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Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" CHAPTER 8 and 9!!
Post by: fausto on August 31, 2013, 08:09:44 PM
THAT'S NOT WHAT YOU THINK IT IS




Pairing : Atsumina (and some others)

Characters : MINAMI : A very discreet girl, who always wears black skirt (Gekikara style) and an hoodie on her head. Known to be really bad at school, violent and has a bad reputation. She's really close to Oshima Yuko, Minegishi Minami, Tomomi Kasai, Akimoto Sayaka, Shizuka Oya, Kitahara Rie, Matsui Jurina and Sashihara Rino.
                     ATSUKO : Cold and classy girl, who always wears classy girly clothes. Very good at school, great reputation, knows martial art since early age. Really close to Shinoda Mariko, Itano Tomomi, Haruna Kojima, Miyazawa Sae, Matsui Rena, Kashiwagi Yuki and Watanabe Mayu.




Chapter 1 : A reason to fight.


Room b-2, history class


« Well today, we are correcting your last test about the cold war, as soon as I give it to you. Many bad marks for this one, you should study more ! »

The students seemed to be all sleeping, no one really listened to the teachers here.
« Maeda-san, very good, as always » he smiled, giving her the copy. « Oshima-san, some mistakes but good, Matsui Jurina-san, no comments... »

He gave the rest of the the test until one. For this one, he came at the last table backwards, against the window.
« Takahashi-san, you should consider working before the end of the year. This is really a shame. » he said to the girl wearing a black hoodie, against the window.
When he puts her test on the desk, she could see that she had an A+. She quickly put her sheet in her bag, and keep watching through the window.
« Akimoto-san, thought we had talked about it... Shinoda-san, your redaction was brilliant ! »

Atsuko was looking at the theater giving the test, but her eyes went on the hoodies girl. She hated this girl so much, she was disguted by her. And by the way, what was the point of being here to do nothing in class anyway ? She couldn't stand people who weren't even trying to do better...

The doorbell rand and everyone quickly got out.
« Takahashi-san, a word please » said the teacher.
Takamina nonchalantly to the office until everyone was out.
« Your test was really good, your analyse of the war situation worths a university work ! I still don't understand why you ask me to do that » he sighed.
« No ones needs to know... »
« But everytime I have to say fake things on you, mean ones, just to hide that you're a brilliant student. You and your friends, by the way. »
« Teacher, I already explained you why, and you agreed, like every teacher in this college ? »
« I know... »
« Look, I'm sorry if it's hard for you. But what matters it's that we're doing a good work. And please tell me what I need to see again with the others for next time. »
« ...Okay »

For 15 minutes, they discussed the weakness of Minami's friends, so she could help them. Everytime after test, she was doing this, pointing at everyone's mistakes to work on it.
« Thank you very much, we'll work hard on this ! » frowned Minami before leaving.


12am, on the roof

« Sayaka, give me your onigir !! » screamed Yuko.
« No, I'm starving ! »
« Jurina, give me your food !! »
« No ! Takamina, tell her to stop ! »
« Yuko ! Stop bothering everybody and eat your food ! »
« But... seems so good... » sighed the squirell.
« Sayaka has a basketball match tonight and Jurina is still growing up, so let them eat properly. Take the rest of my katsudon » she said giving up to the noisy midget.
« Don't always sacrify yourself cap' » sighed Rie.
« It's okay, Rie-chan » she smiled.
Everyone called her cap, due to her position in the group.
« Minna, you've work hard for this history test, congratulations ! We'll see the correction tonight to be sure you got ir. I work until 9pm so since Syaka had the higher mark, she will be in charge of the class. Then, I'll cook special dinner to reward you all ! »
« YAY !! » they all screamed.

She smiled and lay down to watch to the sky for few minutes, it was really relaxing. She liked to do this everyday, to clear her mind and be able to go on.


12am, in the little park next to school


« Aachan, do you want some Chirashi ? » asked Rena.
« No thank you, I'm not so hungry today » she sighed.
« I wonder why she's always so tensed in class... must be because she needs to get out and run, heard she was really good at basketball... » mumbled Sae while she ate.
« Who are you talking about ? » sighed Tomochin.
« ...Sayaka » pouted the short hair girl.
« Again ?! You're obsessed with her ! »
« No, Yuki, I'm not. It's just that... I'm sure she's nice. »
« Maybe, but don't forget that she's part of the Takahashi team. And she sucks at school » frowned Mayu.
« ...I know »

Atsuko was listening to them, head in the clouds.
« Guys, I already told you, you don't have to support this, it's my story »
« Don't say that, Atsuko ! I'm with you, you know it.  I'm just curious, that's all » said Sae, blushing.
« Anyway, Aachan. Do you plan on something against Takahashi or you're just gonna hate her until the end of time ? » smirked Mariko, bothering Kojima with her sticks.
« Mari-chan ! Yamete ! » protested the beautiful girl.
« I don't know yet... Maybe I'll catch her tonight... »

The girls keep eating their lunch while the tall girl was thinking about all this one more time.
I hate her ! Her and her dad have to pay !!


9.15pm, on the street

Minami was walking home, carrying a bag full of food. Everyday, she bought the food needed for the meal, directly at her work since she was working at a combini store. Her boss was really nice to her and usually gave her half of it free, because he liked her very much. She was doing a great jobn all the old customers loved her.

It was quite tonight, and the fresh air was pleasant. She was tired but knowing that everyone was waiting for her was making her happy.

« Takahashi ! »

Minami stopped her walk when she heard her name. Atsuko was in front of her, fist on her waist, frowning.
« What ? »
« We have to fight » said Atsuko coldly.
« Eh ? No, I don't have the time for this... » sighed the midget.
« TAKE IT !! »
« What for ? » said Minami, raising her eyebrows.
« You know why !! »
Takamina looked at the tall girl for few seconds, sighed and put down her bag on the side.
« Do what you want but try not to hit the bag, I have to cook them something special tonight... »
« What ? » asked Atsuko, surprised by this sentence and wondering whom she was talking about.
« Never mind » the girl raised her fist « Go on ! »

Atsuko ran on the girl and try to hit her at strategic places, but all of her hits were stopped by the midget. The tall one didn't give up but it was in vain, she was punching an empty target.
« What are you doing ? » screamed Aachan.
« What you wanted »
« What don't you punch punch me ?! »
« Why should I ? I've nothing against you » shrugged the captain.
« … ? But I'm attacking you ! React ! »
« No thanks »
« … I will find a reason for you to fight !! » she said letting down her fist before leaving in the dark.

Minami picked up her bag and began to walk again. She was late.


9.30pm, Minami's place

« Tadaima ! » said Minami, opening the iron door.
« OKAIRI !! » responded the 8 girls, smiling.

They were all working under the orders of Sayaka. Minami's place is a big abandoned flat, looking like a loft. She's leaving here for two years now, on her own. The man who owned this place knew her and allowed her her to stay if she was paying the bills.
It was really nice, in the living room (¾ of the flat) there was an old and cosy couch, a wood table made by herself, some chairs, a little TV and a cooking space at the back. All surronded by shelves full of books.
Almost all of the furnitures were from second hand.

« How is it going ? » asked Minami storing the food.
« Almost finished ! » screamed Yuko.
« Good, do it while I cook then »
« HAI ! »
« How was work ? » asked Miichan, helping her.
« Good... I've met Maeda-san on my way here. »
« Really ? What happened ? » frowned her friend.
« Hm... She wanted us to fight. I only avoided her punches.
« Why ?! »
« I don't want to fight with her »
« But she does, right ? »
« Obviously... » said the midget while washing the vegetables.
« What for ? »
« She needs answers, I guess »
« Why don't you give her, then ? »
« I don't have them, Miichan »

« Rie-chan, why were you yalking to this guy today ? » frowned Rino while they were playing cards on the couch.
« Eh ? Ah, he wanted to treat me lunch » blushes Rie.
« Pff... He didn't get you were from Takahashi team or what ? »
« Rino, being a part of this doesn't mean we can't get boyfriends.
Rino pouted, tomorrow she will secretly go intimidate this boy. She didn't like someone near her Rie-chan.

« Minna, time to eat ! » smiled Minami. « Teriyaki and vegetables tonight ! »
« YES !! »
They all gathered around the table and Minami served them all.
« ITADAKIMASU ! »

She didn't know what she would do without them, they were like her family. She would be so alone otherwise...
They talked and laughed during  all the meal.


10.30pm

« Everyone, go home ! And don't be late ! »
« When will you allow us to stay the night ? » pouted Kasai.
« Never ! You know you have to go home, see your parents, have a normal life, not like me » frowned Minami.
« And don't be late at school tomorrow ! » said Sayaka.

Minami gave a thankfull glance, Syaka was helping her so much. She was like a dad to them.
« Goodnight ! »

Minami cleared the table and went to bed in her little room next to the living room. She was exhausted.


I'm already writting the second chapter, tell me if it's boring. :nervous I don't where I go with this, but I enjoy it so... ;)

Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 1
Post by: abcari on August 31, 2013, 08:32:31 PM
boring? is good! I want to know more about this C:

waiting for the next chapter author-san C:
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 1
Post by: FoxKing on August 31, 2013, 08:54:44 PM
wow interesting fic

Update soon pls  :on GJ:
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 1
Post by: Shinoki on August 31, 2013, 10:17:38 PM
wawawawa...
I wasn't expecting something so good...
if your chapters continue to be this good... or better, this fic might become something really really great
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 1
Post by: fausto on August 31, 2013, 10:27:52 PM
@abcari: Thank you so much, I'm on it!! :P
@Foxking: Thank you so much! I update ASAP!! :)
@Shinoki:... This is the best comment I ever had :w00t: :inlove: Thank you so much!! :bow: I hope I won't dissapoint you :panic: :banghead:
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 1
Post by: blakwhite on September 01, 2013, 05:12:14 AM
yay fausto-san   :cathappy:
boring? not boring at all, so intresting  :deco:

pls update soon fausto-san  :bow:
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 1
Post by: cisda83 on September 01, 2013, 07:48:43 AM
Eh... why did Minami need to hide her cleverness?

Why did she need to live herself?

Why did the rest of the girls live with Minami?

Where are their parents?

Why did Atsuko want to fight with Minami?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the interesting new story

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 1
Post by: chichay12 on September 01, 2013, 10:20:53 AM
fausto!!! wahhhhh :on woohoo:
new fic!!! :ptam-glow: :ptam-shy:
atsumina~~ i want more!!!! XD
omg im so happy right now :kekeke:
minami why so shy about ur smartness and everything  :shy1:
 :tantrum: cant wait to read the next chapter!!  :tantrum:

ps.pls update ur other fic  :sweat:
iwant to know what will happen to acchan and kai *sigh XD
fausto thank u for the new fic  :on gay:
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 1
Post by: olive29 on September 01, 2013, 01:26:07 PM
Interesting..  :twothumbs  :twothumbs

Update soon, please.. :bow:
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 1
Post by: Yuseichaaan48 on September 01, 2013, 03:45:06 PM
I like this!!!!  :)

Why does minami have to hide her cleverness?? :o

Looking forward to the next update!!! Keep it up! It's great ! :thumbup

Update soon please!! :bow: :)

Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 1
Post by: Zita on September 01, 2013, 05:20:56 PM
Next please  :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow:
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 1
Post by: chichay12 on September 01, 2013, 05:44:57 PM
ps: chichay is stealing my trademark~ :on gay:
LOL XD
i just love :on gay: emoticon maybe because we love atsumina and where both u know? Smut lovers XD thats why we have same trade mark XD

Ps.kuka i swear i never notice we always use on gay emoticon until now  :oops:
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 1
Post by: flunicsnaz on September 01, 2013, 06:23:24 PM
 :mon cigar: Yeah.. sure its boring.. IF U NOTE UPDATE NEXT CHAPTER  :mon sweat:
 :farofflook: minami so cool!!! love it..  :luvluv1:
 :thumbup Good job Fausto
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 1
Post by: miayaka on September 01, 2013, 08:54:02 PM
okay im loving this :3
since I can't sleep and since it's sunday i'm lurking some atsumina fics and jaaann~
found this one.
I'm sure Taka has a reason why she's hiding her int
and she sound like a foster parent like adopting all the girls :v
Atsu so tsun wanna fight with Taka before lovey dovey eh?
 :lol: nuff said my imaginations
update soon  :thumbsup
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 1
Post by: imteedee on September 01, 2013, 09:18:50 PM
I wonder why Chiyu's included on TakaTeam  XD i always imagined her as the classy one but who knows what will happen  :lol:
I'm waiting for the next part  :roll:
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 1
Post by: Archer1992 on September 02, 2013, 02:49:59 AM
Boring are you kidding ¬¬

come on continue this is very interesting...

i want to know better this Minami

thanks

^_^
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 1
Post by: Haruko on September 02, 2013, 04:04:13 AM
not bad.. Im kiding! is interesting :B
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 1
Post by: Minamiyuki on September 02, 2013, 08:03:11 AM
ps: chichay is stealing my trademark~ :on gay:
LOL XD
i just love :on gay: emoticon maybe because we love atsumina and where both u know? Smut lovers XD thats why we have same trade mark XD

Ps.kuka i swear i never notice we always use on gay emoticon until now  :oops:

It's because you two are GAY~!!!!!  :lol: :lol: :lol:

BTW, I like your story... Keep it up~!!!  :thumbsup :thumbsup :thumbsup

Waiting for your next update  :) :) :)
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 1
Post by: chiqinna on September 02, 2013, 01:10:02 PM
just like other readers here...I also  :heart: it!
I hope you update the second chap 'fausto'!!
 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 2!!
Post by: fausto on September 02, 2013, 09:59:43 PM
@:blackwhite: Thank you very much :heart:
@cisda83: As always, your interest for my fic is cheering me up!! :D I'm happy to make you happy! :)
@Chichay12: I love when you put so much emote in your comment^^ :panic: Promise, I will update the other fic soon, but don't fight with Ruka-san :lol: :lol:
@ olive29/Yuseichaaan48/Zita: thank you very much for your comment and liking my story, I'm always happy to see new readers! :welcome
@Rukaeru: Hm... See it's a new challenge for me because I usually only ship Atsumina so including other pairing is new so... Mayuki I don't know, Saeyaka, probably^^ I get what you mean, Ruka-san  :twisted: :panic: and this might be the case... :lol: :inlove:
@flunicsnaz: I don't want to be boring :cry: :cry: So yes!! I update!! :P :thumbup
@miayaka: I'm happy to keep you awake at night :D
@imteedee: ah, I know it's weird, but it's to be original a little :P
@Archer1992/ Haruko/X-last-crosse-X/chiqina: Thank you very much for those lovely comments, please keep reading!! :heart: :heart:


So, looks like many readers are waiting for Atsumina to have some "intimate fight" soon, right? :twisted: :twisted: Well, might be coming...Or not :lol: :lol:





Chapter 2 : Heavy past



6am, outside

Every morning, Minami was running for 30 minutes in town to wake her up and to stay healthy. Her ambition was to create a crew and win a dance contest.
She was helping people (girls) who had been harrassed, she was protecting them, helping them at school and teaching them dance so they could be a part of her crew.
They were 15 now, the 8 girls that were really close to her, and seven others, that only came for practice.
It was well organized : Sayka and Jurina were in charge of the « sporty training », Oya was doing all the music arrangements, Rie and Rino were writting the lyrics, Miichan was creating the outfits, and Yuko was... distracting them.

Still running in the quiet town (only because of the early hour), Minami was thinking about her meeting with Atsuko yesterday. She had this burning anger into her eyes, like she wanted to kill the midget with her hands. Takamina knew that the tall girl hated her, and she understood it.


Flasback, 4 years ago, on TV


« We found this morning, a young woman killed by shot guns. She was the famous yakuza Maeda Kaoru, it seems like it's a revenge from another clan. She left behind a 14 years old girl, and an husband. »

End of flashback


Minami's father was one of her rival, and the last time she had been seen, he was with her. The girl had really suffered from this, everybody was talking about his dad, and each time she asked him if he was guilty, he walked away, with a sad face.
Tired of this, Takamina had made the choice to live on her own, far from this. But she understood that Atsuko that Atsuko couldn't live with this. Her father hadn't been worried by the police because he was a yakuza, so Minami had no proof he was innocent.
She didn't want to fight the tall girl, she was right to be mad. Plus, she was gorgeous, and smart.
No way she could hit her... !


10am, schoolyard

« Cap', there is this girl I like, but she doesn't even know I exist. And... she's kind of forbidden... » pouted Jurina.
« Forbidden ? Who's she ? Is she married ?^^ »
« No!^^ It's... Rena-san » she sighed.
« Oh, I see. Well, you just have to introduce yourself, see if she seems interested. Nobody is forbidden, you know. »
« Really ?! Okay, I'm gonna try then ! »
« Good, Juri-chan » smiled the small girl before noticing the fight going on in front of them.

A tall guy was punching a girl on the floor, kicking her so hard, and everybody was watching.
« Don't ever look at me bitch ! You're just a slut ! » he was screaming, hitting her.
Minami dropped her bag and walked toward him.
« OY!!! Stop this ! » she screamed.
« What ? Who are you little cunt ? » frowned the guy.
Minami was so angry that she didn't notice Atsuko, who was watching at the scene with big interest.
« I said stop this bastard! Leave her alone ! »
She helped the girl standing up and took her next to her friends.
« Who do you think you are ?! Come here ! »
« Don't you know that you're not supposed to hit girls ? »
« I don't fucking care !! »
He jumped on the midget to smash her, but she was really fast. She avoided him, hit him on the back of the neck, then pushed him in the face three times and finally kicked him in the jaw.
The big guy fell on the ground, really stunned. Blood was flowing from his nose.
Everyone was staring at the captain before dispatching.

Takamina came back to the girl.
« How are you ? Does it hurts ? »
« A little, but thank you very much. »
« What's your name ? » asked gently the midget.
« Nito Moeno »
« Okay, Nito-chan » she smiled. « Jurina is gonna take you to the infirmary so you could groom this wound, okay ? »
« Okay » she nodded.
« We'll discuss later. Take care »

« Did you see what my friend just did ? » asked Rino to a skinny guy.
« Y-Yes... »
« Well, don't come near Kitahara-san again or I'll do the same to you. Okay ? »
« H-Hai ! » he shivered, looking at his feet.
« Good »
She left him with a big smile on her face. She tried to look threatening but she was all laughing inside because of the poor guy's face.

Takamina needed to wash her hands stained with blood, so she went to the nearest restroom. She hated fighting, it wasn't in her character, but in this colleg, you had to do it if you wanted to survive. She had been doing many fights to survive and help other persons, and she remembered each of them, because each time she was hating it. She felt sorry for the one she was punching even if he was guilty. Nothing has to end in a fight...
« What do you say if I'm the one asking this guy to fight ? »
Atsuko was at the restroom door, with no expression on her face.
« Nothing. But if you need to punch someone, punch me » she said before leaving the room.

Yes she was angry, of course. She wasn't expecting Atsuko to do such a thing just to provoke her. But it was exclused to get mad, it didn't worth it. She was late for the maths class, and her friends were probably waiting for her anyway.

10.30am, maths class

Atsuko was in a bad mood. She had done this thing under the state of anger, she was angry because this girl was resisting, she was here, and totally ignoring the fact that Atsuko was suffering. She was just asking for a fight, one, so she could let everything go, take revenge...
But something was wrong, she felt it, it was wrong. She was feeling wrong, for this girl, she seemed nice, and she had nothing to do with this... Takahashi-san was in the middle of it, fighting for her just because it wasn't fair...

« Sayaka, I have horrible cramps on my abs... » grumbled Yuko.
« It's good for you, midget^^ » she smirked.
Her eyes met Sae's, and they looked at each other for few seconds, it was weird but... good actually. Sayaka had already saw her, she was in the same class, and sometimes she was running by the riverside on the sunday morning. She seemed to be nice, and funny, but the circumstances weren't good to meet.

« Sorry for being late » said Minami coming into the classroom.
Atsuko looked at her, always wearing a hoodie, what was under... ?

During all the class, Minami only thought about the new choregraphy for the last song they had created. It was mostly electro rythms, mixed with more « idol » sounds (If you guys had saw the remix of Uza from the Kouhaku Uta Gassen 2012, this is the kind of music they make). Oya sometimes succeeded in putting some « rap skit », because she loved rap.
The little cap' liked to draw, and usually she drawn the moves, to remember them, and sometimes the outfits.


12am, on the basketball field, schoolyard


« Rino-chan, why Tetsuo is looking at you with this fear on his face ? » frowned Rie.
« Who ? » the girl was eating up her lunch.
« Tetsuo. The guy who talked to me me the other day. »
« Aah... Dunno, maybe he thinks I'm his real mom^^ »
« So... Anything to do with you ? » she saked, suspicious.
« Nope. Why do you care ? You're in love ? »
« No » she blushed « that's just weird »
« You're really cute when you blush, Rie-chan » she said, replacing one of her stroke of hair behind the shy girl's ear.

Rie blushed twice more, for a week now Rino was acting strange. They had always been close to each other, but now Rino was prevenant, protective and maybe jealous. Was there a chance... ?
Rie had always been attracted to Sasshi, but she was afraid to ruin their friendship, so she never told anything, plus she was a shy, not the kind of person to do the first step.
« And you ? Do you like a boy ? » she asked, innocently.
« Me? No^^ They're so immature and... ugly^^ I'm demanding^^ »
« Souka... »
« Aah... » said Sasshi feeding Rie with curry. « See, you don't need a boy, I'm feeding you^^ » she smirked.
Rie blushed one more time, her heart was melting hearing such a thing.


« Sayaka, what are you staring at ? »
« Eeh ? »
« I said, what are you staring at?^^ » laughed Oya.
«N-Nothing... » denied the athletic girl.
« She's looking at the tall boyish one over there » smirked Yuko.
« Really ? Sayaka is it true ? » asked Minami, smirking too.
« N-No, I mean, maybe... »
« Miyazawa-san, right ? She seems to be a nice girl, you should talk to her. It's about time that someone knows how great you are » smiled gently the captain.
They smiled at each other, they were really close friend, the person Takamina trusted the most.
« I will, thank you »
« Why do you always say nice words to Sayaka and not to me ?! Pouted Yuko.
« Because you're a noisy squirell ! » laughed the midget.
« And because you're not nice ! » added Miichan.
« Mou ! »
« Guys, don't fight » said Sayaka. « Yuko, do you want to go eat an hamburger with me tonight ? »
« YES !! »
« Good idea, but don't forget that tomorrow wa all practice at 2pm »

The group nodded and looked at Jurina and Nito, coming back from the infirmary.
« How do you feel, Nito-chan ? »
« Better, thank you »
« You're welcome, I couldn't stand this »
« Cap', she's really cute, can we take her in our crew ?? » asked Jurina with puppy eyes.
« ...Do you know how to dance ? »
« I already asked her ! She do ! And she's interested ! Say yes ! Say yes ! » she screamed, jumping all over.
Minami sighed and looked at Sayaka, it wasn't a bad idea after all, they needed more members.
« Why not... Come tomorrow at 2pm »
« Thank you very much » bowed Nito before leaving.

8.30pm, combini store

It's quiet tonight at the store, Minami was in charge of filling the shelves.
She was daydreaming when she heard the doorbell ringing twice. The boss wasn't there today, so she was alone until 9pm. But it was almost always like that since it was a little shop, you didn't need to be two sellers.
She quickly  reached the checkout when she saw that an old  lady  was waiting with a lot of food.
« Hello, miss. Do you want a bag ? »
« Yes, please »
She took one and put the food inside while she calculated the cost of it. But doing this, she saw someone behind the granny, it was... Atsuko. She was injured, bruises and blood on her cheeks, and her lower lip was swollen.
Minami couldn't help but stare at her, she knew the midget was working here, so why... ?
Atsuko was looking right into her eyes, like she was challenging her but... to do what ?
« 256 yen please miss » said Minami with a calm voice.
The old lady paid and left without a goodbye, while Atsuko dropped off a little bottle of water and a  Snickers. Minami followed the old lady to close the door from the inside. It wasn't 9pm yet, but she couldn't let the tall girl like that.
She switched off the light and took Atsuko by the hand to bring her some bandages and desinfectant.
« I didn't ask you anything » said Aachan with a neutral voice. She seemed a little lost.
« I know » answered the little cap', washing the blood from Atsuko's cheeks and lips. « You shouldn't fight like this all the time... »
« Why do you care... ? »
« I don't, but it's a shame to ruin such a pretty face » shrugged the midget.
« Mind your own buisness » pouted Aachen.
« Of course... It's clean now, you can take your food and leave by the back door. Goodnight. »
Atsuko got up, still pouting, she gathered her unpaid stuff and left, vexed by the distant tone of Takamina.


11pm, Atsuko's house


« Dad, did you eat already ? »
« No... I'm not hungry »
« How was work ? »
« Hm... »

It was the same empty discussion for four years now. Her dad was dragging his own body in the house and at work, with no expression and no energy.
He had been devastated by his wife's death. For ten years now, he was working as a taxi driver, and he had met Kaoru one day at work, she was in a really bad condition but she didn't want to go to the hospital so he had illed her at his house, and then...
She had told him right away who she was, but he didn't care, he loved her.

« I'm going to bed, goodnight dad »
« ... »

Atsuko couldn't stand this situation anymore. She loved her mom, they were really close, and since the day she's been killed, her life had became this empty hole in her heart. She wasn't even feeling anything. Anything expcept this pain and this anger when she was fighting.
Her friends were helping her to laugh and have fun again, it was better when she wasn't at home ;

She fell asleep thinking about Takahashi at the store. This girl was really mysterious...


Next day, 2pm, Minami's place


« That's not good ! Miichan, focus ! »
« Sorry... »
« Sayaka and Jurina come at the front and THEN you do the three steps, okay ? »
Miichan nodded, they were practicing for 2 hours now and it was pretty hard. The new choregraphy was a real challenge, with more hip-hop moves, and Miichan was frankly bad at it.
Kasai was coming back from her cousin, and she was teaching Nito the moves but in a slower way. She was good at it, Minami felt relieved. The contest was only in two months and they barely knew the lyrics... Plus, they needed like 5 more members.
Honeslty she was looking for someone to be at the center, to shine and blow everything. Someone with charisme and skills...
The captain was really into dance and singing, but she wasn't interested in being the center of attention. So she needed someone to be.
« Oya, can you edit the track so everybody can have it on her phone and listen to it everyday, so it will be easier to remember ? »
« Yep, I'm on it ! »
« Miichan, I would like to talk with you about the outfit soon, I've drawn them yesterday »

They keep working until 6pm, then everybody went home, exhausted.
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 2!!
Post by: FoxKing on September 03, 2013, 01:58:18 AM
Nice update, wonder if takamina has bow under hoodie...

Hope for some kojiyuu moments... :mon santa4:
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Post by: Haruko on September 03, 2013, 04:06:21 AM
ohh... I understand the situation now...
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Post by: cisda83 on September 03, 2013, 05:55:05 AM
Ah... Minami's father might be guilty

And Minami just doesn't want to be mixed into this yakuza stuff...

Poor Atsuko to lose her mother like that...

But then losing life come in the territory with yakuza's life.

Ah... Minami is like a house mother..

Taking care do many kids at the same time...

What's going to happen to Atsumina and the rest if the crews?

Can't wait up see the next chapter

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Post by: blakwhite on September 03, 2013, 12:51:07 PM
thanks for update
takamina kakkoi  :wub:

poor acchan  :(
acchan pls befriend with takamina  :cry:

and just like rukaecchi said, i cannot wait for their lovely momment  :cathappy:

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Post by: Yuseichaaan48 on September 04, 2013, 09:12:55 AM
Awesome! Just awesome!! Haha.  :lol:

Atsuko needs to become friends with minami, NOW!!!!  :P

Takamina needs a center huh? That should be no issue!

I sense a Wmatsui coming?? Hehe.

Saeyaka as well, eh?

Looking forward to the next update!!  :D
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Post by: Beel on September 04, 2013, 10:13:04 AM
Ow, interesting fic, I like it.

Waiting for your next update.  :thumbsup
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Post by: chichay12 on September 04, 2013, 12:52:36 PM
 :wriggly: FAUST O  :wriggly:
chapter 3 where are you??XD
omg i cant wait to read ur next update specially ur other fic :cool2:

i always forget to comment  :whistle:
pls forgive me(lazy much)  :sweat:
 update soon :on gay:

ps.kuka u too im still waiting to ur update~
update soon *wink* XD
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Post by: Zita on September 04, 2013, 08:57:11 PM
Atsuko and Minami such a perfect pair. :lol:
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Post by: fausto on September 04, 2013, 11:24:41 PM
@FoXking: Did you watch "Arrow" recently?^^ Haha it would be good Minami as a vigilanty^^ WAIT!! Could be a great fic!! :shocked :shocked
@Ruka-san: You don't like Saeyaka? Oh, I'm sad... Seems like everybody only like Saeyuki. Please don't stop because of this, it's a little pairing in the fic :bow: :nervous
@Chichay12: It's coming :lol: For the other one, it's coming too, but I am a little busy those days... :nervous

For everyone, thank you very much for your comments, for this update please be patient because I have to begin the story or it will only be like 4 chapters. But please don't stop reading because there are few pairing and not just Atsumina. It's just to do a story a little more... longer. :nervous :bow: :bow:





Chapter 3 : Fireworks


It's been a week since Atsuko had been to the combini that night. Her face was ill and she had slept at Tomochin's for few weeks to run away from her dad. Yesterday, everybody had gone to the movies and then karaoke, it was a really nice evening. Aachan loved karaoke, she knew so much songs and her were always asking her to sing because she had a beautiful voice.
This morning she was early to go to school, the weather was nice and she was in a good mood.
She took the direction of the school, walking next to the river, it was pleasant at this hour.
She was thinking about the movie they had been seeing when she heard low voices down by the river.
« Well, isn't it the daughter of the yakuza killer ? Huh ? What are you doing here ? Killing somebody ? Huh ? HAHAHA »
Atsuko hidded behind a tree and lokked at the scene. There were two bigs men around Takahashi, with knives.
« Piss off, I'm late » said Minami.
« Shut up bitch ! »
The first one tried to cut her off but she avoided the knife and kicked him in the guts.
« BITCH ! Go ! Kill her !! »
The second one hesitated and finally tried to punch her in the face before falling on the ground, miserably.
Minami didn't look at them and keep walking like nothing happened.
This girl knows how to fight... But she seems to be far away from all this...


Monday, 7am, schoolgym


Sayaka had done warming up already, and she was now training for basketball. She was used to come here every morning, the coach gave her the keys so she could practice more during her free time.
« Sorry, is there someone ? »
She stopped playing and looked for the person who just talked.
It was the tall boyish girl, Miyazawa Sae.
« Oh, sorry, I heard the ball and I was curious... »
« Y-Yes, I'm training... »
« Oh, okay, hello ! I'm Miyazawa Sae »
« Hello, I'm... »
« Akimoto Sayaka, I know^^ » she smiled.
« Really ? How ? »
« You're popular, I guess^^ I heard you were pretty good at basketball »
« Not so much, but I'm training hard. And by the way, you're not supposed to be here... »
« Oh, right... But I could just sit here and encourage you^^ Or beat the crap out of you 'coz I'm not so bad^^ »
Sayaka was sceptic, but she was challenging her, and she liked that.
« Come and lose »
« Honto ? Great ! You're dead ! » she smiled brightly.

They were smiling at each other again, and Sae realized how beautiful Sayaka was for the first time.
« Go ! »

They played for 30 minutes, running and laughing. She was good at it, and her enthusiasm was so nice to see.
When they finally stopped, it was time to go in class.
« Thank you for this^^ » smiled Sae.
« You're welcome, you made me run, it's good ! »
« … It's nice meeting you, Sayaka ! » she said before leaving with a little laugh.


7.40am, corridors


« How are you today, hime ? » asked Rino, walking with Rie to go to class.
« I didn't sleep well, my parents argued all night... »
« Really ? What for ? »
« My mom is unhappy and my dad doesn't care »  sighed Rie.
« Hm... Well, they better end this quickly because those little wrinkles here » she said caressing Rie's eyes « are hidding your beautiful eyes » she smiled sweetly.
Rie shivered ans stopped walking.
« I'm sure it's gonna be okay soon, come on ! » said Rino before coming in the classroom.
Rino had kissed her once, a year ago. It was at Rie's house, they were having a pyjama party and they were playing truth or dare.
It was very sweet, and Rie never forget it. But it was a game, nothing more.

Rino knew that Rie was really close to her family, it mattered a lot to her to have a good harmony in the house, it was painful to see her sad like this...


Kojima was talking to Tomochin on her way in to the classroom when she felt like falling.
« OMG, are you okay ? Does it hurt ? Wow, you are really beautiful...
Kojima opened her eyes, a little dizzy. In front of her was a short girl with a big smile, who was actually staring at... her boobs !
« What... happened ? » she asked.
« Ano, I was running late, and I didn't see you, so... I'm sorry, are you happy ? »
« Yeah... »
Tomochin helped her to lift her up.
« Take care, Kojima-san ! It was nice meeting you ! » she smiled brightly before entering the room.
« … What a noisy one » sighed Tomochin.


7.45am, classroom



« Hello everybody, today we'll talk about your future, what do you want to do and why, to be sure you have a goal. So, I'm gonna ask all of you, and later we'll see which school fits you the most. »
The entire class mumbled, those kind of sharing wasn't really welcome.
« So, Kojima-san ? »
« Hm... I wanna be a model »
« Good, Shizuka-san ? »
« I would like to be a rapper »
« I see... Itano-san ? »
« An actress »
« Shinoda-san ? »
« I want to create clothes »
« Alright, Maeda-san ? »
« ...Be a singer. »
Takamina stopped looking at the sky. She said she wanted to be a singer ? Interesting... She was the kind of girls who could be the center. How was her singing like ? Maybe she could ask her, if we forget that Atsuko wanted to crash her everytime she saw her.
« Takahashi-san ? »
Yuko pinched the midget who was in lalaland.
« Hm, what ? »
« What do you want to do ? »
« … probably open a combini store... »
No way she'd talk about her dream in class, it was too personal.
« Ah, souka... well, everyone has various choices, it's good... »
Minami wasn't listening anymore. Shinoda-san wanted to create clothes, and Maeda-san a singer. It was exactly what she was looking for... but how to convince them ?


12am, schoolyard


« Miichan, I need you » frowned Minami.. « Shinoda-san would be able to help you with the outfits, create them before the deadline »
« Shinoda-san ?! But... »
« I know. But  ask her please, we need her. Do something nice, a joke, a cake, I don't know... »
« A cake ?! » asked Miichan, shocked, while Yuko was bursting into laughs.
« I'm not giving up just because we're not popular in class. And I heard she was funny. I have to find Maeda-san... » she said leaving her friends.

The girl hanged out in the school with her black hoodie on to find Maeda-san.
She saw her, sat with all her friends to eat their lunch. When she stopped in front of them, they all seemed really surprised.
« Hello, I'm really sorry to interrupt yourlunch. Maeda-san, can I talk to you please ? »
Atsuko looked at her without saying a word, and finally got up to follow her.
« Have a nice meal » said Minami politely.
They went in a quiet place, next to the trees.
« What do you want ? »
« I need you. To sing. »
« What ?! »
« We are doing a dance contest in two months and I need a center for the song, I would like you to be this center. »
« You're asking me to help you for a contest ?! »
« Yes, this is important »
« Oh sorry » smirked the tall one « we never talk, your dad killed my mother and you're asking for my help ?!... Find someone else. »
Minami looked at the girl leaving, it was risky anyway. She had to find a way...


« Cap' is great but asking me this... I don't know her, she seems so distant... » sighed Miichan.
« Maybe you'll like her, I've played with Miyazawa-san this morning. She's nice ! » smiled Sayaka.
« What ? Really ? Wow you're so brave ! Those girls are freaking me out, like they want to kill us all » frowned Miichan.
« Baka^^ »
« Wait ! Yes ! You're gonna help me ! » she smirked.
« Eh ? Why me ? »
« Because ! You talk t Miyazawa-san about Shinoda-san »
« Let me think... No^^ »
« Why ?! »
« Because Takamina asked you, not me. And it will be good for your social interaction^^ »
Miichan pouted, she was usually good at talking but this girl was a little scary.

Minami came back to sit with her friends.
« How did it go ? » asked Kasai, worried.
« Bad, she refused »
« ... »
« Guys, I might be a little absent in the incoming days, I have to do something... You can still come at the flat, and we practice as always »
« What are you gonna do ? » frowned Sayaka.
« I need her, so I have to fix this... Later ! »
« Why do I feel worried... ? » sighed Rino.


3.15pm, corridors


« So, you're feeling okay with the crew ? » asked Rie while they were walking.
« Yes, I really enjoy it, you are very funny^^ » smiled Nito.
« If Yuko is too noisy you feed her and you can rest for few minutes^^ » laughed Rino.
They were hanging out together until the next class. The two friends really appreciated Moeno-san. Rie was dressed with her scholl uniform but her skirt was shorter today, and her shirt a little opened. She was really hot, thought Rino.
At this moment, two girls crossed their path and stared at them.
« Slut... » said one of them looking at Rie.
Rino frozed and suddenly took the girl by the neck and smashed her against the wall.
« WHAT THE FUCK DID YOU JUST SAY ??! » she screamed.
The girl was so scared that she couldn't speak.
« Rino... Let her go » sighed Rie.
« What did you say ?! Don't you DARE speak to her like that again ! You think she's a slut ? She's more beautiful and smart that you could ever dream to be ! So go fuck yourself because no one will ever want to ! »
She let her go, the girl ran, terrified. Rino came back to her friends with a smile.
« Maybe she was blind after all... Who could say that to you, hime ? And sorry for that Nito-chan, but kids are rude nowadays, right ? »
Rie didn't said anything, she was shocked by the scene, but to be honest she was so charmed that she was blushing really hard again. Nito-chan nodded, Rino was really impressive. Rie came next to Rino and shyly took her hand.


4pm, at the @Caffee

« Tonight Aachan comes to my house ! » smiled Mariko.
« No, it was supposed to be me today » protested Haruna.
« You're too dirty, Nyaro^^ »
« Not true » pouted Kojima.
« You're too cute, come too, we'll sleep together, well, not really... » she smirked.
« Mari-chan ! You're not funny ! »
« Really ? I thought I was^^ »
« So Aachan, are you gonna tell us what Minami asked you ? » said Sae before drinking her ice tea.
« … Nothing important. »
« Come on... »
« She wanted my help... »
« Really ? Wow she's got guts ! I don't know why everyone is hating her... She looks nice » shrugged Mariko.
« Oh yeah ? She's always behind, is really bad at school, love to fight for nothing... Her and her dad are the same... »
It was a sensible subject, and no one wanted to fight with Aachan in moments like this.


7pm, Rie's house


« You're not even looking at me anymore ! Like I'm invisible ! »
« I'm tired when I come back home ! I work all day, can you understand that ?! »

Rie sighed, it was like that since she came back from school. She really loved her parents and listen to their argument was really hurting her... She felt like crying, alone like that.

Bip... Bip... Bip...

From : Rino
To : Rie
Content :
How is it at home ?
Still fighting ?

From: Rie
To: Rino
Content :
Yes...


Rino was worrying, it was making her really happy, hopefully she has a really great friend.

From : Rino
To : Rie
Content :
Sometimes parents
need to. Give them
some time.

From : Rie
To : Rino
Content :
Maybe... I have the
impression that
everything is ugly.
My parents were in
love but they're fighting
now...


 
She waited 10 minutes for an aswer but nothing... Weird, it was important for her to talk about it and Rino seemed not to care anymore... Disappointing...
She sighed and stretched on her bed, tears rolling on her cheeks.

Bip... Bip... Bip...

From : Rino
To : Rie
Content :
Not everything is ugly,
hime. Meet me outside:)


Rie raised her eyebrows, outside... ? She ran to her window and look at the street. Rino was here, in front of her house, waving her hand and smiling.

Rie hurried up, checked her make up, her hair and took her phone before running in the stairs. Her parents were too busy to notice that their daughter were leaving at this hour.

« How are you ? » asked Rino, kissing her on the cheek.
« G-Good... » she blushed, looking at her feet.
« Did you cry ? Well, it's okay, tears suit you well^^ So, come on, follow me ! »
« What ? Where are we going ?! It's late ! »
« I have to show you something. I want to see you smile again »
Rie had no idea where she was talking her but she didn't care, she was with her and she felt good, Rie was so smily all the time.
They took the bus, Rino was inventing a joke to make Rie laugh.
After 15 minutes, they finally arrived in a little park that Rie had never seen before.
« Where are we ? »
« It's a place I love, it's beautiful and calm when you need to think. But tonight it's special, come ! »

She tool her near the center, they walked next to a little lake, birds and fishes were living there. It was a little late but there were so many people that it seemed unusual.
« Why is it so crowed ? »
« Wait a little more^^ Come on ! » Rino smiled, taking her hand to go to a small shop.
« Hello, we would like a strawberry ice cream, please ! »
The woman created a unique ice cream in front of the two girls.
« People say that she create the ice cream depending who you are or what she sees in you. So it's never the same ! »
Rie was really impressed, and looked at the ice cream curiously. It was an « heart ice cream » with only one spoon on the top.
« I think one spoon will be enough for you too right ?^^ »
Rie blushed really hard and Rino seemed satisfied.
« Hai ! One spoon is a great ! Thank you very much ! »

Rino gave the ice cream to Rie and took her to sit on the grass, above the lake. Rie ate some of the cold desert wich was delicious, and smiled when Rino ate it too.
« Oishi !! Nee Rie-chan, did you thought I was scary after I yelled at this girl today ? »
« N-No, but I wasn't expecting such a reaction from you »
« Well, I don't like to hear such things. Why did she think that she's better than you... ? Plus, you were really hot... » she said with a husky voice before wiping off ice cream on Rie's shin. She was really lose to her mouth, and really tempted to kiss them.

Bam... Bam... Bam...

Rie blenched and looked at the sky, there were fireworks above the lake !
« Wow... » she smiled.
« Do you like it ? »
« Yes ! This is beautiful ! »
They watched it, eating the ice cream. Rie was hypnotized by the little lights, she loved fireworks. She forgot about her parents and loneliness
Rino was entirely satisfied, Rie was smiling again, and she could see the lights reflecting into the pretty girl's eyes. She was perfect...

They stood like this for an hour, the park was really crowded but the atmosphere was pleasant.
Suddenly the sky went really dark and the rain began to fall, a really heavy rain. Everybody ran away, surprised because it was really sudden.
The girls screamed and quickly got up.
« Come on ! We're gonna be drenched ! We shall go to my house, it's like 5 minutes from here ! »
« Okay !»
They ran as fast as they could, already wet, laughing hard.
When they arrived at the house, Rino quickly opened the door and they came inside.
« Wow, that was violent ! » laughed Rino
« Yeah... But we're gonna awake your parents... »
« They're away for a week, come on, you have to take an hot shower. I don't want you to be sick » she said driving her to the bathroom.
« Rino... thank you for this evening. It was wonderful » she smiled.
« You're welcome^^ I'm gonna make some tea ! »

Rie felt better under the hot water, she had really laugh tonight, Rino wa so funny ! She was always in a good mood like everything was always so easy with her... Obviously it was someone you wanted by your side, to be always okay.

She turned off the water, dried her body and looked around to find something she could wear. Nothing except white a large tee-shirt. Better than being naked...
She put in on and came out of the bathroom. Rino had already make the tea and was looking for cakes to go with when rie came in.
The funny girl dropped her jaw, Rie was... So sexy...
« Ano... It was the only clothe in the bathroom... Sorry... »
« N-No... It's okay. It's my brother's but... you wear it better... »
She couldn't stop staring at her.
« This is mine ? » asked Rie taking the mug.
« Ah, y-yes. Careful, it's hot... »
Rie drank a little and smiled shyly.
« Rino-chan, thank you for today... »
« You said it already » said Rino softly, coming near her.
« Anoo... »
Rie was now against the kitchen wall, really close to the girl.
« How can you be so beautiful... And those lips » she touched them with the tip of her finger « must be great to kiss... »
« Rino... » shivered Rie.

Rino slowly leaned down to her mouth and kissed them. It was so sweet and so hot at the same time... She had dreamed about this many times.
« I knew it... So hot... »
Rie had her eyes still closed, and she raised her lips, asking for more. Her body was shaking with impatience. Rino took her lips again, more empressed than before, she kissed her roughly, pressing her body against hers. Rie moaned while kissing, feeling Rino's tongue slipping in.
« Aaah... Rino... »
« Rie... I want you for so long... » she said, her hands already touching Rie's flat belly, who was shaking under her contract.

Dring... Dring... Dring...

The two girls stopped, it was Rie's phone.
« Sorry » smiled the girl, as she picked up.
« Moshi Moshi ? »
« Rie, where are you ? You should be sleeping ! »
« I'm at Rino's , and I couldn't sleep with you two fighting all the time... See you tomorrow »


She hanged up and sighed, she had almost forgot about this, but it was like coming back in the real word.
« Come on, you should sleep now » smiled Rino taking Rie to her bed.

They lay down, Rino came closer against Rie's back and embraced her tightly.
« Goodnight, hime. I'm here to protect you »


2am, Minami's house, on the roof

She had to do it, after all it wasn't a bad idea. They all needed to know.
Maybe it will work. Atsuko was suffering, and it had to end.
In few hours, she will begin to look for it...


I'm so confused about this RinoRie scene, please tell me if you think it's was silly, I'm so lost right now about it. I am scared that it's ridiculous.... :bleed eyes: :bleed eyes:
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Post by: Yuseichaaan48 on September 04, 2013, 11:53:38 PM
Acchan.. Befriend takamina.. Please!!! It's killing me that you hate minami... :(

The RinoRie scene is awesome. It's not even close to ridiculous!!!  :thumbsup

I have a bad feeling about what Minami is about to do. She's on a roof and she says it has to end? -gulp- :O

Hope she's ok!! Looking forward to the next update! :D

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Post by: abcari on September 05, 2013, 12:15:35 AM
dafuk is thinking Minami? o.o and the scene RinoRie was good C: and cute <3 so dont worry about it C:
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Post by: cisda83 on September 05, 2013, 02:57:07 AM
What would Minami do to help Atsuko put everything behind?

Would she make her father confess while Atsuko hissing somewhere?

Would she investigate the case?

The situation between rei and sashi was fine... Quite nice..

Rei is getting more and more in love with sashi...

And sashi is getting more and more protective

But when would they confess?

What would miichan do about the task minami asked her to do?

Can't wait to see

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Post by: Haruko on September 05, 2013, 05:17:13 AM
OMG! Come on Atsuko! be gentle with minami!
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Post by: FoxKing on September 05, 2013, 09:12:23 AM
 :mon chilly: minami what are you doing...

kojiyuu  :mon inluv:

ya a few was on when I was laying down :mon sweat:

make the fic  :mon whine:

Update soon  :mon santa4:
Title: Re: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 3 now
Post by: Archer1992 on September 05, 2013, 04:47:33 PM
Takamina would fight whit Atsuko to make the things easy...

Rie and Rino are such a cute couple

i want to know what Miichan woul do to be close to Mariko-sama ^^

Thanks

and update SOON!!!
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 3 now
Post by: aruka on September 06, 2013, 03:53:07 AM
I have to apologize first. Despite trying hard, in the end I had trouble searching the silliness in those RinoRie scenes :lol:, thanks to the smooth switching between their sweet and sexy moments.

The only thing that made me frown a bit was this..
They were hanging out together until the next class. The two friends really appreciated Moeno-san. Rie was dressed with her scholl uniform but her skirt was shorter today, and her shirt a little opened. She was really hot, thought Rino.
Yes, I love to imagine Rie-chan in this 'corrupted' uniform. :twisted: But the way this was connected to the previous sentence is like a sudden jump, isn't it?

Anyway, I totally wouldn't mind many many more RinoRie moments. I'm specifically waiting for them, together with SaeYaka. :D
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 3 now
Post by: diamond kirara on September 07, 2013, 02:42:24 PM
Atsuko dun hate takamina u must love her :catglare: :deco:
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 4
Post by: fausto on September 10, 2013, 11:06:27 PM
Hey, thank you very much for all your comments :bow: :bow:
I update here the chapter 4, it's not finished yet, but I want to update this part since it's done! Please keep reading :D :D



Chapter 4 :


5pm, Kuristore

Rena was hesitating... the white dress was really cute and light, perfect match with her current shoes, but the blue jacket was really pretty, and she needed a jacket...
So hard to make a choice, this store was her favorite place, she could buy all of her clothes here.
« The white dress. I'm sure you're gorgeous in it. »
Rena turned around to see who was speaking to her. What she saw was a smily face.
« Hey, I'm Matsui Jurina. Sorry to interrupt but I really think you should choose the dress. »
Rena looked at her closely, the girl was wearing a black shorty, a white tank and a leather jacket (she has the kataomoi finally haircut). She had already seen this girl since they were in the same class, but she had never talk to her.
« W-Why do you think so ? »
« Hm... » the short hair girl looked at Rena's legs.
« You have amazing legs, so show them ! »
« Well... I guess I should listen to you. »
« Good ! » smiled the girl.
She waited for the girl to buy the dress.
« Now, would you accept to have a drink with me ? Shopping make me thirsty^^ »
« … Okay » she blushed.

Rena was surprised by this girl coming talk to her like that, so spontaneously. But it was refreshing, she knew that Jurina had a bad reputation like everybody in the Takahashi team, but here, she looked charming... Kakkoi. She had this boyish side that made her really popular at school.
Jurina took her to a little tea shop, where she behaved like a gentleman to make her sit and to take their order.
« So, Rena-chan, tell me about you. »
Rena-chan ? She was supposed to be shocked by such familiarity but the way she said it was so cute...
« About me ? What do you want to know ? »
« Everything^^ Starting by... Do you have a boyfriend ? »
« Eeh ? » she blushed hard. « N-No... Why ? »
« Great ! What's your favourite food ? »
« Melon-pan and spicy food » she smiled.
Jurina smiled softly and drank some orange juice.
« Rena-chan is such a cute girl, weird no boys are trying to go out with you »
« … Sometimes they do »
« Really ? What's wrong then ? »
« Hm... They're too stupid... They're behaving like kids, you've got to treat your girlfriend right... » she pouted.
« Yes, like her to drink something in a nice place » laughed Jurina showing the place they were in. « Anyway, I'm happy you bought this dress ! What if you'd wear it tomorrow?^^ »
« What ? No... »
« Come on ! I want to see you in it ! Say yes ! » she pouted like a kid, doing her puppy face to Rena.
This girl seemed so childish but so mature at the same time.
« I will think about it »
« Yay^^ »

They talked about an hour about the school and mostly Rena's life and family.
« Wow, time went fast ! I have to go, my homeworks aren't done yet, and Takamina will be angry if so... »
« What ? »
« See you later, Rena-chan ! » she blew her a kiss, leaving.
Rena was now alone at the table, still surprised of what just happened. Matsui Jurina... she was something. A girl with a strange and strong aura, like everybody who was in the Takahashi team. Something cool, strong and impressive.
But she couldn't talk to Atsuko about that.


6.30pm, Minami's father house


She was all alone in the house. Like everyday for 20 years, it was the hour where her father Kito was doing a footing in the nearest park.
She didn't like to come back here because she was missint it so hard... It was hard to live on her own whereas she was still at school, and to be honest, she was missing her father too.
But this case had been so hard to support.
Kito was a police officer since 1961 and this story had completly changed him. When Minami was young he was always smiling and laughing, making random jokes that Minami loved so much.
And her mother died in a car accident when she was 8. His dad took really good care of her, trying not to appear sad in front of her only child. But then, the Maeda Kaoru case... After she had been killed, he didn't defend himself, he wasn't talking anymore, not laughing with her daughter.
Everytime Minami had asked him what really happened that night, he stood silent and runaway.
Yakuza were violent, and the short girl had learn to fight on her own because she was the daughter of the murderer. After 4 months, she couldn't stand it anymore and she left.
She wasn't believeing that her dad was the killer, and she needed to know what happened, show the proof to Atsuko and leave all this behind once for all.

She went in her dad's office and looked for the file. Like she expected, it was hidden under a big amount of boring stuff.

« MAEDA KAORU FILE 0505915 »



It was heavy, her dad must had been collecting a lot of evidences and facts about it. She put it on her bag to look at it later, and prepared to leave when her eyes met a little picture wich must have fall. It was Kito posing with Kaoru, in front of a temple. They were bboth smiling... could it be possible... ? Takamina had never thought that they could have been lovers.
She couldn't stay any longer, her dad had almost finished his footing.
After a last look at the house, she left, putting her hoodie on.

Her dad came back 5 minutes later, and he could swear I had smell her daughter perfume. Once in a while, he could smell this odor in the house. Weird...


10pm, Minami's flat


« Tadaima »
« Ah, Takamina!I saved you some soup, it's in the fridge » said Sayaka.
« Thank you. How are you all ? It's good to see you »
« GOOD ! » yelled Yuko, jumping on her.

Rino was sitting next to Rie, who was watching TV.
« Hey^^ »
« Hey » smiled Rie
« How are you today ? I didn't see you much... »
« Yeah... sorry » she said, still watching the screen.
« ... »
Rino wanted to talk about their night, but Rie was weird.
« Rie ? »
« Hm ? »
« I'm gonna do something and you have to say yes or no, okay ? »
« What ? Hm... Okay, okay »

Rino took Rie's shin so the girl was facing her now, and kissed her deeply.
« ... »
« So ? »
« … Y-Yes »
« Aaah... So, you're my girl, right ? »
« O-Okay » blushed Rie.
« GIRLS !!! SKINSHIP !! EVERYONE, THEY'RE KISSING !!! »
« Shut up » said Rino, running after Rino all over the flat.
Minami was eating, sat on a chair. She looked at the scene, very calm. She already knew Rie loved Rino so it wasn't surprising her at all.
« If you look for me, I will be on the roof » she said.


She sat on her old leather chair, the weather was nice up there. She loved this place, near to the sky, she could watch to the stars and think quietly about everything.
She had the file with her, and she wanted to read it, try to understand what really happened.


« MAEDA KAORU, 37 YEARS OLD.
FOUND IN THE KITSHU STREET, A BULLET IN THE CHEST.
SHE DIED RIGHT AWAY, AT 3.45AM, 08/07/17.
FEW WITNESS HEARD THE SHOTGUN, BUT NO ONE SAW THE SHOOTER.
THE LAST PERSON SEEN WITH MAEDA-SAN WAS POLICE OFFICER TAKAHASHI KITO, WHO DIDN'T EXPLAIN WHY HE WAS WITH HER. »


Shit... She was really hoping to find an answer about her father and the reason why.

« MAEDA-SAN WAS KNOWN FROM THE POLICE TO BE A YAKUZA FROM THE SHIOTORI GANG. VERY ACTIVE IN TOWN. NO DOUBT IT'T A RECKONING, PROBABLY THE KODA GANG. THIS IS NOT OUR JURIDICTION. »


Was it all..., The official file was so empty that it was a shame. Obviously the police wasn't interested in finding the killer at all.
Her father had done some researches and there were a lots of pictures in the file : some tattoos, buildings and persons quickly taken. And a map, of the town, with a red cross in it. Her father had written something next to it :
« MIURU SATO,HE KNOWS WHO BUT DOESN'T WANT TO TALK. WHITE BUILDING, 3RD FLOOR. »

A clue to follow, she had to go for it, or else she would be stuck like her father.

« Sayaka » said Minami when she came from the roof « I need to go out for a while. You can all stay here for the night if you want. »
She took the map in her pocket and put her hoodie on, once again.
« Yuko don't mess around too much, and Rino ? »
« Yes ? »
« Take good care of Rie-chan »
« Takamina, don't go anything risky » frowned Sayaka.
« Yes, of course » she smiled

She left the flat with a serious face, she didn't know what she was going to find or do over there.
But she didn't care.



0.00am, white building


 It was a messy neighborhood, dirty and very dark. Minami wasn't afraid but she couldn't wait to come back home. She came in quickly and claimed the stairs until the 3rd floor.
She heard a distant noise of voices talking. She followed it and stopped in front of a black door, he was probably here.
She took a deep breath and opened it.
The room was all dark, lightened only by the TV showing a news program.
« MIURU SATO !! » screamed Minami with a loud voice.
A tall gyu suddenly showed up from nowhere and kicked her in the stomack.
« Urgh ! »
The captain fell on the ground, it was hurting her so badly !
« WHO ARE YOU ? »
The guy seemed really pissed off, and he was very strong. She understood better why her dad dropped the case.
« HUH ? WHAT DO YOU WANT ? »
The girl got back on her fat and stepped back.
« Who killed Maeda Kaoru ? »
« What ? Wait, you're a girl ?! What the fuck... Get out !! »
He tried to punch her again but she avoided it and quickly rispoted, in his face. She heard a noise, she probably just broke his nose.
« Aaaah ! Bitch !! »
« Who killed Maeda-san ? »
He ran toward her and kicked her on her jaw and on the mouth. Her lip instantly bleed. She hit him with her elbow, right on the stomack so he couldn't fight back. She took benefits og his and punched him three times, tomack again, right leg and jaw. The man fell, bleeding badly.
« … Who are you... ? »
« Tell me who killed Maeda-san. »
« I don't know... »
« TELL ME !! » she screamed, kicking his body.
« Aah... FUCK ! I don't know ! Just go at the 1st warehouse on the Keru dock, east from here. »
« ... »

Minami left the flat without a word. She could feel her own blood flowing on her shin and neck. Tonight was too late to go check this place, and she really wanted to sleep now.


1am, Minami's flat

When she came in, everyone was sleeping all over, except from Miichan, who was hardly staying awake.
« You should take some rest » smiled Minami.
« Eh ? Takamina ? What happened ? » she said looking at her face.
« I'm okay. I will take a shower, and sleep. I see you tomorrow, okay ? »
« … Okay... » she sighed the girl.

The shower relaxed her, she washed the blood and warmed her muscles under the hot water.
Tomorrow night she will go find this warehouse.



Tuesday, 8am, Science class

The tall girl was already sat at her desk when she saw her coming. Even if she had her hoodie on, Atsuko could see all the bruises and the bruises and the dried blood on her lips. What happened..., The midget reached her table, limping.
atMinami was a really good fighter, Atsuko knew that. So what kind of fight was that ? The punches must have been heavy and powerful. What was she doing... ? Was she in a gang or something ? She eyed contact with the small girl for few seconds, Takamina had this serious look on her face, but Atsuko could actually felt something really kind in her.


« I was right » whispered someone to Rena's ear.
« W-What ? »
Jurina appeared, always smiling.
« This is perfect » she said showing the dress. « And you put it^^ »
« Hm... » she smirked. « Do you want to eat with me today ? I cooked you something ! »
« Really ?! Ano... I usually eat with my friends... »
« Souka... Okay ! »
« No wait, Jurina ! »
The short hair girl looked at her.
« I'll eat with you. »
« Good ! By the way, it's so good to hear you say my name... » she smirked.
Rena smiled shyly, she had say it naturally. She sat at her table, still smiling.
« Rena, is she bothering you ? » asked Mayu, frowing.
« What ? No... »
« If she does, tell Atsuko, okay ? »
« No, Mayu, she doesn't. She is really nice, actually »

« You need to do it today »
« I know »
« Or else Takamina will be mad, and it's not the right time for this »
« I know »
« So you have to go »
« I know, Yuko ! Give me a break, okay ? Why don't you crash against Kojima-san once again... » pouted Miichan.
« Good idea^^ But this time my face would fall right into her boobs... Uwaa ! » drolled the squirell.


The lesson was boring, everybody was daydreaming drawing or texting. When they were finally allowed to take a 5 minutes break, Minami went to the restroom to refresh herself. She was still stunned because of the fight, it was a difficult morning. Plus, she was lacking some sleep.
She was looking at her reflect in the mirror when Atsuko came in, and close the door. They were alone.
« What happened ? » asked the tall girl, frowning.
« What ? » the midget wasn't expecting a discussion.
« Did you fight ? Against who ? »
« … Why do you care ? »
« Because he must be tough to make you look like that, and you. And you didn't want to fight me, so why with him ? »
« … I need some answers. Then, you will be able to help me »
« You fight for a stupid dance contest ?! »
« It's not stupid, Atsuko.  I want to do it, it's my goal, it's what I'm doing all this. So tonight I will find this man, and then I will win this contest »
« … Pff... By the way, I don't know why but my friends are interest by yours. Tell her to be careful, or I will fight them... »
« Hm, you should stop fighting all the time and wear more shirt like this, your cleavage is really nice to see... » smirked Minami before leaving the tall girl alone.

They got back to the sciences lesson, but Atsuko wasn't listening. This girl was making her crazy, so irritating but so... interesting at the same time. And what was that about her shirt... ? She was pissed off and flattered, and it was pissing her off even more... !!



12.00am, in the park next to school


« You eat here with you friends, right ? »
« Yes, it's quieter than school »
Jurina and Rena were walking in the park.
« Ah, here it's perfect » said Jurina, leaving a layer of her bag and placed it on the grass. « Please, have a sit^^ »
Rena smiled and sat on the layer, Jurina had prepared all this for her, it was so cute ! Jurina sat in front of her and took the food off her bag.
« Jaaa !! » she said, opening the bento. « Gekkikara food just for Rena-chan!^^ I've made it, hehe »
« Wow, sugoi ! »
« Come on, eat it ! »
« O-Okayn itadakimasu ! »
Rena took a bit of food, and opened wide eyes.
« Oishi !! »
« Really ?! »
« Really ! Sugoi, this is really good ! But, what are you eating ? »
« My mom made me some spaghetti with meat^^ I'm relieved that you like it. I was so stressed ! My mom said that girls like when a person cook well^^ »
They ate in silent for few minutes.
« Jurina ? »
« Hm ? »
« Why me ? »
« Eeh ? »
« … You're really popular with girls, everyone loves you. So... Why did you invite me ? »
« … Because you're differente »
« Differente ? How ? »
« You're smart, beautiful and mysterious. Plus, you didn't even notice me before. »
« How do you know ? »
« Did you ? Except from the fact that we are from the Takahashi team so we're dumb, violent and bad at school... »
« … No »
« Don't worry, it's better like that. Sometimes, I just wish everybody could see how great is Takamina... »
« What do you mean ? »
« You know... In school, it has to be the smart and classy ones, the invisible ones and the messy and dumb ones. »
« Why don't you work ? I mean, you could do something better. I could help you if you want »
Rena was so cute that Jurina felt in trust. She took her markbook in her bag and gave it to the girl.
« I'm the same as you, Rena-chan »


12.00am, corridors


Atsuko had to put her last history test in the teacher's locker before the end of the lunch.
She quickly reached it and opened it, ready to leave her test when she saw something weird. It was the last history test of Takahashi Minami, with an A+ on it.
She frowned, Takahashi was bad at school, she remembered last history class when the teacher gave her the test, saying that it was bad. A+ ?!
« Maeda-san ? Do you need something ? »
The history teacher was behind her.
« I-I wanted to give you my test. B-But, is it really an A+ ? »
« Anoo... yes, but you're not supposed to see that »
He seemed really embarrassed, it was really weird.
« I-I need to go » said Atsuko leaving all of the sudden.
« But, Maeda-san, you took the test ! »
She was already in the stairs, too late.

She opened the roof door and saw them. They were all eating together.
« Takahashi ! I need to talk to you »
Everybody looked at her, then smiled.
« Hello Maeda-san ! » they all said.
She was so surprised that she blushed.
« Aachan ? Ah, you're here » said Sae, coming on the roof.
She saw everybody and smiled, looking at Sayaka. Minami got up and came near Atsuko.
« What ? »
« What is that ? » she asked showing the test.
« … Must be a mistake... » shrugged Minami.
« Cap', why don't you tell her ? It's okay you know » said Rino.
« Tell me what ? »
« It's not important »
« Tell me ! »
Minami sighed and took her to the stairs and closed the door.
« What's up with you.... It's an A+.
« … What's your average ? »
« Pff... 96.7% » sighed the midget.
« 96.7% »
She suddnely tried to hit Minami in the face but the girl blocked it.
« Not today, please. I need all my strenght for tonight »

Atsuko sighed and came back on the roof.
« Sae, let's go ! » she said, angry.
The genkin one was eating next to Sayaka, the two of them were smiling.
« Go, I'll be catching you » she said.
« Right... »


1pm, the park next to school



« Thank you for the food » said Rena
She had ate the all box, it was really delicious.
« You're welcome. And, Rena-chan, can you keep the mark thing quiet, please ? »
« Yeah, but I still don't understand »
« What matters is that we have good results to be able to do what we want in the future, doesn't matter if people ignore that we're good. »
« But it's unfait... And teachers agreed for this. I don't want people think that you're silly if you're not. »
« Are you defending me?^^ » she smiled brightly.
« … Maybe »
Jurina smiled, put everything back in her bag. They went back to the school, walking next to each other.
« I'm very happy to know you, Rena-chan » said Jurina, taking Rena's hand.


1pm, on the roof



« Minesgishi-san ? » asked Sae, smiling.
« Y-Yes ? »
« Sayaka told me you wanted to talk to Mariko. »
« Ah, yes »
« Do you want her email ? Maybe it would be easier for you »
« Great idea ! Thank you so much Miyazawa-san ! »
« Just call me Sae^^ »
« I'm mailing her right now ! »


From : Miichan
To : Shinoda-san
Content :
Hello, this is
Minesgishi-san. Sorry
to reach you like that,
but... I would need your
help
:nervous

Miichan was febrile, waiting for an answer. Sar and Sayaka were looking at her, laughing and whispering.
« Don't laugh... Twin tower ! » pouted Miichan
« Twin tower ? That's so cool^^ » smiled Sae.

Bip... Bip... Bip...


From : Shinoda-san
To : Miichan
Content :
Well, good afternoon
Minesgishi-san !
How can I help you ?
;)

From : Miichan
To : Shinoda-san
Content :
I heard that you
wear good in creating
clothes. I have to
make some.
:panic:

From : Shinoda-san
To : Miichan
Content :
Souka...
If you treat me
cakes at the
Nekku bar,
I'm your man !
:twisted: :D

From : Miichan
To : Shinoda-san
Content :
DEAL !! After school !



Miichan smiled, mission accomplished. And this girl didn't seem so scary after all. She had a good feeling about this.


5pm, schoolyard

« Come on, Rena-san, go out with me ! »
« No, thank you... »
« Come on, don't be shy ! »
Rena was surrounded by two guys, against the wall.
« No ! »
« Why girls always say no ? Don't be a bitch and say yes for once ! » saidthe first guy, being agressive.
« BACK OFF !! » instructed Jurina, protecting Rena with her body.
« Oh great... the Matsui now... »
« Leave her alone »
She was very calm, but Rena could feel that she was tensed.
« It's none of your buisness, get the fuck out of here. »
Jurina took the guy by the neck and lightened.
« I said, leave her alone. And don't call her Rena-chan, she's not your friend. Respect her bastard ! Now leave or I swear I will not be this gentle... »
She released him and watched the boys leave without a word.
« Are you okay ? » asked Jurina with a sweet smile.
« Yes, thank you »
« I'm sorry for what you saw. But I wanted to make sure they won't bother you again. »
« … Thank you, Jurina » she blushed.
Her heart was beating really fast, it was like a phantasm, to have someone strong to protect you like this. Jurina was her ikemen.
« I'm gonna walk you home » smiled Jurina.


5.20pm, Nekku bar

Miichan was looking at Mariko who was eating her cake with a bright smile.
« Is it good ? »
« Delicious ! »
She was actually cute.
« So, tell me about the clothes ! »
« Hm... We have to do a dance contest, and Takamina had draw some cool outfits for the song. I usually do our costumes but here it's serious, and a little bit complicated...
« A dance contest ? Nice ! »
« Yeah, we really need to win » sighed Miichan.
« Souka. So, are you gonna show me ? »
« Hm, actually the sketch are at Minami's place. Can you come tonight ? »
« I need to go home first, but I can come later if you want. »
« Okay, come around 9pm hen, I'll email you  the address »
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 4
Post by: chichay12 on September 11, 2013, 12:00:50 AM
Brb for the proper comment *teehee*

i smell something fishy here...wait..im wrong the one i smell is our dinner  :oops:
anyways  :on cigar:
minami be careful...acchan just join the dance group already!!
wahhhhh chapter 5 i want u now :on comhere:
thank u for the update fausto  :whistle:
cant wait for more :on gay:
Title: Re: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 4
Post by: Sydney W on September 11, 2013, 01:35:48 AM
Owhh, Acchan don't treat Minami so cool. Hope Minami can settle the misunderstood between her father and Acchan's mum death.
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 4
Post by: cisda83 on September 11, 2013, 01:54:26 AM
Ah.. Minami's secrets got reviled little by little...

What would Atsuko do with the small info she had of Minami?

Would she follow Minami to the warehouse?

Would Minami go by herself?

What kind of the truth would Minami get?

Were Kaoru and minami's father lover or something?

The relationships develop nicely for everyone else..

How about Atsumina and kojiyuu?

Can't wait to find out more

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 4
Post by: Feat on September 11, 2013, 03:05:33 AM
Oh wow. Everything's going smoothly for all the girls. Well, except for Takamina and Acchan. But it's all well.  :twothumbs

Update soon.  :bow: :)
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 4
Post by: FoxKing on September 11, 2013, 03:37:56 AM
Nice update but hope you update soon...  :twothumbs
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 4
Post by: Haruko on September 11, 2013, 04:07:38 AM
OMG! that was awesome!! Im waiting for kojiyuu couple :B too
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 4
Post by: Yuseichaaan48 on September 11, 2013, 08:00:22 AM
Awesome!!

Takamina, be careful!! Acchan's starting to see you differently!

Everyone is going smooth!!

Kojiyuu coming soon?? :D

Looking forward to the next update!! ^_^ update soon!  :bow:
Title: Re: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 4
Post by: Archer1992 on September 11, 2013, 04:15:10 PM
hahahahahahaha your FF always are very interesting ^^

thanks

update ASAP

please!!

¬3¬
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 4
Post by: blakwhite on September 11, 2013, 05:55:47 PM
aww, poor takamina  :cry:
mou, acchan pls take care of her  :cry:
nice update
and looking forward for next faustohentai  :P
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 4
Post by: blakwhite on September 12, 2013, 11:57:37 AM
^ lol :3
but, i think FauSmutMaster/FaustoSmutMaster is better :3

Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 4
Post by: douya08 on October 06, 2013, 07:05:49 AM
I want to know what'll happen to Minami next.. Will Acchan know Minami's reason for fighting?
plz update~  :mon cry:
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 4
Post by: chiqinna on October 06, 2013, 12:03:32 PM
Fanfics rule my life, i want moooore!!!     :twothumbs
Title: Re: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 4
Post by: Archer1992 on October 09, 2013, 06:21:49 AM
awww update soon

ok?

thanks
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 4
Post by: noah minami on October 10, 2013, 04:59:48 PM
Love the story flow...acchqn plz don't hate minami. . I want an update plz.. onegai :bow: :thumbsup
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 4 update!
Post by: fausto on October 24, 2013, 01:16:38 AM
Well, sorry for have been away for so long... But thank you to Ruka-chan ( :heart:), I'm back. It also means that if it's bad, it's Ruka-chan's fault, so go complain to him niarniarkniark :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: I know it's short but it's a teaser so you can remember the fic and be ready for the next update (probably friday). Thank you again for reading!!


He kicked hardly and she crashed against the desk, avoided the next punch and hit him in the temple.
Blood flew on his eyes and blinded him. Minami took benefit of it and pushed him on the side so she could ran out of the office. He catched her on the stairs and hit her in the stomack. The fight of yesterday wih Miuru Sato was still fresh so she was disavantaged.

« Who do you work for ?! ANSWER !! »

He punched her while she was on the ground, she felt dizzy but got up quickly and tackled him nad trashed him. She didn't feel any fear, but she knew that this guy was dangerous, well trained. She needed to make him k.o so she couldn't finish her. She punched him in the vital points so he couldn't move anymore, then she quickly ran in the office to find something to tied him up. Pc cable will be fine, she reached him and tied his hands to the railing.
The guy was stunned and mumbling. Minami put her phone in REC mode and crouchedin front of him.
« Now, tell me who killed Maeda-san »
« W-What ? You're here for that ?! »
« Yes. So ? »
He began to laugh like a crazyman
« Go fuck yourself, haha... »
Minami took him by his hair and put a knife under his eye.
« Tell me. »
« Or what ? You're gonna cut my eye?^^ »
« No... » said Minami, really calm. « I'm gonna open the door and let everyone go. Maybe they won't go too far, but it's gonna be a mess. And I doubt that your boss is gonna like it... »
« … Why are you doing this... ? I can find you and kill you »
« Hm, so... » she took the wallet in his pocket « Takeru Shimada, am I opening this door, or you tell me ? Oh, did I mention that I took pictures of your files... ? »
« BITCH ! You're so fucking dead ! »
Minami was bored, so she cut just under the eyes, not really deep but enough to hurt him. »
« Aah !! Stop !! I did... ! »
« What ? »
« I did. I killed her ! »
« Bastard ! » she said hitting him so hard that he lost consciouness.
She hadn't ask him why, but she couldn't stay here any longer. She stopped the recording and left by the same window.

The guy was stronger than Miuru Sato, and one over another, Minami was in a bad condition. She was limping and her stomack was killing her...
Her father wasn't the killer, he was innocent as she thought. She felt relieved, she wasn't the daughter of a murderer.
She walked for an hour until a big modern house. She knew she was living here for a long time now.
The second window upstairs was lightened, she threw a little stone in it. Few seconds later, Atsuko showed up and looked at Minami by the window. Then she disappeared, amybe she didn't care... But then, the main door opened, and Minami saw the tall girl wearing a cute casual dress. She was gorgeous. She seemed worried when they faced each other.
« What happened ?! »
« Ah... Hello, Atsuko. Could you... walk me home, please ? I have difficulties to walk... » the midget smiled.
« Where were you ?! »
« Keru docks »
« What ? But that's at least an hour from here ! »
« Yes... »
« … Let's go »
Atsuko took Minami by the arm and they started to walk. The captain could smell the nice smell of the classy girl, her soft skin on her arm.
« What makes you smile ? » frowned Atssuko.
« To walk with you, I'm happy^^ »
Hopefully it was dark because Atsuko was blushing. What the midget had done... ? She had blood all over, and she had come to her house to ask for help.


They walked without talking until Minami's flat, that was the first time Atsuko was seeing it. When the captain opened the door, everyone inside jumped on her.
« Cap !! Where have you been ?! OMG, are you hurt ?!! »

Atsuko had eyes wide open, all Takahashi friends were here, worried to death.
« Im' okay, I'm okay » smiled Minami.
She closed the door.
« Everyone, Maeda-san helped me to come home so give her something to drink, please »
« Sure, what do you want ? » smiled Rie.
« … Tea, please »

Then Atsuko noticed Mariko, next to Miichan, but it wasn't the time to ask her why she was here.
« Come here, I'm gonna clean you » said Sayaka to Minami.

It was a nice place, well arranged, and seemed like everyone was here pretty often. So the girl was leaving on her own already ? What about her father... ?

« How are you today ? » asked Minami to her friends.
« You're so silly cap' !! You could have said ! » pouted Yuko.
« Yuko was ready to look for you everywhere^^ She cooked for you by the way, it's bad. » smirked Oya.
« SHUT UP ! It's not ! »
« You shut up » said Kasai, patting her « cap' is surely tired so be quiet. »
« I'm sorry everyone. I'm done now, no more secret plans^^ Jurina, why are you smiling like that ? »
« Eh, Aah... nothing^^ » she blushed.
« Jurina is in love!!^^ » laughed Rino.
« No ! »
« Wow, was I absent this much?^^ »

Sayaka had done learning the wounds, the midget looked better now.
« Well, Atsuko, I need to talk to you in private, can you come ? »
The tall girl was surprised but she nodded and followed the midget up on the roof.

The view was great from here, Atsuko looked at the stars and felt better.

« Come on, sit down » said Minami, showing the chair.
She did and the midget sat in front of her with her serious look.
« Okay... This is not easy to say... I've been looking for it... and I found who killed your mother. This is not my father. »

The tall looked at the small one with fire in her eyes, she was angry. She suddenly got up, ready to leave.
« Wait ! I have proof »
Atsuko suspended her move, and sowly sat again.
« Listen. I took my father's file about your mother. The case has been dropped because it was considered as a yakuza reckonning. And because police was too afraidof them. But I went to a man's flat yesterday and he... gave me the name of a place. That's were I was tonight. A huge warehouse at Keru docks, it's one of your mother gang that i found over there, in the middle of hundred poor naked chinese. Now listen to this. »
She took her phone and played the REC file in front of Atsuko.

« … Takeru Shimada... fucking dead... Stop ! I did. I killed her ! »

The recording stopped, Atsuko was silent, eyes lost in emptyness.

« … Atsuko. I tied him up, and he's in really bad condition. I know it's true, it's him. But I don't know why he did this. And you need to know. So, tomorrow if you want, we'll go see my father, he knows things about her that we don't.

« ... »

Minami wished she could have say something to make her feel better, but it was obvious she needed time to be sad and get over the shocking news. So the captain decided to come back to the flat when Atsuko caught her by the hand, pulled up to her and embraced her really tightly, crying on Minami's shoulder.
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 4 update!
Post by: Haruko on October 24, 2013, 03:20:23 AM
Aww poor achan but i like this atsumina moment...
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 4 update!
Post by: noah minami on October 24, 2013, 10:07:12 AM
yeahhh~ an update. thank you ~ XD XD
looking forward for the next update fausto san~
 :D :D
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 4 update!
Post by: cisda83 on October 24, 2013, 04:07:48 PM
So great... at least now... Minami can be in a better term with her father

and Atsuko can get somewhat a closure...

But would they be able to get the Yakuza that was responsible to custody?

Well with this Minami and Atsuko can be near to  each other now... and become lovers later on

What's going to happen next?

Can't wait to see

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 4 update!
Post by: blakwhite on October 24, 2013, 06:48:54 PM
yeaaay  :banana:

this is a teaser?  :dunno:

well, anyway, i will always waiting for you fausto - san  :hee:

ganbatte nee ~  :onioncheer:
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 5
Post by: fausto on October 26, 2013, 12:01:10 PM
CHAPTER 5 : YOU NEED TO KNOW THE TRUTH


2pm, Minami's father's house

« Are you ready ? » asked the midget to Atsuko.
« Yes, I want to know »
« Okay »

Minami knocked at the door, she was stressed because she was going to see her dad for real.
The old man opened the door and looked really surprised.
« … Minami. Is that you ? »
« Hello dad. We need to talk. This is... »
« Atsuko, you didn't change at all » he smiled kindly.

The tall girl opened wide eyes, she didn't expect him to recognize her.
« Well, come in »
They all sat in the living room.
« So, you came for your mother right ? My file is missing and my daughter came while I was outside again... »
Minami ignored this comment and stood serious.
«  I came to see Miuru Sato and... »
« You did what ?! You're crazy, this is too dangerous ! »
« Yes, well maybe I hadn't to do that if the police had done her work... Anyway, and I went to the Keru dock after, for Shimada. He confessed the murder. »
« … So, this is him. That's what I thought, but in the dark... »
« What ? »
« Okay... Atsuko, I have to tell you the truth now... » he breathed deeply. « I knew your mother a long time ago, we were friends before I became a cop, she was a yakuza but we didn't mind. She was very important in the gang and very respected, but one side of the group was doing some dirty work. They were usually receiving boats full of chinese to make them work here. But your mother discovered that instead of chinese workers, it was women and children who were arriving, to be used as prostitute. She directly came to see me, she was so upset, wanting to free everyone... I told her the police wouldn't do anything because they were too afraid and involved in this, but it didn't stop her. The night she was killed, she told me that she was in danger, the guys knew that she was trying to stop the trading. I told her that I could hide her for a while, she agreed but she wanted to say goodbye to you first. That's when they found us and shot your mom, I was there, a bullet in my arm...
The police tried to charge me because they were to afraid to say the ugly truth. »
« ... »
« Why didn't you tell me all those years ?!! » asked Minami, upset.
« Because I was blaming myself for that. I could have protect her more. »
« Weren't you blaming you for the anger that everyone had toward me ? You could have told me sooner. Were you angry ? Not enough to go see those bastards and killed them ?! »
« That's not how it worked, Minami ! »
« Oh yeah ? So, I leave the house, try to find the truth, fight with men, punch him until he's almost dead and then come here to learn the truth in front of a cup of tea ? You're so brave dad !"
"Don't talk to me that way! This was dangerous, I had you, I couldn't run a crusade just because I wanted to!"
"So you just kept watching me going to school everyday, knowing that everyone was bullying me because of what you hadn't done? What kind of father are you?! Atsuko, come on, let's go!"
The tall girl stood up, looking at the old man one last time.
« Thank you for what you did for my mom. »

Her father stood there, empty and sad, her daughter was hating her for something he couldn't face. He had loved this woman so much, it was still so painful to think of her... He had ruined everything...



They were walking in the streets, quietly.
« Minami ? »
« Hm ? »
« I'm sorry I told you it was your fault, and  your dad's. »
« Yeah... »
« Honestly. You shouldn't have done all this for me. »
« You needed to know the truth. And you wanted to fight all the time..."
« Yes, but you don't owe me anything. »
« Listen, it's okay. If you're okay with it, come dance with us. Tonight I have to go back to the dock. »
« What ? NO ! »
« I have to free those people..."
« You can't do it alone, this is dangerous ! »
« I don't care. Look... Your mother wanted the same thing. »
« Yes, and she DIED ! »
« So what ?! I can't live with this, I want to end this, and I don't need your blessing »
« God, you're so stupid ! »
« Yeah, well, punch me later... » said Minami, coming into her flat. « Hey everyone ! Sayaka, I'm dying to eat your katsudon... Tell me I can have one tonight !! »
« Yes cap', I'm cooking it^^ »
Atsuko sat in the couch next to Yuko who was watching tv, this place was always so crowded
« Hey Acchan, how are you ? »
« Can you tell Minami she can't beat everyone alone ? »
« Minami ? You two are close now, right ? » she smirked. "Well, I can't say that, we all believe that we can fight against the injustice^^ »
« That's so stupid... »
« Don't you want this revenge too ? About your mother ? »
Atsuko sighed. She had been asking this question for so long.
« I don't know... I was burning all those years, believing that it was Minami's father's fault and now... I'm shocked... Maybe relieved. But her... She's so upset... and I don't know why. »

« Tomo, I'm telling you, she's too good for me...! »
« Wait, Juri, I'm sure she likes you ! » said Kasai following Jurina in the kitchen.
« Cap', help me, everyone is harrassing me ! » pouted Jurina sitting in front of her.
« What's going on here Tomo ? » asked Minami, eating.
« Juri is too shy to ask Rena out. »
« Yes cap', Juriboy is obsessed with this pretty girl^^ » laughed Yuko
« Wait, you're into Rena-chan? » asked Atsuko, raising an eyebrow.
« Y-Yes... But I know it's hopeless, I mean, she is nice with me, maybe we could be friends but that's all. » sighed the puppy.
« Rena is a mysterious girl, usually don't lunch on grass with everybody, so... guess it's possible » thought Atsuko while Jurina was blushing, how did she know that...?

Minami stood silent while eating the fabulous katsudon, it was a marvelous time, plus, she wanted to concentrate before going back at the dock tonight. It was dangerous, she was aware of that, but she couldn't stand the fact that it was happening, and her dad had... made her so mad today! She was really relieved that he wasn't the murderer, but how could he not tell her that...?
She was still injured because of the yesterday fight, but she wanted to end this quickly, and go back to the dance contest, now that she could have Atsuko dancing next to her.
« Thank you Sayaka, it was delicious, as always. » she smiled. « I need to get prepared »
She left the living room and went into her room to change her clothes into something comfortable, easy for fighting.
Atsuko took advantage of this situation to go see Sayaka.
« Hey... I know you don't know me well and all but... Could you please talk to her, and persude her not to go tonight? »
« If I could... » she smiled wisely. « You know, Minami is not the brutal person you think she is, fighting everyone without purpose. She think, and if she fights, it's because it worths it. I don't know why she wants it so much tonight, and I don't ask because she's not talkative. But trust her, if you can. And if you can't, then hope it's gonna be okay. »
« Okay guys, I'm going, don't wait for me and go to school tomorrow, or I'll kill you!! » said Minami laughing, before look at Atsuko for the last time.


Atsuko was still sat on the couch, it was 1am and everybody was already sleeping. She couldn't. No news... And if this silly midget was in danger, hurt, dead? She hadn't much memory of her mom, but she strangly remembered her father's look each time she was away for too long, he was so worried all the time... Yakuza are dangerous, dealing with really bad people, for bad things, and something like chinese people trafic is beyond Minami. She couldn't solve this on her own, too much persons to save...
She had already call her four times, sending her 10 mails, yelling at her and asking her to come back home. Why were she so involved in this, this girl was so annoying that she was really angry. So stupid, so childish, so stubborn...

She cleaned the flat until it was 7am, when the first sleepy heads came to take their breakfast.
« Acchan? Why are you up so early? » asked Yuko surprised.
« I have things to do... »
The squirell looked at her and smiled.
« Oh I see, you couldn't sleep because Cap' didn't come back. You care after all... »
« No, I-I... »
« MORNING!! » screamed Miichan already energetic.
They all took breakfast together and got ready to school.
« Atsuko, are you coming with us? » asked Jurina.
« No, go ahead, I'm not ready yet... »
« Oh, okay... See you later then... »
« Sure. »

When the flat was finally empty, she sighed and sat again in the couch. After 45 minutes, exaspered, she took her jacket and prepared to go. That's when the door opened and the midget finally came in.
Atsuko frozed and looked at her. The midget was wearing her hood, had a little blood on her hand but seemed to be okay.
« Atsuko? What are you... »
She couldn't finish because the tall girl slapped her really hard.
« FUCKING STUPID!! Where were you??! Don't you look at your phone sometimes?!! »
« What...? Gosh, it hurts... »
« You're so immature!!! »
« What...? What the fuck is going on here? Where is everybody? »
« At school! »
« Why aren't you? »
« Because you were gone! »
« And? Since when do you care? You wait for you turn to punch me?^^ » smirked Minami taking off her hoodies, now she was in white tank, a little dirty.
« SHUT UP!! I called you several times, emailed you!! »
« Okay, but as you know I was doing some shitty things, not really got the time to check my phone^^ »
« What's wrong with you?! You're so dumb!! » screamed Atsuko jumping on the midget again to hit her.
Minami stopped her moves, frowning.
« I don't understand what's going on... »
« DO YOU THINK THIS IS A GAME?! My mother died and you act like it's a game to you, like punching a little thief to be a hero!! You're a BASTARD!! » she said, tears of anger flowing on her cheeks.
« Acchan... » said Minami softly. « It's not a game. Your mother died for this. No one did anything for this, to honor her memory of just restore justice. We talk about hundred of children and women over there, sitting on shit and mud, waiting to be sold for their bodies... I saw this, I saw the man who killed your mother because she was a good woman. I couldn't just walk away, pretend it was too dangerous for me. It was... I was scared, terrified. But I found him, again, I fought him, again. I  punched his face so hard that he doesn't look like a person anymore, he doesn't breath anymore. I killed a man, because I was angry. And I'm not proud of that, I don't feel relieved. But at least I've opened those gates, I told the chinese to go, run, hide and try to survive. At least I've did something. »
« ... »
Atsuko looked at Minami and suddenly try to hit her again, but the girl avoided it once again.
« You're so dumb... » cried the tall girl crying.
« You already said it^^ » smiled Minami, caressing her cheek to wipe her tears. « I'm sorry if you were worrying... you look so tired. But... you are very... very beautiful. I don't think I've already seen a girl full of tears and gorgeous like that... »
Atsuko raised her head to look at the midget, she was so close to her... Suddenly she pushed her against the closest wall and jumped on her lips with hunger. She kissed Minami roughly, wanting her so badly. The midget was really surprised, but she couldn't think anymore, gorgeous lips were against hers, blowing her mind, making her burn all inside.


Smut scene RIGHT HERE --------> http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=36545.new#new (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=36545.new#new)






Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 5
Post by: chichay12 on October 26, 2013, 12:31:51 PM
OH MY GOD!
Fausto i really love this specially the red font XD
Smexy atsumina FTW :on gay:
And by the way i really miss u here!
welcome back comrade :D
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 5
Post by: blakwhite on October 26, 2013, 01:27:29 PM
FINALLY YOU COME BACK FAUSTO - SAN !!!!  :farofflook:

and come back with 1 update and 1 smut scene :on bleed:

thank you fausto-san   :on slopkiss:
 
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 5
Post by: cisda83 on October 26, 2013, 03:41:53 PM
great development in the case...

Minami would stand up for Atsuko's mother

And Yeah... I do understand Minami's father reasoning as to why he kept quiet

But it was also wrong... Poor Minami... so she was bullied when she was young

Thank you for the update

Can't wait to see what's going to happen next

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 5
Post by: ayudewi6 on October 26, 2013, 03:49:20 PM
Can you PM me the smut scene >< Pleasee!!
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 5
Post by: C@@3! on October 26, 2013, 04:17:52 PM
great fics I follow the time when the story is good I love atsumina and kojiyuu * --- * .. I liked this last chapter but I can not read the link you sent = (if you can send me I would appreciate it =)  :)
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 5
Post by: Elo on October 26, 2013, 05:52:45 PM
finally atsumina hehe If you know what I mean  :peace:  ^^

I love your fic  ^^

ps: can you please pm it too me to please
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 4 update!
Post by: Kirozoro on October 26, 2013, 05:57:53 PM
Omg the story is so good

Now.. Everyone is couple  :cathappy:

Jurina is so gentle to Rena  :w00t:

Rie and Rino so cute when they together

Takacchan toke a long toad to know their feeling for each other

Omg i cant wait to see more
Title: Re: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 5
Post by: Sydney W on October 26, 2013, 06:19:32 PM
Minami and Atsuko together finally. ^_^
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 5
Post by: Yuseichaaan48 on October 26, 2013, 06:27:32 PM
Yay!!! Atsumina finally together ehhh??? :)

Jurina, be brave!!!! I believe in you~~ :D  :twothumbs

And welcome back fausto~~!

Thanks for the update and smut!! ;)

Update soon, k? :bow:
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 5
Post by: shiniza on October 27, 2013, 02:21:45 AM
Why I can't read the smut scene?  :dunno:
Can you please pm me the link?  :kneelbow:
Arigatou  :on cny1:
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 5
Post by: Feat on October 27, 2013, 03:13:56 AM
You're back Fausto-san!  :)

Thank you for this update.

 Finally, Atsuko and Minami together.  :twothumbs

Now, Atsuko will have to join them for the Dance Contest.  :D

Will wait for your next update.  :)




Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 5
Post by: chibi_airin on October 27, 2013, 07:18:49 PM
wow that's HOT!  :yossi:

Aggressive Atsuko is the best  :onionwhip:

Please update soon!
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 5
Post by: roto_131197 on October 28, 2013, 09:04:22 AM
Finally an update  :)
Welcome back Fausto-san  :inlove:
Thank you for the update and smut scene  :P
Waiting for your next update
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 5
Post by: edogawa4869 on October 28, 2013, 01:24:16 PM
wooohoooo.... you're baaaackkk...   :onioncheer:

finnalyyyy.... AtsuMina moment...

that was soooo....  :on bleed:

damn... i still can't access that smut scene...  :angry:

wait for the update...
Title: Re: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 5
Post by: Archer1992 on November 02, 2013, 03:48:19 PM
hahahahahaha Still believe in Atsumina!!!!!

thanks Fausto!!

Continue ASAP
^_^
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 5
Post by: amachan48 on November 02, 2013, 05:07:38 PM
fausto-san please gimme the smut >.< thx
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 5
Post by: blakwhite on November 02, 2013, 05:30:09 PM
just for your info, if you want to access perv fic forum you must do what this link said http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35349.0 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=35349.0)  :hee:
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 5
Post by: ykariya on November 04, 2013, 04:47:47 PM
this will be interesting   :twothumbs

finally moment AtsuMina  :inlove:
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 6 NEW
Post by: fausto on November 06, 2013, 03:16:43 PM
Hello guys,
@blakwhite: Yes, I'm back, sorry for the wait :( Thank you for still reading my nonsense fics^^
@cisda83: Yes, I think Minami's father has the right to say nothing about this, after all he loved that woman very much too... thank you for being here every updates!
@Kirozoro: Yes, there are a lot of couple, maybe too much but I can't help myself but doing pairing^^ Nice to see you on my fic!
@Yuseichaaan48: Jurina can make it!^^ Thank you, I missed this place, so I came back :)
@Feat: Thank you! Yes, now let's dance, but maybe nno everyone will be good at this... :lol:
@roto_131197: Thank you, and yes, this is an update!! :lol:

I just wanted to say that I usually put all my smut scene in the pervy section coz it's here for this I think, and i'm sorry if some of you can't read it. because I know how it's feel to read a story and wait for the smut scene, I want to help you but I don't want to break the rules of this forum, so try to comment other fics, so you can't get access and read my smut parts, please :bow: Thank you very much!




CHAPTER 6: EVERYONE BUT YOU



«  Aah, this is a good morning! » smiled Yuko walking next to Rie.
« Why are you in such a good mood today? » asked Rie, suspicious.
« Dunno, I bet Haruna-chan is gorgeous as always! »
« You're so obsessed with her^^ »
Rino runned toward Rie, the girls stopped.
« I need to go to the principals office right away; I'm late!!! » screamed Rino.
« O-Okay, so, what are you doing here? » asked Rie.
« I don't want to go without this... » she smiled and give Rie a deep kiss on the lips. « See you later! »
The two girls watched this silly girl running away.
« Wow, this was a good kiss...^^ »
Rie blushed, she wasn't really comfortable with this yet.
« How is Rino as a lover? I'm curious! » smirked Yuko.
« You don't have to know that... »
« Really? So I don't have to hear everything you do when you sleep at the flat? Because, it's weird... I'm forced to, and you don't look embarassed. »
Yuko!! »
The squirell bursted into laugh.


« Are we ditching school? Is that what we are doing? »
« Yes, it is. »
Mariko was smirking,  sewing a shirt.
« You're all trying to convince everyone you're the dumb ones, so why are you stressed out by one day without school. »
« What? You knew?! »
« Of course... Who do you think you're fooling...^^ »
Miichan looked at Mariko, she seemed really cool, and impressive.
« So, you like to sew huh? »
« Yes, I would like to open my own store one day » she said, very calm.
« Is there anything who can stress you out?^ » asked Miichan, surprised.
« Why would I stress...? I'm here sewing with you, this is a good day » she smiled.
Hopefully Mariko didn't see her, because Miichan was blushing.


Why was she alone this morning... Well, this was too good to be true she guessed.
She was trying hard to seem okay, as always and not concerned but it was really painfull.
Minami came into the class and noticed that Atsuko was here, at her table. She didn't look at her, kept her hood on and sat on her chair at the back of the room. She wasn't in a good mood, but she didn't want to be unpleasant with her friends.
« Cap', could you help me for the science test? » asked Kasai, embarassed.
« Sure, we'll see this tonight, okay? » she smiled kindly.
What if Atsuko had been disappointed because of their night...? After all, she was really angry at her before they made out. Minami had not really thought about it while they were kissing, her mind was all messy, her heart burning and her body numb. She coudln't believe that Atsuko could be into her, maybe it was the shock to know about her mother...
« Takamina, do you want me to do the class tonight? » asked Sayaka, worried.
« No, it's okay, thank you. You know what? Take a break, spend some time with Sae, I can see she likes you. »
« A-Are you sure? » asked Sayaka embarassed, she wasn't used to talk about that with the midget.
« Yes, go for it »
« Thank you very much. »
« Don't be so formal^^ »
The teacher started the lesson, and Minami draw the girl in her sheet. She needed to forget her, do like they never talked, like Atsuko was still thinking it was her fault for her mom. Minami couldn't resist and took a look at the tall girl. She was so beautiful, in the morning light, how could she have sex with such a beauty, and expecting that she would have eat her breakfast with her... Atsuko suddenly looked at Minami, like if she had felt her eyes on her. They briefly stood like that, then Minami realized what was going on and looked away, upset that the tall girl had see her.



Noon, on the rooftop

« Don't take all of this, Minami needs to eat selfish! » screamed Yuko to Kasai.
« Go for it, Tomo, I don't feel like eating anyway... » sighed Minami looking at the sky.
« What happened with Acchan, cap'? »
« Nothing. It was a mistake... Don't want to talk about this »

« Rino, could you meet me at the Chef Restaurant tonight? » asked Rie, blushing.
« Sure, what for? »
« Hm, I work there now, and... I want to show you something... »
« I will be there, honey » she smiled.
Rie looked at her feet, shyly, she was really falling for this girl.

Minami really loved her friends but right now she needed time alone, away from all this. She decided to ditch school, and left the roof. When she quieckly walk into the stairs, she met Atsuko on her way in. The midget froze, she wasn't expecting this at all. The tall girl seemed sad, and embarassed.
« Minami, I wanted to see you... »
« ... »
« I'm sorry for this morning, it's just that... I'm not really myself since I know for my mother, and all of this was... »
« Yeah, don't worry, you don't have to explain. » said Takamina with an harsh tone.
Atsuko looked surprised of such a distance.
« Can you be there after school for practice ? » asked the midget without looking at her.
« S-Sure »
« Good, Sayaka is on the roof, she'll tell you what you need. » she said before leaving.



5.30, danceroom, under the flat


« It's great that you're here, Rena-chan » smiled Jurina.
« I don't know if I can do this, but... I want to try. »
« You'll be just fine, I know you're made for this^^ »
Rena was aware that Jurina was a player, well at least, that she had this reputation. Every girl in school was under her charisma, even if they were straight.
« Okay, so help me if I'm wrong, okay ? »
« Sure, I would right behind you... » whispered Jurina in her ears before leaving her.

« So, this is here right ? » smirked Mariko.
« Yup, we sweat a lot here » smiled Miichan. «  So, are you ready to impress me ? »
« You're gonna be blind after this ! »
They laughed together, they had became really good friends in just few days, and Miichan was really happy.
« Do you want to see something cool? » she smiled looking at Mariko and Atsuko, who just came in.
« Sure! »
« Okay, come with me! »

Miichan went on the roof of the flat, followed by the two girls. Up there, Minami, Jurina and Yuko were according their instruments.
« What are they doing? » asked Mariko.
« They play, to relax after school. Jurina is the bass, Yuko is the drummer, Jurina the bassist and Minami the guitarist and singer. I can tell, their pretty good » she smiled again.
Atsuko was looking at the band with no expression, but she was curious to see what kind of music they were going to play.
Actually the girls, too focused on their music, didn't noticed their friends up here.

« Okay, I wanna play Change, is it okay for you? » asked Minami.
« Sure, let's go! »
When they began, Rena was next to Mariko, already smiling at Jurina.

deftones-change (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZL4MGwlZuAc#) (Please listen to it!)

Minami closed her eyes and began to sing while she was playing guitar.

I watched you change
Into a fly
I looked away
You were in fire...


Atsuko felt empty inside, the midget had such an aerian voice, sexy and sexual, it was really surprising. She felt like the captain was coming inside her body, her flesh, to talk to her, whisper her some words, softly but powerfully...

I look at the cross...
Then I look away...
Give you the gun...
Blow me away...


Atsuko felt dizzy, the music was hitting her, like an epiphany. Minami had still eyes closed, she was moving like a dancer, in her world... The tall girl realized that she was really in troubles. This night with Minami had been the best of her life, the midget had been very gentle and hot at the same time. Why did she left at the morning, pretending nothing happened...? She was afraid. Yes, it was a shitty reason but it was true. She had never really thought about love, about sharing time with someone and care about something else than her or her mother. And if Minami wasn't serious, if she just wanted to spend the night with her, or just have fun...? She couldn't ask the cap to be serious already, with her. But it was obvious that everything she wanted was to be with her, be her girlfriend, spend time with her, be a part of her team, make friends with her friends...

When the song ended, Miichan, Mariko and Rena applauded, Minami raised her head and saw Atsuko. She was surprised to see her there, but she didn't show it.
« Are you ready to start the training? » asked the captain like nothing happened.
« Yes! Let's go! »
They met the others in the danceroom and began the practice. During 3 hours, Atsuko's friends learned the steps and the rythm. Mariko and Atsuko were pretty good but Rena was having an hard time following Jurina, who was cheering her up everytime she failed. They were late, it was obvious but they could catch them up if they wanted to.
« Good job today minna, hope you like it, and thank you very much for your time! » said Minami, who has been very concentrated during all the practice.

« So, how was I? » asked Mariko while she was wipping her sweat on her forehead.
« Good, actually, you surprised me^^ » smirked Miichan. It was true, the girl was really good at this.
« I love this, I bet we will win this competition!^^ »

« Rena-chan, I know you're tired and you've suffered from this but I know you can do this, I will be by your side everyday to help you if you want to. » smiled Jurina kindly.
« Thank you » she blushed « I'm sorry for being so bad at this... » she looked at her feet.
« You're so cute! » said Jurina raising Rena's head.

Minami quickly went into her room to get change to go to her job, she was a little late. When she came out to pick up her stuff in the living-room, Atsuko went to see her.
« Can I talk to you? »
« Not now, I have to go to work » said Minami without looking at her.
She ran out of the flat and hurried up to go to work.

Rie was finishing her service when the boss said that she'd have to close the restorant behind her. He was trusting her since she hadn't miss a single day of work, and that every client was loving her.
The restorant was specialized in french food, and since Rie knew that Rino was very curious of it, she had decided to stay after service and feed her some french food tonight.
When she had clean the place and washed the dishes, she heard a knock at the back door.
« Hi » said Rino, smiling when she saw her girlfriend's pretty face.
« Hey, come in! » said Rie very excited about this moment.
« So, this is where you work? It's nice. »
Rie nodded and took the dish of the hoven.
« Sit, and eat! » she smiled.
« Great? What is it?? »
« Blanquette de veau, it's delicious^^ »
She sat next to Rino, and watched her eat.
« Hmm... This is really good » said Rino eating a bit of it. « Did you do it yourself? »
« No... » blushed Rie. « I can't cook this, but I wanted you to try it »
« I'm so lucky to have you as a girlfriend... » smiled Rino. « You're so cute when you smile, I wish I could make you smile every second of your life. »
She kissed Rie with a smile, happier than ever.
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 6 NEW
Post by: blakwhite on November 06, 2013, 04:01:33 PM
yaaaaayyy updateeeee  :onioncheer:

minami so cold toward acchan again   :gyaaah:

acchaann, pls seduce her   :kneelbow:

Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 6 NEW
Post by: ykariya on November 06, 2013, 04:25:14 PM

good

Minami getting cold again

Acchan and fears over the afantando minami






Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 6 NEW
Post by: edogawa4869 on November 06, 2013, 05:07:39 PM
Minami is so cold toward Acchan...
well, of course she is...
who didn't feel angry if acchan left her after they make out???
ckckck...  :smhid
that's your fault acchan.. :angry:
go get your minami back....

thanks for the update...  :twothumbs
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 6 NEW
Post by: mikaellitsa on November 06, 2013, 05:19:39 PM
interesting wanna see what minami will do
that's your fault acchan go and fix it  :angry:
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 6 NEW
Post by: sopiyah on November 06, 2013, 07:01:51 PM
aww minami why you so cold toward acchan....
please let acchan talk with you....
 :heart: :heart: :heart:
nice fanfic....


sorry for my bad english....
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 6 NEW
Post by: cisda83 on November 07, 2013, 01:44:18 AM
Well Poor Minami... being left in the morning by Atsuko...

But Poor Atsuko too for being insecure about what it was all meant to Minami then...

Well everything develop nicely for Wmatsui, MariMii and Saeyaka

Would Atsumina be able to clear the air?

How would they get together?

How are they going to confess their feelings for one another?

What's about KojiYuu?

So what's going to happen next?

More dancing and practices I guess...

Can't wait to see the next

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 6 NEW
Post by: Kirozoro on November 07, 2013, 01:53:09 AM
Wowhoo!! Update  :deco:

Why Minami so cold to Maeda  :angry:  :?

Maeda fighting!! Don't give up on Minami

Cant wait fir the next ch

Please update :bow:  :bow:
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 6 NEW
Post by: Haruko on November 07, 2013, 03:59:04 AM
awww.. come on acchan! talk to her!
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 6 NEW
Post by: chichay12 on November 07, 2013, 01:23:06 PM
wahhhh fasuto!!
i cant believed i miss ur new update!! damn u school  :err:

oh well better late than never  :nervous
awww.. come on acchan! talk to her!
^same reaction XD
come on acchan just kiss her again and stop thinking ur mother  :doh:
i want my atsumina smexy update again  :ding: *teehee*

fausto thank u for the update :on gay:
Title: Re: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 6 NEW
Post by: Archer1992 on November 10, 2013, 12:34:51 AM
hope everything went better for atsumina

thanks and continue soon...

^_^
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 6 NEW
Post by: Yuseichaaan48 on November 11, 2013, 07:12:39 AM
Hehehe Love it! :D

Oi Bakamina! always concentrated on your work... TALK TO ACCHAN  :angry1:

Hope to see more of the other pairings as well! :)

Update soon!  :twothumbs  :bow:
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 6 NEW
Post by: Feat on November 12, 2013, 03:52:53 PM
I just read the update Fausto-san. Thank youu.

Even though AtsuMina is not together yet, I like the drama.  :w00t:

I kinda like Takamina's "Poker Face" side. Atleast that's how I call it.  :D

I hope you update again soon. Thanks.  :bow:
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 6 NEW
Post by: triela on November 13, 2013, 03:34:45 AM
i cant read the smut part  T_ T  :sweatdrop:
i love the fanfic more post please
atusmina  :wub:  :inlove:  :drool:  :heart:  :heart:
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 6 NEW
Post by: 7sam14 on November 15, 2013, 05:08:38 PM
I can't read the smut! T_T

So Acchan left takamina after? And takamina felt hurt?... I'm sorry i couldn't read that part  :sweatdrop:

I can't wait for the next chap.!

I wonder what takamina would do? :?
I'll be waiting! :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 6 NEW
Post by: lezperv on November 30, 2013, 02:36:09 AM
heyyy!!! XD

I didn't get to read the smut part, but I bet it was good and steamy. I completely understand why Minami was being cold to Atsuko... I would too, I think, if the girl I made love with just walked out on me afterwards. Since Atsuko realized her feelings, I hope Minami would forgive her  :)

update soon  :twothumbs
Title: Re: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 6 NEW
Post by: triela on December 02, 2013, 01:41:19 AM
more atsumina  please  i cant wait more days T_T
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 6 NEW
Post by: saiyukire on December 25, 2013, 07:30:10 AM
Love it!! :heart:
Title: Re: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 6 NEW
Post by: Archer1992 on January 07, 2014, 07:01:07 PM
update please... update....
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 7 UPDATE
Post by: fausto on January 28, 2014, 01:58:27 PM
Hey :nervous I know it's been a while but here I am. Mostly thanx to @Chichay12 :heart:





CHAPTER 7 : A shadow in the heart



8pm. Minami's rooftop


She was sat in the big chair, a glass of vodka with redbull in her hand. Eyes in emptybess, she was there for an hour now, but it didn't matter. She didn't even move when Jurina sat in front of her.
« Everyone is asking for you downstairs... This view is really beautiful, I don't think anyone realize when they come here. But I do, it's beautiful everyday. »
« … Did you come here to told me to stop drinking ? Coz'... »
« No. I just wanted to spend a moment with you. And if you want to share your drink it's okay for me » smiled Jurina.
For the first time in the week, Minami smiled. She really like this girl, she was funny and really wise. The midget was hiding for a week now from everyone, and now she felt like she needed to talk to Juri.
« I quit my job » she sighed before drinking.
« When ? »
« Last week »
« You don't need money anymore ? »
« I do, but I'm not in a good mood those days and my boss was too kind and to oold, I can't take the risk to be nasty. »
« I see... How do you make money then ? »
« … I know someone, he said I could be paid to fight. But don't tell the others okay, I don't want them to have a bad model »
« No problem »
« You're thinking that I'm pathetic, right ? »
« No, not at all. You're having an hard time, and since you're helping us so much we can at least give you a break. The girl are just worried but they'll understand. Sayaka and I can take your responsability for a while, you can trust us » said Jurina with a serious face.
« Huh » smiled Minami kindly, « you are really mature for your age... »
« You're raising me, remember^^ »
« Seriously, I'm proud of you. I fell like I need you by my side those days. »
« No problem, I will drink Redbull only » she laughed.
« Right, but don't worry about me too much, you are interested in Rena, right ? »
« Yeah... » blushed the young girl. « But, I don't think it's gonna work... »
« Why ? »
« She's really nice girl but I feel like she's not for me, she's embarassed when we're together. This is silly, she deserves better. »
« … Listen, I've fall in love with Atsuko, and for a second I thought that it will be possible, that even if I was a little lost, I could give her what she needed. But I was wrong, it's too late for me. But you, you are a great kid, you have a good future and Rena is a nice girl. Be kind to her, treat her like she deserves and then it's all good. »
Jurina nodded and stood up.
« I'll take that advice, but I want to say something too. Thanks to you I'm better person, I'm good in school and I got mature. I don't think that makes you a bad person for Atsuko. Just saying... I will go now. »
« Hm, goodnight » whispered Minami before finishing her drink.


The alcohol was already warming her body, and her thought were non sense. She needed to fight really early in the morning, but she had planned to go to school on the afternoon.
What was the point of all this..., Honestly she had no clue, something had changed since that day. The night with Atsuko was beyond all that she could have imagine, but waking up alone was the worse.
Atsuko must have think that it was a huge mistake, be scared that she had to commit to her... And somehow it was like an epiphany, Minami wasn't a good person, and Atsuko was too wonderful for her.
For a wek now, the midget couldn't feel anything, she was feeling empty inside, and she just wanted to fight and wait. Wait for something to happen...



10am, at school


Jurina was sitting next to the window, looking at the empty schoolyard. She was thinking about her talk with Takamina yesterday.


From : Unknown
To : Rena
Content :
Good morning ! :) How are u today ?
You look beautiful, as always  :drool:

From : Rena
To : Jurina
Content :
Jurina?Is it u ? How did
you get my number ?

From : Jurina
To : Rena
Content :
Hehe, I'm not telling you that^^
I'm boring, could u move ur hair
so I can see ur neck ? :yep:

Jurina saw the cute girl blushing and smiling looking at her phone. Then, Rena moved slowly her hair on one side, so Jurina could perfectly look at her white skin.


From : Rena
To : Jurina
Content :
So ? Are u satisfied ?

From : Jurina
To : Rena
Content :
Fully  :bleed eyes: Thank u Rena-chan.

From : Juri, I need to sing
tomorrow night in a bar, can
u play the guitar ?

From : Jurina
To : Captain
Content :
Sure, tell me what u
want to play and it's done.

From : Jurina
To : Rena
Content :
I'm playing tomorrow night
in a bar, can u come ?

From : Rena
To : Jurina
Content :
I need to ask my  parents first,
but maybe  :yep:




2.20pm, history class



The teacher was talking about the current government when Minami opened the door. Atsuko looked at her, her heart suddenly beat so fast. The short girl had bruises on her face and looked absent.
« Takahashi-san, you're late. »
« No kidding... » she sighed without looking at him.
She sat at her table and look by the window. Atsuko couldn't focus on the lesson anymore, she was dying to look behind and see what Minami was doing.


7pm, Minami's flat


« Rino, finish your essay before playing PS3 ! » said Sayaka while washing the vegetables.
« Hai ! Can Rie help me ? »
« Only if you work girls »
« Sure^^ »
Minami was preparing the ingredients for the pizza next to her.
« Could you make sure Yuko do the dishes after please »
« Okay, you're not eating with us ? »
« No, I'm not hungry. Take that, I have no time to buy food » said the captain giving Sayaka 14 000 yens in cash.
« Do I need to be worried ? » frowned Sayaka taking the money.
« I'm begging not to »
« Okay »
« Thank you. But call me if you need something okay ? I'm still here for you guys. »
« Sure. Take care. »

« What are we doing for the contest ? » asked Miichan sitting next to Yuko.
« What do you mean ? »
« You know, Takamina is always absent, and it's her who leads us so... »
« Well, I guess we'll be training with the others, and, wait and see... I'll lead for now if it's okay with you. »
« Alright, I will continue the costumes with Mariko »


7.30pm, in a coffee

« Atsuko, do you want to shop with me tomorrow afternoon ? »
« I don't know Rena, I'm not feeling well... »
« Please, you have to help me find something for tomorrow night. »
« What's happening tomorrow night ? »
« Jurina is doing a live performance with Takahashi-san in a bar. She invited me » blushed Rena.
Atsuko frowned.
« Minami is singing in a bar with Jurina ? »
« Yes » she smiled.
« Why would she do that... ? » asked Atsuko, more for herself.
« I don't know, but I want to go ! Oh Acchan, come with me ! »
« What ? No ! »
« Why not ? Don't tell me you didn't like Takahashi's voice »
« Are you aware of what happened between her and I ? »
« Yes, but it's just a concert, and this situation is silly. Come, with someone if you want. »
Atsuko thought about it, maybe it wasn't such a bad idea after all. This dumb midget was acting non sense, and she needed to know it.
« You're right. I'll come »
« Great. Now, will you come with me, to shop ? »
« Okay... »

Thank you for reading this  :bow:
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 7 UPDATE
Post by: chichay12 on January 28, 2014, 02:13:57 PM
Mostly thanx to @Chichay12 :heart:
your very welcome fausto  :on woohoo:

saving the spot XD
i want my atsumina to reconcile and have some smexy moment again  :luvluv2:

OMG FAUSTO...reading your trend in the first page really make me smile..but reading your new update really MADE my DAY :on slopkiss:

and im really glad that my atsumina comrade is back  :hiakhiakhiak:
more update please :on gay:

Title: Re: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 7 UPDATE
Post by: Kirozoro on January 28, 2014, 02:41:43 PM
Yes Acchan go and find what happen to the captain

Hope Takamina didn't run away

Please updatesoon
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 7 UPDATE
Post by: shazrey on January 28, 2014, 03:16:25 PM
owh..u r update its  XD  XD   :twothumbs
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Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 7 UPDATE
Post by: cisda83 on January 29, 2014, 06:53:11 AM
Ah...an update at last... been a while

Great update as usual...

Can't wait to see the next

Thank you for the update

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Title: Re: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 7 UPDATE
Post by: Archer1992 on January 29, 2014, 10:13:08 AM
Oh my beautiful Bakamina
I feel sorry for her
Come on atsuko clear your heart...:'(
Thanks and continue ASAP...
Bye bye
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 7 UPDATE
Post by: noah minami on January 29, 2014, 10:33:43 AM
Yeahhh and update.  Thanks chichay and author san. :thumbsup
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 7 UPDATE
Post by: Zita on January 29, 2014, 02:00:31 PM
 :cow: Happy :cow:
I am so happy ............thank you.
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 7 UPDATE and RE
Post by: fausto on January 30, 2014, 04:35:30 PM
Thank you all of you for your comments, it's making me really happy to see you so into the story :panic: I know the updates are not long enough but it's the only way for me to update quickly or else you're gonna wait for decades^^



9pm, a dark air-shed on the docks


« Youd did well today Takahashi, here is your cash. 280 000 yens. »
« Thank you » said Minami putting the money in her pocket.
« I have a proposition for you » said Toshi.
« ... »
« My cousin organizes some street races in town during the nights. You come, he loans you a car, you do the race and earn money. 40% for you. That's it. What do you say ? »
« … I say okay. »
« Cool, I'll call my cousin. »

Minami left the district, her hands were hurting her but she had avoided almost all of  the hits. It was like this for 2 weeks now, every morning she was going to an adress that Toshi was mailing her, and then she was fighting. The money was good, many easily earned.
Slowly, she was ditching school, or sleeping during class, but she didn't care. What was the pint... Playing dumb in front of everyone, being bored... But she didn't want her friends to believe that she was doing the right thing, she wasn't an exemple anymore, and she was ashamed of that.
And Atsuko... she couldn't come to school and see her perfect face and think she couldn't ever be with this girl.
It was like dying everytime...


12am, in the schoolyard


« Minna, meet Jurina, she's eating with us if it's okay for you » smiled Rena.
Jurina was standing next to her, embarrassed. Rena had insisted and she couldn't resist that girl so...
« Sure, come and sit » smiled Atsuko.
« Thank you, hello everyone » smiled Jurina.
She sat next to Rena, happy to be here.
« It was nice of you Rena-chan » she whhispered.

The girls were talking and eating, Jurina was a little embarrassed so she decided to focus on her food. But when she finally understood that nobody was talking anymore, she lifted her head. Minami was walking in her direction. The midget didn't look at the girls and spoke in a low voice to her.
« Are you still okay for tonight ? »
« Sure » said Jurina embarassed.
« We need to there at 8pm »
« Okay, I will be, what do you want me to play ? »

Atsuko had stop eaten since Minami was there. She was trying to hear the discussion but her heartbeat was all she could hear. The girl was acting like there was only Jurina. Atsuko was so pissed off !
« Maeda-san ? »
« Eeh ? » blenched the gir.
In front of her was a tall guy she had never seen before.
« Yes ? »
« Hello, I'm Takeru, I'm new here. I was wondering if you would like to go out with me ? »
« Wha-at ? But, I don't know you... »

« We will play those four ones okay » said Minami.

« I know but you'll see, I'm a nice guy, we could go to the movies »

« Okay, I will practice after lunch and... »

« I'm sure you are but I have some others plans. Maybe another time... »

« Captain ? » asked Jurina.

« Come on, they said you were cold but it's exciting me ! Don't you want a man for once, feel the... »

SMACK !!

« Didn't you hear her ?? She said NO motherfucker !! »
Minami had punched the guy in his guts.
« What's your fucking problem ? »
The guy stood up, he was really pissed off.
« Get the fuck out off here, don't you dare touch her !! » screamed the captain.
« What's up midget, go play with kids, leave the ladies to fuck to adults » he laughed.
Takamina ran on him and punched him in the face really hard.
« Minami... » said Atsuko.
« I swera if I saw you near her again, I will fucking KILL you !! »
The guy was on the floor, not moving at all. Minami was shaking from hanger, right in front of him.
« TAKAHASHI-SAN, in the director's office now !! »
Jurina looked at her captain leaving, she seemed not to care at all.
Atsuko was frowing, the little dimples on her face were moving fast.
« Rena, I'm sorry, I need to go wait for Takamina » apologized Jurina.
« Sure, is it still on for tonight ? »
« Yes, yes. See you later. Sorry for that, Maeda-san » she said before leaving.
« Acchan ? » asked kindly Kojima. « Are you okay ? »
« … Why is she so stupid... » she whispered before leaving the girls behind her.
« Great... » sighed Mayu.

The short girl left the director's office 15mn later. Jurina was waiting for her, she looked anxious.
« So ? What happened ?! »
« Nothing special... He kicked me out... »
« Seriously ?? »
« Yep » she said, walking toward the school entrance.
« Shit... »
« Don't forget to do your homeworks before the live, okay ? »
« Sure, I hope Rena will come even after this... » she pouted.
« Don't worry, she likes you. See you tonight. »




1.30pm, Minami's rooftop


She was here again, sat in the chair with a glass of vodka. It was peaceful, quiet...
Felt like time was stopped, nothing mattered for few minutes...
 
« Are you satisfied ? » asked a voice.
« Please, shut the fuck up... » sighed Minami.
« You're so pathetic... Hit this guy was really lame, did you think Atsuko would thank you for that ? »
« This is not what I was looking for. He was just acting like a jerk... »
« Because you're not maybe ? And it's the only way to solve the situation ? You used to be kind, human and calm. You're acting like shit, she'll never like you if you go on like this... »
« SHUT UP !! » she screamed, taking his head in her hands.
The alcohol will help her shut this voice up. But her mind was right, she was acting like shit...


8pm, Hard Rock Cafe, downtown


« Are you ready ? »
« Yes »
« Are you nervous ? »
« A little » confessed Jurina with a smile.
« Don't worry, it will be okay »
Jurina nodded, she was anxious because they were only two on stage. She was wearing a black short, tights, a white tank and a black perfecto. Smocky eyes and little boots, she had to rock the stage !
« Okay, so let's go » said Minami.
The short girl was focus on the performance, she realy wanted to sing, a way to exorcize her demon, to forget everything else...

The cafe was a little crowed, waiting for the live to start. Minami's eyes ran through the people here when she suddenly saw the girl. She was here, next to Rena and... a guy. Why was she there ?
« Juri ? »
« Yup »
« Why is Atsuko here ? »
« Ah, she is ? I invited Rena, maybe she wanted to come. »
« Who is this guy ? Do you know him ? »
« Hm... He's a year older than us, I think his name is Miku... »
« Why is she coming with him ? »
« I don't know... But don't think about this okay, do your thing on stage and that's it. »
« Yeah... whatever, I don't care » mumbled Minami. « Hello everyone thank you for being here tonight. Let's start, please enjoy. »

Atsuko was acting like she was relax but she couldn't look at something else than Minami on stage. She was still really pissed off because of what happened at school, especially now that she was aware of the midget ouster.
« Do you want something to drink ? » asked Miku.
« Ano, yes, thank you »
« Okay, I will try to get you something nice » he smiled before going to the bar.

Jurina began to play the guitar, she seemed really confident in her music.

Uh Huh Her - Explode [Official Music Video] (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pSJI0o7T4sk#) (imagine a slowler version)

Then Minami began to sing...

I wanna explode
Watch me I'm a lucky girl...

I love to watch you honey...


« Here is your drink Acchan »
« ... »

I wanna touch you, slowly
I'm a lonely girl
Come on you want to...


« Atsuko ? Are you okay ? » asked Miku, worried about the girl's expression.
« Wh-at ? » the tall girl was talking to him, eyes glued to the stage. «  Ah yes, what's in my drink ? »
« Juice... »
« Could you get me something stronger ? »
« But Acchan, you're... »
« Please, you're 21 so give me something stronger »
« … Okay » he said before leaving again.

Rena was almost drooling, Jurina was next to Minami and she was slowly moving with her instrument, like dancing with it, it was really graceful. She didn't know that the short hair girl was so good at music.

I'de love to hurt you, easy
I've got you, inside me...


Atsuko was beyond all emotion that she expected, why singing such a meaningful song... ? She was here on stage, looking at everyone and no one in particular, yet, Atsuko was feeling like she was only looking at her. All the memories of their night together were coming back like a gun shot in her head.

The song ended and everybody applauded.
« Thank you everyone. We hope you're not sleeping on your tables »

Minami whispered something in Jurina ears, and then the second song began.

Naughty Boy - La La La ft. Sam Smith (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3O1_3zBUKM8#ws)

« Jurina on the mic... » whispered Minami.

Lalala lalala lalala.... (Jurina)

Hush, don't speak
When you spit your venom, keep it shut, I hate it
When you hiss an preach
About your new messiah cause your theories catch fire (Minami)


Atsuko drank a huge sip of what Miku had finally brought her. It was really strong, it warmed her mouth and brain off.
« What do you think of Jurina ? » asked Atsuko with a big smile.
« Ano... She's playing really good ! »
« Don't lie to me, you think she's amazing^^ »
« Well, maybe... » blushed Rena.
Atsuko was feeling that the alcohol was relaxing her, the control that she usually had on everything in her life was not here anymore.

She listened to the next two songs without talking to Miku, the poor guy was wondering why the girl had invited him here. She was acting weird everytime the singer was talking or singing.
« I think I'm gonna go Atsuko, I'm not feeling alright here.. » said Miku.
« What ? Really ? But we're good here, aren't we ? »
« You're good, I don't think I need to be here tonight, you're obviously more interested in the live than me. »
« ... »
« Goodnight, Atsuko. Rena... »

« Maybe you should have been more polite to him »
« I know Rena, don't blame me okay... I feel enough bad already »

During the last song Atsuko finished her drink and watch the show thinking of what she wanted for the future. The year was slowly finishing and she wasn't sure what she wanted to do next. It was easier before, she was studying and looking for her mother murderer. But then she had met Minami and everything had blow away, all the midget was doing, taking care of everyone, being smart and working for money, dancing for a contest... She was felling like she wanted more now than a good school and a great job. Her father was slowing her, not that she didn't love him, but he was sad, and she didn't want to be sad like him everyday. He had his own grief, and Atsuko was missing her mom too but she needed to move on, to build her life and have some projects.

« Thank you for tonight guys, you were very nice ! » said Minami after finishing the song. « Let's fucking party ! »
The girls went to the bar and ordered something to drink.

« I'm gonna go see Jurina, tell her it's was great, okay ? »
« Yeah, go » said Atsuko.

Minami took her drink and sat at the bar, thanking the people for their compliments.
« Was it speaking of you ? »
The midget raised her head and open wide eyes.
« Atsuko... What ? »
« Why are you singing such bad things ? »
She was astonishing...
« Why are you with that guy ? »
« Like you could care... » said Atsuko near Minami's mouth.
« Have you been drinking ?! » frowned the captain.
« And so what ? You're the only one who can drink, ditch school and hang around ? »
« No, but you shouldn't be drinking. »
« You're such a fool... »
« Okay, I'm leaving if you're here to say this... »
« Stupid !! You're just acting like a kid, thinking that you can spoil all that you have because you're in a bad mood ! Don't you care about everyone who is looking at you with admiration ?! »
« … You're right. I'm just a piece of shit. Have a goodnight. » she whispered before leaving the bar.
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 7 UPDATE
Post by: chichay12 on January 30, 2014, 04:59:11 PM
Saving the spot gonna read it later XD

wahhh fast update from fausto (a miracle)  :farofflook:
but wth minami what are u doing :banghead:
i want my old minami back!
go acchan! go get ur girl and stop her for doing stupid things  :scolding:

fausto thank u for the fast update  :on woohoo:
cant wait fot more :on gay:
Title: Re: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 7 UPDATE
Post by: Kirozoro on January 30, 2014, 07:59:31 PM
I hope Takamina back to her sense already ><

Acchan you need to help Takamina

Please updatesoon
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 7 UPDATE
Post by: cisda83 on January 31, 2014, 12:20:14 AM
Minami is on the path of self destruct...

What's going to happen to Minami?

Would Atsuko be able to help Minami?

Eh... Minami is being kicked out of the school

So she would not graduate from high school?

What's going to happen next?

Thank you for the update

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Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina UPDATE HERE
Post by: fausto on February 05, 2014, 11:43:09 PM
Thank you to those who are still reading my non sense stories :lol: :heart:



10pm, Minami's flat

« So, Sae-chan, what are we eating tonight ? »
« Mexican food for you guys, I'm making my best recipe ! » she smiled.
« Aah, I so want to eat now !!! » sighed Yuko looking at the food on the kitchen table.
« Go be busy Yuko, don't disturb Sae-chan. » frowned Sayaka.
« No, it's okay » said Sae as Yuko left. « Sae-chan ? I love when you call me like that...^^ »
« Yuko just did it »
« Yeah ? Maybe it's different in your mouth » teased the girl.
Sayaka blushed and quickly turned around so Sae couldn't see the red on her cheeks. She had invited Sae her because Jurina and Minami were away for their live and it was a little too much to handle for herself. And actually it was good to have her around, everyone was happy and already treating her like their dad. Sae had this energy and good mood that made her instantly really nice.
« So, you live here ? »
« Most of the time, yes. We all have our parent's house but we feel better here, Takamina is helping us for our homework and we practice dance, we live together, it's been better for everyone since. »
« I like this place »
« Yeah, here we feel like everything is possible, nobody juges and we're all together. I'm happy that you're here. »
« Watch out, I could be used to it » teased Sae.
« I never said it wasn't what I had planned^^ »
Sae was smiling, Sayaka was so cute, trying to hide her feelings. She kindly took her hand and feel the tall girl shivered.
« After the dish that you're gonna eat, you will want me here forever, I swear... » smiled Sae.


Minami was reaching the spot that Toshi had talk about. The race was tonight and she didn't know what to expect. She had her licence but she usually didn't drive because she couldn't afford a car. But she loved to drive, it was so relaxing and sexy to do miles and miles in the night, listening to some music...
The place was crowed and she quickly saw Toshi in the middle of it.
« Hey, you came ! » he said smiling. « Alright, let me introduce you to my cousin, Nishima. »
« Hi »
« Hi. I hope you're in a good condition. Tonight the competition is pretty hard. »
« We'll see. »
« Alright... You're driving with my favorite, so don't break her or I kill you. Be in the 7th and you'll have your money » he said giving her the keys.
« Watch out, the streets are sometimes really small and the drivers are agressive so... » said Toshi, nervous.
« 'Kay... » said Minami before coming inside the car, she needed to feel it, get used to it.
She liked it right away, good shape, nice smell and easy commands.
« Everyone's attention !! We're starting now, those who don't drive get the fuck out of here !! »
Minami put her driving gloves on and start the engine, she smiled when she heard the motor... Great sound.
« 3,2,1, GO !! »
She started the race nicely, the drivers were going fast right away, to be first fastly, but Minami was aware of what she was doing, she wanted to win this race with class. She let some of the driver go in front of her and quickly memorize the streets, the gold was to be at the end of the race the first, no one care what path you were taking. That's what street races were about. The night was good, Minami was feeling free and in control, she was driving in a smooth way, already three cars that she was passing through, it was going well.
A yellow car was right next to her and the next street was too little for both of them, Minami could see the driver's face smiling in his car, she pretented to turn so he believed that she would break into his car, the driver swerved, so the short girl could go in the street first.
« See this, bastard » said Minami in a low voice.
She accelerated a little and took a shortcut, winning 5 places, a car tried to kill her way but she handled it and saw the frontline. 

When she got up off the car, she understood that she was the first to cross the line.
« Dude !!! You're first !! » screamed Toshi.
« Of course I am »
« Bastard, why didn't you say that you were good ?! » he laughed.
« You didn't ask me... »
« You played well... I'm not kissing your ass but there are some really good drivers here, so you got me... » admitted Nishima.
« You car is not bad as well. »
« I want you on my race again. And I have a job for you, be a private driver for me. »
« Only if I have 50% on the next races. »
« … Deal »
« Good. I can start tomorrow if you want. »
« I like that. I take my money and I show you the car. »


« So, how was it girls, »
« Delicious !! » they all said.
« Great ! » smiled Sae, proud of her.

They cleaned the table then the girls went on the couch to watch the tv. Sayaka was washing the dishes when Sae stopped her.
« Relax, I'm going to do it. You've already done everything. »
« Really ? »
« Yeah, sit next to me. » said Sae.
« It's true you know, it's was really delicious. »
« Did you like it ? »
« Sure, a bit spicy^^ »
« Actually it was because I wanted you to feel hot so you would take off your clothes. » teased the short hair girl.
Sayaka blushed once more.
« You're always teasing me, I don't even know when you're serious... »
« You want to know ? »
« Of course ! »
« Okay then... » whispered Sae before gently kiss Sayaka's lips. « Are you convinced now ? »
« ...Yes »
« Mom and Dad are kissing !! Gross ! » laughed Yuko.
« Shut up ! »



12am, at school



The girls were free this afternoon, so everyone was leaving school.  At the moment they were at the school entrance, a really classy black car parked right in front of the door. When the driver went out of the car, they all opened wide eyes. It was Minami, in a perfect black suit and black sunglasses.
Jurina ran over her with a big smile.
« Wow !! Is it yours ?! »
« No^^ This is my new job »
« Seriously ?? This is so cool !! Could you take me somewhere ?! »
« Sure, but not now, I have to pick up a client. »
« Here ? Who ? »

Atsuko was also there with her friends, looking at Minami's new look. She was very classy of course, in this suit... But what was she doing ? A very girly woman walked toward her, smiling. Minami opened the door for her and helped her to get in the car.
« I will definetly take you for a ride, see you tonight » said Minami to Jurina before leaving.

Atsuko was pissed off again, she walked by Jurina.
« You have to help me. »
« Sure... How can I help you ?
« I need to know for who is she working. »
« O-Okay, I will tell you » said Jurina, freaked out by the serious look of Acchan.
« Thank you. Tell me, are we practicing dance or not ? »
« Oh wait, Miichan ?! » asked Jurina to her friend who was near.
« Yes ? » said the girl coming to her.
« Are we practicing or what ? »
« Yes, totally, we decided to do it this afternoon with Yuko »
« Okay, so this afternoon then Acchan »


3pm, Minami's rooftop

« You need to go on the left, then count two and go back to your first point, okay ? » said Yuko to the girls.
They were already practicing for an hour when they decided to take a break.
« Did you finish the black outfits Mariko ? »
« No, not yet, I have too much homeworks you know^^ »
« She's lying^^ » laughed Kojima.
« YUKO !!! » screamed Mariko.
« Yes ! » said the midget jumping around her.
« Kojima said that she you to hug her tightly »
« Mari-chan ! » pouted Kojima while yuko was climbing on her, trying to kiss her.

Atsuko came into Minami's room, everyone was upstairs and she wanted to know what was going on with the short girl lately. The room was quite empty, the bed, her schoolbag in a corner and few bottles of alcohol near the bed. This bed were Atsuko had been so close to Takamina... She was honestly lost, the girl had suddenly changed like she had took an important decision. On the little table near the bed she found a visit card, Choose your drive. It was it, the name of the company. She kept it and decided to call the number on the card later.
« Girls, we're going back to buisness !! » screamed Sayaka.
Atsuko quickly went upstairs, to start the dance again. She was actually enjoying this, but she was disappointed that the captain had no time to practice with them, she was the one who wanted to do the contest and she was the one who had asked her to be a part of this.
Yesterday at the bar Takamina had seem really sad, resigned about herself. Atsuko wanted to yell at her, say that she was acting like a stupid child, but when she had seen her face, she couldn't feel anything but sadness.

They finally decided to stop the practice at 7pm, Sae had stopped earlier to prepare the food. Everyone was eating here together, as a reward of the hard work they had done today.
They were all preparing the table when Minami suddenly came in.
« Hello everyone. »
« Captain !! » screamed Jurina jumping at her neck.
« Nice to see you too^^ I took some chicken for you guys » she said putting the food on the table. She noticed Atsuko but she acted normal.
« How was work Takamina ? » asked Sayaka.
« Good, the clients are nice. Let's eat ! »
They all sat around the table, Kojima next to Mariko, Rie next to Rino and Jurina next to Rena. Minami took the last sit next to Sae. The meal was going nice, everyone was talking and laughing when the doorbell suddenly rang.
« I'm going » said Minami standing up.
She opened the door and frowned.
« Hello, I'm looking for Atsuko, is she here?I'm Miku... »
« I know who you are. Stay here. » she said before leaving him.
When she came back into the room she was looking very serious.
« Atsuko, someone's at the door for you » she said without looking at her.
The tall girl seemed surprised but went to the door.
« Hello, Atsuko » smiled Miku, embarrassed.
« Miku ?! What are you doing here ? »
« Ano, I was missing you so I decided to go see you and ask you... »
« Here ? But who told you that I was here ? »
« You talked about the dance yesterday with Rena »
Atsuko was so surprised that she didn't know what to say. She kept thinking that Minami had open her own door to see Miku.
« What do you want ? »
« Maybe we could go out and take a drink... »
« But... »
She couldn't finish her sentence because Minami was right next to her.
« Miku, right? »
« Y-Yes »
« Okay, would you like to come in, we have a lot of chicken and it's cold out here »
Atsuko frowned, the short girl was inviting Miku in... WTF ?
« O-oh, sure, thank you »
« No problem, come in »
They joined the others and Minami gave him her chair.
« Everyone this is Miku, Atsuko's friend. »
« Hi ! »
The guy seemed really embarrassed, sat next to the Ace. Minami looked at her and Acchan felt strange, like she was really losing her for real. The short girl's phone rang and she picked it up right away.
« Yeah ? When ? In two days ? Okay. No, I want the red one, she's faster and the transmission is better for this kind of streets. Yes. Okay, see you. »
« What was that, captain ? » asked Yuko while she was eating a wing.
« Nothing, my other work. »
« What is it ? Tell us ! »
« Why are you always so curious?^^^ »
« Come on, please !! »
« I do races. » sighed Minami.
« Races ?! Like Fast and Furious ??! »
« Kind off midget » laughed Takamina.
« Wow, this is so cool !! » said Jurina. « Did you win ? »
« I've just done one, and I was first. »
« Wow !! » said Yuko and Jurina at the same time.
« Isn't it dangerous ? » asked Atsuko.
« … Not if you know what you are doing. So, Miku, how did you know Atsuko ? »
« Hm... I'm at the school, and one morning I asked her if she could help me with my maths and she said yes. So... »
« I see... It's cute »
Atsuko was blushing, looking at her food. Why Minami was asking all those things ? She was acting weird for no reason... 
« How was practice today ? »
« Great ! Atsuko is really good as the center » smiled Yuko.
« Good. How do you feel Rena, was it okay for you ? »
« Hai, Jurina is reall helping me, so it's better now » she pouted.
« Alright, I want to apologize for not being here today, I was working but next time I'll be there. »

The meal was really good for everyone, they were laughing and talking about old time, like they were all a big family. Minami was feeling good, she had been away lately and she was missing her friends. It was hard those days, she was feeling lonely and sad, but she needed to be stronger than this...
« Well, I'm going to bed everyone, I have work to do early in the morning. Have a goodnight. Miku, nice to meet you » she smiled kindly.



7am, in the streets


The cold air was really refreshing her skin, and the town was quiet. Minami was running in the parc near the flat, she had woke up earlier this morning because she had decided to regain her strengh. Alcohol was not okay for the practice, and the contest was really important for her, and she didn't want to let the group down.

After 2 hours she came back in the flat and took an hot shower, she was ready t go to work. After few days, she had realize that she really liked this job. Driving all day and treat client nicely was a good thing for her, she was feeling good in her task and it was paying well.
Before leaving, she left a note on the kitchen table « I'm back at 2pm, we will practice after, tell everybody. »



10am, in front of history class



« Rena-chan, we have practice later » said Jurina.
« Okay, I'm free. »
« Who is this guy you were talking to later ? » pouted Jurina.
« It's a friend from childhood, he's asking me to help him for a test. »
« Hm... » Jurina sulked. « You could help me too »
« You're good at school baka^^ »
« Rena-chan is mine » she said jumping on her.
The girl blushed, Jurina was always like this but she didn't know if it was serious or just a game.
« Would stay to Minami's place after practice ? We could eat, just he two of us... »
« Ano... Maybe, but I have to ask my parents you know »
« Sure, just be there okay » smiled the short hair girl.

Atsuko was near the two girls, busy with her phone. She was calling the driver society Minami was working for.
« Choose your drive, Hello »
« Hello, I would like to make a reservation for today, around 6pm. »
« Sure, let me check our available drivers »
« Actually I would like to have Takahashi-san »
« Ah, sorry I can't give you Takahashi-san, she's not working tonight. »
« … I see. Thank you, I'll call you later. »


She hang up, pouting. She wasn't expecting this, she wanted to face her tonight, bring her to talk and understand why she was acting like that. The history teacher arrived so she turned off her phone and went into class, sulking.


2pm, Minami's rooftop


The midget was already doing some muscular exercises when the girls arived on the roof.
« Wow, leader, you're already here ! » smiled Rino.
« Yeah, I'm rusty, so I don't want to be weak on this »
Mariko was laughing with Jurina and Atsuko was talking to Miichan.
« Alright, since I wans't here last time, I let Yuko do the center. »
« Ryokai !! » screamed Yuko jumping.
Minami went behind Rie, Atsuko was at the back, looking at the midget while she was warming her muscles up.
« Yo ! Let's start ladies ! » said Yuko with a smile.

Minami was focus on the dance, she was really happy to see that all the members had really evolved in ther dance. She was checking secretly on everyobody to see if someone needed help but it seemed to be okay. When she looked at the back she was able to see Atsuko dancing, she was so graceful that the midget couldn't do anything but stare. When their eyes finally met, Minami looked away fastly, blushing.

All the girls had homeworks to do so they stopped the practice earlier than usual. Jurina was talking Rena to an empty corner to eat with her, Rino and Rie had planned to eat in a cafe, and Mariko and Miichan were already speaking about the outfits.
« What are you doing later Sae ? » asked Sayaka before drinking some water in her bottle.
« I have basketball with some friends, do you want to join ? »
« Seriously ?! I would love to ! »
They both smiled, happy to be together for the rest of the day.
« Acchan, you were really good today, I see why captain wanted you for this ! » smiled Yuko.
« Thank you^^ »
« What are you doing after ? »
« Nothing, I think I'm gonna work late... » pouted the Ace.

Minami was near, listening to their conversation. She desperatly wanted to talk to Atsuko, say something funny, make her laugh, see her smile. But she was feeling like a fool, the tall girl was living her life, seeing other persons, and the midget was always feeling so dumb when the girl was around...  Yuko was leaving with Kojima and Atsuko was looking at her phone, alone with Minami.
The short girl was looking at her, some sweat was running on her brest, it was so sexy that Takamina couldn't stop looking at this, feeling the desire warming her body up. When Atsuko raised her head, she saw where the girl's eyes where and she looked surprised.
« S-Sorry, I-I didn't mean to look at you like that... » blushed Minami taking her bag.
« No, it's okay... »
« I'm... just sorry. See you. » she said before going downstairs, in a hurry.
Atsuko stood here for few minutes, she actually saw the short girl looking at her boobs with a weird expression. That was the first time that she was thinking that the silly girl could have been interested in her since their night.



10pm, in front of the Cherry Bar

Minami was not working tonight, and since she doesn't want to stay alone in her flat, thinking about sad things, she had decided to come in this bar.
She said hi to the man at the entrance and came in, going directly at the bar to order.
« Hi, a martini please. »
The place was a little crowded, the waitress gave her the glass and she began to drink it slowly, looking at the people in the room.
Her heart stopped for few seconds when she saw her on the dancefloor. She was here, why was she here... ? She was supposed to work at home till late. Atsuko... She was here, dancing slowly on the music, in a beautiful dress. Minami couldn't do anything but stare, at this gorgeous girl moving in the middle of the the room.
The short girl ordered two more drinks, but even with all the alcohol in the bar she couldn't forget this girl, forget her name, her face, the fact that she had been in love the second she had saw her for the first time. But her heart stopped for the second time when she saw Miku walking toward her. She was with himl in this bar, it was a date, here, tonight, on the dancefloor. She smiled and they began to dance together, like a couple. It was obvious, she was happy, all smiling and laughing, and he seemed like a nice guy, calm and truely in love with her. Suddenly he talked to her ear, maybe a joke or a compliment, then he slowly took her lips and kissed her very gently. Those lips Minami had kissed that night, those lips she couldn't help but stare eveytime she was talking to her, those lips she was crazy about...
When he finally stepped back, Atsuko was red, and she looked away. Away enough to looked toward the bar and see the captain. Her face froze, realizing that the short girl was here and that she had seen all of this. Takamina gave the money to the waitress and left the bar, even if she really wanted to act cool like everything was normal, she needed air, she couldn't be here anymore.
The fresh air caught her, and she quickly began to walk in the street, to walk away as fast as possible. On the way home she stopped in a combini and bought a bottle of vodka, that she went drink in a park, sat on a bench.

Is this was really the end of it... ? How are you supposed to accept that the love of your life is leaving with another person ? Is it possible to survive to this... ? Is it hurting so bad that you want to stop living right away, erase all of your memories or stay here and wait for the death to come ?
Is this why am I here ? Live to endure such feelings ? Coz I don't really think I'm alive for a reason but I don't want to live if it's to feel such pain in my heart...



11am, Minami's room



The ring of the phone suddenly woke her up.
« Yes... »
« You have a client waiting for you in 20 minutes, I hope you're ready. »
« Ask Toru, he's ready... »
« The client asked for you only. »


The girl sighed, she had a serious headacke because of all the alcohol she had been drinking last night. She hardly went to the bathroom and took a quick shower, she was in a bad mood to work today.
Ten minutes later she was driving in her car, with her sunglasses to fight the sun, too hard today. She had to take the client at Harajuku, she was hoping that the drive would be short so she could go back to sleep.
When she finally stopped in front of the building and got out, she discovered Atsuko, who was waiting here. Why was she here...
Minami took her phone to call her agency.
« Choose your drive »
« It has to be a mistake about my client, can you tell me his name. »
« Her name. It's a woman. Mrs... Maeda. »

Minami looked at Atsuko and sighed, she opened the door for her, and she could smell her perfume when she got in the car.
« Where are you going... ? » asked Minami once she was sat.
« I don't know yet... Drive, that's all. »
The midget wasn't understanding the situation, but she drove, she didn't want to talk anyway.
« … Why did you ask for me ? »
« Because you don't want to talk. You're never free. »
« Yeah... I'm working. Do you want me to take you to Miku's ? » she said, ironic.
« … »
« Choose a destination, I have some other clients »
« That's untrue, I have a reservation for the all afternoon. »
« What the fuck... Are you trying to set me up ? »
« No I just... »
« BASTARD !! Get the fuck out off here !!! » screamed Minami to the other car in front of him.
The man began to scream too and the midget was so pissed off that she got out of the car and punched the man in his face.
« Motherfucker!!What are you saying now!Uh ? »
« MINAMI ! »
The girl stopped, hearing this voice. Pissed off, she joined her car and drive away.
« I'm taking you home, this is enough. »
« I'm not moving, I've paid for the whole day . »
« I will give you your money ! »
« I'm not moving. Go at you flat. »

The rest of the drive was silent, we could feel the tension in the car.

When she parked in front of the flat, she quickly ran inside and took the bottle of vodka.
« Stop this shit ! » screamed Atsuko behind her.
« WHAT do you want ??! »
« STOP drinking this shit !! » screamed Atsuko breaking the bottle on the floor. « I'm SICK of your acts lately !! »
« Why do you care ?! I don't see the point ? Why do you even care ? UH ? »
« You're SO selfish, you only see what you want to see ! »
The two girls were very upset.
« Yeah, like I see that you're not here after a night together, like I see that you're dating a guy in front of everybody in a bar ! But you know what, I shouldn't be talking about this, do what you want... »
« You're so stubborn !! We can't even talk because you always think you're right. You think you can stop school, drink all you want in front of everyone here and act stupid because no one cares ! »
« You don't even know why I do that, but wait, of course it's because you don't care ! »
« SHUT UP !! You're so full of shit when it comes to invite everyone at diner, especially the guy who is coming for me »
« What did you want me to do, punch him ? Kill him ? »
« Why are you acting like a friend to him ? Why are you leaving when you see us kissing if he's so nice for you ? »
« Because I think he's the right one for you, because he's not involved in your mom's death, because it's a guy and because he cares about you ! Maybe for once I thought that you would be happier with a nice guy who does things like he should do it. Maybe because I decided to let you go because I'm too shitty for you... »
« ...What ? » frowned Atsuko.
« … You were right to go after that night. I'm not the right person for you, I'm not someone good, and even if I love you with all my heart, it's not what you deserve. If letting you go means that I have to endure all that, miss school and drink alcohol then I'll do it because I can't see you sad and no treated like you should be... »

Atsuko was froze, her brest was going up and down because of her fast breath. She was upset and actually really sexy like this.
« You're so stupid... » she said in a whisper before coming close to the short girl to punch her.
« I didn't ran away because I thought that you were not good enough for me. I ran away because it was the first time I felt so happy in my life, because I woke up next to you and I couldn't help but smile. And I was scared that you would regret what you did, that you would thought that it was a mistake, that you didn't love me like I loved you. »
« … Why Miku then... » asked Minami looking at her feet, unable to look at the girl, too close to her.
« Miku was nice and I was sad, I wanted him as a friend. And I was missing you. Last night he kissed me but I didn't like it, I said I couldn't be more than a friend for him and he understood. »
« … Acchan, I can't be as good as you, in my whole life, I'm not enough for you... »
« Shut up... Since I know you, everything I see about you is better everyday, you're in charge here with all this girls and they're happier than ever because you take care of them, you're raising them, you're good for them. I had never doubt about you even once, you're the one doubting. » she said touching the midget jaw with her finger.
« Minami... » she said in her ear « I've missed you so much... »
Minami was looking at her brest, so beautiful and close, she could feel the girl's lips on her ear.
« Acchan... Please don't... »
« Why... ? Don't you want it... ? »
« ...Of course I want it... »
« Kiss me... now... »
« This isn't good for us... I'm said yourself, I'm acting stupid... »
Atsuko slapped her, Minami stepped back and opened wide eyes.
« Kiss me now ! » said Atsuko walking toward her.
Minami was burning all over her body, she couldn't stand it. She suddenly raised her head and took Atsuko's lips in her mouth, going crazy for it, pushing the tall girl against the wall. It was soft, sweet and warm, the short girl was sulking, kissing and licking it, she couldn't stop.
« Tell me... »
They kissed again, hungry.
« What... »
« Are you sure ? Coz I'm not gonna survive one more time... »
« … I'm sure. I want you now. » she said pushing the girl against the kitchen table.
« Kids are gonna come back you know, I can stop if I'm touching you »
« … Right. We'll see this later then. » sighed Atsuko.
« TADAIMA !! » screamed Yuko, followed by all the girls. « Wow, Acchan, you're here ! »
The Ace stepped back from the midget and blushed a little, confuse about the situation.
« Were you been ? Did you realize that it's 11pm ?! » frowned Minami.
« Relax dad, we're saturday^^ » laughed Miichan.
« Aah... I didn't realize it... »
« I'm sooo hungry... » pouted Jurina.
« I know Juri, I said I was gonna make you something » said Sayaka.
« Eeh ? Me too Dad, I'm hungry too, I want Sae's breakfast !! » smiled Yuko.
« She's not here to cook you know, you can do it yourself. »
« Relax everyone, I'm making pancakes okay ? » said Acchan, wipping her lips.
Minami looked surprised, she wans't expecting the girl to make such a proposal.
« Yay, Mom is making pancakes ! There are too much dad in this house, Atsuko is our mom now !! » laughed Rino.
Mariko smiled and the tall girl blushed, but inside she was happy that everyone was accepting her so easily.
« You don't have to do this you know, they're all taking advantage of you » said the leader, embarrassed.
« No, it's okay, I like it. »
« Oh, I have a gift actually, for all of you here... But I don't know if you will enjoy it. » said Minami with a little smile on her face.
She had planned this for few days now, not sure that is was a good idea, but now she was burning to show them.
« I want to know !! » jumped Yuko.
« Yeah, we want to know » said Rino and Rie at the same time.
« Okay, you're doing the pancakes and I go take the surprise, I'll be back in 20 minutes. » she said before leaving.



20 minutes later


« So, are you ready ? » asked Minami at the door.
« Yes !! »
« Okay, you need to close your eyes, all of you ! Is it done ? »
« YES !! »
Minami slowly came in and went to the living room where they were all.
« Okay, now you can open your eyes ! »
The midget was here, with a little husky in her arms.
« Oooh... kawai !! »
She had thought that those last months have been a little harsh for everybody, and that they needed an animal in the house to keep everyone close to each other.
« Is it for us ? »
«  You've bought a dog for us ?
« Can we have a  dog ? »
« Hey, hey, keep calm^^ Yes, this is for all of us, I thought it would be nice, we can all take him to run, educate him and teach him things. So, if you want to keep it, it's okay. »
All the girls were excited, talking and touching the dog, the short girl looked at Atsuko, she was smiling kindly.
« Do you think it's a mistake ? » she asked her.
« No... I think you're a great dad » she smiled.
« We need to name him ! Is it a male ? » asked Miichan
« Yes, and we have to decide the name all together »
Takamina was happy, everyone seemed happy with the dog,  even Sayaka was already totally in love with it. It was a good idea, and honestly, the midget wanted a dog for a long time.

While the girls were all over the dog, Minami joined Atsuko in the kitchen.
« Acchan, I was wondering... what is going on between you and Miku, exactly ? »
« What do you want to know ? »
« Is he... in love with you ? Well, of course he is, who wouldn't... But, I mean... »
« Is it important ? »
« Yes, because I know what it feels to love someone and have to let it go. »
« Do you want me to love him instead ? » teased Atsuko.
« No... »
« Listen, I don't think he really feels that way toward me, we're friends and he was probably trying to seduce me yesterday but nothing comparing to you, I guess »
« You guess ? »
« Yeah, we'll see later if you can convince me... »
« Captain, I want to name him Shiro ! »
« Why not » said Minami, still obsessed by Atsuko's words. « Pancakes are ready, come here »
The dog immediatly came to Minami and searched for a contact.
« Oh, he's really liking you^^ » laughed Sae.
« He's not the only one... » whispered Atsuko as she was passing by.
Minami's phone rang, she talked for a while and seemed upset all the sudden.
« I have to drive some rich guy to Nagoya, I'm going back tomorrow night... »
« Seriously ?! But we have some pancakes, and we could have chill out tomorrow... » pouted Jurina.
« I know Juri, but you know what, tomorrow when I come back, we all go to a bar and party together. Okay ? »
« Okay, that's a good idea » smiled Rino.

The short girl gathered her stuff and kissed the dog a last time.
« Okay everybody have fun but Sayaka is watching you for me !! See you tomorrow »
« Bye cap' ! » they all said.
« I'm coming with you at your car » said Atsuko in a low voice.

When Takamina was ready to take the road, she said goodbye to the tall girl.
« Stay around here »
« Don't go to far » said Atsuko against the car, so the midget couldn't get into it.
« I will be there tomorrow you know »
« Maybe I'm a little worried since you're doing some silly things lately... »
« What sort of silly things do you want me to do in Nagoya ? »
« I don't know, you could drink, go in a bar and pick up a girl for example »
« Well, you could also go in a bar, drink and kiss some guy for example » said Minami before looking at the girl's brest.
« What are you doing » smiled Atsuko.
« Just wondering if you had this cleavage earlier... In front of everyone ? »
« It's not this deep Minami... » she whispered before kissing her ear « But maybe tomorrow you will see a little more of this. Don't be late... » she said before moving.
Minami smiled and get into her car and left, excited by Aachan's words.









Title: Re: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 7 UPDATE
Post by: Kirozoro on February 06, 2014, 02:45:29 AM
I hope nothing happen to Minami

Yay Takacchan had come back
Title: Re: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 7 UPDATE
Post by: Sydney W on February 06, 2014, 03:46:19 AM
wohoo. An update. Like it very much. Can't wait to see smexy scene Minami x Atsuko.
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 7 UPDATE
Post by: cisda83 on February 06, 2014, 11:10:13 AM
Well Minami and Atsuko are getting there....

But still Minami wasting her time with jobs legal and illegal...

Would she be okay?

Would she be able to pull herself together by doing the proper things i.e. going to school?

What's going to happen next?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 7 UPDATE
Post by: Archer1992 on February 07, 2014, 03:09:27 PM
Omg! Finally yei I actually believe that Atsumina were broken or something
Thank you
Continue soon
Bye bye
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 7 UPDATE
Post by: chichay12 on February 07, 2014, 04:15:26 PM
Holy sh*t icant believe i just miss an update here *gomen fausto*
Oh well better late than never  :D

Kitta~my atsumina is back baybeh  :inlove:
But i really have a bad feeling about minami going to nagoya :banghead:
I hope im just being paranoid here  XD

Wahh fausto  :wub:
Thank u for the update
Update soon :on gay:

Ps.im really looking forward to see an update in another trend.. u know what i mean*wink wink* :wahaha: :wahaha: :wahaha:
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 7 UPDATE
Post by: noah minami on February 08, 2014, 03:29:57 AM
Hope nothing will happen to takamina.  :doh:
Yeah atsumina is back.. :love:
Gonna wait for the update.  :cow:
Title: Re: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 7 UPDATE
Post by: Archer1992 on March 02, 2014, 08:45:58 PM
Update soon fausto I will wait

Enviado desde mi HTC One mediante Tapatalk

Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 7 UPDATE
Post by: fausto on March 02, 2014, 09:16:50 PM
Hey guys!! I'm just passing by to tell you that I'm working on the update, so please wait for me, I'm coming!!!!!! :twothumbs
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 7 UPDATE
Post by: ryu201 on March 06, 2014, 08:28:14 PM
Hi,im new here and this is the first fanfic that i read here.

U know what,i really love this fanfic  :heart:

It's AWESOME!!!!!  :twothumbs

I really wait for the update so keep going ok?  :thumbup  :thumbsup
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" CHAPTER 8
Post by: fausto on March 10, 2014, 08:04:03 PM
Thank you for every comments, I update tonight, and next will be in another section :twisted: :twisted:
I was re-reading some fics yesterday and I realized that maybe I was too (how to put this... :nervous) tough in my way to write smut scene. I don't know if you see what i mean, but usually in other fics (maybe not Ruka :lol:) the words are cuter or more romantic, and I tend to be driven by the excitment of the scene so I write it with my way of seeing it... And maybe you guys feel a little lost because maybe it's too bold. Thing is I'm european and maybe our standards are not the same... :? Well, I was thinking of that, so sorry if there are too many "I want to f*ck you" or sth like that in my fics, but it's the way I write it :nervous :sweatdrop:


Chapter 8 : Seems to be better with you
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« So, how long have you been a driver ? » asked the old man sitting in the back.
« Couple of years » said Minami, she didn't want to scare the client.
« I guess you see a lot of people like me. I almost forgot how it's like to drive... »
« Why don't you drive for the pleasure, sir ? »
« Aah... I don't know, maybe I'm afraid, it's easier when others do the things for you. »
Minami was already thinking about coming home, this evening was the first she could enjoy with Atsuko in a long time, now that they were « in good terms ». But this man seemed to be sad, and she was concerned about her job.
« I think you're trying to persuade yourself that you can't do things alone because it's been a long time since you're able to have people at your service. You're not feeling the world anymore, you're just passing by, looking and leaving. I think it's sad, to live thinking that all is a waste of time if you're doing it by yourself. »
« Are you suggesting that I should move my ass a little more ? » smiled the man.
« Sir, I'm just saying that maybe one day you should take a break, be alone, drive a couple hours and find a quite place near a river, sit and look, listen and enjoy it. It's easy to forget that things have value, that we care about, that we want to live them everyday. I bet you have heavy responsabilities, and this is making you blind to simplicity. And sad because you think the only thing you're capable of it's to handle big issues. »
The man thought about it for few minutes and smiled to his driver.
« You're really wise for your age. How can you know that ? »
« … Sometimes it's not about the age, sir. I'm just wondering why are we alive. Somedays I think that's because we have to create something that will help the others to survive, and somedays I just think that we have to enjoy this time, love someone and don't be afraid of the end. I don't want to waste my time working everyday and realize at the end of my life that I have many regret. »
« I see what you mean. I think I will think about that, and take your words as an advice. »
« Good, sir. »

She drove until Nagoya, the man had to stay for the night, and Minami was staying at the hotel. She was thinking about the past few months, like a check up.  She was always alone one way or a another, since her dad was always away for his work, and because she was better alone. Fighting for respect and trying to build a life on her own.
And then Atsuko.
This girl had always been in her head since the first day but it's was like a dream and now they seemed to be together. It's was really scary, actually, to know that you care for someone that much. The captain didn't want to admit that she was a jealous girlfriend, but she couldn't help but feel pissed off when a guy was looking at her.
She was staring at the view when she received an email.

From : Atsuko
To : Minami
Content :
How was the trip ?


From : Minami
To : Atsuko
Content :
Good, but I wish
I was home. Where are U ?

From : Atsuko
To : Minami
Content :
In your bed. Wish U
were here too...

From : Minami
To : Atsuko
Content :
Why aren't U at
home ? It's late.


From : Atsuko
To : Minami
Content :
I miss U, so I
decided to sleep
here, with ur clothes.

Minami opened wide eyes, couldn't help but imagine the girl naked in her clothes.

From : Minami
To : Atsuko
Content :
Seems nice ! I miss
u too. I will be there
tomorrow in the
evening.

From : Atsuko
To : Minami
Content :
The girls have
decided to go in
a bar tomorrow,
will u come ?

From : Minami
To : Atsuko
Content :
Sure. Sleep now,
u have to be ready for
practice.


Minami laid on the bed, she was really into this girl. Maybe it will be difficult in the future, but it was worth it.

It had been a long night and this morning, Minami accorded herself a cigarette. She smocked it against the car, looking a the sun rising. She was actually waiting for the man in front of the restaurant he was into.
Her phone rang when she was finishing it.
« You have a client tonight, when you come back in Tokyo. »
« I can't, I'm supposed to be in some place. »
« It will only take an hour. Don't be late. »

She hang up and sighed, Atsuko won't like this but she decided not to tell her.



Chapter 9 : Drunk in love
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« Good morning Takahashi san, how are you ? »
« Perfect, and you ? Did it go well ? »
« Hm... Boring as usual when it comes to buisness, I think I'm too old for all this. » he said going into the car. « Can you take the other road to come back home, I want to see something else than tar and cars. »
« Sure sir. »


3.15pm, mathematics class


Atsuko was lost in her thoughs while the teacher was talking about numbers again. Minami was coming back tonight and she was very anxious about it. If this trip to Nagoya had help her discover that the two of us wasn't a good idea... ? If after all the captain was better alone or liking another girl in a few months... ? The truth since the beginning was that Atsuko was really in love with this messy girl, even if she didn't know until now.
« Atsuko ? »
« ... »
« Aachan ? »
« Huh ? »
« Where were you just now ? » laughed Sae.
« Nowhere, just thinking... » she blushed.
« Yeah, tell me about it, sure it's about the devil midget huh?^^ »
« Don't be silly. What is it ? »
« Can I be away this afternoon ? I have to meet Sayaka to do some sports together. Is it okay ? »
« Sayaka, hm. You seem to like her a lot those days. »
« She's like me, I appreciate that » she became red as a tomatoe.
« Of course you can, I have to go home anyway. »
« What are you gonna do ? »
« Dunno yet... probably work on my history essay. »
« You're life is sooo boring!^^ » mocked Sae, laughing. « I remember when you were fighting against every guy in the city with burning eyes, and now you're the smart girl always doing her homeworks ! »
« Watch out, I could kick your ass sooner than you expect » frowned Atsuko. « And ask Sayaka to be here at the bar with all the girls tonight, I want everybody there. »
« Okay ! »



5pm, in front of a lake, on the side of the road

« Don't you think it's beautiful ? »
« Of course it is... » said Minami in a whisper, she was astonished by the view. « I could stay here forever, and it would be enough... »
« I could too. Sometimes I wonder why people love the city so much. Nothing more than buildings, glass, stones and roads. But here, you feel like you're so small, weak and empty in front of this. I have been living almost all my life walking across the country and overseas and it's probably today that I regret not having raise my head and look at this more often... »
« … Yeah, I know what you mean, I regret it too already^^ You should take a rest, take your life and bring it here »
« … I will give a word to my wife » he laughed.

They get back in the car and Minami drove, thinking about the house she could have with Atsuko next to a lake like this. She could wake up in the morning, wrap herself in a sheet and lok at the view.






« Thank you for the ride, Takahashi san, I think it was more than a simple trip for me » he smiled.
« You're welcome, it was a pleasure for me. »
« It was nice meeting you, and I think soon, I will be contemplating that view, thanks to you. I will recommend you to my friends. »
« Thank you very much, have a nice evening sir. »

Minami looked at the hour on the dashboard, she had an hour free before the last client, and she decided to go to the hairdresser. She was going to see Acchan tonight and she felt like she had changed since their last talk, so she wanted to mark it with a new haircut.






9.45pm, in the « Speedbar »


« Be patient, I know she's late but maybe the roads were crowded... » said Sae with a smile.
« Or maybe it's just that she forgot it, or that she has better things to do » sulked Atsuko.
« You're impatient, take a drink »

Near them were Jurina and Rena, drinking together.
« How are you, Rena-chan ? »
« Good, I like this place. The music is good. »
« Wanna dance ? »
« Hm... No, I don't feel like dancing, I'm ashamed when I dance... » she blushed.
« Come on, you're good, just you and me » she smiled brightly.
« No... I'm not ready for this. Go ! »
Jurina sighed and went on the dancefloor alone, and began to dance alone. Few minutes later, an hot girl who was watching the prince since she had began to dance approched her and smiled. Rena was looking at them, jealous. She didn't want to go dance because she was afraid to be ridiculous in front of everyone, but it was pissing her off that another girl was taking advantage of that to go flirt on her Jurina. The girl was really close to her friend, all smiling and wriggling close to Jurina's pelvis.

When she finally enter the bar, Minami quickly saw her friends sat at a table, all gathered here and al laughing and drinking. Atsuko was talking to Yuko but stopped when she saw the midget walked toward her.
« Hi, I know I'm late. » said Minami with an excuse look on her face.
« You are indeed » replied the tall girl with no expression.
« I'm sorry, a last client and my boss wasn't cool with me today »
« Takamina, you're hair is great !! » smiled Mariko.
« Thank you » blushed Minami. « Do you like it ? » she asked shyly to Atsuko.
« … Yes, it suits you very well » admitted Atsuko looking at the dancefloor.
« Acchan... » sighed the short girl. « I'm sorry, I really am, but please, I'm tired and this was a long day. Can we please not fight and enjoy the fact that we are together again ? »
« … Yes. But you pissed me off because you were late, so I drank, so don't tell me that I'm drunk and I'm not suposed to.»
« Sure » smiled kindly the captain.
« So, how was the trip ? » asked Sayaka who was sitting next to Sae.
« It went well, an old guy lost and tired, but he was nice. And you, how was school ? »
« Boring, every class is the same... And Acchan was distracted, always thinking about you, so she didn't listen^^ » laughed Sae.
« I'm gonna kill you » frowned Atsuko. « Sayaka, you should ask Sae for a date if you want someting to happen because she's too scared of you to do it alone »
Sayaka blushed while Sae threw a towel at Atsuko.
« Wow, easy everyone ! Do you want something to drink ? » asked Minami to calm them down.
« YES !! » screamed Yuko. « I have to get this gorgeous lady drunk so I could touch her brest after » she smirked looking at Kojima.
« Yaa pervert ! »

Minami went to the bar to order the beer and saw Jurina dancing with a girl. When their eyes met, Jurina said a word to the girl and walked toward the midget.
« You're beautiful with this hair, what's up ? »
« I'm good. Who is this girl ? »
« I don't know, why ? »
« I'm here for just 5 minutes and I already noticed that Rena is looking at the dancefloor with fire in her eyes. Did you do something to her ? »
« No, I asked her to dance and she didn't want so I dance alone, and this girl came so... »
« So you let her dance with you like this ?! »
« Yes... Why ? »
« Because Rena is jealous »
« How do you know ? I'm not sure that she is interested in me, seems like she's suspicious about me. »
« Why ? »
« I don't know... » sulked Jurina.
« Okay so you drop that girl and go see Rena, ask her what is she feeling and you'll see. »
« … Right »
Minami looked at Jurina leaving, and sighed. She really liked this girl, and she didn't want her to do stupid mistake because she was too young to understand all the complexity of girls.

« Rena-chan » said the girl with apprehension.
« ... » the girl was looking into her glass, like she was alone.
« Rena-chan, what's going on ? »
« ... »
« Are you jealous ? »
« What ? Did you see how you were with this girl ? »
« I was just dancing, and she was there, I couldn't snob her »
« Right... Then go ! »
« … Rena » said Jurina stroking her hand into the girl's hair to uncover her face. « I want to dance with you. You're really beautiful tonight... » she whispered close to her ear.
« Don't try to mollify me » pouted Rena.
« I do, because I want to spend this moment with you, and see you smile »
« … »
« Tell me if you don't like me, I don't want to embarass you or anything » said suddenly Jurina with a serious voice.
« What ? »
« I feel like you don't like me very much, you're always looking away when I talk to you, you seem embarrassed when we're together and I don't want you to feel forced to hang out with me »
« It's not that, Jurina... »
« What is it then ? Do you think I'm not mature enough, or too stupid ? »
« No... »
« Because if it's... »
She couldn't finish her sentence because Rena quickly kissed her on the lips, a really light kiss but still.
Jurina opened wide eyes and felt like her heart stopped, she wasn't expecting that at all.
« ... »
« S-Sorry, I-I have to go to the bathroom » said Rena red as a tomatoe, running to the bathroom.
Jurina was really shocked, one minute ago she thought that Rena was ashamed of her and now this kiss. What to think of this... ?

« Captain, I need you »
« What is it, Juri ? » asked the midget who was at the table with everyone.
« Rena kissed me »
« Really ? Well done ! »
« No, you don't understand ! I was talking to her, saying that she wasn't forced to hanging out with me if she didn't like me and then she kissed me ! And then she ran into the bathroom... What does it mean ? »
« It means that she wanted to explain to you the way she feels, but when she did she was ashamed or scared and ran » smiled Minami, tenderized by the puppy in front of her.
« What should I do ? »
« Follow your heart, baka »
« … Okay ! » she said before running into the bathroom.

« You're giving love tips to Jurina when you are coming late to our date... ? » said Atsuko raising her eyebrows.
« It's pretty simple in this case, and I don't want Jurina to be mean with this girl just because she doesn't understand girls. »
« And you do ? »
« Maybe... »
« We're gonna check that then... » she said with a husky voice before going to the dancefloor.

Beyoncé - Drunk in Love (Explicit) ft. JAY Z (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p1JPKLa-Ofc#ws)

Minami looked at her girl beginning to dance on the rythm. She was drunk unless she wouldn't do that, but the midget didn't mind at all, she wanted to see her dance and being this sexy.
The tall girl was moving slowly, her hands in her hair, slowly going down on her body. She was totally into the song, rocking on the melody, moving her ass and brest on the beat.
Sometimes she was looking at Minami like she wanted to provok her, show her her sexy side. And actually it was working. Minami was on fire, seeing her girl moving this slow on this music, touching herself, playing with her hair and closing her eyes it was really exciting. She wanted to take her here, right now, on the dancefloor, like they were all alone.
The music was like suggesting her to take this girl right here, rip her clothes off and explore her naked body until the sun rises again. She could see her brest move, her skin shining in the light, her graceful moves and her face totally abandonned to the moment... She could imagine her mouth into her neck, licking her shin, kissing those red lips again and again, caressing her legs, feel her shaking...
It was like a phantasm became true, a real beauty dancing like she was doing the music with her moves, like she was forgetting everything else, like nothing mattered anymore...
But she knew Atsuko, she didn't want to appear this easy to get, and she was going to play her game.

Jurina opened the bathroom door and found Rena alone looking at herself in the mirror.
« Are you okay ? »
« Yes, yes, I just need few minutes » said Rena embarrassed.
« Look... »
« Don't say anything, please. It was a mistake, it was silly. Can we please not talk about this ? »
« No, I want to. Tell me, were you jealous of that girl ? »
Rena seemed surprised by the question.
« I...This... Maybe, but it doesn't matter anymore. You have the right to do what you want »
« Rena, I don't know if you've noticed but I was the one asking you out the first time, and ate with all your friends. I want to know you, I want hang out with you. Why don't you let me ? »
« It's not right, I'm not a girl for you. »
« What ? Why ? Because I was dancing with that girl ?! »
« It's just... I'm normal, I'm not pretty, I'm not funny, I don't know how to dance like her, you could have any girl here or at school, this isn't what is supposed to happen... It was a mistake. » said Rena trying to leave the room.
« I don't think so, Rena. » said Jurina with an husky voice, preventing her from leaving. « I want you, I think you're beautiful, smart and funny. I don't want other girls, I want you. Let me be with you. » she said leaning on Rena's mouth.
« Jurina... » protested Rena.
But the boyish girl didn't listen and kissed her gently on the mouth, she had been teased by the first kiss few minutes ago and she wanted more. She kept her lips on hers, caressing them and licking them a little. She didn't want to rush anything, but she wanted her so much that it was hard to stop.
« So ? How was it ? » she said when she finally steped back. « Do you still want to run ? »
« … No... It's okay » moaned Rena.
« You're mine, Rena-chan, and I'm sure you're very sexy on a dancefloor » she smirked, satisfy of herself.


« Is it true that you want us to have a date ? » asked Sayaka.
Sae drank all of her glass of beer and nodded.
« Yes... Could be nice, right ? » she blushed. « I mean, without any team or ball, something quiet, just the two of us... »
« … Alright »
« Great ! » smiled Sae brightly. She was really into this girl.

Minami was beginning to feel the effect of the alcohol in her blood, she was feeling really good, and she wanted to have some private time with Atsuko. This one was coming back from the dancefloor, and taking off her jacket. Underneath she had a really nice see-through shirt, and the midget felt warm inside when she saw the black bra she was wearing.
« Hi » smiled Atsuko.
« Hi. I think everyone is having fun tonight, it's good. »
« Are you ? »
« Sure. Did you go to school with this shirt today ? »
« Maybe » smirked Atsuko. « Why ? »
« No, nothing »
« Why did you cut your hair ? »
« I guess I wanted to change » said Minami looking at the girl who was before dancing with Jurina.
« Are you looking at this girl ? »
« Maybe » smirked Minami. « I'm tired, I'm coming home, do you want a last drink at my flat ? »
« … Okay » smiled Atsuko before putting her jacket on.
While Minami was going to the bar, the Ace went to Sayaka.
« Please can you make sure nobody come to Minami's flat tonight, I need some time alone with her, is that okay ? »
« Sure, I will tell the others, don't worry »
« Thank you ! »

She pretented like nothing happened when Minami said goodbye to everyone. They called a cab to go home, the midget was too drunk to drive.



1am, at Minami's flat


« What do you want to drink ? » asked Minami looking at the bar.
« Something sweet, please »
Atsuko was against the kitchen table, looking at the captain.
« Here you go... » said Takamina giving her the glass.
The girl smiled while holding her drink, she was still drunk and happy to be, because she was still not used to be close to the midget.
« I'm worried about Jurina, do you think she'll be okay ? I didn't see her since... »
« Yes, she will be » said Atsuko kindly, pulling the girl toward her so she could be right in front of her. « You should worry about me »
« You ? Why ? Are you feeling bad ? »
« No... I miss you, Mi-na-mi... » whispered Atsuko she said before kissing her.
Minami had miss those lips so much that she was really enjoying this kiss.
« I missed you too. You're really gorgeous... » she said when Atsuko took off her jacket.
« … Minami ? »
« Yes ? »
« How many girls have you been dating ? »
« … Why do you want to know ? » said the midget, frowning.
« Because »
« Few »
« How many ? »
« Pff...4 »
« 4 ?! » said Atsuko, shocked.
« Yes, but it's not as much as it seems »
« ... »
« Baby, are you mad at me ? »
« … Why do you want to be with me ? »
« … I was in my past with 4 different girls, it doesn't mean that I like to have many girls in the same time or that I'm not reliable. But I can understand that you are afraid to be with me. I told you before, I don't think I deserve you and a guy like Miku would be better for you. »
« … Right, I guess I'll get going then » said Atsuko trying to leave.
« Don't you dare... going anywere » said Minami preventing her from leaving. « I want you, Atsuko, and not another girl. » she said before touching her jaw with a finger.
« I don't think I'm the kind of girl you want... » said Atsuko shivering.
« Well you think wrong, honey. I saw you dancing at the bar... »
« I was drunk »
« You're still are. It was very sexy » she said in a husky voice, putting an hand on Atsuko's waist.
She kissed her in the neck, smelling her skin.
« How far Miku went with you ? » she whispered.
« … What ? I already told you, we kissed... »
« A kiss uh ? Like this ? » asked Minami kissing Atsuko roughly, putting her tongue in her mouth, searching for hers.
« No... It was not... so good »
Atsuko was against the table, feeling the body of the short girl against hers. She was feeling good, shivering, and warming up because of the closeness of their bodies.
« Did he touch you... here ? » asked the captain putting her hand on the flat belly.
« No... » moaned Atsuko. « Minami... »
« Yes ? Do you want me to stop ? I thought you'd asked Sayaka to send everyone home so we can be alone here »
« How do you know ?! » blushed Acchan.
« Not telling you. Tell me, how many boyfriends did you have ? »
« … I don't remember »
« Really ? I'm not believing you. Tell me » said Minami raising the Ace's shin.
« … 3 »
« 3 ? Are you saying that 3 boys had your yes, that 3 boys have been kissing those lips ? »
« … Yes. But I didn't really love them, and it was just school romance... »
Minami got really close to Atsuko's mouth, looking into her eyes.
« Am I school romance ? »
« … No. »
« … Watching you dancing like this at the bar made me want to make love to you right there, in front of everyone. I was only thinking about ripping your clothes off, touch your naked body. Is it wrong ? »
« No... I was provoking you because I was mad at you for being late. » said Atsuko feeling her heart accelerated. Such words couldn't have no effect on her, her girlfriend was talking dirty and it was really exciting her.



Meanwhile, in front of Rena's house

« Thank you for the ride home » said the older girl.
« You're welcome, it was a nice evening with you » the boyish girl said.
« I'm sorry if I was bothering you, after all you were just enjoying the moment, there is nothing bad with it, and this girl seemed nice »
« It's okay^^ I just want Rena-chan to be happy, and I have to apologize because you were hurt. But don't worry, all I have in mind is you » she smiled very cutely.
Rena blushed, the younger girl was so sweet with her that sometimes she was embarrassed, why was she jealous again ? Ah yes, because she had feelings for her and she didn't want other girls to have the affection of Jurina. But she couldn't say that to this player, sometimes it seemed like a game to Jurina, and Rena wasn't the kind of girl to be played with.
« I hope I will see you soon, have a good night » said Jurina kindly before kissing her on the cheek.
« Yes, you too... » whispered Rena watching her leave.


Meanwhile, in front of Sayaka's house

« Are you sure nobody is there ? »
« Yes, my parents are in Italy for buisness until next monday. Come on ! »
Sae followed her friend to the house, it was a nice and big one. She had understood that her parents were pretty rich, and so she wasn't surprised by such a hudge house.
« Here it is, make yourself comfortable » said Sayaka taking off her jacket and goiong into the kitchen.
« Wow... This is nice ! Why don't you stay here often ?! »
« My parents and I aren't really in good terms. They want me to go to a buisness school so I can be a part of their company later, and I just want to do a sport university so... Plus, they don't like Takamina, they think she had corrupted me. »
« Really ? But you're better in school now »
« Yes, but you know, they don't want to admit that they are wrong and that there is something more important than semblance in the world... » frowned Sayaka.
« Hm... Hard to imagine that they had such a wonderful daughter despite of their way of thinking » smiled Sae.
Sayaka seemed surprised but hid it going to the fridge to take a bottle of water. She wasn't used to compliments, and she was still embarrassed when it came from Sae. This girl was so direct that it was weird.
« I'm hungry but there is nothing in the fridge... » she sighed.
« We could order something, it's my treat ! »
« No, it's okay, I'll wait for tomorrow morning »
« Let me order, Sayaka, it's important for you to eat » said Sae, coming closer.
« O-Okay, if you say so »
« Great !! » smiled the genkin girl jumping all around.


So next it's the pervy section!!! :panic: :panic:
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" CHAPTER 8
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on March 10, 2014, 09:29:58 PM
I don't know if you see what i mean, but usually in other fics (maybe not Ruka :lol:)

Did someone mention my name? :?
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" CHAPTER 8 and 9!!
Post by: fausto on March 10, 2014, 09:46:07 PM
Ruka as Rukaeru
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" CHAPTER 8 and 9!!
Post by: blakwhite on March 11, 2014, 01:55:13 AM
yatta, an update  :mon inluv:

Thank you for every comments, I update tonight, and next will be in another section :twisted: :twisted:
I was re-reading some fics yesterday and I realized that maybe I was too (how to put this... :nervous) tough in my way to write smut scene. I don't know if you see what i mean, but usually in other fics (maybe not Ruka :lol:) the words are cuter or more romantic, and I tend to be driven by the excitment of the scene so I write it with my way of seeing it... And maybe you guys feel a little lost because maybe it's too bold. Thing is I'm european and maybe our standards are not the same... :? Well, I was thinking of that, so sorry if there are too many "I want to f*ck you" or sth like that in my fics, but it's the way I write it :nervous :sweatdrop:


well, i dont mind :3, as long as u comfortable with ur writing style :3
and waiting for that update  :mon misch:
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" CHAPTER 8 and 9!!
Post by: cisda83 on March 11, 2014, 02:40:49 AM
Everyone has the time if thier life with the romance progressing smoothly

Can't wait to see your perv. Section, been a while

What's going to happen next?

Especially to thier relationship after Minami and Atsuko done the deed?

Thank you for the update

  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Re: "That's not what you think it is" CHAPTER 8 and 9!!
Post by: Kirozoro on March 11, 2014, 02:48:37 AM
Omg Takamina had already date 4 girls...well didn't see thaj coming

Wmatsui is so cute...Rena is jealouse

Update soon
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" CHAPTER 8 and 9!!
Post by: Tiptip on March 11, 2014, 02:53:59 AM
Double update  :hip smile:

Atsumina's da best   :hip smile:
Wmatsui cute as always :3
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" CHAPTER 8 and 9!!
Post by: takashu on March 11, 2014, 09:45:10 AM
I'm a new reader here :kneelbow: :hee:

very enjoyable reading this fanfic  :k-great:
wow ... minami had already date 4  :lol: :lol: just like in reality, minami very popular with the girls :nervous

Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" CHAPTER 8 and 9!!
Post by: chichay12 on March 11, 2014, 03:49:26 PM
Thank you for every comments, I update tonight, and next will be in another section :twisted: :twisted:
I was re-reading some fics yesterday and I realized that maybe I was too (how to put this... :nervous) tough in my way to write smut scene. I don't know if you see what i mean, but usually in other fics (maybe not Ruka :lol:) the words are cuter or more romantic, and I tend to be driven by the excitment of the scene so I write it with my way of seeing it... And maybe you guys feel a little lost because maybe it's too bold. Thing is I'm european and maybe our standards are not the same... :? Well, I was thinking of that, so sorry if there are too many "I want to f*ck you" or sth like that in my fics, but it's the way I write it :nervous :sweatdrop:


well, i dont mind :3, as long as u comfortable with ur writing style :3
and waiting for that update  :mon misch:

im totally agree with this  :on GJ:
as long u enjoy what u doing just keep doing it.. i will support u all the way XD

back to your update..
kyaaaa double update  :wriggly:
and thank god minami is safe (maybe im just thinking to much *teehee*)

So next it's the pervy section!!! :panic: :panic:
OMG!!! i cant wait for this
update soon fausto!! like soon..maybe tomorrow XD
thank u for the update and have a nice day :on gay:
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" CHAPTER 8 and 9!!
Post by: IamNot_Glad on March 12, 2014, 01:35:11 PM
Hahahaha
I love the AtsuMina scene  :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1:
Can't wait for the next update
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" CHAPTER 8 and 9!!
Post by: ayudewi6 on March 12, 2014, 03:04:33 PM
I really liked your story, so interesting.. I hope you can update soon, I like your writing style. Thanks for updating, may you have a wonderful day then and keep spirit!  :thumbup  :mon thumb:
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" CHAPTER 8 and 9!!
Post by: Akira ryusen sora on March 12, 2014, 03:37:03 PM
Wow!! Atsumina moment... I love this fic :3
Thanks for update...
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" CHAPTER 8 and 9!!
Post by: triela on March 14, 2014, 05:02:55 PM
i cant wait for the next chapter atsumina  :love: :heart: :heart:
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" CHAPTER 8 and 9!!
Post by: MayuxMatsuixMusic on March 23, 2014, 08:55:09 AM
Atsumina~~

Too bad I don't have an access in the perv section




But more atsumina


Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" CHAPTER 8 and 9!!
Post by: ryu201 on March 24, 2014, 06:46:01 PM
Yo! Fausto-san! It's me again! :hand:
Remember me? Im the new reader that ask u for PM me for ur missing chapter on another fanfic?
Well its ok if u dont remember me.
Hehehe.
Im here for do my promise to read ur another fanfic after all but unfortunely like before,i still can go to perv section :(
But i love this story and wait for ur another update so please update soon ne ^^
Ganbatte fausto-san! :fap
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" CHAPTER 8 and 9!!
Post by: River1721 on March 25, 2014, 03:24:28 AM
Ah~ such an amazing fic !  :shy2:

Please update soon!! :whistle: :nya:
Title: Re: Re: "That's not what you think it is" CHAPTER 8 and 9!!
Post by: Archer1992 on April 09, 2014, 09:15:35 PM
Omg!!! At least you continue...thanks

Enviado desde mi HTC One mediante Tapatalk

Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" CHAPTER 8 and 9!!
Post by: takeshi77 on April 22, 2014, 07:20:13 PM
an update  and plus its was double update  XD…I hate my own bustle get in my way    :panic: only now had time to read its   :sweatdrop:

about the story…. Wow that a  great development between them  :lol:
i wonder how in the end their relationship will be  ;)...is that they will just got happiness or still there is challenges await for them (whose know)  :w00t:

anyway thank you for the great  update   :)

also don’t worry about how the way u write the story ..its was fine and great already… each author had different style of writing and that what make them unique and can differentiate between each other …also the reader can recognize each of author work based on how the wrote the story

so no need to worry anything..just keep going write the way u comfortable with   :)
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" NEWS
Post by: fausto on May 24, 2014, 02:02:55 AM
Hey guys, I'm back again, and I just wanted to say that the update is in the pervy section, it's a short one, yes, but it's because I promised Chi-chan---> :heart: (Kat Chichay) that I will be uploading today so :nervous But next i will be doing the epilogue so it will come fast. Please, be nice to me :nervous :nervous

http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=37680.new#new (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=37680.new#new)
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" CHAPTER 8 and 9!!
Post by: Kakeru15 on May 24, 2014, 03:43:20 AM
Can't access :( :banghead:
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" CHAPTER 8 and 9!!
Post by: ubulubulbilu on May 24, 2014, 03:47:46 AM
Can't access. Pls update this fic  :bow:
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" CHAPTER 8 and 9!!
Post by: ayudewi6 on May 24, 2014, 06:46:26 AM
OMG! Author-san I can't access that one  :cry: :cry:
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" CHAPTER 8 and 9!!
Post by: lezperv on May 24, 2014, 07:55:46 AM
Interesting sex scene... I feel weird seeing Minami talk dirty though...
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" CHAPTER 8 and 9!!
Post by: lossc on August 18, 2014, 09:06:33 PM
Wow!! It's a great fanfic!!
Btw, I'm a new reader :-)
It's awesome in reading your work!!
Takamina is so kakkoi !! I'm wondering how their dancing contest will be ~~
Looking forward !!
Thx for making this awesome piece !! :-D
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" NEWS
Post by: sastio13 on September 02, 2014, 01:37:39 PM
great story author-san! :twothumbs
i want more! i want more! i want more update! XD
umm... ano, i can't access pervy section...
so, would you tell me how to access pervy section? or do you have another link maybe, if you also post this story at another?
thankyou author-san! keep writing! :D
Title: Re: "That's not what you think it is" CHAPTER 8 and 9!!
Post by: Jkugang on May 31, 2016, 05:24:37 AM
Uwahhh! Just discovered this fic!
Author-san where are you? I'm still waiting on what will happen to their contest.
This fic is awesome! Please don't leave us hanging... :cry:
Hopping to read till the end! 😁 :D