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Title: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl) UPDATE!! Chapter 5 08-09-2013
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on January 13, 2013, 12:57:46 AM
Mayuki fanfic, hope you like it inspired by the anime Kotoura-san (basically copying the storyline,oh well) sorry can’t think of anything, hope you guys like it, enjoy!! :)

Plot.

Mayu Watanabe is a 16 years old girl who is born with the ability to read people's minds. She has been suffering from troubles caused by her mind-reading ability and enrolls into a new high school, but tries to keep away from her classmates. Yuki kashiwagi one of her calssmates (and popular) accepts and appreciates her ability and she begins to interact with her friends with his help.

Prolouge.

As I walk, treading slowly through the cold, blank snow.
There is a dark shadow of uneasiness following me...
I know what people think of me, what they see me as.
A creepy girl, who says strange things,
I was a child who didn’t suspect anything.
But I am a zannen shoujo.

My name is Mayu Watanabe,
not that I matter...

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16 years ago...

There in a small, but noisy room, a child was born.
Smiling down upon her crying newborn, a mother gently presses her cheek against the baby’s soft skin, smiling contently with happiness, and the father sitting on the edge of the bed watching the small, fragile being, who’s crying drowns out the silence.

A couple of years later...

Peeking through a white door, there the mum sees her little beloved and walks in soundly.
“Mayu-chan..wake up..it’s time for breakfast” the mum says while trying to wake up her daughter, by nudging her shoulder.

There a sleepy Mayu wakes up, blinking a few times, rubbing her tiresome little eyes.
“mama...”
“ohayou Mayu-chan” her mum smiles.
“let’s go downstairs and find out what we’re having for breakfast shall we?”
“ahh..we’re having sweet omelette yatta!!” Mayu says happily and excited.
“heh?...well yes I guess we are” Mayu’s mum confused at first but decides to ignore it and pick up her daughter to bring her downstairs for breakfast.

At kindergarden class...

“jan-ken-pon!!” Mayu and her opponent shouts.
“yay!! I won!! Which means your it Renko-chan” Mayu celebrates.
“no fair!! Me and the others are always it...” Renko pouts.
“it’s fair Renko-chan, cuz it’s jan-ken-pon” Mayu exclaims.
“hoh...your quite good at this game aren’t you Mayu-chan, how about playing against me” Sensei challenges Mayu.
“jan-ken-pon!!” both shout.
“ehhh!! I lost” Sensei sighs,
“that was lame Sensei” one of Mayu’s classmates interupts.
“it’s easy, cuz all of you say what your going to do” Mayu tells them.
The teacher and the students suddenly are puzzled.

In elementary school...

“hey do you have anybody you like?” a girl asks.
“no of course not” another girl answers.
“boys are so immature, right Mayu-chan?” the third girl asks.
“why are you all lying?, Yuna-chan likes Izumi-kun, Naoki-chan likes Takano-kun...and...Susumu-chan also likes Izumi-kun” Mayu replies.
“wait you like Izumi-kun too?!” Yuna acuses Susumu.
“no I don’t” Susumu says panicking.
“yes you do...you liked Izumi-kun ever since he helped you when you fell down” Mayu continues.
Everybody in the room crowds round.
“yokata ne Naoki-chan, Takano-kun likes you too”
“ehh!..no I don’t...I don’t like her!!” the boy shouts.
Making Naoki cry,
“...Naoki-chan” Takano says feeling guilty.
“your so mean Mayu, you made Naoki-chan cry. From now on were not friends anymore!!” one of the girl says, heading back to her seat.
Everyone goes back to their seats.
“but...miina...” Mayu mumbles.

After school, at the Watanabe household...

“complaints from parents, children and teachers...Mayu keeps lying and hurting those around her” Mayu’s mum reads a letter.
Mayu is standing in front of her mother, quietly sobbing until finally bursting into tears.
“wahh!!...everyone hates me, they say I’m a creepy girl, who says strange things..wahh!!”
Mayu’s mum standing there started by the sudden noise coming from the little girl, until...
“ring...ring...hello? dear!! it’s me, we need to talk about Mayu!” Mayu’s mum picks up her phone.
“I told you I’ll leave her for you to handle, as that’s what the wife is expected to do..oh and I won’t be coming home for dinner, I’m gonna be late at work” Mayu’s dad hungs up.
“dear!!..dear!!” Mayu’s mum shouts at her phone.

A few days later Mayu’s mum takes Mayu to several clinics and hospitals, but they either say Mayu is perfectly normal or they have been kicked out.

Next Mayu’s mum goes to a shrine, dragging Mayu along with her.
“please help me! my child is being possessed by something!!” Mayu’s mum begs.
“I’m sorry, I’m nothing more than a simple Priest...” the old man appoligises.

Back at home...

Mayu’s mum is out in the balcony drinking some kind of alcohol beverage,
“why is only my child like this...*sip* *sip*”
Then turns her head, finding her daughter staring at her.
“don’t worry mama, papa will come home tomarrow...”
“shut up!! who’s fault do you think it is!!” Mayu’s mum shouting and threwing her glass aiming at Mayu.
She missed but Mayu stands frozen, crying.

The next day...

“Papa! you will stay home today won’t you?” Mayu runs to her father.
“gomen Mayu...I actually have to go somewhere”
“me too Mayu...I’m actually going out”
Both of the parents tell Mayu.
“Papa your going with Akiko-san to a hotel”
“And mama your going to dinner with Hayate-san...no fair!” Mayu says pouting.
“what?! who is this women?!” Mayu’s mum accusingly asks shouting at her partner.
“what I don’t know what she’s talking about? And what’s this going out for dinner with my boss?!” Mayu’s dad also accuses.
“nothing! it’s her she’s lying again..” Mayu’s mum says pointing at Mayu.
“I see..you brat!! how many lies do you need to tell before your satisfied” Mayu’s dad shouts facing towards his daughter.
Mayu looks at them confused.

At night time...
(Mayu’s dad left her and her mum)
“Not you too Miyoko, Keitaro already left your not seroius about  leaving too!”
Mayu’s grandfather questions his daughter.
“I’ve hand enough!! she’s ruined everything!!” Mayu’s mum says before turning around walking towards the door with her suitcase in hand.
“mama!! I’m sorry!..Please don’t leave me, please don’t go!! I’ll do anything, I’ll do the cleaning and the cooking” Mayu clings to her mum begging her not to go.

Suddenly Mayu’s mum pushes Mayu...*crash* Mayu lands on the floor.

“mama...” Staring shock Mayu’s eyes widen.

“I should have never gave birth to you” Mayu’s mum looks at her daughter with digust and hate.

Finally leaving, slamming the door behind her.

-fin-(for now)

Don’t know if I should continue?
Title: Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl)
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on January 13, 2013, 01:21:56 AM
OH~ My Gah~ :ptam-wub:

This is So SAAA~D! Poor Mayuyu :ptam-hbk:

I hope Yukirin will be able to win her friendship :ptam-cry:
Title: Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl)
Post by: kahem on January 13, 2013, 02:34:30 AM
Continue please but poor Mayuyu T_T
Title: Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl)
Post by: kurogumi on January 13, 2013, 03:16:50 AM
Yes please continue,the mayuki part i want read mayuki interaction

Is yuki are guy in this fic? I wondering what in yuki mind toward mayu...LOLj
Title: Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl)
Post by: alexsher99 on January 13, 2013, 03:21:05 AM
Yay another Mayuki!!!  :mon santa2: 
Mayu's an unfortunate girl?  :mon spit:  Poor Mayu :mon cry:
Anyways, the story sounds really good  :mon determined:
Please continue! :mon pray2:
Title: Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl)
Post by: Chanaline on January 13, 2013, 10:13:26 AM
Wah Another Mayuki!!!

I love the plot!! But Poor Mayu :cry:
Title: Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl)
Post by: XxRoByNxX78 on January 13, 2013, 04:14:25 PM
OMG im going to kill Mayu's parents how can they be so heartless update soon
Title: Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl)
Post by: DC2805 on January 13, 2013, 04:33:25 PM
The adults who are liars and the kids who are self-denying are all blaming on poor mayu! Not fair!  :angry:

Mayu, be brave and fight on! Hope you will meet your angel (Yuki?) soon!!!  :heart: :heart: :heart:
Title: Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl)
Post by: cisda83 on January 14, 2013, 03:38:36 AM
Oh.. I feel sorry for Mayu...

How can they do that to her... Parents, Friends... they are all very bad...

It's not that Mayu wants to have the power... she was just born with it.

But Mayu is too honest, she should have just kept it a secret instead of telling people that she knew what people are thinking.

Anyhow, it's a great fic... Thank you

I hope you continue the fic... coz' there is lots of potential in making this fic in to a long series.

 :wub: :inlove: :love: :heart:
Title: Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl)
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on January 14, 2013, 12:18:57 PM
thank you everyone :yep: :heart: :love:
it might take a bit for me to update cuz since im following the storyline of the anime kotoura-san  :( it might take a bit of time but if i get inspiration i'll make my own ideas, sorry everyone i dont really have imagination :banghead:
Title: Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl) replies
Post by: Yuki88 on January 14, 2013, 07:40:32 PM
Ahhh this is nice. I wonder if you'll include other members as support characters or cameo?  XD
Title: Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl) replies
Post by: mo-chan on January 14, 2013, 10:17:50 PM
poor Mayu she had been suffering since her childhood T.T
yeah please update I wanna see the next (T^T)
Title: Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl) replies
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on January 14, 2013, 10:52:13 PM
Im definitely adding wmatsui :heart: :yep: as supporting characters but I will have to figure out how to bring in the other pairings :sweatdrop: :nervous (sorry)
thanx for reading the fic though :P
Title: Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl) UPDATE!! Chapter 2
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on January 18, 2013, 04:12:56 PM
Heyo minna here’s the update and sorry about the wait, I forgot to include the rest of what happened in the first episode of the anime, enjoy! :P

Zannen shoujo chapter 1

Flashback...(continuing with previous events from first part)

*hic* *sob* “gomenasai...gomenasai...gomenasai...” Mayu repeats.

Next day in elementary school...

“you shouldn’t be coming here anymore, monster!” one boy says.

Mayu can see in the classroom, looks of disgust and hate in the eyes of her fellow classmates...

“you’re wrong..I’m not really...” Mayu turns round,

“she looked over here!”

“she’s gonna read your mind!” a boy with his hands on his face with a taunting expression.

(turning round again)

A fat kid says,

“that’s why your parents abandoned you!”

*staring in shock*

“uh..uh...eh” Mayu stuttering.

“monster! monster!” everyone in the room shouts,

“stop...I’m not! I’m not!”

In Junior high school, on top of the school’s roof...

“liar!” a girl shouts accusing.

“I always thought something was weird.”

“you pretend to be a friend, then you read our minds without permission and laugh at us!”

“n-no..I don’t” Mayu quietly protesting trying to reassure the girls in front of her.

“you’re horrible!”

“Never come near us again!”

“let’s go”

The other girl follows her friend,

“wait! We’re best friends aren’t we?” Mayu stops them with tears swelling in the corner of her eyes.

“sorry...I can’t” says the other girl.

(Moving on)

As Mayu walks home by herself she remembers her other times in attempts in making friends, sitting alone at break, doing p.e. without a partner and transferring to different schools after time...

Suddenly Mayu hears *a meow*

Walking towards a cardboard box, she finds a black and white kitten...

“are you alone, too?’ Mayu asks the kitten that she picked up.

“*meow*” the cat replies.

“I can’t hear anything you are saying or what’s in your mind” Mayu says smiling.

On a rainy day...

Finding the kitten gone, Mayu drops her bag of cat treats and tin food...

“are you the one who’s been feeding the cat?”

“what a nuisance”

“I took it to a shelter so don’t ever come back in again” an old woman complained and walked away.
Mayu drops her umbrella to the ground,

Mayu screams to the sky and drops down to her knees, with a tidefall of tears falling from her eyes.

(Mayu 16 now but transfers school)

“I see...so you’re transferring schools, good luck”

Teachers pov.

“finally...we’ll be rid of this troublemaker”

Flashback ends...

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Walking in the cold blank snow, Mayu’s making her way to school...

The kids on the other side talk about her,

but Mayu with no emotion keeps walking.

(introduces herself to the class)

“I’m Watanabe Mayu, nice to meet you”

Mayu walks to her seat,

New teacher’s pov.

“this one’s going to be a pain”

“sorry for being a pain” Mayu blurts out.

Other classmates pov.

“what was that? what a freak”,

“poor Kashiwagi, having to sit next to her”

Mayu’s pov.

“it’s the same no matter where”

“if only everyone would ignore me, like she is (Yuki-chan’s staring out the window) I’d be satisfied”

(Mayu reads Yuki’s mind, Mayu can see nothing but a middle of no where accept for food popping into the taller girl’s mind)

 Mayu quickly stops and looks at her, but then Yuki snaps out of her day dream...

“huh? who are you?”

“huh?” Mayu looks at startled.

(tension broke)

At class...

Yuki stares at Mayu, who’s reading a manga book.

Yuki’s staring is interrupted by a short hair girl.

“Yuki-chan!”

Yuki hears an energetic squeal of her name, knowing to who it belongs to.

“what’s up Sae-chan?”

“you know. The invitation I gave you” Sae says hoping Yuki remembers.

“oh, the invitation to go to your house?”

“Yeah, Yeah!” Sae bob’s her head up and down excited like a dog wagging it’s tail when it’s happy.

“gomen ne...I have to refuse”

“ehh?!” Sae stares in shock.

“I have to do shopping for my mum today” Yuki claps her hands together and bows her head.

“oh...it’s ok don’t worry, it’s nice you’re helping your mum out anyway” Sae replied.

Sae walks away looking gobsmacked and sighs,

Sae’s pov.

“shot down again...”

Yuki’s pov.

“she looks so disappointed. She must really want me to come, maybe I should ask her to come with me next time”

“she just wants to spend time with you”

“huh?” Yuki turns to Mayu confused.

“I heard you, so I just blurted that out”

“gomenasai” Mayu says coldly.

“you heard me?”

“wait, did I say it that loud?”

“oh god! I’m so embarrassed!” Yuki shouts giving one her big reactions.

One week later...

Mayu’s sitting at her desk some people crowd around her.

Two weeks later...
Less people crowd around her.

Three weeks later...

Eventually everyone cleared off.

Yuki has been watching her these couple of weeks,

Mayu’s found eating by herself at break, but notices a figure standing in front of her desk.

“let’s eat together, Watanabe-san” Yuki suggests while she’s holding her onigiri and melon pan.

Everybody looks at them in the class...

Yuki just takes a seat and sits down eating her lunch, til she notices and looks at Mayu’s bento.

Yuki’s pov.

“that looks so good”

“I wonder if she’d give me a bite?”

Seeing Yuki drooling and reading her mind and all, Mayu offers a Yuki one of her octopus sausages to Yuki.

“do what you want”

“maji desu ka?” Yuki looks at with bewilderment.

“wow, thanks!”

Yuki reaches for the octopus sausage.

Yuki’s pov.

“whoa, oishii”

“did Watanabe make this?” Yuki’s drooling again.

“I did” Mayu stares coldly at Yuki.

“thats awesome!, you really know what I’m thinking?”

“but keep the magic tricks to a minimum, okay?”

“if you go overboard, you’ll scare people off, and it’ll be hard to make new friends” Yuki whispers to Mayu.

“thats not of your business, and it’s not magic...” Mayu mumbles.

“ah I get the croquette!” Yuki steals a piece of Mayu’s bento.

Noticing this sudden action, Mayu complains,

“Hey! don’t just take without asking!”

Yuki just winks back.

Mayu turns her head away.

Next morning...

“ohayou, Watanabe-san” Yuki greets Mayu.

Mayu just ignores her, reading her manga.

“morning! mornin’” Yuki keeps repeating saying at different angles around Mayu.

Mayu gets annoyed, but still ignores her.

Outside, p.e. class...

Everyone has a partner but Mayu, Yuki who notices ditches her other partner and asks Mayu to be hers.

“Watanabe be my partner!” Yuki says waving her arms up and down.

“hey, Kashiwagi” Yuki’s ditched partner whines.

Mayu tries running away.

“you’re not getting away” And Yuki blocks Mayu.
Again eating lunch together,

now walking home...

“yaho! Watanabe let’s walk home together” Yuki says running to Mayu.

“I’m going this way” Mayu turns right walking away.

Yuki is walking beside her, Mayu glares at Yuki.

“I-I’m going this way, too!” Yuki explains.

“so it seems” Mayu say’s facing forward again.

“are you used to the school, yet?” Yuki asks.

“are you making friends, yet?”

“mou! come on, talk to me!” Yuki shouts.

“why are you hanging around me?” Mayu stops walking.

“what do you mean? Of course I...”

“wait, why do I?...” Yuki wonders.

“your such a baka” Mayu softly continues, smiling weakly but sighing.

“huh?”

“oh yeah, tell me what’s your secret to mind reading?”

“That’s so cool!”

“If I could read people’s minds, I do anything!” Yuki has an expression of envy on her face.

“baka” Mayu said.

“huh?” Yukis replied.

“There’s nothing cool about it”

“you idiot” Mayu says.

“hey! what do you mean by ‘idiot’?” Yuki asks irritated.

“I called you an idiot because your an idiot!”

“you don’t know anything!” Mayu shouts then runs away.

 “Watanabe!” Yuki chases Mayu.

Mayu hid behind a building...

*pant* *pant*

Mayu’s breathing heavily,

“I’ve been looking for you!”

Mayu turns around behind her surprised.

“but how d-did you?” Mayu stutters.

“I’m pretty fast at running you, know” Yuki assured her.

“leave me alone!” Mayu tried walking away, but Yuki grabbed her arm.

“why do you runaway? you have no confidence in your own heart”

“it’s getting late...I’ll walk you home” Yuki offers.

(Mayu and Yuki are waiting for the traffic lights to cross the road).

“I live alone” Mayu says with a sad tone.

“W-Watanabe-san...” Yuki takes Mayu’s hand and holds in her own, Mayu looks up and notices this. But Yuki just gives her a gentle smile.

“it’s green” Mayu says.

“oh yeah” Yuki and Mayu start crossing the road, when a lorry speeds up.
Mayu reads the driver’s mind and pushes Yuki out the way.

*beep* *beep*

“are you alright?” Mayu looks up to Yuki.

“t-that was too close” Yuki says scared and shocked.

“I read the driver’s mind, he didn’t care that the light was read” Mayu looks back to the road for a moment.

“Watanabe”

“so you see, I’m just a creepy monster who can read minds without-” Mayu’s suddenly interrupted by Yuki,

“arigatou” Yuki smiles.

Yuki looks down and finds a cut on Mayu’s knee,

“hey, you’re hurt!”

Mayu looks at the bruise,

“heh? I-it’s nothing”

“yes it is!, Is your house near by?” Yuki asks.

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At Mayu’s apartment...

“there, that’ll do it” Yuki says applying a bandage on Mayu’s knee”

“th-thanks” Mayu replies.

“so you really do live alone”

“where do your parents live?” Yuki asks.

“I can’t control my power. So ever since I was little, I was reading people’s minds without understanding, and hurting them” Mayu answers.

“Watanabe...”

“I ruined everything, the only thing I can do is make sure no one gets close to me” Mayu looks down avoiding Yuki’s gaze.

“so that’s why, even at school, you...”

“why do you try to get close to me?!” Mayu stands up asking Yuki.

“stop it! leave me alone!”

‘You’re the one who’s going to get hurt!” Mayu shouts.

“demo...is that okay with you?”

“you don’t want to hurt anyone? Don’t give me that! You’re the ones who’s hurting!” Yuki points at Mayu.

“still, there’s nothing else I can do!”

“I don’t like to be alone, either!”

“I don’t want to hurt people, or get hurt!, but what I hate the most is...is when...the people I care about leave me”

“That’s why I’m better off being alone” Mayu says covering her face with her tiny hands.

“ne, Watanabe”

Mayu looks up,

“whether you can read people’s minds or not, people who want to leave are going to leave” Yuki gives a serious stare to Mayu, then smiles.

“but not everyone is like that” Yuki says.

“so let’s try this, okay? (Yuki puts her hands on Mayu’s shouders) I will stay with you, no matter what happens, I’ll never leave. How about it?” Yuki wipes Mayu’s tears.

Mayu bursts into more tears, Yuki pats her head.

“yosh, yoshi” Yuki tries to comfort Mayu.

“ne...Watanabe, can I call you Mayu from now on, and you call me Yuki?” Yuki asks.

“un!, Yuki-san”

Both of the girls smile.

To be continued.
Title: Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl) UPDATE!! Chapter 1
Post by: Chanaline on January 18, 2013, 05:45:21 PM
Ohoh! It became more interesting!!!!
Title: Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl) UPDATE!! Chapter 1
Post by: clubhappy on January 18, 2013, 06:17:00 PM
This is good  XD I love the story here.
Thanks for updating, I'm waiting for the 2nd chapter.  :lol:
Title: Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl) UPDATE!! Chapter 1
Post by: qweakb on January 18, 2013, 07:12:37 PM
Not bad, please continue to update ASAP...haha  :thumbsup  :grin:
Title: Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl) UPDATE!! Chapter 1
Post by: kahem on January 19, 2013, 01:44:28 AM
Yuki is so gentle~
Title: Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl) UPDATE!! Chapter 1
Post by: Yuki88 on January 21, 2013, 06:43:40 AM
It's kind of cliche (outcast gets friend) but i'm interested to see where this will head. Can't wait.   :D
Title: Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl) UPDATE!! Chapter 1
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on January 21, 2013, 12:39:03 PM
thank you everyone for reading :deco:, episode 2 of kotoura-san has come out so i just need to type it up for mayuki fic after i done essays :nervous
Title: Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl) UPDATE!! Chapter 1
Post by: cisda83 on January 22, 2013, 04:03:44 PM
Getting more interesting... YukiMayu interaction is great

Thank you

Can't wait to see the next

 :wub: :inlove: :love: :heart:
Title: Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl) UPDATE!! Chapter 2
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on January 27, 2013, 05:43:05 AM
Heyo minna here’s the update and sorry about the wait episode 2 of Kotoura-san has now arrived, but please bear with me. And sorry to Saeyuki fans I feel guilty about using Sae in this chapter but I can’t think of anyone else and in the anime the rival also has short hair, but I do love Sae so I will make sure she has a happy ending, cuz also the short hair girl who resembles Sae in the anime is one of the of the main characters, like I said I’m following the anime, enjoy!  :nervous :sweatdrop: :banghead:

Early in the cold winter morning...

An alarm goes off *heavy rotation* (plays)

Getting up from bed, Mayu goes to shut her noisy alarm off.

“ohayou” she blanky says before changing out of her peached coloured pj’s.

Now dressed, wearing a cute totoro apron, Mayu cooks breakfast for herself,

*cooking omurice (that’s a Japanese omelette stuffed with rice)*

“ittadakimasu!” Mayu chews on the soft texture, finishes her meal and sets off to school...

Before leaving,

“itekimas (I’m off)” she says while looking back at her empty spacious room. She noticed she still had boxes to unpack.

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Walking to school alone, Mayu suddenly sees Yuki walking in front.

“ano...ano” she tries to call her.

“ano! good morning” Mayu says with a louder voice,

“oh, Mayu-chan good morning” Yuki greets Mayu.

Mayu forms a little smile on her face, without noticing and her cheeks turning scarlet.

“what is it? is there something on my face?” Yuki points at her face,

*blushes* “oh...no nothing wrong sorry” turning her head way Mayu walks ahead.

Yuki walks closer to Mayu’s side as they headed for school.

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Meanwhile in class...

“so what club are you thinking of joining?’ Yuki asks curiously,

“umm...I haven’t really thought about joining anything” Mayu says unsure.

While Mayu and Yuki are talking, two other girls watch them...

“why is Kahiwagi-san hanging around that weirdo?” one girl said.

“I don’t she seems to have strange taste with girls” the other girl said rolling her eyes,

all of a sudden Sae walks in and looks at Yuki who’s having a converation with Mayu.

“S-sae, don’t worry I’m sure sure’ll come to her senses soon” the girl saids nervously.

“It’s not like I care” Sae walks out of the classroom,

“ahh wait Sae!” the two girls follow Sae.

Back to Mayu and Yuki...

A girl with short black hair and bangs looks around Mayu’s classroom and goes up to her,

“excuse me, are you Watanabe-san?” the girl asks.

(They step out of the classroom to talk)

“I heard rumours that you can read minds can’t you?”

“ehh...eto...I think you’re mistaken, are you sure your not looking for other Watanabe’s” Mayu says nervously.

Yuki interupts, “You’re the only Watanabe in this year”

“Yatta! I’ve been looking for someone like you!!” the girl says hugging Mayu,

“huh?” Mayu looks at her confused.

“my name’s Matsui Jurina of the ESP research society” Jurina introduces herself,

“I’ve come to bring you to our society, Watanabe-san” Jurina said.

“ESP?” Mayu mutters while still in the hold of Jurina.

“well let’s get going” Jurina holding Mayu like a kidnapper,

“j-just a second” Yuki stops her.

“if you insist on taking Mayu, I’m coming too” Yuki said,

“alright then you’re in! the more the merrier, sa let’s go” Jurina skips along the corridor, still holding Mayu.

“ehhh!! let me go!!” Mayu protests trying to wriggle her way out of Jurina’s grip.

Meanwhile they arrive at the club’s room,

Mayu tries to make a run for it, but Jurina holds her again.

“shall we go in?” Jurina said.

Coming out from a dark corner, a pale tall walk up to them, startiling Mayu and yuki.

“ahhhh!” Mayuki scream together,

“welcome back”

“my name’s Matsui Rena, but’s just call me Rena” Rena bows.

“umm...it’s nice to meet you Rena-san, my name’s Yuki and the pig-tail girl is Mayu”

Yuki says stuttering at first,

“oh, so you’re Watanabe-san, the girl who can read minds, right? It’s nice too meet you”

Rena said.

“um...likewise” Mayu said.

"wait...Matsui are you both sisters?" Yuki asks,

"oh, no we just have the same surname" Rena says.

“Rena’s the president of the ESP society” Jurina says with her arm around Rena’s neck.

“may I run away now” Mayu looks up at Yuki,

Jurina runs to the door and locks it with big giant locks and keys.

Mayu sighs.

“welcome my new members” Jurina says excited.

“if you please just fill out this form, we can get on with club activites”

Jurina hands Mayu and Yuki some a sheet of paper each,

they both have a look at the forms and there’s one question thats asks what’s your ability.

Mayu looks at Yuki,

“you don’t have any” Mayu says coldly.

Yuki’s pov.

“why you little...do you want me to think of something dirty”

(There’s another question that says what ability do you want to learn?)

“ahh..I can answer this one!” Yuki shouts out.

“ano...what does the ESP research society do, anyway?” Mayu asks.

“I’m glad you asked, the objective of the ESP research society is to scientifically prove the existence of psychic abilities so the general population will acknowledge them, also to protect those with psychic abilities from prejudiced views” Jurina says proudly.

“um...I don’t want to really prove the existence of psychic abilities” Mayu raises her hand.

“what?” Jurina said.

Mayu looks down, Rena broke the silence.
“Jurina you’re always so impatient” Rena says staring at Jurina,

“well...it’s my first time meeting someone with psychic abilities, I guess  got a little carried away, sorry Watanabe-san” Jurina scraches the back of head.

“it’s okay...” Mayu’s still lokking down,

“but you will join the club, right?” Jurina asks with her puppy eyes.

“are you sure it’s still ok?, I can still read your mind...” Mayu says.

“no problem” Jurina reassures her.

“I’m done!” Yuki shouts holding out her form in front for everyone to see,

everybody just looks at her.

After school Mayuki are walking home toghether...

“wow! that was fun!” Mayu says smiling,

“what was fun?” Yuki asks.

“well I suddenly found all these people who aren’t afraid of my power, that’s a huge accomplishment!” Mayu replied.

“it’s my first time in a club!” Mayu said,

“yeah? that’s cool” Yuki just gives her a warm smile back.

Yuki’s pov.

“it’s a little sad that it won’t be just the two us anymore, though”

“but she looks really happy, I guess it’s all good”

Mayu blushes and turns away.

Yuki just remembered Mayu can read minds, and blushes as well,

The next day in school...
Sae goes up to Yuki,

“Y-yuki-san have you got a minute?” Sae asks.

“what’s up Sae-san?” Yuki replied,

“w-well...”

(the two girls from before are cheering on for her)

“go fight!” the other girls from a far cheer.

“I’ve got free coupons to a new CD store in the town center, want to come?” Sae said shyly,

“sorry Sae-san I’ve got a club meeting now” Yuki said.

“what? I didn’t think you were in any clubs” Sae says surprised,

“yeah, I just joined one” Yuki said.

“let’s go Mayuyu” Yuki walks out the classroom with Mayu,

Sae watches them and bites her lip,

“Mayuyu, who’s that?” Mayu asks.

“it’s your new nickname, don’t you like it?” Yuki pulls a fake sad face.

“it’s not like that...I just never had a nickname before” Mayu quietly says.

“well...from now on I’m calling you Mayuyu” Yuki said.

Mayu just blushes and looks away,

“do what you like...” Mayu mumbles, Yuki just smiles like she’s won something.

Meanwhile at the at the clubroom...

“today’s activity will be ability training” Jurina announces.

“um...excuse me, I don’t really want to train my ability” Mayu said.
“don’t worry Mayu-chan, it’s Yuki-san that will be training” Jurina replied.

(Yuki wanted to learn how to make objects fly or have x-ray vision)

Yuki thinks what it would be like to have x-ray vision...

Yuki Imagines looking through Mayu, but get’s the wrong picture and imagines Mayu naked.

(Of course Mayu can read minds, so we all know where this is going)

Yuki just turns red for a moment,

“pervert! what are you thinking about?!” Mayu starts hitting Yuki.

“ow, ow, ow!! calm down will ya? Jeez” Yuki defends herself from Mayu’s constant hits.

“hahaha!” Jurina bursts out into laughter,

“as expected from our Yuki-san”

“mou...stop it” Mayu complains.

“gomen, Mayu-chan but you’re just so fun to tease” Jurina said.

“same for me too!” Yuki says,

“mou...you’re so mean” Mayu whined.

“she’s right we should settle down, if we tease her too much and make her feel trapped...”

Jurina remembers a part of her past,

(*Image* a woman hanged herself)

Mayu looks at Jurina and looks down.

“oops...did I let you see something weird? forget you saw that okay?” Jurina looks sorry,

“h-hai” Mayu said.

Yuki stares at Mayu for a few secs,
After the club meeting...

“Jurina, back then, did you do that on purpose?” Rena asked while eating melon pan.

“so, what if I did?”

“I finally found the real deal, with her... with her power...” Jurina said.

“I will neither agree or disagree, Jurina do whatever you want” Rena continued eating her melon pan,

“ah, I intend to, and I’ll even use cheap sympathy and pity to do it” Jurina has a focused look on her face.

The next day Mayuki step out of the classroom...

“hey, Mayuyu, what about the club?” Yuki asks,

“u-uh...sorry. I’m taking today off” Mayu said.

Meanwhile at the clubroom...

“she was acting suspicious so I dragged her along” Yuki said holding Mayu,

“let me go!” Mayu’s struggling.

“sorry, it’s probably my fault. I accidentally showed her one of my memories” Jurina said.

“what did he see?” Yuki puts Mayu down,

“well...”

“don’t tell me it was something dirty?!” Yuki puts one of her big reactions.

“no, nothing like that at all” Jurina just gives Yuki ‘what the hell are you thinking?’ look.

“get your mind out of the gutter!” Mayu shouts at Yuki.

“it was nothing intereating...” Jurina said.

*Flashback* (Jurina’s past)
“My mother had a special power like Mayu-chan’s, too, she was a clairvoyant, which means ahe could see things from far away. She used it to help the police find missing people and criminals. But people started saying she was a fake right away, then, one day, when I returned home...(her mum hanged herself), so anyway, Mayu-chan ended up seeing a bit of my family’s shame.”

“but that’s ancient history, just forget it okay?” Jurina says nevously.

Mayu and Yuki both look depressed,

“so I understand why you feel uncomftable facing me, but I’d still ike if you can come here” Jurina said.

“she’s right, without you I have no fun teasing anyone” Yuki smiled.

“hey!” Mayu says annoyed.

Everyone laughs,

Meanwhile at Sae’s house (which is a Martial arts place)

People are fighting in the dojo...

Sae sneaks out of training and goes outside,

“why should a high school girl have to do something so hot and tiring?

*flashback*

Little Sae quietly sits in her seat, then suddenly a little Yuki appears,

“so your family owns a dojo?” Little Yuki asks.

“y-yeah” Little Sae says quietly.

“that’s so cool!” Yuki says.

*flashback ends*

“Yuki-san...” Sae blushes,

“hey, Mayuyu?”

Sae turns round and hears voices,

“saying it didn’t bother you was a lie, wasn’t it?” Yuki asks.

“yeah...it still really hurts”

“but I don’t know what to say to her, that’s why I tried to bail today” Mayu replies.

“and because of that, I made her say those things...” Mayu says with tears forming.

“I’m... I’m...” Mayu starts crying a bit and wipes away her tears.

“ what good does worrying about it do?” Yuki pats Mayu’s head.

“but...” Mayu says,

“if you’re going to worry, then at least  visit the clubroom, like she said, okay?” Yuki comforts Mayu.

Sae watches the walk together and overheard their conversation.

*flashback*

“you’re mum is making money as a phony psychic, right?” a voice said.

“No! my mum’s power is real!”  a little Jurina shouts.

“working as a fraudster, then committing suicide, she has disgraced her family!” another voice says.

“no!” little Jurina shouts again.

“I bet she died because of a guilty conscience!” another voice,

“no! You’re wrong! no!” Little Jurina shouts crying.

*flashback ends, (actually a nightmare)*

“no!” Jurina wakes up shouting,
(Jurina’s in the shower now)

“just wait mum, I’ll prove it to them” Jurina says.

Next day at the clubroom...

“psychic fortune telling?” Mayuki says in union.

“That’s right, we can prove the existence of psychic abilities, while spreading the name of the ESP society. We can really kill two birds with one stone at this event” Jurina said.

“Wait a second, are you planning on making Mayuyu do this?...she’s...” Yuki asked worried about Mayu,

“of course!, I’ve thought about that” Jurina winks at them,

“psychic helping hands fortune telling!” Jurina’s suddenly appearing with a cape and a crystal ball. And Mayu’s under the cape.

“huh?” Mayu appears out.

“I pretend to tell their fortunes, and Mayu-chan digs for info, and tells it to me” Jurina expains.

“you and Rena will hand out flyers” Jurina pushes them out the door.

It’s just Mayu and Jurina in the room...

“sorry for forcing you into my decision’s again”

Jurina’s pov.

“but this is all I can do for my mum...” Jurina thinks.

“eto...I will try to do my best” Mayu smiles awkwardly.

Meanwhile at the fortune telling booth...

“come! and hear your fortunes! step up!” Jurina shouts,

“I see you’re doing weird stuff again Jurina-san”

“ it looks kinda fun though” a girl says and takes a seat.

“of course!” Jurina says,

Jurina waves her hands over the crystal ball,

“now, your family... you have a younger sister right?” Jurina asks.

“um..no I don’t” the girls says, Jurina back sweat drops.

“Mayu-chan...” Jurina whispers,

Mayu peeps out from the cape,

“sorry...it’s hard to aim when I can’t see...” Mayu said.

Back to Rena and Yuki...

“the ESP society club is fortune telling by the first floor entrance”

“what’s wrong Yuki-san” Rena asks.

“I’m just worried about Mayuyu” Yuki sighs.

“I’m sure she’s fine, she has Jurina anyway” Rena replies,

Meanwhile with Jurina and Mayu...

Mayu and Jurina swap so Mayu can see and tell the fortunes correctly.

A boy comes up,

“oh you’re telling fortunes can tell mine” he asks.

“h-hai!” Mayu said.

“you have an older brother right?” Mayu asks.

“yeah, I do” the boy says.

“you’re annoyed that he’s been bringing his girlfriend home lately” Mayu said.
“u-uh yeah, he’s been showing her off non-stop” the boy looks surprised,

“If you pay him back, by returning his precious dirty magazines that you hid, luck will come your way” Mayu said.

“ehhh?! maji desuka, are you the real thing?!” the boys stands up shocked.

Mayu tells a bunch of more fortunes and the line gets bigger,

Sae and the two other girl’s watch her,

one of the girl’s say, “I think the new girl is getting a little full of herself”,

the other girl says, “is it okay to let her get away with it”

“good point” Sae replies.

Sae walks up to her,

“I like for you to tell mine”

“hai of c-course...” Mayu looks up at Sae and remembers she likes Yuki.

“I’m Miyasawa Sae, from your class, I knew it was you Watanabe-san”

“there’s actually someone I like, but this strange girl stole him from me recently” Sae smirks.

“ano...um...” Mayu looks down nervously,

Sae’a pov.

“reading minds is just creepy, did you use that totake of Yuki-san’s weaknesses?”

“I haven’t done that!” Mayu tells Sae.

“I didn’t say anything” Sae replied.

Sae’s pov again,

“you’re pretty selfish and audacious for a monster”

“don’t you realise you creep people out, you’re getting full of yourself with this club stuff, but you’re only being used, poor thing. Are you planning to make some freak show of this in the future?”

Mayu eyes widened, and tears start forming from the edges of her eyes.

“n-no...” Mayu covers her mouth,

The other girl’s pov.

Girl no.1 “why did a weirdo like her transfer here?”

Girl no.2 “poor, Yuki-san having her follow her around everywhere”

Mayu’s tears start falling out,

Sae’s pov.

“get out of here monster!”

Mayu bursts into tears and throws up.

“eww! she threw up!” a girl shouts in the crowd.

“wait!, Mayu-chan are you okay?! Mayu-chan!” Jurina shouts.

Mayu passes out.

The next day...

Mayu notices something on the chalkboard, it says “Vomitanabe!!” with a cartoon picture of Mayu throwing up.

The other girl’s and Sae giggle,

Mayu cleans the board,

Yuki walks into the classroom,

“hey, there you are, I went to your place but you weren’t there, don’t leave before I get there okay?” Yuki said.
“listen Y-yuki-san... nothing, never mind” Mayu tries to talk to Yuki,

Mayu’s also wipes her desk that had been graffittied on, and picks up her textbook fron the bin,

later in the afternoon...

“Jurina, the girl you were telling fortunes with is getting bullied!” a girl runs and tells Jurina.

“ehh?” Jurina looks at the girl confused.

At the clubroom...

“it’s my fault... it’s my fault...” Jurina repeats,

“did it bring back memories, from when you’re mother was kicked around, by people who didn’t understand?” Rena asked.

“I thought maybe you planned to prove Mayu-chan’s psychic abilities, while fully aware of that.” Rena continued.

“don’t say such nonsense, I’m sick of being reminded of that! I’m...I’m...” Jurina runs out the room.

Rena just stares at the running Jurina and smiles,

Back to Mayuki...

Everybody stares at Mayu who’s walking through the corridor,

“hey Mayuyu!!” Yuki shouts,

“lets get to the club” Yuki says.

“y-yeah” Mayu starts walking but Yuki notices something on her back,

“what is this?!” Yuki asks irrtated.

It’s a sheet of paper that says “you stink! get out of here vomitanabe!!”

Yuki scrunches up the paper and clenches her fists,

“who the hell did this?!” Yuki shouts asking Mayu.

“Y-yuki-san it doesn’t bother me, really, so let’s just go to the club, okay?” Mayu says trying to calm Yuki down.

“doesn’t bother you?! don’t give me that crap!” Yuki takes Mayu by her shoulder’s,

“but it’s true I threw up, it was my own fault...’ Mayu tells Yuki.

“why didn’t you tell me?!” Yuki says angerily,

“who was it?!” Yuki shakes Mayu,

“I’m sorry!” Mayu releases her grip from Yuki and runs away.

“Mayuyu!”

“Yuki-san!” Jurina yells.

Yuki walks into the classroom and salms the door, going up too Sae,

“yo, Sae!” Yuki says.

“oh, Yuki-san, can I help you?” Sae said.

“this is your doing? isn’t it?” Yuki shows the piece of paper to Sae,

“eto...I don’t know what you talking about?” Sae looks away.

“don’t play dumb with me! why, Sae? out of all the people?”

“it was your fortune telling when Mayu threw up, wans’t it” Yuki asked.

“s-so what if it was? are you saying it’s my fault that she threw up?” Sae said.

“yes, your mind is os filthy that it made Mayu sick” Yuki said smirking.

“what are you making me out to be the bad guy?! what she does is way worse! she peeks into people’s mind without permission! I bet she told you ‘oh, woe is me, save me!’ right?” Sae yells at Yuki,

“no, she never said anthing to me, she kept it all inside herself” Yuki explains.

Mayu is outside the classroom with Wmatsui listening to what Yuki’s saying.

Sae asks, “why?”

“why do you always take her side?!” Sae shouts,

“Because I like her! (as in like like) got a problem with that?!” Yuki yells,

“Yuki-san...” Mayu starts crying and Jurina comforts her,

In the clubroom...

“hey everyone!..wait, where’s Mayuyu?” Yuki looks around the room.

“why don’t you ask the girl inside the box” Jurina says,

(a moving box appears)

Yuki sighs, “oi...Mayuyu what are you doing?” Yuki lifts up the box,

Mayu’s pov.

“damn!”

“it’s alright now Mayu, it’s over now” catching Mayu’s attention.

Mayu just shares a moment eye to eye with Yuki for a few secs (both blush), and Jurina hugs Mayu,

“Jurina...’ Mayu’s smiling,

Jurina’s pov.

“gomen...it’s my fault...”

“ano..I’m not a very dependable club member, but please be patient with me from now on” Mayu said,

“Mayu-chan... yes of course!” Jurina hugs Mayu again.

Mayu’s pov.

“I’ve had so many firsts, my firs club, my first friends real friends and...”

Yuki and Mayu smile at each other.

To be continued...
Title: Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl) UPDATE!! Chapter 2
Post by: clubhappy on January 27, 2013, 06:21:07 AM
Wow, this chapter is interesting!!  XD Yuki confessed!!  :twothumbs
Poor Jurina, she has a sad past. So I guess maybe there will be WMatsui in this fic too, right  :P
Mayuki's moment here is too sweet!  :wub:
Title: Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl) UPDATE!! Chapter 2
Post by: DC2805 on January 27, 2013, 03:02:49 PM
sae's so mean... hope she will realise her wrong doing soon!

Mayu, gambatte and fight on!
Title: Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl) UPDATE!! Chapter 2
Post by: Yuki88 on January 28, 2013, 01:58:07 PM
Why do I feel that i'm reading too much villain sae lately  :nervous

Nice update btw, but somehow i feel that it's a bit rushed  :?
Title: Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl) UPDATE!! Chapter 2
Post by: cisda83 on January 29, 2013, 01:47:13 AM
Well that was great.... Yuki is coffessing her feeling to Mayu...

Sae is being a jerk...

Jurina has a very sad past... but making used to Mayu's ability is quite wrong in every level...

It's getting interesting.... Thank you for the update.... can't wait to see the next

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl) UPDATE!! Chapter 2
Post by: alexsher99 on February 08, 2013, 03:24:48 AM
Sae's a bad girl! and I don't like the two girls that's with Sae they're bullying Mayu!   :x :banghead:
Poor Mayu  :smh
 :mon evillaff:  Yuki said she likes Mayu  :mon mischief: :mon crazyinlove: :mon inluv: :mon lovelaff: :mon bleed2:
 :mon fyeah:  I love this fic can't wait for your next update  :mon thumb:
Title: Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl) UPDATE!! Chapter 3
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on February 21, 2013, 01:43:04 AM
Zannen shoujo chapter 3. Enjoy!!  :) sorry for the really late update :bow: :bow: :nervous

The next day...

As Mayu and Yuki walk in the classroom...

*On the chalkboard, a chibi drawing of Mayu and Yuki holding hands*

“oi Yuki, look behind you!!” classmate says,

*Mayu and Yuki turn around*

Mayu and Yuki blush, but Yuki turns back and walks up to her classmates.

“what the hell is this?! And who drawed this?!” Yuki demands shouting,

“Youko-chan wanted to brush up on her artistic skills, (sarcastically) what’s the matter don’t like the drawing?” her classmate smirks.

“no! but you’re missing the heart!” Yuki draws a heart,

“that’s an important part! don’t you get it?!”

“we’re sorry!” Yuki’s classmates bow repeatedly.

“honestly, they don’t know anything, do they?” Yuki raises an eyebrow,

Yuki starts drawing more hearts,

“hauu..please just drop it...” Mayu begs Yuki.

Sae stares at them then looks away,

Meanwhile Wmatsui...

“come on Rena-chan I want a strawberry too!” Jurina whines,

“no get your own” ignoring Jurina.

“fine!...what a shame and I was gonna let you have this new chow mein flavoured melon pan...” Jurina takes out a melon pan out of her bag,
Rena turns around and snatches the melon pan out of Jurina’s hand.

“hey?!” Jurina shouts, Rena suddenly stuffs a strawberry in Jurina’s mouth, then walks ahead,

“hehe” Jurina smiles with victory.

Meanwhile Mayuki are walking in the hallway...

Yuki starts remembering when she had that argument between her and Sae, then looks at Mayu.

Mayu whose spacing out nearly bumps into someone,

“hey, be careful!” Yuki pulling Mayu closer to her, a little too close perhaps.

Mayu notices Yuki holding her hand and how short the distance between her and Yuki are,

“eh..*cough*.. hem” Mayu coughs looking at Yuki then back to their hands.

Yuki looks at their hands, *blushing, lets go* “s-sorry...” Yuki stutters,

“I’m gonna buy some bread from the school store”

“you go on to the club room, I’ll be there soon” Yuki said.

“un” Mayu replies.

Yuki heads to the school store but stops, Mayu tugs on Yuki’s edge of the blazer,

“h-hey? Mayu?”

“what?” Mayu says.

“w-well would you mind letting go?...” Yuki asks,

Mayu looks down at her hand, and pulls away immediately.

“s-sorry...” Mayu looks down shyly,

“well see ya” Yuki waves.

“what am I doing?” Mayu sighs.

Mayu heads to the clubroom, and sees Rena sitting across a table reading her little red book,

“h-hi Rena-san” Mayu sits down.

“hey Mayu” stares at Mayu then goes back to her book,

Mayu’s opv.

“this is kinda awkward, I still don’t know what kind of person Rena-san is”

Rena’s opv.

“Yuki and Jurina aren’t here, so it’s just the two of us. No one to get in the way, the room is tucked away in an old building. So not many people come by, I guess...this is my chance!” Rena (or should I say, a Gekkira like) smirk appears on her face.

Mayu’s trembling,

Rena imagines Mayu chained to a bed, “I always wanted to dissect a psychic!”.

“YADA!!” Mayu screams,

Yuki and Jurina come in,

“sup?” Yuki asks,

“sorry we’re late” Jurina says.

Mayu runs behind Yuki, shaking still,

“eh? what’s wrong with you” Yuki asks.

“hey we’ve been waiting for you, we really couldn’t wait any longer” Rena tries hard not to laugh.

Mayu’s opv.

“eh?! was he was teasing me?!” Mayu looking dumbfounded,

Yuki and Jurina just look at each other.

Meanwhile...

Everybody’s eating, Mayu’s pouting.

Rena’s opv.

“gomen...Mayu-chan I couldn’t resist”

Mayu looks at Yuki, then turns to Jurina,

Jurina smirks,

“ano ne, Yuki yesterday Mayu-chan-”

“J-Jurina-san no!” Mayu covers Jurina’s mouth with her hand.

Jurina’s opv.

“why not? it’s not like you had a problem with what Yuki said, right?” Jurina looks at Mayu,

“t-that’s not true!” Mayu exclaims.

“okay, okay, now hurry up and eat before break ends” Jurina tells Mayu,

Mayu collapses back into her seat, and looks at Yuki eating yakisoba bread.

“do you always eat stuff from the school store?” Mayu questions Yuki,

“hmm? *looks at food* yeah...my mum said I should start being more independent, but I can’t cook to save my life...hahaha” Yuki answers nervously.

“why don’t you make her a bento?” Rena said to Mayu.

“whoa!! *imagining Mayu’s cooking*” Yuki drools,

“W-well I’ll think about it...” Mayu blushes.

“really?!” Yuki shouts happy almost in tears,

“w-what’s with that rection? I haven’t decided to make it yet” Mayu replies coldly.

“now I will announce details about today’s club activities” Jurina yells,

everyone looks at her.

“today, after school, the ESP will...being singing!” Jurina says holding mic,

Mayu with what the hell? look, “ano...what does this have to do with the club?”.

“In order to complete the mission of the ESP Society, we must have a strong bond between our members!” Jurina insists,

“I guess...” Mayu mumbles.

Yuki and Rena are finding a song,

“me and Rena are going to sing Majisuka rock and roll!” Yuki shouts tying in the number into the tv.

*singing*

Tanoshii koto bakari ja nee
Sakete wa toore nee michi
Ippatsu koko de yaru shika nee jan
Puchin to nanika kireru oto ga shita
Kousha no ura yobidasarete gatagata itteru kara
Hanpa na yankii wo souji shinakya
Majisuka rokkunrooru
Dasee iki gatteru dake ja
Gan nanka tobashite tatte hajimara nee
Majisuka rokkunrooru
Chikara misetsuketai nara
Koko de taiman harouze! Shoo taimu
Kenka joutou akekurete
Muimi na koto da to wakatta
Namaiki na yatsu wo bokoboko ni shite mo
Sarani tsuyoe yatsu ga iru
Puraido wa mune no oku no yuzure nee ikikata sa
Mureteru yankii soko de maketeruze!
Majisuka rokkunrooru
Motto honki de ikiyouze!
Shinda me wo shite sunete ita tte tsumara nee ze
Majisuka rokkunrooru
Ue ni tatte mitee nara
Ai wo shinjite goran yo saigo ni...
Majisuka rokkunrooru
Dasee iki gatteru dake ja
Gan nanka tobashite tatte hajimara nee
Majisuka rokkunrooru
Chikara misetsuketai nara
Koko de taiman harouze! Shoo taimu

Jurina and Mayu clap.

“my turn, my turn!” Jurina yells,

*singing*

KISU datte hidarikiki
Watashi me wo tojite kizuita yo
Anata sukoshi hidari ue kara
Hora ne kuchibiru kasaneru
Hidarite no FOOKU de
Kiyou ni PASUTA wo maiteru
Sonna dou demo ii shigusa made
Anata ni kyunto shichau no yo
“Hoka no hito to dokoka chigau” nante
Koi wo suru daremo ga iiharu mono
KISU datte hidarikiki
Fui ni migiude wo hikarete
Kubi wo yoko ni taoshi nagara
Sotto sono toki wo matteru
KISU datte hidarikiki
Watashi me wo tojite kizuita yo
Anata sukoshi hidari ue kara
Hora ne kuchibiru kasaneru
Zutto soba ni ite
Anata wo kansatsu shitai
Subete hyoujou toka kuse toka wo
HAATO no oku ni shimaitai
“Naze watashi wo koi wo shita ka?” sore wa
Unmei no kotae to deatta kara
Kakkoii hidarikiki
Chotto mane wo shite mita kedo
Anata mitai ni dekinakatta
Motto renshuu shite miru ne
Kakkoii hidarikiki
Sou yo soredake ja nai nda
Itsumo jibun dake no SUTAIRU de
Suteki anata no PORISHII
Te wo nobashite (guuzen)
Yubisaki ga (furetara)
Futari de sou
Hitori ni naresou
KISU datte hidarikiki
Fui ni migiude wo hikarete
Kubi wo yoko ni taoshi nagara
Sotto sono toki wo matteru
KISU datte hidarikiki
Watashi me wo tojite kizuita yo
Anata sukoshi hidari ue kara
Hora ne kuchibiru kasaneru
Yume wa anata no kikiude

Everyone claps.

“Mayu-chan your turn!” Jurina passes the mic to Mayu,

“iie...I can’t really sing...” Mayu shoves the mic away.

“oh come on!” Jurina gives back the mic,

“I wanna hear Mayuyu-chan sing” Yuki gives Mayu a reassuring smile.

“f-fine!” snatches the mic from Jurina, Jurina smirks,

“h-here I go!” Mayu stutters.

*singing*

(song: k-on! my love is a stapler)

nande nan daro
ki ni naru yoru kimi he no
kono omoibinsen ni ne
kai te miru yo

moshikashite
kimagure kamo shire nai
sore nanoni maisuu dake
fuete yuku yo

suki no kakuritsu waridasu keisan shiki
areba ii no ni

KIRA KIRA hikaru negaigoto mo
GUCHA GUCHA e taru nayamigoto mo
souda HOCCHIKISU de toji chao
hajimari dake ha karui nori de
shiranai uchi ni atsuku natte
mou hari ga nanda ka toora nai
LALA mata ashita

doushiyo kana
yomi kaesu no hazukashii
are kore to binsen ni ne
kai ta kuse ni

kimochi goto
gomibako yuki ja nanda ka
kono mune ga setsunai kara
motte yo kanna

ima no kimochi wo arawasu jisho nimo nai
kotoba sagasu yo

WAKU WAKU shichau keikaku to ka
GUDA GUDA sugiru tenkai to ka
zenbu HOCCHIKISU de toji chao
kyou no dekigoto omoidashite
itsumo kokoro ga KYUN to datte
mou hari ga nai kara kawanakucha
LALA mata ashita

KIRA KIRA hikaru negaigoto mo
GUCHA GUCHA e taru nayamigoto mo
souda hocchikisu de toji chao
hajimari dake ha karui NORI de
shiranai uchi ni atsuku natte
mou hari ga nanda ka toora nai
LALA mata ashita

“wooo! Kawaii!!” Jurina cheers, Rena claps happily.

“you like K-on, Mayuyu?” Yuki asks,

“u-un!” Mayu said smiling.

Karaoke finishes,

“well we’re heading in this direction” Jurina said pointing right.

Jurina’s opv.

“hehe, it’ll be just the two, why not tell her how you feel?”

“hmmm...” Mayu grumbles,
Jurina just smiles at her, Mayuki walk home together.

Meanwhile Wmatsui walk together...

“oh, by the way, you should eat at my place tonight, my mum keeps pestering me to bring you over now and then” Rena said,

“you’d better walk me home after” Jurina clinged to Rena’s arm.

“wow! roady was really fun!” Yuki said stretching her arms in the air,

“yeah...but I made you and the others worry about me again” Mayu frowned.

“Mayu, that was...”

“it’s okay I understand” Mayu interrupts Yuki.

“I don’t know much about the distance people should keep between each other, there are people who are slowly getting closer to me, and this time they’re not slipping through my fingers, that’s why this is the happiest time of my life”  Mayu looks up.

“baka” Yuki blankly says,

“eh?” Mayu replied,

“you’ll have tons of happy and fun moments from now on, don’t be stingy and say that right now is the best” Yuki answers with a serious expression yet smiling.

“Y-Yuki-san”

The next day at the Miyasawa dojo...

Sae vigorously punches and kicks a practice dummy,

“hu!, huh!, ya!, hu!” Sae pants.

Sae’s opv.

*remembering Yuki and Mayu together*

Sae’s eyes widen, “YA!” Sae gives a final blow sending the dummy to fall down.
Two of Sae’s big brother’s walk in,

“hey sis, you sure have a lot of spirit early this morning” Brother no.1 says.

“I was just letting off some steam” Sae replied coldly,

“mind if we spar with you?, we’ll do anything for our sis” Brother no.2 asked and pats Sae’s head.

Sae’s opv.

“god, they’re so smothering, this is why I hate living in a dojo”

*an idea pops into Sae’s mind*

“you said you do anything right?” Sae gave her brother’s a questioning look.

“of course, you’re our lil sis” they answered,

“is that so?” Sae smirks.

Meanwhile at the clubroom...

“well we’re off then” Yuki said,

“un, bye bye” Rena waved.

“Mayu-chan come here a second?” Jurina asks, 

“what is the meaning of this? Yuki-san ate a convenience store lunch again today” Jurina points towards a bin.

“is that so?” Mayu avoids eye contact with Jurina,

Yuki ad Rena talk for a few mins, while Jurina is busy lecturing Mayu.

“that’s no good, she’ll never notice anything if you make the first move your self!” Jurina says,

“I tried my best, but I couldn’t bring myself around to bring in such an embarrassing bento” Mayu remembers the bento she made for Yuki, saying love on the rice with pink food colouring letters.

Jurina flicks Mayu’s head,

“don’t give too much thought to it, I bet she would be moved by any bento you make for her” Jurina sighs.

Mayu pouts.

Mayuki walk home from school together...

Mayu stops and stares at a supermarket,

“what’s the matter Mayuyu want to buy something?’ Yuk turns to Mayu.

“y-yeah I just need to pick up some things, you can go home” Mayu insists,

“hey, don’t so cold, I’ll at least carry your bags” Yuki says,

“i-it’s fine really, that’s sort of a bad idea, let’s just say you’ll find out tomorrow, I mean eating only bread and convenience store food for lunch can’t be very nutritious, and it won’t take a lot effort to make two bentos” Mayu said blushing.

“you...you’ll really make my lunch for me?” Yuki asks,

Mayu nods her head up and down.

“yatta!!” Yuk shouts with a fist pump in the air, making people stare at her weirdly,

“c-calm down” Mayu said.

“I’ll see you tomorrow then” Yuki walks off singing happily to herself,

“how embarrassing” Mayu just shakes her head.

Meanwhile Yuki’s walking home alone...

“Mayuyu’s homemade lunch, huh? I’m so pumped!” Yuki says to herself,

*hears footsteps behind her*

Yuki stops and look  behind her but no one’s there, then turns around.

Suddenly a bunch of guys come out from the shadows,

“so this is the girl, no mistake about it” guy no.1 says,

“what do you want?” Yuki demanded.

“nothing we just want to talk, so why don’t you come with us like a good little girl” guy no.2 said.

Yuki being crowded in, “like hell I would” tries to run away, but one of the guys grab her.

“you broke my sister’s heart!” guy no.3 said, punching Yuki,

After the beatings were over, Yuki laid with blood in the corner of her mouth.

At the hospital...

Mayu stands outside a ward, takes a look inside and finds Yuki eating and talking to one of the nurses,

“um excuse I don’t have any spoon” Yuki complains.

“ahh sorry dear be right back” the nurse said walking out,

Mayu hides.

Peeks in again,

Yuki’s opv.

“I’m glad this happened to me, at least Mayu was alright, *pops a piece of chicken in her mouth* not bad, could use a bit more salt, Mayuyu doesn’t need to get hurt anymore” 

Hearing Yuki’s thought, Mayu slumps down against the wall,

Mayu’s opv.

“Yuki...you’re wrong, I’m responsible for this, I was happy to have you looking out for me, I thought, now, things could change for me. But it doesn’t seem that way, you’ll just get hurt in my place, I knew it *tears form in the corner of her eyes* I knew people around me always end up unhappy, *remembers her past* but I pretended not to notice and took advantage of you. *pictures a smiling Yuki* Even Miyasawa-san felt so pressured because of me, I swore never to get involved with anyone again...and still *tears flow out* I’m sorry, Yuki-san, I’m sorry Miyasawa-san. So please...forget about me”

The next day...

Yuki’s opv.

“I was discharged from the hospital, but Mayu wasn’t there anymore, she even moved out, where did she go? I still don’t know, there’s a lot of things I don’t understand, but I know one thing...I couldn’t protect her”

To be continued.





Title: Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl) UPDATE!! Chapter 3
Post by: Yuki88 on February 21, 2013, 06:07:24 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOO MAYUYU QAQ

Sae you evil D:

And right after cute fluffy moments of Mayuki (plus teaser Rena) too! ._.

Thx for the update!
Title: Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl) UPDATE!! Chapter 3
Post by: cisda83 on February 21, 2013, 06:09:55 AM
Yeah... Yuki, Mayu, Rena and Jurina are good friends now....

RenaxJurina and YukixMayu... the pairings are forming slowly...

What.... Sae just because she was not being chosen by Yuki as her lover... she sent her brothers to beat Yuki up....

What a jerk, Sae is.... but the older brothers are more wrong than ever... I mean they are older... They should know about right or wrong...

Sae and her family are sick people... should be locked in jail or mental hospital....

Ah... Mayu is moving again... without telling anyone... so that no one will get hurt because of her....

What's going to happen with Mayu and Yuki? Are they going to be together in the future?

What Mayu is going to do? Where Mayu moved to? How are they going to be together?

I can't wait to know what's going to happen next

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl) UPDATE!! Chapter 3
Post by: Kimcoton on March 10, 2013, 05:06:37 AM
Sae is a jerk here tsk. Uurggg.
pls update soon .
Title: Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl) UPDATE!! Chapter 3
Post by: rochilu on March 23, 2013, 05:11:37 AM
Noo!! Why Mayu, where did you go!?
You are going to continue this fic right ? right?? you have to!! ._. it's too good, funny and so so cute and asfhkjas pleaaase i will be waiting for your update!!
Title: Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl) UPDATE!! Chapter 4
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on April 10, 2013, 02:16:24 AM
Zannen shoujo chapter 4. Enjoy!! :cow: Sorry for the late update. (forgot to mention in the start, but you’ve probably noticed already  :sweatdrop: :nervous, Yuki is a bit of a pervert, sorry once again and I decided to make Yuko, Mayu’s grandpa, let’s see how it goes, and remember I’m following the anime of Kotoura-san)

At school...

“hey Yuki! ne, there’s this new coffee shop opposite the takoyaki place, I wanna go check it out...” Akicha said leaning on Mayu’s old desk,

“hey!” Yuki shouted looking annoyed,

“uh, nothing...I just can’t forgive a place that markets ‘coffee milk’ and makes it with chocolate syrup!” Yuki crosses her arms together.

“what is that about?!” Akicha playfully asked,

“it’s just wrong don’t you think?” Yuki and Achika bursted into laughter,

Sae and her friends watch them,

“it looks like Yuki-san is back to her old self.” Girl no.1 says,

“that’s a relief huh, Sae-chan?” Girl no.2 turns to Sae.

“yeah...” Sae looks down at her desk,

“hey, you think this could be your chance?” Girl no.1 said,

“yeah! There’s no one in your way now.” Girl no.2 agreed.

Sae just narrows her eyes.

Meanwhile on the school’s roof,

Yuki’s pov.

“It’s been a week since Mayu disappeared. Not a thing around me has changed. It’s almost as if there was never a girl named Watanabe Mayu here in the first place.”

*looks at phone, dialing Mayuyu*

“the number you have dialed is not currently in use”

*hangs up*

“what do you think you’re doing?”

Yuki turns head, looking above her,

Jurina looks at her worryingly, “look at you, you’re lying around like you’re hopeless...look! just come back to the clubroom.”

“why should I? I don’t need to participate in the in the club anymore, do I?” Yuki stated,

“shut up, and just come with me!” Jurina said dragging Yuki along,

“hey that hurts! wait there are stairs ahead!”

“like I care?!” Jurina screamed,

At the clubroom...

Yuki has grazes and dirt stains on her clothes,

“I thought the hospital released you?”  Rena asks.

“this was all the president jurina’s doing.” Yuki replied,

“straighten up! Honestly, I misjudged you, I can’t believe you’d give up on Mayu-chan so easily.” Jurina sighed,

“what can I do about it?! Her apartment was stripped bare, and I can’t reach her cell phone, even the teachers somehow don’t know where she moved or transferred to...I have nothing left, not even a picture of myself and her...” Yuki said with sadness and hurt in her tone,

“is there really nothing left?” Rena asked.

Yuki looked at her with a confused expression,

“I don’t think that all things that get left behind can be seen.” Rena implied,

“what do you mean?” Yuki questioned,

“oh, for crying out loud! Try asking your own heart that question!” Jurina told Yuki.

Yuki with her head down, remember’s her time she spent with Mayu, and Mayu calling out her name, “Yuki-san!” *Mayu smiling*,

“well?” Jurina asked,

“you guy’s are right. She appeared out of nowhere, then strung me along for all that time. And in the end, she left something unbelievable behind.”.

“and what would that be?” Jurina smirked,

“It’s...my burning rage! How dare that little brat just disappear from me?! I’ll find her even if it kills me and I’ll give her a spanking!” Yuki shouted with a black aura emitting from her,

“you really are a funny person, Yuki-san, poor Mayu...” Rena smiled awkwardly.

“well said, Yuki-san! I’ve been waiting for you to say that! We’re all going together as the ESP Society to find Mayu-chan!” Jurina said pumped,

“yes! Wait how are we going to find her?” Yuki questioned,

“We’ve already identified where she’s likely to be hiding.” Rena says,

“eehhhh?! Nande?!” Yuki pulled a massive reaction, looking at Rena astounded,

“I just took a look a little peek at some train station security camera data. I’ve basically pinpointed Mayu-kun’s escape route.” Rena said with a evil grin plastered on her face,

“um, isn’t that illegal...?” Yuki whispered,

“oh what does it matter, we’re going to get Mayu-chan back once and for all! On that note, the ESP Society’s activity this weekend will be field work!” Jurina pumped one of her fist in the air.

Outside the train station...*trains pass by* ,

“Whew...It took a pretty long time to get here. *Jurina looks around* The sun has already set.” Jurina pouted,

“it’s so quiet, there’s nothing here at all” Yuki sighed,

“Mayu-kun is here, there’s no doubt that this was the last station she used, all that’s left is...”

*wind blows*

“it’s pretty cold for May...” Yuki shivers.

“I’ve been wanting to ask...why are you dressed so lightly?” Jurina asked,

“well, when we set out, my heart was still hot with passion...” Yuki’s still shivering,

“what a lame excuse, forget I asked” Jurina said disappointed,

Yuki just glared at Jurina.

“so what do we do now?” Jurina asked Rena,

“we gather info and infer Mayu-kun’s location from there. Fortunately, this isn’t a big town” Rena implied,

“okay sounds like a plan, let’s rest for the night, and start gathering information tomorrow.” Jurina said,

“agreed” Rena said,

“so where are we staying?” Yuki asked,

“so where are we staying?” Jurina and Rena both looked at each other.

Awkward silence...

“why didn’t you make reservation’s?!” Jurina yelled at Rena,

“I should be asking you that! Why do I have to do all the work?!” Rena said annoyed,

“I swear, Rena-chan, you’re the vice president, yet you screwed up!” Jurina yelled again.

“well, you’re the president! You should be on top of things!” Rena accused,

“you two, chill out” Yuki tried reassuring the two,

“you kids have no place to stay tonight? There’s a temple just down the road, I’m sure the Priest will let you stay the night” a station attendant suggested,

“man we’re saved!” Yuki said relieved,

“you said it! Next time, Rena-chan, do your job!” Jurina said dragging her luggage.

“hai, hai ojou-sama” Rena said sarcastically,

“finally we’re here” three of them sighed in unison tiredly,

“welcome, the train station attendant told me about you, I can’t offer much, but please, come in.” The Priest came out and welcomed the tired trio,

“we appreciate it!” the three bowed,

“finally a break!” Jurina collapsed on the ground,

“we’ve been swaying back and forth on that train all day” Yuki takes her shoes off,

“mou, you’re both being rude” Rena scolded them,

“oh, no, please make yourselves at home. More importantly, what did you come here to do?” the Priest asked,

“it’s sort of a club field trip” Jurina stated.

“ohh? What kind of club?” the Priest said curiously,

“a secret society to prove the existence of psychic powers and protect those who have them, the ESP Society!” Jurina said with sparkles in her eyes,

“E...ESP, you say?” ,

Rena and Yuki look away embarrassed,

“hehe I just love that stuff!” the Priest yelled excited,

“oh, so you get!” Jurina smiled widely,

“how would you like to to discuss the topic till sunrise?” Jurina insisted.

“count me in!” the Priest said enthusiastically,

“ara, I won’t stop talking about it!” Jurina supposed

“there’s a reason why I took an interest in strange phenomena. About 11 years ago, I met a certain little girl.”

“ahh, here we are, please come in” the Priest led them to his room,

“wow! Are these all psychic-related texts?” Jurina stared in awe at the room’s wall covered with bits of paper,

“That girl’s strange power was bringing her great pain. I wanted to do something for her, so I started hunting for books...” the Priest sighed,

“a girl with  a power that brought her great pain...that sounds like...” Yuki mumbled,

“ahhhhh!!!!” Jurina yelled,

“President, what’s wrong?” Yuki turned at Jurina.

“look there!” Jurina points at a photo of the Priest and a little Mayu,

“ahhhhh!!!!” Yuki yelled as well,

*Flashback*

“I’m sorry... I’m sorry... It’s all my fault. I’m sorry.” A 5 year old Mayu, crouched and cries in the corner of a room, folding her knees and arms together,

“Mayu-chan, it’s not your fault. None of it is your fault.” The Priest said, to reassure the little crying Mayu,

“Head Priest-sama... How can I make my parents and friends stay with with me? How can I make them smile at me?” Mayu desperately asks and cries even more,

*flashback ends*

“I couldn’t do anything for her. *turns to Yuki, Jurina and Rena* I see... So you are her...”

“why has she been carrying all that by herself?!” Yuki punches the floor,

“you...” the Priest looks at Yuki,

“Please, tell me where Mayu is! I promised that I’d stay with her! That no matter what happened, I wouldn’t leave her! And this time, I’m keeping that promise!” Yuki begged,
 
Yuki, Jurina and Rena stared at the Priest seriously,

“her family’s house is on the other side of the mountain. I’ll show the way tomorrow.” The Priest smiled,

“thank you very much!” the three bowed once again,

the priest stepped out of the room looking up, “Mayu-chan, it looks like you’ve found some good friends.”

“hehe you won’t get away this time Mayuyu” Yuki smirked,

“We’ll grab her from behind and take her down!” Jurina said,

“I’ve got the capture net ready.” Rena grinned,

“once you catch her, let me tie her up please” Yuki applied,

“good friends...right?” the Priest smiled worryingly.

The next morning...

“Oji-sama... ano... Have you found my next place of admission yet?” Mayu asked,

“your new school? huh? You don’t have to force yourself to go, you know.” Mayu’s Oji-Yuko told her,

“no, I should at least go to school. I’m causing you enough trouble...” Mayu muttered,

“don’t worry, okay? I’m looking” smiling at Mayu,

Mayu avoids her grandpa’s gaze, “I’m sorry to make you do so much for me. Not just my school, you take care of all my rent and living expenses, too...I ” Mayu looks down.

“Forget about that, just sit on your grandpa’s lap once in awhile, come on Mayu-chi!” Mayu’s Oji-Yuko said, patting his lap,

“ano, I’m in highschool now” Mayu sweat dropped,

“I forget things so quickly these days... Place of admission? Oh... Maybe if my granddaughter  shares a bit of contact with me, it might jog my memory...” Oji-Yuko says shaking,

“ehhh?! Fine” Mayuyu sighs,

Mayu sits on her Oji-Yuko’s lap, “now this brings back memories. You really have grown up”

“Oji-sama...” Mayu turns her head at her grandpa,

Oji-Yuko’s pov.

“oho! A granddaughter’s oshiri and thighs are the best! Living so long has paid off!” Mayu’s grandpa drools and cackles,

Mayu read her Oji-Yuko’s mind  :catglare:, “what was that cackle?” As I believe you’re aware, I can hear you. Mou, you’re just like Yuki-san...”

“Nani?! *pushes Mayu off* There’s another lucky person, yet corrupted in perverted things, doing such things, besides me?!” ,

“mou, Oji-sama, calm down...” Mayu gets up,

“My granddaughter’s oshiri and thighs are mine! No matter what you say, they’re mine, all mine!” Oji-Yuko wails,

“actually they’re mine, you pervert” Mayu mumbled.

“hai” Oji-Yuko sighs.

Meanwhile in front of Mayu’s house...

“I guess there are houses like this” Yuki said,

“I can’t even see any of building’s from the gate” Jurina said, looking up at the big black gate, “just how big is this property?”,

“I guess she really is rich...” Yuki’s mouth gaped,

“I bet we’ll find a Mayu-chan or 2 lurking here.” Jurina said motivated.

“don’t talk about her like she’s a cockroach!” Yuki said annoyed,

“her grandpa says he’ll see you, but he seems to know you, somehow, Yuki-san, he said ‘Yuki-san’s here?!’ ” the Priest told them,

“huh?” yuki said confused,

Inside the house...

“eto, Yuko-san these are Mayu-chan’s friends, I told you about...” the Priest introduced,

“Yeah. Nice to meet you.” Yuko says,

“is he mad at us or something?” Jurina whisper’s to Rena,

“I think you should apologize, Yuki-kun” Rena insisted,

“I have to do it?!” Yuki said shocked,

“so, you are Yuki-san” Yuko glared at Yuki.

“y-yes, I am...” Yuki stuttered,

“I’ll get right to the point, what have you been doing with my granddaughter?!” Yuko accused,

“eh?!” Yuki and Jurina shouted in union,

“w-well.. I’ve had a few fantasies here and there... maybe, and embarrassed her in some situations” Yuki gulped,

“hahaha oh, is that all?” Yuko laughed,

“you’re still quite the novice, aren’t you? *looks at Yuki* I enjoyed direct contact with her oshiri and thighs this morning!” Yuko said doing hand grabbing motions,

“geh.. well I think it’s more fun when she can read my mind and know what I’m imagining, thus leaving her with her face flushed with shame than physical actions like that!” Yuki stood up, paranoid.

“Are you saying that you don’t want to touch that perfect oshiri, Mayu has!” Oji-Yuko yelled,

“of course I do!” Yuki yelled back,

*door opens*

“Oji-sama, I heard the head priest was... here...” Mayu’s words trail off,

“Mayuyu!!” Yuki shouted,

“uh.. uhh wahh!” Mayu runs away,

“get her!” Jurina shouts,

“roger!” Rena and Yuki replies, Rena’s holding the net.

“wait!” the three them said running after Mayu,

“hehe, interesting kids aren’t they” Oji-Yuko smiled at the Priest,

“They seem to be enjoying themselves.” he answered.

Mayu’s pov.

“Why? Why are they all here?”

*Looks behind, see’s a very scary Yuki, Rena and Jurina chasing her*

“waaaaait!” the trio shouted,

“Yada!! I’m scared!” Mayu starts sprinting for her life,

*Mayu’s hiding behind a statue*

“Damn, we lost her!” Jurina said irritated,

“it’s no use, this house is too big” Yuki sounded frustrated,

“We have no choice, let’s split up to find her.” Jurina runs left, Rena runs right.

“Mayuyu!! Damn why are you running away!” Yuki yelled, viciously opening a door,

Mayu’s pov.

“I’m sorry, I abandoned everything and ran away... Now I’m too embarrassed to even face you... *peeks outs from the statue* But I’m glad. She looks well. Her injuries have healed.I’d like to face her and talk to her...But I’m sure she’ll just get mad.”

 *Mayu can hear Yuki’s thoughts*

Yuki’s pov.

“I’m sorry Mayuyu. I’m sorry.”

Mayu’s pov.

“Why? It was my fault...”

Yuki’s pov.

“I couldn’t... I couldn’t protect you.”

Mayu’s pov.

“That’s not true! You did so much to protect me...”

Yuki’s pov.

“I promised that I’d stay with you. That I’d never leave you. No. That’s not why! I just want to be with you, hand in hand, I don’t want us to be apart! Aitakatta Mayuyu, I finally found you, let’s go home together, let’s...*Yuki grits her teeth* Mayuyu!!”

Mayu’s bursts into tears, and covers her mouth, *remembers her time with Yuki* “Yuki...Yuki...”

Yuki’s pov.

“I want to see you, I want to see you!”

Mayu’s pov.

“I want to see you, I want to see you!”

 *comes out*

“Yuki-sa...”

Yuki’s pov.

“Crap. Now I’m getting mad again, *black aura emitting again* I guess I’ll have to give her a spanking after all”

Mayu’s pov.

“spanking... spanking... spanking!... Wahhh!”

Yuki’s pov.

“It should be obvious for making me worry so much, not just me, I’m sure Jurina and Rena would agree as well, since you worried them to...”

Mayu step’s back slowly, Jurina is standing behind her, bumps into Jurina,

“huwwaaaaa!!!!” Mayu shrieked,

 “gotcha!” Jurina grabbed Mayu,

“let me go!” Mayu screamed,

Jurina throws Mayu to the floor, “now Rena-chan!”,

Rena throws the net onto Mayu, “yada!!”

5 mins later...

The trio are in front a kneeling Mayu,

“now, how about you explain yourself?” Jurina demanded,

“why did you just disappear like that?” Yuki questioned,

“Because... It was my fault you were hospitalised, *avoiding everyone’s gazes* I thought, if I left, you could go back to your everyday life.”

“Oh? Hmm. I see. Are you stupid?! *shouts in Mayu’s face* It’s your fault I was attacked? Don’t give me that! Besides, having you around already is my everyday life!” Realising what she just said, both Yuki and Mayu blush,

“in other words, you’re saying you’d die for her?” Jurina smirked,

“I didn’t say that!” Yuki denied,

“It’s just... Mayuyu said something so stupid, I just...” Yuki said faintly,

“I’m sorry. Please don’t spank me.” Mayu said trembling,

“I don’t think I can promise that, Mayuyu... You’ve been behaving ever so badly” Yuki turns back to Mayu, with a calm but serious expression.

“eeekk!!!” Mayu hides behind Jurina,

“hehe of course that was Mayu’s fault, forgive her, would you? She hasn’t had friends in a long time, so she doesn’t know how to react around them. That’s why she ran away from you.” Oji-Yuko smiled,

“Oji-sama...” Mayu looked at her perverted grandpa,

“still, it appears I can start the preparations to enroll you to your old school” Oji-Yuko told Mayu,

“I’m not going back! I apologise for leaving without saying anything. But I don’t want anyone else to get hurt because of me... So just leave me alone!” Mayu says running out the room,

“go, Yuki-san” Jurina directed,

“just show her those tragic heroine acts don’t work on idiots.” Rena said,

“hai!” Yuki smiled, then started sprinting off after Mayu,

Outside the gate, Yuki grab’s Mayu’s wrist, “Wait!”

“Let go!” Mayu struggled,

“no way!” Yuki gripped Mayu tighter, “if I leave you alone even for a sec, you’ll keep this all to yourself and go off to hide again.”

“What choice do I have? If something like this happens again, I...” Mayu said looking away,

“what are you two doing?”

Yuki and Mayu turn to the unexpected voice,

“Miyazawa-san?” Mayu stares at Sae,

“What are you doing here, Yuki?”

“I should be asking you that!” Yuki yelled, still holding Mayu,

“I just... Wanted to apologise. *looks at Mayu* I had a detective track you down.”

“Miyazawa-san...”

“I’m sorry” Sae bows,

“My stupid jealousy caused a lot of trouble for you. It even led to Yuki getting hurt.”

“Nani?!” Yuki shouts,

“Huh? You still didn’t know?” Sae said,

“So, that was your fault?!” Yuki yells,

“Why didn’t you tell her? You really are surprising.”

“Why the hell would you get someone to attack your classmate?! Are you into that stuff? Hmm.”  Yuki raised her brow,

“S-shut up! That’s why I’m here to apologise.” Sae said,

“Yeah, but why did you apologise to Mayu and then treat me like that?!”

“Only because of the way you treat me everyday!” Sae argued back,

“Miyazawa-san apologised, over and over.” Mayu told Yuki,

“C-chotto matte!” Sae sweat dropped,

“She said she couldn’t be honest because she didn’t know what to say.”

“Please, don’t talk about that!” Sae said embarrassed,

Yuki looks at Sae,

“It’s like she said. How do I apologise after what I did? After she disappeared, you weren’t yourself... So I thought, if I brought her back, I could apologise to you. But you’re already here, and now I... I...” Sae’s tears run down her pink cheeks,

Yuki hugs Sae,

“yamatte, forget about it, you’re embarrassing me *let’s go of Sae*”

“Yuki-san...” Sae looks at Yuki,

“let’s go inside already *drags Mayu*”

“okay...” Sae smiles and follows Yuki,

“Wait! Yuki, let me me go!” 

Back to school...

Mayu introduces herself again to the class, this time smiling,

Mayu’s pov.

“I guess I was still a child, I thought I could read people’s and know everything about them, but people can change, *see’s Sae clapping* Something so simple never occurred to me, *see’s Yuki clapping* I had turned my back not only on everyone else, but on myself. *laughing with Jurina and Rena* I was arrogant, a selfish coward. But I believe I can change, little by little, but not just myself, also the world I live in, because... I’m not alone anymore.”

*walking home with Yuki*

“A lot had happened, but it looks like everything’s back to normal.” Yuki said,

“that’s not true, things have changed a little” Mayu smiles.

Maybe to be continued??  :dunno:
Title: Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl) UPDATE!! Chapter 4 finally
Post by: Minamiyuki on April 10, 2013, 04:47:31 AM
The end or To be continued?  XD XD XD
Title: Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl) UPDATE!! Chapter 4 finally
Post by: Kazumiyu on April 10, 2013, 07:15:58 AM
Great story I really liked it! ヽ(^Д^)ノ 
Title: Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl) UPDATE!! Chapter 4 finally
Post by: qweakb on April 10, 2013, 09:18:34 AM
Continue!! PLEASE  :mon pray2: :mon pray2: :mon pray2:
Title: Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl) UPDATE!! Chapter 4 finally
Post by: kahem on April 10, 2013, 11:44:09 AM
Continue please ^^
Title: Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl) UPDATE!! Chapter 4 finally
Post by: rochilu on April 10, 2013, 11:44:45 PM
i read the chapter the other thay but i couldn't coment, sooo here i go. i though that that was the end and i was like "noooooo :c" i really like how you write, the pervert yuki xD the clueless and shy mayuyu >u< please continue! you can still tell us others storys, like the past of jurina's mama or start a new problem with the girls like... figthing for save the world (? ahaha i don't know xD
so, great fic! see you around ^^
Title: Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl) UPDATE!! Chapter 4 finally
Post by: cisda83 on April 10, 2013, 11:44:57 PM
Ah... Poor Yuki.... missing Mayu so much

Eh... Yuki is very angry now... Black is appearing...

Hahaha... Yuki is so funny... saying when she set up her heart was burning... now she felt cold....

The priest is wondering if Jurina and others are good friends with Mayu or not... coz' they are discussing how to capture Mayu?  :lol:

All the chasing was so funny...

Wah... didn't think that Sae would go and apologize to Mayu....

Can't wait to see the next

Thank you for the lovely update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Title: Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl) UPDATE!! Chapter 4 finally
Post by: Shinoki on April 15, 2013, 12:36:04 AM
so epic!!! <3 <3
Mayuyu!!!
Oshiriko is now oji-san? normal after all.....
fufufu~ so Shiriri-chan has good Oshiri?
Weird question.... nEver bothered w/ watching Ko-san, so
I guess I'll be reading..... if there is more....
interesting......
Title: Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl) UPDATE!! Chapter 4 finally
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on September 08, 2013, 10:20:30 PM
Zannen shoujo chapter 5. Sorry everyone, I forgot about this because of… let’s just say not very good things :sweatdrop: but thank you so much for reading this and for all your lovely comments!!  :deco:

“Moving in… complete!” Mayu cheered, “well, there’s still a lot of of unpacking to do, but… I’m really back…” she continued, as she gazed at her spacious new room.

“To the place where Yuki-san and everyone else is.” Another nostalgic look, formed on the cyborg’s face as she picked up a photo of her, Yuki and everyone else.

“I want to stay with you, Mayu!!” Mayu remembered how Yuki suddenly confessed, but as soon as she remembered, she gave a goofy smile while not noticing her cheeks were turning red.

Mayu held the photo close to her chest and started moaning in embarrassment, even though she started rolling on the floor like a kid,

*Bang!*

Boxes fell burying her in the process.
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Shutting her eyes, Mayu drew in a deep breath before exhaling all of the oxygen she had at this moment taken in out of her mouth.

Yuki, who was beside her, gave Mayu a reassuring squeeze on her shoulder, “don’t worry, I won’t let anything happen to you anymore”, Yuki flashed a calming, gentle glance.

“un…” Mayu nodded,

Entering the classroom, Mayu greeted everyone and bowed.

“heh?” Whispers of confusion could be heard,

“Mayu…” Yuki looked at her with a worried expression,

“I’m f-fine Yuki.” Mayu turned to Yuki trying to cheer the taller girl up.

“Morning, Mayu-san.” Sae welcomed,

“Miyazawa-san… ohayou.”

“what’s your problem?!”  Sae turned round, as silence fell into the room,

“well, until just the other day, you two were… right?” Girl no.1 spoke up,

“Yeah. It’s kinda of grossing me out.” Girl no.2 agreed, giving a creeped out look to Sae.

“G-grossing you out?” Sae said taken aback, anger started building inside Sae, making steam come out through her ears.

“Shut up! Sae isn’t like that, or do you want me to shut your mouths for you!” Yuki yelled, surprising her classmates.

Sae’s pov.

“sigh, why do you have be so cool and senseless at the same time, baka” Sae formed a small smile.

Sae leaned over to Mayu, “ne Mayu-san, you’re in the ESP Society, are you?”, Sae asked.

At the clubroom...

“why are you here?!”

*sign* “ESP Research Society.”

“that’s some greeting. Your club just got a new member.” Sae furrowed her eyebrows, “you should be welcoming me.”

“yoroshiku ne.” Mayu responded,

“Glad to be here.” Sae turned and smiled at Mayu,

“tsk…” Yuki frowned, facing the opposite way,

“ahaha, so many new recruits this year!” Jurina beamed, cupping her face with her hands.

“we’re welcoming Jurina’s new toy… I mean, the new member.” Rena said, while chewing on melon pan.

“grrrrrrrrrrrrrr……” Yuki kept growling and grunting to herself, “Mayu has to sit next to me!” Yuki grabbed and pulled Mayu’s chair towards her side. “so go away. shoo, shoo.” Yuki gestured her hand in upward and down movement.

“This has nothing to do with you, I just want to be with Mayu, plus I don’t see your name tattooed on her.” Sae argued back, pulling Mayu’s chair next to her now, Mayu sat there with a puzzling look. 

“grrrr……” Yuki started growling again,

“kekekeke” Sae started chuckling.

Mayu looked at Sae, “but really, you also want to be with Yuki-”, “no! Don’t!” Sae covered Mayu’s mouth instantly, but pushed Mayu down in the process, causing herself and Mayu to fall their chairs, with Sae on top of Mayu.

“itai…” Mayu winced in pain,

“grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr………” Yuki made jaw clenching noises as her rage started to fill up Yuki’s entire body.

“don’t touch my Mayuyu!!” Yuki grabbed Mayu, holding her so tight, she might break.

“Y-yuki-san! I can’t breathe!” Mayu started squirming, but Yuki kept a firm grasp on the poor helpless cyborg.

“quite an odd power relationship we’ve got here.” Rena pictured a love triangle in her mind.

“more importantly!” Jurina interrupted, “so, newbie, what kind of ability do you have?”, turning to Sae.

“eh? I don’t really have any psychic abilities like Mayu-san…”,

“You don’t have any?” Jurina gave scary look, while Sae started to sweatdrop, “n-no… I have one that’s even more surprising!” Sae stuttered.

“well, that’s wonderful!” Jurina turned back into beaming person, “then, let’s see straight away!”,

“HUH?!” Sae started becoming even more nervous.

“ne, ne. What’s your surprising ability? I wanna see!” Mayu said excitedly,

Yuki’s pov.

“Sae’s in a pinch. Kekekekekeke, who’s laughing now?” Yuki smirked.

“Mayu-san as well?!” Sae said feeling betrayed,

“w-well, I can move things from a distance without touching them.” Sae awkwardly explained,

“heh?!” Jurina, Yuki and Mayu stared at Sae with dumbfounded looks.

                                              ----------------------------------------                                           

*several lit candles are standing on a table, with Sae a few meters distanced from it*

“huwa! huh!” Sae punched swiftly, trying to blow out the candles with her punch. Sae failed and started getting flustered, feeling the strong glaring stares behind her.

Taking a deep breath, Sae formed a fighting stance again, “genking punch!!!!!!!!!”

*air currents instantly blew cut through, blowing out all the candles*

“oh!!!!!!” Wmatsui clapped, while Mayuki stood there gobsmacked.

“not bad! I never imagined you had the power of psychokinesis! (meaning mind movement).” Jurina complemented.

“this is what I can do when I put my mind to it.” Sae said shyly and embarrassed.

“looks like another psychic is born!” Jurina cheered, “I’m expecting great things from you, Sae-san!”

“hahahaha!!!!!!” Sae chuckled nervously, “b-bring it on!”,

“don’t pick on the newbie, Jurina.” Rena said,

“Miyazawa-san sugoi!” Mayu congratulated Sae,

“I didn’t know you could do anything that amazing, Sae.” Yuki said, with a surprised tone.

“of course I ca-.. WAIT! What do you mean by that?! And what’s with the surprised tone, huh?!” Sae said really irritated at Yuki,

“nothing really…” Yuki avoided Sae’s penetrating gaze.

“a psychic, a pervert, and a martial artist. Looks like the ESP Society is in good hands.” Jurina smiled happily,

“pervert? You don’t mean me, do you?” Yuki asked with a ‘wait? what? you mean me look’.

“who else would it be?” Sae, Mayu and Rena replied,

“ehhhhhhhhhh?!!!!!!!!!! No way!!!!!!!!!!” Yuki pulled out her famous reaction and wanted to cry,

“and what awesome ability do you have, president Jurina?” Sae glared at Jurina, “I still haven’t heard.” Sae stated annoyed.

“my ability?” Jurina just smiled, “hehe, you don’t get it. You don’t get it, ne?” Jurina glared back intensely.

Sae sweatdropped again, “the club president is like a general. Does a general fight directly or use abilities? No! A general’s job is to give competent orders!” Jurina responded,

“so, in other words you don’t have one.” Sae said still sweat dropping,

“it’s not I don’t. I just don’t need one.” Jurina just smiled again.

“on that note we’re going to have a belated party for our new member. At Mayu-chan’s place.”

“hai! W-wait! Why my place?” Mayu protested,

“because you live on your own. We can have a group without worrying about bothering anyone, right?” Jurina specified,

“that is true, but… I haven’t had time to clean up…” Mayu explained her situation.

“that’s fine! You’ve been so busy trying to clean you haven’t done the laundry, so there’s underwear strewn all over the room, right?” Jurina smirked,

“I-I’ve at least done my laundry! How can you ask say that with such a relaxed expression?” Mayu said cross, while next to her, someone’s fantasising about Mayu only in her underwear or maybe none, “heh? Stop thinking like that?!” Mayu kept hitting Yuki,

“sigh, okay, then, We’ll visit Mayu’s chan place some other time.” Jurina gave up.

“ehhh?!!! Yada yo!! I want to go to Mayuyu’s house!” Yuki started throwing a tantrum,

“can you get anymore childish?” Rena shook her head,

“we’ll give you time to prepare, don’t worry Mayu-chan.” Jurina said with sparkles in her eyes.

“really?” Mayu asked with disbelief,

 “do these looks like the eyes of a liars?”. Jurina pulled out her puppy face.

“I guess we could let Mayu prepare.” Yuki also had sparkles in her eyes, “she’s right Mayu. Friendship starts with trust.”

Mayu got up from her seat, making her way towards the exit leaving the others behind, “damn! She read my mind!” Yuki cursed,

“Yuki-kun, capture Mayu-chan before she holes up her room again!” Jurina ordered,

“Hai!” Yuki ran after Mayu.

“Sae-san and I will go shopping.” Jurina and Sae nodded in agreement, “Rena-chan, you go rent some movies about psychics. Tomorrow is Saturday, so we’re gonna party all night!”,

“Leave the selection to me.” Rena grinned evilly,

“N-now that’s giving competent orders…” Sae stuttered.

                                                ---------------------------------------------------         

“ooohhhhh!” Everyone said in union,

“this is a pretty nice apartment!” Jurina said as she gaped at the room,

“please try not to mess with my stuff…” Mayu continued.

“I know, I know. Okay everyone disperse!” Jurina, Rena and Sae went explore Mayu’s room,

“I just told them not to…” Mayu winged,

“ne, isn’t this room smaller than your last one?” Yuki asked.

“un, my grandfather took care of the last one, and it was too big, so I got a reasonably sized one this time.”

“is that so, so you chose this place by yourself?” Yuki said impressed,

“also… this one is closer to your house.” Mayu mumbled in a soft voice, but clear enough for Yuki hear, “I-I wanted to try being a little closer…”, Mayu who was looking down, just notice Yuki transported to the far side of the room.

“w-what’s wrong? Why you all the way over there?” Mayu questioned worriedly,

“you shouldn’t say things that will stimulate my fantasies like that…” Yuki blushed,

“I can’t find the porn mags.” Sae interrupted.

“I don’t have any those!” Mayu yelled infuriated,

“Mayu-chan…” Jurina’s eyes were tearing, “I guess all the nutrients meant for your chest went to your psychic ability instead…”,

“what the hell did you look at?!” Mayu started getting red.

                                                   ------------------------------------------------

Mayu, Jurina, Rena and Sae were cooking in kitchen, meanwhile Yuki was bored out of her mind.

“anything I can do to help?” Yuki offered,

“we’re doing fine. So, just hang tight, ok?” Mayu said while frying tempura,

“o-okay” Yuki stepped back,

*Yuki’s fantasy of Mayu in an apron*

Mayu: “welcome home, Yuki-chan.”
         
          “shall I wear my apron with my school swimsuit today?”

          “or maybe the apron and bloomers?”

          “or perhaps… only the apron?”

“you’re in the way, pervert.” Mayu stood there giving Yuki evils,

“I can’t help it! There’s nothing to do and you won’t let me help!” Yuki screamed.

“sheesh… okay, then, would you taste this?” Mayu help out a tempura,

“really?!” Yuki said excited,

‘no pretending to be newlyweds.” Jurina cringed,

“ahhh…” Yuki opened her mouth,

*munch*

“heh?!” Yuki cried,

“not bad, but I think the oil might need to be a little hotter” Rena suggested,

“hauuu” Mayuki sulked,

“Yuki-san.”

“Taste mine too!” Sae proposed, “say ahhh…” Sae held out something black and had a guey, purpley colour mixed with green, sauce on it.

“w-what is that?” Yuki asked with a horrified expression.

“it’s food, baka. What else would it be?” Sae felt offended,

“it looks like poison to me.” Jurina commented.

“ehhh?!!!” Sae said shocked.

                                                      -----------------------------------------

“okay, let’s toast to Mayu-chan’s return and our new member!” Jurina raised her glass,

“gampai!” everyone joined,

“now, let’s party!” Jurina fist pumped,

“ittadakimasu!” Yuki picked up her chopsticks, “whoa! President, you’re an awesome cook!” Yuki chewed happily.

“cooking is one of Jurina’s few good points.” Rena stated,

“hey! What does that mean?!” Jurina scowled,

“blech! What is ‘specimen X’ here?” Yuki looked at the black stuff, with disgust.

“you saw it earlier! It’s hamburger steak!” Sae protested.

“Yuki-san, please try this.” Mayu offered a bowl of veg and meat stir fry,

“did you make this, Mayu?”

“y-yeah.” Mayu blushed.

“then, you bet I will.” Yuki plopped the food in her mouth, “It’s so tasty! Right up there with the president’s!”,

“thank goodness” Mayu said with relief.

“hmph! Let me try!” Sae also ate some, “hmmm…… oishii!” Sae said with a ‘hauuu this is so good’ but depressed look.

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*watching psychic films*

TV: “let’s start by having you bend a spoon.”

*a man is is rubbing a spoon while looking constipated, while the guy next to him is having like a meltdown, and also looking constipated, the guy having a meltdown screams in agony, in front of him a tomato explodes, so you can guess what happened to his head, people scream*

Mayu had a terrified look on her face and closes her eyes out of fear, when she opens them she finds Yuki next to her, trying to kiss and hug her, “president I’m scared!” Mayu goes and hugs Jurina instead.

“no way!...” Yuki says upset,

“Yuki-san I’m scared!” Sae tries to cuddle Yuki,

“save the jokes for your cooking.” Yuki pushes Sae away.

                                                            ------------------------------------------------

After the films…

Sae notices an old picture of Jurina, Rena, Yuki and Mayu.

“why don’t we take a new one?” Jurina said holding a camera,

“okay, say cheese!” *everyone poses* “cheese!”,

*everyone slept round Mayu’s, Mayu on the edge of the bed, Jurina in the middle and Sae on the side next to the wall, meanwhile the raven haired girls are on the floor, Yuki next to the bed and Rena on the opposite side*

“umm…” Jurina woke up, getting a drink out the fridge,

*Mayu rolls of the bed*

“hmm?” Jurina stared at Mayu sleeping next to Yuki now,

“well, well…”

                                              -------------------------------------------------------


Morning comes…

(Yuki rolled off in her sleep, so she drifted from Mayu)

“umm.. ah…*yawn*” Mayu rubs her tiresome eyes,

“ohayou, Mayu-chan.” Jurina walks in,

“president?… ohayou..” Mayu says still tired.

“looks like you’re still sleepy. But seeing this will wake you up in no time.” Jurina pulls out her phone,

*picture of Mayuki sleeping together, and Mayu is snuggled, hugging Yuki*

Mayu blinks, still trying grasp the situation, “hmm…”. “wh-what is that?!”, Mayu burst into shock,

“please,  delete it!” Mayu shakes Jurina, who looks pretty satisfied with her achievement.

“ohoho, what should I do…” Jurina laughs,

“let me sleep a little longer mum…” Yuki mumbles, Jurina puts her phone in Yuki’s face, Yuki opens her eyes.

“please, send that to me so I can make a poster!!” Yuki suddenly gets up,

“a poster?!” Mayu shouts,

“naa, on second thought, I think I will delete it.” Jurina presses a button,

“noooooooooo!!!!!!!!” Yuki screams with sadness and cries,

“don’t worry, I sent it to you before I deleted it.” Jurina whispers in Mayu’s ear, Mayu blushes.

“hora, Sae-san. Wake up! It’s morning!” Jurina claps her hands,

Mayu looks at the picture on her phone, smiling.

“bye bye, Mayu-chan!” Jurina waves,

“thanks for having us over.” Rena said appreciatively.

“see you at school tomorrow.” Sae says,

“un, see you tomorrow.” Mayu waves and closes the door.

Suddenly the doorbell rings…

“hai! coming!” Mayu opens the door,

“huh? Yuki-san?”

“sorry, I forgot something.” Yuki told Mayu,

“forgot something?” Mayu asked,

“here. A housewarming gift.” Yuki holds out a present.

“Yuki-san… you didn’t have to-” Mayu opened the gift,

“what is this?”

“it’s an alpaca themed toilet paper, you like alpacas don’t you? I asked Jurina what to get and she said get something practical, so I found this and had to get it.” Yuki said proudly,

“um… ok.. thanks, I guess” Mayu stared at her weird gift,

“you don’t like it?” Yuki pulled a sad face,

“n-no, I do like it. T-thank you very much Yuki-san.” Mayu said guilty,

“well that’s a relief, phew! Well I better be going now Mayuyu, *plants a kiss on Mayu’s cheek*.”

“hehe I stole a kiss of Mayuyu!” Yuki yelled in joy, skipping away with glee.

“sigh… Bakarin.” Mayu smiled.

Fin  :peace:
Title: Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl) UPDATE!! Chapter 5 08-09-2013
Post by: Shinoki on September 08, 2013, 10:28:36 PM
Yay!!!! Updato!
Lol... Yukirin Pervert...
Title: Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl) UPDATE!! Chapter 5 08-09-2013
Post by: cisda83 on September 09, 2013, 12:09:28 AM
It's not only you... I also forgot about this story...

Well great long update you had there...

So good and interesting

Yuki was so cute and sneaky...

Like it... Thank you for the update

Can't wait to see the next

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Mayuki fanfic Zannen shoujo (unfortunate girl) UPDATE!! Chapter 5 08-09-2013
Post by: olive29 on September 09, 2013, 05:06:57 AM
An update... :bow:

Yuko is so possesive to Mayu..  :lol:

But i like it..

Can't wait for the next chapter...