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Title: [FANFIC]Questions and love
Post by: X8RTIER on April 22, 2013, 12:17:43 AM
-Questions and love-                                                                                                                                                                                                                  Atsumina, Mayujurina, Kojiyuu, Saeyuki, etc.                                                                                                                                                                     Story by: x8rtier
 
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This is actually my very first fan fiction.  :farofflook:
Sorry about the grammatical errors I can’t speak fluent English.
Well other than that umm… please enjoy :kneelbow:
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PART 1

It’s a brand new semester. The sun shining brightly, flowers blooming at its peak, birds chirping. The neighborhood is quiet and relaxing.                                    Waking up from a nostalgic dream, slowly opening her eyes but still half awake. She lazily reached out for her phone and opened it. She was blinded by the light it gave, she squinting her eyes trying to see what she can make out off. There weren't any new messages, she slowly closed her eyes drifting in to sleep but before she could close her eyes her phone vibrated pulling her back before she could have gave in the soothing darkness. She opened her eyes discovering a message from one of her friend.

To: Bakamina                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     Subject: you awake?                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        I’m already outside your                                                                                                                                                                                                                      house hurry up and get dress.                                                                                                                                                                                                                          I don’t want to be late on our                                                                                                                                                                                                        first day of class.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       From: Yuko

She slowly got out of her bed and peeked outside her window spotting Yuko waving at her with a big smile. She went to the bathroom washed her face, brushed her teeth, combed her hair , changed her clothes, grabbed her things and left the house with a yawn. Both of them started walking to school while conversing

“Hey have you heard that were having new students.” said Yuko with an excited face
“hmmm…knowing you they will probably stay away from us” Takamina mumbled
“ hey!! I heard that.” Exclaimed Yuko

Upon entering the school their class and schedule was posted on the bulletin board in front of the shoe racks. The board was surrounded by students which the 2 midgets would had have a hard time making their way in. with a sigh the 2 midget decided to wait patiently until the crowd diminished but before they could even start a conversation someone they knew came out of the crowd and approached them.

“what are you guys doing”
“Ah…Mariko did you see the arrangement” said Yuko with an excited face
“..Un,,” replied Mariko
“So! So! So! How was it” Yuko with an eager tone and face
“ Yuko don’t get your hopes up to high,” said Takamina nervously ”so… how was it”
“un… were all in the same class” said Mariko bluntly   
“EH!! Majide”  the 2 midget exclaimed excitedly

They headed towards their room. Almost everyone was there and some new faces. They entered the room and spotted empty chairs approached it and sat down

 “Ooohhhaaayyyo ~”.
“Sae-chan!!” exclaimed Yuko  jumping to her with a hug ”I missed you”
“hahah I also missed you guys”
“Yuko you should be careful, if you act to close to her “ they” will seriously get mad” said Mariko with a scary tone
“it’s okay because me and Sae-chan are close” said Yuko while snuggling her
“well I warned ya” Mariko said
“they?” asked Takamina
Mariko grinned “Sae’s fangirls.. FA-N-GI-R-L-S, hora remember last year they even stalked her until to the bathroom those times were troublesome” said Mariko while laughing.
“Ah… I remember….hahaha it must be tough being popular and all” said Takamina “ people these days are scary”
"hmmm...Takamina are you perhaps jealous " Mariko said while grinning
"o...o..of course not!" Takamina exclaimed
"hmmm... that sounds suspicious" Mariko said while still grinning
"it sounds really suspicious" Yuo going with the flow
“Sae you should be careful especially when you confess to a CERTAIN someone” teased Mariko
“w..wh.. what are you talking about” said Sae while blushing
“you don’t need to be shy how long do you think we have been friends” teased Mariko again
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In the hallways being avoided by all students of all year level, Yagami Kumi and the reason to that is because she was a former leader of a famous yankee group. After walking for almost 5 minutes she finally reached her destination, she opened the door and took the seat in the corner of the room near the window. Her classmates dint noticed her coming in, they were preoccupied talking and laughing with others. She was in a deep daze looking at the beautiful scenery outside the window that she dint notice someone entering the classroom.

“Kumin-chan~”

After hearing her name she felt something soft touched her cheeks, she was flabbergasted at first but in a matter of seconds she snapped out of it. Her eyebrows curled and her hand formed into a fist, she strikes using a straight jab to her face.

“What the hell are you doing….Jurina” with a serious and scary tone
“I just thought you were cute when you were spacing out that’s all” said Jurina grinning while catching the jab which kumi shot at her “things like this won’t work on me you know”

It caught everyone in the classrooms attention. Kumi who noticed this decided to end it, she withdraws her fists and gave a big sigh “lets end it here”. Jurina after hearing those words lets her guard down. Not seeing Kumi’s kick to her right foot thus ending their little debate.

“ITTTAIII!!!ITAI!!! ITAI!!! ITAIIIIYO~!!” whines Jurina

But her classmates were still staring at them, this annoyed kumi a little thus leaving Kumi with no choice. kumi glared fiercely at them, after meeting her glare they immediatley returned to what they were doing trying to avoid her glare. 

“Why are you here anyway?” kumi asked
“What are you talking about Kumin-chan dint you know this year were classmates” Jurina said with a smile
“hmm.. figured that much” said kumi reverting her view outside the window
“then why do you ask if you figured as much” said Jurina sitting down right next to kumi’s
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“Like I said it’s not like that” Sae persisting while blushing
“there’s no need to hide it from us, ne~ Yuko” Mariko said
“right, we will support you no matter what, ne~Takamina” Yuko said
“right,always ” Takamina said
“Mou!!..why am I the only one being teased at?” Sae whined
“your just to easy, that’s why” Takamina said
"your just to kind, that's why" Yuko said
"your just to dense, that's why" Mariko said
"mou!!... again" Sae whining
"you dont have to hide that you like her y'know" Takamina said
“then how about you guys do you like somebody?” Sae asked
“….”
“….”
“….”
“Why are you guys suddenly so quiet?” Sae asks
"...."
"..."
"..."
"are you guys listening"
"..."
"..."
"..."
-Ding dong ding dong-
"Ah..its already time for class" Sae sighed

The teacher entered the room before she officially started the class she first introduced herself and took the attendance. All the students were paying attention except the 3 who was made to think because of the question that was asked earlier                                                                                                       

“Now that you mention it-“ Mariko thought to her self 
“ have i ever even-“ Yuko thought to her self 
“ fallen in love. “ Takamina thought to her self 
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Well I’m going to end it for now.
sorry about the crappy story
and all grammatical error
I promise ill do better in the next chapter
havent slept since yesterday fanfics kept me up hahah
my brain isn't functioning well
good night
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Title: Re: [FANFIC]Questionable love
Post by: Shinoki on April 22, 2013, 01:18:53 AM
I cant figure most things out yet
but one comment
usually Yankee Kumi
equals, getting nosebleeds due to getting punched by shibuya or getting beaten up by Team Mongoose
Title: Re: [FANFIC]Questionable love
Post by: arrow27 on April 22, 2013, 01:33:41 AM
great introduction chapter :D Seems really interesting ^^ Thanks for this update and I look forward to the next!
Title: Re: [FANFIC]Questionable love
Post by: kuro808 on April 22, 2013, 01:36:42 AM
Interesting start
Title: Re: [FANFIC]Questions and love
Post by: _abby_ on April 22, 2013, 03:41:44 AM
Interisting

Please update soon

 :twothumbs
Title: Re: [FANFIC]Questions and love
Post by: Haruko on April 22, 2013, 05:27:43 AM
aww poor saeboy... :B
Title: Re: [FANFIC]Questions and love
Post by: 7sam14 on April 22, 2013, 11:05:21 AM
Such an Interesting start!
i wanna know what happens next!!!
Hope u can Update soon!!!
Title: Re: [FANFIC]Questions and love
Post by: cisda83 on April 22, 2013, 01:37:24 PM
very interesting...

In here Sae is the teasing target... :lol:

Ah... Yuko, Takamina and Mariko wondering whether they have ever fallen in love

Great idea there... making me curious...

I like the beginning of the story...

Can't wait to see the next

Thank you for the fic...

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs


Title: Re: [FANFIC]Questions and love
Post by: Elo on April 22, 2013, 01:47:18 PM
I think It will be interesting

please continue to update
Title: Re: [FANFIC]Questions and love
Post by: Elo on April 22, 2013, 08:11:07 PM
yeyy you updated a little short through but it is oki

anyway ATSUMINA and I think JURIMAYU begins

please update hehe
Title: Re: [FANFIC]Questions and love
Post by: kuro808 on April 22, 2013, 08:17:30 PM
Takamina found someone injured and I would like to see how Kumi would impact the story
Title: Re: [FANFIC]Questions and love
Post by: Haruko on April 23, 2013, 02:47:19 AM
of course is Acchan! :B
Title: Re: [FANFIC]Questions and love
Post by: kuro808 on April 24, 2013, 03:52:37 AM
They find Takamina and Mayu and Jurina find each other

Although Takamina and her bowel problems  :lol:
Title: Re: [FANFIC]Questions and love
Post by: cisda83 on April 24, 2013, 08:37:14 AM
Who was the one that Takamina rescued?

Who was Mayu's oneechan?

Why would Oneechan be angry with Jurina's confession or whatever that happen to Mayu?

Can't wait to find out the next

Thank you for the updates

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: [FANFIC]Questions and love
Post by: kenjoy12 on May 01, 2013, 08:06:46 PM
Nice story.. Hope you update soon..

Want to know who was the person Takamina rescued?

Who's Mayu onee.san?

What will happen on the next chap?

Update soon.. Thank you :)
Title: Re: [FANFIC]Questions and love
Post by: blakwhite on August 23, 2013, 03:17:49 AM
update this pls if you have time  :oops:
Title: Re: [FANFIC]Questions and love
Post by: lezperv on September 12, 2013, 10:55:06 PM
YOU HAVE TO UPDATE THIS!!!

I wanna see Atsumina, MariMii, and Kojiyuu together <3

Kyah, I can already see that their soulmates are the 3 new transfer student :D its 3 right? or was it 2?...