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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: Hirasawaizumi on February 28, 2014, 02:45:13 PM

Title: wMatsui- second chances
Post by: Hirasawaizumi on February 28, 2014, 02:45:13 PM
I don't know this fanfic will turn out to be a long one, or an OS. :sweatdrop:
Maa~~ I'll just let it be.  :lol:

Saa... enjoy reading :D
--Inspiration got from Tsuyogari Tokei

Second Chances
If you gave me a chance to show you,
Would I come back and show you?
If you gave me a chance to love you,
Could I come back and love you?
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I’m jealous of the time and people around me. Even though my time is real, the past, present and future are like a highway, falling and pilling onto me like in slow motion.

The watch in my heart is a real bluffer.

Xxxxx

Soft, fulvous light penetrated the windows of the express bus, shining down on a maiden who was staring blankly at the scenery. She gently leaned her head on the window, curling her lips. Her hands were clenching a phone that never rang since she took this bus. Did she make the right choice? Or just makes things worst? She did not know. She did not want to know.

She hoped that the phone rang. That girl will surely know how to calm her when she had problems or when she was upset. But, this time, she cannot be sure if she herself will turn back anymore. What’s done is done, thought she. She can’t turn back. Not anymore.

Maybe she would, if that girl called. Even it is a rage, or her caring, she would turn back, giving her a second chance.

The phone was still silence.

She glanced back at the window. The scenery passed rapidly, colours merged together, forming a undetectable speed of the bus. And then, she saw, slow motions of moments played in front of her, taking her back to the days where that girl was still…

…innocent.

Comments and critiques are welcome  XD
Title: Re: wMatsui- second chances
Post by: Kiri-el on February 28, 2014, 05:57:48 PM
It's interesting and well written and I like this atmosphere what I liked in the Tsuyogari pv too. It can be long or an OS, I definitely want to read this!
Title: Re: wMatsui- second chances
Post by: Koneki on February 28, 2014, 06:37:06 PM
wooow OS or long pls contiiiii!!!
it's really good ...though if it will be a OS it will be a loooong one :3

Excellent redaction  :twothumbs

I'm waiting  :D

PS: hell yeah for wmatsui  :cathappy:
Title: Re: wMatsui- second chances
Post by: Kirozoro on February 28, 2014, 09:06:12 PM
Update soon~

Yea Wmatsui