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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: Wmatsui22 on March 22, 2013, 08:10:09 AM

Title: My Knight In Shining Armour
Post by: Wmatsui22 on March 22, 2013, 08:10:09 AM
My Knight In Shining Armour

Prologue

Maeda Atsuko was fifteen and had his stupid crush on Takahashi Kai,

midget, cool and drop-dead gorgeous. But her feelings for him was way out

of line. Eight years older than her, have a sexy girlfriend and he is the

apprentice of her father in their company and all of this is that he ignored all

of my attempt to seduce him.



But why is Kai is always there when I need him that she became

independent on him? When Kai left,  it broke her heart. Now, he was back

after four long years. CEO and general manager of her parents bank. Not

only in his position in our bank, he also assumed his role as her self-

appointed big brother.




What now? My crush for him is fade away a long time ago but it become

more deeper than ever. She was really falling in love with him.   
Title: Re: My Knight In Shining Armour
Post by: cisda83 on March 22, 2013, 12:08:19 PM
Yeah.... Atsumina fic.... well in this case it's AtsuxKai fic...

Great prologue there...

I can't wait to see how the story going to develop....

Thank you for the lovely start....

 :wub: :inlove: :love:

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: My Knight In Shining Armour
Post by: FNK23 on March 24, 2013, 08:15:25 AM
she what?!!!
nooo! it cannot be !!
he just lying rightt ?
Title: Re: My Knight In Shining Armour
Post by: Sydney W on March 24, 2013, 08:56:22 AM
Oh my ~ i smell something fishy between Atsuko and Hoshi.
Title: Re: My Knight In Shining Armour
Post by: chiqinna on March 24, 2013, 09:17:49 AM
I'm starting to read this cuz it's ATSUMINA!!!!  :deco:
so...kai has sexy girlfriend~ and Atsuko have Takeru.. 
Atsuko have a feeling for Kai..and how about kai??
I think Hoshi is trying to break Atsuko and her mother's relationship...  :smhid
nice story u got there!!!  :twothumbs
Title: Re: My Knight In Shining Armour
Post by: Hii_chan on March 24, 2013, 09:40:12 AM
I hate that step father  :angry:
though Acchan has Takeru ,she just have feeling for Kai
and somehow I think Kai has same feeling too despite having a sexy girlfriend
thank for update I'll wait for your next update :welcome
Title: Re: My Knight In Shining Armour
Post by: cisda83 on March 24, 2013, 10:45:05 AM
Lucky... Atsuko's father is a very good judge of character... if not... This Hoshi is going to be the one that get the rein of the bank.

What the heck... Atsuko is seducing Hoshi... More like the other way around....

Atsuko can't wait to get this Hoshi to get away from her family....

I hope Atsuko's mom would not believe Hoshi's lie....

Kai... please protect Atsuko....

What's going to happen next

I can't wait to find out

Thank you for the lovely update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: My Knight In Shining Armour
Post by: Sydney W on April 03, 2013, 01:54:57 AM
Just admit it, Kai you have feeling for Atsuko !
Title: Re: My Knight In Shining Armour
Post by: kuro808 on April 03, 2013, 03:45:25 AM
Kai is playing out so cool although Acchan is a devil disguised as a muse
Title: Re: My Knight In Shining Armour
Post by: Haruko on April 03, 2013, 07:37:09 AM
Kai is playing out so cool although Acchan is a devil disguised as a muse

yeah! come acchan now you prove that you are not a child anymore..
Title: Re: My Knight In Shining Armour
Post by: cisda83 on April 04, 2013, 04:55:47 AM
I like the picture they look so good together

Ah... so Atsuko just want to go out from the house... from the step father

How could the mother doesn't know.. ?

Is it really easy to go and forget someone... well in this case your death husband only after a year.. and get married to someone else?

Hehehe... so Atsuko is not with Takeru.... is just Takeru one sided love....

Lucky Kai arrived just on time to stop everything... if not Atsuko would not know what she would do

Kai is quite jealous I think about Takeru.... but unable to say anything coz' he would not ever want to cross the boundary

Although, I think Kai is better suit for Atsuko... since he already the CEO of the company... it would make sense with him and Atsuko being together

Hahaha... so Atsuko changed herself to be Kai's ideal woman... so cute

I can't wait to find out what's going to happen next

Thank you for the lovely update

 :wub: :inlove: :heart: :love:
Title: Re: My Knight In Shining Armour
Post by: khryz0421 on April 04, 2013, 07:27:49 PM
As a fan of MC should atleast make a note that this fic is based on a pocketbook, in that way, you give respect to the author of the book.

But it's good you make an atsumina ver. :) Just make a note :)

I'm waiting for your update :)  :twothumbs