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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: Kazumiyu on July 22, 2013, 09:04:38 AM

Title: Prologue "No title yet"-Kumiyuri
Post by: Kazumiyu on July 22, 2013, 09:04:38 AM: Sorry for my grammar or if it's boring I am not that good with fanfics.
I am a beginning writer so I am not good at writing.

(*/ω＼*) I feel embarrassed even re reading my first fanfic
In the end I posted it a while ago I was hesitating posting it at first after a battle in my head
for about 2 to 3 minutes thinking.
I was told by my friends and family stop thinking that hard.

I haven't thought of the title yet.
But enjoy the story!

Prologue

I wanted to see her smile....

I wanted to see her happy....

In the end who was selfish?

I wonder if she knows what I am feeling right now?

She told me once "Yuria you wouldn't leave me right?...."

I always wonder what is behind those words...

In the end you left me...were those time we spent together I lie?

What did you want to tell me?

I'm waiting for you....I wonder if in those 30 seconds you will come.

Somehow I am getting inpatient...

Waiting out in the rooftop I suddenly went to edge of the roof where you can see the moon shining coming from above.

I wanted to end my own life

I didn't want to hurt anyone with my death..my family and friends but I couldn't stand it anymore

Goodbye Kuuchan even if I get suddenly eaten by darkness I won't care

Maybe we weren't meant to be...only as best friends

I wished to be reborn and forget those moments with you

Thank you and I hate you....Yagami Kumi
Title: Re: Prologue "No title yet"-Kumiyuri
Post by: fuu_kun on July 22, 2013, 10:35:34 AM: Hummm, nice prologue~

But somekind its remembering me of eru san fanfic *i dunno*
Are she inspirising you?

Please do continue.. Me love kuuchan fanfic :heart:
Title: Re: Prologue "No title yet"-Kumiyuri
Post by: Lover of Yabushita Shu on July 22, 2013, 11:10:22 AM: OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!OH MY GOSH!

KUMIYURI~!!!!!!!

UPDATE SOON.
Title: Re: Prologue "No title yet"-Kumiyuri
Post by: Shinoki on July 22, 2013, 01:14:37 PM: Me want more...
Kuumin!!! Yuria!!!
Dies...
I feel like there are barely any KumiYuri fics becuz I kind of read most of them a few times over...
Ah... it feels like it'll get depressing...
meh... anything is fine...
Looking forward to it~~
Title: Re: Prologue "No title yet"-Kumiyuri
Post by: kuro808 on July 22, 2013, 03:55:39 PM: I like the start to this one. I want to see the flow :)
Title: Re: Prologue "No title yet"-Kumiyuri
Post by: WotaOtaku~ on July 24, 2013, 12:26:17 AM: We NEED more KumiYuri fanfics (same with KumiNon) for some reason they're popular but there isn't many fanfics D:
I still can't wait for chapter 1 x')
Title: Re: Prologue "No title yet"-Kumiyuri
Post by: millca on July 24, 2013, 06:55:47 AM: Its very rare to see a KumiYuri fic here. please continue this story :D :cow: :shakeit: :deco:
Title: Re: Prologue "No title yet"-Kumiyuri
Post by: Minamiyuki on March 11, 2014, 07:58:46 AM: KUMIYURI~!!! DAISUKI~!!!! :wub: :wub: :wub:

Waiting for your next update :) :) :)