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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: Yui Oshi 48 on December 30, 2012, 03:02:57 AM
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I'm probably not very good at this. :cry: in fact I should probably not even do this. But nonetheless, I'm doing it, let's see how bad you think I am. (There may be some smut portions, if there are they'll be posted in the perv and I'll say so here). Anyway, here's my awful fic.
Yokoyama Yui pulled on her uniform, put a ribbon in her hair so that she looked like the one she desired, picked up her bag, grabbed the letter she hoped would change everything, and stepped out of the door.
She ran on her way to schoo, hoping to be at school before her target.
'Yui-chan!' came a voice, stopping her in her tracks. Yamamoto Sayaka, one of her best friends, was nearby. Feeling she couldn't just ignore Sayaka, even if it meant she'd miss her target, she walked over to her.
The two talked on the way to school, Yui refusing to mention why she'd been in such a rush no matter how many times Sayaka pressed her. Sayaka was Class N's president, and was also top in that classes specialty subject, maths. Yui was in class N, but because she was also good at science she was also in Class A, which one she was in depended on the lesson. Her target was also in Team A.
As they walked to the school they were joined by Watanabe Miyuki, another girl who got to sit in the front of Class N. Nobody was quite sure why though, since she wasn't nearly as good at it as they were. She saw a couple of her classmates from Class A arriving as they did, but not the one she was looking from, meanign they were almost certainly already inside.
Since there was no chance of finding her target before class now, Yui headed off to her first lesson, which was with Class N, spending all lesson distracted and cursing Sayaka for ruining her plans, which even distracted her from finishing the problem on the board Kitagawa-sensei had set them before Sayaka did. They were both miles ahead of Miyuki though.
Yui left for Class A after first period, where she'd have the rest of her classes, though she was slightly concerned that Miyuki's ears appeared to have been letting off steam.
She was hoping to make her move at recess, only to find for the entirety of class that her targets seat was empty. Of course they were busy, being the student president for the whole school, but she'd not expected they'd be so busy.
She saw her target entering class afterwards, meaning she's be able to act during lunch. She spent most of the lesson distracted and trying her best not to stare at her target.
After class she stalked her prey, hoping to catch them alone, only to be dragged aside two of her friends, Kitahara Rie from Class K and Sashihara Rino from Class H. The to of them pressed her into eating lunch with them, so she sat quietly joining in the conversation only when spoken to, and then immediately ran off the moment she saw her target, yelling a rushed apology to the pair.
She cornered her target just outside the building.
'Takahashi-sempai'
The object of her affection, Takahashi Minami, a fair bit shorter than her, turned round to see who it was.
Looking Takahashi in the eye and trying to keep a straight face, she trembling reached for the little envelope she'd prepared, and handed it, hands quivering, to Takashashi.
'Will you please...read this?'
Sorry for subjecting you all to this :nervous
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This is a great fanfic because Takayui is a pairing you don't see much in fanfics.
Keep up the good work!!!
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I liked it! I hope there's gonna be more :hee:
I thought the class system was clever :lol:
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Please please please continue! A pretty new pairing, but I still love it!
Practically I am Takamina X Everyone shipper
A smut? :ding: Oh yes! :hiakhiakhiak:
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Wow TakaYui ? Never thinks about this pairing..
please continue this story.. waiting for your update ^^/
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Well thanks everybody for the undeserved praise. I'm glad ikun1216 liked the class system, but I haven't really put much thought into it at the moment, I only came up with it whilst writing he first chapter, decided the speciality thing on a whim, and there's not really a lot left to say about that mess of a first chapter.
Anyway, it might become clear in this next chapter that I don't really know where I'm going with this beyond having some vague ideas, and then working towards setting those ideas up.
Takahashi looked at her, with what almost looked like a sad expression. Yui trembled as her sempai took the envelope, and removed the letter. The shorter girl finished reading, put the letter back into the envelope, and handed it back to her. It was only then she spoke.
'I'm sorry!'
'Eh?'
'I had no idea you felt like this about me Yui, and I'm flattered... but I just don't feel the same about you. You're a beautiful girl, and I'm sure you'll find someone who will love you soon, but that person isn't me'
'B-but..'
Takamina pulled her into a hug, then released her. 'I'm sorry,' before walking away, leaving Yui standing there with her letter, tears in her eyes.
Yui walked sadly to class. Since she'd left her bags behind when chasing Takahashi she couldn't do any of the work, but she was in no state to work properly anyway. She just sat quietly, trying to avoid looking at her beloved sempai in case she got hurt more, or just embaressed her.
After the last class, Yui walked home sadly, without her bag, or anything apart from the letter containing her rejected feelings. She walked into her house without talking to anybody, and shut herself in her room, not talking to her parents, and refusing to come down for dinner. It was the weekend so it didn't matter if she didn't get her homework done tonight, though she normally would have anyway. She'd been hoping to spend the weekend having fun with Takamina if she'd said yes, but that was just a distant fantasy now.
Yui didn't do anything until her mother called her saying to answer her phone because Sayaka was calling her. She picked up her phone, trying to sound as composed as possible.
'What is it?'
'Well apparently you left all of your things with Sashihara-san, and she gave them to me because she knew we were supposed to be meeting later. Speaking of which, why aren't you here?'
Yui had completely forgotten over the days events that she'd agreed over a week ago now to go do karaoke with Sayaka that night. And honestly, after her day, she didn't really feel like doing it now either.
'Ah, sorry. I just... don't feel like going out tonight anymore'
'That doesn't sound like you. And if you don't agree to come over now and at least get your stuff, I'll send Miyuki over to check up on you.'
'Fine, I'll come'
It wasn't that she dislike Miyuki of course, but she didn't want to deal with her overwhelming cheerfulness right now.
It wasn't far to Sayaka's house, but it was still a trip she'd rather not have made, especially after seeing groups of couples happy together made her sulk. When she arrived Sayaka quickly brought her up to her room, and then questioned why she was still in her uniform. Not wanting to tell her she'd spent the last 5 hours in her room crying, Yui wanted to just take her things and leave, but was pressured by Sayaka into going out to karaoke anyway.
At karaoke Yui just picked a few sad songs to reflect her mood to sing, and sat quietly drinking her cola and re-reading the letter while Sayaka sang her, generally more upbeat songs. Eventually they sang a couple of duets before they went back to Sayaka's.
It was late now, so Sayaka fetched the spare matress so that Yui could stay the night. Yui spent a lot of time re-reading the letter before finally going to sleep, leaving the letter and envelope on the floor.
The next morning, a barely happier Yui picked up her things and headed home to get her schoolwork done. She never really thought to check if she still had the letter. Sayaka, having seen her off, went back into her room to see a letter on the floor, marked Takahashi-sempai, and curiosity getting the better of her, picked it up and started to read the letter inside.
So yeah, they're not getting together this soon :nervous just thought that would be a bit quick, wanted to develop things more. I knew writing the first chapter that Takamina wouldn't accept her immediately, and I honestly don't really know how it's eventually going to happen yet. I just know it will. Also we'll probably wind up implying/outright having some other Yui pairings in this, and in at least one case that's actually going to mean 'writing out long, multiple paragraph descriptions of hot steamy les sex between them', but only for the perv.
Anyway, hope going this way doesn't wind up upsetting too many people. :panic:
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Yuihan had broken heart...
Noooooooooo....
what are u doing with Yuihan ? :frustrated:
*LOL*
nice update ! waiting for another one :byebye:
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^I'll make things better for her. At some point.
Can anyone explain how to change the thread title? I've seen other peoples threads having it done.
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^I'll make things better for her. At some point.
Can anyone explain how to change the thread title? I've seen other peoples threads having it done.
Just go and edit the first post's title
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I'm glad there's going to be more to this :twothumbs I wonder how this will develop even more.
Like new characters and what not.
You can do it Yuihan! Work Hard for love! :onioncheer:
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New characters? Yeah I might like to work on that. Only got one idea in the pipeline really.
Takamina walked into the house she lived alone in, and after spending a few minutes in quiet thought she pulled from her photos a photo she'd taken with Yui one time. She looked at it sadly.
"Another girl I've destroyed"
She tossed the photo aside, then curled up in a bell, staying just in the corner, a tear running down her cheek.
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After the weekend, Yui had recovered somewhat, and had distracted herself with schoolwork for the rest of the time.
She was grateful that she was in Class N for the whole of Monday, which meant she had an extra day before she saw Takamina-san again, and another day to recover. She tried to calm herself down by sticking around her friends from that class, but she noticed Sayaka was actually acting a little different to normal, though she wasn't sure what she could do about that.
She went home that day quite happy, got her work done, and then spent a few hours in town with Rie and Rino, before going to sleep happier than she'd been since Friday morning.
The next morning she was in A all day. She hadn't expected Takahashi to want to talk to her or anything, but before class started she came over.
'I just wanted to make sure you were all right Yokoyama. After... well you know.'
'I'm... okay. I suppose.'
'No hard feelings?'
'I couldn't have them if I wanted to.'
'Atta girl,' Takamina laughed, gave her another hug as if to say she was sorry, and headed to her seat waiting for Togasaki-sensei to come in to teach them.
She got on well enough for the rest of the week, managing to speng time with her friends and return to some facsimile of what life had been like a week earlier, even if she wasn't nearly as happy. She found Sayaka was oddly distracted, but she couldn't do much about that could she.
It was Friday night again, and she'd just finished her homework, when Sayaka came into her room.
'Ready to go?'
It took Yui a few moments to realise that they were supposed to be going out and just having fun for the night. Sayaka's parents were out of town so they'd be staying at her house so they could be out as long as they liked. She took a few minutes to be ready before they both set off into the city.
The two headed into town and went to a club that was open to under-20's, though of course it didn't serve alcohol. Not that Sayaka was allowed to drink alcohol anyway. Given the two of them were both quite attractive, after a while they realised they were attracting some unwanted attention, and so they went outside for a bit. Yui noticed Sayaka was still looking kind of distracted, all things considered.
'Are you okay Sayaka-chan?'
'I'm fine... a little worried about you though.'
'What do you mean?'
Sayaka took out the letter.
'Thats...'
'Do you need someone to talk to about this Yui?'
What does Takamina mean I wonder? (I should know really since I'm writing but you know)
Also next chapter we'll get to see what was actually written in the letter. (Need to get on that as well)
I'm a terrible writer. I should just give up now.
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I don't know what your talking about, you being a terrible writer. That's nonsense. So far you're on chapter 3 and I'm enjoying what I'm reading. :twothumbs
Ah....Sayaka. . .I hope you're not gonna disprove of Yuihan's crush :(
Takamina just attracts everyone doesn't she? :nervous
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Takamina i hope can she fall in love with Yui. :inlove:
Really great history
thanks for upload. :twothumbs
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@ikun126: interesting idea *scribbles notes*.
Now if you didn't believe my writing was awful before I think this one will convince you.
'That's mine. Why do you have that? You didn't...'
'You left it at my house last weekend'
'Did you..'
'Yes. I'm sorry Yui, I shouldn't have, but I got too curious'
Yui just sat stunned a little.
'I understand why you've been looking so sad the last few days. I realise she must have said no'
'I'm annoyed at you Sayaka. How could you?'
'It's because you were clearly miserable. And now I see why. You've been pretending to be alright all of last week, but really you're not.'
'You can't just..'
'I brought you out here so you could have some fun and forget about it for a night. I think you really need it.'
'I understand your trying to make things better, but I'm not staying if your idea of having some fun is getting off with a bunch of random guys.'
'Eh?'
'There were a lot in the club, I assumed you were getting ideas.'
'No don't worry I wasn't planning anything like that. This is getting boring as it is don't you think.'
'Come with me to the shop then, I'll get us some booze, it'll make things funner'
'I'm not old enough'
'Come on, this way. Live a little'
Sayaka smiled a little as her friend dragged her towards the shop.
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Sayaka surveyed the envelope. It clearly said on it 'Takamina-san'. 'I shouldn't read it, this is Yui's private business.' She though to herself.
All to quickly though curiosity got the better of her and she opened the letter, and read it.
'Takahashi-sempai. I'm sorry to have to bother you like this. But there's something I've been keeping to myself for a long time now and I need to speak up. I'm sure Takahashi-san doesn't even care about me, but she is kind so I hope she will at least here me out.
I love you sempai. You are the most beautiful girl I have ever seen. Your attitude towards life and all the things about you make me smile every day. I realise though, sempai, that you probably won't accept my feelings, but if you could, please at the least, go on a date with me to the curry house tomorrow. If you want to'
Sayaka put the letter away. A few tears rolled down her cheek. Yui had created something this beautiful out of love for someone. She realised now she must be hurting inside something awful.
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Yui had bought 2 reasonably size bottles of alcohol, and brought them out to the waiting Sayaka. They drank about half of each before returning to the club.
In the club they waited until a song they liked started playing, and then started dancing, which had the additional benefit of giving the alcohol a chance to have some affect on them.
They had been dancing as pretty much just the two of them together even when they'd been there earlier, but Yui could tell, just about, that they seemed to be getting a lot closer to each other than before, Yui even bumping into Sayanee's chest a couple of times.
At some point a random guy walked over to them, clearly with intention to try to hit on one or the both of them. Sayaka was looking for a window to escpae, Yui took a moment to realise there wasn't a choice, grabbed Sayaka's head, and kissed her. The guy quickly changed course towards another pair of girls. The moment they were sure he'd gone they pulled apart and giggled.
'Sorry, couldn't think of anything else'
'Never mind, we got a laugh in'
They stayed in the club another hour before finding where the alcohol was and leaving, heading back to Sayaka's house, finishing the alcohol just before they got back there.
There was no particular need to be quiet or tidy since Sayaka's parents weren't home, so they just dumped their things inside and walked up to Sayaka's room.
When they got up there they realised Sayaka hadn't actually prepared the bed Yui normally slept in, and neither of them was in a state to sort it out now.
'Ah well. I'll just sleep on the floor'
'No Yui. It's my fault, you can sleep in my bed'
Eventually the two agreed to just both sleep in Sayaka's bed. But neither of them was tired yet so they stole some drink from the kitchen and sat at the foot of the bed laughing about things. Eventually they wound up talking about their kiss earlier.
'Did you see the guys face when we did it though?'
'Of course not, I was looking the other way. I have to say you did catch me by surprise a little with the kiss'
'I'm sorry, it was just the only thing I could think of.'
'No it's fine. Honestly, I actually quite enjoyed it.'
'It was quite fun wasn't it? I was happy for the distraction really.'
It took a moment for them to realise their hands were on each others faces. It took another to realise their faces were a lot closer than they needed to be. It was only seconds before their lips touched.
Uh... plot twist! :nervous It won't stay like this forever but for now I'm doing this. Please don't hurt me :panic:
Now while writing this chapter I discovered two things One was the rediscovery that I can't write love letters. The other was that I am no good at setting up romantic tension.
Not really a lot else to say except that you can expect my first submission to the perv soonish.
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SayaYui :ding:
this is so interesting !
waiting for next update :on gay:
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so cute letter Yui
But I'm a little confused is Yamamoto Sayaka o Akimoto Sayaka? :?
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^Yamamoto. I said in the first chapter. I realise it's kind of confusing, but I didn't think using nicknames really worked in the setting (I could be completely wrong of course), and I realise I've already broken the rule with Takamina, but it's honestly just easier to think.
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Why u not use "Sayane" for nick "Sayaka Yamamoto",,
because someone had confused with "Sayaka"..
"Sayane" is a famous nickname for Sayaka Yamamoto, right ? :on gay:
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Your writing is still not horrible :P
Though I do want to know who would sell alcohol to minors, ah well this is why it's called fiction lol.
I found the ending scene to be quite cute. :)
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Interesting concept with both Yui and Minami. But this moment with Sayanee and Yuihan. •^• Sayanee seems to really like Yui~ How is this going to go? *^*
Hope to see the next update! \o
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midget GM and my princess yui...I always think that if takamina and acchan got married yui will be fit to be their kid :on lol:
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@ikun1216: I'm writing them as their current ages, which means in Japan it is totally legal for Yui to buy alcohol.
You may or may not want to read my first story in the perv: http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34824.0 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34824.0) which is basically stuff that happens between the kiss at the end of chapter 4 and the start of this one, but it's really not important to the story, I just felt like writing it. Because I'm a perv. So be sure to enjoy my terrible writing there.
Yui opened her eyes, and took a couple of seconds upon seeing Sayaka's face to remember that she was staying at hers that night. Nothing to worry about. She did start to worry when she realised she was naked. And so was Sayaka. And their legs were tangled. And Sayaka's hand was on her shoulder.
Yui couldn't remember what had gone on last night, but she was sure it must have been more than just the kiss she remembered. She honestly hoped Sayaka wouldn't remember any more than she did. Carefully and quietly she got out of the bed, and went and had a shower, before getting dressed into the change of clothes she'd bought and quickly finding, without looking at them too closely, the clothes she'd been wearing and putting them away in her bag.
She went downstairs and sat watching television quietly. She honestly didn't want to stay until tomorrow like planned anymore, worried about the atmosphere between them being awkward, but she felt it would be worse to just leave without saying anything.
Sayaka came down, looking a little unsure of what to say, and made breakfast, while Yui sat trying to avoid talking about anything. They ate their meal in silence. Eventually Yui spoke up.
'I'm, going home.'
'Eh?'
'I can't stay here. It's awkward.' She didn't mean to say that last part.
'Well if you think it's so awkward, maybe you could either tell me what the hell happened, or talk about it, or try to work things out.'
'I'm sorry Sayaka, but I can't. I feel awful'.
Yui rushed upstairs, grabbing her bag, and left even as Sayaka begged her to stay at least so they could figure something out. She couldn't do it.
Returning home earlier than her parents expected, Yui sat in her room. She felt awful, thinking she must have forced Sayaka to do whatever they did, and not wanting to deal with whatever had happened when she still had feelings for Takahashi.
Yui didn't speak with Sayaka at all on sunday or monday, keeping to herself and only talking to Miyuki in class. She returned home and retreated to her room.
She only spoke to someone that night because her mother let Iwata Karen, a girl from class A who was actually too young for their year and had made it in by being especially talented in certain areas. Yui sometimes helped her with her work when she didn't understand it.
She tried to keep a happy facade up, while explaining to Karen how to do the work. However, she noticed Karen wasn't her usual cheerful self either. Eventually she decided she had to ask the girl what was wrong.
Karen tried to say something, but eventually just moved and tried to kiss Yui. Yui pulled away after only a second, but she was surprised by what had happened.
'I love you..Yui-san'
'Karen, I've seen you in class for a long time, and we both know that's not true. It's something to do with Sumire, yes?'
Sato Sumire was another girl in class A, who got along very well with Karen they all knew. It'd had been no secret anybody that Karen only had eyes for Sumire, but Sumire herself had never seemed to notice.
'I.. just don't know how to make her notice me.'
'You just have to go and try. Don't sacrifice something you could have out of fear.'
Karen left soon after, leaving Yui to think about her own words. Eventually she realised that even if she still had feelings for Takahashi, she could probably be happy with Sayaka. If she hadn't messed it up already.
She ran out of the house, and straight over to Sayaka's, stopping only to ask Sayaka's mother if she was upstairs. She ran into Sayaka's room.
'Yui?'
Before Sayaka could say any more Yui carefully, took her head and leaned in to kiss her. She broke it, and after a moment, Sayaka returned the kiss.
'I'm sorry I left.'
Sayaka's only response was to kiss her again.
I honestly have no idea how or when TakaYui will actually happen. Or how long SayaYui will last. I guess we'll find out together.
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uhh where is minami? :?
but is a great chapter with the perv section :twothumbs
thanks for upload
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thanks for update..
i'm prefer to SayaYui than TakaYui.. *LOL*
But, just waiting what will happen next :on gay:
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SayaYui <3 ;A; I'm so happy you wrote this fic, cause I ship both TakaYui and SayaYui <3
I really loved last chapter, the way Yui goes back to Sayaka' side and gives her a chance ;A;
I don't really care if Yui ends either with Sayaka or Minami, cause I like both pairings, but just keep writing the fic :D
Waiting for next chap <3
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Okay... is this story TakaYui or MiyukixYui?
Anyway, it's a very nice story there... Thank you
Well... why did Minami needs to cry, just because she rejected someone feeling...
What did she mean by destroying someone's life just because of rejection.
Curious.... interesting... Can't wait to see the next update
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Oohh plot twist lol , I'll wait with you for the TakaYui :thumbsup
As much as I would love to read your not terrible writing I can't get into the perv section link :badluck:
So I'll just sit back and wonder when Takamina shows up again, and see if another poor girl falls for her charms
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I really wish this is takayui
Please make it takayui
Thank you :bow:
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Well I'm glad not everyone is hating on this twist. and @cisda83 I haven't even gotten to the MiyukixYui yet. Be patient (isn't sure if I'm joking or not).
Anyhow, I've been busy, and this chapter would've been longer, but I've got an idea for another fic which I'm going to have to get done before I write more of sempai. Anyway, here's the next, short chapter.
The pairs lips danced over eachother. Yui tried to poke her tongue into Sayaka's mouth, and started pulling her shirt up.
'What are you doing?'
Yui broke the kiss with a start, and looked over to Sayaka's bed to see Miyuki sitting on it, a confused expression on her face, a workbook forgotten next to her along with Sayaka's own. Not only was their relationship public a little quicker than Yui might have liked, but Yui was awfully concerned that Miyuki had somehow decided the answer to the maths problems they'd been given was Kitagawa-sensei.
'Miyuki... what are you doing here?'
It was obvious what she was doing there, but Yui was just trying to distract attention from what they'd just done. She'd gotten over how she was feeling about Sayaka, but having it seen was quite embaressing.
'Did you two.. hook up?'
Yui could have died from embaressment. Sure, she'd known going into this that they'd have to tell people sooner or later, but she'd hoped to have a few minutes to talk about this with Sayaka before letting people know about it. Fortunately for Yui, who was still racking her brains for what to do, Sayaka spoke up first.
'Miyuki, I'm sure you find this very exciting, but we'd like to keep this quiet. Can you do that?'
'Of course. Leave it to me.'
She left, but Yui and Sayaka were unsure if she'd keep her promise.
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Takahsahi sat in her room. She picked up a photo, an look at the girl she was with in the picture.
'Atsuko..'
She placed the photo aside, and cureld up in a ball, tears in her eyes.
Hope you liked it.
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Thanks for the update :) Wonder if Miyuki will keep her promise :p
& aw, Poor Takamina, guessing atsuko is the reason she isn't accepting any other girls feelings. Wonder what happened with Atsuko!
Thanks again, can't wait to read the next chapter :)
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so this fic still Takayui ? :? :)
Hurm I wonder what happened with Takamina and Atsuko
waiting for your update
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As much as wanna read THAT part, I have yet granted access there so I guess I should just go on with what I can read :bleed eyes:
I wonder if Miyuki will go "if you want me to keep it secret you should sleep with me" and blackmail the two, lol. :panic:
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^That might have happened at one point. Won't be anymore. Probably.
And yes, the fic is still TakaYui. It's just going to take a while to get there.
Yui and Sayaka walked to school together, then Yui went to Class A for her morning classes. She was worried the whole time people were discussing her behind her back. But it wasn't until she met up with Sayaka for lunch that her fears were realised.
Ogaswara Mayu, another girl in Class N, was making a lot of jokes, Sayaka was sat looking angry, and Miyuki looked guilty.
'3 minutes' Sayaka said, 'thats how long it took for Miyuki to spill the beans. I wouldn't be surprised if the whole school knows by now'
Based on the way Sashihara and Kitahara were looking over in their direction quizzically, that was the case. Of the students in the dining hall, only Karen and Sumire seemed oblivious, Karen was too busy hugging Sumire.
Yui sighed, and sat down. Deciding there was only one way the crowd would stop looking at them, took hold of Sayaka's cheek. 'Well then, shall we?'
They leaned in and kissed each other. The new development confirmed, most of the school returned to their lunches, Class K's Oshima Yuko was amongst those still watching, trying to see if they did any more.
'Miyuki didn't tell them about the sex did she?'
'YOu two had sex?' Came Miyuki's surprised and a little too loud response. Yui buried her face, embarressed.
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Takashia had been busy with Student President stuff the whole day, and had missed the news developing. She left the school as one of the last, and happened to spot Yui and Sayaka walkig home together. Nothing unusual about that of course. She wondered if the girl had gotten over her properly yet.
Oh okay. Looked from the somewhat agressive game of Tonsil Tennis they were playing the answer was yes, yes she had gotten over her. Maybe things could have worked out with them after all, Yui was a strong person all things considered. Then again, she'd thought Atsuko had been strong as well. She couldn't do that to someone else after knowing what Atsuko had done. Better to let her down than accpet her and then have the cycle repeat. Even so, she was sort of jealous of Yamamoto.
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As their kiss ended, Yui saw Takahashi walking towards them.
'Ah. Takahashi-sempai.'
Takahashi smiled at them, then asked to talk with Yui a moment.
Around a corner Yui spoke.
'Sempai, what is it?'
She was surprised when Takahashi grabbed her, gently.
'Yokoyama, just tell me, right now, are you happy?'
Yui was puzzled a little by the question. But it was just concern, no reason not to answer.
'Of course.....'
Guess what happens next?
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Good Job Yuihan !
Forget about Takamina, Moving on to Sayane ! :luvluv2:
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Not much to say, except updates are probably going to be infrequent now.
'... I'm happy, because I'm in Takahashi-sempai's arms.'
Takahashi took a hold of Yui's chin, and leaned in. Both girls closed their eyes as their lips came closer together...
...Until Takahashi's collided with her bedroom wall. She recovered from her daze. She'd been daydreaming. She'd wanted, deep down, for Yokoyama to say something like that. She'd wanted to be able to accept Yokoyama's feelings whenshe confessed. Now she wished she had even more. But she couldn't do that. Not after Atsuko. Tears ran down her cheek as she looked through her photos.
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That weekend, Yui's parents were both out, so she, along with Sayaka and Miyuki, had gone to her house to do their homework together. Miyuki wasn't doing too well at it. After they finally finished all of the work, Miyuki went home to collect her things, before coming back so they could all spend the night there.
Yui and Sayaka hadn't planned to do much while she was gone. They talked for a bit and were planning to start on cooking dinner, but there innocently-starting conversation soon turned to some kissing. The pair of them were half-naked making out on the sofa when Miyuki returned. Embaressed, but with nothing they could do about it, they let her come in. Sayaka let her come over. After a moment, she took her two friends heads, and guided their mouths to one another. After shocked moment, the two of them kissed again. Then Sayaka kissed Miyuki. They went upstairs.
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20 minutes later Yui was covering herself with a duvet, Miyuki was sat sadly in a corner and Sayaka was trying to break her skull on a cabinet.
Yui spoke up. 'OK, I think we're all agreed that that was a terrible idea. Miyuki, you can go home if you want to, Sayaka, please sto trying to break your skull.'
After agreeing to never do that together again, the girls decided to spend the night relaxing, ordering some pizza, and then maybe kissing a little, but nothing more than that. They then went to bed, Yui and Sayaka sharing one.
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Weeks passed, and Yui was feeling less and less happy with things. She was enjoying being with Sayaka, and felt guilty she wasn't happier, but she was feeling, deep down, that she wanted something else. Even if she knew she couldn't have her.
One day, while on her own (the two of them having had their first fight, it was a silly argument, and they both knew it, they'd just argued over where to go for the night), Yui was surprised to see Takahashi walking up to her.
'Takahashi-sempai' she choked.
Takahashi looking at her could see she'd been crying, and asked what was going on. Yui explained, leaving out the fact she still had feelings for Takahashi.
'You know something Yokoyama? I owe you an explanation. I'm sorry for not giving it to you sooner.'
'You not having feelings for me was explanation enough sempai.'
'Actually, it wasn't. And I'm sorry'
'I don't understand'
'The thing is, Yokoyama, I would have accepted you in a heartbeat'
'Eh?'
'I wanted to say yes. But I couldn't, and I'm sorry I had to hurt you like that'
'What are you saying?'
'I'm saying I couldn't let what happened to Atsuko happen to you'
Well this is getting bad.
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lol it's not getting bad :P :) I'm really curious as to what Minami was referring to in the end regarding Atsuko. Please update when you can, I look forward to the next chapter :D
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What a surprising turn of events! Acchan. . .what did you do?!?!?!
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I may be deserving of hate after this chapter. Your decision really.
Yui stood up, and stepped away, her mind reeling.
'Yokoyama, you remember Meada right?'
'I can't talk about this'
'I blamed myself for her death. I felt like if I hadn't broken up with her, hadn't let her go so she could pursue a relationship that would last now she was moving, maybe she wouldn't have been alone the night she died.'
'Why are you telling me this'
'I'm explaining myself to you. Because I owe it to you.'
'Why wasn't that important to me. Odds of being accepted didn't seem that great to begin with.'
'You're not the first girl to confess to me since then. I rejected them all because I blamed myself, because I didn't want t to happen to them as well'
'...'
'But, honestly, you're confession made me happy. Happier than I had been in a long time. I'm never going to feel it wasn't my fault but, I've decided now that with you I do want this. The question is, do you still?'
She moved closer to Yui, cautiously offering a hug
'I...ICANTDEALWITHTHIS!'
Yui screamed, louder than she probably intended, before leaving quickly, going to hide in her room while trying to process what had happened. Takahashi stayed where she was. feeling kin dof terrible, and realising she shouldn't really be confessing to Yui given the state she'd been in earlier.
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Yui and Sayaka didn't speak much for a few days. Yui was still trying to process what Takahashi had said to her, and Sayaka was feeling bad about the arguments they'd been having.
Eventually, on a camping trip they were both on, both of them being pretty antisocial with others, Sayaka finally approached her.
'How're you doing?'
'I'm trying to work stuff out'
'We had a silly argument, I realise I've taken too long to deal with it but could we move on from it?
'I'd honestly forgotten about that'
'Then why haven't you talked to me'
'There's something I need to tell you'
Please feel free to hate on me for what happened to Acchan. But know what her being dead was one of the certainties of the story for a while.
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aw acchan has passed away :( Must be tough for Minami since she's blaming herself, but its nice she's trying to be happy again. Too bad Yui is now all confused. Looking forward to what happens next!
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Atsuko passed away :shocked and Takamina blamed herself for Atsuko's death...Ah so sad
hope Yui not confused more and accepted Takamina
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I could probably have posted this last night. But I'll post it now since I managed to write it last night whilst depriving myself of sleep.
'Takahashi-sempai spoke to me the other day.'
'Oh? And how's that caused you to be so quiet?'
'...Well, the thing is....she ..uh..said something.'
'Are you going to tell me what or just leave me guessing?'
'She ... uh, kind of told me... that she'd sort of... be willing to get together with me.'
'Then why aren't you with her already?'
'What? How can you say that?'
'Yui, I love you, but you don't love me the same way I love you. Not really. You love her like I love you. I've been nothing but a distraction. You might not have realised it, but I have.'
'So you're just telling me to bandon our relatioinship just because of this?'
Sayaka knelt down next to her, took ahold of her face, and kissed her.
'Go get her.'
'I can't just do that to you...'
'Yes you can. Now lets work out how this is going to work.'
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Yokoyama Yui pulled on her uniform, put a ribbon in her hair so that she looked like the one she desired, picked up her bag, grabbed the letter she hoped would change everything, and stepped out of the door.
she walked to school, accompanied by her best friend, Yamamoto Sayaka. They got to the school gates, where Yui saw the object of affections, Takahashi Minami, stood outside.
Sayaka hugged her, and pushed her in Takahashi's drection.
'Takahashi-sempai'
Takahashi looked up at her and smiled. Yui took out the envelope, and held it out.
'Will you please read this?'
Hooray for me rehashing the opening on the fic.
Next chapter might not be then end of the fic, but I think it's pretty clear where this is going.
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Thank you for update
I'm looking forward the next
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I'm having trouble trying to write another chapter. I'm almost feeling like I should have had the resolution to the cliffhanger I setup and just ended the fic. I'll try to think of something.
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This'll be the end of the fic. There's literally nothing else I can think of.
Takahashi took the envelope, opened it, and read it. Then, putting the envelope to one side, she stood on her toes and kissed Yui on the lips. Yui reciprocated, their lips mashing together. They hugged.
Yui was happy again. She was with the girl she loved.
After school Sayaka walked home with the new couple. She left them at Yui's house, so they could work things out, and walked home alone.
She returned to her room, and sat in the corner for a few minutes. After a while she punched the wall in frustration, tears in her eyes. She wanted to be with Yui. Yui had been everything to her. But she hadn't been everything to Yui. And the knowledge of that hurt her. But she needed Yui to be happy. She reassured herself that she'd done what was best for Yui even as she sat there, tears streaming down her face. It was for Yui, and that was why she'd done it. Becaue she ;oved her. Even if it meant she was alone.
Feel bad for Sayanee.
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So I'm guessing nobody actually read the conclusion then. Anyway, here's a little one-shot I did, same pairing, from Yui's POV
The untouchable sempai. The greatest sempai.
You lead by example, you were alwaysthe leader.
You made the openeing call of the coolest song.
Just after I’d begun.
I wanted to be like you then.
For a time you were my captain.
I stood in another girls place.
I could stand so close to you.
Yet I could never close the distance.
All too soon it ended.
You gave the announcement.
I was happy being promoted.
But not being away from you.
When it happened you praised me.
Said I was an amazing person.
I was nothing compared to you.
Even others said my effort,
was second only to yours.
But if I could work to mortal perfection.
Then you must be a god.
I worked my hardest.
At every task I was given.
If only you would notice.
And see how much it was.
In the dome I stood there
and saw you now receive
a position and a title
befitting your hard work
My team was changed that same event
You ran straight up and hugged me
I couldn't hide my smile
So I just cried instead.
I’ll work hard to help you
and meet your expectations
You say I am your Oshi
But to me you are god.
Not great huh?
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I liked the conclusion of your fic :D Glad all worked out b/w Yui and Minami but ya I feel bad for Sayaka :P
& Nice little drabble there :) I found it very interesting when Yui commented that Takamina was like a god on AKBINGO lol. Thanks for the updates :)
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^Thanks.
I wrote this one a few weeks ago ut never posted it. I'm not sure if it's much good.
Milk on the Mountains
They sat in the club room
Yokoyama
Of course, I'm not actually any good at music. Running a student council and getting people to come to agreements on policies, that's easy. Ask me to write music and I'll just come with a mess. I can't even play a few notes on the piano in the corner. Only thing I can do is use my money to buy instruments for it. Not that I particualry care for the club. Just her. Looking back across the room from the desk I'm sat I can see her there. Sat by the piano. She's looking back. But is she looking at me? Or is she looking at the other girl. The one sat on the sofa.
Yamamoto
Is she looking at me? Or at her? I wish I knew. I wish I knew if she card more about me, since I've known her forever. I've always looked after her. But I guess that's nothing comapred the impressive student president, what with her constant donating to the club. Anyone can see she's only doing it for her. I guess a lifetime of friendship is nothing compared to that.
Watanabe
They always look so angry with eachother. I mean them having differences is understandable, but Sayaka should at least be thankful that Yui's helped finance the club so much. Not that I ever thought Sayaka cared much about music. But all they ever seem to do is glare at each other. Yui's walking out of the room again. Oh god, Sayaka's following her. They're going to have another argument aren't they. I try to play a few notes on the piano, maybe come up with a new song. The noise of them arguing is distracting. I can't tell what they're saying, but I can't play like this. I sit on the sofa, waiting for them to return.
Yokoyama
I walk back in. She's sat on the sofa. She looks sad. Did she hear us? Did we upset her? I couldn't live with myself if I had. I sit next to her, and hestitantly put an arm around her.
Yamamoto
I walk in, seeing them like this. I glare at Yokoyama as I walk past her, and then I sit down on Miyuki's other side. I cautiously take her hand, worried about upsetting her. She looks puzzled. Or worried.
Watanabe
Why are they... doing this. Why has Yui got her arm around me. Why has Sayaka taken my hand. Why is Yui resting her head on my shoulder.
Yokoyama
I look down as I rest my head. She's nervous. I've frightened her. I should move.
Watanabe
The lights go out. A power cut. They both get up and leave. Saying they'll find out what's going on. No doubt they'll argue again. I hear them doing so after the lights are back on. But it takes a long time after they quieten down for them to return.
Yokoyama
We argue. She says I should leave Miyuki alone. I point out Miyuki hardly seems interested in her either. We just wind up arguing more, we've repeated this pattern so many times. I'm sure Miyuki must hear us. It must upset her. We argue over and over. It's always the same. I get closer to her as I shout....
This is new. Our lips are touching. What? How? When? I don't understand? What is she doing? We serperate.
Yamamoto
I look at her horrified as she asks what I think I'm doing. I shout at her that it was her who started the kiss. Deep down I'm not sure though. Might it have been me.
Yokoyama
I push her away from me. Did I start the kiss? Did she? What's going on? I don't understand. We stop still for a second. I reckon there's only one way to work things out. I lean into her.
Watanabe
It's a long time until they return. It was almost time to go home. Both of them looked exhausted. They never argued for that long before. Maybe I need to put my foot down.
Over the next week or so, the pair of them left more frequently, and yet I heard them arguing less, but they were gone for longer than before. I couldn't understand it. I'd have like to think they were getting along at long last, but if that was the case why would they be arguing at all? I was just glad they were arguing less.
Yamamoto
Exhausted, and covered in sweat, I pull my shirt back on. I look over at my adversary, who looks similarly tired. We both know this isn't working. We're agonising less about Miyuki and whether or not either or us has a chance with her, but we still want her deep down. And we both know it.
Yokoyama
As we walk back to the club room we discuss, calmly for once, what needs to happen. We have to let her choose.
Watanabe
I hear them as they come back. Not letting them speak I run away. I have to choose? They have feelings for me. They seem to have for the longest time. I feel awful for not realising. I've been inadvertently leading them on for years. I can't just choose one of them. I couldn't hurt the other of them like that. And honestly, I don't know how I feel.
The next time I see them, they bring me into the club room. They look exhausted. They explain how they both feel about me, and simply ask that I choose one of them. I ask them to close their eyes.
Yokoyama
I close my eyes when she asks. I feel lips touch mine.
Yamamoto
There are lips touching mine, but they're familiar.
Watanabe
It didn't work, they're looking at me annoyed. It was the only thing I could think of. Maybe they could love eachother. But no, that hasn't happened. They're annoyed at me and I can't blame them, I just don't know what to do. I tell them to close their eyes again.
I kiss them both, one after the other. It doesn't help, I can't help it. Honestly I love them both. And I can't decide. I tell them as much. They kiss me together. As much as thet's possible. Our tongues fight together between the 3 of us. I love them. Both of them. Equally.
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And here's a short piece I stopped writing because it depressed me.
The happiest day of my life was the Tokyo Dome.
Not for the concert, or the singing, but for you. And being on a team with you. Being able to be closer to you.
Of course I appreciate what I've achieved, what I've been given, what my fans have done for me.
But my tears on the day I was promoted weren't just for promotion. They were also because I was being seperated from you.
I understood though. I worked hard. Not that I ever believed anything would come from it. You're too busy and I always knew that.
I'll never be with you. And that destroys me but I can't give you more to worry about. So I'll just work hard and maybe one day be taking the weight of of your shoulders a little.
I was so happy the moment you hugged me.
But that's not important. What's important is I don't cause you problems and keep at my work. You'll never love me. And that's how things will stay, and I'll keep it that way. So you have one less girl to worry about.
It's not much, but it's all I can do for you. Because I can't expect you to look at me.
It kills me every time you praise me.
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Nice one-shots
Keep up the good work
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nice OS, yui-milky-sayanee...a nice bizzare love triangle...
I would love to add nana and ainyan just to make things more complicated LOL
keep up the good work... :on GJ: