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Ah~ This is my first time Writing a fanfic here so... It might come out a little lame :nervous But I hope you Enjoy reading it :nervous
PART 1
Yukirin's PoV
The crowd was Cheering for us Hard and Warm, Today was the last day of our dream concert. from day 1 until the last
It was the most thrilling and Happiest moments in my life. before the end of our concert... There was a surprise shuffle of members =, the other girls were starting to cry
the others are thinking mostly murmuring 'I don't wanna go! i don't wanna...' I was kinda scared... as soon as that was said I placed both my hands on Mayuyu and looked
at her surprised expression. everyone was waiting who's gonna go to who.
"Takahashi Minami. Team A. will now be the General manager of AKB48" It was a shock but I was happy for Takamina and everybody was happy too everyone was all 'sugoii takamina!'
I glanced at Sae, she looked uneasy I could see her eyes starting to tear up a bit...
"Shinoda Mariko.Team A. Will replace Takahashi Minami as the Captain of Team A" she was in tears happy tears.
'Oshima Yuuko.Team K.Will replace Akimoto Sayaka as the Captain of Team K" she said "Eh?! Uso!!" while in tears as well
"Umeda Ayaka.Team B.Will Replace Kashiwagi Yuki as the new captain of Team B" I just clapped and smiled. The weight of being
the Captain has been passed on to her and I've learned so much being the captain now I'm only a regular member of this team.One by one every member
went to other Teams...
"Team A. Ota Aika, HKT48" Mayuyu ran an and hugged Love-tan as both of them cried... I haven't seen her like that since the last shuffle.... Love-tan and mayuyu hugged and cried a lot
"Love-tan...please don't go..." mayuyu whimpered...
"Mayuyu I'm gonna miss you so much..." she cried...
"Team B. Takajo Aki, Will transfer to Jakarta 48" Akicha...moved to JKT... as she was headed to the JKT post she cried too then Kitarie hugged her and said don't go.
Then it happened.... while Takamina was going to another team it was announced...
"Team K. Miyazawa Sae. Will transfer to Shanghai 48 in China." No way.... It can't be... No....
I said "No wa-way!!" I was shocked and tears came down... Sae-chan.... is moving to China.... I couldn't stop crying... as Sae went to the Post she had a smile...
A forced one... I was covering my Mouth trying not to yell... then I calmed down a bit....
Every member was transfered Akicha went to JKT and Mariyanu went with Sae.... After that the shuffle is finished... until
"W-wait! what about me?? which group do I belong??" mayuyu asked with a slightly wearied tone
"Oh sorry! I must of skipped.... Watanabe mayu shall transfer to Team A" Mayuyu.... in Team a...? my realization of what's happening hurrdled down on me as I cried...
Everything just went... Blank For me....
~End of Part 1~
Yeah I know, It's Short But please be patient :kneelbow: :kneelbow:
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That feeling when the reshuffle came back :cry:
Can't wait for the next update :cry: :cry: :cry:
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That feeling when the reshuffle came back :cry:
Can't wait for the next update :cry: :cry: :cry:
I'm still crying when I remember it :pleeease: anyways A quick update on the fic :)
AKB48_Anata Ga Ite Kureta Kara (Eng sub) (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qcyxHMi-Kv4#ws) - please listen(or watch this while reading)
Writer's PoV
After the Announcement of the Shuffle Miyazawa's Smile slowly fades and tears up a bit in realization of being separated from her Team and Her Friends in AKB. She wipes her tears and
Tries to smile while going back to The Lines.
---------After the final Songs---------
Everyone was in backstage. Mayuyu Hugged Love-tan, Everyone was crying. Yukirin was left alone for a while. Then Mayuyu Approached her
"I don't wanna be in te-team A..." Yukirin hugs her while both sobs on each other's shoulder Yukirin was rubbing her back to soothe her pain.
"I... don't like what's happening... First Rabu-tan moved to team A now... now she's going to HKT.... and I'm not beside you in the same team anymore...I can't practice with you or Take Breaks with you o-or Sing on the same sta-stage...." mayuyu said in between the sniffs
"I-It's ok mayuyu... it's alright..."
Meanwhile Sae was with Team K.... She and Miichan hugged each other
"Who's gonna be my Pimp partner n-now??" She said while tearing up and laughing weakly
"Hehehe, you're worried about that?! hahaha" Sae Chuckled while shedding a few tears
Sayaka Hits her head lightly "Idiot... we're more worried about your life there..." Sae hugged The former captain
"Y-yeah I know.." Yuko Approached her. "Who's gonna be my Prank buddy now...?" Sae Moved to Yuko and hugged her too
"We'll always be Trouble buddies!!" then all of the team K members did a group hug.
Kuramochi Hugged Akicha from behind "Ah...I-I'm gonna miss that ear of yours you know...?"
"Is that all you can think of...? Ears again?" Akicha chuckled lightly while she wipes her tears away.
Kuramochi started to sob on her shoulder, Akicha turns around and Hugs her tight. "Hey hey... I'll back after 6 months..."
"But still...." she sniffs.
Everything that's happening backstage was all Tears.
"Minami..." Acchan said While Crying "I think...I think I made a mistake..."
Takamina Wiped her tears away "N-no... Your decision wasn't a...a mistake o-ok...?" She said while whimpering
"I can't...be with you during Team A's theater practice...I can't go with you in any of AKB's concerts... I-I.." She broke down and cried heavily
while hugging the General Manager tightly as if she never wanted to leave her side nor the group.
As for Minami... she huged her like there's no tomorrow at all Her Atsuko's graduation was near.... Memories overflowed both in their hearts
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'Hey minami Let's take a break~!'
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'Look Acchan! our audience are getting bigger~!!'
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'Hey Minami I'll stay behind too, I wanna practice more with you! I wanna get better too you know!'
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'Tell me... it's lie r-right..? you g-graduating...?'
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'On August 27th I, Maeda Atsuko Will be Graduating From AKB...'
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Everything they've been through flashes back. they cry even more.
"A-acchan..."
"Mi-minami...I'm..I'm gonna miss you..."
Tears Overflowed from the Couples eyes... 6 and a half years. they've been together for so long, and this was the day where they break down to their emotions.
"Minami...I...I love you so much..." she said as she tries to calm down
"I love you...too...Atsuko..." she said while she sniffed.
"I don't want you to leave my side...I don't want you to leave at all !"
"I k-know minami..."
"But...It's already scheduled tomorrow....on your final theater..."
Everyone was overcomed by emotions. The pain of losing a friend was within everyone....
~End of part 2~
Short.Yes. so Gomen! hontoni gomen! :badluck:
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this is so sad! :'(
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While I was making Part 2 I was stupid enough to play "Anata ga Ite kureta kara". I ended up crying the whole way just remembering Acchan :on cloudeye: :gyaaah:
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Since I forgot how to upload pictures here, read this Fanfic here:
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Attention to all readers~! Do not be fooled by my User name, I am A SaeYuki Fan :cool1: But in this Fanfiction I'll be doing some SaeMaYuki paring :)
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nee? >_ >
saemayuki huh?
GREATS!!! nyahaha XD update soon pweasee :bow:
sangkyuu~
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wahh that was such a sad moment but love the fanfic :heart:
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this concert... so many changes and...
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And Here's the new update~ sorry it took so long yet I made it so short :nervous
After the tears and hugs all of the members assembled.Takamina cleared her throat
"Etto...From this day forward we will meet new Challenges since...we um... Had the Shuffle. The Shuffle hasn't been done since 2009.
I know it's hard for us but...we must stay strong, keep pushing forward....I know a lot of us...will miss our friends that we have bonded for so long in the same team... Even thou..."
She looked down a bit and covered her mouth for a sec and sniffed a bit
"Ah....they can't join us in our practices... or sing on the same stage.." she was about burst into tears but someone tapped her shoulder. It was Acchan. Atsuko looked at her with 'C'mon I know you can do it' look as she nodded. Minami Nodded back
"As long as we pull ourselves together, Obstacles like these will never slow us down... We'll continue to grow...and learn along the road t our Dreams....We say farewell to the past and embrace what we have now..." A few tears Rolled down her Eyes. she wiped them off.
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Almost everyone left Tokyo dome except for yukirin. She was still dumbfounded of what just happened, and All Yukirin want is this Nightmare to stop. She was sitting alone in the dressing room until.... *knock knock*
"Hey...Yukirin....I see you're still here..." Yukirin stood up
"Sae... W-what are you doing here...?" she said while wiping tears off her eyes.
"Well...I was kinda worried where you were so I came back here. Guess my hunch was right..."
Suddenly Yuki hugged sae nice and tight as if she didn't want her to leave at all as well.Sae hugged back and she can feel her shoulder
Getting wet. She knew that yukirin was Shocked and now in pain of the announcement of Her transfer and Mayuyu's as well.
"Sae...please don't go...please..." Sae rubs her back gently "You know I can't do that... I'll be leaving on December 1st... so I think I'll have lots of time to spend it with everybody...." she smiled a little
"Hey...Yukirin..." Sae Broke the hug and looked straight into Yukirin's eyes "Do you... Still Remember Kagekidan...?"
Sae Gently wiped her tears away.
"Of course...I can never forget that Musical..." She said while looking down.
"Sae/yukirin I want to tell you something!" they said in unison. both looked away
"Y-you go first Sae..." she said while blushing a bit...
Sae Gulped. she suddenly kissed her just like how Ruka Harusame kissed Maria Takajima on their first meeting.
Yukirin was shocked.But she didn't fight it. Sae Stopped
"Yukirin...I...I love you...I've wanted to tell you this since a few months after Kagekidan Finished..."
"Really...?" she blushed
"I wasn't sure about it when it was just few days then, i thought i'm Just Infatuted and stuff...But the more time I spend
With you the more I get nervous, More shy towards you....Every time the members ask 'Do you LIKE Yukirin' the only thing I could say is that I like everyone equally...
But In truth....You're the one holding my heart...you're the one that I like the mo-- no... I LOVE the most..."
"Sae...I.."
"I-If you see me as a friend I'm cool wi---" she was cut off by a kiss! Yukirin returned the favor and Sae Kissed back. it only lasted about 5 sec. then They stopped.
"So...?" she asked while blushing just a little bit
"Yes Sae..I-I love you too...I felt the same thing..." She said while looking down and Blushing.
Ah... The couple that was once thought as a Bluff became real.
But Suddenly
"So..Are you two hooked up already??" Yuko said while Mayuyu was beside her.
"Eh?! Y-Yuko and Mayuyu?! how Long were you---"
"The Whole time 'Dad' " Mayuyu said as she cuts off Sae. meanwhile Yuko was near laughter....
~end of part 3~
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ne? MAYU CALLS SAE 'DAD' ?? i love this lil' family :heart: XD
thankyu for the update :bow:
waiting for the saemayuki family sweet moments XD
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Yeah Mayuyu Calls Sae 'Dad' since She has a 'Mom' there should always be a 'Dad' in the family~ XD
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i love this fic, lol <3
ganbatte for the update and happy new year! :D
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I'M SOOOOOOO REEEEEEALLY SORRY!!! :depressed: I'll post the New Chap Later tonight or tomorrow I'm just havin a major Writers block :err: and Studies & I've got to get my grades up in school :on study: :dozing:
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And I'm Back :) :) here's another short update
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*Flashback*
Sae Noticed that Yukirin wasn't with Mayuyu she asked "Hey Mayu-chan where's Yukirin?" Mayuyu Thinks for a sec.
"She was still in the dressing room..." Sae Dashed back to tokyo dome's dressing room. it was a bit far since she was 25 feet away from the Dome itself.
Meanwhile Yuko saw where she's headed and she had that familiar 'I wanna Stalk her' smile and Mayuyu knew it very well.
"C'mon shiriri!" Yuko ran while Mayuyu followed with enthuiastic curiosity in her.
Sae Reached the dressing room. she stopped for a while and tries to catch her breath. She then calms herself up 'Sigh...I can do this!' she thought and finally knocks.
this was the only time she could tell her how she felt.
Not far behind mainly just near the door hiding behind the wall was the Oshiri Sisters. Mayuyu already taking a video of it and yuko quietly laughing while covering her Mouth shut. Then mayuyu thought 'Maybe it won't be so bad having a 'Dad' in the family....' she just smiled and the two Oshiri sisters made the Appearance.
*End of Flash Back*
"A-anyways...Mayu why are you callin me 'Dad' all of a sudden?' Sae said while maintaining her Cool posture.
"That's what I know and you to find out 'Daddy dearest'" the twin tailed girl replied while her arms are Crossed.
Then suddenly an Idea Popped in Sae's head.
"Well I'm guessin We're all hungry so why don't we Grab a bit I have enough for..." she smile a little mischiviously "Me" she Points at mayu " and yukirn.
"Wait!! what about me?!" and Sae was almost out the door
"Ok! Let's leave yuko and eat!" she fist pumps in the air
"Oi!!!" Yuko grabbed her arm "Please don't let me starve to death~"
Yukirin Sighed "Sae you should take Yuko with us"
"But----"
"Sae, please? For me?" Yukirin knew she can't resist her so Sae just sighed and replied
"Fine...But don't you dare make my savings Fly out of nowhere!"
"Yay Food!!!" Sae sighed and scratched the back of her head .
Yukirin Grabs and hugs her right arm and Mayuyu Holds Sae's left hand. Sae looked at the both of them and smiled.
Yuko was the first one out and they followed. Yuko Glanced behind without them noticing
'They do look like a cute Family hehehe~' she thought as she walked a few pace ahead of them.
"I promise" Sae blurted out
"hm?"
"I promise I'll try to come back here on Christmas and New years~!" She said with her Genki Smile, yukirin Smiled back and said with a playful tone
"You better be alive when you Come back you hear?!"
"Roger that Princess~" sae played along "But promise us you won't get Hurt There and when you come back too ok...?" Mayuyu said with a worried look.
"I PROMISE!"
~End of part 4 ~
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Short but I guess it's too short sorry....
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I love this fic, saeyukimayu are a cute little family <3
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Please continue this happy family story x'D
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SORRY FOR THE LONG WAIT!! :badluck: :err: I had Studies following me :on study: :dozing: well Anyways Here's the new Chap and it's an AtsuMina Chap~ :mon inluv: but Prepare for some Tear Jerking Moments! :mon waterworks: :mon surr: :gyaaah: :fainted:
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Takamina was Walking Alone. Acchan went ahead and gone home, takamina decided to stop by the Park. She strolled around and saw a bench
Near by. She sat down and looked the Evening skies.
"Me getting a solo debut from Universal...then there's me being Promoted as GM...and Acchan leaving..." she sighs... she looks down
on the ground, she thinks of the past events that has happened in AKB for the past 7 years...
'When we started AKB...Everyone hated us...Some would say Akihabara jyuu yon hachi...we'd sometimes or maybe
Always Correct them saying 'We're called AKB Forty Eight~' hehehe...but at times at backstage or even in the dressing room we'd
Go into a nervous break down we'd always think that...it was impossible for us to make this group shine....our dream is tokyo dome..and well
it happened...from everything we have done...Acchan always stood out to be the strongest...We never Thought we'd reach this far...we even won the Music awards...'
"Eh.... Minami I thought you've already gone home?"
Her train of thoughts was put to a stop when She spoke. "Acchan..? what are you doing here?" she replied
"Don't ask me when I'm asking you first Minami~!" she playfully said. "Ok ok sorry! I was just going for a long Detour, so answer my question!"
"I'm saying until you say it in the RIGHT way" she said as she pouted
"Fine... PLEASE answer my question?" Acchan nodded.
"I wanted to take a walk that's all" she smiled and sat beside her Bestfriend
Silence filled the air...Acchan was smiling as she was looking up the sky. then..
"LOOK MINAMI! A SHOOTING STAR!" she pointed at the sky "make a wish make a wish!" Takamina didn't have a choice.
Both of them Closed their eyes.
'I wish...'
they both thought. acchan opens her eyes and asked " so what did you wish for Minami?"
"Eh?! sorry but I'm not telling you~~" she stuck out her tongue. "Then I'm not telling eiather~!" she pouted
They giggled then laughed. the laughing soon died out. then acchan was humming soon she sang.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_y24PdHyCYE (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_y24PdHyCYE)
"Looking through the window at the blue moon.... We talked for hours on the phone, sharing everything"
Takamina knows this...her eyes were being filled with tears...she sniffs..and holds acchan's hand.
"E-even though we both can see it, we look upon different scenery This much I-I realized, but it was a something I didn't wanna talk about..."
acchan held takamina's hand a lil tighter as her eyes began to drop tears down her cheeks...
"Because you were always by my side"
"Being apart from you"
"I don't want"
the both of them were in tears, but still sang in unison.
"is something I can't even imagine..."
"Most of my memories were made together with you Laughing, crying, even fighting We spent some days sharing our dreams together Most of my memories make up our footprints Walking, running, standing still We came here every time we lost our way, but now we're friends who must part..."
Takamina wipes her tears and tries to smile...She sings her part...
"If y-you open the curtains, just like a-a sign The bright morning sun quietly o-overflows"
"Before we realized it, the future has approached Even our precious time right now will turn into the past"
"Because at the end"
"I want to tell you"
"Properly"
"Thank you....."
Takamina's other hand Clutches... Both were crying but they continued to sing as they looked up at the Sky...the stars were out the
moon was bright...
"If I could, I want to run to you and hold you tight I want to cry in your arms with my head on your chest But because today I have to begin my own journey, I have to stay here If I could, I want to be weak and complain Because I'm scared of taking the first step forward I thought you would hold me back, but we're friends who will be all right...."
Acchan lets takamina's go and Stood up and Went infront of takamina...She smiled at her while her tears flowed
"Most of my memories were made together with you Laughing, crying, even fighting We spent some days sharing our dreams together Maybe someday these memories will become.... a beautiful sunset They will illuminate.... my path Your face and your voice will guide me, and we'll be friends no matter where we are...."
Takamina hugged Acchan and cried on her chest
"Please Don't g-go...Atsuko...p-please stay..." she hugged tighter. "Gomen ne Minami...but I have to..."
"How can AKB stand with only 1 pillar supporting it...? " Acchan wiped her tears away and smiled at takamina
"Because the pillar that supports AKB is stronger than me..."
Acchan held takamina's pinky and intertwined it together "Promise me you'll take care of everybody...ok?" takamina
nodded and pinky promised..."I promise..." She flashed a smile.
"C'mon Minami I'll treat to some Katsudon~"
"Yay~!!" she cheered
Acchan and takamina's thoughts said in unison...
'I wish we can Be Best Friends Forever...'
takamina looks at acchan and holds her hand. 'Even if You're gone...'
Acchan smiles at her... 'Nothing will ever change between us...'
~END OF PART 5~
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Comment what you thought about this and leave a thank you if you liked it :bingo: And I'll
Update you bros Next Time :byebye: Byeeeee *Brofist
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Love your fics!! :D & latests Atsumina was cute *___* They'll def be best friends forever no matter what!!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks for ur awesome writing :D Any chance you can write A Kojiharu leaving team A fic once heard she'd be moving to B at tokyo dome?
Regardless i look forward to any of ur future fucs :D
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Thanks! And Kojiharu sadly will be leaving AKB once takamina goes first after Mariko
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Ah... so sad.... Minami is going to be left alone....
I like the story very much.... about Atsumina is so heart breaking
Yeah.... can't wait to see the next one
Thank you for the update
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Atsumina moment was so sad :( somehow it made me miss my old bestfriend ._. Please do continue :bow:
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Bad News Bros I can't update since I don't know what to write next! :banghead: So... Part 5 might have been the END of this lame Fanfic :err: :badluck:
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I love the atsumina part :heart: Please update soon :bow: