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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: Archie28 on May 26, 2013, 10:18:22 AM
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This fic is based on a movie from my country. This is my first fanfic, English is not really my mother tongue… :nervous
I’m sorry if the English is not good. I’m writing this script style… I’m sorry if it’s too short…
Prologue
In a room inside a hotel:
Kai (while drinking beer): Your boyfriend’s a lucky man. You really are something.
Atsuko (while removing her jacket and a bit drunk): Really? Because that’s not what my boyfriend would say.
Kai (walking to Atsuko): You know me. I mean what I say.
Atsuko: You’re just saying that because I’m drunk and you’re drunk.
Kai (giggles): No. How many times do I have to tell you? You’re kind, intelligent and beautiful. Who wouldn’t fall for you?
Atsuko (Not believing what Kai said): You’re just being nice. Thank you. *while looking at Kai*
Kai (slowly leans into Atsuko): Thank you. Thank you for listening. *their faces are now very close to each other*
But then……
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I like it so far
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Ah... Kai and Atsuko.... Yeah...
I like the pairing already...
Ah.. are they going to have one night stand....?
Can't wait to find out what's going to happen to Atsumina next?
Thank you for the interesting prologue
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Another Kai x Atsuko ~ just love it so much ! Please continue to update
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Love it ~~~
Pls. Continue
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So... who is that 'lucky man'??
ah, another story of my fav pairing. thank you :)
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i dont like the part ''but then '' :banghead:
just let they do what they were doing dont interrupt them :smhid
yeah..and who is the '' lucky man '' :?
nice update keep go on :jphip:
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Heeeeee sounds interesting
please continue I want to know the relationship between Kai x Atsuko
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Jyan Jyan Jyan!!! What this "but then..." can't wait to know it..
:banghead: :( XD
~Just who is this lucky guy?? Noo!!! I want Kai x Acchan!!..lol :lol: (just do what you want to do author-san.XXD)
:O2 :O2 :( :banghead:
~Please update soon!!!!It's interesting!!!~
:bow: :thumbsup :twothumbs :cathappy: :yep:
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Chapter 1
Thank you for reading my fanfic… I’m so happy that many people like it… hontouni arigatou! :D
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Atsuko: What the-! What do you think you’re doing?! *shocked to found out that it was not Kai*
On the other room:
(Kai did not continue to kiss the girl because he realize it was not Atsuko)
Kai: Sorry, drunk and this is very embarrassing. *embarrassed*
Mina: More like this is hilarious. HAHAHAHA. *laughs like a drunk person*
Kai: I’m sorry Mina. You know I love Atsuko.
Mina: I know—that’s why I knew you wouldn’t do it.
Back to Atsuko:
(Let’s call the guy Aoi since I can’t think of any as the time I’m writing this XD)
Aoi: But I thought you wanted to—. *desperately asked Atsuko*
Atsuko: I have a boyfriend – Kai! Hello! *shouted angrily while quickly fixing herself*
Aoi: But you said you are no longer happy with him.
Atsuko: What I said was I wanted to change my life!
Aoi: Yes! That’s why we’re here! That’s why I got us a room.
Atsuko: What?! I never said I wanted to have sex with you! I said I need to take a dump and throw up! But to have sex
with you? NO!!! *quickly went out of the room*
Back to Kai:
(Mina pushes Kai out of the room)
Mina: Go home! Go!
Kai: We’re still friends, right? *asked stupidly and still a bit drunk*
Mina: Of course! Besides you did way more embarrassing stuff in high school.
Kai: Ssshhh… could we not go there? *feeling annoyed*
Mina: Okay.
(Mina holding on to Kai’s arm while walking on the corridor)
Kai: Can you not tell Atsuko about this?
Mina: Of course! You know Kai, I thought Atsuko’s good for you *confirmed by nodding*
Back to Atsuko:
(Atsuko calling Kai)
Atsuko: Kai, please. Please pick up. Please… *desperately calling Kai while waiting for the elevator*
(Kai with Mina who still clings to his arm and Atsuko saw each other. No words could come out of each other’s mouth.)
(Atsuko then imagine -insert song herehttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=izGwDsrQ1eQ (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=izGwDsrQ1eQ)- what could have been the two are doing inside the hotel and went ballistic)
Atsuko: How dare you! *points at Kai*
Kai: Atsuko wait…. Let me explain…
(Aoi saw Atsuko ang ran to her)
Aoi: Atsuko, wait! Your jacket…
(Now its Kai’s turn to imagine things of what-might-happened and became furious)
Aoi: Nothing happened. Nothing happened believe me. *frantically explaining to Kai which Kai ignored*
(Kai could not take it anymore and punched Aoi in the face)
TBC
Wew… not to be confused. In the prologue Atsuko thought that Aoi was Kai and Kai thougth Mina was Atsuko ^_^;
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woa~ this is cool! :w00t: I never read anything like this yet :fap
wanna know will happen next! :cow:
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Great one there...
very interesting misunderstanding...
They both thought they cheated on one another...
Although that was not the case...
Would Mina able to explain to Atsuko without causing her to attack Mina?
Would Atsuko and Kai be able to get back together?
Can't wait to find out
Thank you for the update
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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ohhh difficult relationship
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Ouuuu!!That was a confusing one, but somehow i understand it~~
:P :lol: 8)
~Really, i'm here to say..."Your way of thinking is da' best!!!"!!!
:inlove: :thumbsup :twothumbs
~How can you create that kind of misunderstanding!!?? You're awesome!!
:shocked :w00t: :)
~And now Kai and Acchan is questioning each other on why they have a boy and a girl by their side!!!~
:shocked: :yep: :banghead:
~Unnnnn!!! I want to know more!!! Pls. update soon!! I'll be waiting kay'!! Ur story is the best!!~
:wub: :twothumbs :thumbsup
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Oh yeah its kind of confusing at first :)
But this is really interesting! :thumbsup
And Wow! Already have a problem in chapter one. XD
Must fix the misunderstanding already! :rock:
UGH! well then looking forward for the next updetoo~
^___________^ MY KAIACCHAN LABLABLAB! :grin:
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I hope u will update this ff soon author san