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Title: Forward Love AtsuMina Chapter 25 6/10/2013
Post by: kuro808 on May 21, 2013, 01:20:30 PM
So I started another one because I realize the previous one I'm stuck without updates :nervous

http://atsumina2.blogspot.com/ (http://atsumina2.blogspot.com/)

I'll leave it here for people to comment on :grin:
Title: Re: Forward Love AtsuMina Updated 5/21/2013
Post by: cisda83 on May 21, 2013, 02:08:46 PM
Interesting

Can't wait to see the next chapter

Thank you

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Forward Love AtsuMina Updated 5/21/2013
Post by: den_takacchan on May 21, 2013, 02:34:13 PM
i'll for your nxt update cuz ive already been hooked by ur story :D please update fast if you can :D :twothumbs  :lol:
Title: Re: Forward Love AtsuMina Updated 5/21/2013
Post by: kuro808 on May 21, 2013, 06:44:21 PM
Quote from: cisda83 on May 21, 2013, 02:08:46 PM
Interesting

Can't wait to see the next chapter

Thank you

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Thank you

Quote from: den_takacchan on May 21, 2013, 02:34:13 PM
i'll for your nxt update cuz ive already been hooked by ur story :D please update fast if you can :D :twothumbs  :lol:

I'll try to but cannot guarantee anything :nervous

Updated with two more chapters
Title: Re: Forward Love AtsuMina Chapter 8 5/23/2013
Post by: kuro808 on May 23, 2013, 06:20:30 PM
Chapter 8 is up.

I feel it may be weird with this fic and it seems why Takamina is alone after the first chapter... to be honest this is the whole fic until she meets her again.

Yes the short chapters are just a way to fish you guys XD
Title: Re: Forward Love AtsuMina Chapter 8 5/23/2013
Post by: cisda83 on May 24, 2013, 05:02:45 AM
Getting.. shot...

What's going to happen next

Can't wait

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Forward Love AtsuMina Chapter 9 5/23/2013
Post by: kuro808 on May 24, 2013, 07:30:50 AM
Quote from: cisda83 on May 24, 2013, 05:02:45 AM
Getting.. shot...

What's going to happen next

Can't wait

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Chapter 9 is up XD
Title: Re: Forward Love AtsuMina Chapter 9 5/23/2013
Post by: cisda83 on May 24, 2013, 08:59:52 AM
Ah... Sayaka's partner got killed...

What's going to happen next...

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Forward Love AtsuMina Chapter 10 5/24/2013
Post by: kuro808 on May 24, 2013, 05:53:36 PM
Quote from: cisda83 on May 24, 2013, 08:59:52 AM
Ah... Sayaka's partner got killed...

What's going to happen next...

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Simply it has been done but the overall thing is the psyche of Sayaka which comes into mind

Chapter 10 is up
Title: Re: Forward Love AtsuMina Chapter 11 5/26/2013
Post by: kuro808 on May 26, 2013, 10:04:15 PM
Chapter 11 is up.
Title: Re: Forward Love AtsuMina Chapter 11 5/26/2013
Post by: cisda83 on May 27, 2013, 05:17:29 AM
kurosawa87-san...

Sorry that I didn't comment anything on previous chapter...

I had problem going into the website where you put your fic...

So I could not read it at all... not until just now..

Great updates as usual...

Ah... Poor Sayaka, Yuko and Takamina... and also the others

The ones that were sent and to fight in this war...

They fought only to died...

That's so sad...

Really... is there really nothing they can do to aviod the death... after the war id over?

Can't wait to find out the next chapter

Thank you for the updates

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Forward Love AtsuMina Chapter 12 5/27/2013
Post by: kuro808 on May 27, 2013, 01:25:13 PM
Quote from: cisda83 on May 27, 2013, 05:17:29 AM
kurosawa87-san...

Sorry that I didn't comment anything on previous chapter...

I had problem going into the website where you put your fic...

So I could not read it at all... not until just now..

Great updates as usual...

Ah... Poor Sayaka, Yuko and Takamina... and also the others

The ones that were sent and to fight in this war...

They fought only to died...

That's so sad...

Really... is there really nothing they can do to aviod the death... after the war id over?

Can't wait to find out the next chapter

Thank you for the updates

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

No problem about it, kinda wishing for more but this is what I expect for no pairings love until much later although it is a long confusing story about them separated :P

Chapter 12 is up.
Title: Re: Forward Love AtsuMina Chapter 12 5/27/2013
Post by: cisda83 on May 27, 2013, 02:15:24 PM
Lucky Sayaka notice the trap...

If not they would have been destroyed to bits...

What are they going to find out in the north?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Forward Love AtsuMina Chapter 13 5/27/2013
Post by: kuro808 on May 27, 2013, 09:46:34 PM
Quote from: cisda83 on May 27, 2013, 02:15:24 PM
Lucky Sayaka notice the trap...

If not they would have been destroyed to bits...

What are they going to find out in the north?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

I like Sayaka in this fic more than anything else because what she provides and she is pretty much the strength behind everyone :nervous

Chapter 13 is up
Title: Re: Forward Love AtsuMina Chapter 13 5/27/2013
Post by: cisda83 on May 28, 2013, 10:49:22 AM
So they are going to the safe zone soon...

Would they be shot too from entering the zone?

Would Minami be able to see Atsuko?

Can't wait to see the next chapter

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Forward Love AtsuMina Chapter 14 5/28/2013
Post by: kuro808 on May 28, 2013, 06:28:42 PM
Quote from: cisda83 on May 28, 2013, 10:49:22 AM
So they are going to the safe zone soon...

Would they be shot too from entering the zone?

Would Minami be able to see Atsuko?

Can't wait to see the next chapter

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Slowly they are getting there and the second question :nervous

Chapter 14 is up
Title: Re: Forward Love AtsuMina Chapter 14 5/28/2013
Post by: cisda83 on May 29, 2013, 03:14:26 AM
Oh... So Atsuko able to escape before the rebel coming...

But not Minami... she was being forced to join if she didn't want to die or being raped...

I could see that Minami didn't have any choice in this matter...

How about Yuko and Sayaka...?

What are their stories...?

So this fight was just a fight to gain the authority....

Like the all of the sectors wanted to be the king...

Poor Minami to catch into this kind of pointless battle...

What's going to happen to them after the storm...?

Would they be able to go into the safe zone...?

Can't wait to see the next chapter

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Forward Love AtsuMina Chapter 15 5/29/2013
Post by: kuro808 on May 29, 2013, 01:44:55 PM
Quote from: cisda83 on May 29, 2013, 03:14:26 AM
Oh... So Atsuko able to escape before the rebel coming...

But not Minami... she was being forced to join if she didn't want to die or being raped...

I could see that Minami didn't have any choice in this matter...

How about Yuko and Sayaka...?

What are their stories...?

So this fight was just a fight to gain the authority....

Like the all of the sectors wanted to be the king...

Poor Minami to catch into this kind of pointless battle...

What's going to happen to them after the storm...?

Would they be able to go into the safe zone...?

Can't wait to see the next chapter

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Okay this part I knew was vague but it won't be explained in any part of the story so the whole gist of it is the battle between the officials.  Civil war but Takamina was sheltered to the point that the war only affected until she saw it for herself rather than the whole picture so the big details won't come until it has been realized :nervous

Chapter 15 is up
Title: Re: Forward Love AtsuMina Chapter 15 5/29/2013
Post by: cisda83 on May 29, 2013, 02:14:17 PM
Thank you for the explanation about the civil war...

Ah... so they were nearer to the safe zone already...

Eh.. who was that pointing their gun at them?

Are they the civilians from the safe zone or their enemies?

Would they be able to safe themselves from this unfortunate situation...?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Forward Love AtsuMina Chapter 16 5/30/2013
Post by: kuro808 on May 30, 2013, 06:29:46 PM
Quote from: cisda83 on May 29, 2013, 02:14:17 PM
Thank you for the explanation about the civil war...

Ah... so they were nearer to the safe zone already...

Eh.. who was that pointing their gun at them?

Are they the civilians from the safe zone or their enemies?

Would they be able to safe themselves from this unfortunate situation...?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

You'll find out soon ;)

Chapter 16 is up
Title: Re: Forward Love AtsuMina Chapter 16 5/30/2013
Post by: cisda83 on May 31, 2013, 11:05:22 AM
Ah... Yuko was a traitor here...

I didn't even think that could happen..

Yeah... so stupid that Yuko just died like that...

At least Sayaka able to kill all the other guards...

What's going to happen next...?

What's beyond the gate?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Forward Love AtsuMina Chapter 17 5/31/2013
Post by: kuro808 on May 31, 2013, 06:16:59 PM
Quote from: cisda83 on May 31, 2013, 11:05:22 AM
Ah... Yuko was a traitor here...

I didn't even think that could happen..

Yeah... so stupid that Yuko just died like that...

At least Sayaka able to kill all the other guards...

What's going to happen next...?

What's beyond the gate?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

That was the surprise of the fic and pretty much I can say that was the high point of the fic so expect it to end in the next few chapters :lol:

Chapter 17 is up
Title: Re: Forward Love AtsuMina Chapter 17 5/31/2013
Post by: cisda83 on June 01, 2013, 09:05:24 AM
Ah... so Sayaka and Minami able to cross over the barrier...

Why did the villagers say they didn't have to break through?

Anyhow... what's going to happen next to Sayaka and Minami?

Can't wait

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Forward Love AtsuMina Chapter 18 6/1/2013
Post by: kuro808 on June 01, 2013, 09:06:11 PM
Quote from: cisda83 on June 01, 2013, 09:05:24 AM
Ah... so Sayaka and Minami able to cross over the barrier...

Why did the villagers say they didn't have to break through?

Anyhow... what's going to happen next to Sayaka and Minami?

Can't wait

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Well hope they survive the torture ahead

Chapter 18 is up
Title: Re: Forward Love AtsuMina Chapter 18 6/1/2013
Post by: cisda83 on June 02, 2013, 05:18:35 AM
Ah... Atsuko was there...

Going to get more interesting now...

Can't wait

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Forward Love AtsuMina Chapter 19 6/2/2013
Post by: kuro808 on June 03, 2013, 10:49:53 AM
Quote from: cisda83 on June 02, 2013, 05:18:35 AM
Ah... Atsuko was there...

Going to get more interesting now...

Can't wait

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Yeah hope to write more chapters soon to keep up with this one

Chapter 19 is up
Title: Re: Forward Love AtsuMina Chapter 19 6/2/2013
Post by: cisda83 on June 03, 2013, 03:56:29 PM
Ah... Poor Atsuko

So she was raped and treated as a slut....

Ah... at least they were able to be together now...

Could they be together?

Can't wait to see more

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Forward Love AtsuMina Chapter 20 6/3/2013
Post by: kuro808 on June 03, 2013, 06:12:05 PM
Quote from: cisda83 on June 03, 2013, 03:56:29 PM
Ah... Poor Atsuko

So she was raped and treated as a slut....

Ah... at least they were able to be together now...

Could they be together?

Can't wait to see more

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Now they gotta get out :nervous

Chapter 20 is up
Title: Re: Forward Love AtsuMina Chapter 20 6/3/2013
Post by: cisda83 on June 04, 2013, 10:31:50 AM
Ah... so they were going to escape to the next town...

Eh... Atsuko also able to use weapons....

Ah... getting more interesting now

What's going to happen next

Can't wait

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Forward Love AtsuMina Chapter 21 6/4/2013
Post by: kuro808 on June 04, 2013, 06:43:15 PM
Quote from: cisda83 on June 04, 2013, 10:31:50 AM
Ah... so they were going to escape to the next town...

Eh... Atsuko also able to use weapons....

Ah... getting more interesting now

What's going to happen next

Can't wait

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

The chase :lol:

Chapter 21 is up
Title: Re: Forward Love AtsuMina Chapter 21 6/4/2013
Post by: cisda83 on June 05, 2013, 02:58:29 PM
Who was the one that fired the gun at them?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Forward Love AtsuMina Chapter 22 6/5/2013
Post by: kuro808 on June 05, 2013, 06:12:53 PM
Quote from: cisda83 on June 05, 2013, 02:58:29 PM
Who was the one that fired the gun at them?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Chapter 22 is up
Title: Re: Forward Love AtsuMina Chapter 22 6/5/2013
Post by: cisda83 on June 06, 2013, 09:37:47 AM
Who was that person that wanting to shoot them...?

Was there going to be some interaction between the stranger and them?

Why was the stranger alone there?

Can't wait to see more

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Forward Love AtsuMina Chapter 23 6/6/2013
Post by: kuro808 on June 06, 2013, 06:39:58 PM
Quote from: cisda83 on June 06, 2013, 09:37:47 AM
Who was that person that wanting to shoot them...?

Was there going to be some interaction between the stranger and them?

Why was the stranger alone there?

Can't wait to see more

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Person shall be named but why not earlier? I have no clue XD

Chapter 23 is up
Title: Re: Forward Love AtsuMina Chapter 23 6/6/2013
Post by: cisda83 on June 07, 2013, 04:52:22 AM
Ah.. Mayu was joining their adventures...

Would they run into trouble with the island people?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Forward Love AtsuMina Chapter 24 6/7/2013
Post by: kuro808 on June 07, 2013, 06:36:32 PM
Quote from: cisda83 on June 07, 2013, 04:52:22 AM
Ah.. Mayu was joining their adventures...

Would they run into trouble with the island people?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Chapter 24 is up
Title: Re: Forward Love AtsuMina Chapter 24 6/7/2013
Post by: cisda83 on June 08, 2013, 02:57:07 PM
Ah... they were given poison berries...

What would be their trials....?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Forward Love AtsuMina Chapter 25 6/10/2013
Post by: kuro808 on June 10, 2013, 06:36:36 PM
Quote from: cisda83 on June 08, 2013, 02:57:07 PM
Ah... they were given poison berries...

What would be their trials....?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

You will soon find out

Chapter 25 is up
Title: Re: Forward Love AtsuMina Chapter 25 6/10/2013
Post by: cisda83 on June 11, 2013, 02:13:46 AM
After being violated and molested like that... they still want to help them protect the village...

Poor Atsuko, Minami and Sayaka...

What's going to happen to them next?

Can't wait

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Forward Love AtsuMina Chapter 25 6/10/2013
Post by: lezperv on September 03, 2013, 05:50:06 AM
HOW DARE YOU!!!  :on speedy:

I can't believe you raped Acchan and then violated both her and Minami with Sayaka  :scolding:

My poor gurls  :pleeease: you are sooo cruel  :tantrum:

Hope you would update soon cuz its really an interesting story  :shifty: