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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: blakwhite on October 09, 2013, 04:14:59 PM
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well,I do not know what title should I give, so, please comment
and please suggest me what tittle for this fic :grin:
and here it is, douzo~
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Chapter 1
Hello there, my name is takahashi minami, 2nd year high school boy, well, my style is mess up, and im a trouble maker in school,well, I like fighting.
and I have some friend who is troublemaker too like me.
[Takamina POV]
--- at classroom ----
“oi, takamina, you don’t change your style, huh?” my friend watanabe mayu ask me, he is a genius, and he is a little pervert and he like to make a trouble, so his girlfriend will “take care” of him
“meh, why must I ?”
“hee? So, you don’t scared to your girlfriend huh?” one of my friend too, Oshima Yuu, well, he is just like me, except he is a pervert.
“Girlfriend? She is more like a devil than a girlfriend. And, I don’t really care about her command~” I said with cool face
“yeah you said you don’t care now, but when her see you, you will dead takamina, hahahaha” my other friend, matsui jun, he is a playboy, but he do that to make his girlfriend jealous.
“well, like you are’nt” I said while glaring to him
and for your info, we are students from Clover gakuen, and we are living at the dorm.
[end of takamina POV]
*Bell rang*
it seems the genius of the school is sleeping In the middle of studying.
“WATANABE – SAN” the teacher shout at him
“haaii ~” he wake up and answer lazily
“I know you are genius, but you must focus in the middle of studying. Now go outside until lunch break”
“SENSEI !, you don’t have the right to punish me! Only yuki can punish me sensei !!” he shouted proudly to the teacher and punch his table while standing up. And for your info, Kashiwagi Yuki is his girlfriend, she is so scary when mad and she is the student council treasurer and one of school princess.
yuki just blushing and release her dark aura when hear that from mayu. And the teacher and other student drop their jaw.
“then, kashiwagi – san can you please tell him to go outside until lunch break?”
“h-hai” she said, and i can see she stand up while releasing her dark aura
“WATANABE MAYU ! GO OUTSIDE ! NOW !” she said while glaring at mayu
“yes honey ~” he said smilling widely and go outside.
“whoa mayu really have a guts” yuu said whispering to me
“yeah, i wonder where he got the guts” i whisper back
“okay, now please focus to the front” the teacher said, im just watching outside the window.
[end of takamina POV]
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sorry my bad english, feel free to comment :grin:
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Mayuki :mon innocent: :mon spit: *now camping in here* :on roll:
Also Kojiyuu :onioncheer: :whistle:
All the boys such a M :mon lmao: :mon duh: :mon speechless: Enjoy their girlfriends' jealousy :mon noprob:
Mayu just listens to his girlfriend, which is Yuki :mon inluv: :mon innocent:
Anyway, waiting for your new update :on drink: :on woohoo:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
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@Leeway : thank you for comment Leeway - san :grin: well, just for info, i make mayu is M type and Yuki is S type :grin:
and here is chapter 2
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------- Lunch Break -------
Takamina, mayu, yuu and jun goes to cafetaria.
[Jun POV]
When me and my friends in cafetaria i can hear all girls call my name.
Im just smiling at them, and then there is some girls come to me
“kyaa, jun sama kakkoi”
“arigatou” i said while smiling sweetly
“jun – sama please have a lunch with me” one of the girls said
“me too, me too”said another girl
“mee too please jun - sama” and another girl too
“whoa whoa, easy, i will lunch with all of you, lets go” i said and embrace them in both of my arms and walking to the table.
Ah, and by the way, even all the girls love me, but there is only one in my heart, that is my girlfriend her name is matsui rena, she has a beautiful smile, and a soft hair, i really love her. But when she is mad, she will smile too, but her smile when mad is creepy. And rena is student council vice – president, also she is one of princess in our school.
And when i eating with them i can feel something
‘hmm? What is this feeling ? why i feel like someone is watching me?’ i said in my mind while looking around.
[end of jun POV]
And same time when jun is surrounded by girls takamina, mayu and yuu is eating together.
“hee~ Jun is really lucky bastard, i want to be surrounded by sexy girls too” Yuu said while put his head on table and frown his face.
“i dont think he is lucky” said mayu
“why? Just like Yuu said, i think he is lucky”
“yeah~ why?” Yuu said and lift his head.
“look at there” mayu said while pointing his finger.
“ahh~, i think we are really lucky” takamina and yuko said at the same time.
“ah, btw yuu, lets skip a class, lets go to the arcade.” Takamina said
“great idea, you come with us mayu?”
“no, thanks, i know after you two go to arcade you will have a fight with another school student,beside, i want to be with my yuki ~”
“boo, you are so boring mayu” takamina said
“yeah~, so, lets go to arcade now takamina”
“yeah, lets go”
“hey, dont forget to get into school before the school is over, or you two will be dead!” mayu remind them.
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Ah.. Just came across and it's already 2 updates
Yeah... Gender bender drama
All the boys scared of thier girls
What's going to happen next?
Can't to see the next time
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Thank you
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@Cisda83 : hehe,thank you for comment cisda- san
and well, here is chapter 3
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Chapter 3
---- at the arcade ----
[Takamina POV]
“Hey takamina” yuu called me
“hmm? What?”
“lets play fighting game”
“okay, i accepted your challange”
“hmm, but, lets make a bet, the lose will give the money to the winner”
“Fine !!, i will not lose” i said and grinning widely at him
“heh ! we’ll see”
----- after 30 minutes ----
“THE FUCK !!”
“HAHAHAHAHA ! You lose again takamina!, where is the money~ ?”
“tch” and i give him my money
“ah~ that’s my allowance for this month” i said while frowning
“hahaha, that’s your fault always said rematch to me~ hahahaha”
“tch, btw, lets go back to school”
“sure, lets go”
----- on the way to school -----
“hee~, isn’t that takahashi minami and oshima Yuu the strongest brother from clover gakuen?” said the boy from other school, but if i see the badge, i think he is from whyvern gakuen. His school always want to have fight with me and yuko.
“well, i accept the “strongest” part, but the brother part, i dont accept it, because he is not my brother, and beside i dont want to have a midget brother.” Said yuu to them.
“hey, you are midget too “ i said to him and glaring at him
“well, im still taller than you midget” said yuu
“ENOUGH !! now you will lose to us oshima yuu and takahashi minami” he said and i can see his underlings come near them and surround us.
“haah ~ i want to be surrounded by sexy girls, not with a men~” yuu said lazily while me and the guys from whyvern gakuen drop a sweat.
“well, forgot about that now, yuu, protect my back”
“that’s my line midget”
[End Of Takamina POV]
----- after 30 minutes brawling -----
Their face full of bruise and takamina’s lips is bleeding
“haah... hah.. hah.. i think we won again takamina” yuu said while panting hard
“hah... hah... of course we won” takamina said, and then they are high five
And they go to school
---------- in front of school gate -------
[ Yuu POV]
“oi takamina, lets climb the wall”
“okay, you will be my stepping, bow down”
“WHAT?! No, you are the strongest right? You down”
“but i got more wound than you, you down yuu”
“okay fine” then i bow down
“argh, quickly takamina, you are so heavy you know”
“well, im heavy because of my muscle”
“JUST QUICKLY”
“Okay okay” when he already on the top of the wall he help me to climb the wall.
When he pull me up, we are fall down.
“ahh~ ittai” we said at the same time. And when we look up, i can see my girlfriend, haruna with takamina’s girlfriend. Haruna is my girlfriend, she is sexy, hot,have a nice boobs and oshiri ~, she is a student council secretary.
I can see she is smiling creepily
“h-h-hey nyan nyan?” i said while giving her an weird smile.
“Yuu-Chan ~, i need to talk to you, come with me.he said to me and pulled my collar until the storeroom.
---- at the storeroom ----
I sit on the chair while my hand is tied.
“N-n-n-nyan – nyan, what are you going to do to me? And where you got the handcuff ? and how do you know me and takamina is skip a class?” i ask her
“Ssshh... you dont need to know.. you are really naughty yuu chan ~, i need to punish you” when i hear that, i gulping hard. And then i see she is stripping herself,i can see she is wearing a black underwear,and now i can feel im heat in my face, im blushing hard right now.
“Yuu~ Chan ~, how many times that i tell you to stop fighting and skipping a class~” she said while hugging me from back, and then i feel im nosebleeding right now.
“Yuu ~ Chan ~, you are really naughty”
‘OMG OMG! She is too hot ! OMG, i think i will explode soon’ i said in my mind
“s-s-sorry N-n-Nyan Nyan”
“Yuu~Chan no Ecchi!” she whisper to my ear seductively.
And then everything goes blank.
[End Of Yuu POV]
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well, that's for today, im sleepy and tommorow i got an exam tommorow,
feel free to comment :lol:
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can't wait for next chapter XD
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OMFG :bleed eyes: KOJIYUU HERE IS SO FVCKIN HOT! what a great punishment XD :drool: :inlove: like seriously this is so awesome but why did suddenly everything goes blank ughh :banghead: :banghead: you should have continued it! :lol: :lol:
more please! :thumbsup :inlove:
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@Tam_atsu : well, you will know :lol: , hmm, i want to continue it(http://emoticoner.com/files/emoticons/onion-head/embarrassed1-onion-head-emoticon.gif) (http://emoticoner.com)
but....
im not pervert enough to make that scene (http://emoticoner.com/files/emoticons/onion-head/lol2-onion-head-emoticon.gif) (http://emoticoner.com)
and thank you for commenting (http://emoticoner.com/files/emoticons/onion-head/beg-onion-head-emoticon.gif) (http://emoticoner.com)
and here its the update (http://emoticoner.com/files/emoticons/onion-head/info-onion-head-emoticon.gif) (http://emoticoner.com)
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Chapter 4
[Takamina POV]
When i pulled yuu to climb the wall, we fall down together
“ahh~ ittai” we said at the same time.
And then i look up and see Yuu’s girlfriend with Atsuko, my girlfriend.
Maeda atsuko is a Student council president. Well, i love her, but there is something that i dont like from her, and you will know it soon. And she is a School Princess too, She is smart, beauty, and hot.
“a-a-ahh ~ Acchan ohayou” i said to her while smiling at her
“takahashi minami !, you are got into fight again huh?! Come with me!” she said angryly and command me.
“h-h-hai !”i said to her while standing up.
And then she grab my tie and pulled me until the infirmary.
---- at the infirmary ----
Whe we are at the clinic room she push me to the bed. And then she brought a medicine and start to take care of my wound.
“Ouch.. ITAII ” i said to her while grab her hand.
“hee ~.. please endure it will you?” she said.
And when she done treating my wound, i stand up and want to walk away, but before i can do that, she pulled me back to the bed.
“w-w-what are y-y-you d-doing acchan?” i said while blushing
“ takaminaa~” she said while smiling seductively.
“y-y-yes?” i said while stay away from her. But she put her arms on my neck.
“takamina ~ how many time that i tell you to change your style~?”she said and move her face until near my face.
“uh-uhm, i think its alrea-“ before i finish my word, she kiss my lips. And im blushing so hard.
“how many time that i tell you to stop fighting~ ? she said and smile seductively.
“I- i –i... i think its-“ before i finish my word, she kissed my lips again, and right now im blushing hard on my face.
“aah~ minami kawaii ~” she said seductively, and now she kiss my neck, and suck it.
“a..ahh.. ahhhnn.. a-a-acchan~ p-p-please s-s-stop” i said while moaning.
“ahh~ right, please dont stop moaning minami~, the more you moan, the more i want you right now~”she said and now she unbuttoned my school uniform.
*Ring... Ring...*
'thanks bell, you save my life'
When i hear the bell rang, im quickly push acchan, and running to my room at the dorm.
[End Of Takamina POV]
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feel free to comment, im working on the next chapter now (http://emoticoner.com/files/emoticons/onion-head/beg-onion-head-emoticon.gif) (http://emoticoner.com)
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here is the update :grin:
hope you will enjoy it
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Chapter 5
---- at Yuu And Takamina’s room ---
When takamina go inside, he see mayu and Jun is there take care of Yuu.
And when takamina see Yuu, he is faint and his face is smiling
“what happen to him?” i asked to them
“well, when me and mayu going to our room we meet haruna dragging yuu, and then she tell us to take care of him” Jun said.
And then, Yuu is start to get a concious.
“uurrgh.. urmm...” she groan and start to open his eyes
“where i am?” he said while looking around.
“at heaven” Jun said
“at paradise” Mayu said
“huh? If i am at paradise in heaven, why am i seeing a devil midget?” he said and pointing his finger to takamina while rubbing his eyes.
Mayu and Jun just laughing hard.
“WHO THE HELL YOU SAID DEVIL MIDGET, MIDGET?” takamina said while grab Yuu’s collar
“hey, hey, take it easy. Im just kidding you know.” Yuu said
“ah, btw yuu, why there is blood on your uniform?” Jun said
“well, when i got caught by Nyan Nyan she lead me to the store room and she tied my hand.. and...” he said and have a goofy smile on his face.
“and she start strip in front of me, and i got a nosebleed” he said while smiling widely
“WHAT?! MAJIDE?!” Jun shouted
“That’s true you know”
“and then, what are you doing after that?” Jun said excitedly
“and then..”
“....”
“i fainted”
“Pffftt, Lame” Jun and Mayu said while laughing
“ah, btw, how the hell haruna and acchan know that me and Yuu is skip a class?” Takamina said
“uhhmm... that’s because i tell them” Mayu said
“WHAT??!!!” shout takamina and Yuu
And here is the flashback
----- FlashBack ----
[Mayu POV]
When i remind takamina and yuu, i finish my lunch, and after that im searching Yuki around the school.
“Yukiiii ~” i shout and running to her while smiling widely
“ah, mayu”
And then i hug her tightly, and she is hug me back.
“im looking for you around the school” i said
“why?”
“because i miss you yukii ~” i said to her.
And then atsuko and haruna come to yuki
“hey, yuki, Do you see takamina?” Acchan ask yuki
“And did you see Yuu too?” Haruna ask Yuki too
“No, i dont see them, why?”
“well, i miss to tease takamina” said acchan while smiling
“i want to play with yuu” haruna said while pouting
And then they are look at me.
“hm? Why?” i ask them
“i know if you know where is takamina now?” acchan said while smiling creepily
“yeah~, i know if you know where is Yuu Chan now~?” haruna said while smiling creepily too.
“no, i dont want to tell you, even you smiling creepily to me, im note scared” i said with no-expression face.
And both of them look at yuki, and then.
“Mayu~, please tell them where is your friend.” Yuki said beside my ear
“though i am not telling about where they are to them im not get anything~” i said with cool face
And then, acchan and haruna looking at yuki.
“mayu kuun ~, so, what do you want from me?” she said seductively and winking at me
“PLEASE PUNISH ME YUKI !!”
I said to her while bow down.
“okay~, sure~, i will punish you if you tell them where is your friend, Ma-Yu-Kun ~” she said seductively while winking at me.
“well, takamina and yuu said they will skip a class and go to arcade. And i know you two will know what will they do right?” i said to them
“hmm, thank you yuki, mayu. Now i will punish takamina too” acchan said while grinning evily
“hm, well, i will punish yuu chan too~” haruna said and smirked
“lets prepare acchan”
“yes, lets go haruna”
Then they are walk away.
“uhmm, yuki, so.., when you will punish me?” i ask her excitedly
“hmm.. i dont know” she said. And im just look down sadly.
And then she dragged me to the boys bathroom and lead me to one of the cubicle and lock it.
[End of Mayu POV]
And you can hear mayu screaming, groaning and moaning.
And the rest you know it yourself.
------ End Of FlashBack ------
“So that was what happen” mayu said while looking at them.
Then, there is a silence.
“well, if you dont need anything i will go, bye ~” he said while trying to go away, and then takamina shout
“JUN GRAB HIM !”takamina shouted
And then jun grab bot of mayu’s arm
“whoa whoa whoa, why you do this to me?” he ask
“well, you like to be punished right mayu~? So..” Yuu said while smiling creepily at him
“LET ME PUNISHED YOU MAYU !!!” said takamina and yuu at the same time.
“W-W-WAIT, im sorry to tell your girlfriend, and, no i dont want to be punished by midget!, i just want to be punished by yuki !!” he said while struggling.
“JUN, DONT LET HIM GO” takamina said
“YES SIR” Jun said and grab both of his arms tightly
“no,no,no, please, NOOOOO !!!!” he shouted
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and that's it :grin:
im writing the update now :thumbsup
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Nee you don't have the title of your story yet right? Here's my suggestion, due to your story is always mentioning about punishment, why don't you call it as Masochist Boys x Sadistic Girls? LOL!! :lol: *jokes* By the way, keep it up~ :on GJ: I'm still reading your story~ :D
hmm, good idea :wahaha:
i think i will change to that, thank you ryuukaecchi/rukaecchi :D
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I just realized that All of the boys are shorter than their girlfriends XD
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Wait, I thought this was JuriAirin! OAO
Kiddin, kiddin XD
From what I see, Rena's slightly taller than Jurina.
Dunno if my guess is right or not though~
Crack that. Jurina's probably taller? Dunno.
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hahahahaha, i dont know why did u think rena is taller than jurina :hiakhiakhiak:
and thank you for commenting :3
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Dunno. I blame the beer.
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1 or 4 centimeter difference doesn't mean anything! is what Takamina would say.
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^yeah that's right :lol:
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now ~
here is the update, hehe :D
please enjoy ~ (http://emoticoner.com/files/emoticons/onion-head/pretty-onion-head-emoticon.gif) (http://emoticoner.com)
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Chapter 6
----- the next day at the classroom ----
When takamina and yuu already in the class, there is jun come.
“RENA – CHAAAAN ~” he shouted while open his arms widely
When he come near rena,
She put her palm on his face
“stay away from me! Im allergic to a playboy” rena said and sit back to her seat
While jun was just still dumbfounded.
And after that here it comes
“YUKIIII ~”mayu shouted while open her arms widely from yuki’s back
And when yuki turn around.
“Kyaaaa... *Slap* *Slap**Slap* WHO ARE YOU?” she shouted and slap mayu on the face, while her eyes widen and shocked.
“its me yuki, im your boyfriend” he said to her dramatically
“what? Why is your face like that?” Last night takamina and Yuu is drawing mayu’s face with permanent marker. So that’s why yuki shocked
“well, that’s long story, to make it short just said that i got attacked by 2 dwarf”
“ah, sou?”
“yes, and yuki”
“yes?”
“can you slap me once again please?” he said while giving her a goofy smile.
“NO !” she shouted and slap Mayu again
“ahh~ thank you yuki chan” he smiled sweetly
And then takamina, Yuu, Mayu and Jun is talking to each other.
“Hey, today class is boring how about we skip class? lets go to the rooftop”
Now Jun, takamina,Mayu and Yuu is at the Rooftop. with Jun and Yuu have a binoculars.
[Jun POV]
Im at the rooftop, and looking at the school yard with binoculars.
“ahh~ nice oshiri~” Yuu said while looking at the girls on the school yard.
“hey, jun, look at there ” Yuu said to me
“hmm? Where?” i ask him, and see the direction he pointing
And when i see there with my binoculars i see rena sit under the tree.
‘ahh~ rena is really beautiful ~, im lucky to have her’ i said in my mind while smiling lovingly.
And then i see someone come near her.
‘hmm? Who is that?’ i said in my mind.
‘ah maybe her friend’
[End Of Jun POV]
*ringg... ringg ...*
---- Lunch Break ----
Jun,Takamina,Mayu And Yuu walking together to the cafetaria and then something caught Jun eyes.
[Jun POV]
‘hmm? I think she is familiar’ when i look closer i know her.
‘AH!! She is rena! What is she doing with that boy?’ and after that im following them from behind
[End Of Jun POV]
“eh, where is he going ?” Yuu said while sitting on his seat
“hmm, i think he will stalking rena” answered mayu while sitting on their seat
“eh? Where is Jun Going?” ask takamina innocently while looking around him
“mayu / me already answer that bakamina” mayu and Yuu said at the same time
“well~ i dont hear you guys” takamina said while eating his food.
And now, something caught Mayu’s eyes.
[Mayu POV]
‘hmm? Why im feeling i know her from somewhere?’ i said while focusing on that girl
‘GOSH! Of course i know it ! she is my Yuki’ i said in my mind while face palm.
‘but... who is that man? He is look familiar too’ when i look closely at him.
‘AH I KNOW HIM ! he is tora the jazz music club president !’ what is he doing with my Yuki?!!’ i said in my mind while gritting my teeth.
‘i must follow them !’ i said in my mind while quickly moving my body and following them without they know it.
[ End Of Mayu POV]
“what the hell ! Mayu is going by himself too ! why they are acting like a gross - stalker?” Yuu said
“well, i think screw on his brain is loose” takamina said and continue eating.
“hah~ they are so weird” Yuu said while continue eating too.
And then something caught his attention from outside the window.
[Yuu POV]
‘hmm? Isn’t that NyanNyan? And what is she doing there?’ i said in my mind and stand up from my seat.
When i look at her, i see someone approaching her.
‘hmm? Who is he?’ i look closely and..
‘isn’t he kisaragi from newspaper club? What is he wanna do to my Nyan Nyan??!! I must follow them !!’ i said in my mind and quickly running outside.
‘WAIT FOR ME ! NYAN NYAN!’
[End Of Yuu POV]
[Takamina POV]
When i see Yuu running quickly to the outside my i stopped my move with my mouth open widely and spoon in front of me.
‘WTF? Just now he said gross stalker and now he become the stalker, and they said im the stupid one?!! Well, whatever’
I said in my mind and when i want so spoon – feed, im stopped my move again when something passing in the hallway.
‘ehh??!! Isnt that acchan passing the hallway ?!’
i see acchan passing the hallway with a muscular-tall boy holding hands.
‘WHAT THE FUCK IS HE DOING?! HOW DARE HE HOLDING MY ACCHAN’S HAND?!!’
Im shouted in my mind while quickly moving my body to stalking them.
[End Of Takamina POV]
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that's for today, im sleepy
and sorry my bad english im still study :badluck:
and please leave a comment ~ byeee :byebye:
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How guys became stalkers 101 XD
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Do I have won't continue? :(
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Do I have won't continue? :(
i will write the update at evening :D
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blackwhite san! :D the girls are sadist and agressive in same time XD
please updateee! :twothumbs
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blackwhite san i wanna an update ~
tehee~~
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blackwhite san i wanna an update ~
tehee~~
i really wanna update this but....
ugh pls kill me :fainted:
i will ask chiqinna for help T_T, and thank you for comment noah minami-san
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Okay, lemme find my knife first.
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whoooa i didn't notice this fic, then i read it and i love it !!
It's very interesting and funny =] please update soon
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I missed quite lots since I last saw this story...
Ah... interesting... all the boys are jealous and stalking their girlfriends
Are they going to be worried and heartbroken?
What's going to happen next?
Can't wait to find out
Thank you for the updates
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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bleki-san please update this fic ~~ I MISS YOU
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blackwhite san i wanna an update ~
tehee~~
i really wanna update this but....
ugh pls kill me :fainted:
i will ask chiqinna for help T_T, and thank you for comment noah minami-san
ur welcome. balckwhite san.. i be waiting... :thumbsup
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hahahahahahahahahaha i believe that something really funny will happen
thanks
update soon
please...
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Ehhh..why all the girls go with other boys??
Lol Minami,May, Jun and Yuu has become stalker now
Cant wait for rhe next ch
Please update soon
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blackwhite san i wanna an update ~
tehee~~
i really wanna update this but....
ugh pls kill me :fainted:
i will ask chiqinna for help T_T, and thank you for comment noah minami-san
we'll wait for you blakwhite san
gambatte kudasai
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Umm, update it pleaseee
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update??? :banghead: