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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: Elo on May 01, 2013, 05:23:05 PM
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I have had an Idea of an fic
Prologue
I have had an mission that was to bring the cristall to the majesty of the Akiba Kingdom.
The enemy called the Daharans were after me I ran away but I dont know how much I can take it .
I cant anymore
But then I saw a creature I think it is a wolf
Or better a White Wolf
How beautiful Then I collapsed
What do you think
If someone could help me I have an Idea about this fic but I cant write goos so If someone would help me to write this fic it would be very helpful
So please comment
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Maybe it AtsuMina? :? :? :?
Anyway, I'm interested! :yep: :yep: :yep:
I am happy to help you write this fanfic, if you want. :P
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I have a feeling telling me it is Wmatsui :D
It looks cool :D
Update soon~
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Interesting prologue you have there, Elo-san
I think I agree with K-popJ-popAWESOMENESS
The pairing might be WMatsui...
Anyhow... can't wait to see how to story going to start...
Thank you for the lovely prologue
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Lost heaven-san helped me a lot with this chapter so enjoy :D :D
Chapter 1
Escape... Escape... Escape...
She could not understand how she could be so careless. How could she hope that the hooded cloak hides her from the Daharans's servants.
Daharans. Daharans. Daharans.
She hates that name. And this hatred gave her strength to run further. She should make it.
Mission. Mission. Mission.
She has a purpose. For this purpose she was born. If she gives up - her life would be meaningless.
Escape. Escape. Escape.
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She was awakened by the feeling of something wet on her face. And it wet was moving!
She sat down sharply, apparently scaring someone. Because the creature immediately disappeared into the shadows.
She looked around. The cave in which she was located, weakly illuminated by the glow of the setting sun.
She got up and went to the place where the creature hid in the darkness.
Snow-white wool, dark brown eyes, sharp fangs protruding from under slightly raised lip. Wolf. The one she saw before falling exhausted.
- Who are you? - wolf snorted and stood up and walked out of the cave. She followed him.
Before the cave was a place of sand. Wolf came back and with the release claw, began to write.
She stood up next to him and saw that the wolf draws runes, familiar to her from childhood - in the place where she grew up, wrote that way.
- Mi ... na ... mi ... Minami? Is that your name?
Wolf looked at her and nodded slightly in agreement.
- My name is Atsuko, - she sat down next to a she-wolf and stroked her wool. - Let's be friends?
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- She's supposed to return! - Queen of the Akiba Kingdom restlessly paced the throne room. - According to my calculations, it should have been back in the morning!
- Mari-chan, sit down, calm down, - the second queen is sitting quietly on the throne. - I think she has a reason why she can linger on the way.
- How can you be so calm? You indifferent to the her fate?
- No, - the second queen went to the first and took her hand. - I just believe her. And you? Do you trust to your daughter?
- Mii-chan ... - the first queen wanted to say something, but they were interrupted by the sound of flung-open door of the throne room.
- Mariko-sama! Minami-sama! - two General of the Kingdom's Army impetuous step into the hall. They came to the queens and worship them.
- Sayaka, Sae? What happened? - On the face of the second queen immediately display the anxiety. Because if Sayaka and Sae burst in without knocking, then something extraordinary happened.
- We no longer feel the Atsuko's aura. As if she has disappeared! - In the Sayaka's eyes were tears. She was the personal bodyguard of Atsuko.
- It can not be ... - it seemed like Mariko going to faint. - When you lose the power of her aura?
- Recently, - Sae clenched her fists. - At that time she was in the Forest of Whisper.
- Mariko-sama, Minami-sama, tell us find her.
- Yes. Find her.
After the generals are gone, Mariko whispered softly:
- Let her be alive ...
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Yay!! Atsumina!!! :on woohoo:
so Minami is a she-wolf huh?.. Cool!!
and Atsuko is the Daughter of Marimii...
Can't Wait for an Update!!
I wonder what happens next so..
I'll surely be waiting for an update... :on gay:
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really interesting :)can't wait to find out more :D
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Interesting... so it's Atsumina... Yeah....
Ah... Atsuko is a princess, a daughter of Mariko and Miichan...
Minami is a wolf... or a werewolf...
What's going to happen to Atsuko...?
Would she be able to return to her kingdom?
Can't wait to see the next
Thank you for the update
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Yeah I read it but never had the chance to reply until now
Interesting so far and marimii right off the back
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The next chapter part 1
Chapter 2.
Part 1.
All she was feeling at that moment - the pain. The pain seemed to fill her all without leaving any living area. The pain spread throughout the body with fire and throughout the soul with ice. She wanted to scream, but instead of shouting from the throat ripped out some strange sounds.
She fell to the floor and seemed to writhe in agony. Slowly her mind fades, passed, giving way to the animal instincts.
Gradually, the torture is over, leaving only apathy and unwillingness to do anything. The pain went away, and to replace came some new sensations. She realized that she could now be hearing a lot more and feel a lot more scents.
She stood up, but the whole world, swaying sharply, becoming too low.
She did not understand what was going on until she saw her reflection in the mirror ...
She was frightened, wheeze escaped from her throat .
At her from the mirror staring White She-Wolf.
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- Minami! Minami! Are you okay? - A voice was heard as if through a very dense pillow.
Minami felt a hand, stroking her wool and immediately snapped open her eyes, dropping off the remnants of sleep.
She remembered the yesterday she saved girl who running away from someone. As it is there? A, Atsuko.
This name seemed vaguely familiar to Minami, but remember where she had heard the she-wolf could not.
- Minami, you have a bad dream? - Atsuko was sitting on her knees beside her, her eyes were anxiety.
She-wolf stood up abruptly, alienating from the girl's hand and ran out of the cave.
Breaking Dawn. Minami loved this time. Dew still wet with leaves, nature like waking up from a long sleep. Minami loved climbing on the rocks and greet the dawn there, watching leisurely awakening of Forest of Whispers.
She and Atsuko for one more night stay in a cave to give the girl to recover.
Minami jumped on the plateau that forms the cave, and sat almost on the edge, looking at the rising sun. She felt that Atsuko with the help of protrusions in the stone also climbed to the plateau and sat next to her.
- Do you love to watch the sunrise? - Atsuko, seeing that the she-wolf is listening, she continued. - Me too. When I was little, I always thought that the sun - it's a ball. He just jumps very slowly, so the day and night lasts a long time and gradually replace each other.
Minami yawned, by clicking his teeth.
- I have to deliver a very important thing in my hometown, - Atsuko sighed. - I wasn't there for six months ... I wonder, my parents at least sometimes worry about me?
And she paused, continuing to watch the sunrise.
Mines closed her eyes, but then her ears caught something strange.
Minami sharply stood up and growled. Atsuko heard it, too got up and went to the she-wolf.
- Minami, what happened?
Minami, quickly finding the next sand, wrote:
"In the forest, there is some stranger".
please write what you think of this part
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She meets Acchan
I like it so far
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So Minami turned into a Wolf...
hmmm....and can speak...thru writing
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Thanks for the Chap.!!
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Taka as a wolf? :O Interesting!
Next chap will be interesting because they will meet :3
Marimii caught my attention XD
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Ah... so Minami is like a werewolf....
But seem Minami having a nightmare about the 1st time Minami turned into a wolf...
Ah... Minami and Atsuko are so close now...
Eh... strangers... who are they?
Atsuko's parents soldiers... or Daharans's servants?
Can't wait to see what happen next
Thank you for the update
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So, this is part 2 of second chapter. I'm sorry, it's very short
Chapter 2 part 2
- You have not caught her yet!? - Today the Lord of Darkness was clearly not in the spirit, so his subordinates tried not to come close to the throne on which he sat.
- N ... n ... no, Your Majesty, - Lieutenant, who led the operation to capture the ambassador of the Akiba Kingdom, visibly shaking. - We chased her, but ... she seemed to disappear! We searched the woods, trying to find her with spells, but ... All to no avail ...
Lord of Darkness clenched his right hand into a fist and suddenly shot with flame into the nearest wall and burning a couple of ghosts.
- Worthless creature! - now he was angry. - She has something that will allow me to manage the living world and the world of the dead!
He got up from his throne and walked over to the lieutenant.
- The girl should be here tonight, understand?
The lieutenant shook even more.
- Y ... y ... Yes, sir ...
- UNDERSTAND?!!!
- Yes, sir!
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- Damn! - She did not immediately notice that she lying on the ground.
- Sayaka, are you okay? - Sae sat down next to her companion, barely suppressing a laugh.
- Damn snags! I always stumble on them! - Sayaka sat up and looked at his partner. - What are you laughing?
Sae broke down and laughed.
- You ... you should have seen your face, - she said with a laugh. - Sayaka kawaii ~
- Shut up! - Sayaka stood. - Have you forgotten why we came here?
Sae instantly calmed down and became serious.
- You do not feel anything? - She got up and looked off into the distance.
- No way ... - Sayaka closed her eyes, trying to catch the aura of ambassador. But instead, she felt an aura of darkness. - Oh, no! Acchan!
dont worry we will write the next chapter larger
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Ah.. who is this lord of the darkness....?
Why did he want to catch Atsuko?
Ah... Sayaka feel the dark aura...
What's going to happen with Sayaka and Sae search for the princess?
What's going to happen to Atsuko and Minami?
Can't wait to find out
Thank you for the update
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Well something has to be up if Sae and Sayaka are laughing about it. Must be a mission that tests them a little too much XD
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Chapter 3
The fireball flew almost next to the Atsuko's head, slightly singeing the ends of her hair.
They were attacked almost immediately after Minami found strangers in the woods. There were about a dozen, two of them were magicians. These were Daharans's pawns - on their clothes, pretty ugly, it was stitched image of the sign of his power.
Without warning, they pulled their swords out of the sheath and rushed to attack on ambassadress.
Atsuko materialized her sword and prepared to attack. The sword was similar to his owner - weightless and elegant, it can easily cut solid objects and seemed to sing his song, when ambassadress delivered attacks.
Block, thrust - and the enemy lies on the ground, unable to rise. Whistling of metal, block, the cutting stroke - the second opponent does not have time to parry the blow and falls dead. The rotation, block, hilt of the sword in the solar plexus - the third opponent went harmlessly falls on the edge of the plateau and stays there lie.
Atsuko corner of her eye saw that Minami fights with two magicians - she trying to hurt them with claws and fangs, simultaneously dodging magic attacks. Her white wool had already changed into crimson. Minami was wounded but fought without noticing it.
Atsuko felt on her own face blood flows - both her and a stranger. She felt that breathing becomes heavier and her eyes become dark.
Yes, Atsuko was taught to fight. Yes, she could in an emergency to protect her own life. But she wasn't a real Master. In the Kingdom they have long does not remain a true Master.
Atsuko did not notice that sword was knocked out of her hands, and she was sitting on the ground.
One of the minions of Lord of Darkness wanted to use her confusion and has raised his hand with a sword for the final blow, but suddenly a powerful stream of water tossed it to a nearby rock.
Minami, who killed the first magician, turned. In her eyes, Atsuko saw fright, almost immediately reverses some humility. She growled something and suddenly, her paws gave way and she-wolf fell with closed eyes.
- Minami! MINAMI!!! - Atsuko wanted to get up and run to a wounded she-wolf, but then someone picked her up and gently whispered:
- Acchan, it's us. Calm down, there is no one but us.
This voice acted by Atsuko as a sleep aid. She slowly closed her eyes and fell asleep, still murmuring incoherently:
- Minami ... Mi ... na ... mi ...
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Little Atsuko, ran away from her bodyguards, now went to her mother to the throne room to ask her to play with her. Atsuko really missed her mother - after that man betrayed a Kingdom and escaped, mom was very busy and constantly sitting in her office. Atsuko hardly ever saw her mother.
But going to the door of the throne room, she heard that her mother and the girl that her mother calls as her friend talking about something strange.
- Mari-chan, you're really gonna do this?
- Mii-chan, you know. This is the only way outб - was heard that she was very worried.
- But who can bring it? After all need someone you can trust.
- I do not know. Among our soldiers there are none. Among the magicians, too. I've already checked all ...
- But the Crystall will grow only a few years. Maybe we can teach children to choose one of them?
"Crystall?" - Acchan have never heard about this.
- Mii-chan, nobody agree to send their child to that! No one!
At this moment something changed in Atsuko . She opened the door to the throne room and said emphatically:
- I'll go for the crystal.
- Acchan?
On the face of her little daughter Mariko saw the determination and commitment to follow through. Maybe it influenced her choice.
- Alright.
what do you think please comment !!!!!!
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Acchan will risk her life for the crystal and action :twothumbs
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thanks for the update!! I love this fic :D Really interesting chapter & great action. Hopefully Minami and Atsuko will be okay.
Thanks again! Looking forward to the next chapter :)
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oooh! I like this! Im waiting for your next chapter! :D
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Ah... Minami is badly wound...
Atsuko is being saved... isn't she...?
If Yes, by whom? Sae and Sayaka?
Miichan is Mariko's friend and adviser...
Crystal... what is that used for?
So Atsuko went out from the Kingdom... to retrive a crystal...
Can't wait to see what's going to happen next
Thank you for the update
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so Acchan went out of the Kingdom to retrieve a crystal....
What does it do? :huhuh :? :?
Minami is badly wounded and colappsed or something else happened? :? :?
Ah!!.... So many questions!... Me need an update!
Hope u can update!
Thanks for the chap.! By the way!!! :D
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Sry for the late update we had exams
anyway Enjoy
Chapter 4
Atsuko slowly opened her eyes. She succeeded with difficulty, because the eyelids were heavy and closed themselves. Her head was buzzing and legs seemed numb.
Turning her head, she viewed the room in which she was. White ceiling, white walls ... She could not remember what this place is and how she got here.
"Looks like I'm in the hospital ..." - Atsuko tried to sit as soon as behind the curtain that hid her from the rest, she heard voices.
- Nyan Nyan, let's go to the beach!
- No.
- Nyan Nyan, let's go to the coffee shop!
- No.
- Nyan Nyan ...
- No!
At the same moment curtain drew back , and in front of Atsuko were her friends - Korisu and Nyan Nyan.
Yuko, or, as her called, Korisu, was personal physician to the royal family of the Akiba Kingdom. She likes to experiment with chemicals, so often her personal laboratory is scorched ground. The nickname has received for her small stature and the similarity with the squirrel. Pervert, especially for Nyan Nyan.
Haruna, or, as her called, Nyan Nyan. The nurse and Yuko's personal assistant. Airhead and sometimes falls out of reality for a long time. The object of Yuko's fantasy.
- I'm home ... - Atsuko laughed a little, than scared Nyan Nyan.
- Atsuko, - Haruna ran to her and tried to put back to bed. - You must not get up ...
- How are you feeling? - Yuko took a notebook out of nowhere and got ready to write.
- As if somebody played football and I were a ball...
- No wonder, - Yuko took the chair, placed it next to the Atsuko's bed and sat on him. - You were barely alive when Sayaka and Sae brought you here ...
Atsuko remembered that day ... Magee, fight, wounded Minami ...
- Minami! Where Minami!?
- Minami? - Nyan Nyan surprised. - Atsuko, who is it?
- Minami ... - Atsuko tried to get out of bed. - I need to find Minami ...
She was able to get up and, swaying a little, wandered to the door of the hospital. Yuko and Haruna ran up to her, tried to bring her back, but Atsuko began to struggle and scream.
- Nyan Nyan, quickly, bring a sedative! - Yuko fastened on Atsuko's hand, trying to contain her.
- Yes, - Haruna, quickly run to the next room, came back with sedative. - Korisu, here.
Yuko, as Haruna held Atsuko, quickly has injected her a sedative. After a few seconds Atsuko collapsed to the floor. Yuko and Haruna carried Atsuko on the bed and covered her with a blanket.
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- She's awake, - Yuko, after Atsuko went back to sleep, immediately hastened to inform Mariko. - The heat was asleep, and wounds nearly healed. I think soon she will fully recover.
Mariko looks no demonstrated that happy about it, her face did not change. She is the Queen, she can not show his true emotions. Mariko has long learned that lesson. But inside, she was terribly happy about it.
- Except ... - Yuko hesitated, apparently not knowing what to say. - She is constantly calling some Minami, says that she needs to find her. Because of this, it is now almost ran out of the hospital ... This is weird ...
- Minami? - Mariko frowned. - Never heard this name of Atsuko ...
- Mariko-sama ... - Sayaka, is also located here, along with Sae, a little limping came close to the Queen. - When I and Sae intervened in the battle and took her out, she is also calling this Minami. But on the plateau was no one else ...
- Oh, and ... - Sae also remembered something. - We felt a dark aura in the forest and on the trail of this aura found Atsuko, but ... Even when we defeated all opponents, dark aura has not disappeared.
- This aura was something else. Not like the servants of the Dark Lord, but no less dangerous ...
- We assume that we do not see the carrier of the aura, but Atsuko ...
- She sees. And take this carrier for her friend, - Sayaka habitually touched the amulet pendant, hanging from a chain around her neck.
- Sayaka, Sae, - Mariko, it seemed to everyone, she was looking a little scared. - Protect Atsuko, not go out of her day and night. Yuko, monitor her condition. I'll try to find something about the aura... Go!
- Yes, - Sayaka, Sae and Yuko came out of the throne room and headed for the hospital.
Mariko, left alone, took a deep breath and whispered:
- Could it be ... That Legend is the true?
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Interesting so far
Atsuko is getting better under Yuko and Haruna
Although the dark aura from the forest will be intriguing
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Ah... Atsuko was saved... and was returned to her kingdom...
But she was so worried about Minami...
Where was Minami?
Why Minami was not able to be seen?
Why did Minami disappeared...?
What was this dark aura in the amulet...?
What with this legend?
Can't wait to see what's going to happen next
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update soon please
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Sorry for waiting :bow:
Chapter 5
About a week almost all Atsuko's wounds have healed, but Yuko and Nyan Nyan is still not allowed to leave her alone somewhere. Whether she was in the dining room, the library, or go for a walk in the garden next to the castle, they both accompanied her. Sometimes it was starting to get annoying Atsuko.
On the same day, when she woke up and tried to escape from the hospital, to her went her two bodyguard - Sayaka and Sae. Sayaka was limping on her right leg, both wrists of her hands were bandaged and her face could be seen still not healed dark purple bruises. When Atsuko asked her about the bandages on her hands, Sayaka just smiled and joked: "Nasty collision of Ice Magic and Fire Magic." Sae in that battle got off a little easier - on her face and on her left hand were long and, apparently, deep cuts.
When Acchan asked them where now there is Minami, Sayaka face darkened, and Sae, a little biting her lower lip, apparently, in some doubt, said that in the plateau, except Acchan and enemies, nobody was there. Sayaka added that Minami was Acchan's dream when she lay with fever.
More Atsuko did not ask anybody about Minami. But she still did not believe that the white she-wolf was just a dream. The girl believed that she would find Minami and never parted with her.
Sometimes, when she had nothing to do, Atsuko sat on the windowsill in her ward and, looking out the window at the bright blue sky, she thought. About her mission, her Kingdom, her mother, about enemies, about ... Minami. Acchan most often thought of a snow-white she-wolf who saved her life twice. And in her chest, deep down, was conceived a warm feeling ...
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Flashback
5 years ago.
She fled. Suffocate, stumbled, but fled. Fell, but got up and, even if not have the energy, she run further. After all, she knew that something terrible is happening. And that something terrible is happening to her family.
When Minami turned into a she-wolf, she ran away from home - did not want to scare anyone with hers appearance. And today she is being away from her parents' house, she felt anxiety, and then the wind carried up to her the smell of the enemy. Minami without delay rushed to the village. Their house was in the suburbs, so she could go to him unnoticed.
Minami did not stop, although not yet used to walk and run on four paws. She did not feel the fatigue and pain - all her thoughts were focused on the goal.
Running to the suburbs, she abruptly stopped, and her heart was forged cold and clammy dread.
Her house burned in the fire - the flame fluttered up and fell down already charred and burnt wreckage wooden buildings. People were running around, carrying buckets of water and sand, trying to put out the insatiable fire. Minami sensed the smell of the enemy - he was here and everywhere, it seems, is soaked all the plants and even soil.
A few hours later the flames extinguished. These few hours were for Minami, perhaps, the most painful of her life. She could not do anything, because if anyone saw her, she would be immediately killed. Wolves in her village, and in the villages nearby, did not like - it was believed that wolves bring misfortune.
After the fire was extinguished, something was taken out of the house and put down to the ground. Minami did not see what happened there, because the people crowded around it and did not disperse.
Minami only heard snatches of conversation.
- Tomorrow ... need ...
- ... Sorry, she was a good ...
- ... And where ...
- ... Run away, maybe ...
When it was dark, and all the people went home, Minami was able to look at what was on the ground near the burnt house.
At first she thought her eyesight fails, could not lie there three charred corpse. She did not want to believe it.
"Father, mother, Juri ..."
She howled like a real wolf. This howl was full of sorrow. Today she lost her entire family ...
End of Flashback
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Minami's family died in a fire because of her transformation and now she cannot trust anyabody within her way but Acchan should be able to connect to her
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Thanks for the update! Great chapter :) Nice that Atsuko doesn't want to forget about Minami and believes she's real.
As for Minami, quite the sad past :(
I look forward to the next chapter :D
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Ah... Atsuko was still being follow around by her bodyguards....
And she still wanted to find Minami...
Would she be able to find Minami?
Eh... Minami still had a family... Now She lost them from the fire...
How and Why did Minami lose her family?
Was that just an accident or someone killed Minami's family?
Poor Minami now she was all alone in the world.
Would Minami try to see Atsuko?
Can't wait to find out
Thank you for the update
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Minamis family noooo why :(
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Sorry for waiting :bow:
This is sixth chapter :D
Chapter 6.
If Atsuko asked what time of day she loves the most, the ambassadress, of course, would answer that night. Exactly at night you can feel the power of nature over man - no wonder all the events in the terrible tales taking place at this time. The person, contacting with the night, feels fear, sticky steps wading into the heart and soul.
As a child, she was told that night to be feared. But Acchan, escaping from under the careful palace guard, went for a few hours at night in the woods - in the depths of trees, there was a beautiful waterfall. Its cold water and no less cold majesty of the girl helped bring thoughts in order and to make a decision.
Today, she too, wearing a light tunic and a jacket, crept past Yuko, who left on night duty at the hospital, and went back to her favorite place. She hasn't been there for a long time - the last time was six months ago, on the night before her departure to a secret place on a mission.
The way there is not long - Atsuko always took fifteen minutes to arrive there. But she knew a short way. Those who did not know him, had a whole day wandering through the woods, but no one there and did not get. Ambassadress assumed that this place is shrouded in some kind of spell, do not let anyone except her to come there.
The forest was full of smells - wet grass after the rain, pine needles, rotten branches. Acchan always enjoyed that smell, and usually at night, he amplified many times over. It was quiet, but only her steps disturb the peace of the forest.
But here there was a noise of falling water - which meant that she was close to the secret place. Acchan, a little smile, quickened her pace to meet soon with his secret place.
And then, finally, her eyes appeared a nice landscape to heart and soul - a narrow path between the bendable willow, lake with a mirror surface and a huge waterfall. This picture has always struck her fancy, and sometimes she dreamed, when ambassadress was needed advice.
Atsuko, going down the path, went to the lake and sat down on her haunches, her fingers touched the water, as if she say: "I came back". She always, when she came here, talking with a waterfall and a lake - it seemed to her that they understand her. And when they answered her, she understood them. Although, of course, when she had just found the place she thought to call Sae, so that she deciphered it that waterfall says. But, over time, she began to understand them.
- Long time no see, right? - She whispered, appealed to the cold water.
Swept the ripples on the lake, like it welcomed a girl. Atsuko laughed softly when the water, as if playing, splashed on her face.
Acchan suddenly saw movement in the waterfall. She turned and saw a figure in a white t-shirt, who came under a spray of the waterfall. Atsuko, looking more closely, realized that it is a female figure.
"Does anyone else but me knows about this place?" - her a bit worried the emergence of a stranger in her favorite spot.
She got up and, took off running shoes and jacket, went into the cold water and went to the waterfall. The stranger apparently saw her as soon as got out of hitters on the jets and went to meet Acchan. When between them there were 5 meters, Atsuko saw that it was a girl. Very short, with medium-length brown hair, brown-eyed, in a wet white tunic. It seems that for her was not cold at all, even though they both were standing in ice water.
- Who are you? - Acchan asked, staring at the girl.
- Atsuko, you don't remember me? - She came close to ambassadress and looked straight in the her eye.
Like an electric shock went through Acchan, when she saw the girl's eyes. The same passion shiny dark brown eyes, like the she-wolf that saved Atsuko's live. She could not believe it.
- Minami? - She took her by the shoulders. - Minami, is that you?
- Atsuko ...
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In such a place she finds Takamina.
Can't wait for the next chapter
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yay!!
finally an update from you~
I've been waiting for it....
and,yay...minami is come back!! :D
nice update...but it's too short... :(
ntw,nice update...and,pls update more~
hihihi :D
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Yeah an update at last... been waiting...
Yeah... Atsuko and Minami met each again....
What's going to happen next?
Can't wait
Thank you for the update
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yay Atsumina are united again, i'm so happy.
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thanks for the update!! Great chapter and great end to the chapter! Glad they could meet again and glad Atsuko recognized her :) Looking forward to the next chapter!
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Here is the next chapter ^^
ENJOY ^^
Chapter 7
Minami did not understand what was happening to her. She felt nauseous, muscle cramping, the whole body as if boiling. This went on for several hours, the breaks were rare, but no less painful.
Was already late in the evening, and she was looking for a temporary shelter in the woods, when all four of her paws buckled and she-wolf has fallen. As she first seem, absolutely without any reason. She tried to get up, but then her body ached.
"What is it?" - before it has never happened. She never felt SO bad. - "What's going on?"
Minami knew next to the place where it is, there is creek near where she will be able to ride out the night. She is oblivious to the pain, barely dragging her paws made its way among the low branches of trees to the purpose.
Arriving at last, to the creek, she-wolf fell exhausted to the nearest cluster of leaves. Her body temperature seemed to rise even higher, and paws were numb.
Minami, struggling with the pain, fall asleep. Her sleep was restless, full of dark dreams. Again she saw the parents and sister, but then it all was burnt in the fire ... She ran away off somewhere and she felt that she is being persecuted.
But suddenly all receded - and terrible dreams, and pain, torments her last few hours. Minami woke up and trying to look around yourself, do not believe her eyes. She-wolf, thinking that all this is her hallucination, closed her eyes and tried to go back to sleep, but sleep would not come. Then, opened her eyes again, she made sure that does not sleep. Minami has again become a human!
The girl, still not believing it, felt her hands, legs and face, even crawled to the creek, to be sure. At her from the reflection staring back girl - long, to the waist, brown hair, high cheekbones, a strong chin, a little plump pink lips ... changed only one thing - the eyes. They have become more predatory, wolfish, with a light shade of predator's passion.
Minami touched the water, and feeling that the water had not yet had time to cool after the heat of the day, went to the creek. The clothes that she was wearing, immediately gets wet - in a white tunic became visible contours of her body. She laughed - for the first time in a long time - and heard her voice, just a little grown-up.
"I wonder, I grew up at least a centimeter?" - Minami laughed again. - "Again I think about the same".
Coming out of the creek, she went to a nearby tree and deftly climbed to the very top and the strongest branch. She sat down on her, she looked around the neighborhood - everything was clean. Just above the horizon was hanging a yellow moon.
"If I was now a she-wolf - must have howled. But now ... It's good - be a human,"- Minami reached out and made herself comfortable, leaning back against the tree trunk.
The next morning she woke up, lying on the sand. Again she become a she-wolf ...
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- Minami? - she took her by the shoulders. - Minami, is that you?
- Atsuko ...
- Minami! - Acchan leaned forward and hugged her. - Where have you been? I was looking for you!
- Atsuko ... - Minami hugged ambassadress back. - I'm sorry ... I ... could not be with you ...
- Minami ... - princess pressed her savior to her and buried her nose in her hair. - You're coming with me?
Low girl winced, as if suddenly feeling the icy water, and pulled away from the ambassadress.
- I'm sorry ... - she lowered her head. - But I can not go with you ...
- Why? - tears flowed from Atsuko's eyes. She pressed her hands to her chest, trying to cope with emotions. - Why can not you come with me? Why are you hiding in the form of a she-wolf? Why can I only see you? Why, in the end, you saved me?!
- Atsuko, I'm ... - Minami clenched fists, holding back tears.
- Can not you explain to me? - Ambassadress's voice suddenly became icy. Even colder than the lake water. - Well ... I thought you'd be my friend, but now ... Goodbye, Minami-which-I-do-not-know.
Acchan already turned around and headed to the path along which came, when she was stopped by the Minami's voice. The Princess was frightened at first that, as a girl-wolf's voice was somehow stranger not as she was used to.
- If you so wish, I'll tell you everything ...
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- I was born in a small village not far from here. My parents owned a small plot of land on which grew vegetables and fruits, then to sell them. I, as I could, help them. Five years later, my younger sister - Juri - was born . Around the same time, there were rumors about a certain villain named Daharans - said that he destroys entire villages in search of one human. But, as it happened far away from us, we did not attach much importance. And soon after that information about new raids did not arrive ...
Atsuko and Minami sat in the almost dried-up clothes under a huge tree near the lake. Low girl, telling to ambassadress her history, constantly staring at the stars, as if she was trying to find the strength to carry on. Ambassadress stared at her, as if trying to remember her in detail.
- After nine years of quiet life in our village came ambassador from Daharans to the order to give him a child.
- Anyone? - Acchan horrified.
Minami in response to this just smiled, still not taking her eyes off the sky.
- Um ... no, not anyone. Certain. He even read the signs: "A girl, 14 years old, brown hair to her shoulders, name is Minami".
- You?!
- Yes, - Minami sighed. - As parents did not resist because they do not want to give me, I was forced to go with this ambassador. He said that if I will not give to him the whole village will be wiped off the face of the Earth.
- Nightmare ... - Acchan clenched her fists. - It's too cruel.
- All the way to his lair my eyes were closed - they put on me some kind of bag that I could not see anything. It was removed only when I entered the hall, where this terrible person was. He said he was looking for me and that I - Selected.
- Selected?
- Yes. He found that the soldiers of the Kingdom also searched for me to prepare for a mission. But he was ahead of them. He told me that somewhere in a secret place in a few years was to grow a beautiful crystal, and his light will save the Kingdom ...
Acchan not believe her ears.
- It can not be ... Are ... You ...
- Yes, originally I was supposed to bring that Crystal to the Kingdom. I was supposed to be a Seeker ... - Minami stood. - But as Daharans found me first, I had to steal that crystal and bring him, that he began to rule the world. He promised that I would be his right hand, and that we will rule together. But ... I knew he was lying. I knew that if the crystal will get to him, he will erase all Kingdom off the face of the Earth. So ... I ran away. I ran home, but they did not notice because it was night. And the next day ... I became white she-wolf.
- Daharans cursed you? - Acchan thought. - I read about it somewhere. This kind of curse is almost impossible to remove. But ... You're in human form. Is this possible?
- Three years ago ... the first time I turned from a wolf to human. I became a werewolf ... But I could only turn at night and only a few hours, and these transformations were terribly painful. Now I can turn into a human at any time of the day, to be in human form as long as I want, and I don't feel pain of the transformation... I think it's because I met you, - Minami turned to Acchan and held out her hand. - Thank you.
Atsuko took Minami's hand, and she helped her to her feet.
- Do not tha... - Acchan tripped and fell on Minami. Their lips met in a kiss ... Atsuko's hands were near Minami's head, her left leg - between Minami's legs. Minami hands were on Atsuko's waist.
They both realize situation only a few minutes. Minami's eyes widened, and she rather rudely shoving Atsuko, jumped sharply.
- What are you doing?! - Minami's eyes just burning furiously, and her cheeks flushed from embarrassment.
Acchan, no less shocked, stood up and bowed.
- I'm sorry ... - that was not visible, but her face was red. - Minami, I did not mean to ...
- Come on ... - girl-wolf again stared at the sky. Atsuko went to the lake and looked down at her hands. At this point, they both thought of only one thing:
"It was my first kiss ..."
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- Nee, Minami ...
They both walked in the woods - Minami agreed to hold Atsuko to the hospital's gate. The incident, happened near the lake, has been forgotten, and they are both perfectly normal to communicate with each other.
- Yes?
- You still have not answered the question of mine. Why can I only see you?
- Hmm ... Good question ... - Minami smiled slyly. - Secret!
- Mou, Minami ~!
They both laughed, and suddenly on they fell net, and the next moment from the shadow of the trees seemed girl with two pigtails. In her hands was a very strange-looking hunting rifle, in her eyes - strange glasses. She was dressed in a black knee-length black dress and a jacket.
- So I got you, werewolf ... - she smiled. The voice seemed familiar to Acchan, and after a few seconds, she knew who it belonged to.
- MAYUYU?!
please comment
what do you think will happen after that ????
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Minami finding Acchan will help her soothe the problems but the curse seems to be the bigger issue at the moment
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Thanks for the update! :D
Glad Minami could be open and speak with Atsuko who was also understanding :) & aww, both had their first kiss with one another :3
As for the ending, yikes for them! Mayuyu? So she's out hunting Minami eh! Can't wait to find out what happens next!
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Awww... Takamina and Atsuko shared their first Kiss :wub:
So because Takamina met Acchan... she can transform from she-wolf to a human at will?
Cool!! :w00t:
So if Takamina is suppose to be the seeker and ran away.... and Atsuko didn't find the crystal... where is the crystal?
what can it do? :? :?
Why can only Atsuko see Takamina? :?
Aaaagggghhh!!!! I need Answers!!!! :tantrum: :mon whine:
Thanks for the update by the way.... :twothumbs
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Sorry :bow: it has been a long time since I updated :bow:
Chapter 8.
- So I got you, werewolf ... - girl in a black knee-length black dress and a jacket smiled. The voice seemed familiar to Acchan, and after a few seconds, she knew who it belonged to.
- MAYUYU?!
When Atsuko left the Kingdom on a mission, Mayu - the daughter of a Atsuko's teacher - was very young. Since then she has grown rapidly and has matured considerably, but, no doubt, the girl that caught her with Minami in the net, was baby Mayuyu.
- Long time no see, Atsuko-sama. It seems that six months have passed, - Acchan flinched from that "-sama". Earlier Mayu always called her "Atsuko-onee-chan"... How quickly she has changed. - I never thought I'd see you in the forest at such a late hour.
- Mayuyu, that's a joke? - Atsuko tried to lift net, but it was electrocuted. - Release us!
- Sorry, Atsuko-sama, but she, - Mayu sent her gun on Minami. - I need her.
- Why do you need Minami? Why are you caught us? Why do you need a gun? - Acchan beginning to anger the behavior of her friend.
- Minami? This is not the Minami, it is a monster! She deserves to die only their existence!
- The monster? Death? - Acchan from her awkward position stared at Mayu. - Mayuyu, what happened to you?
- With me - nothing, - cut Mayu. - But, seem, monster powdered your brains!
And Mayu, snatching the pistol from her belt, fired first at the Minami and then to Atsuko. Acchan felt something bites her shoulder, and after darkness fell.
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Acchan opened her eyes and had to immediately close them - its blinding bright sunlight. Along with this came a terrible headache. Acchan, trying to calm her down, fidgeted, and above it once was inclined another familiar face.
- Acchan, are you all right?
- Yuki?
Atsuko sharply sat up and looked around. The room in which she was, was clearly not in the palace or in the homes of the surrounding area. The walls are painted in a light green color, elegant double bed, in the right corner - a neat little dressing table, next to him - a leather sofa. To the left of the bed - a round table and a bookcase next to it.
- Yuki, where am I?
- This is my family's country residence. You've never been here, right?
Yuki, or, as she was called by friends, Yukirin, was a Atsuko's friend since childhood. The daughter of rich parents, close to the Queen, she was well brought up and educated along with Atsuko. Yukirin was the only one with who Atsuko in childhood could play - the other was not given permission to do so, or they do not exist at the palace.
- Yeah, how many years you and I are friends, and I did not know you had a mansion outside the city.
- I never say about it, - and both laughed.
- By the way, Yuki, how did I get here? - Acchan swung her legs off the bed, Yuki sat down next to her.
- Hmm ... You do not remember? Mayu brought you here yesterday, because you, have not really recovering from the wounds, went for a walk in the woods at night and lost consciousness. Yuko there almost went mad with worry when you are not found in the ward ...
- Mayu?
Acchan suddenly remembered last night - their conversation with Minami, a meeting with the armed Mayu ...
- Minami... Where is Minami?
- Acchan, who is it? Mayu brought only you alone ...
Atsuko looked into the Yuki's eyes. The same black, without a hint of emotion, eyes of Lightning Mage. But still, something was wrong. Acchan was sure that Yukirin was lying to her.
- Where is Minami? - Atsuko repeated a little harder. - I know you know her whereabouts.
Remembering last night, she remembered something else strange. When Mayu caught them and came out from behind trees, behind her was a strange shadow. As if behind her was another person. Atsuko felt the familiar flow of magic, but could not figure out who it belongs to. Now, being with Yukirin, she knew that. Stood behind Mayu yesterday was Lightning Mage. And this Mage was Yuki.
Suddenly, from somewhere below, there was a strange noise - as if something breaks, and then someone shouted.
Atsuko darted off, and throwing open the door of the room, ran out into the dark corridor and ran down the stairs to the first floor, and from there - to the basement. She was sure that Mayu holds Minami there.
And she does something terrible to her.
And Minami hurt.
And she cries.
Acchan knew that the cry belongs to this girl-werewolf.
But as soon as she stepped off the last step, her body was electric charge. Atsuko fainted.
The last thing she heard was:
- Do not interfere in our affairs, Princess. The monsters must be destroyed, - an angelic voice said Yukirin.
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Minami woke up in a room like a laboratory. Everywhere: on cabinets, on tables - were placed flasks with different colors and composition of fluids. Minami tried to stir, but could not - her hands and feet were tightly bound. She tried to turn back into a she-wolf, but nothing happened, as if the curse was lifted. But Minami felt that this was not the case.
- You can not try to turn into a wolf, - Mayu's voice came from somewhere, and the next moment she entered the room. - The cell in which you are, do not let you do that.
Mayu was wearing a lab coat, on her eyes were the same glasses as yesterday.
- Why are you doing this?
- The monsters must die, - Mayu replied icily. - People have to live. Atsuko-sama's affection to you - just your monster's charm. If you disappear - she wakes up and returns to normal, the same as she was before. Prior to her mission.
- I'm not a monster! - Minami tried to break the ropes that bind her.
- You're a werewolf. You're different from the people. You have a very dark aura. As the Daharans's servants. You're a monster.
Mayu said, as if repeating a mantra, which drove to her head. She opened the drawer of a table, took out a syringe and filling it with a colorless liquid of the adjacent tubes, went into the cell to Minami.
- I will protect Yuki, - Mayu opened the cell door, came back and sat down next to Minami. - I will not let IT happen again.
Mayu released Minami's left hand and, holding her tight, introduced the needle into the vein.
Minami screamed.
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In the next chapter of "The Legend of the Seeker":
- Acchan asks her friends for help in order to release Minami;
- Meet TomoTomo and WMatsui!;
- The reason for Yuki and Mayu;
- What will happen to Minami?!
What do you think ??? please comment ^^v
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oooo como on continue this
so interesting
thanks
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What's going to happen to Minami next?
Would Atsuko be able to make Mayuki release Minami?
What's going to happen next?
Why did Mayuki become such a heartless people that hated monsters?
Can't wait to find out
Thank you for the update
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- Do not interfere in our affairs, Princess. The monsters must be destroyed, - an angelic voice said Yukirin.
wait..what? whatt??
I know there's a reason why mayuki became like this.
I do believe in that (cross-fingers)