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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: ChuuuPuffss on December 02, 2012, 09:12:43 AM
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Haha I know I've got a lot of stuff going on, but I think I'll handle it xD Since I've been procrastinating these days, I promise everyone I will finish the Idol of an Idol next week! While the other fic, maybe I'll get some inspiration in me :3 I've realized that I need some angst going on in my head lolol. Tell me what you think~
Prologue
Snow...?
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Why is it snowing...?
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Well, because it's winter...
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Though, I like the rain best...
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Why do I like the rain best...?
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Because she taught me how to kiss the rain.
------- Flashback -------
9 years ago | December 25 | 12 Midnight |
"Hey."
I heard this angelic voice.. I don't understand what it was doing to me but... I felt like that voice was trapping me in a void... Maybe, a void of light..?
"Hey.. Can you not hear me?"
I didn't want to turn around, believe me. But... her voice was tempting me to.
"Are you alright?"
I was surprised to see a beautiful girl. She was maybe only a few years older than me. She had those mesmerizing black orbs. Along with that angelic voice, she may had made me want to grow up faster.
"Hey...?"
She moved closer to me and surprisingly, the snow had stopped falling upon me. That's right... the girl in front of me was not normal at all. The angelic voice? The mesmerizing eyes? The soft, milky skin? Not normal at all... She was something, beyond our imaginations.
"What are you...?"
She smiled upon hearing my question. Her smile was somewhat intimidating yet... beautiful. She knelt in front of me and took my hand. Gently, as she led it to cup her own cheek warmth quickly shot up through my veins.
"I am not like your being but... I can assure you that you will not ever feel bad for yourself again while I'm alive. Especially, while it's snowing."
I mustered all the courage I had and looked openly at her eyes. After that, something flashed through my mind... something flashed through my ears. A familiar sound. A familiar image. Not what everyone expects to see, it was... the image and sound of rain all together.
"Please don't be sad anymore. I had seen that your family has been neglecting you all this time. But if you feel comfortable crying then, please... cry on my shoulders and hide within the rain."
Magically, the snow around us had stopped. Then... rain began pouring down upon us. All the bad memories had flashed through my mind. All... In... Slow... Motion. Unconsciously, I felt warm droplets flowing down from my eyes to my cheeks. I'm sure it wasn't the rain at all, but my own tears.
"That's right. Cry... Cry and let your feelings flow out from you."
She stood up and hugged me as I cried on her chest. Just who is this being? What does she have to do with me?
"Wh-who are you? What is your objective here?"
Then, again. She spoke with her angelic tone.
"I am Yuki. Though, my name is translated to 'Snow', I'm associated with everything water. But I like the Rain best. I am not a Human such as yourself but in fact, I am a Goddess... the Water Goddess. I am young like you but I can assure you I won't ever make you feel bad... Yes, that's my objective for now."
She pulled herself back and smiled.
"Why... why me?"
She ruffled my hair and wiped the tears off my face.
"Because you are special, Mayu-chan."
Finally, she stood up and the rain had stopped. She flashed me one last smile and turned away. A white, blinding light shown before me and her. It seemed that it was time that she had to go back. When she was about to step into that some sort of vortex, I finally had the courage to speak up.
"Won't you come back, Yuki?"
She stopped and snapped her fingers. It started raining again.
"I will come back. For now, if you feel sad... Kiss the rain."
She then, stepped into the vortex. I squinted my eyes for a couple of times and to my surprise, it was snowing again. No more rain. No more Yuki. Maybe it was all a dream? ... No, It can't possibly be.
"Mayu-chan! Mayu-chan!"
I snapped my head back and saw my father and mother running towards my direction.
She will come back someday. But for now, I will just kiss the rain.
------- End -------
Tell me what you think, guys! For once, I've been writing seriously in a long time! Hope this one will get good too!
PS: The title is from Yiruma's piece, Kiss The Rain (http://youtu.be/imGaOIm5HOk). I suggest you read it while the music is playing.
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hmmm~ really interesting~
So when Mayu kisses the rain....she kisses Yuki? Thats what my imagination thinks....
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umum... :D
Really interesting... Yukirin is... a Goddess Waahhhh!! A Goddess with a human... AAAAh :twothumbs
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Cute but how can someone kisses the rain?
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It's interesting.. But I think it will be quite difficult write a story like this..
But I like the way you have started, so, continue :) And I like to think the fact that she will kiss the rain, it's a beautifull thougth :)
I will wait all of your chapters..
So Good job ChuuuPuffss-san :thumbup
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Ohhhh :wub:
i want them to meet again! :inlove:
please :bow:
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Ohh very interesting so far. So far everything is a vague so I can't wait to learn more and more about this.
I look forward to your next update :)
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Woaaaaaa! You should update chapter 1 already >< I want ittttttt
So bored by just staring at the Prologue, no, i mean it interesting but i can't wait any longer :[
Pls update~~
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Replies:
Playgirlz: Hey there~ I'm going to update Chapter 1 in a bit! I'm glad you like the prologue. Please do continue to support this fic!
Sasshii: Thank you for reading, Sasshii-san! I hope you'll look forward to how this fic will develop~
Cmze: Hello, there, Cmze-san. If I'm not mistaken, this is the first time you read one of my fics.. right? xD And yes, they will meet again. Hope you will continue reading this fic of mine!
Lightning: Yes, it's quite difficult since I need a lot of inspiration to keep this going. Haha I thought about that kissing the rain thing too was beautiful. You can just imagine Mayu running around inside the rain and trying to kiss it lol. I hope you will continue to support this fic till' it ends. Thank you!
Kahem: Well, it's not like a person has to literally kiss the rain. Not puckering your lips and trying to lick it, nope. It's like this person lifts her head up and enjoy her moment as the rain lands gently on her lips. I guess that's how I imagine it~
Chanaline: It's kind of unrealistic but imagine a highly placed being fall in love with a lowly person! It's just too adorable~ <33
Yuukimoko: If that's how you picture it then, that's how it is. I carry on with my plot as just what my readers want it to be so if you want it that way then, think that way. It's actually a beautiful thought, Yuuki-chan! I hope you support this fic until it ends. Thank you~
Big thanks to you, guys! Those silent readers out there who did not drop a review, thank you, also! I would appreciate it if you lurkers would post up a review but if you have nothing to say then, it's alright. No one would want a forced, emotional review. So, I would be posting up chapter 1 in like an hour or so. I feel guilty for not updating my other fics ahaha. But I promise everyone I'll update my WMatsui fic! Peace out, guys! :deco:
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Chapter 1
Days, Weeks, Months and finally, Years had passed. You think Mayu had waited? Yes, she did but... she lost hope half way through. She told her parents who started caring for her since that faithful encounter. But they didn't believe a word she said. How could a god appear in front of a person? And most of all, why Mayu out of all billions of people? They thought it was all child's play. After all, Mayu was 9 years old back then when she had encountered that goddess. Once she tried to convince some people she knew, she had to go to depression. She thought of how stupid and foolish she was for believing that stupid "dream". That was the time she stopped believing in fairy tales and happy endings. She had convinced herself to move on and grow up. Those words were repeating in her mind. "Move on and grow up!". She knew what she had to do. And so, she did it... which caused a great disdain to that so called, "Goddess".
------- Present -------
Beep! Beep!
"Oh, come on, Jun! Why can't you drive faster?!"
"I'm trying my best here! And how am I supposed to even drive when it's like an apocalypse of cars had started!!"
"Well, screw this crap! I'm going to be late for my appointment!" The girl immediately took off her seat belt and went storming out from the car.
"H-hey! Mayu! You're going to regret this later!" Jun tried to keep the girl from running to her destination but she didn't listen to him. "Aargh! You just have to ruin my entire day!" He grabbed his phone and press the speed call button.
"Yes, Watanabe Corporation at your service." The phone spoke out
"Secretary Matsui Jun, here. I've been given the authority to cancel all the appointments our lady has at the moment as we are stuck in traffic jam."
"I'm sorry, Matsui-sama but unfortunately, we can't cancel anything at the moment."
"Ah, come on! Are you even trying?"
"I am, Matsui-sama. It just won't budge. They don't want anything to get in the way of the appointment."
"Fine. Then, just set everything on hold until 11:30!"
"..." A few beeping sounds could be heard through the phone. "Alright. Everything is all good."
"Thank you. Have a nice day."
"Also, you-- BEEP." Jun hung up before the speaker could even finish her sentence.
"Yosh! Now, to get back that spoiled brat!" He smirked and quickly got out of his sports car and dashed off to Mayu's direction.
------- Meanwhile -------
"Hey! Mayu! Wait!!" Mayu turned around and smirked.
"Oh? Seems like you caught up." She leaned on a wall and looked up the sky seemingly.
"Yeah, I did. You mouse, you tricked me again!"
"Seems like it's going to rain..." Mayu quietly mumbled
"Pardon? Did you say something?" Jun approached Mayu and looked at her with a worried expression.
"Eh? Oh, nothing." Mayu looked down depressingly. All those foolishness she had believed were still all fresh in her mind like it happened just yesterday.
"Mayu..." Jun cupped Mayu's cheek and looked at her with a reassuring smile. "I don't know what's wrong but... please don't ever feel bad about yourself as long as I'm alive." Mayu's eyes widened as she remembered that line from her "dream".
I can assure you that you will not ever feel bad for yourself again while I'm alive...
Those words echoed all over her mind. Like it was bouncing up and down. Side to side. All around and it seemed it wasn't going to get out any time now.
Mayu looked deeply into Jun's eyes. "Mayu, I... love you." Jun leaned in. Mayu knew what was going to happen. But this was all too sudden. She was too distracted with that line stuck, bouncing in her mind. Just as Jun was about to capture her lips, thunder roared vigorously and rain dropped as fast as it could. Jun looked at Mayu with a shocked expression. "I.. I'm sorry, Mayu--" Mayu ran away from him as soon as she could.
Mayu ran along the rain and it was horrible. She felt pain, disgrace, embarrassment, and most especially, foolishness showering her all over again. By the time she already got through of getting over that "dream" of hers, a nightmare comes and takes over. She just wishes all of these unwanted thoughts would go away. Finally, she got tired. Tired of crying. Tired of being foolish. And tired of being tired. She ran into an empty alley. She just sat there, hugging her knees.
"Please... Please..! Go away!! I don't deserve any of this!!!" She screamed with all her might. The cats in the alley ran away in fright. "I... I wish it is all just a dream. I wish that you aren't real!" Mayu heard someone approaching her. If it's someone who wants to kill her, then she wouldn't do anything to fight. Because she thinks dying is so much better than living in this cruel, awful world...
------- Mayu's POV -------
I wouldn't mind dying right here, right now. If I were a sadist then, it would be a pleasure to die. I just don't want these feelings in me anymore. I feel like could explode anytime, now. If that dream didn't come into my senses then, I would be a better person right now! I just want all of this to end! I don't want to be sad! I want to do something... but I'm helpless. There's no hope for me. I want to die...
Drip... Drip...
Tap... Tap...
"Hey."
This voice... sounds familiar. I heard this angelic voice before.. I felt this amazing void going against me before... This voice is trapping me into a void... A void of light..?
"Hey.. Can you not hear me?"
I don't want to look up. But this voice is tempting me... How... to resist?
"Are you alright?"
I'm surprised to see this beautiful woman standing up to me.. She has these familiar, mesmerizing black orbs along with that angelic voice... I wish she would take that hood off her so I could see her clearly, though.
"Hey...?"
She knelt down to my height and surprisingly, the rain had stopped falling upon me. She cupped my cheek and smiled. The warmth of her hand, shot up throughout my body. This warmth... is
"That's right. Cry... Cry and let your feelings flow out from you."
She stood up and hugged me as I cried on her chest. Just who is this being? What does she have to do with me?
"Familiar.." She spoke again with her angelic voice. "My warmth... is familiar to you, right?"
How did she read my mind..?
"Wh-who are you..?"
My voice was trembling. I was scared. Scared of the fact that this nightmare would go deeper and deeper.
"I am...
"I am Yuki. Though, my name is translated to 'Snow', I'm associated with everything water. But I like the Rain best. I am not a Human such as yourself but in fact, I am a Goddess... the Water Goddess. I am young like you but I can assure you I won't ever make you feel bad... Yes, that's my objective for now."
She pulled herself back and smiled.
"Yuki. My name is translated to 'Snow'. Though, I wish my name was Rain, instead. I am not Human like you but, I am a Goddess. The Water Goddess. I'm sure that no one will make you feel bad as long as I'm alive... Mayu-chan."
She took her hand back and the warmth slowly disappeared. Sensually, she pulled down her black hood down, only to be revealing her raven, black curvy yet straight hair. Her fringe aligned elegantly, as if she was an actual princess.
"N-no... No! This can't be happening again! I want to wake up! I don't want to sleep, anymore! Wake me up now!!"
I swore I saw her frown and I could almost sense a black aura emerging around her. Suddenly, heavy rain started pouring, thunder and lightning were clashing. Is she mad... or is she sad..?
"I came back at the right time, didn't I? The time when I know you can't handle feeling bad, anymore. How am I supposed to convince you that this is not a DREAM. Our last encounter, was also not a dream. Why can't you understand that?! Why...?"
She looked down and tears started flowing down from her eyes to her cheeks.
"P-please... don't cry." I wiped her tears and she looked at me "Please don't cry in front of me... Yuki."
Finally, the rain slowed down as she smiled. Her overwhelming smile that I swear could warm up the whole world.
"Now... do you believe me, Mayu?"
She moved closer to me which made me feel uncomfortable yet... comfortable. I know that doesn't make sense but... I just feel this warm, cozy feeling in my stomach. Are these what you call Butterflies?
"Y-yes..."
She grinned and tucked some strands of her hair behind her ear. Shoot, this way, I think I'm going to melt. She's too hot despite being the Goddess of Water.
"By the way, I don't want you getting closer and closer with Matsui Jun. You're mine." She pulls me closer and she whispered into my ear "That includes your kisses."
She sealed my lips into a thundering kiss. Her lips were so warm even though they were just wet from the cold rain. I don't know what I'm doing now... Can I wake up now? Can someone slap me? Finally, she pulls away.
"Oh, and that's how you kiss the rain.. Literally."
I'm still shocked with my eyes widened. She giggled and stood up. She reached out for my hand and suddenly, a rainbow appeared in the sky.
"Don't think I'll ever let you get out of my sight again, Mayuyu."
Having no choice, I stood up and grabbed her hand. The familiar warmth shot up as she pulled me into a hug. I don't think this is a dream, anymore.
------- To be Continued... -------
Yes, I made Jurina a boy :3 Reviews, please :deco:
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ok ok~ this is not a dream~ *smirk*
And yes Mayu, listen to Yuki, you are hers.And only hers.i love possessive Yuki~ sweet~
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LOVE Yuki possessiveness!
Mayu listen to Yuki eheh... She is right!
I love this chapter!!! Thank you!!
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The way you write is awesome! It's so beautiful! :heart:
And Yuki being this mysterious, possessive goddess is just so fitting...
Even though I don't really like gender bender (especially not if you make my kami-oshi a boy) I didn't really mind her being Jun here. So... Yes, I definitely like it.
I'll wait patiently for the next chapter!
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Finally they meet again but why did Yuki leave it so long til she comes for Mayu?
And poor boy-Jurina lol
Looking forward to the next chapter :)
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so cuuute
mayuki really like it...
this fanfic is sweet, please update :D :grin:
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Hohohoho Yuki seems so mysterious, i wonder if she have been observing Mayu all these years >:]
It will be so fun if she does, is she going to show herself in front of the other or only Mayu? I very curious about that, but i guess i have to wait then XDDDD
Thank you Chiyuu~~~ Update please!!! I'm waiting for it
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Replies:
Playgirlz: Yuki's character here is supposed to be mean and mysterious, so yeah~ Well, it's obvious she has lol. Since Yuki's character here is the type who is 'Stalker-ish', nobody won't miss the chance on seeing her follow Mayu everywhere she goes. The wait is over, my friend. Please enjoy reading :3
Stepk: Thank you for that compliment! I appreciate your time in reading this.
Jell_o_Jello: I wasn't expecting someone to ask that question but it's because I wanted Mayu to lose hope in a way. Yuki wanted to come out in a part where Mayu needed her most. Annnd, that's practically an important part of the plot :3 Don't worry, I have something planned out for Juribaby~
Fffff: Thank you for the compliment! I like your writing style too so be sure to update that MaYuki fic of yours :3 Yuki isn't too much of a possessive person but much of a "what's-mine-is-mine' person lol. But if you want it that way, then maybe it's kind of cool too. I'm sorry if I've disappointed you in a way. Jurina here is planned out for something that's why I made her a dude. The next chapter will may be posted today or tomorrow.
Chanaline: Gosh, I should really consider this 'Yuki as a possessive person' thing since all of you shippers like it trololol. Yeah, Mayu should take off her stubbornness if she could xD I ask for your patience once again, Chanaline-san! Please wait for the update which will be posted later or tomorrow.
Yuukimoko: Meh, I kind of want to smack Mayu's face to think something so real yet fiction-ish is only a dream. But I wouldn't do that. Who dares destroy such a face?! Possessive Yuki is trending lol.
Big thanks again, guys! Please keep on supporting this fic until it comes to an end. Since my WMatsui fic has been completed, I can somehow focus more on this one for the time being. I know no one's asking but, a very wonderful Christmas gift would be those lurkers and silent readers out there post up a review for your fellow wota here! I'm joking but if you insist, then do the honors! I'll probably update later but I'm sure I will update tomorrow if not later. Thank you, once again. Peace out, guys! :deco:
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Hey Chuupuffss o/ sorry for not commenting >< I got so busy with college thing and ended up forgetting. :bow:
But, you know, I think your fiction is really amazing and creative and also bit poetic.
I like the idea of Yukirin being a possessive goodness and got curious about why she chose Mayu. I don't think it is just because Mayu is cute ><
And, well, if you post tomorrow it will be a great b-day gift for me :wink:
Please, continue with this great fic o/
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BbSis: Omfg, I'm sorry for not updating it yesterday! I was about to update it yesterday when I got home, but I found out our Internet connection was on maintenance. I failed you! Anyway, I know it's late but happy birthday and I dedicate this chapter to you! Hope you had a blast yesterday!
Anyway, here's Chapter 2 for all of you readers but especially made a rush for BbSis-san! It's a Sathday update for my time zone lol. If some of you do believe the world goes boom tomorrow, well congratulations! This will be the last chapter you've got from this fan fiction. Nah, I'm kidding. Please enjoy this chapter!
WARNING TO LOLIS: This has mature dialogues. So, don't say I didn't warn you! I'm trying to save your innocence T _ T Just make sure you're ready for this. AND PLEASE, don't ask other people what those mature stuff mean! Maybe the next thing I know is that I'm being hunted down by your parents T _ T Once again, WARNING, MY LOLIS.
Chapter 2
Mayu's POV:
Oh my god... What is this? First of all, I know what I'm going to say would sound stupid but I actually wish this was really a dream! She's so annoying! How am I supposed to get her off my back? She's acting as my tail! My walking tail! While I'm doing my work like this, is she really going to just play around with that aquarium? And she talks fish language?! God, help me!
"Hey, Mayu. Quit making those weird expressions."
I glared at the voice's owner, knowing fully well whose it is.
"Quit looking at every move I make."
I got back to my paper work. Deciding to ignore that idiot on the corner smiling sadistically.
"Who said I was looking at every move you make?"
"Just shut up or I'll call security to get you out."
She chuckled bitterly and at the speed of light, she was leaning closely to my face with an amused expression
"Oh, really? Try calling them, then."
I smirked at her and pressed the red button on my desk. A voice called out,
"At your service, Watanabe-sama."
"Get security up on my office-- Oh, wait! Make that FBI. ASAP."
I hung up and crossed my arms. Take that, you so called goddess!
"Pfft.."
Suddenly, she laughed so hard and smiled at me sweetly. Her smile is so gorgeous. How could someone resist this-- Oh, wait. Fuck these butterflies, stop thinking about things like that!
"Wh-what're you smiling for, you jerk?"
"Nothing. I just like how you're so stubborn, you tsundere."
To that statement she just said, I wasn't expecting I would blush. I suddenly felt a warm, wet sensation on my forehead. The next thing I know, she was kissing my forehead.
"Wh-what what d-do you think y-you're d-d-doing..?!"
She pulled away as I was struggling
"Kissing your forehead?"
"You don't get it, baka!"
She frowned and sat down on one of the chairs
"If I don't get it, aren't you supposed to teach me what it means?"
"You're supposed to get it yourself!"
She raised an eyebrow and had a look of confusion
"I... still don't get it."
Jeez, this girl is hopeless. As I was about to reply, a loud banging sound was sent flying to my ears
"FBI, here. Please open the door at this moment."
Holy freakin' rainbows, I forgot I called FBI! I shifted my attention at Yuki who was just yawning and acting nonchalantly.
"Hey, you! Go hide somewhere..!"
She looked at me and shrugged. She stood up and sat down at the farthest corner. I think I may have face-palmed myself to hard now. Suddenly, the door broke down revealing a bunch of men in black suits
"Watanabe-sama, what might be the problem? A criminal? A rapist?"
"Err..."
Some of the men went about the room and scanned thoroughly. I looked at Yuki but she was perfectly fine. Sitting on one of the couches with her arms crossed.
"Eh?"
If it were possible, my eyes would've popped out of its sockets already. How could they not see her?! She's over there! Are these people blind or what?! Or am I hallucinating?!
"Ha, security here on Earth suck balls."
She yawned and laid on her back
"Watanabe-sama..?"
Almost forgetting this man, I laughed sheepishly.
I'm sorry, FBI-san. My uhh... nephew! Right, nephew! My nephew prank called the lobby and it seems that he asked for FBI. I deeply apologize."
I bowed down firmly as I hear Yuki chuckling
"Your nephew is 3 years old, Mayu."
Praise who ever is up there for I'm the only one who can hear this crying Llama!
"I see. Gang, round up. It has been a mistake."
The men got out quickly
"We shall take our leave now, Watanabe-sama."
"Alright. Have a good day!"
He left and shut the door tightly. I glared at Yuki who was grinning so widely
"Fuck you, Yuki."
"Atatatat! Watch your mouth there, little one. But anyway, I'm free. I just need a bed. Oh, if you want, we can do it on the couch. Do you have that eggplant shaped vibrat--"
My eyes widened as she joked around. Who am I kidding, is she even joking?! I covered her mouth before someone could hear her
"Shut up, you pervert!"
Suddenly, I felt my arm shift and the next second, she was the one covering my mouth
"You think I'm joking? ... I'm not."
I blushed and I could feel my body getting hot
"I know it's wrong here for girl love in Earth but... what if I tell you I'm actually a man who's disguised as a woman?"
What?! She's a man?! That's unbelievable! Please say no! She's already a woman, I'm trying so hard not to melt! How much more if she was a man?!
"Yow wa mwan?!" (You're a man?!)
She chuckled and moved her hand from my mouth to cover my eyes. I could constantly feel her hand growing larger and larger until it has stopped growing. She took her hands off and my mouth was left agape
"I'm not. But I'm willing to change for you if it means scoring more good points."
A SHE was now a HE. From hair that's raven, long, straight yet curvy to hair that's messy but sexy. From a slim waist to a well-toned stomach. Everything changed except for those mesmerizing black orbs that captured my soul. I feel like I'm melting already..
"I don't k-know what to do..!"
She-- He smirked and captured my lips into a rough and forced kiss. I was surprised at first but, even though it's rough, his lips is my new favorite flavor now. I wish they had ice cream flavor of it. Who am I kidding?! I'm supposed to be this girl who's gonna be chased by a goddess-god, I mean. Argh! I push him away and slapped his face. Oh my god, I didn't mean to do that! Bad hand! After that slap, he looked at me in hurt and disbelief
"S-sorry! I didn't mean to!"
He sighed and took a step back
"This is never going to work. I may not be human, but I have feelings too..."
"I said I'm sorry..."
"Whatever."
He turned away and was going for the door. Oh my god, don't do this to me, Yuki. You are not leaving me! You're taking responsibility for making me fall!
"Yuki, wait!"
I hugged him and he stopped.
"You know, you can always say that you don't want to do 'it' yet."
"You would've known better! I'm 18 years old! You're insane!"
"Only humans go insane."
He turned around and held my hands
"So, do you want me as a man or a woman?"
I looked away and blushed
"You're sexy like this... but I like the original Yuki."
He smirked and hugged me. He could be the perfect boyfriend. He sighed and kissed my forehead
"Let me stay as Yuki-dude for awhile. No one would want to steal you from me, then."
"Then, be it."
I wish I could stop time and stay like this forever and ever.
------- To be Continued... -------
Please don't kill me for Yuki-dudette gets more screen time than Yuki-dude.
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Hueje update*.* thank you! *.*
it was a really sweet chapter heheh Yuki+dude. Caught me off guard xD
But I'm glad Mayu prefers Yuki as a woman :p
Hey, you got it in time, according to JpHip time zone huwhue thank you so much! Your gesture will always be in my heart :heart:
Well, I don't believe that the world will end tomorrow, but who knows?
Thank you for this sweet chapter and I'll anxiously wait for the next one. O?
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Now its getting more interesting LOL
Yuki-dude LOL
Yuki and mayu...are they already a couple? How yuki fall for mayu?
Thank for the update
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WOW Yuki can be a man and women :O
but I prefer Yuki as a women XD
Mayu is a tsunadere :rofl:
I can't wait what is going to happen with Yuki-dude :lol:
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interesting! would like to know more how and why the 2 are destined to meet, y yuki looked for mayu, can goddess and human be together, so many things to be discovered! :O2
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It is just beautiful!!! I love Yuki! She can be a man and a woman... so cool :D
I want to know more about this relationship with a goddess and a human.
Thank you for your update!
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still waiting for Yuki-dude~ :D
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-First of all, Sorry for the late comment :D
-Second, I already finished reading your fan fiction (Kiss the Rain)
Prologue to Chapter 2
-Third, it is a good story! I also like the Chapter 2!
(It is very funny and I also like the other side of Yukirin for being dominant)
-Fourth, I hope that there are also WMatsui pairing in your story :D
-Lastly, Please Update and Thank You
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POPCORN
where are u??i miss ur update *pout*
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Still Waiting
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Wow. Yuki can change her gender. :panic:
Looking forward for the update author-san :)