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Title: [Atsumina/Atsuyuu/Kojiyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy LAST CHAPTER UPDATE!
Post by: maeda2708 on September 06, 2013, 09:36:00 AM
 :welcome :welcome :welcome I do not have the ability in the English language. then I use google translate. I hope you can still enjoy this story  :cry: :cry: :peace:

-I Love You But It’s Not So Easy- Chap 1

[Atsuko POV]

Why do I keep forgetting my appointment with Minami? Does my brain can’t remember about Minami even once? Is Minami not important in my life? I know that Minami always bothered me with her annoying way. But, can’t I even remember a promise? The only thing I can do now is to run as fast as I can and hoping that Minami is still waiting for me.

[END Atsuko POV]

[Minami POV]

No matter how much rain fell down from the sky. No matter how strong the storm blowing. No matter how long I have to wait, I’ll still be here until you come. Even though I have to wait for 100 years. I never know how I can get your attention romantically. I’m too nervous and ignorant, so I can only invite you to go somewhere.

[END Minami POV]

Minami is a beautiful, kind, cool, and quiet girl. She really likes sports and she lives with her parents. Minami likes Atsuko since 2 years ago, when they became their own school’s representatives at some Mathemathics competition. Atsuko is a beautiful, kind, spoiled, and cheerful girl. Atsuko hates Minami because she always bothering Atsuko. Everytime Minami invite Atsuko to go out, they always fought over some small matter. This resulted in Minami always left Atsuko alone and doesn’t care if Atsuko know her way home or not. But so far, Atsuko never get lost on her way home even though Minami left her alone in some strange places.

Atsuko has a girlfriend at school named Yuko. Yuko is a player. At school, she’s not just flirting with Atsuko, but also with other girls. Atsuko who really loves Yuko, doesn’t care about that at all. For all she knows , Yuko is hers and no one else’s.

Minami doesn’t have a girlfriend in her school, because Minami already give her heart to Atsuko. Minami knew that Atsuko already has a girlfriend, because she met the couple once while browsing for some clothes in a shop. Atsuko saw Minami, but
she just kept silent and pretended that she didn’t know her. But Minami who is indifferent, didn’t care and acted like she didn’t see anything.

“I’m sorry I’m late !!” Atsuko shouted while panting.
Minami only looked at Atsuko coldly.

“Sorry. I didn’t bring much water.” said Minami while she drink her water in front of Atsuko.
Atsuko who looks upset with Minami then take Minami’s water bottle forcibly. Atsuko feels like dying because she ran really fast to get there.

“If Yuko know what you did to me this time, maybe she will beat you..” said Atsuko while her breathing return to normal.

“Don’t talk too much. We better get going..” replied Minami coldly.

While they are walking, Atsuko keep asking where they are going, but Minami only keep silent and doesn’t respond at all.
Atsuko who is getting more upset with Minami’s action start talking.

“It’s been an hour since we start walking. But you don’t tell me where we are going. You’re wasting too much of my time. I better go home !!!” Atsuko shouted and make Minami face her.

They stopped on their tracks. Minami just looking at Atsuko coldly and didn’t say anything.

[Atsuko POV]

Idiot !!! Why do I still want to accompany her? I swear that I will never accompany her again no matter where she invites me.
I don’t want to.

[END Atsuko POV]

[Minami POV]

“Good Minami. Just keep act like this to Atsuko and she’ll end up hating you and never want to know you anymore. Then, you will lose the person that you love..” Minami said to herself.

[END Minami POV]

“Atsuko!!” said Minami and looking at Atsuko’s direction.

Atsuko who initially feels upset, now feels that Minami care about her and won’t let her go home alone. Atsuko answered Minami’s call with a smile.

“What?” replied Atsuko while smiling.

“Ummm...be careful.” Minami then turn around and walk away from Atsuko.
Atsuko who tought that Minami would walk her home, was left dumbfounded that Minami is actually leaving her. Atsuko feels more upset and really hates Minami.

Minami who walks away from Atsuko is wondering what made her mouth shut? She doesn’t want Atsuko to go home alone.

----

Minami’s phone rang right at 7 pm. Minami arrived in her house since 2 hours ago and now she is getting ready to study.

“Good evening.” Said Minami.

“Good evening. Is this Takahashi Minami?” asks a woman.

“Yes, it is.”

“I’m Atsuko’s mother. Can I ask you something?”

Minami was surprised. What happen to Atsuko that made her mother called her at this time? And how did Atsuko’s mom know Minami’s phone number?

“Sure. What is it?”

“Are you together with my daughter today? Because she hasn’t return to home yet..” Atsuko’s mom ask worriedly.
Minami is getting shocked even more. Because she feels like she’s the one who made Atsuko get lost in some places.

“We were together this afternoon. But soon we parted because we have different direction.” replied Minami who starting to get worried.

“If it doesn’t bother you, could you help me find out where Atsuko ?”

“Of course!” replied Minami firmly.

“Thank you so much. Sorry to bother you. Good night.”

“Good evening.”

Minami who feels guilty because she left Atsuko alone, went straight out of her room to look for Atsuko. First, Minami went back to the place where they parted and asked the people around there. But, Minami didn’t find anything. She then proceeds to look for Atsuko at her school, at the park, and at the shops where they’ve met before. Minami who feels desperate because she can’t find Atsuko, finally went to Atsuko’s house.

When Minami is walking to Atsuko’s house, she saw a car in front of Atsuko’s house. She saw Atsuko with Yuko in that car. Minami clearly saw that Yuko is trying to get close to Atsuko’s face. Minami who feels jealous then walk up towards the car, but then stopped immediately.

[Minami POV]

Wait. I don’t have the right to beat Yuko. She is Atsuko’s girlfriend. And I’m just nobody to Atsuko. I should be grateful because Atsuko is fine and went home with her girlfriend. Atsuko didn’t get lost. I better call Atsuko’s mother now and tell her that Atsuko will be home soon.

[END Minami POV]

----

It’s been 2 months Minami and Atsuko didn’t meet or contact each other. Minami no longer want to invite Atsuko out. Minami feels guilty because she made Atsuko’s mother worried about Atsuko’s whereabouts.
Minami’s phone suddenly rang. Atsuko’s the one who called her.

“Good da...” Minami didn’t have time to finish her words because Atsuko interrupted her.

“Meet me in the usual place now..” replied Atsuko weakly.

“N..now???!!!”

The call suddenly cut off. Minami is getting more confused about what happened. She immediately get ready to go to where Atsuko is.

When Minami arrived, she saw Atsuko is sitting down on one of the bench in the park while holding her phone.

“What is it, Atsuko?” Minami who had just arrived immediately sit beside Atsuko.

“.......” Atsuko didn’t answer.

“Hey, what happen?” asked Minami worriedly.

“.......” Atsuko didn’t answer.

“Are you suddenly mute?” asked Minami harshly.

“.......” Atsuko didn’t answer.

“You’re just wasting my time..” Minami get up, then suddenly Atsuko speak.

“I broke up with Yuko...” Atsuko answered weakly
Hearing that, Minami look at Atsuko and her heart start to beat fast because she’s very happy.

“Really?” Minami asked excitedly. Atsuko looking at her confused, Minami who is aware of it, then immediately ask Atsuko again while changing back her tone to her usual cold tone.

“Really?”

Atsuko sighed and tell her what happened. Minami sitting back next to Atsuko and listen to her story.

“If you already know that Yuko is a player, you should’ve prepared that she might cheated on you..” said Minami coldly.
[FLASHBACK]

“Atsuko, there’s something I need to tell you...” Yuko said nervously

“What?”

“Do you remember how long we have been dating?”

“Today is exactly one year!” replied Atsuko excitedly.

“No, it’s not. I mean, today we are not going to celebrate anything. Because...”

Atsuko still looking at Yuko with a smile while her brain is thinking about what Yuko is trying to say.

“Because I want to break up with you.. “ said Yuko while looking at the floor.
Atsuko’s smile looked strained and she doesn’t look fine. Yes, this day is supposedly become a historical day for Atsuko, because she is going to celebrate her first anniversary with Yuko.  But everything changed when Yuko asked her to break up and tell her everything.

“Once again, I’m sorry Atsuko. You can punish me for what happen..” Yuko pleaded while crying.

“God is the one who will avenge you, Yuko. I forgot ! Today I have an appointment with Minami. I’m going home first.  See you !”

Atsuko give Yuko one last smile before turned it to sobbing all the way home.
[END FLASHBACK]

-TBC-

Huwaeeehhh~!! hopefully there is hope for the next story. I will also learn to improve my English..  :peace:
Title: Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy
Post by: AshuraX on September 06, 2013, 09:59:39 AM
Sounds cool~ I don't know bout the story since I'm not much of an AtsuMina shipper. How about ya ask some of the people here if they could translate it? Or at least fix it. It's kinda hard to read ^^''
What's your main language anyway? I can help if it's Malay XD
Title: Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy
Post by: maeda2708 on September 06, 2013, 10:07:17 AM
Sorry. My english is very bad. Maybe you can translate it with google translate too xD
I'm Indonesian :|
Title: Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy
Post by: AshuraX on September 06, 2013, 10:54:02 AM
I can understand Indon a bit XD I mean, come on, we kinda use the same language, just a tad bit different! XD
I don't think using Google Translate will help you in any way...
Title: Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy
Post by: olive29 on September 06, 2013, 11:03:58 AM
Your english is quite..err,bad.

Sorry..

I'm Indonesian so I understand what you're trying to say. If you want to, I can help you to fix it..
Title: Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy
Post by: maeda2708 on September 06, 2013, 11:39:26 AM
I'm so sorry.. I'll fix this story  :cry:  :peace:
Thanks a lot.. T^T
Title: Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy
Post by: AlmiraTheGreat on September 06, 2013, 11:45:01 AM
I can help you if you want :)
I'm always happy to help someone out :)
Title: Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy
Post by: chichay12 on September 06, 2013, 11:51:09 AM
i want to help too!! XD
but im not that good in english *teehee~~
ok i just wait until someone help u with ur fic!!

another atsumina fic i hope?  :D
i cant wait! :on gay:
Title: Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy
Post by: AlmiraTheGreat on September 06, 2013, 11:58:45 AM

PS: See, someone already want to help you out for example the Sexiest  AlmiraTheGreat-chan~ And chichay~ :on slopkiss: *teasing mode rising up* :on gay:

Teaser Rukaecchi XD nyahaha
Title: Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy
Post by: maeda2708 on September 06, 2013, 12:10:53 PM
Minna, arigato..  :heart:
Sorry for bother your self..  :banghead:
I has sent a personal message to a few people. and I will soon to change this post .. m(_ _)m
Title: Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy
Post by: cisda83 on September 06, 2013, 12:24:25 PM
I can sort of understand the story line but the detail was very bad...

I could not quite follow the story at all.

May be you can post it in Indonesian

Then may be someone can translate it for you.

Yeah... I agreed with Ruka-San

You probably translated directly from Indonesian

Never translate a language directly word per word should be sentence per sentence

The result would be better than this.

And I'm confuse, are Yuko and Minami both girls?

Because the translate always describing Minami as a he not a she?

Anyway... Great 1st attempt.. Apart from the language barrier, you wrote a nice story

Can't wait to see the next chapter

Thank you

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy
Post by: AshuraX on September 06, 2013, 12:29:20 PM
See~? Everyone's english is okay so they'll help you out~
I'm a new guy here so I don't know much XD
Title: Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy
Post by: AlmiraTheGreat on September 06, 2013, 12:32:05 PM
See~? Everyone's english is okay so they'll help you out~
I'm a new guy here so I don't know much XD

Ashuraaa~ remember the AtsuYuu fic I promised to you? I might post it here in Jphip this month XD
Title: Reply to Almira's.
Post by: AshuraX on September 06, 2013, 12:57:37 PM
See~? Everyone's english is okay so they'll help you out~
I'm a new guy here so I don't know much XD

Ashuraaa~ remember the AtsuYuu fic I promised to you? I might post it here in Jphip this month XD

Almiraaaaaaaaaaaaa~!!!!

So we're gon get more AtsuYuu?! YaY!!!!!! I summon thee, ol' dancing cow!!!  :cow:

I'm busy with my own fics so I didn't have time for AtsuYuu thanks to my other fics. Thought this fic was turning to AtsuYuu but I guess that ain't happening XD I hope Almira will make it quickly QwQ
Title: Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy
Post by: maeda2708 on September 06, 2013, 01:00:01 PM
I've found the Indonesian people. and she said "it can finish for 3 days.." m(_ _)m
Now, I feel so happy. Thank you so much guys.
But, I still need your help.. ^D^v :peace: :P
Title: Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy
Post by: AshuraX on September 06, 2013, 01:05:55 PM
Hmmm? Help in what~? I can help if it's something concerning sweet sweet angel Acchan :lol:
Title: Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy
Post by: Kochiki on September 06, 2013, 06:05:12 PM
Hey!!~ I think i know where's this story going!!~ I think~~
-Though i'm on a confused state right now...But can't help it...
-Coz' we too need to improve our english skills~ And geez~
-I want to help too since i know a lil' bit Indonesia~ *thumbs up*
-I mean...I'm the same as Ashura-san!!~ I'll be glad to help too~
-Don't give up on it easily~ There's plenty of Indonesian in here...
-And they can totally speak english very well~ So i'm confident that you can~
-Such a nice story, improve your english a lil' bit and it's a~ll okay~~~

>Thank you for the nice chapter!!~ Can't wait for the next one!!~
Title: Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy
Post by: maeda2708 on September 10, 2013, 11:01:16 AM
Kyaaaa~~~!!! I has fixed this ff :3 Thank you so much Olive :3 :thumbsup
Title: Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy
Post by: cisda83 on September 10, 2013, 11:25:05 AM
Very nicely done there...

I like the translation and the storylines

Thank you for fixing it...olive

Can't wait to see the next chapter, maeda2708

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs


Title: Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy
Post by: blakwhite on September 10, 2013, 01:15:25 PM
waah
maeda2708-san are you really indonesian?  :shocked
if yes, maybe i can help you a little lol  :lol:
Title: Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy
Post by: maeda2708 on September 10, 2013, 03:22:13 PM
waah
maeda2708-san are you really indonesian?  :shocked
if yes, maybe i can help you a little lol  :lol:

Yaaa~~~!! Really need help from indonesian people *_*)v
Title: Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy
Post by: blakwhite on September 10, 2013, 03:51:32 PM
well :3
im from indonesia lol
Title: Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy
Post by: blakwhite on September 10, 2013, 04:09:17 PM
^ yeah im an indonesian  :P
btw what about you rukaecchi?  :?


yeah i dont want acchan using takamina to get yuko back  :(
and i want it will be atsumina  :D
Title: Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy
Post by: AshuraX on September 10, 2013, 04:28:51 PM
I'm on the 'Yuko realizing she made a mistake and will do everything in her power to get Acchan back and Acchan being the clueless girl she is, doesn't know what to do with the midgets' team~ XD
Title: Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy
Post by: cisda83 on September 11, 2013, 01:13:23 AM
I kind of thought the story is going to go to the path that AshuraX said in the previous comment.

Yeah... Team midgets... Chasing after Atsuko

Can be fun to see...

Well whatever it is... I'll enjoy reading it

Can't wait to see the next chapter

Thank you

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy
Post by: Kochiki on September 11, 2013, 10:51:25 AM
Well now, is it olive29-san who helped you??~ A big help indeed~
-Now i can understand the storyline more better than before~ So...Minami wa...
-Minami doesn't really hate Atsuko but she love her, right??~ Hrm...
-Oh my, just like the story before it get fixed, Yuko broke up with her...
-Maan...I'm confused right now cos which one i'll choose to be Atsuko's pair??~
-You know??~ I just love both of them, basically, i love all Atsuko's pair...
-More than Minami's~ Lol...Well anyway, thank you for fixing it!!~ Really...

-Plz update the next chapter soon!!~ I can't wait for the next one!!~ Hehehe~
Title: Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy
Post by: maeda2708 on September 14, 2013, 02:34:54 PM
-I Love You But It's Not So Easy- Chapter 2

atsuko’s tears fell down to her cheek. Minami seeing atsuko crying for the first time erase her tears with her  thumb
“Don’t cry..” said minami calm down

atsuko crying even more and lean her head on minami’s shoulder.
Minami’s heart beating so fast right now. Minami want to hug atsuko right now,
 but minami dont want atsuko think that she is taking advantage right now.

“Calm down. I’m here with you..” said minami calm down

“Minami..” Atsuko raised her head from her shoulder

“Yes?”

“promise me you will always stay with me..” atsuko wished

minami shocked. She was confused what to do. Her heart beating more faster with her looking at atsuko’s sad face

“but i have one condition”

“what?” atsuko ask confusedly

“promise me, you will always smile. And never  cry like this..”

“I promise minami..” atsuko answer with smile on her face

“I promise too atsuko.. Close your eyes”

Atsuko closed her eyes and minami lean closer to atsuko’s face. Minami’s brain going to explode but she tried to control her breathing to calm down. Minami’s lips going closer to atsuko, but she stopped, she think it was too fast for them. She scare atsuko will get mad with her action.

And then, minami trying her best to change her mind and kiss atsuko’s closed eyes.
Minami feel there is tears in there and minami can feel  atsuko’s eyes on her lips
Minami go straight and leaving atsuko in disbelief about her action

“Open your eyes.. I wish, you will keep your promise..” Minami  go straight and leaving atsuko in disbelief about her action


[MINAMI POV]

“what am i doing? Am i really kiss her? Oh god, is this just a dream? If this is was a dream please dont wake me up. But if its not a dream, please always be like this..” minami said on her mind

[END MINAMI POV]

without they knowing, yuko saw them from a far. From atsuko start crying on minami’s shoulder, and minami succes to make her calm. Yuko regret her action to end her relationship with atsuko. Yuko start to think  how to get atsuko back and never let go of atsuko from anybody

[Yuko POV]

Idiot! why i must  i suspecting atsuko and break up with her ? in fact i really love her and vice versa. In this one year  relationship i make a great mistake in my life. I must get atsuko back this night.

[END YUKO POV]

---

*tok tok tok*

yuko knock atsuko’s door house. Atsuko open the door and after she see yuko in front of her house, she imidietly closed the door. But she failed.but she failed before she closed the door Yuko held  the door with her foot.

“closed this door if you want me to live with one foot..”

“Go!!! I dont want to see you anymore!!!!” shouted atsuko

“i dont want to go until you let me explain everything..” wished yuko

“is your explanation this afternoon not enough? My heart already break..” shouted atsuko while crying

“okay, i will not force you. If you changed your mind, i’ll be in front of your house..”

yuko pull back her foot and sitting silently in front of atsuko’s house. The weather was very cold. Yuko forgot to bring her jacket. She feels like she got pierced by needle on her ribs, but that dont make yuko reduce her intention to waiting for atsuko until she change her mind.

Three hours passed and yuko sleep in front of atsuko’s house. Atsuko take a peek from her window and atsuko’s heart melt. She open the door and cover yuko’s body with blanket and hug yuko from back.
Yuko feels warm and start to wake up.

"thank you atsuko..”

“im just dont want to kill someone because the bad weather. Lets go inside.” Atsuko said and let go of her.
They going to living room and atsuko give yuko  a cup of hot tea.

“drink it..”

“Atsuko..”

“Yes?”

“still too cold in here..”

“I know that was just your naughty mind to get my hug..” answer atsuko  and go away from yuko.
But yuko pulled atsuko wrist and says with trembling lips.

“for god’s sake,it was so cold..”
Atsuko hearing change of yuko’s voice checking yuko’s body temperature and she know that yuko got high fever

“sorry i  have ignored you. I should let you in..” said atsuko while take care of her

“dont worry. This is my fault. If i only....” before yuko finished her words, atsuko cut her

“dont talk too much. Take a rest..” atsuko gave her best smile for yuko. Yuko seeing atsuko’s angelic smile, instantly crying. Atsuko going panic because yuko action.

“Whats wrong?” ask panicked atsuko
Im just regret because im already end our relationship

“i dont know what to do anymore. Im just regret because im already end our relationship..” said yuko while crying.

“I dont know what am i thinking this morning. If i just.... I cant live without you. I feel like a year is not a short time to be together with you. Too much things we go through..”

Atsuko dont dare to see yuko’s face. Atsuko feels it was make her very confused. Atsuko think why yuko that easily change her mind about a relationship?

“yuko, why you so easy playing with my heart? This morning you make my life ruined, but now you tried to fix that. Do i look dont seriously through relationship with you?” answer atsuko and seeing her face.

“Atsuko. I dont know what to do anymore to make you trust me that i regret with my action, im not the best, but i always do my best to not make you cry, if only this day i failed..”

“and, what do you want?” asked atsuko with brief while hold the tears
i want you to go back for me, just for me

“i want you to go back for me, just for me.. Please...” Wished  yuko while leaned her face to atsuko and now  their distance just and inch

“give me time. Its not that easy to accept you again. You already suspect me yuko. I dont know how much already you suspect me. dont know how much you already lied to me without me knowing. That’s all because i trust you. But look at you ? do you already trust me that my love is the best for you?”
atsuko said and slowly push yuko’s body away from her

“take a rest. Dont make your body recovering for a long time. tomorrow i will ask someone to take you home.” atsuko said and slowly push yuko’s body away from her
If i got accident because of this fever, trust me i will not haunting you

“No need. I drive my car. And i will go this night. Sorry to bother you. If i got accident because of this fever, trust me i will not haunting you.” Answer yuko and give atsuko smile

[YUKO POV]

What happen? Its not what im thinking. I think she will accept me back because i know she really love me. Is she not love me anymore? Or im just really hurting her? Even my face already near her face, she dont want to kiss me. Atsuko already changed. I have mistake to judge her, she is not like other woman that i got easily. Im really stupid

[END YUKO POV]

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Kyaaaaa!!!! Arigato for translate it, blakwhite  :kneelbow: :ding:
Title: Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy Chap 2
Post by: blakwhite on September 14, 2013, 02:44:38 PM
doita maeda2708 - san :3
sorry if my english and grammar really bad  :oops:
Title: Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy Chap 2
Post by: chichay12 on September 14, 2013, 03:53:27 PM
acchan!!! dont accept yuko!!
i want my atsumina now!! XD
update soon :on gay:
Title: Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy Chap 2
Post by: Feat on September 14, 2013, 04:09:17 PM
Think about Minami, Atsuko.  :cry:

Thanks for the update. Please continue.  :bow: :twothumbs
Title: Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy Chap 2
Post by: AshuraX on September 14, 2013, 04:13:00 PM
Is it just me or was Yuko kinda evil? Don't know if she really loves Atsuko or not...
Oh well, who cares.
Still going for the 'AtsuYuu' route!
*STANDS TALL WITH THE ATSUYUU SHIP*
Title: Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy Chap 2
Post by: Kochiki on September 14, 2013, 04:27:32 PM
Burh...So Yuko suspect something eh??~ Hrm....
-So...Guess that Yuko will keep chasing after Atsuko...
-Urh...I don't know what to say but i got one i think...
-Minami yossha!!~ You kissed her right??! Oh zyeah!!~
-Man...Do that thing more to her!!~ But...Feel sorry for Yuko..
-How will this go on after this??~ Really can't wait for the next one!!~

>Plz update soon!!~ And thank you to you too, blakwhite-san...For the awesomeness!!~
Title: Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy Chap 2
Post by: olive29 on September 14, 2013, 05:52:11 PM
Where's Nyannyan or Tomochin when you need them??

I want Nyannyan or Tomochin there and take Takamina away from Atsuko, then probably it will make Atsuko realized that she love Takamina  :grin:
Title: Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy Chap 2
Post by: lezperv on September 15, 2013, 09:49:47 PM
Honestly, I don't care how you start the story, but as long as Atsumina end up being together, I'm okay with that.

I've never really liked any other ship with Atsuko or Minami, I think they are perfect for each other so I like to keep it that way :)

Don't worry about your english too much. It may be a little confusing, but I can understand the story just fine. So please continue to update this story and the other one :D

p.s. This is really gonna be an Atsumina ending, right? Not Atsuyuu?
Title: Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy Chap 2
Post by: cisda83 on September 15, 2013, 11:03:29 PM
Ah... It's going to be a fight between Minami and Yuko for Atsuko affection...

What kind of things would they do to obtain Atsuko...?

Can't wait to see it...

But I do hope there would be other characters that going to disturb this fight

Like Haruna or Tomochin

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy Chap 2
Post by: maeda2708 on September 22, 2013, 11:02:09 AM
Kyaaaa~~!! I'm back! :3 Thanks for your attention guys~ m(_ _)m
Sorry for late update cause I was visited JKT48 Theater ._. And bought CD KFC for event handshake ._.

I LOVE YOU BUT IT'S NOT SO EASY [CHAP 3] [ATSUMINA/ATSUYUU/KOJIYUU]

(Yuko POV)

Why is it too late for me to realize that I love Atsuko? Why I feel broken hearted now when she get close to other people? Why I need her just when she’s not mine anymore? Why I really love Atsuko? I really miss her. ARGH !! I will never get her back if I don’t ask someone’s help.

I have to call someone who knows everything about Atsuko. Hmmmm, but wait?! I never allowed her to get close to someone else except me and Bakamina.
ARRRRRGGGGGHHH!!!

*Yuko ruffled her hair* *Suddenly she remember someone* AH! I know someone !! NyanNyan!! *Yuko grins*

(End of Yuko’s POV)

(Flashback)

-Yuko’s house –

“Yuu-chan..I don’t know what’s wrong with our relationship for this past few months. But I felt like you don’t have time anymore to be with me..”

“What do you mean NyanNyan? I’m always be by your side...”

“I know you will always be by my side. But, what I mean is, your mind and your heart is not for me anymore. You always talking about Atsuko..” Haruna said sadly.

“That’s just your jeaolusy. I don’t like that. But, I always talk about another women, didn’t I ? Why are you feeling strange? “

“But..” Haruna looked down.

“What, NyanNyan?” asked Yuko while she lifted her face.

“Last night you said her name while you’re asleep. This is the first time you said another woman’s name besides my name..” Haruna started to cry.

Yuko didn’t realized it. She is shocked. Her eyes widen. Yuko felt very bad because she betrayed Haruna’s heart. She didn’t know what to do. But, Yuko can’t fool her heart anymore. She loves Atsuko too. Now, she loves Atsuko more than Haruna.

Yuko is in the same school with Atsuko. But, Haruna is in the same school with Minami. So, when she was at school, she always flirt with Atsuko, and Yuko never told her that she already has a girlfriend.

“Yuu-chan, I never ask you to tell me something. And I will never ask you to choose between me or Atsuko either. I will go away from you. And...” Haruna breathed deeply.

“And I want to break up. I don’t want to disturb your relationship with another woman. I want to be free and I don’t want to protect my feeling anymore. Thank you for this year. You can come to me if you ever need my help. I will always help you..” Then Haruna walked away and left. Yuko still couldn’t say anything.

(End of Flashback)

-In a Park 12:10 afternoon –

(Atsumina moment)

“Hello, Minami..” said Atsuko with her sweet smile that make Minami feel calm.

“Yes Atsuko..you’re 10 minutes late from the appointment..” replied Minami coldly while she hold her happy feeling inside her heart.

“Don’t be so excessive. It’s just 10 minutes. Yuko waited for me for many hours, but she never said anything..” said Atsuko. She then sit besides Minami while frowning. Minami felt heart broken when she heard Atsuko talked about Yuko. But, she doesn’t show it. She has to make Atsuko happy being with her and not make her go away like she always do.

“Even if you come here tomorrow or one year later, I will always be here. I don’t care if I’m starving or thirsty. When it is raining or storming. Life or dead. I will always wait for you..” said Minami coldly but truly from her heart.

“What did you say?” asked Atsuko while looking at Minami. Atsuko looks at Minami with cynical gaze. But Minami doesn’t look at her. She just look straight ahead.

“Nothing. Let’s go for a walk. We can find some ice cream to eat. Today’s weather is so hot..” replied Minami as she stand up from the bench.

Atsuko and Minami walk to find an ice cream shop. They buy 2 ice cream. Atsuko is eating her ice cream with cute expression plastered on her face. Until she got some ice cream on her cheek. Minami who saw her cute behaviour, laughs a little.

“Can’t you eat your ice cream correctly?” Minami then wiped the ice cream on Atsuko’s cheek with her thumb.

“Minami..”

“Yes?”

“Why are you so romantic? Hmmm...no!! Sorry, I mean, why are you so romantic sometime? But you always being sulky..”

“I’m just used to being cold to everyone. But, I will always work hard to be the best only for you.” Minami give her best smile. It was rare to see her smile. Usually she will give a cold face.

“Are you trying to flirt with me” Atsuko give cynical gaze to her.

“I’m just trying to be the best. I don’t care if you consider it as flirting or whatever. I just want to be the best.”

“Do you realized it was so sweet?” asked Atsuko with a red face.

“No. I’m not sweet talking. Because the sweet one is your smile.. Atsuko, I’m hungry. Let’s go for lunch..” said Minami while walkina in front of Atsuko.

“Are you trying to make me fall in love with you, Minami?” said Atsuko in her mind.

“Hey, Atsuko!! Don’t just sit there. I’m starving already !!” shouted Minami.

“Yes!” replied Atsuko while running towards Minami.

-Haruna’s House – 2 pm

*knock knock* *knock knock*

Yuko is knocking Haruna’s door house several times. Not long after that, someone finally open the door for her. Her face seems familiar, and Yuko knows the girl who opened the door for her is Haruna. Yes, someone who ever been her.
Haruna was shocked when she saw Yuko. Her eyes widen. It’s just like a dream. Yuko, the person she loves come to her house.  It’s already a year they didn’t meet each other.

“Hi..” Yuko smiled nervously

“Hi..”

“Long time no see, NyanNyan..” said Yuko while smiling and showing her squirell face. Haruna feels so happy because Yuko still call her NyanNyan.

“Yes. It’s been a year we didn’t meet. Please, come in, Yuko..”

“Sorry for intruding..”

Yuko look around her house and she found that her house is quiet. She remember when Haruna told her that her parents always back home late at night. That’s why Haruna always stay over at Yuko’s house so she won’t feel lonely.

“Please, sit.” Haruna go to the kitchen to take a drink.

(Yuko’s POV)

There’s not much changes here. It’s still the same. Just the frames on the wall is increasing. I still remember the first time I kissed NyanNyan. That was when I confessed my feeling. In this house. In this couch. It was raining outside and I had to stay here. Because NyanNyan’s house was so quite, we did something more than kissing and..ah, wait!! Why did I remember my memories with NyanNyan? I’m here to ask for her help !! Arghh!!

(End of Yuko’s POV)

“Please, drink it..”

“Thank you..”

(Haruna’s POV)

I still can’t believe that Yuko is here !! Right in front of me now. It feels like a dream. I try to pinch my arm. But, still not change. It’s real !! Yes !! Yuko is in front of me now. But, why she’s here? Does she needs help?

(End of Haruna’s POV)

“So, why did you come here?” asked Haruna with a smile and then sit besides Yuko.

“Hmmm...ano.. I’m confused where do I start..” Yuko rubbed her back neck.

“Just say it. Don’t be nervous..”

“Okay. Do you remember when you said that you will help me anytime?” asked Yuko while looking at her eyes.

“Yes. Of course. How can I forget. So, what do you want?”

“I need your help to..” Yuko breathed deeply.

“To..to..to bring me back together with Atsuko...”

Haruna who still has feeling for Yuko feels like her heart broken into pieces. She believes it’s just a nighmare. Yuko is not in front of her. Yuko doesn’t truly visit her and asks for her help. Haruna just keep silent.

“NyanNyan..are you alright?? Please, answer me?? Do you want to help me?” asked Yuko with pitiful face. But Haruna still ignores her and doesn’t respond.

“NyanNyan..please, answer me..”

“Ummm...Yuko..” NyanNyan finally said.

“Yes?”

“I.. I.. Yes, of course I will help you. I can’t reject your wish for my help. Hahaha..” Haruna hides her feelings in front of Yuko. Because she knows that Yuko’s happiness is her happiness.

“Thank you so much, NyanNyan. I think you don’t want to help me. Just for your info, I really love Atsuko. I love Atsuko more than I love myself. Thank you so much NyanNyan..” Yuko then hugged Haruna. But Haruna doesn’t hug her back, because, if she did it, it will broke her heart more.

-------------TBC------------

sorry if i make some charachter so evil or look like that. but pls stay calm and pls enjoy this story. because i will make happy ending. with their respective couple. and with romantic way  :wriggly: :wriggly: :ding:
Title: Re: [Atsumina/Atsuyuu/Kojiyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy Chap 3 ~09-22-13~
Post by: abcari on September 22, 2013, 11:11:44 AM
What the... my kojiyuu feelings ;A; poor Haruna, Yuko you are so bad here ;A; just move on and understand your feelings, I know you love Haruna not Acchan ;A;
Title: Re: [Atsumina/Atsuyuu/Kojiyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy Chap 3 ~09-22-13~
Post by: AshuraX on September 22, 2013, 11:28:09 AM
Yuko you heartbreaker...
If for some reason Acchan doesn't like Yuko back even though Yuko's chasing her so much, then I don't know what to say....
Title: Re: [Atsumina/Atsuyuu/Kojiyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy Chap 3 ~09-22-13~
Post by: Takahashi Atsuko on September 22, 2013, 12:23:30 PM
Nyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah~~~~ this fic is soooo puuuuuuurfect!!!!! i  love it :D
Please update soon  :mon angel:
Title: Re: [Atsumina/Atsuyuu/Kojiyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy Chap 3 ~09-22-13~
Post by: Yuki13 on September 23, 2013, 02:43:49 AM
I think this is the first time I read a fanfic of Kojiharu being the one chasing Yuko.
but Yuko is a jerk in here and very insensitive about Kojiharu's feelings  :lol:
thanks for the fanfic. Please update soon!!
Title: Re: [Atsumina/Atsuyuu/Kojiyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy Chap 3 ~09-22-13~
Post by: Kochiki on September 23, 2013, 02:39:09 PM
*sniff* *sniff* ...Y-Y-Yuko....You're so meany!!~
-KojiYuu...Poor Haruna, i can't read this again...
-Lol!!~ Just kidding!!~ I'm not at my limit yet~
-But if i'm at it, i'll stop reading it coz it's heartbreaking...
-What'll happen to AtsuMina and Haruna next??~

>Plz update it soon, i can't wait for the next one!!~
Title: Re: [Atsumina/Atsuyuu/Kojiyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy Chap 3 ~09-22-13~
Post by: maeda2708 on October 02, 2013, 12:41:08 PM
-I Love You But It’s Not So Easy- Chap 4

At the park – 7 PM

(Atsumina Moment)

“Minami..”

“Yeah?”

“Can we go home now? I’m already satisfied playing in this park…” said Atsuko sleepily.

“Sure. I’ll walk you home.”

“You don’t have to. I can go home with…” suddenly Atsuko stopped her talking. Because Atsuko used to go home with Yuko, but now it’s impossible for her to ask Yuko to pick her up, because there’s nothing between them anymore.

“Ummm…I mean, sure, Minami. We can go home together”.
During their walk to home, Minami keeps walking behind Atsuko and they didn’t talk to each other. Suddenly, Atsuko stops walking.

“What’s wrong, Atsuko? Why did you stop?” asked Minami.

“Stop acting like you’re my bodyguard. Just walk besides me.” Said Atsuko while holding Minami’s hand.
Minami who seems shocked with what Atsuko did, open her eyes widely. She really wanted to slap her cheek and hoped that it wasn’t a dream.

“S…s…sure…” said Minami nervously.
Half an hour later, they finally arrived in front of Atsuko’s house.

“We finally arrived…can you let go of my hand?” asked Minami coldly.

“Oh…sorry, I thought you like it, because you always tried to tease me in the park.” Atsuko then let go of Minami’s hand and walk into her house without waiting for Minami’s reply.

[Minami POV]

Great, Minami. You never be the best person for Atsuko. You always ruined your day with Atsuko with your cold speech or action. ARGH !!
I want to give up to being a romantic person. Because speak coldly or act coldly is in my character.

[END OF Minami’s POV]

When Minami started to walk away, she suddenly tripped. When she saw what made her tripped, she realized that her shoelace was untied. When she is busy fixing her shoelace, suddenly…

*chu*

There’s a pair of warm and soft lips that touched her right cheek. Yes, it was Atsuko. Minami didn’t realized that Atsuko was out of her house and was next to her. Suddenly, Minami became frozen like an ice. Shortly after Atsuko kissed Minami’s cheek quickly, Atsuko said…

“Thank you very much for today, Minami…just be yourself. Don’t try to be better than anyone. Good night…” Atsuko then ran into her house.

Minami still frozen in her spot for a few seconds.

“Atsuko…what’s the meaning of this? Are you finally get over Yuko??”  said Minami while rubbing her right cheek and feeling the warm of Atsuko’s lips.


----------


[KojiYuu Moment]

“Yuko, can I hang up now? It’s already midnight…” said Haruna sleepily on the phone.

“But NyanNyan, there are a lot of things I wanted to tell you…” whined Yuko.

“……”

“NyanNyan?”

“………”

“Ahhh…okay. You sound tired. Good night, NyanNyan. Mmmm… I..” Yuko took a deep breath.

“I…miss you…”
Yuko ends her conversation with Haruna because she thought that Haruna is already asleep. Finally, Yuko decides to sleep.

[Haruna POV]

What is going on in your mind, Yuko? I don’t really fall asleep. I just don’t have any energy left to talk to you. But, what do you mean that you missed me? Don’t you realize that it will only hurt my heart? If you don’t love Atsuko, maybe I’ll tell you that I missed you too. Whatever. There’s no use for me to hope to get you back. I’ll be happy if you’re happy.

[End of Haruna’s POV]

-Saturday afternoon, in front of Haruna’s school-

Today Yuko picked up Haruna to accompany her to buy some things like what they had discussed last night.

“Hey, look. Is that Haruna’s girlfriend?” “Ah…is that the person that Haruna always mentioned before?” “They already broke up, didn’t they?” “Are they together again?” “Haruna is really good at picking up girlfriend” (some girls whispered when they saw Haruna walked towards Yuko)
Minami who stood right beside the girls acted indifferent as usual. She didn’t look around her. For her, Haruna is not her business. Minami hurriedly walked towards the station where she and Atsuko would go home together.

“Sorry I’m late Yuko..”

“It’s okay. Let’s go…” Yuko then opened her car door for Haruna

“So…where are we going, Yuko?”

“I don’t know…I guess you know that I’m not good at picking up present, NyanNyan…”

“Yeah. I already know that. So, that’s why you asked for my help, right?”

“That’s right ! So, where are we going?”

“There !” Haruna pointed at a supermarket.
 
When they arrived, Yuko opened Haruna’s door for her and they walked inside. Haruna is the one who take over the trip this time. Haruna looks focused while looking around her and looking for the things that Yuko should give to Atsuko. Yuko just followed Haruna’s order.

“NyanNyan..”

“Yeah?” replied Haruna shortly while picking up some apples.

“It’s been an hour and we already bought a lot of food. What will we give her?”

“Some meal and you have to cook it by yourself.”

“Okay. Then, can I ask you one more question?”

“Sure…” Haruna is still busy picking up some fruits.

“Why are you so eager to help me?”

“Because I want you to be happy…” answered Haruna shortly as she didn’t realized what she just said because she still picking up some fruits.

“What do you mean?” asked Yuko confusedly.

“Yeah. Seeing you happy and looking at your smile is the happiest moment in my life and-“ suddenly Haruna stopped talking and turned around to look at Yuko.

“Are you listening?” asked Haruna nervously.

“No. I just want to ask you to repeat it again, because I didn’t hear what did you said.”

“Oh. Hahaha, yeah… I’m eager to help you because I want us to go home soon because I have a lot of homework that is due tomorrow…” Haruna tried to act normal and laughed.

“Really?” teased Yuko.

“Yes, of course. Do I look like I lied?” asked Haruna while walking around to search for more food.

“Fine. If you’re not lying, then tell me. Since when did your school doesn’t have a day off?  Did you forget that tomorrow is Sunday?” teased Yuko.

Haruna suddenly stopped walking and turned around to look at Yuko.

“If you keep asking, I’ll go home by taxi !!” threatened Haruna

“Hahahahaha…don’t be mad, NyanNyan. It’s too funny. And I won’t allowed you to go home alone.”

“Then shut up and follow my order.”

“Roger!” said Yuko while saluting like an army

[YUKO POV]

Maybe NyanNyan didn’t realized that I heard everything clearly and now I don’t understand who is the one who played with someone’s heart? Did NyanNyan still love me? But, didn’t she tried to open her heart for this past year? I’m getting more confused with my feelings. Who is the one that I love? Atsuko? But, I don’t know if she loves me or not. Or NyanNyan? But, I don’t know if she still loves me or not. ARGH !! Why love must be complicated? I just want to fall in love with one of them and loved back. I don’t want to fall in love with them. God, please help me to stop this and choose one of them for forever..

[END Of Yuko’s POV]

------TBC------

ERGH!! It's so cute right?  :onioncheer:
And please leave your comment for next chapter  :ding: :kneelbow:
Title: Re: [Atsumina/Atsuyuu/Kojiyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy Chap 4 ~10-02-13~
Post by: Tam_atsu on October 02, 2013, 12:59:08 PM
nice chapter! :thumbsup kojiyuu scenes  :love:
maybe yuuchan should already choose haruna.. :inlove: :lol: but i also like atsuyuu moments lol
Title: Re: [Atsumina/Atsuyuu/Kojiyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy Chap 4 ~10-02-13~
Post by: chiqinna on October 02, 2013, 01:00:59 PM
It's really cute~~~~  :luvluv1: :shifty: :luvluv2: :shy1: :shy2: :nya:
Atsumina moment is soooo cute~
Minami is better for Acchan only!  :on woohoo:

and Yuko,you're just confuse~ it's NyanNyan!!! just go for NyanNyan!!!
and make lovey dovey moments~  :wriggly:
thanks for the update maeda2708-san!!  :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: [Atsumina/Atsuyuu/Kojiyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy Chap 4 ~10-02-13~
Post by: Kochiki on October 02, 2013, 01:08:37 PM
Aw~ It is cute~ Totally cute and relaxing chapter~
-Lol...Walking behind Atsuko as if she's her bodyguard...
-Well at least, that kiss on the cheek~~ I-Is still enough~
-Oh my, the KojiYuu is going to the supermarket and...
-That was simply enjoyable to read...Harh...I wonder...
-I wonder what'll happen next??~ Next should be interesting??~

>Haha. Maybe, but this chapter is interesting too!!~ Plz update soon!!~ Huehue.
Title: Re: [Atsumina/Atsuyuu/Kojiyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy Chap 4 ~10-02-13~
Post by: blakwhite on October 02, 2013, 01:19:55 PM
nice chap maeda-san  :thumbsup
hope you will update soon  :D
Title: Re: [Atsumina/Atsuyuu/Kojiyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy Chap 4 ~10-02-13~
Post by: Yuki13 on October 03, 2013, 06:08:57 PM
Please update on Yuko-Jerk and Haruna's dilemma!!
I really like this kind of story!! unrequited love!!
Title: Re: [Atsumina/Atsuyuu/Kojiyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy Chap 4 ~10-02-13~
Post by: maeda2708 on October 06, 2013, 10:40:30 AM
I Love You But It's Not So Easy - Chap 5

-At Yuko’s Apartement-

“NyanNyan..What will we cook for tomorrow?” ask yuko while put the ingredients to refrigerator

“what food Atsuko likes to eat?” ask NyanNyan while looking at recipe’s book

"Ice cream, chocolate, and-"

“enough. I already know. You must make chocolate cake and buy some ice cream...”

“Roger! I will send her an e-mail. So, when we must meet?”

“tommorow afternoon”

To: Atsuko
Hi~ how do you do? Long-time no  chit chat with you. I hope you can go to my house tomorrow afternoon.
Thanks 

[Yuko POV]

Tonight nyan nyan will stay over at my apartment because tomorrow she will help me to cook. But, why is my heart beating so fast?  It’s even faster than i see atsuko. My lips feel like freezing. I don’t know what to do. Must i sleep on the couch ? Or by her side? Oh god, please don’t make thing more difficult and make me look like a jerk.

[End Of Yuko's POV]

"Yuko.."

“ah? yes? what’s wrong?”

“why you out of daze? Are you already sleepy?

“Uuumm, yes. I’m already sleepy. I will take a bath first then go to sleep. If you wanna take a bath, you can use another bathroom, an go sleep at my room. Remember, in my room. Not on the couch..”

Haruna just nodded and smile, and then Yuko walks to her room

After a while, haruna go to yuko’s room. She sees yuko already fallen asleep. Haruna look around at yuko’s room. It’s been a long time since she last came to her room. That’s nothing change. When haruna already satisfied to look around yuko’s room, she takes a look at yuko’s laptop that still on.

“she always go to sleep with laptop still turned on because playing game..” said haruna

*Haruna closing program*
Suddenly haruna shocked after seeing her desktop background.

(https://fbcdn-sphotos-h-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-prn2/v/1374124_666967803321823_624513931_n.jpg?oh=0e127758a72f794faa70b1ed0bd51327&oe=5252C47F&__gda__=1381221651_89783e28dea42b3cfe2027ab0bec635e)

[Haruna POV]

I don’t know what’s on yuko’s mind. Who is her love one? me? Or atsuko? She already works hard to get atsuko back, but look! She still saves our photo together. Is yuko are player? If i always protect my feeling like this, i will hurt myself.  Its better i find her replecement. Sooner or later yuko will make me more suffer.

(suddenly Yuko’s phone ringing and got 1 new e-mail. Haruna quickly get yuko’s phone so she not wake up from her sleep)

From: Atsuko
Yes. Of course. I will come over. goodbye

(after she reading e-mail from atsuko, haruna just staring at Yuko’s hanphone screen and make her more shocked)

(https://fbcdn-sphotos-h-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-prn2/v/1374284_666967779988492_1783484753_n.jpg?oh=2b6c5254f2f49a6d6b578ca86e8c6a49&oe=5252E9AD&__gda__=1381246585_9592ffb0d5d2a1c126e728f29ab93998)

Oh god. Enough. I dont want to hurt myself because love yuko. I must find someone to become her replacement. Because yuko is yuko. She is not change or never change. Its better for me go to sleep and hope tommorow will be better.

[End Of Haruna's POV]

-10 am- -at bus stop-


To: Minami
Come to bus stop we always meet. I will wait you for 10 minutes, if you late, i will never want to know you again!!


Minami, who just want to relax at her home directly change her chlothes and go to the bus stop. The distance from minami’s house to bus is not near. She needs 30 minutes to get there by walking. If she go with bus, she will got there around 20 minutes. Whithout thinking, she go straight away with running as fast as she can.

“minami, becarefull.. dont go back home at midnight..”

“yes, mom..”

From afar atsuko can see someone  is running so fast while grab her chest. Yes. That was minami while control her breathing.

“9 minute 28 second. You almost late..” said atsuko then stopping her stopwatch

“you are really crazy atsuko..” minami said while bending and grab her chest to control her breathing, but, looks like she failed to control her breathing and suddenly she fall

Atsuko really panicked and trying to wake her up.

“Minami! Minami! Wake up. Are you just kidding? Or you really passed out? Or are you-“

Without thinking atsuko suddenly grab minami’s chest to tell her heartbeat. And the result is her heart still beating but out of control. Atsuko look around her, and there is so quite. There are no other people around except her and minami. Then atsuko breathing deeply, and try to give minami CPR. But when her lips was almost near minami’s, suddenly.....

“stay calm atsuko. Im fine. Can you go back a little and let me control my breath calmly?” minami stopped atsuko’s movement to give her a CPR with hold her shoulder with her hand. Then atsuko is almost crying, stay back her body from minami

Atsuko back sto sit on bench at the bus stop and look down sadly.

Not long after that minami success to control her breath and sit beside atsuko that still look down.

“What’s wrong? What’s wrong with you?” ask minami while staring at atsuko

Atsuko just shook her head
“okay. Then why you call me to come here this fast? Is there something troubling you?”

Atsuko just shook her head

“are you still talking to me?”

Atsuko just nodded her head

“if you still talking to me, look at me. Dont look down like that..”

“if you dont want to see my face,  for what i have been here..” minami said while standing from her seat, but atsuko succes to hold her with grabbing her hand

“i need your help minami. I need you. Only you can protect me. I need you. Please dont go away..” atsuko trying to hold back her tears. Meniami hearing that back to sit by her side and always grab  atsuko’s hand that still looking down.

“i will never go. I will always by your side.i will always come to you when you need me, dont care if it was midnight or im still wounded, i will come. And i will always protect you.i will do anything for you atsuko..”

Atsuko start to lift her head and look at minami
 
"Minami.."

“yes?”

"I love you.."

atsuko kissed her lips soflty. But that was just short kiss. Then atsuko and minami smiling each other.

“ok princess. So, can you tell me what make you to call me to come here?”

“do you want to accompany me? This afternoon I make an appointment with someone. And i think, i don’t fell comfortable if i go alone.”

“of course. Let’s go!”

“wait!”

“what’s wrong?”

“dont let go of my hands except we already in front of my house..”

“I think today you are going crazy..”

“im crazy because i don’t want to let go of you baka..”

“okay okay. Let's go!”

-----TBC-----

the next chapter will be the last. And there will be something unexpected hahahaha  :onioncheer:
and please leave your comment  :kneelbow:
Title: Re: [Atsumina/Atsuyuu/Kojiyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy Chap 5 ~10-06-13~
Post by: olive29 on October 06, 2013, 11:19:19 AM
Yuko's replacement??

I vote Mariko-sama for Yuko's replacement !!!
Title: Re: [Atsumina/Atsuyuu/Kojiyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy Chap 5 ~10-06-13~
Post by: chiqinna on October 06, 2013, 11:47:34 AM
LOL I go for Juju!!!  :lol:
Atsumina was fast...so they are together now?
aaaaaaaaaaand when they arrived Haruna saw Minami and then Haruna thinking of making Minami as Yuko's replacement but then Atsuko declared her and Minami love~  :heart: and then Yuko is sad becoz Acchan found another love then she started to think oh crazy love~
What am I doing?!  :lol:
Okay I hope Yuko realize her true feelings before Haruna found her replacement!  :D
nice update!!!  :inlove: :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: [Atsumina/Atsuyuu/Kojiyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy Chap 5 ~10-06-13~
Post by: olive29 on October 06, 2013, 11:53:24 AM
LOL I go for Juju!!!  :lol:

But I can't think of Juju and NyanNyan together..
Looks like their relationship is like a mother-daughter relationship.. :grin:
Title: Re: [Atsumina/Atsuyuu/Kojiyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy Chap 5 ~10-06-13~
Post by: chiqinna on October 06, 2013, 11:56:07 AM

But I can't think of Juju and NyanNyan together..
Looks like their relationship is like a mother-daughter relationship.. :grin:

Hmmmmmhow about Sister's love?! lol~ nonsense~  :lol:
Title: Re: [Atsumina/Atsuyuu/Kojiyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy Chap 5 ~10-06-13~
Post by: Tam_atsu on October 06, 2013, 01:03:53 PM
OH NO NYAN -NYAN YOU DONT NEED TO FIND ANY REPLACEMENT CAUSE SOONER OR LATER YUUCHAN WILL BE YOURS!!  :banghead: :banghead: XD :heart: :heart: yuko is just confuse right now  :cry:
Title: Re: [Atsumina/Atsuyuu/Kojiyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy Chap 5 ~10-06-13~
Post by: Tam_atsu on October 15, 2013, 02:24:54 PM
patiently waiting for the update  :roll: :roll: :)
Title: Re: [Atsumina/Atsuyuu/Kojiyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy Chap 5 ~10-06-13~
Post by: maeda2708 on October 15, 2013, 04:24:11 PM
patiently waiting for the update  :roll: :roll: :)

Kyaaaa!! I'm so sorry. I'll update soon! I promise m(_ _)m
Title: Re: [Atsumina/Atsuyuu/Kojiyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy Chap 5 ~10-06-13~
Post by: maeda2708 on October 26, 2013, 02:49:57 PM
YUHUUUU~~~!!! LAST CHAPTER!!! \o/

I Love You But It's Not So Easy [Last Chapter]

-At Yuko’s Apartement-


RING~

Yuko’s bell room rang. Not long after that someone open the door
Yes, the one who open the door is yuko. But she was not directly greet the guest, she felt shocked  because there is minami with the guest. And minami is shocked too. She didn’t expect if atsuko will invite her to yuko’s apartement. Who knows what on atsuko’s mind until she took minami here.

[Minami POV]

What happen here? Why is she invite me here? Is she want to make yuko jealous? But why must be the victim? Don ' t atsuko appreciate my feelings? I feel i want to running away from here.

*minami tried to release her hand from atsuko’s. But but atsuko is more stronger to hold her*

Oh god! Why is she strengthen her  grasp?! Is she tried convinced me if this will be fine? ERGH! What’s on your mind atsuko?!

[End Of Minami’s POV]

“Hey,Yuko. Who’s coming?” suddenly there is another sound from behind yuko, and it was haruna.

Minami shocked for the 2nd time because haruna in the same apartement with yuko. And haruna is more shocked because she cant believe if minami come to yuko’s apartement with atsuko while hand in hand with atsuko like a couple.

“yuko, they cant go in if you just standing there..” said haruna breaking the ice between them

 “O-Oh. Haik! Come in..”

“thank you”

Atsuko come in to yuko’s apartement like usual. She is smiling like everything is okay and like the problem between her and yuko is never happen. But minami not. She still confused about the situation, and she uncomfortable to hand in hand in front of yuko.

“please sit. Me and yuko will be at the kitchen for a while, if you need something just call me..” haruna said with beautiful smile. She and yuko continue to make their cake at the kitchen and leaving minami and atsuko at living room.

“atsuko, uuuumm can you let go of my hand?” ask minami while trying hard to let go of atsuko’s hand.

“cannot..”

“oh come on atsuko. I never see an angel do cruel thing. I just want to go to the toilet..”

“you lied..”

“ERGH!! WHATEVER!!”

Minami really want to go to the toilet. Finnaly she force her hand to let go of atsuko’s hand and go to the kitchen to get permission from yuko yo go to the toilet at her apartement.

After minami finish with her business, she come back to living room and see atsuko sitting alone while busy playing with her phone. Minami tried to act calm and sit beside her while looking at her.

“Atsuko...”

“............”

“Atsuko...”

“..........”

“okay. Im sorry to make you angry like this. Im sorry to break my promise to always hand in hand with you until we go home. Im sorry because-“

*chuu*

Atsuko quickly short kiss her lips and back continuing playing with her phone.

“minami, please stay calm. Im still concentrating  in this game. I dont want to lose just because you always talking..”
Minami stay frozen because atsuko is kissing her again. Minami feel her heart beat is beating really fast. She feel like she need an oxygen tank and some slap on her cheek to convince her if it real or just a sweet dream.

Not long after that, yuko and haruna come while bring them a chocolate cake and vanilla ice cream.

“sorry to take a long time..”

Yuko bring a few glasses of vanilla ice cream and strawberry. Haruna bring a few of slices choco cake. And they put it on the table.

“lets eat..” haruna invite them. Atsuko quickly stop playing with her phone, and minami snapped from her daydream.

“Itadakimasu~!” they said together.

After they finishing  dish on the table, haruna brought that dirty dishes into the kitchen, originally Yuko wants to help, but haruna not allow it, so yuko can accompany atsuko in the living room. Because this event for yuko and atsuko.

“Uuumm... Atsuko...” said yuko with nervous.

“yes?” answer atsuko with smile. Yes, just that make minami jealous.

“how are you doing? It looks like you already find a new lover..”said yuko teasingly to remove minami’s cold glare to her.

“im fine, what about you? Hahaha we are not a lover. We just a friend. Right minami?”

Minami surprised with what atsuko said. But she just nodded her head as an answer.

Atsuko and yuko keep talking with each other but minami just keep quite.

[Atsuko POV]

Forgive me minami. not my intention to not to consider you more than friend. But im cant lied if we really just a friend. You never ask me if i want to be your girlfriend or not. Even already kissing each other, even we already said about love. But i need your question. I hope you relize it..

[End Of Atsuko’s POV]

After a while, haruna comes.

“ah! Atsuko, minami, pleas meet haruna..

“Yoroshiku~” Haruna bowing her body

“so, who is she? I she your girlfriend?” answer atsuko to tease yuko

“hahaha. She is just a friend..”
When hearing her answer haruna just can smiling while she feels pain in her heart. They are just keep talking until they dont relize the sun is ready to set atsuko and minami ask permission to go home.

“thank you for today yuko. I hope haruna will gave you a private lesson to cook, and you guys will invite me and minami next time hahaha..”

“Hahaha of course. Okay. Goodbye atsuko.. minami..”

“goodbye..” answer atsuko and minami

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-on the way home atsuko and minami-

“okay, we already at my home. Thank you for today minami. Sorry to trouble you. See you tommorow..” atsuko bow to minami. When atsuko want to go to her house, minami succes to make her stopped.

“atsuko. Wait a minute..”

Atsuko look back and see minami with confuse face

“what happen? You leave your thing at yuko’s apartement?”

“no, its not like that..” minami let go of atsuko’s hand and start to draw breath in deeply.

Minami tried yo bring something from her pocket.

“atsuko, i have two pendant with heart shaped. Each pendant have a half of heart. So, do you want to be my girlfriend?”

*minami stopped for a while* *atsuko not answer it, and her face still shocked* if you accept me, you take both of this pendant. If you reject me, just take one of this pendant.” Minami take both of the pendant on her right and left hand. Minami start to close her eyes.

Atsuko still look surprised with all of her action. Atsuko dont expect if she already planned all of this, even atsuko command her to come with fast. Atsilp start to come near minami and move her hand to take the pendant.
Minami still closed her eyes. Atsuko start to take one of the pendant from minami’s right hand. Minami still waiting atsuko to take both of them. But,atsuko just stay silent. She just take one pendant.

She feels her heart already broken, because if atsuko just take one of them, that mean atsuko reject her. Minami still closed her eyes, but she dont feel if her tears falling down.
Then, suddenly minami feels a soft lips touch her lips. Its not short like usual. But it feels like atsuko start to tried a kiss more than usual. Minami hold her tears, and start to make distance from atsuko.

“if you reject me, you dont need to give me a goodbye kiss..”

“baka. Im not rejecting you..”

Minami give her a confused face for what atsuko said

“i cant wear two pendant at the same time. I want to wear one. And i want you to wear the other one. Its not like i reject you. Minami believe me. This is the moment i wait. I am willing to be your girlfriend..” atsuko finish her word and smiling.

Minami really happy to hear that, and come near atsuko imidietly and kiss her lips lovingly. She cant believe if atsuko accept her love. Minami hope if she will be the last lover for atsuko.

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-at Yuko’s apartement-

“NyanNyan, thanks for today..”

“yes. It not a problem. But, i dont understand why atsuko come up with someone. I think it will be special day for you..” said haruna while sitting beside yuko

“Hahaha. Yes, its really unexpected. Even i already have some word for her..”

“really? What is it? I want to hear!” haruna tried to feeling excited to yuko’s story, even she know it will break her heart.

“okay. I will show you..” yuko turn off the TV and grab both of haruna’s hands while looking at haruna deeply. *their position sitting on the couch* yuko start to breath in deeply.

“i know im a player. Im really close to many girls. Im always kiss many girls at school or at  meetings. I am not a romantic person. I dont have skills at cooking...” haruna look confused with yuko’s word.

“but, I can't stay away from you too long. I miss to see you jealous. I miss you when i see you sleep at my apartement. I miss when i failed serve a breakfast, so we eat outside. I miss when you hug me. I miss when you kiss me. I miss when you always by my side..”

Haruna feels if all of yuko’s word is for her. Not for atsuko. Because all yuko said is what they do usually.

“nothing has change in my house. Im still cant cooking. Im still a player. And im still love you.... NyanNyan...” Yuko smile and take something from her jacket pocket. She take out a box, and open it. And there is a ring.

“NyanNyan... do you want to go back to me? I can't live without you..”

Haruna is really shocked with yuko’s action. She cant believe if yuko did this for her. Too much question inside haruna’s brain.

“wah. Its really good yuko. Atsuko will like this, and-“

“NyanNyan. This is for you. Its not for atsuko. I love you. Im not love atsuko or other girls. Im just love you NyanNyan..”

“wait, i dont understand..what do you mean? You love me? But you make a special day for you and atsuko? You begging me to help you to get atsuko back,you make your photo with atsuko as wallpaper on your phone, is that what you said if you love me? Haruna said sarcastically with confused face.

“Hahaha. NyanNyan, you really notice all of my plan.. i think some of my plan is useless..” yuko start to breath in

“yes, i loveyou. Yes, i ask you to help me. I do that because i dont know what to do to go near you. And i remember if you promise me if you will help me. Yes i make one special day for me and atsuko. but i do that to introduce to as my girlfriend to atsuko. But i cant because she is with minami. I dont feel comfortable. And for that photo...”

[FLASHBACK]

[Yuko POV]

How about i send an e-mail for atsuko now? Then i leave mu handphone at bedroom with max volume sound. Atsuko will reply back imidietly. After that i go to take a bath, then i will ask haruna to check my handphone. When she checking my phone i will open the bathroom door a little and seeing her face. Is she will be jealous? Hahaha. Its a great idea !

[End Of Yuko’s POV]

[END FLASHBACK]

“but that plan failed, because atsuko reply back after i fall asleep, so i cant see your face..” answer yuko pouting

“is it really like that?” ask haruna still feeling doubt, but she look sincerity in yuko’s eyes. She never see yuko look at her like this. It really make her heart melt.

“yes, of course, uuumm, looks like i must repeat my question again.. *yuko start to breath in* Nyan Nyan do you want-“

“yes, i would like to be your girlfriend yuko..” answer haruna with smile

“Kyaaaa!! Thank you NyanNyan.. if like that, please take this ring. Then I will put it on your ring finger..”
Haruna take the ring, and haruna see a word inside the ring “Yuko-Haruna”, haruna smiling and give the ring to yuko. Then yuko put the ring on haruna’s finger.

“NyanNyan... I love you...” Yuko come near haruna’s face, but haruna stopped her.

“Oh wait! If you want to kiss me, you must promise me to not to kiss other girls..”

“Hahaha. Of course. I promise..”

“okay. So, kissme..”

They are kissing passionately. Yuko really miss haruna. Its already 1 year they dont meet. And finnaly yuko succes to express what inside her heart after 1 year. Yuko will never be a player again. She always drop off and pick up haruna at her school.
And same like minami. She and atsuko always meet at the bus stop when they want to go to school or go back to home. If atsuko go home late, minami will go to her school and waiting for her in front of gate. When they celebrate their anniversary, they always do a double date hahaha.


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Hope you like it guys m(_ _)m
Thanks for your attention  :peace:
Title: Re: [Atsumina/Atsuyuu/Kojiyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy LAST CHAPTER UPDATE!
Post by: cisda83 on October 26, 2013, 03:56:27 PM
well that was a fast ending...

I like the pairings... the ending pairings... Atsumina and Kojiyuu

Thank you for finishing this story

Can't wait to see more of your story or may be a sequel...

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: [Atsumina/Atsuyuu/Kojiyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy LAST CHAPTER UPDATE!
Post by: Tam_atsu on October 26, 2013, 04:44:32 PM
wow great ideas yuuchan  :heart:
thanks for the finish story we expect more kojiyuu from you lol
Title: Re: [Atsumina/Atsuyuu/Kojiyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy LAST CHAPTER UPDATE!
Post by: AshuraX on October 26, 2013, 05:50:16 PM
Le AtsuYuu was a lie!!!
Oh well. *leaves*
Title: Re: [Atsumina/Atsuyuu/Kojiyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy LAST CHAPTER UPDATE!
Post by: chibi_airin on October 27, 2013, 09:01:20 PM
Thanks for this fic  :heart:

Atsumina is so cute together  :deco: :deco: :deco:
Title: Re: [Atsumina/Atsuyuu/Kojiyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy LAST CHAPTER UPDATE!
Post by: Dianalrs on April 20, 2015, 09:13:49 PM
Yeii!! Atsumina!!!  :)
Very nice story  :heart: