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Title: My boyfriend and my fiance - chapter 9 (MaYuki) 15/10/2013
Post by: cmze on December 31, 2012, 07:30:46 AM
                                           
Hello everyone! :)
Good news my parents gave me a tablet for christmas so i can update often,the bad new is that i lost my music MY FRENCH KISS SONGS i can't find it in 4shared! does anyone know where i can find it? 
while i was absent a found a new group and well this us what came after listening to their songs and also my friend's fic called Married?! you know who i'm talking about!! ;)


                                             My boyfriend and my fiancé
         
Coming soon!

"Get on the car kid!" An older man says as he stops next to a handsome boy

The handsome boy looked at the man on the car "are you some kind of pervert?go away before i'll kill you'" he says serious with a black aura then walked away

The man was kinda afraid but still managed to control it "i knew your parents Kashiwagi Yuki!" he says in a serious tone

Yuki turned around and looked at the man

"come on kid,i'm your guardian and also your father in law!" the man says with a smile

"what?" the young handsome boy reacted

The man laughed "i'll explain you everything so get on!" he says as Yuki gets in the car

"well your parents before dying,my wife and me agreed that you two would marry once you were older!" The man says

"who's you two?" Yuki asked

The man laughed again "my daughter and you!" he answered as he drives

Yuki was really shocked but he could do nothing but stay quiet,he blinked a few times and still can not believe it

(At the man's home)

Yuki entered to the home and puttedvhis bag aside then there was an older woman who invited him to drink tea

(By the way it look the woman is his wife)

"i want Mayu to get home already!" The man says smiling

"Kashiwagi san i'm sorry about your lost!" The woman says sad

"ohh don't look at me like that!" Yuki says mad

The woman was shocked and also the man

"don't feel pity for me,i'm ok!" Yuki says mad then leaves the house by slamming the door

"poor kid he's having a hard time! do you think he'll come back?" The older woman says

"he forgot his bag!" the man says grinning

(After a few hours)

"i'm home!" a good looking girl shouts as she goes to the kitchen to say hi to her mother

"Mayu chan welcome back!" the older woman says smiling

"Mayu chan you're home come and sit with me!" her father says as both goes to the living room

both sitted and after a fee seconds her mother sitted next to her dad

Mayu looked at her parents " what's going on?" she asked

"you're growing so fast!" her mother says

"ehh?!" Mayu frowned

her father smiled "how was your day?" he asked

"great till a jerk bumped me and didn't apologized" Mayu replies annoyed

Her parents were only looking at her

"why are they looking at me like that? do they know? stupid Jun.. we said i was going to tell them! i'm going to kill you when i see you tomorrow!" The CG thought while gets red

"let's talk Mayu chan!" her dad says serious

"oh man Jun i'm going to kill you!" Mayu thought as she gulps

Suddenly the doorbell rang

"oh he got back!" Mayu's mom says as she gets up and opens door

The older woman gasped then called her husband who showed up with Mayu behind her

"you!" Mayu says shcoked pointing to the handsome guy who's being grabbed by a police man

"is this your son?" the police man asked

"what?!" Mayu a asked

"no,im his guardian what happened?" Mayu's dad asked

"he cause a fight!" the police man says

"ha looks like the jerk has what he deserves get him on jail!" Mayu says smirking

Yuki looked at Mayu then smiled then got closer to Mayu even thought the policeman was still holding him by his arms "so you wanna be an ex con's wife! bad girl i like it! he says teasing Mayu

"ehhh! wife?" Mayu repeats

Mayu's dad facepalmed himself

"What you heard honey i'm your fiance and you're my soon to be wifey!" Yuki says grinning

Mayu was speechless…

TO BE CONTINUED
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Prologue :)
Post by: clubhappy on December 31, 2012, 08:09:42 AM
Wow Yuki is a bad boy in this fic. Interesting XD
It's been a long time since I last saw you update your fic. Kinda miss them. Waiting for your new updates now. :D
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Prologue :)
Post by: ChuuuPuffss on December 31, 2012, 08:16:42 AM
Oh my God, this is awesome!!

You have to update this like.. everyday!

Yuki being a VERY bad boy is first in thiss~~

Update soon coz' were low on MaYuki fics!
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Prologue :)
Post by: kurogumi on December 31, 2012, 10:39:40 AM
Already fall in love with the plot!

So yuki is mayu's fiance,

gezz its still prologue and mayu already yuki's, love it

Im really happy for you cmze-san...LOL

Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Prologue :)
Post by: mo-chan on December 31, 2012, 10:54:50 AM
wow an other fic  :w00t:
I'm happy you're back  :cry:
about French kiss songs I couldn't find it too  :sweatdrop:
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Prologue :)
Post by: Chanaline on December 31, 2012, 11:16:30 AM
YOU'RE BACK!!!!!

WOOW You make a gender!!!! Yuki is a boy and a bad boy!!!!!!!! :inlove:

why she had already a boyfriend?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? :angry:

Oh and for the French Kiss song which do you want? I don't have all but I have some.... :)
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Prologue :)
Post by: korin48 on December 31, 2012, 11:36:24 AM
Yuki is so cool!!  :mon crazyinlove:
Don't tell me Mayu has boyfriend name Jun??  :mon huh:
Please update soon!  :mon inluv:
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Prologue :)
Post by: leEwẬy on December 31, 2012, 12:15:57 PM
This fic is interesting :inlove:
I very love your Mayuki fics, cmze-san
Wait for your new update :)
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Prologue :)
Post by: jell_o_jello on December 31, 2012, 12:50:07 PM
Yuki-Mayu-Ju(n)rina triangle!?!? Me likey  :w00t: :inlove:


And congrats on the upgrade from ipod to tablet! I'm sure it will be much easier to write on.
Thanks for a new story!

Happy New Year, cmze !!!
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Prologue :)
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on December 31, 2012, 02:01:13 PM
love it, its so funny cant wait til the next update  :heart: :cow: :jphip:
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Prologue :)
Post by: qweakb on December 31, 2012, 03:33:11 PM
I want to know more what is happening! Please update soon  :bow:
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Prologue :)
Post by: BbSis on December 31, 2012, 11:48:22 PM
Looks intersting! Too bad Yuki,  and Jurina(?) are guys >< Well, I'll read it anyways^^

Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Prologue :)
Post by: DC2805 on January 01, 2013, 09:06:58 AM
let the 2 boys fight for princess mayu! haha!
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.1
Post by: cmze on January 03, 2013, 12:09:52 AM
My boyfriend and my fiancé
                                                                CH.1

"This has to be a bad taste joke,i mean it was a dream.I bet that guy doesn't even exist!" An sleepy girl thinks while she wakes up then walks to the bathroom,she sighs before openning the door

The door opens revealing a handsome boy brushing his teeth on underwear,his body was really in shape and his got a big oshiri

Mayu stood there watching without saying a word then shook her head "cover yourself" she says looking other way

Yuki spits then looked at the blushing girl "why should i? you're the one spying on me!" he says with a smirk

Mayu frowned "i'm not spying on you!" she says mad

"don't worry…they always say that!" The handsome boy says as he gets out and gets on his room

"such a jerk!" Mayu thought as she enters to the bathroom

~Breakfast~

"Yuki kun your uniform is on your bed!" Mayu's mom says

Yuki stopped eating and looked at the older woman then rolled his eyes

"Mayu and you can go to school together!" Mayu's dad says grinning

Mayu stopped eating "no way!" she says

Yuki sighed "damn i have fallow their orders,i have nowhere to go even if that means babysit this girl!" he thought then got and went to his room

Everyone kept eating and after a few minutes Yuki came with his school uniform

"you look really handsome! right Mayu chan?" Mayu's mom says with a smile

Mayu looked other way "whatever!" she says as she gets up

"you should go it's getting late for school!" Mayu's dad says with a smile

(The two walked to school)

Mayu was walking two steps ahead while Yuki followed her without saying a word

Mayu looked at him with the corner of her eyes "well he doesn't look bad with that tie!" she thought

Soon both were at the door

"Well we're at school so… bye" Mayu says coldly then tries to go but Yuki grabbed her by her hand and spin her around to grab her by her waist

Both looked at each other eyes hypnotized, their lips a few inches from each other's

Mayu gulped while Yuki only smirked " wifey..you're now going to help me" he says with a smile

Suddenly a guy appeared from nowhere and pushed Yuki away from Mayu

"Jun!" Mayu says trying to calm her boyfriend

People around stood there watching

"How dare you grab my girlfriend like that?" he asked mad

Yuki got up and laughed like crazy  "you're boyfriend is funny!" he says with a smile plastered on his face

all the girls around were already melting for Yuki

"am i a joke to you?" Jun asked while Mayu gets on his way to not let him get close to Yuki

"Pretty much!" the handsome boy says with smile then his face

Jun's friends grabbed him "I'm going to kill you!" he shouts while his friends grab him tight

"yeah yeah we'll see about that! right wifey?" Yuki says smirking then puts his arm around Mayu's neck

"Wifey?" Everyone repeats

Mayu sighs

"ohh you haven't told him uupps my bad!" Yuki says with a smirk then walked inside the school

"who's that guy?" A girl in the around asked

"He's really handsome!" Other girls say

Jun friends let him go

 "Why he called you wifey? Jun asked

Mayu pouts "it's a long story.." she replies as she enters to the school fallowed by Jun

~At the classroom~

Yuki is in the same classroom with Mayu and Jun and he's already the center of attention

"He's like an ikeman!" A tiny blond guy says irritated by looking at the girls around Yuki

"That guy is so lucky!" Another guy with black hair say

"Kai, Kuu stop watching him like that there are many other girls in the school!" a tall handsome guy says

Kuu sits "Riku You say that because you have your girlfriend!" he says pouting

Riku gets up from his seat "She's not my girlfriend!" he says irritated

"your friend.." Kai says

"not my friend either,don't even mention her.. she can appear I'M FEELING SHIVERS ALREADY!" Riku says paranoid looking around

Yuki felt annoyed by all the girls

Mayu looked to the back and saw all the girls around Yuki

"What are you jealous?" Jun asked

"i already told you we just met..." Mayu says then sighs

(P.E class)

The guys were playing football Yuki and Jun were already in opposite teams

"Oh hope Jun don't fall into his games.." Mayu thought

Yuki took the ball and run to the score area

"Yuki! Yuki! Yuki!" A bunch of girls shouts

Kai looked at the bunch of girls "he's doing nothing and takes the credit!" he murmured then noticed a girl with glasses looking at him

"Kai what are you doing?" Riku asks while runs for the ball

"Creepy girl!" Kai murmured and runs

"That jerk is mine!" Jun shouts and tackles Yuki

"Yuki.." Mayu murmures and soon goes to the court

Yuki gets up and jumps on Jun

Both rolled around punching eachother

The coach separate both and send them to the principal

"Riku are you okay?" a girl says examinating the tall guy who was pouting

"i'm fine Yuko!" He says

Yuko hugs him "i thought i would loose you and can't live with that!" The girl says hugging more

Riku just sighed

~At home~

On their way home neither of two said a word...

Both entered and saw their foods on the table

(Mayu's mom and dad works all day)

Yuki took the food to his room while Mayu sitted alone to eat, once she finished she went to the fridge for some ice then walked upstairs and stood in front of Yuki'd doors a few seconds before knocking

The door openned "what do you want!" a male voice asked then noticed the ice on his cheek

While Mayu puts the ice on his cheek she looks down "i'm not doing it for you, it's your fault anyways for telling him but i'm not happy because the way Jun is acting!" she says still looking down

Yuki yawned " this is really boring.." he says then puts his hand on Mayu's hand that has the ice

Mayu feels Yuki's hand and let go the ice covered with a towel and looked up

Yuki smiled then pushed Mayu to him and kissed her, she tried to fight him but he was stronger

TO BE CONTINUED!!
well i want all of the songs you have of french kiss PLEASEEEE!!
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.1
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on January 03, 2013, 12:28:43 AM
thank you for this great fanfic cmze san like always its funny, cute and has a good storyline  :love: :heart: :yep:
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.1
Post by: jell_o_jello on January 03, 2013, 02:58:39 AM
Ah, Yuki is a bad boy huh?
Why do I feel like rooting for Jun instead  :? XD


Thanks for updating, cmze. But I'm sorry I can't help you with French Kiss songs as I don't have any  :(
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.1
Post by: kurogumi on January 03, 2013, 03:29:46 AM
Eh oh yuki is sooo bold!! Bad yuki LOL i love bad boy~

Be careful yuki,once you touch and feel mayu's lips...,everything on your life will change LOL

I feel bad for jun,but lets make him competed with yuki...

Boyfriend vs fiance LOL

Where's rena?

Thank for the updjte cmze-san~
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.1
Post by: ChuuuPuffss on January 03, 2013, 07:48:47 AM
Nice update, Cmze-san~

I hope Yuki wins fufufufu :3

Anyway, I only have French Kiss' If.

Should I send you by link or something? :3
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.1
Post by: korin48 on January 03, 2013, 08:06:00 AM
Hahaha Yuki is really funny  :mon lmao:
I love bad boys  :mon lovelaff:
Please update soon!  :mon pray2:
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.1
Post by: Chanaline on January 03, 2013, 12:06:32 PM
I love Yuki in it!!!!

Bad boy is so cool! :inlove:

And the end Yay!! :heart:
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.1
Post by: DC2805 on January 03, 2013, 03:24:27 PM
Yuki! Please be nicer to Mayu! :smhid

And poor Jun! How horrible it'll be to have your girlfriend snatched away from you by someone that aloof!!! :panic:
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.1
Post by: cisda83 on January 09, 2013, 10:54:59 AM
Eh... Yuki as a guy here... very interesting idea there....

Oh... Yuki is a jerk... I mean 1st he did want to be engage

Now he liked to tease and possess Mayu anyway he wanted...

Anyhow, can't wait to see your update

Thank you for the interesting fic

 :wub: :inlove: :love: :heart:
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.2
Post by: cmze on January 09, 2013, 07:14:37 PM
                                          My boyfriend and my fiancé
                                                                CH.2

Mayu couldn't believe what was going on Yuki is kissing her ..

"No! This is my first kiss!" Inner Mayu shouts mad

Mayu pushes Yuki against his door then looked at him for a short minute and slapped him

"BITCH SLAP YAY!" Inner Mayu shouts in victory

Yuki putted his hand on his red cheek "Why you slapped me you stupid.."

Mayu slapped him again

Yuki looked at her with hate in his eyes "I can't punch because you're a girl!" he muttered before grabbing her of her arm

By looking at him in the eyes he was really mad and somehow Mayu got scared but she still manage to hide it

"Why you kissed me stupid animal?" Mayu asked then release her arm Like a boss xD

"i wish you were a guy to punch you but you're not" Yuki  thought then took a deep breath "i was bore!"replied carelessly

Mayu pouted "IM NOT YOUR TOY AND I HAVE A BOYFRIEND YOU IDIOT!!" she shouted mad

Yuki grabbed her by her waist then smirked "Yeah but i'm your FIANCE!" he says with his charming

Mayu tried to release from his hold

"I bet he haven't kissed you like that before!" Yuki asked smirking still holding her knowing that he has control over her

Mayu kicked him then run to her room

"Ouucch..you.." Yuki says in pain then grabs the ice and enters to his room

AFTER A FEW HOURS..

Mayu's dad and mom got back home

Mayu heard them and went downstairs to say hi

"Hello Mayu chan! where's Yuki kun!" Mayu's dad asked while her mother openned the fridge

"Locked up on his room!" Mayu replied pouting

"Dad forget about him, can i bowling with my friends??" Mayu asked

"mmm it's kinda late.." He replied looking up

"what!?!? it's 7 pm!" Mayu says shocked

"first please go to the supermarket we're running out of food!" Mayu's mom says

"what? i can't go bowling with bags!" Mayu replies

"You have to come back with the bags then go!" Mayu's mom says

"ok!" Mayu says with a smile

"And you have to go with Yuki kun!" Mayu's mom adds

Mayu's smile faded "No, no Yuki kun!" she replied

Yuki came down "ohh it will be nice meeting Mayu chan friends!" he says with a smile

Mayu pouted

"what happed to your face?" Mayu's dad asked

"I had a fight with a guy *pail Mayu* <Yuki smirked> who wanted to get to close too Mayu chan!" He replied

"What!?!" Mayu shouted

"and you have to look the other guy,i bet he recognized his face.. what was his name.. MATSUI JUN!" Yuki says with a smile

Mayu was shocked

"Good job Yuki!" Mayu's dad says

"oh Yuki go with a Mayu to the supermarket we need some bands for you!" Mayu's mom says worried

"This..guy.." Mayu whispered still shocked

Yuki gets closer to Mayu and even put his arm around Mayu's neck "it doesn't hurt..anything for Mayu chan!" he says with a smile

Mayu looked down "You you just are doing this to bother me!" she whispered

Yuki looked at her and smile "c'mon Mayu chan we have to go to the supermarket!" he says 

"Here's my car's key' Yuki" Mayu's dad says as he gives it to the younger man

~Once out of the house~

Mayu removed Yuki's arm harshly "You're just a liar!" she says mad

Yuki got in the car "shut up and get on my face hurts like hell!" he says complaining

Mayu pouted then walked away

Yuki get out of the car

Mayu notice and runs away

"Stupid brat!" Yuki murmures and runs after her

The two run at least 3 blocks non stopping

Yuki was about to cross the stree but the red light change to green one so he stopped and watched how Mayu dissappear from his sight

"Stupid!stupid Mayu!" He murmures as he taps his foot waiting for the lights to change

Mayu stopped running after a few minutes to catch her breath "i left him behind!" she says smirking then looked around "where am i?" she thought

She pulled out her phone

"what is doing a cute girl like you in this dark place?" someone asked

Mayu gulped

"It dangerous!" he says smirking

Mayu turned around afraid

The man grabbed Mayu by her neck and started to asphyxiate her

Mayu tried to fight but he was stronger,he was smiling while he was asphyxiating her

Soon everything became dark

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Mayu openned her eyes "My room.." she thought then sitted and noticed Yuki sleeping on a chair in a sitting position close to her bed

<Little flashes came to Mayu's head>

She remembered loosing hope while that man was asphyxiating her then suddenly something happened, that man fell on the floor and let her go

"Mayu chan! Mayu chan! don't close your eyes!" a voice says

Mayu feels some warm coming from that voice and then fainted

Mayu looks at Yuki again then noticed a band on Yuki's arm,she got up and looked at him closely

"It was you.." Mayu thought then kisses him lightly on his cheek

~ EXTRA..FULL SCENE~

He was asphyxiating her then Yuki appeared from nowhere and pushes the guy away

Yuki grabbed Mayu and started shaking her "Mayu chan! Mayu chan! don't close your eyes!" he shouts

"you jerk!" The man says pulling out a knife

Yuki putted Mayu on the floor softly then looked at the man "You're so dead man!" he says mad with a black aura around him

Yuki runs to him that man tries to stab him but Yuki dodged all his movements

"so she is your girlfriend!" the man says smirking and cuts his arm a bit

Yuki was even angrier "It's not my girlfriend is my fiancee!" he shouts mad then grabs his arm and make him throw his knife and hit him with his head

The man was on the floor,Yuki got down and punched him several times on his face then got up because his hands were full of Blood

"You're not worth it!" The handsome boy says irritated then called the police and grabbed Mayu he carried her bridal style

TO B CONTINUED!!
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.2
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on January 09, 2013, 08:03:04 PM
awww Yuki was really sweet in the end :yep:
poor Mayu she has so much to take in :(
thank you for fic :heart:
can't wait for next update :cow:
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.2
Post by: Chanaline on January 09, 2013, 10:57:02 PM
Kyaaaaaa! Yuki is just so Kyaaaaaa!!!!!

So coool!!! :inlove:
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.2
Post by: kurogumi on January 10, 2013, 02:32:53 AM
Oww its start again~

Its start again...im getting excited with this fic..!!! A lot!!

But because their lovey dovey act still kind of little and they still dont fall to each other,yet.....

its make me still love time is good as gold,but i know in the next future chapter this fic will as awesome as that or maybe more...LOL

The word “FIANCEE” looks more powerfull than just a Boyfriend LOL

Im pity jun~ haha

Thank for the update cmze-san
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.2
Post by: cisda83 on January 10, 2013, 10:09:53 AM
Yuki seems to be bored so he keeps playing with Mayu like she's a game for him.

Well that's a bit harsh for Mayu...

I think this is all her parents fault to decide whatever they want without counseling with the youngsters.

Married without love is very bad... But then lots of rich family do that sometimes.

Well the story is getting more and more interesting. Thank you

Can't wait to see the next one

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.3
Post by: cmze on January 22, 2013, 06:59:55 AM
                                          My boyfriend and my fiancé
                                                                CH.3

~The next day~

Like it was normal Mayu's parents had to go to work so Yuki was kinda in charge or at least that's what he thinks..

Mayu's alarm started ringing, it rang several times but it didn't seem to bother the cyborg. Yuki entered to the room and turn it off

"Hey you it's time to go to school!" Yuki says careless then he remembered something "Shit! i left that thing on!" he shouted and fast went downstairs running desperate

Mayu only covered herself more with the blanket

Yuki got back and Mayu was still "Sleeping" he frowned "are you planning staying in bed all day?" he asked poking Mayu's blanket

The cyborg ignored him

"oh c'mon get up already!" He says inpatient as always as he tries to remove the blanket off her

After forcing for a bit he was able to remove the blanket

"Got'cha!" Yuki says with a smirk but then his smirk faded when he noticed that Mayu was up with a blank expresion on her face, he saw the marks of that man's hands on Mayu's neck
.
Yuki looked other way then covered Mayu with the blanket sweetly

"get up when you feel to!" Yuki says as he leaves the room and went to his room,he layed on bed face up looking at the ceiling

"i got there just in time.." He sighed then turned on the tv

TV NEWS..

"well the alley animal was capture last night by the police!" The hoster of the news says

"Oh i'm so glad he was caught, i couldn't imagine another young girl dead because of him!" His partner says

"Yeah he has the tendency of asphyxiating his victims and then rape them!" The hoster says

Yuki got mad and turned off the tv "damn alley animal!" he says irritated "i should have punched you more!" he says mad

~After a few hours~
 
Yuki heard a noise and woke up, he went to check Mayu's room then noticed she wasn't on bed,he walked downstairs and saw Mayu on the kitchen she was still with her pjs

"Mayu i made you breakfast!" Yuki says looking other way then got closer and pulled out Mayu's breakfast from the microwave and put it on the table

Mayu was still spacing out with a blank face, Yuki got closer and putted his hands on Mayu's neck

Mayu reacted fast trying to not let him touch her

"Easy i'm not going to hurt you!" Yuki says trying to calm Mayu but it was useless she slapped him

After a few seconds Mayu noticed what she did but then just looked down while Yuki brushes his cheek and looked at her "what the hell?" he thought then he calmed and took a deep breath

Mayu only looked at him without saying a word

Yuki went to the fridge and got her a glass of milk which putted on the table for Mayu "i don't think you wanna eat that without milk!" he says with a smile

Mayu ignored him and started eating

Once Mayu's parents got home Yuki told them what happened and also that Mayu haven't said a word in all day so they agreed to take Mayu to the doctor.

After examinating Mayu with many tests the doctor send them psychologist who gave them the results

"What's wrong with Mayu?" Yuki asked

Mayu's dad and Mayu's mom were kinda shocked about how worried Yuki seems but they let it go and listened to the psychologist

"Well Watanbe san has a transtorn because what happened to her, her mind has blocked everything that hurts her and she's *sighs* living in the past.." The psychologist says

"Is there anything we can do to get her back to normal?" Mayu's dad asked

"Well do everything normally she's traumatized so don't remind her of it!" The doctor says

"why she's not talking?" Yuki asked

"She doesn't feel safe!" The psychologist says

"Bullshit!" Yuki says and leaves

~THE NEXT DAY~  (At school) Before it starts

"Wait why she's coming back? she had an affair with one of her students!" A teacher says

The headmaster smiles " that's not truth Matsui san will never do that and she's marvellous teacher so that's it she's coming back!" he says with a smile

the other teacher were gossiping around

"Why does she want to come back?" another teacher murmures

MEANWHILE

Mayu's mon woke up Mayu as usual and prepared breakfast,Mayu showered and got downstairs to eat with her family

Yuki and Mayu's dad were talking about sports while Mayu's mom looks at her playing with the food with her blank expression

Yuki also looked at Mayu "well it's time to go let's go Mayuyu!" he says with a smile while gets up

Both walked to school

Yuki looked at Mayu while she walks ahead of him "what should i do? why do i even care?" he thought then sighed

Mayu stopped walking she was afraid looking at a man who was wearing a black hood just like a man who attacked her

"he's not...<Mayu runs away!>  Mayu get back!" Yuki shouted running after her

The two run for a couple blocks to a park Yuki saw the grass and jumped on Mayu, both rolled on the grass but Yuki was the one on top in the end

Yuki looked at the girl features hypnotized then blinked a few times "Mayuyu is really pretty.." he thought

Mayu tried to got up,she was feeling really uncomfortable with this position

Yuki shook his head then got off and helped Mayu to get up, he noticed Mayu's knee was bleeding so he made Mayu sit on that park seats

He ducked at the level of her knee and pulled out what it seems to be first-aid kit things so he started cleaning Mayu's wound

Mayu blushed

All the girls that were passing by were checking out Yuki..

"Omg he's so cute i wish my boyfriend treat me like that!" one girl says

"Awwww so cute!" Another girl says

"Call me!" Another girl says and winks at Yuki who totally ignore it

*Mayu smirked slightly*

"cold guy!" that girl whispered as walks away with her friends

Mayu got up

"Stop doing that, you can not live in the past that man is in jail!" Yuki says serious

Mayu looked other way then walked away to school

Yuki sighed and followed her

TO BE CONTINUED
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.3
Post by: steven_0809 on January 22, 2013, 07:49:22 AM
you update  :)

yes that man is in jail

mayu keep fighting :thumbup
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.3
Post by: Chanaline on January 22, 2013, 07:54:24 AM
Yuki is so sweeet :wub:

 Yay thank you!

Mayu speack...
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.3
Post by: mo-chan on January 22, 2013, 09:11:00 AM
I was waiting you to update even I always wait all you update  XD
I feel sorry for Mayu she is scared of all men and Yuki too it's what I don't like  :catglare:
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.3
Post by: kurogumi on January 22, 2013, 02:09:25 PM
Òmg mayu!

She may a cyborg girl,but now she's really like cyborg with broken system,yuki!!! Please fix her!!

Where mayu boyfriend?when her girl need him,he never be by her side (like i care!) LOL

Yuki you care about her because you love her! Aww sweet~

And who the teacher? (somehow i know who's the theacer are LOL).have scandal with student...i smell something...ahahahaha~


Its funny when yuki said mayu is her fiancee,he never propose her,yet (its just their parent say that) their status is still uh we can say that mayu is "avaliable" for any boy's in the world LOL

Thank for the update cmze-san
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.3
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on January 22, 2013, 02:32:25 PM
poor mayu :cry:
awww yuki   :heart: :yep:
i sense wmatsui :cathappy: :deco:
thanx for the update :cow:
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.3
Post by: cisda83 on January 22, 2013, 02:36:53 PM
Well that's different... Yuki being a gentlemen for a change.

Like how Yuki treat Mayu here....

Thank's for the update

Can't wait to see the next

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.3
Post by: DC2805 on January 22, 2013, 05:01:40 PM
yuki showing more concerns for mayu now... I also welcome the new character, matsui sensei. hehe.  :lol:
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.4
Post by: cmze on February 08, 2013, 05:11:51 AM
                                          My boyfriend and my fiancé
                                                                CH.4

(At night)

"Oh Yuki kun you're going out?" Mayu's dad asked

"Yes!" He answered while puts on his black jacket

"Would you buy me something?" Mayu's dad asked

Yuki looked at him "NO.." he coldly replied and left

Mayu was listening from upstairs then got back to her room

Mayu's dad moves his head side to side "kids these days!" he says as he gets back to his room

Yuki was walking suddenly a man shouted "WACTH OUT!"

A girl was crossing the street and the car didn't seem to stop, the girl was close to Yuki so he jumped on her and moved her out of the way

The car got on the sidewalk, Yuki got up fast and pulled out the guy from the car (he seemed drunk!)

Yuki punched him on his face several times

The people around called an ambulance for the girl who got up and stopped Yuki from killing that irresponsible driver

Someman also helped the girl to separate Yuki from that man

"For people like innocent people die everyday!" Yuki shouted mad while other man separate him from that man

"Stop!" The girl says to Yuki who totally stopped

Once calmed the men that were grabbing him let him go, Yuki walked away

The girl smirked

~After a few blocks~

"What do you want?" Yuki asked and stopped walking

The girl showed her face "i just wanted to say thanks for saving me!" she said with a smile

Yuki turned around looked at her for a moment then kept walking and ignored the girl

~The next day~

(Walking to school)

As always Mayu was ahead while Yuki walks looking at her back

"I need to find a way to leave..i'm tired of this" Yuki thought "but i have no money,no place to stay and nothing else!" he kept thinking

Mayu stopped walking so Yuki also stopped

"are you okay?" He asked putting his hand on Mayu's forhead to check her temperature while Mayu only looked at him

"you have no fever.." Yuki murmured

Mayu putted her hand on her throat

"your throat hurts!" Yuki says then smiled then putted his hand on his pocket and pulled out a candy

Mayu only looked at him

"i'm not a doctor but heard candies are good for throats!" He says smiling

"Just the one with mint!" Mayu thought then smiled a little

Yuki noticed but then started walking again " why am i acting nice? i can't let her catch me.. i won't stay here long anyways!" he thought

The two high schoolers got to school and soon noticed that everyone was gossiping around

"Matsui san got back!" A guy says

Yuki sits behind Mayu and ignore everyone, Mayu also sitted and ignored everyone too because she can't speak

Jun entered to the classroom, he kissed Mayu on her cheek and sitted next to her

"Jun have heard about Matsui san coming back?" a friend of him asked

Jun got up of his seat surprised  "Matsui san got back?" he asked all shocked

"yeah.. she..got.. back!" A girl with glasses says a little scare

"Who are you?" Kuu asked

Kai and Riku also looked at the girl

"Me.. i mean i... i'm Maeda At.. *forget it too slow!* Kuu interrupted the girl and went to sit with her pals in the back

Jun was so surprised, he's very anxious about her

(Hours passed)

Suddenly the headmaster entered to the classroom

Everyone got up

"Everyone sit!" The headmaster says with a smile

Everyone were looking at each other

"Mr Fujimoto had an accident,he will be fine in a couple weeks so we brought his replacement so please be nice! Matsui Sensei please come in!" The headmaster says with a smile

Jun was totally getting crazy in his head "Finally i can see Rena chan again..after that scandal finally!" he thought

"Hello i'm Matsui Sensei and i will be teaching maths in replacement of Mr Fujimoto!" Matsui sensei says with a smile and looking at Yuki

Mayu and Jun also noticed

"Why she's looking at Yuki?" Mayu wondered

Yuki looked other way "Great the girl of last night is my sensei!" he thought

(LUNCH TIME)

Jun forgot about Mayu and went after Matsui sensei in the hall

"Jun what are you doing?" She asked as she walks

"I wanted to see you!" Jun replies like a lost puppy

Rena stopped walking "why this things always happen to me?" she asked

Jun was confused

"Jun you're just a kid, date kids of your age okay!" The teacher says with a smile then leaves

Jun was speechless .

~ In the classroom~

"Looks like your boyfriend forgot about you!" Yuki says mocking

Mayu looked other way

"because i'm a good friend i'll invite you lunch!" Yuki says with a charming smile

Mayu gets up and smiled a little

The two walked together to buy food

[In the same classroom in the corner]

"Riku let's go eating lunch together!" A squirrel girl says smiling hugging the back of the handsome boy

"i'm not your boyfriend or anything leave me alone!" Riku says while gets up and walks away with a squirrel hanging on his back

"that's a weird relantionship!" Kuu says rising an eyebrow

Kai sighed "i wanna have a girlfriend.. i want Tomochin but she likes tall guys like Riku or Yuki or Jun!" he says hopeless

"Love is hard my friend and my stomach is begging me for cakes so are you coming with me?" Kuu asked

Kai sighed "go first not feeling like eating!" he replied

Kuu left the classroom leaving Kai alone in it

Suddenly someone entered to the room

"Tomochin!" Kai says shocked

"Hi Kai!" She says with a smile and sits close to him

Kai was all red (the girl of his dreams finally talking to him)

"i'm feeling boring lately Kai!" Tomochin says

Inner Kai: ["when girls says things like that is because they wanna be kissed" according to Kuu]

Kai took a deep breath then got up of his seat and tried to kiss Tomochin who totally avoid it

"eh..eh..eh not yet!" Tomochin replies with grin

"Then when?" Kai asked

"when you do something for me.." Tomochin answers

"what?" he asked

"Make Maeda fall in love!" Tomochin says

"Maeda? who's Maeda?" Kai asked

"The girl with glasses that sits over there!" Tomichin says pointing to a desk

Kai sighed "okay but you'll be my girlfriend!" he says

"deal!" Tomochin says

~Meanwhile~

"Yuki did bought her food but it didn't mean that they were going to eat together, Yuki is more the lone wolf type of person"

"I'm going to show her that i have a girlfriend.." Jun thought as he walks around the school looking for Mayu with his friends

Once he found her, he grabbed her by her arm and interrupts her "let's go Mayu!" he says dragging her

Mayu stopped walking and release her arm then remembered that she couldn't speak

Jun grabbed her arm again "let's go, you're my girlfriend!" he says forcing with Mayu who didn't want to go whatever he want to go

Yuki looked at the scene, he finished his orange juice and squeezed it.

Jun was still forcing with Mayu

(nobody gets in it becauss Jun is the most popular guy in the school and also has his friends always next to him so he's kinda untouchable.. nobody mess with him apart from the fact that he's rich and spoiled)

Yuki appeared from nowhere and punched Jun on his face

Mayu was shocked

Jun got up fast and jumped on Yuki

The two boys started punching eachother till the P.E teacher separte them

Rena was observing everything

~The bell rang and everyone got to their classroom~

Yuki and Ren spend the rest of the day in the headmaster office

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

When the two got out it of the office they looked at eachother

"Dude is my girlfriend!" Jun says

"Dude is my fiance!" Yuki replies imitating Jun then run away fast because he knew Mayu might be waiting for him

Like he thought Mayu was waiting for him in the classroom,everyone already left but she was still there waiting for him

Mayu got up and looked at Yuki's broken lip

"it doesn't hurt anymore,i'm fine.. let's go!" Yuki says turning around but Mayu grabbed his hand

Yuki turned to look at the cyborg girl who pulled out a handicraft and cleaned the blood on his lip softly

Yuki close his eyes showing his pain, Mayu got closer slowly and kissed on his cheek softly

Yuki openned his eyes and blushed

TO BE CONTINUED!!
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.4
Post by: nik11 on February 08, 2013, 07:47:50 AM
That was great!

Jun can be a jerk sometimes.

Mayu and Yuki are getting close together.

Jun and Mayu should just break up already.

Rena is back, wonder where she came from??

Thanks for the update. Your stories are awesome.

 Can't wait for the next chapter :twothumbs
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.4
Post by: Kimcoton on February 08, 2013, 08:30:21 AM
How sweet :"> but atsumina's case seems to be in a bad shape or should i say will be in a bad shape?
anyway i'm a new reader here :D
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.4
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on February 08, 2013, 10:22:56 AM
ahh love it!! :heart: :yep:
thanx for the update :cow: :bow:
and poor mayu, having a sore throat is one of the worst things when your ill :thumbdown:
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.4
Post by: cisda83 on February 08, 2013, 10:56:07 AM
Eh Seem that Rena and Jun has some past... and Rena's scandal?

I think Jun still has feeling for Rena... but Rena doesn't want to risk her future with having feeling for her student again....?

Why Rena is looking at Yuki, well he did save her... but is that all?

Mayu is kissing Yuki? She is developing feeling for him now?

Yuck... Kai is going to play Atsuko so that he can date Tomochin... That's bad...

Making Kai as a jerk... that's the first.... to see....

I can't wait to see your next chapter... with lots of questions everywhere.... it's going to be interesting to find out

Thank you for this update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.4
Post by: DC2805 on February 08, 2013, 04:19:53 PM
Mayu should stay with Yuki since Jun is so unreliable (and unfaithful too!)!  :grin:
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.4
Post by: Chanaline on February 08, 2013, 05:20:06 PM
They start to like each other!!!!

Jun what are you doing? You know Matsui sensei??

And Rena why did you look at Yuki! Stop it!!

thank you!!!!!
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.4
Post by: Kimcoton on February 08, 2013, 08:50:56 PM
Jun became a jerk xD and mayuki's relationship seems to improve a lot :)
And what is jun's relationship with rena?
im a new reader by the way ;D
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.4
Post by: -gibson-mayulover on February 10, 2013, 07:02:12 AM
awww is mayu falling for yuki-boy :wub: ???
I hope so. cause I love Mayuki
and minna please like our facebook page http://www.facebook.com/AKB.fan.page (http://www.facebook.com/AKB.fan.page)
thank you minna!!!
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.4
Post by: kurogumi on February 10, 2013, 08:00:44 AM
 what happen between jun and rena? Looks like they are in relationship in the past,
Will rena get jealous when she know jun is mayu's boyfriends?

Yuki please dont leave,you have mayuyu~ she need you LOL

Thank for the update cmze-san
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.4
Post by: gek geki on February 28, 2013, 11:08:16 AM
AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME!! OVER AWESOME!
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.5
Post by: cmze on April 03, 2013, 08:33:05 AM
                                          My boyfriend and my fiancé
                                                                CH.5

~The next day~

On his bed Kashiwagi Yuki stretched his body before get up "Somehow everything seems different the air seems fresher.." he shook his head "for the stupid statement his mind was able to make" he walked to the bathroom.

Once inside of it he looked at himself on the mirror "Nothing has changed still the ikemen look" he says as he watches his face in look for some more manly features like beard suddenly the memory of Mayu kissing his cheek hit him, he smiled for a second "What am doing? *slaps himself* what now do you wanna wear a dress or some make up? when do you became a teenage girl?" he asked to himself

~Meanwhile~

The Watanabe family preparing breakfast, Mayu woke up earlier so she was helping her mother with the breakfast while her dad waits sitting and reading the newspaper

Mayu was setting the table and was she was about to put the fourth glass of juice in it's place something came to her mind "A memory of the first moment she saw Yuki and when she thought he was really handsome.." Mayu smiled as she thinks about it

~Flashback~  a few weeks ago

On the same train..

Many girls were commenting in the train about something but Mayu was careless so she wasn't paying attention

"He is so handsome!" A girl says and takes a picture of him without him to noticed
Mayu looked at the guy that was causing this (He was sleeping with his head aginst the glass) "Now i see, he's really handsome" she thought staring at him

The handsome boy opened his eyes then looked at the girls that were looking at him and gave them a cold stare

Mayu looked other way embarrassed while the other were excited because he was cold

"So cool!" Another girl says

"I'm going to ask him his phone number!" Another girl says confident

He fast got up and even thought the train was full, he was able to push everyone and even Mayu out his way

"Ouch You idiot!" Mayu says in a Nezumi way then turns her head and looked at the guy's back

The guy also turned his head and for a second they shared eye contact till the train's door closed then he walked away

~End of the flash back~

Yuki walked downstairs and the first thing he saw was Mayu wearing an apron and looking amazing with the sun light as she sets the last thing on the table

"Good Morning Yuki kun!" Mayu's mom says smiling as she sits ready to eat

Yuki was still on a daze till Mayu tucked her hair behind her ear and sat also

"Something had change.. she's gotten pretty!" Yuki thought still in trance

"Why you don't sit?" Mayu's dad asked offering the empty seat next to him

Yuki blinked a few times then sat

Everyone started eating, it was awkward he didn't want to look at Mayu and Mayu felt the same way so both ate quietly

"So Yuki i guess you been able to become closer to Mayu chan!" Mayu's dad says with a smile as he pats lightly Yuki's back and winks at Mayu

Mayu looked other way while Yuki almost chokes and took a glass of juice fast

Mayu's mom smiled "I'm happy!" she says making both teens to get red

~Meanwhile~

At the train station..

Maeda Atsuko a not popular girl or how her classmates call her "Who?" was waiting for her train

"Another day.." Atsuko says lazily as she waits

"Oh what a causality, Hello Maeda san!" A handsome blond guy a few inches taller than her says

"Eh.." Atsuko let out as she watches the boy next to her "Are you talking to me?" she asked as she looks around

The blond guy smiled "Maybe you don't know me, i'm Kai we go to the same school and classroom!" he says still with a smile

Atsuko was shocked "How.. could..could i not know you,?you're the star of the football team loved by everyone!" she says looking down

Kai scratches the back of his head "No, i'm not.. i'm just an average player!" he says smiling

The train stopped in front of them Kai moved fast and when she noticed he wasn't next to her anymore, Atsuko looked at the million people inside the train

"Well i guess i wouldn't last forever.." She says as she adjust in the middle with all those people inside the train

"Maeda san were are you?" A voice asked

Atsuko looked around then moved from her spot and found Kai sitting

"There you are.. here!" Kai says smiling as a gentleman then gets up and offers his seat to Atsuko

"Why? why you're being so nice to me?" Atsuko thought before sitting

Kai stood beside her "Sorry for leaving alone for a moment Maeda san!" he says

"It's.. it's okay by the way you can call me Acchan!" She says with a smile then her smiled faded away "Why you're being so nice to me?" she asked serious

Kai looked other way then something came to his mind "Well i heard you were good at maths, so i wanted you to teach me maths.. could you do that Acchan please?" he asked

Acchan looked down first not trusting but something inside wants to be accepted by him and even become friends "I think i can do that.." she answered

"Yay! high five!" Kai says with a smile

~Meanwhile~ already at school, even though is early

Matsui sensei was already at the teacher's room reading some papers..

Somebody else entered to the room, Matsui sensei turned her head then sighed "What are you doing here Jun?" she asked as she gets up

"Why you don't treat me like before?" Jun asked feeling down

"Jun, you're a kid and i'm really sorry if i made you think that i was interest in you romantically so please if you still have those kind of feelings stay away from me i don't want more troubles!" Matsui sensei says as she was about to walk out but Jun grabbed her by her arm and made her turn around

Jun looked at her "I have a girlfriend, i..just miss you as a friend Rena" he says then let go her arm and leaves first

Rena sitted again then smiled

~Meanwhile~

As always walking to school they never walk next to each other, Mayu is always a few steps ahead while Yuki follows her 

"Why i never walk next to her? am i her dog?" He wondered as he looks at Mayu's back after a second "Now i see why i walk behind her.." he thought then smirked and kept admiring Mayu's best feature [her butt]

Mayu for some reason feels even more awkward she tried to look back with the corner of her eye but it was impossible Yuki was too far to see what he was doing and Mayu is so proud to turn and look at him so she kept walking ignoring him

[Yuki was grinning like a pervert]

They got to school and as always all the eye were on them people can't believe they're engage..

Jun also entered to the classroom with his friends then sat next to Mayu and kissed her on her cheek

Yuki was sitting behind so he had a "good view of it"

"You know i'm so sorry about yesterday, i know you're a rough time i'm here to support you!" Jun says as he grabs Mayu's hand

All the girls were looking at the scene and said "AWWWW"

Yuki sighed and felt so disgusted by that scene that he switched his spot, he went to the back

Kai and Atsuko entered to the classroom together, Kai winked at Tomochin who just smirked

Kuu and Riku looked at their friend and fast Kuu sent a message to Kai via mail

[Dude i know you're desperate for love but.. who the hell is she'?]

Soon the teacher entered to the classroom and everyone stood quiet, the morning passed fast

~Lunch time~

In the hall..

"Kashiwagi san wait!" Matsui sensei says

Yuki turned around "what's wrong?" he asked coldly

"So you might be now 23..what are you doing in highschool?" Rena says with a smirk

Yuki gave a step back "Do you remember?" he asked shocked

"Well you don't have a face easy to forget even though your hair is longer and you're taller, what was your name?" Rena says with her finger on her chin

"Shun" Both answer at the same time then laugh like crazy

Jun came out of the bathroom and looked at them laughing together like closer friends "WTF?" he thought

What Jun would do? TO BE CONTINUED!!
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.5
Post by: DC2805 on April 03, 2013, 12:17:26 PM
So, Yuki and Rena knew each other? More drama ahead! What would Mayu and Jun do if they know about it...hehe...
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.5
Post by: Kimcoton on April 03, 2013, 03:09:21 PM
Ehhhhhhhhhh??~ yuki and rena knew each other? and wat the hell ... Shun????!!!
Lol im overreacting here anyways i know kai just started but somehow i want the opposite thing to happen.
instead of acchan falling for him, why not make him fall for her for real instead hahahah xD
Thanks for the update :D
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.5
Post by: cisda83 on April 04, 2013, 03:20:02 AM
Hahaha... Mayu's parents like to tease them

Kai is making a move to Atsuko and using Math as a reason to get closed

Ah... Atsuko be careful you are going to be played.

But I hope over time Kai would like Atsuko for real not as a deal with Tomochin

Can't wait to see how they develop

Eh... Yuki is Shun and 23 years old.... wah... so old... it would be like pedophile if Yuki and Mayu get together
 
And Yuki and Rena knew each other?

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.5
Post by: Wmatsui22 on April 04, 2013, 07:36:05 AM
Hi! :D

You finally update!

I really like it!  :w00t:

I am a bit curious about Yuki, Jurina and Rena :D

Please Update Soon!

Thanks
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.5
Post by: leEwẬy on April 04, 2013, 03:07:29 PM
Yuki is 23 :stoned: That kinda shocked!
So Rena and Yuki knew each other :kekeke:
And who the hell is Shun? :temper:
I guess next chapter will very interesting :hehehe:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.5
Post by: Chanaline on April 05, 2013, 05:04:35 PM
Waah! He is 23!! Rena know him :shocked

Yuki start to like Mayu :wub: Yeah!!

He is a little tab pervert... XD
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.5
Post by: gek geki on April 06, 2013, 08:21:31 AM
LOOKS LIKE RENA HAVE AN INTEREST ON YUKI
YABAIIII YUKI IS MAYU'S
I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPEN IF RENA KNOW YUKI IS ALREADY ENGAGED WITH MAYU,AND SHE KNOW THAT MAYU ALSO JUN GIRLFRIEND!

I BELIEVE EVEN YUKI HAVE AN INTEREST IN RENA,HE LOVE MAYU MORE
AND JUN,WELL HE LOVE MAYU OF COURSE,BUT IT JUST BECAUSE HE COULD NOT HAVE RENA FOR HIM,POOR JUN

THANK
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.5
Post by: gek geki on May 31, 2013, 04:21:37 AM
STILL ME KAAKAKKAKAKAKKAKA AGATA LAUGH STYLE (IF YOU READ SKET DANCE ANIME OR MANGA ITS FUNNY)
LIKE I SAID,ITS GOOD ONE TOO
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.5
Post by: cisda83 on May 31, 2013, 11:18:58 AM
cmze-san

Update please

Can't wait to see the next chapter

Thank you

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.5
Post by: K-popJ-popAWESOMENESS on May 31, 2013, 01:19:13 PM
author-san! Please Update soon I can't wait ^~^
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.6
Post by: cmze on June 03, 2013, 04:32:32 AM
                                          My boyfriend and my fiancé
                                                                CH.6

~The same day~

"I can't believe you still remember that!" Yuki says smiling.

Rena smiled also "Fake name, fake age.. What were you hiding?" She asked still with a smile.

Yuki put his hand on the back of his head "Well I was sad and needed a drink, fake name and age." He says looking other way sad.

"Jun.." Rena says looking at Jun coming out of the bathroom.

Jun ignore the too and walked away but not before pushing Yuki out of his way with his shoulder.

"He's crazy!" Yuki says while looks at him walking away.

"I have plenty to do, see you around!" Rena says with a smile then also walked to the teacher's room.

~Meanwhile~

Acchan was eating alone in the terrace but she couldn't to think about certain blond guy "Do you really wanna be friend!?" She whispers.

"Of course I do!" Someone replies.

Acchan turned her head and there he was, showing her his best smile "Can I sit next to you?" He asked still with a smile.

Acchan blushed and didn't hesitate to offer him a space next to her "sure!" She says a little nervous.

Kai sits next to her "You know, you don't seem like anybody else...Why you don't hang out with somebody else?? I mean I never have seen you talking with somebody else, do you like loneliness?" He asked curious.

Acchan looked down "It's not like I chose to be lonely but I'm too shy!" She says still with her head down.

Kai smiles "Well I guess in return for helping me with maths I can teach you how not to be shy!" He says still with a smile plastered on his face then put his finger on Acchan's chin and made her look at him.

(Acchan blushed)

"Since we're friends is the right thing to do!" Kai says with a charming smile.

Both had eye contact for a few seconds but they were interrupted by Kai' s cellphone.

[A text message from Tomochin]

"I'm sorry I have to go!" He says as he gets up "We'll eat next time!" He says with a
smile then runs away.

Acchan was totally on a daze but then smiled.

~Meanwhile~

Mayu was watching everyone from the window..

"If you're the type of person who likes to look into someone else life then we should end our engagement!" Yuki says with a smile as he gets closer.

Mayu looked at him and gave a cold stare.

"I'm sorry, I was kidding!" Yuki says with a smile while Mayu redirect her look on the window.

"You know your boyfriend is such a.. in the.. " Yuki says standing next to her "what are you looking at?" He asks then sees Matsui sensei talking with Jun.

Mayu kept looking not showing any expression.

"They're just talking..she's nice!" Yuki says still looking at the two.

[The bell rang indicating that should get back to their classroom]

"I'm going to the bathroom!" Yuki says.

Once in the bathroom two friends of Jun entered and grabbed Yuki while he was washing his face.

"What the hell? Let me go!" Yuki says mad while one was holding him from the back and the other was in front of him smiling.

"Jun want you to meet him!" The one smiling says then punches Yuki on his stomach and put a paper on his pocket.

The two guys walked away and Yuki was catching his breath "damn it!" He says mad then gets up and walks to his classroom.

[The rest of the day in the school passed fast but Mayu couldn't help to steal a glance at Yuki, he was acting weird and he was holding a paper on his hand]

~The bell rang again~

"Friday!" A guy shouts happy.

Everyone was happy too cause it was Friday..

Yuki stands next to Mayu "I'm going somewhere else!" He says then walks away.

"Mayu I'll pass near your house at 6:00 pm" Jun says then kisses Mayu's cheek and went out with his friends.

Mayu only looked at him then decided to follow but some girls got on her way.

"You're so lucky Mayu chan, Jun is strong and manly while Yuki is totally gorgeous!" The fist one says happy.

"So romantic two man fighting for you!" The other one says also happy and in love.

Mayu pouted.

~At the back of the school~

"Wow you man up and decided to come!" Jun says with a smile.

Yuki looked other way "What do you want?" He asked in a light mood.

Jun smirks "Kashiwagi you're really annoying, actually I don't really stand you or like you so you better leave my school!" He says changing his mood to a serious one.

Yuki laughs "You're school? Somebody has a big ego here!" He says mocking.

Jun' s friends looked at him "I'm tired of you Kashiwagi!" He shouted then run to him and jumped on him.

The two were rolling and punching each other while Jun' s friends looked at them.
Yuki kicked Jun off him then got up fast "You're just a spoiled kid!" He says serious.

Jun got up and two guys started punching each other for Yuki's bad luck he didn't' know Jun was really good at fighting.

So he end up on the floor.

"Now say it.. You're leaving this school for good!" Jun says stepping on Yuki's stomach

"AHHHH" he shouted.

"SAY IT!" Jun shouts.

"You're insane!" Yuki says with a smile.

Jun got madder then kicked him on his stomach while he was trying to get up. "First Mayu now Rena.. I WON'T FORGIVE YOU!" He shouts ready to punch Yuki on his face.

"NOOOOOOO!" Mayu shouts and gets in the way so Jun end up hitting Mayu on her face instead.

"Mayu!" Yuki says shocked and grabbed Mayu before she fall on the ground.

"Mayu!" Jun says worried.

Mayu fainted and now was on Yuki's arm who was totally shocked because she spoke and took that punch for him.

"What the hell?" Jun' s friends wondered while Jun stood there without saying a word just looking at the unconscious Mayu.

"Why did she do that?" Jun thought confused.

~At Mayu's home~ In Mayu's room~

That scene was replaying on Yuki's head "Nobody ever had done such thing for me.. could it be.." he thought as he gets closer and puts ice on Mayu's swollen cheek.

Mayu moved and opened her eyes. The first thing she saw was Yuki's worried' s face.

Both looked into each other's eyes for a moment till eventually Yuki broke the silence "What did you do that? That was stupid, I could take that punch!" He says irritated.

Mayu blushed "I guess I don't want you to get hurt anymore!" She says looking other way.

Yuki sighed "You can't be this good.."he thought "Thanks" he says a little red.

Mayu smiled a little cause she notice the redness on Yuki's face.

[Somehow the vibe changed into romantic one]

"Look at your face, you look awful!" He says then gets up "You deal with your face!" He says coldly breaking the vibe.

"You're an idiot!" Mayu says pouting.

Yuki was about to get out of the room but stopped at the door "Mayuyu it's nice to hear your voice again!" He says not turning his head then walked to his room.

Mayu smiled.

TO BE CONTINUED!! Thanks, I hate allergies too but my fight with the dust always wins the dust no matter how much vitamin c I take :/
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.6
Post by: kurogumi on June 03, 2013, 04:40:04 AM
yes its me!!! i will edit after read it LOL


Jun...ah im pity him.....mayu is his girlfriend,but mayu protect yuki from him....love is hurt :knee: :knee: :knee: :knee: :knee: :kickass: :kickass: :kickass: :kickass: :kickass:



wonder what is the relationship between rena and jun in the past....is jun got reject by rena...poor him ...love is hurt :knee: :knee: :knee: :knee: :knee: :knee: :knee:




thank for the update cmze-san..... :germany: :germany: :germany: :germany: :germany: :germany:


P.S: cmze-san i need lovey dovey mayuki...its hurtful these day read a painful mayuki....ahhhhh LOL
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.6
Post by: blackcyborg on June 03, 2013, 11:54:10 AM
YEAAYYY MAYUKI!!  :farofflook:

Still surprised seeing Mayu took Jun's punch...... cant believe she cant turns that bold.

Kinda curious about wmatsui's past

BUT STILL ITS GREAT TO SEE MAYUKI MOMENT HERE!!!  :hiakhiakhiak:

Please please I WANT ANOTHER MAYUKI SCENE ON NEXT CHAPTER    :shy2:

Oh please no more long wait for the next update  :pleeease:
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.6
Post by: cisda83 on June 03, 2013, 05:09:22 PM
Rena knew about Yuki real identity...

I want to know about Yuki's secret...

What's Rena going to to with Yuki...?

Eh... Rena and Jun... what's going on with them?

Atsuko is getting more and more interested with Kai... Poor Atsuko

Kai would just leave Atsuko, just from getting a message from Tomochin...

Kai is really a good flirt... Would Kai success in his plot to fool Atsuko?

Jun was so great at fighting.... He could beat Yuki up..

Why did Jun was so desperate from getting rid of Yuki...?

Was he jealous of Yuki closeness to Mayu or Rena?

Ah... Poor Mayu got hit trying to stop Yuki being beaten up...

What's going to happen to Mayu and Yuki relationship?

Would they be closer now...?

Can't wait to see

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.6
Post by: gek geki on June 04, 2013, 10:52:05 AM
MAYU FACE NO!!!
THIS INCIDENT MUST HAD AN EFFECT ON MAYUJUN RELATIONSHIP



MAYU FACE MAYU FACE
HOW DARE U JUN!!


Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.6
Post by: leEwẬy on June 05, 2013, 05:03:33 PM
Mayuki~~ :on woohoo:
It's seems Jun loved Rena at first but something happen, maybe Rena loves Yuki. Now Jun and Mayu are going out but Yuki appear, steal her away from him :wahaha:
That was I think :sweat:
Mayu protect Yuki :wriggly:
They both blush~ Kawaii :shy2:
Oh, Mayu finally spoke again :onioncheer:
Yuki also glad to hear it :kekeke:
Can't wait to see what'll happen :on gay:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.6
Post by: Terragen on June 17, 2013, 11:26:21 AM
love mayuki fic!!!!
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.7
Post by: cmze on June 20, 2013, 12:27:10 PM
                                          My boyfriend and my fiancé
                                                                CH.7

~The next day~ Saturday~

Kashiwagi Yuki was up but still on bed rolling, moving. He wasn't sleepy anymore but he didn't wanna get out of bed.

"My body hurts, who ever thought that jerk could fight so well? Why anybody warned me?" Yuki thinks complaining "Rena!!!" He shouts mad then gets up from bed.

[He thought Rena could had warned him at least since they know each other from before and she knew about the high tension between him and Jun]

As Yuki walks the hall to the bathroom Mayu's dad grabs his arm "Yuki kun Mayu haven't came out from her room.. is she okay? Can you please check?" He asked worried.

Yuki was about to reject him but he remembered what happened yesterday so it was the right thing to do go check on her..

He pouted "Do you really want me to check on your daughter shirtless and only underwear?" He asked mocking him.

"You little... I meant once you dress up!!" Mayu's dad says kinda irritated shaking by his neck.

"Don't touch me old man, my body hurts!" Yuki replies as he's being shook.

Suddenly a door opened revealing Mayu with a big white shirt, she had her hand on her cheek to cover that damage spot "Good morning.." she says normally and passed between the two and entered to the bathroom.

Mayu's dad was like [O_o] "Did she said good morning?" He asked still with his hands on Yuki's neck.

Yuki was already blue so Mayu's dad let him go, Yuki fell on the floor coughing "You old man!" He says kinda mad.

"Darling! Mayu spoke!" He shouts and fast goes downstairs happy.

Yuki get up pouted then knocked the door "Don't take too long I wanna go out!" He shouts knocking.

"Don't bother me, I can do what I want!" Mayu shouts back.

Yuki stopped knocking "I woke up first!" He muttered to himself as he walks back to his room.

After some minutes Mayu came out from the bathroom so Yuki entered and use it.

~ Mayu in her room~

Mayu was putting make up on her face to cover her black cheek but she couldn't help to think about yesterday "Why did I do that?" She asked to herself then her phone vibrating brought her back to earth.

"Call from Jun" She read then turned off her phone.

Mayu sighed "Sorry Jun I wanna have a calmed weekend.." she thought.

"Mayuyu and Yuki kun breakfast is ready!" Her mother shouted.

Mayu went downstairs and once her mother saw her hugged her "I'm glad you're better!" She says as she breaks the hug.

Mayu smiled a little "Me too.." she replied then sat to start eating while her father
was reading the newspaper as always.

Suddenly the house's phone rang and her mother fast went to pick it up..

Yuki came downstairs then sat and started eating.

"I understand.. Don't worry I'll be there soon!" Mayu's mom says with a smile then hangs up.

"Who was it darling?" Mayu's dad asked as he puts the newspaper.

"Well we forgot today was aunt's 80 birthday!" Mayu's mom replied.

Mayu felt shivers on her body and Yuki noticed.

Mayu's dad got up fast.

"Don't take me with you! Don't take me with you!" Mayu thought as she moves her leg nervous.

"We're going to spend the weekend with them to make it up!" Mayu's dad says with a smile.

Mayu looked down "Damn it!" She murmured but enough cleared to be heard by Yuki.

"So where are you going?" Yuki asked with a smirk to mock Mayu.

"With my family!" Mayu's dad replied.

"That bunch of perverts!" Mayu says irritated.

"Those perverts are your cousins and they are friendly.." Mayu's mom says as she sits.

"What?!?! They lifted my skirt many times, I STILL REMEMBER!" Mayu replies mad.

"Funny.. have fun Mayuyu with your perverts cousins!" Yuki says with her charming smile.

Mayu was mad for how Yuki was bothering her since, he really doesn't have to go with Mayu's relatives and he would spend the while weekend alone because there was no way her parents leave her alone with him for the weekend so her Nezumi side activated.

"Eh wait but Yuki kun is my soon to be husband so he needs to know my relatives, don't you think dad?" Mayu asked with a mischievous smirk.

Yuki almost chokes and swallowed fast "No! No! No!" He replies making an x with his arms.

Mayu's dad started to think.

"You don't even have to think it.. *Yuki smiles* Yuki kun should come with us!" Mayu's mom says.

Yuki looked at her with an open mouth :O "I feel betrayed!" He thought.

Mayu's dad smiles "Yes, you have to come with us!" He says tapping Yuki's back.

Mayu smirk as Nezumi.

"This girl..." he says then drinks his juice frowning.

After breakfast everyone went to pack their things, Yuki finished first so went to Mayu's room. He saw her packing with her bag on her bed.

"Do you think we are going to leave for a month?" He asked as he gets closer.

"My dad always say a weekend and we end up staying there for more than a weekend!" Mayu thought then smirked.

[There was no way in hell she was going to tell that to Yuki xD ]

Mayu didn't answered and kept packing..

"Nice shot by the way, you just ruined my weekend! And where the hell are we going?" Yuki says a little irritated then sat in Mayu's bed.

"Thanks I'm really smart I don't like to be teased and we're going to a little town close to the beach and near those perverts!" Mayu says also irritated.

Yuki smirks "How do you expect them not to be perverts when you use little shorts like this, showing your hot legs!" He says pulling Mayu's Jean shorts down slightly.

"Hey!!" She says grabbing Yuki's hand and trying to remove it.

Yuki grabbed the hand and intertwine their fingers [the moment became dense for a few seconds as they hold each other  hand]

"Once we marry I'm going to burn every short and skirt you have!" He says serious then let go Mayu's hand then gets up and walks to the door.

"Like if I'm going to let that happen!" Mayu says turning around.

Yuki smirks and turns his head "Well then You will be able to use them when you're with me since you're not that ugly, you can't wear it when I'm not around!" He says then gets out of the room.

Mayu tried to process those words "Does he gets jealous? Hot legs?" She whispers then looks at her legs and blushed.

Once everyone got ready, they got in the car to travel a few hours..

Mayu and Yuki were sitting apart from each other, the two in every window. For time to time they would steal glances at each other.

"Hot legs.." Mayu thinks trying not to show any emotion while Yuki only looks through the window.

"Great now I'm meeting her relatives!" He thinks and turns to look at Mayu unconsciously.

Mayu also turned her head and found Yuki staring at her, the two blushed and turned their heads to their respective window.

~Arriving~

Everyone got out of the car and Mayu's family were already waiting outside the house.

"We're really close to the beach!" Yuki thought looking around.

Everyone said hi and grabbed Mayu's cheeks several times while Yuki only smirked.

"And who's this handsome boy!" Mayu's girl cousin Karin says poking his cheek.

Mayu was being surrounded by her 3 weird cousins..

"Stay away from me!" She says annoyed.

"That's Mayu fiance!" Mayu's dad says with a smile.

"Mayu chan has a fiance!" The old aunt says pinching Mayu's cheek lightly.

Mayu's mom smiled.

"We have a lot to talk about!" The old aunt says and all the adults went inside the house.

"You're so pretty Mayu chan!" One of her weird cousins says.

"Do you work out?" Karin asked as she uses her finger to touch Yuki's stomach.

Yuki only face palmed himself "great relatives.." he says looking up in sarcastic way.

"Look at her Legs!" Other of Mayu's cousin says taking pictures of Mayu's legs.

"Stop bothering me!" Mayu says irritated.
 
Yuki ignored Karin and  kicked the idiot who was ducking to take a better shot of Mayu's legs.

"Don't mess with the legs!" Yuki says acting cool.

Mayu's cousin was with his face on the ground..

"You're pretty handsome, you look like if you came out from a manga!" The two other boys says admiring Yuki.

"What the hell is wrong with them?" Yuki asked really shocked.

"I still don't know!" Mayu replies as she watches how her cousins were admiring Yuki.

"Cool!" One of them says.

"Now I wonder how you turned out pretty?" Yuki says unconsciously which cause Mayu to blush while Karin was pouting.

Yuki realized what he said and looked other way "This weekend is not going to be fun" he thought.

TO BE CONTINUED!! Happy birthday Chanaline!! :)
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.7
Post by: cisda83 on June 20, 2013, 01:26:18 PM
Oh... Mayu and Yuki are going to have an interesting weekend now...

What kind of troubles are they going to come across?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.7
Post by: fael_c00l on June 20, 2013, 01:30:21 PM
It's gonna be the best weekend for them both :)
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.7
Post by: Haruto Lee on June 20, 2013, 05:24:23 PM
As Yuki walks the hall to the bathroom Mayu's dad grabs his arm "Yuki kun Mayu haven't came out from her room.. is she okay? Can you please check?" He asked worried.

Yuki was about to reject him but he remembered what happened yesterday so it was the right thing to do go check on her..

He pouted "Do you really want me to check on your daughter shirtless and only underwear?" He asked mocking him.

"You little... I meant once you dress up!!" Mayu's dad says kinda irritated shaking by his neck.

"Don't touch me old man, my body hurts!" Yuki replies as he's being shook

"So where are you going?" Yuki asked with a smirk to mock Mayu.

"With my family!" Mayu's dad replied.

"That bunch of perverts!" Mayu says irritated.

"Those perverts are your cousins and they are friendly.." Mayu's mom says as she sits.

"What?!?! They lifted my skirt many times, I STILL REMEMBER!" Mayu replies mad.

"Funny.. have fun Mayuyu with your perverts cousins!" Yuki says with her charming smile.

Mayu was mad for how Yuki was bothering her since, he really doesn't have to go with Mayu's relatives and he would spend the while weekend alone because there was no way her parents leave her alone with him for the weekend so her Nezumi side activated.

"Eh wait but Yuki kun is my soon to be husband so he needs to know my relatives, don't you think dad?" Mayu asked with a mischievous smirk.

Yuki almost chokes and swallowed fast "No! No! No!" He replies making an x with his arms.

Mayu's dad started to think.

"You don't even have to think it.. *Yuki smiles* Yuki kun should come with us!" Mayu's mom says.

Yuki looked at her with an open mouth :O "I feel betrayed!" He thought.

Mayu's dad smiles "Yes, you have to come with us!" He says tapping Yuki's back.

Yuki smirks "How do you expect them not to be perverts when you use little shorts like this, showing your hot legs!" He says pulling Mayu's Jean shorts down slightly.

"Hey!!" She says grabbing Yuki's hand and trying to remove it.

Yuki grabbed the hand and intertwine their fingers [the moment became dense for a few seconds as they hold each other  hand]

"Once we marry I'm going to burn every short and skirt you have!" He says serious then let go Mayu's hand then gets up and walks to the door.

"Like if I'm going to let that happen!" Mayu says turning around.

Yuki smirks and turns his head "Well then You will be able to use them when you're with me since you're not that ugly, you can't wear it when I'm not around!" He says then gets out of the room

"Do you work out?" Karin asked as she uses her finger to touch Yuki's stomach.

Yuki only face palmed himself "great relatives.." he says looking up in sarcastic way.

"Look at her Legs!" Other of Mayu's cousin says taking pictures of Mayu's legs.

"Stop bothering me!" Mayu says irritated.
 
Yuki ignored Karin and  kicked the idiot who was ducking to take a better shot of Mayu's legs.

"Don't mess with the legs!" Yuki says acting cool.

Mayu's cousin was with his face on the ground...

"Now I wonder how you turned out pretty?" Yuki says unconsciously which cause Mayu to blush while Karin was pouting.

Yuki realized what he said and looked other way "This weekend is not going to be fun" he thought.

I keep laughing at these part because it is funny.....

And I think Yuki is over protective..... Does Yuki love Mayu?

Like you this new update.....

Pls update soon
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.7
Post by: Chanaline on June 20, 2013, 07:30:06 PM
Nyaaaaaah! Yuki show more your love to Mayu!!!!! :D

They are so cute and funny at the same time  XD

Thank you for this present I really Like it!!

I want more of this fic!!!!!! Sooooon!!!  :lol: :bow:
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.7
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on June 21, 2013, 12:58:29 AM
lol mayu's cousins are perverts :lol: :rofl:
hehe yuki's getting possessive/protective more now :P :inlove:
im glad mayu's talking again :deco:
thanx for the update :cow: :bow:
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.7
Post by: MaYuki_AiAi on June 21, 2013, 05:05:28 AM
hello cmze-san, i'm new member here... yoroshiku onegaishimasu ne   :kneelbow:
my english's really really really bad  :bleed eyes: so sorry for my write  XD

i like mayuki's interaction  :twothumbs they are so cute n funny  :inlove:
yuki is so perv n possesive  :lol: :lol: :lol: poor mayu, but i'm glad mayu talk again  :farofflook:  :deco: :deco: :deco:

I LOVE YOUR FANFIC  :wub: :wub: :wub:
I want more of this fic so please update SOON  :lol: :bow: :bow: :bow:

Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.7
Post by: alexsher99 on June 21, 2013, 05:23:46 AM
cmze-san, hi I'm a big fan!  :w00t:
I'm just a little shy to comment on your works (don't know why)  :?
I've been stalking this fic (and your other fics) for a long time now and just now managed to comment :doh: But anyways I love the MaYuki and the cool Yuki in this fic! :wub: please update soon! :twothumbs
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.7
Post by: leEwẬy on June 21, 2013, 10:41:14 AM
I see there's a lots of action that shows Yuki's protective :ding:
Maybe he begins to love Mayu :hehehe:
Mayu's cousins are pervertes :hiakhiakhiak:
They're gonna have an interesting holiday :kekeke:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.7
Post by: kurogumi on June 21, 2013, 01:24:52 PM
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL!!!

yuki!!


thank for the update cmze-san
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.7
Post by: affiber on June 27, 2013, 03:03:21 AM
hey, please update soon! i really love this fict :w00t:
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.8
Post by: cmze on August 05, 2013, 01:05:20 PM
                                          My boyfriend and my fiancé
                                                                CH.8

~The next day~ still the same day~

The family had a dinner, they introduced Yuki as Mayu soon to be husband and everyone took it well.

After dinner the women started cleaning the messy table while the men were in the living room.

"C'mon Yuki kun have a drink!" One of Mayu's relatives say offering him a glass of alcohol.

Yuki didn't know what to do at first then looked at Mayu's dad who nodded approving "Well family is family!" He said with a smile and grabbing the glass.

"Yeah!" All the men in the living room said hugging the handsome boy.

Mayu looked at Yuki with her family and smiled a little.

"Yuki kun is cute, doesn't him?" Karin asked waking Mayu from her thoughts.

Mayu pouted "I don't care!" She said coldly.

The men in the house were drinking listening to music, the older women joined them after cleaning the dishes and the party started.

Mayu went upstairs seeing her family getting drunk wasn't fun, actually this kinda reunion is not fun for her.

After some hours the while family was drunk.

Yuki got out to catch some air "These people drink like there's no tomorrow.." he said feeling dizzy.

"Yuki kun!" Karin shouted then gave him a back hug.

"What?!? Let go!" Yuki shouted trying to remove the girl.

Karin closed her eyes "Why I always find myself dating jerks? I wish someone look at me the way you look at Mayu chan.." she said drunk

Yuki was completely impressed after a few seconds he reacted "You're crazy!" He said embarrased.

"That's why I wanna kiss you!!" She said and fast turned into a crazy girl that wanted to Kiss Yuki no matter what.

"No way!" Yuki shouted scaping from her going back inside the house.

Mayu's dad looked at him "Yuki kun drink some more!" He said with a smile.

"I feel like throwing up.." Yuki thought "I need to go to the bathroom first!" He said with a smile then fast went upstairs locked the bathroom and went to the room nobody would look for him.

Karin entered to the house and asked for Yuki, they told them he was on the bathroom and made her join them to the party again not letting her go.

Yuki knocked Mayu's door several times fast.

Mayu opened the door after a few seconds and looked at her drunk soon to be husband.

"She's crazy if she thinks I'm going to kiss her!" He said before hugging Mayu.

Mayu blushed and help Yuki to lay on her bed.

Yuki was totally drunk as soon he touched the bed he fell sleep while Mayu looked at him for a moment.

"The truth you're not that ugly also.." she whispered with a little smirk as her hand caresses his cheek.

Mayu yawned "I'm kinda tired also" she thought as she slowly lays on bed next to him.

Somehow Yuki unconsciously putted his arm on Mayu's chest, she got red and was about the slap him but then realized he was sleeping.

"Your sleeping face is cute.." She thought and remembered the last time she saw Yuki sleeping.

She remembered she kissed him on his cheek that night and somehow all the memories of Yuki helping her were replaying on her head.

Mayu blushed then gulped and slowly was getting closer to his face (his lips), when she was a few inches away she stopped.

"Why am I doing? Could it be.. No way! am I in love with this jerk?" She thought asking herself surprised and looked at him sleeping.

After a few minutes, she grabbed the pillow to separate both and decided to sleep.
~The next day~

Yuki opened his eyes first then noticed the room and looked at the person beside him sleeping.

"What the hell? Why did I come to sleep here? What did I tell her?" Yuki asked to himself then got up and to the door quietly.

Outside he saw Karin sleeping leaning on the bathroom door.

"She's crazy!" He thought then went to his shared room with odd cousins and kept there.

~After some hours~ 2:00 pm.

Everyone were already up and making food.

Yuki went to the bathroom once he was about to enter he saw Mayu coming out of her room with a skirt and a white shirt.

"Where are you going? Btw nice skirt your cousins going to have a good view of your panties." Yuki asked kinda irritated cause the skirt.

Mayu smirked "To the beach and don't be so jealous Yuki is not healthy.." she said as Nezumi.

Yuki laughed "jealous really? Don't make me laugh" he said .

"Well you know what they say.. drunk people always say the truth!" Mayu says as she walks downstairs.

"What? What did I say?" He asked paranoid.

~Downstairs~

Everyone were having a bad hangover even Karin.

"Wow you look terrible!" Mayu says with a smile.

"Hangover!" Mayu's dad replies as he waits for the food.

Mayu's mom smiles "Where are you going so pretty?" She asked.

"To the beach!" Mayu replies careless.

"You can not go alone, you three go with her!" Mayu's dad says to the odd cousins who smiled

"Okay Sir!" The three replied with a smile.
 
Mayu pouted "what? No! I can take care of myself!" She said irritated.

"I'll go with her too!" Yuki said coming downstairs already changed, Mayu smiled a little.

"Then if Yuki kun goes then I'll go too!" Karin says with a smile.

"Didn't you say the beach is boring!" One of the cousins asks

Karin smirked "Not anymore!" She said looking at Yuki.

Mayu pouted a little while Yuki was totally awkward.

TO BE CONTINUED.. BEACH DAY~ YAY!!
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.8
Post by: Zita on August 05, 2013, 01:16:10 PM
Poor Yuki, that Karin is funny. :D
Mayu is going to be jealous.  :rofl:
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.8
Post by: Chanaline on August 05, 2013, 01:21:39 PM
Yeahhhhhhh you update it!!!!!! I'm happy :D Thank you cmze-chan!!!! :twothumbs

Mayuki are so jealous and jealous  :smhid

Mayu seems to like Yuki more than before yayyyy!!

Morrrreeeee! XD Update soon!!!! Thank you :deco:
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.8
Post by: leEwẬy on August 05, 2013, 02:23:36 PM
Oho~ Both of their feeling are slowly development :ding:
Awww ><~~~ Mayuki little moments are so cute :nya:
Karin's surely love Yuki very much, she'll be able to help Mayuki's relationship become better :kekeke:
Too much happy in one day :luvluv1:
Can't wait to see the beach sceens :on gay:
Update ASAP, please :kneelbow:
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.8
Post by: imteedee on August 07, 2013, 09:52:22 AM
i see some jealousy there  :mon misch:
OHOHOHO Yuki-kun getting overprotective there  :mon determined:
admit eeeeettttttt already you like each other!!! NOW KISS :mon geek:

Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.8
Post by: kurogumi on August 10, 2013, 03:00:41 AM
Yuki,as a boy he's so tsundere

Jun,has mayu already forgotten her loved toward him?
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.8
Post by: an_93 on October 08, 2013, 09:36:16 PM
This is hilarious  :rofl:  I made an account just to say that  :oops:
Keep it up :thumbup
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.8
Post by: Jamie.AP on October 09, 2013, 02:40:09 AM
author-san where are you ?? comeback n update plz
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.8
Post by: an_93 on October 10, 2013, 05:33:56 AM
I love this so much please update soon :)
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.8
Post by: an_93 on October 15, 2013, 11:47:59 PM
                                                        Chapter 9

After that awkward moment the teenagers went to the beach to have a good time. Mayu continuously was being stalked by her cousins while Yuki was watching and losing his temper to make it worse Karin was holding his arm.
"Your muscles are well defined!" She says clinging on his arm tighter.
Yuki looked at her "This girl.." he thought mad while Mayu kept walking ahead of them ignoring them.
Once at the beach, everyone dropped their things and started to get comfortable.
"Yuki kun take off your shirt!!" Karin says over excited while Mayu only turned her face away.
Yuki sighed "There's no way in hell.." he answered then looked at Mayu's cousins waiting for her to take off her dress.
"Uh ah.." He said and grabbed the three boys on his arms squeezing them and taking them away with him.
Mayu started to take off her dress and showed a pretty white bikini that catched many surfers attention, Karin also started to take off her big shirt.
"Yuki.. we haven't done anything" The three said with their face a few inches away from the sand, Yuki was furious "I know what we're you thinking!" He shouted red.
Mayu looked at the boys with Yuki "I wonder what's the commotion?" She thought oblivious at the situation.
Yuki looked at the three begging for their lives and sighed "I'm going to get you three girls and you guys will stop stalking Mayu.." he said serious with a cool vibe around him.
"Really?" One of them look at Yuki excited.
"Yeah get up let's get going" He said as he walks. The three boys followed him.
May and Karin were laying on their towels then Karin sat to look for Yuki and found him "Look Mayu Chan, Yuki kun is flirting with those girls!" She said pointing at him surrounded by girls.
Mayu pouted a little then got up "Wanna play some ball?" She asked ignoring the situation in front of her, Karin blinked a few times "Yeah.. Why not?" She said as she gets up.
The two pretty girls with curvy body started to play.
Yuki smiled at the girls jokes even though it wasn't funny "Hey girls I think my boys here has good jokes too.. right?" He asked faking a smile and taping the closest one's back hard.
"Mmm.. huh.. well.. " He said nervous looking at the good looking girls around them.
Yuki face palmed himself "Got to be kidding me.." he thought angrily.
Suddenly a ball hit Yuki on his face.
"Yuki kun!!" All the girls around them reacted.
"WHAT THE HELL?!?!??!" He shouted and fast Sat to look at the culprit once he saw the culprit' s  face, he controlled himself and calmed down.
"Sorry my bad!" A smiling Mayu says as she grabs the ball then gets back to Karin and the other boys waiting for her.
Mayu's cousins tried to help Yuki who was looking at the guys with Mayu "DON'T TOUCH ME!" He shouted irritated and got up. Everyone around them were confused and wondered why Yuki is acting this way?
He cleaned the sand from his hand and walked determinate to Mayu ignoring everyone as he is going to grab Mayu's hand someone talked to him.
"Hey why don't you play with us?" One of the guys asked him and distracted him from his main purpose.
Yuki looked at the two "Yeah.. yeah.." he answered with an odd face.
The two guys smiled at eachother "Some football?" The taller one asked still with a smile plastered on his face. Mayu looked carefully at Yuki "What's wrong with him?" She thought.
"Totally!" He replied still with the same odd face and picked his mates for the match which were Mayu's cousins.
Mayu sighed while Karin was smiling "SHIRT OFF!!" She shouted excited, Yuki turned to look at her "She's insane.." he whispered to himself.
The match started...
"If this doesn't get you girls then don't know what else.." Yuki thought as he runs with ball dodging the others while Mayu and Karin were looking at him.
"Yuki kun is so good at football.." Karin says with a smile and impressed while Mayu sighed "I know.." she thought "He's just doing it to look cool to those girls!!" She shouted supporting the other team.
Yuki heard that then lost focus and other snatched him the ball and made him fall.
As the time passes Yuki is more confused "Does she want me to lose?" He thought.The other team started scoring 1 by 1.
After a while the match ended.
"We're never going to have girlfriends!" One of Mayu's cousins shouts as he sees the girls going with the guys who won the match.  The other two were asking them to not leave.
Karin looked at her cousins "C'mon you'll find some girls eventually!" She said while Yuki looked at  the three "C'mon tomorrow is another day.. I'll get you better girls I promise."He said feeling guilty
Mayu was shocked "Now I see, he was trying to get them some girls.. " she thought.
Soon the five were at home Mayu was concerned it was already 3 hours after signing home and Yuki haven't bothered her or anything.She's so used to it that she misses it.
Before going to bed Mayu looked for Yuki around the house and found him outside.
"It's cold.. what are you doing out here?" Mayu asked as she sits next to him.
 "Nothing.." he said carelessly not looking at her.
 "You know it was nice that you were trying to get my cousins some girlfriends" Mayu said looking down.
Yuki turned to look at her "This is what you came? To tell me something like that.." he asked serious while Mayu was confused and somehow some heat got to her cheeks.
"What.. What.. else..." she asked nervous as Yuki gets closer to her face.
 Mayu can see Yuki coming closer to her face in slow motion, she knows what's next and she's anticipating it.
Yuki gulped for one last time before.. 
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.8
Post by: FairyNyan on November 10, 2013, 08:11:47 AM
cool fic. i love bad boy yuki  :twothumbs

please update this  :)
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.8
Post by: sidny48 on December 07, 2013, 03:36:46 PM
Woohoo nice fanfic it's my first time reading this keep going update this please
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.8
Post by: vivinardisa on March 26, 2014, 02:08:56 PM
Yuki is so cool because he is bad boy  :cathappy:  :cathappy:

It's been so long, but please update soon  :bow:  :bow:
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.8
Post by: Ceej!~ on March 30, 2014, 10:04:51 AM
 Silently reading this. gawddd~ please update~  XD
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.9
Post by: cmze on April 04, 2014, 08:28:11 AM
~Thanks but there's another thread right? This is weird An_93 xD
                            My boyfriend and my fiancé
                                        CH.9

"Guys... oh sorry!" One of Mayu's cousins said interrupting them.

"Nice!" Yuki said sarcastically while Mayu was looking down embarrased.

Mayu's cousin angered to the house fast knowing that Yuki might be pissed off.

"Oh.. well good night!" Mayu said nervous and tried to go but Yuki grabbed her arm made her spin and kissed her.

Mayu was shocked first but then just replied the kiss not knowing why?

After a moment the two had their foreheads connected and Mayu remembered Jun so she just walked away nervous inside the house.

"First she gets jealous Then I kiss her and she goes away.. What the hell?" He thought

~ The next day~

Yuki woke up as always, he got downstairs and found nobody just a piece a of paper that says "We're at the beach, meet you there xoxo Karin."

"My future wife doesn't write anything for me..  that's cool!" He thought before making breakfast by himself.

Suddenly Mayu's family entered (elders)

"How are you?" Mayu's dad asked.

"Been better... You're daughter don't treat me well!" Yuki said with bread on his mouth then grabbed a glass of juice and went upstairs.

Mayu's dad wondered why he said that.

Once done with breakfast Yuki went to the beach.

~Beach~

Mayu's three cousins were building a castle of sand while Karin was getting tan. "Where's Mayu?" He asked curious.

"She went to walk to the beach!" One of them replied while the others were still too focused on the castle.

Yuki went to look for Mayu. After some minutes he was able to find her, she was looking at the sea.

He walked to her till the point he was now standing behind her.

"What's up?" He asked while Mayu just looked down. "I just can't believe we kissed." She replied.

"Those things happen I mean you're not that ugly.." he said looking at the sea.

"I have a boyfriend!" Mayu said sad.

Yuki smirked "I see where it goes now.." he said "What do you expect? You're my soon to be wife!" He added getting in front of her.

Mayu just sighed.

"Of course I wanna touch and kiss!" He said grabbing Mayu by her waist. Mayu blushed "Hey.." she let out.

Yuki connected their foreheads "It's okay cause you're my soon to be wife... and you want that!" He said getting closer to steal another kiss.

Mayu hesitate but Yuki kissed her anyway.

The two shared a sweet but passionate kiss bolder than the last.

Mayu broke the kiss.

"Okay Why we just don't walk?" He said grabbing her hand.

The two walked holding hands like a couple. After some minutes Yuki notice that Mayu was having trouble while walking.

He knelt down and removed Mayu's sandals "You'll walk better without this." He said making Mayu blush.

Girls around were melting cause Yuki gentleman side.

Mayu noticed and pulled Yuki by his shirt with her. Yuki only smirked "Mayu jealous is cute." He thought as he's being dragged.

The two got tired of walking and sat on the sand.

Spend some quality time together before thinking about to the city and all the things that involve it.

TO BE CONTINUED...
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.9
Post by: prof.j on April 04, 2014, 11:47:31 AM
an update   :w00t:
it's been a long time eh (?)
I was following this fic silently and I'm really glad that you update this  :grin:
thank you for update  :D  :thumbsup


yuki sure really agressive  :grin:
mayu start receiving yuki but still thinking of jun  :?


looking forward for next chapter  :grin:
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.9
Post by: chiqinna on April 04, 2014, 01:24:53 PM
*sigh in relieved* I'm glad~  :D :D :D
Jun can take Rena~ haha  :lol: :yep: :heart:
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.9
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on April 04, 2014, 07:46:56 PM
two updates~? oh well it means more mayuki!!~ ah god *fangirls over mayuki*~ :heart: :heart:
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.9
Post by: vivinardisa on April 05, 2014, 03:38:55 AM
Kawaii~~  XD

MaYukiis so sweet   :wub:

Cannot get them away from my head  :inlove:

Update soon  :bow:
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.9
Post by: Archer1992 on August 08, 2015, 02:06:16 AM
 :cow: continue
Continue soon!!
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.9
Post by: niineechan on August 08, 2015, 09:13:54 AM
The sweet scenes...
:shy1: :shy2:
Waiting for the next..
though it's already a year..
Title: Re: ~My boyfriend and my fiance~ MaYuki Ch.9
Post by: genkingblack on November 23, 2015, 01:14:36 PM
still waiting for update

author-san comebaaaack pleaaaseeeeee