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Title: [SCRIPT]Princess and the Prisioner Act 1 Scene 3 2/13/13
Post by: kuro808 on February 10, 2013, 07:56:00 AM: I wanted to try something, if you like it, it shall flow if not, it will still flow

ACT 1

Scene 1: Akihabara Prison

Guard 1 and Guard 2 knocks on door.

Guard 1: Jurina-san, you are up for parole.

Jurina: Right, the yearly procedure to get me back here again.

Guard 1: Positive thinking will drive you forward.

Jurina: Negative thinking does the same… to my death!

Guard 2: I guess the girl’s mouth just wants to be slapped.

Jurina: A spit for your cares.

Guard 1: Calm down Hiro. She’ll be gone for good one day.

Hiro: It doesn’t matter now. She’ll take one for the road.

Jurina: No pain can be worse than the murder of my parents.

Enter JUDGE

Judge: Murder? I swear they were rebelling against the nation.

Jurina: They were loyal servants until a plot to turn them against the king.

Judge: The king has every right to kill traitors, like your parents.

Jurina: Send me back to the cell if you must but the people know the truth.

Judge: Unfortunately I can’t do that. The king has asked me to appoint you as a guardian for his daughter.

Jurina: I won’t.

Judge: You have no choice in the matter. He has selected you to revenge your parent’s true murderers.

Jurina: Eh? The king wants me to find the people who killed them. He should look at the mirror one more time before telling someone else that he hasn’t killed a person.

Judge: Jurina-san, commenting against the king is a serious matter. Your head can be rolling if you stop your tongue from letting out poisonous words.

Jurina: Does it matter? My words sting a lot more than a hundred men stabbing him in his oversized belly.

Hiro grabs his nightstick and strikes Jurina in the back.

Judge: It does matter to him but I am forced to let you leave here and be escorted to the castle.

Jurina: What if I refuse?

Judge: I can’t let you do that. I have reasons to let you live and it involves his daughter, Rena.

Jurina: The princess of the kingdom. Did she get married?

Judge: She was kidnapped.

Jurina: Good! Now he is worried to send his army to fight another useless war.

Hiro unleashes another strike to the back forcing Jurina to her knees.

Judge: He doesn’t want to fight because his daughter is too precious as a kill. You are needed to retrieve her back to the kingdom.

Jurina: He’s begging?

Judge: No he has heard of you and he never did meet your parents. Honestly, you are mistaken about your parents.

Jurina: They died protecting the king.

Judge: They died against the king.

Jurina: So why would he want me? To lie about my parent’s death?

Judge: He wants you to hear the truth. If you don’t come, the muddled thoughts of your parents would only drive you crazier.

Jurina: I won’t accept.

Judge: It won’t work like that.

The guards escort her out the backdoor.

Judge: The girl should know that the king wasn’t responsible.

Enter Deputy

Deputy: Jurina is off our books.

Judge: Good job Mariko.

Mariko: She doesn’t know the truth of the matter, does she?

Judge: Unfortunately not. She is right that her parents were murdered by the king. The issue was they were in a middle of an important role.

Mariko: Spying?

Judge: Not really. They were trading secrets to the king’s men about his life. In being insecure, he was exposed for an illegitimate child with a concubine, his only son.

Mariko: Seems interesting… I need to return to my post.

Judge: Fine. Do you have the next case?

Mariko: Takahashi Minami and the height matter.

Judge: Grow a centimeter.

Mariko: Good one.

Judge: That’s kinda easy for you, are you losing your touch?

Mariko: Unless Akigori wants to have her next meal now…

Judge: Anyways we have the case of the missing princess

Mariko: Missing? Did she run away?

Judge: Mariko-san, she has been missing since the full moon rose over the Eastern sky.

Mariko: Three days and four nights

Judge: The guards are looking for her but the king wants to press charges against the country folks for luring her daughter to the lower end of society.

Mariko: I guess we need to send a group of warriors.

Judge: That has been arranged.

Mariko: Oh Judge Maeda has a vendetta towards the prisoner.

Judge: I don’t care about Ms. Jurina. The king will get his wish.

Mariko: I guess we shall exchange some words over tea.

Judge: We shall.

Judge and Mariko leave to the next chamber.
Title: Re: [SCRIPT]Princess and the Prisioner Act 1 Scene 1
Post by: cisda83 on February 10, 2013, 08:49:36 AM: Interesting story there... Wmatsui pairing.... any others?

but the King is a jerk... I mean what kind of judge is that... pushing prisoners doing their bidding without able to say no.

Some more... Jurina don't get lied to... be smarter... get your revenge... slowly... expose all the dirty secrets to the public.. have the king humiliate...

Then kill the King.... that should be how to get revenge on the most munafik person... the King

But I do hope Wmatsui is going to have happy ending even if Jurina kills the King

Thank you for the interesting fic...

Can't wait to see the next one

:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: [SCRIPT]Princess and the Prisioner Act 1 Scene 1
Post by: kuro808 on February 10, 2013, 08:52:41 AM: Quote from: cisda83 on February 10, 2013, 08:49:36 AM
Interesting story there... Wmatsui pairing.... any others?

but the King is a jerk... I mean what kind of judge is that... pushing prisoners doing their bidding without able to say no.

Some more... Jurina don't get lied to... be smarter... get your revenge... slowly... expose all the dirty secrets to the public.. have the king humiliate...

Then kill the King.... that should be how to get revenge on the most munafik person... the King

But I do hope Wmatsui is going to have happy ending even if Jurina kills the King

Thank you for the interesting fic...

Can't wait to see the next one

:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

W Matsui for sure, I will say no for now but its a general one pairing until other characters come out
Title: Re: [SCRIPT]Princess and the Prisioner Act 1 Scene 1
Post by: cisda83 on February 10, 2013, 09:07:12 AM: Thank you kurosawa87

I know you are not going to tell me anything...No Spoilers....

It was just my option if I am in Jurina's place...

I don't mind waiting to find out how the story going to develop...

Can't wait....it's going to be an interesting story... I think

Ah... good to know there will be more than one pairing... so it's going to be a long story....

Thank you....

:wub: :inlove: :love: :heart:
Title: Re: [SCRIPT]Princess and the Prisioner Act 1 Scene 1
Post by: kahem on February 10, 2013, 09:35:01 AM: I like the plot hehe
Title: Re: [SCRIPT]Princess and the Prisioner Act 1 Scene 1
Post by: Wmatsui22 on February 10, 2013, 11:34:48 AM: Hello kurosawa87 ! :D

Please Update Soon! :D

I hope it will be WMatsui :D
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Title: Re: [SCRIPT]Princess and the Prisioner Act 1 Scene 2 2/10/13
Post by: kuro808 on February 11, 2013, 06:42:57 AM: @kahem: thanks it is a combination of a few plots and one of my favorite plays

@WMatsui: call me Kuro, its easier and everyone calls me that :lol:

Act 1

Scene 2: King’s Court

Enter King and loyal members

King: Welcome all to my court. Please bow to me.

Loyal 1: To King Nagao

All: To King Nagao

King: Loyal servants, we are here to find my dear princess kidnapped by the fools of the West.

Loyal 1: Fools of the West? Why do they have to keep involving us with this fight?

King: Mayu, they fear our power and now they have leverage over us.

Mayu: We must fight!

Crowd cheers

King: I will not allow my army to take on damage. The prisoners shall work for us.

Mayu: They will betray us. We cannot trust them.

King: I have no choice. They will be forced to assist us.

Three prisoners enter with Hiro behind them.

Mayu: They are not skilled as I am, King Nagao.

King: It doesn’t matter about skill. It is about my daughter.

Hiro: These are our warriors to save the kingdom. Miyazaki Miho, Akigori, and Matsui Jurina.

King: Fine selection, guard. You will be excused.

Hiro: Thank you sir.

Hiro Exits

King: You three are here to free the princess from the fools of the West.

Miho: What is our prize for your daughter?

King: Freedom is the least of your concern. You’ll be free as of now but time is your enemy with allies surrounding your every path out of the kingdom.

Akigori: So we are just mercenaries to get your daughter back?

King: Yes you are.

Miho: Seems fair to us.

Akigori: I agree.

King: Matsui Jurina, have you not anything to say? We are talking about your life here.

Jurina: None to say about you. One to a son.

King: Hmm a son? What do you mean? I have no son.

Jurina: I mean the bright person up there. He looks like a sun with the yellow cape and crown.

King: Praise the man who freed you? You must be adjusted to prison life.

Jurina: I am not sir. The bars only protect you from what is truly known to the people. I know the truth. The people surrounding us are martyrs to your life. You live, they die. Doesn’t that work out for you?

King: The words of a prisoner don’t hurt me. You are the ground I walk on.

Jurina: Enough to make cracks.

King: You are soil to me.

Jurina: We are the sinkhole to your reign.

King: You are the toilet I possess.

Jurina: Yet the seat doesn’t fit well so a squat is an adventure to get up from.

Mayu: This girl is insolent. She cannot fight with her mouth.

Jurina: Nor can the king.

Mayu: One more from you my sword will be the last sight of your life.

King: Enough! The three will head to the gates immediately and offer them a weapon.

The three prisoners exit.

Mayu: You take them as saviors? I think you must be crazy.

King: Leave it to me and fight the war brewing beyond our walls. The North shall overtake the East soon and head for our lands. We cannot let them take our precious goods.

Mayu: I will fight to protect you sir. My wife is also expecting me to fight.

King: Good. The maiden will be happy for a warrior in battle. Disgrace will not be taken lightly.

Mayu: Yuki, beautiful as snow yet black as coal. Her mind is on the castle, her heart is with me. She feels happy that I am fighting for the country but not happy in this kingdom. I will force her to understand, I am leaving the castle walls.

Mayu exits

Jurina, Akigori, and Miho reach the gate.

Akigori: You seem a little ticked with the king. Does he strike you as a loafer?

Jurina: Loafer is not my concern. His reign must end.

Miho: You are not planning to kill him?

Jurina: I don’t want to kill him. I want to see him fall.

Akigori: Are you planning to defect? That would be reasonable in your position.

Jurina: No, you must be looking for your escape yourself, if I may ask?

Akigori: I wouldn’t do so because my family would be in danger. My best friend is a defector and I begged her to come back when I was caught.

Jurina: I guess he disregarded your plea?

Akigori: Unfortunately, he overruled the judge of my case. The judge was disappointed that he did that. Judge Maeda, the fairest of the court was under pressure to reverse the decision and she did with heavy thoughts.

Jurina: She was swift with me. Her words were poison to the members within the court. She knew my parents were supporters until the incident happen.

Miho: I feel whatever has happened then should be out of your mind. You are going to be free after this. The grudge will be over soon enough.

Jurina: If I believe that, he would have released me earlier but now he is afraid I can revolt and send an attack his way.

Akigori: I doubt that’s the thinking.

Jurina: If you don’t believe me, I’m fine. I feel ready to return to my cell.

Miho: I’ll take the bow and arrow.

Akigori: This hammer is perfect for me. Take the sword, Jurina-san.

Jurina: Sure.

The three walked through the open gate.

ENTER Mayu and Yuki

Mayu: The three have left the premises.

Yuki: Don’t worry about them.

Mayu: I cannot help to think that the king doesn’t want me as his successor.

Yuki: If that was the case, he would send you out into battle and I would be here without my hubby.

Mayu: I love you so. My wife cares too much for me. She will risk my manhood for the bed.

Yuki: Is my body starting to bore you? You were a baby towards my chest, suckling it at every opportunity. Still when it was raw, you kept at it until you feel asleep.

Mayu: Your body is wonderful. But my blood boils over the king’s orders to not fight. We will be attacked one day without an army. As the commander, I cannot train the men to fight for their land. It bothers me that he doesn’t see that.

Yuki: Sit down, Mayu. You need to rest. The sleepless nights have toiled in your mind the urge to fight. Fighting is not the solution, we must be wise.

Mayu: You are always right. Maybe I can rest with your soothing words.

Yuki: Or… we can serve our purpose of making an heir. Wouldn’t it that sound fun?

Mayu: My eyes will only cry tears to see him. Then, I can have my wish of seeing your curves within your waist, your hips and butt, only to dream of my wish.

Yuki: My bosom becomes second to your butt fetish. Aunty must have fed you too much of her milk. Then again, your mother was aware of your eyes over towards Aunt Yuko. She warned me if you weren’t aware of your eyes, I would lose you.

Mayu: I love you very much. If the stars could come closer, I would grab one for you and name it after you.

Yuki: You are a romantic in bed and on the battlefield. This passion drives me to wanting a child. The bed is far.

Mayu: I cannot show my poise in such a public place. Yuki, my love, we shall venture to our quarters and finally make your wish come true.

Yuki: Take my body first.

Mayu: Hai! We shall venture to the place to confirm our child.

Yuki: I guess I’m not the only one.

Mayu: I have been waiting since the court meeting. The king never cares for his own blood.

Yuki: His blood is still his blood. It pours the same color.

Mayu: Mines is of a different tint.

Mayu carries her away to the private quarters.
Title: Re: [SCRIPT]Princess and the Prisioner Act 1 Scene 2 2/10/13
Post by: cisda83 on February 11, 2013, 10:20:14 AM: What kind of king is that.... :angry:

Demanding the subjects to bow before him... :thumbdown:

The things he said to Jurina are so crazy... :panic:

Basically, everyone and everything is beneath him... He is the GOD, the BEST and ABOVE everyone and everything else... :shakeit:

Yeah Mayu and Yuki interaction is so cute and lovely... :twothumbs

Yeah Jurina is safe now... at least he is outside the castle... he can do whatever he wants now.... Great going :fap

I can't wait to see the next chapter

Thank you for the update

:wub: :inlove: :love: :heart:
Title: Re: [SCRIPT]Princess and the Prisioner Act 1 Scene 2 2/10/13
Post by: Wmatsui22 on February 11, 2013, 12:29:09 PM: Hi kuRo-san :D

Yehey! You finally update again :D

Thank You
Title: Re: [SCRIPT]Princess and the Prisioner Act 1 Scene 2 2/10/13
Post by: kuro808 on February 11, 2013, 05:00:37 PM: Quote from: cisda83 on February 11, 2013, 10:20:14 AM
What kind of king is that.... :angry:

Demanding the subjects to bow before him... :thumbdown:

The things he said to Jurina are so crazy... :panic:

Basically, everyone and everything is beneath him... He is the GOD, the BEST and ABOVE everyone and everything else... :shakeit:

Yeah Mayu and Yuki interaction is so cute and lovely... :twothumbs

Yeah Jurina is safe now... at least he is outside the castle... he can do whatever he wants now.... Great going :fap

I can't wait to see the next chapter

Thank you for the update

:wub: :inlove: :love: :heart:

Thnx for your kind words

Jurina is still a girl :lol: It may sound like she is a guy but she is a gutsy person :lol:
Title: Re: [SCRIPT]Princess and the Prisioner Act 1 Scene 2 2/10/13
Post by: sakura_drop_ on February 11, 2013, 05:40:32 PM: I oredi have kuro-chan and kuronyan between my friends... How can I call you? kurotan? kuroro? sawa-san? kuropyon? ah, so many possibilities XD ;)

About the story... :bow: :bow: :bow: for mentioning Yuko-sama!!!

MaYuki so cute~

King... :kickass: :knee: :mon worklate:

Juju, go and save Rena-sama!!! :onioncheer: :onioncheer: :onioncheer:
Title: Re: Re: [SCRIPT]Princess and the Prisioner Act 1 Scene 2 2/10/13
Post by: kuro808 on February 11, 2013, 06:45:32 PM: Quote from: sakura_drop_ on February 11, 2013, 05:40:32 PM
I oredi have kuro-chan and kuronyan between my friends... How can I call you? kurotan? kuroro? sawa-san? kuropyon? ah, so many possibilities XD ;)

About the story... :bow: :bow: :bow: for mentioning Yuko-sama!!!

MaYuki so cute~

King... :kickass: :knee: :mon worklate:

Juju, go and save Rena-sama!!! :onioncheer: :onioncheer: :onioncheer:

Can call me kurorin XD

Giving mayuyu a problem was actually key here and reason for Yuko to actually appear

Anyways thnx for the comment

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Title: Re: [SCRIPT]Princess and the Prisioner Act 1 Scene 2 2/10/13
Post by: kahem on February 13, 2013, 01:36:41 AM: Mayuyu is a guy?
Title: Re: [SCRIPT]Princess and the Prisioner Act 1 Scene 2 2/10/13
Post by: kuro808 on February 13, 2013, 08:46:29 AM: Quote from: kahem on February 13, 2013, 01:36:41 AM
Mayuyu is a guy?

Yes Mayuyu is a guy, effeminate of course :lol:
Title: Re: [SCRIPT]Princess and the Prisioner Act 1 Scene 3 2/13/13
Post by: kuro808 on February 14, 2013, 09:09:02 AM: ACT 1

Scene 3: Forest outside the castle

Miho: Half a day has gone with little use of my bow.

Akigori: Killing a pig was well done on your part, as my club cracked its skull open. Yet the sword remains clean.

Jurina: I don’t want to taint my weapon. I offered a prayer for our fortune.

Akigori: Very little to that effect.

Miho: I hate carrying the meat around.

Akigori: Let the swordsman take the meat.

Jurina: I’ll carry it.

Miho: Now I can attack with all my strength.

Akigori: We are going into the depths of the forest now. Watch for anything suspicious.

Jurina: Okay.

Akigori steps into the brush.

Miho: Do you feel the tremor?

Jurina: Yes. Akigori get out!

Akigori: Don’t worry.

Miho: It is too late. The eyes are now watching us.

Jurina: It looks god-like.

Monster: How dare you kill a pig without a sacrifice?

Akigori: We offered the innards as the sacrifice.

Monster: Meat is the passing point.

Miho: Jurina throw the pig towards his feet.

Jurina: No, it is our meat.

Akigori: Don’t be the hero. Give up the meat.

Jurina: No.

Monster: My stomp can knock any warrior to the ground.

Miho: Give up the meat!

Jurina: Never!

Monster: I guess one kill shall drive them away.

Akigori: Watch out!

Jurina rolled to her right.

Jurina: I shall attack for our safety.

Miho: Jurina don’t do that!

Jurina: One strike to the heel.

Monster: Human, you shall not get away.

Miho: My arrow shall pierce his scales.

Monster: Humans cannot win this battle

Akigori: The path to the final blow. His head is mine!

Monster: NOOOOOOO!

Monster collapses and transform into a pig.

Jurina: A fake pig god.

Miho: How did you know?

Jurina: They don’t attack unless provoked. This one wanted attention early. It had a curse on it and anger is the last goal of fighting.

Akigori: Wise for a young woman.

Jurina: It doesn’t pertain to me but you guys should have attacked earlier when I was ready to deliver a blow.

Miho: Wisdom and youth rarely mix well

Jurina: Mock the youngest one and she saves your lives.

Akigori: Okay you two, let’s move forward

The three move forward to the jungle.

ENTER Judge and Deputy into the King’s chamber

King: Welcome to my chambers!

Judge: King Nagao, always nice to be in your presence

Deputy: Same here, why do you call us?

King: My daughter is a curious fellow. My son is fixed on his aunt. His wife curiously cares for him too much. Yet my manhood feels for her.

Judge: The wife is motherly yet young. Does she possess any children other than what Mayu has brought?

Deputy: Mayu has brought none yet the wife brings out the envy among the women.

King: Don’t tease about her. Mayu will slice each of your heads off for your inconsiderate comments.

Judge: Mayu understands he is not known as your son and possesses what many boys do have between their loins, a sword with ultimate power to penetrate any enemy for his gain.

Deputy: Has the judge received such power?

Judge: My husband has one though and even does my friend.

Deputy: Friend? She is a him?

Judge: She dares strike it upon the weak and produces blood on first contact.

Deputy: Your husband must have one too? Am I certain?

Judge: He has one but rarely uses it in battle. He was swift once now it only hits once every great while when he is in defense.

Deputy: So it is. I never faced one with such vigor. Although many insist on the whore before touching the pure.

King: Are you mocking me deputy?

Deputy: I am only saying truth, King Nagao. Men like words to build their swords into steel to face the fire. However, I heard a fire has been burning of late.

Judge: It hasn’t, right? We cleared them of their curses when we caught one of them last week.

Deputy: Yet steel cannot fight on its own and another fire has been on the loose ever since.

Judge: Is that so? I apologize for letting such things ruin the kingdom.

King: You are forgiven judge.

Deputy: What about me?

King: I shall demote you to jester.

Jester: I shall take as you wish.

Judge: That’s cruel.

King: I need a person to entertain me and not mock me.

EXIT Judge and Jester

ENTER Yuko

Yuko: Brother, how are you doing?

King: Imouto, don’t worry about me.

Yuko: Mayu has grown to a wonderful man.

King: Yet he likes you instead of his wife.

Yuko: I blame myself for it but Mayu has been playing with me since he was small. Rena was always in your caring eyes.

King: I wish it were different. Rena has refused to love me once as her father and now she can’t be seen as a princess through my eyes.

Yuko: You have a prince that can succeed you.

King: Mayu? He can never succeed unless his sister dies.

Yuko: It can be arranged.

King: I won’t do so. I rather kill Mayu than Rena.

Yuko: That’s harsh brother. Mayu has always been looking up to you.

King: It may be so but he has fixed his eyes on you.

Yuko: Has he seen her dressed down?

King: I have.

Yuko: Mayu must have seen her flesh. Her breasts are bountiful and her body is angel-like to the highest degree.

King: Don’t get me going. My wife will hear your comments and wrap her hands around your neck.

Yuko: I shall keep my thoughts within me.
King: Sister, please let Mayu venture over his wife.

Yuko: I shall ride away at the moon’s shadow. If you must contact me, send Kojima.

King: Yuko-chan, Kojima is your friend and lover. I will always send her.

Yuko: You are the king. Thanks for your concern.

EXIT Yuko

King: My son. My bastard son. Can’t even look at his wife without feeling remorse for his father. I must not think of her. She is evil for me but Mayu please produce a son for my sake.
Title: Re: [SCRIPT]Princess and the Prisioner Act 1 Scene 3 2/13/13
Post by: cisda83 on February 16, 2013, 10:29:57 AM: Thank you for the update

Jurina is wise beyond her year.... that's good... she can survive her trip.

I have nothing to say about the King's family... except... there are full of screw up bunch of people...

I can't wait to see what's happening next....

:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: [SCRIPT]Princess and the Prisioner Act 1 Scene 3 2/13/13
Post by: Ricchan_Sawa on February 17, 2013, 05:32:29 PM: Reading this things really makes me want to be a Prisoner *LOL*

Aa... Hell I'm hungry~