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Title: Takahashi-kun no Revenge! (Update Chapter 4!)
Post by: nadiyahdz16 on July 20, 2013, 06:10:57 PM
Prologue

"I won't like someone like you! You're so weak and pathetic!" The girl yelled as she closed her house's door with a loud bang, leaving the boy outside with teary eyes and runny nose.

The boy slowly walked away from the girl's house with a broken heart while holding the boquet of flowers he intended to give her.

As he walked to his house, he met those bullies again. Not wanting to be involved with them, he stepped past them.

"Hey! It's Kawachi! Let's tell him to buy juices for us!" One of the bullies unfortunately saw him and called his friends.

The tallest snickered, "Oi, Kawachi Buy us orange juices with your pocket money!"

Suddenly the girl who just rejected him walked to where he and the bullies were. She chuckled seeing him, "Don't call him Kawachi. His name is Piggy!" She laughed and the bullies laughed along with her.

The 'Piggy' boy couldn't take the mockings anymore and ran away with those bullies chasing after him. He ran and ran but he wasn't fast enough with his big body, the bullies managed to catch him and beat him up.

He was left with a bleeding nose in the middle of the park and the roses he had earlier was scattered around, the bullies stomped on them.

He cried his eyes out on the way home.

He opened his door and was met with the worried eyes of his grandpa. "Kai-tan, what's wrong?" He asked gently as his grandson suddenly burst into tears in his laps.

"Grandpa help me! I want to be healthy! I want to be thin! Bring me to Fukuoka with you!" He cried out loud.

"Eh... But dieting is not good for an 8 years old kid..."

"I don't care! I want to take revenge! I want to be handsome!" He said determinedly.

His grandpa sighed and shook his head in disbelieve. "Fine! I won't go easy on you! Let's go to Fukuoka and make you exercise and face those bullies, young man!"

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A/N: Hey everyone! This is my first fanfic here  in this site! And for your information, this story is based on 'Masamune-kun no revenge' manga. Well I was inspired by that story so I decided to write it with akb as the characters... But I won't make it completely the same! Thanks for reading! Oh and this is genderbender by the way...
Title: Re: Takahashi-kun no Revenge!
Post by: olive29 on July 20, 2013, 06:27:54 PM
Nice prologue  :twothumbs

Wonder who's the girl who reject Kai???  :?

Can't wait for the next update..
Title: Re: Takahashi-kun no Revenge!
Post by: Kochiki on July 20, 2013, 06:44:40 PM
Ouh...Kawachi is actually Kai...And he has big body?!?!
-I can't imagine it nor i want to imagine it...
-Bullies?!?! Poor Kai...Dat girl!!
-Oh, having a diet eh? I bet he'll succeed it!! Go handsome!!
-Btw, i wonder who was that girl...don't tell me...It's...
-Hrm...Just gonna keep it ...Heheh

>Plz update soon!! Can't wait for the next one!!!~
Title: Re: Takahashi-kun no Revenge!
Post by: blakwhite on July 20, 2013, 06:46:35 PM
nice prologue :3
btw im read masamune kun no revange manga too  :D
looking forward for next update
and i will happy if its not as same as masamune kun no revange

btw what pairing is this?

sorry for my bad at english  :grin:
Title: Re: Takahashi-kun no Revenge!
Post by: cisda83 on July 20, 2013, 11:41:35 PM
Interesting new story..

Can't wait to see the next

Thank you

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Takahashi-kun no Revenge!
Post by: Sydney W on July 21, 2013, 01:36:26 AM
Pls continue on writing the next.
I bet Kawachi (Kai) gonna be thin & handsome.
Title: Re: Takahashi-kun no Revenge!
Post by: shiruba_rein on July 21, 2013, 02:14:56 AM
Kai is going to become handsome and hot I bet . . . .

And the girl who rejected him. . . . . Acchan?  :?
Title: Takahashi-kun no Revenge! Chapter 1
Post by: nadiyahdz16 on July 21, 2013, 08:01:44 AM
8 years later...

"Some things are made by God for the handsome guys only... Now that I'm like this, it'll be easier for me to do my plan... Revenge!" A boy who was standing in front of a mirror muttered and smiled to himself.

"Kai-chan! Time for school! Hurry up, this is your first day!"

The boy quickly picked up his bag and went out from his room with a big wide smile. "Okay! I'm going now, mum!" He yelled and went to the front door immediately.

"But Kai-chan! I made you breakfast!" His childish mom pouted seeing his son ran away without eating his breakfast first.

Meanwhile, Takahashi Kai, the boy shuddered as he imagined eating his mom unhealty and oily food. That's not good for his body so he better eat breakfast in school rather than eating his mom food.

'Hmm... Akihabara High School, eh? I got my acceptance letter yesterday and I couldn't help but jump for joy! This school literally is the best school in Tokyo! Heehee I guess I'm a genius.' He thought conceitedly.

He arrived at the school and went to the administration office to ask where his class is. Well, he is the new transfer student in Akihabara High.

As he entered the room, an old lady greeted him cheerfully, "Ah! You must be Takahashi Kai-san! I've been waiting for you! Please take a seat!" The old lady had a creepy smile on her face and her breathing was abnormal.

'Is she going to pounce me once I sit down?' Kai thought fearfully as he noticed the lustful look the old lady had on her face while staring at Kai.

"Now let's see... You're in class 2-B..." The old lady cleared her throath and checked the data of Kai. Kai wondered where might the girl's class be. And he concluded that because that girl is pretty smart, she might be in the class A. After all A classes are usually for the smart ones.

"Um... This is just a request but... Can you place me in class A?" Kai requested while playing with his fingers. He had a small smile on his face and in an instant, the old lady squealed loudly seeing the cute smile from Kai.

"OF COURSE I CAN!!! Now let me place you there because you're cute!" She pinched Kai's cheeks lightly and scribbled something on her note book.

'Heh, some things really are made for the handsome guys only.' Kai smirked internally and thanked the old lady.

Kai's POV

I walked to my new class and was called inside by the homeroom teacher.

"So this is Takahashi Kai-kun. Please introduce yourself, Takahashi-kun."

I bowed to the class and showed the perfect smile I could muster at that time. "I'm from Fukuoka, my name is Takahashi Kai, 16 years old. Nice to meet you all!"

The girls were in awe as they saw my most charming smile. I could also hear them murmuring things about me being so cool and cute at the same time.

Heh, it felt so good being the center of the good attention!

But as I observed the faces of my new classmates, she isn't here. Oh well, it's a pity but maybe it's okay. After all I don't want to rush things.

The teacher then cleared her throath, "Ehm, please be quiet and Takahashi-kun, my name is Shimada Haruka, the homeroom teacher in this class, 2-A. Now you may take your seat beside Minegishi-kun. Minegishi-kun, raise your hand, please!" A cute looking boy raised his hand and I walked to the vacant seat beside him.

I greeted him with a smile as I settled down on my seat, "I'm Takahashi Kai, nice to meet you, Minegishi-san. Please call me Kai."

The cute boy showed me his green and greeted back, "Nice too meet you, Kai! I'm Minegishi Kuu. Please call me Kuu and I love cakes! Do you love it too?" He asked me with his big round eyes. Uh, I wonder if this guy here is a man... He definitely looks like a girl! His face is just sooo feminine!

"Hmm, I don't really consume sweets... Sorry." Don't you know that sweets contain so many calories? I might get fat! And it'll tarnish my handsome guy image.

We continued the homeroom and after that the 2nd period and finally a break. I was chatting with Kuu and some of my classmates.

"You know, Kai-kun, you're so smart! I heard you've got the perfect scores in the exams you took to transfer here! And also handsome but you're not arrogant... You're so kind!" The class president, Yokoyama Yui-san praised me with her sparkling eyes.

Kuu nodded as he munched on his third chocolate puff. "Yeah, well, we have someone like you here... She's the top student in our year, she's pretty but-" His sentence got cut off as someone suddenly opened the door loudly.

"Who's Sato Takeru?!" The figure appeared and yelled loudly as she crossed her arms in front of her chest with a confident smirk. There was a girl behind her also.

Wait... The shoulder length hair, big round but cold eyes... That's her! The rude girl!

Yeah, that's the girl who rejected me. She's the one who made me suffer from bullying and grandpa's strict diet methods. Ugh, because my plan for revenge, I even changed my surname to grandpa's surname. From Kawachi Kai to Takahashi Kai.

My classmates were murmurring something as they saw the rude girl entering our class with her menancing look. Accidentally, our eyes met and she walked over to my desk and sat on top of it.

"Oi, do you know Sato Takeru?" She asked with a glare.

"I-it's me!" A voice spoke up. The rude girl and I turned our heads to the source of the voice and saw a fat boy with glasses raising his hand, blushing hardly while facing the ground.

She got off from my desk and walked over to Sato. She signaled something to the girl behind her and the girl then pulled a letter from her pocket. Maeda took it and opened the envelope.

"Princess, I fell in love with you on the first sight. I saw you in your P.E class and I couldn't stop thinking of you. I like seeing your legs that is covered by your long socks.... It's so pretty that I want to touch it. I like you, Princess. Will you be mine? I'll wait for you at the roof top after school. With love, Sato Takeru from 2-A." She read the letter aloud so all students inside my class could hear her. She darkly chuckled after reading the letter and sat down on a desk. She once again crossed her arms.

A smirk was plastered on her plump lips, "Is this what you call a confession? It's pathetic and you sounds like a maniac. You like my legs that is covered by my socks? What are you? A perverted maniac? Someone like you makes me sick! And here is my answer, I refuse." She said harshly before continuing, "By the way you've got a new nickname. You're Pervert Maniac now." She stood up and cleaned her skirt. "Let's go, Mayu." She called her follower and went out from my class with a statisfied smirk played on her lips.

I was left agape, did that girl just hummiliate a person in front of so many people?! I guess she's worse than 8 years ago...

Kuu munched on his bread while worriedly glancing at Sato who was weeping on the floor, being comforted by Yokoyama.

"Who's that?" I pretended to ask.

"Maeda Atsuko from class 2-B. The Brutal Princess. Well, she's the daughter of Maeda Atsushi, the founder of Maeda's Supermarket and other corporations. She's extremely smart, the top student in our school and she's also the top when it comes to beauty.... But her attitude turns people off. She's so harsh, that's why people often called her as the Brutal Princess." Kuu explained and drank his strawberry milk carefully.

I internally smirked. I guess it didn't take so long to find you, Maeda Atsuko... Well, just you wait! I'll do my revenge very soon.

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A/N: thanks for the comments! I hope you like the first chapter!
Title: Re: Takahashi-kun no Revenge! (Update Chapter 1!)
Post by: shiruba_rein on July 21, 2013, 08:10:25 AM
So how is Kai planning to do his revenge?. . . .

Would Acchan recognize Kai?  . . . Looking forward to your next chapter!  :)
Title: Re: Takahashi-kun no Revenge! (Update Chapter 1!)
Post by: Kochiki on July 21, 2013, 10:02:09 AM
Ha! As i thought! That girl who reject Kai is Atsuko!!
-See?! He's handsome~ And now i can imagine it!!!~
-So that pretty boy is Kuu...Well, he is cute though~* imagining*
-Pfftt...S-Sato Takeru is the pervert maniac!! Bwahaha!!
-*cough* I'm gonna get killed by Sato-san's fans later if this go on...
-But who cares...This is getting interesting~ revenge!!

>Plz update soon...Wanna see the next chapter!!!~
Title: Re: Takahashi-kun no Revenge! (Update Chapter 1!)
Post by: korin48 on July 21, 2013, 11:22:03 AM
What the f***?!?! Acchan is the one who rejected Kai?!?! :shocked I can't wait to know how they fell for each other!!! :drool: :w00t:
Please continue!!!  :twothumbs *vanishes*
Title: Re: Takahashi-kun no Revenge! (Update Chapter 1!)
Post by: Takahashi Atsuko on July 21, 2013, 12:39:39 PM
What!?!?!??!?! Was Acchan who rejected Kai? And she's bad? :glasses: What the hell is going on here? :frustrated:
Good start!  :on GJ: :on GJ: This fic will be very interesting
Next chapter fast please   :kneelbow: :kneelbow:
       
Title: Re: Takahashi-kun no Revenge! (Update Chapter 1!)
Post by: olive29 on July 21, 2013, 01:37:44 PM
So...Acchan is the one who rejected Kai..  :grin:

Can't wait for the next chapter...  :twothumbs
Title: Re: Takahashi-kun no Revenge! (Update Chapter 1!)
Post by: cisda83 on July 21, 2013, 03:20:51 PM
Ah Atsuko was such a horrible girl... Very bad attitude

What's going to happen to Kai's revenge?

Would he success...  ?

Can't wait to see the next

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Takahashi-kun no Revenge! Chapter 2
Post by: nadiyahdz16 on July 22, 2013, 04:17:14 AM
Chapter 2

A week after...

It was pretty peaceful inside class 2-A in Akihabara High. The students were still a few. Some were sleeping on their desk and the others were talking with each other.

Minegishi Kuu, one of the student in class 2-A was already eating one of his sweet cakes. He munched on his heaven gleefully.

But then someone slammed the door open. Takahashi Kai was behind the door. He greeted all his classmates before quickly making his way to his chairmate, Kuu who was choking a bit because he was surprised by the loud slam Kai made earlier.

"Kuu! I heard that you were in the same class with Maeda in the freshmen year!!!" Kai, not noticing Kuu who was pretty much gasping for air to fill his lungs, hugged Kuu with one arm around his neck. Kuu began struggling and freed himself from the guy and punched his chest several times.

After awhile, he could finally breathe normally and when he did, he sent killing glare to Kai who looked so innoccently dumb. Kuu cleared his throath, "Yeah, but we were only classmates... What do you want to know?" He answered the question earlier. Kai grinned widely hearing that, "Tell me all about her that you know!" He excitedly said, earning a confused look from Kuu.

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Kai's POV

"She's pretty close with the rich and smart girls, usually drinks tea with them, her follower's name is Watanabe Mayu... They are close since childhood... Wait, I didn't see her with Maeda when I played with her back then... Nah whatever." I muttered under my breath while walking around the corridor and checking my notes that had been filled with Maeda's informations from Kuu and several others.

"Hmmm... What is this? 'She has never seen eating her lunch.' Huh? Is she hiding something?" Weird... Why everyone hadn't seen her eating lunch? Wait, I remember she and the other girls drink their teas in the garden. Maybe I should check them out.

I walked to the school's garden and saw Maeda with those rich princesses. She seemed like she was respected by them. But then Watanabe Mayu tapped her shoulder and signaled something, which made her stood up and excused herself from the other girls.

I followed them and saw that Maeda and Watanabe entered the gym storage room. I opened the door a little and peeked inside. There, I saw Maeda eating a lunch box eagerly.

"Mayu, buy me sandwiches and croissants." She ordered and I saw Watanabe nodded her head and walked towards the door. I moved away from the door and hid myself behind the nearby bushes. Once I didn't see Watanabe, I carefully entered the storage room.

Maeda munched on her food, not turning her head to me after she heard the noise of the door being opened. "You're so fast, Mayu. Don't tell me the bread store isn't crowded?" She thought that I was Watanabe. I didn't say anything and walked closer to her. Noticing the silence, she finally teared her eyes away from her lunch box and looked at me. From what I could see, her eyes widened in surprise after seeing me.

"Wha- who are you?!" She yelled and glared at me. I chuckled a little before sitting down on the floor, not minding her scary glare even though I swear it was so scary.

"Good afternoon, I'm the new transfer student. Takahashi Kai from class 2-A." I showed my charming smile but she seemed unfazed. Maeda still had her scary glare on her eyes.

"Well, I don't care who you are but if you still want to be alive, shoo." She calmed down a little and continued eating. I peeked at her lunch box and saw the menu was pork rice. Hahaha, a princess is eating pork rice! Not to mention with a lot of tomatoes...

I ignored her statement earlier, "You've got the apetite there, eh? Maeda-san. I wonder if all girls are like you... Well, my lil sister also eats like you." I grinned and saw her moved a little hiding something beside her. I moved too, wanting to see what did she hide.

Whoa... There were three empty lunch boxes beside her... Meaning that the one she currently eat was the fourth one... She got a monster tummy...

Just then the door opened, revealing Watanabe with two plastic bags in her hands. "5 ham sandwiches and 6 croissants for you, Atsuko-sama." She announced, not noticing my presence inside the room too. Maeda really got a monster tummy...

I glanced at Maeda and her cheeks were red. "Eh... You sure eat a lot..." I managed to let out a sentence and she snapped after hearing my voice.

"Shut up! Don't you think that I will let you off so easily! Now get out!!!" She shrieked and kicked me out the room. Ugh... Her kick hurt...

Oh well, I've found her weakness. This is gonna be interesting. I smirked at the thought and cleaned my clothes before walking away from the storage room.

End of Kai's POV

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"Ugh, what the hell?! How could he know that we are here?! Did he follow us?! Ew! He's sick!" Maeda Atsuko complained loudly, shuddering at the thought of someone stalking her.

"But his name is Kai... His name is the same but his family name is different..." She muttered but quickly shook her head, "Why am I recalling such an old memory?"

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Kai's POV

After the incident, I began my plan, that is to make Maeda likes me and then reject her after that. Hehehe such a great plan, right? I can't wait for that to happen.

I greet her in the morning, try to talk to her and smile when our eyes meet. Of course all she does to answer my kind gestures is her killing glare. But I keep going on, greeting her every morning until some rumours started.

It was P.E class for my class. I was playing basketball with Kuu, passing here and there.

"Hey, Kai, I heard that you and Maeda got closer lately... Is it true?" He asked and I caught the ball he passed to me. I glanced at Maeda's class. I could see her from the field as she sat near the window. She turned her head to my direction and I waved at her when our eyes meet. She then scribbled something on her book and then showed it to me.

"Go home, you creepy narcissist."

What the hell... Am I really a creepy narcissist? But I only appreciate my face more than anyone else... Does that make me a narcissist?

Then a ball landed on my head and I crouched down in pain. "Hey, who threw the ball?!" I asked in annoyed tone while rubbing my aching head. The girls and the boys asked me if I was okay but then someone whispered in my ear,

"It must be nice being close to Maeda, eh? Don't let it get into your head, transfer student."

End of Kai's POV

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Maeda Atsuko and Watanabe Mayu were walking to the gate to go home together. But then Atsuko turned back and faced Mayu, "Hey, I forgot my text book in class. Can you get it for me?" She asked, earning a nod and Mayu hurriedly went back to the school building.

Atsuko sighed as she looked at Mayu retreating back. "Now what does that Takahashi want? He sent me a letter saying we should meet after school..."

But then someone pulled her hair. Atsuko let out a surprised yelp and there she saw the person she rejected a month ago, the Perverted Maniac. Atsuko calmed down seeing the weak guy.

"Oh, you're the Perv-"

"Don't call me that!!! I've been the main topic of some jokes because of you! You rejected me but how come you never rejected Takahashi's advancement to you?! What a perfect couple both of you are... A handsome guy and a beautiful girl... But let's see if the beautiful girl is bald... Will the handsome guy still like the girl?" Sato Takeru let out a creepy smirk as he pulled out a scissor from his pocket.

Atsuko panicked seeing the scissor and she closed her eyes, seeing the scissor so near to her hair.

But then she felt that there was someone standing in front of her. She opened her eyes and saw Takahashi Kai, protecting her from the scissor, resulting the scissor buried inside his palm instead. Takeru looked at the blood flowing out from Kai's hand in horror and he quickly ran away from them.

Kai pulled the scissor away from his palm and smiled worriedly at the girl behind him. He turned back to face Atsuko and touched her hair, "You're okay, right?" He questioned the still stunned girl.

Atsuko snapped back to reality and nodded, "But your..."

Kai smiled seeing the wound in his hand and touched it a little, "It doesn't hurt if it's for you." He chuckled, "Well, Maeda-san, I have something to take care of, see you tomorrow!" Kai waved and ran away from the girl.

Atsuko was stunned hearing the words from her saviour, "What was that for?"

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Kai ran back to his house while wincing in pain, 'It hurts!!!!! It hurts like hell! I feel like my hand can't feel anything!!! I just want to collapase right now but it'd be embarrassing! Ugh... The things I do for revenge...'

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Kai was exercising in his bedroom, running on his treadmile while thinking. 'Heh, usually in mangas, those kind of words will make the girl's heart go weak! Guess I've done a good job!' He thought and laughed at that.

"Kai-chaaan! You've got a love letter! Here!" His mom walked inside and placed the letter on his desk. She then went out while giggling, saying things like "My son is sooo famous!"

Kai turned off the treadmile and went to open the letter. He teared the envelope and read what was inside.

It wrote:

Piggy.

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A/N: thanks for waiting! Now I present you the second chapter!


Title: Re: Takahashi-kun no Revenge! (Update Chapter 2!)
Post by: cisda83 on July 22, 2013, 05:04:52 AM
Oh... Kai was so great there..

Yeah the classic way of appearing like a cool person...

Would Atsuko like Kai because of that?

Who wrote the letter 'Piggy' to Kai?

Was it Atsuko or someone else?

Would Kai be able to get revenge on Atsuko?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Takahashi-kun no Revenge! (Update Chapter 2!)
Post by: Kochiki on July 22, 2013, 11:31:51 AM
Ha...Ha...Ha...Atsuko have the appetite there, a big one~
-Mayuyu ka? Naruhodo...Somehow i get the feeling that...
-Nah...Nothing at all~ Oh, Kai just saved Atsuko from...
-T-The perverted maniac!! Bwahahaha! Who started that??~ *look at author-san*
-Uh...Sorry, just now i lost my mind...Cuz' it's getting interesting!!!~
-Piggy?! That word...I think it didn't easily come out from Atsuko's mouth...
-Must be someone else.....I think i know who 'she' is ((Maybe, lol, sorry))!!!~

>Anyway, plz update soon! Can't wait for chapter 3!!~ Nice one!!~
Title: Re: Takahashi-kun no Revenge! (Update Chapter 2!)
Post by: shiruba_rein on July 22, 2013, 12:47:37 PM
Lol. Atsuko is such a glutton yet she maintains her 'princess-like' appearance   :lol:

Who was the sender of that letter and how did he know that Kai was once fat?. . . . .  :?
Title: Re: Takahashi-kun no Revenge! (Update Chapter 2!)
Post by: nunku on July 22, 2013, 04:25:52 PM
go on kai-kun  :D
atsuko kowai naa but it have a reason right?
who send the letter to kai?
wait for next chap  :twothumbs :twothumbs
thank you author san  :thumbsup
Title: Re: Takahashi-kun no Revenge! (Update Chapter 2!)
Post by: kuro808 on July 22, 2013, 06:31:01 PM
Kai saves Acchan and yet no respect XD

Maybe no chivalry in a bloody palm
Title: Takahashi-kun no Revenge! Chapter 3
Post by: nadiyahdz16 on July 26, 2013, 10:44:00 AM
Once again it was a peaceful morning inside the class 2-A. Some were sleeping and some were conversing with each other. Minegishi Kuu arrived and as he sat down, he quickly put out his so called 'heaven'.

Kuu smiled seeing the sweets on his hands. But then he looked around the class room and noticed that Kai hadn't arrived yet. Remembering a few days ago accident were he was gasping for air because of Kai... He made a mental note to eat his heaven after Kai arrived in the class.

But then for some reason, after 25 minutes of waiting, Kai didn't show up. It was weird because Kai was one of the dilligent student. He usually come to school 30 minutes before the first period and it was weird that he didn't show up as there were only 10 minutes left before the first period starts.

Thinking that Kai might be absent, Kuu quickly unwrapped his heaven and stared at them lovingly. When he was about to take the first fine bite, the door opened loudly with a restless looking Kai behind it.

Unfortunately for Kuu, he once again choked, surprised by the loud sound of the door. But he had prepared! He quickly grabbed his water bottle and chugged down a lot of water before finally realising a relieved sigh. He turned his gaze at his new best friend who took a seat beside him.

Kuu wanted to be mad at him but after seeing Kai restless and sad face, he decided to be mad at him later.

He poked Kai's cheek, "Ne, Kai, is something bothering you?" He asked as Kai turned his attention to him.

Kai sighed deeply, "I just slept late..." He answered and lay his head on the desk. 'I didn't get a wink of sleep... It's all because of that piggy letter... I wonder who sent that...'

He shuddered at the thought of someone knowing his old self, when he was a big fatty and cowardly boy.

The first period started and in a blink of eyes, it was already lunch break time. Kai stood up and quickly headed to the gym storage. He wanted to meet Maeda. After all, the first suspect is Maeda as she was the one who made the much hated nick name for him.

As he walked there, he saw Watanabe Mayu entered the storage room hurriedly while holding 2 plastic bags in her hands.

Kai opened the door of the storage room and peeked a little. There he saw Maeda gobbling a lot of food inside her mouth and he could hear her saying things like how late Watanabe was.

'How can a girl eat like that?! And the way she treats Watanabe... It's like she's Watanabe's step mother and Watanabe is the Cinderella. Only this time, thr step mother is a glutton like a pig.' Kai thought and snickered slightly.

Maeda could hear some snickering outside and quickly yelled, "Who's there?!" Kai then opened the door to reveal himself. He had a smiley face and bowed to Maeda like a gentleman, "Good afternoon, Maeda-san. I'm here again."

Maeda stared at him for a bit before continuing to eat her sushi bento. She ignored Kai's presence totally.

"Oooh, I see you're in the middle of eating your bento... May I know how many bentos have you eaten before this one?" Kai teased as she sat down on the floor and rest his back on the wall.

Maeda threw a glare at him, an irritated feeling kept on piling up inside her mind. But she chose to eat her lunch quietly, not wanting to give her attention to a small fry.

Kai tilted her head seeing the princess being unusually quiet. He then shrugged his shoulder before closing his eyes and sighed, the piggy letter still haunting his mind. He then scratched his hair with his injured palm and Maeda saw his hand.

She felt a lil bit guilty seeing how he got the wound because of her. She cleared her throath which earned Kai attention, "Does your... Hand hurts?"

Kai smiled seeing how flustered she looked after asking the question to him. "It hurt when I took a shower earlier and when I ate... But after seeing your face, I'm feeling much better! It doesn't hurt now!" He showed his bandaged palm and slapped it with his other hand.

'Shit, it hurts so much but I have to look cool! Gah! I shouldn't have slapped it!' He actually sobbed and winced inside but he had to keep his cool for the sake of revenging.

Maeda could feel her hear skip a beat seeing his smile but she quickly looked away and continued the 5th box of her bento. Her cheeks were somehow red. Unfortunately for Kai, he was too busy wincing and sobbing inside his head to see the cute blush on Maeda's face.

Maeda then noticed that Watanabe wasn't there. Kai looked at Maeda who seemed to be searching the missing person in the storage room. "Watanabe went out to buy drinks..." Just then the door opened and Watanabe walked to her master and gave her a strawberry milk and she walked to Kai, giving him his share of chocolate milk.

"Eh?! You bought it for me?!" Kai couldn't believe it as he saw Watanabe nodded cutely. 'Oh my God... You're really a Cinderella aren't you, Mayu-chan? So cute and kind...' He thought as he sipped on his chocolate milk.

"Anyway, Maeda-san, have we met before I entered this school? I felt like we've met each other before." He tried asking to find out if Maeda is the culprit who sent him the letter.

Maeda lifted her eyebrow as she muched on her salmon sushi. She gulped it down before letting out a word, "In your dreams! I never knew someone as conceited as you, you freaking narcissist." She answered calmly and took a sip on her milk.

Kai shrugged his shoulder, 'Hmm.. Definitely not her... It's her usual response... And she wouldn't send the heart breaking letter to me as she was a little guilty for being the cause of my injured hand.' He thought and stood up. He walked closer to her and placed his hand on her left cheek.

"You know, Maeda-san... I feel sad that you have a horrible view of me... Am I really that narcissist? I'll try to change as I want you to change your view of me... And it's because I like you and I want to be your friend, Maeda-san." He winked and took her hand. He held it and kissed it before leaving the storage room.

He walked slowly as he counted inside his head. '3... 2... 1... 0.'

"WHAT WAS THAT FOR?!?!?!" Maeda's voice could be heard from afar and Kai smirked as he imagined Maeda's completely red face because of his words earlier.

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Atsuko and Mayu were walking down the hall. Atsuko's mood was so horrible and Mayu just quietly following her behind. She didn't dare to make Atsuko's mood worse.

As the walked, someone bumped to Atsuko which knocked her down the floor. Mayu shivered, imagining what her master would do to the 'unfortunate' person.

But then she heat the very familiar voice, "Eh? Acchan? Mayuyu? Ahh!! It's really both if you! I'm so glad that I transferred here!" The figure spoke as she helped Atsuko to stand up.

"Tomochin?"

"Itano-sama..."

Both Atsuko and Mayu said, still shocked seeing their childhood friend. The person smiled, showing her cute fangs like a vampire.

"Yup, the one and only Itano Tomomi!" She said and did a pose to her close friends.

Atsuko squealed seeing her long lost bestfriend before hugging her tightly, "Oh my God! I thought you moved to America?! When did you come back? I've missed you soooo much!" She squealed excitedly at the girl.

Tomomi chuckled seeing her old friend's antic. "I just came back last week and I transferred here yesterday... I missed you too, Acchan." She hugged her best friend back tightly.

She noticed Mayu who looked tense, she smiled at her, showing a sign which Mayu replied with her sadistic smile. They seemed like they were talking to each other by their eyes. Atsuko didn't notice that as she was busy hugging her long lost best friend

She gestured Mayu to come closer and she did. When she was near, she hugged her too, making Atsuko hugged Mayu too. They group hugged for awhile before releasing it with a laugh and a smile.

"Ah, I see that both of you haven't changed that much... But what happened to you, Mayu? You looked so silent and calm..." Tomomi wondered, looking at her other old friend. Deep inside she knew the reason.

"I'm okay... Itano-sama..." Mayu muttered under her breath as the smile she had earlier faded away. She just put an act as she knew that Tomomi knows the reason.

"Mou~ why are you calling me Itano? Call me Tomochin just like what you used to call me~" Tomomi pouted and pinched Mayu's cheeks.

Atsuko giggled seeing both of them, she hadn't seen Mayu's smile for a long time after Tomomi moved away.

Just then she saw Takahashi Kai walked with his classmate, Minegishi Kuu and the class president of his class, Yokoyama Yui. Kuu was eating his cakes while Kai and Yui was chatting with each other happily. Atsuko noticed Yui's big smile and suddenly she felt irritated.

Tomomi looked at Atsuko who looked a little mad for some reason. She followed Atsuko's gaze and saw three figures walking.

Soon, a small smirk appeared on her lips as she saw the familiar figure. The figures walked past them and the familiar one turned his head to her as he noticed her stare.

He smiled slightly to her, being a kind person he is. But then his smile disappeared completely after reading Tomomi's lips, who mouthed something to him, which shocked him greatly.

"Did you read my letter that I sent to you last night, Kawachi Piggy Kai-san?" She mouthed and smirked seeing the colour of Kai's face drained. Another figure who saw his face too, smirked, praising her old friend inside her mind.

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A/N: Yahoo! A new update for all of you! And a new character has come! It's Tomochin~ hope you like it~

Title: Re: Takahashi-kun no Revenge! (Update Chapter 3!)
Post by: shiruba_rein on July 26, 2013, 11:13:48 AM
Wha- ??

How did Tomochin know??.....
Title: Re: Takahashi-kun no Revenge! (Update Chapter 3!)
Post by: Kochiki on July 26, 2013, 01:19:35 PM
Well, that's beyond my expectation...
-I really thought it was Mayu who did it...
-But a new character appear...and the culprit too..
-I'm only right on the part where Atsuko was not the culprit~
-Dang...How will Kai react after this?! Oh no...
-What'll happen next?!?! can't wait for the next chapter!!~

>Plz update soon!!~ Looking forward for the next one!!~
Title: Re: Takahashi-kun no Revenge! (Update Chapter 3!)
Post by: cisda83 on July 26, 2013, 02:00:29 PM
Ah Itano was the one that noticed about Kai

What kind of trouble Kai would get?

Would Kai plan to make Atsuko love him work?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Takahashi-kun no Revenge! (Update Chapter 3!)
Post by: chemicalstar on July 26, 2013, 08:36:34 PM
i think Kai had mistaken about the girl who rejected him.
it's not acchan, it's tomochin....
Title: Re: Takahashi-kun no Revenge! (Update Chapter 3!)
Post by: ezha on July 26, 2013, 08:49:32 PM
PLEASE THIS STORY IS VERY GOOD ! I CAN'T WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPTER !!!
Title: Re: Takahashi-kun no Revenge! (Update Chapter 3!)
Post by: kuro808 on July 26, 2013, 09:17:38 PM
Tomochin appears and Kai still is in suffering :lol:
Title: Re: Takahashi-kun no Revenge! (Update Chapter 3!)
Post by: momondmozide on July 27, 2013, 12:41:13 AM
please update soon  :jphip:
Title: Takahashi-no Revenge! Chapter 4
Post by: nadiyahdz16 on July 27, 2013, 06:28:52 AM
Kai was speechless after reading what the new girl mouthed to him. Who was she?! Did he know her? Why did she know his nickname? All the questions in his mind were left unanswered as he couldn't recall any memory of her. She was a stranger to him.

Kai gulped loudly seeing the smirk on the beautiful stranger's face. The stranger then turned her body away from her and continued to talk with Maeda and Watanabe. He snapped back to reality when Kuu and Yokoyama called his name, waiting for him.

He bowed to them and continued to walk to the class. He glanced back at the stranger and found her glancing back at him. He swore he saw her smirked and winked at him... Which made his heart... Skipped a beat seeing how beautiful the stranger looked. He hastily turned his head back, his heart beating faster and faster.

Kai blushed and hung his head low, he just had a crush on a sadistic stranger who sent him a heart breaking letter.

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Atsuko raised her eyebrow seeing Kai looked so restless after Tomomi smirked at him. Knowing him for more than a month, never had she seen him lost his narcissistic smile. It was the first time she saw him looking like he had seen a ghost or like he was gonna die. It was quite amusing actually.

"Nee, Tomochin, do you know him? You gave him your knowing smirk earlier..." Atsuko questioned as she tilted her head to the side. Tomomi chuckled, "No, I don't know him... It's just that he looks cute so I gave him my special smirk."

Atsuko glared at her after hearing her sentence, "Huh?!" She snapped loudly, which made Tomomi flinched at the loud voice slightly. But then she kept her composure and instead, she gave a wink to her, "Why? Is it wrong for me to say it? Do you actually like him, Acchan?" She teased and she swore she saw blushes appeared on her cheeks.

"W-wha-what?!?! It-it's just... I thought you have eyes infection! He's cute?! What the hell!" She yelled and covered her chest in a defending manner. She likes him? No in a freaking way! Why would she like someone who is so conceited over his looks? Eeew!!!

Atsuko could hear Tomomi giggled softly at her statement and she could hear how Mayu faintly chuckled too. She grew redder in embarrassment before stomping down the hall way to her class. Mayu looked at her master's retreating back and glanced at Tomomi.

"Good job you've done there, Shibuya." She showed her sadistic smile at her partner and earned a slight smirk, "I'll make sure to make him our partner too, Nezumi."

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Kai sat on his seat while daydreaming about the stranger's face. He hadn't seen her around the school except earlier. Maybe she was the rumoured new transfer student. He wondered what her name was...

"Yoo Kai! Snap back to reality! You've been daydreaming too much today! The school is over!" Kuu slapped his head lightly, making his daydream time over.

He rubbed the sore spot on his head, "Ittai..." He pouted and packed up his things to go home. "Kuu... Do you know the name of the new transfer student?" He asked as he finished packing up and walked to the door with Kuu.

"Hmmm, her name is Itano Tomomi I think..." Kuu thought a little while munching on his chocolate cake. Kai made a mental note of the stranger's name and smiled happily as he finally knew her name.

Both Kai and Kuu separated as Kuu had a club activity in the cooking club. Kai hadn't entered any club yet as he didn't want his time of working out in his room to decrease because of club activities.

Kai walked to the school's front gate. What he didn't notice was a rope trap around his foot. The rope quickly tightened and it lift him from the ground, turning him upside down.

He opened his eyes and saw two figures in black hoodies. He knew them! They were Watanabe Mayu and Itano Tomomi! Someone who are linked with his target, Maeda Atsuko!

"Oi! Put me down!" He shouted as he felt dizzy being upside down. Mayu then pulled a knife from her pocket and immediately cut the rope. Kai fell and he groaned in pain, "Ittai... It hurts..." He whined and sat down properly while carressing his head.

"What are you planning to do to Acchan, Piggy?" Tomomi asked as she crouched down and leaned closer to him, "Are you planning a revenge?" She straightly asked and let out a low chuckle, making Kai shivered at her scary chuckle.

Mayu then leaned closer too, "If you're planning a revenge, we'll help you do that, Piggy." And there she goes, calling him Piggy too.

"Huh? Help?" He was a little lost. What help? Aren't these two close to Maeda Atsuko? Watanabe is Maeda's follower, and from what he had seen earlier, it seems that Itano is Maeda's old friend. So why are they helping him to get his revenge?

"You've been trailing Atsuko-sama for more than a month now and I know that you've noticed how she treats me... She's like the step mother in the Cinderella story." Mayu opened her mouth. Kai averted his attention to the person he just met earlier.

"Then you? By the way who are you? I didn't recall any memories with you in my childhood..." He questioned what had been in his mind for a while. There was a hurt look displayed on her face but as fast as a light, it was already gone and replaced with Tomomi's usual smirk, "I'm Itano Tomomi. I'm Nezumi's partner in crime since we were little. I don't know you either," Tomomi looked away a little as she spoke the last words, and then she continued, "but Nezumi told me that you're planning a revenge on Acchan, which Nezumi wanted to do for a long time. I was the one who sent the piggy letter to you but it's all Nezumi's idea."

Kai raised her eyebrows, still not grasping the situation, "Nezumi?" He askes and glanced at Mayu who showed a little smile. "That's me." Mayu giggled a little and pulled out a chewing gum to eat.

"I want to help Nezumi in getting her revenge because I'm on her side. I don't really like Acchan's princess attitude too." Tomomi continued.

"Eh... This is too much for me to digest... So are you telling me that you're supporting my plan?" He asked the obvious.

"Tch. You're taking so long in getting the situation. That's why I told Nezumi to not hire you as an additional partner... You're an idiot." Tomomi clicked her tongue and crossed her arms.

Kai flinched at the harsh statement she just made. Rude!!!! Kai felt disappointed seeing a pretty lady being a rude girl. 'She's just the same as Maeda... And to think that I thought I had a crush on this rude girl... Eeew!'

Mayu smirked and made a bubble gum baloon. It quickly popped and she continued chewing her gum, "We need him, Shibuya. He could make her feel heartache." She said calmly and Tomomi grumbled in disagreement.

"Anyway, let us help you, Takahashi-kun. We're going to make your plan a success." Mayu offered her hand to shake hands with him. Kai hesitantly accepted her offer and shook hands with her. Mayu showed her trademark scary grin as she knew that the boy agreed to her.

"We're ShibuNezu. Call us if you want to discuss your plan." Tomomi gave him a card that contains her number and Mayu's. Kai accepted it and put it inside his breast pocket.

Mayu and Tomomi smiled a little at him before running away, leaving him thinking about the reinforcement he just joined. After a while, he chuckled a bit. 'Heh, it'll be easier to conquer her now.'

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Tomomi sighed loudly as she knocked on her house's door. Then a maid opened it and greeted her with a smile, "Okaeri, Ojou-sama." Tomomi replied the greeting with a smile. She walked to the couch and slumped down on it.

She pulled out her phone and unlocked it, smiling as she saw the wallpaper she'd never change. "I guess you've already forgotten me huh... Kawaiichi-chan... Did I change that much? Or am I just another person in your life?" She stared at the boy beside a 'boy'. But the 'boy' was actually a girl and it was Tomomi. Both of them posed happily with sweets in their hands.

"But I guess that's okay... I'll make new memories with you later." She smiled and kissed her phone lightly, feeling determined all of a sudden. "Ganbatte Tomochin!" She encouraged herself and stood up to walk to her room.

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Inside the Kawachi's household, a boy was working out in his room. He was doing 100 sit ups. When he was finally done, he wiped his sweat and went to search for something. He found it.

Kai looked at the card Tomomi had given him earlier. He then got an idea and quickly sent a text message to them, hoping they would help him.

To: Master Nezumi and Master Shibuya

Good evening~ this is Takahashi Kai ( ^ω^)
Thank you for kindly wanting to help me to do a revenge for Maeda ψ(`∇´)ψ
Anyway, I've got an idea...
Can you please persuade Maeda to go on a date with me? It's a part of the plan of course (´▽`)
Let's do our best, Masters! p(^-^q)

Kai locked his phone after he sent the text message. He smirked after that. The help of both of them would surely benefit him. His plan for revenge would flow easily by their help.

But then he was still a bit confused... Watanabe's reason for helping him was already clear. It was just the new girl's reason was still a lil bit off... She wants to help just because she doesn't like Maeda's princess attitude? But she has princess attitude too in his eyes.

Kai inhaled deeply and turned to look at his night table. There wer two photos of him in his childhood. The first photo, he was posing with a girl. The girl was no doubt Maeda Atsuko, someone who rejected him. He then turned his attention to the second photo. He stood up and walked to his night table.

Kai picked up the second photo and smiled at it. In the photo, there were his long lost best friend and him posing with sweets in their hands. They looked so happy. Kai carressed the picture and hugged it, "Kiba-chan... Where are you now?"

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A/N: another chapter, another revelation... Hehehe! Thanks for the comments and the thank yous! Oh and Kiba is fangs in japanese
Title: Re: Takahashi-kun no Revenge! (Update Chapter 4!)
Post by: Kochiki on July 27, 2013, 07:17:06 AM
Ha! I was right...Mayu-chan is the one!!~ Horayy~
-And an addition character who work with Mayu!!~
-For revenge...I wonder why she is having a revenge on Acchan...
-But...I feel sad for Acchan though...Honestly...Poor her~
-Ma..But she have done many evil thing so yeah...
-Detto!!~ Yay!~ How will this work out??~ Will Acchan accept it??~

>Plz update soon, can't wait for the next one!!~ Nice chapter!!~
Title: Re: Takahashi-kun no Revenge! (Update Chapter 4!)
Post by: cisda83 on July 27, 2013, 12:35:52 PM
Ah... Atsuko is getting in lots more trouble now... with Itano and Nezumi join hand with Kai

What's going to happen to her?

Would Atsuko really going to be hurt?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Takahashi-kun no Revenge! (Update Chapter 4!)
Post by: kuro808 on July 27, 2013, 02:08:24 PM
Kai is after Acchan and with Mayu and Tomochin's help he may win over the girl
Title: Re: Takahashi-kun no Revenge! (Update Chapter 4!)
Post by: shiruba_rein on July 28, 2013, 02:24:20 AM
Don't tell me . . . .

Kiba = Fangs

Tomochin = Has Fangs

Therefore, Kiba = Tomochin ??  :?

Oooohhh . . . . So Tomochin and Kai has something in the past . . . .
Looking forward to your next update!  :)
Title: Re: Takahashi-kun no Revenge! (Update Chapter 4!)
Post by: mgxx on July 28, 2013, 04:15:57 PM
please!!! don't make my waifu suffer   :banghead: :banghead:
poor atsuko! she have fake best friend  :bleed eyes:
Title: Re: Takahashi-kun no Revenge! (Update Chapter 4!)
Post by: taenylove on May 02, 2014, 12:43:09 PM
pleeease author-san update soon... I‘m dying waiting for continue reading~  :bow:
Title: Re: Takahashi-kun no Revenge! (Update Chapter 4!)
Post by: liabont on May 02, 2014, 03:29:15 PM
author-san please update soon the next chapter, please more atsumina  :wub:
Title: Re: Takahashi-kun no Revenge! (Update Chapter 4!)
Post by: iLeo221 on May 02, 2014, 07:43:17 PM
woah! I just found your story. It's handsome!
I don't like Atsuko behavior! Why do she act like this? It's terrible! :P
And Kai is not better! XD
Revenge is never a solution! tz, tz, tz!

Mayu and Tomochin are a mystery to me. Let's see how it goes!

thx u for your hard work! I look forward to the next update from you!
Title: Re: Takahashi-kun no Revenge! (Update Chapter 4!)
Post by: AtsuminaForever on May 03, 2014, 05:09:19 AM
 :otomerika:GO! GO! GO! I'll be waiting for an update! Yeeey!