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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: Hirasawaizumi on March 23, 2013, 01:21:44 PM
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Ahaha.............. My muse has come back! This time a continue story. :lol:
Hope you all enjoy. Comments, critics, flamethrower are welcome too.(except for the last part, of course.) xD
I realized it was kinda short. :shocked
BEGINNER
Prologue- Be Ready(down there)
Game 1- The Promise (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35285.msg1165693#msg1165693)
Game 2- The Rules (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35285.msg1166116#msg1166116)
Game 3- Let the Game Begin (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35285.msg1166378#msg1166378)
Game 3.5- Takamina's Life (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35285.msg1166952#msg1166952)
Game 4- Stand Up, Together (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35285.msg1170040#msg1170040)
BEGINNER
Summary: If you have a chance to reborn, would you rather fight for it, or let it be?
Prologue- Be Ready
It was raining. A girl with an umbrella was walking down the road peaceful, enjoying the view of rain droppings from the sky, landed harshly to the ground. Her deep brown eyes narrowed warily as a deafening metallic screech ripped through the raining night. She turned around, only to found that a black sleek car was coming in full speed. She wanted to scream, but no sound came out. She wanted to run, but her legs betrayed her, stood there, not moving.
A loud bang echoed in the velvet sky, painted with few birds flying in panic.
The umbrella landed on the ground softly.
The black hair girl was now lying on the ground, motionless. Her lungs constricted achingly within her chest, forcing her to take shallow breaths. With her sense muffled and paralyzed, she could only feel cold steel against her burning skin. Delirious with pain, she whimpered feverishly and tried to move her leaden limb.
She was lying on the ground, decorated with crimson liquid flowing through her body.
“A-c-chan… A-c-c-h-a-n…”
Her name was repeated by a flat voice similar to that of a dusty music box. The unique, stretched out syllables coaxed her to open her eyes, to find out whom the speaker was.
Murmurs and gasped were heard, talking softly about the accident. Atsuko tried to focus her mind about the mysterious speaker, yet her injury proved to be too overwhelming, disrupting her thoughts and preventing her from remembering anything clearly.
“Mi-na-mi…” She rasped with excruciating effort. Through her blurry vision, she could see a white silhouette about her, where a pair of unreadable yet intense orange orbs was peering at her.
“Wrong~~, Acchan guessed wrong~” The dusty music box voice sang. It was a faint feeling, but she felt that the white hair girl was cradling her. Atsuko tried to gather her strength, yet it slipped away from her grasp like the crimson liquid flowing down her arm.
She tried to open her eyes; all she saw was the silhouette’s smile, and she knew no more.
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Uwaa~~~ Acchan~~~~ What the HECK happened to you?!?!?!?!?! :panic:
A mysterious voice calling her name, that sounds like a music box??? :huhuh
And a girl with white hair and orange glowing eyes????? :? She must be a guardian angel! :grin:
But then, why did Acchan say she was Takamina?! :shocked :banghead:
This is amazing! Can't wait for update! :twothumbs
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Acchan~!!!!!
Who's that girl in white hair?
Where's Taka when you need her?!
Update soon~!!!
:bow:
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Wow interesting :cow:
And of course another Atsuminaaaa YAY! *IhopeitsAtsuyuu
Ooopss LOL just kiddin :banghead:
But still there are too many question to anwer
Soooo
*Waiting for chapter 1 O(∩_∩)O
WELCOME ^O^
Oh oh and btw you're funny :D
Thank you.
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Well..........~~
*white silhouette with a flat voice of a music box* Attention, please wait patiently as this writer is trying to squeeze chapter 1 out, thank you. I'm a character from the story and story is under processing.
tehehe. *geki laugh*
otanoshimini~
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woah great prologue! Seems really interesting! Can't wait to find out what happens next!
Great start to the fic, thanks for the update :D
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woah great prologue! Seems really interesting! Can't wait to find out what happens next!
Great start to the fic, thanks for the update :D
no no, thank you for reading my story. <3
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This fic is awesome
Really love it :heart: :heart:
Can't wait for the next update
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great prologue
I think this fic will be very interesting
Please make the chapter 1 soon
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Nice plot very mysterious!
I wanna know what's next author san :kneelbow:
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The story is going to be interesting...
Thank you for the great prologue...
So mysterious....
I like it...
Can't wait to see the next
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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The intro leaves a lot of things to be answered. You got me. I'll be stalking this thread.
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Thank you so much for your comments!! kya~~ it makes my day.
I managed to squeeze game 1!! hope you all enjoy!!
Atsumina part Atsumina part.... there are~~
Comments and critics and daggers :sweatdrop: are welcome.( mend for those Takamina shippers, you may wanna do that.) :banghead:
anyway, enjoy~
BEGINNER
Game 1:The Promise.
“I want you~ I need you~ I love you~”
White. All she saw was white. Vast and void space, can’t tell that where the end was. Everything was blank, except for her, brown orbs widen as she saw a white silhouette, dancing and singing happily like a music box.
She heard the voice before, but when was it?
“…. Ano…?” She spoke. The white hair girl seemed unnoticed, continuing singing her song.
“atama no naka…~” Atsuko titled her head, wondering why this girl was ignoring her. When she was about to turn away, the white hair girl appeared in front of her. Atsuko took a step back, shocked. The midget grinned, and murmured… no, sang the lyrics, as Atsuko started to feel dizzy, mind spinning around and landed on the ground.
“Atama no naka, gan gan natteru music, Heavy Rotation!!”
She remembered everything; from the accident, met this girl, the music box voice… memories came into her head, flipping through her page of life. The white hair girl smile slyly, and helped Atsuko to stand up. “So, I bet you have a lot a lot of questions in your mind, right?”
The ace remained silence, only kept her eyes focused on the white silhouette.
“I know I’m cute, but please don’t keep staring at me, it’s embarrassing.” She pouted. Atsuko’s stare did not stop, but moving closer and closer to the midget, as to examine her meticulously. Unable to defend herself, she tried to push the ace away, while she and the girl’s distance getting closer…
“…Ta..takamina?” Their face was an inch close, almost could felt her breath on her face. The white hair girl blushed furiously and managed to push the poker-face girl to the side. The girl fell right to ground, expressionless. Her face was still as red as a tomato.
“I’m not Takamina, as I said before, even though I assemble her.” Pulling up Atsuko’s hand, she said.
“Where am I? I remembered that I was lying on the ground….and then…” She scratched her head, hopping it could help her remember but did not work.
“… You died.”
Such simple words, yet it hurts Atsuko like a thousand blades slashing through her heart. Deep brown orbs widen, covering her head, as she mumbled, “I’m dead…? I’M DEAD…?”
She can’t accept the fact that she died, because of her best friend. She made a promise to her, and now she broke it.
“Acchan, live on without me, be strong.”
That was the last words muttered by her, Takahashi Minami. Atsuko still remembered the gory scene, where a figure was lying on the ground with pale expression. The ace grabbed her weak, painted with blood hand, close to her face. She was murdered, yet no one knew. Everyone thought that Minami committed suicide but in Atsuko’s heart, she knew that the midget had been murdered.
Minami was not an idiot, she would not kill herself.
The dagger that left in Minami’s body was thrown away by Atsuko. The ponytailed girl coughed, unable to suppress the pain from the deep wound. Atsuko tried to call the ambulance, but was stopped by her best friend. “Hey, I’m dying here, and I don’t want to die in an ambulance…” She smiled wryly. Atsuko watched the midget with a pair of watery eyes, as she tried hard to grab the ace’s hand back. She sighed, and gave her a weak pat on her head. Tears started flowing as she leaned over Minami, pressing her lips against hers. The electrifying overwhelmed all the other senses, even pain, and she found herself responding to the hungry kiss, unconsciously wanting more of this thrilling feeling. Even it was a slight, she felt that Minami gently stroking her tongue against hers. She opened her mouth, giving the midget a better access. While their tongue battled, she tasted something salty.
Atsuko stopped her movement and saw Minami, was crying with a grin. Her smile; a smile that could melt Atsuko’s heart instantly, was tainted with some blood on it. Actually, the ace wanted to continue, but seeing her in a state of this condition, she shook her head, declined the feeling towards the midget.
“… heh… Acchan… you took away my last breath…” Minami breathed heavily. “… I guess…this was a goodbye kiss…nee? Acchan…” Eyes almost half closed, part of her wanted to see more of the ace’s face, but mostly of her were tired, wanted to let it be. Atsuko grabbed her hand tightly, not wanting to let go. Her face was soaked in tears, with some stained blood on her lips as she got from Minami.
“Acchan, live on without me, be strong.”
The peaceful sky was broke by a shriek, moaning and yelling of the ace. She could not live without her best friend, but she promised her. She promised her that she will live on.
But then, right now, she had broken the promise.
“Such a pity, but you died.” The white silhouette chuckled lightly, but stopped as her orange orbs met the deadly glare of Atsuko’s.
They were still in the void space, watching the memories of Maeda Atsuko.
“Heh, but then, you are not officially dead yet, you are chosen to be one of the players!”
“..Eh? I’m not dead?”
“Nah, of course not, like I said, you have the qualifications to be reborn!”
“What…? Wait… that means I have a chance to reborn??! To live on as Maeda Atsuko?” Her glare softened.
“You’re talking silly, yes, that’s right, but only if you win the game…” replied the midget with a sly grin.
“Win….win the… game…?!”
how was it how was it?
oh yeah, try guess the song that I used.(Isn't that quite obvious?)
I know, Takamina died. I MADE TAKAMINA DIED...
Takamina's shippers, you may take daggers, knifes, spears and come.
for those who want updates, you can also stab me. ( even I died, I shall continue the epic story!!)
the game will be reveal more in next chapter.....
douzo douzo. :twothumbs
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I hope Bakamina is in the game... So this is Yuko-sama, eeh? I hope she's in the game too... My mind is messed up after reading this... I'm gonna go and write some
AtsuMina while I still have some sanity left..
UPDATE SOON!! :bow:
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I hope Bakamina is in the game... So this is Yuko-sama, eeh? I hope she's in the game too... My mind is messed up after reading this... I'm gonna go and write some
AtsuMina while I still have some sanity left..
UPDATE SOON!! :bow:
AHahaha....... yesh of course, she will be playing a important role in a game~~hehehe...
apparently that's yuko-sama..... :panic:
I shall reread....it....
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Hohoho . THIS IS AWESOMEEEE . :ding:
Please update soon ! :nya:
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This is SO sad~~~~ Acchan and Takamina both died :ptam-wub:
Maybe this "game" will make it so they can see each other again!
..But, what if they both fail? :ptam-cry:
So many questions need to be answered! I'll be waiting for you!!! :byebye:
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Eh.... so Minami died already....
And this white hair girl has the same feature as Minami... but not Minami?!
Atsuko needs to play a game...?
What kind of game is it... like in 'GANTZ' comic....?!
Minami was murdered by Whom? Why? How?
Atsuko also died why? how?
I can't wait to see more
Thank you for the great update
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Atsuko needs to play a game...?
What kind of game is it... like in 'GANTZ' comic....?!
Isn't it the game like in "Beginner" MV?
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Arg !!! this chapter was so short I want more please update soon :)
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Atsuko needs to play a game...?
What kind of game is it... like in 'GANTZ' comic....?!
Isn't it the game like in "Beginner" MV?
Ehh........ you're smart.
Yes, I got the whole idea from the "Beginner" MV.
But I change a little, and....
I made into a story, by adding my ideas while watching that mv.
spoilers;*Acchan's hands will bleed.*
:D smart smart smart. I like you~
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This is interesting. There a lot of questions.
Why did Takamina die? Who murdered her?
Why and how did Acchan die?
Who is the white haired girl, who looks like Takamina. Is it Takamina or someone who looks like her?
And the most important question is.... What kind of a game Atsuko has to play. And will she win?
Please update soon!!
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Thanks for the update!!!! Great first chapter :D
Sad events for both Atsuko and Minami :( Curious about this game now :O Seems interesting. Wondering if there can be more than one winner in this "game" cause if Minami does end up in the game than that'd mean only one of them can live if one were to win.
Looking forward to what happens next! :D
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Aww what kind of game? sounds interesing
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Why would you kiss your best friend XD?
Interesting. I wonder what kind of game it will be.
Somehow when I read the part about that white hair girl who looks like Minami I think of this
(http://img843.imageshack.us/img843/3535/minami1013.jpg)
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Why would you kiss your best friend XD?
Interesting. I wonder what kind of game it will be.
Somehow when I read the part about that white hair girl who looks like Minami I think of this
(http://img843.imageshack.us/img843/3535/minami1013.jpg)
Uwah................ Takamina is so kakkoi~
How did you find this photo anyway? I create the character randomly and ...wow....
there really have that photo.
so kakkoi!! takamina is so damn cool~ :twothumbs :twothumbs :heart: :heart:
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It's photos from No3b's first album :P, except that her eyes aren't orange like you described.
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It's photos from No3b's first album :P, except that her eyes aren't orange like you described.
Photoshop will do the trick XD
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But somehow I think the blue eyes are better matched with that white outfit XD
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But somehow I think the blue eyes are better matched with that white outfit XD
you'll see :D :twothumbs
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I'll be waiting :inlove:
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interesting.
and i really love the goodbye kiss scene.
omg takamina marry me!!
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Yesh. I updated it. Game 2
Hope you'll enjoy it.
Comments critics are welcome.
Oh, BTW, thanks for Tanchan for the awesome picture for Ryuu (That white silhouette girl.) :panic: :panic: :thumbup :deco:
BEGINNER
Game 2-The Rules
Ryuu was standing in front of Atsuko, wearing a big cross with chains on her neck. She wore a white frizzy piece, which match the background.
“I’m Ryuu.” The words were ringing through her ear, as she was kissing the cold floor. Everything was engulfed by the dark, after Ryuu, the white silhouette, bang the ground, forming a deep chasm.
“…The guider of the game, BEGINNER.”
Atsuko was still in her confused state, letting out a low groan because of her head had hit the floor harshly, leaving pain on her mind.
Ryuu stood there, muttering some words. A big screen popped out with a flash video like a cinema.
Atsuko looked up and saw there were some girls sitting there, wearing a collar that connected a small tube to nowhere. Orbs shined as she saw one girl sitting at the throne, her collar was connected with bunch of tubes, expressionless.
Every girl in the screen had no expression, like they had lost their soul.
“Takamina…” The girl that caught Atsuko’s eyes stared at the camera. Her orbs were sky blue, but the ace could recognize her lover everywhere, so that girl was definitely her.
The video focused another angle. This time, the ace gasped in horror. The black hair, blue eyes, those delicate fingers touching the game controller…
…It was her.
“What is the meaning of this, Ryuu? Why am I there but I am here?”
“…You’re confusing me, human.” Said Ryuu with a menacing tone.
“B-but…. I’m here but I could see myself there,” Atsuko pointed at the video, emphatic her words. “What is meaning of this!”
“You’re taking part in the game, and that was one of the rules.” Replied Ryuu with an enigmatic smile.
“Rules…?”
“Oh yes. Your body is there but your soul is here. That’s why you saw yourself on the screen.”
“But I have a body here…” defended Atsuko.
“That’s your temporally body, your real body is there. So, any injuries or wounds that you experience here are not going to effect on that body. That means even you got hurt you would not feel the pain.”
“Really? Nothing at all?” Asked the ace with a suspicious tone.
“Nah… well, a little maybe…”
“…”
“Talking about the collar…” The white silhouette quickly changed the subject, preventing her from asking more of the soul and body question. “Do you see that there was a tube connected to the collar?”
She nodded.
“That will be the qualification of you in the game. Once you are killed, the tube will automatic disconnect. And this means that you are not being able to take place in the game.”
“What if I lose?”
“You’ll die, officially.”
“So I’m half dead?”
“Yes, you have the chance of 50-50 to either lose or win the game.”
“So If I win the game, I get to be reborn and live again?”
“Correct.”
“…”
“But is not easy as you think. You have to fight with other players, as well as enemies.”
“What’ kind of enemies?”
“The one who create this game, of course.”
The screen vanished in the thin air, and everything went blank again. They were back in the same place, only to see that there were some weapons on the floor.
“Choose one, and be ready for the game. The others are waiting for you, last player.” Carefully, she took a box filled with bullets and wore it on her hand. Her clothes immediately change as she touched. The collar appeared on her neck.
“If this collar was destroyed, you’re disqualified, get it?”
Atsuko inhaled deeply, and opened her blue orbs slowly. There was a path, towards a big metallic gate, writing “BEGINNER”.
“I’m ready.” The ace pushed the gate, ready to fight off anything that stood in her way.
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On the other part of this void space, a girl with brown hair was staring at Ryuu.
“What’s the meaning of this, Ryuu?” said Yuko with a menacing tone.
“As I said, you’re half dead.”
Yuko dashed forward and pulled down the cress of Ryuu. But, when she almost touched it, the white silhouette disappeared.
The squirrel was furious, she turned around franticly and eyes focusing searching on that midget. Suddenly, the midget appeared at her back, glaring hungrily at her, making Yuko shivered.
“Don’t. Don’t ever touch this cress, or you’ll be in hell in rest of your life.” Anger blazed in Ryuu’s heart, but quickly subsided as she saw Yuko was huddled on the floor.
“I’m sorry…” A soft mutter came out from Yuko’s mouth.
“Nah, I was the one who need to say sorry. I didn’t mean to frighten you.” Ryuu let Yuko buried in her embrace, comforting her.
The silence was ripped by a loud deafening alarm, signaling the game has to start soon. Yuko gathered herself, preceded to the metallic gate. Lips twitched into a smirk, she went through the gate without hesitation.
“Wait for me, nyan-nyan.”
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A girl was sitting on a throne, playing with some puppets on her hand. Ryuu came in, greeted the ponytailed girl with manner, and gave the information of each player. She nodded softly, still playing with the puppets, especially the black hair puppet, was her most favorites.
“Yes, each player is ready to proceed.”
“Good. Then, shall we precede the game?” The girl in the throne chuckled lightly. The white silhouette bowed, vanished out from her sight.
She kept on twirling the puppet in her hand, gently kissed it and stared on it. She smiled. A wry smile formed across the ponytailed girl’s face.
“Sa, Acchan, what will you do? Could you win the game?”
A light chuckled.
Ehehe~ the game will start in next chapter, so....
be ready~~
Oh, and the picture that Tanchan found, I photoshoped a bit.
This is Ryuu(Who looks like Takamina but it's not...)
Btw, should I update the next chapter first or side story? :D :yossi:
(http://i757.photobucket.com/albums/xx217/Jesslyn_02/minami10131.jpg)
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It's very interesting please update soon :)
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I love youuuuuuuuuuu ( not in that way XD) as you update so fast. So Takamina from being Acchan's best friend now has become her lover XD!
I Love beginner, the roles assigned are like how they are in the PV. Many fans have discussed Takamina's roles in the PV and most have come to the conclusion that she's the mastermind behind everything seeing how every one is connected to her. I like how you incorporate that into your story. So Takamina was killed/committed suicide and now she's here controlling the game? But why? Can't she just come back to life again? Or does that have to do with Acchan winning the game or was this all a big plan from the start created by Takamina? So many questions here. And Yuko's there to save Haruna also? The white silhouette seems like a representative form of Takamina and judging from his/her manner, Takamina is the most authoritative here.
But at the end of Beginner it's like Takayuu XD so I wonder how you would deal with that scene?
I don't mind which one you update as long as there's Atsumina :inlove:
P.S.: woa she looks fierce with that orange orbs but somehow I like the blue orbs better because it makes her look cold and mysterious. Plus the players all have blue orbs so :nervous. ACtually there's 1 or 2 more photos of her in that outfit but for some reason I can't find it in my laptop. I'm sure I saved it :banghead:
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YAY !!
NEW UPDATEEEEE !
Thanks for the update ! :farofflook:
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Well, Ryuu was actually part of Takamina-( You'll know why when read the side story)
How and Why Takamina died is also included in the side story(which I finish it first before game 2 xD)
Ryuu suppose to be fierce, she's the one who control the enemies( in the beginner pv, those 'stuff' that kept attacking them, I called it 'enemies'.... :sweatdrop:)
Please wait patiently for next update. (maybe the chapter will be longer.)
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HOLY CRAP!!!!!!!! THAT PICTURE!!!!!!!!!! :shocked
Acchan has started. So has Yuko.
And, she's fighting for Haruna... :deco:
Takamina is Ryuu's servant. And she's controlling everyone with puppets. :shocked:
Let's hope Atsuko will snap her out of it before she hurts her. :cry:
Let's see if she can save her...
This is the ULTIMATE action/mystery. Can't wait for an update. :twothumbs
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HOLY CRAP!!!!!!!! THAT PICTURE!!!!!!!!!! :shocked
Acchan has started. So has Yuko.
And, she's fighting for Haruna... :deco:
Takamina is Ryuu's servant. And she's controlling everyone with puppets. :shocked:
Let's hope Atsuko will snap her out of it before she hurts her. :cry:
Let's see if she can save her...
This is the ULTIMATE action/mystery. Can't wait for an update. :twothumbs
Actually, you got Ryuu n Takamina role the other way around. *Spoilers*
tehehe....more characters will come out in the next chapter~
otanoshimini~~ :deco: :deco: :deco:
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Great update! I love the beginner concept. Nice to see someone's interpretation of it :) like some mentioned, fans speculated Minami was in control, & others said along the lines of it reflecting her role in akb where she is the leader who leads everyone & must stay behind/walk a solitary path, that's why she was last to b awoken & needed help.
Well I loved everything about the beginner pv & wish they'd explain it more but I guess it's more fun for each fan to have their own ideas.
Once against great fic! Can't wait to find out what'll happen to everyone & how things play out!
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Wah.. great follow up there
Who is the boss of Ryuu?
Ah... so Yuko and Atsuko are half dead...
Are they going to fight one another?
I can't wait to find out
Thank you for the lovely update
:wub: :inlove: :heart: :love:
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Well, Ryuu was actually part of Takamina-( You'll know why when read the side story)
How and Why Takamina died is also included in the side story(which I finish it first before game 2 xD)
Ryuu suppose to be fierce, she's the one who control the enemies( in the beginner pv, those 'stuff' that kept attacking them, I called it 'enemies'.... :sweatdrop:)
Please wait patiently for next update. (
maybe the chapter will be longer.)
You're making it more mysterious now that I can't wait much longer. Somehow that reminds me of Voldemort who splits his soul into 7 parts :nervous
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Today is Mayuyu's birthday.
And the opening is about Mayuyu, but then....
ahaha.... read it yourself, won't you? :sweatdrop: :panic:
Anyway, Happy birthday Mayuyu! Otanjoubi Omedetou~~ :heart: :heart: :heart: :thumbup
Hopping to post in Mayu's birthday, I managed to finish it (which is super cause I kept on typing typing typing.... get scolded by mum :cry:) XD
How you'll enjoy it!! :bow: :wub: :wub:
This chapter is focusing on KojiYuu. KojiYuu fans, hope this made your day~ :P
BEGINNER
Game 3- Let the Game Begin
“In your. Position. Set!”
Lips twitched into a grin, she buckled up her gun with loads of bullets at her waist. The twin-tailed girl aimed focus on the big round ‘thing’ that moved. Before the ‘thing’ could react, she fired her gun continuously until it drained its life. The green bar was reducing to zero, and the ‘thing’ disappeared.
“That was easy…” She checked her weapon, although it looks fine.
The cyborg girl, known as Watanabe Mayu, walked carefully on the desultory space. Anything could stumble out, just like the ‘thing’ that Mayu encountered.
From the screen, Ryuu and the girl was watching the flash video.
“Should we do something?” Asked Ryuu in a polite matter.
“…I insist. Now go.”She grinned, twirling the twin-tailed puppet on her hand.
“Roger.” The white silhouette was now gone, like a spectral.
The girl smile enigmatically. Her hands kept on twirling the puppet, not wanting to stop. She stared at the screen, hopping to see any changes from the CG.
Mayu was surrounded. It launched an attack when she was unaware. The spears stroked through her body as she coughed blue liquid. Then, it took the chance to destroyed Mayu’s collar.
“OMG, Super Damage.” Written on screen.
The girl in the throne smiled again. This time, the puppet in her was not twirling anymore. It landed on the floor, slowly but flawless. The twin-tailed puppet fell to the floor with a soft thump, signaling the qualification of the CG was over.
On the other side, Mayu’s collar was disconnected from the tube. It poured out blue liquid instead of blood. Her blue orbs shut tight, fell to the ground and vanished out from sight.
“What a pity, Watanabe Mayu. You’re out of the game.” Smirking.
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“You say that Nyan-nyan was here?” asked Yuko, giving the white silhouette a incredulous look.
“Yes, Haruna was here, like you, as a player.” Ryuu said empathically. She had repeated this for nth time! Yet this squirrel here kept asked the same questions over and over again!
Yuko looked down, thinking. If only one winner could win this game, it was either she or nyan-nyan, or worst, maybe other players will win.
Then, she can’t be with her beloved nyan-nyan anymore.
“Maybe you get to find her in the game…” Said Ryuu.
Ignoring the girl, she fumbled her pocket and took out a cat shaped necklace. She put it in her palm, softly kissed it.
“Wait for me, nyan-nyan. I’ll find you wherever you are.” She gritted her teeth.
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Now, she was in the battlefield, searching for Haruna.
Yuko flickered her eyes open, focusing on the empty space, as she walked.
A round thing appeared. Yuko aimed at that thing, shoot continuously until it disappeared. After that, more and more of the round thing appeared, even bigger and stronger.
“DAMN YOU ALL GET OF MY WAY!!!” Raged Yuko.
Evolution, Box gun.
A moment later, the entire round thing vanished from her sight. She staggered a bit before fell to the ground, panting. The evolution had used up half of her vitality, making her hard to breath. She must rest for the sake of finding Haruna, and let her vitality rose up.
While she was in a mist of resting, a big box appeared. Yuko’s eyes dilated with fear as the box launched almost launched its attack. Before she could react, the box suddenly vanished in the thin air. She was shocked; she did not shoot it, how come this thing could disappear on its own?
“Are you ok? Thank god I passed by. I managed to strike that thing with my ‘triangule’ before it hits you…”
Yuko brown orbs filled with tears as she recognized the owner’s voice. She took the tall girl’s hand, and buried herself in her embrace. The tall girl flinched, but calmed down after seeing this cute squirrel crying and playing tantrums like a small kid.
“…nyan-nyan… I-I-I thought I lost you… Where…did you go?” Haruna gently pinched Yuko’s nose. “Hey… At least I’m here, right Yuko?” The squirrel smiled wryly.
“I miss you…I miss you, you know…”
“Yeah… Me too, Yuko. But now we’re reunion!” Said the cat while punching her fist to the air.
“…But this is just temporally…” Yuko sniffled, rubbing of the tears on her cheeks.
“You know what Yuko, you’re not the same anymore.” Nyan-nyan’s tone was serious.
“…Eh? Why?”
“Because the Yuko I know is cheerful in anyway, anytime… But now, this Yuko has sad and negative thoughts… Maybe you’re not-…”
“I AM! I AM THE GREAT YUKO-SAMA!” She shouted.
“Really? Prove it!” Saying, Their face was an inch closed.
“Nnn-gh” The words were silence by a harsh kiss. Haruna grabbed the midget’s waist tightly, for not letting her fell down. Her hungry kiss was responded by the squirrel, trying to pry open her lover’s lips for access. Her tongue managed to slip inside, earning a small moan by the taller girl. Their tongue battled in dominance, until they were out of air.
“…Heh… you’re one good kisser, nyan-nyan.” Panting, she was holding the cat’s wrist.
“Well, thank you for your compliment, hentai.”
“Ahh… so you wanted another round, eh?” Losing her grip, Haruna managed to break free from Yuko’s clutches, and ran slowly.
“If you can catch me, I’ll give you not only the lips, but the whole body as well, Yuko-sama.” Said Haruna with a seductive voice. Being unable to control herself anymore, the perverted squirrel started her chasing journey with her most beloved lover, nyan-nyan.
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“This will be here, that will be there.” Takamina put two puppets on her hand; one was a cheerful girl, another was a tall girl.
Lips twitched, she took the tall one on her palm, gripping furiously until the puppet’s shape changed. A mockery was heard behind her. It was Ryuu.
“Should I send more army?”
“We’ll see. Let’s see how long this lovey-dovey couple can survive in this game.” A heavily chuckled.
The girl in the throne smiled. She wanted to see how long they could survive in this game. This game was a heavenly game made by her, and she doesn’t want to see it end so fast.
Hmm… Why did she create this game?
For fun? For excitement? For pleasure?
She died. And she was here, meeting Ryuu.
“The first player is always the creator of the game”
The words were ringing loudly in her ear.
Yes, she did create this game. But the purpose?
She can’t remember.
Wait.
She remembered.
She wanted other people suffered like her. She wanted other people to know that there was a hope, but it will be taken by others if you don’t fight for it.
Just like her.
She had chosen the wrong path. Now, she could only walk down the road.
She solemnly regretted.
She had a chance, yet she let slip away.
This game, BEGINNER is her creation.
Her way of changing her path.
She wanted to meet Atsuko.
So, she brought her in.
She knew that this game will be more exciting with her existence.
The tall puppet fell to the ground, headless.
Ahaha~~ updates!!
I dream of Acchan, singing blue rose, while me burried in her embrace. LOL. strange. I kept dreaming of AKB48 these days.... :shocked :oops:
Well, I like it. so....yeah. :D :D :D
KojiYuu spotted! XD :lol:
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KOjiyuu you two should be fighting with enemies not
making out kissing right there
NOw I wonder what path Takamina chose?
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thank you for this update ;)
Yeah Kojiyuu I love this couple
Please update soon :)
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Interesting update.
So Takamina created this game? Does she really want people to suffer like she dis?
And she brought Acchan into the game?
KojiYuu!! Whaf the heck are you doing?? You should be fighting not making out! xD
Update soon.
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interesting story as always
How the relationships are developing?
How about Atsumina and KojiYuu?
I can't wait to see more
Thank you for the lovely update
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Gahh.. Kojiyuu, they can make out in this situation
and Takamina..is the creator of this game
and why she brought Acchan here I thought they are in love :O
too curious
thanks for update I will wait for your next chap :welcome
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So, I post this side story first, after this only post chapter 4~
This part explains Takamina's life. Before she died. Enjoy~ :lol:
BEGINNER
Side Story 1: Takamina’s life.
“One… two…three…” The midget counted. She was alone in her classroom, waiting for someone, while staring at the gloomy sky that produced raindrops a moment ago. Her mind was blank, and her crush was going to be here in any minute. Her heartbeat was beating fast, breaths became abnormal as she heard pairs of footsteps…
Wait, wasn’t one? Pairs?
“…This is the girl I told you…” She clearly heard the sentence, and turned back in shocked. This guy, that so-called crush of her, brought some friends. Their expression were irritating, like some thugs loitering around the streets. “Heh, she’s cute~ you sure this is for us?” One of his friends asked, smirking.
What…that bastard… He asked me to wait just for these? And wh-…. Shiver crawl up her spine, alarming her that she was in danger. “Oh shit…This is bad…crap…” Minami muttered softly.
“Why don’t you come with us, girl? We’ll treat you nicely and everything’s fine,” A loud guffaw.
One of them grabbed Minami’s hand, trying to take the opportunity. Takamina gave the thug a fist in to stomach, made him fell to the floor. But there were some guys grabbed both her hands as their mate was down, and Minami’s strength was too weak to defend.
“You better be nice, or else…”
Shimata… I’m dead… my purity… She thought as the guy started moving his filthy hands across her tiny body…
“STOP WHAT YOU’RE DOING!!!” Takamina flickered her eyes, only to be greeted by a broom stick on the guy’s head. Everything was in slow motion, and the black hair girl was pulling her hands tightly, not wanting to let go. They kept on running, out of the school, to the girl’s house. The midget was dumbstruck by this brave girl’s action. Tears started forming as they went in to the house.
The nameplate was written “Maeda”.
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After taking a warm shower, she sat quietly on her bed, observing everything in the room; Books, pictures, teddy bears, CDs…
Something caught her eye, at the corner of the study table, there was a book, with a picture…
… A picture of her eating ice cream.
Takamina was curious about the picture. How come she didn’t know that she had been capture on camera? She wondered, and saw the girl was standing at the entrance. Her mouth was slightly ajar; her whole face was in tomato state. Quickly, she stole the picture from the midget’s hand and hid it, turned her back without noticing how confused Takamina was.
“I-I-It’s not th-that I stalked you or something…” Said the girl with an angry yet happy expression… Whats that word again…! Ah yes, Tsundere.
“Well, you save my life from those idiotic bastards, so…” Takamina gave her a big grin. “My name is Takahashi Minami, Yoroshiku!”
“…. My name is Atsuko, Maeda Atsuko.” Said Acchan with her redden face.
“Then, I shall ask you some questions, Maeda-san…”
“Just call me Acchan, that’s fine with me…”
“…o-ok… A-Acchan… I want to ask you some questions-“
“Is that how you say thank you to your savior, by asking questions?” She shuddered.
Takamina’s anger rose up as this woman was interrupting her. But her anger died down as she saw the innocent face of Atsuko, trying to look at her yet dare not to. Was there something on her face…?
“Are you stalking me…?” That was a very straight forward question she gave to Atsuko. It seemed like the ace was clearly rattled by a simple question. She looked down, not wanting to answer the question.
“I-I like you, that’s all. And… I wanted to be your friend, so… I stalked.” Finally, she spoke.
Minami shrugged her shoulders, giving the blushed girl a gentle pat. “Ahaha, and your stalking had save me. So now, we’re friends.” Atsuko tilted her head, pouting cutely with a pair of puppy eyes. Her dark black orbs met hers. The midget looked away as she can’t stand the sight of cute innocent humans like her.
“Yoroshiku, Minami!”
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Time flies as Atsuko and Minami became best friends, after the incident. They will always be seen together, anywhere, anytime. The bond within them deepened so fast that they looked like having a relationship of long time.
However, fate was cruel.
Takamina was chase by a group of thugs, which was from the incident. The thugs wanted Minami to pay after what she had done to them. She kept on running until she reached a dead end. The midget cursed and faced the thugs.
“You’ll pay!!”
Words were spoken, but they did not move a muscle. They gasped in horror as blood splattered out like a paint, decorating the dull alley bright red.
The dagger was stab in Takamina’s stomach.
“I’m sorry, Acchan…” She muttered in her breath.
She stabbed herself. She hated them. She wanted them to feel guilty for their rest of their lives.
It cost her life.
Her visions became blurry; only saw that Atsuko’s panic and horrified face came to her.
That innocent cute face… Takamina was going to miss it.
Acchan must thought that she was killed. She smirked. The ace knew that this friend of her was not stupid enough to kill herself.
But she did.
She committed suicide.
The midget flinched as Atsuko pressing her lips against hers. She relaxed herself, responded to that kiss. She tried to deepen the bond between them as she prided open the ace’s mouth, earning a small moan.
The electrifying kiss took away all her pain, leaving her and Atsuko in their own world.
Tears rolled down as the black hair girl broke the kiss, trying to get some air. Takamina felt that she wanted more, but she controlled her inner self after seeing her friend’s nervous expression.
She knew that her time was up, yet she wanted to stay. She wanted to live with Atsuko.
But, she had chosen this path.
She knew everything cannot be turned or twisted.
With shrill and shirking of the ace, thus she left the world…
…into a brand new dimension.
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The white silhouette, Ryuu was sitting on a throne, waiting for Takamina.
As she landed, she was greeted with a wolfish grin by Ryuu.
“Welcome, first player.” Ryuu reassembled the midget, as she spoke, Minami flinched.
“Must you ask that why I reassemble you, isn’t it?”
Takamina gulped, took a step back.
“Relax, I’m just taking your soul, so that’s the reason.” A sly smile formed on Ryuu’s face.
“Wh-…” “That was the rule. You, as the first player of the game, had lot more benefits than other players. In other words, you get to observe every single player’s movement…Isn’t that fun?”
The white silhouette jumped down from the throne, moving closer to her.
“But in exchange, I have to take your soul.”
“What if I don’t want? What kind of game is this?” She asked with a hint of nervous.
“Oh, don’t you want to play, for the sake of your best friend?”
“…”
She looked down, clenching her fist tightly as she thought about Atsuko. After a moment, she had made the decision. She wanted to live on with Atsuko badly, yet because of her idiocy, she let the chance slipped away.
“Very well, Ryuu. I accept.”
Ryuu was confused, how come the midget knew her name… maybe it was soul reacting to her. Interesting… This human was so interesting…
“So, I announce that the game, BEGINNER, has found its first player!”
ONE WORD: Crappy~ XD
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This is getting MORE and MORE interesting!!! You're really good. I'll be waiting for an update!! :twothumbs
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Thank you for update
Poor Takamina :(
Please update soon ;)
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Chapter 3 and 3.5 were great! Thanks for the updates!! Kojiyuu was awesome haha, but they should def be careful :P
& i liked the explanation of Minami's past & her relationship with Atsuko & how she came to be part of the game.
Looking forward to ur next update! :D
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Ah... Minami did kill herself.... She prefer the ended everything better than being hunted down by the thugs....
Ah... Minami indeed like or even love Atsuko...
So Minami is the 1st player
I can't wait to see more players and the story behind the death
Thank you for the background story about Minami
Can't wait to see more
:wub: :inlove: :heart: :love:
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Uwaaah~~~ YESSSS!!!!!! :farofflook: :farofflook: :farofflook: A NEW Atsumina!!! xD woot woot :wriggly: just saw this today xD but man! the update is fast!! (a good thing for us) :on lol:
looking forward to the updates~ :ding: :ding: :ding:
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oh Takamina is the bad guy, interesting
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At first Ryuu seems like the one in charge but later on the master became Takamina?
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At first Ryuu seems like the one in charge but later on the master became Takamina?
Ryuu was in charge. Yes. And Takamina is the one who create the game... Ryuu is her assistance :twothumbs :theking
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Isn't Ryuu the one inviting Takamina to the game? I thought he/she would have been the one creating it. Somehow later on Takamina became Ryuu's boss.
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Isn't Ryuu the one inviting Takamina to the game? I thought he/she would have been the one creating it. Somehow later on Takamina became Ryuu's boss.
:cow: :cow: Ryuu's waiting for her, She and Takamina create the game but mostly is Takamina's idea. So, she become the creator rather than Ryuu becoming one. (It'll be no fun if Ryuu was the who control the game XD) :panic: :panic: :thumbup :sweatdrop:
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So how are they related? You said earlier on that Ryuu's part of Takamina?
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Ryuu is taking Takamina's soul. So they're related...
Ryuu is like a dead master that takes away one's soul. So, she took Takamina's soul, in order to let Takamina create the game in da world.... :banghead:
Okay, I'm also confused. :banghead:
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Lol, ha ha. Should you better clarify it?
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Sorry. Will clarify in next chapter. :cry:
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very interesting
you make me more curious about what will happen next chapter
Goob job
I'm waiting for you :deco:
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OTL
I mixed comments... sickness got the best of me...
ORZ :bow: :bow:
This is becoming more and more interesting with every chapter.
My Theory.
Ryuu had an idea to create a game and oredi had a name for the game but Takamina was the one who gave the name its form and shape. From what I read even when she was alive she was not that innocent goody two shoes, as she stabbed herself so to make the boys look at fault and to make Acchan think they did it to her.
And apparently Haruna is headless coz her doll fell headless too... So Yuko-sama couldn't save her? Or Minami just cut the head of the doll but Haruna is still alive coz Yuko-sama will save her? But I believe that if Mayuyu died, Haruna probably also died...
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Ahoho... sorry for waiting.
From now, I could only update one week once, due to the school time.
Maybe sometimes update 2. One is the chapter, one is side story.
So this is chapter four. Hope you'll like it. :lol:
BEGINNER
Game 4: Stand up, together.
In the beginning everything was dark. The lights were off and no sound could be heard. No one could know how long it had been like that or even what was inside of such darkness. Then suddenly the lights went on. The background was pure white and a girl, whose head was down, slowly lifted. Her name was well known and she was the ultimate captain. The core of the group, the soul of it.
She lifted her head, with dark blue eyes and a face wearing a deadly serious expression. Not her usual serious face, but a sadistic serious one with those eyes shaping a look that could kill without feeling remorse. She was dressed in white and had headphones covering her ears. They were also white and there was a half done tie around her bare naked neck.
The second she blinked the room changed. It was now all black again, only this time we could see her.
The collar on her neck appeared. Various tubes started to connect to her collar instantly, as she picked out the names of the player
“So, the name of this game... Beginner is it?”
Still wearing the serious expression, she nodded silently.
“Hmm… quiet interesting… you sure had a creative mind eh, human?”
“I wanted them to suffer. I wanted them to know, there are hopes around…”
“Speak, human. You gain my attention.” Ryuu smiled as she flipped the ‘files’ in her hands.
“… but if they don’t fight for it, they will end up losing it… and drop into the deepest abyss.” Takamina chuckled with a low tone, her blue orbs flared up in angst.
“Well, this was just perfect, isn’t it? I have taken your soul, so…”
Ryuu turned to the midget, put her hand on her head, and muttered something she could not understand. The only thing she knew next was she was on a throne, with puppets on her thigh.
“You, Takahashi Minami, shall be the creator and first player of the game, BEGINNER.”
Takamina stared at Ryuu with a cold expression. Ryuu cringed her teeth.
“And I, Ryuu shall be Takahashi Minami’s assistance for the game.”
A crocked smile.
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“Haruna, where are you? HARUNA!! NYAN-NYAN!!” Her sound echoed through the large space. Yuko was finding Kojiharu, who disappeared after the whole space changed. Her eyes moved around frantic trying to sort what happened. She called for Haruna but no answer. Her voiced echoed in the place and the clarity was hurting her brown eyes. She didn't even felt like laughing if this was some sort of joke. She couldn't spot anything other than white and started to run.
The squirrel stopped as she spotted a door. Feeling sweaty, she wiped off with her back of her hand. She grabbed the doorknob; hoping Haruna was at the other side of the door. Yuko opened it and gasped in horror.
Her legs fell to the ground. Her whole body was trembling. Her brown eyes dilated with fear as she saw the gory scene. She tried to reach out by in vain. Yuko was too shocked, and fear had devoured her. Lips trembling, she tried to call out her lover’s name but instead tears fell down her cheeks.
The scene she saw was nothing but a box and a human.
The human; Haruna was headless.
Her head was hung up by that damn box.
Her lifeless body dropped on the floor.
“Tch….” She gritted her teeth angrily, launched her attack. The box managed to avoid her attacks, tripping Yuko to the ground. Eyes burned up, she got up again, clenching her weapon tightly. In a moment, her weapon turned into a silver sword. Again, she swung the sword of valor and slashed the box into three symmetry parts. It vanished, leaving the panting Yuko and the headless Haruna alone.
“Haruna…nyan-nyan… why…?” She sobbed, hugging the headless body. The collar was broke, and the body and the head gradually vanished as Yuko stared at the blank space. She was alone, again.
She wiped off her tears away, stood up. She grabbed her sword and moved in her pace. Her deep brown eyes reflected the inferno that burned within her body. Her face wore a deadly expression, ready to crush the entire obstacle that stood in her way.
For her sake. Also for Haruna’s sake.
She will win this game no matter what.
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She could sense it. It was closer and ready to make its entrance. But she was also ready for it.
She stepped forward and when her foot touched the ground a red sphere emerged. It stayed still for seconds and then changed into a sharp pyramid. Atsuko closed her eyes and when the thing started to move at light speed to pierce her, the moment it almost touched her skin, she avoided it and with her hand now holding a lightning sword, she crushed it with no mercy. The crashing sound dispersed through the room and the broken pieces fell on the floor. It soon disappeared, leaving the girl alone.
She walked forward, following her senses in hope to find what she was looking for.
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The squares stopped in front of her and stayed still for some seconds. Yuko brought up her hands to touch the metal collar around her neck. It reminded her of something but the sudden change of pace distanced her from further consideration. The squares moved again and each one parted to the ceiling of the room, each one to its corner. Yuko lifted her head to follow them and wide opened her eyes when one of them shot something in her direction. What at first resembled a tiny ball transformed into a black baton and went straight into Yuko's face direction. Her reflexes allowed her to roll to the side, avoiding it, and then seeing the damage it would have done to her face if it had encountered it. The wall was pierced and destroyed heavily.
As she got up the squares moved again. Her head began to hurt and in her hand something was glowing. She opened it, revealing her palm and with her other hand touched it. Her mind seemed to go blank for a second and she blinked. As her eyes opened again, the room had changed. It was all black and she was seeing it through a blue protection. She looked down and realized that she was into her Beginner's gaming outfit.
The squares were flying above her head and encircling her. They were moving faster and steady.
“Tch. Troublesome stuff.” She gritted her teeth.
The enemy stroke again. As they encircled her, part of the squares separated into two and now with four small portions, from each emerged a small limb and moved down creating a circular prison. Not seeing what was happening above her head, Yuko felt two of the four limbs grating on her arms, leaving a trace of blood behind.
"Ahhh!"
She automatically opened her eyes and moved her arms away, trying not to touch the limbs. Her green-ish fluid was shinning on the black limbs and she shook her head when something crossed her mind.
“It’s not pain at all…”
Meanwhile, the enemy changed its shape into a sharp pyramidal blade, ready to attack. Before Yuko could react, the thing broke into millions of pieces, felling to the ground, vanished. She panted heavily, looking at her wound. She carefully touched it with her fingers, to confirm that she was really hurt. To her surprise, the wound healed in a fast speed, only left her perfect skin was revealed because of the attack just now.
“Are you ok?” The girl held out her hand.
“Y-yeah, I’m fine…” Yuko grabbed the black hair girl’s hand and stood up abruptly.
Atsuko was just passed by when she saw Yuko was in trouble. She took out her sword, giving the enemy a deadly blow before the enemy could lay an attack on that girl. She wiped the sweat on her face, still clenching the sword of hers.
“Ah… hey, thanks for saving me…” Yuko said with a tone of embarrassment.
“Oh, no problem. My name is Atsuko. Maeda Atsuko. Yours?”
“Me? I’m Yuko. Oshima Yuko.” She grinned as she heard Atsuko’s name. She heard it somewhere, but where? The bells are ringing through her mind, but she just can’t find the answer…
They both walked forward, chatting about the fights.
Well, quiet interesting, isn't it XD :panic: :panic: :panic: :thumbup
Oh BTW, here's a picture of Yuko's dead serious face
(https://fbcdn-sphotos-e-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/388681_277483392386143_559248226_n.jpg)
ignore the vampire thing please. :nervous
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Nice cool picture of Yuko you have there....
Ara... Minami is quite horrible person there.... like to see people being tortured and desperate
Ah.... with Atsuko helping out Yuko... how will Yuko win the game...?
Will Yuko betrayed Atsuko... to be the only one that win in the end?
I can't wait to find out more...
Thank you for the great update as always
:heart: :love: :inlove: :wub:
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So Ryuu took Takamina's soul? That means Takamina doesn't have a soul of her own?Does that mean she doesn't remember who Acchan is?
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So Ryuu took Takamina's soul? That means Takamina doesn't have a soul of her own?Does that mean she doesn't remember who Acchan is?
:lol: correct. she doesn't remember anything since Ryuu has taken her soul. So, she can't remember acchan.
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Seems like Takamina's and Ryuu's relationship somehow similar to that of Ciel and Sebastian of Kuroshitsuji. Ryuu obeys Takamina but she is more powerful than Takamina.
Acchan and Yuko working together but I wonder if they will betray each other since they are determined to reach their goal
anyways tnx for the update
this is really awesome
Pls. continue
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This is getting good!!! :deco:
Yuko and Atsuko meet. What will happen next? :cathappy:
Also, this...
(https://fbcdn-sphotos-e-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/388681_277483392386143_559248226_n.jpg)
When you get some free time on your hands, PLEASE do a vampire fic!!! Pretty please with chocolate syrup on top!!! :bow: :bow: :bow:
Sorry... But, I just REALLY like vampires. :mon bat:
Keep it up! :heart: I'll be waiting! :mon pray2:
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This is getting good!!! :deco:
Yuko and Atsuko meet. What will happen next? :cathappy:
Also, this...
(https://fbcdn-sphotos-e-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/388681_277483392386143_559248226_n.jpg)
When you get some free time on your hands, PLEASE do a vampire fic!!! Pretty please with chocolate syrup on top!!! :bow: :bow: :bow:
Sorry... But, I just REALLY like vampires. :mon bat:
Keep it up! :heart: I'll be waiting! :mon pray2:
DONE-- link to here- blood curse (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35388.0) Hope you'll like it. :inlove: :lol: :banghead:
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This is getting good!!! :deco:
Yuko and Atsuko meet. What will happen next? :cathappy:
Also, this...
(https://fbcdn-sphotos-e-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/388681_277483392386143_559248226_n.jpg)
When you get some free time on your hands, PLEASE do a vampire fic!!! Pretty please with chocolate syrup on top!!! :bow: :bow: :bow:
Sorry... But, I just REALLY like vampires. :mon bat:
Keep it up! :heart: I'll be waiting! :mon pray2:
DONE-- link to here- blood curse (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35388.0) Hope you'll like it. :inlove: :lol: :banghead:
Thank you for this! Keep up the good works on both stories! :twothumbs
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Thank you for update :)
The picture is beautiful
Ahhh !!! poor Haruna no way and Yuko was so sad when she discovered her girlfriend :(
Please update soon ;)
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So Ryuu took Takamina's soul? That means Takamina doesn't have a soul of her own?Does that mean she doesn't remember who Acchan is?
:lol: correct. she doesn't remember anything since Ryuu has taken her soul. So, she can't remember acchan.
But she seems so interested in the black-haired puppet which is Acchan's representation. Is that instinct?
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Update please~! :bow: :bow: :bow: I need to know what happens soon!!!