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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: korin48 on January 04, 2013, 06:41:51 PM
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Hello there, readers! This is my first fanfic! XD I read many fanfics here so let's me try to write this crappy fanfic...
This crappy fanfic will might be ended at chapter 5 or 6... :sweatdrop:
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Chapter 1 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34768.msg1139936#msg1139936)
Chapter 2 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34768.msg1140450#msg1140450)
Chapter 3 Part 1 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34768.msg1144858#msg1144858) | Part 2 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34768.msg1163875#msg1163875)
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Chapter 1
There was a girl who just transfers to Ryou High School. This girl name is Maeda Atsuko and she was very pretty and attractive and no interested in boys.
*YESTERDAY*
She was with her mom going to book store to buy her things for school tomorrow.
In book store, while Atsuko was looking for something a boy bumped to her and he seems in a hurry.
Atsuko: Ouch!
Mysterious Boy: I’m sorry! I am in a hurry!
Mysterious Boy helps her to stand up. But Atsuko denied.
Atsuko: N-No need to help me…b-b-but thank you! (Why am I shuttering!?)
Mysterious Boy: Ah…Ah…S-Sorry! This is my fault.
Atsuko: N-No… this is my fault because I didn’t notice you passing here…
*Atsuko’s cellphone rings*
Atsuko’s Mom: Atsuko! Where are you? Come here! I am in the cashier area.
Atsuko: Okay Mom! I will go there…
*She hangs up*
Atsuko: Excuse me! I have to go…bye!
Mysterious Boy: Oh…Oh B-Bye! (Why the hell am I shuttering!?)
*Atsuko went to the cashier area*
Atsuko’s Mom: Dear! Where were you?
Atsuko: Ah sorry! I was looking for something…but since it is not available here…so I don’t mind…
After they bought something, they went home and prepare for tomorrow...
Atsuko is laying on the bed and thinking about that mysterious boy
Atsuko: I wonder who is that boy who bumps me earlier…Why was I shuttering? Don’t tell it is love at first sight that my friend was talking about? Hmm…No way! Why am I thinking about this!? Forget about this! *fell asleep*
*THE NEXT DAY*
Atsuko was walking to her new school, Ryou High School.
When suddenly a mysterious boy bumps to her again, and Atsuko fell.
Atsuko: Ouch! I am sor- *with a surprised face*
Mysterious Boy: I’m sor- *with a surprised face also*
Atsuko and Mysterious Boy: Eh!? YOU!?
TBC!
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So how is my crappy fanfic? how is my crappy english here!? DX I know I am sucked in english <_<
and sorry for this short chapter because it is my first time to write fanfic XD
Stay tune for next chapter.... :mon geek:
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-Hello-
-It’s Great!
-I hope the boy is Kai :wub:
-Please Update Soon!-
-Thank You-
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It's definitly Takamina! :gmon bang:
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Haha. A bumping meeting. I hope the mysterious boy is Kai/Takamina.
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Yey im glad that your first fic was kaiacchan(?) XDD
LOL nvm.
Thankz
Your engrish is good btw,not a crappy one.
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This is awesome korin~~
Can't wait for the next update :D
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of course is takaboy or maybe minami dressed like a boy
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Thank you so much for comments! :sweatdrop:
I will make chapter 2 longer than chapter 1 :thumbsup
Let's see if your answer is correct :D
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Here's chapter 2 :sweatdrop:
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Chapter 2
Atsuko: Y-You again!? Why are you here? Don’t tell you are stalking at me!? DX
Mysterious Boy: What are you talking about!? I am just walking to school, Ms. Girl-from-that-bookstore! DX *gives his hand*
Atsuko: *slaps his hand* *stand up* Shut up!
Mysterious Boy: Hehehe… :P
Atsuko: Whatever…I am also walking to school…
Mysterious Boy: Ah…Eh really? What school? Maybe let’s us walk together?
Atsuko: No way!
Mysterious Boy: Oh Okay sorry for yesterday <_<
Atsuko: *ignores him* *walking away*
Mysterious Boy: Hmm…*realized something* (Oh damn…I forgot to ask her name…hope I will meet her again) *starts walking*
*Front of Ryou High School*
Atsuko: Oh this school surely is big…*starts walking* (I guess I have to go to office to ask where the 2nd year is…)
Atsuko is walking to office. She asks office lady where her class is…
Atsuko: Excuse me? Where is the 2nd year classroom?
Office Lady: Oh! You must be Atsuko Maeda, right? ^_^
Atsuko: Yes, ma’am.
Office Lady: And about the 2nd year classroom, your class adviser is coming here…Just wait, okay?
Atsuko: Ok, ma’am.
*Her class adviser arrived*
Class Adviser: You must be Maeda-san, right? My name is Togasaki, your class adviser…nice to meet you!
Atsuko: Ah nice to meet you too sir! :D
Mr. Togasaki: Let’s go to classroom!
Atsuko: *nods*
Mr. Togasaki and Atsuko walked and arrived the 2nd Year classroom. Atsuko can hear little noise from that classroom.
*Mr. Togasaki opened the door*
Mr. Togasaki: *claps his hands* Be quiet, you! So Maeda-san, Please introduce yourself.
*Classroom became quiet*
Atsuko: Hi everyone! I am new student here. My name is Atsuko Maeda, nice to meet you! :D
Boys: Wow! She is so cute! I wonder if she has boyfriend… *starts whispering*
Mr. Togasaki: *claps his hands*
*Boys stop whispering*
Mr. Togasaki: Okay! Now you know her name…so Maeda-san, *points at empty table* Please sit there.
Atsuko: Yes, sir.
*Atsuko sits on the chair*
Mr. Togasaki: Okay! So now the lesson is about Algebraic *starts writing something on the blackboard* (Writer’s POV: Sorry! I don’t have any ideas what lesson DX)
*Atsuko sees a boy beside her is sleeping*
Atsuko: *taps his shoulder* excuse me? The class begins right now…
Mysterious Boy: *yawn* *still his eyes closes* But this lesson is bored… *opens his eyes* *sees her* EH!? Ms. Girl-from-that-bookstore!? DX
Atsuko: Eh!? YOU AGAIN!?
Mariko: Oi Kai! Do you know her? *points at Atsuko*
Kai: *look at Mariko* Ah no! Just an acquaintance of mine, Mariko…
Atsuko: No! I don’t know him! He just bumps into me in the bookstore yesterday.
Mariko: Oh hi Maeda-san! My name is Mariko! You probably fell for each other already after bumping each in the bookstore… Like in a drama… *troll face*
Kai: Mariko! *slightly blush*
Atsuko: *slightly blush* Ah no! I don’t have interest in boys…
Mariko: Hahaha Sorry…I was just kidding…
Kai: *look at Atsuko* So Why are you here for!?
Atsuko: Well, I am new student here…
Kai: Eh? That’s so? *yawn* What is your name again?
Atsuko: My name is Atsuko Maeda, you?
Kai: Oh your name is beautiful! My name is Kai Takahashi. Nice to meet you! ^_^
TBC!
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How is this crappy chapter!? Dx Sorry again for short chapter... :mon slapself: hehe...hope you enjoy... :on beatup
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its funny that the first thing that atsuka said is "Im not like boys" .. but I think kai would you change your mind, right?
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It's interesting!! Please continue!
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ahaa..!! they finally.. kai's look so messy but he's cute :D
but, what if you make that Kai is already have a (boring) girlfriend? hehe
please continue :D
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They (kai x acchan) officially meet again at school. That cool ! And they're sitting beside each others. That great !
Will their love / feeling develop later on ? I hope that will happen in the next update ~ wohoo !
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It's your first time writing but I like it :heart: Please update soon :cow:
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HAHAHA love it!! :cathappy: :thumbup :deco: :deco: :heart:
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Kai and Atsuko interaction is so sweet and their reaction is cute...
Well thank you for making KaiAachan fic...
Can't wait to see the next
:wub: :inlove: :love: :heart:
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Here's my updated chapter! I am really busy with studying... Sorry for keeping you wait... :kneelbow:
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Chapter 3 Part 1
Kai: Oh your name is beautiful! My name is Kai Takahashi. Nice to meet you! ^_^
Kai: Ah! And can we be friends?
Atsuko: Sure friends only…
Kai: Yeah friends… ^_^ (Hmm…? What is this feeling? I’m sure it is different… Wait! I had this feeling since yesterday when I bumped her… Don’t tell me it is love? Ehehehe! No way! It is not!)
Mr. Togasaki: *done writing something on the board* Okay, so listen! Definition of Algebra is… Hey Takahashi! You tell us what is definition of that?
Kai: Eh? Me?
Mr. Togasaki: Yes, you!
Kai: Eh? *stand up* Ah! Ahaha I don’t know
Mr. Togasaki: Too bad, Takahashi… You, Maeda!
Atsuko: Yes sir! *stand up* Definition of Algebra is the part of mathematics in which letters and other symbols are used to represent numbers and quantities in formulae and equations. (Writer’s POV: I got it from Google LOL! I forgot what is definition of algebra... LOL!)
Mr. Togasaki: Nice answer Maeda!
Kai: *his jaw dropped* (Wow! Never thought she is so smart…)
Atsuko: Thank you sir *sit down*
Mariko: Oi Takahashi! What are you doing? Sit down already…
Kai: Ah sorry DX *sit down*
After several minutes, the bell just rang. It is break time. Mariko stood up and asked Atsuko for eating together…
Mariko: Maeda-san, want to eat together?
Atsuko: Sure! And you can call me by my nickname, Acchan :D
Mariko: *nods* Let’s go
Atsuko and Mariko went to cafeteria. Atsuko saw a lot of girls fangirling over Kai…
Random Girl 1: Takahashi-sama! I like you! Please go out with me!
Random Girl 2: No way! He don’t like you! He likes me!
Random Girl 3: Shut up! He likes me more!
The girls continued to fangirling over Kai…
*Back to Atsuko*
Atsuko: Pity him! Takahashi-san is popular! =_=
Mariko: Yeah right… He is so popular since he enrolled here… Perhaps there is ‘someone’ who is jealous right now… *smirk*
Atsuko: Stop it Mariko! I am not jealous! DX
Mariko: Whoa there, Acchan! I didn’t say it was you! *smirk more*
Atsuko: O-Oh! Shut up, Mariko! DX
*Back to Kai*
Random Girl 2: Do you have girlfriend? <///<
Kai: Ah! Y-Yeah! I do have… why? ^_^ (Sorry! I answered without thinking DX)
Random Girl 4: Oh that girl must be lucky… D:
Random Girl 1: May I know who is that girl? O_O
Kai: Eh? Ah! *points at Atsuko* That girl! (Why her!? What the heck am I tell without thinking!? DX)
Random Girl 3: Eh? That transferred student?
Kai: Ahaha! That’s right! ^_^
Random Girl 5: But she just transferred here right?
Kai: Y-Yeah! But I know her before she transferred here… ^_^ (Sorry for my fail joking DX)
Random Girl 1: I envy that girl…
Random Girl 4: I wish I am that girl…
Kai: *stood up* Ah sorry! I have to go! Bye girls! *suddenly left*
*Back to Atsuko*
Atsuko: *eating*
Kai: Yo Ms. Girl-from-that-bookstore! ^_^
Atsuko: *stop eating* Ah Takahashi-san…
Kai: May I sit here?
Atsuko: No…
Kai: Why?
Atsuko: Sit there…
Kai: Sure =_= *sit beside Mariko*
Atsuko: *start eating again*
Kai: *stare at her*
Mariko: *accidently see at him* *smirk*
Kai noticed that Mariko is smirking at them… so Kai stopped staring at Atsuko…
Kai: Erm… So… Maeda-san, I want to ask you questions…
Atsuko: Eh?
Kai: I know that it is stupid but do you have boyfriend?
Atsuko: Why ask suddenly?
Kai: Nothing <_< just asking ^_^
Atsuko: About that, I don’t have one…
Kai: Why? You are this beautiful but you don’t have one? =_=
Atsuko: It is because I don’t have interest in boys and I am ‘NBSB’ ^_^
Kai: Eh… Ah… if you don’t mind…can you be my girlfriend?
Atsuko: No! I can’t! Once I’m a ‘NBSB’ I’m always a ‘NBSB’=.=
Kai: Come on! Just P-R-E-T-E-N-D that you are my girlfriend okay?
Atsuko: I said I C-A-N-T!
Kai: Please help me! Just P-R-E-T-E-N-D only, okay?
Atsuko: Why pretend?
Kai: Because those girls are always fangirling over me! If they know that you are my girlfriend, I am sure that they will stop fangirling over me…
Atsuko: Even if you have already girlfriend, I am sure that they will continue fangirling over you ^_^
Kai: Oi! Don’t say that! =_=
Mariko: Sorry for interrupting you but talking like a couple huh?
Atsuko: Mariko! >///>
Kai: No way… =///=
Mariko: I am just kidding :P Continue talking, you two… *smirk*
Kai: *ignores Mariko* =_= Maeda-san, is it okay?
Atsuko: Okay about what?
Kai: Pretend being my girlfriend?
Atsuko: If it is about helping a friend then fine… But one condition…
Kai: *clears his throat* Eh? What is the condition?
Atsuko: Don’t you do something sweet and touch me!
Kai: Whoa There! Girls here might will think that we are not a couple!
Atsuko: Come on! It is fine!
Kai: No it isn’t!
Atsuko: I told you that I don’t have interest in boys and I am ‘NBSB’!
Kai: A-Ah O-Okay! DX (She is so scary! =_=)
TBC!
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How was it? :OMG: Sorry if it is crappy chapter and english too..... :scared:
I made chapter 3 little long so I separated them into 2 parts (or 3 parts maybe...) :sweat:
I will be on hiatus mode maybe i will update next month... :mon prayer:
Oh! And I planned to put some pairings here but i dont have any idea which pairings...tell me who do you want to put pairings here?
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que es NBSB ( No boy so boring).. jajaj poor kai-kun
if maeda doesnt want to be you GF come with me acchan is so mean..
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well... Atsuko is scary... eh... she is quite mean there...
Is she not interesting of Kai... or is she acting like she's not interested but interested on the inside?
Well can't wait to see the next update
Thank you for this chapter
:wub: :inlove: :love: :heart:
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I laughed on the algebra part :lol:
Takamina's so cute when she's all flustered and dorky :cathappy:
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:cow: :cow: :cow:
:cathappy: takamina or should i say kai?? haha so damn adorkable :inlove: . hehe acchan why so tsundere?? :? hahah
any i love ur story :twothumbs but please update XD
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Just throw takagirl in and acchan will be interested 8)
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Sorry for waiting! I was busy with my schoolwork but this week no more! Because the vacation is started already! so here's my update! :onionwhip:
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Kai: *clears his throat* Eh? What is the condition?
Acchan: Don’t you do something sweet and touch me!
Kai: Whoa There! Girls here might will think that we are not a couple!
Acchan: Come on! It is fine!
Kai: No it isn’t!
Acchan: I told you that I don’t have interest in boys and I am ‘NBSB’!
Kai: A-Ah O-Okay! DX (She is so scary! =_=)
Chapter 3 Part 2
Lunch Break ended, time to go back to class
Kai: *stand up* *goes to Acchan* *offer his hand to her* please? ;)
Acchan: Eww! Don’t wink at me!
Kai: (pretend he didn’t hear it) Please? ;)
Acchan: Ew! Uh… fine… *offer her hand to his and stand up*
Kai: Let’s go… ;)
Acchan: (That’s too much, Takahashi…)
Mariko: *clears her thoat* *stand up* *walk to him* Hey… you know it is too much…
Kai: Ehehe… whatever…
Mariko: *whisper* If you do ‘something’ to her, you’ll be killed for sure.
Kai: Huh? *whisper* What do ya mean?
Mariko: *sigh* *facepalm* *whisper something*
Kai: WHAAA-!
Mariko: *cover his mouth* Shh!
Acchan: *surprised* What are you two talking about?
Mariko: Eh? Ah! Nothing! Haha!
Kai: Ahahaha! Yeah! It’s nothing so let’s go back to class ;)
Acchan: *remove her hand from his and leave*
Kai: Heeeeeey~ Waaaaaiiiit fooooorr meeeee~ *start run and follow her*
Mariko: *facepalm* *sigh* *start walk*
In classroom
The class president ran to classroom and shouted in joy.
Class president: Teacher for this subject is absent!!
All classmates scream for joy expect Acchan and Mariko
Mariko: *cover her ears with her hands* Geez! They are noisy as always!
Acchan: *also cover her ears with her hands* Are they always being like this?
Mariko: Hmm? Probably?
Kai: WOOOOH! HAHAHA! YAY! HAHAHA! XD
Mariko: *grabs paper and hit Kai* Be quiet, Kai!
Kai: *ignore her words* WOOOOH! XD
Mariko: *facepalm*
Class President: Whooooo! No teacher! XD
Girl: Stop it! You are noisy!
Class president: HAHAHA! I can’t help it but happy! XD
Girl: When will you stop being like this? *go to his*
Class president: Hm? O_O
Girl: ………
Class president: *touch her boobs and squeeze* Wow! Your boobs are smoother than before, Nyan-nyan! XD
Haruna: *blush furiously* *slap his face* Stop it Yuuchan! You pervert!
Yuu: HAHAHA! XD
Haruna: *punch his chest 100 times* YOU PERVERT!
Acchan: *facepalm* Who is that guy?
Mariko: *point at the boy* Oh that guy is our class president. His name is Oshima Yuu *point at the girl* and her name is Kojima Haruna.
Acchan: What!? I can’t believe that pervert guy is our president! *shake her head*
Mariko: Yeah… And he’s also a player. He may flirts a lot of girls but his heart belongs to that girl he loves the most *points at Haruna*
Acchan: Aw! How sweet!
Mariko: *smirk*
TBC!
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How was this crappy chapter? Sorry if it is bad and short :bigdeal:
Wait for chapter 4 :cool2:
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Lol sweet story
Good job
Posted by the mento Hawaiian
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hahaha... Yuu and Kai are a joker here...
Atsuko is so scary...
Yuu is so perv....
I can't wait to see the next
Thank you for the lovely update
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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It's a good fic please update soon
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finally kojiyuu entered the fic hahaha ! :cow: wohoo. hehe btw uhm what did mariko
said to kai?? i wanna know it hehe! :tantrum: btw again thanks for the update !
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Aww cool! kojiyuu but takaboy you are so slow
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Uwaaahhhh Uwaaaaahhhhh
Interesting :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
you don't know how thankful i am to you :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow:
:onioncheer: :bingo:
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update please..
dont forget you still have unfinised story :bow: :bow:
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almost every fanfic, Acchan is scary when crossed.. :hip smile: :hip smile:
hope you continue writing this, you're doing a good job :twothumbs :twothumbs
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kojiyuu so sweet XD
update soon :bow: