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Title: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 6 – The Expelled ( III ) Oh NO!!
Post by: Young Sun J on January 06, 2013, 01:19:18 PM
Hello everyone. My first fiction XD


Prologue
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At the beginning Heian Period.

There used to be a just and wise king Akimoto Yashusi name. He was a wise and prudent king in Kyoto Kingdom (Kyoto Gosho). During the reign of Yashusi, Gosho people never lack anything. Their life is guaranteed, both in terms of food, clothing, and security. The kingdom sheltered and blessed by the gods in the sky at Araoniwa. Because the king led the people justly and wisely.

Akimoto Yashusi was awarded seven daughters. Respectively they are Sayaka, Kojima, Atsuko, Tomomi, Yui, Rena, and the youngest Yuki. Sixth daughter had been engaged as a teenager except the youngest. The most beautiful and sweetest is Yuki. She was a baby all the people of the Gosho Palace. Sayaka the eldest daughter is engaged to the son of a minister of the kingdom. To Sayaka and should her fiance, the Yashusi King may entrust the kingdom. However, despite his advanced age, and it was time to step down, he was not free to give up the crown. Because, whether Sayaka or her fiance, he can not trust completely.

The King was thought that the eldest daughter, Sayaka’s temperament not as expected from a leader of the kingdom. Sayaka has a proud and ruthless nature, while her fiance was a dandy. That young nobleman would think more about themselves, the clothes and jewelry rather than to take care of the safety and welfare of the people of the kingdom.

One day In the dream, the king got the inspiration from the celestial ruler Araoniwa. The youngest daughter is the next leader. But before that, the youngest daughter will get a big big and serious problem. Happiness and fear come together in his mind.
~


Now, his children have grown up. It was time for them to get engaged. And the prospective husbands they have been prepared by experts in the empire. The future husband is in the select of the whole nobility and his ministers in Kyoto corners to find the best.



Hope you enjoy it    8)

MaYuki Dearest In The Gosho Palace (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n23HrL8Jz08#)
Title: Re: Dearest in The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] Prologue
Post by: ChuuuPuffss on January 06, 2013, 01:25:47 PM
Oh yessss! More MaYuki~

Woah, never expected someone to make a plot like this! So, thank you ;~;

And I bet Yuki is going to be engaged to Mayu fufufu >:3

Update soon  :deco:
Title: Re: Dearest in The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] Prologue
Post by: Chanaline on January 06, 2013, 01:45:03 PM
IT...IT IS REALLY INTERESTING!!!!

 :deco:
Title: Re: Dearest in The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] Prologue
Post by: sakura_drop_ on January 06, 2013, 02:06:13 PM
I'm not a huge MaYuki fan (I even prefer wWatanabe) but I enjoy the little plot we got so far. I'll be waiting for your update~

And...  :welcome
Title: Re: Dearest in The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] Prologue
Post by: DC2805 on January 06, 2013, 02:16:52 PM
Will mayu be a guy?

Anyway, I dun mind a cute boy mayu!  XD
Title: Re: Dearest in The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] Prologue
Post by: mo-chan on January 06, 2013, 02:24:51 PM
it is rare to find this kind of story. :D
I wonder how the little Yuki will meet Mayu XD
update soon please :)
Title: Dearest in The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 1 – The Fiancés
Post by: Young Sun J on January 08, 2013, 12:18:04 AM
Hello you all
@ChuuuPuffss  : thanks back..let we see ^^
@Chanaline         : a bit strive hard for it  :nervous
@sakura_drop_: thank you..allow me to make you fall in..  XD
@DC2805            : aa, keep read..let we see, whether we will meet or not?  :D
@mo-chan       : lets imagine first.. 0^^0




CHAPTER 1 – The Fiancés


For two months, the kingdom held a strict selection in order to filter out hundreds of nobles in the country. Complacency is upon the hearts of the king's counselor after winning candidate with the highest value. Six young noblemen were elected. They are all son of the ministers chosen royal who has a background as the son of wealthy and educated.

"Yuko, Kai, Sae, Jun, Rino, and Minegishi"Said a royal escort to the six young nobleman, call to go to the Shishinden main hall to attend the annual party of the palace.

In the Shishinden was ongoing party that was very festive. Besides the fiance, Yashusi was inviting dignitaries from around the country. All the guests were invited to meet the daughters. This party intends to bring the fiancés to the princesses. Because even though the men were selected from hundreds of the best nobles, the king still wants the natural selection of the personality of each.

The six young noblemen who chosen were already entered the hall, they chatting with the advisors. Young nobleman was informed of all matters relating to the party. Then advisers lead them walked toward the main place to the king Yashusi. There King Yashusi sits together at the hall guests of honor. The girls, who will be introduced to the young nobleman, had gathered at the second table near on the main table where the king sat.

"My daughters, there will be the nobleman who will be accompanying you each"

"Who they are, Dad?" asked Atsuko curious.

"The great king, the young nobles together facing this, my king," said one of the advisers of the king.

"Ah, they've come," said the king.

The young nobles invited to sit in the same table with the daughters. Royal advisors introduced one by one the young nobles to the king and others.

"Kai. Son of the minister of domestic affairs"

"Yuko. Son of the minister of justice"

"Sae. Son of the minister of finance"

"Minegishi. Son of the minister of commerce"

“Rino.  Son of minister of communication”

"Jun son of the minister of transportation"

One by one they stood to greet and honor to king, queen, princesses and guests around them. For an hour they sat and chatted with the royal family. Yashusi felt the harmonious between young noblemen with their daughters. Some of them began flirting with the girls. There are those who are friends, some are merely known. Knowing the situation, then the king gladly said.

"To draw the attention of my daughter, then I allow you to introduce them" said the king, very wide open arms, a sign that he welcomed the guests.

Headlights suddenly go out the hall, and interestingly, the lights of a smaller set in the walls of the hall lit massage. The royal musicians who have lined up neatly on the stage smiling friendly to all guests. They started playing zither, violin and others with agile and elegant. Creating the atmosphere inside the hall became more romantic. The guests were impressed with the atmosphere has been neatly arranged in such a way. They smiled happily and continue enjoying the party.

"Glorious time for a dance party" a guest said.

Elected nobles stood and walked to the middle. Followed by the other nobles who smiled and enjoying the atmosphere. Some of them began to dance to the rhythm of the music.

"Very pretty lady, if lady kept silent like that, then all the flowers will wilt  ... let me water the flowers were missing...” Kai approached Atsuko who is silent waiting for someone to ask her to dance.

"Aah  ... Of course I'm not going to let you watering flowers alone  ..." Atsuko smiled and reached cheerfully Kai’s hand. Her body reflexes follow the movement Kai, stepped up and they started dancing together. They joined the other nobles who had already been dancing and enjoying the music.

"How about there? You are sexy, you are beautiful, makes me  ..." no time to finish his words, Kojima jump toward Yuko.

"You, my Yuko!"Kojima hugged tightly.

"Princess Kojima...!w-what you say..." said Yuko shocked and blushed.

"Let’s dance with me, my prince" said Kojima fun and exciting. She grabs Yuko’s hands into the middle. Yuko blushing, and did what she wants without defence. Yuko still did not aware that she is his childhood friend. Kojima was.

The other four did not want to lose to follow them. Tomomi dancing with Minegishi, Yui dancing with Rino, Rena chose to go out with her Jun.  While Sayaka chose to sit enjoy the company with Sae.


(Walking in walkway, Seiryoden)

"The selection has been completed my king, all went perfectly" said Ochano, the supreme minister.

“Yes Ochano. You know.., I will always do all my best for my daughters.”

“Yes my lord”

“Furthermore, what about my youngest daughter, Ochano?”Yashusi stopped, turned around and saw Ochano eyes questioningly.

“Princess Yuki is a very special daughter, my lord. We dare not careless  ...”

“You’re right Ochano.” Yashusi was overlooking the beautiful garden in front of him, and then closed his eyes for a moment toward the sky.


(Near a cherry blossom tree)

A beautiful girl was playing around with two rabbits and a squirrel around the park near the cherry blossom trees. She was running here and there, playing chase with them. She laughed when she saw the squirrel jumped and collided with one of the rabbits. The squirrel slumped, his eyes spinning. Rabbits were stuck out his tongue and running again. The girl continued to laugh because of the small animal behavior was very funny.

***

Even now you still haven't noticed this quiet sky
I am always thinking of it, but I can no longer return to there
And I will always be awake in my heart, gently taking notice
That someday I will be able to see kindness
And every time I look, I thought you were there,
But it was just my imagination
I don't see it anymore cause I see thru you now


***



Hope you enjoy it..  :theking
Title: Re: Dearest in The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 1 – The Fiancés
Post by: mo-chan on January 08, 2013, 01:04:15 PM
I kinda dont understand who is talking at the end but I ll continue :)
Title: Re: Dearest in The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 1 – The Fiancés
Post by: Chanaline on January 08, 2013, 01:10:47 PM
Ummm.. don't know what to say.

In the end, who is the beautiful girl? Yuki? Yes! Because she is beautiful! Mouuhahahahahahahaha!!

yay update as you can!!!!
Title: Re: Dearest in The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 1 – The Fiancés
Post by: DC2805 on January 08, 2013, 03:01:43 PM
At last! We get to see a SHY Yuko! haha!  XD XD XD

Want to see more interaction between the princesses and the  :theking noblemen, more actions, please!!!   :otomerika: :yossi:
Title: Re: Dearest in The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 1 – The Fiancés
Post by: sakura_drop_ on January 08, 2013, 04:32:40 PM
Oh, I wanna know how Mayu will appear in this~~ And Yuko-sama here was just so cute~~  :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:
Title: Re: Dearest in The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 1 – The Fiancés
Post by: XxRoByNxX78 on January 08, 2013, 05:11:12 PM
Mayu was the girl at the end right lol

Great update cant wait till you update next
Title: Re: Dearest in The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 1 – The Fiancés
Post by: steven_0809 on January 08, 2013, 11:30:24 PM
please update soon i want to know where mayu
Title: Re: Dearest in The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 1 – The Fiancés
Post by: cisda83 on January 09, 2013, 09:04:16 AM
Well... that's perfect match between all the first six princesses with the noble youngsters.

What's going to happen with Yuki... I hope the partner is Mayu as a male like the one in danso (doctor Watanabe or the one in perfect match)

The Mayu there very very cute... it seems to be Yuki's type.

Well thank you for this Dearest in The Gosho Palace fic.

Can't wait to see the next one

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 2 – The Youngest Daughter
Post by: Young Sun J on January 11, 2013, 12:18:47 AM
Hello there again, everyone  XD

@mo-chan   : you will know it.. o^^o
@Chanaline         : haha, yes you got a name...bit busy here  :nervous
@DC2805    : yes..Yuko is a shy one  :D
@sakura_drop_   : hmm, seems we should wait for that... :roll:
@XxRoByNxX78      : haha, Chanaline got a name... :P
@steven_0809     : lets we see...^^
@cisda83     : last..someone care about what happen to Yuki   :thumbsup 



CHAPTER 2 – The Youngest Daughter


Her eyes were shining brightly. She has rosy lips. Her face was bright and shining like sparkling clear river water. Her shiny black hair so gently. Pretty perfect slim body. And her soft hands with a cheerful tone of her foot. Really incredible beauty is, very charming, beautiful, and unbearable.

One month after the annual feast.

Yuki turned the same page quickly. She was looking through the two facing pages. In reading sentence by sentence, and then she gave the bottom line thicker in some sentences that she considers important. A servant approached and put a cup of cool green tea at the table. She did not say anything because she saw the princess Yuki being seriously. Yuki put her pen on the table, took a glass of green tea that served for her. She only drank a sip, and return to continue reading lines.

"Your skills are really similar to king Yashusi." a voice came from the entrance to the den. Yuki woke up from its seriousness. She put the book on the table and stood up.

"Ojisan, you praise too much... "Said Yuki smiled and sat back down.

"You are always humble. How I justify everything that people say about you, "said the minister Yama who was sitting in a chair, faced with Yuki. She smiled at the compliment from his uncle.

"You're right my husband, she was the daughter who was tireless. Two week she accompanied me to visit a nursing home in southern Kyoto. She helped me much and stays there too. And no complained."Said Yama's wife, who had been accompanied Yuki. She explained with enthusiasm, and saw Yuki, smiling proudly.

"(Chuckle) I never knew a princess want to go to the field for this... (Smiles) but remember your childhood past, I've been convinced by what I see from you." Yama explained, seems to think and try to remember.  “Well, that book? How was that?”Yama asked curious.

"Really what you are saying. We must immediately cordon off the area and to the workers, I leave it entirely to you. My father allowed me to command the closure that place."Yuki said formally.

"Yes. I will execute immediately. They've gone too far." said Yama regrets.

Yama is a minister of security, he's taking care of the problem of crime and other criminal acts. Yama is a brother of Yashusi’s wife. Yuki, was commanded by her father to complete the cases, fraud and doubling of history books. This case was handled by Yama about six months. And development stages of completion now. Although Yuki is in the young age, but the ministers who have ever been worked with her have always been satisfied with what Yuki gave.

"Now I have to get going to pack up, my uncle, because tomorrow is father’s birthday. I had arrived at the palace tonight.” Yuki said.

"Yes princess.  And we will arrive on time tomorrow. "Yama promised.

The soldiers, who escorted Princess Yuki were ready outside at Yama’s residence. The Ox cart is set up at the front door of the residence. Princess Yuki and his entourage went back to the palace. She smiled satisfied has completed the latest single from her duties. She opened the curtain and the window of the cart. The wind was blowing gently hit her pretty face. She saw hills and green trees are lush. It goes evening.

"The youngest daughter.  Was truly blessed by the gods in the sky..." Yama said to his wife as they entered the residence together.

" Our ruler of Araoniwa blesses us all, my husband..."


(In one of the daughter's room, Otsunegoten)

The pretty daughters were sitting together, looking at the pool that has seven beautiful fountains. The fountain is made of the best bamboo imported from China. It is very sturdy. In each bamboo, there are paintings that have meaning for each daughter. While the water that flows through the bamboo comes from the Yura river. Ancestor believed that water is holy water awarded by the ruler of the sky in Araoniwa. Since the water never stops flowing and is always clear.
The sound of water that flows falls into the pond is beautiful. The daughters were resting and playing the game Go (encircling the game). They are fun joking with each other. Soon, Yuki appears, and joined with her sisters. She sat near the edge.

"There you, my beautiful sister...where did you go during a week?" Yui asked gently.

"I went to southern and Visit to Uncle Yama. He gave greetings to you all..." Yuki replied and smiled.

"Father certainly gave the task again, right?" Sayaka asked with a slight tone of envy. Her face became rigid. She did not look at Yuki while said that.

"Hai..." Yuki said softly, smiled at Sayaka.

"Hhh-this is really too much." Sayaka said while slamming hard pieces on a grid. For a moment she was silent with no friendly face. Then she stood up and left her sisters without doubt.

"She's okay?" Ask Yuki worried and feel something inconveniently.

"Never mind, Sayaka always like that. Does not worry much, here, let us talk about our fiancé. God..I miss him..."said Atsuko fondly.

“Me too. You know, I only could meet him two times a week..”Yui griped.

"Wait.. Yuki, have you ever met them? As I recall, you did not exist at that time. "Kojima said while remembered. Her eyes like searching something miss.

“Ah, yes right. I did something urgent.”Yuki answered fast.

"Where were you when it was Yuki?" Rena asked.

"Ogakumonjo. Father asked me to read some page of Chinese calligraphy items.”Yuki answered.

"But you missed the party, Yuki. Dance, handsome noblemen and...Wait...why father did ask for it, while all members of the family were there?"Rena said curious.

"The advisors did not find any fiancé, father wont Yuki came alone." Atsuko assumed.

"Father might think, Yuki was too young to get engaged" Tomomi said, looking up at Yuki.

"Too young? Guess not. Nineteen years... smart, beautiful... and well, she is idol for all noblemen...What man want.”Yui said praising her sister in front of Yuki's face. Yuki looked down, coyly. She let her sister to assume and listen carefully.

"Tomorrow they will come to father’s birthday." Rena informed.


(In Doorway, Seiryoden)

A princess was running quickly in Doorway. Her face looks sour and sharp. Her footsteps are very harsh and hard. She did not turn at all, keep walking and suddenly stopped in front of the prime minister who was in the front living room. She stared hard at that middle-aged men.

"Ochano?! I want to face my father. "Said Sayaka little high pitched.

"Currently he is implementing a prayer ceremony in Omima, princess Sayaka." Said Ochano explained briefly.

"Hhh-Ochano. You must know this. Why Yuki are assigned to go to Yama?! Not me! "She heavy complained.

"Princess..." Ochano surprised and looked down gave a sign that he was reluctant to answer.

"Why? Why Ochano! Do not play dumb, I know you're hiding something!”Sayaka little scream and took a step toward Ochano.

"The answer would be the same, my princess.. You've asked the same question for more than ten times. I’m so sorry... "Ochano moving backwards two steps away.

"Yuki has the ability on it. Always it! Am I not?! What else old men! Answer me, Ochano! "Sayaka's eyes widened. Her hands rise.

Ochano silent and did not dare look at princess Sayaka. Ochano trying not to make princess getting angry, he chose silence. Sayaka who upset went away leaving Ochano. She hates why Yuki always more duty. Envy and resentment make her lose control. She ran to the kitchen. Kitchen servants who was working in the kitchen, was expelled by Sayaka to get out of the kitchen. Sayaka take anything nearby. She threw all the stuff in take it in any direction. She pulled and kicked chairs and kitchen tables, uproar. All servants just keep their mouth and silent. This is not the first time they saw princess Sayaka doing it.

"Yuki...the youngest daughter right?" Her eyes change incisively. Sayaka took the knife on the table and threw the knife into the wall.

Suddenly, sound of loud thunder from the sky out. Then the heavy rain fell, drenching the palace. The inhabitants of the palace that was working in the court yard ran into the building. The rain grew heavy and the sky was really dark.
DRAKK! One of the fountains wrecked.


(The next day)

Today is the birthday of the king Yashusi. The entire population of Kyoto welcomes today. They were revelers celebrating the birthday of the king Yashusi.  Ceremony was used to pray for the king Yashusi being held in Omima. The ceremony was celebrated by members of the royal family.

"Come on Yuki, we immediately went to the dining room together." Said Atsuko quickly.

"Grandma, if that's okay here alone?"Yuki asked softly, want to make sure grandma fine if stay alone.

"Go Yuki. It is your father's birthday. You do not keep with me. I will go to the pond." said the grandma, smiling gently, pushing away Yuki's body slowly. They left grandma in that room alone.

Atsuko and Yuki go to get to where the family gathered. They ran small. In the dining room, all royals are waiting for the two daughters. Atsuko entered first, in one after another Yuki. Atsuko smiled at her Kai. Yuki entered, and all the fiancé looked toward Yuki with amazed. She smiled to them.They were fascinated by the beauty.


~~~
Meanwhile (Otsunegoten)

Grandma was walking around to the pond. There are two guards who accompany her. She intends to rest and enjoy the view of the pond. After a day of watching the work in the kitchen for lunch the royals at his son's birthday. She walked on the rocks and sat in a chair beside the stone and fountain. Sighed for a moment, then she turned and...Surprised.

“Oh goodness!! W-w-whaaat h-happen with...The fountain!! Hhh..The seventh...”grandma was shocked, shortness of breath. Her distress to sound, take breath for a while then ran quickly toward the fountain. Her face turned pale. Her eyes did not blink at all, as if to see something happen, and it's not a good thing.

The guards were shocked with grandma’s scream. They extremely frightened with what they saw.

 “My goodness! This scary...Someone has done something bad.” said one of the ladies fear.

“O-O-Ochano...called Ochano!” said grandma shaking. Her body stood rigid, her hands trembling. She's almost like falling, seeing that the two ladies were hurriedly helped her to get into the room.
~~~


"She's so..beautiful..." said Jun without blinking. The others look at Yuki too.

"Okay, if she is beautiful. So tomorrow I'll have counselors looking for a new one. "Said Rena sharp.

"A-okay..How can you think like that..? I will not allow it. "said Jun bit scared, instantly could not breathe well, if it is really serious Rena.

"Jun, Jun, you should imitate me." Minegishi smiled proudly towards Jun and Rena, and he showed off his hands gripping Tomomi’s hand and kissed it. Tomomi was smiling and blushing embarrassment. They were looked each other, feeling so rollick. Jun and Rena became embarrassed with Minegishi behaviour. Yuko who saw it, immediately thought to imitate.

“Princess Kojima...you mind me to kiss your hands too?” He said softly, looking at Kojima's eyes playfully. He holds Kojima wrist and held her hand gently.

“My Yuko, you think that's enough? If you've started to kiss me, no matter where it is, then I'll ask for more...do you dare? "Kojima smiled full of meaning.

Yuko was immediately frozen in place. His face flushed. Ghhh ~ There Yui, Rino, Atsuko and Kai saw it (laughs).

Yuki noticed her sister's fiancés. Yuki throws a bunch smile to them always.

"Honey, is she your famous daughter?" Minegishi said gently to his girl.

“Yes honey, she is our...she really prefer to go outside the palace, meet peoples and farmers, rather than hanging out with the royals. Therefore many nobles actually have never seen her, some only know her name “said Tomomi smiled softly.

“So, what peoples said is true. Your sister is pretty sincere and humble.. “Minegishi nodded. Tomomi smiled proudly toward Yuki.

"Is she engaged?" Sae whispered softly, moving closer to Tomomi’s ear. Minegishi who saw it, immediately push Sae’s head and keep him away from Tomomi.

"Sae. If your fiancée was not here. Do not you try to approach the other’s girl! "Said Minegishi threaten. Sae frowned. Minegishi asked Tomomi to switch places with him.

"What are you doing! You are suspicious of me? " Sae asked surprise. Minegishi was sticking out his tongue, smirked.

The servants came and went bringing food from the kitchen and put on the table. The dining table is rectangular in shape and width. The daughters were sitting next to their fiancés each on the left side. Being on the right, the other royals sat. Yuki sat next to her mother and Ochano. Only Sayaka who did not attend the meal that follows.

During the meal progresses, there secretly one of the six fiancé was constantly sneaking perspective towards Yuki. He could not stop staring at her beautiful face. He was looking for an opportunity when the eyes of all people do not see it. Because he did not want suspected by others. He hopes Yuki saw him and caught his gaze intent. But, Yuki did not see him at all. Yuki did not realize that there was her sister’s fiance who sees in that way.

Until the meal in the cap, he still continue to see Yuki. When everyone were started to leave the dining room, he accidentally plan to come out at the end. He followed Yuki. When he feels safe, no one saw it, he stopped Yuki.

"Princess Yuki, wait..." He asked politely to Yuki.

Yuki who was repairing her sleeve looked back. She knew the man.

"Is there anything left?" Ask Yuki friendly smile, made him more interested. But.

"Hey! I thought you were with your friends there, I'm waiting for you outside of that. "A girl said while approached her fiancé. Seeing her sister came, Yuki smiled and left them alone.

"W-why are you here??" He asked in surprise and a little tense, trying to calm his self.

"That question. Why you're here. With her? The youngest daughter?! "She asked suspiciously.




And, Hope you enjoy again... ;)
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 2 – The Youngest Daughter
Post by: cisda83 on January 11, 2013, 03:41:29 AM
Hahaha... it's getting more and more interesting. Thank you

The one on the last scene is Sayaka right?

Well Sae is trying to get Yuki attention...?

I don't think Yuki will do anything even if her sisters' fiances making move towards her.

She seems to be a good girl.

However, I think the King is to bias towards Yuki...

I understand that Sayaka would be angry with her father for the unfair treatment.... since she's the oldest, she is supposed to the first in line to replace her father the king... but that was not the case... as the rest I don't think they care....

I mean as a nobles don't they suppose to help and looking after  the citizens, trying to find out what they can do to improve the living conditions of their citizens... but that not the case... they are only playing and gossiping everyday.

How about the noble youngsters are they also like the princesses... only know how to play... and no work?

Anyhow, can't wait to see the next update

 :wub: :inlove: :love: :heart:

Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 2 – The Youngest Daughter
Post by: DC2805 on January 11, 2013, 04:03:21 PM
Yuki does not like to royals and noblemen, right? She would prefer someone more down-to-earth. Perhaps she could meet a young farmer  XD who is hardworking, smart and kind-hearted! And of course, a handsome one?  :twothumbs
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 2 – The Youngest Daughter
Post by: sakura_drop_ on January 11, 2013, 04:17:07 PM
This is so interesting... I wanna read further.. I'll be waiting for your next chapter~
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 2 – The Youngest Daughter
Post by: XxRoByNxX78 on January 11, 2013, 06:34:16 PM
And im gusseing Sae was the one looking at Yuki but he can go away  :angry: :angry: coz she is Mayu's and only Mayu's and im gusseing aswell that Sayaka walked in on Sae trying to talk to Yuki.

Obviously the relastionship between Yuki and Sayaka isnt as close as the others since Sayaka always feels like she loses to her younger sister so if Sae is trying to make a move on Yuki then that will affect Sayaka even more in well her jelousy towards Yuki and may even damage their sister bond.

I love how protective Miichan was to Tomomi-sama when Sae tried to talk to her and how straight foward Miichan is.

I wonder what made the Gradmother act like that over a fountain hmmmmm mabye the seventh whatever stopped giving out water and that represents something.

And ahahahahahaha when Rena said she wanted another Fiance lol

update soon
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 2 – The Youngest Daughter
Post by: Chanaline on January 11, 2013, 09:00:12 PM
I agree with DC2805-san XD
She doesn't want to become the queen(?). Maybe. I really love how you write!

We don't who are the man? It seems that other think it is Sae but Sayaka wasn't there, or she arrived suddenly??
Oh no... I don't her to get hate by her sisters...It is not her fault if she like that. XD

Really Interesting !!!!
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 2 – The Youngest Daughter
Post by: Playgirlz on January 13, 2013, 04:48:33 AM
Hahahaha i like it, can't wait until Mayu's appearance.

And about Sae, she's such a playboy. At the end of chapter 3, Sayaka sounds like a mad yandere, anything could happen to her fiancé lol

Thank so much for a new Mayuki fic, it's awesome >:]

Title: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 3 – Temptation
Post by: Young Sun J on January 17, 2013, 12:17:21 AM
Hello again everyone, Surprised much! You guys got many points here...Im  :inlove:
@ cisda83   : Hahaha…thanks back…yes you are pretty right  :love: And you got the blue point, the eldest is…and some clue there go  :yep:
@ DC2805       : Hahaha, I bet you more… im waiting :lol:
@ sakura_drop_    :  Thank you…take some cookies while waiting..  8)
@ XxRoByNxX78    :  Your guess correctly, grandma take rest now..lol, hey waits! you can get much red in this chap... XD
@Chanaline   : Thank you..,and you got the gold clue one!  :w00t: Their answers were right… she wait for him in out
@Playgirlz   : haha, Mayu preparing in some where… and thankyou…MaYuki 0(^^)0

Well, here the next… let's see the rest fore, a long journey wait for us. Arigatou gozaimaz!



CHAPTER 3 – Temptation



The rumors about the destruction of sacred and hallowed fountain in the pond palace predictably have spread rapidly throughout the palace. Everyone began to talking about the destruction of one of the fountain. They began to assume an assortment. Some say that it was a sign of something dangerous to come to the palace. Others say there is an evil curse came to threaten.

“Master, rumors are already spreading around the palace?" Adviser said.

"We could not let it continue. Commanded all the inhabitants of the palace, do not let this news out of the palace. People outside the palace should not know this. Our King did not want any unrest in the community beyond. "Command Ochano firm.

"What about the water, master? Increasingly, the water continues to flow irregularly at a messy, very heavy sometimes... "The court lady said with pale face.

"And most recently, the sound of water roaring sounds tight ... we were scared with all this..." Other Naishi attendant added, and appeared frightened face.

"It was destiny. All that happens is the will of heaven, as well as running water in the ponds. The fountain could not be cured by ordinary people."Said Ochano seriously and try to explain calmly. He tried to hide the same tension as perceived advisers.

There were held ceremonies massive exclusively for seven days. This is all they can do now.


Two weeks later.

"I cannot wait to deliver this good news to our sisters." Said Atsuko smiled happy.

"I would not wait for their arrival..." said Tomomi face flushed with embarrassment.

This morning Atsuko and Tomomi went out from one meeting in Shishinden. They and some domesticity minister have finished a meeting with the King Yashusi. They discussed the removal of the daughter’s room and prepare rooms for the fiances.Two daughters face was beaming. Their father has announced that start tomorrow, the fiances will be staying at the Gosho palace. They will be given a private room. Their activities were transferred to the court, by not leaving their learning and working activities. Previously, they stay in the pavilion, respectively, in the western of Kyoto, and the eastern outskirts of Kyoto.

Atsuko and Tomomi ran to the weaving room, where the five sisters are working on the craft of weaving fabric.


(In the weaving, Ogakumonjo)

The five princesses were diligently working on woven paper. This is one of the skills they have mastered. Classes are held every afternoon weaving lessons. The daughters are very good at making crafts woven. Already some of the work they create and impress the observer of the art in the palace. Sayaka, Rena and Yuki are the cleverest weaving produces beautiful work. The four other relatives had to admit, they are less competitive than the third. The door opened. The princess stopped weaving, turning. Two teachers and a guard in the room were paying homage to the princess and left the room.

"Time to break my pretty sisters ... I will convey something of the father's word." Said Atsuko smiled. The five daughters went to Atsuko and Tomomi were already sitting in front of the rest area.

"Listen carefully. They will be staying at the palace. Start tomorrow! "Said Tomomi explained enthusiastic. Her eyes look towards her sister's face one by one.

"It means that we can meet them every day! Yay." Atsuko jump little bit.

"Ah..,that's very good news my dear sisters...I did not think this plan as soon as... "Kojima said and hugged Yuki tightly. Yuki smiled, replied back.

"This means that we will get married..." Yui said smiling happily and shy.

"Exactly one of us..." Rena added, her eyes showing the same happiness with others.

"And I'll make sure, I do." Sayaka said confidently. She looked towards her sisters, vanity smile tugging at her red lips.


(The next day)

Kai, Yuko, Sae, Minegishi, Rino and Jun had arrived at the palace. They entered the main gate on the front, south, side of the Palace. The six men were directed toward the individual rooms in Otsunegoten. Rooms that will be in the building they occupy the same room with the other members of the royal family. The room is set for a family member who is not married, men and women are not in a row. While member of the family who are married get a spacious and large. Rooms at Otsunegoten set with a very neat and synergic. It was very spacious, comfortable and beautiful.


(In one of the room’s fiance)

The six young men entered their rooms. After they put the goods and equipment to learn, they were gathered in one room. Kai who was putting books into the storage, stop the activity so come see his friends.

"Ah, so tired...Finally, we live in the palace now. So, soon we'll get married. "Said Jun, lay down on the floor (tatami).

"W-what ... married..?" Yuko glared to Jun, and pulled his shirt so that he wakes up.

"Aarh, let me. You is why Yuko? (grumble) You scared? (laughs) "Said Jun while release the grip of Yuko from his collar. He thrust his face with eyes jokingly. Minegishi embrace Yuko neck and ruffled his hair. Kai and others joined tickling Yuko.

Grekk! The door opened.

"My Yuko, here! What you doing guys? Let him go, only me who should hug him like that. Got it? "Kojima in and ran towards Yuko, take him from them and immediately hugged him. Dang! Yuko was shocked and embarrassed. All his friends burst out laughing.

"Princess Kojima..,you should not be in here, do not you?" Kai said politely, as far as he knew, women was not allowed to enter men room without guards, both unmarried, or vice versa. Although engaged, should only be adjacent room.

"Indeed. I just could not stand long. I miss him so much..." Kojima spoiled. She still clung to Yuko in trouble breathing. However, is not good for men to deny a woman.

"And I could not bear to see her..." muttered one of them who stood alone in the corner, looking other side.


(At night, In the main dining room, Seiryoden)

After a day in the meeting room briefing and preparations to launch a new activity at the palace, the young nobles were gathered with the daughters. Dinner time was only attended by the daughters and their fiances and Yuki. They are very fun to enjoy this dinner, because it was the first night for their new sense of togetherness, six pairs of lovers who are intoxicated by romance. They were joking and teasing each partner. Yuki who was sitting next to Atsuko and Tomomi also dissolves in the atmosphere was pleasant. Ochano watching from a distance, gently smile, happy to saw the daughters. But...when he saw Yuki, his face instantly turned wistful.

"Where is your mate..? Princess ... where is he...where is he..." Ochano said in his heart, his eyes looking towards Yuki who were laughing merrily. His mind constantly asked without stopping.

Suddenly, tears dripping bit by bit. His hand was slightly shaking. He felt very guilty for not been able to find a partner to accompany princess Yuki. Because sadly, and could not hold back his tears, Ochano away from that place. He promised himself that he would not give up.

An hour had passed.

Atsuko, Kojima, Yui, and Rena went together into the main break with their partners. Tomomi and Minegishi went for a walk into the main hall to see the soldiers practice. Sayaka and Sae chose to go alone to the park near the building of their rooms. And Yuki went to pray.

"Sayaka my princess, I'm going to walk around a bit. I want to memorize the rooms in the palace..."said Sae gently holding Sayaka, wistful eyes and tried to reveal the truth.

"I thought we'd talk all night...I do not want to be alone..."Sayaka spoiled whining to Sae. She leaned her head on his shoulder.

"Yes .. I will not be long, I promise." Said Sae, fake smiled. He released his hand from her arms, and go. Sayaka face looked disappointed, but still let him go. Sayaka was walking to her room alone. She looked back, hoping he did not go.

Sae walked into the main hall. He saw the soldiers were practicing in the middle of the dark night. He also saw a laughing Minegishi intimate with Tomomi. Then go to Omima, then he got to where he wanted. He looked around to make sure no one is looking. He walked over to where prayer was. He saw a girl who was praying at a small temple next to the house. He went quietly, and stood in the corner of the wall.

Finished praying, Yuki stood up and pack up. Suddenly she was startled by a voice from behind.

"I'm so glad to find people who like to pray at night, because it means I have friends to do the same thing. May I join you? "he smiled.

"Sae. You were not with Sayaka? "Yuki asked curiously, seeing Sae come alone.

"I was with her, but she was exhausted and I want her to rest in order to recover her body. I do not want her hurt. So, can I join? "Said Sae again.
 
"Oh sorry, here of course. Please pray here, I'll get the equipment first. Hope my sister get well soon..."Said Yuki friendly smiled. Quickly and pick up the equipment in the box of prayer shrine. Sae continued to stare at Yuki, he praised her beauty and her body in his heart and smiled to his self meaningfully.

When finished, they both came out of the temple. Minegishi the accident is still around, seeing them together, and then approached them. Yuki was pleased to see, she told to Minegishi that Sae participated in the temple and prayed. Minegishi just nodded, said nothing. In his mind, he did not believe it, because he knows, Sae hate prayer and temple.


A month passed.

For a moment, the inhabitants could forget about the sacred fountains. Till this time, no significant events occurred. They believe, god of the sky has heard their prayers and protect the palace from things that are not desirable. Special prayer ceremonies still performed by the elders.

The young nobleman demonstrated his diligence in learning. They competed to show it off to the king. They think that someone who is getting married later is who will occupy the throne. So, they prepared well everything. Try not to disappoint the king and the court, which were trust them. The minister was pleased to see a healthy competition and is open.

Besides that, the relationship between the daughters and the fiances is getting better and showing affection in very beautiful rhythm. King Yashusi was very happy to know this fact. The inhabitants of the palace revelers participate, as day after day they passed with six pairs of lovers such harmony. They love to see their daughters play in the park with a lover. It became its own entertainment for anyone looking. Since one of the most beautiful in this world is to see the lovers unite romance with her partner.

Yuki dissolves in the same happiness. In every leisure night Yuki always pray in the temple, to be grateful. Almost every night anyway, Sae follow Yuki to pray at the temple. Yuki did not think anything, unsuspecting slightest, because Sae is very good at hiding the real intent.

Each day he lied to Sayaka. Ignoring Sayaka and was more looking for an opportunity with Yuki. Sae felt he had fell in with Yuki. Her good looks, and the kindness that have been misinterpreted by Sae. However, Yuki is still not aware of this.

Without knowledge, Minegishi know what it makes. Secretly, he always follows every night to see what was done, Sae with Yuki at the temple. Although no matter what happens, Minegishi suspect something.


(In the dining room, Otsunegoten)

This afternoon the seven princess and mates had lunch together. Incidentally today, all can gather. At some time ago, we can be sure there are two or more people could not attend. Especially Yuki and Sayaka, because Yuki was so busy studying and being outside the palace. Whereas Sayaka prefer more attuned to events with his father to seek more attention from ministers and colleagues.

The servants came into the room one at a time, preparing food on the table. They tidied up seat cushion and a flower pot in the corner of the room. After making sure all clean and tidy the servants out of the room, invite the girls and their mates to enter. Kojima, who had been holding hands Yuko, forgot to remove it. Sae intentionally sat next to Yuki.

"Look. We are so blessed by the heavens in, my friends. We are given health and our brides are beautiful and good. “Kai said to everyone. He smiled proudly, see Atsuko gently. Atsuko blushed and hugged Kai from the side.

"You're right. We are also grateful, to get you guys. "Rena said, then turned to Jun. June clutching Rena’s hands, as did not want to take it off. Yui and Rino were doing the same thing. Sayaka smiled a little, seeing Sae's face gently. Everything smiled delightedly.

"We can be happy because father was always does his best for us... or that let us pray for him first..." Tomomi invites all to pray. Everything bowed his head with wisdom. Silence.

Suddenly they all were surprised by the shouts of Yuki.

"Kyaaa!" Yuki cried out in shocked. Her hands pushed her backward table and reflexes. Her face was a little tense, she put her hand on chest as her heart would fall out.

"Yuki. What's the matter with you? "Atsuko asked worried. All turned to Yuki curious.

"... (Sigh) ... no..." Yuki did not continue her words. She shook his head. Everything was surprised and since Yuki did not say anything, they continued the meal.

Yuki realized that the hand that is trying to grope her thigh is.


(In the reading room, Ogakumonjo)

A man was lowly sliding door and entered. Yuki was waiting for him inside. Yuki was sitting and reading a book seriously. Realizing his came, Yuki turned. She invited him sit facing her. He sat and smile happy in front her. Yuki did not reply.

"Well. What do you mean you did ‘that’? "Yuki asked curtly. She put her book and stared at him seriously.

"Ohh-that. It's nothing...You do not exaggerate..."He replied, smiling tease. His eyes narrowed meaningfully.

"What do you mean exaggerating?" Yuki asked and fell unpleasant.

He stand, he turned and sat down next to Yuki who was silent. Yuki did not budge. She kept looking straight ahead, waiting for an answer. She tried to hide her tension. Ten seconds silence. He, who could not stand longer about the beauty of Yuki, tries to move closer. Yuki could feel his high desire. He tried to grope Yuki waist from the left. Lightning reflexes of Yuki, immediately throw away that men hand quickly and sharp, she up and away into a corner fast. She stood barge and no look him. Her heart ticked fear.

"My sister loves you very much. Do not do things like this. This is shameful. She must have been very hurt if know. "Yuki said softly, so as not to offend him. Then she quickly walked toward the exit. Leave without looked back.

Heave shocked on his head, his face redden. He feels ashamed and snubbed. He hit the table two times, pushed it hard away to the wall. Still could not believe with what he got. He realized this is the first time being rejected.

“How dare you...reject me!!”His face was full of angry.



Haah, hope you enjoooy  :)
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 3 – Temptation
Post by: Chanaline on January 17, 2013, 09:23:44 AM
No! NO! NOOOOOO! It seems that Sae will do something bad to Yuki!!

NOOOOOOOO! Mayu Hurry up and come!! You say that it is a Mayuki but we don't see Mayu. You torturate me... Mayu! Mayu! Mayu! Mayu! (Sorry I became crazy....)
When will (s)he appear? :banghead:

I'm so sorry for Sayaka! Sae you're bad guy!! :angry:

Young Sun J-san I don't need you to update fast... I just want Mayu to appear!!! XD (I am one more time sorry)
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 3 – Temptation
Post by: ChuuuPuffss on January 17, 2013, 01:48:42 PM
ASDFGHJKL DX

DAFAQS WRONG WITH SAE! MAYU SHALL COME TO THE RESCUE NAOOO DX

I WANT MY MAYUKI SCENES NAOOO! DX

Lol -Tries to be patient-

Update with MaYuki scenes soon :3
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 3 – Temptation
Post by: sakura_drop_ on January 17, 2013, 02:04:28 PM
MAYU~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

SAVE YUKI~~~~~~~~~~``


HURRY~~~~~~~~~~~~~`

 :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers:

Ah, Yuko blushing was just  :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub:
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 3 – Temptation
Post by: XxRoByNxX78 on January 17, 2013, 05:14:41 PM
Thas its sae go away seriously every mayuki fic u always come in an wreck it lol an it gets annoying however when Mayu comes into this fic i cant wait for her to kick the crap out of you na her to win Yuki's heart without even trying now back off sae
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 3 – Temptation
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on January 17, 2013, 05:28:47 PM
im curious about what mayu's entrance is gonna be like :? :yep:
cant wait to see her appear :P
bad sae!! naughty sae you should stay with sayaka :smhid
great fic :cow: :deco:
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 3 – Temptation
Post by: DC2805 on January 17, 2013, 06:14:56 PM
So rarely to see Sae and Sayaka as the villains in fanfics! Hope yuki wont get hurt by the evil couple... :shocked

very amusing to see princess kojima getting all clingy on a "shy"  :oops: yuko! haha! :lol: :lol: :lol:
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 3 – Temptation
Post by: cisda83 on January 22, 2013, 12:40:24 PM
Wah... Sae... is a horrible person...

Somehow I feel bad for Sayaka for falling in love with Sae... where Sae seems to only like someone because of her beauty.... since in this story it said that Yuki is the most prettiest of them all. Even if she is also nice I don't think Sae cared about that at all.

Well what's going to happen next... can't wait...

Thank you for this update...

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 4 – The Anxiety
Post by: Young Sun J on January 24, 2013, 03:12:41 PM
Hello again everyone, waaaahh  :shocked:
@Chanaline: oh god...gomen gomene.. you know, I'm being crazy too..  :banghead: but, Mayu still on the way...hold on please.. :deco: *together
@ChuuuPuffss: gomene...please waiting, once more..let's stay mad patients  :sweatdrop:
@sakura_drop: im joining you...*pray pray pray..  :panic:
@ XxRoByNxX78: yes, you pretty right..! Mayu is top  :thumbsup
@mayuki_daisuki: let’s wait bit more...thankyou..MaYuki  :heart:
@DC2085: yes, we could fine here...oh you knew it? And..gomen for your hope.. :(
@cisda83: pretty right...you realized it..thanks back.. :deco:

Today is my day off, so I could finish this chap..already tried faster. Arigatou gozaimaz!



CHAPTER 4 – The Anxiety


Two weeks later.

Lately Yuki often did not attend the dinner and a get together in the lounge room with her sisters. She chose to eat with her grandmother and more often chose alone in the den. No longer pray at the temple. Something repeatedly bothering her without stopped. Some servants and royal guards were aware of the changes attitudes princess Yuki and started talking about it. They are worried about the state of princess Yuki.

"Yuki, my dear sister, what happened to you? I do not see you as usual..."Rena said softly.

"Did something happen to you Yuki..?" Tomomi asked.

"... There is nothing wrong with me, sister... do not worry about. Let’s continue reading." Yuki said with a sweet smile.

 "You're never complained about anything. I hope you are fine..."Rena said, the anxious sister. Tomomi nodded in agreement.

"I'm sorry my sisters, I could not say actually..." Yuki muttered softly.


(In the lounge, Shodaibunoma)

Minegishi which provoked emotions, instantly appealing Sae’s shirt, then directed a blow to Sae’s head. Before the second blow launched, Kai grabbed Minegishi and pushed back away from Sae. Jun was deftly capturing Sae who want to come forward to fight back. The two faces flushed with anger. Minegishi was wheezing and looking forward to the blow again. Yuko helped capture Minegishi body from the side and push up stalled on the wall.

"You want to hit me or what? Hah!" Sae said upset.

"You deserve beaten hard, damn you Sae!!" Said Minegishi sneered. Sae escape from Jun and intend to reply Minegishi, but the shot missed, hit Yuko who was near Minegishi.

"Ouch!! What the hell are you! Lousy you..."Yuko said angrily, holding his left face, his eyes squinted. Without further ado he's delivering hard blows to Sae’s face. Sae whimpered pain, and retreated to the back.

"Stop you! What did you do to him!! How dare you, Yuko!"Sayaka who saw it, ran and pushed Yuko until fall. Kojima surprised, ran to Yuko.

"Sister! Don’t do that to my fiance! You do not know what happened."Kojima was defending. She helped Yuko standing and bolstered away from Sayaka.

"What? You think I don’t see it!"Sayaka was mad, Sae approached her.

"This mess was raised because the act of your men. Did not you hear the embarrassing rumor? He interferes with princess Yuki."Jun explain carefully.

"That was a big lie! Yuki definitely a tease, I know he is good! Don’t arbitrarily. Watch what you say, Jun!"Sayaka denied hard.

"That’s right. You do not know I always continue to dodge, but...She continues flirt. Realized, a woman alone, without lover, began to naughty...You know what I mean? Like a.."Sae have not had time to finish.

PLAAKKK! PLAKK!! Atsuko and Kojima gave heavy slaps at Sae’s face both sides.

The sisters did not like the greeting him. Minegishi and Yuko starts hooked, moving forward but Kai and Jun managed to hold them tight. Kai could feel the power of the huge anger of these men. Sae could be killed by them, easy.

"Damn you!!”Atsuko and Kojima said simultaneous.

“She is not a woman like that! Watch your mouth! "Atsuko stared Sae with disgust, with burned face.

"Shut Up you damn!! We will not let our ears hear the useless chatter of your mouth!!"Jun pointed Sae sharply. His hands were clenched tightly as if to punch.

“If your mouth kept going like that, I make sure you will not be smiling tomorrow!”Kojima added sharp. Her face turned daunting.

"What the hell is this?! Don't do that to my fiance! Why you guys discredit us! This is Yuki's fault!!"Sayaka feel broke, and then approached her fiance who was screaming in pain.

Suddenly, they felt strange tensions in the silence. The heat enveloped the room and their hearts. The atmosphere is very uncomfortable. Thus, brotherly, sisterly relationship began to deteriorate.


(In the boardroom, Seiryoden)

"Princess Sayaka act too early. She has given permission for foreign investors to put weapons in storage in the North. Now the border security kept coming to us. "A principal officer of the court said worried.

“Princess Sayaka intends to take advantage of them. We thought she didn’t know that the gun was not the weapon used."The minister explained.

"That's illegal, master." Yama said regret. Yashusi king closed his eyes for a moment.

During one week, the border security came to the court because of the reports of illegal arms smuggling through the court. The court has strongly denied, and tries to prove that the statement was not true. But, princess Sayaka have been first brought investors to stay and asked taxes and tributes were very high. There are tensions between the palace, the border security and foreign investors. Knowing the situation, princess Sayaka was chose a hands-off and leaved the case to the court. The ministers and court officials were working hard to save the palace of the deteriorating situation.


At Night.

(In Sayaka’s room, Otsunegoten)

"Everyone thinks I'm wrong?! Stupid." Sayaka said, slapping the table.

"You calm down, I was equally worried about you. We must keep your reputation as a potential queen. I do not want you to be dragged in this issue. "Sae tries to calm Sayaka. Hearing the last sentence, Sayaka was offended. She stood facing the face close.

"I dragged?? What kind of talk! It was your idea! You should be dragged! "Sayaka snapped.

"What?? You also agree to receive many tributes that right? Do not blame me! "Sae snapped back. Sayaka was surprised upset.

PLAKK! Sayaka gave a slap to Sae. His face flushed and his eyes were irritated. They looked at each other.

"(Sign)...I never blamed you. I've always obeyed your word. "Sayaka said in a tone of disappointment, turned away and walked quickly toward the exit. Sae slumped, holding his forehead, feeling dizzy, he let Sayaka left the room.


(In the main room, Seiryoden)

King Yashusi was sitting and resting with his wife, looking very tired, sharp frown at the thought of so many things. Faced with such problems, Yashusi often moped. The health condition of the noble king was increasingly unstable, as he was often thinking of all problems in one time, and never slept soundly at night. His heart was growing anxious. Seeing such a state of husband, the queen had approached.

"My majesty, you have been looking sad for days...What is it bothering you? Maybe I can help you... "The wife asked in a soothing voice.

"Oh honey, I am getting old. I could no longer lead this kingdom well. I have been thinking of stepping down...I want to be hermit. But..."Yashusi was stopping the sentence. His face shows his eyes glassy and mounting fatigue.

"But what...my husband...?" His wife asked again.

"Our Eldest..." He sighed.

King Yashusi told her wife that he could not yet decide which one of the daughters would succeed him. According to the reigning traditional law, the most rightful successor would be Princess Sayaka as she was the oldest daughter. But the king himself did not think she would fit the position, knowing her traits. Besides that, she frequently made a tactless decision that caused bad situations. The queen who heard that, smiled.

"My husband, when the next full moon night...go to Ninna-ji temple, sleep there." The queen said softly. Yashusi King was following the advice of his wife. He would go to temple to pray and sleep there.

Ninna-ji Temple is a holy shrine dedicated kings who are facing a big problem or do not have hope in face of problems. In temple there is a sacred statue of the god of the sky. Many elders past and previous kings always used to sleep in the temple to ask for a way out.


(In the temple, Ninna-ji)

Today is arrived. Tonight is a full moon occurs, it means the right night to pray and worship in the temple. The king did not waste this golden time to ask for directions to the lord of the sky. Once finished the prayers, the king was lying in a bed of wooden boards covered with mats only just. He took a small pillow and starts his sleep.

Obviously, his anxiety and perplexity good king is known by Azusa who dwells in other world. When Yashusi was supreme asleep, he dreamed. In his dream, he heard the voice of Azusa.

Azusa said, "O great king, do not worry. It is time that you relax. Leave the palace. Leave the throne to the youngest daughter. Perform your desire up to become a hermit."

An hour after he woke up, his worries gone. In the morning, he went back to the palace to meet his wife. He recounted the incident in his dream. Hint of other world was really comforting him and empress.


One week later.

(In the main hall, Shishinden)

The King gathered his daughters, maids, his faithful adviser Ochano, governors, Ministers and other dignitaries of the kingdom. He delivered the order Azusa of other world that it's time he step down and hand over the kingdom to the youngest daughter, Yuki.

"Today the king Yashusi will announce something very important for all of us." Ochano said in front of all those present. King Yashusi was standing and smiling to everyone, looking into all angles.

"It has been revealed to me the order of the sky, the greater Azusa. It is time for me to abdicate. And who will replace my position is Princess Yuki. "King Yashusi smiled proudly towards Yuki.

"I am..? Father..! "Yuki was shocked, her eyes blinking rapidly, she turned to her mother and her sisters.

She still could not believe what she heard. She never thought would be queen before, she slowly stood up and smiled at all the royal family as she saluted. All present stood and saluted.

"Yukii ..!" Five sisters simultaneously shouted with joy. They turned to each other, respectively, and then embraced. The fiances joined cheered and clapped.

"It is beyond our expectations. So who would be king? " Jun said curious.

"It's very exciting." Yuko said.

"Yes, I wonder, who is he? That will accompany the princess Yuki? "Kai was curious.

The queen and Ochano were smiling happy and proud to see Yuki. All governors, Ministers and dignitaries cheered the good news. The servants and guards thank each and hugging each other. They are happy that finally the youngest daughter will be queen Kyoto Gosho. The news was received with delight by most all of the contents of the palace, except by Sayaka and Sae. They pretended to agree, even though deep down inside they get heavy shocked and angry. Sayaka becomes inflamed and could not stand up, pound the table and walked toward the exit. Sae followed her from behind. No one noticed they were leave.


(At night)

(In the main room, Seiryoden)

Sayaka refused the decision. She could not accept that her father favored Yuki over her. Feeling she was deserved to be queen.

 “It’s supposed to be me, Father. I’m the eldest daughter!” Sayaka said, complained hard. King Yashusi smiled.

 “Sayaka, to be a queen takes more than age. There are many other qualities that one must possess,” explained King Yashusi wisely.

“What does Yuki have that I don’t..?” Sayaka pouted.

“You’ll find out when Yuki has replaced me,” King Yashusi answered. After the discussion, Sayaka went back to her room.


(In the Sayaka’s room, Otsunegoten)

Sliding the door loudly, and slammed into the side. Sayaka entered and began to take anything nearby, and then thrown in any direction. Wild eyes full of hated, drove mad by her anger. She paced back and forth, full of anxiety. Occasionally she yelled annoyed. Sae only be silent about his fiancee. He's also deeply regrets for what was decided by the king.

“My father is being unfair!! He is planning to crown Yuki instead of me. I am his oldest daughter for God’s sake!” moaned the princess. Her fiance, became angry at once.

“It can’t happen that way. You’re the real queen!” shouted him.

“What do we do??” Sayaka panicked. Her hands were clenched tightly.

“We need to get rid of your impudent sister!” said Sae aloud. He said to himself, that this is a good time to revenge for the rejection, Yuki had done against him.

After a long discussion, they decided something.


(Near a cherry blossom tree)

A self walked slowly around the tree. Been a few days, rabbits and squirrels in the garden that always accompany play, has not looked back around the cherry tree was. She was looking for something missing, not them. But something deep she has not been found until now. She was sitting under a cherry tree, facing the sky, closed her eyes and smiled softly. Slowly she sniffed, feeling a little breeze against her face gently. Small clouds in the sky revolve slowly, covering most of the crescent moon. Start one by one small leaves of the cherry blossom trees falling. The wind took the leaves toward her. Without realizing it, tears dripping slowly on the cheek of the beautiful princess.


***

Behind all the smiles were the tears
And behind all the comfort were the fears.
Everything you think you see on me,
Was not everything there was to me

It disappeared far away, it scattered in the wind
I could not catch my feeling so it made me sad
I put down my hopes like disappearing waves
In this great heart-like pain, my embrace is lonely

Nobody knows the solitude of my heart


*** 


Hope you enjoy, and be patient more  :banghead:

Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 4 – The Anxiety
Post by: ChuuuPuffss on January 24, 2013, 04:11:34 PM
That was an impressive chapter~

Though, I hope Mayu appears in the next one -Sobs-

Still being patient! :3
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 4 – The Anxiety
Post by: mo-chan on January 24, 2013, 04:15:07 PM
where is Mayu????  :shocked
I'm dead   :imdead:
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 4 – The Anxiety
Post by: Chanaline on January 24, 2013, 06:26:21 PM
I want my no no no... Yuki's Mayu!!!! I think I can't hold on... XD

Oh noooo! What Sea and Sayaka have planed???

Yuki is lonely... poor her!!! Don't cry  :cry: (the end is Yuki, right?)
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 4 – The Anxiety
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on January 24, 2013, 06:49:56 PM
bad sayaka and sae!! :angry:
yukirin!! :cry: your not alone your prince charming will come soon (hopefully "mayu") :heart:
thanx for the update :bow:
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 4 – The Anxiety
Post by: Yuki88 on January 24, 2013, 07:12:36 PM
Somehow I have wrong image in my head that they're wearing Chinese traditional clothes instead of Japanese one, lol.  :nervous

I like this! Very intriguing. Can't wait until mayuki met each other!  :twothumbs
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 4 – The Anxiety
Post by: steven_0809 on January 24, 2013, 10:29:24 PM
when mayu  :(????

don't cry yuki

bad sae bad
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 4 – The Anxiety
Post by: chichay12 on January 25, 2013, 12:51:45 AM
F*ck!
Can i kill sae now? XD
Sayaka deserved someone better....
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 4 – The Anxiety
Post by: sakura_drop_ on January 25, 2013, 01:39:38 AM
Mayu, if u do not appear in the next chapter... *prays*

I think I won't be able to write until Mayu appears... I'm getting anxious...
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 4 – The Anxiety
Post by: cisda83 on January 26, 2013, 04:41:28 AM
Wah... Sae is really crazy... just being reject... he wants to kill the girl.... Man... honestly just because she hurt his pride.

Sayaka.. is a stupid girl... keep listening to her fiancee all those bad decisions. Severe her right to have her taken down from replacing her father.

I guess they are going to make Yuki evacuate the palace... meeting Mayu outside palace... right? Then Mayu helps Yuki regain her position as the heir of the kingdom.

Thank you for this update... can't wait to see more...

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 4 – The Anxiety
Post by: Young Sun J on January 31, 2013, 12:23:06 AM
Hello there, I was adding opening on prologue  XD kindly check it now guys..

@ChuuuPuffss     : thanks much..expensive patients... :heart:
@mo-chan        : don't dead... :cry:
@Chanaline         : don't know what to say here  :catglare:
@mayuki_daisuki : thanks back... :deco:
@Yuki88           : added opening that can make you clear..check it out  :) and thankyou..
@steven_0809     : wait for Mayuuu.. >_<
@Chichay12     : lol, i said that too.. XD
@sakura_drop_   : aahh, gomen for your anxy.. :doh:
@cisda83          : you walk on the red line..good! thanks.. ;)

Arigatou..!
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] Prologue - ADDED Opening
Post by: nik11 on January 31, 2013, 01:17:10 AM
I really really like your story, its awesome. I cant wait till Mayu shows up and saves the day! Please update soon, yay  :panic:
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] Prologue - ADDED Opening
Post by: Chanaline on January 31, 2013, 05:23:00 PM
Nice video!! So Mayu is going to be a man!! :?
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] Prologue - ADDED Opening
Post by: DC2805 on February 01, 2013, 04:46:04 PM
Thanks for the prologue video! looking fwd to meet mayu in the coming chapters!!!  :on asmo:
Title: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 5 – You In The Morning
Post by: Young Sun J on February 02, 2013, 04:01:49 PM
Hello there,  8)
@nik11      : thankyouu...check this one  :roll:
@Chanaline    : we have danso time here...this chap answered your  :cathappy:
@C2805     : thanks back, how about this...  :vv:



CHAPTER 5 – You In The Morning


A kitchen maid was sitting on one of the pole gate. Sitting down, she brings together her hands and plays like a prayer. Her mouth muttering says something. A kitchen maid who came from outside, ran to the kitchen maid who still lips muttered. Hearing the sound of footsteps, a kitchen maid opened her eyes.

"It's a long time. I'm almost out of breath waiting here. Got those things?"She took two bags of the kitchen maid brought it. Bag contains a kind of rare spices. The spices will be used as a spice for main dishes.

They both ran to the main palace kitchen and quickly cook the main meal with that spices. In the palace kitchen, everyone is working quickly to cook and prepare food in large quantities. This morning was being held, a special prayer ceremony in honor of the God at the sky. Yashusi king was lading the ceremony with wisdom. The ceremony started at seven in the morning and lasted for two hours, which was attended by ministers and a few invited guests. The kitchen waiters are busy preparing food for the soldiers and guests who were following the prayer palace.

"The main cuisine prepared?" Kitchen maid said to the one of kitchen maids.

"Yes miss, we just completed on time." A kitchen maid said with satisfied smile.

"Good. Prepare all neatly in one hour ceremony."Said head kitchen.


(In the main garden, Oikeniwa)

Seven little daughters were playing royal romp in the garden. They are very fun to play and have fun. They also play throwing the ball. The guards are in charge of maintaining and overseeing the seventh child was standing on the edge of the park. Once in a while they are laughing at the little girls. Seen a girl sprinted up the small bridge over the pond garden. Yet she got to the edge of the bridge, suddenly her feet slipped and she fell into the pond.

All who looked shocked and immediately shut up. They hold their laughter so as not to be heard by her. The six sisters ran to the edge of the pool to help her stand up and clean her clothes. Her clothes were wrinkled and her hair is nice to be a little wet. Suddenly one of the waiters laughed out loud as laughter could not resist for too long. The seven little girls turned toward the waitress. The girl's wetness became angry and went to the waiter.

"You! You! Come here, you! "She said in a high voice. Her face looked very upset and kept pointing her hand towards the waitress. She runs fast.

"Y-yes princess..."Waitress was shocked and confused. She stopped laughing when she realized that she was standing in front of her. The waiter was silent and looked frightened. Her hands trembled and she began to sweat. The other waiters bowed and did not dare pull out a word.

"You think it's funny?! Hah! Kneel! "The girl yelled. Her eyes glared sharply, making the waitress was getting scared and quickly knelt in front of her.

"Princess Sayaka...so sorry...really really sorry..."The waiter said, worshiped.

"You piss me off! You, get me a broom and a stick! "Sayaka look towards other guards sharply. A guard immediately ran to take what was asked by Sayaka. Sixth sister stood behind the eldest and see what their sister would do.

Moments later, Sayaka was holding a stick and a broom. All the waiters and guards already know what will be done to the poor waitress. The six sisters have memorized the habit of their sister who always punishes anyone who made him angry or upset. Therefore they said nothing, waiting until the anger down. Sayaka hit the waitress’s head with a stick a few times. Medium broom she used to hit the back of the waiter. No sound comes out of the mouth from her. After receiving several blows from Sayaka, the waitress sat limp and crying softly. Yuki who saw it, ran towards.

"Are you all right?" Yuki feel pity. She saw the head waiter was a bit bloody. Yuki was checking her. Seeing that, the other waiters were approaching the poor waitress and help her.

"Yuki, you do not need help. Stay away! "Sayaka shouted and glared at Yuki. From behind, she pulled the shirt of Yuki, it make Yuki fell backward. Yuki small grin, then get up and keep helping the poor waiter regardless her sister. Atsuko, Kojima and others follow Yuki. Sayaka grumbled annoyed at all the people concerned with the waitress.

"Hah! It sucks you all. It was make me so hungry. I'd better go."Sayaka said, throwing sticks and broom carelessly. She left the park, walking quickly towards the main kitchen.


(In the main palace kitchen)

Sayaka entered the palace kitchen. It was empty, no one. All waiters were preparing tables near the field where the ceremony took place. Sayaka around and found a lot of food in the main kitchen tables. Sayaka walks slow near a stove in the corner of the kitchen.

"Hmm-it smells very fragrant. This seems like a very tasty soup."Sayaka said as she opened the lid of the pot. There are vegetables are cooked and still emits boiling water.

There is a creature that saw it from the kitchen window right nears the stove she was approached. The creature leaned his head close to the face Sayaka. His eyes blinked rapidly. Sayaka that sense the presence of the creature, moving her head up. And the two are bead view. They were quiet shocked.

"Waaaaa..." Sayaka cried out in surprise and move backwards.

The monkey closed his eyes and covered his ears because the sound is very tight. Not careful, Sayaka slipped again and she fell backwards. Sayaka was holding a sick ass. The monkey who saw it laughed, and wagging his tail. Sayaka stood and took the nearby kitchen appliances and threw toward the monkey.

A pot hit the monkey's head, he grimaced, turned to look at her. Sayaka saw the monkey's eyes, suddenly afraid. Without cue monkey was immediately made a mess most of the kitchen, and rearranged the food lies neatly on the table quickly. While little rant is not clear, he took and ate fruit and drank the soup. Sayaka surprised at the behavior of monkeys that unusual. She was much panicked, and ran towards the exit of the kitchen immediately.

"Princess Sayaka...what are you doing here?" A waitress said who had been in front of the kitchen door.

"I.. I, there was a monkey in the kitchen..." Sayaka said in a tone of fear. The waiter smiled.

As with the fall of a tree, the waitress's eyes widened and her mouth dropped open in shock at what she saw. The waiter was suddenly dizzy and her body limp she almost fell. Sayaka just stood still see the waiter who almost fainted. She was confused not knowing what to do. She was scared and thought the monkey was still inside.

“Princess Sayaka...what to do in the kitchen...?" Waiter looked around the kitchen, looking worried incredible.

"I-I did not do anything... mo-monkey did it!" Sayaka scared and did not want to be blamed. Mistress of the kitchen waiter who also intends to check the kitchen was surprised not to play. Her eyes widened. Her heart pounded and her sudden trouble breathing.

"Jungri! Who did this? "The head mistress of the kitchen clutching her chest, her eyes was blinking rapidly.

"Mistress... I found princess Sayaka... alone...there."

The head kitchen waiter was getting dizzy. She prefers to pass out of the half-breathing middle like this. For a moment after she set breath, she ordered all kitchen maid to tidy the kitchen and quickly prepared meals and main meal food potluck. The king was shocked to hear this news and immediately ordered the clerk royal kitchen, so the food there is served prior to the soldiers. Looking for the king and his guests could follow the next dish.


(In a round, Higyosha)

Yuki walked quickly from the room to the exit. She looks very happy, because finding a lot of her favorite food on the table, a gift from her grandmother. She also took part, and intends to bring it to the main garden, and gave it to her little friends. She descended the stairs, and ran into a shortcut between the bushes. Arriving in the middle, she stopped, as heard a noise from the bushes. She approached slowly. Had not yet approached, she was startled by a flying little kid who jumped from behind a bush, towards Yuki. Her eyes widened in surprise. Likewise with the kid, no less shocked. The kid bumped into Yuki.

Accidentally, they kissed. Very gentle, sweet like touching ices from cloud. Their bodies such as hugged each other. Yuki pushed back fell to the grass, her hand can hold up half the body to touch the grass. Both the kid's hand can hold him for not pushing more Yuki. Yuki shocked, but could not resist.

The wind blows from direction of cherry blossom trees, towards them. Blue light was came out from the kid's was flow to Yuki. The leaves of the tree are pink, with a beautiful flying around them.

Slowly he releases the soft lips that stick to Yuki. They felt their heart pounding. They looked each other with strange feeling, still shocked inside. The kid was blinking his eyes rapidly.

“You, you, wake up. Are you going to look at me like that? Wake, I need your help.”The little kid jiggled Yuki’s shoulder.

“Y- yes w-what...?” Yuki woke up from the shock.

“I need to hide. There are people who want to kill me!” He looked around.

“What? You, it was not possible in here.”Yuki did not believe.

“Ghh, you don’t know...Come on. Take me to a safe place. Hide me.”He said urgently moved away.

“Where do you go?”Yuki asked.

“I don’t know. I am lost.”He answered quickly.

Yuki stop the foot, pull back the kid's hand, and ran in other direction. He was following.


(Near a cherry blossom tree)

Yuki and he were leaning against one of the trees. With were still panting. Yuki looked up and saw the little kid face. His hair is shoulder length, black and shiny, tied in part to the back (ponytail). His forehead was covered by bangs are very neat and aligned. His face was white, bit pretty and very cute. His eyes glowed with a sharp sense. Wear clothing that is very nice, white with blue stripe in multiple folds clothes and crystal blue belt. Very different from the children's clothing here. And he was no taller than Yuki.

"His clothes are very beautiful... “Yuki murmured softly, she admires pretty of the clothes.

Then, the little kid turned, spun around and facing the right direction Yuki. The wind was blowing from the young kid towards Yuki, stroking her beautiful hair is long, black and shiny. The wind was very irregular and rhythmic. They looked at each other. Feel something.

“You look at me like that again?”He was curious, bit nervous. Yuki turned in the other direction, for a moment. The kid pulled out a small red pill from his pocket. He twirled, his eyes were thinking.

“What is that?”Yuki asked curious.

“This thing can only last for two hours.”He answered unclear.

“What? So then tell me, who would kill a kid like you?” Yuki asked.

“Hey, I am not a kid.”

“Eeh? Yes you are. We are.”

“No.”He insisted.

“You are.”

“I am not!”

“That’s proving.”Yuki smiled win.

“Ghh~”He turned to the fore, pouted.

“Eeeh, what a cute kid! You...” Yuki smiled wide, look at him, small pinch his cheeks. He blushed.

Yuki stepped one by one approached two young rabbits in front of her. Rabbits were turned towards Yuki, and Yuki approached who presented a sweet smile. Yuki took the food she was carrying and gave the rabbit. When Yuki providing food, one of them biting Yuki index finger. Yuki yelled surprised and amused, intrigued and hoped rabbit chase Yuki. Yuki laughed and immediately chase the rabbit. The kid looked at them strangely.

“Come here...they are my friends...they very nice. Let them know you. They cute, uh?”Yuki smiled happy.

“What. I am the cutest.”He answered proud, smiled at Yuki. Both of them laugh.

"You want to try? Feed them...here the food...this is my favorite."Yuki handed a bag filled with snacks.

"May I?"The kid bit hesitated. But he did it with bit worry bitten by them. They greeted well, and jumped signifies love.

Together they chase the rabbits and squirrels that came from bushes. Their face was radiant with joy. The kid tried to catch one rabbit, but the rabbit jumps faster, so that he fell to the side. Everyone laughed saw it, the kid laughed at his self. He stood up, pretending to be angry and put up weird face towards the rabbit, ready to pounce. Yuki who saw it laughed. She approached him, holding his cheek, smiling. Then grabbed the kid's wrist and asked him to dance. The kid smiled delightedly and follows the movement of Yuki. Rabbits and squirrels were seen laughing. Cool breeze blowing lightly from the tree. Behind the tree leaves, the sound of a gentle breeze and pulled out a very melodious tone.

Not long after. Yuki stopped a moment, turn her head due to the noise coming from the back. She looked back, hearing the sound of it. Without realizing, the kid step back slowly. When Yuki turned around, he was not in front of her anymore. And she did not see anyone around. She searching but there was no body. From a distance, there were Sayaka and two bodyguards jogged towards Yuki. Her father followed from behind.

A little monkey jumped down around the cherry blossom tree.

"It was! Father, I’m not lying. That's the monkey! Kill! "Sayaka ordered two bodyguards who stood beside her. The bodyguards immediately catch the monkey.

"The monkey had to die."Sayaka said. The monkey was trying to release the grip of a powerful guard. He managed to escape, and then hopped on a cherry blossom tree. Continue to jump, jump, move to other trees around it, and then disappeared. Sayaka upset and ran toward his father.

"Not my fault, Father." Sayaka said as she hugged his father. Yashusi king smiled at his daughter, who was thirteen years. Then, they back leave the garden.


Yuki sat under the tree. Her face looks tired. Two rabbits and squirrels sat next to her. Their faces seemed confused and wondering, just like Yuki.

Where the cutest go...



Hope you enjoy it  :theking

Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 5 – You In The Morning
Post by: ChuuuPuffss on February 02, 2013, 04:27:14 PM
AHHH OH MY GOD, FEELS <3

Mayu must be 'the cutest' huh? >:))

I can't wait till' they meet again~ It's making my heart go doki doki <33

Update soon :3
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 5 – You In The Morning
Post by: XxRoByNxX78 on February 02, 2013, 06:27:21 PM
mayu where did u go ???

and is mayu dansoing in this fic ???

nice update
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 5 – You In The Morning
Post by: DC2805 on February 02, 2013, 06:50:46 PM
Is this sort of a flashback? And dun tell me Mayu = monkey? hehehe!
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 5 – You In The Morning
Post by: mo-chan on February 02, 2013, 07:08:49 PM
where the cutest go  :mon exhaust:
I wanna Mayu appear  :mon whine:
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 5 – You In The Morning
Post by: cisda83 on February 03, 2013, 02:10:49 AM
I think this fic is a flashback when they were kids...

Man... Sayaka even when she was young already bad.... no wonder when she was older she was still that bad...

I mean the monkey didn't do anything to her... she just hit the monkey...

She was the one that start all that... the monkey just taking revenge by messing the kitchen

I mean just because of that the monkey needed to die

I also think that the monkey is Mayu (the boy) that was playing with Yuki

Yuki is kind even as a kid

Thank you for the update... Can't wait to see the next chapter

 :wub: :inlove: :love: :heart:
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 5 – You In The Morning
Post by: Chanaline on February 03, 2013, 08:13:54 AM
Yeeeesssss! Mayu must be "the cutest"!!!!!!

When I read Cisda83's comment I was like "maybe (s)he is right."

Sooooo! Poor Yuki! and bad Sayaka why did you become like that??

Mayu appear pleaseeeee!!!! :bow:

Thank you for this good update!! :D
Title: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 6 – The Expelled ( I )
Post by: Young Sun J on February 11, 2013, 06:31:22 PM
Hello everyone, aahh  :cathappy: just update this one...
@ChuuuPuffss    : absolutely yess, its closer..but patient more XD
@XxRoByNxX78      : yes yes, danso as...(still secret lol)
@DC2805          : so true, Mayu ate something...check again  ;)
@mo-chan              : mo-chaaann, ahahaha I bet youuu  XD
@cisda83           : pretty right! oh god, just  :heart: your excellent shoot here!
@Chanaline            : so yeeeess! Mayu the cutest  :love: and cisda, s(he) got all! aah, wait wait again  XD 

The cherry blossom! That flashback told why Yuki always be there in a whole time...Now, check this chap...Arigatou gozaimaz!



CHAPTER 6 – The Expelled ( I )


Three court officers opened fifteen envelope contains letters and foreign papers. They read carefully and repeatedly examined. It's been three days they were busy with a startling discovery.

"I can know you conclude?" President of the court, Tanaka, asked his men.

"I've found the conclusion sir. But, like what I said yesterday. "

"I support the statement. I did not find anything else. All these words belong to her."

"I think it's impolite to her. But we still have to do. "Tanaka said.

"If you, Master, trust in her, then we should do this."

"She was still good enough to take something like this. Just do it."


Next day.

(In the court)

And yet Yuki did not move. Instead, she stared curiously at her father, willing him to break. The guards had managed to bring Yuki without doubt. There were also other, more unusual, protections in place. In the end they had forced Yuki to concede, helped by the fact that Ochano was on her side.

"Majesty, we had to bring you into exile now." A soldier preparing ordered guards to escort princess Yuki out of room to be brought out of the palace.

"Stop it! What the heck are you people? She's just a victim. All of this traps! Please take a good look!"Atsuko were ahead Yuki, facing the soldiers.

"Sister, don’t. I'll go with them. Let see these entire first. Soon we will get the truth."Yuki said quiet, looked at Atsuko soft, make her sure.

“No, Yuki...”Said Atsuko worry.

“What victim? You need more than?”Sayaka asked.

“Sister! Why you always did not help in the case like this, hah?!”Atsuko angry.

“Do not dare raise your voice! I only see the truth. We should not discriminate in this way!”

“What way?? Because in each case of Yuki! I did not see the others!”

“Please. Stop it. Do not fight for me. Let me handle all this by my self.”Yuki said.

Yuki walked out of room followed the guards. Sayaka smiled sarcastically. Atsuko sighed annoyed. Ochano approached her.

"Princess Atsuko. Please, take this calm down. We did not stay here without any acts. We’ll do whatever it takes to help her."Said Ochano promised, it makes Atsuko quieter. She never doubted a promise from the kingdom's supreme minister.

"Father, I do not think Yuki like this. She dared to fool us all. "Sayaka tried to convince his father. Yashusi king said nothing, his face very serious without slightest movement. He left the room without a word.

With the discovery of three tributes filled with money and gold, as well as correspondence files in Yuki room. Finally, court ruled that Yuki was guilty. For all allegedly accepting bribes from the traitor state. Yuki asked for help Ochano to investigate this issue. Ochano very pleased to receive the order, he could not wait dare to give an oath and a guarantee that he would bring evidence and truth.

“With all the efforts. Princess Yuki. We should have something for you in three or five days.”He said.

“I’d appreciate it.”Yuki smiled soft.

Yuki thanked him, and said that she understood perfectly. As she hung up a sparkling thing, memories of previous meetings flooded back to her, and she almost smiled.

Council requested suspension of defence during the ongoing investigation. While Ochano and his team investigate, Yuki was exiled to the residence of exile in the west. All regrets this incident. This news spread throughout the palace. Many opinions came from mouth to mouth. Arrest princess Yuki caused a stir all. Some believe there is not. This is very disturbing, given that she is a candidate for a leader palace. Many have started talking about Yuki, incompatible with the truth.

During exile, no one could see Yuki. The place was totally deserted and uninhabited. There are only a gate keeper and janitor. They also have a rule, which is forbidden to speak to the prisoner’s exile. Over there, Yuki did not interact with anyone. She spent time in prayer and study in den, alone.

But it was not long as he predicted, in just five days. Ochano managed to catch two perpetrator deliberately laid tributes and letters to trap Yuki. Both men are members of royal soldiers were arrested while trying to exit the border. Both men were admitted only a messenger. The king heard it, do not hesitate to behead them if they do not want to say the mastermind behind all this. At that, the perpetrators promised to say who sent them, and the king promised that they would survive.


At night.

(In the hallway leading to the prison)

For somewhere on the other side of the hallway, the perpetrators heard the crackle of a walks then it was lost in the sound of an approaching peoples. They could see the shapes of two peoples in the way. A man and a woman dressed in black and hooded running crept into them. Idle. Nobody moved.

"That's them." He opened the door and into the detention room, followed by a woman with him.

"My Majesty."Those two knelt and bowed their head.

"You are useless!! You know what you caused, Hah! Stupid!"She said angrily. Her eyes go sharp.

"We've been fighting them tooth and nail. But they are a very strong. We were ready to cross the border, they found us quickly."One of them explained.

"Damn about that!! You know these guys careless?"She said while widened her eyes sharp.

"Please Majesty. Forgiveness..."Both were prostrate pleading.

“You two stupid did not need that.”The woman did not show the slightest mercy.

“Majesty! Majesty no! We didn’t tell anything!” They begged harder, their face began to heavy panic.

“I will remember that.”She said.

She gave the code to her hooded man. The man nodded, quickly, he came forward drew his sword and swung into one of them. A sharp sword stabbed on neck one of them. Blood flows out quickly from the scratched neck sharply. His friend who was in the side, straight backward, looking very frightened. He had no choice but to suffer the same fate with his friend.

“With respect, you are not the most right candidate of the Gosho queen.”He said the last words before the last breath.

Many crows suddenly flew quickly left the roof of the house. Making noise in the air that can only be heard by the darkness of night. The blood was flowing through narrow of spaces rocks. It smells so fresh and pungent. Water pipes into the red, as the color well blended blood.


At morning.

News of the two perpetrators who was killed last night, that will be on trial this morning shocked the whole of the palace. That means people who are behind this entire are still hanging around the palace. Tension surrounds the palace. For the first time there are murders in the palace area, especially in prison. Yashusi king ordered all the soldiers on guard at every corner of the palace, to trace the people who killed perpetrators. The soldiers were manning the castle endlessly time.

Ochano. He had only been up in this godforsaken part of the world for an hour, and already seen two dead bodies and, according to the team, the dead men had probably been on their side, which suggested to Yama that the odds in their favour had started to shrink. Now the rest of what passed for a rescue mission had disappeared, and the team had appeared more disappointed than surprised at their absence.

Yuki had returned to the palace. Atsuko who can not wait, pick up her at the Kogo-mon gate. She was very concerned about the state of Yuki, though only five days in exile. Sayaka are seen from a distance, were furious and her anger came back, this time bigger.

After meeting with her mother and grandma, Yuki started to meet her sisters in Shodaibunoma. Yui, Rena, Kojima, Tomomi was waiting inside. They hugged Yuki alternately.

"Yuki ... I could not sleep at three nights, I was afraid that something bad happened to you ..."Kojima said with a sob, Yuki released her hand and wipe the tears.

"My pretty sister... thanks you, calm down here. If you like this, I would feel guilty..."Yuki smiled down.

"Yuki, the actual perpetrators has not been found. I'm not sure this place is safe for you."Yui said frantically.

“I'm suspicious. Since Yuki was named a candidate for the queen, these strange events appear.”Atsuko said.

“Looks like, somebody wants to kill someone.”Rena said fear.“They already sent bloods...”All put faces with worry.

The door was opened by one of room guard. He invited the fiances comes and joins to the princesses.

"Princess Yuki, are you all right?"Kai asked anxiously, followed by Minegishi, Jun, Rino and Yuko. Yuki ensuring that the situation is fine.

"Its okay brothers, thank you." Yuki smiled to everyone.

"How could be ok? You return to the palace, while the killer is on the loose in here?"Minegishi said worry.

"What can we do? We stand blank here, couldn't see any clue..."Kai bit confused.

"Brother, I myself still do not understand with all these."Yuki said.

“Someone targeted you, Yuki.”Kai said.

"It's a surprise, it turned out we found they were killed before they could tell the truth."Rino said.

"Actually, what kind of people are they??"Tomomi asked annoyed.

“Who are these guys, exactly?”Jun asked. All was silent. This question had been troubling them since they had faced the events.

Yuki closed her eyes, took a breath slowly, standing toward the open door. The wind blows hard from trees. Yuki smiled.

"Whatever happens, I'll deal with it ...I am ready"She said softly.


(In Sayaka’s room, Otsunegoten)

"Stupid. Stupid. Stupid! All failed, because that stupid soldier! We lost a chance again! Damn!" Sayaka said in a high tone.

"Take it easy. According to my seeing, your sister can not be disabled by that way. She’s too strong attacked by ordinary ways...”Sae said while thingking.

"Then what? The soldiers here suck! Could not rely on these people, we must do all by ourself. This is the third time we trapped her, and nothing works!"Sayaka was mad.

"Well. How about we get rid Ochano first. He was always there beside her to help her. That’s why we always found this difficult."Sae said.

"We can not do that. We'll run out of time. Father would get out of the palace, he should have already stated that I would be the queen. That rule."Sayaka refused the idea.

“Just kill him. He is just old man.”

“Don’t be stupid. Our target was her, not him.”

They were silent for a moment. They racked their brain to find a more convincing manner. Opened many books, looked for some weapons, flipped through the papers. After two hours, finally...

"All right. If this should be fast. So this idea, I'm sure it'll work. "Sae smiled full confident.

"What's your idea? I hope it's not weak. "Sayaka was curious hope.

“Here.”

They drew back a plan that is more terrible than before. A huge thunder snatched. The sky suddenly darkened. Black clouds surrounded the palace, and shed water quickly to earth. A black shadow enveloped the palace. The noise of the water fountain sounds terrible. No animals venture out tonight. They are aware of the arrival of something evil. There collection of weird grinning black shadows around them. After while, heavy rain dropped.


One week later.

(In the main hall, Shishinden)

Today is anniversary of Princess Sayaka. The invited guests were mostly from aristocratic youth and most son of minister already crowded room. The daughters and the fiances also attended the party. They enjoy dessert while watching dance performances and musical entertainment. Although this was a Sayaka’s day, but most of the attendees are on a busy talking about Yuki, especially male guests.

"Look, how pretty princess Yuki is."A young nobleman said. His eyes pointed towards Yuki who was sitting with her sisters and brothers.

"The most beautiful woman I've ever met!" Other embellished.

"Other than that I've heard she's very good at singing?"

"Yes. No doubt about it. I've met at one event where she sang. It is a very unusual, melodious..."

“Hey guys, do you want to try to take her?”

“Are you kidding? Very difficult to get her. Many guys much has been done, and they end up.”

"Ah...So, who is the person who will get her...?"

"A very lucky person..."Everyone nodded quickly. They smiled at each other and continue enjoying the show.

Sayaka who listened was suddenly annoyed. "Supposedly, I'm the one you're talking about. Not her! "

Her heart was filled with envy heats. She arose from her seat, took the glass on the table and smashed it to the floor. All around her were surprised, turned toward her with an aback and confused. Sayaka turned to go out of the room to see Sae.

"Hurry does! I could not last longer than this! I'm getting mad!" Sayaka shouted.

"Take it ease. This is the first step, so I would do it perfectly. Go back there. Don’t forget your part."Sae said. Sayaka nodded quickly.

Sayaka get back into the room. She saw her sisters and their fiances fun joking while enjoying music and dance. She approached Yuki, sat beside her. She said the fake stuff, that there are some officers of the ministry is waiting Yuki in the library, they were guests from border. Yuki was unsuspecting, immediately went to the place in question. Sayaka smirk. Jun who happened to see, feel something odd so he secretly stalking Yuki. There could be any number of men in there waiting for her, drawing a bead on the moving targets or holding their aim on single spot, waiting for the target to come to them.


(In the library, Ogakumonjo)

Yuki enters the library. She looked around the corner of the room, quiet, no one was inside. She walked fast into the sides of the bookcase and into the living room. Looking for the guests like Sayaka told to her.
 
"Where are these people?" Yuki said questioning.

A smirk appeared from behind one of the bookshelves.

"Looking for someone, a beautiful princess?"A man showed his face. Yuki surprised.

"Sae! What are you doing here? Oh god. I'd better get going. "Yuki are aware of the situation, walked quickly toward the exit.

“We don’t know that they were out there.”

Two men appeared and directly confront her. Yuki stopped and fell silent. She did not drean at night or she could not remember if she did, but she woke up just with situation like this. She did not know the two men. Sae approached, followed by two other men in tow. Yuki could not run. She looked in all directions, looking for loopholes. Then she went to the side. One of the men pulled Yuki hand, so that his body almost touching her.

"So real! What people are saying out there is real. You really are very pretty, princess!"He saw Yuki with a look full of passion. The others laughed. Yuki rotate her wrist and break away from the grip of the man.

"What the sassy you guys! Do not strike! How dare you do shame things like this?!"Yuki said loudly.

Another man who could not stand of beauty Yuki, go closer and want teases her. Have not had time, Sae pulled his shirt.

"I'll do it first! And only me." Sae pushed him. He was backward, Sae thrust his face into her.

PLAKK! A hard slap hit his ear. His friends shocked.

"YOU! Do not ever dare touch me! ! Surprisingly enough, that you have no shame like this!"Yuki looked up sharply. Her hands pointed Sae, and then toward others men.

"What is lacking from me? Hah! Look at me! Good, rich, young officers, in like by many girls. What else?! Why do you reject me!!"Sae hit the table and smashed it to the side, he was upset and disappointed.

Yuki did not flinch, she did not care about him. She was busy looking for a gap to the exit. She took a quick step through all three men, and ran so fast to the door.

"Heck. I have not finished this. Go get her! We must do soon the important part! "Sae ruled.

Four men ran towards Yuki. Yuki opened the door and found a man in front of her.

"Brother!" Yuki shouted in relief.

"Princess Yuki. What are you doing here??"Jun asked in surprise, bit worried.

Sae appeared from behind. Seeing him, Jun quickly read the situation, but he has no time to move. Sae’s friends had already been dragged into, and then beat it out in Jun, rain in Jun with a series of punches to his head and in stomach, one after another very hard. Yuki was shocked. Sae pulled her hand roughly. Her body was thrown back, hit the table so hard. Yuki small wince, feel pain in the back. She viewed Jun with guilt, because she could not do anything about it. She endured the pain, viewed Jun beaten like that. After long, the four men stopped their actions, Yuki came to Jun who could not move.

“Brother! Wake! Brother! Come on, wake up!!” Yuki shook Jun, no results, Jun was unconscious. “No...”

A man pushed Yuki away, Sae dragged Jun body into a corner of the room. Others still confront Yuki.

"Now. Fast remove your clothes! The show begins. I'll take care of the rest."Sae said to his friends. Then he went out of the room very fast, while dragging Jun’s body. The four men began releasing layers of clothes, to dress the top open. Yuki who looked at it, shocked confused. She can not follow where Sae go, because the four men confronted him with strange situation.

"What are you doing! Stop YOU!" Yuki said angry.

Not long, there was a door open with a bang. King Yashusi, his daughters, the fiances, guards and a few guests entered to room with haste, and found a big surprise. The four men were aware of the coming party directly, immediately knelt in front of Yuki, resigned face down and put the fear. Like lightning, everybody was shocked abysmal.

“Yuki...”

“Princess Yuki??”

“Yuki...”

“Yuki...”

“Yuki...?”

"What are you..."

Almost all call upon the name Yuki simultaneously. Found Yuki along with four bare-chested men kneeling in front of her, in one room. Their minds are filled with allegations of bad about that youngest daughter. Yuki backwards, her body limp. Her face was incredible tension, stiff mouth.

"It's ... not...what you see..." Yuki said quietly.

"Looks, everyone realized. Trouble finding a man, made she did not deserve such like this. Too bad...What you want to say now?? How many guy she have?"Sayaka said mockingly.

"Sister, what do you mean! How could you think like that to me?! ! Everyone...don’t..."Yuki did not receive. Her eyes go around seeing all the people in front of her, in the hope that everyone do not believe what they see.

The reality turned, not like what she expects. Everyone is quiet in the unusual feeling. The wind was blowing hard to bring all the lies go to the heart, making a mess of the truth. Busyness mazy foliage whispered. Whisper by whisper untruth comes to peoples mind.

None of this was making Yuki feel any more at ease, and she began to wonder if her father hadn’t been wise to stay where she was, and if she shouldn’t have stayed right there with him.

At the moment, the biggest hole Yuki had ever seen in her dream appeared from the west. It was jet black, and its tires were so huge that even so stand on them and use them as a means of jumping to the ground. As it drew closer, Yuki could see that the hole also seemed to be with its evil, and both of its make her fear.


(In the doorway, Seiryoden)

"My lord, princess Yuki does not like that. I’d stake in heavy."Ochano said quickly. He tried to compensate for the King Yashusi walking very quickly.

"But, Ochano! I saw it myself. And I'm so embarrassed! "King said with a rising tone. In his heart, he began to doubt his youngest daughter.

“But, that all is not strong enough to prove anything, My lord...”

“What do you think again? It may be true, the fact is she does not have a boyfriend until now! Right??”

Ochano was glaring disbelief.

“Nevertheless, we should not think so...My majesty...”Ochano muttered, very surprised and disappointed to hear the words of his majesty king said.

Ochano, he stopped, lowered his head, silent. Arising feeling disillusioned with the king. There are disturbing mind that it affects Yashusi mood. Yashusi king realized Ochano not follow him, he turned around.

"Soon, I'll go out of the palace. Lots of unexpected events happen here. And Yuki...What does all this mean?!"Yahsusi King closed and glared Ochano. He asked his prime minister a question that can be answered.

DREEKK! DREEKK! Six water fountains now fractured in the middle. One of the broken water fountains amid issued murky colored water. And the water in the reservoir gradually becomes blackish. Then it’s increasingly roaring noises from the shower water hole.



Ghh~what what? hmm...just enjoy it again XD

Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 6 – The Expelled ( I )
Post by: Chanaline on February 11, 2013, 07:03:58 PM
YADDDDDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!! They are so bad!!!! Yukirin I love you!!!

Poor her! Just Ochano believe her!!! Yukirin  :cry:

Mayu must appear!! When are you going to put his character in this story :cry:
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 6 – The Expelled ( I )
Post by: mo-chan on February 11, 2013, 07:07:22 PM
I don't like it I don't like it I don't like it!!!!!!!! 
why you have to make me hate Sae and Sayaka :(
Yuki why all this happened to her???!!
why they have to make her look like that??
It  hurts me so much. :(
seeing Yuki in this state :(
I will say it again : where is Mayu!!!!!????!!
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 6 – The Expelled ( I )
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on February 11, 2013, 08:28:05 PM
the inner demons of sayaka and sae finally show their true colours :angry1: :badluck: :depressed:
Yuki!!! Damn why no one believe her :pleeease: :pleeease:
Mayu hurry your the only one who can save her
wait Jun knows whats going on! hehe you just wait sayaka and sae justice will prevail (hopefully) :shifty:
thanx for the update :kneelbow: :kneelbow:
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 6 – The Expelled ( I )
Post by: Elo on February 11, 2013, 08:37:13 PM
oh my god nooooooooo  :cry:

what happened jun you must say the truth noooo

please update soon :bow:
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 6 – The Expelled ( I )
Post by: nik11 on February 11, 2013, 11:33:13 PM
 Oh my goodnesss!!! :cry:

Mayu where are you?! Yuki needs you now!!!!

Jun, I hope you are okay, save Yuki!!

Sayaka and Sae are so bad. Yabya

Thanks for the update, please update soon
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 6 – The Expelled ( I )
Post by: cisda83 on February 12, 2013, 09:33:49 AM
What kind of traps were that....?

Sayaka is such a tricky and bad sister ever....

I mean after setting Yuki up as a traitor... and now as a slut....

I thought her father understands that Yuki is a nice and kind person... if not he would not have set her up as his heir...

Now just because he saw something like few unclothed men surrounding Yuki... he thought Yuki is a slut

And said... that may be she is because she never has a boyfriend before...

He was the one that didn't let any guys coming near Yuki and he was the one that arranged a heavy and busy schedule of her life since she was young to help him running the country....

Now he blamed all that on Yuki... Ah.. what a stupid King...

Jun please be okay and clear up Yuki's name. 

Ochano please do something... you are the only one that seem to trust Yuki...

I hope the other sisters trust Yuki's character... except Sayaka.

Thank you for the update

Can't wait to find out what's going on next...

 :wub: :inlove: :heart: :love:
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 6 – The Expelled ( I )
Post by: DC2805 on February 12, 2013, 10:35:43 AM
Oh dear, no one out there to protect Yukirin... and I hope Jun is fine...
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 6 – The Expelled ( I )
Post by: ChuuuPuffss on February 12, 2013, 11:18:20 AM
Wtf just happened...

Lol, you mischievous writer  :rofl:

You're really good at this... breaking my heart from these traps ;~;

When the hell will Mayu appear? O _ O

And Jun must be a witness... soon.
Title: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 6 – The Expelled ( II )
Post by: Young Sun J on February 24, 2013, 06:50:59 PM
Hello again you there...are you fine?  :deco:

@Chanaline :
Eeeehhh?? I love you too...(from Yuki)  :lol: Of course Mayu appear, but not now...this expelled have three part. After the third...I make you sure about Mayu  ;)

@mo-chan :
Don’t hate them...That’s real, when human are blinded by power, throne, heritage, beauty, wrong desires and make their heart go bad. They do all possible things. All this happen to Yuki becoz she will be a leader, so the world prepare her to be a great, a wise, and a brave one (the hope). Yuki who will be great and powerful, she is going through hard things like that. This is what I purpose...about this fic...  8) Honestly, I wrote myself feel miserable sometimes...And Mayu, oh my, patients more...

@mayuki_daisuki :
Yes they are... but, not as fast as they get something in return. This story won the bad at the beginning  :banghead:, maybe some will be disappointed to read this... and thankyou back...  :heart: MaYuki

@Elo :
I'm not sure, if you read this, what Jun would actually say something? Hmm... :? Yes, I always tried update faster...this what I can..

@nik11 :
Absolutely yes, Yuki needs Mayu :heart: more than we thought.  Read this part, ready to conclude? Thank You back... I try make this fast, I realized couldn't write everyday... :)

@cisda83 :
Yes, their traps very very bad. Not only that, in here and possibly three later, you will see how far they are doing evil. We can say that easily, in real life, many people are deceived by what they see. Sometimes we do a lot of good things, but when we make mistakes then people will easily continue to recall the error, and forget the hundreds of other virtues. Especially, the mistakes we did not do at all...hurts.

Her father just a perfectionist, that’s why he very careful about concern to Yuki. And yes, he became stupid. The facts, the human heart can be turned upside down with ease. No matter how great people is, when the heart is exposed to shocks that fall well.

Ochano, yes he's the one of main here. We’ll see he do many many good to help Yuki. He is a type of a confidant who is very loyal and intelligent. Realized in our real life, we need at least one person who can really trust and on our side, maybe a guard, our mom, sister, best friend, or...a lover...a special one... :nervous

And thank You back...   :oops: :wub:

@DC2805
:
Read this, and you’ll sure Jun fine...but Yuki...Im not sure... :smhid

@ChuuuPuffss :
Im a what? :ph43r: Lol :lol: hmm, I'm not sure just breaking your heart in once. The expelled have 3 parts...Mayu appears at chapter ----- spell it, you’ll know  ;)


Ok...lets prepare our heart stronger, I think this fiction has killed many, slowly. I asked myself, Am I write a serious fiction? Dunno... Arigatou gozaimaz!




CHAPTER 6 – The Expelled ( II )


The next day.

The king gathered the shamans from all over the land. They were instructed to look at the sacred fountain. All the shaman shock, they show their face of anxiety and fear. Stunned and had hesitated to express their illumination.

"My lord, we do not dare to say something that's scary."

"My king, if we had to say something bad about this?"

"Tell the truth. I guarantee your salvation will be something that will tell you that."King ruled.

All shamans looked at each other for a moment and then nodded to each other.

"Kyoto is in great danger, my lord. Two demons, the type of Jaki descendant Ryutoki and Tentaki have settled somewhere in the palace. They were spread chaos."

"It is inevitable."Said another.

"We do not know exactly what the incident was. Because the water which from the fountain had turned to be black. We did not get to read more of this. Excuse us, majesty. "

The king and his ministers stiff silence.

"We accorded to the legend, only Jikokuten. Who can conquer Ryutoki and Tentoki. We found it, difficult."

“The protector of the world.”

"So where we can find him??"

“Just get him here!”

“We are really sorry about this, my lord. We couldn’t see it right now.”

“Finding Jikokuten is impossible, my lord.”

“It was shame said!!”Yashusi yell bit.

“Forgiveness majesty...!”All shamans bowed head.

“Whether they have anything to do with the murder of two people?”An advisor asked.

"We make sure there is. But, we found it to be more shocking than that. "

"Tell me."

"Sacred fountain made for the seventh daughter. And the damage... "

"Of course it has something to do with one of the daughters of the kingdom."

"What are they doing?"

"We couldn’t see, because as we knew. They didn’t do anything."

The royal ministers and royal adviser shook their head disbelief. If that is true, who is the mastermind of all these events? Is it true that she was one of the king's daughters? And what does the water turn black it? What does it mean there is only one shower destroyed, while six others suffered only cracks? So what to do with the Gosho? Kyoto?

All of the explanations from shamans were make them weary. Without thinking much, the exclusive ceremony again performed with intensity more often. The whole point of the palace is given an antidote spells evil exorcist. The temples are heavily guarded, a crowded prayers sending prayers to heaven salvation always decorated.

Other side. Slander is now engulfing the majority of the palace and has penetrated to the outside. Since the incident in the library yesterday, Yuki instantly became the talk of everyone. Sayaka paid peoples to spread some news, false news about Yuki. Today was mostly friends Yuki, nobles and colleagues began coming to court to ensure the rumor. Some looked from backbiting. Her sisters, they bite believe they saw the incident in the library, they hit the confusion.


(In the waiting room, Shodaibunoma)

"I wasn’t sure with all this, but what we saw was..."Rena said listlessly.

"It has been more than enough."Said Sayaka. Her mouth chew food again, her face showed calmness and indifference.

"Until now, Yuki was still reluctant to talk about it. She thought that it was useless."Atsuko said quietly.

"Where is she now?"

"I haven’t seen Yuki this morning."

"Which is it...?"Kojima said, clutching her forehead like a headache.

"Everyone's talking about it. I'm not comfortable hearing it, not necessarily like that. Do you believe Yuki did that?"Yui said.

No one answered it.

"Things like this are very difficult to making something more clear or easy to understand..."Rena finished her word, she turned towards the back. All turned towards someone who comes from the south.

Minegishi ran in quickly. His face looked very worried, he stopped and bent down for a moment to take a breath of air and soothing.

"You have to see! Jun! Something bad happens to him."Said Minegishi, his breathing still slightly pants. Rena who heard it, got up and grabbed both shoulders Minegishi.

"Tell me. What happened with Jun!"Rena said. Her face turned pale. Her eyes widened with worry.

"I couldn’t explain here Rena. Come with me you all."Minegishi said. He saw Rena's eyes to make sure something, and then he turned and walked quickly to the north, all girls moved and followed him. Except Sayaka, she chose to return to her room.

They trot out of the Kenshun-mon gate. The carts already wait in front of him. Minegishi had prepared since morning to take them to where Jun was. They traveled for an hour. The carts stopped at a cottage, a nursing home in the west.

Minegishi was running at front, leading the girls to a Jun room. They passed through many hallways and quiet rooms. A nurse who saw Minegishi, immediately opened the door. They immediately burst. Rena was shocked found her fiance lying helpless, with a body bandaged in almost all parts of the body. Tears fell fast down her cheeks. She ran quickly towards Jun.

"Jun! Jun!"Rena shook Jun shoulder. Yuko who had just come into the room greeted them with a few explanations.

"Someone found him lying in front of the gate, full of sores on the head, abdomen and legs. The soldiers immediately took over."Yuko said briefly.

Atsuko, Kojima, Minegishi and Yui approached slowly. They very shocked to see the state of Jun who was seriously injured.

"Until now he has not been awake. He lost a lot of blood. I'm afraid it did not go as we expect."Yuko continued. Rena cries increasingly become.

"Who... did this! "Said Rena. Her voice full of sorrow quietly. Her heart was deeply hurt. Sisters approached, Atsuko hugged her. Rena sobbing, she did not accept what happened with Jun.

"Someone tried to kill him slowly. Lucky, a soldier found him in time."Yuko said.


Evening.

Kai, Rino and Tomomi followed the entourage to Jun. They brought the same, bad news. All gathered in one of the breaks. Rena still hold sad sob. Atsuko kept her calm. The servant was busy here and there to give news of state Jun who is still in the same condition.

"We brought more bad news."Rino said serious.

"Sacred fountain became increasingly messy. The six had cracks, and the voices sounded again. "Kai explained in a tone a little tense. All was silent disbelief.

"The evil spirit has transformed into black water. A shaman told to father, that all of this has to do with either of us, sister!"Tomomi said. Her face showed fear.

"Us???"Said Kojima, panic. Yuko took Kojima hand and held her tightly. Kojima smiled a little, frightened over her. She leaned her head against to shoulder Yuko.

"Actually, one of us..."

“Yuki...”


(In Sayaka room, Otsunegoten)

"She's too perfect, but this time. See, the way this is going to overthrow it. Just wait, how far she is survived by all of this. What if all people don’t believe her and no one helped her."Sae smiled slyly.

"You're right. She will feel alone and useless. So we don’t need to be tired of the act, she herself would resign."Sayaka said, satisfied.

"Exactly!"Sae said as he hugged Sayaka and kissed her forehead.

"Wait, what about your people? Are they gone?"

"You take it. Currently they are in a place that is not possible they will leave. The soldiers will not find them."

"Well. Now, just one more step to make all of this to be perfect. And soon, the power will be in my hands."Sayaka smiled. Sae hugged her again.

"You're a genius perfect!"They kissed each other.


Night.

In an old shack that simple in a remote jungle area south of Kyoto. Inside was an old witch who sits in front of the furnace flame while stirring something on the stove black. Put some foreign spice into it. Then she inserts a few small pieces of wood to enlarge the fire. Smokes are visible from outside of her shack. Two people wearing black robes and black hoods come close to the shack from the front. Their faces were covered with black cloth, and only their eyes visible. They were seen speeding footsteps.

The sky was getting dark. The thunder grew louder. Black clouds had gathered ready to spill water into the earth. Owl voice heard in the darkness. There’s strange swishing from the sound of wind on the sidelines of grasses. The trees are being looked grim for the wind grew louder and make their branches swaying erratically.

The old witch put a spoon, a quick walk to the door and opened it. Two people who have been right in front of her direct entry. The house has only one room wide. Witch had invited them to sit.

"You old woman, your time is up. Where my orders? "The hooded woman said in rude.

"You young people with bad. No wonder you book this deadly concoction."The old woman was fierce.

"Dare you said that! Shut up! I don’t need your talk!"She said sharply. Her forehead frowns unhappy. The old women shook her head.

"Don’t fuss you both. You old witch, immediately wrap that, we do not plan on staying in this ugly shack.”The man broke it up.

"And keep, send spells!"Hooded woman was raising her voice.

The old witch sighed, hurrying to package herb and container containing the powder kind of scrub. She quickened her movements, because it wants the two hooded to get out of her shack. One bag contain of gold given to the old witch. Once completed, the two hooded went.

"Grandma, do you believe gives them the potion?"A girl asked, she came and stood behind the old witch.

"The potion has many powers of evil spirits. It was very fun to work with people like them. They're doing something bad there."

"What your reason grandma, gave it to them?"

"They pay high. What you don’t want to buy nice clothes like the lady? And should you be one of them. "Old woman said in a high voice. The girl smiled, hugged her grandma.

At palace.
Hooded woman was taking the herb bundle and powder from her pocket. Then she poured the liquid ingredients into a one of princess bathtub. And replace the powder on the side of the tub with powder made carries. She sat down and read a spell. The voice replied forest owls in odd reply. The trees were no less noisy, welcoming them as a creature from the black and dark underground.

"Feel this, my impudent sister! (chuckling) "She smirked spooky.


Three days later.

Once out of the shower and pack, Yuki rushed out of the room. Down the stairs quickly and ran toward the main hall. Her sisters were waiting in the hall an hour ago. Today they will go to the nursing home to visit Jun. Yuki told to her sisters, she still prepared something. She will come later. They quickly went without Yuki. Rena who had been there, since that days, she never left her Jun alone. She continues to care for Jun, every time there beside him. Feeding, changing bandages, blanket. June has been aware since yesterday. But he still could not fall out of bed.

"Rena... just get back to the palace. I wasn’t in big trouble here..."Jun said. Rena put a bowl of fruit.

"Why do you say that?"

"I don’t want you to take care of fatigue ..."

"You think I'm tired? Do you think I need a break? Seeing you like this, even I'm not able to sleep!"Rena began to cry. June surprised, he did not know the words hurt Rena.

"Rena ..."

"What you don’t know...I feel..." Rena sobbed. Jun move his body, he pulled Rena hand, and hugged her tightly. Rena replied.

"Rena ..."Jun closed his eyes. He forgot about his back pain.

“Please...don’t say like that again. I’ll never leave you alone.”Rena gently touched Jun cheek. Jun smiled soft.

Jun thrust his face into Rena. He stroked Rena cheek gently, he touched Rena red lips. Rena felt something rustling in her body. Both were closer together. A moment later, Rena felt a soft touch on her lips. Jun closed his eyes. His lips softly stick on Rena lips. A kiss that was very warm. Rena did not realize, her cheeks wet. She just let her Jun kissed her.

Minegishi who lead the others entered the room first. He saw Jun and Rena.

“Oh my...should I close the door for a while?”Minegishi said. He stand back, take step backward and closed the door slow.

“Minegishi, what are you doing?”Kai said. “Open the door. We must see Jun right now.”

“Wa-wait...take a minute...easy, easy...”Minegishi grinned.

“Hey, Come on...don’t play, this is not right time to play.”Yuko said.

“Hhh-ok, ok...just get in.”Minegishi opened the door. Jun and Rena smiled to all of them.

"Sister..." Kojima was slowly approaching Rena. Rena hugged Kojima.

"Jun? Jun?"

"Minegishi, take it down. You're too excited. Look, he's still exhausted..."Rino said. Minegishi smiled, nodded.

"Oh my god. You should carefully about this, ok?"Rena made closer her head to Minegishi. Minegishi smiled. Tomomi knocked Minegishi forehead.

“Auch...honey, what?”

“Be nice today.”Tomomi glanced. Minegishi pulled Tomomi hand. He said he want to talk later. Tomomi nodded and knocked his head again.

After checked Jun and got some information from the healer. They went to the room. Rena told to all to gather in the dining room. The servants had prepared dinner for them. All went to the dining room. Rena did not go with them, she was accompanied Jun in the room.

“Rena, could you take me some food? I’m hungry now.”Said Jun.

“What do you want? There’s many delicious food in the dining room right now. I have to take it quick, before Yuko and others devastate all.”

“(laughs) ok, ok, just go there. Yuko...how many he eats, he never be giant.”Jun laughed. Rena saw it, she happy saw Jun like that. She kissed Jun cheeks. Jun blushed.

“Wait here.”Rena winked.


(In the dining room)

“Yuko...don’t push yourself like that.”Kojima take some plates in front Yuko. She took the plates of food away from him. She asked some servant to keep it. Seeing that, Yuko could only stare. He put a face pleading to Kojima. He hopes to continue to eat these tasty foods.

“Kojima, why you not let him...Look, he was sad.”Yui pointed Yuko who drop his face on table.

“(sigh) ok...”Kojima pulled Yuko hand. She walked away from the table. Yuko bit shocked. They went out of the room.

“Oh yes, she began again. (laughs) lucky Yuko...”Kai said.

“What you mean?”Atsuko asked. She nudged Kai.

“Auch...(laughs)...”Kai smiled, he let Atsuko hit him a bit.

“Kojima has said that she’ll not let Yuko full whenever. And so ...”Minegishi winked to Kai. They laughed.

“Don’t think about it. Man...”Tomomi took some piece of apples. Atsuko confused.


(Out room)

Yuko and Kojima sat in the bench near small garden. Kojima look at the sky. She was a breath of air slowly.

“Kojima...”Yuko said soft. He bring closer to Kojima.

“What?”Kojima glanced cold.

“Eh, you...angry with me?”

“No. I just...tired.”

“For what?”

“All...of this.”

Yuko pulled Kojima shoulder, Kojima landing her head to him. Kojima put her hand around Yuko waist. Yuko stroked her hair softly.

“What will happen next to us...”

“I don’t know...”

“Eh? So, what do you know...?”

“I just know. I’ll always here for you. No matter what. So I could protect you.”

“My Yuko...”

Kojima rise. She looked deep into Yuko. Yuko felt his body heat up. He refrained from Kojima eyes make his heartbeat faster. His eyes turned to view Kojima full lips and thick. Kojima grabbed Yuko’s shirt quickly into her. She awarded a touch of hot lips and thrilling. Yuko began to feel the sweat flowing body quickly, as soon as his heartbeat. He put his hand on Kojima back, pulled her closer. Kojima holds Yuko shoulders tightly. They were throwing hot kisses. Kojima released.

“Promise me. You’ll always...”

“Don’t say again.”

(Back, to the dining room)

“Kai! Don’t play your hand like that right now.”Atsuko glanced sharp.

“Wh-what? I’m not.”Kai shocked, released his hand from Atsuko.

Minegishi and Rino laughed. Yui smiled and keep drinking. Tomomi knocked Minegishi again. Minegishi stopped laugh. Rena came and joined them. She ordered a servant to prepare the foods. Yuko entered the room while Kojima still clung at him. Kai approached Yuko, gave him a bunch of little punch on his stomach. Yuko yell bit and laughed. Atsuko still confused saw it.

~Meanwhile~

Jun heard footsteps enter the room. He opened his eyes quickly. He saw a woman smiling at him in the corner.

“Yu-Yuki...”

June looks struggled to open his eyes. His mouth moved, like to say something. His eyes look towards Yuki. Yuki who saw it, smiled, and shook her head. Jun just opened his eyes and has not issued a single word. Yuki bring closer to Jun.

"Brother... Right now, the most important is healing you. Don’t think about me. I'm fine..."Yuki smiled. "I'd love to see my sister not sad...right?"

Jun began to shed tears slowly. He moved his head. Yuki said several words which make Jun surprised. She immediately excused herself, she went out of the room quickly, preventing Jun to talk more. Jun in a half rose, trying to get out of bed to catch Yuki. Rena came from distance, saw it, immediately shouted, and sent him back to bed. Jun shook his head, holding Rena’s.

"Jun! What happen... "

"Yu-Yu, Yu..."

"Jun..."

"...”Jun sighed, his head became sick again. He resigned, remembered what Yuki said and chose according to her.

Rena stared blankly Jun. Kai and the others entered and approached. They stared at each other did not understand what happen too. Jun corrected his position. He closed his eyes, he felt useless. There was a feeling of regret. He could not talk the truth to others. Kai and Minegishi smiled at Jun, he replied. They brought some fruits for him. Nobody knew the feeling. Then he saw Rena, who laughed in playing with her sisters.

“This is what Yuki mean? But, how about herself...?”Jun thought. He wiped his tears.

It was getting dark, Kai and the others went back to the palace. Rena told to others if Yuki already had gone first since this afternoon. They entered their respective carts. The air gets colder. Thick fog from the mountains down the hill, and decorate the roads and borders.


(In Yuki room, Otsunegoten)

Yuki saw her face in the mirror. She felt there was something strange about her face. Longer she looked at the mirror, suddenly and rapidly emerging black spots that began to widen in the forehead and cheeks. She was startled, scratched softly, but black spots widened. Within fifteen seconds, Yuki's face had turned the color becomes darker. Yuki panic, she took a powder and applied it to face.

Before going to bed, Yuki started to feel itch all over her body. She tried applying powder to her body, but it’s no use. Instead, the itching grew even worse. She didn’t want to scratch it, but she just couldn’t help it. There were scratch mark all over Yuki’s body.



Aah, hope you enjoy...let me caught the bricks, if you throw to my head   :catglare: *crazy*

Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 6 – The Expelled ( II )
Post by: Yuki88 on February 24, 2013, 07:04:57 PM
Omg, Yuki becoming ugly and cursed? And maybe she has to go on a journey to find someone loves her... oh wait I read too many fairytales "orz

Thanks for the update!
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 6 – The Expelled ( II )
Post by: Chanaline on February 24, 2013, 08:59:07 PM
What are you doing with Yuki Young Sun J-san??

What Yuki said to Jun?! I want to know! It seems that it is something important!!

Yuki! Yuki! :banghead:

So it have more one parts?? and Then Mayu can appear after... Ya Hurry Mayu Yuki needs you!

You kill me with your story... But I love this story... Am I M??

Thank you for this update!!
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 6 – The Expelled ( II )
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on February 24, 2013, 11:36:12 PM
saeyaka couple you are going down!! just wait til mayu comes :angry: :angry: :angry:
awww wmatsui sweet as ever, porr rena worried about jun a lot  :heart: but also poor jun wants to help yuki :cry:
yuki has marks on her, dont tell me shes sick!!  :cry: :cry:
the witch is interesting  :)
thanx for the update  :yep: :cow: :bow: :deco:
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 6 – The Expelled ( II )
Post by: ChuuuPuffss on February 25, 2013, 03:51:24 AM
What the hell...

I have no words. I'm just confused on what's happening to Yuki.

And what's the relation to Mayu with all these problems?

Update soon~  :deco:
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 6 – The Expelled ( II )
Post by: cisda83 on February 25, 2013, 09:04:53 AM
Ah... Jun is alright... which is good... but he can't tell the truth about Yuki...

Poor Yuki... everyone thought she was at fault for everything that happen in the kingdom and world... soon enough

Eh... the scaring and blacken of Yuki is because of the potion that Sayaka asked from the old lady...

Such a bad sister.... Sayaka is...

What's going to happen to Yuki with the seventh fountain is the one that pouring black water?

Who is going to help Yuki... clear her name...?

What about the other sisters... their fountains also cracked?

Can't wait to find out what's going to happen next

Thank you for the update

 :wub: :inlove: :heart: :love:
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 6 – The Expelled ( II )
Post by: Pwety on February 25, 2013, 03:26:53 PM
NNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOooo! Yukirin!!

What it is with that fanfic!! poor Yukirin!! Sayaka and Sae you're bad! Bad!!

Mayu must appear!!
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 6 – The Expelled ( II )
Post by: DC2805 on February 25, 2013, 03:55:29 PM
This is getting eerie! Witch craft and stuff... Yuki is suffering in silence...poor thing....
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 6 – The Expelled ( II )
Post by: sakura_drop_ on February 27, 2013, 03:27:44 PM
isn't Mayu that girl with the witch? but maybe no, if Mayu is a boy in this story... Yuki, hang in there!!!!

wMatsui~  :wub: :wub: :inlove: :inlove: KojiYuu  :deco:
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 6 – The Expelled ( II )
Post by: Elo on March 08, 2013, 12:28:49 PM
I cant wait to know what will happen next to yukiii  :D :twothumbs

please mayu where are you she needs your help  :cry:


please update soon :bow:
Title: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 6 – The Expelled (III) Oh NO!!
Post by: Young Sun J on March 23, 2013, 06:54:23 PM
Hello everyone  :) off day. Still could not believe I'm updating this long part, which was like I broke it in half. But when I re-read before posting this, hey hey it turns out I already promised to someone  :tntrm: (Chanaline-san) so I continued to write until the end, until my fingers bloated  :w00t: lol ~

@Yuki88           :  you read a fairy tale from me  ;) now your pocket full of tales~thank ya...
@Chanaline       : Eeh? not me, not meee...the old witch who did  :( Jun keep it dunno why. Sure, I already promised to ya... Gasp! I’m so nervous you love me this story  :nervous thank you...
@mayuki_daisuki : eehahaha XD I actually own very impatient to bring Mayu here...Yuki not sick. Oh my...you are interested in the witch had  :shocked she wicked ya know...thanks back... :deco:
@Chuuupuffss   : you can shoot “bang! bang! bang!” me now... :? (wait, I wear my helmet first) keep hugging  :deco:
@cisda83          : some of your questions, here the answer...so thankyou back...  :wub:  :heart:
@Pwety            : Eeeh, your voice to be heard here...I got derailed here~ XD (better I run now) This fic is...Aaargh hmmm  :huhuh
@DC2805         : Yes you right, it is uncomfortable when forced to be silent when the pain... :cry:
@sakura_drop   : sakura-san! You here...you said you won’t be here until Mayu come...umm you miss me? yes :love: hehehe... My first work fiction is danso Mayuyu base on how she love danso just \^_^/
@Elo                 : please wait again...Mayu so meaannn... :love:

Well, are you ready to accept a little surprise? Come here, I present you the last part of the expelled. Arigatou gozaimaz!




The Expelled (III) Oh NO!!



"Oh NO! (queen reaction!) What happened to my face? "Yuki rubbed quickly her forehead and cheeks. "What is this? What is this...I hope this is just a dream... "Yuki continue wiped her face with shirt. Her eyes blinked rapidly, she was very worried and a little nervous about the look on her face that has begun to change colour. "(Sigh)... I'm going to shower. Maybe water will dissolve it. "

Yuki took clothes and went into her private bathroom. She stepped into a tub full of water, sank her body into water. The water was cold. Her eyes were closed, while hands were busy playing water, making small ripples and play. She took a powder scrub next to the tub.

"This body powder scrub ... it's been three days I use it, but ... I forgot when and where I got it."Yuki twirling where scrub it. "I'll use again, maybe this scrub will remove black spots on my face and get back to normal."

Yuki opened the lid, take out all scrubs until exhausted, and spread throughout her body.  Rain came down with swift and loud sound thunderbolt several times. Yuki rushed back to room, as the air becomes colder. She looked at mirror again, ensuring her state. She sighed softly, then rose from chair and lay down on bed. She start worried but deny it and hope it was nothing.

Midnight.

~
Yuki's pov

My body was shivering. I felt the unusually cold air... but in my body, it feels like a burning, like my skin is peeling slowly, bit by bit. The pain and itching all over my body and become increasingly painful-so. Like a bullet bombarded from all directions. Sick... sick once. I still could breathe, I can still move, but the heat that I felt made my heart almost stop. My legs, my hands were shaking violently. I can’t stand last long. I... I... if I'm going to die?

Yuki was great writhing in pain. She woke up from sleep, set the breath. Stood and looked around. Her eyes blinked slowly, looking down, realizing that her vision blurred, her body is very weak still fell pain. She staggered, with a body that does not stand up straight. She approached mirror, trying to look back at herself in the mirror. Vaguely, she could not see her face clearly in the mirror. She wiped her eyes slowly, and looked into mirror again.

Still not clear, she wiped the glass with layer of clothes. Her eyes narrowed, she lead at the midpoint of the mirror. Slowly, she caught a foreign-looking girl in the mirror. She shook her head to determine who the girl in the mirror. Looking back as she leaned close to the mirror, until her pretty nose touched the glass. Her eyes stared without blinking. Her face became rigid.

"EE-eee-HH, Wh-who ... are ... you ...?"Yuki in pretty shock. Her eyes slowly closed, her body fell limp.

Yuki fell. Her body was thrown back quickly. Her head hit the edge of table behind her. Yuki sprawled on the floor. Her long black hair covered most of her face. Her eyes were closed. The wind coming from window is still open. It makes the hair gently moving backwards, so that her face looks. No. Her face did not look. Black spot block on the forehead and cheeks have disappeared, indeed, has disappeared. That is because Yuki's skin has changed colour as the same colour with that spot block.

Black cloud clustered in the sky, began to spread. They disappear. The sky remains the moon, which is almost a full round. The moonlight came into Yuki room, shining directly on to Yuki face. Unfamiliar faces. The wind blows hard to her face, many times. But still nothing changed.
~


In the next morning.

A bird flew low, and landed on the edge of window. His head moves quickly looked around the room. Then ended up he looked towards girl sprawling on floor. The bird was flying again, away from window. After a while, the bird came with two rabbits and a squirrel were seen running toward window. They were trying hard to jump up the wall. They tried to get into the room, through the window.

After trying many times, the trio managed to reach the edge of window. Because of lack caution, a rabbit slipped and fell onto the table. Rabbits and squirrels are still sitting on the edge of window laugh. Rabbit got up, rubbing his ass. Then, he saw the girl was still unconscious. Rabbits were off the table, approached her. The two friends followed.

They walked slowly approached her. A rabbit tapped her gently on the cheek. The others look carefully. They looked at each other. Because not wake up, the squirrel looked around and took a cup sprawling on the floor. He took a cue, and threw it into forehead. Two rabbits were followed. They take the same cup to be thrown repeatedly.

"Auuuch..."The girl said. Not counting the throw. The three animals were little grimace.

The girl frowned. She holds her forehead that ached from throwing a cup. She got up slowly, she rubbed her eyes briefly. Then saw three cute animals in front of her.

"Eeh? You here? You who wake me up? (Saw three small animals in turn) Thank you ... "She smiled. Both rabbits and squirrels smiled and showed their teeth. Then wagging tail, and jumped for joy. The girl chuckled.

She stood up, walked to mirror, heat on body gone, pain caused by scratches on arms and legs missing, only her head was still a little dizzy. The steps stopped in front of mirror. She closed eyes, trying to gather courage, opened eyes slowly. She is very aware of what she saw. Her fingers gently touch the mirror. Repeatedly she gently wiped the mirror. Tears dropped slowly but sure. Her mouth trembled, her nose getting more reds. The more she shook her head, the more she could not endure the fact. She tried to smile...but she could not do that.

“So...You are...Me.”


(In the living room, Otsunegoten)

Five pretty princess ones were gathered and laid to rest. They had finished lunch in the hall with their fiance.

"You sure Yuki want to talk everything?"Said Atsuko.

"Yes. She was still in her room, she soon here."Said Tomomi.

"How about Jun and Rena then?”

“Jun told Rino, if he wanted to hurry back to the palace after night. Don’t know why."Said Yui.

"I hope he is cured. Oh yeah, what's Yuko gave you last night, Kojima? "Atsuko asked, she remembers Yuko laughing with Kai overnight.

"Ah! Sister, why ask such a question..."Kojima blushed.

"What is it? Tell me, I want to make sure he doesn’t cause trouble for you."

"It's not. Instead. He didn’t like that, don’t worry..."Kojima shy. She looked down, looked out the window. "I am who messes with Yuko." Kojima smiled getting wider.

Behind entrance, Yuki stood in long with a pounding heart. She was hesitant to meet her sisters. Her hand holding door, but did not move. She drew a breath, take a step back and lean on the wall.


(In the main yard)

The sun was beating down.

“HOO! HAA!”

“YOO! HAA! HAA!”

The voice shouts of the soldiers sounded very loud from a distance. At corners, Yama seen and controls dozens of soldiers who were practicing martial arts.

"Huu huup! Yea, you're ready to accept blows, man? Ha ha, ha! "Minegishi move his body to the right and left like boxing.

"Yoo, fighting style what it is, this isn’t a boxing martial from west. We got some...Um, kungfu maybe." Yuko avoid Minegishi.

"Hahaha. Don’t care about, I'm often doing this man. Hap! "Minegishi catch Yuko, he put his arm around the neck and pulled him to the side.

Yuko grinned, taking his left foot right Minegishi go circling motion, and pulling forward. Minegishi fell and rose. Yuko turned around with a frisky and cast Minegishi, and gave a little hit to the head. Yuko grinned and chase that raced toward Kai, Sae and Rino who has been practicing earlier. Since Jun got attacked from doer, all fiance now more actively practicing martial arts and join other soldiers. Because attackers has not known by anyone, court concerned and do anticipate that happening again incursion. Kai and Sae already had martial arts ability before. Both also often practiced with soldiers before.

"You, want to make any trouble again?"Sae pick-up chin pointing towards Yuko.

"Yoo, someone start talking about trouble."Yuko raised his hand, and threw winds in direction of Sae face.

"Son, you're inexperienced." Sae puff towards the man shorter than him.

"Dare me, uh?"Yuko pushed Sae away.

"Yea, come on! Come on! Fight! "Minegishi soared, provoking both. He stood behind Yuko and holding Yuko shoulders.

"Hey, what you doing, let me." Yuko moved his shoulders. "Oh yeah come on!"He developed a brief smile to Sae, a sign that he is ready to fight.

Sae jumped little, moving his head to the right and to the left. His hands clenched and punching the air several times.

"Wowoo wooo...What the kids doing is this? Come practice. "Kai pulled Yuko shirt.

“Yoo, let me.”Yuko turned.

"Easy man." Minegishi embrace Kai's shoulder and smiled mean. "Come Yuko, get him down!"

Without further ado, Sae hit Yuko make him fell backward. Yuko rose and pushed Sae, up both tumbled to the two soldiers who were training nearby. Yuko wobbled Sae clothes, shaking him bit sharp, then hit Sae's face very hard. Sae grinned, he wiped a few blood coming out from his nose. He cursed, he realized Yuko did that on purpose, without further ado Sae grabbed him and threw him back. Sae-up with a red face. The soldiers did not respond to them, thinking that they are exercising.

"You crazy Yuko! You dare make me bleed. You want to die? Huhh! I'll give you a lesson just like him!"

"Yeah come on! Come! who? Jun?"

"Course! who else? Useless."

"How did you know him, we were never told you about him?"Yuko asked suspiciously, he stopped and stared at Sae who stepped back.

They were face to face. Minegishi and Kai nodded. Sae shocked, he retreated to the back, face turned pale, his eyes turn towards Yuko and others, Rino pulled Sae shirt and lifted it. Sae rid Rino hand and pushed him, and left them.

"Suspicions just correct."Said Rino.

"I didn’t think he's easy stupid like that."Minegishi looked at Sae who has disappeared from view.

Kai patted Yuko. "Are you okay?"

"Do not worry, my brother." Yuko winked coquettish at Kai.

"Oh No...! I don’t need that! Son." Kai ruffled Yuko hair. Minegishi and Rino captured Yuko simultaneously. Yuko tried hard to escape from collaboration of three body of man who was laughing and hugged him tight. Yuko yelled ‘a help’ but no one heard that.


(Otsunegoten)

Yuki sliding door, stepped inside. Kojima turned.

"Oh NO!! Wh-what who... who are you?" Kojima surprised much, she stood up and retreated to the back hit Sayaka and Yui. Kojima rest on Sayaka back, Sayaka pushed Kojima away. Yui pull her layers partially wedged between Sayaka and Kojima. Go board ratcheted up the stones on the board is a mess and falling.

"Oh No! You're out of the way Kojima, you hit me! You think you cotton?"Sayaka pushed her aside. Yui moves away.

"I’m not cotton sis, I’m confectionery." Kojima said with a grin smile. Sayaka frowned.

"My god! She's Yuki! "Tomomi was shocked, she spontaneously shut her mouth, do not believe what she saw.

"Sister... it's me... "Yuki did not dare approach them. She just stood still in the middle of the entrance.

"My dear sister! What happen...? "Asked Atsuko in heavy surprised. She approached Yuki and pulled her in, until Yuki sitting in front her. Atsuko glared at Yuki, closely watching. Yui are aware of it, over and gently stroked Yuki cheek.

"Yes ... you're my youngest sister. Yuki..."

"What's happen to you Yuki?"Sayaka asked, pretending to be concerned.

Everyone was surprised and felt weird, they do not stop watching Yuki. Nothing has changed with Yuki, it's just ... her face darkening. Her hands and feet are like a scratch wound was dry. Silence. No one said anything, they freeze up. Their eyes that do not blink saw a girl in front them. The heart seemed to stop them by force.

"I don’t know, sis. Last night, my body felt very itchy. I scratched and scratched, and this is what happened, "Said Yuki.

Sayaka shook her head. She had not expected so soon, she's a bit scared with Yuki. Because a strange look. Inwardly, she was happy because the powder and spells of the witch had turned out to work perfectly.

"This is not good Yuki, this is not good ..."

Atsuko rise. She took her hand and led trot Yuki left the room.

"Sister, sister... wait."

Atsuko ignored Yuki calls. She slowed her pace, but still looking straight ahead. Yuki did not understand, and keep abreast Atsuko. In the alley way to the room where their father currently in, the palace servants and soldiers guard who saw Atsuko, shocked. They wondered who the girl behind Atsuko. Yes, they did not recognize she is.

"Sister, I don’t want to face father like this."

"Just follow me."

"Princess Atsuko, please stop and leave your friend here. And you can enter princess. "A guard stopped Atsuko. They see a girl behind Atsuko suspiciously.

"They did not know me?”Yuki thought. She bit shocked and worried.

"Get off!" Atsuko broke the guards while holding Yuki hands tightly, and made the guards confusion. They follow Atsuko from behind.

Atsuko pushed door quickly. Her father who was reading a letter sheet turned quickly toward Atsuko. Yashusi smiled at her daughter's arrival. The soldiers were trying to capture Yuki, stopped behind.

"Atsuko."

"Father. Look. "Atsuko pulled Yuki and pushed forward. Yashusi stood up from his chair. His eyes widened, his face freeze.

"You know who she is?"

"My-my ... youngest daughter ..."

"Father ..."


(In the doorway)

Yashusi king walked very fast down the aisle. Some ministers followed behind in a hurry. Yashusi gathered all royal physicians. Instructed all of them to cure Yuki and eliminate dry wounds in hands and feet, returns Yuki to normal state. All physicians bowed and saluted. They promised to cure princess Yuki. They are very confident because they have not seen Yuki. Before long, they were gathered in the living room and check on Yuki. They were surprised to see the state of youngest daughter, they had never seen a state like that before from hundreds of patients they had ever handled. Even patients who had have develop severe illness though, never this severe.

The physicians began to worry, their hearts are filled with insecurity could cure Yuki. Without further ado they took drugs and draw on equipment as soon as possible. Various kinds of medicine and natural ingredients that they made, nothing works. Yuki was taking dozens of ingredients which have no bearing at all. Some even make Yuki nausea and want to vomit.

"My goodness, behold, they tried to kill Yuki! Anyone stop this!" Said Tomomi.

"Oh NO! Yuki, hold on..."Kojima holding Tomomi hand.

"Something serious has happened to Yuki."Said Yui.

It was getting late into the night. Finally, the last three reliable physicians surrendered.

"Majesty. My lord, we are very sorry, couldn’t do anything more than this..."

"What is that words! She should be healed! Do whatever it takes!"

"Yes My lord."

These three powerful healer back to the table each and concocting new drugs, combine spices, to obtain a suitable remedy. They are assisted by all the physicians of the palace. The chamber maids back and forth from the living room to room Yuki, deliver drugs.

"Father, please stop all this. Look, Yuki wasn’t able to receive drug again...we'll find some other way, father."Atsuko begged his father.

Yuki ran out of the room and threw up most of the liquid is too much drug reactions.

"Sister, I...I’m fine." Yuki fainted.

Advisory ordered everyone to pray for healing of Yuki. All inhabitants were wondering about the state of Yuki, because they do not know exactly what current happen with their princess.

"Majesty, all physicians fatigue. They really did give up and not continue it all. They argue, princess Yuki doesn’t hurt, it's kind of... "

"Curse."

“Oh NO!!”


Next day.

All inhabitants of palace were struck by strange events that happened to princess Yuki. During the period of last night, the whole body Yuki changed color to jet black. Yuki did not know what caused that. Everyone is scared to see it. Yuki could not help herself. No one dared to approach her. They fear that if it is an illness that is contagious. Her face has changed, making the people who see it feel frightened, and began to not recognize it. Everyone was whispering.

"Who is she? Is it true that she's the daughter Yuki?"

"I don’t know, strange face. She's black. She's not a princess Yuki."

"She was a girl, got a curse, then she becomes like that."


(In the doorway, Seryioden)

"My majesty, if I may say, of what happened to Princess Yuki. She is the cause of all the strange happenings in the palace."

Yashusi stopped suddenly. He did not flinch. Her eyes look down sharply. Then, he pulled the psychic shirt, prompting him to touch the wall.

"How dare you said like that at all!"

"My lord. Don’t like this. Take control of your emotions."Said Ochano, his hand on the king's arm, and lower king arm slowly. Yashusi flashes quickly, he saw Ochano, sigh. The psychic was fixing his shirt down quickly.

"We have got conclusion of the whole incident in palace, my lord."

"I'll listen."Said Yashusi.

"There is only one shower was broken. One of the seven water fountain was broken it indicates that one of the king's daughter has done something that is not feasible, the daughter Yuki."

"The water changed color to black, the water comes from a broken shower. It means princess Yuki turn black, like the color of water."

"Strange noises are heard is the voice of the evil spirits out of the nest and threatening Gosho, the evil spirit is inside Yuki's daughter with a face that we see today."

"Sixth fountain cracked, it indicates that six other daughters are in danger, if not immediately rescued from the influence of evil spirits that come out of that place."

Everyone was silent. No one dared to say. Their eyes did not blink, they breaths seemed suspended in the middle of the road. As trapped in the ice cave increasingly narrow. King Yashusi wiped the sweat from his forehead with his sleeve. One of adviser trembled. A minister shed tears because the other was too scared and anxious. Ochano not budge, his mind roamed.

"We could not afford to continue this. We sure majesty can decide all of this."

"My lord. It is the will of heaven."

"Collect all! We must save Gosho! "Yashusi harsh ruled. Actually, his heart hurt. He could not think any longer. He would not selfish, if a thought Yuki. For him, safety of all Gosho people is important more than.


Afternoon.

(In the main room, Seiryoden)

All ministers gathered palace. They do a trial against Yuki. The king also ordered all psychic and shamans. The shamans had up to this point did not believes what they see on princess Yuki. Horrors on their faces. They had never seen anything like it before in all stories that happen to a human being, especially a princess.

Yuki entered the great hall room. Everyone has been waiting for her, including her mother who is very worried about her youngest daughter. The sounds of bustling people whispering about messing atmosphere. The king ordered them to be quiet and calm. Yuki sat with her face down limp, not knowing what will happen next. She could not think well, mixed feelings. Between the confusion, anxiety, fear, shame, and so on.

"Yuki, tell me. What have you done? "Said Yashusi. Yuki shocked, spontaneously got up from the chair.

"Father. I did not do anything."Said Yuki.

"You must have done something really awful. You've been punished by the gods! "Said Sayaka frontaly.

"Sister!"Yuki eyes widened, big surprised like hit by truck from behind.

"Yuki!!"Atsuko, Tomomi and Kojima shouted in unison. Yui holding Atsuko's shoulder, led her to sit back.

Everyone looked at each other confused. Atmosphere was abrupt tense and silent with no sound. The wind whirred softly. Muffled voices began to enter the recesses of the human heart falter.

"Nothing happens unless you've done something bad." King said in a tone rather high. His mixed feelings grew.

Yuki shook her head. "I did not do anything that would upset the gods, Father...,"She answered. She hid the fact, that her heart is very hurt to hear his father said that.

People returned to see Yuki. Some of them feel sorry. Yuki beautiful, has turned to black, sometimes they really do not get to see Yuki's face, because the dusky shadows appear around her body.

"Don’t lie anymore...You may fool us, you dodge all the allegations of events yesterday. But now look at you. God knows, Yuki. You better recognize, that God maybe forgive you immediately. "Said Sayaka with hoped her words affects the minds of all those present.

Everyone was silent. They looked at each other and whispering, some began to justify what was Sayaka said, some very confused and almost did not want to see what would happen, it was too horrible. For a moment the ministers discussed briefly, then nodded their head to justify what was Sayaka said.

The king closed his eyes for a moments, he never expected anything like this before. Remembering Yuki has been known as a good girl, not doing freakish stuff. And now, front him, the youngest daughter, pride who will be a leader of this country, inherited the throne, was turned into a terrible figure in his eyes.

"Then how can you explain what happened to your body? Black?"Said Yashusi, he very curious. He wanted to hear significant explanation from Yuki.

Yuki shook her head, her eyes showed that she really did not know what happened to her. The king frowned. Father and daughter looked at each other with a view equally surprised. They were saying something without sound. But not find anything constant in it.

Yashusi stood. "If you don’t confess, I'll banish you to the woods."He continued sharp.

GASP!

Oh NO!!

All crowd in heavy surprise. They turned towards the king with a sense of wonder and worry. They do not think the king would reveal something like that to her youngest daughter. Yuki was heavy shocked and disappointed, would not thinking anymore.

Yuki took a deep breath. "Like I said before ... I didn’t do anything wrong. And I'd rather be thrown into the woods than to confess to a deed I didn’t commit. "

The wind blew hard against her face. Making her black hair moves to back with beautiful motions.

Some ministers and royal advisers stood up together, they were very surprised to hear Yuki answer. Ochano and her mother did not believe in each other, Ochano leaned slightly forward look towards Yuki full of confusion. Sayaka got winning smile rolling very quickly. Her eyes followed the movement of her lips widened. Sayaka saw towards her fiance, Sae clutching her hands, hinting that something they did successfully. The sisters and brothers no less shocked than they reveal a rigid expression. Yuki, what do you think?

Yashusi king rose from his chair throne, his eyes glared at Yuki full of disbelief and left the great room, the court ministers and advisors followed behind. Yashusi offended, Yuki is very presumptuous for daring to fight like that. Everyone involved disband. They threw a strange look to Yuki, left her alone in the middle of room. Atsuko and others are still standing in the corner, saw Yuki from afar.

"My god! I couldn't believe father said like that? And so it is with Yuki. They really like. "Said Atsuko. She looked at Yuki confusion.

"Yes. Your father is difficult to predict. Just like Yuki."Said Kai.

"So she is..."Kojima want to close Yuki, suddenly stopped. Tomomi pulled her hand back.

"It's all clear now ...You still not trust me?"Said Sayaka quietly.

"Looks like Sayaka's right, I was very upset by this." Yui nodded.

"The shamans and psychic has revealed everything, Yuki couldn’t help anymore, unfortunately all this happened."Said Rino.

"Come on guys. Let's get out of here. "Kai and Atsuko went first.

"We wait for the next decision."Said Tomomi.

Everyone is going to leave Yuki alone. No one does it feel disappointed that night. Disappointment mixed with confusion. Sayaka out from the side of the door, making sure that everyone had left. She approached Yuki is still sitting in the middle of the room. Yuki bowed sluggish, move head and see Sayaka in front her. Yuki smiled softly, Sayaka responded with a mocking smile.

"How does it feel?"

"What do you mean?"

"Being the most beautiful princess, adored by men, loved by all women, liked by everyone, praised the father."

"Sister..."

"Now? Look at you. You're black! "

Yuki did not reply. She came back down and closed her eyes. Her face looked very tired. Sayaka was not releasing cynical gaze to Yuki.

"You are a difficult sister to rid."
Sayaka thought, she walked slowly around Yuki, a moment her eyes fixed on the sparkle thing hanging on Yuki belt. "Hey what's that?" Sayaka was about to take it. Yuki got up from the chair.

"Oh No! Don’t take this. Sister, go. Please don’t bother me more. I need a time. "

"(Small laugh) Well..." Sayaka turned away and left.


The next morning.

(In the main room, Seiryoden)

"You can’t do that, your honor." Said Ochano in a disappointed tone.

"What else Ochano? You remember what the shamans told us? The will of God couldn’t be avoided. Maybe this is the answer to all of these events occurred in recent times. "King insisted.

"Indeed! I don’t believe that shamans."Ochano thought.

"Ochano. We have taken a decision. As long as you know, we do all the calculations based on the natural and instructions from sky. The elders also couldn’t say anything. All this clearly suggested that she should go."A representative from court officer was supporting Yashusi.

"This is the only way. If do this Gosho survived. Do you remember? Yuki herself who asked to be throws into the woods."

"... (Sigh) ... Well if so, I'll follow."Said Ochano quietly. He realized could not do anything for now. "I really hope this is all a mistake. A very very A Damn Big mistake... "

After a long and violent discussion with his advisor, Yashusi king ordered Yuki to be moved to the woods. Yuki was very sad, but she could not do anything to defy her father’s order.

The royal guards keep Atsuko, Kojima, Tomomi, Yui, and Sayaka to not get out of the building in order to meet Yuki. Kai came along with Rino slip in, to see them from the back of the building and get them to go to the Jomei-mon gate. Yuko and the others were waiting at the gate. Actually they are already banned, but they are still forced. The daughter ran fast. Kojima saw Yuko, straight up and hugged him.

Yuki looks was walking alone, accompanied by bodyguards in tow. Her face was not clearly visible, transparent hood covering her face. Her sisters and brothers saw her from afar. Sae took Sayaka hand. He guided her fiancee to behind. They walked to the back, and began to move away from them all.

"Yuki, Yuki, why are you doing this?"

"I still couldn’t believe it, actually... I don’t want to believe it."

"I feel there is something odd. It bothers me."

"Me too, saw that cart, I couldn’t even think clearly. I mean, it’s...hurt."

"Oh No, no, no... I don’t want to end up like this! I never imagined we lost her this way..."

"Is it really like this??? End of story, our dearest in the Gosho palace."

The wind was blowing breeze from mountains to the palace. Sunny afternoon, but not for heart is overwhelmed with anxiety. Winds bring all news and goods, stay away from people who are complacent. The birds flew low marks in mourning. Lovely gardens in the corners of palace was deserted, inhabitants hide behind doors, to inform them that their grief and mourn the departure of someone.

The ox carts start running slowly out of the Kenrei-mon gate. The servants and guards witnessed it at each other strangely. All who witnessed the departure of a girl figure in the cart, feeling the same thing, that sense of loss? As there were missing. Someone had left it all. But who? Who is that?


Midnight.

The Journey to eastern woods takes all day. They had to pass through town from the palace first. Currently, carts are still half way to town. Sayaka and Sae who secretly followed the carts from behind, they fell out of hiding and stop the carts in front of it.

"Stop all of you!" Sae shouted commanding soldiers guarding the carts.

"What? Master, Princess Sayaka? Why you here? "The soldier shocked.

"Put her down."Said Sayaka ruled.

"Bu-but, these midnight. And we haven’t got to the east."Soldier said.

"If you not allow, I make sure the palace wouldn’t see you tomorrow."Sayaka was threatening, Sae move forward getting drew his sword towards. The soldier's eyes widened and straight down quickly, other soldiers walked toward the herd.

Fearful, the soldier ordered guards to lower Yuki on the way, and intend to leave her alone. Sayaka and Sae smiled delightedly. Yuki came out and saw her sister. Her eyes stared endlessly sad to Sayaka. In Yuki's mind, she does not believe on what her sister did to her. She does not want and will never believe it, but now, how did Sayaka treat her for real. There is no sense of affection of a sister she could feel from Sayaka, no. Yuki realized that Sayaka think of it as opposite, not sister, family?

"Now, give me that sparkling thing. Give me!"Sayaka draw Yuki clothes and searched the belt.

"Oh No, sister! No!!"Yuki fend very hard Sayaka hand and pushed it away spontaneous.

"Oh yes! How dare you! You're hurting me! Now, give meee!"

"Sister, you may, you could take everything from me, but not for this one!" Yuki hid her sparkling thing behind her shirt and hugged it tightly.

Sayaka grumbled, she was very interested in it. She did not even know why, since she saw at first time with that sparkling, so heavy wanted to have it. Sayaka trying to win it again, Yuki turned around and avoid Sayaka.

“Oh no...”Sae just shook his head, sighed at the two sisters were wrestling.

With annoyance and not managed to get it, Sayaka walked into the cart, fuming. Yuki breathe relieved. A voice makes Yuki shock.

"Yuki, Yuki. See you dare reject me, now...I'm sure all people reject you. No one wants a girl look like that. Do you understand now? (small laugh)..."Sae widened his eyes. He walked follows Sayaka from behind, boarding the cart in tow.

Yuki did not look back. Her heart was pounding.

Entourage soldiers, Sayaka and Sae have walked away, leaving Yuki alone without any light. The carts began to disappear in the darkness of night. Sounds legs ox was not heard from again, the sound of crickets and owls are now beginning to be heard faintly. Yuki was still standing in middle of road. Her body was limp, she fell limp. Her knees hit the ground hard. Her hair hung forward over her face from side. Her hands touched ground. Yuki uniting her hands, closed eyes and started to say something, prayed. The atmosphere was really quiet and spooky.

Slowly, light was emerging from behind leaves of trees around road. Black clouds which had been over the moon, is now moving away and showed in an almost spherical. No disturbing noise. When Yuki opened eyes, she found small path. The road just looks dim, but visible. She felt moon lighting gave intentionally so she could walk right direction. Momentarily closed eyes again, Yuki tries to remove her fear, began to take steps and leave that place, ran track path. A self she runs in the dark of night. Run, run and run without knowing where she has to stop. It was cold, quiet, and lonely.


(In Soldier lodge, Backyard)

"Oh NO! How dare you all do that to princess Yuki?"Ochano said to the chairman of soldiers who served to bring Yuki.

"Master. I'm really sorry. I realized I’m in big trouble with this. Princess Sayaka ordered it. We couldn’t deny."

Ochano eyes widen, he hard to believe even know for sure what happened. He knew Sayaka does all that. He did not blame the soldiers and guards. Without thinking, Ochano prepare to move out of the palace after Yuki. He did not allow anyone to follow.

While in the world or Kyoto Gosho, happening events the youngest daughter was expulsion and exile into the woods, there are events taking place in another world too.

* * *

Yuki stumbled and fell. The sparkle thing was thrown out from pocket. Yuki murmured, picked it quick. She cleared it with layers shirt. She brushed and blows many. It was started emitting whitish glow blue light flashing alternately and very beautiful. Slowly...without realizing, tears flowed like a broken down dam. It was so wet. It was so silent.

When I was just a little child
Happiness was there awhile
And from me it... it slipped one day

Happiness come back I say...
Cause if you don't come...
I've got to go looking for happiness

Say that...
Say I'm hurt...
And it's no sense
I'm hurt, I'm hurt... Deep inside

Oh hear my cry, hear my cry....

Said I'm
Don't you know I'm?
I'm hurt, hurt inside
Oh It’s hurting...Who cares...Who cares...
   




Next!! You Know Who...You know Who... Yes, someone whose name has always been said by all inhabitants in this world and bring all hopes...someone who we (especially she) have waiting for long...somewhere...far away...oh come on baby :heart:

MaYuki Dearest In The Gosho Palace (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n23HrL8Jz08#)
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 6 – The Expelled ( III ) Oh NO!!
Post by: ChuuuPuffss on March 23, 2013, 07:22:30 PM
UPDATE SOON~ OMG

Hugs~   :deco:
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 6 – The Expelled ( III ) Oh NO!!
Post by: DC2805 on March 23, 2013, 07:41:23 PM
Mayu, mayu come to the rescue, quick!
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 6 – The Expelled ( III ) Oh NO!!
Post by: Elo on March 23, 2013, 08:17:25 PM
No what happened to yukiiiii

so sad they throw her out to the woods

but one of the soldiers said the truth

what will happen ?

and YES the next chapter will be mayuki

please keep it up
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 6 – The Expelled ( III ) Oh NO!!
Post by: Chanaline on March 23, 2013, 08:48:03 PM
What did you do to Yuki? Poor her! Rejected by her family... So bad and sad... :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:
What is the things that Yuki didn't want Sayaka to take?? It is something really important for her. And her mother didn't do anything! :shocked
Ochano is so good! He wanted to go with her. What is the thing that lead her in the wood? :huhuh
Argh... Love this story even if it too bad for Yuki. Oh and last question... or not... I think I ask you this after some chapter. ;)

Don't force yourself even if I want the next update so bad! :lol:

If you want I can love you and the story... I already say that I love you didn't I?

Why are you nervous don't be!!!! :)

Mayuki! Mayuki! Mayuki! It comes! Yeahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! :w00t:
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 6 – The Expelled ( III ) Oh NO!!
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on March 23, 2013, 10:39:20 PM
i just thought the witch was really weird :nervous
yuki stop using that stupid scrub, mou :thumbdown:
i love atsuko, she's so caring and ochano :cathappy:  :heart: :yep:
no!!! they can't banish yuki!! :angry: :cry:
saeyaka!!  :shocked you won't get away with this!!! :angry1:
yes finally!! mayu's coming, i love the video, its so awsome!! :luvluv1: :luvluv1:
thanx for the update, more please  :cow: :bow:
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 6 – The Expelled ( III ) Oh NO!!
Post by: cisda83 on March 24, 2013, 05:41:09 AM
What is that.... just banish Yuki....

Ochano knew the truth now.... with the soldiers and others as the witness, he can save Yuki... and get Sayaka and Sae to confess

Also... Kai and others knew that Jun was beat up by Sae...

I think.. that would be enough to get them to save Yuki...

But Ochano just left the palace and followed Yuki out to the forest for what?

And also the other good fiances knew the truth but don't want to tell the other princesses... why?

Honestly... the other princesses believed Sayaka more than Yuki... why? How?

I guess Yuki is going to be saved by Mayu soon enough

More questions....

I can't wait to find out more...

Thank you for the update

 :heart: :love: :inlove: :wub:
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 6 – The Expelled ( III ) Oh NO!!
Post by: Chanaline on August 09, 2013, 12:29:54 AM
Are you here? I want the next :(
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 6 – The Expelled ( III ) Oh NO!!
Post by: cisda83 on August 09, 2013, 12:55:00 AM
Please update...

Can't wait to see what happen to Yuki and others

Thank you

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 6 – The Expelled ( III ) Oh NO!!
Post by: vivinardisa on September 15, 2014, 06:42:51 PM
Please continue this  :cry:

It's time for Mayu to come  :rofl:

I Will be waiting for the update  :bow:
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 6 – The Expelled ( III ) Oh NO!!
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on March 07, 2015, 01:03:37 AM
*found the trailer on youtube again and reminded me of the fic*  :err: :fainted:
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 6 – The Expelled ( III ) Oh NO!!
Post by: kuro_black29 on March 07, 2015, 11:37:05 AM
IMMA CRYING
damn sayaka and sae...ure gonna pay

Thanks for the update author san
Mayu..please come to yuki..ASAP
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 6 – The Expelled ( III ) Oh NO!!
Post by: kymkamwm48 on March 07, 2015, 11:51:00 AM
when will mayu come out? :>

i like the story so much  :heart: but... it's a gender-bend :<
guess it would have been more exciting if it wasn't a gender-bend?
but still, nice fic  :thumbup
Title: Re: Dearest In The Gosho Palace - [MAYUKI] CHAPTER 6 – The Expelled ( III ) Oh NO!!
Post by: gek geki on March 08, 2015, 12:08:17 PM
how dare!!