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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: FoxKing on December 07, 2013, 01:00:04 PM

Title: Chased... Prolouge (atsumina/kojiyuu)
Post by: FoxKing on December 07, 2013, 01:00:04 PM

Hi I am a new writer, this is my first ever fanfic hope you like...
Sorry for any bad grammar or other mistakes to come...

 :mon sweat:
 
 
Prolouge
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2am
 
Minami's P.O.V
 
 
*minami... minami... minami wake up sweety we gotta go* My mom said while shaking me.
 
I started to get out of bed, I stop and notice Yuko's not in her bed, I start to wonder what's going on.
 
*mom... where's yuko* I asked while yawning.
 
*your dad already took her... we will meet up with them later* She said.
 
She picked me up and walked to the backdoor... Knock Knock Knock *Open up we know your in there* I heard someone say from the front door.
 
*Minami.. I want you to run to the park and hide okay* She said as she opend the back door.
 
Knock Knock Knock *Last Chance* I heard the person from the door say again.
 
*w-why wh-what's going o-on* I asked starting to cry.
 
*Minami hurry I will be alright* She kissed my forehead and hugged me.
 
*n-no you c-come with m-me* I said.
 
Smash
 
*RUN!* She yelled and closed the door so I couldn't get in.
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Sorry if it fails
 
 :depressed:
 

Title: Re: Chased... Prolouge (atsumina/kojiyuu)
Post by: Sydney W on December 07, 2013, 01:20:23 PM

Another atsumina ~~

Title: Re: Chased... Prolouge (atsumina/kojiyuu)
Post by: TakaminaBG on December 07, 2013, 05:25:08 PM

Atsumina day!!!!
This looks so interestinformation. Please continue

Title: Re: Chased... Prolouge (atsumina/kojiyuu)
Post by: blakwhite on December 07, 2013, 06:00:10 PM

O____O

i ... i ...is that loan shark ? O___O

i hope minami will okay Q___Q
pls update soon

Title: Re: Chased... Prolouge (atsumina/kojiyuu)
Post by: lezperv on December 08, 2013, 02:26:47 AM

I LOVE YOU  :on slopkiss:

Yay for AtsuMina fic  :on GJ: I hope Minami is okay, I wonder what happened... Is it a loan shark like blakwhite had mentioned, or is it some kind of enemy? I'm really stoked about this.

Hope you update soon  :on lol:

Title: Re: Chased... Prolouge (atsumina/kojiyuu)
Post by: cisda83 on December 08, 2013, 02:53:56 AM

A lone shark or mafia...?

Well... so Minami and Yuko are siblings...

Why didn't they wake Minami up earlier... ?

Then they can all escape...

Some more why did the mother was the last to leave the house?

What's going to happen to Minami?

Would she get to reunited with her father and Yuko?

Would she be caught?

Would she need to live by herself?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the prologue

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Title: Re: Chased... Prolouge (atsumina/kojiyuu)
Post by: FoxKuzan on December 08, 2013, 04:24:22 AM

hope its atsumina mafia maybe?
hey we got same name kinda
>_<