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Title: [ChiqinNa's Neverland] When Love Stops... (Atsumina) 03/01/2014
Post by: chiqinna on April 30, 2013, 11:14:50 AM
This is my first time making os so please be good to me~  :bow: wmatsui22 have ask me to make wmatsui os loooooooooooooooooooong time ago so I was kinda have an idea...hehe  :lol:



Title: When I was your man
Pairing: Wmatsui and a little of Mayuki

“Yuki, I’m going out now. Bye!” said Rena while putting on her shoes.
“Wait! Rena, where are you going?”
“I’m having a date… with Kato.” Said Rena smiling happily.
“Owh…have fun then…and take care!”
After Rena got out of the apartment, Yuki let out a small sigh.

Ring! Ring!
It’s Yuki’s phone.
Seeing the name on the phone screen, Yuki quickly press the green button.
“Mayu-kun~~~” said Yuki happily.
“Hey my sweet Yuki~” said Mayu on the other line.
“What is it that you call me? Don’t tell me you miss me already?” said Yuki grinning.
“I always miss you~~ by the way I just want to tell you something…”
“Hm?”
“Is Rena there?” asked Mayu.
“No. Why?”Answered Yuki.
“Nothing. I just want to tell you that, Jun has come back to Japan.” Said Mayu.
“What? When? How?” said Yuki giving her famous reaction face.
“Calm down dear~ he just arrived yesterday…He just calls me today.” Explain Mayu.
“I see… so…what is he going to do now?” asked Yuki.
“I don’t know…want to meet him?”
“Hmmm…why not? It’s been a long time we didn’t hang out together...how about I ask Rena too?” said Yuki.
“Err…I don’t think that was a good idea...Yukirin…” said Mayu.
Realized what she was saying, she put her right hand on her mouth.
“Ooopss…I forgot about that…hehe” laugh Yuki.
“I have to hang up now, bye…I love you!” said Mayu.
“un…love you too~” said Yuki.

Yuki sigh for the second time.
“I wish they were still together…” mumbled Yuki sadly.


Jun’s pov

I came back to Japan after 5 years staying in New York.

I miss Japan…

 and my friends…

and her.

The first person I call was Mayu, my best friend.
He was shocked when I tell him that I was in Japan.
I want to ask him about Rena but…me being a coward.

I bet Rena doesn’t want to know anything about me anymore.

After what I’ve done to her

Regretful was the only thing left inside me.


Today I was having a walk for the first time in Japan.
So many has changed here.
I walk into the café near the park. I took a sit on the second floor so that I can see the whole place down there.
While waiting for my coffee, I look around to enjoy the peacefulness.
As my eyes wandering around, I saw a couple of lover sitting on a bench at the park.
That woman looks…familiar.

I keep looking at her then I finally realized. It was Rena.
My heart beating faster when I saw she smiles happily.
I miss that smile. But that smile was not for me anymore.
Then I feel my heart hurt when I saw a man beside her.
I turn my eyes away from them…because I couldn’t stand seeing her with another man.

I hold my tears.

Be a man, Jun.

After I finished my coffee, I just walk back home.
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Mayu, Yuki and Jun are having lunch at the usual place that they always hang out.

“Ne…Jun, tell me…do you found any girls there? Are they hot?” asked Mayu who got smacked by his girlfriend. “Ouch!”
Jun chuckled seeing lovely couple across him.
“Nah~ I prefer Japan girl than New York girl~ although they are hot~” said Jun leaning on his chair.
“Really? Then do you still love Rena?” asked Yuki with a smile.

Mayu face palmed himself.

Yuki realized that she had promised Mayu that she wouldn’t talk about Rena in front of Jun.
Seeing Yuki’s reaction, Jun let out a small laugh.

“Don’t worry guys, I’m okay with it. Besides, I also know that Rena has someone else already. I saw her yesterday.” Said Jun with a sad smile.
Mayu and Yuki feel sad for their friend.
“Do you still love her?” asked Yuki again with serious tone.
Jun nodded. “I will always love her.” Said Jun looking down.

“Ow come on dude! Don’t be so emo~~ btw you look different now…huh? I bet many girl are falling for you~” said Mayu trying to change the atmosphere.
“Yeah~ I work out...” said Jun patting his chest.
“Hey, how about we make a party for Jun this weekend? A comeback party?” suggest Yuki.
“That sounds good honey!” said Mayu putting his arm around his girlfriend.
“Mou~ how about you Jun? Are you okay with it?” asked Yuki to Jun.
“*sighed* Do whatever you like then~ “said Jun.
“Then…can we invite Rena too?” asked Yuki with pleading eyes.
“Of course you can…if she wants to.” Said Jun sadly.
“Of course she will dude! We’ll invite everyone to this party!!” said Mayu.
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The party night

Rena comes to the party with her boyfriend. She had to because of her best friends.
She was nervous to meet Jun again, her ex-boyfriend.

The party was held at Jun’s mansion.

Jun still hasn’t come out from his room.
“Oi! Jun! Are you still in there?” shout Mayu from outside.
The door opened revealing Jun…with a white suit.
“Wow~ you look great…but I’m greater~ okay now go down everyone is waiting for you!” said Mayu while pushing him downstairs.

Everyone was having fun in the party.

But not for Jun.

Every time their eyes meets each other, his heart beat faster…but it hurt him when she smile to her new boyfriend.
He's trying his best to show his smile to everyone.
“Everyone! Since it was Jun’s party, how about Jun singing us a song?!” said Mayu to the audience using a mike.

Everybody start to cheer for Jun.

“Come on Jun! sing for us!” Yuki said pulling Jun to the piano make him sit.

He was hesitating.

Then Yuki whisper something to him.
Jun look at Yuki. “You can do it!” said Yuki patting on his shoulder.
Jun took a deep breath. Everyone is focusing on him right now.

He started to play the piano.


Same bed but it feels just a little bit bigger now
Our song on the radio but it don't sound the same
When our friends talk about you, all it does is just tear me down
'Cause my heart breaks a little when I hear your name


It all just sounds like oooooh…
Mmm, too young, too dumb to realize
That I should have bought you flowers
And held your hand


Jun sing while looking at Rena with his sincere eyes.
Rena looking other way...

Should have gave you all my hours
When I had the chance
Take you to every party
'Cause all you wanted to do was dance
Now my baby's dancing
But she's dancing with another man


My pride, my ego, my needs, and my selfish ways
Caused a good strong woman like you to walk out my life
Now I never, never get to clean up the mess I made, ohh…
And it haunts me every time I close my eyes


I still love you Rena...

it all just sounds like oooooh…
Mmm, too young, too dumb to realize
That I should have bought you flowers
And held your hand
Should have gave you all my hours
When I had the chance
Take you to every party
'Cause all you wanted to do was dance
Now my baby's dancing
But she's dancing with another man



Although it hurts
I'll be the first to say that I was wrong
Oh, I know I'm probably much too late
To try and apologize for my mistakes
But I just want you to know


I'm sorry...

I hope he buys you flowers
I hope he holds your hand
Give you all his hours
When he has the chance
Take you to every party
'Cause I remember how much you loved to dance
Do all the things I should have done
When I was your man
Do all the things I should have done
When I was your man...



After he finished, everyone was clapping for his performance.
“Wow~ you really a great singer dude!” said Mayu walking to Jun.
Jun just give a small smile.
“Cheer up dude! It’s your day~ forget about the past~” said Mayu patting Jun’s back.
“Thanks, Mayu. I feel good now.” Said Jun.

He saw Rena looking at him. Jun breath inwardly.
Rena was smiling to him.
He smile back...



done! I left it hanging there hahahahahahahahhaha    :lol: :panic: :yep: :pimp:
I don't know what am I doing just now~    :nervous
Title: Re: [ChiqinNa's wonderland of one shot!!! ] - When I was your man(wmatsui) 30/04/13
Post by: sakura_drop_ on April 30, 2013, 11:51:55 AM
PLEASE WRITE MOAR!!!

I WANT A CONTINUATION!!!

It's okay though if you leave an open ending too  :nervous :twothumbs

But write more OSs!!! :bow:
Title: Re: [ChiqinNa's wonderland of one shot!!! ] - When I was your man(wmatsui) 30/04/13
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on April 30, 2013, 11:53:27 AM
OMG my mom LOVES this song! Nice work. :thumbsup

Aw... how sad... Everyone left Jun all alone. :cry:

Poor Jun... hope he finds new love. :heart:
Title: Re: [ChiqinNa's wonderland of one shot!!! ] - When I was your man(wmatsui) 30/04/13
Post by: gek geki on April 30, 2013, 12:03:05 PM
Ah its SWEETEST STORY
A LITTLE BIT SAD,BUT LOVE COULDNT ALWAYS FOREVER.
 I HOPE RENA AND JUN STILL BE FRIEND AFTER THAT PARTY.
AND WHO KNOW WHAT HAPPEN IN THE FUTURE
BECAUSE THE STORY HANGING LIKE THAT,I JUST IMAGINE THAT THEY TOGETHER AGAIN
BECAUSE YUKI KEEP ASK ABOUT JUN STILL LOVE RENA OR NOT,THAT MEAN YUKI THINK RENA STILL LOVE JUN TOO
THAT WAS JUST MY IMAGINATION
Title: Re: [ChiqinNa's wonderland of one shot!!! ] - When I was your man(wmatsui) 30/04/13
Post by: smarty0821 on April 30, 2013, 03:31:47 PM
 :cry: JUN!!!  :cry:


I've read your story while listening to "When I was your Man"


And....WOW! I can feel what Jun feels... :cry:


OH GOSh!!! this is only a one shot story!!! ToT

Title: Re: [ChiqinNa's wonderland of one shot!!! ] - When I was your man(wmatsui) 30/04/13
Post by: Rena-chan Daisuki on April 30, 2013, 04:22:46 PM
Oh!!! Comon!
don't just leave it like that :(
u hanging it not on the right time
I'm going to cry if u just leave it :cry:
I beg you  :bow:

Title: Re: [ChiqinNa's wonderland of one shot!!! ] - When I was your man(wmatsui) 30/04/13
Post by: kuro808 on April 30, 2013, 06:22:58 PM
When I was your man is such a great song.

Good one shot.  My fic was AtsuMina with this song :lol:
Title: Re: [ChiqinNa's wonderland of one shot!!! ] - When I was your man(wmatsui) 30/04/13
Post by: KojiYuu44 on May 01, 2013, 04:48:44 AM
please don't leave it at that  :(
write more!!!
I wanna read the continuation
Title: Re: [ChiqinNa's wonderland of one shot!!! ] - When I was your man(wmatsui) 30/04/13
Post by: Wmatsui22 on May 01, 2013, 06:08:27 AM
~Hi chiqinna-san  :luvuluvu: :luvuluvu: :luvuluvu:

~I thought you forgotten about that.. but I am happy that you didn't!  :on woohoo:

~It's a great story but..... you let it hanging  :on speedy:

~I hope you continue this... :bow:

~Please  :bow:

~Thanks  :)

-WMatsui_22-
Title: Re: [ChiqinNa's wonderland of one shot!!! ] - When I was your man(wmatsui) 30/04/13
Post by: chiqinna on May 01, 2013, 11:04:23 AM
Hmmmmm....u want the continuation???!!  :dunno:
fine...I'll make it for the sake of wmatsui to be together again .....maybe?  :mon trudge:
minna minna minna!!! thanks for commenting and reading my first os!!  :kneelbow:
wmatsui22 of course I haven't forgot about it~~ hehehe  :D
thanks again!!  :hee:
Title: Re: [ChiqinNa's wonderland of one shot!!! ] - When I was your man(wmatsui) 30/04/13
Post by: cisda83 on May 01, 2013, 02:51:21 PM
Ah... Jurina and Mayu are males here....

Interesting...

What happened that made Jun and Rena break up?

What's going to happen next

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the OS

I hope you made this OS to a longer fic...

It's very good start of a nice fic... actually

So please continue it...

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: [ChiqinNa's wonderland of one shot!!! ] -continue~ My Reason(wmatsui) 02/05/13
Post by: chiqinna on May 02, 2013, 08:24:33 AM
This is the continuation…  :)
enjoy!

My Reason

A year after that…
Jun and Rena had decided to becomes friend. Jun has started to move on but deep inside he still really loves Rena. He sacrifices his feelings for her just to see the one he loved happy. As long as Rena happy with Kato, it’s fine with him.
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“Papa!!! Papa!!!” shout a cute little girl happily to Jun.
Jun smile widely seeing the cute little girl running towards him and Jun kneel down to catch her onto his arms.
The cute little girl wrapped her small arms around Jun’s neck.
Jun lift her up and walk towards the house that the little girl has come out from.
“Papa~ I miss you~~~” said the little girl pouting cutely to Jun.
“Awww~ I miss you too Miiko-chan~ Papa Jun say sorry okay…I’m so busy lately that I forgot to see Miiko-chan~~” said Jun while entering the big house.

A man comes out from the kitchen to greet Jun.
“Yo! Jun! Long time no see… and Miiko-chan, stop calling Jun papa already~” said Kuu to Miiko-chan while walking to them.
“But daddy~~~” she pout cutely looking down.

Jun chuckled seeing her behavior.

“It’s okay Kuu…besides I like it when Miiko-chan calling me papa~ haha” said Jun patting the little girl’s head.
“See! Papa Jun is okay with it!” said Miiko-chan then stick out her tongue to her father.
“Then who’s your real father then?” said Kuu acting mad to his daughter.
“Mou~ of course Daddy~~ I love daddy~” said Miiko-chan running to her father and hug him.
“I love Miiko too~ now give daddy a kiss!” said Kuu then she kiss Kuu on the cheek.
“Good girl~” Kuu say then kiss her daughter also.
“Where’s Mariko-sama?” Asked Jun while looking around the big house.
“She’s at her office, still meeting. But she’ll be back soon I guess…” said Kuu looking at his watch.
“How about you? Aren’t you working today?” Asked Kuu.
“Nope~ I have a day off so I want to spend my time with Miiko today.” Said Jun smile while watching his niece playing with a doll.

“I’m home!!!” said Mariko who just back from work.
“Hey, Papa is here~” said Mariko laughing then sit on the couch beside Kuu after kissing her daughter’s forehead.
“Whatever Mariko-sama~ anyway I come here just to give this invitation card to you guys.” Said Jun giving the card to them.
“What is this? Your wedding invitation?” Joked Mariko while opening the card.
“Shut up! It’s Rena and her boyfriend…they asked me to gave it to you.” Explain Jun faking his smile.
Mariko and Kuu’s smile fade when they read the content and look at each other.
Mariko sighed. Kuu get up to make a drink for them.
“Jun, there’s no need to hide your true face to me now. I know you were sad okay.” Said Mariko looking at Jun.

Jun keeps looking down.

“Look, Jun. I know it was hard for you to forget about her but try to date with other woman. Maybe it can help you.” Said Mariko.
Jun sighed loudly.
“Nee-chan…I already going out with many girls already…but still…I just…can’t.” said Jun.
“Or you can have a date with…..Miiko-chan!” said Mariko smirked.
“Nee-chan~~!!!” whined Jun at his older sister’s joke.
“Fine~ but, hey, you still have a chance you know…ask her if she still loves you.” said Mariko looking back the card.
“I know…but I don’t think so I’m cruel enough to destroy their wedding…” said Jun.
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“Rena, you serious right? About this?” asked Yuki to Rena who’s sitting at the living room watching TV.
“Of course I am Yuki.  Kato had been waiting for me for so long already.” Said Rena.
“And Jun had been loving you for so long already.” Said Yuki looking away.
“*sighed* Yuki~~ we’re just friend okay. It’s all in the past.” Said Rena still looking at the TV.
“Yeah right~ like I don’t know you still have feelings for him.” Said Yuki frowning.
“Say who?”

“Say me! Then who else looks so in love when she watch Jun singing in a TV show right now?” said Yuki when
she looks at Rena who was watching Jun’s performance on a TV show.
Rena then realized about it then she blushed looking away from the TV screen.
“Then should I just broke Kato’s heart when I already accept his proposal?” said Rena looking down sad.

Yuki sighed.

“Come here. I’m sorry.” Said Yuki while pulling Rena into a hug. Rena sobs on her shoulder.
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Jun ask Rena to meet him. He wants to ask Rena something before she married.
“What is it Jun?” Asked Rena to Jun who sit across her.
“I just want to ask you this for the last time...” said Jun before asking her.
Rena was looking at him with curiosity.
“You really don’t …love me anymore?” Asked Jun looking at Rena’s eyes serious.
Rena’s heart beating faster when she heard it.
“N-no.” said Rena looking away.
“Look into my eyes and say it, Rena.” Said Jun with serious face.
“It’s over between us, Jun.” said Rena looking at him.
“No it’s not-“
“I’m getting married Jun!” said Rena with tears in her eyes.
Jun was really hurt when he hears that from Rena.

“You don’t love him.” Said Jun in a low voice while looking down.

“He’s a good man! Then tell me a reason why I should go back to you??” asked Rena. Jun keep quiet.
Rena then got up and walks away from Jun.
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“What should we do about them honey?” asked Yuki to her boyfriend. They are having a date right now.
“Nothing.” Said Mayu with cyborg face.
Yuki frown hearing his answer.

“Are you really their friends? Mayu?” Asked Yuki still frowning.
“No…I’m not their friend…” said Mayu still with blank face.
“What??!!” shout Yuki confused.
“I’m their savior~” smirked Mayu looking at her beloved girlfriend.
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The day has come…Rena and Kato’s wedding ceremony.
Only close family and friends were invited to the ceremony.
Rena was in her room wearing a white gown. She was looking at herself in a mirror when Yuki comes in to bring her out.
“Don’t worry Rena, you looks so beautiful already. Let’s go, everyone is waiting.” Said Yuki then Rena comes out
of the room followed by Yuki who smirked behind her.

Kato already waiting for Rena inside the church.
Rena walks inside slowly. Everybody’s eyes are on her, praising at her beauty.
Once she stops beside Kato, Kato hold her right hand, and said something.
“Rena, we’ve been together for three years, and I have the most happy, lovable moments when I’m with you. And I want to thank you, for making me happy with your smile, your laugh, I was grateful to have a girlfriend like you.” Said Kato.
“You know, after years being with you, I finally realized, I realized that in your eyes, it’s not me that you’re looking at. It’s not me that you’re searching for. It’s someone else.” Said Kato.

Rena and the others except Mayu and Yuki were confused at what Kato say.

“What are you saying, Kato?” Asked Rena.
“I’m saying that, you make a wrong decision if you get married with me. I can make you happy, but I can’t make you happier. I love you, but I don’t love you as much as he does… I know you still loves him Rena, I can see it in your eyes.” Said Kato.
“W-what do you mean? Kato…” Rena was shocked.
Kato step back and said to Rena, “look there~” while pointing to where the place where the music was played.

There, she saw Jun sitting across the piano with black suit.

‘Jun?!’ said Rena in her mind.
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Before the wedding, Kato met Jun. He told Jun that Mayu had told him everything about him and Rena. Jun was shocked at first but he understands.
Kato had made a decision to let go of Rena to go back to him. He realized that Rena’s love is not for him. But he made Jun promised him that he will take care of Rena and never make her cry.
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Rena was still confused at what happen. Her eyes still on Jun.

Then Jun started to sing.



I fell for you the moment I first saw you
You were so beautiful
I fell so deeply for you

I felt it for the first time
The thing called love, and my heart racing
I can’t help my heart feeling this way

I will go closer to you, just stay as you are
I will hold you tight so you can feel me more

Only one to protect you
Only one person to value you
The person who will love you is me

Only you are the one who makes me exist
Only you have stolen all of my heart
My All, You are the reason for me baby yeah

My heart pounds when I see you
I look and look but I want to keep looking at you
I’m in front of you, pretty sweety girl
Only you are the reason I live

I will be a bit braver, just trust me
Will you catch me so I can have you more?

Only one to protect you
Only one person to value you
The person who will love you is me

Only you are the one who makes me exist
Only you have stolen all of my heart
My All, You are the reason for me baby yeah

If something happens to you
Will you tell me? Will you lean on me?

Only one to make you smile
Only you to make you happy
The person who will only look at you is me
 
Then Jun got up and walk towards Rena...

Promise you forever
I love you, who has taken all of me
My love, You are the reason for me baby yeah

Only you are my reason


Rena shed her tears when Jun finished.
Jun stops in front of her.

"I gave you my reason already." said Jun.
Then Jun kneel down and pull out a ring box from his pocket and opened it revealing a diamond ring.
"Marry me, Rena." said Jun sincerely.

Rena was stunned. She looks at Kato. Kato only smile and nodding at her.
Mayu and Yuki were smiling watching the moment and hoping that Rena would accept it.
Suddenly one of the audience shout,"just marry him already!!".
Rena started to cry loudly.
Jun got up panicked doesn't know what to do.
"Eh? Rena? What happen? Why are you crying?" said Jun panicked.
"*sighed* Jun has never changed~" said Mayu to Yuki beside him. Yuki just nodded.
Rena suddenly hug Jun making Jun froze.
"*sob* I love you too, Jun. I love you so much!" said Rena tighten her hug.
Jun was so happy that he also hug Rena tightly.
"I promised I will be a good man to you~" said Jun crying.

"Err...Jun,can you let go, I can't breath." said Rena because Jun hug her so tight.
"No, I WON'T let you go...ever again!" said Jun.
"Just...please...it so tight!" said Rena trying to pull Jun from her.

Jun suddenly pull Rena into a passionate kiss.
Rena was kissing him back and wrapped her arms around his neck.
After the kiss, they stared at each other lovingly.

"Let's get married...now." smirked Jun.


Happy ending!!!!  :cow:  :banana: :pepper: :leek: :taco: :muffin: :strawberry: :lock: :bounce:



uhhhh...is it good? I feel weird after I finished it...  :?
I never make a love story before... ow my god!!  :panic:
hope u guys like it~  :sweat:




Title: Re: [ChiqinNa's wonderland of one shot!!! ] -continue~ My Reason(wmatsui) 02/05/13
Post by: kuro808 on May 02, 2013, 08:28:38 AM
Oh god that was impressive.

I love it!!!
Title: Re: [ChiqinNa's wonderland of one shot!!! ] -continue~ My Reason(wmatsui) 02/05/13
Post by: Rena-chan Daisuki on May 02, 2013, 09:31:38 AM
Yeyyyy!!!!
Score!
It really is such a beautiful ending
I LOVE IT :inlove:
Thank you so muh for continuing the story
 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: [ChiqinNa's wonderland of one shot!!! ] -continue~ My Reason(wmatsui) 02/05/13
Post by: cisda83 on May 02, 2013, 10:21:33 AM
Ah... Jun letting Rena go... for Rena's happiness...

Miko is so cute, she wants so many dads....  :lol:

Ah... Rena's getting married to Kato... while she is still in love with Jun...

She should just be with Jun... forget or trying to let go of the unhappy past that caused their separation...

It would be better for them in long run...

Wah... such a romantic gesture... playing piano and singing to her before proposing to Rena...

Excelent move there, Jun

Kato indeed is a good guy... to be able to let go of Rena after all these time... he spent dating Rena...

Yeah... Happy ending for Jun and Rena...

Thank you for the lovely update and ending...

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: [ChiqinNa's wonderland of one shot!!! ] -continue~ My Reason(wmatsui) 02/05/13
Post by: smarty0821 on May 02, 2013, 03:54:29 PM
YAY!!! Happy Ending!!!  :twothumbs :twothumbs Jun is really a good singer though.... I want like him ! He's my dream guy  :drool:



hahaha!! Thank you for the update!  :D
Title: Re: [ChiqinNa's wonderland of one shot!!! ] -continue~ My Reason(wmatsui) 02/05/13
Post by: POPCAT on May 02, 2013, 04:30:18 PM
Man, I like this story.  :thumbup

ps. read the singing part and listing to the song make it more spacial, well kind of  :nervous
 
Title: Re: [ChiqinNa's wonderland of one shot!!! ] -continue~ My Reason(wmatsui) 02/05/13
Post by: DC2805 on May 02, 2013, 04:39:36 PM
Yeah! Finally together...go get a HOT honeymoon too! :P
Title: Re: [ChiqinNa's wonderland of one shot!!! ] -continue~ My Reason(wmatsui) 02/05/13
Post by: K-popJ-popAWESOMENESS on May 02, 2013, 05:32:25 PM
This should happen irl O.O I mean they always kiss on stages and with Jujubb being a kissing monster and all....

Image them marrying each other T__T even if it's just on a show *dies happy*

I loved it :DDD what will you update next oO?
Title: Re: [ChiqinNa's wonderland of one shot!!! ] -continue~ My Reason(wmatsui) 02/05/13
Post by: chiqinna on May 03, 2013, 06:13:03 AM
kurosawa87: thank you soooo much for reading!!!!  :bow:
Rena-chan Daisuki: yay!! score!! hahah thanks for reading!!!  :bow:
cisda83: thanks you for reading~ :D  :bow:
smarty0821: he's my dream guy too~  :drool:
POPCAT: you're right...read the singing part while listening to it...  :D
DC2805: HOT honeymoon lol~ haha imagine it yourself~ hahaha  :lol:
K-popJ-popAWESOMENESS: hmm what should I update next..?  :dunno: maybe a heartbreaking story...  >:D hahahahahahaha  :on gay:

anyway, thanks to everyone who ready my first os and please take care of me~~  :kneelbow:
Title: Re: [ChiqinNa's wonderland of one shot!!! ] -continue~ My Reason(wmatsui) 02/05/13
Post by: Wmatsui22 on May 04, 2013, 07:58:59 AM
Hi ChiqinNa-san  :lol: :lol:

~Yehey! She will continue the WMatsui One-shot

~I also like the MaYuki scenes here [They so sweet]

~Please update soon...

~thanks

~WMatsui_22~
Title: Re: [ChiqinNa's wonderland of one shot!!! ] -continue~ My Reason(wmatsui) 02/05/13
Post by: Wmatsui22 on May 10, 2013, 09:37:53 AM
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~My Reason

~Hi ChiqiNna-san...  :deco:

~Sorry for late comment...

~My Reason: It's a nice love story with a very happy ending!!! HEHEHE...  :inlove:

~Love it!!!

~I also wait for your update in "You're My Sunshine"

~Thanks for making this One-shot

~WMatsui_22~

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Title: Re: [ChiqinNa's wonderland] -LONGING- 26/09/13
Post by: chiqinna on September 26, 2013, 12:27:32 PM
Any pairing would do...
Probably Atsumina?  :?
Using Allen Kibum's longing lyrics.


Longing

Walking…

Walking…

Walking…

And walking…

To the place…where you and me,
here, in front of the whole nature…
Moon, stars, trees, wind…
We promised to never be far away from each other…
Even if you are at the end of other world, while me at the other side…
Our heart will never far…


The sound of us laughing together running towards our favorite place of the world.
The place where we build our friendship
Where our bonds develop...

“It’s raining!” You shouted as you dragged me towards the big tree
We hug each other to gives warm to our bodies
The trees becomes our shelter in the rain

*giggle*

“what?” I look at you confuse on your sudden behavior
“You looks cute even with your wet hair~” You said making me blush.




Each time the longing comes, think of me

Fill your heart with the sound of the rain and this music

I realized that life can’t be only about sweet moments

On night when I still feel like you’re next to me, I’ll

Probably call you, although no one will pick up

Again today, the moon hopes in the wind, like my faded hopes

Will you look at me on this sleepless night?

I keep longing for you,

you seep through my bruised heart,

your eyes,

your whispers in my ear

but my feelings will grow dull and like a passing by trend,

You’ll be forgotten

I am getting farther away from you because it’s just too hard

But why is it harder to be farther away from you?


Each time the longing comes, think of me

Fill your heart with the sound of the rain and this music

Even though we can’t be together forever, we can

Always stay together in our memories





I’m still not used to this so I’m living in memories after letting you go

Although this tear-stained letter has melted away in the rain, my love will not melt

They say that the sadness and longing will be forgotten after a while but

Forgetting you…

Just at thinking about that suffocates me, I don’t like it

You and me…

We have so many memories, you’re more valuable than life

I wanted to be with you until the last day of the world

But my feelings will grow dull
(but it’s not easy)

My feelings will grow dull
(that’s too hard)

When I miss you…

When I keep thinking about you…

Tears will come


I miss you, I miss you, I still long for you

I want to take out all of my heart and tell you

Even if you can’t accept me anymore, so that I can remain in your memories



Again today, I walk in the rain alone…

trusting myself in the memories that I made with you

I hope I will be with you in this moment


Because I was always slower than you, I guess I wanted to protect you

I’m always standing behind you




Hey, don’t worry, I will never forget you.

You said when you hold my hands tightly.

I know.”

I knew you will never.

I will come and visit you.”

But you never come back
.
And I promise I will call you always

But you never did.



OOO
Title: Re: [ChiqinNa's wonderland] Lover's Lullaby(Atsumina) 28/09/13
Post by: chiqinna on September 28, 2013, 11:35:45 AM
Don't mind me! I'm just healing my Atsumina  :heart:  :on cloudeye:


Lover’s Lullaby

It seems like lately the General Manager of the whole 48 group is having a problem.

“Hey, NyanNyan, what is wrong with Takamina?”

“She looks…troubled…pale and tired.” Yuko asks Kojiharu as they were taking a break from the intense practice.

“Maybe she was just tired…you know…practice, work, event and all.” Kojiharu said as she let Yuko hugging and smelling her hair.

“Yeah…but…*sigh* I will talk to her later.” Yuko said as they continue their practice for the new single.

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Takamina has finish changing her clothes as she has another event to go.

Then Yuko entered the changing room and walking towards the midget.

“Hey” Yuko greeted her as she stands beside the other girl whose busy packing her things.

“Hmmm…” Takamina only hummed not looking at Yuko.

“Are you okay?” Yuko asks full of concern.

Takamina looks at her with a questioning looks.
“Yeah. Why?” She answered.

Yuko looks at her observing the younger girl.

She’s absolutely lying.

Obviously her eye bags are getting bigger and darker than usual.

Even the way she talks doesn’t sound like the usual Takamina.

Usually even if she was tired, she would greet them with full of energy.
But now, the person beside her is different.

“No you’re not okay.” Yuko said stopping her from walking away.

“Yuko, I’m okay. I’m just tired from the work it’s all. I have to go now.”
Takamina is definitely trying to get away from Yuko.

Takamina was about to go again but this time Yuko held her hand tight.

“Takamina, you’re going to make all of us worried if you keep being like this.” Yuko this time being more serious.

Takamina sigh.

She drops her bag and sits on the chair lazily.
Yuko take a chair and sit beside her.

“What’s wrong?” Yuko asks concern about her friend.
Takamina massage the bridge of her nose.

“I’m just tired and all.” Takamina said to convince Yuko that she is really fine.

“Did you get enough sleep?” Yuko crossed her arms.

“Y-yea…don’t worry I’m taking care of myself, Yuko. Maybe I was just thinking too much.”
 Takamina smiles said then stand up and pick up her bags and was about to walk out of the room when Yuko suddenly said the reason why she is like this.

“You miss Acchan are not you?” Yuko said calmly still on her position.

Takamina stop her tracks when she heard the name.

She chuckle weakly and smile at herself without looking back at Yuko.

Yuko sigh as she looks at Takamina’s back as she walks out of the room.

“I will report you to Acchan after this Takamina…just wait.”

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Takamina had just come back home from work.

Tiredly she walks inside her apartment.

She feed her pet then walk inside her bedroom.

She quickly laid herself on the bed without changing her clothes.

Too lazy to change herself.

Then her phone rang.

‘It’s Atsuko…’ thought her as she saw the name on the phone screen.

“Hello Atsuko!” She said with an exciting voice.
She knows Yuko must have told the taller girl about her.

“Hey, how are you?” The taller girl asks her.
“I’m fine! I was just getting home. How about you?” Takamina said without changing her voice.

“I’m fine too. Hey, I heard from Y-“
“I’m okay Atsuko. I…just…miss you. “Mumbled Takamina finally confessed what had been troubling her lately.

“Atsuko? Are you still there?” Takamina said weakly.
Then she heard a sob from the other girl.

“Atsuko…are you crying?” Takamina knows that her girlfriend is getting worried about her again.

“Atsuko…I’m okay.” She said worried.

“Are you?” Atsuko sob as she doesn’t fall into Takamina’s words.

“I…I…sorry.” Takamina who still lying on her bed turning around as her front is now facing the bed.

“What can I do for you?” Atsuko asks her as she stops crying.

“What?” Takamina was confused.

“Tell me what can I do to make you feel better?” Atsuko explain.

“Hmm…I can’t sleep well lately.” Takamina said giving a hint to the other girl.

Atsuko, being her girlfriend for almost more than a year quickly catch what does she means by that.

“Do you want me to come over?” Atsuko asks her.

“No…just…make me feel better now.” Takamina said tiredly.

“What song do you want?” Atsuko asks her again making the other one let out a small laugh.

“Whatever as long as it’s your voice, Atsuko.”

Takamina can imagine that Atsuko is blushing at her words just now.

Without anymore question, Atsuko started to sing to her girlfriend through the phone.

Takamina close her eyes slowly as the other girl lulled her to sleep.
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The next day,
It seems like Takamina is getting better but still looks weak.

Takamina walks towards Yuko.

“Thanks.” Takamina pat her back then walks away.

Yuko knew it’s not enough for the general manager.

After the practice, Yuko quickly call the former ace of AKB48.

“Acchan!”
“Yuko! Whats up?” It seems that Atsuko is probably having a break as she answered her call fast.
“Did you talk to your midget already?” Yuko asks her.

“Yea…she’s fine right?” Atsuko said.

“Yeah I know she’s fine now but I think it’s not enough!” Yuko said “W-WHAT??” Atsuko was clueless.

“I mean…YOU SHOULD GIVE YOUR BODY TO HER!!!”
Yuko said as her other hand touching her own body.
Luckily there’s no one in there.
But yeah even if someone saw her they would not care since…Yuko is Yuko~.

“Yuko! She’s tired! Are you stupid? She will get more tired If I do that to her!” Acchan said raising her voice.

“Do what?” Yuko tease her grinning.

“D-do t-that!!” Acchan was stuttering as her face is reddening.

Only Yuko did not see her face as they were talking on the phone.

“hehe Okay~ I have to go now and…Takamina is free tonight!”
Yuko said smirking then hang up without waiting for her answer.
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.

That day the general manager finishes her work early.

When she arrived at her apartment, she was greeted by her cat as they were asking for food.

After feeding the cat, Takamina took a shower since she still have energy left.

She washes the dishes on the sink.

Then she fell on the bed as she was getting tired.

 She trying to close her eyes to sleep but her eyes opened again staring at the white ceiling.

“I can’t sleep…” mumbled Takamina to herself.

Then the bell rang.

Takamina walks out of the room to the front door and open it.

“Atsuko!” she was shocked and happy to see her girlfriend coming to see her.

Atsuko stare at her sadly.

‘Yuko was right…you looks really tired Minami.’ Thought Atsuko.

“I thought you were busy.” Takamina said as she accepted the hug from Atsuko.

“I ask them to finish early.” Atsuko said then walk inside the room.

She looks at her girlfriend’s face as she misses them.

“Are you getting ready to sleep?” Atsuko asks her seeing her girlfriend already in her pajama.

Takamina nodded.

Atsuko then push Takamina to her bed and she joins her to lie beside her.

Takamina just let her do anything she wants.

Currently they both lay on the bed side by side.

Without any talk, just holding each other’s hand.





“I want to sleep.” Takamina finally break the silence.

“Then sleep, I will be here.” Atsuko hold her hand tighter.

Takamina then turn her head towards Atsuko as Atsuko do the same.

“Lullaby~~~” Takamina pout cutely at her girlfriend.

She's so cute when she wants something from the younger girl.

Atsuko smile sweetly at her but inside she feels like crying seeing her tired face.

“You can listen to my songs on your phone if you can’t sleep.” Atsuko said looking deeply in her eyes
as she caressed her hair softly.

“I want to hear your live voice.” Takamina said as she slowly close her eyes.

Knowing that the other girl is getting tired, she wrapped her arms around her and singing her a lullaby.

Atsuko kissed her forehead as Takamina also wrapped her arms on Atsuko’s waist.

While singing Migikata, Atsuko hugging her midget as her head is buried under Atsuko’s neck.

After Takamina sleep soundly, she slowly make her sleep comfortably beside her.

Looking at her sleeping calmly, Atsuko gives a peck on her lips.

“I love you, Minami.”

Then Atsuko fall asleep as she also tired.


OOO

 


Title: Re: [ChiqinNa's wonderland] Lover's Lullaby(Atsumina) 28/09/13
Post by: olive29 on September 28, 2013, 12:02:50 PM
Atsumina..  :inlove:

It's so sweet..  :wub:

Thanks..
Title: Re: [ChiqinNa's wonderland] Lover's Lullaby(Atsumina) 28/09/13
Post by: cisda83 on September 28, 2013, 01:17:26 PM
Sorry Missed the update

'Longing' is interesting...

But Lover's Lullaby(Atsumina) is the best....

My favorite pairing too....

Thank you for the OS

Can't wait to see more

PS: Yeah... You made me believe in Atsumina again... though only in dream...

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: [ChiqinNa's wonderland] Lover's Lullaby(Atsumina) 28/09/13
Post by: FlameHazeKatsu on September 28, 2013, 04:43:51 PM
Ah...my heart...it's slowly healing up~  :luvluv1:
I need yo keep reading more Atsumina!  :farofflook:  lol
*sigh* seems like I've been missing some stuff...  :badluck: well glad to be back (>_<)  :onioncheer:
write more~  :on GJ: lol thanks for this~  :on gay:
Title: Re: [ChiqinNa's wonderland] Lover's Lullaby(Atsumina) 28/09/13
Post by: lezperv on September 28, 2013, 06:36:50 PM
Awww that was really sweet and cute  :shy2:

You know, at first, I thought Minami was super tired because of the news that Atsuko got a boyfriend, but I guess its just cuz they don't see each other a lot and I"m okay with that lol

anyway, thanks for the cute story, hope you could continue or write more :D
Title: Re: [ChiqinNa's wonderland] Lover's Lullaby(Atsumina) 28/09/13
Post by: chiqinna on September 29, 2013, 10:15:00 AM
Ah...my heart...it's slowly healing up~  :luvluv1:
I need yo keep reading more Atsumina!  :farofflook:  lol
*sigh* seems like I've been missing some stuff...  :badluck: well glad to be back (>_<)  :onioncheer:
write more~  :on GJ: lol thanks for this~  :on gay:
yeah...I'm happy I help healing you guys heart too!  :heart:
I want to read more fics...but i don't know which one to read first!!   :sweatdrop:
glad to see you back too! and hope you update your fics!! enemy or lover~
and make more OS!!! I love your works!!   :twothumbs

Awww that was really sweet and cute  :shy2:

You know, at first, I thought Minami was super tired because of the news that Atsuko got a boyfriend, but I guess its just cuz they don't see each other a lot and I"m okay with that lol

anyway, thanks for the cute story, hope you could continue or write more :D

Well, I thought to make it like that at first but yeah...just pretend that news never EXIST!
my mind keep thinking of atsumina sweet moments thats why i change it...  :heart:

Cisda-san, always believe in Atsumina! even if they are not together in the end, always believe their bonds!  :D
olive29, thanks for reading! i'm glad you like it~  :)

Title: Re: [ChiqinNa's wonderland] Lover's Lullaby(Atsumina) 28/09/13
Post by: Archer1992 on September 30, 2013, 06:01:30 AM
is glad to see that all the atsumina fans are supporting each other

actually that notice is hurting me too

but i know we can support us

i still believe in Atsumina to the end!!!

thanks ^_^
Title: Re: [ChiqinNa's wonderland] Lover's Lullaby(Atsumina) 28/09/13
Post by: chiqinna on January 03, 2014, 11:09:29 AM
Heyo~ Happy New Year 2014 to everyone~  :cow:
And I forgot what to say so...
here it is...
maybe, when you see the title...ohh... hummm..okay~ but I took the title from the song that I've been listening again and again when I wrote this~  :lol:
 
I suggest you to listen to this song~
  :heart: :heart: :heart:  :wub:

U-KISS- 사랑이 멈출 때 (When Love Stops) lyrics [Eng. | Rom. | Han.] (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b8hLElZEUhw#ws)






When Love Stops


“Minami!! Come here!” Shouted Acchan as she stands in front of the big tree doing something on it.
The short girl walked toward her friend confusedly watching her action. “What are you doing Acchan?”Asked Takamina as she raising her eyebrow.

The tall girl finished doing what she was doing before she turned to look at Takamina.
She step back several times to gives way for the other girl to look at what she was doing.
Takamina chuckled reading at what her friend writes on the surface of the tree.

‘Atsuko + Minami = AtsuMina~’

Then she took out something sharp from her bag and started adding something at the end of the sentence.
Meanwhile Acchan was looking at her as she giggling seeing every single alphabet the other girl writes.

‘forever~ ♥’

Acchan suddenly remembered something so she looked at her wristwatch. Acchan gasped.
“Minami!! We’re late!” Her eyes widen in panic.
Minami had just finished making her arts on the tree as she looked at the panic girl.
“Huh?!” Still not comprehend what the other girl means, Minami gives her a confused look.
“Bakamina! We’re late for school!” Acchan quickly grabbed Minami’s hand and dragged her along running towards their school.

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Acchan was waiting for Takamina at the school gate when a bunch of girls walking towards her with a smirk on their face.
Acchan started to feel nervous.
“Oh God…It’s them…Minami…”
Acchan look inside the school hoping to see Minami’s figure coming out of it.

“Oi! Maeda~” One of them calling her by her family name. They started to surround her while looking at her intensely making Acchan looking down feeling afraid.

Inside, Acchan was praying for Minami to appear and save her.
“Give me your bag.” The one at her front said as she held out her hand waiting for Acchan to gives her bag.

Acchan was hesitating. “Oi~ we’re using soft way for you now. Don’t let us use harsh way!” The other one said with a rude tone.

Acchan slowly took off her bag from her back and was about to give it to them when a voice startled them all.

“I give you one second to run away before I put your name in school record!” Turning their head to the owner of the voice, they quickly run away leaving Acchan and her alone.

Minami glared at them as she watched them running away.

“Minami!” Acchan quickly hugged her savior tightly. “Are you okay?” Acchan nodded.
She was glad that the shorter girl appeared at the right time or else she’d already become a victim of the bully.

“Seriously Minami, one second?” Acchan chuckled as she parted from the hug.
Everyone in the school knew not to mess with the midget because she is the school president, and they really respect her.

Minami laughed. “Because 3 seconds are too mainstream~” joked her while gently taking Acchan’s hand and started to walk home.

Acchan just smile at her gentle’s action.

“Next time, don’t wait for me outside the gate, stay with me inside the school. Understand?”

“Un~” Acchan nodded as she pouted cutely at her friend.

She’s always like that towards the taller girl. Gentle, kind, caring, loving, even though sometimes she’s annoying with her fail jokes, acting cutely when she wants something.

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“Minami, why don’t we build a tree house here?” Acchan suggested as they arrived at the big tree.
Since then, the two always spending their free time scratching on the tree.

~Flashback~
“Eh?! Acchan! You meanie!” Whined Takamina as she saw what Acchan had wrote on the tree with a fork that she took from home. [LOL]

‘Minami is midget’

Acchan was satisfied with her work of art as she grinned widely.
While the other girl pouted and quickly thinking of taking revenge as she took out a screwdriver from her bag that she secretly took from her father’s store. [LOL]

Acchan was busy making another of her artwork when she hears the other girl laughing.
She diverted her eyes towards the other girl and then turned her eyes to what her best friend’s work.

‘Acchan is crybaby~’

“That was lame, Minami.” Acchan said.

Then she dragged Minami around the tree and showed her what she wrote before.

“Minami is crybaby~ Ehh? You copied me!” Minami said as she pointed the screwdriver towards Acchan.
“No! I wrote it 2 days ago!” Acchan stick her tongue out at Minami playfully.

“I did not noticed it~” Minami just shrugged her shoulders. They both then continued back writing all their thought about each other. The good and the bad about each other.

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“Hummm…” Minami lean her index finger to her chin looking up at the big tree.
“See? You can ask your father to build it for us~”Minami looks at Acchan who looks like she was really eager for it.
“I will ask my father about it first.” Minami was also agreed to her suggestion.

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“Woahh~~” The two girl were impressed seeing the beautiful tree house in front of them.

Since Minami’s house is near the big tree so it was easier for her father to finished building it in a short time.
Glad that his father did not ruin any of their artwork on the tree.

Acchan was still with mouth half open looking at the tree house when she suddenly saw Takamina inside it already as she opened the small window.

“Acchan~ come in!” Takamina waves excitedly at her as she laughing lightly seeing Acchan’s shocked expression when she saw Takamina in the tree house.

“It’s really nice, Takamina~” Acchan was still admiring Takamina’s father’s works.
“Don’t forget to thanks my father for this~ hehe~”


“Of course!” Acchan still looking around inside the tree house. It was like a room, with the tree at the centre of the room.

The tree house has been their hanging out place since then. The tree was full of their artworks.
So they call the tree house, AtsuMina house~ with an ‘AtsuMina’ sign hanging in front of the house.  :heart:

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One day, Acchan did not go to school because she’s having fever.

After school, Takamina was about to visit Acchan after she finished cleaning the tree house.

Someone quietly climbing the stairs to the tree house.

When she makes sure that their small house is neat and clean. She quickly turned around and about to climb
down the stair when-“Aaaarrrrggghhh!!” Minami falls backward as she was surprised to see someone suddenly appear from behind the tree.

Acchan laugh weakly at her reaction.
“Mou~ Acchan don’t scared me like that!” Minami stood up as she pouted. But her pouted change into a frown.

“Aren’t you sick?” She started to feels worried.
Acchan just ignored the shorter girl and walk towards the small bed and laid her weak body on it and close her eyes.

Minami is getting more worried. She walks towards the girl and slowly put her hand on her forehead.
“You’re still hot.” Acchan just close her eyes when she feels the warm hand on her forehead.

“Let me bring you home.” Minami hold her hands.
Acchan slightly shook her head. “No~ I want to stay here~”

‘Geez~ this girl is always stubborn’ thought Minami. She knows the taller girl will not listen to her.
“Wait a minute.” Minami quickly run down the stairs. Acchan opened her eyes seeing Minami already gone. “Minami~” mumbled Acchan as she feels cold.

After a while, Minami comes back with a blanket.
She covered Acchan with blanket and then she sit beside her.

“Have you eats medicine?” Asked Takamina. Acchan nodded. She already ate her medicine before she goes out from her house to see her midget.

“Hug me~” She can hears Acchan’s voice trembling.
Minami just obeyed her as she lied beside Acchan and wrapped her arms around her.

Acchan snuggled up closer to Minami’s neck making Minami stiffened up.

Both knew their hearts are beating so fast at the time.


After a long while, Acchan falls asleep in her arms. Minami look down to see her sleeping face.

Without she realized, she was staring at the sleeping figure beside her.

Her hair falling on her faces covering her sleeping face.
Minami slowly , and gently swiped the girl’s hair to the side to see the cute sleeping face without waking her up.


When the wide ocean dries up
When the sun loses its light
Maybe that’s when this love will stop



Minami’s face is getting closer to her face as her eyes keeps looking at the pale pink lips.

When their lips are an inch closer, Minami stopped.

She smiles lovingly, and changing her direction. She kissed her hot forehead instead, gently.
 


When the first snow falls for the thousandth time
When the stars fall like rain
Perhaps that’s when you’ll know my heart that goes only toward you
You’re special person that I long for the point that it hurts
I don’t know the words of separation
Even if my life ends and I’m born again




“Acchan wait! Please listen to me!” Minami run after Acchan who was crying trying to run away from her.

“Just leave me alone! You’re going to leave me alone anyway!”
Her tears keep falling down on her cheeks as she run from the shorter girl.

“Acchan I’m not going to leave you forever~ I will come back…for you.”
Minami managed to hold her arms as she also started to cry seeing her loved one cries.

‘I’m afraid you will not Minami…’

Acchan harshly get Minami’s hand off her as she leaves Minami alone.


It’s been a few days, Acchan has been avoiding Minami.
Since the day she found out that Minami is going to further her study abroad and she will be living with her uncle.

Minami was trying to talk to her. She even goes to Acchan’s house, but Acchan locked her door.

So Minami decided to write a note and asked for Acchan’s mother to give it to her.

‘Atsuko, I’m sorry okay…
Please, I want to talk to you…for the last time.
I miss you Acchan…I really miss you…
Meet me at our AtsuMina house, at 4 pm today.
Please, I will be leaving tomorrow morning.’
                                                             ~Minami~




Minami patiently waiting for Acchan outside their tree house.

She’s smiling while holding her tears watching at all their artworks around the tree.

She’s walking slowly around the tree and reading again every of the words on the three.

Until she saw a figure standing in front of her stopping her from walking around the tree.

Minami looks up to see the most beautiful God’s creature ever that she really loves other than Katsudon.

The taller girl burst into tears as she quickly pulled the shorter girl for a hug.

The other also started to cry loudly. They hug each other tightly.

There’s no words needed.


I want you I need you I hold you
Even if I add on every word in the world to the words, I love you
It’s not enough for me, that’s my heart
I see you I hear you I feel you
Wherever you go,
My heart will protect that place
I promise you,
There will no longer be tears of sadness
Always I’ll be there for you



“Minami promised me, you will come back to me.” Acchan’s voice cracked when she spoke.

Minami hold both her hands tightly and looking at the other girl as she nodded.

“I promise. I…-“She did not continued as she remembered something. Minami took out something from her pocket.

“Here, I want you to keep one of this...” Minami said as she gives one bracelet to Acchan while the other one she put in on her own wrist.
There is letter M and A on the bracelet.

“M for Minami, A for Atsuko~” Explained Minami while Acchan put the bracelet on her wrist and looking at it.

“Aren’t it stands for Maeda Atsuko?” Joked Acchan. It was probably the last joke she will hear from the younger girl. They laughed.
Acchan stopped laughing and leaning her head on Minami’s shoulder while holding her hand.


When you leaned against my shoulder
And softly held my hand – that’s when I knew
That this love cannot stop



Acchan decided to send Minami to the airport. She wants to see her for the last time before she left.
They were holding each other’s hand all the time.

“Acchan, before I leave, I want you to take care of our AtsuMina house, understand?” Acchan nodded still holding her tears.
“And one more thing…” Minami took a deep breath before she continue,

“I had left something for you at our house. But you need to find it~” Minami said to her playfully making Acchan pouted as a single tear finally falling down on her cheek.

Minami wipe the tears with her thumb. “I love you~”


When at some point, you leave
When this world falls into a deep sleep, please remember
Remember me, who loved you with all my heart
You’re a person I long for even at the moment I look at you
Even in my dreams, do not speak of separation
Even if I’m reborn several times



After coming back from the airport, Acchan went straight to the tree house.
She climbs up and started to search for the thing that Minami had left for her.

“Where is it~” mumbled Acchan as she search through every places.

She sat on the small bed, sighing as she had been searching on every part of the house.

Suddenly she feels like she needs to look up somehow, so she looks up at the ceiling.

Almost every part of the ceiling is being covered by a heart shaped balloons.

Standing up, Acchan looks everywhere, and then she spotted one balloon with a folded note hanging below it.

Acchan took it and opened the folded note.

She burst in tears again as she read it.


‘I love you more than anything else Atsuko,

I love you more than just a best friend, less than a sister.

I want to add on all the happiness in the world

And give it to you

I’m never gonna let you go

Please wait for me…

Take care of yourself.’




I want you I need you I hold you
Even if I add on every word in the world to the words, I love you
It’s not enough for me, that’s my heart
I see you I hear you I feel you
Wherever you go,
My heart will protect that place
I promise you,
There will no longer be tears of sadness
Always I’ll be there for you...




~~~



 :on cloudeye: :on cloudeye: :on cloudeye:
Title: Re: [ChiqinNa's Neverland] When Love Stops... (Atsumina) 03/01/2014
Post by: Konoe on January 03, 2014, 11:58:23 AM
I NEED PART 2!!! :on speedy:
Title: Re: [ChiqinNa's Neverland] When Love Stops... (Atsumina) 03/01/2014
Post by: cisda83 on January 03, 2014, 01:41:02 PM
Thank you for the New Year present...

Yeah Atsumina...

Great OS....

Can't wait to see another one... the continuous

Thank you again....

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you...

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: [ChiqinNa's Neverland] When Love Stops... (Atsumina) 03/01/2014
Post by: TakaminaBG on January 03, 2014, 02:55:55 PM
You can't leave it end like this!!!
I need part 2!!!!!!!
Title: Re: [ChiqinNa's Neverland] When Love Stops... (Atsumina) 03/01/2014
Post by: chichay12 on January 03, 2014, 03:42:08 PM
:on cloudeye: :on cloudeye: :on cloudeye:
same feels ^ i need part 2!!! chiqin..please dont do this to me  :cry:
Title: Re: [ChiqinNa's Neverland] When Love Stops... (Atsumina) 03/01/2014
Post by: Haruko on January 04, 2014, 02:00:39 AM
part 2 please!
Title: Re: [ChiqinNa's Neverland] When Love Stops... (Atsumina) 03/01/2014
Post by: noah minami on January 17, 2014, 09:54:28 AM
Part 2 plz.... :cry:
Title: Re: [ChiqinNa's Neverland] When Love Stops... (Atsumina) 03/01/2014
Post by: lezperv on January 18, 2014, 08:07:13 AM
NOOO!!! :OMG:

Dude you made me all teary  :on thumbb:
I was really happy seeing them being sooo cute with each other. Minami should have stolen that kiss though X3 or kiss Atsuko when she's leaving abroad.
Please make a sequel, and please don't give Atsuko or Minami any boyfriends. I would really die if that happens.  :fainted:

Hope you update soon  :hee:
Title: Re: [ChiqinNa's Neverland] When Love Stops... (Atsumina) 03/01/2014
Post by: Archer1992 on January 19, 2014, 03:58:50 AM
we need more Atsumina aaaaaaa!!!

thanks!!

but a happy one!!!
Title: Re: [ChiqinNa's Neverland] When Love Stops... (Atsumina) 03/01/2014
Post by: mikaellitsa on January 19, 2014, 04:23:14 AM
ooooo i want part 2 plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz  :inlove:
Title: Re: [ChiqinNa's Neverland] When Love Stops... (Atsumina) 03/01/2014
Post by: KaoriChan on January 19, 2014, 07:18:06 AM
Waaaa :mon XD:


 we want Part 2 Please!! :mon cute: :mon cute:




 :wigglypanda:

Title: Re: [ChiqinNa's Neverland] When Love Stops... (Atsumina) 03/01/2014
Post by: Ando on January 22, 2014, 07:45:04 AM
Waa...just found it now.... XD

ALL  :thumbsup  :twothumbs

Huhu..gonna wait for more update...  :cathappy:

 :deco: :deco: :deco: