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Posting this thread as a month long countdown on Atsuko's upcoming 22nd birthday on the 10th of July.
You can post anything you want regarding on how to surprise Acchan or what birthday happenings would you like her to celebrate etch.
Basically this is an OS/drabble/script so anyone can post as long as Atsuko is there.
You can ship her to anyone you like Takamina/Kai, Yuko, Tomochin etch. (if you know what I mean)
This must not contain perv (of course I'll check it) you can but there's a proper section for that so lets just transfer it :3
You can pm me for questions and clarifications THANKS!
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Not You, Not Me but Us (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35759.msg1193232#msg1193232) by Yuichii
Not So Banal of A Present (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35759.msg1193551#msg1193551) by sakura_drop_
Tsun tsun or Dere dere? (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35759.msg1198336#msg1198336) by sakura_drop_
A Thanks to the Rain (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35759.msg1198609#msg1198609) by sakura_drop_
My beautiful (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35759.msg1202759#msg1202759) by sakura_drop_
Advance Birthday Present (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35759.msg1194873#msg1194873) by Rukaeru
VITAMIN (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35759.msg1197039#msg1197039) by Rukaeru
STUPID GAME (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35759.msg1197135#msg1197135) by Rukaeru
Online Celebration (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35759.msg1196043#msg1196043) by karupin12
Announcements (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35759.msg1196241#msg1196241) by AshuraX
From 0 to 24 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35759.msg1196742#msg1196742) by chemicalstar
Just To Check (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35759.msg1197482#msg1197482) by fausto
I wish You (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35759.msg1198351#msg1198351) by ichikawa
IN YOUR BLANKET (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35759.msg1198924#msg1198924) by moekare
Troublemaker (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35759.msg1199787#msg1199787) by chiqinna
The Last Something That Meant Anything (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35759.msg1202539#msg1202539) by flean
The Last Something That Meant Anything Part II (http://flean.thecrazy.me/the-last-something-that-meant-anything-part-2.html)by flean
Entry #16 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35759.msg1202699#msg1202699) by miyumi
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How to surprise Acchan?
I can't think of anything but perverted sekuhara =w=''
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THIS IS COOL! I WONDER WHO WILL POST FIRST. :deco:
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Entry#1
Mia-san requested me to write one this morning and I promised to posted this fic before 12. I don't have much time to write, so I'm really sorry if my story not really that good. :nervous [I was late for 8 minutes! I'm really sorry Mia-san]
Title : Not You, Not Me but Us (weird title! I know! :lol:)
Paring : AtsuMina
Words : so many words + warning for weird english usage
:same [Not You, Not Me but Us]
Minami wakes up with the very annoying sound of her alarm clock. She opens her eyes and presses the clock’s button to allow her to sleep ten more minutes. She was about to fall back asleep again when she heard a sound from downstairs, the front door unlocking and then locking again. She turned around and layed her left arm on the bed. It was empty. She opened her eyes and started looking around.
“Atsuko?” She sat up on her bed and looked over at the clock; it was just past 5 a.m.
Minami decided to get out of bed and look for Acchan. When Minami was in the living room, she heard Atsuko’s voice talking to someone over the phone.
“No problem Mari-chan, we can have the party in my house. Of course Minami wouldn’t mind about it. Yes, sure. See you later then, okay bye.” Atsuko hung up and put her phone in her pocket.
Grabbing her bag before going upstairs, Atsuko was surprised to see that Minami was standing there. Perfectly silent looking at her.
“You just got home?” Minami asked, folding her arms across her chest.
“Oh, Minami. Y-Yea I just got home.” Atsuko said with a faint smile on her face. “I was busy going through our clients files that I lost track of time.”
“Again?” Minami asked with a frown.
“I’m sorry okay, you know me when I’m working right?” Atsuko explained, hoping Minami would understand.
“I thought we had a deal? You promised to text me if you’re going to be late again.” Minami said.
“We did. But like I said, I lost track of time. I didn’t plan to be late okay?"
“You should’ve texted or called!”
“I know I should’ve texted you. I know you’re worried about me but I’ve told you countless times that I’ll be fine! I know how to take care of myself Minami.”
“How can I’m not worried if you keep going on like this?”
“Minami please? Can we not argue now? I’m really tired.”
“It’s just a simple text, how hard could it be for you to send me one?”
“You know what? If you really trust me, you wouldn’t be like this!”
“What?”
“You really need to control that jealousy of yours! I was busy working! And not flirting around until 4am in the morning!”
“Jealous? You think I’m doing this out of jealousy? I’m being like this because I really care about you! Can’t you see that?”
“Just stop it okay?! Since we moved in together the only thing we do is arguing! Argue! Argue! Argue! And I’m sick of it Minami!”
“No we’re not! We’re just discussing.”
“Why did you have to make everything complicated Minami? I thought you understand me! Have faith in me, that’s all I’m asking for.”
“Of course I have faith in you! I trust you more than anyone else! Is it wrong for me to care about you?”
“No, you’re not wrong. But with you being overprotective around me, it’s suffocating me!” Atsuko said, with her voice piercing through her lover’s heart like a knife.
With what being said, both of them kept silent. Hurt was written clearly on both of their faces. Atsuko quickly run upstairs leaving Minami behind with tears began to form at the corners of her eyes. The usual Minami’s calm demeanor slowly cracking as she thought more and more about what Atsuko have said to her. She sighed and silently laughed to herself.
“The overprotective Minami you once loved is suffocating you now?” Tears silently made their way down her face.
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During lunch hour, Minami decided to find a suitable gift for Atsuko. Apparently she was too busy as well to remember that today is Atsuko’s birthday. Only when she heard Atsuko talking to Mariko about a party that she remembered she didn't buy any present for Atsuko yet. She walked around downtown for hours but she can’t seem to find the right birthday gift for Atsuko until she walked pass a jewellery boutique’s display and saw a sign of custom design bracelet and jewellery.
“Should I get her that?” Minami asked herself. She stared at the display for a while before she shook her head. “Nah, maybe not this time.”
Minami started walking again to continue her quest for Atsuko present but stopped only a few steps after. She turns herself and quickly went into the jewellery boutique.
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Later that night, everyone gathered in Atsuko’s house. She invited some of her old classmates in university and her law firm friends. With mariko as the organizer, nothing could go wrong as everyone were having fun with the music, beverages and delicious food that was made especially for Atsuko, their ace attorney in their law firm. It took them a while before they realize that the ace attorney lover is not present at the party.
“Acchan, where is Minami?” asked Mariko while she handed a glass of wine to Atsuko.
“Oh! Um- Minami wa- busy?” Atsuko answered before taking a large gulp of her wine.
“Busy? How can she choose work over you?” Mariko asked before taking a sip of her wine. “That’s the most insensitive thing you can do as a lover.”
Atsuko, who was half-way drinking her wine, almost choked upon Mariko’s words because that was actually what happened 3 months ago on Minami’s birthday. She was so busy with so many cases that she couldn’t keep her promise with Minami to have a romantic dinner together.
“I don’t see what you really see in her? She's just a dance instructor in a small dance studio, compared to you, you’re one of the board directors in one of the biggest law firm in Japan!” Mariko stirred the wine in her glass slowly.
“She never leaves me even after she saw the different side of me.” Atsuko took a deep breath and continued. “And the look in her eyes, every time she looked at me, is still the same as 7 years ago when I first fall in love with her.”
“What you’re trying to say is that she hasn’t changed ever since?”
“Hm, something like that I guess. A never ending love? I think I'm being greedy when it comes to love.” Atsuko says with a laugh.
“As long you two are happy, I will always give you my support okay?” Mariko raised her wine glass. They both clinked their glasses together and gulped down their wine.
“Ah! Yuko, you’re here!” Atsuko said when she saw Yuko walking toward their direction.
“Happy Birthday Acchan!” Yuko said and hugged her best friend.
“You’re late. You’re supposed to be here like 2 hours ago.” Mariko said opening her arms, inviting Yuko to hug her which she did.
“Sorry guys, got myself into an accident a while ago.” Yuko explained.
“Accident?!” exclaimed both Atsuko and Mariko.
“Oh, nothing serious guys. I was getting off from work when someone bumps into my car.”
“No injuries right?” Atsuko asked, examining her best friend.
“Nope. I’m fine. But my car-” Yuko sighed.
“Who bumped into you?” asked Mariko.
“I don’t know. I think she’s a model or something? She wants me to compensate her medical expense as well as her car! But she’s the one who bumps into my car!” Yuko exclaimed.
“Don’t tell me you two had a fight?” Mariko asked again with a laugh.
“I work at a law firm! Of course I know how things work! I can’t let some model who thinks so highly of herself to look down on me!”
“So what happened?” Atsuko asked in amuse.
“I told her I work at our law firm and I will not tolerate her claims. But she just laughed at me and said that she will get me fired! Ugh! I’m so pissed! If I ever see that woman again! Arghh!” Yuko said, clenching her fist tightly.
“A model you say?” Mariko asked, smirking beautifully.
“Yes, I think so because she’s really tall?”
“You mean that tall?” Mariko pointed to a really beautiful lady who just walked in.
Yuko turned around and gasp in surprise. “How did- But why- She’s here?!”
“NyanNyan! I’m here!” Atsuko waved to her just as she come in.
“Acchan!” the guest quickly went over to Atsuko. “Here is your present! I bought you a big one this year!” she hands over a big red box to the birthday girl.
“Thanks NyanNyan! So big!” Atsuko smiled and placed the present on the table next to her before hugging her ex classmate.
“Because I know that Baka-chan is going to give you the small sized one, so I just thought that maybe I should make my present the biggest!” Haruna exclaim excitedly.
“Baka-chan?”
“Your midget?”
“Oh! Minami? What do you mean she will give me a small one?”
“Hm, well." Haruna turn to look at Mariko but the short haired attorney pretend to be really enjoying her wine. "A- Anyway, where’s is she?” Asked Haruna, looking around the living room for Minami.
“She’s not home yet. I think she’s kinda busy today.” Atsuko answered with a faint smile.
“You think?” Asked Mariko.
“Oh! Mari-chan!” Haruna hugs Mariko. “I'm so excited!” she whispered to Mariko.
“I have to make a call, excuse me.” Atsuko excused herself and went out.
“Hm, something went wrong with those two?” Asked Haruna to Mariko.
“Lovers. It's a usual thing.”
"The plan is still going on right?"
"Of course. Besides it's normal to have some conflicts before going all happy and lovey-dovey in the end. It was so typical in a fanfic."
"What?"
"Nothing, I just remember about the case I'm working on right now."
“Ah, none of my business then.” Haruna said before turning to Yuko who has been watching silently and trying to figure out the relation between the model and her two best friends.
“You!!”
“Yes, me?”
“What are you doing here? Did you follow me all the way here?!” Asked Haruna, half shouting.
“Yes!”
“What! OMG Mari-chan! We need to call the police! This person actually hit my car on my way here and now she followed me here!” Haruna took out her phone, ready to call the police.
“I came here to settle your claims, miss….?”
“Kojima. Kojima Haruna.”
“Ah, Kojima Haruna.” Yuko smiled. “Kojima-san, here is my phone number.” Yuko passed her personal business card to Haruna.
“Oshima Yuko?” Haruna read the name printed on the card.
“Yes. Just give me a call when you already know how much I need to pay for the compensation.”
“Oh, ok.”
“Let’s discuss this claims matter over a cup of coffee maybe?” Yuko said with a wink before she smiled, flashing her dimples. “For now, I need to enjoy myself a bit after a long day at work, excuse me.” Yuko excuses herself and make at stop at the mini bar.
“Is she really one of your colleagues Mari-chan?” Asked Haruna and tilt her head to the side.
“Well, hmm. More like one of the biggest shareholders?” Mariko scrunched her shoulders up with a smile.
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Staring at her phone, Atsuko was silently hoping inside of her heart that Minami would call or maybe send her a text message. Today is her birthday but the person she wanted to celebrate with is nowhere near her sight. She just realized her words from this morning probably really hurt her sensitive lover. Her words came out all wrong, all she ever wants is for Minami to understand her better. For ten minutes, she keeps staring at her phone screen until tears began forming in her eyes and not able to hold the waving feeling inside her chest, Atsuko decided to send Minami a message.
Typing…
Minami, I’m sorry for what I've said to you this morning. I don’t really mean it that way when I said you’re suffocating me. I don’t know why I said those things to you but I’m really sorry. Please forgive me. Onegai. Where are you now? Are you still at work? When will you come home? We’re celebrating my birthday now. Come home soon okay. I miss you so much and I love you. (｡’▽’｡)♡
Message Sent
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In a playground nearby her apartment, Minami was sitting alone on the swing. Minami felt her phone vibrate in her pocket; it continued to vibrate as she sighed and grabbed her phone but smiled when she saw the name on screen, it was a text message from Atsuko. She tapped the read button and read the message. She was happy Atsuko send her a message to apologize but at the same time she knows she was at fault too. She thought all this time she was protecting Atsuko, but today she realized that all the things she does was only suffocating the person she loved the most.
“Am I really suffocating you?” She breathed in deeply, holding in her tears. “What should I do? I don’t think I can go home and face you right now.”
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“Ha~” Yuko breathe out and smile when she saw her breath fog in front of her face. “Waiting for Takamina?” she asked when she saw Atsuko sitting on a sturdy wooden bench in a gorgeous garden behind the Ace Attorney apartment.
“Ah! Yuko.” Atsuko quickly wiped the tears on her cheeks and smile. “What are you doing down here?”
“I should ask you that. You’re the birthday girl and it’s your birthday party. What are you doing down here?”
“Well, I normally never take notice, but the moon looks so beautiful tonight." Atsuko said with a fake smile. "So I came down here for a walk.” Atsuko swallowed hard as she glanced down at her phone. It was almost an hour later after she sent the message but no reply from Minami.
Yuko walked over to the bench and take a seat next to Atsuko. “Hmm." She laid her back against the bench. "I know that I may not know exactly what’s wrong with you but, does all this have anything to do with Takamina?"
Atsuko lowered her head down. She doesn't really know how express all the mixed feelings in her chest right now. All she ever want is for Minami to appear in front of her right on this moment.
"She’s not the kind of person to miss your birthday like this.”
Tears slowly welled up in Atsuko’s eyes as the air also suddenly felt heavier around her shoulders.
“Let me tell you something. Do you know that according to recent research, the reason why many couples having problems in relationships are basically the same, which is.....a bad communication.” Yuko ended her sentence with a sigh. “So....You better start showing your true feelings because you can actually save lives if you actually do that. Your life and Takamina’s life. It will be such a waste for a 7 years relationship to begin crumble now, you know.”
Atsuko gripped her phone tightly in her hand, trying to control herself from burst into tears.
“And, do you know what feelings are, Acchan?,” Yuko began but stopped a moment before she continue. “..for me, feelings are like magical things in life. Do you know why?” Atsuko turns to Yuko, taking interest in her best friend words. “Because you can’t see it, you can only feel it.” Yuko hold Atsuko’s hand, gripping them tightly in hers.
Atsuko look down at their hands and slowly to digest what is Yuko trying to tell her.
“And to feel it, you must use your heart.” Yuko added. “Sometimes it’s so easy to believe someone when they’re telling you exactly what you want to hear. And it’s hard to except things you do not want hear especially from the one you love the most. Am I right?”
Atsuko smiled to Yuko’s wise words, because it was exactly what’s going between her and Minami.
“Open your heart, so that she can feel yours as well.”
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“You’re not being fair, Minami!” Atsuko’s voice surprised Minami that she almost fall off the swing. Turning over to her left shoulder, Minami saw Atsuko walking towards her direction and she’s not looking happy for a girl celebrating her birthday today.
“A- Atsuko?” Minami quickly gets off the swing.
“What are you doing here?” Atsuko asked Minami as if she would punch her if she did not give her answer immediately.
“I- I miss playing the swing, so I came here.”
“To play?”
“Y- Yea.”
“Do you know what time is it now?!”
“Hm, pass midnight?” Minami answered, looking at her wrist watch.
“And you’re still playing around? After midnight?!”
“I just sit on the swing, I didn’t-”
“I thought we had a deal as for us to text each other if we’re going to be late!”
“I know. I’m sorry. I was thinking too much that I didn’t realize it’s already after midnight.”
“Didn’t you receive my message?”
“Oh, I did.”
“Why didn’t you reply? I was waiting for your reply for the whole time! What time did you got off from work? Why didn’t you come home? I already told we’re having my birthday party, right?”
“I’m sorry. I’m really sorry, Atsuko.”
“Minami, why are you doing this? Are you doing it on purpose?”
“I didn’t mean to-”
“Are you, avoiding me?” Atsuko asked nervously, unsuccessfully managing to hold back a tear. She could feel the distance between them is growing.
“I’m not avoiding you, Atsuko.”
“Then what is this between us? Why I can’t feel it anymore? I can’t feel it anymore.”
“You can’t feel it or the door to your heart is still closed? I was always here Atsuko, right in front of you.” Minami took both of Atsuko’s hands in hers and looked at her like she was the most beautiful and valuable thing in her life. “If only you could see me trying all this years, just to make you open up to me.”
Staring deeply into each other’s eyes, tears started to flow down their faces. It’s all started because a stupid simple text message which they’re not able to committed in doing so. Just why two people who are in love could love each other for every stupid reason that does ever exist and turn it into a fight for every stupid reason they could find. Maybe this is what makes a relationship memorable, being stupid and doing stupid things together.
“Baka! We’ve been together for 7 years! Why do I have to open up to you! You’re supposed to understand me by now.”
“How can I understand you if you never tell me how you feel?”
“All this years, how did you love me?”
“I don’t really understand your question by how?”
“If I continue being myself, like this. Will you stop loving me?” Atsuko asked with a sob.
“No? I will love you no matter what.”
“Even if I changed and being mean and ugly?”
“Hmm, I don’t think so.”
“You won’t love me?”
“I don’t think you’ll ever be mean and ugly. That’s what I mean.” Minami let go of Atsuko’s hands and wiped the tears on her cheeks.
“When I become old and all wrinkles, I’ll be ugly.” Atsuko pouted.
“I have come to love you and accepted you for who you are to care about how you would look when you’re getting old. My pretty meter already broke after I met you. You’ll always be pretty in my eyes.” Minami said, blushing slightly.
“Y- You don’t have to tell me something I already know.” Atsuko said before she purses her lips to hide the smile that naturally invades her face whenever her short lover giving her the sweet talk.
“I'm just expressing my feelings, so you'll know how much I love you. Unlike that someone.” Minami said with a teasing tone before laughing.
“Tsk, you think I don’t know to express myself?” Atsuko frowned and pouted. She moved closer and brings her face closer to Minami’s.
Minami was surprised at first but she didn’t back away. She just smiles, wondering what her lover is going to do.
Atsuko then nuzzles their noses together making Minami to giggles and scrunched her nose before placed a soft kiss on her partner’s nose. “I love you.”
Minami smiles and tapped her nose before placing her finger on Atsuko’s nose. “I love you too.”
Atsuko couldn’t help it to blush when Minami is being cute and sweet at the same time. She hugged Minami so tight that she doesn’t want to let her go. Minami was about to wrap her arms around Atsuko when she’s suddenly got pushed away.
“Minami, is that the present you got for me?” Atsuko asked, tilting her head with an excited smile on her face when she saw the small maroon paper bag placed on the bench behind Minami.
“Huh?” Minami turn around where Atsuko’s eyes were looking at. “Oh, yes. Just a small a present.” She went over to the bench and took the paper bag before giving it to Atsuko. “Happy Birthday.”
“Thank you, Minami!” Atsuko placed a small peck on Minami’s left cheek. She could hear her heart beating hard while holding the present she got from the person she loves the most.
“You’re welcome?” Minami said with a small laugh. “I’m sorry if it’s not anything special. I tried to find the best present for you. But this is the best I can get.”
“It’s okay, I love everything that you gave me so far, because I know you’ll get me whatever your heart tells you to.”
“How did you know that?”
“Because it’s you, Minami.”
“You don’t have to flatter me that much Atsuko. It’s just a small present.”
“O-kay. Can I open it now?”
“Yea, sure I guess.”
Atsuko took out a small brown box out from the paper bag and her heart was beating somewhat frantically for no reason now.
“Open it up. I hope you like it.” Minami said excitedly, hoping Atsuko would like her present.
“Um, Minami. Can you turn around? It’s kinda embarrassing to open the present in front of you.” Atsuko said.
“Eh? Why? It’s not like this is the first time.”
“Mou~ Just do it will you?”
“Okay, Okay, anything for the birthday girl.” Minami sighed as she turned around as she was told to.
Atsuko could hear her heart thumping hard in her ears but she doesn’t know why she was so nervous right now to open the present. She swallowed down all her nervousness and Atsuko hesitantly opened the brown box. She felt her heart stop beating abruptly, her jaw dropping slightly with shock when she saw what was in the box. She felt goosebumps break out all over her body before a tear slipped out of her eye and went down her cheek.
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A/N: My first OS, hope you guys like it and thank you for reading :tama-bye:
credits : - original story by crappy writer
- proofreading by kana-chan
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That was so sweet and romantic!!!!
Thank you for this, I so needed this.. My AtsuMina feelings..
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omg my heart!
Its 1am here and im squealing and rolling in my bed like crazy
Kyaaaaa atsumina!
Pls continue this :on gay:
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That was cute and funny. I guess the fight made them realize how much they actually loved each other
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WeW
That was awesome O.O
Thank you for writing this!!!
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uwaaaaa so sweeeeeettttttt :deco:
this is why i love atsumina so much simply great :shy2:
thank you author-san! :oldie :kneelbow:
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Wise words coming from the Yuko!?! hahahaaha :glasses: and LOL changed her mind after meeting Kojiharu...I see what u did there... xD :on GJ:
This was so sweet and kawaiiiiiiii~ :mon inluv:
I think i just got shot in the heart... xD lol :mon lovelaff:
Reading Atsumina really refreshes my mood/day :on gay:
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ooh yuko so smart, her words...
please continuous this fanfic is great and cute :panic:
nice fic :inlove:
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Yuichii-san...
Not You, Not Me but Us... about Atsumina
Great OS there
Oh.. Atsumina were having lover spats...
Mariko was not really happy with Minami being Atsuko's lover... thinking that Minami was not a par with Atsuko... in term of status and income...
Ah.. Yuko was flirting with Haruna there... after complaining about her little incident with the cars' repair
Very nice drama plot there... about Atsumina lack of communication making them having a bit of problem in their relationship.
Wah... Yuko was such a good listener... and also gave very good advices...
AH... yeah.. at last they were together....
Thank you for the lovely OS
Can't wait to see more OS from you...
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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so cute our atsumina couple
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Awwhh.. :wub: :wub: :wub: that`s too sweet to handle :heart: :heart: :heart:
Yuko, where did you get that words? its too deep!!! :mon cute: you`re a genius~ :glasses:
AtsuMina is love.love.love :luvluv2:
Thanks for this author~san :kneelbow:
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So I suppose Takamina's present to Atsuko is... a ring?
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Niceee~!~!~!~!~Argh!!~ i want more of it if possible..ehehehe~
:twothumbs :thumbsup :bow:
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eh what was the present? please do continue!! :twothumbs
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Its ring!
my advance conclusion :nervous
love to see more :deco:
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kore wa dame desho kawai sugiru ( that is not good it is too cute )
I love this OS thanks for this ^^
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Okay minna, sorry for the missing things in the story, they are of no importance, but if you have any questions, you can always ask~ I love the story before me to death but.. ATsuYuu is what makes my heart flutter so badly... Mia, I know you wanted to read this, nee? XD Sorry for the weird story line...if there is one... Proofread by my girlfriend miyumi, by the way~ I owe you, honey~ :wub:
P.S. Banal - So lacking in originality as to be obvious and boring.
-----------------------------------Not So Banal of A Present--------------------------------------------
‗‗Year XX20, June ‗‗
“Yuko-chan!!! Yuko-chan!!! Yuko-cha~~~~n!!!!”
“I’m here, baka~!”
“Where?!! I can’t see you!!!”
“Behind the ghost~”
“Iyada~!!!!! Kowai~~~!!!!”
Suddenly the black haired girl was hugged by someone and screamed with all her might.
“Baka… It’s just me~”
“Mou… Yuko-chan….”
The said ‘Yuko-chan’ wiped the tears from the black haired girl’s face and hugged her in a comforting way.
“I was joking about the ghost. I won’t scare you anymore just don’t cry okay?”
“Un…”
“Such a crybaby you are Acchan.”
“Mou…”
“And so cute when pouting~”
“How can you know I’m pouting? It’s dark in here…”
“I can tell by the tone of your voice. It’s what grandpa taught me before he…”
The girl’s voice cracked but then she smiled widely and took firmly the black haired girl’s hand.
“Let’s go back home, shall we?”
“Un!”
‗‗Year XX30, October ‗‗
“Yuuko-cha~n!!”
“Nani?”
“Can I come over? Onega~i!”
“What for?”
“Ano….need help with homework…”
Acchan looked away innocently and waited for her friends answer. Yuko smiled and patted her friend’s head.
“Fine. But Riku comes over later, so make sure to study well so I can go on a date later, okay?”
“Un.”
“Atsuko, you’re such a cutie pie~”
“Mou…Yuuko-cha~n….”
“Haha…you’re blushing~”
Yuko chuckled and then went to her class. If only she turned around then…she would have noticed a hurt look on then fourteen year old girl’s face.
‗‗Year XX37, July ‗‗
“And CUT!”
“It’s a wrap everyone. Good job!!”
Applause was heard and everyone bowed to each other. A woman with long light brown and a bit curly hair bowed to everyone and then left. She didn’t even change her clothes. She just picked her bag and got into her car that was in the garage near the shooting location.
*’Kimi wa boku da’ ringtone*
She put in the headpiece and answered the call.
“Moshi moshi?”
“Acchan!!”
“Miichan? Doushita no?”
“Are you still in Tokyo?”
“Un, I just finished shooting. It was the last scene. Now I’m heading home to pack. Nande?”
“Ano…maybe you should come over…”
“Where..? Miichan…what happened?”
“Just come to the theatre, okay?”
“Okay…”
Being the good friend she was she headed to the place she wanted to visit the least of all other places. It just brought back so many painful memories from her past. When Atsuko reached the theatre there was so peaceful…too peaceful. Wasn’t there supposed to be a musical performed? When she passed the halls, the memories came back and she teared up. The black haired just had to stop for a moment before entering the theatre’s main auditorium.
~flashback~
“Acchan!! Catch me~!”
“EEH?! OOF!!!”
Yuko fell on Acchan with all her strength and they both crashed on the floor, the squirrel girl on top of then black haired girl.
“Y….yuuko….” Atsuko looked away in embarrassment and tried to pry off the heavy squirrel but it was useless. The auburn haired girl snuggled in the one’s under her assets and stayed there while murmuring something.
“Yuuko~!!!!” The girl tried with all her might, her face now was beet red.
The squirrel raised her head and flashed her charming toothy smile which melted Maeda’s heart.
“Nani?” Yuko asked innocently and was smacked on her head by Takamina who was passing by.
“Stop harassing our ace actress and come to help with decorations. If this musical isn't No.1 in the media, you will be at fault and I’ll make you swim in a sea full of balloons.”
The squirrel became all white and shivered while hugging Acchan tightly.
“Mou, Bakamina~ You’re so cruel…”
“Do not whine, Oshima and don’t you dare to call me something starting with B again.”
“Hidoi, midget….”
Acchan could see their General Manager’s face was turning very red and she knew Minami was about to burst so she decided to save her childhood friend and forever crush.
“Ano, Minami. I can always help you with the papers. You just have to ask me.”
She flashed her wrinkle-smile and Takahashi relaxed all of the sudden.
“Okay. Come when you have time, okay?”
Atsuko nodded and when the short girl left she was squeezed Yuko nearly to death.
“Uwa~ You saved me, Acchan~!!! Thank you~!!! I owe you one!!”
“Mhm… I’ll think about what you owe me, now go or she’ll send Mariko here.”
Oshima shivered even more and hurriedly ran to help with decorations.
“Why does it always work with president’s daughter I wonder? Is it because of that incident with balloons when Mariko blew it while Yuko was sleeping?” asked Miichan who appeared out of nowhere and helped Atsuko to stand up.
“Maybe… Anyway, wanna go and see how our juniors practice?” Atsuko asked.
“Hai, my waifu~”
~end of flashback~
She entered the hall and saw everyone was gathered there. Atsuko looked around and noticed a lot of new faces as well many of the old ones. Three of the main ones were not there though and the ex-ace coughed.
“Ano… Hello minna…”
All eyes turned to her and shock was apparent in their faces. They did expect for Miichan to invite Riku or Tomio but Atsuko was not what they expected.
“What happened, Miichan?”
“Well…”
“Why are you here Maeda-san? Shouldn’t you go back to your company? We don’t need traitors here to come and solve our problems.” Watanabe mocked and turned away. He hugged Yuki and smiled gently at her. “Let’s call someone else.”
Suddenly the doors blasted open and two midgets ran in.
“I won’t ever let anyone say things like that about Atsuko.” Stated Minami and glared at Yuuma.
“I’m sorry…” Acchan murmured and turned to run away but was stopped by a tight hug.
With all her body she felt that it was her crush who hugged her with ever so much power. They scrambled on the floor like at the old times and she felt everyone staring. She knew why. It was like back in the days. Whenever the current ace crashed herself on the ex-ace, it would always end up in Yuko being on top of her and snuggling in her assets. Though this time it was different. She always dreamt of this but not in such a place and not in such a way. For a moment she wanted to push the squirrel away as she thought it was a joke or an accident but when she opened her eyes… Yuko had this serious stare at her with gentleness and love hidden deep in her eyes. It melted Atsuko’s heart and she hugged her crush instead. They kissed passionately, ignoring everyone around them and enjoyed the moment until someone coughed. They both blushed and Yuko got up helping Acchan to stand up afterwards.
“So, Miichan.. Why you called all of us here?” a stare from Mariko who came just in time to witness the kiss scene didn’t show any signs of forgiveness, if all this was just a joke.
“I want to clear a misunderstanding. It is my fault that you all despise Acchan and I want to clear that up.” Yuko said and lowered her head.
All eyes were on her, even Atsuko stared in disbelief. What just happened while she was away?
“I know you think she left our theatre because she wanted to act badly for other companies but that is not true. I said that out of anger and couldn’t bring myself to say the truth. Until today.”
Yuko turned to face Acchan and held her by the chin while staring deeply in her eyes.
“I've loved you since forever. I don’t want you to kiss other men, I don’t want you to hug other people and I hate it when you give others more attention than me. We lost contacts because you left and I hated that. Being so far away from you, seeing you only on TV… I was a fool to think the feelings will go away. I know you left because of me and I am sorry.”
“Yuko…”
“Takamina said to me you had feelings for me…you probably don’t have them anymore but…”
She was cut by a tight hug from Acchan followed by a deep kiss.
“I also love you…” Tears trickled down Acchan’s cheeks. “Being called a crybaby, being called sexy, being joked with and pranked by you… I remember everything… And I don’t want to forget no matter how painful it is to remember everything.”
Yuko wiped Atsuko’s tears and smiled.
“You don’t have to suffer anymore as I will always be by your side. Nee….you know what day today is, right?”
“10th of July…” smiled Atsuko and shook her head in disbelief when Yuko pulled out a small pouch out of her pocket.
“One, I thought a lot and decided this ring is too banal and two, we need to date seriously before I propose to you…Mou, crybaby~”
Acchan couldn’t keep her tears from flowing and just shook her head. She couldn’t believe her sad days can change into happy ones in just a few hours.
“So…my crybaby…this is for you from me. Happy birthday!” Yuko flashed her smile and gave a pouch to Atsuko.
The actress checked inside the tiny pouch and found a beautiful flower necklace. She hugged Yuko tightly and whispered a ‘thank you’. Everyone clapped and then congratulated Acchan too. Yuuma was reluctant but with Yuki’s cooing he gave up and also said ‘Happy birthday’ to Atsuko.
“Let’s have dinner later at my place. I’m sure you miss my bed~” Yuko teased the light brown haired girl and Acchan smiled with a pout.
“Baka…”
“So?” the expectant look on Yuko’s face didn’t leave any space for objections.
“Okay..” sighed ex-ace and kissed squirrel’s cheek. “Let’s go and check up on the juniors for now, okay?”
“Hai~”
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sakura_drop_-san
Not So Banal of A Present
Yuko was so naughty... like to scared Atsuko... when she was younger
Ah... so Atsuko liked Yuko... but Yuko just thought of Atsuko as a childhood friend... no more
Ara... that was why Atsuko needed to work in other company...
At least... Yuko at last able to confess her feeling to Atsuko...
And They were happy...
Great sweet OS there....
Thank you for the lovely OS
Can't wait to see more OS
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Cuteness overload :luvluv1: :luvluv1:
1st fic:
My Yuukooooo is so awesome :mon inluv: :mon inluv: :mon inluv:
Haruna, you better pay attention to her or else i'll make her mine :mon evil: :mon evil:
About the gift, i bet its a ring? :hehehe:
2nd fic:
Whooaaahh.... Their make-out-in-public scene is so hoooot :on bleed: :on bleed: :on bleed:
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finally! acchan and yuko!! thank you so much for writing this!
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:inlove: oh so sweeett AtsuYuu
It's great :twothumbs :thumbsup :twothumbs
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I love bossy acchan!.. eat tomatoes.. now minami!
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Rukaeru-san
Advance birthday present
Very cute and sweet story...
But Poor Takamina needed to eat tomatoes too...
Great OS...
Can't wait to see more Atsumina OS
Thank you for the OS
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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I was inspired by someone and some events so I end up writing this :lol:
I don't know what else to say, so here it is.. Ja~ :P :heart:
"Online Celebration"
"Maeda-san, it's nice to hear that you will film another documentary this time, I'll look forward to it" a random man wearing a black coat greeted her.
"Hehe. Arigatou" she gave an awkward smile. Who the hell is he? Are they close enough to just say that?
Atsuko frowned when she remembered ‘that’ problem again. Yeah, that is a problem for her. Problem for her heart since she will be out of the country because of it; and it means, she will miss her heart’s general manager.
‘Takamina probably knew about it already …’ she continued on walking to her destination while holding her phone and thinking how she will say it to the midget.
*Typing …
*Delete ….
*Type again …
‘Aargg! What am I going to say?!’ Atsuko felt irritated to herself as she ran out of words. Then suddenly, a small familiar figure made her stop. Looking at the ground, she slowly raise up her head to look and check if her guess is right.
Wearing sneakers, loose jogging pants as well as the shirt while both of hands are inside the pocket. She can't be wrong. The small figure is the love of her life, Takahashi Minami.
"Takamina..." Atsuko called the serious faced midget and without any response, Minami starts to walk again. And that is a signal for Atsuko that she wants to have a private talk with her.
-Inside a room-
"How long you'll stay there?" Takamina asked without looking at Atsuko and still having those postures earlier.
"A month I guess?" Atsuko answered nervously. (A/N: o.a xD month? lol)
"Ohh.. I see....."
There is a moment of silence before Takamina decided to talk again. "So it means you're not here on your birthday? You’ll not spend your day with us? ……… with me?”
Without any second thought, Atsuko move a step forward to reach her obvious sulking midget and give her a hug from the back. She places her chin onto Takamina’s shoulder and hugs her tightly.
“I’m sorry for not telling you about this…. I’m sorry if I can’t celebrate that special day with you. Do you want me to back out on that project? I don’t want you to be mad at me”
“No no no… I’m not mad Atsuko…” Takamina finally turns around to look at her teary eyed woman. “I want you to go for it.. Don’t worry about me. We can still celebrate your birthday when you get back here” she smiled.
“But ….”
“No buts…” she kisses her cheeks.
“I have an idea!” Atsuko lighten up her mood when she thought of something. “Why don’t you go with me? Let’s go to Australia together!”
Takamina sighed. “Sorry Atsuko. You know my situation here. I can’t. I need to guide the juniors. I need to be in AKB”
“Ohh.. I forgot. Sorry General Manager” she frowned.
“Please give me your sweet smile. I don’t want to see that kind of face.”
Atsuko smiled. “Just a smile? I’ll give you more than that” she winked cutely then captured the midget’s soft lips.
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Right after Atsuko left Japan to go to her documentary recording in Australia, she and Takamina never fail to have a conversation each day. They call and mail each other; and even though they were tired, they still manage to meet online, just to see how each other looks at the end of the day.
Days passed by and the day that is supposed to be an Atsumina day finally came. Early in the morning, Atsuko felt disappointed and worried at the same time. She didn’t receive any message or calls from Minami. There’s really none. So to cheer up herself, she just thought that the midget might be busy or totally exhausted because of work.
Today’s recording finally ended. It’s already late in the evening yet there’s still no mail from the midget. Atsuko hurriedly went to her room and change her clothes. She was about to put on her upper clothe when her phone suddenly rang indicating that there’s a message from Minami.
“Be online. I want to see you. I miss you”
Atsuko’s eyebrows twitched. It took a day on waiting for her yet she will only receive this kind message? “What the hell is wrong with her? No greeting and her message is so cold. Haaay~” she sighed deeply. Though she was disappointed on Minami, she still needs to follow the midget’s order for she also misses her so much.
She logged in lazily with a frown face and to her surprise, a sudden incoming videocall indicator appear on screen. Right after Atsuko clicked the answer button, her eyes become wide as she also felt confused what is happening on the other line. There are four people who seemed like a cast in the movie World War Z not because of their looks but because of their riotous and energetic actions.
“Oh Acchan! I’m glad to see you!” a squirrel who is sitting at the center greeted her.
“We miss you!” a short haired gachapin followed.
“Otanjoubi Omedetou Atsuko!” the other two tall women greeted her with a smile.
“Waaaiiitttt !! All of you calm down !! I don’t know what’s happening. What are you guys doing?”
“We’re here to greet you! ♪♫ Happy Birthday to you~ ♪♫ Happy Birthday to youuuuuuuuuuu~ Happy Birthday dear Acchannnnn Happy Birthday to youuu~” the four sang in chorus.
“Oh~ Thank you guys. I really appreciate it. I’m so glad that I see you in this special day but ….” Atsuko stopped for awhile and start searching for her midget if she’s with their friends.
“Looking for Taka?” Yuko asked.
“Where is she? She’s the one who said that I should be online yet …….. Haaaay~” she sighed. “I miss her already but I don’t know where she is now.”
“We’re sorry if we made you disappointed seeing us here instead of her…” Haruna apologized.
“No, it’s not that I’m disappointed to see you guys …… it’s just..”
“Ah! Acchan! Who’s that?! There’s someone behind you!!” Miichan squeal and widen her eyes like she saw a ghost.
“Micchan, that’s not a good joke. I’m begging you, don’t scare me. I’m alone here and based on what I heard from the staffs here, there’s really something creepy happening in this hotel!”
“But there’s really someone!!” Miichan insisted.
“Miichan pleaaaassseee I don’t wanna see a ghost!!” Atsuko closed her eyes then suddenly, a voice echoed from her back.
“Do I look like a ghost to you?”
She quickly opened her eyes to look where the voice is coming from. She turns around to look who the person is but to her surprise, soft lips suddenly touched hers.
“Happy Birthday Atsuko” the person greeted her as she broke the kiss.
“Minami ….. What are you doing here?”
“Why? I’m here because it’s your birthday. You don’t want? Then I’ll be out” Minami aimed to leave but Atsuko pulled her again for another kiss.
“It’s not what I mean. As much as I want to whack your head because of this, I can’t. I miss you so much Minami”
“I miss you too Atsuko” both of them smiled.
“Ehem.. We’re still here, for your information!!” the four on the other line shouted at them that made them realize that they are not alone.
“Sorry guys.. the show is over. Thanks for your help by the way” Minami turned off everything by just unplugging the plug then quickly lift Atsuko from her sit down to the bed next to her.
“Thank you Minami. You really surprised me” Atsuko said as she wrapped her arms around the midget’s neck.
“Surprises is not yet over. I have a gift for you”
“Really? Where is it? What is it?” Atsuko excitedly asked.
“You’ll know once the lights are off~” Minami smirked as she lay down her princess’ back onto the bed then switched off the only light that is coming from the lampshade.
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to much sweetness
Bring me to a dentist now!
My teeth ahhhh
Karu!mia!
Arigatou~ :on gay:
Ps. I want *cough* fireworks part 2 *cough* *winkwink
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Ohhh!!!!! Smexy time!!!
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awwwwwww :inlove: melts my heart :heart:
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oh damn~! :farofflook: Takamina u devil~ :kekeke: kyaa...imaginations are taking over...gah... :shy1:
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awww takamina is so sweet
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So what did they do after the lights are off?
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Owww! Sakura_drop_san! Thanks for the AtsuYuu!
I'm joining in!
AtsuYuu~~~ Kidding.
-Announcements-
[8th June 2013]
"I, Shinoda Mariko, will be graduating from AKB48."
Her announcement shook the world. First it was my graduation, then WTomo's and now her... I feel responsible for them graduating for some reason... Right now I'm overseas, because I'm on break, I watched the sounsenkyo live and heard her announcement. When the sousenkyo was finished, I waited for 20 minutes and dialed her number.
"Acchan?" I could hear her at the end of the line. "What are you doing, Mari-chan?! I thought you were going to be staying in AKB for a while longer... Or at least until all the first gen graduates..." I blurted out what I was thinking. Silence fell on us for a few seconds but she answered. "This is my decision, Acchan..." I couldn't talk back. Whenever I'm talking with Mari-chan about something serious, she always ends up overpowering the discussion. "I'll see you on your birthday." she hung up.
"Mou! What's with her?!" I closed my phone and kicked the trash bin that was beside me. Luckily there wasn't any contents inside. "Always running up on her own! I know I made a selfish decision to graduate, but it's only because the others can replace me as the Center. Nobody could replace the big sister of the group!" I continued, yelling at my phone for some reason "BAKA! Mari-chan no BAKA! Old hag! MORE IDIOTIC THAN NYANNYAN!" I stick my tongue out at my phone. If this was an anime, I'm sure the phone would have that weird awkward emoticon which the characters usually have.
And NyanNyan would be sneezing at this time. Though that's impossible. Besides, a staff-san was watching my outburst... Which lead to an awkward moment...
===Meanwhile===
Kojima Haruna lets out a sneeze. Oshima Yuko, who was with her, calmed her down. Making sure that her pet cat isn't cold. "What's wrong?" Yuko asked her, while Haruna was confused. "I think somebody's talking bad about me..." She answered but Yuko lets out a laugh. "There's no way that would happen!!!" she starts laughing more as Haruna tries to protest, saying that it can happen. Suddenly, a wild Mii-chan appeared!
"Eh? Mii-chan? Are you crying?" The cat-like girl asked the gachapin. "I'm not crying!" Says the Gachapin while crying.
The two knew why she was crying but doesn't want to bring it up. "Hey, Acchan's birthday is coming up a month from now~ She's gonna be coming to the theater on that day since our General Manager invited her~" Yuko changed the subject. Haruna, who realized Yuko was trying to calm Mii-chan down, joined in. "Ah, what will you get your wifey, Mii-chan?" The Gachapin only looked down and pondered for a while "Wifey? I don't know... Probably some free buffet tickets that I've been saving up..." The other two were amazed that the glutton Gachapin would give her free buffet tickets to the other fellow glutton. The two then laughed. Realizing this, the Gachapin laughed as well, not knowing why.
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[10th July 2013]
"Acchan~" a midget pounced at me, followed by another midget. One with her famous ponytail and cute ribbon and the other with her funny laugh with her cute dimples showing. I hugged the two and greeted them after such a long time. "Takamina, thanks for inviting me today." I said to the shortest one. "Hehe, Takamina was waiting for you like an adolescent high school girl waiting for her boyfriend~" the squirrel-like girl teased her." Takamina blushed and reacted to it. "Y- You're the same, Yuko!" she pointed at the girl who was slightly taller than her. "At least I'm with NyanNyan~" she made a posture as if she was grabbing breasts in mid-air with her hands. 'This girl can be such a pervert. I let out a chuckle as I saw how those two reacted.
I went inside the theater and was greeted by all of my kouhais. Some even bowed at me, looking nervous. 'Ah~ I love how cute my kouhais can be~ I hugged each one of them, not controlling my urges. Then I saw a tall figure with short brown hair, looking at me, smiling. I went to her to settle our unfinished business.
"Yo, Acch-" "Why did you hang up the phone the last time we talked?!" I glared at her, not giving her the chance to finish her greeting. We didn't have any chances of meeting each other because of our works. "Ah, about that." she whispered in my ear and as a result, I blushed. She lets out her sadistic chuckle and walked away.
"MOU! If you always teased me like that, then there's no way I could ever get mad at you!" I shouted at her back as she left. I could see her figure giggling as she retreated. "Hm? Did you have a fight with the old hag, my wifey?" A wild Gachapin appeared and hugged me from behind. "Ah, Mii-chan. Long time no see~" I patted her head as she was acting all cute. I wanted to ask her why Mari-chan wanted to graduate but decided against it, since she probably has it harder...
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It was the day of the theater performance. This time, most of the senbatsu members are there. I was in the corner as I felt some eyes were staring at me. Some of them even came up at me and wanted to shook my hand, while some looked at me with hatred. They sang Namida Surprise and called out my name. I put on a wry smile, since this performance was probably for me. I was thankful but I'm thinking of something else right now.
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"Acchan~ Happy birthday~" They all, finished singing the song and called me out on stage. I decided to just go up and get it over with. The brought out a giant cake. I knew who made it, so I burst out laughing Others as well. One by one, they came to me and gave presents. Congratulating me on my birthday.
"Then, Mii-chan." Takamina said, calling Mii-chan forward. She fidgets, looking a little pale, and hands me some tickets(?). I reluctantly took them and read what was written. It was some free passes to an all-you-can-eat buffet that the restaurant I really liked hosts every week. I hugged her and thanked her a lot. She answered "Anything... for my wifey..." and died. Not really. It's just her spirit that's dead.
"Yuko." Takamina called another name and a squirrel-like slowly ran towards me. "Acchan~ Your birthday present is me~" "I reject your present" I quickly replied and she tripped. "W- WHY?!" she asked me with a dramatic face. "Because I don't need it..." I answered with a straight face as she dies like Mii-chan. Another one defeated.
"Sae." Her name was called and she, who was back in Japan for today came towards me and gave me a hug. "Happy birthday, Atsuko~" she says, embracing me tightly. "S- Sae... Can't... Breathe..." I thought I was the one that was going to die but it turns out I'm still alive. Typical. She took out something from her pocket and puts it around my neck. It was a necklace. The necklace that I wanted when we went out window shopping. I felt touched so I hugged her tightly as well. The fans were screaming out 'SaeAtsu!' which made us laugh.
"Yukirin." Seeing that she was called out, she quickly went to us and pulled Sae away from me. I chuckled as I saw the jealous Yuki and the oblivious Sae. Sae went back to her position as Yuki came forward to talk to me. "M- Maeda-san, happy birthday!" She bowed and handed me a chocolate. "Wait, you know this isn't valentine, right?" as I asked, she retreated back to her position, next to Sae... The others looked at me with scary glares... The fans were puzzled as well, some are saying "YukiAtsu?" and "New pairing?" questioning each other but after a few seconds, they roared and screamed "YUKIATSU!!!"
"Err... Mayuyu." Takamina awkwardly called forth Mayuyu. The young girl glared at me for accepting a chocolate from her 'Mama'. I can't do anything but smile. She looked away, gave me a chocolate and went back to position. "WAIT, ANOTHER CHOCOLATE?! This isn't Valentines!" I looked at Mayuyu worriedly as the other members looked at me in disbelief. And of course, the fans went wild.
"... R- Rena?" Her name was called. Rena went towards me and patted my shoulder. "Maeda-san... You have it tough..." she sighed and gave me a present box. I asked if I could open it and she nodded. When I opened it, I was speechless. I closed it yet again and looked at Rena in disbelief... She went back to her position.
"Jurina. Wait, what was that, anyway?!" Takamina called out Jurina and looked at the box in my hands. I put it away from other's view. Jurina came forward and hugged me. "Atsuko~" She hugged me, being friendly. I hugged her back. "Jurina~ Did you behave in AKB after I graduated?" She nodded, which brings out a smile on my face. She said that she and Rena both picked the previous gift so that was from both of them. She went back to hug Rena.
"Err... Harunyan?" she called out NyanNyan. She looked at me as if I did something wrong. She reached to her bag and took something out then gave it to me. It was cat food. I was touched and hugged NyanNyan. "WHY?!" I could hear the others shouting at us.
"Takamina~!" everyone called her out. She reluctantly went forward and gave me something I never imagined. It was a microphone. I recognized it. It was the microphone I had on my first stage in AKB. I hugged Takamina tightly as fans yelled out "AtsuMina!" and such. I didn't care. Takamina really thought about what to give me. We parted and all that's left was,
"Ah, sorry I'm late." A tall girl came from the front. She went onto the stage and looked at me warmly. "Happy Birthday, Acchan." The girl hugged me. I could feel my heart racing but I decided to ignore it and hug her back. "Thanks, Mari-chan" I thanked the girl. She says calmly, "I wanted to give you a present but before that," she faced the crowd and the members.
"I have an announcement to make." All the members and fans were shocked. Yet another announcement from Mari-chan. I sighed, hoping that it would be nothing serious... "I, Shinoda Mariko," she looks at the fans, the members and then me. She looked into my eyes. My heart was beating faster and faster. I instinctively checked to see if the mike Takamina gave me was on since I was afraid that the sound of my heartbeat would be transmitted to the mike. Though it was impossible, since the mike wasn't connected.
With the last bit of courage she has, she finally announced
"I'm in love with Maeda Atsuko!"
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karupin12-san
"Online Celebration"
Yeah... Atsumina... so sweet...
Atsuko is in Australia... and Minami in Japan... unable to be together during Atsuko's B'day
But Minami was so good... giving a very great suprise.... she flied to Australia just to be with Atsuko on her special day...
I like the way Miichan... acted... like she saw a ghost... Atsuko was so scared...
Great sweet OS
Thank you for the OS
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
AshuraX-san
-Announcements-
So great... Miichan would give a free buffet ticket for Atsuko's B'day present... very suit present for her fellow glutton
I can see lots of jealousy... going on among the members...
What... Mariko's graduating from AKB because she wanted to be with Atsuko...
EH... well that's interesting idea...
Thank you for the shocking OS
Can't wait to see more OS
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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karupin = make me think perv on the last line :lol:
AshuraX = this is shocking the title literally describes it but i find it cute :thumbup
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Miaaa….. As your request, here I made an OS. My first OS. Whoop whoop!!
“From 0 to 24”
Having a super busy days with very strict schedule, the actress Atsuko Maeda looking forward for her day off. Her manager said that she may has three to five days off next week, but she has to attend some TV show on her important day, her birthday, which will coming next month. She really wants to spend her special day with the special people for her. Family, friends, and the most important... Minami.
Later, Acchan ask her manager and offer a deal that she will go to work the whole next week, but she asks for having her day off on her birthday. Fortunately, the manager agrees about the deal. She will having her day off on her birthday, only that day, one day. Although it seems like that deal force her to do hard works, she bravely face it just to make her birthday happier. Planning to have a great celebration, she calls her beloved midget to mark that day as 'their special day'.
"Minami, are you free on my birthday next month?!"
"Aah, seems like you're so excited to prepare it, eh?" she teases her pretty princess.
"Mou... I have to. I'm quite busy so I have to make it special"
Although they talk on the phone, Takamina can imagine how Acchan pouts. She giggles. "Okay. I'm free.. Let's celebrate it together!"
"Seriously?!?"
"Uhn. I'll be there for you from 0 to 24!" Takamina said confidently.
"Thank youuu Minami!!! I love you" Acchan replies happily.
Hearing Acchan says I LOVE YOU always makes her blushed. Luckily Acchan can't see it now.
Acchan works hard every day, now she has a new little habit, cross marks the date on her wall calendar, counting down to her birthday. She's so excited as she plans a little party with her best friends at her apartment.
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Just a week before Acchan's birthday, Takamina is called to meet Akimoto Yasushi. He told her that their performance in Osaka on July 8th will be postponed to July 9th. It made Takamina a bit surprised. She had planned that the next day after the show in Osaka, they will come back to Tokyo so that on July 10th, they can spen their day off to celebrate Acchan's birthday. After the meeting, she immediately informs other members, and then sends Acchan a message.
"Acchan, I'm so sorry to inform it so sudden. Our show in Osaka will be postponed to July 9th. We can't go back to Tokyo before your birthday. We're so sorry for that.. We promise will celebrate it whenever you have a day off. Once again, sorry…"
Reading the message, Acchan feels like her heart breaks down. Her mind is full of disappointment. Now she has no choice. Her birthday will be a day off without any celebration as she had already cancelled all scedule for that day. Then, Acchan decides to call her mom and tell that she will going home and celebrate her birthday with her family at home. Besides, it's been so long that she haven't had spending her time with family.
At first she doesn't want to reply Takamina's message, but she realized that her midget will be so worrie if she doesn't reply it. So she finally text her a message
"It's okay, Minami. I understand. I will spend the day at home with my family. Do your best for the show, my dear General!!"
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In the evening just after the show, Takamina gathers all the members in circle.
"Thank you for your hard work. I'm so proud that we did our best and the people cheered up by our performance. After the event ended, go to the hotel and take enough rest. Tomorrow we still have a talk show event. Thank you..." Takamina said in polite.
The girls are in the changing room while suddenly, Yuko grab the General Manager's wrist and drag her out from the room.
"Yuuko!!" she yelled. "What happen??"
"Here!" Yuko hands her an envelope. Takamina examines it, guessing what's inside.
"It's still 9PM. You have 3 hours to go back to Tokyo. I told the driver to take you to the airport and a driver in Tokyo will be there to pick you up."
"What do you mean?" Takamina frowns, she opens up the envelope. Then, she finds a plane ticket to Tokyo.
"BAKA!! Go to Acchan's house you idiot!!" Yuko shouts.
"Are you crazy? That's impossible! Tomorrow is talk show event!"
"Your fans won't let you leave Acchan on her birthday! Just go... I'll tell AkiP about it. Hurry!"
Without thinking any longer, Takamina get in the room, change her clothes quickly and takes her bag. Yuko leads her to the parking area where the car is ready there. Takamina get in the car. "Good luck!"
Drives fast to the airport, Takamina almost left the flight but fortunately she can still get on the plane. One hour flight to Tokyo, Takamina arrives and a driver already there. She asks him to drives her to Acchan's house.
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Feeling so tired with her work that day, Acchan just take a nap on her bed when she arrives at her house. Her mom cooked her some her favorite foods. Late after the dinner, she has a talk with her family tells them about her work and dreams and also… about Takamina. It's not a new thing for her family to hear Acchan tells a lot about her cute midget.
Getting closer to 00.00, Acchan get in her room. She told her mom that she wants to go sleep, even though she knows she wouldn't. Acchan takes her phone, reading earlier messages from Takamina.
I'll be there for you from 0 to 24."
She smiles in pain, the pain that says the fact that Takamina is out of town for work. Acchan put her phone on the desk, she walks to the balcony. The sky is beautiful, there are a lot of sparkling stars and also a bright moon. She misses this moment when she always spends the night watching at the sky with her midget when she were in AKB. Just when the clock hits 00.00, Acchan lift her hands, close her eyes and turn her head down. She prays to God, that for her birthday wish, she only hope the best things happen to her Minami wherever she is now. And she hopes those stars can send her longing to her Minami.
As she finished her pray, she opens her eyes while a cracking sound heard. She quickly turns around.
A small cute figure, half panting but she tries hard to smile, Takamina standing in front of the door to the balcony.
With her teary eyes, Acchan half whispering.. "Minami...."
The older girl takes the initiative to move first, she walks closer to the taller girl and capture her lips with hers. It's not a long kiss but can erase Acchan's sadness that night.
"Happy birthday, Acchan" Takamina says while breaks the kiss.
"Minami how could you here?" Acchab said worriedly. She knows that 4 hours ago, Takamina was still shows her performance on a stage in Osaka. She watched it on TV. But now, she's in front of her, kissing her. It's just like a dream for Acchan.
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The next day, Takamina woke up earlier than Acchan. She promises herself to make a breakfast for her lover. Acchan's mom helps her prepare it so it finished faster. The lazy Acchan is still on her bed closing her eyes. Minami get in the room, bringin her breakfast with her.
"Acchan, wake up.. " she whispers in her ear, sending an electric shock to Acchan's body.
"I made you breakfast. Come on, let's eat it "
Acchan smiles, looks at her midget acting so romantic that day. She gets up and lean her back on the bed head board.
"Wow, looks so delicious!" Acchan said, she smiled bright. She takes a slice of tomato and about to eat it but then Takamina slaps her hand.
"Why?" Acchan frowns.
"I'll feed you, you're the birthday girl!" she grins. Minami takes the tomato by the fork and about fo feed Acchan. But then the birthday girl take the fork and feed back to Takamina.
"Aah Acchan, you know I don't like tomato" Minami avoid the tomato that Acchan directs to her mouth.
"Who said you have to eat it?"
"Eh?"
"Here bite it!" Acchan force Minami to bite the tomato. In a second, Acchan moves closer to Takamin's mouth. She licks the tomato in Takamina's mouth, she starts to bite an chew it until her lips touch hers. They starts to kissing as Acchan already bite the whole slices and swallow it.
"Now you still wanna say that you don't like tomato?" Acchan smirks, leaving a red blush in Takamina's cheek. To erase.her shyness, Takamina ask Acchan to o hang out together that day. Acchan easily agrees with her offer but they tell Acchan's mom first before they go.
"Mom, I'm sorry I think today I will go out with Minami" Acchan said while her Mom is having tea in the backyard with her father.
"No worries, honey. As long as you’re happy. Takamina-san is here, don't waste this rare chance" her Mom said.
"You're right. But I feel uneasy as I told you I would spend the day at home with my family."
"Ahh, no… Nothing's problem with us." her father said. "Besides, Takamina is our family too. Sooner or later you will be one of The Takahashi, right?" at this statement from her father, the two blushed so hard and look away.
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~ Talk Show Event ~
"Yuko-san, there's something incomplete with AKB48's appearance today. Where is the General Manager Takamina-san? I thought I see her last night on stage." the MC asks her.
"Takamina was going back to Tokyo last night. You know, it’s Acchan's birthday." Yuko said. Then she looks at the main camera "Atsumina fans out there, if you're lucky, I guess you can spot them walking around together in Tokyo!" Yuko pointed her index finger at the camera.
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Takamina takes her Acchan to the city. They had a great day together. The two walk to the park. They were so surprised as they saw some big posters of their photo and written there “Happy Atsumina Day”. At first, Acchan thought that it was Takamina’s idea, but it seemed like Takamina had no idea too about how people could put those poster all over the city. Takamina texted Yuko and told her what happened. Yuko just laughed at her, that’s the time Takamina and Acchan knew that it probably Yuko’s idea.
After a very wonderful day spent with Takamina, Acchan ask her to spend the night in Acchan’s apartment. About 11 PM, they finally arrived there. Acchan opened the door, holding her girlfriend’s hand, after a long surprising day that Takamina threw for her 22nd birthday.
"I can’t thank you enough for day, Minami. It was so amazing!!" Acchan exclaimed while hugging the older girl.
"Anything for you. It's your 22nd, we had to let it go down with a bang. You deserve it" Acchan began beaming a huge smile at Takamina, and Takamina returned the gesture.
Feeling so tired, Acchan walked into the living room and flopped down on the couch, pulling a blanket over her and shut her eyes, nearly falling asleep. Takamina followed her into the living room, a small smile toying on her face. She walks over to her half asleep girlfriend and whispers.
"Acchan, why don't you head to bed instead of sleeping on the couch?"
Acchan's eyes flutter open and then close again, "Carry me?" the younger girl asks sleepily.
Takamina laughs softly and says "Aren't you capable of walking there yourself, eh?"
"But I'm too tired to stand, Minami. Please carry me?"
The older girl smiled and leaned down, "Raise your hips for me please?" she whispered softly and lovingly into Acchan's ear, and her hips lifted off the couch and Takamina scooped Acchan up bridal style and headed off to Acchan’s bedroom.
Acchan barely realized she was in Takamina's arms and was on her way to her bedroom, without actually having to move and walk there herself. “You’re getting stronger..” she said while clinging her hands around Takamina’s neck.
Once they entered the bedroom, Takamina placed her girlfriend under the covers of the bed and tucked her in like she was a baby. "OH! I almost forgot to give you your surprise!!" Takamina exclaimed as she quickly stood up.
"Another surprise? You've already given me so many throughout the day!"
"I know but this one is different. That's why I saved it for last. Just give me a moment to go get it, okay?"
Acchan nodded her head and Takamina placed a sweet kiss on her nose and quickly ran off to grab Acchan's surprise.
"I'm so lucky to have someone like Minami by my side" Acchan thought to herself, as she untucked her arms from under the blankets and smiled. "She's so perfect. She's the greatest girlfriend ever".
As Acchan was lost in her thoughts about her girlfriend, Takamina was walking back from the living room, where she kept Acchan's surprise in her bag.
"I really hope she likes it and doesn't freak out. I mean, I could always return it but things wouldn't be the same between us if she doesn't. I really hope I'm not making a mistake with this surprise." Takamina walked back into the bedroom and stopped in the door frame, admiring her now wide awake girlfriend, who was lost in her train of thought. After a couple of seconds, Takamina walked to the younger girl and snapped him out of her train of thought.
"Am I getting my surprise now??" Acchan asked like an excited 5 year old on Christmas morning.
Takamina giggled at her excitement "Yes, you are, but I need you to sit on the edge of the bed so you're facing me."
Acchan did as she was told and sat on the edge of the bed, facing the older girl.
"Okayyy, I'm ready!!" Takamina got a little nervous and slowly got down onto one knee and pulled out a little blue box from her pocket. Acchan gasped and put her hands over her mouth while tears brimmed her eyes.
"Acchan," Takamina began "…these past almost 8 years, have been the most amazing, wonderful years of my life. Ever since we first met, I knew there was something about you that was special, and ever since that day, my life has been incredible. You are the most loving, caring, sweet, thoughtful, loyal, and amazing girlfriend anybody on this planet could have, and I'm so unbelievably honored that you've chosen me to love through everything.”
Acchan just can’t say anything. Her eyes start to teary with happiness.
“This ring right here, is a promise ring. It means that as long as you wear it, I'm always yours, and you are always mine. It means that even through the hate, the arguments and troubles, we'll always love each other no matter what. You mean the entire world to me, and I want you to wear this ring until we're BOTH ready enough to get married. Acchan, do you promise to be with me?" Takamina asked after she finished her whole speech.
Acchan was shocked and happy. She didn't know what to say, but she knew that if she didn't say something that said she wanted this, Takamina would feel like Acchan was unhappy. Acchan then practically attacked Takamina and kissed her passionately for about 5 minutes.
Once they pulled apart, Takamina says "I hope that was a yes" causing Acchan to giggle.
"Yes", she kissed Takamina’s nose. Takamina could not stop smiling at Acchan. She was so happy that she accepted the ring the way she did. She’s gonna marry Acchan someday. That thought made her get butterflies. Takamina then crawled into the bed, pulling Acchan beside her, neither of them bothering to change their clothes. Acchan nuzzled her face in the older girl’s neck, and Takamina wrapped her arms around Acchan's middle.
"Goodnight, Minami" Acchan whispered.
"Goodnigh, Acchan. I love you so much."
"I love you so much too. Forever…" the younger girl began the line,
"and always" Takamina finished. “Happy birthday again…”
And with that, the two lovers fell peacefully asleep in each other’s arms, happier than ever. Just as what she promised, Takamina has been there by her side on her birthday from 0 to 24.
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My first OS and I think it’s too long for an OS. LOL… But I hope you like it.
Thanks for reading, please review it
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Chichay died on june 22 2013..
Cause of death diabetes..
To much sweetness can kil XD
Omg atsumina~~~
Chem arigatou for the os!!
Yey yey yey :cow:
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All the stories here are SO great... But this particular by chemi-chan made my heart flutter and I think I need to visit not only the dentist but also the clinic... Sugar Rush is just too strong~ God that was SOOOOOOOO SWEEEET!!! My guilty pleasure pairing is wandaafuuru :wub:
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This OS really made my day :wub: I love it so much :heart: :heart: especially the tomato part, made me smile like an idiot at 2 am in the morning~ :inlove: :inlove:
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wooo atsumina overload! im loving these :deco:
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chemicalstar-san
“From 0 to 24”
Very good sweet romantic story there...
Minami flighted in to Tokyo just to celebrate Atsuko's b'day together with her...
Yuko was such a good friend... even covered for Takamina... and even arranged everything so that Minami could be with Atsuko on her B'day.
And the last bit... A promised ring.... so great...
Ah... if only it was true.... I would support them together...
Like it lots... Thank you for the lovely OS
Can't wait to see more OS
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Rukaeru-san
VITAMIN... interesting story and song...
Both Minami and Atsuko were so busy, that they could not have time to rest at all.. for their careers...they needed to make sacrificed...
Oh.. Atsuko was so stress that she was so upset with Minami and others making this suprise party to celebrate her B'day
Ah... Yuko was so good... asking Atsuko to be more considerate to Minami's feeling and not to mistreated Minami...
Ah... I like how Minami said... she would be Atsuko's Vitamins... and always be there for her and always make her happy...
Yeah... Atsumina were so cute together...
Ah... Yuko disturbing their passionate time...
The spoiler was fun...
Thank you for the lovely OS
Can't wait to see more Atsumina OS
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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OMG i loveit !! and the second part too.. But I want the smut scene too.. for the pervy section maybe?
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STUPID GAME
Interesting game...
Did they control the bottle movement or there was a trick to it...?
well anyhow... Atsuko was such a teaser.
Thank you for the another OS, Rukaeru-san
Can't wait to see more OS
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Ruka~~~ Write us a perv continuation, ONEGAI!!!!!!
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Ruka~~~ Write us a perv continuation, ONEGAI!!!!!!
Totally agree with saku...
Kuka continue this in perv!
Waaaaaaaa :panic:
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Hello guys :) I'm so glad @Miayaka invited me in this drabble/OS, thanks to you ;) I feel the pression 'coz I don't want to low the level of this collaboration, so I will do my best here! :roll:
ENTRY #9
Just to check
"I'm hooooome!!!" says Atsuko walking into the flat.
"Minami??" she asks as she didn't hear anything from the inside of the flat.
She slowly goes in the evening room and finds her midget here, eyes glued to the screen of her laptop.
"Minami!" she pouts.
"Eeh?! What?! Ah, Aachan, you're home!" the midget smiles, finally looking at her.
"That's what I said! But you weren't listening to me, you're so serious that you only focus on your work..."
"That's not true baby" says the general kissing her dear ace on the lips. "Do you want something to drink?"
"Hm... Yes, I want a juice!"
"'kay, let me give it to you"
The midget goes to the kitchen to take the bottle of orange juice and serve a glass to the tall girl.
"Can I borrow your laptop? I need to check something" asks Atsuko.
"Sure, go ahead"
The Ace sits on the chair previously taken by the midget and looks at the screen.
"You know, today we had a dance practice and Mariko was so over Jurina^^"
"..."
"You should have seen it, everytime the puppy was doing it right, Mariko was patting her, it was cute^^"
"..."
"I still thinks that Jurina is making big progress, she has the will and the same force than you, I think she could be great for this."
"..."
"I don't tell her yet because I don't want to influence her or pressure her or anything but..."
"..."
"Aachan?" asks Minami as she stops doing the dishes and looks at the ace. "I know you're not in AKB anymore, but could you say something?"
"... Minami?"
"Yup?"
"What is that?" says Atsuko pointing at the screen.
"What?"
Minami brings the glass of orange juice to her and looks at the screen, not understanding the question.
"Oh...that" she blushes.
The midget slowly deposits a sushi on her left nipple..." Aachan, I can feel your excitment..." She does the same thing on her right one before kissing her hardly...
"Minami?"
"Y-Yes?"
"What is "Eat you up/ Atsumina perv fanfic""?
"Hm, this is something made by our fans...because they like us..." she blushes.
"And, you're reading it. Do you read that often?" asks Atsuko getting up.
"I-I discovered it some weeks ago and they're so many... I'm just curious to see what they think and... imagine"
The Ace moans slowly when she feels Takamina's lips on her soft belly"
"Don't you think it's well written? Actually you should try it, this is really taking" smiles Minami.
The general was now biting the sushi that was on the collarbone of the gorgeous girl, snatching her another moan "Minami... You're so good, please don't tease me, eat it all and don't stop..."
"Well, I understand why you like it so much^^"
"..."
"So, my midget is a pervert who reads fiction about me and her doing some sex activity huh?"
"Are you disappointed?"
"... Not at all, I wait for this moment for a while, seeing the pervert sparkle in your eyes, I think it's very sexy...^^"
She jumps suddenly on the short leader and takes her lips to kiss her roughly, the midget feels her blood boiling under her skin, she loved those moments where Atsuko was so unexpected.
DING DONG
"Are you expecting someone?" asks Atsuko already lying on the desk, topped by Minami, her shirt half opened.
"Yes"
"Who?" frowns Aachan.
"The delivery sushi guy. Just to check if it is as good as the fans pretend it is with you...^^"
The next thing Minami sees is a bbig smile on Atsuko's face.
Sorry if it's not what you were expected :nervous :nervous, I will try to do another one, I love the idea of this drabble for Atsuko's birthday. :) :thumbup
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LOL. This is funny, fautso-san!! I can't stop laughing
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Just to check
Interesting story there.. about them looking at the perv. fanfic that fans made with them as the characters...
Simple but nicely done....
Thank you for the OS
Can't wait to see more OS
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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What a @#!@#^%U#$&^%&*%&^!!! :mon spit: drabble...
Atsumina + fanfic + sushi = genius! :mon lol:
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:wahaha: this is so funny!!!
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hahaha so minami reads atsumina fictions so funny
I will wait for the next updates ^^
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thank you for this :deco: funny atsumina
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Some time ago I was talking with a certain Maxine about how I want to write AtsuTomo and she said I should. I was procrastinating then but slowly I pushed myself over my limits of working while on procrastination. Yeah...this might be lame but... I hope you enjoy this. :on crazygran:
Entry #10. Tsun tsun or Dere dere?
She couldn’t sleep at all, tossing around all night in her bed until the alarm clock rang. It was 4am and she had to get up. Dressing up in haste she left her house and started running. The girl ran and ran until she was totally out of breath then she looked around. Realizing where she was Itano Tomomi let out a grunt and turned back. She did not intend to come to her house, especially knowing who was staying over there. The fashion queen started jogging back until she reached her own house. Just as she walked in she was greeted by the ever cheerful distant cousin of hers.
“Tomochin~! Ohayou~!”
“Ohayou, Miichan…” Tomomi said without any happiness and passed the hallway to the kitchen. “Where is Mariko?”
“Dunno, why?”
“Are you serious? I thought you like her.” Itano couldn’t believe her cousin.
“I do, but she is dating Haruna-chan, isn’t she?” Minami frowned and looked away.
“As far as I know, MariHaru is only for school fan girls. I mean, we all know Mariko is one of the most wanted Ikemen in our school and Haruna is one of the top beauties. One thing I know for sure is that deep inside Mariko wants to be a girly girl but her image is not letting her do that. And you know how hard she works and studies to get into the fashion university next year.”
“Anyway, aren’t you going to buy a birthday present for Atsuko today?” Miichan decided to ignore the ‘Mariko’ topic and touched a bit more interesting subject.
“Why?” Itano retorted and drank a glass of orange juice.
“Are you serious? I thought you like her.” Gachapin copied her cousin with a smirk on her face.
“Humph, as if I care. She has Minami for that.” The fashion queen left the kitchen and hid herself in her room so to avoid further questioning from the bubbly girl. She kicked a chair by the table and went to take a shower, her mind full of unwanted thoughts about a certain Ace of the school’s Drama Club.
They were all more or less friends – Drama Club’s president Oshima Yuko, vice-president Matsui Rena, ace Maeda Atsuko, junior Matsui Jurina; School Council’s president Takahashi Minami, vice-president Minegishi Minami, spokesperson Kashiwagi Yuki, junior Watanabe Mayu; Comedy Club’s president Yamamoto Sayaka, vice-president Sashihara Rino, ace Watanabe Miyuki, junior Kawaei Rina; Beauty Club’s president Shinoda Mariko, vice-president Kasai Tomomi, ace Kojima Haruna, junior Iriyama Anna; School Newspaper’s president Akimoto Sayaka, vice-president Miyazawa Sae, ace/fashion reporter Itano Tomomi, junior Yokoyama Yui. Being such a huge group of acquaintances in an All-girls-school there were lots of quarrels and love triangles and such. Itano always had her eyes on Maeda Atsuko but she was like a third or even fourth wheel between the constant contenders to the ace’s heart. Either it was Takahashi Minami, named by Maeda as the No.1 girl she would date if she had to choose, or Oshima Yuko, who was living with her under the same room, who she dated in the past and who was her best and closest friend.
Even though Tomomi was a good friend of Acchan’s and they both often went shopping in the past… One day Itano realized she had feelings for the school’s most wanted actress so she started avoiding Atsuko. They drifted apart and now they were just common friends with no deeper connection and Acchan grew colder and colder towards the fashion queen. Now they would only say ‘Hi’ to each other, share some fashion stuff and that would be the end of their conversation.
“We’re gonna miss the bus, hurry!” Miichan shouted and brought Itano out of her thoughts.
“Hai…” The fanged girl turned off the water, dried herself and dressed up in her uniform, not forgetting her pink trademark jacket and then left the house. She saw no point in eating breakfast today – usually Itano was a heavy eater and especially without the taste buds she would always enjoy Miichan’s un-delicious cooking. They got to the bus just in time and she sat in her usual spot at the very back by the window. Some minutes later Kasai dropped herself to the seat next to her.
“Ohayou~”
“Ohayou. Why so cheerful?”
“Grumpy… It’s such a nice day today, the sun is already up~ Chiyuu~” Kasai smiled but then her jaw dropped literally. “Nani?!”
“What?” The fashion queen didn’t even turn to her friend. She actually knew why the reaction happened.
“Miichan!! You cut your hair short?!! KAKKOII~!!!” Tomo~mi squealed and soon the whole bus were into discussing the newest Ikemen look on the school’s vice-president.
Itano just sighed and kept staring through the window, not interested in any of the chatters.
When they arrived at the school, she passed the crowd – they would always give her way – and went straight to her locker. She changed her shoes and then started heading to the classroom when suddenly someone hugged her from behind.
“Ohayou, Itano-san~ *chu*”
“Jurina… If you keep kissing everyone around...I don’t even wanna know Rena’s reaction…”
“Neechan worries too much… She should mind her own business on how to tame the black queen.” Jurina mocked jokingly and flashed her puppy smile. “I have only one thing in mind…and that is conquering a certain cyborg’s heart~”
“*sigh* Yeah… Can you let go off me now?”
“Why so grumpy..?” Juju asked, still hugging her senpai.
“I’m not grumpy!” Itano shoved the girl away and stomped to her class. She slumped on her seat at the back of the classroom and stared through the window.
Their first class was always with their homeroom teacher. Their homeroom classes were different from their usual classes because people were divided in different groups. If usually Itano had classes with Atsuko, Takamina, Tomo~mi, Yukirin or Rena, here things were different. At the beginning of the school year teachers would ask you to take a test, where you had to answer simple questions, like ‘Favorite color’, ‘Your hobby’ and etc. By the answers they sort students into different classes only for homeroom class. Her homeroom class was Class K and she was in it together with Oshima, Akimoto, Saechan, Miichan and some others, while Class A had Acchan, Takamina, Annin, Mariko-sama and Kojiharu. Class B consisted of Yukirin, Mayuyu, Sasshi, Kawaei and Tomo~mi; wMatsui were in Class S, while Sayanee together with Milky and Yuihan were in Class N.
A sudden commotion was heard in the hall; soon after Yuko pushed Miichan into the classroom while the twin towers blocked a huge crowd of fan girls from entering after the two. After Sae and Sayaka were safely in the classroom too, Miichan sighed with a wheeze and slumped on the floor.
“That was fun~” Yuko happily exclaimed and then turned to the fanged girl. “Your cousin suddenly has a sudden increase of her fan base.”
“It’s because I cut my hair… Everyone says I look Ikemen and stuff…” Miichan sighed and ruffled her boyish hair.
“Well, more chances for you to win Mariko-sama’s heart” Sae stated and Sayaka nodded in agreement.
“That reminds me!! Tomochin, did you buy the gift for Acchan yet?!” the squirrel asked and stared closely at the Tsundere queen.
“I’ll pretend I didn’t hear this…” Itano frowned and kept looking through the window.
“Why? I mean, everyone knows you love her. It’s only logical for you to buy her something.” Akimoto said matter of factly.
“Or take her to dinner, or your house~” Yuko said while wiggling her eyebrows. “It would be perfect to confess and stuff.”
“If you don’t shut your mouth right now…” Tomomi glared with her infamous Yankee glare.
“Okay okay…” Oshima held her hands up showing she surrendered. “Sheesh, what has gotten into you today...”
“Well, her PMS has ended recently so it’s not because of it… I think it’s because of AtsuMina fans’ recent huge increase.” Miichan said thoughtfully.
“Sou ka…” Sae met the glare of the fashion queen and pretended she didn’t say anything.
Then the bell rang and their usual school day started.
After school Tomochin was walking towards her locker and heard a stifled moan coming from one of the toilets. When she peeked inside – even Tsundere has her tsun tsun limits – she was shocked to find Haruna and Minami making out.
“Mi…na…mi….a~h….” Haruna’s silent moans echoed in the toilet, her nice round assets being nommed by the chibi SC president.
“I’m lucky to have you as my girlfriend, NyanNyan… So delicious….” Takamina’s fingers caressed the exposed belly.
It was all Tomomi needed to hear – or see – and it made her sprint to the lockers as fast as she could. The fashionable girl quickly changed her shoes and ran towards the school gates. Lucky for her, Atsuko was walking alone near them. Tomochin blocked her path and stared deeply into those beautiful orbs.
Acchan was surprised to see the other girl standing in front of her like that. Maybe she didn’t forget her birthday after all.
“Ano…I’m sorry…” Tomochin said and looked away. She noticed the crowd of girls gathering around them to see whats the commotion but she could care less. Itano was tired of running away from her feelings, and now after noticing the scene in the toilet… She just had to confront her crush.
“Sorry for what?” Maeda tilted her head. What was all this about, she wondered.
“For distancing myself from you…and I don’t have a birthday present for you…” she coped herself and looked back at those brown eyes. “But….”
“Mh?” Now the black haired ace was wearing an amused expression. Could this possibly be true? Was Yuko right, saying Tomochin has feelings for her as well?
Tsundere queen blushed hard yet kept her gaze on her crush.
“I love you. I don’t care about anything else but you and it bugs me…whenever you are having fun with someone else… I hate I when you flirt with Miichan or Minami…or even get close with Yuko… I want to be the one to hold you….” Her dere dere expression was unusual for anyone around and they all stared with eyes wide and jaws dropped.
“Silly… I love you too but when you started getting colder towards me…I decided you don’t have the feelings for me…” Atsuko cupped Tomochin’s cheeks and kissed her forehead. “Don’t run away next time when you have something to say.”
“…my image of being cool was ruined just now…but…happy birthday…” and she pulled Atsuko in for the kiss.
Yuko and others watched everything from the crowd and snickered and clapped their hands while Mariko-sama took loads of pictures. Sasshi and Rie started mimicking the two while Mayu filmed everything. Miichan approached Mariko and suddenly pulled her in a tight hug, while over-dramatically whispering sweet words to her.
“I think we should get a room.” Atsuko joked after they stopped kissing.
“Wanna go to the beach?” Not-so-tsundere anymore asked.
“Yeah, let’s go.” The ace smiled.
THE END.
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Entry #10. Tsun tsun or Dere dere?
Interesting school love drama OS
Like it... great pairings too...
Thank you
Can't wait to see more OS
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TomoAcchan saiko~!
Now to wait for any AtsuYui
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OMG! OMG! OMG! AtsuTomo kiss and TakaHaru making out!!! :mon spit: :frustrated: :mon fire: :on voodoo: :mon slapself: *cough* Sorry... This is my reaction...
I dunno why i read this.... But i feel i wanna read this... Nvm... Anyway, it is great one shot... :on GJ:
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Long time no see people! :heart:
Just a short short Atsumina from me :)
Hope you enjoy minna!
I wish You
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Inside a Cafe
“Mou, why must it rain tonight…” Atsuko sighed. She pouted and looked outside.
“Why you so upset?” asked Minami, her girlfriend. Seven years bond, they’ve been dating for 5 years. Although they have different direction toward their carrier, distance and time are not a matter for them. Their heart always connected.
“Didn’t I say, I want to play mini fireworks with you on the first second of my birthday?” Atsuko mad.
“Hooooaamm” Minami accidentally yawned. The fact that she just arrived at New York two hours ago, in order to celebrate Atsuko’s birthday. “Gomen, I can’t control my tiredness. I was supposed to sleep at this time in Japan”
“Are you tired of me?” asked Atsuko angrily.
“What?” Minami still adjust to process the sudden rage of Atsuko.
“I thought you’re dying to see me as much as I dying to see you” Atsuko crossed her arms and looked away.
Atsuko has been stayed in New York more often because of her new achievement to play role in Hollywood project. While Minami stayed in Japan, they’re like living in two different world. When the sun shines in Atsuko’s place, it’s the moon spreading light in Minami’s night. They can’t meet freely as they used to before, can’t talk everyday like they used to… They only thing that sure is, they have each other in their mind every single minutes of the day.
“I’m thinking of you every single minute in my life” Minami replied.
“But your attitude is the opposite of what you just said”
“What did I do?” Minami raised her voice a bit.
“…………….” Atsuko stayed silent to keep her calm.
“Aren’t I here?” Minami reached out her hand to hold Atsuko’s, “You texted me 12 hours ago, saying that you want to play fireworks with me on your birthday and I come. I’m here now…”
Looking at Minami’s teary eyes, Atsuko held down her temper. She looked outside again, “But it’s raining now, no more fireworks”
“What time is it now?” Minami asked.
“11:20 p.m” Atsuko said while looking at her watch.
“Still have time” Minami gave her a warm smile.
“How long you gonna hold my hand like that?” Atsuko picked up a fork and acted like she’s going to stab Minami’s hand, “How can I eat my steak”
“I’ll feed you~~” Minami grabbed her fork and stabbed on a small piece of meat. “Aaaa…” Minami paused her hand not far from Atsuko’s mouth. Just when Atsuko about to bite the meat, Minami pulled back.
“Mi-na-mi!” Atsuko growled.
Minami giggled to see Atsuko’s redden face. She put down the fork and stood up, still holding Atsuko’s hand, “It stopped raining. Let’s make some fireworks out there~” Minami pulled Atsuko to stand up, while the other hand grabbed a bag full of firework tools.
Minami was leading Atsuko to the centre of the crossroad, centre of the city. There, they stopped in the middle of the street among the people walking with umbrellas in their hand. Minami can’t stop her smiling face, thinking about the surprise gift for her beloved Atsuko.
“What time is it now?” asked Minami.
“11:59” Atsuko answered shortly.
“Let’s just standing here until the first second of your birthday~” Minami put down her bag and took something out of it. A small cake in tomato’s form with a candle on top of it. She lighted up the candle and singing the birthday song for Atsuko.
“Happy birthday to you~ happy birthday to you~ happy birthday to Acchan~ happy birthday to you~”
“Minami…” Atsuko didn’t expect to celebrate her birthday in the middle of this crowded street, in the centre of New York City.
“Surprised?” Minami said with wide smile.
Atsuko can’t help but smile and slightly smacked Minami’s head, “Am I supposed to blow the candle now?” When Atsuko looked carefully at the cake, she covered her mouth and giggled, “Why is there your face on my cake?”
“So you can eat me whatever the way you prefer to~” Minami grinned, “Hurry up, blow the candle!”
Atsuko giggled and closed her eyes to make a wish. She took a deep breath and blew the candle. Once she blew the candle. All the lights of the building around them were black out. Not long after, a familiar song was aired within the PV of Namida Surprise on the big digital screens at one of the highest building across them. Atsuko gasped in surprise. The people around them were surrounding them in a circle and singing along the song.
Happy! Happy birthday
KEEKI no KYANDORU wo
Hitoiki de
Saa fuki kkeseyo
Kimi no tame no PAATII hajimeyou
Happy! Happy birthday
Sakusen wa daiseikou
Tanjoubi
Oboeteta no sa
Konna oozei no
Tomodachi ga utatteru
Kimi no hoho ni namida SAPURAIZU
Minami playfully tagged Atsuko’s arm, “Need my help to close your wide spreading mouth?”
“Minami…”
Minami put a finger on Atsuko’s lips to keep her silent, “There’s more”
Suddenly the street lights, lighten up one by one, forming a light road in front of them. The people around them opened their formation to form a straight road for two of them. Minami held Atsuko’s hand to lead her to another path. The path leading them back to the café. Once they stepped inside the café, a projector was playing. The pictures of Atsuko and Minami were playing on the wall. All of the collection of them together from seven years ago, the pictures they took together. Each smile was bright and brighter from one to one in the pictures.
At the end of the song, Yuko’s funny face showed in the slideshow. She gave her greeting to Atsuko and then followed up by Mariko, Mii-chan, Tomochin, Haruna, and the old graduated members like Megumi, Erena, Kayo, etc. One by one said their greetings for Atsuko.
Atsuko can’t hold up her tears and let them flow. At the end of the video, all the café workers and those generous people said “HAPPY BIRTHDAY ACCHAN” to Atsuko. She hugged Minami tightly and buried her face on her shoulder. Minami just smiled at her silly Acchan and patted her head.
“Do you like my present?” Minami whispered.
“Baka…” Atsuko hugged Minami more tighter, buried her face on her shoulder.
Minami raised her hands up to signal all the crews to leave them alone. When the people all gone, Minami sneakily put on a necklace on Atsuko’s neck. Atsuko pulled back to see what’s hanging on her neck. It was a necklace with a ring on it. She looked closer to the ring and found something written on it.
Minami Loves YOU
Minami pulled out the necklace hidden behind her shirt and showed it to Atsuko.
Atsuko Loves YOU
“Let’s officially put it on our finger next year on this day” said Minami.
“Hmm…” Atsuko started to act playfully, “I need to think about it”
“No need to think about it~~” Minami pinned at Atsuko. “Let’s get married next year~”
“Hmm~ hmm~~” Atsuko playfully hummed.
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Somewhere in the city
Two of them were walking on the side of the river, holding fireworks in their hands (mini fireworks which used to be played in the summer).
“Beautiful” said Atsuko while looking at the firework shining in front of her.
“Ne, tell me~ What did you wish?” asked Minami.
Atsuko stopped walking and smiled, “I wish You”
Minami smiled and moved closer to Atsuko, slightly touching the thin chain of her necklace hanging on her smooth skin, “Is that count as a wish?” She touched the ring on the necklace, “I’m already yours… a long time ago”
“I wish You!” Atsuko said once again with her trademark grin.
Minami raised her head to look at Atsuko’s beautiful eyes. No words can replace what they feel right now. The silent of the night, the sound of the river, the stars and the moon all gathered up perfectly around them. Minami leaned in to catch Acchan’s warm lips. Just a simple kiss and a priceless love.
The sparks of fireworks in their hands flying around like a magical scene in the fairytales.
I wish you to be forever with me…
END
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I wish You
Great romantic drama OS...
Minami was so good.... making such a great surprise for Atsuko on her B'day...
Thank you for the OS, I enjoyed reading it...
Can't wait to see more Atsumina OS
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“So you can eat me whatever the way you prefer to~” Minami grinned, “Hurry up, blow the candle!”
pfffftttt... Taka giving hint for smut..LOL :lol: me and my corrupted mind.. XD
At the end.. Acchan's wish lol.. I wish for the same thing for both of them.... :deco: :deco: :deco:
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Kyaaa~ :inlove:
Thank you for this os, Ichi-sama! :mon lovelaff:
Taka has surprise for Acchan :inlove: I hope it will happen on Acchan's birthday :w00t: :inlove:
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rolling and squeling in my bed like crazy....
When i read the fireworks...
I think something green XD
Pervert mind on :ding:
kyaaaaaa my atsumina heart i cant take it..... :imdead:
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hiya its me ガルシア アレックス from FB just like I said I would I did I read this it was really refreshing for me reading this since its the first time ive read a fic with this pairing and I like it you did an awesome job :twothumbs I like how you had marimii in this loved it!!! :wub: hope to read more fics of yours :D
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Entry #12. A Thanks to the Rain
*PATA PATA*
*PATA PATA*
*PATA PATA*
"Mou... I hate you, rain!!"
The brown haired girl was sitting in the bus stop, all wet from head to toe, clutching her wet papers in her arms. Actually, she loved rain on any other day. But today...the sun was shinning when she woke up, and it was still brightly up in the sky when she was in the library studying. While the girl was walking home, suddenly it downpour-ed and her important papers were drenched in a matter of seconds. She didn't care becoming wet herself - she loved playing in the rain - but her papers were a different story.
"Of all the times you decided to appear when I don't have an umbrella with me..."
The girl pouted then puffed her cheeks in displeasure. She couldn't be mad for long though.
"But it feels nice, sitting here and enjoying your music."
She smiled and put the papers carefully on the bench then stood up.
"Well, let's use this opportunity, nee?"
The ponytail-ed girl walked from under the bus stop's shelter and let the rain fall on her. She carefully looked around. The streets were surprisingly empty. Well, more like they were always empty, just once in a while a car or a bus would pass. The street was known for its lacking of vitality as only the library and some houses with old people was situated in it. And it was not like you needed this street badly as passing it wouldn't take you anywhere where other streets wouldn't take you. In fact, the street was treated as an out of place street for some years now.
The girl loved the street for two reasons. One of them was that her favorite library was in it. The other was because not many people were walking past it.
She smiled and readied her stance. She hummed the melody while walking around a bit and then started singing.
omoidasu yo ima mo...
koi to kizuita natsu wo...
TOKEISOU no hana ga
hinata ni afureta michi
harewatatta sora ni
nyuudougumo ga mokumoku
atto iu ma ni fuete
naze da ka fuan ni natta no
ima iru basho to mirai
anata no migikata
watashi no atama wo katamukete
chokonto nosetara
sore dake de anshin shita
shiawase yo
umaku ikanakute
tsuraku kanashii toki wa
sonna watashi no guchi wo
kiite kureru dake de ii
yuudachi ni furarete
minka no nokisaki de
sotto yorisotta futari
iroiro aru nette waratta
ame sae tanoshikunaru
anata no migikata
toki ni wa kokoro wo yasumasete
shinpai ga atte mo
itsu datte raku ni nareru
nukumori yo
sorezore no sora no shita de
kagayaiteta ano koro omou no kanaa
ima demo futari wa
issho ni aruiteru mitai ni...
anata no migikata
watashi no atama wo katamukete
chokonto nosetara
sore dake de anshin shita
shiawase yo
natsukashiku setsunakatta
aa ano natsu yo
As if her song was some spell or chant, the rain suddenly stopped and the sun appeared from behind the clouds. The girl smiled and bowed to the sky.
"Thank you."
She was about to turn around when suddenly her eyes spotted a shy girl hiding behind a tree. The girl was blushing while peeking from the sturdy piece of wood.
"Hey...come here~" the chibi girl cooed and the black haired girl shyly walked out of her hiding place. "What's your name?"
"Atsuko..." the voice came out so silent that the brown haired girl was able to hear it only thanks to the street being the infamously quiet one.
"Oh, nice to meet you. My name is Minami, Takahashi Minami." The smaller one smiled and extended her hand.
The shy one took it while blushing even more and her eyes went wide open when she was pulled in a tight hug.
"I saw you all the times you watched me." Takamina whispered and giggled. "Do you have a crush on me?"
Acchan tried to escape the embrace but it was hard and it felt just too nice.
To tell the truth, she didn't want to leave those warm hands so she stopped struggling and sighed.
"I do like you..." the black haired girl mumbled, cursing in her mind for the street's quietness.
"Well, then.." Minami pulled a bit away and stared at the blushing girl. "Let's go on a date."
"EEH?!"
"A friendly one, you silly. I don't have many friends and you seem nice."
"Okay..." Atsuko's face now was really bright red but she shook her head and ignored her own shyness.
"Just let me pick my papers." Minami faillingly skipped to the bus stop - which made the taller girl chuckle - and picked them then extended her hand towards the black haired girl.
Atsuko took it and they started walking. The girl had a question and her curiosity got the best of her.
"All this time...every time you danced and sang here..you did it for me?..."
"Un. The first time I noticed you peeking I was attracted by your cuteness... And so I decided to make you smile. I am happy it worked." Takahashi smiled and held Acchan's hand tighter.
"Arigatou..." The taller one was beet red now and yet really happy.
"It's all thanks to the rain though. If not the rain, I wouldn't have met you as I never go to the bus stop if it doesn't rain." Minami stated.
"Un..." She raised her head to the sky. "Takahashi-san... The rainbow..."
They both looked at the beautiful art of nature and stared at it for awhile. Then continued walking towards their destination, hand in hand.
THE END.
P.S. I know it's not a birthday fic, but we can always pretend that it was Atsuko's birthday on that day and that she got a new friend - her crush - as a present :nervous XD
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Took me some time to read it because when I saw the migikata lyric, I play the song and re-read if from the start for the AtsuMina feeling~ LOL :lol: :lol:
I'm really into a simple AtsuMina scene recently.. This one is really nice~ :deco: :deco: :deco:
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yo~ :peace:
What I write it here would have next part which is updated right on Acchan's bday.
Enjoy~ :on lol:
IN YOUR BLANKET
Strange title, I know :nervous
When the general manager has come back from her unstoppable work;
Minami : Ah~ tsukaretaaa~ *lying on her king size bed* This bed is too big for me, no?
She started pulling the blanket to cover her body.
Minami : Time to sleep and another tiring day will start tomorrow morning.
The general manager can't sleep. Only the sound of the clock could be heard and it was quite distracting her.
Minami : Too many oshiris I saw today! I can't sleep!! *rolling around* Nyan2, Mayuyu, Yukirin, aaaaa!!!
When she tried not to think that too much, it was becoming more and more "giving pleasant" to her.
Minami : Thinking that too much and its tickling me. *something is moving in the blanket* Hm? *the thing is crawling now on Minami's chest* Eh, oh, waaa-what is this!!
The general manager started panicking.
Atsuko : *showing her head off blanket*
Minami : A-ATSUKO!!!
Atsuko : Enjoy the oshiri paradise?
Minami : N-no.. j-just..hehe... no-nothing to worry though.. *sweat*
Atsuko : I know you start forgetting about me.
Minami : That is not true, honey~
Atsuko : That won't work.
Minami : .....
Atsuko : I'm going to leave for Tasmania on July, so... we can not celebrate my birthday together.
Minami : W-WHAT?!
Atsuko : I was thinking that we probably could spend time together tonight. but you are actually busy imagining everyone's oshiris.
Minami : Atsukooo, come on, that is not like what you think.
Atsuko : I lost my mood already. I'm going back home~ *crawling out of the blanket*
Minami : A-ATSUNOOSHIRIMOMITAI~
Atsuko : Hah?
Minami : *touching Atsuko's oshiri*
Atsuko : >//////<
Minami : This is the real paradise~
Atsuko : >//////<
Minami : Then, you forgive me?
Atsuko : U-un... >/////<
Minami : Then, can we celebrate your birthday now? *pinch the oshiri*
Atsuko : >//////< ye-yeah...
Minami : But Atsuko.... your oshiri is smaller than Nyan2. You should ask her how to make it look bigger *pinching*
Atsuko : You only care with oshiri! Even you praise Nyan2's!! Minami baka! hentai!! *slap Minami's cheek*
Atsuko ran out from the room crying.
Minami : :err:
I dont know what I write! LOL gomeeen~ I would write the lovey dovey moment in the next part! See you~ :on asmo:
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Ah... very nice and sweet OS there...
Atsumina were so cute together...
Can't wait to see more Atsumina OS
Thank you for the update...
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Minami : A-ATSUNOOSHIRIMOMITAI~
Atsuko : Hah?
Minami : *touching Atsuko's oshiri*
Atsuko : >//////<
Minami : This is the real paradise~
Atsuko : >//////<
Minami : Then, you forgive me?
Atsuko : U-un... >/////<
Minami : Then, can we celebrate your birthday now? *pinch the oshiri
One of the best scenes I ever read!! :on bleed: :on bleed:
it was nice to be able to read your work again moekare-san!! :kneelbow:
I'll be waiting for the next part~ :hehehe:
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Yay moe!
Thank youuuuu Iloveyouuu hahahahaha makes me happy you're writing again :heart:
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Moe-chama!!!!! I was just recently grumbling to Flean that u do not update, and here u r with this awesomeness!!! I am so happy raitnau!!! :deco:
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Yay! Thank you, Moe-sama!! :farofflook: :farofflook:
I am very happy to see you write new story again!!! :on speedy:
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MOE!! I want moreeeeeeeeee :tantrum:
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MOE
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MOE
MORE
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:on lol:
mia just tweet about this and here I am! off to rush!
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Hi everyone! :D I have nothing to say so I just post mine here! hope u enjoy it! I tried my best~ :bow:
Troublemaker
Maeda Atsuko a.k.a Acchan
A smart beautiful girl from a rich family.
Always got what she wants.
Being loved by many.
She was really popular in her school.
She even have her own fan club.
"ENOUGH!!!"
"Enough with her so good intro!"
"I already know that! "
Author: err..o-okay takamina-san. I'll skip that part.
But!
Her scary aura comes out from her body when this someone appeared in front her eyes.
Its non other than...the trouble maker,
Takahashi Minami a.k.a Takamina.
No one dare to messed with the school princess except her.
Once, when the princess ordering food at the canteen, she ordered the right food, but when it already in her mouth, it was really, really spicy. Everyone knows the princess hates spicy foods. It took the whole day for her to endure the spiciness.
It turned out that takahashi disguised as the canteen worker and put a really spicy sauce into her food before the order comes to her.
Acchan knew it was her. She would chase her around the big school but to no avail...takamina always good at hiding herself.
When it was PE class, it was the best time for takahashi, especially when the teacher let them do whatever they want. Acchan would get the chance to chase her. It should be her advantages, no it is not. Takahashi is having fun being chased by the princess. She would never get caught.
No one can stopped takamina, they dont want to get in trouble. Even takamina have her own fanclub. 2 members only... they are Mocchi and Ray. The president is Ray and the vise president is Mocchi. They don’t have a good relationship, always fighting over the midget. But the midget eyes is only on the princess of the school.
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Its been a week, Acchan having a peaceful life.
'Hmmm...i wonder why she stopped disturbing me. Maybe she's tired already. ' thought acchan shrugged her shoulders.
"Hey Acchan." Greeted Haruna. Acchan's best friend.
“Hey, ah! Nyan Nyan, Are you free this evening?” Asked Acchan to her friend who sit beside her.
“Um yeah why?”
“Let’s go shopping! My birthday is coming soon, I need to buy a beautiful dress for the party.” Tells her.
“Okay! Hmmm…Your birthday is on Wednesday , I haven’t think what present should I buy for you…”said Nyan Nyan making a thinking pose.
“Mou…Nyan Nyan…I hope you don’t give me the same birthday present as last year. It always the same thing every year.” Said Acchan pouting.
“Hehe..okay! By the way, you looks different lately.” Said Haruna looking at her friend.
“Hmmm…maybe I finally got my peace time! Hehe~” said Acchan smiling.
“Acchan! Takahashi is looking for you!” said Mariko who just entered the classroom.
“What?!! No way!” said Acchan furiously looking around.
“Just kidding~” Mariko said with a troll smile.
“Mariko~~!!” whined Acchan.
“It’s weird, usually at this time you would already chase her through the corridor.” Said Mariko laughing.
“It’s not funny okay! That troublemaker~ I would not invite her to my birthday party night. Hmmpph!!” said Acchan crossing her arms.
“Yeah~ yeah~ it’s good that she stopped bothering you though.” Nyan Nyan tells her.
Acchan nodded.
That evening, Acchan, Haruna and Mariko went to shopping.
They goes to every mall searching for the best dress for the party.
Suddenly Acchan stopped and turn her head around looking somewhere.
“What’s wrong Acchan?” Asked Mariko.
“N-nothing.” Said Acchan then started to walk again.
‘I think I saw someone just now…’ thought Acchan.
After a while walking around in the mall, Acchan spotted something that caught her eyes.
It was a beautiful silver necklace with a small sparkling star on it.
Acchan smiles as it was the one she want.
“Mariko, Nyan Nyan!” Call Acchan to her friends.
Did not hearing answer from them, Acchan realize that both her friends is not beside her.
Acchan started to walk around looking for them.
Long after, Acchan saw them walking.
“Nyan Nyan! Mariko! Where did you two go? I was looking for you!” whined Acchan.
“Sorry Acchan, we thought you are with us just now.” Explain Nyan Nyan.
“Come on! I need to show you something.” said Acchan while dragging them to the place.
As they arrived, Acchan started to look for the necklace that she saw a while ago.
Acchan smiles faded when she saw the necklace is not in its place anymore.
“Ano, Miss, where is the necklace that I saw here a while ago?” Asked Acchan to the worker there.
“Ah, someone already bought it just now. I’m sorry.” Said the worker smiling.
“I see…it’s okay.” Said Acchan.
“What is it Acchan.” Asked Mariko seeing her friend looks sad.
“Nothing.” Said Acchan giving a sad smile.
After finish shopping, they just went home.
The next day, the day before Acchan’s birthday.
Acchan was with her friends at the school canteen having lunch.
They were talking and laughing.
Suddenly she saw a short figure walking to the canteen.
Her friends also saw it. They just look at her walking to buy some food.
“Acchan, be careful of your food.” Warned Miichan.
Acchan then look at the food that she ordered and examine it carefully.
“It looks fine. It taste good.” Said Acchan after having a bite of it.
Then she turned her view to the midget again.
Looks like the midget also looking at her…smiling.
‘What is she planning to do now?’ said Acchan to herself.
Suddenly Takahashi wink at her while walking away from the canteen.
‘what was that?’ thought Acchan.
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Acchan birthday party was held at her house.
Many of her family and friends was invited.
She wore a beautiful dress that she bought a days ago.
“Wow! Our birthday girl looks so beautiful tonight!” said her mom hugging her daughter.
“Thank you mom!” Acchan smiles replies the hug.
Then Mariko enters the room to looks for Acchan.
“Hey Acchan!” greeted Mariko.
“Here! My birthday present for you!” said Mariko while give her a present box.
“Thank you Marichan!” Acchan took the present cheerfully.
“And Mariko, Did you saw any suspicious midget outside?” Asked Acchan.
“Who? Takahashi? I don’t see her anywhere. Maybe she really stopped disturbing you since it was your birthday.” Said Mariko.
“Really? I’m just being careful. Who knows she would do something that might ruin my party.” Said Acchan serious.
After that Acchan going out to show herself on front of everyone.
Then a very big cake carred by the waiter comes toward her.
It was just a box that looks like a giant cake actually.
Acchan knew it, maybe someone would come out of the box and give the real cake.
As Acchan already on front of it. Everyone started to sing a Happy Birthday song to her.
As they finish, the cover of the big giant cake box opened revealing a midget with a cake on her hands.
“HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!” shout her making Acchan surprised.
Acchan’s eyes widen when she saw the one who’s inside the cake.
“You!!!” said Acchan mad.
“E-e-eto…”
“TAKAHASHI MINAMI!!! WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE?!” shout Acchan again.
“I was just-“ before she could say anything Acchan interrupt her.
“Get out of my house now!” Acchan said while asking the two waiter to bring Takahashi out of the house.
“Ehh??! But…I was…I did not..” Takamina could not say anything as she is being dragged by the two men.
“Calm down Acchan, let’s continue our party!” Said Haruna as Acchan manage to calm herself down.
She doesn’t want to be bothered on her big day.
The party went well.
After the party ended, Acchan started to unwrapped all her birthday present that she got.
She was really thankful that she got many present from her friends and family.
She was really hope that the necklace that she found at the mall was one of the present but, none of the present contain the necklace.
Acchan sighed.
“Whats wrong honey? “ Asked her mom.
“Nothing mom. I’m just…happy.” Said Acchan smile.
“Miss, there is one more present for you.” Said the butler as he give the small red box to Acchan.
Acchan took it and quickly opened the wrap to see what is inside.
Once she saw the content, her eyes widen.
It was the necklace that she wants.
Her smile grew bigger as she took the necklace.
“wow~” said Acchan admiring it.
Her mother just smiles seeing her daughter happy.
‘but, who gives this present?’ thought Acchan curious.
Then she found a note inside the box.
The note saying,
‘meet me at the playground near your house this Saturday at 7 pm.’
“mm? Who might it be?” said Acchan curious.
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Saturday night, 7 pm.
Acchan really goes to the playground near her house as she was really curious about the person who gave the necklace to her.
It might be her secret admire.
Acchan look around the playground to find the person but no one is there.
So she just sat at the swing and wait for the person.
After a while waiting, Acchan felt someone is walking slowly behind her.
Her heart start to beat faster.
Acchan quickly turn around as she could not hold her curiousity anymore.
“You!!!” shout Acchan. The person just froze in her place.
“D-don’t tell me…It’s you??!!” said Acchan pointing her finger to her.
“Yes it’s me.” Said her.
“Why it has to be you Takahashi?” said Acchan mad.
“Why? Is it wrong? Then you can give me back the necklace.” Takamina trying to tease her.
“W-what?!”
“I’m just kidding. Sit!” said Takamina as she sit on the next swing.
“What do you want?” Asked Acchan as she sat down on the swing.
“Do you like the necklace? Don’t worry I’m not doing anything to you.” Asked Takamina smiling.
Somehow, the way she talks to Acchan was soft and sweet. It making Acchan blushed.
“How did you know I want that necklace?” Asked Acchan.
“I saw you at the mall.” Said Takamina looking at her.
“So you were stalking me!” Acchan shout again pointing her finger at Takamina.
“Yeah so what?” Takamina said grinning.
“But…the necklace was expensive…and you’re not rich as I know.” Said Acchan.
“Well, I use my fan club money…” answered her.
Acchan was confused at first but suddenly she remembered that Takamina’s fan club only have 2 members. They are 2 girls from rich family.
Acchan nodded slowly as she understood it.
“Then why are you asking me to come here?” Asked Acchan curious.
“I just want to ask you something? Do you really hate me?” Asked Takahashi directly.
“It’s not that I hate you, I just don’t like you disturbing me all the time.” Answered Acchan.
“So you want me to stop bothering you?”
Acchan nodded.
“Well, I’m going to transfer my school next week. And that’s mean I could not disturb you anymore…” said Takamina sad.
Acchan also suddenly feeling sad when she hears that. After years having a troublemaker in her life, soon her life will be peaceful. It was good right?
“Actually, I like you, that’s why I started to disturb your life to get your attention.” Hearing the confession from her troublemaker, Acchan’s heart suddenly beating faster.
‘She like me?’ thought Acchan.
“I’m sorry if all this years you have been having a hard time because of me. I-I just love teasing you.” Said Takamina looking at the ground.
Suddenly Takamina stand up and walk in front of Acchan.
Acchan look up to see her.
As soon as her head look up, her lips meet with Takamina’s.
Acchan eyes widen shock.
Takamina cupped both of her cheeks.
Before Acchan could replied the kiss, Takamina pulled out then running away from her.
Acchan was still dumbfounded at what just happen.
‘What happen just now?’ thought Acchan.
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4 years later,
Acchan now is more beautiful and gorgeous princess in her college.
Currently, she’s having her birthday party at her house.
The party went well.
When she was talking with Mariko, a midget comes to her looking at her from head to toe.
Acchan was feeling weird at her behavior.
“W-what are you doing?!” said Acchan to her.
Suddenly she got smacked at her head.
“Yuko! Don’t look at Acchan like that!” Said Haruna comes towards them.
“Ouch! Sorry Nyan Nyan~ I just want to see how she looks like…” said Yuko clinging on Nyan Nyan’s arm.
“Ah! Acchan, Mariko I want to introduce you to my…er, girlfriend hehe…Oshima Yuko.” Explain Haruna.
“Hai! I am Oshima Yuko! Hehe~ Btw Acchan, Happy Birthday~” said Yuko showing her dimples smile.
“Before I forgot, someone asked me to give this present to you…” said Yuko while handing her a small red box.
“Thank you…but who gave this?” Asked Acchan.
“Ermmm…you will know soon!” answered Yuko wink at her.
‘Is it her?’ thought Acchan suddenly remembered 4 years ago during her birthday party.
After the party, Acchan quickly opened the small box that Yuko gave her.
But it was nothing inside it except for a note.
‘meet me at the playground near your house tomorrow at 7 pm.’
Acchan started to smile knowing who it was.
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That night Acchan comes earlier to the playground.
It has been 4 years she did not see her face.
Acchan patiently waiting while sitting at the swing.
“You really came!” Suddenly she heard that voice.
Acchan turn around smiling widely.
Without saying anything, Takamina sit on the swing next to her.
“Do you miss me?” The first question she asked to Acchan.
“No.” Answered Acchan shortly.
Takamina frown hearing it.
Takamina stand up while walking in front of her.
Acchan know what was going to happen next as it happen 4 years ago.
Meanwhile at the other side Takamina is smirking while turning her back on Acchan then walk away slowly.
Acchan realized it so she look up and found Takamina walks away from her.
“Where are you going?” Asked Acchan.
“You said you don’t miss me.” Said Takamina without turning her head.
“Don’t turn your back on me!!!” shout Acchan.
“B-besides, you took something from me 4 years ago!” said Acchan. Her face redden.
Takamina was confused.
“What?”
“Y-you kissed me, so I need to take my kiss back!” said her blushing.
Takamina look at Acchan smirking.
“Then,if you want your kiss back, catch me if you can!” said Takamina grinning then started to run.
“Takahashi! Come back here!!!”shout Acchan also started to chase her.
Deep inside, Acchan was really happy…
Her troublemaker is back in her life again.
and they love story started~
The end.
I know..it's weird right?
Miayaka-san I hope u like it! :nervous
and hope eveyone like it too...
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this is so cute!! :inlove: :inlove: disturbing someone to get their attention! I so can relate! :lol: :lol:
I always like Atsumina chasing scene, got me squealing imagining them chasing each other :heart: :heart:
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Troublemaker
Takamina as the troublemaker... and always disturbing Atsuko.. to get her attention...
Yeah... They were so cute together....
Great love drama story there
Can't wait to find more OS
Thank you for the OS
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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“Then,if you want your kiss back, catch me if you can!” said Takamina grinning then started to run.
“Takahashi! Come back here!!!”shout Acchan also started to chase her.
how i love when acchan called her like that like a boss!
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A troublemaker Minami and princess Acchan. Nice fics of your. Update more. Tq
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Happy Birthday Acchan!! atsumina flooding :heart: :heart: :heart:
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Just rememberd this so I did it for you Mia hope it's alright!
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Entry #16
"Atsuko..."
"Minami?"
Atsuko opened her eyes and found herself in her room. She could have sworn she had heard Minami's voice. She looked at the clock and saw it was only three in the morning. Atsuko started to wonder if the lack of sleep was finally starting to get to her. She tried to fall asleep but there was something inside her that wouldn't let her sleep. In the end the idol gave up and got up. She walked into the kitchen and decided to get a drink to help her calm down. When she walked in she grabbed a glass and then poured herself a glass of water. She sat at the table and drank alone. As she sat there she looked up at the window and saw the moon was shining. It was a moon like this on the night Minami left her. She remembered it so clearly as if it had happened moments ago. She sat right there in the empty chair across from her.
"I can't take this anymore Atsuko. You've changed and I can't take it. You're not the same person I fell in love with before. I'm sorry but I'm leaving you. Goodbye."
Just like that Minami walked out the door never to be seen or heard from again. Atsuko didn't know what exactly happened. The two were happy being together but then when she graduated, she started to see Minami less and less. Because she was busy all the time she never got to see Minami let alone talk to her. Minami must have felt lonely because of it. Atsuko remembered during their last days together, Minami would act cold towards her. She wouldn't say much and she would hide things from Atsuko. The on the day that Minami finally said she wanted to leave, Atsuko didn't know what to do. All she could do is watch Minami walk out the door. That was a year ago and still today Atsuko wondered why she didn't do anything to stop her. Now all she could do is live on with her life but still have a little sadness in her heart. Losing the one you love the most leaves a big scar on your heart that takes many years to heal. Atsuko still wonders how she is able to live today.
"Minami..."
Just then there was a ring coming from a cellphone. She opened it and saw she had gotten a message from the one person she thought she had lost. It was Minami who sent a message saying,
"Meet me at the park in five. I know you're up so hurry up or I'll leave without you."
Atsuko got up as fast as she could and ran to the park not even changing into regular clothes. She ran all the way to the park and there standing under the single park light was a very familiar chibi. She walked over and when she turned to face her the chibi was surprised to see that she had actually come.
"So you showed up." Minami said.
"Of course I would." Atsuko said.
There was an awkward moment of silence between the two. Neither one of them was going to say anything so Atsuko decided to say,
"Why did you call me out here?"
"I wanted to tell you something."
"What is that?"
Minami reached into her pocket and pulled out a small box with a red ribbon around it. She handed it to Atsuko and then said,
"Happy Birthday."
Then she turned around and started to walk away. Atsuko reached out and grabbed her arm. Minami looked at her with a mean glare and said,
"What?"
"Aren't you going to watch me open my gift?"
"No."
Minami tried to walk away but Atsuko held her tightly.
"Come one Minami please."
"Alright fine."
The two sat down and then Atsuko opened her present. There inside was a small bracelet with her name engraved into it in fancy letters. There was also a small heart diamond on it but it was only half the heart.
"Where's the other half?" Atsuko asked.
"Here."
Minami handed her the other bracelet with no name on it.
"Give it to someone you love."
Minami then got up and walked away this time without Atsuko holding her. Atsuko sat there alone looking at the blank bracelet. She noticed that the two hearts connected when the bracelets were brought together. The bracelets shined in the moonlight and it was then Atsuko saw it. There on the blank bracelet faintly written was a name.
"Minami.."
Tears ran down her eyes as she realized what Minami was doing. She was trying to tell Atsuko that she still loved her even after all this time. Atsuko got up and started to run after Minami looking for her. She ran all over the park trying to find where the smaller girl had gone to but there was no sign of her. Then out of the corner of her eye she saw Minami walking along the path standing over the bridge. Atsuko ran to her and stopped her from crossing the bridge. Minami looked at Atsuko with tears in her eyes as well. Atsuko said nothing but instead pulled Minami in for a hug. The smaller one tried to break free but Atsuko wouldn't let go. She held onto Minami tightly and said,
"I know who to give the other bracelet too.."
She took Minami's hand and placed the bracelet around her wrist. Minami looked up at Atsuko who only leaned in and kissed her lips. She kissed away the tears on Minami's face and then leaned in saying,
"You're the one I love Minami so I'm giving this to you.."
Minami gave Atsuko a sad smile and said,
"Thank you Atsuko."
The two held each other in a close embrace. After all this time Minami still loved Atsuko and just knowing that made all the pain in her heart fade away. The scars healed and the tears were dried. She was with the one she loved and that was all she cared about. As she two were holding each other, Minami kissed Atsuko's forehead and said,
"Happy Birthday Atsuko.. I love you."
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aww... such a cute story, cute couple, and... cute kiss :)
Happy Birthday Atsuko :)
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Miyu honey~ this was so sweet at the end~ nya~
Entry #17. My beautiful
She turned around on her stomach and burried her face in the pillow. Her body was all sore and tingly, she was still wet down there and her hair was messy and tangled. All embarrassed, as the memories from last night up until twenty minutes ago flooded her mind, the light brown haired girl flipped once again on her back and let out a small grunt when her body protested about her trying to move. A chuckle was heard next to her and the taller girl turned her head to the source of that little laugh.
"You are so cute when you scrunch that adorable nose of yours, Acchan."
"Mou, Yuuko! You totally tired me out... And the party is today. How am I going to attend it without any sleep and with sore muscles?.."
Oshima Yuko leaned closer to the pouting girl and stared her right in the eyes with a loving gaze.
"You don't like it when I touch you like this, Oshima-san?" Yuko caressed Acchan's thigh and grinned when the taller one moaned from just this simple touch. "Sensitive, aren't we, Oshima-san?"
"Yuuko..." All embarrassed Atsuko lightly punched the auburn haired woman and then sighed. "Well, it's my fault the wedding took place yesterday..."
"Yup, I still remember what you said that time." Yuko changed the tone of her voice and started mimicking the younger girl. "'Ah, it would be nice to marry someone just before my birthday.. Imagine, wedding as a birthday present~' You said that when we were on a school's rooftop ten years ago. That cute dreamy expressionon your face... I could never forget that moment."
"I was not thinking about 'first wedding night' then... And when we decided on the date... I forgot about it..." Atsuko blushed and looked away.
"Oh, you forgot?" The petite woman smirked and from her all-of-the-sudden-low-sexy-dangerously-luring voice Atsuko could tell her choice of words was bad. "Let's remember, Oshima-san~"
"Yuuko..." Acchan wanted to remind her wife that they have her birthday party later in the evening but the unexpected entrance of three digits blew her mind away. Through her own moaning she faintly heard Yuko speaking and hugged her in response to her words.
"Happy birthday, Oshima Atsuko." The squirrel said with love, passion and pride apparent in her voice, then kissed her wife, absorbing the loud moaning and providing the taller one with much needed oxygen; her fingers attacking mercilessly and sending her beloved higher and higher.
Atsuko answered the kiss and before her mind went totally blank she whispered 'thank you' to her dearest chibi wife. She was the happiest person in the world, getting her own wedding with her beloved Yuko as a birthday present. She was 100% sure that no one would ever be better than her dear Yuko.
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Somewhere.
"As you can see, we take all kinds of photos. Yesterday we had a wedding to shoot, it was a blast. Wanna see the photo as an example?"
"Yes, it would be nice of you."
Mariko took a recently done photo of two beautiful brides and showed it to the other person.
"AtsuYuu, huh?" a short haired chibi mumbled silently while looking at the Oshima couple in the photo. "Mhm, I'll think about what you said. Thank you."
The woman gave back the photo and left.
"What was that discontent look about?" Miichan asked while hugging her lover from behind.
"I smell at least one broken heart..and maybe even a ruined marriage." Mariko looked uneasily at the photo of the brides. "Though I hope I'm wrong. These two suit each other and they deserve to be happy."
"Un. Ah, today is my waifu's bir... Wait, I can't call her waifu anymore!!! DAMN YOU, SQUIRREL!" Miichan shouted half jokingly. Maritroll just smirked and dragged her lover towards the storage room, to punish for neglecting having a wonderful sadist as a lover.
THE END?/TO BE CONTINUED?
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:wub: my beautiful fic so sweet so lovely :twothumbs
I think you're the only one who makes a married couple atsuyuu
Its great sakura_drop san :thumbsup
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Nice update! Atsyuu! Seems Yuko is a handful for acchan :P
'short haired chibi' Minami?
& lol at Miichan no longer being able to call Atsuko her 'wife' :P
Let it be 'to be continued' so you can update another chapter :P I'm curiouse about this!! :)
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ENTRY 15 PART II [Atsumina] (http://flean.thecrazy.me/the-last-something-that-meant-anything-part-2.html)
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A PRESENT FOR OUR DEAR MIAYAKA~!!! Happy Birthday, Maxine~ :deco:
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Just today Saku realized that the link was wrong!!! :banghead:
APOLOGIES and so I post the full real deal here~
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Entry #18. Sorry for Being Selfish
A/n. MIA!!!! HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!! I hope you enjoy this little present from me~ And sorry if it’s too bittersweet…
(Atsuko POV)
I was walking past the white corridors, every step taking me closer to a certain ward and I couldn’t even breathe for a moment. In my mind there were so many flashbacks that there was no way I could tell them apart..
I know I was always curious how my life would be if I hadn’t met her or if I never developed feelings towards her. I know there were many times in our relationship when I tried to tell her about how I felt…when I lost my feelings towards her somewhere in between and…. I lost the courage to say it to her….The lie grew wider and wider, turning into a cobweb of hidden unsaid things.
I knew that one day I would explode and tell her everything but I never thought it will make her act like this. I never thought she would hate me this much, delete me completely from her life, ignoring even her closest friends. To think she wanted to commit suicide….
I told her that it was for her own good, that I wanted her to be happy and that I felt like I don’t belong with her… Another lie which made things even worse… She wanted to kill herself to make me feel guilty, to make my life miserable… She was against me being the right one… I know I was wrong…. But….
Then it was her first surgery and I was not there for her… I felt like I didn’t have the right to be by her side… Like I was not wanted… But I found out from Rena – she found out from Haruna – that Minami was staring at her phone all the time before the surgery, waiting for my call or message, talking about me non stop…
I tossed away my fears and ordered a plane ticket… My dad had no idea I did this…. I left and went to meet her…but I lost courage and in the end didn’t even fly there…. Maybe because I was unsure of what to say…or maybe I knew that once I meet her I would be lost in that gaze and would comply to her again, staying with her and not letting go…even though my heart was already craving for another person….
I saw how broken she was and how she treated those close to her… Tossing away everything….Wanting to die in any case to make me unhappy…. And then she found out that another surgery was needed… I knew about her only from ‘Friendnote’ where she posted stuff and updated her status once in awhile… There I saw the chat of our mutual friends and I found out about this second surgery of hers…
I didn’t know until some friends told me…that she wanted to end it all because of me….that she lost faith in life overall… I hate it that Rena was always there for her but Minami didn’t appreciate it….she said Rena is too close to me….. Soon after she cut all ties with everyone….then I found out she said to the doctor to not blame himself if she doesn’t make it…because she wanted to die….
Everyone was more or less worried but they tried to not show it… Only Rena was open about this….she would go and nag her to not give up… I don’t know why Miichan, Sae, Mariko or even Haruna were not as caring as Rena was… Probably because she is the one everyone would turn to when they need help…because Minami was not helping anymore….she was running…dying inside….
I felt so exhausted by all the memories in my head….how we met….how happy we were in the beginning…how things changed and we started arguing about even the smallest things… And then I met Yuko and…. The lies just grew wider….
I reached her ward and wanted to go inside but my hand stopped in front of the handle, all shaking and unable to touch it… I turned around and started going away when I bumped into someone… It was Yuko.
“Y…yuuchan… What are you doing here?” I ask her and tear up, while she hugs me and comforts me, gently rocking me back and forth.
“You have to go in there, Acchan…. You can’t run away, especially now… She wanted to die but she survived the surgery….you just have to go in there and tell her everything, how you felt and what you want… I think if she heard all that is in your heart…. I am sure she would finally be able to let go of you and continue on living… Don’t be afraid anymore…you are hurting me, your friends, her and yourself the most…” Yuko said and I realized she is right.
“Thank you….” I said and went back to the ward’s door. I pressed the handle and went in, instantly meeting with that sad deep gaze of my dear chibi. I closed the doors and let myself run towards her, feeling her pat my head while I sobbed into her lap.
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(Yuuko POV)
I knew that making her go inside might be the biggest mistake in my life but watching her in this much pain… I just couldn’t live like this anymore… I left the hospital, though my heart was screaming to go back and drag Acchan out of the ward, showing Minami that she lost all the rights to her, that I am the only one who can have Atsuko… Yet I didn’t do so and just got into my car, driving wherever the roads took me…. I found myself in front of Sayaka’s house… I knew why I went there… To talk about this whole situation….
I rang the doorbell and she opened the door. One glance at me and she helped me inside, ordering Sae to bring out some whiskey. They gave me a glass and I calmed down a little bit…then started talking. I was always there for Atsuko but….I felt that Minami was always in between us….
That feeling, nagging inside me was always there, telling me I could never replace that midget for Atsuko…telling me I was not good enough to be in her life… It was hard because Acchan told me I am the only one for her, that she loves me deeply but her posts… They were filled with her longing for Minami….
Today was Acchan’s birthday and I planned a trip and a present….but she got a call from Miichan, saying that midget woke up and…I knew she has to go there to meet her and talk…. I pushed her there though my heart was like a dirty rag, tossed far away and not needed anymore.
I said all this to twin towers and drank another glass of whiskey feeling so down…so unwanted… If only time passed by faster… My thoughts were scrambled and I drank another glass….
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(Atsuko POV)
I knew Yuko probably headed towards Sayaka’s house… I knew she thought I’ll go back to Minami but… I love Yuko and Yuko only and Minami is already a part of my past and it was what I realized and wanted to express to Yuko. I dialed her number but she ignored my call… Ah, must be drinking…. I went outside and caught a taxi and said Sayaka’s address, calling Yuko again. She dropped my call and I smiled knowing she was jealous… I urged the driver to hurry and anxiously tried to call her again, knowing she won’t answer.
When I got out of the taxi and barged into Sayaka’s house I saw the situation was not that bad… Yuko was crying and all but she was not that drunk so I smiled and hugged her.
“Baka… Do you really think of me that lowly?” I asked her and she shook her head. “I love you, Yuuko. No matter what, I want to be with you. Minami is my past, you’re my present and future.”
“A…cchan…” She kissed me passionately and knelt on her knee. I looked at her wide eyed, tears already escaping my eyes. “This…might be a bit out of place….because we missed our plane and I intended to do so later on but… Would you be so kind and say yes to my next question?
Sayaka smacked her head and Sae face-palmed herself but I needed no more and pulled her up, hugging her and kissing once again.
“YES YES YES YES!!!! YES!!!!!!!” I yelled out and let her put a ring on my finger. It was a very beautiful one, thin and made out of white gold, the small white diamond shinning in a very middle of it. It was so beautiful and simple. “Yuuko….”
“I love you, Atsuko.” She said while staring in my eyes. “Would you be my wife?”
I just nodded, once again agreeing to her finally worded out question and hugged her with all love that I had inside. It might be just the beginning but I felt this time this was the right thing….the right choice…the right person….
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(Minami POV)
The words she said in the hospital bed to me…. I would never forget them…. They will always be etched deep in my heart…. But I think they are the ones that will help me move on with my life…
“Sorry for being selfish, Minami….”
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I missed lots of your stories...
Like all of them...
There are all kind of versions of Atsuko coupling...
My fav. is the atsumina pairing....
But the last one... about 'Sorry for Being Selfish' is very nice twist love drama story there...
Though it did not end up with Atsumina... but Poor Minami... didn't get the girl in the end...
Would Minami move on... just from hearing 1 sentence from Atsuko “Sorry for being selfish, Minami….”?
Well ... Great OS as always...
Thank you for the OS updates
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