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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: umichan on March 04, 2013, 02:19:33 AM

Title: You, Me and My Son - Chapter 3 (KaixRay, Marikuu, Saeyuki & others) 18/06/2014
Post by: umichan on March 04, 2013, 02:19:33 AM
well......i know that i'm not done with the tale, but i'm going to finish it in two more chapters. I want to post this a long time ago but i was still writting the tale, so .....

i hope you guys like the prologue, and please comment on what you guys think the story is going to be.

Thank you.



You, Me, and My Son
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Prologue
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“Congratulations Mr. and Mrs. Takahashi, you are going to be parents” the doctor shake hands with the two soon to be parents.

Kai and Atsuko were so happy to know the news. After of marriage, they finally were going to be parents. “I’m going to be a father” Kai said happily.

“I’m going to be a mother” Atsuko said also happily.

“I’m so happy, I love you” Kai kiss his wife. “I love you too”

After a few a months, the couple was searching for names for their baby.

“If it is a girl, let’s name her Atsuko” Kai’s head was resting in Atsuko’s lap.

“No, if it is a boy lets name him Mizuki “Atsuko pat Kai’s head.

On the 7th month of the pregnancy, they went to the hospital. That day would change their life.

“Doctor, what’s wrong” Kai asked worried.

“I’m afraid to tell you, but your wife will have to be careful for the last 2 month”

“Why”

“There is a high possibility that either she might die or she might lose the baby”

After that day, the married couple went to other doctors to see if there was a chance to safe both. The day had finally come; it was time for the truth. In an emergency room you can hear a baby cry.

“Atsuko. You did it” Kai was besides his wife.

“Please take care of him” Atsuko said weakly.

“My love, don’t talk like that, everything is going to be okay” Kai kiss Atsuko’s forehead. The future that was uncertain awaits him, but he was scared of losing the
person that he had love since the day he saw her.

“Please promise me”

Kai was crying; he couldn’t stand seeing his wife like this. He felt impotent to do something, if he could only scarify himself to let Atsuko and his son live, he would do it.
With her last strength Atsuko grab Kai’s hand and said, “ no matter what happens, everything is going to be alright, so promise me that you will take care of him” Atsuko weakly smiled.

“I promise” he kissed the hand of his wife.

“Here is your baby” a nurse held the baby in a blanket. Kai reach for his child.

“It’s a healthy boy” the nurse added.

“Look it’s our son” Kai showed Atsuko her son; she was smiling.

“He is beautiful, just like you” Kai was crying; holding Atsuko’s hand, so she can feel her son’s cheeks.

“Please….take care of…him” Atsuko slowly closed her eyes.

“Atsuko”

It hurts doesn’t it? It hurts me that you are not with me. I miss you and I guess you do too. Even if you have missed many things, I stupidly think that you are with me every moment. Our son, Mizuki, he has only seen picture of you and he asks me why aren’t you here, so I tell him that you are in heaven, protecting him. I miss you so much, that sometimes I cried at night. As the sky cries, I cry too. Remembering you is painful. With the joy I have left, I will smile. Time has passed and I haven’t healed; I still love you.


And well thank you for reading. Can any one guess who is the paring???
Well now i have to go back to my life. I will update this in like 3 week from now, so yeah.....

.......until the day comes.....
Title: Re: You, Me, and My Son (guess the paring)
Post by: kuro808 on March 04, 2013, 02:26:47 AM
So Acchan passes on leaving Kai alone with the baby.

Supposedly it'll continue from there :nervous
Title: Re: You, Me, and My Son (guess the paring)
Post by: umichan on March 04, 2013, 02:45:53 AM
yes it will continue from there.
Title: Re: You, Me, and My Son (guess the paring)
Post by: Haruko on March 04, 2013, 04:03:13 AM
Nooooooo my atsumina, I hope that ray or someone die ..but atsuko -_____- why.. I guess its gonna be takaharu or takayuu and i dont wanna it -_- gomen ne.. yeah I love my otp so much...

keep your best!..
Title: Re: You, Me, and My Son (guess the paring)
Post by: Hii_chan on March 04, 2013, 05:36:24 AM
wao..Atsuko passed away
so it will be Takaharu ,Takayuu, or Takatomo :w00t: :drool:
I cant guess because I love all Takamina's pairing
please update soon :welcome
Title: Re: You, Me, and My Son (guess the paring)
Post by: ChuuuPuffss on March 04, 2013, 11:25:49 AM
OTL While I was reading the sad part, a sad song suddenly played lol. Quite a coincidence~

Update soon~
Title: Re: You, Me, and My Son (guess the paring)
Post by: cisda83 on March 04, 2013, 11:49:44 AM
Ah... I feel sad for Atsuko....

what's going to happen with Kai.... he is still in love with Atsuko even after all this time...

Who is going to be with Kai after Atsuko....?

Well if there is no possibility for Atsuko to magically revive back... then I would say Haruna is going to be the best bet.

Although I would not mind if Tomomi is also another candidate...

Anyhow... it's your choice....

Can't wait to see what's going to happen

Thank you for this new fic.

 :heart: :love: :inlove: :wub:
Title: Re: You, Me, and My Son (guess the paring)
Post by: Sydney W on March 04, 2013, 04:06:53 PM
You have killed Atsuko character here. You need to revived Atsuko into Acchan character ~ I demand you to do so ~ i mean request  :kekeke: :hehehe:
Title: Re: You, Me, and My Son (guess the paring)
Post by: umichan on March 05, 2013, 12:10:28 AM
why are people requesting Atsuko to awake  from the death, and recarnate into Acchan. I thought it was the same person. Althought its a good idea.
Yeah some one was close who the paring is going to be but.....no body got it.
Nooooooo my atsumina, I hope that ray or someone die ..but atsuko -_____- why.. I guess its gonna be takaharu or takayuu and i dont wanna it -_- gomen ne.. yeah I love my otp so much...

keep your best!..

don't worry there will be a lot of flashbacks in the story for you to be satisfied with KaixAtsuko stuff.
i want to update tody, but i'm still writting chapter 2 and i usually start written in pencil then in the computer,and besides somethimes i don't have the inspiration to continue. but with story i will.
thank you for the people that read this.



........until the day comes.....
Title: Re: You, Me, and My Son (answer) not update
Post by: hitomi hagiwara on March 06, 2013, 01:22:42 PM
i think ray will come to kai life. it's better for me. i have watch mendol million times, i still think kaixray couple the sweetest couple ever.  :lol:
Title: Re: You, Me, and My Son (answer) not update
Post by: umichan on March 12, 2013, 01:02:00 AM
well hello there. apparently I have a writers block and I just had the idea of updating this story.

I hope you guys like it.

Chapter 1


“Have a good day, and be careful” Kai waved at his son who was in the entrance of the school. “Yes daddy” his son wave at him. It’s been six years since Atsuko died. Kai was strong though out those years, he kept living because of his son. His friends always were there. The years were hard for him especially when Mizuki was only a baby. Luckily Atsuko’s mother and his mother were there for him.

Today was his first day in Sae’s modeling company. He wasn’t exited but he was happy that he could win more money.

“Kai you will make all the contracts with the models” Sae told Kai. They were in Sae’s office. Sae is the owner of the company and he is also happily married to one of
the most famous models in Japan, Kashiwagi Yuki.

“Yes, and thank you for giving me this job” Kai vowed.

“Anything for a friend” Sae smiled and shakes hands with Kai.

“And about Mizuki, you can tell me if you need to go pick him up from school” Sae smile

“Ok thank you”

Later that day

“Mizuki how was school” Kai hugged his son. He pushed him gently to see his son’s face.

“Mizuki, what’s wrong…why are you crying” Kai wiped his son’s tears with his thumb.

“Some kid was making found of me because I don’t have a mom” Mizuki cried.

“Mizuki, you know even if she is not here, she will be in your heart” Kai pointed to Mizuki’s heart. Mizuki try to stop crying, but those words were the same as all this
years.

“I know but…” Mizuki couldn’t finish his words because his dad hugged him.

“Hey that’s the kid who doesn’t have a mom” one of the kids shouted and pointed to Mizuki. Mizuki cried harder, he push his dad and started running.

“Mizuki” Kai yell

“Ma’am can you please tell your son no to be so rude” Kai pointed to the kid that has just said those horrible words. After he said that he started running to find his
son.

“Mizuki”

At some other point, there was a woman who was walking with a lollipop I her mouth. Every guy who was crossing her path looked at her. The tall woman walked without a care in the world…well that what it seemed.
Then she stopped when she saw a kid, about six years old, who was crying in the bench. She moved slowly to the kid.

“Are you okay?” the woman asked.

“No” the boy answer.

“Where is your mom, kid?” the woman asked as she squad to see the boy’s face better.

“My mom is not here anymore” the boy started to cry more. The woman thought about what the bot had said, and then it hit her.

“I’m sorry. Hey do you want a lollipop that always cheers me up” the woman took out a lollipop form her bag.

“My dad says I should not accept candy from strangers” the boy wiped his tears.

“Well how about this, I tell you my name, so I’ll not be stranger” the woman suggested.

“Okay” the boy look at the woman

“My name is Ray and yours?” Ray asked

“My name is Mizuki Takahashi” Mizuki smile. He thought Ray was a good person. Ray gave him the lollipop and he accepted is happily.

“Now Mizuki where is your dad? Ray asked him. She turned to see around if there was someone looking for Mizuki.

“I don’t know, I run away from him” the bot look to his side.

“That young and running away” Ray move her head side-to-side signifying ‘I can’t believe this’.

“Mizuki” a man yell. Ray got up and looked at the blond short guy.

“Is that your father” Ray asked and Mizuki nodded.

“Mizuki, I have been looking for you” the man went running to his son and gave him went running to his son and gave him a hug.

“Daddy I’m okay, my friend cheer me up” Mizuki pointed to Ray.

“Thank you very much for keeping him company” the man vowed

“It was nothing Mr. ….” Ray wanted to say his name, but she didn’t knew his name.

“My name is Takahashi Kai” Ray smile.

“let me take you somewhere if I may, just as a thank you for looking after my son while I was searching for him” Kai smile.

“Can you please” Mizuki plead

“Okay, but only because of you”

After some time, they got to put a place where they had an indoor playground.

“I haven’t introduced myself, but you probably already know who I am” Ray was drinking a strawberry smoothie.

“Do I know you, you don’t seem familiar” Kai answer as he still kept on watching Mizuki.

“Seriously you don’t who I am?” Ray answered a little shock. She thought all Japan knew her.

“No I really don’t know. What’s your name” Kai turn to look at Ray.

“I’m the top selling diva, Ray” Ray said proudly.

Crickets that’s all you can hear.

“Seriously, I still don’t know who you are” Kai shrugged.

“but I’m everywhere” and like magic, Kai turn around and saw a poster of Ray in the window, a person passing by had a CD of Ray in his hands, then a truck came by
promoting Ray’s new tour.

“I don’t think I have heard of you” Kai shuck his head side to side. This is why Kai never knew of her: Kai was a hard-working man that paid no attention to anything else except his son and his work.

“Okay, well now I know that not all Japan knows me”

“You must be proud” Kai chuckled

“Mr. Takahash-“Ray interrupted by Kai.

“Just call me Kai”

“Okay. Kai if it isn’t too much to ask, but did your wife…..is she in a better place now?” Ray didn’t want to say the word “death”.

“She is, she died after she gave birth to my son” Kai sounded sad.

“I’m very sorry” Ray gave a slight smile.

“It’s okay” Kai  turned to see his son.

Ray saw that shine on Kai’s eyes, and she thought he was a dedicated father.

“Well, would you look at the time? I’m sorry, but I have to leave” Ray look at her cell phone.

“Really, I hope I didn’t make you late for what you are going to do”

“No its okay, but my manager is going to be mad at me, but I’ll put him in his place” Mizuki came and saw that Ray got up.

“Ray, where are you going” Mizuki walked towards Ray. Ray smiled and got to Mizuki’s level.

“I got to go, I have work to do” Ray smiled

“Hey do you want another lollipop?” Ray asked. Mizuki nodded. She got out a grape flavor lollipop and gave it to Mizuki.

“Mizuki, what do you say” Kai said as he got closer to him.

“Thank you ma’am” Mizuki vowed.

“It’s nothing. If you want to I can come by and visit you and give you another lollipop” Ray smile and look at Kai.

“If its okay with your father?” Ray added. She didn’t knew why she said that, but it felt right.

“Yes of course, but aren’t you busy being Japan’s number one diva” he sarcastically asked

“Yeah, but I have time for my friends” Ray patted Mizuki’s head.

“I hope we can see each other too friend” Mizuki smiled. Ray thought his expression was cute.

“Let’s not hope, let’s make it true” Ray got up and gave him a piece of paper, with her information on it.





well if you are asking yourself, where is Ray's bitchy self? well next chapter that side will appeared.

thank you.


.....until the day comes...
Title: Re: You, Me, and My Son Chapter 1
Post by: kuro808 on March 12, 2013, 01:28:41 AM
I like how the story is played out although...

I wished I didn't know about that last part :nervous
Title: Re: You, Me, and My Son Chapter 1
Post by: chemicalstar on March 12, 2013, 01:30:08 AM
idk. i'm starting to love Ray until you said that you'll reveal her bitchy side. hahahaha
Title: Re: You, Me, and My Son Chapter 1
Post by: cisda83 on March 12, 2013, 04:12:45 AM
Wah... Ray is such a nice girl.. here

She even give her personal detail to Mizuki...

Although she was arrogant as always.. to Kai and the world

and the selfish self is coming up soon... can't wait to see

Poor Mizuki... being bully for not having a mum... Yeah there are those kind of kids around...

Is Kai going to work with Ray....?

Is Kai going to slap Ray... and then Ray suddenly liking Kai afterward?

so it is KaixRay coupling... it's a good choice too...

This fic is not restricted to AKB only but Mendol too... Great choice

Well.. can't wait to see the next chapter

Thank you for the lovely update

 :heart: :love: :inlove: :wub:
Title: Re: You, Me, and My Son Chapter 1
Post by: Hii_chan on March 12, 2013, 10:05:36 AM
first, I wonder why ray can be nice like that :?
and in the end I understand :twisted:
I just hoped it was Takaharu but KaixRay is good too :thumbsup
It will be interesting :w00t:
please update soon :bow:
Title: Re: You, Me, and My Son Chapter 1
Post by: hitomi hagiwara on March 13, 2013, 02:39:29 AM
 :lol: i just got myself point there. right author? its ok if Ray become bitchy towards bad person. she so nice to Mizuki.  :deco:
Title: Re: You, Me, and My Son Chapter 1
Post by: Wmatsui22 on March 14, 2013, 10:33:35 AM
Hi....

Please update soon!!!

I really like the pairing and the story!!!!

I love KaiRay...

Thank You
Title: Re: You, Me, and My Son Chapter 1
Post by: Yagami.Rai on March 14, 2013, 02:30:07 PM
Woah! So it's KaixRay I guess? XD
It's been awhile since I last readed a KaixRay fanfiction!!!
I'm really looking forward to what is going to come next
Please update soon. :)
Title: Re: You, Me, and My Son Chapter 1 (KaixRay, Marikuu, Saeyuki, Kojiyuu, and Wmatsui)
Post by: noah minami on October 12, 2013, 01:45:31 PM
Wow another kaixray.. yeah.. I want an update onegaishimassu. .. :cow: :bow:
Title: Re: You, Me, and My Son Chapter 1 (KaixRay, Marikuu, Saeyuki, Kojiyuu, and Wmatsui)
Post by: LukeMatsuda on October 15, 2013, 02:50:00 AM
Interesting, please continue.  :thumbsup
Title: Re: You, Me, and My Son Chapter 1 (KaixRay, Marikuu, Saeyuki, Kojiyuu, and Wmatsui)
Post by: ezha on October 15, 2013, 03:04:24 AM
where are you author-san???? fufufu
Title: Re: You, Me, and My Son Chapter 1 (KaixRay, Marikuu, Saeyuki, Kojiyuu, and Wmatsui)
Post by: ptrd3009 on October 19, 2013, 07:48:43 PM
may i ask you one thing?
can you set yuko in man role please
i prefer yuu more than riku
Title: Re: You, Me, and My Son Chapter 1 (KaixRay, Marikuu, Saeyuki, Kojiyuu, and Wmatsui)
Post by: umichan on January 03, 2014, 03:10:06 AM
SURPRISE!! I BET YOU THOUGHT YOU'VE SEEN THE LAST OF ME.
FINALLY!!
after a few AP hw, i'm here. Its been like a year right? well i had new classes and stuff.
Sorry for the long waiting.  :(

This chapter two.....please don't kill me....i will update the other ones one of this days...



“Kai come with me, we are going to make a new contract with our new model” Sae motion kai to follow him.

Today Kai took his son to school, and talk to the boy’s mother who yell at Mizuki. He went to his office and now he is preparing the paper work for the new model. They headed to the main office and there was a man waiting for them.

“I’m sorry for making you wait, Sakurawa-sachou” Sae and Kai vowed.

“It’s nothing, now I have to apologize for the model because she’ll be late” Sakurawa-sachou Said.

They sat in their corresponding seats, Kai for a minute forgot that they were in the main office and thought of Atsuko, even if she did died many years ago he still remember her like it was yesterday.

-Flashback-

“Hey do you think your mother will accept us” Kai asked while he was holding hands with Atsuko.

 Atsuko smiled and saw that her mother was coming down stairs”

“Mom” Atsuko walked towards her mother.

“I want to introduce you to my boyfriend” Atsuko walked towards Kai.

“Good afternoon Ma’am, my Name is Kai Takahashi and I’m Atsuko’s boyfriend” Kai vowed politely.

“Good afternoon, My Atsuko has talked wonders about you” Mrs.Madea said as she smiled. Kai was a little surprise by what Atsuko’s Mother had said; he never thought Atsuko talked about him with her mother.

“Please take a seat” Mrs. Madea said as she offered Kai to take a seat.

-End of flashback-

“Mr. Takahashi will you get the papers out, our model called his manager and he said she will come any moment now” A man that work there told Kai. Kai felt a little sad with the memory that he just had. His heart still ache, but he had to move on with his life. He saw Sae open the door, and heard all the commotion going on outside.

“Hey you are Mizuki’s dad” Ray smiled and pointed to Kai. Kai was a little surprise that the new model they were hiring was Ray, the person that found Mizuki.

“Ray it thought you were a singer” Kai smiled and look at her with a questioning look.

“I am it’s just that they want me as a model” Ray answer.

“I see you guys know each other” Sae said with a curious tone.

“Yeah, do you have a problem?” Ray said in an arrogant tone. Kai was a little shock by how Ray talked, she seem nice a day ago.

“Well, should we star?” Sae offer them to sit. As the meaning went, Ray kept on putting ‘buts’ to everything they say. In the end she didn’t get to say anything on the matter, her manager said everything was okay. After that Ray decided to go around get to know it. After Ray left everyone started to leave as well. Kai went to his desk where Riku and Kuu were waiting for him.

”So how was it”

“Is it true she is arrogant?”

“Guys, shouldn’t be asking me that, its rude!” Kai sat on his rolling chair. Kuu rolled over to him.

“So she is really whinnying?”  Kuu ask curiously. Kuu had heard rumors about the diva being to stubborn, whinny, and even bitchy.

“Kuu stop bothering him” Riku slightly punch Kuu in his arm. Then out of nowhere, Sae came in.

“Let’s go out to night to celebrate that for the contract we just made” Sae said in a exiting way.

“’I’m sorry Sae, but I can’t” Kai vowed.

“It’s okay Kai, maybe when our first magazine with her in the cover makes a big sale, we will go out okay”

“Yes” with that Kai stood up and went to wet some water. The meeting was actually a little tiring with Ray whinnying about the conditions of the contract. How come
when he meet her the other day she was so nice?

As got closer to the water dispenser he heard as two people were talking.

“I heard you going to work here, so how much do you miss me” a guy said as he lean close to the other person. He smirked when he saw the other parson take a step back.

“Yes, I’ll be working here….ME missing you? Don’t think to full of yourself” The other person reply with a sense of arrogance. When Kai heard the voice, he lean to
have a better view and he was right. It was Ray.

“Oh don’t treat me like that. I know you miss me” the other person, who was a guy that was the same height as ray, smirked at the responds the diva had given him. 
The other person lifted his hand to grab Ray’s cheek, but she backed away. At this Kai seemed to be a little upset.

“Don’t touch me with your filthy hands” Ray told him with a harsh tone. How dare the other person try to touch her? Ray was very upset now.

“That’s not what you said 2 years ago” The other person remarked. The other person knew he had hit a nerve because of the looks of it; Ray gave him a disgusting
kind of look.  Kai head there conversation; he didn’t know if he should interfere. He never saw this guy before. Well it’s probably because he had work there for a long
time.

“That was 2 years ago” Ray snapped at him. She was right anyways; they both dated two years ago. For Ray, that was the biggest mistake ever. The other person grabbed Ray’s wrist and was about to say something when Kai came into their conversation.

“Hey, that not a way to tread a lady” Kai stood near Ray, eyeing the guy in front of him.

“Why do you care?” The other person looked at Kai with the same arrogant face Ray had a few minutes ago. Ray just looked at both of them. She then looked at Kai, wondering if she should tell him not to butt in or not.

“I care because she is a woman and you have no right to talk to her like that” Kai raised his voice. He never liked people bullying on other people or people being disrespectful to another person.

“Kai, please don’t get involved in this….I’ll handle it myself” Ray said in the calmest way possible. In reality, she wanted to slap the other guy.

“Oh…is he your new boyfriend? Haha…I never knew you like short people” he lean in as to make eye contact with Kai. Kai felt irritated. Ray wanted to say something but Kai beat her to it.

“Hey who are you calling short. At least I can respect someone and treat them right. I’m not a jerk like you” Kai took a step forward and made a serious angry face. He didn’t like it when people called him short. He wasn’t short…other people were just tall.

“What did you said little midget” The other person grabbed him by his collar and pulled him up. Kai just looked at him with anger. Ray step in, she was getting angry at the events that were happening.

“STOP” Ray commanded. The other person let go of Kai and looked at the diva.

“You better go before I called security, Kenichi” Ray said as she looked at him. Kai looked back at Kenichi and now that he knew the other person’s name, he would be careful.

 “I’ll see you around, Ray” Kenichi leaned in and smirk. He left. Ray was relief that he left, he could stand him anymore. But he couldn’t stand another thing. 

“What’s wrong with this pers-“Kai stopped saying what he was saying when he felt a sting across his face. Ray had slapped him.

“You don’t have to interfere. I can put him in his place by my own” Ray told him in a harsh tone. Kai was confused. He HELPED her.
With that Ray turned around and left for the elevator. Kai just touched the stop were Ray had slapped him. ‘What is wrong with her?’ Kai thought to himself.

He walked back to his working place and sat down on his chair. He was grateful that Riku and Kuu weren’t there at the moment, if not they would have asked him what happen. He looked into space and still didn’t understand why he had slapped him.
Sometime later, he realized that it was time to pick up Mizuki from school.



Please don't kill me and for the last person that commented...i can't gomene. I'll try to make one shot of yuu and Haruna but not right now.

((i'm sad that Yuko is graduating))


......until the day comes...
Title: Re: You, Me, and My Son Chapter 2pt 1(KaixRay, Marikuu,Saeyuki, Kojiyuu,and Wmatsui)
Post by: cisda83 on January 03, 2014, 06:12:17 AM
Ah.. Ray met Kai again but she became her spoil self...

What's going to happen to ray and Kai?

Would Ray still be nice to Mizuki?

Why did Kenichi and Ray break up?

What was Kenichi attention towards Ray after 2 years?

What's going on next?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: You, Me, and My Son Chapter 2pt 1(KaixRay, Marikuu,Saeyuki, Kojiyuu,and Wmatsui)
Post by: Sydney W on January 03, 2014, 02:02:54 PM
Finally, an update.
Is that true yuko going to be graduate ? Let me google and see.
Title: Re: You, Me, and My Son Chapter 2pt 1(KaixRay, Marikuu,Saeyuki, Kojiyuu,and Wmatsui)
Post by: Akira ryusen sora on January 03, 2014, 02:31:04 PM
 :lol: Please update soon!!!  :bow: :bow: :bow:
Title: Re: You, Me, and My Son Chapter 2pt 1(KaixRay, Marikuu,Saeyuki, Kojiyuu,and Wmatsui)
Post by: shazrey on April 05, 2014, 07:58:51 PM
wht will happen next..will kai and ray relationship develop?
and how will ray fall in love with kai since their first meeting is not much good one ?
so..really looking forward to its :)
Title: Re: You, Me, and My Son Chapter 2pt 1(KaixRay, Marikuu,Saeyuki, Kojiyuu,and Wmatsui)
Post by: umichan on April 17, 2014, 04:33:46 AM
HELOOOO!!!!

AFTER MONTHS OF NOT UPDATING THIS OR ANY OF MY STORIESSSSSS
I'M BACK!!!!!
AND I'M VERY SORRRRYYY

well, anyways...i'm in spring break and i will updates this fic only. I hope you like my sloppy writting because i for got my own style of writing.
anyways, enjoy!!

Chapter 2.2


After kai went to pick up Mizuki he told his mother to watch him for the night and he wouldn’t come late so by 10, he will be there. Kai walked to the agency but couldn’t help but be confused because he never seen many people grouping in a circle.

“What’s going on?” Kai asked to himself loudly.

“Oh that’s the Great Mariko-Sama who will enter this agency. Do you know who she is?” Riku said as he walked towards Kai. Kai tilted his head a bit not sure if he
knew her or not. Maybe he did but he didn’t remember at the moment.

“I don’t think he knows who it is. He stayed in his house for like..” Kuu paused. He had come to his friends because…well…they were always together.

“…Until Mizuki grew up a bit.” Riku finished Kuu’s sentence and they laughed.

“Whatever guys. We have to go back to work!” Riku and kuu only saluted his and said “yes, sir!” and laughed again.

“You know…” Kuu wiped a tear of his cheek.

“She is very pretty…but she is old…” Kuu said and like magic the Great Mariko turned to look at the person who just called her old. Riku and Kai were silent and backed away slowly.

“That’s not the way you talk about a lady, you know” Kai said

Mariko only looked at Kuu and Kuu only looked at Mariko. What was happening? Why the staring contest? Kuu won…

“Ha! You lost old woman!!” Kuu stuck his tongue out and walked again.

“What kind of introduction was that?” Riku asked confused.

Mariko in the other hand looked very pissed.

After hours of working hard and Kuu and Mariko staring and making faces to each other, they went home.

“Daddy! You are back!” Mizuki said as he jumped to his father hug.

“Yes I am! You want something to eat?” Kai asked as he picked up his son and ruffled his hair.

“Yes, me hungry!” Kai only smiled and walked to the kitchen but before he could get there the doorbell rang.

“I wonder who it is” he put his son on the floor and let him go to the refrigerator.

“Maybe it’s my mom…she forgets stuff now and days.” He walked to the door and when he open it he was surprise to see the person that was in from of him.

“R-Ray!?”

Yes, Ray was standing there with some plastic bags. Why was she there was the only thing that pop up to Kai’s mind, yet he did not wonder how did Ray got his address.

“I asked Sae-san your address and here I am. I just want to apologize for what I did early, but I never get help from anyone not even from my manager. I always get things done my way.” She looked to the side avoiding Kai’s eye.

“Anyways, I came to see my little my friend”  she smiled a bit. Kai nodded slowly and was dumb fold. Mizuki came to his dad side and when he saw Ray he smiled happily so much.

“I see you are excited to see, Mizuki” Ray smiled and patted his head.

“Can she stay daddy?” Mizuki excitedly tugged Kai’s pants. Kai was in a dilemma now, would he let her in or tell her to leave.

“I’m sure Ray has a lot of stuff to do tomorrow. It will be an inconvenience if she is tiered tomorrow” Kai reasoned with his son, but Ray been the diva and all answered.

“Actually I have nothing to do tomorrow, and I brought some food” She lifted the plastic bags.

Kai had no other choice that “invites” her to his house. He was a bit uncomfortable with the situation because didn’t Ray slapped him early? That’s was a reason why he felt uncomfortable but the most important one, and the one that bugged him the most, was that another woman was in his house. Kai’s mother was the only one that went there because Atsuko’s mother lived in Osaka and he lives in Tokyo.
After hours, only two, Ray decided to leave the house; however, before she left, Ray told him sorry again but she didn’t need help nor have a knight in white armor.



okay its very stupid but hey its a long fic so what!?

okay!!


.....until the day comes......
Title: Re: You, Me, and My Son Chapter 2.2(KaixRay, Marikuu,Saeyuki, Kojiyuu,and Wmatsui)
Post by: takeshi77 on April 22, 2014, 07:26:13 PM
seem like this will very start for kai and ray destiny
but its seem both didnt like each other much especially ray with her altitude
i wonder how they actually fall in love etc  :?
look forward to its and thank you for the update  :)
Title: Re: You, Me, and My Son Chapter 2.2(KaixRay, Marikuu,Saeyuki, Kojiyuu,and Wmatsui)
Post by: cisda83 on April 23, 2014, 03:31:43 PM
Mariko and Kuu gave each other bad impression...

Ray came into Kai's house...

Erm.... what's going to happen next?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: You, Me, and My Son Chapter 2.2(KaixRay, Marikuu,Saeyuki, Kojiyuu,and Wmatsui)
Post by: umichan on June 18, 2014, 04:10:07 AM
HELLOOOOOOOO

I AM ALIVE!!!! anyways, its been a long time since i updated this and maybe most of you don't remeber this fanfic but still. I plan on finishing it fast, yet this does not mean that i will make some shitty story.  Love in this story is a bit of since i don't play Ray to fall in love with Kai because he told her how an ugly person she is. No. this will take time because love take time. Before they relize it they will fall in love.

Anyways, here you go!!!

enjoy!!


Chapter 3



It was another busy day at the Miyazawa Agency, full of work, people running around from one place to another, some were running towards Room 48 or Room8, but what really made everything seem busy was that today was Ray’s Photo Shoot. This was going to be the first time the Agency had such a celebrity that they had to
give their best at what they were doing. Kai and his friends were doing all the paper work which required permissions to distribute her photos in magazines and news.

They were actually giving their best. Kuu wasn’t complaining instead he tried to finish early, well, so it seems.

Kai was in the middle of writing some permission and then stopped. His mind went back to the events of yesterday. Why was he thinking about this? Maybe because out of all his life he has never seen a woman so independent and strong. Atsuko was different; she was sweet, kind, and helpful, but this woman, Ray, was A LOT different from his Acchan. But still, that bother him. He couldn’t stop thinking about it, but then…

“Itai!! What was that for!?” a loud smack on the head was heard. Kuu was the culprit. Kai rubbed were Kuu had smacked him; that really brought him back to reality. Kuu only stuck his tongue out.

“You seemed a bit off, so I just happen to smack you. It was that or I was going to pour some water on, but Riku stopped me.” He pouted. Riku whose back was facing them nodded. Kai only rolled his eyes and continued working.

Mariko appeared, she was heading to Sae’s office but before she could get there, Kuu glared at her. She seemed to notice the glare and glared back. Surprisingly she kept on walking without taking her eyes of Kuu.

“Old gag, I’m Sor-“Kuu spoke but was Mariko interrupted him.

“Did someone heard that? I think a pig just spoke” Mariko smiled at him and walked away to Sae’s office. Walking like a boss you might say.   

Kuu looked at her in disbelief.

“Why do you treat her like that? That’s not good.” Riku who was working hard and still had his back to them said. He was right, why in the world did HE treat her bad?

“I know her from high school.” That was all he needed to say because the same flash black was replayed in Riku’s and Kai’s mind.

“Do you mean…she is the girl who you…” Riku started his statement as he turn around.

“…made a big deal because she accidently let fall your favorite drink?” Kai finished the sentence. Yes, it was Mariko-sama who did that and ever since that day he couldn’t forget about it. How dare her ACCIDENTALY let fall Kuu’s favorite drink? How? And did the narrator said ACCIDENTALY?

“Yes, damn that senior. Just because she was taller than me and two grades higher than me, that did not meant she could do it” Kuu stated with such a passion than both of his friends looked at him like ‘bro, just let it go’.

“Kuu that happen elven years ago. Just let it go already” Riku, who had much more sense that Kuu, said.

“He is right!” Kai nodded.

“Never!” those were the last words that Kuu said before storming out of the office.

Kai and Riku looked at each other and chuckled. It was around noon and kai decided thought that by now Ray had her lunch. Kai got up, told Riku to do a good job, and left to room 8. There, Ray was doing her photo shoot and he wanted to talk about what happened yesterday.

He went inside the room where people were running around from one place from another. He went there like a timid child. He spotted Ray in a table resting, water in hand and to his surprise Mariko was there. She was seating in front of her. Wasn’t she going to Sae’s office or is she that fast? He walked to her. To his bad luck, someone stopped him; it was Ray’s photographer.

Somewhere in the building, in Sae’s office, Sae was talking to someone over the phone. They were talking about things, from “it’s been a while to will you do me a favor?” The conversation went swell, which was what Sae wanted from the first place. This was the best opportunity to do this, he has been waiting for this change. A chance that he will not let go. Finally he had someone that could take care of the company so he and his wife could go to vacations to his private island. Finally they
could have some little peace.

Days passed, Kai had let go of what happen and moved on with his life. After a week of Ray’s magazine release, most of the staff and workers went to celebrate, and like promise, Kai went. He left Mizuki with his mother making sure that he would come back the next day to pick him up since it was Saturday. His mom let him and was kind of happy that after six years he would go out with his friends.

 Jiro, Ray’s photographer, Katsuyuki, Sae, Riku, Kai, Kuu, some other works, and even the charismatic Diva. First time in a while. They were having a good time, well so it seems. Katsuyuki-san couldn’t stop talking to Riku, while Riku just laughed at his jokes. Sae and Kuu were talking and laughing throwing jokes around. Jiro and Ray talked about how wonderful was her photo shoot was and how Jiro need to work a lot harder if he wanted to work with her again. Kai was talking to some other worker and laughed a bit but every time he wish that Atsuko was with him.

Flashback

“Oh like that time when Kai tripped because he was running towards you?”

“Or like that time he was red as a tomato after he fell?”

“Or that time when he was shy because I said hi to him?” that was Atsuko who said that. Kai just looked at them. It was their senior party and they had been invited
to Atsuko’s house.

“Acchan stop. I was shy back then.” Kai protest

“Ha! You still are!” Kuu played around. Riku only nodded while holding his chin on the deck.

End of flashback


“Hey, Kai! Earth to Kai!” Kuu passed his hand in front of him and that’s when Kai fell down from dreamland.

“Hai?” He looked at him with a confused face. Kuu chuckled a bit and held a glass of what it seemed water.

“I dare you to drink this and out of me and you whoever gets tiered of drink this wins gets 10,000 yens” Kuu grinned. Kai looked at him like if Kuu was crazy. Wait…was he not?

“What is it?”

“Water”

“I don’t believe you” Kuu drank the whole glass and didn’t show sing of disgusted or anything. Kai unfortunately believed the guy.

“Ok, I believe you. If its water, this should be easy” the worst choice ever.

After a couple of ‘water’ glass both started feeling dizzy but Kai thought it was normal since drinking water too fast was a bit bad.

“What is…this?” Kai asked as he held his head. Most of the people were taking and not paying attention, but Sae, Ray, Katsuyuki, and Riku were. Sae kept score and laughed every time Kuu made a stupid comment like “I’m gonna beat you shortie” or “I can’t wait for that money to be mine” while Kuu laughed evilly.

“Its shochu on…rocks” Kuu said before drinking the glass of alcohol. ‘Crap’ was all that Kai could thinking before everything become even dizzier.  In the end kuu won because after that Kai wouldn’t drink another drink and Sae and Ray wouldn’t let it. Kai was babbling now.

“Kai go home already. Mizuki wouldn’t be so happy if he finds about this. This is not a good example to your kid” Sae stated as he helped Kai get up.

“But….you were the one….who was…keeping score” Kai laughed and ruffled Sae’s hair. He was really drunk, but this was the first time that he was drunk. Ray got up from her seat and went to help Sae.

“oh look who….is helpin’..” Kuu pointed towards the diva as he chuckled. Ray gave him a death glare and that shut him up. Sae looked at her and was confused as to why he went to him.

“I’ll drive him to his house. You told me where he lives, so I can drive him since his two friends are kind of drunk.” Ray said.

“eh…ok”

After walking him safely to the parking lot, which took Ray a lot of time, Ray spotted her car and went to it.

“Kai-san, what are you doing?” Ray said as she tried not to laugh at Kai’s craziness.

“What? This is my jam!!” he said as he flew his hands up in the air and moving from side to side. This was the first time that Kai, one of the most serious out of his friends, was acting differently like if something let go of things.

“Kai-san this song is 7 years old” Ray said as she stopped from the stop light. Kai in the mean while didn’t listen to Ray and kept singing the lyrics of the song. Ray just shocked her head and kept on driving once the red light turn into a green light.

“Don’t take your seatbelt out! It’s dangerous!”

“No it is no-“Kai didn’t finish his sentence because Ray had stopped the car abruptly. Kai hit the window in front of him. This is why you wear a seatbelt.

“That’s why you wear a seatbelt, Kai-san!” Ray said as she help Kai get in her seat and laughed at Kai’s face.

“It’s not funny, I might had died there” Kai complain as he rubbed his head. Ray kept on driving towards Kai’s house until they finally made a turn and got to his house.

“It’s your fault. Now come on Kai-san, your house awaits.”

After having complications with Kai, they got to his house door. Ray was complaining about Kai’s drunkenness and smell. Why was she helping this guy?



I think i could have done a bit better on this chap.......


anyways, thanks for reading.

.......until the day comes.....
Title: Re: You, Me, and My Son Chapter 3(KaixRay, Marikuu,Saeyuki, Kojiyuu,and Wmatsui)
Post by: cisda83 on June 18, 2014, 07:03:32 AM
Ray cared about Kai and she was not sure why?!

Yeah Kai is ready to move on

Eh... Kuu is still holding a silly old grudge after eleven years

What's going to happen next?

Can't wait

Thank you for the update

  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: You, Me, and My Son Chapter 3(KaixRay, Marikuu,Saeyuki, Kojiyuu,and Wmatsui)
Post by: crosteks on December 11, 2014, 02:08:22 PM
 :ptam-psst: :ptam-shy: What's Happen  :? :?
where the other chapter :grr: :grr: :shock: :shock: :scolding: :scolding:

 :D :D Nantene hope you finish this story  :onioncheer: :onioncheer:
Title: Re: You, Me, and My Son Chapter 3(KaixRay, Marikuu,Saeyuki, Kojiyuu,and Wmatsui)
Post by: emprezz48 on December 11, 2014, 05:56:12 PM
Oooooo KaixRay fanfic  XD XD XD XD
Do update soon! I really wanna know why Ray seems so caring for Kai but at the same time she acts so arrogant towards Kai??
Title: Re: You, Me, and My Son Chapter 3(KaixRay, Marikuu,Saeyuki, Kojiyuu,and Wmatsui)
Post by: Saint0angel on July 28, 2015, 06:06:38 AM
Update please  :love:
Title: Re: You, Me, and My Son Chapter 3(KaixRay, Marikuu,Saeyuki, Kojiyuu,and Wmatsui)
Post by: niineechan on July 28, 2015, 06:55:41 AM
:twothumbs
Title: Re: You, Me, and My Son Chapter 3(KaixRay, Marikuu,Saeyuki, Kojiyuu,and Wmatsui)
Post by: LuckyMatsui on June 09, 2016, 02:48:54 PM
Please update Author-san :cry: