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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: chibi-midgetlove on June 24, 2013, 09:39:51 AM

Title: Jane Doe [Takayuu/Yuumina <--- Mariko]
Post by: chibi-midgetlove on June 24, 2013, 09:39:51 AM
EDIT: I'm going to put this story down. I might go on hiatus or I might start anew with a new account (locations of my stories are messy). I'm sorry for all the trouble I'm causing!
Title: Re: Jane Doe [Takayuu/Yuumina <--- Mariko]
Post by: kuro808 on June 24, 2013, 09:44:04 AM
Interesting start to the fic.  Takamina has an intriguing personality
Title: Re: Jane Doe [Takayuu/Yuumina <--- Mariko]
Post by: WantingtoCuddle on June 24, 2013, 09:48:45 AM
WHY so many awesome wmidget fanfics unfinished!?
...now I'm really lost on which I want read more of.
Keep up the awesome writing! :love:
Title: Re: Jane Doe [Takayuu/Yuumina <--- Mariko]
Post by: Dieyg48 on June 24, 2013, 09:49:19 AM
Ehhh~~ What's this? Takahashi Minami the soukantoku is different...Hm...
 :roll: :huhuh 8)

~Is it her who she sees on the mirror? The other her? Or her before she was a soukantoku...
 :huhuh :? :w00t:

~Hmm...Takamina and yuko i see...What is really wrong with Takamina? I hope Yuko notice it...
 :) :yep: :heart:

~Well, the starting is interesting for me to read, i wonder what'll happen next!~!~
 :w00t: :D XD

~Yeah...Pls update soon! I really can't wait to find out what next!~!~!~
 :twothumbs :thumbsup :bow:
Title: Re: Jane Doe [Takayuu/Yuumina <--- Mariko]
Post by: cisda83 on June 24, 2013, 10:04:37 AM
This is a great story...

Minami has two persona.... one is a normal Minami and another is a GM Minami...

I like how you pictured Minami, it was like you took a dive deep into Minami.

I like how you described her feelings and her worries.

Yeah... nowadays everyone always associate Minami with GM... not just a normal idol anymore...

Too much responsibilities too.

Can't wait to see how you are going to make Yuko reassured Minami in the next chapter?

Thank you for this new Jane Doe

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Jane Doe [Takayuu/Yuumina <--- Mariko]
Post by: kenjoy12 on June 24, 2013, 10:56:31 AM
Minami with double personality! Uwaaa.. Nice start! :thumbsup

Imma going to set my camp here also! :thumbsup

Looking forward to it! :thumbsup Keep it up! :thumbsup

INTERESTING~ :twothumbs
Title: Re: Jane Doe [Takayuu/Yuumina <--- Mariko]
Post by: Dieyg48 on July 06, 2013, 12:10:58 PM
Ah...Don't you worry XxTakaminiluverXx-san...It's not confusing at all...Haha!~!~
 :P :lol: XD

~Oh...Even though they speak in the phone...The atmosphere is really scary~
 :cry: :( :banghead:

~Hm...An advice(Is it really count as an advice?LOL) from Mariko really broke Yuko's heart...Yeah.
 :) :yep: 8)

~But in the same time...It may be really useful for her...and for Minami too...
 :D :w00t: :oops:

~Hey...I hope that Minami is okay!~!~ Agh!~!~ Takamina be strong!~!~ Nyaro!~!~
 :cry: :( :doh:

~Well, pls update the next one...I'll be waiting for it...Agh! Takamina!!~!!~!!~ Haha, looking forward for the next one!~
 :twothumbs :thumbsup :bow:
Title: Re: Jane Doe [Takayuu/Yuumina <--- Mariko]
Post by: kenjoy12 on July 06, 2013, 02:33:11 PM
Scary Mariko-sama  :nervous I got what Mariko-sama meant and she's right.. :oops:


“The only person that can make Minami cry for real and Minami laugh for real.”


I can't wait to see how will Takamina manage her double personalities? Hope she's going to be alright..

Thank you for the update :bow: :twothumbs
Title: Re: Jane Doe [Takayuu/Yuumina <--- Mariko]
Post by: cisda83 on July 08, 2013, 07:41:45 AM
interesting...

Mariko was so great...

Can't wait to see the next

Thank you

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Jane Doe [Takayuu/Yuumina <--- Mariko]
Post by: Kochiki on July 13, 2013, 06:20:13 AM
Waa...Poor Takamina, is she really okay??~
-Just come across to ur fic...It's interesting~
-Burrr...Sometimes Mariko-sama can be scary!!~
-Yuko need to follow Mariko's word cuz it's right in many aspect.
-Aw~ There's no Takamina in chapter 2~ But will wait!!~
-I hope you'll update it soon!!~

>Thank by the way~ For the nice chapter!!~
 :w00t: :P :twothumbs :bow:
Title: Re: Jane Doe [Takayuu/Yuumina <--- Mariko]
Post by: takamae on July 25, 2013, 01:33:39 PM
What happen to takamina?
It like she doesn't know who she is anymore, poor takamina...

Really? Mariko love takamina?
I seen quiet a few time where mariko beside takamina when she's down (sick)
It's really hard to tell, mariko just consider takamina as a sister or something else

Please update....please...please...