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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: Takahashi Atsuko on May 26, 2013, 08:44:34 PM
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There's nothing else i can do... everything is lost...
Through the earphone, i could hear many voices calling my name, the panic in their voices was obvious, but there was a voice that was more noticeable:
" Takamina!" shouted Acchan.
I smiled and whispered:
"Sorry Acchan... I couldn't keep my promise..."
My plane was getting closer to the ground, and then i noticed...
...This is my end...
So what do you think? (sorry for bad eng >.<)
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:heart: Immortal love=Vampire story :cathappy: :heart:
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The prologue is mystery and It makes me want to know more
So their love goes to immortal interesting cant wait for the first chapter
ps: dont forget your other fic I am waiting for it
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great prologue :D I'm also curious as to what will happen :)
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woahhh~~~ :w00t: this prologue gave me goosebumps~ XD
I wanna know what happen to Takamina!! :panic: :panic:
can't wait :cow:
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Interesting...
Immortal love = vampire story.... I agreed with TTLuver497-san idea...
Takamina was on the plane that going down... why?
Atsuko probably waiting for Takamina... somewhere... waiting for her return...
Takamina was on her mission or something...
More questions.... :?
Can't wait to find out how the story is going to be...
Thank you for the interesting Intro...
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Oh my!!! Someone Pov(maybe) crush to the ground!!?? <---the way i'm saying it is funny...lol :lol:
:cry: :( :( :shocked :banghead: :panic: :panic:
~What does Takamina promise to...who!?? Oh my gawd!! I want to know it!!!
:banghead: :banghead: :shocked: :? :?
~Yabaiii!! This is getting more interesting!!
:D :wub: :inlove: :twisted: :twisted: :twothumbs
~Please!! I'm waiting for the next one!! Takamina hang on there!!!~
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Chapter 1
I don’t like my life, i want to die, leave this world behind.
Since that accident, my life changed… A lot…
Flashback
” Minami!!” said Kirara. Kirara is my bestfriend since ever, she’s always by my side supporting me.
We are part of the AKB(the best airforce ever), there are four diferent levels:
- Student, they use a black uniform.
- Experts, they use a gray uniform and they're divided in three teams, Team A, K and B.
- Captains, they use a white uniform, there are just 3 captains, one of them is the best pilot we have, we call her Special A.
- Ace, there are just one ace, she is not good pilot as Special A, but, in the battles, she is always the first who attack the enemy, she use a pink uniform.
Today we, students, have a tournment and five will became experts.
" Good luck for the tournment, and make sure that you'll become an expert okey?" she said hugging me.
" Sure! Don't worry and you too, i want to become an expert together with you" i said hugging her too.
" Don't worry! I'm going to become the Special A!" she said.
" Ahah really? I want to be the Ace" i said.
" Students! Attention please!" Said a voice " The tournment will start, make sure to comply with the rules!"
I win all the fights, and Kirara too, she's going to fight Kuramochi Asuka and if she win, she will become an expert.
Tsubasa Kirara pov.
I went to my plane.
"Left engine CHECK! Right engine CHECK!" i said to my self " I'm ready to fly!" i said with a smile on face.
" Tsubasa you can go now! Good luck!" said somebody at my earphone.
I smiled and i pulled the joystick back, and in a few seconds my plane started to fly.
" Kirara, Asuka is a very good pilot, you have to be carefull!" said Minami in my earphone.
" Yeah i know, but i'm better!" i said " so don't worry" She laughed.
Asuka was already flying to, and then we heard a voice saying:
" Are you ready?"
" Yes!" We answered.
" 3, 2, 1, start!"
I steer my plane at her direction, she did the same. I want to over this quickly, so i started to fire against her. She easily dodget, and my plane passed by her, quickly she steer her plane at my direction and now she is on my back.
I have to get out of here, i have to though in something...
She started to fire, she hitted me on the wing and i started to lose the control of the plane.
" Kirara get out of there!" Screamed Minami on my earphone.
" No!" i said.
" What??"
I pulled the Joystick back.
C'mon... It have to work...
The plane started to steer in direction of the sky.
Now! I turn on the engines at maximum. I recovered the control of the plain but Asuka hit me on the other wing, i tryied to got out of there but i can't my arms don't move, and then the impact of the plane crushing on the floor.
I don't feel nothing, i don't hear nothing... Just one voice...
" Kirara!" screamed that beautiful voice.
I felt something in my arm, i think it's her hand... And now my head is lyied on her legs.
" C'mon Kirara... Y-you can't die!" said Minami.
I oppened my eyes, she's crying like a baby. Suddently i started to feel everything, my hole body hurts.
" Mi-n-nami..." i murmured " don't c-cry"
" I can't stop! I mean, you're my best friend Kirara!" she said.
I smiled.
" I want you... to realize my d-dream" i murmured.
" What?"
" Please... Become the Special A, for... me..."
" Whatever you want! I do everything for you but don't die please!" she said.
" I feel like i'm going to sleep, but before i die i want to tell you something..." i murmured.
I put my hand over her neck, pulled her over me and i kissed her.
" I... Love... Y-you..."
End of the flashback.
That was the last words she said to me.
After that day, i tryied my best to become a good pilot and now i'm the Special A but i'm always alone, i don't like to be with the others.
It's hard... I lost the most important person to me, i know i should forget her but i just can't...
What can i do?
Oshima Yuko
" Aaah... This is boring!" i grumbled.
" Yeah i know, i heard that we have a new expert, she's from SKE" said Acchan.
" I heard that too, her name is Kojima Haruna" said Tomochin.
" Kojima Haruna?" i asked.
Kojima Haruna, Kojima Haruna, Kojima Haruna... I've already heard that name before but... where?
" Ah... There she is" Said Acchan.
I looked at the girl.
Oh my god... This can't be real!!! kyyyyaaaaa she's here!
I knew Haruna since i'm six years old, she's my childhood friend.
" Haruna!" i called.
She looked at me.
" Yuko is that you?" She asked me.
" Yes! Haruna!" i run at her direction and gave her a hug " I missed you!"
She hugged me too.
" I missed you too my little squirrel" she said.
Then i touched her boobie and she gave me a pouch on face.
" You never change right Yuko?" she asked.
" But you're boobs are perfect! I want to touch them!" i said.
" Shut up pervert squirrel" she shouted.
" But NyanNyan..."
" Don't NyanNyan me!"
" Yuko, you know Kojima?" asked Acchan.
" Yes, she's my childhood friend " i said with a smile.
" That's true Kojima?" asked Tomochin.
" Yeah..."
" But you pouched Yuko..." said Tomochin.
" Because Yuko is the most pervert girl i've ever know" she answered.
" Really? She never act like a pervert with us..." said Acchan.
" See! Is just with you Harunyan because i love you *-*" i said.
" You're lucky..." said Haruna.
" NyanNyan don't ignore me!" i shouted.
" Ahh whatever" she said " Ah... Can you tell me where are the Special A?"
" We don't know" i said " She's always alone..."
" Eh... Why?" She asked.
" She used to be a happy and kind girl, but one day in a tournment, her best friend died..." I explained " they were very close to each other and since her dead Takamina never was the same, always alone, never talk with us just in the practice to give us orders..."
" I missed the old Takamina" Said Tomochin.
" Yeah me too..." said Acchan.
Tbc...
So what do you think?
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Ahhhhh~Takamina's best friend dies!! Her last word is I Love You!!! So sad!!!
:cry: :( :panic: :O2
~Why did Takamina doesn't want to mix with the other...Takamina hang on!!!
:yep: :O :roll:
~So even in here Yuko is a pervert!! That's Yuko..NyanNyan is her childhood friend!!Yay~
:wub: :twothumbs :grin:
~Hnn...Since this is AtsuMina...How would Acchan handle it..? Or would Takamina fall for her?Mou...I want to know!!
:panic: :inlove: XD :banghead:
~Hnnn!! This is an interesting one!! Please continue!! Can't wait for the next update!!!~
:P :lol: :twothumbs :thumbsup
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woa, good, im feel sorry for takamina :(
looking forward to the next chapter :3
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aww.....
Takamina... I feel Bad for her...
losing her Best friend like that....
Can't Wait for the Next Chap.!!
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woa~ the flashback got me in tears XD but I really like the start of this story :twothumbs
will be waiting for more :grin:
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Air force tournament...Was very harsh I would say...
They should not have used real bullet here... It's only tournament for ranking right...
There was no need for killing and injuring the opponents...
Though the death of Kirara could be concluded as an accident... But it was very harsh...
The air force lost a very good soldier...
Poor Minami ... lost someone that she loved lots... and she became closed off...
Ah... Yuko was such a perv... but only to Haruna... her childhood friend...
Haruna envied Atsuko and Tomochin... for not being sexual harass by Yuko all the time...
Ah... how Atsuko going to be with Minami if she was so closed off...
So Tomochin, Atsuko and Yuko were friends with Takamina on training days...
What's going to happen next
Can't wait to find out
Thank you for the update
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aww takamia dont worry acchan will help you
hahahah my yuko changes never hahah ^^
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That is a tough one for anyone to go through it is the resilience in her to make her pull through :3
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update soon
i like this ff
its different
sooo
UPDATE!!!
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awww.. minami a heartless person ohhh
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Atsuko-chan gnabatte
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Chapter 2 part 1
” Focus!” she shouted.
” But Takamina, we’re doing the same thing the intire morning” i said.
” Okey, i’m going to give you a break, but if you don’t do this correctly on the tournment, you’ll do this all day until you do this perfectly!” she said.
” Okey” i said.
I left my plane and went looking for haruna. I ran down the hall, i ran around the intire building looking for her but i didn't found her anywhere.
I opened the wrong door but i just noticed it when i saw Takamina there. She was sitting in a chair, looking to a photo that she has on her hand.
" Forget it!" i said.
" What are you doing here?" she asked.
" Takamina you have to forget her! Stop blaming your self, it's not your fault!" i said.
" Then who is?" she asked.
" Takamina, listen to me!" i said " I know, everybody knows that is hard, lost someone that i love is the worst thing that could happend to me but that is part of the past! You've to live the present and look for the future!" " Yuko... Do you know, what were her last words?" she asked almost crying " I loved her for years, i though that she would hate me if i confessed my true feelings to her, and seconds before her death... She said that she loved me" now she was crying " Do you know how i felt in that moment?!"
" You're stuck in the past! I know how frustated you felt, but you have to look to the present, you're the Special A! Do you know how students want to talk with you? Hear your voice? And you're always here... Alone... You have to make new friends, you have Acchan, Tomochin they're woried about you!" She just looked at me and i hugged her.
" You're not alone " i wispered " remember that"
Then i gave her a kiss on cheek and i left the room.
Takahashi Minami pov.
A few days passed and today is a big day, finally the day of the tournment has come.
The tournment was in the middle and the next combat was between Acchan and Yuko.
They're already flying and finally we heard the sinal to the combat start. The distance between the two planes was dwindling and then Yuko started to fire but Acchan dodget it.
" Acchan be carefull" i said.
" Takamina are you woried about me?" i heard her answer on my earphone.
I didn't answer.
Acchan was steering her plane and quickly started to fire missiles but she failed and Yuko took that opportunity to fire against her and she hit on Acchan's plane.
" Acchan, are you okey?" i asked.
" Yes, don't worry"
She lost her left engine!
" Acchan you lost you left engine, stop that fight now!" i shouted.
Then some memories passed by my head.
' Kirara get out of there!' My voice scream in my head.
" No" i heard both Acchan and Kirara voice.
" Kirara..." i murmured.
Yuko counterattacked and hitted again on Acchan's plane, she was starting to lost the control of the plane.
Kirara...Plane...More closer... To the ground... No!
" Acchan get out of there!" i screamed.
She didn't answer me.
" Acchan..." i murmured.
And then, when Yuko saw the situation of Acchan's plane, she gave up. I sight and let my body fell on the floor.
They landed the planes and when i saw Acchan out the plane, i got up and i started to run on her direction.
" Takamina!" she said and then i hugged her " Takamina?"
" You scared me like hell! Don't ever do this to me again!" i said.
She hugged me too.
" I'm sorry Takamina, i didn't mean to scare you..." she murmured.
End of the part 1
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The tournament is only going to bring up a lot of past memories but somehow it seems AtsuMina :nervous
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Poor Takamina...
She also loved Kirara... but was scared to confess her feeling....
And she knew Kirara's feeling too late... Now she left only with regrets as to why she didn't confess then...
May be she could make Kirara happy even only for a short moment... Ah... Porr Kirara and Takamina...
Yeah... Yuko was right, Takamina need to move on... she was not alone... there were Tomochin, Atsuko and Yuko that worried and cared about her
Woah... such a close call there... The situation with Atsuko and Kirara was the same... with different ending only...
Ah... Takamina and Atsuko were hugging...
Would this be the start of a new relationship...?
Would Takamina start to open up?
Can't wait to find out
Thank you for the update
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Ah...
the Tournament brought some past memories huh....
Maybe after that tournament she'll forget about her past... and then fall for Atsuko... :P :P
Thanks for Zee Update!!!!
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I'll be waiting for Zee Next Chap.!!!
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Ehhhh~ Takamina wanted to confess Kirara but is scared to..
:( :cry: :O2
~Argghh!!The worst part is when Kirara is about to die, she says the word that Takamina want to hear from her!!!
:banghead: :cry: :(
~Ouhh...When she is worried about Acchan, she remembered the horrible past...sad..
:cry: :( :O
~Wow Yuuko...You're really a good one!!~You're just not a pervert~~
:yep: :heart: :thumbsup
~For some reason...May i ask, is it AtsuMina already?
:? :huhuh :doh:
~Anyway...Thank you for the chap!! I need your another chapter/part of this story!!
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atsumina feels :heart:
caught my attention nice plot you got here :thumbup
looking forward on your next chapter :3
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Nice plot here..
Ah poor takamina..sad memories
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well i want an update~ onegai author san~