting Haruna’s head

“don’t touch my Harunya!!!” Yuko started yelling

“ I’m not yours Yuko” Haruna glared to Yuko and let Yuki

“ what are you spacing out for?” asked Rena

“ you’re always after Watanabe-san” Jurina said smirking

“ ehhh that scary girl” Yuko said

“ What do you mean scary girl?” Haruna asked

“ well It was really an accident her skirts where so long that I wanted to know what is behind it” Yuko said in innocent look

“ pervert! Of course she would be scary all girls will get angry if you do it to them!” Haruna said

“ but it wasn’t really my fault her skirt where att-“

“what a lame excuse” Rena said rolling her eyes

“ even you Rena-chan” Yuko said teary

 “ I think Watanabe-san doesn’t like you Yukirin she’s been avoiding you all the time” Jurina said

“ eeeh! you think?” Yuki said in a sad tone

“ un! Un! “ all said and nodded at the same time

“ you all don’t say un un “ Yuki said and sigh

“ Let’s go to karaoke together! You promised remember!” Rena said to Yuki

“ yeah of course I remember let’s go then” Yuki said smiling

“ let’s invite cute girls with us” Jurina said smirking

“ Let’s choose girls who have big boobs!” Yuko said jumping

Rena and Haruna sighed at the act of Jurina and Yuko

“ you really don’t have anything else on your mind you two”  Haruna said

“ Isn’t it more fun with cute girls?” Jurina replayed

 Rena only faceplamed

“maa maa you know them let’s have fun” Yuki said smiling

Someone where looking the group of girls from far not really happy.




<><>Mayu work’s place <><>

“ I’m off manager-san I’ll go now” Mayu said

“ okey good work Mayu-chan!” the Manager said

“ thanks manager-san  good work you too good night” Mayu said and she walked out of the otaku coffe.

 Behind it stinted a guy . He is a regular comer in Mayu’s work place.

It was night Mayu was walking back to home the same guy was walking all the time on her back .

 Mayu got really scared the guy had been fowling her for almost all the way. She entered in the nearest convenient store .

 She was really terrified . She took her mobile phone and called home but no one answer.



<><>Mayu’s PVO<><>

“ that man he always comes to sit in the otaku coffee I work in doesn’t he?

Is he following me or is it just a coincidence but he’s standing there outside looking at me.

 What if it isn’t coincidence and he’s really been following me? Mom please pick up!!

<><>end of PVO<><>


Mayu looked at the piece of paper Yuki gave to her.


 <><>In karaoke<><>

I want you !

I need you !

 I love you !

Haato no oku janjan afureru itoshi sa ga

 Hebii rooteeshon

Hebii rooteeshon
♫♫♩♪ ” Haruna ended the her song

“ Harunya! You’re the best!” Yuko shouted

One girl of the girls Jurina and Yuko invited  ended up all around Yuki she took the mic “ here Yuki it’s your turn”

“thanks” Yuki attented to take the mic *ring ring* her phone is ringing

“ ah excuse me for a second” Yuki said

she took her phone and answered “ moshi moshi”

“ well it’s Watanabe…”

“eh!”

“ save me please save me”  Mayu said

“calm down Mayu . where are you now?” Yuki asked

“at the convenient store near the 8th district”

“ stay where you are I’ll be right there!”

“ yes”




<><>at the convenient store <><>


Yuki entered the store looking for Mayu. When she found her she run to her. Mayu was trembling she was really scared.

“ what happened?” Yuki asked Mayu

“ that man outside he always comes by my workplace” Yuki looked and saw the man outside

“ he’s been following me since I left the shop he followed me all the way here”

“ how long have you been here?” asked Yuki

“ for about half an hour” Mayu answered

“ that’s called being stalked!” Yuki yelled

“ I didn’t know what to do my mother wouldn’t pick up the phone I didn’t have anyone else I could call”

“ leave it to me” Yuki wicked to Mayu

Yuki went and took something and bought it

“ it’s XXXyen” the man’s store said

“ here XXXyen” Yuki gave the money

“ thank you very much” the man’s store said and bowed

“ Kashiwagi-san what are you doing?” Mayu asked confused

“ here!” Yuki showed Mayu what she bought

“ ice-cream?” Mayu said

“ I need something to cool down after running all the way here” Yuki said smiling

“ I see”

“ I know what to do” Yuki said put herself next Mayu and she put her arm around Mayu’s neck “let’s go” Yuki said and dragged her out

“ eh what are you doing wait!” Mayu said

The same guy still waiting for Mayu . Mayu started trembling again and looked down.

“ It’s alright” Yuki said Mayu looked to Yuki’s face. Yuki was serious.

The guy started to go to their way . Mayu couldn’t face him so she closed her eyes .

 But a warm voice called her the owner of the voice was only Yuki.

“ Mayu!” Yuki called her again

Mayu looked to Yuki and Yuki said softly “ Mayu I love you”

“eh”   before being surprised by Yuki said to her she was even surprised when she felt a pair of lips kissing hers sweetly . Mayu’s eyes were open wide but the guy

faced the back of hers he didn’t saw it when he sow the kissing scene he walked away


<><>Mayu’s PVO<><>

She kissed me. I don’t know what kind of fate this

<><>end of PVO<><>



“he left” Yuki said relived

Mayu was really surprised that she couldn’t  move

“ Mayu?” Yuki looked at Mayu who was all red


<><>Mayu’s PVO<><>

I…. I for the first time… my first kiss




I hope you will like it  :catglare:
please comment~  :cathappy:
Title: Re: you love me{Mayuki,WMatsui,KojiYuu and maybe others} chapter 3 : first kiss
Post by: Chanaline on December 08, 2012, 08:14:16 PM
I LOVE IT!!!!! :inlove:

Ahahahah! Yuki!! :wub:

And Jurina, Yuko... :smhid
Title: Re: you love me{Mayuki,WMatsui,KojiYuu and maybe others} chapter 3 : first kiss
Post by: yuukimoko on December 08, 2012, 09:22:14 PM
kyaaaaaaa~~~~

Like that Yukiiiiiiii!!! good job tiger!!! *grin*

I just hope Mayu wont be mad or something....

Go Yuki go~~~~!!!!
Title: Re: you love me{Mayuki,WMatsui,KojiYuu and maybe others} chapter 3 : first kiss
Post by: BbSis on December 08, 2012, 10:00:20 PM
Wooooow! Yukirin taking the lead! *.*

That was a great update o/

I think Mayu should scold Yuki and Yuki should ran after Mayu *.*

My friend showed me the anime heuheuhe and I think it's a very good story. Keep going o/

Thank you for the update *.*
Title: Re: you love me{Mayuki,WMatsui,KojiYuu and maybe others} chapter 3 : first kiss
Post by: kurogumi on December 08, 2012, 11:12:05 PM
Ehh!!? Wow uh i need the next chapter!

I need yuki POV for explanation what she was doing to mayu awww its sweet,yuki stole mayu first kiss!


Thank for the update
Title: Re: you love me{Mayuki,WMatsui,KojiYuu and maybe others} chapter 3 : first kiss
Post by: alexsher99 on December 09, 2012, 01:56:19 AM
Wow this fic. is awesome can't wait for the next chapter!!!!


 :cool2:
Title: Re: you love me{Mayuki,WMatsui,KojiYuu and maybe others} chapter 3 : first kiss
Post by: ChuuuPuffss on December 09, 2012, 04:51:49 AM
Asdfghjklqwertyuiopzxcvbnm!

I just hope Yukirin meant that kiss~ Bwahahaha!

Thanks for the update :3
Title: Re: you love me{Mayuki,WMatsui,KojiYuu and maybe others} chapter 3 : first kiss
Post by: Playgirlz on December 09, 2012, 04:54:57 AM
Yuki looks so mature XDDD And there's so many characters XD

The new chapter is so cute, and Mayuyu lol at her reaction, she must be very shock. I wonder if someone in the school see them >:]

Thank you, please update soon
Title: Re: you love me{Mayuki,WMatsui,KojiYuu and maybe others} chapter 3 : first kiss
Post by: DC2805 on December 09, 2012, 12:02:03 PM
mayu needs to open up and makes more friends.

and yuki, she did that on purpose right? stealing someone's first kiss ... hahaha! winner!  :theking
Title: Re: you love me{Mayuki,WMatsui,KojiYuu and maybe others} chapter 3 : first kiss
Post by: kahem on December 10, 2012, 02:21:58 AM
Because it said 'you will see' and it made me laugh, I don't why xd
Yuki good job!!!!
Title: Re: you love me{Mayuki,WMatsui,KojiYuu and maybe others} chapter 4
Post by: mo-chan on December 11, 2012, 11:05:19 PM
I'm sorry all I will only update the chapter I'm really busy thank you to all who commented and I'm sorry for who was waiting for something else
about Yuki she only kissed Mayu to save her or it isn't?  :nervous
I had a little I think this chapter will be boring  :catglare:




Chapter 4


<><>in karaoke<><>

“what song should we sing next?” a girl said

“ I wonder” an other girl said

“ hey Yuko-senpai  what are eating anyway?”

“this is delicious want some Harunya?” Yuko asked Haruna

“ you eat too much” Haruna said pouting

“what”

“did you see that commercial last night?” a girl said

“it was so cute wasn’t it?” Jurina said to the girl

“It was adorable!” the other girl said ( girls Jurina invited)

“ I told you.  you are eating too much!” Haruna said to Yuko

“ but Harunya I’m hungry..” Yuko  said

“ If you let me touch your boobs then I’ll stop eating” Yuko said smirking

“ forget it then” Haruna said and looked away

“ Harunya…” Yuko said sadly

“Watanabe-san did you choose a song?”  Rena asked Mayu

“ I can’t sing” Mayu said looking other way

“ I see.. here you go” Rena said and give the mic to Yuki

“ Mayu you’re not going to sing?”

“ you heard what a pity I wanted to listen to Watanabe-san’s voice singing” Rena said capped her two hands and smiled

Mayu kept staring to Yuki who was thinking. She was looking exactly to the lips of Yuki. Then she started blushing.

 She remembered how Yuki kissed her yesterday.

“ Mayu!”

“…”

“Mayu”

“…”

“ Mayu” Yuki kept calling for her but she didn’t answer so she got up and sited next to her .

“ let’s sing something together Mayu  okey? ” Yuki said showing the mic to Mayu . But Mayu was only foxed 

on the lips of the girl who is in front of her. Mayu's

face turned red again . when relized what she was thinking about and looking . She slapped Yuki’s hand which made

Yuki fall the mic of her hand. There was a silence on the room and looked to Mayu.  Mayu couldn’t beer it so she took her bag and run away.


<><>out on the way<><>

Mayu was really sad of what she did to Yuki a while ago. She felt embarrassed and guilty at the same time.

The kiss with Yuki was repeating again and again in her mind.


<><>flashback<><>

After the kiss. Mayu was really embarrassed and her face was a red to ears . She was standstill she couldn’t move.

“Mayu? What are you blushing for?” asked Yuki surprised

“eh!”

“ you know why I did it don’t you?” Yuki asked concerned

“ I know I did know you did it to get rid of that man ” Mayu shouted nervously

“ I know..” Mayu kept saying it but she was all red

“ don’t tell me this was your first.. sorry I-” Yuki said worried

“ It’s alright you don’t need to apologize!” Mayu kept shouting

“but-“

“ I told you it’s alright!” Mayu yelled

The silence reigned in the area it didn’t last long when Mayu broke that silence.

“ to tell you the truth I didn’t expect you to come”

“why? Is there a reason for me to not to come?” asked Yuki

“ I was happy when you called me. I was able to help you out” Yuki continued talking kindly

“ didn’t you need me?”

“ well I-I needed you this time!” Mayu shouted nervously

“ this time you say!” Yuki said

Mayu looked down.

“ then can I call you in return?” Yuki asked

“eh?”

“ call history” Yuki said smiling and showed her phone. Mayu pouted when she saw it.

“ I almost forgot”  Yuki said then she took one of the ice-cream and gave it to Mayu.

<><>end of flashback<><>

“Mayu!!!” someone shouting

Mayu turned her back and saw the person and whispered “ Yuki..”

Yuki run to Mayu and stopped in front of her.

“ aaah I’m exhausted” Yuki said try to catch breath

“Mayu let’s walk home together” Yuki suggested

“aaaah!! I-I’ll pay for my half of the ice-cream” Mayu said trying to look for her money on her bag

“ you don’t need to I already got something in return” Yuki said laughing 

 “ah!” Mayu looked to Yuki

“ your first kiss” Yuki said smiling

Mayu got surprised by what Yuki said and started blushing then she started walking and Yuki followed her.

<><>Mayu’s PVO<><>

I can’t understand her. But I think I’ll trust her .

<><>end of Mayu’s PVO<><>


Mayu was reading a manga and waiting for a certain someone at the metro station

“ Mayu!!” Yuki shouted

“ you’re late” Mayu said angry

The metro was very busy of people.

“ are you alright Mayu” Yuki asked conserned

“un” Mayu answered but someone pushed her so Yuki her arms around her. Mayu started blushing.

* ringing alarm clock in the morning*

Mayu woke up from her sleeping .

“what was that?” Mayu said shocked of her dream


<><>Mayu’s PVO<><>

Kashiwagi Yuki is the most popular girl in our school. Compared to her  I have no friends and don’t even exist. Yet…

<><>end of Mayu’s PVO<><>


<><> at school <><>

Mayu was putting her shoes in the locker .

“ good morning” someone said

Mayu saw it was Yuki she got nervous

“ W-what it!?”

“ didn’t you hear me calling you? Good morning” Yuki said smiling

“good morning” Mayu replayed looking other way

“ Yuki-senpai!!”

“ ah I coming then see you later Mayu” Yuki said and went to the source of the voice.

“ Watanabe-san!!” someone shouted

“ah” Mayu tourned her back

“who are you all? I only know that pervert” Mayu pointed to Yuko

“eeeh I said It wasn’t my fault really” Yuko said

“ apologise now Yuko!” Haruna said angry

“ but Harunya It wa-“

“ Now or I wont talk to you ever again!!”

“ Hai I’m really sorry about what I did that day” Yuko kneeled and said sorry to Mayu

“ It’s ok you don’t have to do it” Mayu said “ they are so weird” Mayu thought

“ how can you forget us we went to karaoke all together yesterday I’m Matsui Jurina you can

 I’m your classmate you can call me Jurina“ Jurina said with a cat smile

“ I’m Matsui Rena I’m Yukirin’s classmate” Rena said

“ you are siblings?” Mayu said and looked to the two Matsui

“ no we’re not!” Jurina shouted

“ I would never like to be to be relived to such a pimp girl” Rena said mad and walk away

“ Rena-chan wait I’m going before I go I’m Kojima Haruna I’m also Yuki’s classmate” She said and followed her

“Wait for ma Harunya don’t leave me alone” Yuko stand up and run after Haruna

“ Rena-chan why are you so cold always with me” Jurina said sobbing

“ they are all weird” Mayu thought and rolled her eyes


<><>at class<><>

“ yesterday I was surprised that you went home so suddenly last night” Jurina said

“I’m sorry” Mayu apologized  to Jurina

“ let’s go out again sometimes Yuki would be happy if you come”

“eh!”

“ I almost forget yesterday I bought this stuff on my way home I bought two I got one for you” Jurina said smiling

“ thank you”


I'm sorry for this sorry chapter but I hope you comment  :catglare:
I have chemistry test tomorrow at school wish me luck mata ne~
Title: Re: you love me{Mayuki,WMatsui,KojiYuu and maybe others} chapter 4
Post by: Chanaline on December 11, 2012, 11:51:12 PM
Ahaaaaa! Mayu is jus too kawaiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Title: Re: you love me{Mayuki,WMatsui,KojiYuu and maybe others} chapter 4
Post by: jell_o_jello on December 12, 2012, 02:49:45 AM
Mayu is getting soft, I see.


Good luck for your exam! Will be waiting for your update! :cow:
Title: Re: you love me{Mayuki,WMatsui,KojiYuu and maybe others} chapter 4
Post by: kahem on December 13, 2012, 12:57:48 AM
Hum I wonder if Rena would be jealous if she sees Jurina with Mayuyu
Title: Re: Mean Atsumina os
Post by: TakaminaBG on December 14, 2012, 04:00:48 PM
This is so sad!! Acchan.... she.. she is dying right???  :gyaaah:
Title: Re: Mean Atsumina os
Post by: Haruko on December 15, 2012, 05:00:21 AM
not atsumina!!!
Title: Re: Mean Atsumina os
Post by: miayaka on December 15, 2012, 01:22:23 PM
 :on speedy: :on speedy: :on speedy: :on speedy:
acchan why oh why T_T
Title: Re: Mean Atsumina os
Post by: cisda83 on December 21, 2012, 06:41:11 AM
Thank you for the stories.

I like both stories (Say you love me & Mean)

I can't wait to see the update.

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :theking

Title: Re: Mean Atsumina os
Post by: ChuuuPuffss on December 26, 2012, 10:53:07 AM
Mo-chan, I just noticed something lol. Isn't 'Say You Love Me', 'Sukitte Iinayo' the anime? XD

Lol~ Nice idea making it an AKB fiction! Hope you update soon, though lol
Title: Re: Mean Atsumina os
Post by: stepk on December 26, 2012, 03:15:22 PM
great fanfic.  :inlove:
the couple mayuki & atsumina really like it.  :thumbsup
please update
Title: Re: Mean Atsumina os
Post by: chemicalstar on December 26, 2012, 06:07:06 PM
Mou.. i don't want Acchan pass away :'(
Title: Re: Mean Atsumina os
Post by: FNK23 on December 26, 2012, 08:34:09 PM
mo-chan, whats on earth you going to do with acchaan ??!  :OMG:
i trusted you, please, dont hurt acchan and takamina feeling will you ?  :shifty:
please update soon~  :tantrum: :tantrum:
Title: [ mo-chan's Fanfics ] Kinjirareta Futari | one-shot
Post by: mo-chan on December 30, 2012, 12:47:07 PM
@TakaminaBG and @chemicalstar: why the you think I'm going to kill Acchan  :shocked
@miayaka: in the next upadate she will tell you why  :P
@cisda83 and stepk : sorry I'll make you wait more.  :(
@ChuuuPuffss: hey Chuu-chan long time no see  :lol: yes about Mayuki's fanfic you don't like Sukitte Iinayo Mayuki remake  :P
@FNK23:  what are you going to do if I do something to Acchan :lol: good I'll kill her then  :twisted: I'm joking  :rofl:


Removed for the new rules
Title: Re: [ mo-chan's Fanfics ] Kinjirareta Futari | one-shot
Post by: BbSis on December 30, 2012, 01:30:59 PM
Yeeeey o/ finally a incest here *.*

Loved it o/ thank you o/
Title: Re: [ mo-chan's Fanfics ] Kinjirareta Futari |wmatsui| one-shot
Post by: korin48 on December 30, 2012, 03:53:40 PM
Oh you are back, mo-chan...   
Acchan is dying??  :mon whine:
An indirect kiss of AtsuMina!  :mon lovelaff:
I love 3 of these fanfics!!  :mon XD:
Please update soon!  :mon pray2:
Title: Re: [ mo-chan's Fanfics ] Kinjirareta Futari |wmatsui| one-shot
Post by: JuRikki on December 31, 2012, 05:59:57 AM
OMG, I love this incest os :cry: I love it :cry:

Thank you :kneelbow
Title: Re: [ mo-chan's Fanfics ] Kinjirareta Futari |wmatsui| one-shot
Post by: xxx220 on December 31, 2012, 06:46:46 AM
It kind of Sad....I even cried.... :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:

What...I quite didn't understand the story...Rena is Deaf ???...Really... :? :? :? :?

I LOVE THIS FIC
Title: Re: [ mo-chan's Fanfics ] Kinjirareta Futari |wmatsui| one-shot
Post by: mo-chan on December 31, 2012, 10:53:25 AM
@BbSis: I'm happy that you like this kind of fic  :D
@correnereyes: no Acchan won't die  I said it earlier  :catglare:
@JuRikki: I'm happy you like it I put all my feelings on it
@xxx220: don't cry it's a fic  :P yes Rena had an accident caused gher deafness so she can't hear she read what the other say by see her/his lips  :D
Title: Say you love me Chapter 5 -Mayuki-
Post by: mo-chan on June 16, 2013, 11:25:44 PM
I'm really really sorry I updated very late   :( But still I want someone read my fic  :nervous But this break made me think of lot of think and made me change things in this fic  :roll: Be careful drama is coming in the next chapter  XD
 I'm thinking about writing a Mayuki one-shot too  :lol: I hope you will like this chapter  :sweatdrop:
and  @momondmozide: momo-chan sorry for making you wait  :(




Chapter 5



You’ll see. I’ll take my revenge. I will make you suffer. Like you made me and all my family suffer. If you didn’t show then we would be ok. We would be a happy

family without any problem. It’s your entire fault. Yes it’s all you fault...

.....

....

...

..

.


###


“RingRing”

I heard the music of my phone right beside me. So I opened my eyes and I woke up from my dreams. I really hate waking up Sunday but I have to go to my part time job. I slowly stood up from my bed took a quick bath and rushed to wear my clothes. After that I went to my job.

At the maid café, I got in the dressing room to put my uniform. Then the ceo called for me saying that he has something to tell me.

“Watanabe-chan I want you to know our new worker. Kashiwagi-san! Here Watanabe-chan she is our best worker here you can ask her whatever you want and
she will help you”

“Ah! You!” I shouted pointing my finger to her. For my surprise, it was a new worker was nor then Kashiwagi Yuki.

“Hi Mayu-chan~” She waved to me smiling.

I was really shocked seeing her here. Why she is here? Of all part time job she wanted this one? Why?

The ceo’s laugher snapped me from my spacing.

“It’s easier than if the two of you know each other. Ok! Ok! Let’s work! Let’s work!” I looked to the girl who is still smiling to me. The truth it’s creepy me out.

“Heuh Mayu-chan... We really should wear this?” Yuki asked me and kept looking to her uniform.

“It’s a cosplay café what do you want else? If you would not then you should have applied for a normal café not like this one.”  I told her coldly

“But I thought we would wear something else...” She had a disappointed look when she said it.

“Among all the characters the maid offers has a relaxing atmosphere. That’s what Manager-san told me when I got this job the first time.” 

“Aaah I see...”

“If you can’t do you can qu-“

“No! I’ll do my best!”

“Ok... So you need to know that we are prone to have more male customers and the female customers come during the tea time hours. For now I think you can go to the kitchen to make coffee for morning customers. If you need something call me” After finishing my explanations I went to take orders.

“cakhshhh”I heard a loud crash. It was from kitchen. It’s Yuki! I rushed to the source of the sound. I saw a panicking Yuki trying to stop the coffeemaker and the coffee was slipping everywhere.

“Mayu!! Help me!!” Without even waiting for a second, I unplugged the outlet with speed.

“You put too much coffee beans!!”

“I’m sorry I didn’t know how much I have to put” She apologised as she began cleaning.Did she do it on propose? I sighed and I told her to make juice and I continued cleaning on the floor. But still I’m asking myself why she is here. She is not the kind of daughter who needs a part time job. I thought that she is rich...

“What are you doing!!?”

“You told me to make juice”

“Yes I know! No it’s not it I mean you should you have to cut the fruit first! If you put them like that you will broke the mixer!”

“Aaah really I didn’t know it!” She took a knife and a plank and starting cutting. But I have a bad feeling saying her taking that knife.

“Itai!” I knew it. She cut her finger. I took her hand and I placed it under the tap as the water flowed.

“Here is a plaster” She took it and she put it. Seriously! why she is always so clumsy? She always ends up having my plasters.

“Geez! This girl! I’ll show you how” As I showed her how.

“I see!! Let me try!” She said as she took from my hand.

“No! It’s not like that you’ll hurt yourself again” I put my hand on hers and I showed her. When I have realized that I was too close from her, I backed away.

“Aaah!! I did it!! I did it!! Thank you Mayu-chan!!” She thanked and she smiled like she always does. But for some reason my face all red

“Are you ok Mayu-chan?” My heart started beating so fast. It made me remember that day. My co-worker got in and she broke the atmosphere.

“Oh! G-good morning Kuramochi-san!”  I snapped at her.

“Y-Yes good morning Watanabe-san you loud this day not as you do”

“Oh Asuka-chan!”

“Yuki-chan! What are you doing here?”So they know each other. It doesn’t really surprise me because Yuki and Kuramochi-san have the same age.

“I’m working here from today!”

“Eeeeeh Don’t tell me you let her alone in the kitchen Watanabe-san!!”

“Y-yes”

“Do never let Yuki-chan in the kitchen. Ok!”

“Yes!”

“You’re so mean Asuka-chan. I’m not that bad. Right Mayu-chan?”

“For someone who slipped all coffee everywhere, almost broke the mixer and doesn’t even know how to cut fruits. It’s really...”

“I told you so!” Kuramochi-san shouted at Yuki.

“Mou!”I think that what Kuramochi-san said it true. Letting Yuki in the kitchen is dangerous. If I was not there Yuki would be kicked out from this part time job from today. Thanks to me it didn’t happen. She was rather good in taking orders.  She got many fans even it was her first day.
At night woks ended. When I got out I found Yuki leaning on the wall who still waiting for me in the corner.

“Good work Mayu-chan! Let’s walk home together!”  I did not say anything. I just walked away and she kept following me. I t was the absolute silence. No one of
us said something. Halfway I stopped walking and I kept staring at her.

“Why?”

“Mayu-chan?” She was confused.

“Why you’re here with me now? Why you choose the same part-time? Why you ke-" It was really fast. For three or four second I felt her lips on mine. I felt my world froze and my cyborg system hacked.  She tilted her head as she said:

“I want to be with you all the time. I like you Mayu-chan.”

 I couldn’t bear this new feeling. My knees buckled and I fell if it was not Yuki who caught me I would be on the floor.

“What’s wrong Mayu!?”

“I-I don’t know” Yuki sighed in relieve then chuckled to my respond. She hugged me more tightly and she told me to not be shy. After that I went back to home. I went straight to my room and I didn’t even to what my mother was saying to me. I threw myself on my bed. I still can feel my heart beating very fast. I feel all hot. I can’t breathe properly. Is this love?
On Monday I went to school like usually I do. But I don’t know why, inside me there is this feeling telling me to not go.  I went in the classroom and I sat on my place. Afterward Jurina arrived, she came next to me and she stared babbling. I really didn’t pay attention at all what she was talking about. I was thinking about someone.  Suddenly a girl from my classroom I don’t remember her name came running yelling that she had news.

“ I heard that a girl will be transferred at our class!!” 

All the class was excited about it I even saw Jurina grinning and saying to herself and “Hope she is a cute!!”

“But!! There is another big news!!” The girl cut us again

What again!

“Miyazawa-sempai came back!!”

“Kyaaaaaaa!!!”

Miyazawa? I didn’t know who she is. I turned to look to Jurina. I was surprised by her reaction she was rather shocked than surprised.

Then I looked again to the news girl and she said:“I wonder if Miyazawa-sempai will come back to Yuki-sempai..”

What...


Title: Re: Say I love you Chapter 5 -Mayuki-
Post by: Shinoki on June 16, 2013, 11:58:25 PM
So... I read this... and then I was like...
how did I not notice this before...
godly writing...!!!!
yups, yuki + kitchen = either food poisoning or explosions or just destruction...
sae-chan nooooo!! Mayuki hasn't developed enough...
well, life is life, what happens is what happens~
test their bonds yosh!
Title: Re: Say I love you Chapter 5 -Mayuki-
Post by: rochilu on June 17, 2013, 12:41:10 AM
yatta! i'm happy that you're still writing this fic :3
Waa, Sae came for Yuki? so... she is her ex girfriend? and what was that in the beggining of the chapter?
Revenge? who is talking? :O
i'm waiting for your next chapter ! ^^
Title: Re: Say I love you Chapter 5 -Mayuki-
Post by: momondmozide on June 17, 2013, 02:08:18 AM
wohoow drama is coming...  :twothumbs
I really wish it will not take a very long time for you to update this fic maybe its rude, but I really like this storiea yosshhh  :inlove:


looking forward for the next and thx for the update :jphip:
Title: Re: Say I love you Chapter 5 -Mayuki-
Post by: gek geki on June 17, 2013, 02:58:19 AM
Eh i dont know you wrote this before,its good you should continue
Title: Re: Say I love you Chapter 5 -Mayuki-
Post by: cisda83 on June 17, 2013, 10:34:09 AM
It's been a while... thought you discontinued it...

It's getting more and more interesting...

Yeah... more drama developing....

Can't wait to see the drama between the main characters and Sae...?

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Say I love you Chapter 5 -Mayuki-
Post by: Terragen on June 17, 2013, 11:21:12 AM
i love u
Title: Re: Say I love you Chapter 5 -Mayuki-
Post by: leEwẬy on June 17, 2013, 12:07:10 PM
I've read it many months ago but I prefer to be a silent reader :depressed:
It's an awesome Mayuki's fic :luvluv1: I love it very much :shy2:
Thanks mo-chan for writing and creating this great fic :on slopkiss:
Eh!?! Yuki has liked Mayu already :onioncheer:
Yuki in most of Mayuki's fanfics is very bad at cooking :bigdeal:
Sae's coming back and she's Yuki's ex girlfriend :shock:
I sure there'll be a lots of drama in the future :hehehe:
Who's the transfer student? Yuki or someone else? :dunno:
Can't wait to see what'll happen next :tantrum:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
Title: Re: Say I love you Chapter 5 -Mayuki-
Post by: -gibson-mayulover on June 17, 2013, 12:15:49 PM
let me guess the other transfer student :dunno:



is it Lovetan?  :on gay:

Title: Re: Say I love you Chapter 5 -Mayuki-
Post by: cmze on June 17, 2013, 01:07:47 PM
ME: New fanfic "interesting name!"  :)

After a few seconds "Wait a minute I read this before..."  :nervous

Saw my comment  :shocked

Damn I'm so bad with names "All the fics I missed because I don't remember the name.." :sweatdrop:

I'll catch up on this later, gotta study!  :)

Keep up the good work!!  :bow:

EDIT:

NOOOOOO!!!  :cry:

This was a great light MaYuki fanfic this can not be happening  :banghead:

Sae chan!!  :angry:

I wanted more light and cute MaYuki now I understand my readers when they say more MaYuki  :nervous

Anyways I'll keep reading!!  :grin:

Good job!!  :bow:
Title: Re: Say you love me Chapter 5 -Mayuki-
Post by: Elo on June 25, 2013, 09:07:10 PM
ehhhhh if sae comes then I bet It will turn to a drama ^^

I want to know more ^^
Title: Re: Say you love me Chapter 5 -Mayuki-
Post by: kenjoy12 on June 26, 2013, 08:53:29 PM
Me like this fic!  :thumbup

Oh! Sae's back! And a transfer student, dare? :?

Yuki just announced her feelings for Mayu! :wub:

Is Sae going to get Yuki back with her? :banghead:

Ah! Things going to be a little complicated..  :smhid

Argh! I don't want to see Mayu's heart to be hurt!

Maa~ Drama! :oops: Me want to see.. :fap Heehee :twisted: Can't wait to witness everything.. Yeah~! :peace:

Thank you for the update :bow: :thumbsup :twothumbs
Title: Re: Say you love me Chapter 5 -Mayuki-
Post by: momondmozide on June 27, 2013, 03:38:30 AM
mo-chan huhuhu...

please don't makes me wait for a half of year for the next update  XD
Title: Re: Say you love me Chapter 5 -Mayuki- Replay~
Post by: mo-chan on June 27, 2013, 12:14:52 PM
@Shinoki: It made me laugh knowing the fact that you didn't notice my fanfic  :hiakhiakhiak: it's ok you know it now  :on GJ: and of course Yuki and the kichen can't fit each other and like this it would be more funny right? :P Yes! Sea is coming back an Mayuki didn't not developp enough. I wonder it to what going to happen....  :hehehe:
@rochilu: I'm glad you're happy seeing that I updated  :hee: I know that I'm kind of lazy and slow  :sweat: but I'll continue this fic donc worry.  :on GJ: About the one who is talking in the first of the chapter   :hehehe: naah I can't tell you it would be obvious  :bigdeal: don't worry you'll know everything slowly  :hee:
@momondmozide: I'm glad to know again that you like my fic.  :shy2: momo-chan please wait more I'm actully writing a mayuki one shot  :depressed: after it I'll fox more on this fanfic   :mon determined:
@gek geki: geki-chan you din't read my fic I'm surprised  :mon closeup: haha I'm joking  :mon sweat:  of course I'm gonna continue it :mon sweat:
@cisda83: Yeah it's been a while...   :mon sweat: No! I never said that I'll never said that I'll discontinue it.  :stoned: And Let's gonna happen  :bigdeal: but please wait a little more   :depressed:
@Terragen: I guess I should say I love you too  :dunno:
@leEwẬy: I'm glad to know that you love my fanfic  :whistle: It's ok I'm righting this cause I like writing fanfics  :hee: and thanks for the kiss leEwAy-chan so chuu~.  :gmon heartu: I wanted to put Yuki bad cooker it would be more funny this way.  :mon thumb: Yes Sae is back let's see what's gonna happen   :kekeke:
@-gibson-mayulover: wow! it's gibson-chan~  :whistle: First I really want to tell you that you really turtured me with you fanfic "Blank face"  :on cloudeye: I'm happy you're reading mine  :hee:  Yes! you're right aboyt the transfert student :bingo:
@cmze: You know ! when I read your comment I couldn't stop laughing.  :wahaha: :hiakhiakhiak: It's not good to forget names  :on lol: thought that  I know all your fanfics names  :on cloudeye: but it's ok cmze !  :on GJ: Yes Sae is comming back and like you said you should wait like your readers  do :on gay:
@Elo: yes drama is coming  :nya:
@kenjoy12:  I'm glad to know that you like my fanfic  :wriggly: Yes when Yuki anouced her feelings for Mayu everything will change or not?  :dunno: I don't really know maybe nothing will change  :on drink:
Title: Re: Say you love me Chapter 5 -Mayuki- Replay~
Post by: cmze on June 27, 2013, 05:45:55 PM
Sorry it always happened to me :catglare:

Hope you update soon  :thumbsup
Title: Re: Say you love me Chapter 5 -Mayuki- Replay~
Post by: imteedee on July 16, 2013, 06:41:41 PM
just reading the prologue I already knew it's based on Sukitte Iinayo  :yep: ... but then again as a newly converted MaYuki fan  :heart:  i opted to go on reading.. knowing the story already puts everything at ease  :on drink: 
like how i see myself...
"OMG OMG i remember this scene this is a good part  *gets popcorn*  :stuffed:


 but then after the last update  :stoned:

now I'm  :sweat: here comes the drama

tho I'm liking it  :wahaha: Sae Vs Nabe  :cool1:
Title: Re: Say you love me Chapter 5 -Mayuki- Replay~
Post by: Kirozoro on December 01, 2013, 04:26:17 AM
Omg. Your story is so cute and sweet

I cant stay still... Gahh

Please update soon
Title: Re: Say you love me Chapter 5 -Mayuki- Replay~
Post by: gek geki on January 13, 2014, 05:13:44 AM
MO-CHAN? HEHEHE
Title: Re: Say you love me Chapter 5 -Mayuki- Replay~
Post by: Archer1992 on January 19, 2014, 06:48:56 AM
some hard time i believe...

oooo a lot of drama maybe...

continue SOON!!
Title: Re: Say you love me Chapter 5 -Mayuki- Replay~
Post by: soolim on January 19, 2014, 12:33:52 PM
This story is really great ^^
Hope you're still up to update it some day!
Title: Re: Say you love me Chapter 5 -Mayuki- Replay~
Post by: kmkpc22 on August 30, 2014, 06:50:04 AM
waiting for you update ^^
Title: Re: Say you love me Chapter 5 -Mayuki- Replay~
Post by: yurin23mayuki on August 31, 2014, 07:01:15 PM
awesome story  :twothumbs
please update soon   :bow: :bow: :bow: