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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: ZeriusLei on December 05, 2012, 05:53:34 PM
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Alright. :depressed:
Uhmm o______o This is my first time writing a drabble. *Is it even spelled correctly?*
*First comer to fanfic and jphip* :err:
Pardon my ugly English and bad fic.
Here goes.. *hopes* :dizzy:
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*Jurina POV*
Again.
I see you talking with the girl who named Furukawa Airi again.
You look so happy with her.
Is she really that fun to be with ?
Am i not enough to make you happy?
Did i not tried hard enough to make your smile mine?
I love you, i always do.
My love for you never lose to hers.
I always been looking you smiling and laughing at her at a corner.
I always been kissing the others member to get your attention.
I wish you can look at me, even once.
*Rena POV*
Again.
I see you hugging and kissing everyone in the team.
Especially the girl who named Churi.
Is this what they called Jealousy?
Did i not worth your heart?
I'd purposely act close to Airin to get your attention.
Did you bother to look ?
Did you realize?
I don't know.
Jurina and Rena: I wish you'll realize how much i love you.
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Woohooo! Good job on your first drabble! :twothumbs
Welcome to Jphip :D :deco:
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Irasshai! > w <
Good one! XD
Please update for more! :bows:
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This is nice!!! :twothumbs
Thanks for this ZeriusLei-san! :bow: :bow:
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Wow! This drabble is so cute!
Looking forward for more! :thumbsup
Please make AtsuMina too! :banghead: :banghead: :banghead:
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Poor of them triying to get each other attention
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Great! It's cute :thumbsup
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@Everyone: Thank you so much ;w; I'm not really good in English and i always have grammar mistakes so i was sort of nervous for the first time :kneelbow:
@Chichay12: Ah o__o I'm not good in AtsuMina as i just started to read them. But don't worry, i will make one soon! *notes down*
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We just flooded your thread zerius :P If you noticed xD
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@Chessy : I do <n<
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jejej they love each other a lot
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@Haruko: Huahuahuahua~ Yes, they just can't stop wanting each other's attention xD
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I'm looking to read it for sure !!
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Ah, arigato! ouo