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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: Elo on May 28, 2013, 08:41:10 PM
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Prologue
Her I am on the plane who flys to the cold little town Akihabara
I will stay with my dad bacuse of my mothers lover
Dont ask me about her anyway after the plane goes down I see my father who waited for me
He takes me to his house and I see my room who was still the same
" I didint chaged it because I didint know what you would like so you can choose how you want it " said my father
" thanks dad "
Here I am in my new life
3 person pov
She begins a new life but she doesnt know what will wait for her
I want to write the next chapter but I need a pair so what pairings do you want
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Takayuu :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
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Takayuu?
Atsumina?
Mayuki?
I wish its Sayamilky tho :( there ain't many sayamilky fanfics D:
I still wonder, which pairing? Update soon! ^~^
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Enjoy
Chapter 1
The next morning
" Yuko wake up it is time to go to school" shouted my father which woke me up
Yeah you heard right I came yesterday and begin one day after that with school
I know I know but I will have fun in school
Flashback
The night before
" yuko you will begin with school tomorrow "
" why so early dad "
" because you should begin early and tomorrow is early ok "
" ok then let me sleep now "
End of flashback
Yuko pov
After that I go down to the kitchen I eat my breakfast with my dad
" so have you prepared everything "
" yeah I am ready for the first day of the school "
we finished breakfast He drives me with his police car
I think I didnt say that my dad i a policeman ? oh I didnt ! anyway now you know
We are here my new school
" ok my dear have fun "
" yeah see you soon dad "
I walk to the secretary room to take my timetable so that I know where to go
" ano I am a new student I need my timetable "
" name please "
" Oshima yuko "
I said and she looked to her computer
" ok oshima yuko welcome to the akb girls school "
" thanks " I said and got my timetable
The first lesson is homeroom
After I had it it was break
I saw familar faces there were the new friends from my class those were yokoyama yui
sashihara rino and Ota aika
" yuko-san If you want you can dit with us " asked yokoyama me
" thanks I would like to sit with you " I said and they smiled gently
Suddenly the cafeteria door opens and I saw 7 faces
" who are they " I asked one of them
" they are the rich family of our school "
" why are they so close to each other I mean they hold hands "
" they are together as in love together "
" what are their names "
" ok the fist you see are the Tomotomo pair "
" Tomotomo "
" yeah the fashionable one is Itno tomomi and the sexy one is Kasai tomomi "
" eh are they together I mean they are sisters arent they "
" no they are all not blood related
" so who are the others "
" the second pair are the Marimii pair the model like is Shinoda mariko and the gachapin like
is minegishi minami "
" next is the Mayuki pari the cyborg like girl is called watanabe mayu and the other one is
called Kashiwagi yuki "
" now we come to the last on and this is Takahashi Minami she is the only one with no one
special "
I looked at her she is short but has something adorable and manly on her this school is getting
interesting
" they say that no one is the right girl for her " I looked at her nd saw her smirk as she sat on the table where the others were
and spoke with her
" no no you dont have a chance on her "
" no-. I wasnt looking at her she just ... forget is anyway we should go class will begin "
we went away
Takahashi minami interesting let us see if you are so hard to break
what do you think I know it is short I will make is a bit larger in the next chapter
what do you think has the meaning of What are you ?
what kind of story do you think it is ?
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I want to see more of this
:D
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Just came across this fic...
Interesting... another Takayuu... :thumbsup
When I read The prologue... somehow... I seem to read the beginning of 'Twilight'
Even the 1st chapter... like the police car, seeing the 7 attractive people...
So this is a love story between Takamina and Yuko...
The Meaning of 'What are you'... The Takamina and others are not humans... some other species...
So is this also a vampire story like in 'Twilight'?
What's going to happen between Takamina and Yuko next?
Can't wait to find out
Thank you for the interesting story...
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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.... Was Lurking around and saw this....
Interesting....
I Agree with cisda83-san :yep: :yep:
Is this Supernatural? :? :?
So Curious!!! :panic:
Me Wanna Know!!! :panic: :panic:
I'll Be Waiting For zee Next Update!!!
:twothumbs :twothumbs
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Chapter 2 preview
" HEY what do you think you are doing "
I heard someone screm I looked around me and saw her Takahashi minami
She ran and killed her with something I didnt saw before
It was a fireball
The last thing I know is that she looked with sad and hurtful eyes to the killed person
I know it is not much but I will update the second chapter maybe today evening or tomorrow
Ashiya-san: thanks for you omment I love Takayuu so maybe it will be takayuu or will it be kojiyuu we will see
K-pop-j-pop-awesomness : thanks for your comment I will let you all be suprised hehe ^^
Kurosawa87: thanks kuro-chan I will let you see more ^^
cisda83: thanks for your comment I Know it seems like twilight but it isnt hehe you will know more in the next chapter
7sam14 : thanks you will now more if it is supernatural MAYBE IT IS BUT MAYBE IT ISNT ^^
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Elo-san
So it's not Twilight or Supernatural...
Is it 'Vampire Diaries' or 'The Secret Circle' or a original story...
Anyhow... I can't wait to see the 2nd chapter...
Erm... Minami with fireball killing someone... but she was not happy about it...
Interesting preview...
Can't wait to find out
Thank you
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Its Takayuu afterall xD Nice~ but I atill don't get the prologue but we're only on the first chapter ^~^
S-surprise? :D please update soon :)
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Chapter 2
After class ended my new frieends asked me if I want to go with them I didnt want so I
went home alone
I wanted to be sooner home so I took a way which lead to a dark alley
I saw some random guys they seems to be drunk but there were somrthing with them
As they saw me the smirked evily and gave my body a perverted look
One of them comes closer to me and I couldnt move I am scared
" hey babe what to have fun with me " he asked
" no thanks " I said
I turned around but he grabbed my wrist
" where are you going let us have some fun " he said as his other friends came
As they teared my shirt away I heard someone scream
" HEY what do you think you are doing "
I looked around me and saw her Takahashi minami
They looked less feared they grinned at her which made her angry it seems so that she frowned
and ran to them they tossed som punches but she dodged hurry and punched them on the face
3 of 4 weree down the lst one seems different because I saw dark wings
Was it my imagination or is that what I see wings
As takahashi minami saw them her face turned from an argry one to a dark cold stare
" As I thought you arent normal "
" you are right but If I am not normal you arent normal too "
what did he mean that she isnt normal
Minami ran towards the man but he fly away
" If you want to kill me you need more "
" I dont need more I need that "
As she said that something like fire burned on her hand
When the man saw the fire he looked scared and tried to fly away but he wasnt fast enough
the fireball burned him down
The last thing I know is that she looked with sad and hurtful eyes to the killed person
Minami pov
As I killed the drunk fallen angel I saw how yuko collapsed and carried her to her home
Because her father watched tv I went from the windoe in and lied her to her bed
As I wanted to out I hear her mumbling " mhhhh minami " I was shoked but then it warmed me
Yuko Pov
The next morning
I woke up and saw that I lie on my bed in my room
How did I end here I was in the alley
Maybe it was a dream but why did I dream of Takahashi Minami
Minami pov
As I lied her on her bed yesterday I watched her to wake up
It seems that she doesnt remember what happened yesterday
`Minami you need to come back´ I heard in my head it must be miichan since she can telepathy
Yuko Pov
" dad I will go now "
" but you didnt eat yet "
" it is ok will eat at school "
" ok have fun ......" As I wanted to go he shouted
" wait I have a present " he said and pointed to the motorbike who stands in front of the door
" see it as a welcoming present " he said and I saw 2 people come nearer
" yuko that are my friends Kojima Riku and her daughter Haruna you know her you played
with her when you were little "
He said and I bowed to her father and looked at her ` she is beautiful ´
" it is nice to see you again yuuchan " she sad and smiled a cat like smile
" yeah nice to see you again Haruna or better nyan-nyan " I said which made her smile
" you remember "
" of course how could I forget you "
We talked more and I saw someone shadow behind a tree
` Minami ? ´
what do you think ?
Maybe it will be kojiyuu
Maybe it will be takayuu
Everything can happen
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Takamina saves Yuko and takes her home but seems hazy with the details :nervous
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kurosawa87: I will wite about the details in the next chapter where it will be minami pov ^^
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Lucky for Yuko... Takamina was there to save her...
Eh... Fallen angels were going to rape Yuko....
Weird fallen angels...
And They seem to be afraid of Takamina powers....
What kind of mystic cretures Takamina is?
Is she a devil... well with the fires and all...?
Ah... the way you made Yuko met Haruna... was like the plot in Twilight when Bella met Jacob...
Well can't wait to see how the story going to turn up...?
Would Yuko and Takamina be together or Yuko and Haruna...?
Because Yuko seem to have taken a liking to both Takamina and Haruna...
Can't wait to see the next chapter
Thank you for the update
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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WOOOOOOOAAAAAHHH!!!!!!!!!!
Kakkoii~ Taka-angel!!!!!!!!!
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Now Nyannyan is here...
Soo...
Is it Kojiyuu or Takayuu? No Acchan so there'll be Atsumina?
Anyway! Update soon ^~^
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Kojiharu is here....
Kojiyuu?... Takayuu?... :?
or will more people Show up?.... :?
Curious... :panic:
Fallen Angels....
Is Takamina an Angel?... :? :?
Thanks for Zee Update!!
I'll be waiting for Zee Next Chap.!!!!
:twothumbs :twothumbs
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I felt there is some kind of forbidden love between takamina (angel or devil) with yuko... :cathappy:
BUT i guess..yuko will be with haruna 1st..maybe... :cry:
:lol: I dunno why..but I'll waited for Takayuu moment..must be heartbroken and sad..
maybe... :(
I'll waiting..waiting...for the next chapter..>,<
thanks for writing this n updating it..
:peace: :peace:
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Here is the next chapter enjoy ^^
Chapter 3
Minami pov
day of yukos first day cafeteria
As I entered the cafeteria I see a new face that I didnt see before
` she is kind of cute with her dimples it is like a squirrel´ I smiled at my thoughts and sat with
beside my sisters
" ne minami what do you think of the girl " I heard from miichan when she used telepathey to
talk privatly
" I dont know she is kind of ...... I dont know......" she looked kind of shoked it is mabe because
she dont hear it everytime when a girl attracts me
I dont know why but I followed her after school she seems to walk between a dark alley
it is dangerous there on nights because you never know what will wait for you
I saw 4 man who were drunk and attaced her I couldnt see it anymore so I knocked 3 out
but the 4 of the man was not how the other ones he was a fallen angel who is on the dark side
I didnt want to see him suffer anymore so I killed him with my fireball
I looked a last time and took the collapsed yuko with me
I am before her house but her father is awake so I went from the window and lied her on her bed
As I wanted to go out she mumbled ` mhh minami ´´
I dont know why but it maked me happy
The next day
I was before her house the full night to see if there are other fallen angels who wanted to
fight her
there werent but I saw 2 of what I can see her fathers friend
When I smelled the `thing´ from his freinds I knew what they were and it became dangerous for
me I is sad because I wanted to be more with yuko..........
I went home and saw my sisters with their partners
I go to my room and played the piano which made me calm and happy
` I hope I can see her again ´........
The next day
Yuko pov
I dont know why but I followed Takahashi Minami when she leaved the school from what I see
she goes to the forest
" how long do yoou want to follow me " she asked she knew that I followed her
" how did you know tha-.."
" because I smelled you from afar " she responsed
" what do you want "
" I want to know why I dreamt of you "
" dream ? "
" yes there is something but I dont know something that I should know "
" there are things that you shouldnt know "
" what kinds of things "
" things that you ever could dream of "
she turned around and walked to me I walk back but there is a tree
she is now before me
her face a little inches away she leaned forward and I closed my eyes
she giggled and touched my cheek
her gigle sound so beautiful and like a angel
" what are you " I asked she looked at me and leaned forward I didnt close my eyes
she kissed me passionately wich startled me I closed my eyes to feel the kiss
she broke it and looked me in the eyes
" you wouldnt want to know what I am " she said and when I blinked with my eyes she was away
what do you think
I know it is short
leave a comment
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That creates intrigue
Yuko following Minami maybe may create trouble for her in the end
We'll see in the next chapter
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short..but enough to make me smile...huhu..
yuko curiosity...means she did interest n want to know more about takamina.. :grin:
thx for updating this... :heart: :heart:
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Ah... So Minami was also interested in Yuko...
Eh... Minami said Yuko would not like to know what Minami was....
What was Minami...?
What kind of mystic creature was Minami?
What's going to happen next
Can't wait
Thank you for the update
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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EEEEHHH!!?
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The kiss!!!! THE KISS!!!!!
Yuko, good thing you followed Minami!!
I like Takamina here, she is mysterious and aggressive.... :twothumbs
I want to know what happens next, update SOON!!
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Heeee~Takamina too did follow Yuko and Yuko too follow Takamina..i see!!~LOL
:yep: XD :lol:
~Ahh...What is Takamina? Who is she, the real her? Who? I want to know!!!!
:? :w00t: :panic:
~Uhhhh...The kiss, wow Takamina, you're behaving like a COOL person...KAKKOIII!!~
:inlove: :twothumbs :wub:
~Huhuhuh!!! Don't know if its TakYuu or KojiYuu...Ughhh!!! My head is full of curiosity!!!
:banghead: XD :P
~I'll be waiting for the next update!! Thank you!!~ Nice one~~
:thumbsup :twothumbs :bow:
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takayuu :twothumbs