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Table Of Content
Every 4 days I will update it
Opening Song: Kimi Ga Ometteru Yori by Team Surprise http://vid48.com/watch_video.php?v=MM6KNR7NY8OD (http://vid48.com/watch_video.php?v=MM6KNR7NY8OD)
Introduction: The Spiral Space (June 30, 2013)
Chapter 1: Friends (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35852.msg1199555#msg1199555) (June 30, 2013)
1-2 Dream (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35852.msg1199886#msg1199886) (July 1, 2013)
1-3 Mistrust and Truth (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35852.msg1200780#msg1200780) (July 4,2013)
1-4 Domination (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35852.msg1202408#msg1202408) (July 9, 2013)
Chapter 2: Journey (On Progress)
To Be Announce
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Introduction
The Spiral Space
In the universal dimensional space there is a large ball-like space wandering around it is called the Spiral Space and its of it is there is Five Realms.
The First Realm where the God live and the angel singing in a harmonic and melody songs and where light is always in there, The Aether.
Second Realm The Gehenna this realm is worse than you think this is where the sinful people live with the demons and devils and all of the darkness minions and there is The Nine Circle of Gehenna (Limbo, Lust, Gluttony, Greed, Anger, Heresy, Violence, Fraud and Treachery). Darkness of the Gehenna will always be the threat of all realms.
Third Realm is The Technologia this is where people lives with a high technology devices, weapons, vehicles and buildings, the Ability Users, Technology User, H.I (Human INTELLIGENCE, G.I (God INTELLIGENCE) and Manipulators is the people who lives in Technologia. our antagonist live in here.
Fourth Realm The Mundus this where normal people they call themselves Humans and of course they have a high technology just like Techonologia.
The Fifth Realm The Magia where Sorcerer, Mage, Sage, Druid, Necromancer, Summoner, Magician, Elementalist, Priest, Bishop, and Prophet live, they have a technology but not high as Mundus and Tecnologia have. Our main characters live in here but one of them will betrayed.
This Five Realms have a war for many years the war of Technologia and Mundus in Universal War I and it end in Universal War III Technologia won, the Battle of Technologia and Magia in Universal War IV Technologia won, The battle of Magia with their allies Aether vs Mundus and Technologia but Technologia won. Technologia is the only one realm always started the Universal War. It stared I, II III, IV, and Universal War V where Technologia won again against Aether. The war will never stop until Technologia will be defeated but………
In the Magia there is a girl name Takahashi Minami a girl who lost her parents in Universal War and now she is with her grandmother and Takamina live in the Fire Country, the capital country of Elemental Continent. Takamina is a Fire mage Class B but she have a dream and that is she wants to be the most strongest magic user in the whole universe, she never think to revenge her parents but the one who kill her parents will pay a lot……………
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Sorry for my bad english.......... What do you think about my Intro is it okay????
Just comment if you want me to continue this.. :) :) :) :)
Sci-fi, Adventure, Action, Supernatural, Comedy, Space Battles and Shoujo Ai is the genre.......
I'm so nervous what will you comment this is my first fanfic so yeahh....
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I like the storyline! Keep it up :twothumbs
Also welcome here in JPH!P ~!! :onioncheer: :onioncheer: :onioncheer:
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Oh, welcome to jphip...It is really nice to have you here!~!~!~
:wub: :oops: :twothumbs
~Hm, sci-fi...actually i like sci-fi~~ Oh yeah!! There's comedy in it!~!~!~
:twisted: :inlove: :w00t:
~Woah...So Takamina is The Magia...A fire mage...Cool!~!~ Takamina!~!~
:D :roll: XD
~Yossha!! I hope the main character is Takamina!~!~! Kyaa!~!~ Fire mage!~!~
:wub: :thumbsup :theking
~Okay, enough with my nonsense...Pls continue it!~!~ I kinda' like it already!!~!!~
:twothumbs :thumbsup :bow:
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Wah. . . So interesting!
Please continue. . . . I'm looking forward To your story! :) :)
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Very interesting... Although I already know your story... HEHEHEHEHEHEHE :lol: :lol: :lol:
Waiting for your next update XD XD XD XD XD
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Sound interesting!
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Well I'm interested can't wait
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Interesting intro...
Can't wait
Thank you
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Welcome :welcome :welcome :welcome
Interesting introduce, I like it! :yep:
Can't wait for the next chapter!
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For suddenly moment I will post the chapter one now.. :lol: :lol: :lol:
@Mai-chan: hehe Thank You
@Dieyg48: Yes Takamina is the main protaganist in my fanfic :) :) :)
@shiruba_rein: Thank Ya :) :) :)
@X_Last-Cross_X: Shut Up :lol: :lol: :lol:
@gek geki: Thank You
@kurosawa87: Well I'm posting it now :) :) :)
@cisda83: Thank You TOO
@Lost Heaven: Tank YO :lol: :lol: :lol:
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Chapter 1
Friends
Year X463
“Takamina!!!!!!” grandmother shouted at her in the bed.
“What is it??!! Takamina shout back
“It’s already morning get up now or else you’ll be late in your class…” grandmother said while cooking.
“Eeeehhh!! Why you didn’t tell me earlier??” Takamina rapidly get up in the bed and go to the shower.
“Because you’re too cute to wake up my dear.” Grandmother said
“That’s not I’m talking about, by the way what day is the contest will held?” Takamina asked
“Next week my dear and hurry up time is gold you need to hurry now here is your bento” her grandmother smile to her.
“Hai!!! Bye grandma” Takamina kiss her grandmother in the forehead.
Takamina use her fire boost to fly and go to school in time. She is come from in the Sky Academy, one of the richest and expensive school in elemental continent it is located in the Raijin Country…
Maeda Atsuko is a Lightning Sage Class S, age 22, born in Blitz Village in Astrapo Country and she is Takamina’s Bestfriend.
Oshima Yuko is an Earth Magician Class A, age 25, born in Terra Village in Gaia Country.
Kojima Haruna is a Water Sorceress Class A, Age 25, born in Aqua Village in Hydro Country.
Kashiwagi Yuki is a Dark Druid Class S, Age 24, born in Tenebris Village in Nyx Country.
Sashihara Rino is a Metal Summoner Class A, Age 20, born in Aurum Village in Metallo Country.
Itano Tomomi is a Light Priest Class S, Age 21, born in Lux Village in
Hemera Country. They are the friend of Takamina since they met in Sky Academy
“Takamina you are so late where you’ve been?” Acchan was pouting at her.
“Eto….” Takamina just scratched her neck
“Is your clock out of energy??” Kojinyan asked
“No. I’m just you know, I had nightmare last night.” Takamina smile at them.
Takamina and others go to school. Takamina, Acchan, Tomochin, Yukirin, Kojinyan use their element to fly while Yuko and Sasshi……….. they can only boost themselves at the land………
School Bell rang
Takamina is the only one in the Class B while the other is in the Class A and Class S…..
In Takamina’s mind
“Someday I will be in Class A.” Takamina said.
“Someday!!! Someday!!!” Takamina shout loudly.
“Takamina!!!! What in the world are you doing in your desk? Are you sleeping again??” Maimai asked with her forehead wrinkle.
“She’s drooling again” the girl whispering to other girl.
Takamina’s classmate laughed at her.
Takamina suddenly waked up in her daydreaming and realize that she’s in the class.
“Takamina go outside and run 200 times at the corridor right now!!!” Maimai shout angrily at her.
Takamina run at the corridor at the speed of 200 kph with her flaming aura while running. Suddenly Meetan open the door of the faculty room. When she opens the door, Takamina suddenly rushed, leaving the door burn into dust. Meetan wondered why the door disappeared and frozen from her state. Noro Kayo stops Takamina’s movement with her Time Lock spell.
“Why are you running??” Noro Kayo asked.
“Well I sleep in the class so my teacher said run to the corridor 200 times.” Takamina smiled innocently.
“Hmm so how many times you make? By the way come to my office.” Noro Kayo asked.
“Ahmm 180 times… Okay” Takamina answered swiftly.
In Takamina’s mind
“Hmm what is it??” Takamina tilted her head while the Time Lock spell disappears.
“Ouch!!” she said as her whole body dropped at the floor.
Oshima Yuko and others are waiting outside but Takamina takes very long and they wonder why.
Takamina suddenly appears on the front of them making them shocked.
“KYAAAA!!!!” they squeal.
“Where in the heavens you’ve been??” Sasshi asked while she is in shock mode.
“Ahmm in our, ahhmm I don’t know who is that person but her name is Noro Kayo and she talked to me at her office. Do you know her??” Takamina wondered.
Everyone was shock to what Takamina said…
“EEEEEEHHH!!” they shout.
“EHH nani?? Takamina wondered why they are shock.
“Did you say Noro Kayo?? Tomochin asked
“Yes.” Takamina answered.
“Anoo she is our Principal.” Yukirin said while she is in frozen state.
“EEEEEEEHHHHHH!!!!!!!!” Takamina shout very very loud.
Takamina and others go home but Takamina is still in her frozen state for she doesn’t know that Noro Kayo is their Principal. Just because back in there where Noro talked to her Takamina answered without respect.
At the Technologia.
Orion Base Facility Room #22
Mariko is looking at the UPS (Universal Position System), she is watching the Magia and plan to invade it. Project JUDGEMENT, A project to invade the Magia and make it as their own realm to increase their power and to become the most powerful realm in the Spiral Space. Mayuyu is a G.I (God INTELLIGENCE) she can control the whole world and the other technologies.
“Mayuyu how many remaining days until we will do the Project JUDGEMENT??” Mariko asked.
“Five months and five weeks and five days and five hours and five minutes and five seconds and five milliseconds and five nanoseconds remaining milady” Mayuyu answered swiftly.
“Will you please don’t make it long? I only said how many days.” Mariko asked with her narrowed eyes.
Mariko is the Marshall General of Orion Country she ruled about 200 or more field army and she is the only Marshall that can activated the Black Materia SPHERE the most powerful material and non material being it is most powerful than dark matter and celestial stone…
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TO BE CONTINUED………..
Welll Feel Free to Comment and leave a thank you if you like it.. :) :) :)
Mou Arigatou Gozaimasu :) :) :)
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I have a feeling i know this ahmmmm :? Right X_Last-Cross_X.. Teehee :P
Anyway.. Me like it~! :thumbup Oh Mariko-sama's planning to invade Magia! Can't wait to witness everything! :fap
Thank you for the update :bow: :thumbsup
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I have a feeling i know this ahmmmm :? Right X_Last-Cross_X.. Teehee :P
Sou desu ne.... :lol: :lol: :lol:
HEHEHEHEHEHEHE
Waiting for the next update
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I have a feeling i know this ahmmmm :? Right X_Last-Cross_X.. Teehee :P
I know what you mean.
Ah, I'm hoping that this would be AtsuYuu but dat ain't happening. Takamina, huh...
I get the vibe that it's gonna turn TakaMari O.O''
Or at least Atsumina >.>
Or better yet, friendship story!
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interesting....
Minami was just in class B...
And here she was a lazy person and liked to day dream....
What did Kayo need with Takamina?
What will Mariko do?
Can't wait to see what's happening next?
Thank you for the update
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Ah...Yeah, on the introduction i was confused on why did all of them is in class A n' S...
:roll: :huhuh :?
~Well, I wonder why Takamina is the only one in class B...Is it because she's weak than other?~?~?
:? XD :lol:
~No way in hell!! Takamina i'll be supporting you!~!~ LOL Wow...There many kind of magic eh?~?~?
XD :) :yep:
~Iya...Somehow i miss the old member already~The queen of comedy and Maimai~~
:oops: :D :wub:
~Well, so far it is interesting~ Pls update soon!~!~ I can't wait for the next one!~!~
:twothumbs :thumbsup :bow:
~kenjoy12-san, X_Last-Cross_X-san and AshuraX-san...What's this all about?~?~LOL *confused*
:? :huhuh :sweatdrop:
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HI~~~!!! :)
UWAAHH~~!!! :w00t:
This is Very Interestingly Cool!! XD
So Takamina is the only Class B while the Other's are Class S and A?
so does this mean she'll suddenly get all strong and all? :lol: :glasses:
Anyway... Thanks For Zee Update!!!
I Can't Wait For More!!! :twothumbs :twothumbs
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The Story is Awesome! :twothumbs
I'm confused about the class System...A is higher than B...but what about S? :?
It Really got me interested :w00t:
Is Sae & Jurina Gonna be Featured :wub: :twisted:
Mariko is Always the Villain... O0
I wonder what the Pairings will be...If any... :nervous
I cant wait for the next part! :panic:
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My,my . . . Takamina's in trouble :D lol.
So Mariko is the bad guy huh. . . .
I want to see how this story would develop :)
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The Story is Awesome! :twothumbs
I'm confused about the class System...A is higher than B...but what about S? :?
It Really got me interested :w00t:
Is Sae & Jurina Gonna be Featured :wub: :twisted:
Mariko is Always the Villain... O0
I wonder what the Pairings will be...If any... :nervous
I cant wait for the next part! :panic:
Well, DiVAGal2458-san...I suppose 'S' is more higher than any of it...
'S' represent 'special' or what so ever but yeah, 'S' is more higher than 'A' and 'B'...
Hope that could help ya'...Sorry if i'm kinda' rude...And i hope that's true~LOL
:oops: :D XD
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The Story is Awesome! :twothumbs
I'm confused about the class System...A is higher than B...but what about S? :?
It Really got me interested :w00t:
Is Sae & Jurina Gonna be Featured :wub: :twisted:
Mariko is Always the Villain... O0
I wonder what the Pairings will be...If any... :nervous
I cant wait for the next part! :panic:
Well, DiVAGal2458-san...I suppose 'S' is more higher than any of it...
'S' represent 'special' or what so ever but yeah, 'S' is more higher than 'A' and 'B'...
Hope that could help ya'...Sorry if i'm kinda' rude...And i hope that's true~LOL
:oops: :D XD
Your correct Dieyg48-san....
The ranking system that this fic uses to the class according to its order, from ascending to descending is: S, A, B, C, D and E
That's according to my observation, but it could be possible.... :yep: :yep: :yep:
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Sorry For Another Sudden Post I Just Feel Yah Know... Teehee XD XD XD
kenjoy12: What did you feel?? :) :) :)
X_Last-Cross_X: Ehh What is it??? :? :? :?
AshuraX: Just wait for another chapter and witness it :) :) :)
cisda83: Ahmm the time where noro talked to takamina will be release in chapter 4 :) :) :)
Dieyg48: HEHEHEHEHE just like Naruto he is the only genin just like that just because takamina is lazy.. lazier than naruto.
7sam14: :) :) :) just continue to read and wait for the other chapter I'll make it more interesting
DiVAGal2458: yes Sae and Jurina will be featured in here Sae is the Guardian of The Tartarus of Gehenna and Jurina is the Grandmaster or Master of all masters of Mundus
shiruba_rein: Tank you :) :)
Opening song: http://vid48.com/watch_video.php?v=MM6KNR7NY8OD (http://vid48.com/watch_video.php?v=MM6KNR7NY8OD)
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Chapter 1-2
Dream
June 30, X463
“Aaaahh!!!” mage and other magic user shoutt and casting magic to defend theirselves.
Orion battleship fires a multiple cannon and blaster and they have been destroyed the Elemental Ruins.
“Acchan!!! Acchan!!! Where are you!!!” Takamina shout with her wounds from the blast of the bombs.
“Takamina!! Go and save yourself!!” Maimai shout to Takamina while fighting the soldiers with her magnetic powers.
The soldiers shot Maimai in her arms and Maimai is almost die from it thanks to her Magnetic Magic.
“Archmage Maimai!! Are you okay??” Takamina cried.
“I’m okay go now go with others tell to them to evacuate and tell to the Sky Councilor about this.” Maimai gives order to takamina due in her dangerous situation.
“Don’t worry I will not die. Have hope Takamina. Now go!!!” Maimai shout.
“Hai!!” Takamina run away and leave Maimai and others while they cover Takamina..
Takamina run and she find the others. She find Sasshi and Kojinyan fighting the soldiers..
“Aluvión de hierro!! (Iron Barrage)” Sasshi cast to the soldiers and kill about five to ten soldiers.
“Alta ráfaga agua concentrada (High Concentrated Water Burst)” Kojinyan cast and send the soldiers flying.
“KOJINYAN!! SASSHI!!! DAIJOBU DESU KA??!!” Takamina shout.
“Ow Takamina?!” Sasshi and Kojinyan surprised that Takamina is still alive.
Takamina fly and cast a large AoE Flaming magic.
“Máxima Sobrecaliente!! (Maximum Overheat)” Takamina shouts with her angrily flaming eyes.
It leaves a large crater, burns a troop of soldiers and destroys their vehicles. Takamina cast again.
“Radium Solarem!! (Solar Ray)” Takamina rapidly cast against the Orion Airships.
Kojinyan and Sasshi frozen from their state as they witness of raging Takamina..
“What in the heavens is she really is???” Sasshi asked out of blue.
In the backyard of the Sky academy Acchan, Yuko and Tomochin fight and killed the Orion soldiers. Acchan cast Caelestis Ire (Wrath of Heaven) that send a multiple lightning bolt, Yuko cast Ráfaga Tectónica (Tectonic Burst) that crush the crust upside down and Tomochin cast Lanza de Divinidad (Spear of Divine) that pierce the tanks and other vehicles like a barbeque.
“Eeeehh! This is no ending.” Yuko complained.
“Yeah they always coming and coming.” Tomochin answered with no reaction.
“Just defend and kill them all. Wait I will go I have to do something and wait for the reinforcement.” Acchan smiled at them and fly away.
In Yuko’s mind
“What is she doing? I smell something fishy.” Yuko wondering.
In Orion Fortress Airship, Mariko ordered to fire the Tiberium Cannon to the Elemental Continent and steal the Elemental Materia but Noro Kayo blocks the Tiberium blast to prevent it landing in the surface with her Zeit Zerstörer (Time Destroyer) in her full power and she successfully blocked it but her magic power run out and fall down.
“Principal!!” Yuko catch Noro Kayo from falling down in the sky.
“Don’t let this people steal the Elemental Materia because this thing is important to all of us.” Noro Kayo smiled at Yuko and she gave the materia stone to her.
“What? No I can’t do this I can’t protect this materia please Director don’t leave us!” Yuko cried and shout at her.
“You can do it I know you have friends they can help you.” Noro spoke softly.
Director Noro Kayo suddenly breaths weakly until Yuko witnesses her body into lifeless in her arms. Takamina saw Yuko with Director Noro and she saw that she is dead..
“What happened to her??” Takamina asked sadly.
“She blocks that green blast with her magic at her full power just to protect us and this materia.” Yuko cries a lot with the Elemental Materia in her hands.
“I see.” Takamina lower her head and pray for Director Noro.
Takamina’s rage is increasing and Yuko saw something in her arm a flaming bird tattoo. She felt Takamina strong aura and wonder “Is she really a Fire Mage Class B?” She never saw this kind of strong aura equal of Rank S Archmage magical aura.
“I’ll never ever forgive them!!!” Takamina shouts angrily.
Suddenly a girl attack Yuko and Takamina in the back and knocked them out. Takamina saw a girl in her front with the Elemental Materia in the girl hands but her sight is blured so she can see it but she hears a static sound.
“Takamina.. Gomen ne.” the unknown girl smile at her and whisper in her ears.
Takamina saw the unknown girl fly away and she saw an airship fall at her and squash her..
Suddenly Takamina wakes up and realize that all of that is a dream but actually that was a nightmare but she still wondering whose unknown girl that attacked her. Is that a vision or a nightmare??
TO BE CONTINUED…………………………………………………..
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:) :) :) Feel free to comment and sorry again for my sudden appearance teehee :lol: :lol: :lol:
Ending Song: http://vid48.com/watch_video.php?v=RD13833YHNBH (http://vid48.com/watch_video.php?v=RD13833YHNBH)
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nooooooooooo noro dont die :cry: :cry: :cry:
takamina you have much more power than you know ^^
I hope takamina will be ok :cry: :cry:
anyway good update want more ^^
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NOoooo!!! Noro Died!! :cry: (though I think this would still be in the future :P )
HA!! I was Correct!!! :P :D
Takamina being strong and all :P XD
I'm starting to the think that Acchan was the 'Unknown' Girl... :huhuh
Or Have I Mistaken?... :?
This mean Takamina has Premonition? :?
When I practicaly saw 'To Be Continued' :temper:
Me Want More Updates!! :panic: :tantrum:
Can't Wait For More!!! :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Jurina's a Human... :yep:
And Sae's a Bad Guy! :shocked
Well at least she's in it :wub:
I also forgot to ask about Sayaka! :nervous
Thank you for the Reply, I can't wait for the next Chapter! :panic:
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i just read this fic
and one thing for sure
this fic is AWESOME! :twothumbs
nice job!
ps: btw will Rena make an appearance?
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eehh..??static sound?is it acchan?
I hope i'm wrong....huhuhu..don't wanna acchan be the one who's bad here...please :bow:
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Ah... Takamina actually very strong....
Who was the person betraying them... ? Atsuko?
Was it really a dream or a premonition?
What's going to happen next?
Can't wait to find out
Thank you for the update
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Agh!! I thought that the end is the spoilers but no! Something must relate to this...
:smhid :roll: :?
~Oh...T-The principle just died...To protect them, thanks god that it is a dream!~!~
:twothumbs XD :)
~Ohh!! Takamina way the go!! A powerful aura that is stronger than an S class?! Sugoii!!
:theking XD :w00t:
~Ah!! Takamina have this bird tattoo!! That's cool, and it must...happen in the reality?
:? :huhuh :roll:
~Who knows if she really have that thing...But who is the mysterious women who hits her?~?~?
:smhid :shocked XD
~Well, i'll be waiting for the next update!~!~!~ Nice and interesting chapter by the way!~!~!~
:twothumbs :thumbsup :bow:
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I'm finished and right now I'm posing it sorry for my bad english again Teehee XD XD XD
Elo: HEHEHE that's only a dream but who knows if noro will die. :) :) :)
7sam14: hahaha arigatou :) :) :) and yes takamina is kind of that strong
DiVAGal2458: yes sayaka is in here :) :) :)
Rena-chan Daisuki: arigatou :) :) :) yes rena is in here and her role are really really so cool.. :) :) :)
no-chan: eehhh i can't explain but just continue to read :) :) :)
cisda83: arigatou hmm was it really a dream or a vision?? who knows only God knos jowk.. :lol: :lol: :lol:
Dieyg48: THANK YOU!!! ehh i wonder who is that :lol: :) :) :) :)
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Chapter 1-3
Mistrust and Truth
After Takamina have a strange dream everyday and everynight she’s still wondering who is that girl hit her and she notice that why she have that phoenix tattoo in her arms. She goes straight to the school and she saw Acchan, suddenly she hear some static sound and it is familiar in her dream.
“Hi Takamina.” Acchan smile at Takamina .
“Hello Acchan.” Takamina answered but she still hears some static that hurt her head.
“Are you okay Takamina? Do you need help?” Acchan ask confusedly.
“No I’m alright Thanks.” Takamina smile.
“No it’s impossible I must be hallucinating, maybe I will just forget to what I have dream last night.”
Takamina and Acchan go to the school. Yukirin rushed to Takamina and Acchan and she tell that Director Noro call them. They rushed into the Director’s office.
“Now all of you are here. I have a mission for you.” Director Noro said while walking back and forth.
“Is it a class mission?!!” Takamina said excitedly and sparlked eyes.
“No. It is a special mission but you need training, three days of training. Is that clear? Director Noro said
Takamina felt down for not knowing that mission is not a class mission and that is a special mission. It makes that she will stay on being Class B.
“It’s okay Takamina you will have your class promotion test.” Acchan comfort Takamina.
“WAAHHH!!!” Takamina hugs Acchan hardly.
“Wew why you are always want to take that class promotion test? Is it because you are still in Class B.?” Kojinyan asked and she’s like teasing Takamina.
“It is your fault Takamina. If you come in our Class Promotion Test and not to sleep all day you will be in Class A right now.” Yuko sighed.
“Yah yah yah. Guys stop now we know how lazy Takamina is.” Sasshi tease Takamina.
“URUSAI!!!!!” Takamina shout.
Seven of them are now training and not to waste their three days. Takamina practice her fire magic and explosive magis perfectly but still not enough. She cast her Radium Solarem (Solar Ray) but the ray goes vertically and she tries it again but still failed.
“Again!! Again!! Again!!” Takamina shouts while she cast her magic spell but still failed.
“Wew are you okay Takamina?? Let me heal you.” Tomochin asked..
“Yes I’m okay. Ahmm okay.” Takamina answered.
“Sanctis Relucent (Holy Glitter).” Tomochin cast on Takamina and replenish Takamina’s stamina and buff her magic aura.
“Thanks. I feel okay now.” Takamina smiled and continue to practice.
Yuko started to doubt about Acchan she smell something wrong, she don’t know why but she want to know it.
“Yuko what is it?” Acchan asked.
“Ahh nothing… nothing.” Yuko answeredly surprise.
“Yuko!!! Acchan!! I have food in here want some??” Kojinyan asked the two.
“Hai.” The two answered.
“Ehh where is Yukirin?? I saw her in here minutes ago.” Kojinyan asked confusedly.
“Naaahh she is just in the darkness side you know every time we will have training she always in there instead of training with us.” Yuko explained.
“Let me taste you food Kojinyan by the way what is is? Acchan asked.
“It is my specialty. Fried rice with vegetable omelet.” Kojinyan smiled.
“Itadakimasu.” The three said.
While the three eating Yuko is starting to looked at Kojinyan and her eyes sparkle.
Yuko cast Tierra jirón (Earth Shred) in Kojinyan clothes and the clothes has been ripped.
“Iye!!!!” Kojinyan shouts and cast Aqua Gagates Tormento (Water Jet Cannon) to Yuko.
“WAAH!!!!” Yuko shouts while she has been fly away and she saw a star and a planet around her.
Director Noro called Takamina to come in her office to say something about her parents and what happen to them. Her parents are now dead they are alive but they are in slumber and Director Noro tells that her mother is a Priestess of the Phoenix Clan and her father is a Dragon Lord from Dragon Clan. Phoenix Clan and Dragon Clan is one of the major Royal families in the Pyro Country so Takamina is a Royal blood. Takamina was shocked after hearing that.
“Eehh!!! Is that true? If they are alive where are they now I want to see them!!!” Takamina shouts and cry for knowing that they are alive.
“As I say they are asleep. They are sleeping for how many years since you born Takamina.” Director Noro pity Takamina.
“Why you didn’t tell me earlier?? Why??” Takamina asked.
“I didn’t tell you about it because you are not ready for it but now you are ready to know this and to accept your fate as the next Priestess of the Phoenix of your clan.” Director Noro said and gave the Phoenix feather that symbolize of being the heirless of the Phoenix Clan.
She don’t know about her past since her grandmother cast a Memory magic that seal her memory and if she turns 20 or 22 her memory in the past will come back. Yuko silently sneaked into Director Noro office and she eavesdrop their conversation.
“So I see. That’s why she have that phoenix tattoo that she tells me an hour ago and I have been notice that strange aura and that aura is belongs to Takamina.” Yuko thought in her mind.
Director Noro’s pen sensor moves a lot and notice that they are not two but three person in the office but she ignores it. Takamina went in the office as Yuko sneaked out of the office but Noro already detect her but for godsake she ignore it.
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TO BE CONTINUED
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Ah...W-Wait...She said that Acchan's voice is almost da' same as the mystrious girl...hm...
:roll: :? 8)
~Is it really her? Or it is just Takamina's own imagination...What if it is true?! Agh!~!~!~
XD :P :doh:
~Ah...Naruhodo...That's explain on why did Takamina is the only one who is in Class B...
:lol: XD :yep:
~She didn't even take the Class Promotion Test and instead, she sleep the whole day?! So relax!~!~
:shocked :? :lol:
~Hm...If she takes it she can be in Class A but that's not the point...That dream really stuck on my head...
:smhid :banghead: :panic:
~Agh! Surely! It must related to the whole thing!! Pls update soon! I can't wait for the next one!~!~!~
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Takamina is a royality...
Yuko detecting something off with Atsuko
What's going to happen next?
Can't wait to find out
Thank you for the update
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So... Takamina is of Royal Blood....
So That's Why!!!! XD
So Yuko thinks somethings weird with Acchan...not only that but Takamina too...
Can't Wait To Know About That! :panic:
Thanks For Zee Update!!! :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Sorry for not post about 4 days Gomen :) :) :)
Part 4 is here now :) :) :) :)
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Chapter 1-4
Domination
July 28, X463
Central Cross Star Alliance Headquarter Orion, Mortalis
Marshall General Mariko, Akimoto, Akane and Kanon had meet up and discuss about the invasion in the Magia. Akimoto ruled the Hercules country, Akane ruled the Perseus country and Kanon ruled the Andromeda country, they are the Four Marshall General also called by their ranking 35th Star Marshall General the highest rank in the whole universe and they formed an alliance called C.S.A short for Cross Star Alliances.
“Mariko-sama are you sure that we can invade the Magia? Those people are strong.” Akimoto asked.
“Yes I’m agree even though we have this weapon that can make the people of Magia weak. They have their Archsage and Archpriest and those high rank magic user.” Akane explained with her hands instructing something.
“Of course we do generals by the time we will invade it and we will start to invade the Elemental Continent, we will fire the Tiberium Cannon that my G.C.I make and with its full power the blast will exterminate the half of population of this continent” Mariko said.
“Generals we know that only Mariko-sama has good strategies, we have won many times in our great battles with her help we can conquer this continent.” Kanon retorted.
Mayuyu suddenly appears in the front of the generals and tell them about her new weapons that she made and she tells that they have Black Materia that will help them.
“Overdrive System this is a system that can overpower our weapon and make it strong than it’s normal state, B.L.A.K.C short for Black Light Amplification Stark Cannon.” Mayuyu explained in the crystal screen.
“B.L.A.K.C? Is it forbid to make a hyperweapon made in Black Materia?” Akimoto wondered.
“Is the Government of Logia known about this? Do you have a certificate permission to do this? Isn’t this illegal G.C.I Mayuyu?” Kanon mockingly asked.
“Well they didn’t know but I will not tell them about this and if ever they will know this thing I will kill them if they will touch my things!!” Mayuyu shouts and all of the system disrupt.
“Hayss, is your A.I no I mean G.C.I had been spoiled by making this ridiculous advance technologies? Her upgrades are in the fullest, will you please downgrade her just little because I will crush her if my patience is gone.” Kanon asked angrily.
Mayuyu didn’t tell the generals even her creator Mariko that she will make another weapon made in Black Materia and this weapon called Dark Rift and Space Rift. Dark Rift is a dimension and space ripping weapon and make a warp, Space Rift is a dimensional warp that can swallow a universe or a galaxy and send it to the other universe or galaxy to make a huge explosion larger than Big Bang and Supernova.
Leo, Zodiac Continent Leo HQ
Colonel Miichan ordered her army to be ready and prepare all of the weapons, airships and fortress.
Miichan is an Ability User: Void and Ancient Rune, she is a Colonel Rank under Marshall General Akimoto. Miichan saw a lot of airship flew away in their world and ready to the another Universal War. Also she is a part of Mariko’s Tohoshinki
“Eeeehh it will start again. Well Mariko-sama really wants to conquer the Magia, hmmm I guess she needs my help again, my loyalty for Mariko-sama will not fade away.” Miichan wandered and smile.
“Colonel everything is prepared we are ready to go now.” The soldier said.
“Very well.. ALRIGHT!!! We will go now!! It will be a months until we reach our destination.” Miichan shouts.
Miichan and her army flew away with their fortress called Excalibur Fortress its size is same of Io and its weapon and airships are estimated about 200 million to 500 million and its population capacity is 500-700 million soldiers.
“Now it is the time to invade the Magia and to make another history. Go to the west, location Magia. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.” Mariko laughed devilish.
Takamina and others didn’t know what danger will come to them and it will appear like a strike of a lightning. Still Yuko investigate everything about Acchan and about Takamina that she saw that Takamina was a daughter of a Phoenix Priestess and a Dragon Lord. Mariko and the other four general are ready to go in the Magia and proceed to do the Project JUDGEMENT and they will reach to their destination Magia about a months. Mayuyu calculated everything and it was successful according to her plan.
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END OF CHAPTER 1
Next: Chapter 2: Journey
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Mou Arigatou Gozai Masu :) :) :) :)
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thx for updating :bow:
looking forward for next chap :3
im still wondering about the pairing :?
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Yo! I've just finish reading all the previous chapter!! Amazing~ Mage is cool!~
-Oh...Mariko-sama want to invade The Magia~ Sugee~
-Eh?! What weapons? That's dangerous...It can make people weak.
-BLAKC? Kakkoi desu ne~ A month until they reach their destination.
-Oh please! Make Takamina strong within a month..as well as the other!! Haha.
Plz update the next one!! Thanks for the nice chapter!
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Hey, an Update.... (though i only read it today :nervous )
Thanks For the Update!!!
Obviously Miichan is loyal to Mariko :P
In 1 Month?! Takamina must get strong! :D
though I take it she'll remain a Class B? :glasses:
I'm still wondering what the pairing is still Though... :?
Atsumina?! Takayuu?! :frustrated:
also, I wonder if Acchan works for Mariko or something? :?
or was it a Different person?
Aaaaggghhh!!!!! I Need To Know The Answers to these!!!! :tantrum: :mon whine:
I Need an Update!!!! :mon whine: :on cny2:
.... if u have time.... ( :nervous )
Can't wait for the Next Update!!!! :temper:
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Ah... Mariko is coming to attack Minami soon..
Would everything happen according to minami's vision?
Would Atsuko really betray them?
Can't wait
Thank you
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