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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: mayuki0048 on August 29, 2014, 12:20:27 PM
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Yowz! Since I'm an inspired person. An my grammar improved
I guess I will attempt myself to create a fic. Thanks for some advice, from those crazy authors. (You know who you are) :luvluv1:
"Nee, papa." Little Yuki called her dad.
"Yes sweetie?" Mr. Kashiwagi asked his precious little daughter.
"What is love?" Little Yuki asked her papa.
Kashiwagi daddy laughed, "Love is always there for you."
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"Love is always there for me?" Teenage Yuki mumbled as she think about what Kashiwagi Papa used to say.
"Nee, Yuki-chan." A slim girl with a white pale looking skin called her.
"Oh, hi Rena. I didn't see you there."
"Still think about your dad?"
"Yah. I can't get it out of my head."
"Then try." Rena said as she kissed her bestfriends cheeks.
"Jesus, Rena. That's the fourth time this day." Yuki said she wiped her cheeks and her bestfriend laughed "why are you laughing?"
"Baka. See that girl over there?"
Yuki nodded. "Watanabe-san? What about her?"
"I think she likes you."
"What are you saying Rena? Are you on drugs or something?"
"She's been staring at you for the whole day, give it break Yuki, I know that you're inlove with her."
Maybe I am? Yuki thought as she felt a hand on her breast. "Renaaaaaa! WHAT DO YOU THINK ARE YOU DOING?!" Yuki shouted she hit Renas head with a big book. "You're acting like you're Watanabe-sans sister."
"Oh, Oshima-san? Isn't she lovely?" Rena asked her friend as she felt her heart beating, so fast.
"Give it a rest Rena, Oshima-san belongs to Kojima-san."
"You're right......" Rena said while her voice is breaking.
"Let's go? I don't want to be late. Specially when Mariko-sensei is our teacher."
"Un...." Rena said as she picked up her things, and stole a kiss from Yukis cheeks
"RENA! YOU LITTLE DEVIL!"
Please tell me if I have to improve or something. :bow:
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It's either MaYuki or YukiRena (With a side of KojiYuu and MariMii)
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1: MaYuki, WMatsui, KojiYuu, and MariMii?
2: YukiRena, JuriMayu, KojiYuu, MariMii?
3: MaYuki, YuuRena, JuriHaru, MariMii?
4: MaYuki, KojiYuu, MariJuri, RenaMii?
5: MaYuki, WMatsui, YuuMii, MariHaru?
I hope you will do Option 1. :mon thumb:
Rine, you do know it can't technically be options 3 or 5 cuz Yuki says that Yuko belongs to KojiHaru but maybe~
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MaYukiRena and MariKojiYuu triangle maybe? :kekeke:
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Since the authors name is MaYuki0048 definitely think it's MaYuki :on thumbb:
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The Mayuki is already thereee! And I sense an incoming YukoRena! (O_O!)
Or maybe a little more twist like RenaYuuHaruna triangle~
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1: MaYuki, WMatsui, KojiYuu, and MariMii?
2: YukiRena, JuriMayu, KojiYuu, MariMii?
3: MaYuki, YuuRena, JuriHaru, MariMii?
4: MaYuki, KojiYuu, MariJuri, RenaMii?
5: MaYuki, WMatsui, YuuMii, MariHaru?
I hope you will do Option 1. :mon thumb:
Rine, you do know it can't technically be options 3 or 5 cuz Yuki says that Yuko belongs to KojiHaru but maybe~
HA! Rine is being biased again. :glasses: Nah I'm just kidding. I hope this is going to be a MaYuki story. :cool:
It's YukoRena, Rine. YukoRena. We've been arguing this last summer and you still don't get it?! I'm going to spank you next summer. Just you wait you BAKA!
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or maybe it start with usual pairings but end up being random :err:
Since the authors name is MaYuki0048 definitely think it's MaYuki :on thumbb:
Haha.. great hypothesis :mon fyeah:
and yeah hope its MaYuki :cathappy:
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Lazy, yeah right. :glasses:
Good luck for your fic mayuki0048-san! :)
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Good luck author-chan!
@GekikaraRena48 @ChibiRine Yeah you two should stop arguing on here before it get's out of hand.... It can be said either way! Just your personal preference~ Like MaYuki could be MayuYukirin as well~
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Mayuki~~ Kojiyuu~~~ and Wmatsui~~~~~please
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The smell...
RenaYuki, MaYuki, RenaYuko, KojiYuu. And I hope I will see JuriMayu or wMatsui XD
Oh yeah, oshiri sisters forever!!! :D
Update!
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Thank you for your comments! I decided to make some twist here. I hope you will all forgive me. :bow
Oops
Rena's Point of View
"You idiots! You don't know how to play dodgeball!" Oshima-san shouted as she hit the head of our classmates couldnt help but to giggle. "You losers, Im going to rest now lets battle again." And our classmates nodded. I can see Satas nose is bleeding. "Hi Rena." She greeted me. My heart is beating again.
I stand up and bowed at her "Hi Oshima-san"
"Dont call me Oshima-san, Yuko is fine. Were classmates right? We dont need any formalities"
"Hai" I said as she smile. Her dimples is cute, even her brown eyes.
"Yuuchan!" That brought me back to the real world.
"Nyannyan!" Oshima-san shouted as she run to her girlfriend. Kojima Haruna
Kojima-san hugged Oshima-san i can feel my heart breaking. "Hi Rena" kojima-san greeted me I bowed at her and i smile at her "let's go yuuchan? Marichan is waiting for us"
"Marichan marichan marichan, if you want to talk to her then why don't you date her?!" Oshima-san shouted as I can see her beautiful face turning into a sad one "tell me!"
"Yuuchan not here"
"What do you mean not here?!"
I need to stop this fight
"Why are you acting like you own me? You know that we're not together right"
Ending of Rena's Point of View
Mayu's Point of View
"That rena girl, she's been observing me." I mumbled as I steal a glance to my dear yukirin
"Hey mayu" my bestfriend greeted at me
"Oh hey jurina" i greeted her and i sipped on my straw
"Have you seen your onee-chan?"
"I dont know what are you talking about what happened to oshiriko-chan?!" I asked her my hormones are starting to shake
"I saw her crying and shes with rena-sama and kojimasan"
"What?!"
Jurina nodded and I clenched my fist I ran as fast as i can jurina follow me insaw my sister crying and shouting at kojima-san
"WhT did you to my sister?!" I asked rena and she pointed at kojimasan
"Rena where hVe hou been? Im looking for you" kashiwagi yuki.....
I'm going to be a cruel person. :hehehe: i will post chapter 1.5 later, i guess that chapter will be alot better than this one
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Lol MayuRena :P ""That Rena girl, she's been observing me." I mumbled as I steal a glance to my dear Yukirin" MaYuki!!!!!!!!!!! Should have a capital letter in someone's name or nickname btw :D
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Hehehe...
can't wait for the twisted pairings :twisted:
but right now i want to enjoy the story :D
update soon~