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Title: :9 The Rock City Boy [Relation Chart Update]
Post by: Yuichii on May 10, 2013, 08:59:11 PM
*reserved*
Title: :9 The Rock City Boy [The Missing Chapter]
Post by: Yuichii on May 10, 2013, 09:00:05 PM
Hi everyone! my first teen-porn in attempt!!!!! lol joking! :lol: This is just another typical fanfic from me if anyone interested. :D



:same [The Missing Chapter]


Lying on top Minami, Mizuki stares into her dark brown eyes as she stares in his. Minami can hear his heart beating faster below his shirt and she curls her fist softly against his chest. A red blush stole across her cheeks as she tore her eyes away from Mizuki’s eyes.

Taking the initiative, Mizuki leaned down and press their lips together into a gentle kiss, barely pressuring her, moving his lips softly and warmly on hers, not forcing his way into her mouth. Minami kissed back, resisting the sudden urge to fist her hands in his hair and pulling him closer.

Mizuki playfully nibbled on Minami’s bottom lip. She sighed and opened her lips under his. Gently, he slipped his tongue into her mouth, slowly letting her know he wanted her, but not pushing her. She kissed him back, tangling her tongue with his and moving her hands up to his shoulders. He deepened the kiss a little, and then pulled back; dropping small feather kisses over her lips, cheeks and forehead.

Mizuki then hovered over Minami with his lips curl in a smile. He brushes a few errant strands of hair away from Minami’s forehead, studying her closely, especially her plum cherry lips.

 “Minami, I love you.” Mizuki flashed his irresistible smile and it was impossible for Minami to hide her fluttering heart. Though she would never admit it, his smiles melted her heart every time and she would find a way so that he wouldn’t catch her blush.

“And, I love the shy Mizuki-kun more!” Minami said ruffling her hand through Mizuki’s hair, messing up his hair.

“Why..you!” Mizuki scrunched up his nose.

Minami smiled and grasped his head in her hands, pulling him closer so they could kiss, moving her mouth against his with fervor.

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"ATSUKO!!!!!!!"


. . . . TBC



A/N: I know nothing much to start with but I will introduce the main characters in the first chapter soon. Thank you for reading. :k-hello:
Title: Re: :9 The Rock City Boy [The Missing Chapter]
Post by: kuro808 on May 10, 2013, 09:05:07 PM
Teen romance in a pg-13 setting :lol:

Nice start
Title: Re: :9 The Rock City Boy [The Missing Chapter]
Post by: sakura_drop_ on May 10, 2013, 09:15:06 PM
Yay, new AtsuMina story~
Title: Re: :9 The Rock City Boy [The Missing Chapter]
Post by: cisda83 on May 11, 2013, 06:22:06 AM
Interesting...

Minami is with a guy... Mizuki....

Who was the one that said 'Atsuko' at the end of the chapter

Can't wait to see more

Thank you for the good start of the new fic...

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: :9 The Rock City Boy [The Missing Chapter]
Post by: dark48 on May 11, 2013, 07:24:44 AM
Pls Continue it really interesting
Title: Re: :9 The Rock City Boy [The Missing Chapter]
Post by: Yuichii on May 28, 2013, 04:15:12 PM
I made a banner and a relation chart for my fanfiction. :) I will post the first chapter later, so here is the relation chart for a start. I will add and reveal more additional characters / relations as the story progress. :nervous

(http://i1300.photobucket.com/albums/ag88/yuichiiono/sig/TheRockCityBoy_zps3c67077c.jpg)
(http://i1300.photobucket.com/albums/ag88/yuichiiono/sig/RelationChart_zpsd50bac28.png)
Title: Re: :9 The Rock City Boy [Relation Chart Update]
Post by: cisda83 on May 28, 2013, 04:35:40 PM
Yuichii-san

Nice pictures chart...

I can't wait for the story to start...

Eh... Minami and Kai...

Are you going to make them cross-dress or siblings...?

Whatever you are going to decide... it's going to be interesting...

I want to see how you mix them with Mizuki...

Can't wait...

Thank you for the chart...

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: :9 The Rock City Boy [Relation Chart Update]
Post by: ashiya on May 28, 2013, 04:50:05 PM
This's going to be interesting :w00t: and JunichixMinami???  :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

Kai? He's realated to Minami? Identical twins ?

Mizuki-kun huh? It's seems like someone woke "him" up from dreaming... :lol:
Title: Re: :9 The Rock City Boy [Relation Chart Update]
Post by: kenjoy12 on May 28, 2013, 05:41:28 PM
nod nod.. Interesting :') Mizuki woke up from dreamland.. Nice start :thumbsup

Kai and Minami with unknown relationship.  :? Why Atsuko cross-dressed? Junichi and Minami? Why? Ohman! I ask alot of questions.. >_<

Can't wait for new characters with unique relation with one another.. >_<

Thank you.. I'll be waiting for your next update :bow:
Title: Re: :9 The Rock City Boy [Relation Chart Update]
Post by: 7sam14 on May 28, 2013, 06:04:01 PM
Nice Pic Chart!!

Kai and Minami as Siblings?  :? :?
or she's crossed dressed as Kai...

Mizuki was Dreaming huh?  :lol:  XD

I really can't wait to see their Interactions!!!  :panic:

Thanks for zee Chart!!
and I'll be waiting for zee Next Chap.!!
 :twothumbs :twothumbs