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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: ni.holic on January 28, 2013, 05:40:44 PM

Title: I hate you but I can't help to love you| Chap 1
Post by: ni.holic on January 28, 2013, 05:40:44 PM
Hello everyone! This is the first time I write a fic about AKB. I think it would be very bad, and my english is not good. I hope you will like it :)

Prologue


What will happen when our love forbidden?

I will always be by your side even our family forbidden our love

Promise?

I promise


Whether this love of life we can not be perfect ... please let us meet again in the next life to be able to complete this love




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Tit.....Tit.....Tit.....

"Agh! That stupid dream again" the handsome boy groan when he heard the alarm bell

Tsock...Tsock...Tsock

"Oiiii! Have you finished? We are going to be late for school" a voice shouted from the door

"Okay Okay. I've done and stop whining. I don't ask you to wait for me, you can go ahead if you want"

"No! We are close friends, and close friends must go together" the handsome boy's friend says

"Tsk, whatever" the handsome boy smirk.

When they go to the front of the class and they hear the voice to stop their

"Oh no, it's her again" the handsome boy's friend shouted when he hear the familiar voice

"Rikuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu" after that a little girl kneading hugged the boy named Riku

"Yuko! Let me out, Yukooooooooooo" Riku was begging in vain despite knowing the answer

"No no no, I love you, Riku" the time he didn't notice Yuko was kissing him on the cheek

"You two if you want to hug or kiss then go to your room and do it. And don't standing in front of doors " the handsome boy shouted

"We're sorry"

"Baka" the handsome boy smirk and goes to class


In class

"Hello everyone! Before the start of class, I want you to get acquainted with new student" Mariko sensei says

"It's annoying" the handsome boy thought

"My name is Watanabe Mayu. Nice to meet you" The cute girl named Mayu said with a cold face
Title: Re: I hate you but I can't help to love you| Prologue
Post by: mo-chan on January 28, 2013, 06:50:24 PM
welcome :D 
sounds like romeo and juliet story XD
the handsome is Yuki right?! :P
Title: Re: I hate you but I can't help to love you| Prologue
Post by: Tam_atsu on January 28, 2013, 10:57:29 PM
KOJIYUU!!!! Continue it please!!  :inlove:
Title: Re: I hate you but I can't help to love you| Prologue
Post by: Hii_chan on January 29, 2013, 05:16:00 AM
so it's Mayuki, or Saemayu :? :?
Uhm I don't no but I hope it's Saemayu
waiting your next update :welcome
Title: Re: I hate you but I can't help to love you| Prologue
Post by: cisda83 on January 29, 2013, 06:17:03 AM
Ah another Mendol-type story.... Good... can't wait

I hope all the other members of Mendol also here.... Kai and Kuu

Thank you for the prologue....

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: I hate you but I can't help to love you| Prologue
Post by: ChuuuPuffss on January 29, 2013, 11:20:09 AM
That dude is either Sae or Yuki... But I want Yuki ;~; Update soon xD
Title: Re: I hate you but I can't help to love you| Prologue
Post by: hitomi hagiwara on February 15, 2013, 11:35:35 AM
i just wondering who that handsome boy??
Title: Re: I hate you but I can't help to love you| Prologue
Post by: ni.holic on March 15, 2013, 08:27:00 AM
I'm sorry everyone. I've been a bit busy lately because of exams in school should not be posted fic  :(. expect you all to sympathize. Chapter 1 will be updated soon  :nervous maybe tomorrow  :D
Title: Re: I hate you but I can't help to love you| Prologue
Post by: Chanaline on March 15, 2013, 01:08:07 PM
It's Mayuki??

Well, it sound good! Continue it!!!
Title: Re: I hate you but I can't help to love you| Prologue
Post by: Riechan on March 15, 2013, 04:06:13 PM
Yeyyy! Kojiyuu ♥♥ and Mayuki? Yiee
Please Continue
Waiting for other pairings to come
Thank you O(∩_∩)O
Title: Re: I hate you but I can't help to love you| Prologue
Post by: kuro808 on March 15, 2013, 05:12:06 PM
I'm interested with how this story will flow

Posted by the mento Hawaiian

Title: Re: I hate you but I can't help to love you| Chap 1
Post by: ni.holic on March 17, 2013, 09:07:10 AM
Chap 1

"My name is Watanabe Mayu. Nice to meet you" The cute girl named Mayu said

"She's so cute" Boy A

"I want her to be my girlfriend" Boy B

"Please be my girlfriend" Boy C shouted

"She look like princess" Girl A

"I think I'm in love with her" Girl B

"Hai hai.... Everyone keep silence. Watanabe san! Where you want to sit?" Mariko sensei asked

"You can sit with me" Boy A said but Mayu ignore him. She looked at once and her eyes stopped where the handsome boy sit and said "I want to sit next to him".

"Are you su......" Not wait Mariko sensei complete question. Mayu go to where the handsome boy sit.

Apparently felt someone was watching him, the handsome boy looked at Mayu. "Anou..... Kashiwagi kun! From now Watanabe san will be sitting next to you." Mariko sensei said in a serious tone.

"No! I do not want to sit near anyone. One is her sit with another, second that she can go home" The handsome boy said in a calm voice but makes everyone around terrified because his cold face.

------------------ Meanwhile on the other side ------------------

"Look so fun. Hey! Why we not bet that she is subject to change seats?" Yuko asked

"Good idea. Let us relax after school any fatigue" Kai excitedly replies

"You always relax and you never learn" Kuu mock and laugh

"Shut up Kuu! I do not want you to say it" Kai shouted

"How about you, Riku? You will join with us?" Yuko asked while hugging him

"Huh! What? Join what?" Riku asked

"Nothing~ He said this meant that he shall join with us" Yuko said and kiss his cheek

"Ok! I think she's going to change the other seat" Kai, Kuu and Riku said

"Yes! We are to be a soulmate" Kai laugh and give them high five

"Hmm.... I don't think so. If you lose, you *Kai and Kuu* have to do Osin me a week, and you *Riku* let me kiss you" Yuko said

"Deal" Kai, Kuu and Riku said

------------------ Meanwhile ------------------

"I do not want to talk much with you, go find another place and sit down"

"Kashiwagi kun" Mariko sensei whispered

"Kashiwagi Yuki... You will regret with what you just said" Mayu smirked then she leaned to kiss on the lips by Yuki

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Here Chap 1  :nervous How do you feel? Please comment let me know. I'm planning to add more pairs, would you please give me some idea  XD
Title: Re: I hate you but I can't help to love you| Chap 1
Post by: yuukimoko on March 17, 2013, 09:31:58 AM
wahhh~ Mayuyu is so bold! and Yuki is a boy? cute! handsome!


thanks for the update~
Title: Re: I hate you but I can't help to love you| Chap 1
Post by: Elo on March 17, 2013, 12:31:54 PM
yosh I see kojiyuu mayuki hehe  :w00t: :D :drool:

keep it up  :twothumbs :twothumbs

haha yuki plays hard to get and mayu the opposite  :P XD
Title: Re: I hate you but I can't help to love you| Chap 1
Post by: cisda83 on March 17, 2013, 12:45:30 PM
Ah... Yuki is so cold...

Kai, Kuu & Yuko are like the class clown?!

Riku is a airhead?!

Very funny.... Mayu just kissed Yuki... to make him regret rejecting her?!

I can't wait to see the next one

Thank you for the lovely update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: I hate you but I can't help to love you| Chap 1
Post by: Riechan on March 17, 2013, 04:58:18 PM
Ehh kisuu!  XD
GOOO MAYUUUU!   :cow:  :cow:
Thanks for the update  :twothumbs
Title: Re: I hate you but I can't help to love you| Chap 1
Post by: kuro808 on March 17, 2013, 06:23:14 PM
 :lol: That was really funny between Yuki and Mayu
Title: Re: I hate you but I can't help to love you| Chap 1
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on March 17, 2013, 06:34:19 PM
ohh mayuyu  :hehehe: :lol: first she sits next to him, then she kisses him
poor yuki-kun it seems your gonna be stuck with mayu-chan :P :heart: :yep:
kojiyuu alert!! :cathappy: yay kai, riku, kuu and yuko have joind :deco:
thanx for the update :cow: :bow:
Title: Re: I hate you but I can't help to love you| Chap 1
Post by: leEwẬy on March 18, 2013, 01:22:53 PM
Your fic has Mayuki and Kojiyuu  :ding:
Hmm, I wonder will this fic also has Atsumina :on drink:
Yuki's danso :on woohoo:
Yuki will have a hard time with Mayu :kekeke:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
Title: Re: I hate you but I can't help to love you| Chap 1
Post by: Chanaline on March 20, 2013, 01:29:19 PM
Mayu is already in Mayu YAY!!! She is so bold XD

Mayu are going to disturb the peace of Yuki XD

Thank you it seems really interesting for the next.