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Title: Jane Doe
Post by: mayuyuXlyukirinlover13 on April 26, 2013, 10:04:26 AM
H-h-how's it goin Bros?   8)
Today since last last week I've been on LSS  mode. and this time it's Takabear's "Jane Doe" and I decided to make a Fanfic out of it
So Here's the Prologue


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Who are you? ...Who am I?

I live in 2 Worlds with 2 Persona...

Red....

Like the heart's desire to love

Black...

The mind's desire to steal...

I'm wearing Red....but In front of a mirror I see myself wearing Black...

'Who are you...?' I asked myself in front of the mirror...

I answered.

"I am Jane Doe..."

I am Takahashi minami...but.... in front of me now....it's not me...

She is Jane Doe.... the thief in black....
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Title: Re: Jane Doe
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on April 26, 2013, 11:43:27 AM
This is interesting! I did something like this before, so I can't wait to see how you pull it off.
Title: Re: Jane Doe
Post by: cisda83 on April 26, 2013, 11:52:25 AM
Very good prologue...

Minami is going to have 2 personalities...

One is the normal girl... and the other is a thief...

Can't wait to see how the story going to develop

Thank you for the nice Intro...

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Jane Doe
Post by: sakura_drop_ on April 26, 2013, 12:16:55 PM
You shoud read my rendition of that PV, story A.L.I.V.E. :-)

Self promoting aside, I wonder how is Minami going to deal with her two sides :-)

I'll be waitin for your next update :-)
Title: Re: Jane Doe
Post by: K-popJ-popAWESOMENESS on April 26, 2013, 02:50:53 PM
Looks awesome :D

Alpha, am I right? xD

Takathief xD

I can't wait to see you first chapter :P
Title: Re: Jane Doe
Post by: kenjoy12 on April 26, 2013, 03:30:15 PM
Oohh! I like the prologue! Surely im goin to like your story.. Update soon :)
Title: Re: Jane Doe
Post by: -gibson-mayulover on April 26, 2013, 03:40:54 PM
Hahaha alpha M
Nice prologe
Can't wait for chapter 1
K-popJ-popAWESOMENESS know you're admin name here that's kinda cool
Jaa
Title: Re: Jane Doe
Post by: mayuyuXlyukirinlover13 on April 27, 2013, 02:27:14 AM
@K-popJ-popAWESOMENESS : yup you're right that's me  :lol:

@Gibson : You'll be the first(?) to read it since it's first updated on the Fan Page  :rofl:

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I'll be updating this fic once a month from here on out. so Update you bros On May :thumbsup 
Byeeee~ *BROFIST
Title: Re: Jane Doe
Post by: -gibson-mayulover on April 27, 2013, 03:14:11 AM
^^ oh yeah you're right  :D :D :D
Title: Re: Jane Doe
Post by: mayuyuXlyukirinlover13 on May 07, 2013, 11:34:07 AM
Bros!  :w00t:  Chapter 1 Will be updated on May 27th~!  :grin: So I hope you look forward to it! Till then Adios~!   8)2
Title: Re: Jane Doe
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on May 07, 2013, 12:10:03 PM
^Can't wait!!! Hope I get to see some more of your fanfics update, too! :heart:
Title: Re: Jane Doe
Post by: Amakuchi on May 07, 2013, 03:32:07 PM
GO MAMA! The prologue is so interesting! I'll be waiting for the chappy! GO MAMA! GO MAMA! *\o/*
Title: Re: Jane Doe
Post by: sakura_drop_ on May 07, 2013, 03:34:22 PM
@kuchikuchi: sister in law is amazing, nee? :D

@sister in law: are you gonna update this? We are waitin, ya know? :D



P.S. actually, I'm still waitin for the full version of family tree, coz I still don't know if sister-in-law is the right term :D
Title: Re: Jane Doe
Post by: mayuyuXlyukirinlover13 on May 07, 2013, 11:45:59 PM
@TTLover :Tokyo dome can't be updated since I don't know what to do anymore :lol:
@Kuchi:D'aaaww thank you sweetie
@Sakura : wait until May 27th
Title: Re: Jane Doe
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on May 08, 2013, 01:03:42 AM
^
1. You spelled my username wrong! I put the "U" there on purpose!

2. That's fine. My main concern is "Infinity," I've been waiting for SO LONG~!!!
Title: Re: Jane Doe
Post by: Hirasawaizumi on May 08, 2013, 03:42:27 PM
Stalking mode on!!!
Ah, you are the admin from the page ya? oh I see~ stalking success! ^^v :banghead:
Alpha M is it? Glad to me you~
I waiting for this story's update!
 :twothumbs Nice prologue anyway!  :lol: :lol:
Title: Re: Jane Doe
Post by: mayuyuXlyukirinlover13 on May 08, 2013, 07:24:29 PM
Stalking mode on!!!
Ah, you are the admin from the page ya? oh I see~ stalking success! ^^v :banghead:
Alpha M is it? Glad to me you~
I waiting for this story's update!
 :twothumbs Nice prologue anyway!  :lol: :lol:

XD  Glad to meet you too buddy, If you want early updates Go to the fanpage if you like  :grin:
Title: Re: Jane Doe
Post by: TK.Yuu on May 08, 2013, 09:08:52 PM
I suddenly remembered saku's A.L.I.V.E. fan fiction!


hopefully the bounds of your fiction between hers is so different so you can grab many readers through your fiction :DDDD


waiting for the 1st Chapter!  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Jane Doe
Post by: mayuyuXlyukirinlover13 on May 12, 2013, 05:20:59 AM
SURPRISE BROS! and early Update!  XD Enjoy this Chapter 1 ~! [I had to update now before they cut off my WiFi Connection in the upcoming weeks]

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Chapter 1



BOOM

BOOM

BOOM


Loud explosions just erupted behind me as I ran, Debris flies to the air as I come out the black smoke......Seems like using hand Grenades are futile. Holding My cane I try to look for an Easy Escape from the roofs. I swear these guys behind me are persistent well why wouldn't they be when I took their Ruby that was I think from Cairo Egypt. Gun Shots. Now their Desperate,Their using Gloc 40 hand guns with 3 magazines on their belts. "GET HER!!  DON'T LET THAT RAT ESCAPE!" Rat? Well that's very rude. As they Shoot bullets at me aimlessly I just spot a Chain Line That connects to the other side of the road to a building. I ran straight for it but...

"Aa!!" I let out a Yelp. I got hit on the left arm it's nothing bad just a deep scratch but nothing too serious, thou it hurts very badly... damn.
I stop on the edge of the building facing towards the  other. I turn around. "This is the end of the line" a man in a black suit said.


"Yeah it is the end of the line" I replied I smirked and Tipped my heel backward making me Fall backwards.

The Hook of the Cane grabs on to the chain line. the Men in black rushed on the edge  to see if I fell bloody flat. their faces were shocked mixed with dumbfoundedness and slight fear but then they looked up and saw me Zip lining on a cane. My right hand holding on to the cane, my Left holding the Ruby. Facing them I waved the ruby. "Bye bye Losers~"  I half shouted as I looked at them with a Cheeky Grin that was on my face.

I placed my weight down as gravity does some of the work and I Pull the cane up & down while using my Weight and I slowly bounce up causing the Chain to make a wave. My Cane and I were Bouncing higher and Higher until we were almost on the other side when the Men in black were zip lining towards me, As I was High enough I swing myself and the cane releases me as I was Bounce up. I did a double back flip accompanied with a Single Summersault.


I skid a bit back but I regain full balance when I spread my legs a bit and placed my Right hand on the floor. I stood up straight and approached the Chain Line.


They're half way here so, I twisted the Handle of the Cane Counter clockwise and on the tip of the cane comes out a Blade that can ACTUALLY cut through Solid steel and Pure Diamonds. I Waved the cane in front and said "Bu bai~" then I sliced the end of the line.

"We won't forget this !! You'll pay for this Jane Doe!!"

The man in black Shouted as his group swings down and hits painfully on both the wall and ground, You can hear a loud Bang or thud when they crashed but at least they're still breathing. I see an ally way on the left side of the building, I jog towards the edge and jump down and land Softly and quietly Like a Cat. My left knee bends touching the Ground, My Right hand holding the cane is also on the ground. I stand up and toss the Ruby up in the air.

The ruby glimmers through the Light of the street lights at night. As it slowly drops I catch it and Stuff it on my Pockets, when an electrifying sensation shot up to my brain I forgot, I Got shot earlier and it hurts like hell...I took out an Ointment from my hat and opened it revealing a green mucky blob that I call ointment I apply it on the would. I wince as I rub it, It burns and smoke comes out until it's good as new again.

I Disappear into the shadows and come out of the light as a different person....Takahashi Minami.

Wearing A Red hoodie jacket, underneath is a simple white shirt, I wore Denim jeans and Nike shoes. And no one knows who Jane Doe is behind this mask I've created.

I pass through people unworried, Nothing threatens me...Everyone's oblivious, uncaring and not afraid.

It's 10pm,I headed to the back door of the restaurant I work for. I opened the door, and quickly headed for the dressing room. After thirty minutes I step out of the room, wearing A Red Gown there's a clip on the Right part of my head that's Clipped on the hair the clip is a Red flower, I wore my Golden colored bracelet and a silver colored necklace, I also wore red 7 Inches high heels.


I heard the Clattering of Table wear... Appetizers must have been served. I also heard Chattering but I ignore what they say. The lights dim a little to catch the attention of the Audience. A spot Light was shone on the stage where on 2 sides of the stage there are 2 Circular mirrors.


The Audience was focused on me, and they would whisper about my performance to newcomers and those newcomers will be curious of my performance. I stepped out into the stage in between The 2 large mirrors. As I reached the Mic I spoke.


"Good evening everyone, are enjoying the Dinner tonight?" I say calmly. They Exchanged nods and Whispers. "Well....I'll be singing for you all tonight, Please enjoy"


I sang for the entire 2 hours of my Shift, no one listened much since I don't care about the guest....All I need to do is Entertain them. This is my Life when I'm Simply Takahashi Minami A girl who works Day in and Day out, I have friends but I never really get in touch with them. My Family's scattered all over Japan mainly my Mom's at Osaka and My Dad's in Hokkaido for business so meaning their Supporting me Financially. I am an Only child in the family so I'm supporting them as well.


Although I hate the people eating here in the restaurant I love to sing with my whole heart without caring for the world. Some give me Applause that were meant to say "Amazing" or "Beautiful" some criticizes with claps that says "Not bad, I've seen better". Some wealthy people just sicken me to tell me indirectly that I'm not that good.


My shift is finally over tonight and its 11:30pm. I wore my casual clothes the white T-shirt, the red Jacket, the Denim Pants and the Nike shoes; after I changed I picked up my Backpack And left the place and I walked back to my house which fifteen minutes away. As I walk less people are on the streets, well it's almost midnight so it's obvious why they're less of them here. Lately I've been having this bad ominous growing feeling in me for day now, I thought of trying to set it aside and ignore it but....


I have a sinking feeling that something Horrible will happen soon.  I'll try to ignore it since it might be nothing or just something minor.


I finally Reached home, I looked at my watch and it's already 11:45pm I have got to start getting some sleep tonight, I'm tired and I can't wait to just fall into my soft bed that has a warm Blanket and pillows to put me to sleep. I press the door bell and I pressed the button below it where the intercom is used. As I pressed the button a buzz sound was heard " CG-chan I'm home open the gate will you?" I said lazily. Then a buzz was sounded again "Yeah, sure" CG says with a yawn, the gates open and I went in. Automatically as I reached the Door that leads into the house the gate closed and locked. I opened the door and stepped in.

I let out a slightly loud yawn "I'm home..." I tiredly said. I took of my shoes, placed the cane on the umbrella case, and then I took off my jacket and hung it at the Coat rack. Right beside the Umbrella case there's a counter that has a cabinet. Inside the cabinet were CG and I's shoes and there were house slippers as well. I took the Pink slipper and wore it then I walked in. My back was slightly arched to the front as I sloppily head towards the stairs that will lead me to my room which I love so very dearly.  CG passes by the stairs

"Welcome home Takamidget" she greeted and insulted with a blunt face. I try not be ticked off since I'm too tired to even start yelling. "Yeah...yeah whatever... I'm going to bed CG see you in the morning..." I sleepily said as I opened the door to my room which is Right beside the stairs, CG also went back inside her room after I went in to my own. The first thing I need to do was go to the bathroom, I open the lights of my room after I closed the door behind me. I head to the bathroom and opened the door. I could barely keep my eyes open, I flip the switch on the lights in the bathroom and stepped right in. I took my toothbrush and applied toothpaste and brushed my teeth, soon I rinsed and washed my face after that I stepped out of the bathroom and flip the switch to "Off" I closed the door and head towards my dresser where I took out my Pink PJ's and changed clothes.


My eyelids were getting heavy I can't seem to keep them open for too long, so I headed for the Lights and turned it off. I wobbled towards my bed and just slumped there, I kicked my slippers off and adjusted my body up towards the Pillow and snuggled my head on it. This is bliss. Tomorrow till the next days I'll be on a day off. And I can finally catch on some sleep.... the night's so Quiet, my Window's open so the cool breeze enters my room which makes me sleep more peacefully...

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Author:So~! with chapter 1 ends I'll update you bros on June 30th , why 30 you MIGHT ask? I have classes since JUNE is the start of a new School year. well I hope you enjoy this fanfic! and also! the Fanfic will be written in Takamina's Perspectives

Takamina:You're just doing this type of writing because you've been reading TOO MUCH Hunger Games!

Author:So?

Takamina:and trying to make it obvious doesn't help at all you know and also no one would ask why on June 30th =.=

Author:So? o.o

Takamina:No One cares about it [⌐ o ⌐"]

Author: I'm just a lonely person, give me a break Takabear! *sulking in the corner* Q~Q

Takamina:I can't believe I have to put up with you in this fic *face palming*

Author:At least I make you LOOK cool!!

Takamina:HEY! I AM cool!

CG:No you're not, you're a Fail man remember? *blunt face*

Takamina: Acchan!! Mayuyu's being mean to me again!! T^T

Acchan:I'm not in the story so I can't help you Takamina *sweatdrop* ^^"

Mariko: I don't Know these people, Never seen them in my life ..... (⌐ ⌐"...)*leaves*

Yukirin:Well! see you guys in the next Chapter of "Jane doe" ! *sweatdrop**waves good bye* (^_^") //
Title: Re: Jane Doe
Post by: cisda83 on May 12, 2013, 07:20:51 AM
AH... Jane is so great out there...

I like the way she escape.... so cool...

Ah.. Minami is just a singer in a restaurant...

Minami's sense something is not right... but don't know what?

What will happen next.... to Minami?

CG... who is it? Mayu...?

Minami is living in a house with someone else?

Why did Minami become jane doe?

Can't wait to find out more

Thank you for the story

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Jane Doe
Post by: Dieyg48 on May 12, 2013, 11:02:03 AM
Man!!The way Takamina escape is totally awesome!!! Like the action so mucchy!! :thumbsup

~And it is a good thing that you make my Takamina cool in here!! I'm really addicted to this fanfic now!!!~Plus the story and action is easy to understand[for me at least]...ANYWAY!! *Please Update The Next Chapter Please!!!*

~I'm listening to Jane Doe now and i will read Jane Doe from now on!!!XXDD

Pls update more!!! :bow: :bow: :thumbsup :thumbsup :thumbsup :twothumbs XD
Title: Re: Jane Doe
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on May 19, 2013, 04:38:20 PM
Sounds like it's gonna be one of those "uncontrollable split-personality" things again :panic:
Title: Re: Jane Doe
Post by: Amakuchi on May 20, 2013, 06:47:01 AM
WOOH! BAKANTOKU (Short for Baka Sou Kantoku / Baka Kantoku) IS AWESOME! XD

MAMA, UPDATE! ORA MISMO! XD

GekiSaku-sama : YEAH! MAMANYAN IS SHUGOI! *pretend to be BAKA* Not sure if Sister in law? Tell me Mama-nyan's closest link in the Family and I'll tell. :3
Title: Re: Jane Doe
Post by: mayuyuXlyukirinlover13 on May 28, 2013, 10:33:55 AM
So Bro from now on until God knows when it'll end, I'll be on hiatus . BECAUSE my Older brother has Prohibited me to make Fanfictions because he said it was a Waste of my time.   :banghead:

So Jane Doe will be updated whenever I can update because My older sister will be taking the computer away from me starting tomorrow  :cry:
 :badluck:

I am really sorry    :on speedy:
Title: Re: Jane Doe
Post by: Haruko on May 29, 2013, 03:03:49 AM
really?! its not a waste of time because you can develop your imagination.. but well some people don´t understand that
Title: Re: Jane Doe
Post by: Dieyg48 on June 03, 2013, 04:34:51 PM
Unn...Don't worry author-san!!! I'll be waiting for it...zettaiii!!!
 XD :) :yep:

~I know how's the feel of our freedom to be taken that easily!!! It's the worst!! <--for me at least..
 :smhid ;) :cry:

~Can't really blame you author-san..But don't worry!!~ I'd still be waiting for it!!!
 :yep: :heart: :banghead:

~Pls, take ur time!!!!~
 :deco: :twothumbs :bow:
Title: Re: Jane Doe
Post by: mayuyuXlyukirinlover13 on October 02, 2013, 01:31:17 PM
Author:How's it going bros, brochachos bromen! I'm back with another le update

Takamina:You better not make me look lame!!

CG:You are lame from the very start so there's nothing to do to change that

Takamina:Shut Up!! Acchan!! Help meeeee!!!

Acchan:Like I said Takamina I can't since I'm not part of the story

Author:I beg to differ Atsu-neechan you ARE going to be part of the story~

Acchan:Eh? Really?

Takamina:*Clings to acchan* Yay~! ( Q u Q )

Author:And also Juchan~

Jurina:Alright!!! :D

CG:Great... ⌐⌐"

Author:And yukirin won't be in the story for she will be helping me right here in the writters station :3

Yukirin:That's right

CG:Aw.... *pouts*

Yukirin:Well on with the Story! ^^




Chapter 2

I feel the warmth of the sun coming from my bedroom window at the left, I the pulled sheet of blanket over my head and cover my whole body in it. I hear the chirping of birds 
but I still decided to sleep until the afternoon. Besides, it's just 7 in the morning.


As I drift off to sleep once more, I hugged and snuggled my pillow that is right next to me. Without any warning, a loud blast of a horn just rang into my ears, I felt like my ear drums was about to give out and bleed. That blast made me jolt out of bed causing me to fall to the cold floor on my back-side and causing me to hit my left elbow on the corner of my dresser thus causing it to give me that small electric shock.



I held my elbow as I turn to face and my front body to the floor, my head resting on the floor as my body arched into an acute angle while holding my elbow ––that is now  having that painful and electrifying feeling up to my shoulders.–– I groan in pain.



"Breakfast is ready tiny" says CG with a smug look on her face.



She enjoys my pain in the morning because she finds it very amusing to see me react in the most stupid ways possible. I hear her footsteps fade as she goes out my room,leaving the door of my room open.

 I was lying flat on the floor, I let go of the hand that was holding my left elbow, I used both of my hands and pushed my upper body up and using my legs I stood up from the floor.



As I stood up, I stretched my arms up and made a small groan. I took a deep breath in and then I exhaled. I walked towards my bedroom window and unlocked it, I lift it up and it automatically locks in place as soon as it was in contact on the top end. Cliché but, the birds are chirping, it’s sunny, and peaceful.



I then head towards my bedroom's bathroom, I went in and took off my clothes and took a quick shower.


The warm water flows down my whole body, I feel like, all the stress and physical strain on my body just disappears. After five minutes of taking a shower, I turned the knob of the shower to the left and turned the shower off.

I grabbed the towel from the towel rack that's near the sink and covered myself with it.



I reached out and grabbed the door knob, I turned the knob causing it to make a 'click' sound, the sound meant the door is now unlocked. I opened the door and walked out of the bathroom.


Moist, visible steam escapes the bathroom. I can still feel the warm humidity inside.


I walked towards my closet and lazily picked out my clothes, I lay my clothes down on my bed, Before I could wear my clothes, first, I closed the windows and also the curtains inside my room for privacy.


I took off my towel and began to wear my clothes. After I wore my clothes I looked around my room, I sighed, it’s a mess! When was the last time I cleaned my own room? Yesterday? 2 days ago?



I don't know anymore. I decided to clean up my room for God knows how long I didn't clean it.


As I picked up the pants and skirts lying around, I first checked the pockets, 3 of my skirts' pockets has 500 yen each while 5 of my pants' pockets has a coupon for a restaurant I went a week ago and the other 3 pants has 10 to 50 yen in them. I guess I can call this a lucky day finding money and coupon in my clothes…. It’s like a present from myself.



I picked up the shirts, underwear and blouses on the floor and folded all the clothes I've collected on the floor; I placed them in a basket where I usually put my dirty clothes.


My room looks less of a pig's stalk than before, I'm too lazy to sweep the floor or fix my bed, I picked up a scrunchie that has a bow tie design from my dresser and tied my hair into a ponytail. I walked out of my room and headed down to the stairs and into the living room.


 I let out a yawn when I reached the living room; the first floor is as big as any mansion of a rich person, the living room, the dining room and the kitchen showcase are all created using the highest quality material there is. From metal, wood and rocks. Technology updated and styled to its finest.

As I head walk into the kitchen I can smell the aroma of pancakes, bacon, eggs and toast that have been newly cooked by CG. I opened the wooden door and walked inside. I greeted her a "Good morning" but as usual she just waves a hand as a response. I walked towards the small circular table, which only fits 3 people, and took a seat. The table was near the kitchen window and near the door to the backyard. As I sat down I saw a newspaper on the left end of table, just near the edge of it.

I unfolded the newspaper and looked at the top headline.


"The Black thief strikes again! Stole a ruby from the Yamazaki household and returns it to the Archeologist in Cairo!"


I looked behind to where CG was cooking. 

"You shipped it back last night?" I said with a slightly exaggerated tone.

"I can't do it today; you know how busy I am in the weekends. Plus, the earlier the better." she bluntly said as she flips the pancakes.

I sighed. I swear she's just a lazy assed child... then she spoke.

"By the way, that detective's still hunts you down. And she got no leads what-so-ever."

"So...?" I asked


"Be lucky that I can clear traces of who you are. She's a good one..."
She answered


After that conversation she serves the breakfast. on the table was a simple variety of meals. I had coffee some pancakes, and a ham sandwich and also bacon.
Another peaceful day I guess...


After an hour of breakfast I told CG that I was heading out to buy groceries. I headed towards the front door to change into my roller blades but CG had to say something to me before I left.

“Those roller blades of yours are newly modified so be God damn careful” She said

And so I asked.

“What do you mean ‘newly modified’? What the hell did you do to my skates?”

“Nothing really, I just turned them into Air treks.” She said with a smirk.

“You and your anime themed gadgets… But I have to admit, these stuff are amazing…” I said.

“Go and try them out, I need data for me to improve those, if needed.”

“So… Is it just like in the anime?” I asked as I put the skates on.

“Yup.” She answered.


I tied the laces tight and stood up.


“By the way, you can remove the wheels if you need to.” She said to me as a follow-up for the skates.


I nodded and removed the wheels. The wheels can be removed by pushing a button on the side of the skates, and can also be easily attached as well.

As I went out of the front gate of my house, I re-attached the wheels and took a test run. And my first thoughts came as soon as was on wheels.

‘If it is made just like in the anime, then…’

I shifted my weight to the front, the skates are automatically moving. I tried to use them as normal skates but the only difference is that, I placed more weight to the front.


I was picking up speed; I can feel the air rushing against me. I decided to play around a bit.
I bent my back half way down, the air felt like a strong wind pushing against my body… As I suddenly placed a quick and heavy amount of weight, I felt a sudden jolt of speed on my skates.


I zoomed past so many houses it all seemed like a blur to me. I then notice a wall; I made a playful plan to test these little puppies out.



I made a small leap but… due to the suspension and the air cushions in the AT’s, it made this small leap a big jump. This surprised me a little but I had to act fast because I’m 30 feet in the air. But even thou I’m this high right now… I feel as if the whole world slowed down.


I did an Arial backflip then miraculously landed on the wall’s ledge. My heart was pounding fast but I have a huge grin on my face.


 “That little Hikikamori genius…” I murmured.

I then jumped off the wall and landed on the ground; I leisurely skated around the neighborhood. The hood has a lot of good people in it; most of the people here are senior citizens. Sweet old granddads and grannies.


I passed by a lot of them, not in the speedy way thou. Those folks will get worried if I get into an accident.


I just skated normally thru town while avoiding the crowd on the streets. I plugged in my ear phones and skated to the sweet beat. Another normal day I guess.

As I reached my destination, I took the wheels off… The last thing I want is to slip and fall in public…


I’m right here in the supermarket buying what’s on my phone’s list. Of course… the list is from CG’s text messages.


“So… we ran out of milk, cereal, eggs, meat, ketchup and many more… great.” I said with a hint of sarcasm.


“I wonder how my wallet will survive…” I murmured.


I took a cart and went to the meat section. I looked around to find the meat I would always buy since CG and I favor it the most. My phone suddenly vibrated and I reached into my pocket and took it out. I flipped it open and saw a message; I clicked ok and read what CG sent me.



“We’ll be having…” I quietly said. I had a dumbfounded look as I can’t believe what I just read.
And so I blurted it out anyways.



“KATSUDON?!” I half shouted. I looked around if anyone heard and saw me. No sign of people so… I’m safe.


I started picking up some Meat. I saw a sign near the price tag, it’s 20% off.
That saves me at least some money. I think.


As I picked up some fish in the seafood section I heard a familiar voice, I looked around; both left and right, then I saw her, on the left side of where I am now. The detective that’s trying to track me down!

I almost dropped the meats. My feet are cold and I’m sweating a little, trying to act cool and not shakey. My cold sweat is sliding down my face as she passes me from behind. I know CG said that she erased my track but I can’t help but doubt sometimes. My life is at stake here!

She groans.

“Didn’t I tell you to NEVER mix up the files? Or lose it?!” she half shouted. Seems like she was talking on her phone.


“You better find those files if you don’t want that sorry ass of yours to get the boot out of the department!” she firmly said. God she’s one hell of a scary girl!


I pretended to compare 2 types of ground meat; this will lessen the chance of suspicion.
She puts her phone back into her pockets and walked passed me in frustration.

“I swear to God that Jane Doe is giving me a hell of a week! If I find her… She’s Dog food for the K-9 units!” She furiously said as she practically marched away.

Good God… She is freaking terrifying! I’m lucky to have CG or else I’d be dead by now in my house.

I sighed in relief, I was lucky she didn’t notice me. I then continued shopping for food for the next hour or so. After that, I re-attached my wheels and carried 2 bags on both arms and left the place.


Even thou the air treks are propelled by weight and all, I still have to use my legs since Air treks are self-propelled as well.

As I skated swiftly against the crowd, I saw a little kid being kidnapped by 2 guys. Of course, my instincts told me to save the kid. Guts first I guess. I left the groceries somewhere I could easily find it and retrieve. That’s under a bench.

The men started running as soon as they took the kid and taped the kid’s mouth. I had to act fast.


‘Fast…?’ I thought, then I realized. I have my Air treks.

I placed a huge amount of weight on the left foot as I stand there quickly scanning the area for anything to work on. Then I figured something out.


I wore my gloves and dropped down on my hands, my fingers pressing down the cement as I get myself ready, and my right leg stretched behind me, the front wheel of my right foot was pushing down as I placed the same weight.


Smoke was beginning to surround me and then, I dashed. Everything blurred out as if I were in a car driving 250 Miles per hour. But I didn’t lose my focus.

Just 50 meters away I see a tall but thin and sturdy light post and beside me right now is a smooth thick cement wall on my right, at first I moved 2 meters away from it then I quickly jumped towards it. I grinded the walls and head towards the post.

5 meters away, I leaped off the wall and propelled myself forward. My left hand grabs on to the post, my feet landed vertically. I shifted my weight down to my feet and onto the tip of them. Just like stepping on the gas pedal of a car, I pushed my Air treks forward and I hunched down as I started spinning.


‘Upper soul 26…’ I thought to myself.


As I reached the top I waited for the right moment to jump and let go.

“60 degrees toward the north east” I said to myself as I jumped off.


I felt like I was soaring in the sky as I made that jump. I was breathless for a short moment.


Then, amidst the sea of crowds below me, I saw the 2 men with the kid. My eyes fixated on them, I changed my body’s position into a flying kick posture. With my right leg pointed down, gravity pulls me down fast. And then I hit one of the guy –the one without a kid of course– Dead straight on the back of his head with an additional wheel burn.

The guy passed out and his partner looked at me in horror as I stood up and glared at him. My fists were clenched tight. He ran with the kid on his hold. I placed my weight down like what I did earlier and then there I go, zooming past so many people and not harming anyone except for the man who’s running.


I zoomed past him and as he kept running I charged towards him in such high speed. I punched him right on the guts. He let goes of the kid as he skid and stumbled far. I catch the kid and gently placed the kid down on the ground. I took off the tape that’s covering the mouth.

“You ok kiddo?” I asked the little boy.


“…” no response. Crap, did I scare him?


“Hey kid?”


“THAT WAS AWESOME!!!” the boy half shouted with excitement. Ok, I didn’t scare him.


“Ok , ok, what’s your name kid?” I asked him.


“Matsui Junichi and I’m 8 years old! And I know who you are!” he said. He knows me? Oh…Shoot.


“Eh? You know me?” I said in a fake confused tone.

“Yeah! You’re Jane Doe!!” he shouted. And of course! Everyone who witnessed the things I did Earlier just now are now looking at me. Some were whispering while others just looked at me. Great.



I stayed cool, calm and not in panic. I made a fake chuckle.


“How can I be Jane Doe? My name is Takahashi Minami, Kid. Plus! I’m not near as awesome as her!” I said.

“But you have those skates! Only Jane Doe can have awesome gadgets!!” he happily said to me.



“Oh these, these are made by group of pals of mine! We experimented on the skates, I’m the Test dummy!” I let out a slightly but unnoticeable nervous chuckle.



“Oh… ok.” The little boy murmured, and then pouted.



“Ok Junichi, where are your pare––“before I could finish his mom arrives to where we are. Junichi happily ran towards his mom and his mom hugs him. She’s crying. I can tell she got deathly afraid and worried.



“Jun! Never ever leave my side like that again!!” she shouted in a weary voice. She’s hugging the little boy tight in a protective way.
Junichi hugs his mom and said “Ok”. His mom approached me and said

“Thank you so much for saving my little boy…”


All I could say is.


“It’s no biggie. After all, it’s just something some people would do too.” I smiled

After thanking me, Junichi hugged me.


“Thanks Minami-nee!” he cheerily said.


“It was my pleasure kiddo.” I said as I patted his head.


After that they went on their way back home. As I look them I realized something that I shouldn’t have forgotten.


“Oh crap! The groceries!!”I exclaimed as I skated fast towards the place where I hid them.
After I came back I was relieved that nothing got moved. I took them and skated back home.


I guess it’s not a peaceful normal day as I thought. But it’s not boring either.

As I was skating back to my place I said to myself.


“Gee, I have so many things to tell CG when get back… and She’ll kill me for almost trashing the ATs… and I curse myself for almost trashing them too!”
 

I sighed.

Another day that’s out of the ordinary. Just like I want them to be.



===============

Me:OH GOD I FINALLY FINISHED IT!!!

Takamina:Good ... AND WHAT THE HELL MAN!! DO WANT ME TO DIE BECAUSE OF ACCHAN AGAIN?! D:<

Me:I'm sorry! alright! ==

CG:No screen time? Really?!

Me:At least you get one CG-sama~ ^^"

CG:Drop and give me 50 -.-

Me:*doing 50 push-ups* One! two! three! T_T

Yukirin:U-Until next time folks! ^^"
Title: Re: Jane Doe
Post by: mayuyuXlyukirinlover13 on October 02, 2013, 02:19:03 PM
I am here to seek forgiveness for not updating this  :kneelbow: :kneelbow:

This time!  :mon lol:  I'll update this once every 5 months!!!  :glasses:

Why? Because I have to focus on my studies for me to graduate next year~!  :on grad:
[Even thou I'm always online ^^" ]


Plus! for me to get fresh Ideas of this fanfic  :bingo:


So... See you guys in 5 months?  :mon sweat:
Title: Re: Jane Doe
Post by: Archer1992 on October 02, 2013, 05:30:41 PM
oh god!!!

Acchan is scary

continue ASAP!!!

thanks
Title: Re: Jane Doe
Post by: mayuyuXlyukirinlover13 on October 04, 2013, 05:44:38 PM
oh god!!!

Acchan is scary

continue ASAP!!!

thanks



I'll try but.... it's kinda hard to do when I'm out of Ideas  :sweatdrop:
Title: Re: Jane Doe
Post by: Amakuchi on October 05, 2013, 11:18:02 AM
Oyea. Update, mom.